【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- h, E3 d9 Z% ^" ~' h# H/ a! QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  I" G. e/ F6 u* n% }4 F4 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' P6 t" f5 c" ]7 Q  L! N: n' lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& z  U' {5 L; t, _  b# n" KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 @1 J) c; u) a( ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! X+ t% T1 T+ k7 s" |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ W3 t" O9 L3 i' CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# ?/ j4 M: h. o  g0 T( U3 eI love you I love you with all my heart
9 g5 [* \$ {# N# X9 ]$ cNothing can compare to my love
6 }& B$ Q7 F7 A3 p1 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& H* D, R0 r" ^+ F& _# C; p. {I want so much to see inside your heart
8 E* [7 Q% M3 f5 e, `" }' wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( `, D% q7 m+ `% SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; V- ?) ^+ h7 b4 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ g. X/ ~9 F3 x/ B: H5 ^% yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 i+ F6 ~; e- H- HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ i$ {2 `; z6 A* p7 w# ~! U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% D  ]. X( `& d( w5 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. \9 t2 u/ p/ p) ^6 ^, A- g- _  D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( f# t9 M% [2 q% C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 w( b% V( f; S; N- n! N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' k4 W9 N" n7 i* M; t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 o' q9 n# E$ c2 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ X$ n  {, D, q& K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 R$ m  i, G$ M' Z7 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: s" p6 i, e3 }* ]. E' p% J4 T4 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 ]# Y4 N* b9 n+ a& x/ R* \' N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% [* t, P3 M  z7 g: i1 X- I  \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 q4 l. p) W" S" G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* R: Z0 I3 W5 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. w- c0 q" P6 _6 k! g: {% X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& [1 y5 ^% A7 t- `2 I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, q& f2 e- {" f8 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, a, K6 M, {6 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 h. `; a7 o7 H; _2 A( V% b& `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 z( K# Q! j7 f4 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 }* Z- ]. j  m/ e( m% L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: Q+ @& L8 U* z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) \5 S9 H+ j( i# Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 Q$ o* a/ L6 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 |- \+ E3 ~# m- x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* U$ t, b( p: |  ^8 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& {/ \" V' b: l/ M. U. {" ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 f7 L, C: g3 N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>