【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 o# f2 w( c6 b5 H, d: xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) {' O& H2 `5 q' ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! V4 {9 k$ \+ }+ VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& K- u8 w+ e! l" G0 y* gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 o1 h3 F8 D# }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- R7 N5 s& V2 l$ R0 n8 EEvery other word you utter is love
- V' }( t3 M- L2 UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 A5 S$ b* u, g* S7 N  ^2 {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" Q, @) B8 g& _4 b& w$ r( NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 e" y) j/ f+ k+ J/ RI’m still filled with fear
0 ]" B9 d5 y' V( Z3 Y+ v( UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 X% b. S# w; _1 H3 T& I  @# g( zI regret not dying
  r; i/ ~, d! q1 I3 }$ ]$ y% n) iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& O2 z$ Y2 l; @) e! _( w& }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! L# ]7 \5 Y) m2 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 Y; E* }9 x4 {7 ^, f: p6 c( `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 y' c# F$ v6 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. n, v: `, Y* _/ Q4 E5 k9 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& I( C0 P% \( G. y- w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 |5 k( [: Y) F" w* \: n- i3 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) `* G6 z- C, F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 I* S* A: `+ A: C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ]: f. w% N8 J5 b0 x& T, R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 k4 Y* w5 H- A% B- N# J& J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 ]% w, o: i/ U+ x' o* f+ K8 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* w/ _) X% [/ F4 N: ?( \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* g* [. D1 _2 _2 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  P( f# ^4 s$ g7 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( k5 x" Z; y  y% g( u2 M+ N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: Q$ `6 v0 K% z& N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& I, u8 y2 W3 Q' J$ g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ?0 Y! c% G0 p; C- u2 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 t/ D3 r9 ]8 j: V% G4 k* p3 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( H# a$ K9 k* H) P8 f# n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 O: G% Z4 d% p: R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" F' x. M# \; P7 s6 O: e- v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 I$ r7 Y' Y+ k% J& }( z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* M) E/ o; q# Y( a8 E# {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" _- K, |; b+ ^5 ^1 k; H: T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 }3 b" k) {. m( u* R- F& x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 B  g- ]( K6 l% f% n# U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" G7 T. J$ `" E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: ~8 b; R: ]$ s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 z) r, e' M, ^3 U1 y我请你剖开它

) h2 }& U  j) Q/ G" E" { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>