【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# c, [3 z6 K3 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ?( c6 e7 ~, U' kThe sky is happy down to its soul
) H& W1 Y# W* \! q+ l& MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 ~+ K; P5 O3 b6 k1 D# x2 ?& i5 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! V9 J- F8 y) r6 r2 {) U+ n: IYou needn’t fear anything
9 z" _* G4 a/ d# E5 V* lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* X7 s% F7 H3 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
. }' J# }5 @" XNothing can compare to my love
& N/ }# J7 D7 _8 T7 @$ JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# v( w- B% H$ i' X4 w' j+ VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# a4 i! N9 F$ V. QI’m still filled with fear
7 X% g$ O5 B4 @: ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! }3 r' }/ z9 Q* [! m8 c7 ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# f( w! j& I7 R  ~( Y$ C# [. k4 BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* [% o, O5 k2 z6 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ I4 R7 m  ?+ T6 E0 G6 {, KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- K) M+ b1 v" n. x( {6 ]2 Z$ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 A% D. l  Z! i9 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 \  o1 U: A+ i) \) E! R9 f- d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 N6 `# ]! f/ c) ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 P; u. a* q6 U; ~2 u* j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ }6 v; R3 ]& F; b2 L, Q/ A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; D9 g" W# u0 X* e  k. o5 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- m$ x; D' j1 T& L' L! I  }/ g& ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 n( H( R1 A0 {4 l6 a% Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 s4 g8 u2 B4 g# s& F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 N  Q6 ?& n/ X  Y% d1 F* C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* h* |$ ]2 t7 U* X9 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) N5 c6 g3 }9 o, y2 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! n( p9 M2 w  B/ O6 b3 T- Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 j) r* [/ ]9 A# H: v* d: w' [. N+ @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. H' U4 ?) h; X; Z1 X( ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; ?% v8 @0 L) e3 v' x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  b3 D+ e+ ^) {) p! c+ U8 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  \) o& T; W: a1 H8 q% l9 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( k: l7 H- y- a. A% D6 g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) J2 r1 f2 J, K<P>I regret not dying</P>
: s8 G8 y0 D& A6 X4 \/ r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 `  Y! M7 a5 A4 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 Y8 e8 G* U" H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  h; N$ g! _2 V2 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 {* d: q# O/ [- E6 @' L# \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 L0 I4 L8 @8 p* E" M$ P' S; _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>