【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 z1 E. i- F# o  C歌词我附在后面。
+ c6 C) W: C+ q. ]( k8 x$ k# wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 a) c/ X9 M6 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' d  a' ?4 \5 w0 G7 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 T* N6 h( {8 w3 b6 x# M5 _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ N$ G+ k: a- o4 ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 Q& j( w3 h5 m# A$ I0 y) }! AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 f- S" p$ V2 J7 lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 w' K2 ~7 C( I% ^* I9 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! h3 c4 H# j/ y9 e6 C$ EI want so much to see inside your heart
- {+ i! u  t& Y0 P+ {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. R& k4 s$ V; c1 e6 n+ E$ U" }I’m still filled with fear
. s# @6 v/ m; S+ L7 z# LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: ^0 N2 N1 Y" J: n% `4 s3 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" k% ]- w0 p' |1 _3 S' UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% q/ y/ j7 ~2 e# `7 ?7 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; X) o0 i2 N7 p( {" A2 o2 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 O: v/ [$ J0 i/ s/ p  {' |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  z* S' D' ~; R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ U3 H7 A: q& t2 T$ o: g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& R2 D) p8 A: J* Q, k$ p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" g1 X2 t+ J7 G, H. t  Z) o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" k, c8 K4 z, }# L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' r) c4 C, J1 M/ p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& ?9 \& b5 Y1 W% A$ K1 w' ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& U" [9 ^3 w7 N/ V2 }" [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' Y9 o& [+ g% g9 S5 D! g" g3 M7 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 B$ F' [; G9 c: I* L# T! |+ Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; W/ l& s! z. o/ C7 L7 W9 j9 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& _( Y: J8 G( R4 c  H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" }6 K8 \1 G9 `  b4 \, A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. P6 A3 r1 h4 C7 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 _1 w/ M* x/ e5 f1 Q0 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' y4 [  n- o/ a" K- ~5 _, q7 g" e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 j, u5 f/ v  N% g$ T4 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) L% C' {  q- J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% M: C1 L% \5 ^( ^3 A: R0 \! ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# c/ c, n5 f+ ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ i0 O# _% z" k) F<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 S3 B: w1 ]8 Q) i& e' O6 m9 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: H5 B* S: Z! D' P- D$ r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 c; ?  x! E( K$ @2 Q0 }# A) o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ?& P8 U* o* @" n) u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 J3 L% ^2 X- a! ?, s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 X! @7 v9 A1 e. J$ T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: |, x# S1 `& u; T, U0 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ ]3 G3 K0 O6 x& i3 ~: Y我请你剖开它
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% {4 Q7 H% P& N7 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. }$ x  a8 n4 G) J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>