【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ ^% L" ~& b! V/ t5 i+ KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; C: ?3 p. w$ Z5 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. i2 T! z7 C! _7 [6 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 @: I2 _5 O3 c& m' hWith the moon kissing it every night
5 f/ k' ]+ x! }. }$ q* _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* d: c3 {4 A: H8 Z0 Z( E+ V6 o( S( kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( f* o, J0 f- c5 |Every other word you utter is love
2 [" m+ N/ a2 m8 g3 i$ ~* E5 dI really want to know just how much you love me
( v4 S6 W: W  F, v! H5 zI love you I love you with all my heart
+ u5 Z  ?/ j4 U6 |2 }3 MNothing can compare to my love
8 C* `5 L) l2 z# o& uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 T. k3 |6 O7 f% A4 D# t9 |6 E' KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 a8 U# u* S. V+ C7 E0 cI’m still filled with fear
: X2 [; `+ d% V8 hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ U2 w: ]$ |$ P  H) B4 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, x4 i  H/ K+ F2 w4 o0 vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: t, K9 `7 U, @6 h: V  b! L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' k+ z; Z4 c$ i( W7 }( G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 v2 x* r( {4 k8 _! f( [) S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  E# q- V) R0 C0 M; ?+ J3 E& P+ Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ H9 t# H3 Z- }& J) Q% L% k8 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 i8 V6 C/ f1 t* f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 f  q4 s/ R& R( r! W# k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 C7 \+ l& X5 y* e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. `2 Y- o) a- y  V+ G2 i/ R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: b/ s; k" {" r3 c8 E/ o9 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 V# i0 S0 O' K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- v& x  t# Y% S4 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 P/ O3 d% R% [. J; ]8 }: V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* t. P6 ~. X2 K8 @8 P. c7 p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  Y) ]0 D! O+ _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) U# v- o* ]: C. [" Y$ f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( f7 V3 S) m) f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 e; H  E: ~+ M; @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ l. c, M8 m3 \# W4 l% z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 H( w6 F# d/ x$ \! _: u8 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 S6 j! y- H" U/ t! c9 v. R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ X, {8 o* K6 K+ t3 B2 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# M9 \9 s/ z" n& O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. B- z" w, l' v; b1 J7 K$ ^+ z& g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, [) A' o0 g, l# ~3 G- J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) N% W. u! i' D3 x% p. V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Y) |4 ]+ r0 v. ]4 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; v2 @& }- X! x: P6 @9 @5 v2 h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 |& e: `& r3 G# f/ b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 P* @4 n- K( P) q* B, l1 J5 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& C  j9 N3 }9 v( D# U. y( |6 W4 Z5 H我请你剖开它

2 N' K6 [2 N% c% A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 n1 @$ A$ n; t5 C* x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>