【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. E  n/ w0 H4 `5 K: [( eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) T  G6 S& P  z0 @! JThe sky is happy down to its soul
" m5 W% Q/ ^# B/ d# S8 v5 SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 y& Z0 g3 n2 B: z, A6 zYou needn’t fear anything
5 i* u( L: ]% Y# Y5 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; l1 ^! X, j5 K$ [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: h/ }7 \+ C: f: OI love you I love you with all my heart
' }  B3 W! P; O. o( Q7 NNothing can compare to my love
3 G# A7 _/ o0 s; hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; d' H  x$ ~# w( [' s3 TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ D* }3 \9 N2 `, A! x0 P) r) i0 NI regret not dying
; U, [; C* q7 o0 _8 Y/ x# QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& \: V7 p1 p3 h4 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* V/ [7 O5 o; y% C, |* `4 K6 }: ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ t8 m3 o4 k; V' ^% u5 I* [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; E& l; U* M3 e! O* p1 ?& g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% M# w8 h2 m: `5 O" p; R: R5 x/ V" o) F4 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ V, \6 t7 V9 y. k' D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 o2 x+ Z' u) y; H, ^8 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ y' S6 \8 H0 G# W0 A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 ~  C! c" Q9 q; W7 ?, `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" X6 v: n9 z, _. N5 T, Y2 w  ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' P, [5 _0 B  k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. H/ f, r& w& W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ r  L" a. U; i2 |$ G4 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ L' _5 s& h5 `* h% [& v2 `- ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ S! s* {! i. A! T) i) O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 a: ?/ r; y# V8 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! M+ A! ~7 p0 {8 t8 y! p8 ~9 A) ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 d# [0 k6 K" D5 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. Q# B1 R, ?* K, Q7 j& F2 b, N# m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" Y- V' W. z  H3 F2 S! }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' W4 n3 i; |, M: h& P! Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 l4 ~, u4 o' r1 Y' ?& D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. r& s3 `$ ]4 X' k# I+ U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& t% l* _; d  i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 N5 K7 z) H3 V- [( m) L. g2 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# G$ \) X3 t4 h# H- W9 c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 [! ~6 W& z" Q; x0 Q. E* [# ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  ?2 U. Q- C8 A- K4 Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% Y& [% Y# K& z8 U* b. A* ]8 a' ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 y/ ^* @' G/ v  K$ C2 p9 I5 v( l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 `9 t! ^4 i" `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 ?; e1 C) S. M# v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- f9 c8 ^! d. Y. {  h# ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# e; S! n& D+ S1 z/ V2 T4 U. a  s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! I& O! F4 y$ C/ u: e我请你剖开它
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) \/ ]5 ]6 h8 B7 K# S3 c! l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 C6 R5 N) K2 _* M+ H6 o- n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>