【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 P2 Z/ V; F6 w8 Q1 B9 E" f9 C! SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% t! V6 ^& Q( c4 A: x6 h  _With the moon kissing it every night
2 ^5 n& {, v4 LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 E) x" v! b  p% MYou needn’t fear anything
2 K/ t/ H. G( g2 ?# `. UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& G2 x  O9 t! |2 v3 DI really want to know just how much you love me
3 n0 G* I% v+ gI love you I love you with all my heart
1 Z' S+ b) t" D# s: v$ VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( W8 W' k( A1 wI want so much to see inside your heart
+ U# @5 @( y( B# B& O6 P1 J" [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: ?0 D* c* Q. n$ c. G' KI’m still filled with fear
0 x* B1 a& d: _4 z/ U& [' a8 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" D! k9 N3 n6 W* o0 AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* y; R  D3 J; s8 w; s2 v4 S! uWith such a tongue as yours,
& q. l+ h9 c& w* b' V0 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 j5 C7 B- o  H; a' l& m* L$ [8 N$ H% BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 e3 ?& f) f) r3 S, f) [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  T7 I7 a2 H: t; v5 ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 y2 T( [3 r) l1 _; f2 @/ ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ d5 U& x& T- ^* m" K& r& j% D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 V1 g$ G; D7 e0 H8 k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# j/ J6 Y  @& E& [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 U& g- B6 o1 O8 M2 n! D* U( E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; S/ g2 g; @+ A! B) i8 Y! W$ c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 s# E( S0 a, m) R/ }& b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 s  R& ~3 z$ F6 C5 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: c  u) H+ C# M0 e: T# }: S3 J2 |& N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 ~1 k1 l, L) K2 Z4 B/ K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. v/ }, l1 P+ O/ w1 g. G( E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 K9 X9 c2 l" n1 j3 p3 @9 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- e2 Z) ^$ @3 r. @- Q7 V" Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% f9 W1 S% B. `0 y  Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  \5 x" e- g8 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, ]; K5 M% i1 X5 `' |* K! L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 j! h# y, l8 k: i& P0 j% D<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ u: H) U& Z8 {+ ~% F+ S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 {* `1 I# H, O  z; ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ F' C# ~% |5 O' u, v1 V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 O" ^* H3 f8 Z9 |, ^( `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& g/ d6 K, F. l$ I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( A& [; ?  c) m$ n6 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ m: g" `" e1 e+ T# H- _) f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# l7 W2 u8 p$ C0 F; J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>