【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 B# f  ~2 j3 I( }歌词我附在后面。
+ J2 k1 }( F! R5 h6 \: d' F  RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) ^4 V: u! t9 N( o1 U9 Q& h' |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 T% `! X: h% O- B& t0 q  D4 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* h" G3 K4 B# E0 r$ n) aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: C' I7 _. E4 ?# N: C7 eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& z( I  d3 d; @: b& D; E% BI love you I love you with all my heart
9 z, |( c7 B0 r' }8 f2 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' f# ^4 y& N0 n% s" B' F! m& `% hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ t- e+ O: T6 ]) w3 sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ {- E2 X) H* O) i+ c* k" dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! k+ ~, y, K, G  ^; m% m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ x( s' n. A' q% l  W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& L% w1 l* c! m4 f+ ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( [' o. j  l3 M. B4 l0 f# ?/ l4 y$ B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ d% t1 s2 D$ [* Q0 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, @" j6 w6 F( {- P! }, p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 @- ^/ S% l" w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ ^$ u! P9 K  ]; v1 U" K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 h9 [& x; J2 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; v" G7 g% R/ T( P9 E: ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! ]; k& ~! B( m- }; v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 {0 [* ?8 o' J" |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% g1 P) {; r7 z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 a7 _( d: H/ R: P: d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. ~* Y0 k5 n" ^: n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& t6 b  l; o1 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: m( k' J' r3 s" l/ V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 W% N4 M1 h6 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* m! @" Q& a& s3 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 t% O% R- u3 ^& r6 }- E) M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( J  s7 z1 H2 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ]& ]& w1 j$ S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: u; B* \+ |9 w  O3 i$ S; B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 ~2 o! U/ W. |3 E( k! P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 I# q: V) ^9 m& \; P9 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' q! V4 Z; q$ `) h/ I9 g) e5 h* [& ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; x, B$ x" L1 w0 s% Z: u! a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 A5 }. s: a3 N- W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. k5 f+ S- Z' \# b7 D9 J; ], F我请你剖开它

0 {- i, w+ C# _5 A* I7 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 q4 D  i! e# s4 j2 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>