【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% _3 w- K- j) ~3 a+ ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
) f, N5 ^: N  iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) L: R% {+ A( B! F7 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 n* G1 k5 A  G7 q3 r# {0 m' R" dWith the moon kissing it every night
1 x, r8 K! M# l. S) e6 OSeeing the sky content with its love
- _- V8 g. I1 L/ m9 P* tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ b" L4 E- _: P0 n* E% fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" y5 j8 |, f% }, e; _Nothing can compare to my love
& d7 i: H8 x5 j* VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 L9 M+ _- b; V" @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( P( a! T0 y0 L  GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& c$ o, ]+ f, L! i6 [: zI’m still filled with fear
, m0 K+ Y1 O! sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 Y/ J, c6 p: \0 e3 P& zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( r% R6 i4 e3 ]2 I5 ]. \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 B' w3 D: x% ^1 L6 i5 X$ H& H5 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 S  P6 [4 W+ V8 s* L, x1 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# L# M. {' N( t) v: Q3 [% J- T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 |; h' d6 T3 u6 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# y2 J! ?; W8 d; J1 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* A% Q2 t5 ]- @; m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 A0 X; z1 w2 B, k. y- e0 j2 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 D  N/ _( V- @+ ~' B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; I# \9 V' G$ ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 u- H: m9 Q" ~; W  q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 R1 o* ~7 o5 m1 O2 n5 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! v8 R( s9 ^1 b; C- D: D% z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& x1 U' O! B1 k0 s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ ]2 f' `3 D4 Y8 p4 v- h, @9 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 A$ @- W( ?/ z* c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% r; \* M' R' n$ Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ P2 Z4 v+ _+ v7 J' X( `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% z# [. e9 O1 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ a% G6 ^  j: ~4 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: b' S( ]1 |  L2 ~9 y" F- J9 B% O! m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 i; j& \, o8 J( x2 q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; t. ~9 [1 I5 g5 x: e0 U9 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 L% ~" C; l% ~* [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 s" A4 i3 C, [( G$ [: t* _3 r' {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 d  R" f3 i/ b' W0 J. ^: T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: M6 G. K/ W$ a% d( e; ]# w8 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 s! \  J. T5 s- e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>