【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, g% t/ Z& u* Y; c! R  w, KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 B' f/ R# b) I! i" W/ e  Y' DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" ?, j/ u0 u- D- LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, j  Y, o' g$ [& AThe sky is happy down to its soul
" n; B+ Z4 C9 y5 m! KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: D2 ~7 [, N! u: q& @I really want to know just how much you love me
8 M4 C7 e) O% y3 p! w, |# WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. {+ e8 G$ y) h* P& uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' |) Q% d9 H4 D! V' s/ {I want so much to see inside your heart
+ s" a; b5 Q4 e5 c, WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; e3 |8 y# a, p5 M+ @" c. F& FI regret not dying
& A, k: K  l+ p. B6 o2 s: II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 g4 z" o# w% Q' t; G/ uWith such a tongue as yours,
, a5 i6 x( _/ |( S$ x6 ^; C! zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) a' e0 z# X- J. }; Q" ~  UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 `' m, O1 P! E: N. K( D* \, t- ^+ \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ o+ o% Z$ T7 a# X2 B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 V" a: G8 v2 ~& I# g+ d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: i9 a' K" I4 V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 s4 n) w. o4 h9 g/ W4 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% m) m* U( _, ^% r! o& [9 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 g8 W2 L+ [5 T0 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ O( m$ J; r, V4 h8 C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' L' O8 f9 ]- F! I( K2 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 H: c4 Z7 Q' h# {6 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
7 o+ O$ N- g9 O! E8 l1 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! `8 ^0 i% \, _1 h* W* e( \) Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 H1 Z+ D' o& m, t3 |' h: u9 P9 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& p1 K7 `& k3 |0 o7 X, D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, \3 o: Y1 D; X- |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 v/ d5 Y' r2 i7 x. U# c- T: Q7 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 E% N- B# N1 y4 Q; d2 v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 P) c5 v9 t5 r- W, T8 \3 \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 E4 M' t8 s' ~  ^3 ?1 X9 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: U7 U) x1 `5 Q. l/ f% J8 r4 [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 _: c2 m$ `7 i& S# s0 [: y$ A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! N% a7 O7 A: T( C- |7 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) I5 {* X+ u$ V! U& u# m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 Y4 ?$ V' }3 H% E: ^- L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" d& c# Z( w7 J# Y1 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ S" f( g! m$ B& q, X9 e4 c/ c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* `7 ?8 k# N: J5 Z( h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# v* W5 U/ H' }6 r& W: C5 O* a! u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 Z+ P; o) [$ \% y  M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: J9 [8 A, n& [. t) Y+ t: a) a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ Q3 [5 J7 c5 C5 Q1 Z% h: W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; E9 l0 L' H8 _& x5 [: n2 S* n4 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 a4 Q0 F5 o) J! X! l" ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& J! g9 Q$ v2 K2 J: H; |) E: F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ K& ^/ L& ^' n8 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>