【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 D2 j; q/ d7 U: F0 ~* C( b( fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 H8 e9 I9 ^$ n( W5 L* w- h; r& _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' X8 P* s0 q& g' R" V% yThe sky is happy down to its soul
( h1 ]+ [. k6 H& _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# I7 m* }- a3 F+ v, x7 XYou needn’t fear anything
4 k. A& i' v. L# A/ @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% W& s( ^( {$ w& J1 HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 K, V( Q4 N( Z! Y$ ?I love you I love you with all my heart
2 o7 r7 V3 r: ~' \& ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. U/ S% @8 L/ z+ kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, j: o" R5 w. X  \1 vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 h3 {, \1 t' t; P3 SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 u4 @+ {( W7 ]$ q) PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# o1 M. R( x$ \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, T/ q' j4 {) s& }+ P* ?: t, V6 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: w2 O+ z9 o' h) |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' i( [7 u6 h8 q5 h/ s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 k  v" _3 o2 T+ @* M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& a' X7 ]1 Q/ N$ O: ~- z9 g2 g! e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& o8 d, I8 w4 M0 X7 m  N. a. e4 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' G" U+ r8 o$ l7 ?$ f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
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) d1 o/ ^; y1 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) M  a/ X, {/ p+ i0 U: K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- B1 u" Y, M& A7 i* L7 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' q) K' ]1 W; _, W% M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 C# W* H, q- ~% {1 l2 k, S9 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 F  M% K1 Z  D% j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 X8 w' x3 \* J+ _; V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* n" ]4 K0 A/ k! d9 F1 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  T6 s1 p% P. l, |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- _4 C3 j2 y. A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>