【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, R; g! a! {; }. d: X歌词我附在后面。
: E8 z0 H) T8 r5 m" ^5 _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) D2 B: O0 K/ l* u! {6 L- SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 o. h; o3 d$ eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- H$ J4 A5 R$ Z  g6 t* aSeeing the sky content with its love
2 j  ^# Q$ k# s/ s* B  VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; _& J) R& ?4 r  D0 X( _# ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 A/ e. E5 O, Z8 v: f6 b0 C0 [Every other word you utter is love
% f) R- B/ X- f8 N# |7 VI really want to know just how much you love me
/ s% W' D1 ]8 J# t9 GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 n5 U8 i8 u7 p7 S- `0 S' q3 D( V3 h$ ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- q5 g, p* }/ [- ^+ `% cI want so much to see inside your heart
4 i5 m0 W  `+ x1 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% L$ n8 k  p1 G. ~: bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  x2 U" n) p/ T4 L! \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 ^' u- z- b: cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; n  q6 G6 g" G7 v4 w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 K+ _: L0 `/ Y3 m6 @( z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 F6 L$ t( o) \4 ^/ j/ A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- z7 G& k. p- G) i2 l5 `3 X- C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& q" ^; Y* ~; ^" Y$ Z- x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. b/ S% }' _3 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ f% a" D! W1 ]" h" G3 G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: w4 g0 Z* j6 q/ Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) S& U! x% J; j; ~# i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& Z2 |1 i9 \' Z; v' J$ {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ^  V; @; z5 A6 g! }* N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ r$ U8 f' [# Q8 B; Y" z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 y8 B+ s! R- j2 G' n5 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& {/ ?; C# [# O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- e' R6 }: c& Z+ l4 p( A. z  E, W9 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# Y! N0 V  X, b9 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ k+ G8 Q% A$ h3 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) g9 `" W: R$ O! {9 ~9 M7 W; Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 @1 Q$ Q1 t9 H' K3 G; o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 C2 H2 X# n( m" Q; [5 O2 o7 n; B0 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: P+ A; ^$ P; c, I) _# t" N- E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" x) b: ?% d: R0 z! t. e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" E8 \3 b7 i! b9 B* F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( q) i1 M7 U& R0 ?0 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' C2 @' f$ s8 {; |8 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 Q3 @, n# y6 @$ i: r9 D+ P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 J# i2 P. t! U5 l5 f! C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ y0 V0 |* e/ K3 ]; C# I0 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  f- }, l3 P( o& D7 d5 M! c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* T6 t+ }2 Q" H5 n我请你剖开它
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3 {$ k8 t6 n5 x" z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>