【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 D, P1 S# N+ r$ L8 D; n: m4 V歌词我附在后面。
5 q, ?. v# C0 L: {6 H& [; C' uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 E# ~! V/ [/ C, A* G  H0 v, OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 p$ |8 s3 O/ Q# q2 t5 K$ J1 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. O6 W. l. G% ]! H% v' ?# n* I, LWith the moon kissing it every night
) `: L0 R/ u4 M* ?5 zSeeing the sky content with its love
; ^8 z3 q* {. n6 F% q; p! g. A' JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' [! _% J2 a/ y- e) M  r0 K2 F+ CYou needn’t fear anything
, C5 q' E5 @5 ?% Q8 r( L) k/ XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 L0 D& q+ _* d4 Z. iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% o" w9 A! J# O* C2 P0 w1 bI love you I love you with all my heart
: C2 B: V# m/ r6 y8 aNothing can compare to my love
3 z/ |8 J3 B2 J0 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 t. l8 X) V0 ]2 G% c2 s  ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! Z$ g3 t( j# [* wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* ~6 z) _8 G0 d3 M; lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% A  t$ ~5 {4 o# CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. `7 ?# K4 ]( S1 w' D  gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 B( v- h. L& V5 z" tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- y  I& K* }% H1 P1 I' @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 L7 e+ k# R+ r8 {6 R* W) z0 H1 r1 i3 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 [3 x+ q; u# g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  t" A' A6 k7 b+ A" j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  X8 E/ y  Z2 _  C' Z, e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  v' G% k( X! u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ |0 f* U. C0 C( n! m; o2 s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 b# q! c+ h! j3 [# L/ x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. R0 n" l$ A% Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& d# W2 r8 B, H3 ^5 Z$ t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: {! I) Z1 m6 `9 L2 ?; }% m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* [: A8 x( h" p9 v5 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 T: K3 P0 E; Z: t5 p* t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 ~/ f7 F' m! b* T. G' M+ f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 w& m7 D; k7 l( X  N( ^; Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; q! o7 ^  ^- Z6 G$ L. @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" O% i6 H) @6 N# w( k& `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& Q8 [3 ~+ a5 x: |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 e) H5 k, _0 w" M7 v: q% d* F1 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, j+ p/ `3 ?$ P, ^0 _3 u) u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( L3 y3 v0 E1 C# a) o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( ~0 S/ t/ }: X; P# q! S6 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! O% r" G. G6 k9 J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 z: [) ]  Q# b" U  @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' x# A1 A, S" R+ J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ c4 Z' A3 ~: s  h3 |3 Y- o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 Y, I: c: v: X2 H我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ |, y, m8 k6 _( D3 p+ f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>