【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. l$ E% n+ U# A: `歌词我附在后面。
) |/ p, I1 P3 h6 Z0 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 X9 H( D: s" CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 q/ ^! Q# @7 W8 g+ C% @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* ?1 N% M* j& i) q! \7 m/ ZEvery other word you utter is love
5 X8 r, X- c: k; }- }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& l$ b( u" r% S: QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( w* X* s3 {4 D: g* ZI want so much to see inside your heart
/ o* J4 y; S% U9 B1 cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 w" E# V; C! i" x6 j; ^' c( ~I’m still filled with fear
* \3 X( e. s- m+ ^- `8 X% X6 o0 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 A- w, L4 i1 ^I regret not dying
, [0 y) `9 e; w. j. K" b3 AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ T* V; E1 A, S' sWith such a tongue as yours,
, p: u+ x. `3 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: a4 I: R0 \5 ^; ~, b' e0 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! I3 a$ d$ O' |% L, P( `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) G1 Y0 P, q3 L* i4 A3 t% w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 T" F$ _# o% ?, H' u, [' I+ A# H1 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 [6 ~$ ~! p3 G1 {- e: ]& l5 s7 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 A2 k1 l$ B" \; }3 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% E, h) `* u+ u3 ?$ X- r  w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 ^* x+ H- {- F; s' h  O( ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 ^/ N; Q0 j0 m<P>你无需担心</P>
) ^* t1 `8 a7 x4 s# b! `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 B* B  H4 Q1 ]& [4 s. Y6 Q$ u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 |4 H) Z% ^& k, X; W' O* f5 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* Z: M/ w$ R, t- ?2 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 p6 Z7 L5 W# D0 E. ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& b* u& E) r  R3 U' @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 e& e" W# o% n- q+ e( E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 ]6 {: V2 G1 w4 \& X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 m8 A; P% o7 O" [( A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ j- o! z9 H4 p5 u# O* o0 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. {0 b" }( T- l# O) K( @% Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 i! i1 `1 \* S3 m& a3 x/ U2 k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 s8 h# z; Q: \+ `+ B/ }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' C9 |* m" G+ B4 [* Z$ }! b( k6 y<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 {+ {% [: J  Y5 t: y' A& q" v& {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& b$ ]5 t" B" t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# @- c9 t3 |! \) X: V$ h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! d9 D  o# U! m  n; H4 l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& L+ W4 x9 `% ^) @/ @1 w# P5 z: z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 b6 z# G! j) U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 o, ~# _" P3 I2 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, W( S1 X/ ~' I( B3 O2 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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  o; S1 ~2 Q9 i% V$ o0 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# @6 H; F, W3 i8 p1 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>