【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; t5 J% l& t7 r  i/ Y歌词我附在后面。
3 V- [! k/ D6 \4 r" ^" w+ hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ w' d, k3 ~1 o5 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 S& {/ l0 I# q5 L! W: m: SThe sky is happy down to its soul
- m9 G+ x+ E7 f+ jWith the moon kissing it every night
% t8 o4 |  K! A% f, ~; [) zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& @+ F# |4 C. G  K) m. ^! O7 tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& @- `' ^" F! C6 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 `  I7 v# F/ F) D) W/ }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 O( s0 U2 r" J( K8 qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 V7 j9 z8 `$ |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 E" L. ?5 e& i1 J) `1 T! I$ B# TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 J3 H  P: }$ l. n" S% E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 j/ T( ]0 u, d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! l% j; a3 L) s5 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( P+ l& R% }( p8 X% h7 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 W) [3 t5 w4 n2 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& \" W/ w- `( V" Y, f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ U2 _% h$ ^( P! G  S+ }" |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 O0 V+ [2 V6 E3 K1 s. ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ K' k# o2 I% D8 V# @3 _, V7 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, Y3 E4 X5 i& Q( n7 ]" l% s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 u8 T2 f5 b7 S, s( J; p, o! ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! R* o; `& P; \3 E5 I, l! i<P>你无需担心</P>
& v1 f7 l0 y+ k6 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) J" G, g5 F" [3 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ q! t4 X' l& B' m- J- r% [+ ~( ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. _: K$ a$ i+ P5 _' C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' W( F; O' n& ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) W4 g+ k% d2 i* U5 G; X7 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ m" `6 Y5 ~' Q- `2 M, a! h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- `- u' V  i% y9 R) J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) ~! }0 C- ]" m2 q9 t. c+ k$ J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ _8 J! D1 @* x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ a8 ~) b: O0 l% s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' `3 X+ l  r, ]) J* w+ {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" f' q3 `, l' i& y6 c9 j' i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 c( ?: `) l1 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 U7 V% t' Q5 X7 [! [1 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! w8 _6 @# }2 I9 r$ K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 U" @$ v2 e3 G/ f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% u" F1 {8 G/ e8 y) P* v" T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- N, t$ x- w0 O& }. [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! g8 S6 V  W! |5 S0 `# R; V: y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 r9 A0 J. u/ ?% D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>