【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& m0 s' C# _+ L5 q% tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- p, j# D4 B1 r0 G* I5 a# |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ w( W" v4 V. }0 U0 h. S+ YWith the moon kissing it every night
. _. V' O4 |2 G- QSeeing the sky content with its love
' U( L! M2 p1 q; fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 G; z1 I3 y! j) @2 {6 w/ @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  Q( x- n7 m% z5 LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# t5 E) c. v, r2 `1 Z* y; KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ]8 A- d2 x8 W! v" n8 C# aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. |4 r7 e: l/ ^$ P$ [) zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ Q: q$ I8 v, j+ h; o# yI’m still filled with fear
+ G2 C7 t( c( i$ b* t' wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# d$ ?) g/ d& w3 g* QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 o! }" [8 y# URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 f/ v3 [# H: v' P) O. i3 w" k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 ^; |1 {) x4 A3 L6 G# `- K8 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ Y: K$ k" H" `$ x0 U; ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 l0 ^. d2 X5 a: c) M. v) Y6 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" a. L( u& r- o7 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* |8 M+ C0 t9 N3 E4 F* l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: w- S5 `4 C% z' R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" Z2 Q: X1 y+ a1 @  d0 @1 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% b2 f6 @8 W. i+ B' f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% x0 \" b( H# G6 l: R9 V+ d5 ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 r1 S& t% J9 [: O  I$ J4 X1 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 `' _# C% S4 ^& J# M; r/ b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% p+ v' \) X$ ]0 A; ^" n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- U& }8 ]( Z1 J; M/ ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- x7 H& ?$ \  I9 M- x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ I/ P+ y6 `9 N! ^' @: V) j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ _! `) W2 ^& J) r9 r1 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) b' d7 x8 j6 j* K( e2 G1 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- k+ U, P: W2 ]- O: N/ j6 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 z- T# M% ]  x( j% |$ o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; Z! ^, v8 K6 _8 ~* X' t% r" s6 I3 c0 n$ j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ i: s& \, `5 ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>