【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 K) r6 A( g$ N4 \" q; n2 D. y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 Z- q( {' S$ t+ f' u* p4 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 E( R3 }2 A7 D2 y* |4 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 h# D$ |4 v! @) f% AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% G" l; B2 Z2 j  pSeeing the sky content with its love
7 a. d* Q7 N% Q% s6 j) z- P" j" Q8 V. ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 b2 y& |  Y4 Y+ R7 G1 R( x5 TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 [5 W' @4 W$ H2 @& b, ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, v3 g* N/ A  A- {/ u% rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' m% w- u* L) c/ a: F% ZI’m still filled with fear
& `- C, ]  n, W4 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 `8 Y( b0 S( E$ |+ SI regret not dying
/ E7 L1 S' L$ ~$ \4 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) k' z3 a/ m5 o3 P: rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% e  o! N( o, _" c. K: j; WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. U. ?; }5 q$ a5 l- P3 x( X" R+ e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ D" k  s2 N/ b7 f& P& p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) {9 Q' n' ?8 y4 i2 t* m0 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' w+ j4 B$ Q' \2 R9 C) R  `5 K5 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: ?; c9 Q8 ~4 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 Q$ k  I+ \8 a% d& G; _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* T6 x4 x+ v. r# C, ^( l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 C- }4 j, z+ F5 Q: T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* z) U" D2 k. W3 j$ M. [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* x; F! b3 D( n9 P4 i, D+ E: @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: k- x' a( @5 m+ q4 R5 U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& H! a2 N/ d0 L+ T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! {3 |( w4 A. Q  G0 T) Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 ^& k; M7 K6 F" ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, y( B0 g+ o) w8 g- H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* Y% x5 K% A2 q9 X/ Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  c* a* a) a8 `% W: O$ {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ }4 `2 C( |1 \1 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' {! O4 U  [% W( r- ?7 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& C2 L1 W9 _( O! W! j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" |6 b( d/ e! U2 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ X5 i9 F- g. [  q3 c$ j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 x% o; I# l8 d8 m( I* D' r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; Q( F, j- [; `- @3 L9 E( W, j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 d0 T( J3 m$ g. p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 T# v6 i4 f, ]2 P' G+ p2 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, o6 d+ \# F* b3 m+ Q) ~: D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 J6 x- y7 Z( {1 Y1 ]( A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 a: |2 v# K- Z/ T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 ^5 v; ]7 ]+ ~* Q0 h* z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 }; k7 @( a6 I& w4 `7 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# O; I/ g3 v% c( }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* H% x  f: x0 L0 ^3 y! j* c3 V8 T8 [8 i我请你剖开它
% |4 B# B5 _# v4 p% z6 ]
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 U0 ]$ j& e) ^, h8 w, w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>