【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ U% X( C; I; A0 h5 `& D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# y6 L: H# x* T/ i: ^8 iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 @; {) J" n+ P7 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! A0 ~1 n( R) b/ e( W) OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ |! b% q- h! M' C" f5 b0 y: i7 UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 o; U7 v  X: Q2 T2 c6 R7 O) [1 J8 VEvery other word you utter is love
( V& Y: @( {' @# t+ @4 p8 mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 U$ T  t  B8 M4 O1 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( h# A0 c% s& U% w% qI want so much to see inside your heart
6 B4 `$ D" y$ E4 c7 S: hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 X" O' q3 e" t% BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! J  u0 S  J$ M$ T3 M: N; dI regret not dying
% f- d0 Z2 e' n( S0 w; h+ q' m* j8 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' J1 g' n: H3 I5 a2 a% pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, X4 u- y2 P1 I" Y* \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 G8 ^$ r* U8 h% d, Y, K* U$ d- [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 ]/ Y1 W6 k  z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. s, c0 m% O4 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 |8 y: O# D' \6 t+ F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 O% T/ `" L6 ?, v" I$ i% k. r0 I/ k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 \/ Q9 }) k! v, e% Y! P0 G1 w$ v8 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! J2 w+ L! |- G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; [) p5 m6 N8 V7 ], G<P>你无需担心</P>
) a: z* i/ H5 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 W5 h" p  a! V9 z4 V) h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! [4 Q! x& a( A, A" t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 i, \) Y9 t& q3 K* g2 ^6 K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. G' f* f) n; \: ?/ T4 o5 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 G. O# V1 T  g: ~, r0 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; Q& m7 S( @/ A4 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 }$ [. n3 s4 `9 ^- \- q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 k1 ]+ |" j; \& L, q* C+ v8 M( [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* x( I# r$ B2 o- b. Q& Y- u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 C9 M) L7 ^  S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  w9 ~1 r4 h7 c7 a! W6 F. y; W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: x  x, m6 J6 x& G# t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( I1 s' t; ~6 X! B+ S& D. G/ b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) l( d! R5 ?( z3 d& X( {" r% h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! Y3 s: D+ {. o( a' D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& [# C6 k' T3 }8 Q) ~+ L/ m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( N4 x  Q  g) K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 \  o- P8 @; `6 d! S5 k* E! K# h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& ^! t4 X5 M6 T4 ], x( S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 ^/ R5 l$ \) e+ }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 Z. f+ y) E# b6 G0 V; l5 u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>