【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! s. p8 c# b! g) Q5 p% X% @Making the sky glitter like gold,
: R3 P, X! q8 w6 g) |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- @0 o; U5 o0 A9 G- r, nThe sky is happy down to its soul
) z1 {5 A! v8 j% h: i) `( S3 XWith the moon kissing it every night
; ^  O" i6 j1 A! M2 \! iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* z0 f9 r# w0 N( p% @Every other word you utter is love
# F' [& K" l0 V. dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 \6 B/ ^# _, w  uNothing can compare to my love
; {# O: `9 E9 t$ Z6 p8 n5 q/ w8 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 O. v) Z# B9 t* l8 h! [2 HI’m still filled with fear
; ~- @" W% S8 `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 r2 M. M. o  E# WWith such a tongue as yours,
. [2 m: i# ^: J1 F9 Z4 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 _0 s( {- i( [: }0 q: hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& g$ z' V! {, H! S. XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  u3 y7 }) I6 b+ f( x2 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* s3 V% Y1 k8 b. T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% F$ g! c3 M/ s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! I; K' w, |4 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, ~5 J/ h: l( r1 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; F/ G) ^4 \/ c. l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ O, @$ X9 H: Z/ ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ ]% t2 i  Z. u9 s, K9 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' u3 N5 c& h1 C5 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. k( U' K1 V  v7 Y% j$ ?( E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% p/ U* H! b. y# g9 t  }- e( \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 z) L7 w" m; Y" u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, P, [; v4 r  A, N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 M% _3 d$ f2 ?) I6 ~5 u6 V1 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ O/ u9 p$ P- g' a$ H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  E$ |$ E* ~; t2 K1 i4 T# D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  ?: d6 k1 a. {" u- x* z" P  A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 ^8 t# m( O7 P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 b( O  n, e( l: {' C; S" }# I4 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% I/ h: b* \6 s7 m& z; H3 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ Z* {0 M1 }' c. y9 v# l7 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, H/ N. \9 k  M+ y# l1 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! v9 V) I$ J5 y, N; D+ \<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 R- W. f* n! [; J2 f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% A1 J0 a2 P/ f" h2 E; {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 ]# e+ _/ w* R! `% x2 M1 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ K: J/ D3 a1 S+ q+ A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  _, c1 t* q+ X  p2 E( b+ |+ @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 e4 l" o* G0 z& j5 F. C# a5 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 A1 X" L4 ?( s6 l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>