【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 I* a0 E1 z& W+ S4 i! }/ iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: q# J( B) [( k, |  [The sky is happy down to its soul
3 f7 D; G8 j- Q+ p( z- b6 k  o0 z1 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: l- _! R2 w, W1 H3 X1 C. mYou needn’t fear anything
: r/ p4 ~/ I  [1 y! @3 ^$ ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ @0 M% k4 j% Q* H) i) c5 lI really want to know just how much you love me
2 ?0 Y1 Y2 G& D, m$ pI love you I love you with all my heart
4 y( ?0 f9 i" I3 m2 H" aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, L/ X* C7 ]7 I1 C2 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! b3 q6 R/ z, QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  u/ ^4 P; U, y1 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- m" I/ B. p- W, P# F+ \* \6 j* d1 M! ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" O6 @+ d& ]+ e5 R/ B4 p3 M, kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" [0 _; d! Z. v; r: a1 t2 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 h% O8 L8 f2 H& `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 a  K& B' C4 P+ ?  z6 R5 A& J2 O% r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" A5 K, N' w  W! M0 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% w9 y% m) q3 d$ B1 a2 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ e; J: E; q8 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# g% }6 h! _8 N1 l$ m. g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* \/ J- L5 g7 ~1 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ m6 T/ S# p& J3 ~3 `' l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! A: n2 E# y+ H" ]) a+ W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: Q, |8 _7 M- l# Y/ ^% m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  d5 `! a- l; F2 V5 E* \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) L3 K/ B3 N* [( ]# D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 r, L! q2 h. {2 i- E6 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& z5 |: o+ b. ~7 G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, ~3 b) u# f8 z# U* h9 j; E0 b! v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ D5 b1 V! y( H/ C: o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ I, s5 G( d3 A# m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, g7 Y- u$ k9 {" i, y9 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 Q$ V0 E4 g1 t) j6 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
& R8 {' X) L3 C3 j' @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 @  Y+ c. @* X9 G' o3 s: `* }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 C% I, g) [/ ]7 i- h  m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 p! _2 ]; K, J- S7 l4 F) S( a1 x$ z0 H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 E- p3 Q! @" F# Q- Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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. ^% O- U+ m# s% u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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