【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
0 J& @4 I3 s, |4 i; s袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

4 Q5 J+ I' ]9 uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
6 I, I$ U# n! {( m  r, ]& N深藏在我心底的那句
5 ~% g0 E; a5 ]2 a8 d9 p我愛你  
. n8 v2 Q4 d% d& J/ M8 ~
From the first moment we met,
" Z3 O& Q( L7 Z$ j$ A; OI already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
) a2 n3 ~9 a/ R5 {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

6 ^2 w+ M+ T. X  Z6 j6 x縱然朝夕相處
7 O5 z7 q% B' Z5 `& Y' p" @8 t還是不能肯定你的心意
( O) f7 @) p3 S$ S. U1 G8 H
! Z( U" E3 R  d. v1 p% SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* z" [9 {0 d% k' H0 d3 h1 c: V凝視著你的眼
$ j0 B5 p3 D2 u搜尋著你的魂
, K/ e! j8 _; f8 |! l$ H0 M我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

+ u2 B3 k7 C% ~2 q愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
) e( z4 c3 z- r8 i如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

- [, Q; G& @0 ^, I5 ^) c愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

! {  }" v# y7 t, KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
1 g- O9 `9 ^/ t
# w# H( u' [7 }( K( RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- E. p+ g+ r) d; i5 ]
5 Q/ `  J8 b3 y& e* g* ~: ?希望今天還不會太晚
3 [9 K; K- E" O4 O0 I讓我向你表白
7 `( s- h& e) i8 w8 v. c# Q我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# b% @& a; X5 o. {; o, _
9 y& E7 ]/ |- X不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
) K; d! T$ y* B- }$ _
+ ]' Q- e# k. Z- }( h# RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 R. @5 I( u6 {- @- F3 N" D可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

4 O/ Y7 C' h9 {0 F: Y愛  簡單一句愛
- r1 w" T5 Y; D7 k: v6 [2 K0 S* |為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
; x. E8 t& U. p% L! QBut I never did

. z, j! o5 Y7 j愛你 我想要告訴你
8 m% D6 {7 \, ^0 [; M8 y, ?卻還是說不出來

6 D! k- b! X5 g3 X, E4 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- v7 i- Q; F" B( B0 i! T+ b0 H% b
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
5 I, _3 a3 ]6 L, D* z1 L. s
6 P! G2 P+ _) VIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 |# y1 {, U/ ?, e" _# Y/ K
" @3 j3 A+ e  |" F8 ?5 {希望今天還不會太晚
8 E4 a) K; }. D, F讓我向你表白
7 f+ _5 y- @7 d5 n; X3 E2 a我心底的秘密
7 }; |4 L$ \: g  P7 W9 Q) S
+ _, d) I  ]# E  p* n! w$ @4 w+ RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

9 x" N: _' ~! m) z" H6 Q% j+ p不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
: V) M5 p- X+ J% n9 [
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
+ O  i) l$ s' c# F收在你心裡
( c% a: [+ g. V
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; V4 Y4 C9 f, {, w$ s$ j
可否讓我托付給你?
) D/ a: L/ j0 {" s+ p托付我的愛 收在你心裡
( A7 h5 R1 k- {$ v3 r
/ J( c( v' \( ^, G$ d6 M
  i$ w$ A4 q! O$ A# a3 ^- @. P7 H
% R* w0 I' Z7 p! Y
- O9 {  G4 S- X' G  c$ X6 R
6 a, C8 p5 u( n& L对唱曲参赛译稿
9 y0 }8 b: q5 O. k
7 z# G" c+ b# w. q: W  {3 q( pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& |. i: x! L$ \- H8 R6 A7 P; Q/ \0 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ Q2 E3 T- I+ U" O) `8 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  y; u* B. N( I, b
皎潔月光下
. g0 ^$ |) C$ i. a  u( g# O  S3 A天空金銀閃爍
3 T, ]# U% C& M/ o凝視著星空
% D3 {! Q( P6 s3 ?) `我心充滿快樂
8 f/ Z- h$ P- w, n; a8 \
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 |. y- D1 f* {! j! XThe sky is happy down to its soul
- V* i( Z  `$ D! f( zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( e) h2 K6 @; ^4 v! U  n
月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
, H: `1 T4 D4 x2 s+ ~月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
6 B3 R* C3 m- a# p! j7 W; @4 m! o
It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
' V+ v0 l" }! g# C. K8 J9 I$ E# Q% a
5 C+ k  X* V/ y  |6 @" n, _, y$ R5 p我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

- l  |- M2 k5 i$ TYou needn’t fear anything
( i- R- U& ~5 m% G- ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, V% r) h% |! F# J
你勿須擔心憂鬱
) G- T/ ^/ w" D8 n我心充滿著歡欣
* h6 Q2 K9 C% |4 K! z) m& `愛你
堅定不渝
+ B- G( Q) N7 }+ [% R2 y' D
Every other word you utter is love
% Z& f' q$ r2 f. q6 l8 G2 Q) I; XI really want to know just how much you love me
! Y/ h0 }+ E( y* j7 w3 j0 [+ r
$ X( g7 n! B; d% f: d% V- z/ W你的一言一語都是愛
0 ^9 {- p2 b" h+ w) G. V% ~& C我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

' Q: z* e  }; i% V6 W- {& _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
, {! P) @( V5 T! j: B你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" V: X/ ~& I4 M) I; h7 ]
能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

3 \+ _0 E4 r5 {9 U6 @7 e. fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 w  c+ b& h% {: ]整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
  X7 U/ y  T- b3 o8 V6 K
I want so much to see inside your heart

: k, o1 ~& w  a我想看透你的心

& f; _' i2 \, K" a' dI invite you to rip it out
) h8 _3 i* O+ t  ~To prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
, N2 K' o4 t* h2 d我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; C# E7 ]' N3 S- I/ S/ W$ w
- M! y3 B) s6 _. n" a0 Z我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
: G8 D7 b- T8 S  k4 R: }2 b
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
3 m8 \/ v/ e0 [' iIt’s nothing close to 100,000

% ?# U$ H7 H/ y1 Y) Y$ J; g可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
1 m! R$ P6 b+ w& z2 {2 L9 O遠遠不及千萬
% N( G6 ?2 \. r! x: ]
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 g2 c4 ~. g9 q* k
$ V) s! X! ]  O: R3 M, S& v這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
( l& G2 x& Q! p! v! w
( g2 G, @/ k/ [/ lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' U8 k9 Q( X* w7 S8 ]/ ?+ U如果我真有千百張口
  I* b1 q! u1 f我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
4 d& O6 Q1 i$ I* A7 b) m0 R' s3 P8 x
: ?# D- f6 A+ N) URambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
( E  \3 f( J  o  ~: S" Y! L6 H愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
3 X  g: m. f+ \% Z( |( T; |; Jxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

' ~3 H: P6 s. h  |是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒