【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 H( y1 c1 k4 y3 E歌词我附在后面。
( u0 d3 [7 o- h2 u9 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 w/ U- D% `3 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
( F5 i8 O4 g6 t# Q% yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! L& S# i3 Q) Q  p4 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 _. r. S2 ~9 ^0 |  C$ l$ w; h- W0 nYou needn’t fear anything
9 F: u$ a$ s8 E2 O9 C+ IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- C0 {$ Y8 \" tEvery other word you utter is love
8 ~$ @3 v' L/ I8 D, bI really want to know just how much you love me
( z; V4 x$ P9 v+ i/ T( \I love you I love you with all my heart
( ^! l  U  t8 t' KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' b8 Z8 T% [. x" RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- Y( F; [! l/ S1 w$ |& pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% y  b& H; J: l# L/ e* YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 \7 @: ]1 x7 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ N6 V1 n* N" L" t2 K1 \3 k; ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! O  U1 j! b6 r  q& {* |* H* g/ w, C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' l4 Q* L" t( d  Z5 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 R! k% U* c9 x: k: ^; F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 j0 L! X- r# g0 `, }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 D+ @/ s3 I% }) c- {" N+ n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! h/ P. b: H5 G; ~- z" k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, y+ y; }$ p$ C! w7 a! R+ d! t6 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ m; k+ t" E/ W+ i7 |$ n! h' [: Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ i7 i) x6 q7 a& [! @  ?: r1 {& ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! Q' T: R4 |; n) {<P>你无需担心</P>
/ h1 B& Z0 k: Z3 t; C6 h" c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' j# e: l  C( I2 Q' v) Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 f# |' b- r' k+ x/ K, \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% K; Y- H3 `  Q+ T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 S7 R: C9 o% e' ^: o' W, c3 r. e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; f+ k, j/ I4 y, }! P& ?# l* i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. u6 E0 _6 U! E- v3 U: F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. o9 I9 w8 l- K. T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 f5 R) k* Q4 J' H# e0 ?# J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; P6 }7 }8 R7 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ g5 |# U3 p! v  o0 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ P8 ~! @% A2 T( Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 M. `! F- K( f: u6 y9 I- r: s6 H; E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 L4 Z- `1 ?$ P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>