【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  y2 ^  v; Z$ y; I3 R8 O9 [) M歌词我附在后面。
, k3 n3 R+ s9 ]7 {2 Q7 m* r* [& w7 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 g: v9 o& Q$ Y9 G1 b  xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 h6 Y/ E" m. T1 R- ]& z; X, jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 y  ?( E8 D2 ^& O! @, HI love you I love you with all my heart
$ ~3 A$ |5 o1 }$ z1 c, hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 t$ ~' c: b+ E4 pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; P. k* V& T$ k' J! A. S( X% w6 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ ~6 ^! U0 t4 o# X' N8 X$ m' e# QI regret not dying
1 S4 v8 T2 f5 V$ n! iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 X; k) M+ m* m2 DWith such a tongue as yours,
* i- |; R7 U% Z3 D$ @1 x- o* p% qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% x8 k. S9 e: X$ J! p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 g3 [' `- [, P8 O' V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ O2 R, y) ~( r# p" T9 t  D, X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% Y) G) Q7 p* ]! _+ ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( c4 W3 Y4 ?9 s6 h% U( i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- x% b: ]- ]1 N8 u+ i0 ^; z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: h" Q* n  Y0 C0 A/ h& `' P( ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 h- p8 h4 k+ L- _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) d& b# M& I3 \* n8 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 V1 f. ~, t5 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# L7 {' H3 u0 f! Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- f0 ]4 P! w$ H% ~  O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! e9 c- Z9 z! {3 O- k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# R( _( ]1 p% l. e# J3 `5 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( M8 G  @7 u9 R) k3 Y& Y* x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 M% \1 K) I. U% _9 `8 Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ c/ e4 `4 V& b3 a& K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ H( y& P& S  u! i* p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 p0 x( Q4 J- `9 m/ g7 P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- `+ k, z- @  P. b' V6 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 o, ]1 m9 A% q2 M7 O" {, Y# U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ {1 G/ y' E! [8 {7 p$ k6 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" G% v9 B. g+ t8 I" c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# j. R9 M' H7 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 B8 I; |" R- l( U) i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ l+ b( \. |# z$ W7 b5 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- a8 G6 a. U9 p, q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 n3 ?7 \' k. k0 {" F$ U3 i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' R) B: l- y0 p2 h5 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  {& m2 B! j. Y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 `5 C0 d; i$ Z0 p9 X: t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>