【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

+ K  n* H, Z+ h3 E: N( \<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
1 t! K1 Q" f: \4 s9 f! h

' f/ h" o) P% m歌词我附在后面。
2 h/ j& C, J# O# q2 K. I! BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 W7 a& o9 f3 g3 j8 NWith the moon kissing it every night
' A; u3 ~: d( A. L, F  |Seeing the sky content with its love
5 w: w- T4 M0 V# X( \/ d7 N4 ]% M) jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 n5 N, J# ~, t6 M- m! f& R4 W6 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; g( R& b9 b) tI really want to know just how much you love me
/ H: D+ R0 _1 r& E# CI love you I love you with all my heart
. K6 i% V% k+ u& _" A1 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( B9 ~3 m* j$ i& J4 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; b. u* m$ w3 g8 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 P  n7 C2 a5 SI regret not dying
: A: a' b. t4 w  z( r  ]3 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* n( |8 U' K8 {. L) w6 MWith such a tongue as yours,
  @5 s) w& n" D/ xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! Z1 {7 ~" w7 e( [, ^
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  q6 `) n: V  H+ }$ G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 e; q" [; c0 A; v" I) y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ S5 _9 y+ U7 B4 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ s- e. H5 N0 F' D/ N1 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 D; N; O( a+ W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 n: J2 i- v" E8 P2 ?$ e7 u* ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 |# l! e  T4 X8 M7 }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; ~- c6 x, v# V- G9 p8 W" A/ |$ T6 {6 J' B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 m" S, q( |# l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- s% l# m, T0 [7 v. Z9 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 `: b* j; n5 ]8 a4 L2 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& e" w8 y) o3 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% x5 g+ M1 ?2 y# m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! W: Z4 Q$ X! J( z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 X- V4 S+ |  X+ {, }! a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& o" C' n) @3 {# R  c6 F* D9 g1 `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( B( T9 n! j5 r) ?$ s+ }3 n1 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 Q# t/ K$ I- e4 \6 I2 L- `. |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# @8 O5 [$ c/ g! h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. ]1 ]% P/ Q: G4 @0 T: o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: r) u" k5 t. u3 N; H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* m9 U( p2 B& l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& H6 |' x( `, r( K1 b+ U' k( P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 R1 F1 r+ c! e# J7 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ i6 v; ?2 ?3 J- `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- Q* B3 {5 T7 j, J1 u, W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 {$ C+ U( C: {/ r* [5 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ R5 c7 |$ C- d4 W- {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: b" Y. v6 H8 T; \* p$ h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' }) K9 E& d$ Y" H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( C+ ^. S" I7 k( ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
6 e: [- M7 v3 S$ n
我请你剖开它

' v+ Z4 j! l. I, F; l3 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>