【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 M% `' S4 g# R' c/ ?8 U! l( {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ O8 j+ p4 {) P1 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 x4 @# l% r; r% }' V) P( W- rWith the moon kissing it every night
8 Y! f6 z1 v' Y, S% w% Z- X" ASeeing the sky content with its love
# e) k6 J* A% [- ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* }6 @: E. g+ y) q+ W1 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ v& [0 u9 x* x7 q' r' SI really want to know just how much you love me
5 [) t+ T! I0 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 U* c( x. C( j5 U! Z7 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: @9 N7 w: L# S  N% BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& Q! [$ H4 A- P# CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: ^; a$ ]" K; E% k/ rWith such a tongue as yours,
) F! d$ K4 I1 |# V# LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 p" W8 s' D2 I+ v1 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ C( P2 c( B0 k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 L; @& E, T  K+ v, ]# `$ @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! a2 k. ^, o' g" m$ O4 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, C( [- V4 d1 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 Z! I2 C" p5 w* p9 y; R0 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  K# R$ w' c, V2 ]- `7 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. M$ q' ]' X! d# J: T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 f' f6 s  a! R9 k" j, D! r% v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 |0 y! P. z* M; F& W0 C! h/ ~' D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ W1 J0 U6 r* a& r1 `6 E: e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! I' ~" g9 F8 t" G$ M+ @7 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; S4 x* S0 ^- U0 @& O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ G4 F5 D" e0 V7 y* n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ x2 i* C! `8 J' }7 g. M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 T2 a* U0 i+ a; F2 [6 I0 B* @, Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 U2 Q8 V0 ~, M$ o& r9 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
% ?* Q6 n& m! t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 S5 x0 `; X5 r( e! P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ t- F2 Q0 ~0 k# i* w; K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ u" V$ H4 q3 J6 [+ c/ t- z! Q) n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) Z* @  ~& y) b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>