【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( R9 b9 \& a: u1 |# j% E; g0 n+ y歌词我附在后面。
- a, a+ l. T5 Z& eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ A- q3 K- E1 @! d% SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& T: T" A6 _/ A/ ^You needn’t fear anything
2 Y$ l: x3 K% [. K0 g# BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! O6 o/ p% y% D' ]+ [: aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 w) F7 s: Y! ]; sI love you I love you with all my heart
- S# H% i+ }5 a, v+ W+ l& Z) \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 D+ a5 \/ G( ], [) u$ xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% a0 a% [/ b. p$ eI want so much to see inside your heart
% b; D, `  `) `, S; g' i3 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 w( R; _, {9 J, K& VI regret not dying
# B0 L2 f. t8 ]6 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! W5 q7 |& f8 Y% x6 q7 pWith such a tongue as yours,
4 X( U+ r: R2 \6 w% d& cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 n/ c5 }; a8 p3 g& T: {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 {6 p# g, _/ L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" `4 S% t9 Z. ^0 W, d" K: F( m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' r5 U! s; z9 _0 c# ]9 ~; @$ ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: B' |( S8 A4 ?+ M7 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* m% t. C. }0 _, X0 \/ l. p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ I" w: K9 ~# I& V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 S3 ]' U3 A* W( _  }% h- Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) h5 Z& b: f" V3 u& L3 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% J3 b- I3 Z" ?% w0 o7 K: c# l. p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 ~9 j. f" I. V& r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* G7 K& H$ l% N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 V( o; h' m0 `3 G4 g8 g9 l  F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& U2 ~) p& b" \+ E1 X) H9 n+ A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& `7 P  s* E/ W6 N8 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  n0 b6 o3 n0 E( w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, w8 g: h$ X9 O. a! w" [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: z# q$ f, P- D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 [( F, T- P/ }  j5 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 A/ f: M$ ^/ g- X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! e5 [2 c7 c' r1 G! r' j/ M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* B' X) b4 d+ f: T) o% R  U+ X% K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, h0 T- c, ~1 ^( k! B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 ?, W& a6 J7 {- U+ d& f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* ~& ?3 W4 s' a/ O  R# f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. J# v% o( j, ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, H. \; F* ~: r# b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) k, M4 |) x, }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>