【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- W# k) n& x$ X0 K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 K. K' B% _; A6 T; V, PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 q- e! {8 |& gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" k) \2 ?9 k0 ~+ n1 }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 [3 L; P: W# n: v" l. SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) o& _9 l! [) ~9 r. n: P+ GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 [( |9 ?6 V. D0 ]1 T. RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 Z4 r, `7 L! G; z, e; e% H6 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 o% l( K) H0 L4 E, P7 ^I’m still filled with fear
2 B, y' {! ?  @+ ]* iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& K+ L* n9 T0 \% ^  D8 vI regret not dying
& L5 A+ J# X1 ]$ hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& d+ n* W% m7 @$ A6 D5 cWith such a tongue as yours,
. h) y+ x% C7 ~  @1 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ L9 T( D+ J0 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ N6 H2 K; w+ D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* g" Z( _- ?3 S% ?$ n& Y+ V1 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 F) T0 g: h7 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 U/ k3 j3 J( D& h; g8 x( Y: R. d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 s: y. t3 I8 V4 G0 R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ p; ]$ m0 @7 `, x8 V* R- }/ p. g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; E0 h. m, X7 \% x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ E5 P  J" g  a+ x( D) u0 @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- `: i9 W+ k% Y) I. Z5 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' \  ]2 p0 Y& `  W+ s4 S3 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 V) t& M+ Z& K$ e1 b/ i. {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 T# G6 E6 ^: t5 r+ g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 D- ~  w+ x& k( V- |$ U" g) S; w+ ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ A9 r3 @  N3 k/ y, l* ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* v7 ?5 _1 T5 r9 M" ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& y8 n' O' _5 e8 ?6 u& R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 ]! d$ }: F7 `/ F' L1 J7 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# M2 d0 C; p) T( p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" }+ T( j2 Q  D6 N* U% J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) @3 V9 G5 k( x2 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ T1 e* a4 k8 o) n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) |$ o% L0 A  G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 N$ G) J$ `0 j% Y  G* J1 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 d: v8 ?6 j3 o8 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 _3 E* K3 o9 C8 Y* p0 d$ m) q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' q2 V. T0 D* @8 X, L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  g& Z  d0 d  ]- ?/ S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! _- w. Z3 p$ d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; {& s) A8 S: }* A" n5 x# I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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* A: a) {$ A- o5 S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>