【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! Q2 d- w1 Q9 ?, a- }The moonlight is shining brightly,
  i: h, V5 k" v2 N6 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 t( Z4 b& C, V% g# V; I, t& c+ z! ^8 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' r! Q  N; D: O; Y$ d4 n  UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 p8 T5 U! p4 V/ u, @* ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  J* ]/ o$ z8 i0 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 M' O- c8 {3 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 D! S! `" ]# f! PI really want to know just how much you love me
( F0 [% l& P8 }/ H' J4 _I love you I love you with all my heart
, P. ~7 d) H- UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" R6 N0 _2 O% {( W. m/ R' [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# |9 |6 J! z, H/ j% eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ r7 D# E9 {$ H* z% [. ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 A  L* w; X$ e* q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 K/ ^$ F4 s$ S. q7 A" B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! y0 ^7 }7 q4 u- X7 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 Q( g- f& {. w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% {  d' R1 Q8 D: I" a2 K* U" x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) Y( k5 [+ g  B, |6 T$ {* Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& z( u$ p1 w2 r& A8 G; e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ V5 h  Q' K+ n5 Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* m) j& S* u0 O5 s9 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 J5 |* A/ ^. {* K; V5 i0 |% d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' P5 Z' W. y% L( S' q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 F, u* T) d  D6 i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, `3 v. F4 e1 v; T; ^/ N* E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  p; r- ]; f$ m0 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. K# R. P8 \! S4 }' h, Q" ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% b5 i1 [* q4 X; c! e: I/ z0 U: C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% {2 `9 J. e# E( a: Y5 s/ Z6 e2 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 h6 [5 ^8 }9 j# ^8 {+ D% d; N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# f3 {% P  [$ `  ~3 D- G2 J9 N1 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! m3 q4 U. h2 I7 `7 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! s$ L7 ?6 ?2 O& K3 {8 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 {/ S7 d9 m/ }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ g+ K3 G+ k5 y1 s8 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# S% Q/ q# \2 \' b. U" J0 f' c: L  p& n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% I$ o9 M' b* H# p) i( r. z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& U, w+ q: u6 ~' j4 O7 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% p! B+ k4 ^- {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 O8 V: r5 B7 k, S* W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 f5 j% ~3 c& R1 K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 f3 l, @8 t+ @" H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! n' B% u  U5 w( {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>