【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 a  w+ t- h' I1 E0 d# NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 J6 y) L% G0 @3 }$ V, ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: A2 P5 M7 E+ Z7 U& i: `3 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 {, ]& ^% Z, X* pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 M( L0 i5 R9 o$ r: Y2 u% ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) ^+ C4 W0 b8 D' _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 V! t' ?% w$ ~9 MI really want to know just how much you love me
: {1 k0 I/ B% a, C" ?I love you I love you with all my heart
4 N* t9 M" M( R% g) FNothing can compare to my love
6 S2 d; T! N6 \! J5 A' \% ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! d4 ]+ h4 W- O0 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 U+ \$ d( Z: s" P* d$ _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) Y& d  I. n/ O4 A0 \& G8 u: LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& S2 P) ~" n# Z0 d. a, \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* D" P; u% h. `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ k7 p0 P5 R8 L5 y# n0 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. }$ l4 @# W+ w7 E# Q: }. t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 \6 }  B8 j" T  J' W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 l0 v/ _" S2 L. A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: Y9 B+ _% x- j: |' m% V6 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 h! m  j" L9 [4 ~$ J4 [" v" H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- R! w" N2 G" e4 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! R! @! o# ^$ h; k7 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ h3 d  G" N. i; y3 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' v( `9 n1 z, N5 N. q8 e# _! m4 }3 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- W' U0 ]% h1 Y, B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 ?: K, A2 j- d) V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 Q0 L, S0 g& N+ j; Z) l9 o* Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 J" p' \: N$ D+ ]8 I9 [& l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ k# h( v! a/ b" o: h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 x/ `0 Y* n3 ^/ v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( |, M& m, b' D  @9 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& u* u( [2 G( Y$ Z. Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& X0 r9 x4 n5 @: O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& {: e+ y7 w4 ?5 c! M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 D$ }/ [- y( B# K, A+ a% v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( p# q' Z. r4 a, k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- b* F4 @$ Q- b1 M. V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. {+ D+ h: O4 R$ n7 v: L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 o& f* b4 h3 V! v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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0 d  C! q  C: ~$ y4 [6 ^4 o  s2 V9 t5 } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 @) s8 L! g5 T% w; {5 j" K* V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>