【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
; `1 x* d' ~3 z" I: T袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

- b7 h, K. w8 I# c6 ~/ b( B; kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 v' [  a4 r6 OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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: |  v" m4 `7 l& _( M* |我想我從未表露出
1 W) g, m* N0 h( f2 D3 g1 H深藏在我心底的那句
# M" M! F: O7 [  t我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
- o- ?) T) J6 y2 l' u我的心

. M& U/ x) o' |$ |4 s; v, ?We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

& M2 `9 t1 t, G6 k縱然朝夕相處
( H$ D9 E9 u1 _* ^* q還是不能肯定你的心意
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/ E1 X7 m4 @; E6 C  NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 B) O6 h7 n# T8 s- R  b3 kI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
( s) P4 j1 ^+ Z  g" V我也許就能了解
- Z) m* @2 G) Y0 F) `# C% ?你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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2 Y( S. j, J5 z4 I* H4 s' F/ f& m& r愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
: i) r+ d) |! E* c+ v" q' H如此難以表白?
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' ?; c, ?9 ^9 H' [) h. LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

) d7 p; M1 s+ k& Z' y+ A愛你 想要告訴你
0 ~. H' Z# ?& g8 z卻總是說不出來
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& D1 Z; {* Z6 ?; r. g2 j: _! F5 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
8 a2 v- i" `4 J1 g- x; O4 w% g你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
8 B4 J. l( C7 t讓我向你表白
6 e0 T5 z# m- f" [+ I我心底的秘密

; Y, z! E1 G5 \/ _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

1 N& p! g: Q. f4 M' ?; E不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
% a' {) O* w! ^4 x$ b6 ]8 |托付我的愛
$ P! @* B$ F5 `& a# D: w& V* _收在你心裡
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' q1 a) e  U; A& @+ {5 d# i5 h  yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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  a) ~! X; C2 v  H% F! }* `  W& ]愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
* j0 t% D0 V" h" g) @/ aBut I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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; W& V( b8 j& X  q6 v% POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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0 M# j" y' K6 d" h! `/ U7 j$ t也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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5 C. c" f, t  h' _1 r, w6 F; x% ?If today isn’t too late,
7 {: ~2 F+ V( c8 `) hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

9 f3 C) U6 f; ?! E3 z希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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5 R/ g' P, S4 l  w8 f4 NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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+ i2 R/ ~5 Z& }( @  s( [" }Can I entrust it to you?
; B7 T$ v* }$ }) L: o, U) vEntrust my love within your heart

/ ?4 }5 ]& Z6 r" F6 n可否讓我托付給你?
4 b( U! K% L) h0 S& y$ j# U. C托付我的愛
; v0 P0 F" |5 j+ z+ n: a* B8 A收在你心裡

* f: K) j5 ^: X4 wCan I entrust it to you?
3 N4 `# g. s& [8 uEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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, ~: c5 `# E0 T. @5 g1 `+ k皎潔月光下
+ ^" z5 R' B5 W4 W/ y' M$ d/ y, ]天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
- ]/ G2 a1 b3 [- t! {5 }" d我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 ?5 w2 G8 B' s6 J% E5 o# NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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6 L+ [  }/ C$ D! j$ P& Q* a月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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+ T6 m1 W* \% {! sIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
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, A6 Z1 D9 b  F( a9 ?; vYou needn’t fear anything
; d. ]+ H" o+ p  s% j4 F! h" PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

0 \" ]8 D6 r& u4 [) C你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
, J1 d+ P+ Q7 w# f0 dI really want to know just how much you love me

你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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+ e1 }" ^. g5 ~! a8 SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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* x- k2 n5 |% M( a9 b" P我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

: t6 A# i) L, |; H; J能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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& i8 |. _- b2 a) G0 B6 R4 ^3 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# R2 W! ]! F6 D整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

; x1 k4 B; ~$ M9 F2 dI want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心

I invite you to rip it out
1 r0 }- ^/ l$ x- JTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
. v/ n, @/ @4 c) w* i  S來證明我的愛
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0 u* s: w7 |0 Q8 KI’m still filled with fear
. ^+ y0 E+ \- J$ Y$ H) DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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8 |" r8 N+ f* B* f; R. G4 t% I- r我依然滿心憂鬱
. q- v! B* R$ h. H  `/ S4 S你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
+ V# J) b0 I; @+ JI only have one tongue
+ c. r" w4 E! T( e  a$ \It’s nothing close to 100,000
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0 k% X5 V  ?2 J# N+ `! c# w可惜我未能以死證明
/ x& Q$ |2 V& _) m4 L* y0 V; p6 u我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

4 C1 {3 C) f; i2 I/ qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

& y9 [- t/ d1 o4 ^$ I( [7 P這樣一張巧舌
% m0 m2 E* E( H5 j3 Y3 H! e你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
! {' m! E' b* K3 j' W我將對你訴說
/ P0 d1 n6 `0 q' q' x千萬個心思

Rambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
- G. R7 |: K, x; xxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

/ ~! \2 X* [* X0 g" C# D$ \是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒