【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! _: Q, O# f- J: p$ zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ R2 N* @3 d; I- G1 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, H. H, @  O, ^3 g7 j; k5 [: A+ AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 F& W4 L3 w( ASeeing the sky content with its love
" N* ~  t! Z5 M$ h0 x/ CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, h# t! M9 O9 c2 w* _$ aYou needn’t fear anything
+ k% Z) Y1 m+ k1 l( gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 v$ {: P% i2 P. V& ]9 \! OEvery other word you utter is love
& Q" F$ }5 T  m. e: EI really want to know just how much you love me
9 T# o3 O% v4 w6 @% C5 A4 mI love you I love you with all my heart
  H9 ^. I% d- D2 UNothing can compare to my love
9 \$ d! [9 k, ?4 ~. Y+ }  H9 @2 L9 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* j# r! u* F6 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 M. v2 S; w7 |3 SI want so much to see inside your heart
% G3 y9 E2 Z& t2 r. a+ rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 L( l# a1 o# j" `0 }6 m9 `1 gI’m still filled with fear
& B2 u" x: T0 r; c! G$ n# k' ?2 S, ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 s8 j% J; m: i& GI regret not dying
' k; H8 l1 M' K4 g( p4 v/ T: wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) C- y: j" O4 X# H- ~) hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% Q' w, c5 I6 g) n# K0 @9 N! h; _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, c: Y  g% r0 I" R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  o. c% a: B# P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& k4 ^& p/ Y; c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; P1 F5 c% k' I6 ?1 ]* ]. ^: d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ C$ Q/ n6 L5 @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 S/ |$ [2 M% I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 C4 H+ _2 E# K0 q4 ]" i5 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( \+ Z/ U- l/ W! h' h( A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 T  v0 O) v( |7 x0 O$ Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 n5 x: K1 \$ |! _& J0 K( N' w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 p# ~3 z! e! T; }8 [  l1 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 g; X! ^7 ^- U; p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 B: `1 I1 T  }6 [; S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 @; r+ c- w6 {$ [1 |( r4 F3 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) G5 u1 |1 P% R6 g- a1 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. G, `4 J( `9 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 c0 a: J# \: ]: ^" c$ r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, ]9 A! q/ O6 y3 k$ B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ ^% _. x) c" J7 O9 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 T& B: `1 K7 g& }3 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% c% c6 L" z) n) x! {1 w& i: U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 }4 T8 [1 n0 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& y4 |. E3 G1 A; T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ u/ k* Q8 V# I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 q2 J; G% C- q# t! A* Q9 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  A2 R8 _# T9 V) O6 T5 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- K  S5 a4 m5 o9 k: i: ?  X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ ]# h. p( U; a# ^3 x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( R" G, I! X) d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 {! M# i% M8 m9 o4 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" v/ J9 v9 h* N/ [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! y) i( ~1 Q" G7 q我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) @+ o! }1 T1 c( J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>