【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! v. c' r7 {6 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ f3 k* [% h' q* R$ `& wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 K& N/ v1 J9 O: w1 w5 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
) d/ V& @2 R. v! _% b* |With the moon kissing it every night
! w- ?2 ?0 i/ \% r8 R% l9 s5 kSeeing the sky content with its love
7 u3 j8 P; R; i' |. B; M2 a& O5 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; [9 u" }4 b$ G8 [1 r& qYou needn’t fear anything
9 F  D' o. H3 D5 y( ]: x- u# o7 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# x& @7 E. O4 v. d8 n; tI love you I love you with all my heart
) D. B6 i( D# {) L% N; q. r% A* Z9 qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! y) L; d; C$ o# _; q; U# c8 q+ KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' }3 v9 W" I( b9 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 B. k' ?9 D7 b2 u- f1 xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 y# _# p5 W' Y( Q' U% oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 F9 c. L1 C( W/ g) D5 {9 M' mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ b# A' b7 Z0 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 ~, t- g* G2 l8 l# @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) ~' x+ L6 X4 V( U' E- V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' T; U/ B6 n( b! L5 j% J& c* g! f+ Q1 U6 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 k: T& _" `; q' u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! [/ P2 E6 G) A% F5 U5 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, a, n. b: T; _  C6 ]) l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: W1 [  p5 u+ p2 A! {0 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; R  a8 v) Q4 `4 ^$ K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; ?. j+ a7 S) ], u  F: n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ }" h% [5 M6 `6 E4 F/ n, [8 H1 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* }" P) A: g; h3 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 O$ {4 w6 T$ c# G1 J0 a, I- I* L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! ]: z) w* N" h3 `2 a) S, F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) p8 C1 R% N9 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 T3 ~2 l$ H' y3 F7 S. g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 \; P) S" e+ |/ K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 |( C% q  _' [9 f2 b* i% _4 F$ t3 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" l0 D+ f, Q2 [  b: L8 _" }+ ~1 Q' n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ d; k0 g3 P( o" i5 }; R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ ^6 g0 S7 _8 ?, r% F) X) W$ P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ n. y0 C/ n5 M1 w: q, n7 v( o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 {# F# y6 A" C0 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 H) R' }: a, Q2 J- B( j& D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 X: W# V* C  H4 y. C8 C2 l: k<P>I regret not dying</P>
. w# T. v7 I) X/ L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' o% |- ?7 P/ S% d3 O' H+ p  e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* v, l# z  j9 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( R, D0 u% |8 b6 q4 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, y; }( I3 ^3 Y- a9 |  k4 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. g3 [6 Z7 X- Z9 r5 b! C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 S: z6 o" V; A( ]- e+ V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: f7 k, r  I4 T5 u. C+ {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( f- s" g% U( Y' N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 c: W  ~. q* H4 s3 C. i( y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>