【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: i) B' K2 V. v; }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, E% [! ?: l( ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 K3 K5 ~2 W" m6 w: G( ^; p  \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 Y/ _8 d; ~' w; Y, [( OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; Z& |$ s  J% J6 iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: l) _+ G, f) d  NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 O6 k: H3 {- l, Q5 S) P6 wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, y! t9 \9 V1 ]8 ?  o* R4 ^. y0 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 j7 {& x7 I' d# a3 ]0 q% h9 J+ \& D& eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 ?+ p8 [, w' D  k: S0 u4 @6 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 `% L2 [' a: t6 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' E9 c% i9 v& E+ S& a3 I9 R3 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  P7 b6 a$ Z7 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 {0 S& P5 `% i8 q0 r3 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 y4 m, m8 h5 R: H9 n1 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ m2 a% M: A: g3 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ L6 g& @7 d* T0 \8 a5 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# m% t$ K$ F* W, b# ?' K$ f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 m( A7 [) P$ F2 V, p" Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' T; G9 t6 C6 K3 k. ]1 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 w! y+ P; y4 e6 Z5 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) w/ [3 v' o8 N; {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! b6 a1 s: n/ c8 ^2 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 l6 X4 k! |% E0 v( ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 |* z2 ]' F9 p5 H% \6 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 k+ A" A( G. |9 o# N- g2 z* W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, o& ^2 ?& w% G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 h$ R( d, R; R, _4 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, }- p/ K: S" U( t' k4 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ z# {' Y/ O) d% ]. R" ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 r7 n# Q. R3 _6 C/ @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 _$ \$ f% N+ i  S! n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, {! a- U" n- l& ?/ t7 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% k' J  J3 g1 {1 v  R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" G4 l+ E0 e( e2 ^% U+ {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 [5 G; _. d  j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 n" a' O) C5 ~8 O9 T$ d- k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 o' O* V: r/ e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

3 H1 @7 V" f0 B( R8 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 d% h& O4 q) c* c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>