【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 d) _! ]3 [+ M0 c$ UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: o5 o' ?, c- E' ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 i& Q1 \, z9 i3 _9 Q5 K! FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, u; c$ f! s. |7 H( hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& b8 d4 I$ C8 p" b- |/ n& V- mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" Z+ r0 A  R' bI love you I love you with all my heart
- [% B5 ]9 v0 @# _Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 W) a, j1 `% P- YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- F: s& ^% I: qI’m still filled with fear
7 u* L6 E: Q: a9 I( J9 K, B: OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" i" S4 a& C# l- H) |3 D/ {- |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 ~& j3 ^! ~$ C! b8 ^% DWith such a tongue as yours,
- b8 |- _* g4 z( t) G$ o: T* ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  ~/ y; t% {& @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ }& |: `1 z: V8 m) n: d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  L1 y$ E6 k0 h: \" K* p: f+ I. h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' O/ `) e  c6 _+ H; Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* d/ ?: i# r! n9 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; w5 L! t$ l; o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 d2 t8 k6 _; U9 h5 ~8 P. z, V7 M8 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- l8 S$ @) a" Z/ n, c8 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; z; P+ u+ z* W/ R" H- j' j) g<P>你无需担心</P>
( Z# ]1 u& Y; f, J8 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' P+ u* e& b! p/ E5 }/ q% C% l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 z9 \( v* ?4 _4 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. ?% p: x1 z7 j/ R7 @2 P6 m2 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! ]7 y- d, s1 }* y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ w$ k, b2 S% B# u0 L( \( w; P( w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: K. s; H1 Q3 M  O0 q2 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- W  C/ G% R6 J' h4 D8 e* W' U0 u- O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 H5 i+ q, T+ Q- d7 G7 ^" ]3 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ D$ c2 ?; d6 h# h9 {7 }! e0 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# Q' k# Y. Q: u<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 Y6 w$ D$ N0 j, I$ Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ o& c# ?# `( o0 S. j, o9 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) ^5 @7 z' y7 o3 Q. G: w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 z$ V# e# w/ `' H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! S  H. I3 G! q) p# M0 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% h4 j2 I* Q, e! u8 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 _6 ?# j6 H0 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 q7 p- y$ `7 H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 _; P: p* z; b4 [8 c- l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 W1 P- `1 [# v3 _, l3 [我请你剖开它

/ A/ c% \" v% s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>