【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 W& b1 \0 [1 P" y+ v! N* g& zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 E' ]( V+ j# t: fThe sky is happy down to its soul
, g* y- U' Q3 w3 @5 N6 H# }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 z7 l* ]. P9 K) X, d: |" rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- [2 U. C; n  P9 w2 l9 a; aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  n0 G$ `' L/ xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ [# `: C5 v5 o, jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 J! s3 n# G0 \# e1 J6 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% {( g' |( Y, q- VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 b! h! I+ d( u# O9 NWith such a tongue as yours,
: M& X; _9 \: |# IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: c! `" R. x1 ?) |; K0 T9 U$ R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! l6 Q5 Y. F% q  g. M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, m- X4 T# \% a2 E% J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 }# i2 n+ a% g: }6 _3 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) S6 w$ r& t3 ]9 k/ u% @1 j5 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 W, z, @. ?" B# q- T2 @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 w/ n# ^5 B: J' B6 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* e3 ~3 e; A( ^( m- y' T% F2 Y1 f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; b; j0 W' x& Z* W, w$ W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& T% [) r3 B  d# |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' R7 y: J; b! M% |; H. I/ U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 a  Y  d# }- G) i# N5 u% ~& U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: P* B! @' f0 ~; M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( _1 f/ m7 U2 \$ t' L: ?0 l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& M* L" g4 n6 }/ x1 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( s+ \! _3 m: l* n! r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 {4 Q( O, r5 n; v5 [& H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' o7 F, s. L; P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 Z" ?& x) D4 E$ e% M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 q- s8 F1 i: g+ P" ]5 D* j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) k; }0 R: b4 o, h) L& V( |: e7 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) F. f0 L( _( Q1 J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& a1 `! j) o8 l3 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' D4 ]: F" i" `% _8 P( ?9 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# i8 @3 M7 Z" {* f2 n. w8 w( |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! T4 C/ J& y, `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) N- J; D. f, Z: S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  ~' z3 w9 M- l: m* x- \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 Y0 b7 T; f$ t- z' p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>