【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' V% R7 l* r2 U' @- ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) H& C3 A; a2 ]1 ]6 T8 z* ]! D6 j. vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 E' I* Q' v' ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 V" B* C- w. x4 T& WThe sky is happy down to its soul
) T" H  h7 D# j1 `! ?# OWith the moon kissing it every night
8 R. N& \' Z# U* nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  m4 ^7 e3 ?2 l/ J) \/ d9 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 b1 m+ ]. K! q6 D( Z# ^/ VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  C9 K" o0 C  x& g+ \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% |" o. P4 e+ UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 y' R% q! t3 z( `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 K0 r* p  U: D* Q! mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 `2 @! W$ P$ H3 R& V0 l3 x" |% oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 }2 m( _3 T7 K: s0 |+ g# t. hWith such a tongue as yours,
/ ]$ x  n9 r$ b, l) P& d. @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 @; o1 W! B1 r8 R0 j! URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 E% a# U2 g8 l) O# R# _' `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* t) \( @2 }" W6 i' ?. M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ x1 k  ]. f, z. @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 P1 T7 F  e9 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& p' G5 v. @- c% b# p* d# x# t0 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 ^, x# q3 W1 V5 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 B3 s: P0 l. V3 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- p8 q3 i) h) a' s* N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 P! _' m/ e) J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 ^9 G& v4 ^% `" {. I9 }% ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  `, ]; i* u% Y8 r# U" [5 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 ?! G% i3 Q5 _/ _) j, H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" z' p! I6 H5 q$ D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 R# F3 h0 t4 g1 W  O* g/ X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  |; \0 O5 f  k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" B6 }% d' |8 M5 \% w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 K; e  p# c0 I! w1 @5 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, Q8 R" @8 G, ^8 ^8 O" X& z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 M& O  B2 Y+ z1 D4 f# h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. I4 L  ^* [. w2 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# h$ I' l6 o( S- U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 K0 T5 F! [. {, J3 i7 _1 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 A3 p! }& E) E6 S+ W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 q) I' b% v1 A* P& j# O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. C2 [  j7 H" \$ i$ I: d! d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ t/ }; T  t2 r+ e5 n8 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% P+ E$ o' {2 Y, k- O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 b) O( u/ G6 L) ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ [' a, d4 D! E& j5 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. v4 s2 h5 V2 [& Y' Z$ C" [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ N+ e( f" ^+ Y+ V. j/ b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" S5 D/ f4 Y0 |+ P( g$ d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>