【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ U  g# m/ `4 N2 w) r& T6 C6 |5 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  v4 H6 T7 n4 U% y* j! QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, _, n) Z0 f5 i2 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, r3 P% Y0 f$ M! k3 N6 `; n6 YWith the moon kissing it every night
8 C4 U6 }- ?( Z' X3 L" {: U  oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& a. B7 k0 w. n6 F0 wEvery other word you utter is love
* V4 }/ Y; T* e; n4 dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 d  r5 }9 A' XNothing can compare to my love
: }0 w2 d9 H& \% _& p+ d% vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 ?. z4 r% ^: iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) ^1 h$ z5 A, r1 [$ e( z1 f  }I regret not dying
* U. c8 P1 u  d. y+ O5 C* t" C9 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 ~  i5 P% E  ^" eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" K% h1 Z' w/ t& B: k2 I/ K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ ^0 D% T8 S* _, U9 N' k4 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ m% u; b! i7 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% Y6 J: D1 ?6 W* w5 H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- W8 k  F: ]; p( E! }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% b' D9 W3 g1 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 ~; v& v5 \0 H( V1 e! @  ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 u! q$ \9 E' Z8 T3 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! F4 e) s, {& ^! {: H$ I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 I" A2 {3 u% z. j! g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& S7 l# w9 E" v+ P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! I  e, f+ a/ Z0 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; m; }% A  Y& c/ [# p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! X/ b, ]; M5 b1 l/ f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, F( L5 T+ u3 ]/ G% C: b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, J+ N0 j, o5 Q7 o. G* W# D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! }& B3 Q8 u9 t4 D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 }) F* o3 A0 }  W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, n+ e& z7 x" y  n- a2 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
- P) ]9 x$ [8 d- u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& V  Q+ Z# s1 p/ ]/ C$ c$ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 \: @8 W# ]; V0 e! N" ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 H# M9 _" T7 v% @: S* Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& e/ U. a5 f5 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  ^2 N0 d+ t( k! d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# w8 O0 |' X5 [. M/ y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>