【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( f2 v) ?4 L/ j5 u) {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% f/ n  J  T. }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 J/ C4 T  W. P& uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  ]! N# y8 R9 {% E: YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- V( K" x& y, P7 B1 I* cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ `0 v( t+ L7 [! s) f8 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 d9 M; H- h/ u& m& V! REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# Y; e% j3 Z, d* h1 S  GNothing can compare to my love
5 i0 y- t6 ]/ r% n# p; `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 _; @" p4 }  N$ w* a2 Y( M  ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( ~/ @8 `0 ^) U+ C/ `- v0 UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' l8 O/ u% U. ^; r  t( D- uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ |( S- T$ v! K# m1 H% @% Q: VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- B- _# K. \9 j( [* Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 l* e; D* C& w) e) }$ r; g) X7 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 i. P! e$ A3 K5 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- }0 s: \+ ?# k6 u3 {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. m& u: k/ J( h( n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* T0 A0 b& _% x  C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 j% Q! p+ ?! L$ p& C0 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ Z. o2 V0 K% p- }- }% a: |- a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ L, y. v! r+ O2 V3 w" \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; \% V: k5 p, w0 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! U! W+ w4 L) M" Q. i6 s9 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 g7 k+ l) }/ q( d8 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 i2 N, W0 O$ c: y, g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* t$ C8 y8 ]5 s) {& Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 F+ P4 L! @+ j, H5 ~  H9 X, \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* ~5 v% R' l" i& y+ k' f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: N0 A* T  a' }* _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ ~5 ?' s0 F& G9 h% b8 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: q) l; G; P" d' O0 p/ ?7 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 H, q. ]" a7 _; h) ]1 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 c7 i& Z0 i8 i  C<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 S6 A. [, L9 _5 h2 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! C& u$ ]; N6 O" D; s9 E- f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ G6 T% Q- [% o5 }) n' Y: k% p4 B3 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 O% B- p& \0 J* c. i' Z' N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 v* I. @2 Y( Q. F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 Y& i- k. n8 `$ ~" H0 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# A, |' s  [$ N/ j$ H" W5 u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  l' m$ U/ ~7 \, u我请你剖开它

" ^+ s5 [+ p5 P8 N0 F$ y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>