【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; M8 H4 k: j" U' O% V歌词我附在后面。
3 n3 \: @7 r- e9 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
  a0 E# a. w6 C" g/ OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" c! B9 J* S9 G+ S/ W1 M: _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, N1 @0 w9 l/ p1 [9 ~# S; mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 u7 ]. }' @4 ?7 B# A7 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 G3 U" W1 ?! A' N: @& j; k9 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. {. a  n) z7 ^5 Q4 O1 CNothing can compare to my love
: S% `0 A( n5 n1 ?/ BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 P; K8 ]$ G/ ]  D* jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" r% L' b- x* U  @/ K( K8 K0 Y/ LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ P0 U7 Z! }7 _. Y+ A) @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 T5 W- r% a/ S( n! V) GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 I7 d( g4 P8 M* TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- W. h5 r2 m& F) v' T8 L9 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  u9 ~1 h7 X. }/ }9 Y1 q2 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 @6 z. B- p/ B/ W9 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* d: D+ w. H( A- X+ |% ]6 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 H! W. E+ c8 F5 Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: V  |; v5 k, d* y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ a, J; h. P: H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# L' c: @: y9 K9 i% r/ b! ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: O" x# n7 S, Q+ l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 A6 E; P5 f$ K8 H+ l  ?$ p3 X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( I& s0 [# P7 @( p9 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 W% W* ?( V6 P; u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 U; t" D% J" `& }' i* I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" n2 Z# p- Z  e: u6 m) k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: E  w0 w& r+ g+ Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 a3 p+ N0 w% t6 G) m+ P4 H& Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# N" x" }* Y: f% v8 V1 D" ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& L: J. c; h- L9 v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& t8 Q! f6 b  j! B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, r; a5 N2 y/ S/ |+ B<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 |# }# E) f7 I/ h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& I/ k* ]/ O! `6 G$ Z* i/ g& i0 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; ]  e" z& z4 P: [% u5 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 l3 c- J4 I0 r$ M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>