【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  j" i! @0 Z7 {' [+ ^3 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
( ?3 i3 O5 \" [1 q- YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 L/ {' r1 j5 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 L" B3 m% \, m7 w: p6 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, L$ s" i  s- j  z7 s6 P+ M+ kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. ^1 u8 }7 D7 o! E$ d& O) ]1 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 b( U, j- s  ^% ~1 b! pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) b; s, b! G8 f4 `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ g& M4 A6 Z9 W$ K4 j1 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. h$ }; r. Z5 G( E, Z) `: c- [! CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: @# o: H" k3 ~9 e. z" oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ Q( l! O* k" `" {0 C) B' N' iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( p) `' c0 N( L0 ~7 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 _. I# d0 h  ^$ V/ X# M4 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 i9 o$ R# V0 o6 c& Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 E: P" w% p1 V1 H1 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& I* m! _% ]- Y& X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 q3 H' g6 d4 j3 i5 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& D5 Q" V1 j  t4 P0 R0 x3 Z. x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& j% ^. g) F$ g( e4 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 _6 P: p+ t8 T* ?" M# g! A) L* H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 B' T+ \6 S2 ^1 s! x. e8 W" M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% r2 F1 o2 L4 t$ a* \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- x, }" @/ [: ~! M. f$ Q3 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 w  A# M- G, v, S# r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! o7 i$ p5 k* @8 o$ G# y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ b% g: v% i* ?9 s4 G) l6 g+ o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. \( T' }, O9 Z' a3 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" t+ I* [- \: }! r5 y& G7 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) D7 O$ ~- b( w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& M) x) G2 ?6 w" p  o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( i, q8 R1 A! d# ~- t2 [* Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: ~& d* N1 u+ E& D/ `; l/ a% U& I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& E) Y% W2 I- K; v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 N2 b; C4 m" H* ~) f3 e3 e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% T+ X- x5 e7 e, Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 G! l7 T) `/ V  e6 H: _- F" ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% F4 Y7 F1 v+ `: o* M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* X5 V$ b9 w! `/ p3 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 W$ g6 N; m5 I9 M3 V; L; s0 @& q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) |" m: ]% W- Y  r2 a& B- ]7 t( V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" h! d+ K+ G1 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" P2 s2 `) K3 ^( N& R" y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, a7 H: x+ U9 V; [( T  A' I* N4 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 v$ ~8 S$ g" T  G  H( C4 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 H2 C0 O3 ^! e3 f3 G/ x0 Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 i$ ^7 h: z# C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 l' s& d5 t9 s' _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ f3 |& ]0 b; y6 |& M$ n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ n/ d  l8 I- o6 H- G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>