【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 ?$ Z" O7 g- L$ ~7 F: P0 j8 [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: U7 b! I1 p" O4 G* q4 Y: B: SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% g: B6 ?" K7 x: C4 R6 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; u- O4 J/ t  ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ a8 @  Z7 _4 GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( S( w7 _7 c1 o5 X, W! b1 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 M- V! Q, R7 v, L4 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 V& u; \: P0 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 J9 B" H3 d! _. o/ G8 y: _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' N9 ^' a7 x1 P, y* a2 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ N( f3 B4 y- O5 s& V! K0 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. Z5 ~/ v* h$ f; I/ G/ `, R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; g, D1 x* D& O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) \' G$ T7 v0 ]' A3 z; ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, M# }: j, H; `* ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- T2 Q: I/ k/ T6 R- E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 m/ ?4 y9 {- P0 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" L" @2 i: a9 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" `& O5 V  Y6 X$ k" q% k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! K) N9 O+ A  W3 z' F8 Z) r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* X  F$ m$ c. N7 e( n; _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 r1 c8 O! t2 R+ {<P>你无需担心</P>
. x1 s. v0 C: F9 P1 P  S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* G4 U2 s8 K3 B* t; h+ y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 ]' l7 Q, G! s, u$ b. j7 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ R5 h3 T" p  S( y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. D% v  X' b  x  [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 G1 Z9 D0 w+ }/ G" t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 \! n) @9 Q1 n8 @, l1 S/ j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 c6 J4 C2 f$ Q8 V8 x& f$ ]6 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 E$ `0 K" M3 G3 X; J% [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- k" u  g0 \0 z& }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( F* H& }& D$ c$ v9 O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! i4 U3 f! W! i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' E' b" b( y3 X/ S* F, }6 s4 D2 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Q1 Q3 s% ~0 ]1 E) B+ ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 d6 C" ^3 g5 ?- U4 b; c1 Z- C5 o. `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 n" w2 x% P2 D9 e  [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ f& I4 J  G2 j: j% Y* V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 V( @8 R- ^1 H; J6 ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>