【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 `9 F% O# ?. LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 S# F. A# z6 N0 _1 g  K8 ]4 v  G4 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' E# e, |. Y9 {* V  EYou needn’t fear anything
1 y" J, l* @( f; NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; x. Y, J) ?# ]$ S: X) |0 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) h# m  o+ I9 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% \" J2 {# A5 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" C, ~9 \( J- M7 G& S! rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( ]6 D& y9 ?/ G4 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, H5 r* e$ a4 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- u/ F) g6 `" `6 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. H0 T( p% m5 n2 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 P+ L5 {2 B! k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 Z) h7 k5 }  E  Y- B3 i% W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. w+ l! }0 L! I( e2 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; o. ~+ a" a- a/ R- S' w8 A' H& H& j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 r0 q" O6 n0 J% m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 R; [' R& k6 [, ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 N' }3 Y+ h; w" J$ N$ m- L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# x) {" J2 H, |# ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; Q( i# G9 ?0 Y* z0 P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, K7 \& K; s  `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* j6 P; t, J  }4 x! [  {* w4 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* [3 r* u. G$ \* K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. p. j- n; c( r4 W  M' z0 E- y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) ~% t( u- P1 y& d8 A( r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ G6 Q4 ?9 i( p0 H2 |( G/ @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 ^# L' K7 |1 m9 h, N4 r" J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 J# `2 S/ d. @0 s& j3 f我请你剖开它

: X1 w5 _0 Q  ^  m6 p! F7 q/ W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>