【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( q5 j6 J8 N; w8 R歌词我附在后面。
! z' u7 c# a: ]- l7 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 w4 w) `5 ?- j9 l, XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ l) C) `- t' g/ j2 ^! {& XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 y0 o% i2 ], N" Y" F+ V% }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, v" h0 ^" n8 j% f& H+ MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 J8 y, x$ S7 ], _I really want to know just how much you love me
+ T- e; A: u. N0 g9 n  BI love you I love you with all my heart
9 I7 c, {2 ?. N* Y+ x* m9 ^" Y( MNothing can compare to my love
; G" Y2 F* b$ x  r% cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( w' R! G5 v# |/ c+ w4 II’m still filled with fear
# i& g" d0 o8 ?9 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& h2 V) t+ t* c4 YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, K& o$ c7 Y! F& M/ F3 SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 w8 W1 ?: k+ w. k! m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& M# |- T3 m  j; O; R9 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( X# M! l. {3 Y/ n9 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, T% `* [- k: C; j( V2 S5 K3 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 w; \- _0 `, _" D1 l1 c4 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! ^( L5 W$ V. q. V' T5 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( l; Q- B5 J% }8 H. `) B( x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 i  _7 j- |. a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ }7 T1 \/ e5 z: u$ x4 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* |& I3 G. u2 V5 M7 y5 G% W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. a6 r! {/ e" ^4 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" r: p! f  u* ?! n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 I. P$ s5 m  U2 X" e4 x) d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 Y1 C% Z- f# F% W0 J, \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 m" r. q% _5 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% M" c( m$ G% `4 R  c! v. a4 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! F: p' G8 q$ Z8 ^; \: f$ O+ M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' Y5 n. K# M$ e6 x/ ]% r3 B9 b: J$ P$ s/ d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# o, T& o: b+ V9 N: w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* e( f* i$ ~0 C" I# w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; V0 g( B/ ]8 r( N: k6 Y/ B1 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: b, _+ u4 Z4 X/ D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ P& z- l; Y* ~. _/ E( R# ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! F" u. I6 p! n  h$ U, K1 A# X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 D. L; g+ L% |8 V3 Q7 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: L0 O) Y# N- d! }9 Q* V3 j1 z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* e* B  F# H1 e; v& f8 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' |7 d) q! Z" h7 U. {, ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, x2 i# L8 q) h7 E4 s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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