【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) H- U( n9 Z. c; K歌词我附在后面。
1 V- F6 M6 i+ A% j* vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! N5 V+ X5 W9 V/ `7 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
' y+ X+ n3 U- z. y+ E3 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' D& O! P. S4 U9 d8 G! MWith the moon kissing it every night
0 Y* H0 J. Z, @5 W4 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 U$ ]9 r& t2 d5 p% dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 |$ V3 z% V1 L4 q- O2 HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! {# P/ M) i9 l* l2 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& @- z4 r+ n8 _) M" X& p  [+ k/ Z1 z! {I’m still filled with fear
, Q5 I. m; h( S+ d/ ~- q3 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 O8 {# N4 T, D/ k8 ]I regret not dying
1 z5 g- }4 A& YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% v) c+ a4 t" a/ w2 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 n! B4 x# j) b( i* r( p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 R: z" e  E0 N2 K8 ?" F2 M' J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: T: s. v3 K1 a: M- C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 y! i$ ]3 Y. \. p+ T) u9 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 u  u/ C" A( f( k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. I3 w5 S% U+ S% u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 z2 F( m" P+ x' K1 G, u. b9 B) `# b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. v) @1 {$ [3 ?8 e' M& B  M# L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 k" J0 E; d+ o) }% l5 R% S3 O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) N  W- u: D8 q6 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 J& j8 s; q5 N' o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 h7 U; X" }+ p& [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 x$ K3 J3 [' Y- X$ o) u! \/ h1 M4 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- Z; K. l6 M! C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 n+ K0 \# `2 M; Z1 ~3 J% b% R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& I9 P6 \) ^  M! L! E' T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& Y, t, Y7 p( j0 X, n* L$ x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ T2 Y& B1 W1 V; ]7 e, g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>