【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* @& t7 i; @, Y: g0 @( ]6 n3 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: q0 q7 z; `: S9 h1 o2 X8 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
- |# V' a; u& d. Z% C: Y* YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 L. _) y1 L' D; O; N% K- iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, Q. p  g, p( ?# p+ BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( G4 f! j% B2 ~$ `0 A7 nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) P% Z; u! h8 h: dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- I2 D* K- S; l5 ^5 QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* C+ u8 x: L6 I. L; l1 k1 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) B8 Q3 @$ h' f, k' u" n7 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) `* F) h9 w2 B$ m" ]- eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  z) r/ E" ^0 G5 M, P/ Z( }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# m, ~! p: V! s) d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 E! w8 n( }, L+ }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 O: |, L& L5 p6 y/ c; |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 v! @# ]! z2 P3 e/ e, r3 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' I: j& }1 b( I+ _0 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; x# a; M7 x* K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: u' r, q& m5 j% ~5 S* R! ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" S! V' f% Z1 g# v) t" I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 g( N7 K7 \$ l<P>你无需担心</P>
& g1 V$ k. [% D. w3 J) P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 d" @+ F5 N# D* }, X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 r& X% S7 ~: q9 x; z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ {7 B1 f# s- z+ q+ N6 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 y/ j( W7 R: C; P: U. O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! o0 D* P; P& F" F! s" Q! d+ n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ ], s% x* J' p$ K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) v* s4 o, N' D4 x3 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 H6 d( Q2 v- {2 y* J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: D- o9 ~+ {6 o8 `( |& I( ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 X- w, X2 T+ E5 T9 w6 A# \. p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) {0 f. V  I; x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 P. d7 G. v% ?' `. T! r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: O3 t  g* P: G/ ]6 r! V5 k  @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: ?8 `* x3 y" w; S2 F8 K3 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ j+ |# d$ w$ B. j# j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 L* K3 ]) T6 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 V- L; [8 R/ v; @/ ]2 w: M0 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ e5 e& B/ H( Z1 [7 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( l5 M( C  s7 o' M5 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ R+ }4 i- b! Q+ |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" I% W) }4 ?( W! l* w2 y. n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 W; _7 m9 U2 G) m7 q' n; g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 W% q& ]9 v. S% K& ^0 }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>