【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' g9 _- S9 s6 ^0 s% r. Y  ^4 Z$ W4 W8 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; \* F9 m8 R, C, yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 V2 D# v$ T( H. c! z6 T* |7 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" V; O, Q/ ?5 X8 ^! d4 n6 q7 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: M% ~+ Q, W2 d9 o- YYou needn’t fear anything
( x% O) B% u( S+ q+ {& E6 g6 E# oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* b9 Q- a9 U) H. H: }Every other word you utter is love
7 \$ Y& Z- m# O8 N" q& @! gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! J/ F0 _4 Z1 m! o' I5 @; [8 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 [; a& Z+ \. fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- R( C5 o3 y( |: G. m6 p  HI regret not dying
4 y7 j/ n; B" I0 m1 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 D7 o9 j* ~3 t6 uWith such a tongue as yours,
, p8 q- k3 ^* T, ~& o) I" ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 T# z* Y9 G+ ~' T5 R! a2 y( f- ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ M6 g5 G% _4 n9 w9 f0 E9 G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" [5 _9 ~4 ^& E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 G7 s* u% v! Y+ U* [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& y5 z8 T5 L! X& a+ R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 h: R; Z- z0 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 r7 r! y' v, z' p6 r- e0 u  X/ |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  r: d" B% J/ K8 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% j' f7 c% _* }. a5 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( |7 H0 B# X* p( B1 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 t. E; j/ v" ?" C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ w4 {. c" w5 g  t; t  Q<P>你无需担心</P>
# ^$ `7 l# D# A4 Q/ a9 T2 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: a+ o* e' n2 f) S/ O: }- Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  R! F0 v: }6 p5 w$ t$ q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- F$ U  a( V4 j4 K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 O/ K6 c6 w3 a: ]2 ]' k: o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% i$ {5 j" j7 L' `9 A& K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 ]) |5 {0 l, ?' @, w" e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 G: g4 Q8 [' \" \% Y: a: F/ O* c$ Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 ~" i$ v- R' [5 Z8 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( }& H6 V! n7 l! {/ [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 s/ `1 x( R+ d/ q6 \4 \7 i4 v! E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 }3 p" v; v5 s  h& L- V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: M7 L  A$ V5 T: F0 D7 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 C- v! y# q1 Q, {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" w- |9 T. K7 N+ Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  p! o: f4 f. A! u' C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 }4 p* j/ h+ N6 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; M( E/ H: K$ f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>