【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, a8 P' s# n6 V9 L  GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, j1 e3 h) |7 T, z/ |8 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. o6 n+ k* J! A9 A3 k5 r. PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( K+ }" z( X4 `0 X: A$ {$ zSeeing the sky content with its love
& K3 v5 F! ~# H3 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, ]& ~, C8 }2 L! M- P6 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% f+ Z) s3 L. A4 T2 F. a0 }& ~7 QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 Y. ~; S! ?$ u' uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 M; ^# s; j* A9 ~8 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" E" n4 L) K, ?/ N, vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% n* {* y, q& Z4 o: A! Y! Y4 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. M7 R  o- I& LWith such a tongue as yours,
  e$ J' G& K4 N9 F0 u4 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ T& t9 |- E7 Y3 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 C8 V5 M1 h4 Z# O1 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& Q2 ]$ [: \6 z3 V0 S# c7 G/ Y, f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; l6 {! H  `* Q7 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% Y6 J5 Z7 G) k' o; g& S1 s5 ]; F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 t% C3 K* j$ f- v8 m$ X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 ]; k2 m% H7 V6 q0 k5 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) o3 o/ m3 c- i. B/ W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: P" a2 s1 n( b8 _8 T  [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 U# b$ {& d7 l: k- I0 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# i; a' Q2 |2 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, Q2 X* I3 K1 }* L6 `, U( h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- }: y' _/ o" z7 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( C8 Q. q$ \$ c! n. _* }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! |) }6 C; }7 y7 b. W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% b# F* D5 ?& E/ _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ |; z" q; f" t2 x' Z: L. e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 i) `* ]: ]0 a$ A5 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' J' Z7 ~4 O+ ?3 ^: g: T  k0 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; i/ e3 h; B) {$ S* K: \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- J. p. {8 v/ e4 ^$ s7 g- e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) e9 ~* L3 _% @; B. |8 A3 q( G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ f2 O" }0 [& o5 }0 U7 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, h6 a) l# C6 e5 D0 u% \( Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( P7 {" `& d  P9 H! v$ f! o- a<P>I regret not dying</P>
; i1 v* _5 L) F% g+ c& C6 Y; @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ P* h3 P8 [* h( t& ]& B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 ^/ V5 O2 q5 n5 l* i; @6 T  C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& A9 X* S: H& H4 o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  ~( @1 ^3 m2 d4 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ s- A5 K' u- J5 Y1 K1 C$ D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' U! Y( j; v& g- [# n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" w; x( |& n, h; i7 ^2 \* X! R8 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: M. H/ P' R0 K1 c" f4 J! G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! N0 `2 k" a$ W# S+ U) _% [4 ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>