【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 a1 j, ], \9 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 F9 Q/ t4 O5 _$ y% E# d$ E" ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  `& l. ^0 d3 {( m4 q4 i& [" DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ Y( i( W8 f# H' c" y/ i% RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 \  Y& O5 B+ X8 N; ?# C7 p1 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' S6 A" [5 ^  I9 vEvery other word you utter is love
& b( D$ _* C. L% s5 g& SI really want to know just how much you love me
4 w2 N: K/ X4 z' R, K8 MI love you I love you with all my heart
3 S8 ?5 I9 W, h! j1 C; ^  eNothing can compare to my love
* W+ w6 R7 \& D% q' l9 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ u  D; S- B; N+ hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 a: `/ Q* c# t1 ]- x+ i( uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; F1 U, q9 _% ]5 s1 D# s4 Q! {" EI regret not dying
9 L: W" X1 b) @5 o- g$ X2 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ N  W1 c1 t2 g0 H  JWith such a tongue as yours,
1 n0 K$ ~8 W. Z0 `" d) VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 }8 v" t( o) V& k, B% I7 n7 e6 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: I. V( d$ p+ C( r/ T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 v) z- C! I2 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 l+ E5 j6 B3 v3 V. s0 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 n7 X9 r) `+ j( A+ p2 a% p* |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; g* R, ^6 s, p; s2 A/ l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; ?; a: [, ?. v8 G3 o: r# f9 s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 R9 M( a* y% T/ J; ]% p5 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. r0 S$ b+ h3 V+ Q# z1 z8 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; H; n0 y3 g/ H" h8 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 R! Z0 l+ [' u7 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 Q- f- [, `6 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 j/ W( c  ]& m$ W0 K2 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& L# ?2 E' G$ y0 P' F" L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 F1 `. f$ E% T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 L* o5 b9 W" a; X$ @" u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% t0 H7 ?" `& j$ W5 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 T4 e3 ~' K; x0 y6 L. W% S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 B  u+ C/ O7 p! U4 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& |' t1 M; P5 [3 \/ v7 O8 k" |. o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& ]6 |' h0 X3 p0 V% A1 |' i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% a1 L! v! @# n- }  E8 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 N9 o/ r- b2 Y' G0 e8 y5 Q. t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% |1 Z0 N5 O+ ~+ w, q% P9 d: X  [" R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, T9 C- G, }1 r, Z9 P/ g' S4 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" z: j3 f! h. {& w7 Q* F. R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 U# i  F$ [$ ~6 X6 K0 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>