【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) N% v) u+ F3 O7 k7 [3 k4 f歌词我附在后面。
3 d. h+ z3 E/ rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: {' u, u7 K/ V" P2 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) \& k) N. C& Q9 M# h2 |! C( TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 q( Y+ ~/ [4 i& g: i0 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 U8 s9 u, u  V5 }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 B* S" n  j! u" P; m+ ~1 bYou needn’t fear anything
8 i$ x- J0 g0 `3 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; z- V- L+ W! o8 }4 ]& n7 O% pI love you I love you with all my heart
9 z1 z$ F" g# f) N  A6 N% RNothing can compare to my love
  I- S5 H  r' D( P9 X7 k2 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 k+ h  ]7 [# l* FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 Z8 v) a2 v4 ?# b# x& f2 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ r7 b3 G% J+ y- t7 V& UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. F" ~* ^0 ^/ }) cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  [# W. Q' r, g$ [( g; \: S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& q- L% E7 \# C; g  t7 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. t% f" o/ v6 c2 ^) c4 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, q5 e, z4 g3 b' {; r# x3 i2 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 [9 H; l, }  E8 Z9 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& m; K8 }7 d4 _, I% m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 B1 g0 \% B8 n( H3 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  {# V8 W2 n- U  ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  O! \# U0 x. g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 A. ~1 Z  \! n7 j! z/ H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 k* t, M1 t0 u" `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 G0 _, [2 K7 I4 F' O0 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 j/ Z( |( e* I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ k  G; O* d" a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% L4 @8 N' s1 u, W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 A5 u& A+ w7 r& U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 u/ O# ~/ B5 w7 d5 j* @% H% C4 I* x, ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( I% {" N; X) |  W. h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 g5 \9 k# x$ V1 t4 F7 }4 c* b4 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 X& F' ~4 m+ N# }! c0 `( ?9 A. Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 ^) U3 S( T* a9 z% ^, V" P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# T# E, x& F9 _; d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! x- S& ^3 Y- H, k) T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 F3 O1 A% x6 I  }8 S; b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
3 D" }; u# G. T( |4 L% j( G* S
9 _) ?# m: t' l3 f% c! h我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>