【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 M) d) t4 ]+ p% b* L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, F- s! Y( v+ iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* O2 o* y! t. D8 q. @4 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 E7 i" B9 C. C5 XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 T  S  R) s! q' o4 UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, m# }5 x4 ~+ \! V- z0 uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# z: h1 l) I/ HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# Y2 ]" M+ u. L( bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- j8 c) O8 K, P% K% a7 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ U8 s, ^- R5 s3 P. e! X# BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' p+ a. t. R/ |1 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& L$ e* C  m8 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 r  A& M1 `. }2 A  T) _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; R+ h2 A8 }0 m& F1 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. \7 U# t8 B# U! h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. C8 \5 y) j- F' d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' ^) o  y' n& I- e. i$ g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% Y- `; u6 }8 H: n/ ^) N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 @, V6 u1 G3 \  m* c, r% H  G, ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- S# m  f9 [9 Y% V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; [5 N/ r8 q9 G0 z" x; Z& b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 C/ S# c- K- x0 U1 s3 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# e9 ~1 v8 k9 U+ l3 K/ a' \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 g9 a: w' W3 t5 u0 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% ]2 E* k; q3 ?# h0 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) }" m$ @1 O. U% M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  R3 I% K6 {' b) B* y7 A$ _! I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 K( v! ^7 B% r; I$ S  A! \/ u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 w/ \, J" q: U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* x4 r) P0 X/ Y. M) K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) s: m. W( j7 l& W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 w" {' C0 J- |4 Y& g. \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' t+ R  O4 f5 X# K8 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' V9 M2 ^# e' Y9 g7 [- O/ Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) d0 h; v7 E; J/ y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ @3 P5 }* D' u" }8 I* D" Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 j2 V7 [: B- ~7 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& [2 `- o3 A, ~- n1 X4 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
$ d' R6 w3 F  X8 D
我请你剖开它
# b, ]2 x: K9 l. [( \
3 q! |4 P  K$ k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>