【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: p" ?! |( H) _! r& [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 f  X, s3 T0 q. S! oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) R' {4 G9 }: n, e. ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 W# ~/ F7 n% GYou needn’t fear anything
/ ?) ?+ C: g: o, e8 g7 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ v1 e; A6 y9 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, n$ j5 T' [7 z; T+ G( R; H+ Y2 Z9 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ ^" o' L3 _# C  W, n2 |I want so much to see inside your heart
1 y7 I0 P4 o3 e9 t& E4 t6 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& d; B$ N. x% E; M9 i* x- }I’m still filled with fear
5 N2 U. f7 I% T  rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- o+ b1 T" e5 d, Q; l5 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' c2 f6 {& E- w& p% EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) K- |6 q5 v+ R) m1 R# wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 j% L( q! r4 `, a5 r- a* a# Y  s  B9 \$ @+ _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; a$ G* ?+ k- S- I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& v) c* J6 Y: G1 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! O* l& C& F1 D: c5 n& }( z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ Z5 h% I- c) ^4 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ D3 @/ c# d( u6 m) T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! ~0 A5 L2 ~0 Z2 H9 J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 c; V5 w" p) B$ b( l/ \) ?% f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 W5 C/ M+ B5 |; h8 y2 ]( B& Q<P>你无需担心</P>
% Z; G( `$ y* M: o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ b$ H; a0 Z4 s" T4 ~! S! Y2 @% M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- l  u& a( X4 k& C2 L7 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 t0 P2 j& H% J$ J9 H8 q8 i2 ^& R: }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& o* @7 X( @! k! {  o( `; o. S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 m: l! n* F: \' l/ N# n+ h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% [0 N0 \% ~+ P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% {2 T. H4 Y; d/ m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 _0 E) @" s" z- L3 ]7 t! B8 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 N" u/ s# r1 T; z) @" C$ q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ c7 r( Y' }7 D# L7 V# `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 p- x2 R  L  @5 n6 m" N( ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' G: u4 T5 V& Q8 ]8 l5 {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, T: V$ m% E$ F# `! l& t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 F  ]2 e9 d8 ~  A, B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- f! f, t0 k" V& W1 g3 @- z  f* ]2 z# n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 P, F# p  z! M0 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ v; ^/ x' U- o& ?8 y) b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 r5 z, E- ?( F1 n9 c. P我请你剖开它

* L2 J, h% _, F3 h8 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' M: |  t% z% ]' c, `; z' D- J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>