【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) u) x; ?! y5 G3 x0 pWith the moon kissing it every night
7 a* |* f! \& J6 PSeeing the sky content with its love
& s  a% h+ h: {) S5 c5 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& I) f! s6 ]( t7 w$ g6 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 b2 Q* v4 G* Y% D, D0 R" ?1 P. aNothing can compare to my love
8 `. v( @/ y4 E  w- ~, N: lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 b. s# T7 h4 {6 A6 [5 l; {; J; TI want so much to see inside your heart
% c; {" c2 E# `; G; L: yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" O" J# {; P( x! y3 {$ K. N0 `0 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 @2 u# Z. W2 N  l  Z+ H/ `6 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ m3 u' D/ e  I/ ~, d1 D% FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 a* j2 ~& }) o: V8 X2 {: s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% w5 s1 p' {5 c  u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& }9 Y  B0 E" C8 E4 q6 e/ z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. L1 U9 o! C- c/ w" @7 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; J: t& L' ~  ^; X3 q( w( r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ P& @4 b; J2 L' Y. P  I# S" s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& g9 Y/ M+ w) [5 r  P# L- K( G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 j9 g1 Q+ q9 b- u$ z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* w8 S( H* f: b3 q2 W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% U8 W5 e: y$ h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ i( H4 x# e+ m! o5 K* K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 _6 P) _  j3 W6 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; G- H$ N  p( i% O* m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. J. Z7 p; C  A7 G# _' H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ w* @5 j8 o8 z/ c# }. @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. j, L, \$ U$ ^0 ?4 A; i) |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ W( }/ h& J% K) B8 G. r" s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ u9 M3 |) |- v# d( T1 I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 B1 m) p$ z, I1 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' r8 ^0 L5 Z1 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) R' X# ^9 {3 K, l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; Q! q2 e8 E  S; f6 z( k4 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- b% o# K! f6 z. U7 y3 ]* S/ t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ h/ S" j! ^7 O/ c7 ?% \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; k& |0 E  y/ i# x4 }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' F: j) q$ h2 d6 V4 n  N- G/ m8 Y! O4 ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' k' |! H. C+ h. v我请你剖开它

# H3 o5 Z% q1 Q% L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>