【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ F/ B2 ^2 x) Z! z$ O* f3 R6 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 f6 s0 @* j: ~3 ^0 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% B# s/ U7 v/ K; V! W9 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% q- _5 D$ D: k3 HYou needn’t fear anything
' `5 p' |8 N: H7 o# A4 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 h$ b2 k: s1 S1 e  N5 w7 KEvery other word you utter is love
8 r% m+ d' o* \. t: aI really want to know just how much you love me
8 b2 ]1 {5 e2 F$ o1 O- l) MI love you I love you with all my heart
  @+ y5 p4 D, INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( e* T! J% K. K( m5 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ ?0 y$ p0 o6 i/ P! o3 L3 {7 {8 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 d4 f9 @) H) a  F: iWith such a tongue as yours,
0 T  F. \, }/ c  F5 P. u7 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% _! h  ]7 |! i- A& ^; [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' L! v' N/ ^! `: Z' \, X$ q2 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 ~2 M, P2 v! [6 H  ^8 T" k7 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) O: C# L9 _  y* }. l: b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 C; D" Q* ^+ p1 c3 K2 G: B7 O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- ~. ~+ R6 l/ D, ]2 h$ F, s$ V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% Y" u8 a* f$ y/ F/ _9 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  S3 h5 I8 r' y; c, E6 C: c9 K. M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- \' c/ @* n3 b, E; Y0 u4 h6 G: M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, k- ^7 B+ c( L) d) q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; s8 ]" e! ]% e9 h  P7 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: }! `3 S# X( y) m* w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 v! O; E. r; H3 a' E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 m1 d5 P2 l1 ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) Q) ?/ o0 [3 _6 b, Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 C) P; y) f+ _0 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 g' T2 x* S1 `5 m! G$ _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! R( L/ \6 l+ b: ?" N% X  S  M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 B; h* M, D( v# x# A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! T2 \' A& [6 O, d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# i0 ^3 X3 }2 e- p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. A* o- R* ^  f) B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 n  ~7 U9 Z+ b) u5 R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 l0 J2 c5 V: r% H1 j; Z$ d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ D" u, D7 M) Y; i( \* m: s0 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! |/ I/ h1 k" C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 i! |1 q: ~+ Z! W1 ~( N# w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 r" L: g/ S- f* x- w" A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; A! m. e  s% O  T- @2 l5 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>