【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ q/ X& t) Q" U* l歌词我附在后面。
/ u5 B7 b, z4 s3 U, @The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( F% a) H3 G5 h: L5 @# kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! t, h6 R1 U* H0 v$ a$ u. k" VThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 p; E7 o6 I/ C1 C: }' {- M( S# nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 ]9 A2 ~4 U: f$ G  `2 RYou needn’t fear anything
! P" n  r" v) K! g, LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  L, X; W2 a* O7 `, j2 g# b" qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 O, ]& j) e( r% u1 INothing can compare to my love
5 i  ]! I; y3 N, L( ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 M5 X4 V, I+ S6 I5 {  T: _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) B. I3 U7 `% K) cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! s, J3 ]/ a: {4 A8 r" k+ Z4 v3 G  eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) N5 R8 S5 W5 u4 A- \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* Q( y0 m0 a5 I$ _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 Z! H. `: t8 O4 x- L! C3 I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 M4 z1 t1 B, m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: o" h& Y4 `+ C- V* p2 n1 h" j1 W- ^6 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ |: l' o: f# l' ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 S3 a) N8 m5 B6 V7 F: `) L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, R* e$ T1 i: V9 ^. z- M$ m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& \+ t7 t$ }, \0 ^) V. G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  x6 z3 w4 k: W. k; z1 o# Y/ v  Z8 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 F5 T! Z; C( _. d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 h# y$ ]8 C4 m1 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, J  L. L- Y3 ~! ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 ?2 @: ]* e' w4 W1 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 T: K' D8 m# }0 l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  o/ A! a* B: L( n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 [6 e2 e1 j4 T( }* q* c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ {6 J& D4 _, J+ ^9 S/ d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 ~% z- q& X( R; k5 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 x9 Y' @' N+ T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& p. q) [5 K2 U0 m. t3 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 L$ t4 e0 ]2 z, n; q4 |: G5 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 {& w6 Q' i1 W: m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, U6 @& H, d; A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) K& W  d8 y; ?: S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 [* ]/ n" }' z" M* O: v/ \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& D2 Y. Z* L' Y/ c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* R0 b$ T4 o0 a2 u5 \3 y' v. n" z+ _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! w0 A6 |5 I  h  w9 ]7 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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