【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# x; ]( a# D, N3 U( j6 u9 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: z0 k( b$ I  H) M; ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! _- Q0 T2 q$ [$ Z1 f; i' W* c+ USeeing the sky content with its love
: i/ J( u6 j1 n  n& B( zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- D) ]  e2 B' F& p0 Z) PYou needn’t fear anything
0 \$ v7 [7 w- \+ vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 \7 G0 W% G+ N+ oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( |1 \% B; C: CI love you I love you with all my heart
; P7 D, s# m6 V! R" \3 ^' j" p* XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( y% S9 V. L1 n  d8 x8 m: kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: d/ L( m5 }9 B5 m' RI’m still filled with fear
. z# a' h" n3 ?/ n* ]6 t4 Z) m) o5 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" P; h" C' u, U  Q+ M, fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 K& l' Y5 I" ?8 t1 w# H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! j- B; H- X5 W+ A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 i+ _3 [3 Q' \- I2 U' d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, w) v% P: S! [0 I7 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 X1 Y# L- l% a$ T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* d: [2 X4 o: x; N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: P% D3 x6 M2 q6 R; ^& W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. Y( c  L$ w+ T2 P- f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ i& o3 T( }7 K, \, I+ u$ z& {" c+ v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ A9 f4 W7 w; r; R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- B3 ?5 p7 \' z2 C* J6 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 h- U; {4 n; ^: |: \8 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 x9 i  ?0 n/ s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 H! R+ j' m. d( d9 u- |+ s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 z. t/ H6 o# D+ [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 `2 c7 k# S. j7 k) v# T+ f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 _7 h- y  J: A9 }/ w8 e' F' v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ ?7 ^! i6 v5 Y& }) [: g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ r4 U0 P% V: S0 g; j# _2 f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 B" u* S9 \  w" s9 z3 z9 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 B% \1 T: W/ W1 ]) ~$ u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% b+ M+ K" Y5 h, M' T7 |; T<P>I regret not dying</P>
  ?7 H- d8 S% f8 F4 O# B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 X! A: e. m( B1 h9 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" T% T- Q+ r: v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 a. \+ w! G+ d/ r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 H2 D& g7 `2 c" R' P1 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( R5 f2 s: w7 b" B* P; a2 t* r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% A1 d! A7 x) e, H$ x: ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& j8 s* p; r; V" Y7 ]) ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: o) ^4 p1 i3 j+ n$ v3 G% y' R0 e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ X) V% Q. n, v: M+ N我请你剖开它
: a# J3 W) \  s
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% a3 o! y, @8 h( I8 O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>