【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 Q4 c( s% v; GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ^' S# R  S7 ~6 U3 d. _9 f% QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ @6 p6 r- E9 p, D2 n; cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  B2 H* R6 Z$ r! J. G3 AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& E  U9 M  ^% r/ wNothing can compare to my love
6 U2 ~! ~! K7 E! }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& F- [" Y" r2 s6 `7 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ q$ H  @* O: q( g# x& u/ SI’m still filled with fear
: a# t( J, U+ u1 q+ aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- a* c; z! r% \$ Y) O" N  hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ r- B- i( B. @( A0 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( l3 l+ Z; ]. oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 c& g2 U! l% Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 W: |, H7 ?: ?2 n! W, E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  d3 z2 G% z6 y5 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, i% W  h( O. l: w; ]% b" N: p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: O8 Z) n9 @+ n9 ^. Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( U" [+ Z2 E# k4 V; e/ p/ Z! Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 l! `! d7 g, |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 U& S+ F, d% @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 ]0 M7 @8 i& R. x4 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 E' q, J2 t, N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) d8 V. o1 r' @% U) ^2 R* T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" D/ i6 \2 X! k% c) F' W: h' |, \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 \3 u% ]  Z" w! a& G  C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; ?+ ]$ w) x  H- L1 G1 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ b7 w: u0 Y/ \: w- P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ P! V  B0 y& b1 Q: f) u* ]$ c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 Z& i( M. h1 m+ a3 \1 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' b: ?/ F$ `( r4 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  }1 h' W5 ?  e" M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, ^; B1 d+ E5 t2 h# C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ a- U. t* E% }$ K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# B$ ~- Y( p$ V1 ?! {* _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' L" J0 O! e6 m! A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ a+ g3 ^/ Z* W+ P/ @8 K' s# Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 c7 b6 a, D7 a- \# n9 l, P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, L% {* f. g3 e% ]5 D. p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' C& q1 ]8 e1 @( h8 E$ n# ~! E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>