【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 V4 u0 t+ |6 m- x; ^1 K0 T+ HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 l4 A8 I; D8 w) Q8 X9 z3 n2 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 Q+ A9 ^# H" {% H8 ^/ P( L3 g! [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, T% p1 `1 S1 m* q3 H9 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 e0 d7 I1 A& a. k. J0 |$ R4 s* gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: \/ S3 [2 G5 w8 v' s' EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. w; a' s- w' }" xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* v8 l6 F, Z, t. L$ \* kEvery other word you utter is love
/ c( b  H9 {( q" q1 \  lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! y  c4 W9 v8 b+ ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. |/ ~! i, O- b, J0 T4 k- e! FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ [  e. v' e0 L4 j" y6 C& m1 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. _0 T$ j" D% v: F; W# II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. E, l  {( `% d0 l/ d2 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 Z% J  B1 P  H. W9 b9 q. BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 T% `: L; Z3 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( w2 g/ s' X  Y& `5 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# N0 K! e# W4 ~: a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 s8 ?8 T* L4 O! z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, t2 Y. C, ~& `4 ]3 |: f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 a; r& O9 Y( Z* b  K5 A8 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 K0 t+ w( l* y5 M. c$ N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# p! U% M; q% F' G" B* x3 \/ P8 Y0 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 ?3 E: o9 S, ^3 D' R! _( ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 j' k) A# j$ K6 v# w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- [/ j. ~/ x6 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" T) ^2 U- o5 I) R0 e+ }8 P/ O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: x" Z8 b; i' P3 D, C1 G3 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) U7 g: C! r1 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! p& m" R' j7 }1 b: Q6 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  E  T+ c! B' e8 m% t* h1 G' C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& R6 c1 x  `( z2 ^- Y2 U6 s5 j! a. |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 n8 y" I+ }! a% l- D. A) v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' r; D; D, H, V' ^$ U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 G- u& h4 {" X6 [. R- u- D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 h& E% J# f( {) T3 ]# D: j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 w( q" f  u* a, k2 k/ Y1 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 O; J' G+ ~( ~; M<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 c$ `4 g# q6 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ i9 ~1 u; G$ M+ V- D* ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" S* a* R9 w, N6 Y8 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  z7 w+ u$ k6 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  @. s2 X' Y) }' l6 U, R% F. b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! {- Z9 Y5 d' D8 r7 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ O7 T7 U" d$ D7 I7 t( {7 I5 z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ E" ?$ a' y. W# t# K$ i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# H6 n1 l/ o, E% h我请你剖开它

0 ?% s3 E! ~  T9 n! r' w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ n$ J; ?& k3 t* n* Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>