【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, n* A# [( }. l: `% K  G8 X歌词我附在后面。
' r# V: C/ F. o6 X; w8 ^& DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" T" w! |( D; X! [" I) bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 i4 M# P2 b2 u' Q( a) t; k# mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ P% n; t1 L; ]4 @& nThe sky is happy down to its soul
; P; |; W: v+ RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% K+ }. r/ ]2 ]9 q0 Q+ OI really want to know just how much you love me
+ K& A4 p0 _" Q% b+ D4 uI love you I love you with all my heart
: e- N) m8 r' ^# X$ |& ZNothing can compare to my love
+ D/ |; |* d# K( M0 l+ GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, Y$ G: m; E* J5 r; QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' J+ \& j# M2 W% D+ EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ d! x+ ]7 F4 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) F! n! {* s, \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ G: K& A" U% C  hWith such a tongue as yours,
2 w% Y) [# O5 G6 a- j+ `/ bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; |" i  F, P; X) Z- t  _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 w* b8 A$ [( O; dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 E1 k- o/ g& L7 R0 _  m. X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- c: m2 S4 ^+ s) w" Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 H! K4 O( [/ f! o6 I6 ]* G$ @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, d) k) O& m% ~# x- c; t% ^/ T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 u5 g. C( ?9 X; O( O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 {- ]4 ^# `( O- ^  M# c% \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ ?; t, i/ M5 N2 x9 F* t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 ^! n% Z9 L# i6 E. l8 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 `9 ?' x3 w- t- r: \% p: t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  f4 h  }3 d# c6 `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, o+ [( ^; J* [7 Q9 t2 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. P/ n  N7 I- I. \$ Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% B3 j! B, {( n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& @% D  @: M' G/ ]& S0 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 J; h, @% E. m% K, w; c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 c/ _% `1 U4 J6 Y" N) s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 [# S) W) x# c  D6 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- c4 C8 o8 Y$ Q* i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( G2 s7 E7 A8 Y6 r1 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 ~/ O& H  ]4 g# g8 X2 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 Y$ p) T$ S  Y; i0 P7 n0 \5 B. Q; J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 d5 g$ ?$ O8 k0 v2 p# C  q  L) v( k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 L' S* n8 h5 P# l' C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, R# b2 F4 u3 L" d/ x7 b/ Q+ K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. z9 F! r2 |/ D- g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; g4 E. @+ C, R1 I3 `: p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 C- [' f4 O: p" v+ j- L" k: A* S7 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, Q" O; u2 ?1 a+ a. u' `9 e* ^! h0 E% F2 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 f, f+ D2 `- D- l; `' V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 T- r/ j+ d3 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' o& K; y+ Z  ^4 r/ E/ I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* ]0 z1 A. N) @' a1 y" S4 X2 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: a, Z" `& A# g, @" M( Z6 u' b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>