【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 f/ K% [; `9 w+ \0 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 F3 A" J0 `" b+ a- MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 N0 m& t3 z6 b$ {5 h) x+ mThe sky is happy down to its soul
& Y- B$ w1 k) C9 _% c" p% _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) x. r! d  v. ~3 OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" @3 q: A/ e$ I" l6 V; s1 wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( m1 ~# I, `5 f4 i9 |4 E& NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 a2 ~, [  X. v& l) nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 q& R# {4 [( Y' K3 \I’m still filled with fear
0 X( D0 |0 k5 V$ k1 u% }# rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" h$ e2 f( H7 }% x" u. T8 QI regret not dying
0 D3 u9 `  V* w: K2 t. V1 ^% uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( H% z# t  `& K. s% A0 @, QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  E1 K/ ?9 B  m% G+ u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- q+ F; p( e1 ^5 X6 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 T: h" D& j% L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- {8 U) ?7 a  @6 H* X+ n$ h& m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& p5 S5 Z3 H, T, E  [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, `6 Q; J, p$ H; X/ y, m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! o6 {$ w0 Z( o$ `, ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; V- e3 o: j6 O" B- ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: t9 B+ U3 m( V7 L6 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' H! @! }& j+ ]5 S1 Y# M* J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* x" m; w6 X, d! u  `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 ]/ M$ ~0 F7 ~# R  G6 m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ _# i1 V2 k$ \8 G<P>你无需担心</P>
- ^- D: S* X( y  d  \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# T( D  @! \% u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, s  M: ]; c0 |! D: i$ x& M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' T$ y- @: C, |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' A% z% n* H4 N2 `) H' H% A* w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) q$ Q. ?  I- G0 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- Z: a9 y7 C! n9 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' q* w9 h) U9 S1 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" a: ~% V' y2 H0 w; \+ H" A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 C( P, W# G% ?( ?9 `+ I$ [0 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: _( R- N" M0 {& t9 `$ }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) u7 E+ w& g! r$ v/ f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' [' i' C0 H% P. W. p# q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: ]4 v8 C8 w( V  t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( E1 a! D* ^, @, O2 y2 g2 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! s- d, N# @# n/ b+ J& d  E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  `; Z0 o4 u3 G4 B3 O" I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 K# F7 S' v6 ]9 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>