【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* m7 n1 \( k$ EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  y5 r- ?; c, _0 V: w5 h( XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: s6 n; K+ T4 o4 O4 i) O( u  gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. x( m5 r1 @* w) z* Z7 ?1 C- kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 S+ q( Z8 O! ?& ]- |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 ]: n& U: y+ i( q; L# bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 G* q9 t4 x# [0 t& ]3 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' J$ t8 g7 K$ e" ~8 W' R8 s* x  PI regret not dying
1 a- ~, J( p6 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 b" q+ z0 O, R' [! M6 EWith such a tongue as yours,
' ?4 \* d' o8 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* {2 f4 b' {; g. {: [5 |+ {/ L- n. \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: S, O" b+ q: S! W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' e- c3 T3 t! {3 \3 N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  ^0 H$ h: l- F8 p1 V4 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 ?( I/ P6 h" G3 r; f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; z9 `$ M+ _; X* F/ S+ ^! Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# I6 T) N( Q- P1 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* j- z3 {' b6 N1 O* y% J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" a1 q' J5 f; w6 \  q% Z! f1 {* P2 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( R3 F) d8 V# k' N; n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 _; h/ V3 Q6 a( w+ v. m  j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. }5 \# n# A5 O& }# ~1 r$ B7 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* Q3 x# n0 G8 ]+ Q& y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, M4 F+ w2 L, R# R2 q. r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* y8 q$ G/ R" O, _7 V+ ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& O/ d. _* u2 ^. k4 t: }3 Q4 W* ^! M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  \- o6 N& J6 }, ]) r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, W2 l' Z0 [0 u: F* n; F' }( V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 ~5 m  w* e! p0 J<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 q: H% [9 t' D' n1 `( c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- M; f8 Y, F4 V0 u" t! ?! _' h2 V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  S3 M; ?" k' ^# Q, b* E- m$ d0 U' G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! f$ q1 E& I& I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- \4 u- a: A4 L" a- R7 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 c3 x! A  V. s4 ?, a! `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>