【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 L7 K" \$ I$ s  H6 X) j9 W0 ^0 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 q8 ^& I4 W+ p& `# I4 PWith the moon kissing it every night
" ?6 E. w( D, R$ h5 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* G8 J7 l( g6 c- BYou needn’t fear anything
/ {0 |. ^5 k! IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 f4 f0 u* g4 k4 q) Y) a$ `, zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- d1 E) y0 n1 ^7 F# ^$ WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* b$ A" j& ^+ oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- s! I. G9 e6 ]9 f8 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" L9 M/ l7 b- v1 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 Q2 g. y3 D# c$ y$ c# D/ C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& s) _$ Y+ W3 _8 |0 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ {' }# z; x; a5 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 A- D  L5 j: b* R! K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* p1 x' Y6 q. c, _, I) X4 D, A' G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! g# }6 l  l5 Q# E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& p9 [8 I% R8 w9 n- M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: ]; ?. b. c4 E! y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 k' n+ t8 W9 a8 \6 @0 I+ |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, _3 w; L* m2 v, s% {+ e: p$ J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ ]+ k$ i* x, H4 x4 E( }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' Q9 p& F. }- S2 X. ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 Y# @3 O) A  R, g( |/ F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 a5 m' n4 S% P: N9 e( [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 R( I$ W+ [# `7 n8 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; u( `! P( Y' M+ o& a& u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 C7 u; A" y0 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# i% D6 ^; R, q3 [. d" E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) p/ _/ B! c/ ]9 L7 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. i1 u) Z, w6 S8 ^/ K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! W4 C8 G" L/ s" C( v<P>I regret not dying</P>
( b2 v! h$ o  c2 S3 o$ f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# p$ [+ A$ J7 I8 y7 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ K0 @0 h, `4 O* x! d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( Z; f$ s: }) x) F/ J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) R- k3 V- }' c  T  ]- Z& r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 @5 r8 z0 F" N; {9 B- L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>