【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
! K: Q4 x4 N1 T% f$ ^! ~0 wxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

; u' _8 q) L6 e- t+ LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 E. Z2 ]* z/ ?8 s3 s5 ?. ^皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, o# p7 T: o/ U, i8 I2 o$ Z凝视明月 我心欢畅
+ F4 R5 r1 [" g/ dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! g+ Q0 {8 E% k# c2 B" p月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
# \+ G0 n3 s, p一片丹心 照耀夜空

/ S9 a, d+ l( Q9 S; S# w7 q8 zWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
2 p) l* S  `6 l5 R6 hSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
3 n; [: X+ C; n& {It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
; }+ x' |- T9 J8 ?- [9 j# cYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
8 |' T6 F* F( _- d) Q& U8 y口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
  Z& Q& t: k, a" R/ b$ }爱你爱你 全心全意
. J6 d" S# L4 H5 V; P: E" l( bNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. t# ?" G  n( \8 r能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
$ j( `2 F- |" v! I7 {: UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
  c  v. N; r4 F我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
* S7 L% D, l; G4 O$ v5 f- E( }你尽管把它掏去
& [& }6 R  j. ~" zTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
8 k+ t, @" r3 H* V4 ^+ @: hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 P0 V  _" r% P. U你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
8 G# e! s) e7 E2 Z3 R: S& @真恨不能 以死明志
6 K4 G1 F1 W, Y; {2 V% m% ZI only have one tongue
3 I5 ^8 {0 g) j* Q. N! ^7 ~我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
9 ?8 R0 \+ X8 h5 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
% Z3 `6 ]8 O5 k, y. j+ u+ Q0 PRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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% p# L' N" Z5 |0 W* ]% G5 m6 N7 L  o5 H5 n1 ?The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; g# _2 `  }, H爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
$ @3 q+ F( Y- G2 M对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
" {8 b4 G* V9 J& MWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
$ e8 `8 V( @) ~( _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
5 T( v+ j  y. C$ X* L( H  NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
" [- F5 W3 I8 }) i& N9 VI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
$ ]' q" t2 _$ j$ m& fBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
' b4 f5 @1 D# v& v! y0 lIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" M! ]% k0 r' M) M! Q# c, q8 O8 p不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
3 ^2 P5 h  ]7 }可否将它 托付于你?
7 @0 r3 u* M6 ?Entrust my love within your heart
5 y: V4 K/ F4 A) D6 P' n从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

6 P0 X6 o: y" zLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
5 L( Z% n3 M5 \1 z$ QWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ I' d7 T/ o# y4 m& U" Y为何如何难言？
2 q; q7 K% T5 X, `5 L; }1 g/ w) X& wI want to confess that I love you,
& Z5 _, ~' P: u+ C* t0 U我多想向你表白
0 w. `; e. Q; x+ zBut I never did
) H( ^2 u+ V, t& x# X8 \却始终未曾出口
9 l, L) p, ^5 }5 ^( k4 Y+ v3 g! r- qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ H0 Z9 s3 D$ j" }% h" u2 ]只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
2 N! K* I* a3 c0 r* I4 @7 GIf today isn’t too late,
: X- L  i, l( b0 `假如还不太迟
+ G7 B9 M. x) Z6 i9 N9 J+ HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% |; m. |& p  Z4 a% u! E今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( j2 Y+ A9 J: g9 I( ?! d不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
/ ]1 K  a: o7 {$ G2 |- j2 H* a7 lEntrust my love within your heart
3 A( y- H5 L0 v* F2 ^7 J从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

Can I entrust it to you?
4 C6 K# D: g. L" t" D( s& x可否将它托付于你？
# a2 y( b4 d' v: n. u$ ?( QEntrust my love within your heart
7 a+ q% v4 f9 z' m从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
1 M3 n2 n  s6 c老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
% M. X6 U9 {  s$ X" U1 K" Y- m) c刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
$ [2 }9 R4 _* ?( ~! r老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

' W' d0 ^9 \: M. S' j不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。