【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ V8 B' c! h. z9 H. l" I6 s% ?$ `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% G5 h  m+ D& a, u& |! ~2 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- ~2 ^; z' u" U# R0 I4 JWith the moon kissing it every night
: E, N6 Q( H2 wSeeing the sky content with its love
4 |& l' u. J1 K/ NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: B' ]2 d+ w/ D# c7 ]- N4 y, [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% v! p) K$ |6 x  dEvery other word you utter is love
" A2 J4 R) o+ jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) Q, o1 D' W  I# h; }) n, D# sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 g! @* X6 A2 K. OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# l" a8 g. r5 ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. |1 R/ b( `  H, R8 j$ c9 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ f2 R. |0 L* W6 |With such a tongue as yours,
; Z7 n7 @5 I. ?/ ?0 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" v* C' ]4 f& |# F  R- N6 X1 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& T* w3 J0 s( S2 m: `" O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  E8 c) L. y9 B  z% p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% y, Q9 k( h, f, T+ Q' {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ k0 u" c, y0 A: _1 w1 R0 y9 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. G( [8 o  E" }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ]" w9 L# L+ I: ^5 C$ h& g: G# m/ X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: H' W9 }5 e7 o9 Z& M+ D( l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* S! g/ I- u5 m- N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, u' N( v! Y- d% \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ l! Z6 R+ b# F  V+ i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 K* M3 e' X- y: F  Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* S# c- f1 V6 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: I7 W0 z, c* Q; `& G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% |3 C1 T% U. O6 M' U  F9 X; t5 E$ s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; o: @+ O. u! P  I. m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. f, ]- M  G2 `' N* `5 o1 \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" h6 E* C' q: D' t" {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. s; v. k/ Y8 J5 `9 c" Q3 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. o  ]6 A8 G' X8 ?/ H/ S4 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 X3 e, h3 k( V8 T7 M9 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ c1 \/ }  Q, }: e) ~6 A- E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" O; c2 f5 k; ^# k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! S/ _- m4 b) a9 B0 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* _9 f; Y, j1 u3 `1 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- f% [& ~2 L2 t6 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* `, R9 i) k' H6 ^! b: b9 K, W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 w# t2 a8 m" f3 `' M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 ?; m* f) ~" H7 W3 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; U+ p6 y3 u( V. T' O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" t! I3 ~0 F) \( L, a5 `) X6 @  ^5 L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 @4 ^  W5 `' |) N& L* y% }我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>