【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 @) Z, o0 h  V歌词我附在后面。
: f- }) l, u" m) \: B$ wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! F2 v4 Y# Q# l9 u3 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ O& N% {+ U- }1 ?7 A, v# aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 j% ^" k$ n# B5 W  wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 o; f9 z* }0 z7 L( mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 p3 Y- q0 c1 g2 F/ JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* V& L) j3 t# s' e$ l4 o' _: w: XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 v7 }, B2 ~4 c& EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& L7 R0 L! ^' G5 ?9 b2 W9 A, CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) w% ?6 }- |! h: _# ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 q" c1 a: e. Q2 l1 R; w# _9 S% nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- f3 W, q7 F) UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 z% t# |8 W6 O% U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 T6 v) F  H! W& _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% P" n: p7 H+ t. y3 O% H4 _5 n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# ~  z' ]8 N, H- u7 o! {' E+ |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 r4 Y) n  }1 I" l0 \2 t8 A6 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ^5 |$ h9 ^7 }0 W  F3 q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, f5 p9 I. ]* X( Q0 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 I0 j' p  N: y5 Q& k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; i7 S  Y; }* t( U, s$ y/ _( l5 V$ q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; t- K; a" b; i9 @& a" _9 Y1 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 r4 s: ^% ~7 S4 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ l) O7 i7 K/ Q7 _; x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 ?* E5 X: G, c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ M# ]7 ?; i# O* C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) @$ n( ^5 q5 P* T$ v3 W7 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 o2 p  x" Z! l6 k5 B3 `: }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 V( o8 n0 B* H4 ^# I+ }2 J+ M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; O" j# A  ~/ S, I' b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ K8 @1 i& y: q6 ~. `) H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, q- }" P' y* K9 T8 A# S2 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, T% P# h/ [/ B" o8 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 v8 s/ o" U+ O% m! L& s8 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ }) C7 A9 t" {* J9 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 l' f) x* {2 u( u* O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, e% r. T0 a6 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 v) N) t$ W( P8 M. l我请你剖开它
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( I3 @* e/ b# w% c8 r( k2 O, S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% v# q+ W; }- u% h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>