【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# t" _) i% v! i# b$ B  C0 b歌词我附在后面。
5 w( M3 p) U* f- l/ {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 V1 k7 w5 Z& h( Q3 T$ v- Q0 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- f: ?/ z9 o, ]+ y0 R+ dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 o" a/ b8 T& SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  ?0 m2 y& P  N. N" g: @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 N: j# R8 a9 B  k* L* S/ OYou needn’t fear anything
, T/ o. N' \! y) ^0 D' iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 M1 U: J$ x% E: s% E$ o3 L! ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% [! l9 w; o; ?  c+ ?4 z$ C- G3 M) MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* U: z: A2 v8 o5 [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 e; s# V+ S8 [6 e0 |5 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! f; D  L  y5 O7 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ q3 t  @3 Z2 q7 ?* j2 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! E# D# E6 `! N" b+ d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% c- V2 ~# P, ~( `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; s/ a0 S* F2 `5 n5 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 B7 j2 S' K$ b) s8 O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ F$ }% g7 ]) }, W  \8 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# C& k' d! K- u) \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& V5 |9 z# Q( z<P>你无需担心</P>
  V7 F% A" V0 C; e" z  @" Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( x- N* A' O6 H3 H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 V: X! _" q$ ^. H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* e% t. b. ?) g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ [+ e! N+ W% @" E4 M% b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 ]1 K1 d+ ]% m! ~9 u1 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- m+ Y  P9 @3 R/ y) o  K# a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. f# I" D& E# x6 w* U& g, C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( \# \9 ]" M1 ~2 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ [) h8 U, j/ _- f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% c$ ?- P" ]2 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) U- g( @' Z1 v; z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ n8 Y+ ]7 `  e! `  x- @<P>I regret not dying</P>
- s+ `9 X) F% {  Y, }; ?# O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# d/ D" A, D9 f% I2 V/ d! m3 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- B# `/ u  q' _( M3 F8 X3 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" m# R: H5 L0 s5 n7 w. {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 y; b3 D8 a7 u4 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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$ ?! i! e$ p* V$ [& u  R7 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>