【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( V8 G4 V' B  u; H! X' Q: E4 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ d* s+ U, S8 e$ Y' T8 RSeeing the sky content with its love
" }' y: S. r# h- R6 b- w* ?2 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; X6 ], h9 u1 ~& a7 t7 _! x& ^3 aYou needn’t fear anything
2 G' ?0 I0 u/ i, H6 @5 R# \4 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 v8 w# T" X( T4 u1 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# m/ u6 T+ f3 b4 s$ q6 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. g, E* F6 e* }4 N8 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 Y" _; L/ V' F& q! p& c7 F8 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ {6 o4 E8 v0 ^" V2 w' M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# M/ C/ a5 V$ B" U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ c2 M/ y0 g! D' z  o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( v8 D; E  t+ L! d/ _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ r* r# {  \5 ~' @+ b0 b" v2 E+ v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, n/ ^( o2 {9 r" q6 Y3 @5 E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% w8 J/ F" n" O1 j. `: R, q& [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 D' u$ j* p) o5 U6 W% L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 t% {" l0 S# D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) ?+ W, k1 v8 X3 o3 G" H5 T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* [, v, X" D/ N: y9 {$ N9 Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ p! i4 }/ ?& v1 R- W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) V; z# l' Q( m/ B7 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 w1 A8 ~- w# f9 h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 `( u0 m5 M& D) C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. o( l% C' Z. P) v& P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; Q( d+ C4 Y2 y) K: Y! `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 n" }) D6 d! r8 ]% Q3 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. U7 t0 h. Y4 D( |" Q  E7 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 C: ^. o: M" n9 j: s  A; l8 S; q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  b1 H3 d7 S& }  p* Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 F" X) a8 X* I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# b) e* i5 N  N# Y; p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 s  i* P) j' P, S1 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& D% g6 ^) j" l( K1 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 A& J( z8 v6 \3 t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) P! c5 b, @/ @  q# ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 L6 |- H8 Y8 c! e) n( r3 u# n我请你剖开它
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4 v  ^4 \: d3 j2 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 T! N$ L, u/ p% @* [% E8 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>