【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 e* P7 [1 T$ M. E" Z+ u8 F歌词我附在后面。
5 a; G/ X4 D. o! O8 p* o$ q7 C* @The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 d, h: D" C, ]. `- H& }Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ D1 ]" [/ T6 `/ PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* M" W! Y: z9 y; _* ?! L# uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  u" Z1 f- M. f$ E/ Q' A: IThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 U% S, m* _4 w/ a) k( m9 eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' ?+ h( t& X% a6 X) D1 x$ qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" b5 V  Z. f% b% v) LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# H8 V1 Z: P& O% ^* R+ T0 QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: @: o& t% m: Y: m9 C4 ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: {+ j" N! p5 z0 A  P: A4 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ }% u9 I. j/ R2 b" RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 J# ~2 I. S) H1 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 U8 f5 t- a6 [$ {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 \5 W' u2 Z( S" t% o! v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# E) Q8 b! }) e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* y4 T0 x) F" P* X$ V* g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- }2 s6 O5 ]1 E3 Y9 L0 x0 Z+ ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; L7 t) C3 C" ]8 V1 f/ S2 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; X7 ], V) \) b$ a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 {& n1 F  |+ u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, I* f1 h* M5 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ ~  x. B0 K' ]3 V$ i) [. \" S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ U8 I- s9 r% t: p- q- L2 M4 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- J- E+ H9 C9 }/ s  ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 I0 S7 D1 [9 M7 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& K; f( m  h! _1 V6 u3 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! G" ]7 \" j. K6 \$ P1 N8 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 [0 E2 \' |3 E/ O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 u9 G$ q( L4 w$ A4 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# n, _* R1 @) C# l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) H0 y% p# ~  b( G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" {, Q9 L: U6 g6 Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  m5 R- [: j$ F4 H; b6 `2 ]% F! p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  \+ T: P; v) `/ Z. P. ~% S/ G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ u3 Z% ~; @) B0 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 M0 e7 P$ @' ?5 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 U* ?+ B3 A4 O- u# Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* U: a4 `/ N* w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 D: J0 G$ k0 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( Y0 L/ W7 o3 h3 q$ l) ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ p8 @2 y8 T4 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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