【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 W% R8 t) P: m6 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 Y) L* P( I: V+ [" T4 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  d+ q5 N6 x# V4 k1 Z$ `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* T  q3 v1 t8 u% Q" \7 J( u1 GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 p4 ?7 p# ]4 x, g: F! O% lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 e' y. C) z  m6 M+ |* cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 S% b) O: {+ T" DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" y  k3 a' q" `, y4 Y6 V1 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" j) n1 ~$ i3 P' K& _# G- J) c. _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* E( k7 K; g- }% k- R$ h* a0 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 g: g, D; c5 ^2 k4 F  V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 k, a+ U! R9 H% u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' U5 p. M+ s: y9 f6 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% f1 J5 n: N6 Y2 z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 T' N- y+ b' o0 p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ ]  A, g. C8 Q7 r$ U! s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 b: ^; _- ^+ ~* Z/ v9 g; U<P>你无需担心</P>
- u' E5 S% t% P! P' _! [, e/ f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ g0 o% S$ ]. c. F: ?" n# d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' J( i! N" `  E/ S5 I5 `* `# t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ h& W, V; \( V( l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% C2 B/ ]0 Z$ S, w; q' l  U" ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 \. `& v* i8 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( c% g& ^# ~+ B0 Q0 s' c8 P- }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 u8 P( U7 i8 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 T7 ?9 n: P% J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) Y5 _9 A6 N# m5 V) l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  ], u# R6 ]& D& m  c1 R: `, j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 n. e: Z* i5 D# \. `  m8 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 T4 R6 f. G- q9 i/ P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 m# s8 ~7 Z4 A. ^$ n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 ?: k6 W6 J) e. L- X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ y( K- R: O/ M4 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. T% C! a3 N+ m- a2 W; V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  V1 t# y  }* j+ q' @0 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 N( e3 L" R" Y* n9 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, L* L( ^/ k& n: M4 y- T, K) H* \6 D6 k  w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- c$ S: @' Z' c" a6 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; s! B: F8 ?: Z; J1 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

" ~" I! D6 Q1 I, _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>