【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) b0 Y6 t: k, R6 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 Z: \4 l& ?& R8 g" LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 D  z' h' V! tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; |0 g8 X5 u5 h! OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, _  e# S0 y$ b6 I  w: wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 S( I7 }7 L* ^. ]You needn’t fear anything
8 w! A/ l3 m* k+ ?1 K( zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 _- k0 a/ N5 `% g. }( S* _6 ZEvery other word you utter is love
8 r4 _* w, D" j- _3 _0 AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 O' |# F% X2 O6 h: v3 L+ mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! Z  U2 {- Q& a$ @/ mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  \, {4 A. \5 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ A2 Y1 X5 @( K2 |3 U, [9 n; C' MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. J" A# w- B* J' K4 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ?2 F6 `, Z! U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 S1 e" c- B; y% s9 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 \1 W: a3 p7 e6 N( s; x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& b& ~0 w* [4 t) e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 L6 ?/ h4 z* r" |0 D$ o" v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% N; e( f8 B% {" R9 b+ d& @. J- A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  Y' E& C4 ]  P' S( H8 ]* ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; Q. p0 y" ~4 H' r- b4 v% x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- L- O! ]# G% h  o: T( X1 E) K% |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 L, w: w, D+ b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! g. W# F- Y" m+ E; `8 s$ |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. l5 Y; H% D+ u) V+ @  |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! }3 m' r: e; g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ K- C* @6 w' k) e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: w6 q7 N2 x  M# [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& g$ V/ O& l, C& W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 q: K+ e* k6 g2 X& H& F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ W. }+ c2 z) e) i; `, L- ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% b! c7 ~  ]( y8 p2 H7 D( E  H, m, {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 B$ ?7 @$ P1 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 U( i0 s! Z) N/ h- z- n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. Z4 n, f" V/ e! b3 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ `0 F# |, Y( c7 D* K" N1 B4 o7 C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ b" E3 G) ~2 A5 B8 h$ N2 }/ b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& D$ @& `9 ^9 v3 H" \( _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ w# t# ~  r5 z2 h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" R2 Y6 R# ~# C5 L; ~* a, o, [8 w8 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ L' u5 h; S! S( D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- A" U4 E* x0 I5 w, C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. A5 q) y% v+ e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 a) Y1 g  A  u/ Z8 b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>