【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 `# U* W7 ^* V' ?1 l& m: c3 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( y% o8 N2 ]1 @5 p( B( SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ ^) D5 D9 {- IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 N1 ]3 Q) W+ O3 U9 Z# UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ W  ^8 H* w4 o; ~0 LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 R$ c& s9 W% s6 Z4 h* |! X6 B: UI want so much to see inside your heart
- h0 C5 |% v( k( V- II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  E9 a5 i" I& {' r: RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 p2 h* B0 K6 \- mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 T- ^7 \$ h7 YWith such a tongue as yours,
) z5 b* Q+ o! r/ Z- I7 G8 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 d" n7 h; @, L  a/ k; D( AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 i# j0 D' k7 h/ O2 i9 T" ^- kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* j9 y, C& q3 P7 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 n! x, u; n3 Z/ N9 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( l" U4 T3 L2 V& K$ ^+ y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; P5 w+ G) A5 J6 L) @7 {  h( i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 K& l8 h- |9 J; s9 E5 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ T# b7 u- x" J$ n4 H; N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 @% K: x5 w2 ^: R1 j8 g! I$ S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  J) O- y" A/ ^; Q# J( O0 X# ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ B5 S2 `! m7 @0 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 l$ B! Z4 x  Y8 t+ W. L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: f3 W( v0 Z  ]/ K( j4 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ q& K5 l8 S5 P# s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" W0 @  o) K) k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 U8 |/ n0 l2 A& j$ Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  ^+ s$ o. \4 o& @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 k, j- L8 k% D* A/ O( V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 v6 ^" B8 L# J- g8 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ v8 _# X  f9 G  Q: O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' t! {: {: Q6 p6 a4 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& D3 B: V& T  U+ k4 C* b7 x- _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 p. d+ d" N* [2 ^; O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" h4 `+ X( ^9 n$ b<P>I regret not dying</P>
! L. D/ D6 L! C. [1 e$ \- g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 g1 H3 |8 c2 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  H1 p% |) v) |2 t" h2 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! A5 n3 f1 e& @! T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 G: @' E8 e. `. v" E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& l6 _# n" @- w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ L) n+ l9 B) @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ A) A' a2 G7 O我请你剖开它
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& ~' B7 X% M' [$ o1 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>