【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, G' h: i' `% K; dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* n/ v) V3 o$ G2 V; _$ @* p( bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% P9 F  q+ [  h, m: \; j; MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 W( h: X0 H2 @9 ~8 s% H0 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 w4 [, o& i! }, d3 R. M% W  aI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- w7 g3 m# t( N% S; |' ?) SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. I% ?4 Q% s7 D: F/ l1 {- iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ W1 c# `9 L! n* X' f6 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' b) v# i& S5 x; C; ^' ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: U! f" `, m3 M; h9 `$ vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" Y% P+ ~) l1 OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" V, M( o, G( D$ t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  V! C4 h0 G* l% Y' p" E. K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" N& I: z- o0 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 Z) \+ H5 A. K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  e  Q& U& R7 G. ^* p! n6 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: o( Q  J6 E: d) o, P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. W; J& I' M0 Z/ \) T9 {% `' F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* S5 {) s# p! ?! H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% Y$ k9 U0 ~6 F# Q4 q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: K4 U- R+ A& }9 h7 x; E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ Q& }" C5 p- H8 I) Y5 h0 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& F# k1 z5 y2 C8 [" F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- b8 c' Z) V3 r( F, l& q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) V; F9 ^$ v4 }8 ^8 G  Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 ]4 \" C- L0 J; N4 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 j. W9 h' d2 Z, s8 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( B1 [1 R2 D. m! g" |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, `2 C" O4 I$ K1 O1 F  T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ k+ A. x9 ^+ a$ A- R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 F8 j" v3 S( S7 B$ E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 _* ]9 q+ A9 D* P3 t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. |! z- Z7 g0 y' m8 Q, v; a7 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. ]9 F$ W7 e% @0 e9 A$ S+ |7 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 Y9 N7 f/ T( M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% P$ w" i" f( T& _, Z0 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ m+ X% C  ^" Y, ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% z& p$ S& B) ]  O: G+ ^$ e我请你剖开它

, R0 y! [9 z7 N4 A3 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>