【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ I! D6 B9 X) E# y$ h歌词我附在后面。
3 F) J. S0 M+ L8 r# [; @* U- m% {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 e8 R- A: Q) h+ rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. K3 {0 a% ]+ t) Q/ m( E5 B; |) tThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ r: U! f  F. [( `With the moon kissing it every night
# y/ W9 Z9 ?2 YSeeing the sky content with its love
- U: W) I# u* u4 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" g# G9 b! j5 i8 T0 c) C9 ?0 kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- }) F' P; E0 K$ SI really want to know just how much you love me
! ~; |% a3 L- w; y. h( U  II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ T$ v4 t7 O( J% y4 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- M! H6 u/ y4 C' r3 Z/ d, h& ]2 x: VI’m still filled with fear
/ v) M4 [9 _0 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- z+ j9 l- s( V; VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 ^4 E" W8 O9 N& \# ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( t6 a% S( z9 N% U' PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, ~3 R* e9 S# N+ L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, `' h8 l2 \- ?( C( t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. \# @  G0 O" r, U: Q# p: D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' l$ r' G$ u5 Y0 y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 ]9 ^+ x3 S: V8 j4 w7 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* k6 N* `4 B" k6 r1 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 L7 g# x3 e; l0 H* f' t9 R' H5 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: i# {6 o- ~: o" M8 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 ~7 b. I' o  i; Z$ C5 k0 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  ^( R) B. Y3 F. y6 B; {# c4 e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, T1 |. p, \3 U4 U9 z5 p<P>你无需担心</P>
* W4 Y3 q: C; e1 j! R* X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 r9 q/ t2 L! Z* v$ G( K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- K. W' Z4 U9 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" X6 c* C# {" u, c0 A5 `9 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* ^  j$ [4 `  o, W, d- h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 w( R$ }  `- h7 W9 [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 ~/ j4 ^" {5 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 i, {$ R$ z+ A9 N. e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: K) Q9 i; T. G1 s! ^2 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 S9 r+ i% q& ~4 r  ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. d* d, K; m5 k! D) O4 v4 x, {. n6 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 O. b6 A* b# v- G: }: N# V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( e) O6 Y! m) N" X; j, ]7 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" D+ @3 o7 `1 S; S9 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: o5 q! h+ S( |8 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% d) V; _8 i6 k/ G* L" s$ l* h4 M% _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 }( Y* x& v0 e& e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. X1 a; O/ u" @2 l0 C1 Q2 S. K1 C5 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 C& j' g8 ]5 |$ f( ^  j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ W" R* ~2 C& V- S# k3 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>