【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 O. {. S" h' I/ }& P$ CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 _7 }4 z. Q6 G1 S* uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 T5 j  d7 d5 e5 k/ ]' gThe sky is happy down to its soul
, m0 c, \7 E; o9 Z( J' [+ SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 ^0 _3 R1 X5 ?' k- B& jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 ~7 s# F- W0 I- nYou needn’t fear anything
2 c6 A  a; B3 K8 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 y- u# f. |" }$ B% {I really want to know just how much you love me
) C8 L% R$ k' ^/ {$ A6 hI love you I love you with all my heart
$ E" C$ e( o$ V& C6 I' T; hNothing can compare to my love
& A. a. H" N0 C' Q/ ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. P; y. y' P( Y) U/ F# b9 O* T2 wI want so much to see inside your heart
; W- ?7 ]! x* \! Y$ TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! `- I! V+ n' O" b8 |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* `; m7 [+ ?+ ^7 f) r6 n$ gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( G8 k. _" J- X1 x) W# JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 O  L) P/ ?! Y
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 O, e, o9 k" Y( f3 T( K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 l) P) p' U7 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( Z8 @7 e! p. R: Y: ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 x/ D/ [2 ^* ]6 w1 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) z3 J/ P& x3 v) H$ S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 H: F! l5 N* ~$ z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 ^, v5 [" d- k( o  C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% D! t5 S9 M; v) f6 b- y6 ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. p) i) N( F6 U7 ^! B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& a( J- s1 L& y; C+ b! |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 h4 T; ?& v6 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* ~' ^$ J5 x2 u0 D/ B' J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 f9 S: a, r! G# `& ~- w9 A- L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* s1 n+ Q- L2 l' ~4 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 V$ c* A4 Y$ f$ U8 u. n) r0 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  L) |: u5 A0 e$ }6 T- F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 _, M; `3 R. C, M4 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' P/ u5 o2 K3 H7 _6 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: P6 J, k3 ]' F* G8 y7 J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; {6 u! N. x8 G; v5 c! L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# d9 i2 F: P( ]" q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ t# y7 g1 f1 H1 @8 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 f  B) z# |( @' L5 G6 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: x" H" t5 Z; q! @. v" M" E: D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! m( V, H7 F& L+ @1 ?6 a! H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ r6 X6 ~' Z# e5 H2 r' z) O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 I- N- Y. \6 M3 j! d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; t$ X, R/ v1 t5 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
5 b, e/ U; j& C! N* C8 ^4 D5 I# V, X
4 q) G( [; T# d4 L0 q我请你剖开它
; A5 E8 ?; v' J2 D  Q9 Q
% v5 r0 y* H% C* W" B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>