【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, _7 M5 I* ^6 i4 B. {/ V, D# DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, J* p# t& q5 J$ nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 [* P& U2 [) KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  G% k" L& O1 X3 \$ v9 yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 b0 r6 B7 B0 r6 w' Z2 j& sYou needn’t fear anything
+ S, z7 C4 ~6 K$ z% j1 a9 c; LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 U  r! Y" [! r' o" v& yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 `) M2 N1 ^# y" Z* WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, i2 W7 b- D- a0 Q! e; o/ F* pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 P' I! l' f/ }8 n7 w' MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 A! o( Q) m6 g* K/ A6 jI regret not dying
5 W8 D& j, D5 U5 I  [1 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; r; S. g0 g" o& N. D7 d2 RWith such a tongue as yours,
; U) H  Q! c: O/ I! ?# TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ o- ~& X$ M( d! c! b6 b- S/ T8 E, s! bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& J/ B6 }( J5 l& y+ `; P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 n3 w  y* i2 F! Z0 m8 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& D' f+ X' O7 L6 ~; z6 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, \. h/ R! a; H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ J0 M% H7 i+ ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ I; p5 C2 @) V' g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: t) K5 R; G4 O( }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! k; F0 F. e2 O7 w0 M. A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 S. E' P) q5 v/ Q% i7 E' [' W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; s4 V1 ^2 M* l8 [' x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 m, F: T# t7 t2 O1 U! [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- R# k/ ]4 m8 t6 `# F2 s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, ?# `0 a) w- X& }  q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ T# j* M$ E3 J- G7 D' s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 w4 C1 ]( t" y) F( j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# }  H2 h! S$ y- }7 C9 U6 D/ c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& f# p& m* o5 g2 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ u9 k' t" Z: M3 d2 ^2 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# i' B2 f* |  _9 E0 f4 W) t! L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! [& k2 _! C% [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 O4 s2 s* F" \& ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ i! L8 s- R  T( u: O- |$ p% U" n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) {" C; ?- h9 U" o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' v- \" \4 R) S/ A9 x6 I6 x  D0 j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 A$ @; c; Q& h0 c# a9 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 S% n0 k3 K+ w& Z! A: w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" _1 s$ U0 D5 D4 z7 b/ [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* D0 Z2 `8 h; `0 t. c3 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' a0 I1 K1 O% _$ K+ S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) S, j9 s3 [5 W3 x9 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( U: X, H9 {) j: k1 {3 y# v7 |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 B$ V. F2 d: N9 h4 u5 Q% h4 ^. Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# z/ P/ F, ~- s( A+ ~) I我请你剖开它
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2 B  i" U* \7 Q) t. N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>