【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! a6 s. l( j7 ?5 L) |9 s5 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
- G4 m" W' c9 M9 u) }/ x! E3 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 D  l0 o( `' V& C" pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ b$ p  }" R+ |  T" ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  F  _) A! S) \' B/ ~! RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* U. c/ O0 P4 Z* R; P" t7 ^$ SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) R2 t- a& T) M/ `+ K- {Every other word you utter is love
& r" W- n- i* s, a* S- d4 MI really want to know just how much you love me
" u' J) g2 M8 k6 C/ vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 R) r' M2 K3 w. O& D( k: NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! N6 }1 m: n/ Q, gI regret not dying
  o' \4 t. F5 l1 EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: {5 ]& ~' s' S& KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; P2 K: q( c8 E4 \$ ~, J% [$ qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ |0 g" k. w6 Z/ dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 x3 E; y( {8 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% A# j/ _$ R  V& h2 A' K8 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 w2 a5 I# M; f* ~% y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! h6 c" g) @2 U' C1 Z3 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( s$ _. y, V; P! |6 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# O$ W: `2 g0 Z6 ], N2 f; n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  x0 t* a: _8 D8 W' v* Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& p7 E% c* M, U& a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 Z- ^  ^) ]1 p! }( M2 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; p" L! G% \# C  F9 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 `! D' M( _) B" t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* D1 H! E9 f$ a6 L# e3 ]. i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& D) I  I1 t  O1 ~* t, g4 J% ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 k5 w5 b( x  G- i0 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ r$ H8 p- x; A7 t: Q$ N. {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( B% O$ e# k4 _- o6 n: o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. U) X; Q4 J1 W6 _- D& U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- G" d' Y1 s0 q. y8 H. r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 ?& x  d$ F5 X) G1 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ I9 t  c" c1 C0 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' e% b1 l% m* k% h# B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; |$ ^4 g- r% f/ U4 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( |: @6 |6 V* r2 r5 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ L! `% p) J8 t: @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 }7 R& I$ H, G, @, I3 V# J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" r. n$ u+ y: k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; }' q: a" g5 `0 P7 l" c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 t; Q% L3 x* K; X  q我请你剖开它

$ Y  V2 @7 s# `6 {2 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>