【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 y: e* k7 q& v& F* I* [4 t# sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  z: R; I7 k8 v+ |. y) k& s: AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 B1 n0 R* N: s% n; XSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 M  b8 \, s! R9 b  x8 @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- Z' o/ |8 X2 _6 UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. V) F4 F" L. {4 Q0 m/ X7 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( X' G: v6 s7 T3 z% O+ CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' g& g+ A3 L, F' W; OI’m still filled with fear
6 O# b( K3 W, ]3 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& n+ ]! b7 F: v$ bI regret not dying
8 j( R7 E- S/ I5 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! o1 h8 ~8 i3 j+ {  ]2 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) Q- _4 c3 l4 h* [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ L7 R  F$ Y# c$ G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ S6 Y* S0 Q; W1 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 ^: V  d8 J0 T* ?7 S. j; _/ |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! l- ]( `+ W' M6 Y0 S1 R, E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 m  I2 `+ |. w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 A) R% }. x6 j! ~! i; y3 s# W9 d0 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' @/ Q5 I9 z3 w: ]" w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* T: r' j2 w( p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 |8 _. g' F6 ~4 @$ d1 ?4 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 I. ?; Q7 E$ w4 b9 G1 O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* ?1 O$ C* k5 `( [4 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ j& o( c% u% b+ g4 p1 h' T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& g2 f* D3 o' y$ c8 I1 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& ^# i! j8 R6 R7 J  P% f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* u. f' c4 |4 a4 {  g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 y/ k2 |% G% N9 F3 C# a7 W- E2 i) [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, v1 j1 `/ x2 Z9 _2 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 N7 S5 v$ |  n( F( w/ |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( ~* ?9 `2 I* y8 G% q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; n- L9 Z- l% N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# N; k% Z- D) C! v0 N3 `$ x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, f6 e, d9 Q; w( |9 v( q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) c' K; k; K4 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 s1 P, b5 F0 K7 l3 S4 i" h# ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; t* P* x7 x6 u  S/ W2 j8 i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>