【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" [% h8 T% `/ }. C) E. x1 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' Y# R* z- c5 y# k7 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 N: o+ Y# X# q1 N2 K5 kYou needn’t fear anything
8 N5 C- F: p3 K% ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 `8 j% k; Y" H% T7 c; \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. E  D! ]$ i. r6 \& L. ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ P# |5 h# |) u2 Z/ Z1 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, {# F! I* T7 c$ D; s' iI want so much to see inside your heart
8 a! q- g; `2 }9 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, B) I: P  u$ I# o( m7 |, t8 U# AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: O4 O+ o# |# x6 p+ w* fWith such a tongue as yours,
' R& [: z/ [( K6 ?3 ]5 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, m9 a3 x) l+ zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 h, e9 J, r; U+ M1 r9 n/ _) q5 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 R7 t- G' p  }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ w! K& F5 j5 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' F9 M) s! j+ y3 e3 T' V+ I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! [$ k" P* h  a, q5 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* s5 d* H, x. b) w# ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  w# }* K8 @9 }8 y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* _5 ^# X; U5 |1 E# M$ j9 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  m$ D8 }( R% i. Q: l7 ]( y$ C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Q! g. S0 t2 A0 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 a3 m8 [3 O  P& B: b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" R+ i! B: m2 G) M5 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) b7 g6 H; F  U9 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 S* `, \, e0 v" j" c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( f9 T3 [* X5 ?3 {5 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ F% \  k# e/ \# X5 @$ y! \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 x: t, D, x5 R7 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 R' v. {' [9 \9 {5 H4 i1 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, m  p4 e% t3 j/ Q1 G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! {0 X9 q* \& _9 U- g& ^' V# [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 X, `( n3 {8 n# ^8 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ D! V* j% A& w1 m! M8 @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" w2 a- D  H4 \8 C/ p' S6 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>