【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( i, K% o9 Z+ a! ?( vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 e. I. d2 y& E9 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; @& @# X" E3 dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# G- O1 T8 O* {8 z( h" iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ l) f6 z" V% b/ Q  ^! lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; C3 w# ?6 z! v! a" L; i& v/ KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" z0 K( Z- o/ e; D! \) g9 CI’m still filled with fear
6 M' G1 m" J5 |9 T" c* [& sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ z( @3 S( ?! |1 @. H& sI regret not dying
& N% N- ?6 B2 [0 X; o- W  vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 L3 L* B6 E, v3 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ a# |5 L; W0 J- S- DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# P: L- L' x1 N# v" P0 A( }/ A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) D8 P0 ~& Z6 O$ C  e9 n5 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 F8 L; i, q: D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. c1 ~8 B# ]1 Q0 \9 \" Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 K' Y/ ^- `9 m2 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% M3 R9 ]  R9 B6 E% i/ C4 j) ]# I# G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% {, r4 }% Z4 F( Q' a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ x+ a" ~5 m* P4 O5 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, }" b* \9 M6 ]" w7 c# T/ z3 w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' F, @( @6 B; X5 V1 l) r1 e: x8 Q# V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; _( H5 }! q0 n9 @/ F, A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 |5 e  B  d! j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 n- J6 Z1 x* b9 ]4 A. ?5 S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ Q" n3 O6 b3 z* \( E9 O$ V& k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( P% c% i) \8 K7 x! Q% \7 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 v. v* g% |) j: d) N( F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% i: \: G9 w. ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; E( {- j$ M" c) @6 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" D8 C) M6 [1 p1 @! e" B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, e/ N; v7 G7 E6 z3 P9 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  Q7 ], Y; D3 s" B& U7 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ |( I- G5 O# T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 J( Q, ?1 t4 ~2 u& `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% ~4 z0 @- g! g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 f3 k5 d5 n3 i" j& M( X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) J+ B/ u0 R5 i6 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* t5 ]3 z; ]' Q2 I5 v. w9 N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ y0 ~& T9 V. |5 E2 b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, d: F- X- Y" w2 B3 k我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* B3 v7 w& ~& @4 D* z  H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>