【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* p9 X& x* v6 d4 h: E1 O" ^歌词我附在后面。
9 O2 [6 [; }& r8 A: ]3 L6 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" u# J/ u# p/ D3 a1 j- m& S# c0 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 C: l9 r* p  I$ }  q+ l' ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ [! Q6 Q+ y- o* o' cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  ?* a) a; c# F8 F8 i8 r* ZI love you I love you with all my heart
9 F8 A/ p9 s+ E: ]. S  m! qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 v# L' Y+ L" N  B% X, U. g+ nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ r6 t3 B& E8 z0 p, u5 xI want so much to see inside your heart
3 [4 O2 S  g* r3 N" H1 `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' [3 G/ E  y" ]) B5 ?* E9 zI’m still filled with fear
9 R: p3 {  D- T) i1 J# HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ @) b/ C& F$ ?% {. q4 Z$ k9 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# L; ~; R% m$ r# c9 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 ]# D" F5 G+ h: ~5 N! N5 e+ L; \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# h$ t8 s# p' D) q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% x$ J$ B: Z, c* k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  }7 W1 w" N9 ~" T0 z1 F5 a- t3 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 B) t0 a: P; E" `/ q1 x" O# A5 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 r; Y' a, P% k/ H  G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ o/ X9 a4 H# p0 Q+ L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ f" x" P% k, u! Q" L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) X& ?: Z& _" G9 F# w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# |5 |. A$ C  u) h8 C7 `/ T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! ?( l5 t- S7 J9 t" V9 L) t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 d2 |# f+ E! |/ [- H& ^- G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* y" }; V3 o9 V; s( f6 h- a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! @( ^1 F# Z0 J) C4 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% B, d- [. K; t1 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% z/ N- m& L* R0 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 |* `5 ]4 y- m2 U  g2 m/ K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( Y2 I$ n0 O/ H5 F- k. p4 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 ?  ?2 X7 K/ g5 _+ u<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 J0 N4 D) ~4 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 ?% `# p. B: x4 q, z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 J7 \0 D7 \* b, L  v1 M3 m, c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( Y# p$ e  @6 D( q8 x& K3 B& G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 K( C, V2 Z' k* g) G% G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' ~7 L- V% h% h; x0 ?9 U& }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% T2 p. [2 b$ S  x1 u* g6 J- ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 P: N! t# G2 t2 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  R$ s- H6 i" y) b) u9 T; `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>