【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
6 X  _" p3 V+ o# D/ E2 c% axxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
* C5 ]7 |% [3 {+ A5 W# \vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 ]' N7 E; g7 D" i" h$ F1 J+ j夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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. ]' Z! q/ u- I0 Q9 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: P2 M4 N$ {0 N  t5 y月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 I2 A! t0 W' I7 |7 M夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
! [) t3 m! `5 W; d: qIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
3 t9 o+ _+ ~# U* o. v% g" [我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
  f3 g2 z, V+ g1 K9 UYou needn’t fear anything
) v9 w0 B; [) `1 L8 q5 Y. I怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
# w8 j) @; D4 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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/ o' K, B! _, k6 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
; e; D- @3 ?$ M# m/ e" I6 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
' V: R8 `$ U: r5 a+ i, N我真想看透你的心
4 j* B% c+ P4 W1 }- vI invite you to rip it out
0 Q) `! ?4 Y9 c' j4 `, r  x, V你尽管把它掏去
/ l" t; m" c5 f* T9 F. |+ i6 eTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ N7 H1 G" A: O. s( R若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
4 ~# \# \. s- s, c+ }( CI’m still filled with fear
. E6 f% c( h$ }1 }3 N: A" p可我依然满心忧虑
. z: `/ y4 R6 E* @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
/ k) M$ o' E2 j- a/ uIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
* d4 ~  M- J: H* cWith such a tongue as yours,
2 V3 X. Y" [2 K" k) `" o! v/ Q- a你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" g. n' F- m+ ^5 A( {+ ^能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 U; u5 B3 P1 M若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
" r1 Q) u( M4 O向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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9 q3 z; h) v/ X& ^+ M/ dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
. D% @7 n3 t* f! JFrom the first moment we met,
) b- t4 A9 j: d3 O对你一见倾心
6 {( [1 `' D8 U/ cI already loved you with all my heart
/ L/ p* `7 I7 T从此别无他意
! Y' v( Y8 y# B& BWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# V$ t2 @: M5 K# m若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
5 d- s0 M6 z' ^/ Y" K# p( C或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
" r* R- c9 ^4 y7 ~" N; m% t为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
' k8 l) I# V2 vBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
( f( [- o. G, ?8 n2 A2 x" `7 Q% tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
/ h! T' }8 z: S) d假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
  }% U5 v: t4 LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
8 `. _) x( V& d: ]Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ w! f6 \4 {% b! L5 x& U从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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$ @# c7 r, Y9 t9 Q+ u$ X+ RLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 ~8 @) Y9 U/ Z' A& Y7 l- A5 ~" o为何如何难言？
( m; ^" j7 @) t; rI want to confess that I love you,
( Q0 @; e7 I# L0 k- f5 f我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
, U) A! h1 d. O4 T) N7 G! GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: z; Z: L1 M9 Q# i  X& L7 f7 A只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
0 }8 x2 B- L& K* G可否将它 托付于你？
! \5 w8 ^+ y6 A: J7 e. q+ yEntrust my love within your heart
1 J& O+ r2 U3 w从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

) G( ~2 P9 T# T: lCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
+ X! |2 f/ P! p$ v5 v8 ^! H" AEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
9 {& j: L+ U; z! w) w老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
' }( n/ T- ]  P1 C! M刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
# M% i% I6 `! `6 d7 U5 Svichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

7 }9 T; w- Y7 ~, V" M2 w$ J9 \- T9 ~4 M不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。