【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% w# n& n+ i& C. a" \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) [8 l+ H* y# ?" P" F- K6 j" |: aThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 h8 Z1 ~! Q: r# sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: ^! `1 }# \# g. U; p: vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 r. |! |' T. ]6 t" H6 G6 IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 ~* @# j! y6 g$ l% B" P" KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, o, e& H  A* @  a/ HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. ?) F6 z2 ~$ w& N/ r8 ~% TI want so much to see inside your heart
4 s) N; |3 n  ~( k: fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 b  @1 G/ m, j+ xI’m still filled with fear
8 s* ~, E0 W  ?5 u8 }  V! dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 G' U# R, j6 }0 a. r4 @I regret not dying
9 Z8 H4 A; Y0 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* m" T. ?0 H% [- UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ^! d8 @! M/ o+ D, }& o" x7 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; f# Z+ [2 `: WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' e" Q, V5 Z6 B1 @) R. f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) g8 l$ E7 y* |& r5 V1 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 e" u0 E/ Z1 [% h* t$ x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, Z" ^" q1 w+ {' j5 g5 W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 n: B) Z/ H4 D+ I  i! }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* L: u6 A; M5 K/ c+ w- R; g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% r9 Z1 v) n4 V. f! x- c7 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) z& M$ r" y( V% q3 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 C! \+ y2 o, B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 o. ^* u1 W! v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. z7 |5 M, M( Z4 H2 ?# `" b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 K3 L- A5 \# i" V* j" R# G4 |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 x1 u% p% A9 D  h* D/ |% M# u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% ~0 }- m: P3 i/ d. d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# U) ^( }1 d, R, z) m1 w% M; m+ E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; Q1 L' E8 d6 t4 p) D7 J+ p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 o5 j7 f  \# U  |3 ]4 o! |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  f0 \& t8 Y% L7 U: {1 s1 W$ ?& Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% ~9 R; Y# i% ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% H! U+ T& {+ o+ v. F! [; u2 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 B6 _% Z3 s9 K  R. T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ u1 |6 _/ |9 C3 \& G; I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" _% ^" a, U0 P1 {& U( |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 ^7 Z( l1 E" R+ h) c7 h3 y, V. Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' a, H3 l" I3 R: C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: J" g4 p$ M+ ~4 @, X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 p2 ^. d- T0 b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 \/ z. |/ d: v8 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>