【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' l* N4 e0 C5 y0 O! M" ?4 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 x3 b9 D" L- o7 C2 T5 CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- U; l  |3 x. @" nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 n7 f* T' w% G9 Y: OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. W& h4 V, d1 u* n7 f- m( OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 {: G: @0 m8 N! U: iI love you I love you with all my heart
# }7 V( E7 U- dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( \$ |8 r  @9 y! r: S! |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" [! ~# D$ U, S6 l& W! R- uI regret not dying
8 P, t% p4 R8 r2 u$ M. ^9 e: B; PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. j2 O3 C! B9 T) o& }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# t2 Z0 e; `6 t2 c6 Y% h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 E# ~. x8 A2 o& b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' m& P4 d( W, \2 Z0 s3 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- }' `3 d) K3 J* T0 ~" b& v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- @" E1 z$ X8 n* X4 I" q4 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! ]  y" N: E3 |& s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 x' S" ?% d* s4 Q9 {8 r$ ]7 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 b9 B  O( x* a; U; Q  e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 C1 Y; h& S- c  z& I+ O0 V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- X& r* I8 ~4 J/ \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 t8 j1 o$ N1 v" Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 F& w; ^% T8 p0 c$ }* m, ^! w- k( z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ O1 k# w1 S" d4 j5 j: H2 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 s+ P% U" E" j0 |" M  F" ^0 P6 {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. _; P" ]% k/ D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% y+ z3 L7 `% t6 Z9 m- k! m' t+ @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 r8 ^) p1 s. L! u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% v$ c" y7 ^1 Q) R3 b, F) X* z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ V1 P2 q7 n$ r) L8 J% S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 A" `% H  q; c  W; j: Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 L& k9 x  x; B& J4 L8 P% B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* }4 P$ ]! S  o: R0 k( r4 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% R0 Q1 {& X# x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( j1 e2 r- T1 K" U' S! T* n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% G# g, j, b9 M) y( U; h* P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ K6 W, @# }' t9 o2 F4 S- I# T' ]# _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 v" L6 p* T9 l- n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>