【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. t1 d& R2 O" |+ a' sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: l$ U5 R7 w3 ^' q3 Q, AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( q9 J( F0 c+ i3 \1 y( N" n$ Q2 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- l7 Y& x. k( W& ^$ D' aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 ~4 e6 k* f$ x, A0 {0 VYou needn’t fear anything
, [% q# J! A) a1 ?4 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 X9 Y# v/ m) {# F% vI love you I love you with all my heart
0 `- e7 f7 R8 w- v6 \2 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- d3 F/ R$ n2 oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% I; j, l& F2 O8 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% v, z8 N0 ]: q/ S% II regret not dying
. z* ?6 z. I. u4 O* C' D" hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& \& P. b6 P' p* pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. T, R* s- F0 V# f7 t# j9 ^  QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. ?4 ]/ Z9 h4 e: e5 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. W. {, o4 T/ j$ `+ z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" D; ~* s: s5 ]; i1 \6 M3 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 Y/ M- b/ L/ i6 h* v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( x$ J1 m, R+ Z1 p5 N. U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: O' `3 z. D$ g6 z' Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. |) n" a# L1 A+ I$ W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) Z( \: o8 h  W3 P5 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 d& a: u- n, a6 ~2 Y7 X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) z& ^1 E1 k& e) l. J6 H$ E% v) e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! y. G8 z2 F7 F' J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 V7 ~0 o3 m" x, D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; w" P/ w. M* i8 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 h+ V. ^7 C/ x) N2 s; C  L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 |( [) ^1 z# V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 H' q( K. Z; O1 E, _& g% q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- B* E0 W$ N* [, y7 E4 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: {7 r* a: a* r) r0 {! \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; O4 Y* V6 ]. S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ ^2 W' o1 r" g. K+ v& ^2 Q4 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* ?4 K9 H. L0 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 }* v  j6 T: i5 d$ M$ `1 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' `9 |4 j& ^7 }3 b) T% \: Q, U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 a1 l+ t& ?$ a3 s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! O, W( L% J3 r! v2 Y2 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% r. q5 B8 p3 }6 A; X; K" R$ X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) {1 Q1 `' F; ~' W, T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 K. K* \( u. k1 [, e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 G% `$ V0 W; ?$ s我请你剖开它

3 m' k4 z$ ]& m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>