【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 |" v# \; ^" d, b% ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ }+ F' P3 k# S  ~0 K( KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' @# v' ~; T$ e/ Z) C( pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: q4 c8 r+ R# ~6 i/ CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 a: N+ ~# E5 X4 Z) r1 \3 E+ k4 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
) k; s( S2 A  t4 E3 I% GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 s& v% B4 M2 l. |9 E" [& F7 M4 xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; r" e6 V- f7 pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 n( d/ o' B7 W' \. HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 |1 C) p5 Z( Q4 E) BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 T7 V  w" q  ~. n% XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, l$ I1 c. Z3 Z6 a0 ~3 gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( k1 T# p; `, {4 R: L( fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 f  l. f  y+ O1 d5 g' vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, L, F6 O- G9 @( v5 ?$ O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 a& {8 v4 ~. e4 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ Z$ ]% y# R6 i1 m% s1 q# x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( H- E5 |1 \4 r; I# O8 p/ J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& E* \+ J; f1 l. Q/ w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; T6 w$ \8 P+ O5 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" P9 m6 @9 a$ S2 r5 {3 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ @( H( v9 o9 s- c* X3 z  |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' Z2 U6 \* y2 C4 |<P>你无需担心</P>
' G3 D' `3 x1 Z4 j- J/ ~8 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- D9 Z( X/ W1 t* H0 Z5 p$ l3 j1 r; u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' s4 |- L5 o$ ~, [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, L$ e. }; G2 ?6 d+ i& p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& ~4 n) U( I5 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 f/ Z1 i. `$ m  |5 o0 x/ L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. I" s3 t! u( f7 q5 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) G5 X! s( c% \7 E# `' I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 r) f' H$ k2 ^: a* o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* P0 l  P9 g4 {6 n  C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ j9 y. U& [6 P  p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ O/ y3 ~& G& t) Y9 Q0 l# X1 C+ A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 {2 p: h3 N) |) `3 c6 g' ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 |; n+ t6 D2 E) j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 {3 ?$ }: X) e4 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# Q9 o( M" J% B+ @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ k% V  R2 `& H7 l2 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 G$ S# h! u& K0 ~8 t. S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ [4 w+ a+ p! S7 L5 F7 [1 ?$ w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 }. d) R/ D9 k' r% _/ V6 [) C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 t8 W+ B3 a  b( B; Y4 H我请你剖开它
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# @: p7 \9 I  }5 z: E1 k' B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ a+ z7 j& Q8 Z7 p/ Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>