【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 a( }" }9 U5 W* X( e* y' o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 v8 A! @+ u* L3 W7 }4 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 Y* S; c, x! R8 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
- z3 O, b' x3 W$ T. W  f( _With the moon kissing it every night
0 z+ [1 g3 I  }2 f$ ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% w5 i" B) p  b8 |( AYou needn’t fear anything
/ E3 ~9 x8 Y/ fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. Q2 M6 ]1 c9 i- W! `Every other word you utter is love
7 H$ J& i* B  D9 j+ sI really want to know just how much you love me
4 y& _# V, j; z4 U  bI love you I love you with all my heart
0 b' [) X  s4 ]/ m' ~# SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! o8 Q& y6 l8 E* ?7 b+ \8 E/ V2 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 F4 n# U/ ~! F$ `1 @# f% r7 r9 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; v% G4 T# s/ W$ a4 jI’m still filled with fear
" g' A+ n9 J- b* ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' d- }) h4 i5 m3 h* sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 z2 q& G% g8 X' L: F: cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 d/ N7 p- t. I  \7 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 C# E5 M. S4 P1 N' x; x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 }; j+ X8 ~( m' u6 Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 o; k+ U  J% ?$ U; m: M3 X4 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ O0 l# V2 k) {3 j+ N" O: c' g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# T  `0 `- c$ B/ w+ a! g8 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# E1 K! B4 ^9 X6 a5 Y  t7 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( u5 R$ Z- \$ [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; E+ @$ B+ X7 j! g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- M$ k1 W5 M. [+ a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 V! y% u7 H; c* Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 M! e/ c- `5 I0 P. m' V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: }$ t3 t; ]) {. ^5 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* a3 c2 B+ I8 T+ F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 M0 L9 l% h6 [4 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; k: Q# e3 P6 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) D4 X9 r' z5 X. R5 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" ?4 e* X, B3 @: v6 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# D6 h+ k: k+ U3 u* r# [8 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" J% u! r) ?1 V2 d% A3 [% f7 j, @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( K$ R& q$ F- [: c- }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 E) {( J) u7 H  t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# O0 [2 u8 d; S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' o2 P6 Y) A4 ], x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ v1 }' D9 A, a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: r! [+ x! b& d( P; _5 |' s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% e/ X$ b) o. {/ I  G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' O) U' v4 f2 @& ^: }! x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, U3 q9 W2 v+ d% P我请你剖开它
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9 b6 a8 x' Z# }( r9 D& N5 T$ y5 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>