【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: h/ J" z' O( FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% f  f- c1 ]% U  s" ]% AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) P! L( z( p9 p" h8 p6 AYou needn’t fear anything
/ l  q& G5 F8 o- H8 I. HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. j- l$ n3 a1 m$ v% }6 pEvery other word you utter is love
7 G# Z. C6 O$ ~( e+ Y0 v; o2 JI really want to know just how much you love me
, S( K, b' Z! o5 L; zI love you I love you with all my heart
; @6 P2 ?( @0 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! z, v6 j# `( [5 W( g; L2 bI want so much to see inside your heart
) M6 c, A4 H; C5 F6 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- d3 i; ~$ \: x, N* |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 o. W1 E; y6 t& ~( lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 F! W6 ]  E2 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 T: j. y$ ?7 ^. g# R; o. B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: c/ `# v, _5 D) Y* ~( u6 |$ ?# K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 u/ J2 }0 y. O8 X7 u0 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- z6 }# n) {# L, J6 x0 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, G& E- H  H& f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! F# j7 e+ b! F4 N% v7 f7 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; l8 y$ V% k" Y" x; {$ W4 Y3 _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* u/ P% \3 w" `) V# d, R& f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 _0 z( f, h. n0 s' _8 Q* P0 H( [  I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 ^% r) o# z, D, D9 W2 z; X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# C, I9 q1 j% b( j& l; w- K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 F5 Y0 `' V+ u6 \- |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 |  }0 M! H1 `1 z& t5 t  Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 y8 G! P& Y+ e" k2 T; T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: f9 E% @( E* k9 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& f* d; H" }! e% z. k8 s* w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 ]: R/ O5 V  n) p6 o0 G' M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 R5 d9 ]* _3 F8 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! R# n) l. p1 t, c4 d9 F4 b1 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  L9 {* Z9 K8 c) o9 ]2 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( [% ?% P$ W8 j; X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: D$ \9 i9 ^1 {1 i% f4 b! s/ [  Y3 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 T# r. x' I& ?/ Y" |  R: m7 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
; `+ {) V5 d% I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. p1 M. w2 Z1 @' {( d6 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! u- ]% j$ J$ v9 v- d$ c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  ]: j' i# {8 K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  w2 V7 G# }, |7 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ S7 O+ k/ ?7 _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 s" K* @. |) y% Q# g! H! C3 n6 t! |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>