【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 N2 G$ |* d/ z% B( SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 _% a3 P3 `& G; J. U- OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 X0 e1 ~+ A2 ?. q3 Y. a" N; mSeeing the sky content with its love
7 n7 t+ W) y, Y( |6 r* BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 n( U/ G0 }0 V( ?# ?& M' c2 {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, m& w: E# u; x7 N+ ]* e' rNothing can compare to my love
' o# A, f& m5 K: m+ Z$ FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( v0 a% F& J0 F) @0 SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, q9 M9 O$ f$ i4 q3 M3 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& S% F# {/ H4 q/ wWith such a tongue as yours,
3 b3 [$ d" W- i0 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* Q# }! X  Z8 l( F2 ?4 c9 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ d' }9 W# n5 e/ h" ~8 b7 _: d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, M0 H) g" E* F; |) i2 f. E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  m0 R/ m' m8 c0 K+ h9 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ O9 j' p" A9 E; D3 y! V1 |. N; a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 [) I) f- i. F9 a2 l5 l/ \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- c; K" m* E% _' M' E6 T( b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" P/ \6 Q! l) F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, R+ R9 d+ e, \0 b% l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 r% J1 Z4 B; W1 N& y" L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* |$ U: [+ N: t% K( a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- Y' W: L" X. \1 Q; O$ ^6 C! ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 d6 P& W! |4 c  R4 s8 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 v: w$ u& s. R* F. I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! q- T7 t: q( Y3 [) V' J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# R: y* H. G4 X: R1 G7 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) k2 n" q# j# A( r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 \0 W$ A. c0 w$ H' R0 ?; P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ m& q+ B& ^- J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ X9 T- t% ]+ i' b/ E2 o% S+ h3 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 ^4 a' Z% N7 u" J8 b/ A. e) ]! v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* _0 q' f$ h0 L) x3 ^, E  e+ ^( P' f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. N2 {  {* U6 Q/ G- g, H* ^, S* S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  D4 X6 {) v0 c! ^9 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" X5 A  w" }/ V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- F( S3 Y* L! J4 i: _- s: v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 A  W/ Q; l. E  ]1 k我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ V; J  i, A" }% |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>