【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, e7 `4 L! d$ Q' B$ @" ^歌词我附在后面。
1 q8 l3 j3 G# [* R4 J3 z) w$ c( fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) E. x2 D7 \& Y% h# M9 K3 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  d& p: I1 Q. Y% v7 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- _$ z: J4 r0 m+ I& N9 @* bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& a) O, O" l1 U8 BEvery other word you utter is love
/ l, ~# ^* O  i8 m* L* FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 U. b) L8 v. }# C& t0 [( \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& |% S2 o* \5 J7 q5 N, LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! a  g& Y1 x) {+ LI want so much to see inside your heart
' x" ~4 L% t& f1 p9 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 V' r' [( {) n' tI’m still filled with fear
' M+ e" |; x4 n% QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. o* J* f/ j& [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 P0 _# ?8 X6 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# H! Z0 U* U5 i' l2 ^  B2 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! l, k6 M: B( r: W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ f7 Z4 Q  N! A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' S3 F, }- q( \1 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. N5 f8 ?" i( [1 n  K0 N( q! h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' E: @- @  T' T, x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 o; b- v' B& L8 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 |  E* p) H: X; A1 n8 p$ ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ a  T7 l5 h8 {" c( l- i" l2 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 n4 z% H! d( p8 H* _, k' q/ Y7 q0 V4 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ |% o! C  k9 @  i& h- u0 \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 r1 K$ ^: H5 a3 m% A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! @- d* V5 |' p# `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# L1 g4 o1 j4 ~6 f; l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- o' b8 w  ~% t! M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! K0 ~+ E& b) J$ _! |9 u" b; H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- y. H' a" R6 f8 [/ n. N8 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  `3 @$ T7 x0 X# `, P% T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 m; B$ E1 G( u! j4 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ o0 v8 E" S& S0 B. s4 I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  v2 h, X# O! v0 ?2 }) U0 W* M3 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* _* q+ Z* K6 {  ]3 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. R& I7 c6 R  j) m: n0 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 l: u+ l6 D; J  R: J* H: V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* t% P; m: Y5 d7 F& F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  i* B9 @7 i+ E: L# w6 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 {9 }/ [7 h) T8 L/ {6 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) j! Y* P& y% [$ ~' j2 I7 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ G4 G3 C# w1 y; |- h* K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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2 W/ f! M6 ~  @# R2 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 m( {' Q" D7 B# H8 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>