【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 x# v7 s8 q4 Y3 K  ?- o) QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, u  A& \/ ]. \* f1 i4 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& F/ b8 P) R3 f2 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 S0 ^! A/ y& KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: w" B1 e; u  m! j4 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 }2 k2 |- Z8 HYou needn’t fear anything
% E: R" L/ i1 ]) b) }6 B! [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  X8 ^' ^$ B8 G5 P0 C6 a, {4 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
3 w0 C! O' N* D8 `3 Y% g( A7 L) Q  OI love you I love you with all my heart
# e4 ]% g- A, g1 e- HNothing can compare to my love
2 [' Z( }) S/ W3 k1 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( D* ?& m0 d% L9 ^: h- o0 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 A$ ]3 ^3 K9 u6 |- @" uI want so much to see inside your heart
9 K& {% {. H0 p5 U9 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: I5 a8 C5 X/ q' pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 m; e3 T% m2 `0 p, w: s' {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 a6 C" |6 k+ hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: S2 c5 B' x4 E& v' `8 Q! QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ Z( D% {* U$ T* |% p! H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( m$ l! L( d) I/ X$ C9 e9 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' ]( N+ s) ?) f5 T( t3 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" W. ^2 c0 _/ o* g" ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& A( p+ ~+ S1 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 N3 D7 A+ G! V4 O  l8 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 J# O7 J% p+ i, X2 K  @* S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 J8 l2 b: u! u/ G3 E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: \3 O& S/ q+ K3 X! b$ j% B: |& ]2 z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 \  F: G) ]/ G3 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) N0 }9 \8 g# o' K2 b8 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 X  D9 T, P9 U" n. ~) Q! v+ o' {<P>你无需担心</P>
  G3 ~8 \8 L. K! |8 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. Q7 L) a; U7 H) L+ u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 n3 }, x6 i- K0 V' ]0 H4 @6 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 k6 }6 q2 q- G3 S4 ]3 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( U  p$ n" d  L5 P/ e2 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ _+ U3 K8 W' v& T  N6 N7 [8 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 \: Z6 C* [( s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; w) X' f9 P0 ~; i4 q6 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 `$ Q" R6 S/ _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 K% Q3 Q& _5 n3 ?  y! @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 R, |( [5 K% L3 i% s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 Y* R# s& j$ |* @0 o9 x7 a3 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 f& f  b: Q# ]' g<P>I regret not dying</P>
# T* F, k1 i+ j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 Q4 H! x% o. x/ k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: s$ x& F4 q3 M1 m! G, ?8 t. G5 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, d+ @5 `3 Y! Y3 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 z. Z4 x9 ?, U: A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 c+ _. i9 d' p, ?' f( Y我请你剖开它
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: @$ k# D* @) n9 W5 v% W( t% A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% Z5 X. f8 F% g. l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>