【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! z! A" l+ T( b% B; O! O6 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 k6 n2 a6 k! O4 R# bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 C5 C: {* O! E9 wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ {+ I% u3 Y! p) SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 s% Y* F* k. _2 I. z) |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 G$ x' w9 _' W% ]0 DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# ~' F2 ?0 C( Y5 P1 H6 mI love you I love you with all my heart
2 d, S# l" n7 Q' A& n* aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( g4 ?& ~7 T& k( s; T! TI want so much to see inside your heart
; y' D; H: A9 E5 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 s" H( [/ U+ z) @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 b1 }3 h: }' R; l; SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ C0 B; x/ x+ ~9 v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ V/ \9 Q& ]+ U1 o, }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 {6 B4 q2 ?' E+ O' H& U; S6 i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% x; A9 R* Z; |* r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 X# o6 r  r. A2 e1 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  o% y! [# q) W6 |7 ]& P- S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, p% b8 L! S; h0 U& `7 M7 k5 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 @( v; Y. B; J" v0 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  e: A5 u1 Y' b' P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ S3 f) u2 E# l0 {: Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' o4 ], J, g: `( W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. ^4 l9 i  T( i1 @- K2 W/ x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 |: i& R* p& z2 ?0 h5 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( Q3 d" ^5 R" V/ h2 c6 R7 V6 g# j' r$ i/ M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 N2 Y7 k/ `: C+ E" q" U2 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& F  e; O# d, B1 E0 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 l& u  C$ S/ `% q7 M( r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' a3 @. q! ?. ?6 L. a- m7 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% S& E0 A! c# x. |0 A' Z7 n- e% e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 n! z# @+ @! C: r( ?% h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% e3 r4 ?2 i. n4 I* k# T2 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" X; q% |7 g: _0 s2 x. i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 n# H3 c7 Q8 J+ F/ S* L0 m1 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  M1 [  w6 ^" o8 V$ t5 H7 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; V! ?; G. Y) h% p& [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 K3 a' i  I. T$ {6 B1 K) B+ Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* U% I/ |6 C0 |4 g' O7 g) C0 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# t7 |. A0 E* Q- p2 E& o+ S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 `! k$ O# h0 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 `  r+ @8 i) K8 c, t  J' ?( Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

, m7 t1 h+ `8 ~% w) {+ [/ b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>