【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  s5 d! H! n/ A# }. k. OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 c) r/ l0 @% _7 n9 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 [1 {3 @7 j& yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! s) L8 \( L% {* p7 ]  ?* i& cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ L* m4 z1 H! v3 i* z2 `- jNothing can compare to my love
1 Z" H5 n1 ?- s5 ?2 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 q( r  Z, X2 q0 ^4 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* R$ A/ j0 q4 Z9 I( PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: N, d3 M( x8 y9 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 o& x8 c" I4 l# x$ @  OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; o. C# N/ c' H. _" f+ `, Y, |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& @+ Z; ~* R% }. Q# \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 A6 @8 d* u' I( r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% C) Q; m# _1 h/ q. R- v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 M( T, j0 [- l8 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 ^& L9 ]/ r# D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& q/ B. R8 A2 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ T5 ~) e) L; Y$ _, k, g- H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 \0 M. ^) S( ]  M& R, `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ V/ u" p! m( P1 M5 u! N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" ?, q" o) A6 c/ f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* a+ P+ J- ?- Z# x: n/ b* \3 S+ v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 w/ k4 O/ x/ ?4 [6 u$ j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# i0 G6 Y: ?1 ~0 Z( a) l1 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 L# i; d) x6 C2 z- R" ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ ^3 T8 T8 G; F' e% ^4 o9 f4 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  X; m$ E, R' q! Q$ Q) F( f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ v3 t- R% v# K0 e* M) N0 `/ w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' S8 h! m* _# r' I% Y+ \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- @" E' E9 \. d: q3 _$ X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 Z8 ]' Y3 L. l! S3 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 S9 L; v# R7 e8 u# F6 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. N4 A( w5 T4 @1 B) y8 z) d# x8 J- G- o& b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# d" [% R/ U- C+ p1 T5 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ c; |9 q7 m' i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 r1 T5 P4 W; N9 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* ~# |% X0 i4 ?. _( ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  @" X3 u9 d% w" w9 Y# Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 P! N* q/ q( M$ D0 S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 k. ^# m" _" A% L5 t2 s3 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 d  g! u- }# i3 K3 o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ K7 @) `* q8 M1 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# p! ~  h2 g# K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) j* K6 G% L3 B6 y% K+ u- \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 v& i# Z( j  k4 Q) X, k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, n# ]8 x9 ?! D4 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 s* D& o9 c5 t' V$ w我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>