【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
& w9 l, x, t% H# l2 e袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

+ o. p3 e, e: n, ^# M: ^4 I, Q7 d: EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
$ y2 w: \% l1 n: `  s3 R+ ^  j深藏在我心底的那句
7 [3 ?* z& ^6 u我愛你  

- H( V8 A; e) x# K4 |0 fFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
. U) u- q6 T  Q1 s: B' g8 t你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
% d0 T- o5 @: W4 {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

; y8 W. ]$ N- T# l" F" t縱然朝夕相處
" g8 G: U+ i# m* a還是不能肯定你的心意

2 |8 h5 B6 `% O1 @  E3 ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% w# p4 b, L! F/ Z, K  c0 y; cI would probably know how you feel
  B0 m5 k. m! g$ t: Y凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情
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: Q6 J% X: v! u9 dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
; }8 n/ ]# ~9 t: z3 N為什麼
如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
9 r2 h, o, R8 y/ fBut I never did
4 `7 N9 L/ N5 t! C. \: n$ h; S! W
愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

& H/ C) }# F4 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
1 _+ I" M, w9 Q$ Y3 A我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

3 ^( z! a9 F' Y3 p2 ?& z! i不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
# R. f5 c; s7 y+ Q1 gEntrust my love within your heart
( t# o# }+ E4 @# g1 r可否讓我托付給你?
9 Z. g5 k* |2 U1 q, @- d托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
- Y# m9 B$ X2 i; H3 ]* kWhy is it so difficult to express?

) f( b  ?& B' s3 k2 W) ]愛  簡單一句愛
/ x: Y! _' s) ^. y" }為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

& O9 Q3 ^. @+ R7 V/ a6 \* c愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

8 Y# F  \. |0 J# I" T: jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 `$ G$ G& v& B; A# m
4 R2 b4 O+ E7 H7 Z$ o+ k( `也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
% A& b$ a# m0 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
- H/ Q! _8 a* E9 n& |讓我向你表白
, y( H% y% k& ~0 g7 w* N我心底的秘密

- f4 a3 P& `5 O) b: l, kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 x; u2 G7 \- l. x
0 T' k9 W6 K$ a4 j! D# m不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
4 X$ K6 m/ Y" R0 }# mEntrust my love within your heart

: [0 k9 m/ ]0 f- K5 I. j/ Q可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

/ P; G8 \" F8 R5 G0 X1 q/ ~Can I entrust it to you?
9 B% k# g7 W1 d# cEntrust my love within your heart

, [; d1 F2 d, v) U可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡



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对唱曲参赛译稿
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! V; t. K* q4 {" Q5 L% J! X, {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! K; [7 ~. Q5 U! C. s# u% V$ }; UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

& B2 Y1 Y; o: I% k4 R) M# I3 r皎潔月光下
9 q: Z: I* r) r  f" o! _2 y* z天空金銀閃爍
4 L: Y; o# S6 T3 L凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 i" x  v, y& rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
; g' S* Q5 b4 L. d月夜陪著我一起沉醉
$ s' f1 }  N( q月光輕吻著夜幕
* {. T  a5 R9 M1 m. j) x星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
; T& ?6 X& A2 l6 O3 @+ a2 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ T6 U8 I; s4 r: @3 K
/ P, u$ q" Z+ F4 j. @3 @/ E! y2 j9 z你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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/ k; |% Q; J% }2 K0 m5 |你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
. D: M# R% D4 y2 c0 l3 Q2 g* GNothing can compare to my love
* k4 R8 X9 ?0 `
7 e/ d+ v1 t- V  c% `7 e2 I我的愛 全心全意
3 p$ r) v1 v9 @. y1 X" B你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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" N: n  |7 k0 @8 b5 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  s" T; \2 u" y7 x# @整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

! D8 I  C: M% u) L! \5 rI want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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# n; ~3 ]' F& L# e" NI invite you to rip it out
/ b) J* s; G. L  i( v" Z9 KTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
! r/ j, L# x5 d& \) g6 T
我歡迎你將它打開
/ M7 u, U# }- K. N) A7 {# c4 q我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

( R) y0 k: }$ l; Y. r* ^- k% K- `I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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- R. D' N) f, J1 ~1 r! A3 y可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
7 o; z. e9 F3 U! q/ ?' y遠遠不及千萬

- }8 K6 A2 Q, J' gWith such a tongue as yours,
5 y( K& C5 z# gYour speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
- A) k  P; |' g1 _0 c; B3 ^你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
4 F& c* \* M- a3 h4 B. J我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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4 n3 X- x% P; ?; f. ~" J2 }0 d訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
8 e' E8 X& ^1 F! ]* nxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

& ^/ m! u" ?( I0 ?+ ]7 I! B, L# d是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒