【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% a9 b; X' j; _4 S. a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 Y0 F  u3 C. V# E: s- v) F3 L2 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ D- b9 z- G1 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 L. {  V" v! D- a; P. DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& F5 A) Z& y! L  b8 uEvery other word you utter is love
+ m1 |* d+ S5 m  j5 ]1 H) ?, ], AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( J/ M" l, t* G8 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ^/ ?+ ~$ x( P' W2 ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 ~" D( F3 X; j' T8 V/ XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 D' \1 q  ~6 y9 B9 W7 e1 SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& m  `. Z) u6 G- q7 x3 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: V. v' N8 x5 C- R% d+ Z& H! p( ^/ bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& B5 w0 v" ]4 w. f& g. QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 G: R5 {3 d* W" u. _1 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 l3 \  N& W* L! U5 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# s: A3 O! M: u; T1 m1 `% y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) @) p$ A0 K- G; S' k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- A; g- @7 m+ i. l! v- r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 u, M0 U+ J4 Q. }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ I+ E7 h' {8 }2 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& j# p! V& v4 F4 s) E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ ^" w, B9 R& ?1 X" D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' u) T* l) O5 G5 O, k& ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 B2 a' v% }) J2 c8 O8 G7 R4 H  b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* x3 q! v9 i8 @7 o7 }1 q* C7 c. I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( [9 x* }6 e3 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 _  w! p' l) \2 A; f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 D4 c3 t1 O% s3 r4 t5 H$ b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& }. J) s7 ]# J  r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) l3 H* J. }8 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 h5 P, o4 W1 r9 A$ k& c6 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ c) ^$ E# H, T+ d4 U! q% q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 s' P) U8 L5 ~$ Q9 {" P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' Y, r- |. r0 q/ N<P>I regret not dying</P>
! B! R, A8 h" m2 P, n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& ]- z' y7 H' \# g6 h# Y7 S- [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 x. }! _7 f! f' E3 f& Y0 m6 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& H" o( L0 |% M4 O1 s: S5 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  g3 o, g) T4 f. _: J& I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ u. |5 u9 \+ ^: o& j0 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! P  y7 @0 q. S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 X' R5 o9 X5 V* Q! ?+ |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% {) B' A  R% k( w- J4 F- k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 b! H- i% i6 S( B5 x% R. R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>