【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
6 |3 D( w$ v( j+ U( f) O, t袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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! n0 j% g: y8 n1 ?我想我從未表露出
& u1 g0 I3 A$ l# n' Z7 V深藏在我心底的那句
. J8 p1 h3 O: _* a我愛你  

0 F7 y5 O1 `8 x9 E" N; D) @. ZFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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4 U% _' O5 m1 j' v& v  s! _$ v在遇見你的第一刻
2 `8 s" t7 ~+ R7 @* l你已經深深的佔領了
2 `4 t( k, m/ }* {# y0 D我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% e( Q6 s9 k* J) F2 oI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

6 ~  r/ O9 l: p, }! z' H2 t愛  簡單的一句愛
+ M  ]5 q; x* q* }: _為什麼
如此難以表白?
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* |! C& v3 T4 t# r5 e  ]$ z  SI want to confess that I love you,
( j$ M1 t& ^4 A: r: L. e$ n; IBut I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
1 c7 T+ a2 _8 d卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
3 Y0 z6 g: u* \/ I$ e1 m你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
& t+ t/ s9 p8 e6 }我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

' l2 {# D/ y. f+ e' m" m  @8 V3 G# O8 G不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
% K4 T6 C: {0 s; t: j, |6 a! p9 z, [Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
' U& R6 u+ Y# c8 m托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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4 o4 v$ J7 Y1 V: ]/ [0 X7 u愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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( r6 l# B* E+ s% _愛你 我想要告訴你
- Q( x" u' i2 f! p$ b$ k卻還是說不出來
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5 W8 z: w6 R( z  eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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% q; q, P$ ?1 X5 M1 x3 {( K; l也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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$ [" L2 x  i* _希望今天還不會太晚
  r/ g  _# B7 H. p讓我向你表白
* B) p& J& y$ x  `) O我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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1 ?$ h+ N' k7 |- xCan I entrust it to you?
8 P% V% F' |* l1 N4 e; OEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
4 y- u3 p- \  ~' ]& Y5 c4 _托付我的愛
" \  U/ y3 t/ D3 l/ }* H收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
$ ]' R5 [6 E& @7 r, o2 s$ x5 VEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
" Y, h) k- b3 ]( Z% O& V/ O. Y托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿
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, E3 b! `  [, k& j5 D/ o! sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 R% {& b( }. U! _7 b4 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

6 M) E  @( _# n6 T' f皎潔月光下
- N8 r4 ^7 F+ }5 V/ Q1 H& u天空金銀閃爍
$ W) x1 T# ~7 `3 `2 ^' q# ?1 S凝視著星空
9 ~' c, T& L5 U1 d+ T- A' K4 z我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 L8 M! f% Y- O  L$ lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' ~+ f$ X( M0 B5 B; x, S9 j: c. l7 vSeeing the sky content with its love
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+ P6 j0 y3 l# h) |0 y2 g% E% @$ w6 x月光映在我的眼底
) d9 n: q- u# u1 H+ ?% ^$ M$ D月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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+ L1 X- T6 ]2 b- |It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
/ Q/ w* k9 h- c害怕我們的愛
$ i6 e' S2 R; V  @- m; w) o0 t: y終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
( |+ |: K* v. _/ l0 m我心充滿著歡欣
7 X1 X4 g3 z( n. H. o% J5 a愛你
堅定不渝
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0 L& X2 f! q0 \( q" w& c! LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
: o" J8 V; g5 l, ^+ H7 ^5 V- \我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

( H- e4 `0 T8 \' n2 k- ~我的愛 全心全意
0 W2 N( {- k$ l- P; `" J你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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+ w- o: P7 v* d$ X/ q% c' z1 aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

( b# q: |, @% {4 ]' c/ h, k: w6 X能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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* _( ]/ X" F  U7 M) F3 z! l; GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! K. |! j, X! B4 M$ z3 |6 R整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

- d  x1 d. ], [6 U# Q! [9 yI want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心

I invite you to rip it out
  @& B6 ~9 Y; u9 A3 X6 i9 JTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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  }$ U( z% C5 N) W$ N) S$ l* m$ \我歡迎你將它打開
. N( v0 U; {+ q7 l% P- `我願意用生命
1 p0 |# C6 z. h4 |( m來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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  N) L' v, ~& x6 I% |9 k我依然滿心憂鬱
( `2 H' }: \) F# x你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

; j" b% K9 Z  b2 j, p' ]I regret not dying
, \1 h+ k# _# SI only have one tongue
1 |' T, a' E! `. D  pIt’s nothing close to 100,000
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( v& \# \) g5 w  j可惜我未能以死證明
9 \6 q5 z9 K% B2 p+ K  V我只有一張口
5 Q' H7 u3 v" S/ f3 p遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
. w/ T" ~' Y6 q) P" u2 H4 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it

6 b) y* L( C& I- I這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
) l) I& |3 h/ U  v7 {2 I我將對你訴說
% v9 G1 ?6 h7 `" i' s) ^千萬個心思

Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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# U, Q: p: s. P3 r0 @訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

1 X2 X& n0 ~* t# u. F* H) v是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒