【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 }. b; }0 _) eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* v. Q+ U& {, d! sThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 d9 s# q8 u! Z( b6 NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% q- U% e9 X( e- j1 p/ O/ X5 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 X0 C9 P; L9 v( I- mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) `' }3 o) Q: P% L# e: C- F; QI love you I love you with all my heart
1 Y+ k9 }& S# `1 NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 {0 |# D/ P  Q' N# ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 ^+ u) M. R% E2 X3 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- K( |4 H. d( c8 `/ H9 xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  L9 w% T# F+ x) U) i& ?With such a tongue as yours,
+ V: A" m* s6 u! n8 |1 I* KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ ?4 f9 ^4 `8 J/ E$ oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# Z1 V8 Z, @$ Z* n2 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; Z* h0 V9 Z8 h8 G$ z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 Z) y1 i6 [* I" M1 r- G) v2 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ W* q2 L6 O5 l% O5 t  \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 m9 T+ F7 D- v9 b1 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 ~3 A9 l2 L: A; R4 S9 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 R6 i4 ?! n: B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 _; ~; e9 m9 Z0 n* t; g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 e5 _6 Q# j$ _3 S- v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 S9 l+ q; l! A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) ~# o# _5 u% t( S$ ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! d- z5 h9 O: Q3 W4 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 r9 v2 Q( \3 a* ~: \4 }% }6 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 i) n) d/ [  u% }5 B& W0 X( L! w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# |" B0 a/ x- K8 v" P" h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  ]% T$ A5 C3 |6 X# D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 V+ v$ h5 t: q: a1 X9 H% O0 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ s- ]( i1 y2 P9 |) v) x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 H. z% \* D7 ?" _! r$ j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 s  C! _7 C8 ^4 t8 n6 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ S, A# p1 Y* s4 v* y8 J1 ?$ m  J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% a/ T* r  ?  r, t; [% S( U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 X' b! ^, W0 P  {5 N0 f' f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% G! \/ {/ U; m! ]  n1 t! t% y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ w: f' y# o3 b0 x" _* n. n, [  T<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ J4 A; R+ B6 L  J: B& K- \# l+ \, J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ w# b8 P+ j: V  q- Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 q- |. I$ a2 X. S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, Z: I7 N, s/ n6 }5 {! Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  m% X3 `  z8 g3 Y4 ^2 z) I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 p5 P+ h- A4 z, d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>