【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 P" Q/ Q* h5 k, m/ H' ?歌词我附在后面。
; ]7 a2 k; k- uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; d% B: S7 k1 M: N; ]  L6 K! S$ _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 S  x2 Y% x. |7 k6 C: hWith the moon kissing it every night
6 q5 }4 k- ]8 B1 P9 I9 a9 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- @% @# ^7 B& C% J7 C* c' \+ WI really want to know just how much you love me
4 P) |$ `9 a& |0 NI love you I love you with all my heart
9 g( c' n5 x2 h5 z; z# X+ _Nothing can compare to my love
- W. O+ m, f6 K0 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. F: e( E' G" ?7 ]! t( y$ s5 J* RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# A; ?# ~/ {6 h+ f% y! vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. N  P$ |: _# r& r' eI’m still filled with fear
% @2 D8 R1 g0 Y  n- m/ LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 z# x0 s8 k  u5 {) y% j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ E4 q! O& z2 W) F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# E9 o$ V* B- v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, Z; L. ~5 z9 s, V( A; C/ G% d) ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 K& k9 V9 c: B( l" ~6 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 |, G! K* g1 m3 R6 u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. C* u8 @2 O: M* A: J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ Y. e& \  z$ ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 ?% |" `6 e8 ~2 ?1 @9 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 x% b  I4 n+ B9 t6 [2 Z( g  Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  \3 d; {6 U" y  }$ S6 k3 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) P& o4 N: [$ x# w9 |% Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 w% Y0 A# E+ n; _9 ~7 b6 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( |8 `- H- _) K1 z$ c* B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 |+ J  d( @* d# s% @4 F$ D4 P# l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 m4 m# X1 E( ]( v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; j" i( ^# y7 L7 f5 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* l! u/ L5 f: Q+ u) a; r0 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# M6 f# U9 Y6 B( s- |8 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ W( ~; x8 B# {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 H& T# a/ I) _$ E9 Q. l& x( D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& z1 \* |6 `. ]8 c" z, n+ a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ U1 `& S: C6 k( F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; B9 o, ?! Y* V" \! F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; T" |( k1 h5 L$ e5 f- F. e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 ~3 G" o2 u1 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! p3 r  {" J* }6 }; N7 b/ B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* ~: [* ?* G! M0 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

- h3 O2 a1 p3 x+ x3 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: E1 |" l. a# g' j% x) A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>