【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 {  ]9 b; C+ M( T! Z. j( t8 {歌词我附在后面。
- v/ R# l- P" k5 Q( h, ^  SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 @1 H& ]" X3 \* g. D: HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 X6 Q1 L! d1 o/ IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 n3 j' N9 z& V, OSeeing the sky content with its love
+ K+ n2 @4 G# X9 {0 t4 N4 u# @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 J2 ]5 w6 C8 G7 L/ C0 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ Q2 m) s& v$ M1 P: _6 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; `6 i- B3 ^. h+ K& hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 v) A$ e' I; n. G- wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- B' D9 t3 ?" O: e1 N" B% E2 ]( EI’m still filled with fear
$ f3 U" x! _- p& x+ U2 U/ X4 P" ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# J; ^. W) U$ v! DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# y3 O5 F! s$ Y7 n/ y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  j" W. A# h5 M) V# M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 U) E: G0 \  q3 v  Y  a: x4 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ }( r  M% e. u% _! j, b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 k) M+ m0 Q$ x" ]; y0 m, u3 ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; F( q& I, G$ B, \* E+ r$ d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 N' V! O) N" i4 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) P: F$ \0 O. I( p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ V( N, d, v, G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 j  c2 t) ?- s1 A. w; ?# Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ {5 R9 }- x+ N6 M& s' @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 T8 B6 Q$ h  G! O0 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ m% Q! T9 d0 @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: }( v1 w( q+ g* u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" B2 s$ r/ |7 v3 i! d5 j  x- E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" S% [# X) d* v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. h  t0 y* F$ f/ s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 q. K2 L8 l8 z+ l( v9 A2 S# S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ Q7 F3 h  `* P4 J4 m% S4 P& Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 T9 M7 s  z2 H$ J2 ]( Q1 q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. V  {% s- r  G% w) M8 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 J- R7 N( E- H# j- q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 q# w. Y. \0 \, Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; `; ]2 ?1 G: u9 d* v/ b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
2 b% i' ?% ]1 w5 W0 ^( u
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>