【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ x+ N  d4 D4 K: S6 r歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( V" ?2 A; w1 \7 [+ o1 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  x8 y5 q! j( {: QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 T( }  |% j, a! M$ \0 S) v& Q! SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 G% p8 H" Z7 q8 x4 W! v9 b+ `Seeing the sky content with its love
! x+ X1 `. D2 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# G5 u' i# I5 C7 uYou needn’t fear anything
8 @5 P+ I( Z( A! y" nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 I3 i  S$ c9 d! F9 OI really want to know just how much you love me
7 R& w: U% ~: z. a+ EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 M$ W; I% D  e8 JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 U8 i. a* B9 ]& DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 P# g; t/ z1 s+ g" K; |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) M; F  C( f) `! U8 O1 c! y- HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- u! _7 ]) }; N5 z1 L. }- J/ C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# h2 S; X% c* v% U+ W  b# c+ j- c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, W$ J) \: L) R- J9 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 g6 n! U8 F% ]" B# a* j& i7 i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" Y# ]; L1 u% `, }) A$ Y9 Y& S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; {; ^- o8 G, D& a0 E: z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. I' A& e& T5 K9 _* R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, x; ?5 A' y# N: s0 Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ w: O  @3 Z" f  J" }) q' g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" t) d# t$ G" K' d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( V! S, W% J' S& o$ D* `. F& {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: Q/ s) C. S$ _+ ?% g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% s: `0 b1 O6 e4 U: s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' r3 D, @: V5 ]. i5 l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, p3 s. @) H+ V( x9 @* H; x4 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# z7 s" d" p1 _; l0 [' ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 W8 H; O" Q1 q" k( ^1 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ Z: n. V2 b# D6 r' M# Q4 |0 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& I" t, o- y* h. T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 K9 k0 Y# O4 |9 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' A+ j, n6 \" j+ J3 a: n% }  p1 T5 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  s5 B" ]  H/ v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ {/ O" k. [( z4 b& v8 L: {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 }5 |+ m$ z/ E# |8 W9 `6 e& Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 i+ f, N( [- \0 u1 F! z/ H6 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ f* e) |; [5 p4 h9 d* T' n+ p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% {  o/ s4 q) R& v3 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ h5 f9 c) d) l8 C' ?* n' \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ u/ s* X6 O- L, I- i! {) x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& }1 f9 I. F* S+ z( B4 t# M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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: {, z9 _, q, x* k0 N/ y( O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ]$ J+ W& G, B) L/ j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>