【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: \5 I8 i& j( y9 S- g8 E9 Y7 P  Y  N歌词我附在后面。
# ]4 V3 O# U% F9 `' W$ S5 @6 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: s# m8 r9 ?3 ~. O+ L, ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ^' [& m; a) l5 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
) m$ R% }. Q) v7 A/ ~! f6 ^" s7 ?- jWith the moon kissing it every night
# |$ `$ g9 i5 a! _" R$ Q; T0 vSeeing the sky content with its love
* G- ^' g) [: P4 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% c' o* M2 u4 v0 V% d2 X( mYou needn’t fear anything
- U& w3 S- W. R& }% Y3 A8 B) EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 y0 S, Z/ k3 C! o1 A/ PEvery other word you utter is love
5 C2 x9 m  G! P8 @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% q( c$ B0 ], \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; Z/ ^) P) M( C  u3 _; y! dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: F5 p! ]1 z; T0 z4 R, i" L% hI’m still filled with fear
9 P9 S; u9 D% @) D: S6 Z. VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& o4 ^& K& z2 u2 hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 m$ x) B7 ?! A2 w% `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ k3 o. j: Z0 q% L$ v% I& D6 \" {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# _$ }4 E. c, j( A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: y: s0 H& Y# a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# C/ h! j7 l3 x0 y2 p$ K7 G. g  \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" {* q+ K: j/ c( x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 z' v5 v$ N  U; a- h6 [! w* C# n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' A0 x$ B' t$ a0 @" R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' |8 g9 t3 \. Z+ N1 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ m5 @/ g% ~+ I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 b- Q! R5 r4 M; {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) r3 A# [# s& T  D! ]0 g8 S/ p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, C) ~  _! U+ S& f$ W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. z$ e; \0 ~1 _' ]; p* a8 ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* l1 D4 b3 u/ e: {: p. X5 J6 T1 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 o  Z6 o+ W: {. R9 C  F( d" a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ @3 X, m+ l' Y7 b- a& _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 C1 @, K0 D, d4 @# M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# ?6 j( }) o" ]9 o! k( }. z9 `6 K. c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. I: V2 m( Q+ S6 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. |' G  C! b% |* a' W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" \8 L+ o( K3 O8 \% j6 m6 `5 g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# T0 i  z8 s2 o6 L: B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 A6 e8 c( U/ T+ p! d9 q% O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

; X8 ?& o$ o3 b1 F  D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' s- ^8 Z7 H) H! a+ r; y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>