【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: N8 o& j  F4 Y* L) y" B2 |歌词我附在后面。
7 Y0 F: K7 k3 w( X; X9 }* ]* ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) E" O( P& s/ n% J. q* PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 e$ `, `  i7 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; ~# M: E& a& m! |4 WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ n7 \9 ]) D9 M1 L3 R: qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# M# _' ~7 C% i& R% cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) _$ T4 x/ u" X, r2 x( mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% d) Y- k+ h- \* _: U$ }7 ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. W# E0 w/ G& ~; bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 h( G; V2 Y2 m2 K# EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* h/ _4 T* Q, `& LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( b6 Q+ X/ f/ H) B9 ?0 ^+ Y, D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 M" \$ u* Y6 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 t9 m, h9 q# d1 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* A& Y, W! a/ U" `) x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; `) F' c5 J3 z. ]! A4 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ T6 l/ V% u2 s# B7 X7 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  t% i: @' J' N" G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! a: I0 U9 n+ V) t7 ^2 U/ q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( y8 C* u, o- u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 Y6 T4 B, g% S  b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 u3 D1 w" u9 P/ z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# _! F9 Z* H1 b9 g; g8 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% v+ ?0 M% [* ]8 `) z: i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- F9 u+ \4 S* n) N* V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ i; V* H* C( i' f9 e) |* r; [& U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. G' {+ x4 [2 }# d& r8 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, q, t3 \0 w6 g" v' x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 n& Y9 y5 n4 r2 \7 c3 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' {" x+ s. o+ Y+ a5 L6 k6 p- [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& b8 U: \4 a( D& B/ P2 X2 S  c! h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" R- L0 N- O. r% }1 l- o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 ~3 V6 r$ s5 u8 n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 r2 D3 ?1 t' @1 j  x; I2 N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 u; u/ t9 s, l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 l+ R* S  c$ b  r$ f  `/ M: Z1 M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: e) Y( {- L5 \" L# t( X<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 S% m- |8 @& l* Y: ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 b+ G4 z4 i7 e& f4 R) X! n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 R" P) i% v* a. o, W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! T5 w7 o  O2 K* l1 F3 [, x# B9 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 e; B3 O/ _0 W6 J+ K- i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* }. Y1 B; @+ F2 d, n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( J4 \2 k5 I  Q- ^# _2 J/ {( l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>