【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) Z8 {" h6 r4 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% X' L( a, P" |: k8 U' [2 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) t- h, |2 }9 f5 V: o* i; i) BThe sky is happy down to its soul
, S2 e' y, r( C3 |With the moon kissing it every night
- b; w3 y- A. q. I" ySeeing the sky content with its love
2 s" y1 @  V8 J' DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# R" n" X+ `( ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 W; Y7 l! J0 bEvery other word you utter is love
: Q% b  T: ^4 U9 F# J+ }0 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
' X/ ]/ I" K6 a& l9 OI love you I love you with all my heart
& V# T. o% j" b, f+ J& \Nothing can compare to my love
) b3 m# F/ y, h' E2 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* b& `  |  W* I3 r/ P4 Y, K& U( ?1 i6 iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 ]' F9 S* Y6 W8 MI’m still filled with fear
. d5 n- @- [( d/ t* eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% @3 H4 K8 T& g: B" A0 CI regret not dying
8 k  _3 F6 Q, s: z0 \, c, F" zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 Y6 T) Z8 P" b- Q' ~+ j4 p# iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# e! g* S6 h4 p/ A  X$ ]; j; sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: e& Z: e9 j/ _0 {* E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 ]4 |* v# X& x* j& W5 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. y  N$ t! n4 t. l+ \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 |' ~, r# A# ]& {  h# L0 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* j; d1 `" ?" u6 a7 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& r' @3 F" c$ E2 g" f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 i) u" ]% d3 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( q/ L7 O$ s" p) N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# D3 ?7 G0 F3 z3 g% e" w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- ~+ @/ e! }; `- c5 ~! l; F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 C* o5 V" _0 {, ?# L, V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  M- z9 Z9 Q$ @( s7 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 j# j4 o4 Q% z7 D$ L+ ^' @, a; r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ W2 C' z: s* n2 L& Q2 p/ F! h& W  P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# n0 c$ g6 _  s5 ~! ]& K5 m4 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" P( d! k" V8 `1 V+ ^% T4 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. }3 t8 |+ z  p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, T0 n$ g/ A# {8 h0 l. V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ ^7 D  C2 C- Y5 T! H3 ~& L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ]2 ~, ]+ F; {) Y" n7 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# W1 I0 ], A' b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 |  @) Q/ Q3 `( D" D$ x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ y) Q3 G1 X+ |# j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ O' z1 |0 |8 B1 |6 v! m! J- u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
% Y+ M$ e  m6 A8 F& P9 `" Y  q
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>