【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 p2 O6 }! E6 P) w, e! M# }1 V/ h, t) ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
- v7 x" _0 P2 |/ [; gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 p) i/ Q6 g6 C& nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 p/ R1 B* d' |The sky is happy down to its soul
# P& A  H& [# c) }+ E5 `7 i- MWith the moon kissing it every night
# I% K& |" _; k% r0 B7 ?+ YSeeing the sky content with its love
" o9 d. r- v, y7 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 V: v  N  n5 e9 U$ K) L. n1 H% AYou needn’t fear anything
) J( b. @; I- C$ K# GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ S! w/ ]0 J& ]9 l3 B7 sEvery other word you utter is love
& r6 q! K& o/ d& KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 P, z  G$ P: G% c  YNothing can compare to my love
8 e  s* s/ J% v  rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) d! P4 H" R% t3 J% o; r+ sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% X8 w& h  R5 f. _- y' e, LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ x& E. g6 U8 x2 F/ R' \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: y2 \- A. Z+ \6 M5 h6 ]' j1 J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# _) {4 `* r4 i; x% E' O% K3 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, ^" J3 C- ~4 `* K' [5 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 }9 \3 _7 H7 j' \! [6 x* ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 R8 R4 M: r8 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: n/ A; _, K! l+ Y/ ?3 _) F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ n7 }/ F; |( ?0 @. h( {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% C5 G8 }0 x, J4 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 i  N1 ^3 J' P1 d# S" f5 z5 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 \9 o; E7 G" [$ S; u; ^& @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! {1 ~/ D9 T! Z4 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* \: y* h2 K, i2 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' H9 e: Y# M# @) r9 S" j' }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 T* I0 Y/ Y! N+ u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  R: G) U- d: U, z; w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. b$ l: M! N8 Y  N+ k  n1 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 \: G1 C1 I( h2 Z% x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 }) ~2 s- i# d1 o/ y) a! N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" c2 _7 s* g2 a- ~$ J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ H  b, j! e. f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 J7 w. g3 x- ~, {' \: A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# C% z; a0 C9 a$ p$ r1 l# q, _" Z+ |, j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) O1 S: @4 r; ]$ ^; J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' [% V' N. o: j" j0 }% s/ v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( F# l$ Y( u* n! R+ m6 ?* u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ H8 H  C/ r; \/ d( _8 d. L0 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
& h: E' }. k6 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 y4 ^2 ^. A1 N, t4 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' e! g' ^9 h% R: H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 U9 \/ J; q( W* K/ M  f, Y8 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: t) y5 A, d: h- s" [3 B9 w% E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ [) T# V; N0 ^" \/ T6 d5 b$ j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: B& a* x" y$ F  o* y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 c( S+ b2 Q; T* I7 T/ q+ I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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