【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ ^" s$ |$ a% @" `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; a( i9 ^6 O, A, A; Z3 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, V$ k. Z0 \! t) O, F+ E, dWith the moon kissing it every night
& i) I5 u: d/ Q+ `* K& NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  ]4 V0 \2 C) J" I  I! ?$ sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! B+ P# j0 }0 i" O2 z( nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  w' g, {9 S+ Y8 B+ pI love you I love you with all my heart
; s/ k4 X: L5 q' A7 b, MNothing can compare to my love
( I7 B) h# P( J  U4 {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- f( V! c" `7 K# I- w: x# M$ ^0 EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 ]7 j2 E! J' vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- M) z- \5 t8 e( S2 k  |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' J6 e3 V( s' aWith such a tongue as yours,
3 T7 G8 a/ t. s: |' cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& n1 B' u- x$ U+ ~9 E2 g. {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ K0 ~2 `3 o/ a; C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" O6 a0 ~$ v# S* i( F3 K* A9 q5 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ ^8 T: O9 }6 }0 b5 @! O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% _0 m" H; C' m) h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* a8 Q1 v6 E3 i8 n* T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ r% T+ B6 V. v) c* i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ I% v' h( A1 o4 a" t! \3 d4 c5 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, F' C% s! n4 b! Z( K) \8 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% g" f% o; b, T7 D: |3 u* z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, Q) i" w7 Q0 T$ B; n# |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% \; W5 z) V- j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- n$ g$ h% n2 u3 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  q7 s: n0 z3 L( n4 v  q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 C2 I9 f. F' X1 P3 d( B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 y" C- \  M- g9 m" `3 J6 z) g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ t7 D9 ]' Y6 W) Y4 z3 q3 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 F8 M. K$ P, M- o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 O: ]( ]! m6 `! k! J' \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. |6 l! i( a, J, b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ e# \0 Y6 P( e( p' I$ q; ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 i% Z1 J  E( R1 i3 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) Z$ D* y  f. N) O/ [) l8 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ p# ^3 U+ m0 l) L6 c. n. S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 `# X: T& L, j* i8 V# d, M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; q3 B, n5 m3 a6 B2 Y+ i1 Z3 l8 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! r/ n* o3 h& g: S2 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 g2 r) r8 K- M. _" V4 `/ A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# V( @! o* i7 P$ c3 G+ E, h: D4 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 a7 X+ ^2 p5 a: [! B9 E" A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 R4 H2 X  o: \- m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- _$ W! s# J" T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ r' B7 {; R7 I6 s/ ~& ~& {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 y, ?( l9 o$ q; n0 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" n1 c! Q/ y! w+ D" q* R我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& h2 C* w$ u6 N/ W7 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>