【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- g  X6 H# y. H& ^% jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 `7 c" P; a# j; k0 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 I4 {: Y/ G2 Q! i1 k/ z2 qWith the moon kissing it every night
3 U9 N& X, ^' v) a! s8 g) ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) D' v* E8 P" a) ]/ [7 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 B+ A. U! X/ D7 ]& {Every other word you utter is love
7 M/ ?3 E6 j+ V& `; g6 Y2 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
0 \& B, t# b# R, E* t, d4 xI love you I love you with all my heart
9 L. T8 C/ D" u, V! u1 t1 f4 }Nothing can compare to my love
( B+ ~, N! G% s. [9 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. E3 `5 t6 v" n8 w, U& eI want so much to see inside your heart
1 e% s8 Y& T6 r5 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 D$ X: q; t' f( s! W' \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 S+ y# `/ R" V$ V' f- H' MWith such a tongue as yours,
& p: \3 o) J8 t- eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 r0 c5 u* ]$ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& {$ z: R1 a, A" G, V2 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 l* [1 n- |/ F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 c- b0 g! q3 |1 U+ b$ Y  v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# U3 b" |0 G: Z& ]7 r8 e& h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 e" [0 v  u1 a: u2 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ [- Z5 ~1 y9 m6 X+ n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ E  W8 I; b! L4 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 E1 T6 _& N+ H& m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. S* ~. l: w" ~% g- v$ V  o/ d; ~+ P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( s! P/ X6 r7 ^1 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. M+ z; j) X- ^2 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# U( H( i5 d9 P<P>你无需担心</P>
- @& g# |( a" U* r5 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 v: i7 E/ w6 o- W2 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ u. P" N# A, n" p, S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( C3 }4 ]0 t, J: ?" e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  N1 w) l$ _& o' V+ ?5 T) V; s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 H  w- ]$ Q9 r. E" a' W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# C: s2 F: R: q8 a( \7 a" [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, }$ S& x& E) z$ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# o+ p' N) p4 u5 h' \# L( N* l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 T. M) _9 H4 @+ ?( k9 Q% J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 W3 }( O6 H1 z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 q3 R$ g& f8 Z; a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% B5 _  k# J6 `* E% Y9 }8 _$ k! _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, Z' R8 M# k3 V! a7 D0 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  `, O) ]1 l* f- ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. T9 {8 ]$ O5 ~& U: c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( x$ j& y) i% k/ B9 w  @2 S  Z0 p/ R+ I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>