【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, y' {7 `! k' ?  i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( V% _" d6 P9 j0 r& D3 d. KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, @4 O2 |& b8 q* BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 ^  d- p0 ?$ mWith the moon kissing it every night
! N/ Q' w( m: r, V* j" M7 \Seeing the sky content with its love
( k4 J( k* Z( |! \4 `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 p8 [6 X# ^5 {. x; @% S: pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% _9 P" U, x8 F  n2 xI love you I love you with all my heart
( D1 j' x0 F; i# pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# @8 c8 J! _! p* uI want so much to see inside your heart
  ^( `  B( M; z! M/ \& Y! Q, VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ E8 d& f9 A. }9 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* f* t0 k* f% S! M" JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& j* K$ A7 _, S. U3 Q( C, t8 F1 [With such a tongue as yours,
1 Q% g7 z+ r' FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 j8 U9 N# Y  G6 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, M0 [  p9 T6 k2 q/ n) M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& P5 `) b3 i! Z% v& N" D9 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  @/ A! x7 {' i; n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 ?7 e( \, S& F* k' b! V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( X$ Y. d1 N: f; U! d  ^' \% W8 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. l7 ^% S  S5 ~* P( v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, E- C& e/ b8 @: J7 ~" m) c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- L7 @/ M! ]4 ^2 F% p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& o; m! V. A  @  G) z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 T& K, Y/ q6 G; K# p# `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( F3 A# F  l( V' V4 s& V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 d! v& K3 ~1 F9 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 D+ L. v5 V' ^0 ?, d9 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 x! s: r8 t8 N+ u<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ ^! S- F% X( H3 m* `" @8 z, v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( K, |3 Q# L, C+ Q% p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ A0 _: O. h! D$ [) [& c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( K! `6 o$ E6 V" }7 q. E6 ^; U- _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 V( x  D4 L9 z4 S; X- W# g  |" V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ a( n, r* M8 x' Q5 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 w5 h/ R1 J! `' @% W9 N/ Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ o6 k. x! a) m; W2 j& N. |& A3 z. r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 c4 U; f; n+ h2 s. s- V7 W$ C* U我请你剖开它
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# V; i: X( C' |5 u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! S8 O: D7 A( P( P+ f) `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>