【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 |# x# |3 M. ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 ^( K4 W9 S! ]: L; ^! y8 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- M2 P$ S1 Z. j# Z; A; r+ e% |The sky is happy down to its soul
/ I- Z1 U9 }; ]# r2 ?With the moon kissing it every night
* {. O" N7 g/ @8 {Seeing the sky content with its love
/ |" l$ n4 U1 b% a1 z4 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. r) D6 L! {5 t$ L: v! M  g9 |% x) v. ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) B" h! N2 v! B0 }! iNothing can compare to my love
) o' F8 Q) r/ W) y" z8 G$ j0 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 ]' G: L. S; |+ MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  n, S6 k6 I, H: II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" w9 G7 d* s. ~. o) dI’m still filled with fear
, j0 w: [& j2 b4 A: YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" W3 ]4 l+ o: BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 t$ y! p2 A& LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 ?  Q$ d! }' N' F, U: ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! U# v0 V; [0 N) {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. r4 j- i5 A( |7 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ r: a! K: w1 O- W4 N1 r- q9 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 {! {& f8 y/ N6 k5 D9 J% C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' l1 K2 B4 w0 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; f. {: h. m$ W. _( n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 L" ^: Y9 g" e* E$ I9 T. j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ o/ I0 K+ g- S) d2 |8 _$ ?# o, _1 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! H) T0 n+ ^3 a7 p# t9 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 z8 V9 x7 Q' x: M5 z8 ]' G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 A2 o6 P0 V# R2 v& K2 `. R- z' y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: j8 b7 C; e8 ]5 z8 T, C) M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. \$ x5 l' m; D! u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 q8 M( v3 C$ v% H5 A/ T3 X4 @$ B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 W: q5 ?) a$ g) l' Z/ C1 S4 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 i- D" X; A* y& B' h6 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; v; Z9 K3 b5 k8 C7 m. ?( D2 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# t( z! ~7 ]8 m& I+ G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! G& l: _; E" W' g% b7 `+ M/ X( O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 t9 _( {+ D! q" `$ W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, e3 j- h7 J8 b: G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ q( p' c. m6 s2 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  }! [4 z+ p5 c7 u# r8 x6 X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ E. m3 L" D+ S/ b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* G. {" k( B8 `% \; w% l5 `$ _9 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# Z4 t/ n! s5 t  {  F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- G$ Q  F2 v- m) K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( S. x. y+ I* b! y0 {7 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: C4 V: Z1 L& w3 K3 D) J+ p7 [' T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 A$ m! O4 r, {/ L- p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 ~- n9 s  {# \; r: G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 |! k1 _8 H2 v0 _2 R( q5 {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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9 {# c, R; i) W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>