【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 M1 @3 ^$ `; \2 B/ J: N7 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 E' i) W+ q$ V% s3 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" V+ R* G1 v$ j: m0 |7 R/ WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: V7 F' V# q4 Q' |- LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 @; y3 d/ G* ?+ _1 k- rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& D$ y% W  ]5 Q& |/ v  E1 D6 |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ P. I2 M2 X9 @( k# U2 ^" F! a& aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' i3 V4 O; Z5 ]% B( MNothing can compare to my love
& e2 E; L. r' eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( Z; g# V7 G% G! a1 H7 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ s, y; S( Z/ _. Z. D$ W1 S: wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  m) v2 Y6 v% ]$ ]/ NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ G- z2 x" J7 \9 Q: }+ f9 @( L: g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- b  b! U, P8 d' C/ [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 e, c9 o+ }( M( z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 V; W5 x5 F/ I! y; ^- `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; N+ n0 p6 ?9 ]4 X+ P& O% w" d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ A+ A! ?# A4 L: z9 g& K- e$ s! a: V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, U: I; k0 d6 s, Q- F/ d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, D# v) l2 Q: j6 r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 O7 {8 A9 o0 r' L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 D4 A6 y; a, S4 E- w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 v# j) f# V+ f" r, f, O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" _+ R2 T; @0 B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 c1 R( b# G1 W2 b& P2 A5 W3 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) I( u# t/ {) l( A& m, {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 c  w( j' r8 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: m# f6 W8 q* S) |3 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: @$ b- D% a, J+ g5 ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 Z8 p0 r' ]& }1 V* q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- t2 f: h4 h: d; D  U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ ~4 V* c& {% ~$ C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 F, L1 Q5 J1 M+ i- A4 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 T) \3 q, Z5 w% k" L& `  |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ ]$ v* v# v( K/ ~0 l$ H6 |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& j( ^0 L# _8 D/ k& }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 ]4 K& W# K0 q2 @# f9 E  J7 b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: C: [+ M% L& ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>