【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. T" M6 B1 g% M- L% ^6 B* E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 V6 x, K0 [7 _. Y7 |2 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; E& f% a: ?( ?( R& ]2 `8 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 `$ B0 L. y. NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* O* K# u3 b+ B! n" yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- q# d2 w1 I4 }& [# ?; U5 `" n  `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 h" \) U" {& V- e0 `1 W% k$ dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' ]# D2 K8 ^5 v* h9 `6 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 O1 K/ P1 h5 l" [% F% b9 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 B$ Y! X/ J7 ]8 O+ ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" r9 u: M( p0 o2 v) a& g& R2 m" @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; N) k" [2 q! z/ w2 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ b  Y6 f( [. D5 I) \  \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% `3 i3 g6 U# S$ }; s% u4 m7 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. h- O: t, e( u+ l! E* Q+ o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& c& V& N% p& k1 X" _" P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, ^+ k8 ^# I2 Z4 B* I/ x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 e2 l* R7 g  r5 Q/ s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& x: c2 ?% _5 l: b( n1 t. t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' P& x$ M+ @" Q! H+ s3 m( M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& q$ z1 c7 f2 g' d) E% w5 y2 g, ~6 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 l  h* O5 h- L5 ?, n1 D1 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 g# F9 h6 }- @7 \5 \9 \1 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) O- P  M+ Z2 ]. \6 l" f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 R$ u  x' h2 j5 M8 F0 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 \# K) _( P9 j- u1 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 y  z3 `8 T" d% ~/ Z/ D: ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, R& x; [9 q  k- T* @  K( R! @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' Z9 J/ ~$ u; M% l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: \# R# D7 ]# ]3 L4 \3 w5 |4 k, ]5 f* B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) L: C6 p( y; u1 R: u2 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, i& V4 M/ ^+ g) J+ \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 L3 h4 q. n. W9 V* q: F! S3 C, m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* y" T+ E' M: ~3 v3 c  ?* U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% Y) B* s& s. q* p' x/ h) q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- U0 @+ A0 \/ S; a! b6 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 {- N0 G1 ]6 }" ^4 v( }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 a6 y' x- X7 X+ r8 ^% D4 R; T  W( a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, a* O9 [) J2 i( A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 w0 B5 U4 g$ }7 I6 c( E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 ~7 G2 D2 M2 m% w! U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>