【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 x8 U5 O, J" q1 G& uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* `& b) N( ~0 y0 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ e9 O" c5 Q) l$ n4 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 N# Z! R/ `; c0 C9 x7 yWith the moon kissing it every night
5 J1 }5 @6 F- q' l" u+ s% |. I5 MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: g1 \  F7 h! P" u) i1 U1 d  A. }You needn’t fear anything
/ }) ^( Z) S0 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: W! D5 e3 ^3 Q, f5 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( r1 S, s% c4 W. _Nothing can compare to my love
, T2 G1 U3 z: @0 }9 yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 V% w0 ^. R3 t) \$ }2 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- \3 o& }$ R- U' c4 yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# O, Z# ]3 l. ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 X* V& j! B9 P! U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) M2 i9 o# J/ L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ ^6 f4 e# M& a/ Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* z9 R- f$ z/ ?) P& O; q$ q  Z& q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( }' g& ?' C9 u  n$ P! z, S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' p; a- q- C* ]9 E) `9 E* |( m) Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% w9 m" l: |) U3 b( V- _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 F- K  v8 L+ r/ m; Y8 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 p0 d/ l4 Y3 n/ z  B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 Z3 O6 ?( V3 [5 r6 p. y4 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 s/ P* j" B2 i) g  w3 i- }( J4 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 K- O; u7 `, P& u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& Y7 @7 a8 W1 g+ y5 A8 x. D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% D* _( K. A4 n& ?) e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  @: l+ _1 I# T% M. `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 M7 t$ D- J8 M# |" I  M6 f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  b1 E, q8 M8 J1 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ n. A) X! w* S1 N( _" v2 Z/ X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% h9 l6 J# }+ {( e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: \  a1 @( P3 Y6 x* Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. g* Q1 Z% k3 C6 s" `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* a% S3 W3 ~  z5 p7 Z% g* K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, t8 {+ t  {8 I8 i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! O: W& }& \( _% i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 }1 g: r/ U' M( j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: J" k% P$ _, n! S6 l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>