【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 o. F6 P( f1 U2 _0 N; GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 O& B; C- u5 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  ]7 l' J4 Z, i9 Q6 O5 H9 `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ _9 u9 y- k5 d0 I! M, N' Q$ d. xEvery other word you utter is love
/ h$ @5 k8 Y  f- {I really want to know just how much you love me
. Q/ e( O7 R/ B3 P# P7 B; HI love you I love you with all my heart
% O" t: C% ?3 }$ M* h/ l4 QNothing can compare to my love
2 _9 y  t, _1 U3 P, L# ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( N$ J) S/ \0 H4 ?+ r; |7 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ W; d9 W) X2 M4 Y) i/ JI’m still filled with fear
& g% @! c2 C1 x* S  A" bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 S6 o) O3 A5 P) O0 G+ MI regret not dying
; Q* l/ ~/ a9 V0 @7 ?" aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& ]& m2 z1 X. eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 V& X1 f  f0 U9 Q- S! H0 dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" t4 l! y  M. _& k1 X& b/ _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" q$ k- I6 H( w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 l4 u8 P5 H) r  r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ h. k* |! o  Y  b2 u( S% `5 o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ `2 g% q8 M- {! s# F$ e7 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 K- x. p5 L; \9 U7 w3 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! @$ w3 @7 o$ x+ S* F6 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 b+ _) L, K5 @, b' {7 _8 s- \) @* J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" p: I- f% Z4 f% s2 y! _5 h4 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. G# J; X8 }+ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ {+ {6 ?7 @% X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" w  j+ ~: x( L  M3 r. Y) s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, V4 {+ a* K1 q, f3 S+ \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  q* P& h; s& h5 q7 @" k0 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 {2 D; k  d: X3 R$ f+ j! d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ r1 o/ N8 Z1 m9 o1 X8 ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 U0 m9 h, o. o5 V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' J* V. p8 w, R2 ~. B. F0 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 N( K( Z5 c/ E2 m, h  d* l" [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 `  H' s  V& L7 T) e. M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& q, P+ V3 V, p8 a- U5 q6 t1 q) k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 V! z/ ^6 F  ~1 X. r5 C7 [' r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% t( t0 _2 `0 N3 d+ m& \. b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' q) `9 l7 q; v5 Y, Z' g/ }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 F% T* ]$ I2 K7 Q5 i  i, w' p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>