【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 V0 t% V! {5 e+ pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( s/ J0 I9 r8 S+ C( \( x$ UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 d8 F' l6 j+ B2 {! S& R+ I) _: vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" [  a( p/ d7 Y+ C; ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# t2 R  v9 v' o- o/ l7 u( S, }The sky is happy down to its soul
4 L  ^0 ?7 e" H+ v" ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* n4 j. J9 X0 ?7 c. XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* b; P* Q0 G3 p2 I6 W: }  @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. Y5 B/ x* z( J. K1 MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ M4 \5 Q1 w% N- V- [& S# |5 zNothing can compare to my love
. A. u7 I' q0 O0 f. @6 n- F  sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 ^/ D- a7 l% N+ m! O. M3 C* ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! W6 m3 \! o- z# N" y* c+ ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# |; X+ Q0 G4 h; \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
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0 o" O+ Y5 {* B7 hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% h5 k/ }' O- q9 m8 N2 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: _) L* o% O, E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% C& i3 Q4 T" Q9 G3 l- I$ r8 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: c. |1 O' O* M3 M- |1 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 v' v/ w5 Q9 I) {1 j# v$ F. f% D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% e# b0 W7 m- g+ i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 y( O( K0 o+ h. S( q2 u. X9 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 _- B5 N  _& \8 d, E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 L  h& n. R7 H% q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, c( j8 M6 I! I7 F! g9 L) a, }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 q, d  [8 P+ k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 e- B4 _/ W- K' F) E0 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ E  v# m  b) K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# e* k1 O7 a6 O; ]! p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. W& ^# L9 }; [6 _( R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 y- j5 c8 A1 P5 G7 X' S4 m8 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ E! T( i" D% s! Q* Y" A3 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 @* j) x$ C* L5 v% f2 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 \* {! L# ?  K, p) c/ p0 s2 L& G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 j/ s: |& R3 H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 `# I' o) |: P7 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& a5 K- O4 R& K1 o, D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. g7 z& _5 v$ A% ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ d8 H1 r! o  M. R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, U3 p# {# S* K8 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 b4 \3 Y  S; ]) ^" O7 e* O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 y7 S0 D' m0 i/ A- n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>