【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ a; G  D; }& Y( JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  t3 D3 L* ?- ]7 j% @Making the sky glitter like gold,
* r, L, S; A; V4 u, Z1 P# j8 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) u! c$ n$ }$ JThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ w2 n/ R- ]; `8 [* u- s) GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  g" d0 V3 ^2 x1 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 g- O$ ~( k  g7 z/ y  Y/ N/ GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- m9 F2 b+ G8 M' {& o- EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) X3 O9 f3 z! R' |8 JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 x% d% m: d9 W* ~# _5 E  r' q3 yWith such a tongue as yours,
4 b( i+ i% D; \  y9 R  k# @, J! l/ G2 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 g3 z2 Q5 \; e5 @* A* G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% |4 c: t7 D6 N2 U! b$ N1 R' |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 f8 Z" x& `" y# Q% w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* d$ _; A2 i- h5 d) u+ [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ R2 w) c9 H( f% }3 _7 U8 _; @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* l  S# j1 J, u- m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 y: q1 }0 y3 W8 l: r2 V* O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 n7 @' Q' x) E) q" {7 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ L* P9 `( |& ~' h& o: A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 E& J5 h; g7 v. p) P/ z  C; k) R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! e) r; b) r7 {6 y; U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  {- F% T+ X+ e7 _3 h) W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! D! }2 n2 G4 S  K1 \  i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& v( k  d4 c4 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 O# J  B# ], @- L2 ^% L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- v7 G$ }) Y' I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% N" a- L& l) `6 ^4 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! C, Y/ j) [, }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 Q3 n' X# W% g" i9 q% A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 G& s- C; [: E6 M& D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 J! g% _2 T- F8 Q3 G. t% f+ K) y& c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 m8 D$ g, C0 }  _1 k8 {3 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% D. m: V3 y, R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. l7 }; \; T: e+ d# N# z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! u9 X" Z+ g; D3 l/ C1 i4 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) r/ ^1 @4 m7 _( ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>