【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 q/ r; a3 Q% M0 \7 @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! m/ ]3 V+ B" o/ Z  e2 ?% D$ gThe sky is happy down to its soul
, J9 h9 X2 y5 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* m7 p* m* `$ r2 `0 o. _; BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) Z- g# j' n$ A# |2 z" `% {' N! X  {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; A8 q$ Y7 L* m* lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: ^* W4 V4 P1 W2 W% t$ ~I want so much to see inside your heart
1 u6 h, z8 V, y2 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* l' y6 t! w) ~* x3 N7 J/ JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) ?6 ]& d9 W5 k+ u  r& iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' q8 Y! O: c+ ~7 C" g3 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: y$ y& b; K" A6 q% R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& n4 C& p$ L6 m( N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# j/ k  h& J8 d/ [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" f% I: Z2 {% L: D9 ]1 H5 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: Y! ~# {3 f/ C1 N: p( i( \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- a  g( A: d) q: K9 O% _: t; R% @" ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ p. y2 {9 A) n5 I5 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 d1 M& ^: Y1 I  T- X- o! h8 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ ^% Z8 k- g) C- Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ E) i; ~% ]9 r; }" ?% s, T% g: K# K  O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" v5 T; p2 O; i$ @<P>你无需担心</P>
* \. U6 x1 d/ a0 y6 [% v. O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 W; C) @/ e; k; @6 e% v' Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! ^: ?3 l. p& P0 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 _6 p9 ]& t# g$ R: O3 o6 ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ A0 t, a1 `! N% Z4 A" t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 S# q; E% F# ^7 m, g7 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ ~1 g' u/ y3 _, J8 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* \- @1 m) d4 z# \* C- `- t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- e- y: f3 E. c# W5 F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ v7 \+ k0 ]3 T0 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  |+ C- I. m6 j! p0 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- c! ?) U. k, e! @- E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" _( r- k& ~; Q% B9 a: o/ m; X' k4 Q% U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" }7 a6 X' M* L4 w( ~0 j* Y8 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 r( l" F' H; N% X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 r+ K  C  u) W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  x8 w9 f3 C4 `) i. D, @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& l: V6 F+ ^8 F% c3 v) K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 E2 h( i9 s" F( _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% o2 l: m1 s' Q% k) O+ F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 S2 ]! h1 y  v' x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>