【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ D- t7 K8 `6 G; vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 b, f1 c) f7 q1 X: AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 M, Y+ I" L7 Y2 i+ c" KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 F' y5 B7 B; H3 h  |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, N, R2 r6 W2 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# X6 ~7 h6 N9 T+ o; \# hNothing can compare to my love
# O, L4 }: R: Y1 _) g: tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 h* Z" B/ ~. [& ]2 Z7 eI want so much to see inside your heart
# ^3 `( {9 |0 @' ?4 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 D8 _% C7 p( c6 v; W3 O0 |! H1 RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 o3 m) [0 H7 R$ ]5 E6 m) p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% @8 s* R6 f9 q) M3 i! G# V$ n8 d( Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& q! Y. V& r" W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 l6 p% ]4 W3 i1 ~# ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& p; o! n/ B! Z; `# r0 F* V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' f1 t1 m+ p4 V3 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ a; y$ N% F+ [, B% e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; N) l6 J* c9 a! V; p# q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 B4 @+ ?2 C) F7 Q4 S* A7 n1 U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- h/ O  \: M  H2 a# g2 {! D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( K) ~& t4 o3 A% @. T  J9 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 D8 w+ Z" U/ Q8 V/ K& d<P>你无需担心</P>
' ~. y$ v/ p* v6 ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! S8 H+ B8 g# O) Q2 l8 A5 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 u/ T7 O; R2 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' F2 E& i# J3 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. Z& S: [( c  ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. N8 D* u5 `5 N+ M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  {+ B' b: g' X4 Q7 N& S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% K# @: ~4 O+ r7 G, b1 x5 K7 d$ L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! f! F4 a$ d; G8 A5 b0 l8 ?, ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 t: ?/ i3 ]; b& q" I& P4 y7 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 |' }# z# ]; l! k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 W- F& ^" [' W* ]6 N$ h! o$ ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! P* h: `- j* W0 \0 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 ~1 t8 b* d- k1 O( R& K  b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( x+ ]: g' Y' r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 I& _8 k$ x/ `: x  F8 y" c! J5 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! P( g' q$ w4 l# `& [& a% j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  p& _" h; y0 o) x( a" Y& ~) s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: C3 t  M! f2 r! O5 u+ E4 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* r- V7 ?' W. K- N2 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 l, R4 I" R. R# c! {" K4 {$ G1 A; K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 x3 E: f( O2 w8 E: q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>