【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ `2 x" _! R9 E歌词我附在后面。
4 o3 m# f) ~3 }* A5 `- vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 H7 G1 b# t) ^8 ^- Y4 d  f7 K9 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ R! x' }- ?  H8 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; T( Q! e: H. _+ GThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ p% [4 q3 g6 o( \$ T2 _- v' K$ TWith the moon kissing it every night
4 a2 q4 V) b8 n8 x2 T9 ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 X- L  ^$ S9 u, ~) TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 t, e. A* ?2 L8 rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. G7 Q% V% `& C1 f: xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. z( o2 o% Q5 p8 w5 YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 R5 O& c8 X5 s" K, j- l) WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 z) m; R9 \5 ?! TI regret not dying
0 c0 `! q( ~* }+ s# p' @( X( DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ V$ S, S8 _% g# x6 w; xWith such a tongue as yours,
8 e  H  n+ O* BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# x8 i6 ?1 ]" f$ {# dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% |9 \5 L# \5 y( p+ m1 G6 u6 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ y6 ?& S1 G: o' B; S/ a3 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 l  E+ G8 ^  k1 o1 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ @. ^* r, }, ^/ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. j4 b  i9 C8 }: t9 \8 u2 b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' m  K: s) M6 j  P& v3 R$ `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( @6 z! r# s8 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 Z  {# B, a; Z- j+ \4 E0 b( @4 a7 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' O$ Y2 s  w4 {* a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 h" w8 b; r5 t, F3 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  d. b. w- n: v. h# B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" B% ?3 f% q4 n% R; h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 a* Y' q1 I! n$ z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' \  {) ~) Z8 c1 N0 S1 N8 I' p' [  @& d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- i( u0 E$ B2 ]. ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 W- V, J- w+ Y* D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 ~: _0 ^; J5 I, }: I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) q0 w& }! ^+ i& }* \- x# A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 |0 C7 x3 V2 ^- N& c$ e* |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 |# }! t- X# u) I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& ]# I% X5 `0 p+ ^6 d& r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- A* W  ?; `/ m0 q# o" e  u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 d$ N  O4 L- O9 E9 H! A2 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>