【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( ^7 i- O  d5 _7 b; b9 I2 X' wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 g- F, W9 C  y8 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; O3 M" E& u1 K$ U: YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% s% V$ b# i- H' r( d; ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ w2 ], N$ n: Y  N' c, U& NYou needn’t fear anything
  j: B  t5 Y1 g7 \1 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: ?5 Q4 T1 G6 e; S& z  N8 rEvery other word you utter is love
  v3 i/ ]/ k" a7 M& yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. B$ `' r7 y# ]5 Z/ V1 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- }8 ^( d2 s% u3 cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( L9 u% S7 G% }8 d* ]  [# s* mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- f' r! f  _2 lI regret not dying
5 G& q- \  q3 y- I' lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 M( @1 Q6 L" o, ~) tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 r! X  L- f: D. ^, {, T. s: wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ J9 S/ `" U4 @9 w! ^  b' ^( A1 d( W' `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ C7 |* L1 r- w" \% F. D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 v2 h* J! `4 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ t2 o3 t0 u* y( o5 u0 {9 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# l4 Q$ Y1 _8 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, F' Y/ _& @# E; @8 s/ b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 D! b  M0 M" R) F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 _1 t" R1 W; P3 E2 I" O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( ]; E( Q" L, O: A" W, f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: g( x$ [) _# {/ @0 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) l8 s- N: o& U  d0 M! B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 G9 m7 K' H% s& S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: t8 W0 `1 g5 O# a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, Q  a! Y5 M9 A; @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; n3 K) ^  x1 |& \" d8 E. \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: m# k5 y' c; }" K5 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 `9 X. N# J, g2 G2 ^% ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 l; t: b7 D8 `, S) a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ O$ Q* `  W6 f  q  E& U' n1 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% w0 K5 D0 u  X7 P3 T. r9 v) P! U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 e8 T9 A1 Y( L; i( ?" p9 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 {( c  |9 g% `( Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 M7 d; v$ f( {) h- D<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ ?% F) l1 [, k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. H/ o3 _& c( |* B/ t' {1 R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 o9 k3 K" B. \* U  c1 p* \) `9 q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' r0 I& z' o8 u0 z7 i+ T" C- h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) |7 t1 T8 ?7 x& c# Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 o& {( K( h# W0 f3 `& u3 {, ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 Y) n% M. i  L- Q  u6 ?; Q我请你剖开它
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7 `7 `0 @$ ?/ _$ T" \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>