【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 @$ V/ s8 }/ X$ x; ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, S' p, ^+ d! ]" J  E) vWith the moon kissing it every night
7 S) }/ R4 d* ?2 n: oSeeing the sky content with its love
- H1 U0 y& @8 n+ R6 \8 I" LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. R, R' z0 R: XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% G6 H! t) Q# q% XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ _2 G; E$ s& }. k7 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 K! J* M2 W* f8 K2 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ z! ^# ~7 F9 z! j. jI’m still filled with fear
6 Y; M% j4 _/ g+ M1 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 T) N; a' Y9 H( H4 c% e% cI regret not dying
* P8 N$ \6 L$ Z1 b. _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" {3 c& ~& g# PWith such a tongue as yours,
2 @8 ~$ Z5 }, h  cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, D8 r2 P/ ^6 K: @  {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 j7 R, ?7 C! y& U/ x4 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" g& }6 J6 ]3 D) \8 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 h. l# f$ [9 p2 S3 Q; \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% f# f9 ^0 D" l& Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( a( D3 M8 `& a- ~5 D& Q" T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" `  j' _. G) Z- B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 r& i! q4 i1 Q+ x5 F" W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 p5 I( G7 o, [& I+ u9 O1 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 w* ]3 f) q! ]' [$ i0 k+ Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. w, X1 F- |: F; H) A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 ^% I  w0 d' B: ~2 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 S; F6 j+ @) S3 f9 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, e2 w2 K/ ]' H) M) W$ w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 v) O! o& S6 E% M3 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( B- T' ?, o1 V" E! }) ~5 A$ a; p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( c6 Q+ f5 A: I0 Z8 [8 X" p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ x. @1 S0 p  R2 j+ w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ C6 p: i& i  c" R" Q( y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ m0 r) y0 P5 o2 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# a; `* K/ [: g4 v' w; ^* I" Z4 H; b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 w% ^% _: M: _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& G" q5 p5 t! ^( J<P>I regret not dying</P>
" r' r4 O# c9 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 `" o* c$ R1 t; _9 z, Z5 y# u5 g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 J, f7 K3 F% N7 e, a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* T6 _+ y2 e( b0 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& E0 l; {3 M5 q$ C* J' e* x% j6 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; Z9 Y7 _; p; c$ A. q0 e# Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 i% h/ Y1 t! G: Y' D2 Z4 C$ O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 k) i* ]5 ?, E8 K& ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 f5 D0 d& G/ X. r  K; \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>