【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ D0 k/ N3 o9 `歌词我附在后面。
2 I+ w4 ~. Q+ ^/ Q" ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ @; W4 G4 K  x2 w6 c: b& TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 V" M3 \0 K7 K# u8 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; j; h3 q+ S4 V. X6 m/ h, pThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 n$ n" X4 A4 y3 t2 x3 D* i' EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; [$ U( g6 f/ w8 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 c6 V; b" G+ Y: aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, f. z2 H$ I3 WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* `. t6 }+ K3 X$ L6 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 k+ c- s8 {% L) _3 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  y" l/ }6 {* x+ s. t/ C0 r/ qWith such a tongue as yours,
/ Y9 s( ]6 y/ B7 t3 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( F5 z! D2 c) h+ ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 V, T+ x, B9 A0 O2 l- c" R; xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: A+ E7 y8 C( E/ e9 _2 `( q1 Q& c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' V" ?' k* x  y4 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* n6 k6 M5 [) A0 l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ s6 j; L; L0 D7 F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. ^2 D: L6 ]: p7 Y, P, Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 w# d2 k6 d* [5 t- ?8 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! Y8 l* [; y( a- `" e" J" U) B) {; D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ w8 s6 h1 @  r. e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  n4 ^+ ^/ [& e; z* {3 t. d7 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- {( `; O& h/ x  F7 F4 X7 P* K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 X2 X+ W) ~. O' F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ s3 Y3 R5 l; V7 `4 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 p7 j1 P/ F$ Z4 @! j6 U4 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ v; |; s5 }0 e5 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 t% d( v; P+ |* z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) l* ~: H5 f; v5 j5 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, [& p( }9 B4 C6 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# `+ G8 P" L, n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ ?1 L! H5 {+ _8 k9 q2 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 x- h7 P7 Y! `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 I. `: A& w; `6 L. N9 R2 ]- {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) k6 F5 }! I+ {7 y9 A- L3 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' C; Y/ l  k! Q' E9 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ f* v+ Q- S# P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) F5 L* u* B0 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 Y( [9 b! E' K: E( i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ j  d2 [6 @8 S$ j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ x/ ?. E# {- H) F; ?4 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% V) ]% \# S/ |% E+ A) q4 [6 y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# @& D! l8 D7 Q1 l# v我请你剖开它

/ S4 B, x& U; f/ O( O# [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 H2 w9 z' a6 q" g- E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>