【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 H; h1 K9 \8 j! d歌词我附在后面。
  ]6 V3 q' l- l7 \6 @. \( PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, k" e7 `5 S* {% r# Y2 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( I" }2 ], b' MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( Z5 a# e% h- C- T  QEvery other word you utter is love
* {3 o5 _* H/ A# {( W( `I really want to know just how much you love me
4 g% n! l# W) a4 W3 z; hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 T) S+ E3 a) h) e6 q5 X# |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" f2 j6 [& l' Q" {! ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) z6 O, G* x$ f" Y2 }) JWith such a tongue as yours,
6 O4 ^! {& C$ d  qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& \# T2 n3 l2 W; w5 sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 W" ]) o& g: a* B$ c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: ~0 J+ K- ?4 a( {: T$ u3 X5 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 M( c& I" u8 C; b  A+ b4 Y+ R( G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' l# t8 {" a+ E, G0 X' ~4 v) X1 o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ Q2 K& V8 \( c$ N" I" _9 e/ f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 n( b- {% b' _1 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: [: z1 x) @. S1 z3 L3 l! F) `+ {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; T+ _: p( q# v* G; i% Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: W- C( j; F) k: ^! M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% a. B# o, R( e; a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& d, ]$ {. w: b" X0 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: b$ `3 `3 g# g: |7 \  J6 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ Q: M& O' t$ H0 Q8 u1 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 I8 `2 s3 u) A9 Z7 y: I; n# C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. q- q0 o" V3 q6 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( t* j* G8 y: v$ U! n" H9 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% c2 `0 [; D/ B! K% v9 A, B5 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 k  D3 D/ c) D7 A: h! z8 z! @& Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: T" L) O5 Y4 x/ H+ E2 f% R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% Z2 X. ~; V6 ^( @9 h( T6 q7 [/ {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. C0 ]# V. R# c/ x; x$ ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: r# f+ [. S) Z4 ?# J7 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, H2 n4 m4 m" W1 [7 ]( h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& Y' X8 K" h1 r5 P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% G6 V7 h& {$ P7 S, s4 ]" ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 z  c" o1 V* u. |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, F5 o/ u& k: q- R, ?6 S8 j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 }& V4 |1 D, `) t# a: g; f我请你剖开它

! R9 v+ e( W( Y- f7 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>