【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# g+ `- e7 W, \$ H7 `4 P6 K歌词我附在后面。
1 j( U8 v5 i* L* yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 S$ n# \9 Y4 j. q8 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# m' Z) g- T( t9 [; q, L1 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 F; n% Z' z7 Q% qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' C, E$ {% b% nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  B6 j$ s% q+ d$ N4 `# C: I+ CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% W: H% F1 P6 A+ x  I3 Q8 WI’m still filled with fear
: K0 }! \) E( H6 B9 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, E0 N2 I4 q' {/ q+ MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 p5 g0 R* q+ A1 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 V. r' j+ N# ]. W) a; l( qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" R; C( ^/ x6 ^3 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; }, N9 \0 U; u$ E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 \2 d6 s+ a. U  q. ^' e- _4 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 k" q4 @( U" h, D9 t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 F9 @/ {8 n' Z" p5 s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 D. Q5 K2 K  A# q" I# I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 g& A! \4 Y' ^( b3 o7 B  [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, A3 @9 u  [  y  ~; C. ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; L& J3 b$ m2 X, T: {  X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" n! N/ K3 x. v/ u: ^8 A# T& ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ]8 w8 U4 G8 v% c6 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  K) A/ E$ P- |) P: G( `- f) l5 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 o: X% I* `' R; `' x% t, I( Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ N2 S( h) b& i9 ^7 U) p( K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' N' ^: c& R/ h3 G& [2 Q4 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  t/ y2 j# S1 [( t3 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 @; u7 g0 x3 \2 F1 H% l2 n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 M2 `7 s/ ?: o6 L2 a& u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 M1 M3 }1 `* F* O$ q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* b- V* b* T! N, l* E. J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 H$ [+ ?/ b" S! o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# x7 \' t" _$ {6 b0 g* o) E1 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% \  `* w# d' c3 k) h# x. A7 y我请你剖开它

" E  c* \7 _# ~' D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>