【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, S5 e) ]8 `2 S) B& \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 }  Z8 b& P$ A; d2 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 [# a, _( c) u- S0 M$ k5 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 X" d! T7 z2 S" E) D6 z8 K8 }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 J8 [- r! ]2 V# N) uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 `7 {4 j, K+ y( \5 M7 m2 l! MI love you I love you with all my heart
7 P9 k& d! j2 n) p" \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  |# Z7 j  ?) a2 q* xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 L5 |) J2 `$ g% A' ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ c! W) Z+ `# B% m+ k8 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* u/ V- D4 S$ t( XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) ~- q1 o, I7 z( uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& N5 N, J$ h, e( c( r6 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- y/ [7 C) @/ J! Q  j! l  E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ A8 [  k8 p1 `: D' B* `' i$ k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 Q0 I* W$ @# ~4 ]. w  ^) K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" V; O/ _6 B( k6 g: s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, T: v+ ?" C+ {$ \( o9 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( e! u) v, q5 M% @* w8 M6 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: H7 z3 A4 c% o8 Q, G$ @9 R2 B+ p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' b+ G- D  c' J<P>你无需担心</P>
. P0 v( ^; H7 h+ i. W  `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 ]- `# Z; p3 O! M  i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! I7 H, R( n  ^5 X+ V9 u+ @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 l5 X- P6 S9 A$ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" [( f' w! Z) m  y+ O$ H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ K0 o6 z$ V* c( j$ T" y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, u7 w0 T5 O6 b6 e# a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 @7 P2 a$ i$ H1 d/ h+ ?6 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, j3 v8 d2 r4 |3 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 F* R6 E6 [! w0 h5 |3 Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 ?' i% T" J, k5 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 I$ T$ C5 q) T8 W' h" W3 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 L# \: ]4 ]* c9 e" c8 V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% d8 ~+ G! B+ j/ s( u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  l5 M/ E* c: v6 l3 g) Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ `8 G+ J, t8 _+ d1 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ I8 ~, y# F) s1 a* l7 B' E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- m5 U+ E, B: K9 Y, ^* M2 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 n# ?0 `7 J7 ~; a5 S# O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( h8 _7 P. G. e' Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# w- S. G# S" {- S& t0 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* y" Z* U$ D$ B9 b6 B2 e! d& M* A# \8 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ v' k/ |# n1 K: Y, o/ P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 O! `& ?1 A+ r. F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 g  L; x0 L8 p2 d+ |# W! Z0 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>