【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  ^1 h* E# U/ q% Y9 P) [& `6 u7 I0 q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 Z* V! H1 g3 w$ N: h, o; `. xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ~7 n) N+ ^8 ^/ PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 s& Q* M. ^1 c5 w$ GThe sky is happy down to its soul
  X6 y; s% x& u' I, GWith the moon kissing it every night
2 S7 }( J* x* A, G0 fSeeing the sky content with its love
+ S- V& K" s8 k6 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ j, H5 C9 A4 j: W3 TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, x+ r( r! o; t$ b5 ]- Q% `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# C/ g# j9 u! o6 G4 m% ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% N  s- {& p" O5 F! XI want so much to see inside your heart
, O2 N2 A7 G! Q6 O* @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 A! f: W( t# mI’m still filled with fear
  X9 y* I" D" B! k4 m6 fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& V1 I8 e1 i/ c6 p' S7 k$ P0 uI regret not dying
) G& ?, o: o1 k+ k3 j' U$ \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 W. X8 x0 ?1 ~2 _. S! W/ J/ I+ J  e" ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 z2 [5 z9 y4 _/ y7 VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 b: X0 y% j2 _9 d5 R9 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' d! [  g4 X3 ]. A3 v3 {4 f: }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 \% Y/ k$ ]* m: e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- s0 [8 _! ]2 I& u2 H( k4 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# ?2 m! U; E4 Y0 t8 t0 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 N* t2 {" Z8 C4 p2 R$ n4 `, L4 e3 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ w8 B! F! i8 `# k7 X7 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- P/ N* H) `# T3 C( k/ c; V/ P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 G( d) K% C  N$ s% G3 W: p4 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ R8 S) K( D% z/ |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* d2 T3 d/ G% A6 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 d/ P' K! d% t9 Y7 ^; n7 p5 {& u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! ?8 U4 C* |9 A& s/ U  ~; |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* G: m. B5 {9 z3 E2 D; q0 `<P>你无需担心</P>
3 v8 b5 ]6 c0 C: p) \" [, i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* M  P) |: t$ c1 B& ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 c) v! I+ m/ @) T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; i: Q+ D. L. O) g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( {1 g9 }  t  p& C, \5 d1 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% p0 s+ ?5 \7 g) E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; V8 a- K* e, I0 L. R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 a! A! U5 B9 Z1 K5 s  o( X3 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ J8 g. u4 w4 T0 N. Q( @' e4 W8 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. F1 d( u. R2 n, N# A% b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 e2 c( y; P. G- Q2 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 |0 n3 `4 Y8 X, z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: \2 v. `% j" `$ B  Z$ K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ v' F% p  o; g( a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! @" p/ k: r+ w' n9 e9 k/ M0 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! r6 b1 x% D% L! m! A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 M) U* x$ E& d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  I# s7 z( z! c" f( v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" Q- G! _/ @/ @( a8 q. `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 p8 f- z1 _$ r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ j5 j5 ]& v( _$ [7 A6 r# G; z( {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>