【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( T/ T8 T# ]9 }) e歌词我附在后面。
0 Y/ i& L  l' v- d! I6 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ }4 R, p, V) GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 l3 Z* q- b& u' H, T$ D" R3 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 o6 n6 r2 b( {5 _: V. j2 B9 g5 n, {With the moon kissing it every night
4 h* k' {3 q7 ^  ]Seeing the sky content with its love
3 ?) X; H3 Z, H1 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; a7 U" q" u, CEvery other word you utter is love
4 D' O4 j( y8 F* N# b, ]$ a# H/ C# j2 WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, y5 {  [7 G; T5 e" U8 |3 LNothing can compare to my love
& a: h* U8 V1 W4 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( U9 d0 Q3 Y6 U  Y  e# Q0 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 [( V  U( G8 W8 k3 T6 VI’m still filled with fear
4 @* M! d& @8 U0 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 ~$ u$ R$ r8 a* CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ h1 n8 _. t+ N0 R0 L- r  B, y! z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; d( Y! C, }( o7 {; n1 _6 J( F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 @: W7 F% z1 z2 Y; _/ I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 w  @% K7 k- b2 l( N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: a' o3 s) I+ O% Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. M: @# J$ X4 B3 I7 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! U: }4 H# X6 E7 h% \5 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# T7 K  x2 `. f' M, S2 W  `0 T/ U$ K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 U* D+ o6 g: D# w# x9 S+ e2 p2 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- N4 r) w4 w4 l8 ~0 @1 }9 w<P>你无需担心</P>
! {/ X* |6 H0 x* `9 A: F& u& |! a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ Q% E9 ]4 f5 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 [+ q0 I6 z+ l# Q: N/ i& o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 L, ~6 o/ O# D8 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 \8 `6 s& z! ^# M- d" H/ S0 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 a+ l' h/ [( z% P5 N1 H# l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 c, N9 _6 Y0 w1 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) r7 N( q% n, \( G" }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ u6 O5 Y' [6 p) F! n+ D+ L; Q5 T2 }+ }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ z. ?4 Z) N* O. Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 a) r. h+ @, Q2 p% C6 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* P% m" Y- r) w0 c/ T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ o: _/ g5 X# O3 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ b7 F4 q& {1 _" a+ z% }$ ^7 U) q我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ~9 D5 K' W/ ]0 B' w/ @3 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>