【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 w* e3 {5 U  Q6 J: k! Z$ k. N1 \$ ]歌词我附在后面。
, E8 u5 @0 C9 Z# b- e' |) h4 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 @1 Z, I" w3 V& rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 V( Y6 m+ ^) ^; o' K: Z3 @# yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# Z. n9 H) f# k4 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ l9 W7 d" y1 l9 L  E: BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 {; E2 A, A" o" F8 U. ?/ g) ^! BYou needn’t fear anything
7 R; B) m6 X) }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 \0 G! z: v5 Z" r& ?9 {9 Y3 ]' {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' R/ z7 \, o/ U5 ^+ n( D0 [$ ?# e! qI’m still filled with fear
; [2 C2 L- ?: |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. M% _8 P, k0 E$ Y, xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 j+ K( \! T, ]* ~7 e5 h- tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" a! @0 E! K: W5 K, M; sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 E+ D( E3 S( {9 [% x( C* h* f2 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* N9 w0 ~2 e2 y6 ^& ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! ~/ o% b! x8 A: n! |$ O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 Z+ \; |2 M/ w3 F* Q& E/ H- O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 }5 Y  s1 v. Y# M) |( Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' R" X2 \  Z1 I7 F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 \1 x; z) T% @) [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 x2 G$ t1 a7 J- a8 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 v3 t) D9 q0 }. f% r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 v, t( K( e4 Y1 ]" Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, m2 ]3 o% s9 o5 x+ I8 g( v; T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 A, D6 H& [/ g$ R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 a3 j& E; O$ _) T6 y9 U7 n" R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; _2 S' c/ [+ f6 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 W) n+ [% H# Q$ ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# u1 L7 `. }) @6 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& }9 E5 l9 O* Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' _) i0 A- U3 y3 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  @3 W$ u4 z+ Q( P# G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 H# j9 Q/ ]. b7 u. v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- ]& y6 U1 D6 E' S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* \. o5 U' y; h) h& U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- c) b  r2 E* R! d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) i4 Y# a3 m8 w0 g; Q4 n3 O* f9 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 s9 F$ G7 M. Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- ~3 t) p7 U- R8 g  H我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>