【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
! F: t9 i; M- ^# |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 O0 H: D$ @4 [3 G. C7 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 u8 r- F  X7 e0 oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 @. y* F% {+ I, L: Y3 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 u; _' V3 y, \3 b: j- wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 F8 c$ R8 I; |; A% qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 D8 R- [# d& |0 {  O3 ~- _. DNothing can compare to my love
+ }- e  ?, }. l# Q" b+ @" MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  [( ?( {9 A( G1 D8 SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; R; Y3 h8 |+ ~% p, w, aI regret not dying
0 h4 l; r# V  eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, t( `3 j7 V) Q5 c( O, Z2 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, m/ v$ [5 _, W3 G, H1 _/ eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 }, a5 t# W! H) wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( n$ d# K! _# S, c7 m5 ^2 @: F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( h/ m9 N, t) z2 d" f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 h; j) |% k% s) P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  Q5 @- Z! A/ e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# W6 [8 q: W0 J. H2 I0 U  W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# T8 I" m& z5 d+ I" E' a# w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) g- _2 N7 d+ b<P>你无需担心</P>
) ^0 X/ A$ E! g4 j1 h- m; G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  e) b7 H: ?4 {: J5 B* I0 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 [8 P/ t* v. K' I; T# d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 N1 b4 r) R) O0 F2 `0 g' E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( N3 X  K4 H/ w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 b, _/ C) K' x0 N, Q, l* |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ o) t3 _0 [9 W' v5 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 u6 d8 v1 g/ h$ |4 x, T4 V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 e! R/ V! P/ R  O8 o: W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ [0 O5 o8 g1 L$ Z% H  i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) B8 p1 d* Q4 R* k1 @1 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% W' X( @6 P# Z/ B! u6 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- P" A1 ^" r8 d- b4 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 L* A* R1 L8 I' e  R$ V1 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 x& _5 G+ U1 O1 ^7 x# Q, p6 ~2 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. ?. p0 q" E5 B( |7 h+ C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 d) ?2 I" V$ s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& f0 m7 e! Z( }, z0 e, H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# {# |+ b& G/ Y# t: q$ M" w$ G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ K, G& ~. Z7 e6 `3 Y: F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 A# N# A2 n8 N/ y# e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* u1 t! I; `7 X4 z4 f# f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) b2 u$ @4 s. U; u4 b& o5 c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 n% ?3 N# p; J1 T2 b0 o; \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>