【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! T/ X2 w7 R0 |+ F歌词我附在后面。
2 d; b+ `3 B$ e! N' jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: G- Q4 B0 I4 {' ?2 {& RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 j1 x. j2 \: i2 E" e) U. YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% L6 t; r# A5 ]: BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) z+ X0 g2 u5 u7 CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' t: A! y( h( V1 U% S1 `. i; uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' Z6 I( Y% z0 V& E3 ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ s3 W! A" `4 R8 \: }+ XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 s. h8 E' f7 m3 lI’m still filled with fear
% q* g2 O) ]2 Z$ FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( B7 }. ]( |9 r2 j3 G4 i; x) E2 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: D! R, v6 F# G, E0 x2 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ ?; l4 c# r( R& g# n# Y# \5 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: k8 R; t4 l5 C% {* L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* E8 ^* W( B5 y" o% V! [% s8 t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- F$ _" D5 e  O; z" X% x( Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ Y! H+ d  j# _* s  p( @' m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) \% T. d* S! j5 j2 I! ~6 o3 t4 x8 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  h0 l2 b9 _3 x( L7 Q% s, z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  M# c5 \7 Z' t9 }# H3 n& s2 E* r: `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, f8 t  g/ a1 T' L3 B; a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  V0 b' i& H: O) y- n! y1 }5 _4 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 `7 ~, U, f% f) _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; n2 l5 d+ K7 ~+ r) X# j& V<P>你无需担心</P>
2 Z/ H8 i# x8 w8 n6 J5 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! w/ e; q6 L1 X& k1 t7 H# {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 f4 H5 Y- R  p0 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) S& t0 k8 `( A# _7 }" P2 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% a( d; g9 t7 n1 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 I- U. x& V( j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 T1 y+ z. }- k1 X1 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: m5 ^: a5 h4 w& `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) i* j% `$ F9 ^& ?8 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! u0 M: o. Z$ M' x4 Q3 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. t3 W/ H3 C& T8 Q8 c/ C- ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- t: P. C5 y& o4 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, D$ I+ T/ C- z, N/ o1 H/ X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 }) g+ H+ l3 o- a1 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, D' G3 v9 ^2 X, i/ H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! i+ u6 q0 Q$ v3 m5 F6 @1 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! \: k" i. C2 E: p5 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ m; \( L+ j! u. h8 I5 d: l5 p2 G9 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ O% @. l3 s7 p: C3 }7 x: x, d3 A+ F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ ^( m' O+ T5 O我请你剖开它

9 _, @& c. w- ]3 H& ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>