【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ J" G  v2 ~& ?$ |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ ^' O: H3 K1 [  k+ k( t) UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ E& E0 Q. Q& ?7 L) eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. O5 o! @9 n9 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' l' X6 j9 a1 K/ b. \2 P! WYou needn’t fear anything
9 [' \  N$ k' M/ \! ?) a3 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; [+ d( W0 l% nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 H  D$ w, m. u, `" w* U. ^1 R0 pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 e% R! y. J: n  }. r" XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 \. o, m- _" K" Z' P) ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; T" t- W1 s6 M7 {6 \& }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' v4 f2 m7 m4 N5 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- K  i& R3 n" v- a* N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. ]7 q" X2 q( ?1 Q: Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 {; \6 D; ^! O) c8 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 r( S) d- g( M% [( V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 _" T1 u" ?, M- d! B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 ^3 O4 z1 \5 O: X1 a, T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ r. L6 t' x2 \! f2 Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 a  _* \( P& `! i6 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' E$ {1 Y  A5 L3 A, v3 U- P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# q/ G% q+ P: D) \8 ?, |' J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ u% Q% h0 J6 O+ u* `7 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ J$ a. Q. o& h3 X- ?1 }9 a* D" X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, \- r2 T( l/ ?+ h; A  \5 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 b% }  |6 v3 Z. i8 X( ?6 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! h0 i; r! r4 E" M5 e$ A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, ~( T1 a0 o; D, V' `+ N" w3 ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! d( {3 H$ ^  ?+ p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. d0 `6 e7 M) e. q; ]9 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 m8 |% B. C6 ?6 s' Q* y* A5 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ I. M/ M% a' ~# e" n- s1 e+ I" w8 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ H6 }/ `: ~' u( O* c# Z" i+ P8 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ~6 q! l8 I: v) ?4 P( ^# r! m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 G) i# V% C5 ^( V) _5 ~0 e* y: g' T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 c" U) b& o- @. Z5 P$ ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: X0 ?" n* @0 z. ^5 L6 H' q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% X. E5 V+ o& O* Z7 O' n( r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ O& D) d! P+ W7 a4 \我请你剖开它
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  `$ M+ R# B$ i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 }/ @7 J+ ]* J# C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>