【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

: i. v( k% D! _6 f) P  {7 t我想我從未表露出
: N) ^) z8 M# ~; b, N( |7 }# b深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  
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8 \) K5 U/ A) L, r1 V8 G& NFrom the first moment we met,
9 o+ L! o  e8 Q9 C4 g& ]7 tI already loved you with all my heart
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, w! O6 E0 c) E, ]" t4 i在遇見你的第一刻
) ?/ y( H& F( b2 }你已經深深的佔領了
" P- t1 Q% D- U) Q2 C1 d我的心

! C. V9 c% w/ {. q4 HWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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+ m" x$ k6 o3 ]# y, @9 H& N5 s縱然朝夕相處
( H  k2 U6 Z7 d1 R還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) h# P1 P0 L: [凝視著你的眼
) o: v4 g+ W! x* K6 K+ F搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情

% _7 a- ~7 H, H/ V/ [- cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
2 d3 ]& W# m6 T7 N6 ^; M為什麼
如此難以表白?

- s2 A' R1 W/ f" w+ OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

9 o3 {3 F0 m- ]5 D9 M* \1 ?愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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9 a* B" i( P2 i3 x4 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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; D' _. ]( R( X1 A/ A. TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
7 X5 d/ q2 \. e) {2 H* x/ \讓我向你表白
) g7 O5 i  F8 }/ F( V我心底的秘密

# ]* D6 Q, r8 ]3 LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: d# Q% R' M5 p/ r8 j+ ]3 F2 }1 ^6 v2 K1 w
不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
0 ~' W9 {2 W& \5 C3 h6 kEntrust my love within your heart
* y. w3 O. |2 D- c% d可否讓我托付給你?
6 z( _1 ^' x$ K. Z' o托付我的愛
- F+ o9 ~8 a/ e4 [收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
) u0 h- M1 ~$ b8 e9 OWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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1 M7 _4 `7 R! L, b9 M+ ~' II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

3 j$ v$ P% f3 ]愛你 我想要告訴你
( C& L8 A- w' }3 S/ z, s卻還是說不出來
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+ K: I! b, d; |( x9 y9 JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

- }  T7 e3 G2 hIf today isn’t too late,
: C8 w3 k1 F2 W+ i& r2 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

4 D, |" X  d) k3 ~0 I( M$ t. e希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

, `# ~' r( C" p% _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! b. n) p' R4 i9 t' V9 j) I可否讓我托付給你?
- ~" M2 a7 j* \6 W托付我的愛
" z, J! s5 v2 G. Q" c% k$ M收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

$ Q! e( S  J+ H4 [+ l: H2 ~可否讓我托付給你?
' n% L2 s7 r7 e& L# i( X2 Z# J托付我的愛 收在你心裡


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4 i6 Z$ T8 M" o& Z7 a% p; O对唱曲参赛译稿
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ V1 V: d! |* ]/ a( `; SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 v; R$ T' S+ k. Q* b6 H5 \! fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

- x: D" O7 R9 x- n皎潔月光下
% S+ Y0 i0 B% ?$ h: G  _天空金銀閃爍
3 ^$ N8 h7 Z, A3 b1 [* Z9 W6 Y8 ?凝視著星空
1 i% I. M6 j( u我心充滿快樂

0 D6 C$ e' u+ HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ x% L% G/ `  q; p- [3 A- WSeeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
) o! ~4 p) ~. O- Z4 r5 `月夜陪著我一起沉醉
3 a2 A7 y+ j" U8 P月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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) ?: c7 W4 Q  W  SIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

/ e  L5 m! W7 Z4 |5 U. A& C我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
# L3 `4 W8 N; ]. N- a/ x6 r/ y4 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
* y& l  S0 Q, E1 Q. a, m你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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/ J3 R$ D! w8 s; J$ \, n# ^能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' e, C+ t) P, ~整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart
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3 ?0 {% B5 c" ]7 Q$ ?我想看透你的心

( J5 d9 g/ o3 u, t5 m4 x" F: mI invite you to rip it out
2 Q( G1 G0 f  e$ s9 w! H0 ^+ a" _) oTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
/ Y/ `' f' S, O. Z0 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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, Z6 h3 u8 b2 |1 A6 E- m& D! y9 @我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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& d$ D! l8 f1 Y- k8 x# ~7 lI regret not dying
$ Z( k8 ?! _6 L, y+ ~I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
+ T0 H& ?/ R0 |遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

5 h" |7 F) u' |- |, t7 @這樣一張巧舌
9 m; }* `. r* w& U$ k你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

3 I0 T2 M  J% m* a0 c* V, m" \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
5 S, h9 E: \) `/ p) M5 rxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒