【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 {7 ?6 o4 Y0 ~+ C  m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" P& c8 F" X# OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 p- T5 g, q' _" oWith the moon kissing it every night
5 o. u: [( `( TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 S0 E5 C6 _* ?  `& o' jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 Q# K- R" R. }' ]# OEvery other word you utter is love
+ m' e5 v9 D0 U& bI really want to know just how much you love me
: ~" G% u" d, o: |9 wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% L# t/ M0 ]: _% b) f" qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! G/ F7 \+ M6 Q- uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* C( X. ~0 r# ^8 HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' s9 @  K) a+ D+ w' s' F. |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; u. k  u. A) v$ O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ u& y7 i  h& z" b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 \2 \! B" @" V. Y; o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 ?1 T! i. {2 Z3 r; M4 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ ?! i; Q& n- \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- d8 F1 G) C  K7 y- n/ _( x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ }3 P0 W2 _% l! [7 a& Y% A3 ?* r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ |6 |5 e9 C0 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 ~7 i2 m, N5 b( a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, s; G% U5 @- R* z6 ~% N7 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% Q! P2 k9 n/ V; u  Q2 H1 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 w: E, l" A+ P5 u" ^& X5 u  z0 r<P>你无需担心</P>
4 `! i8 P6 C# s( V- g3 ?3 K$ @" O$ {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 o- X6 d3 m% f/ B! x7 A4 w0 i5 m; |. R- ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 c+ ?" a6 H6 s  \0 v0 f( R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 r. J3 j" {6 A" s0 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ T( P& y+ b! w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* R3 t3 J4 |* ^6 m; h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! H! F1 r; y" S" S/ ?$ I- _- e& {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* x2 L0 y  l7 n5 o' T( h9 S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, f& _2 ?  _, f- l6 T<P>I regret not dying</P>
) ]: z( I; n- ^) k, ?; D/ y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 e% M' g: K" G3 h; a3 k* K& l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: _1 T6 C* e! j, b& f: [; L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 D' q4 k+ h- \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  e6 A) g2 n; c& [4 D. \我请你剖开它

, M# @: b/ H! M: n$ E* ^5 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" t+ p- w& r6 w- l" j% V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>