【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. E4 O. x" W7 ^3 O' E0 m) jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% b: \0 ^, o* C0 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- \. U( T2 F/ \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 m! k+ X1 t' s3 b; z0 MEvery other word you utter is love
* u# U5 l- o0 b2 `  jI really want to know just how much you love me
9 t( D2 y% z: M) i3 N2 qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, a& H- f7 x- d# QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 n2 C: D8 \: |( Y& \2 s' t* u% KI want so much to see inside your heart
9 g& r; d& v$ O3 w$ K! MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% p% {" Q% g+ n- f7 a6 iI regret not dying
3 |$ [) ]* c% v* _- J' Z: ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- O; K4 L. k2 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 I6 j  w. d2 |" l2 v1 W  \5 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% j1 X8 |; A/ y2 P: ]5 c2 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 m+ ^5 _- o: j9 v% Z. I+ a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! _, V' S1 e/ o- D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' e! @7 r9 d; e/ i  \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) U" _5 J( n! h3 R1 N  ~. D7 b7 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 ]6 a2 a" K/ x' f% e: M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* i% S# Y: R& l+ [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' j  F* P. ]: b- m7 G% T  n0 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& H) h/ P# l* I' B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' h+ P8 s( d% Z- Q! @# ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% p. t& x( j  l1 J! z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 N: W9 g# T# m$ O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ Q" N: z! M8 c0 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% G6 P  ]$ y$ d1 P7 q<P>你无需担心</P>
3 E7 ~) d& A8 ?6 u% ~9 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 i) @/ L) e. N+ ~) `2 w! R  P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ M, |9 s) _2 {$ i6 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 K' V  v, \$ |& C+ }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 K9 Z# }/ r' g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. [! d7 Y9 K6 m( M" [) D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 I6 ]$ D; Z1 h) X) }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ \% Z4 @% F$ H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# H# z3 g1 v" M9 M+ G. m. M/ x  E5 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& I4 E; ]. c1 `, |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, u: u6 S: {/ o$ V+ T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 c2 m( `2 z2 ?2 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 n5 Y' a2 T+ S0 p$ S4 h4 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' Y, t1 ~7 ^7 N6 p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 x1 }# \* W& e) K5 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ o6 G- Q. M: o$ {2 Q3 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; l; E3 f% c$ J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) [* L5 D6 q- J4 D$ L1 d3 h2 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, u' I. N- `1 k7 Z: F  `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) d* @% K  @6 {  M) |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 z& |0 ~+ x. i( V% J" x$ ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, \2 Z; W/ N/ [& ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ H: ]5 l1 G4 U4 q. K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) s2 m. i8 _) A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% `! T% _) ~$ Y6 _2 U, v: M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% Q! L6 ^3 @- V1 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>