【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 r# a. \# P# c% |3 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 L0 f; s1 f7 P( Y# @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 i) O8 I) T/ W0 i( \0 R" N) lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( \$ F$ F# D% Z; H+ d" mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 A# X9 {' g6 z( c/ g" tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 c5 y! y1 \* \3 C8 cEvery other word you utter is love
: i- G( t7 @' C) YI really want to know just how much you love me
; G$ x' a' S0 |  D0 ~4 C& K  vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 A& \4 B/ E. v2 D8 y# _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" B* q) y# H0 C/ C8 C4 x. [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) l( z, v* w) |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 p' r; P0 E& p% f! dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ x# `3 l5 p- GWith such a tongue as yours,
9 t8 k: P3 d1 ~4 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 Q3 s" h: j" Q3 t" Y/ x# rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 [: B( c5 S+ ]9 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 {. i7 L/ F5 c8 x& U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 y& i2 ^: c; R# v$ r6 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ P; i: ~# ?! q, V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 f, w) J5 {) s0 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, r+ Y7 s/ q1 r2 y7 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, e4 |- C4 B  z) J  l0 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# x' ^/ J6 U) F, D& x3 D6 X- |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' \0 `! E% @" K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: r1 W0 N. [% }4 R5 @: \8 [- Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! j- o3 E* s! M' k1 \- q% {8 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" W, X; E/ _) @" z" e  Z! W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 v' p8 b& f" ?/ I  o% p9 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 }3 {9 {  q2 S1 v) v% S2 E% W5 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- J( j, A9 Q. U) v0 l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 N$ }8 \" _( [9 W+ u9 K2 E; ~/ x  `0 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 ]; j) W7 H: ]% |* B: |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ [* L! k* a/ e+ D! J2 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' w5 J4 k, ?8 f+ j, n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 e4 G* K! t2 Q& `! M5 u, E( b* G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 c  B/ H- z( R/ r* {5 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* E# T: X& ]9 W- }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. o4 c' }! O. u5 ]. V! u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 D3 Q7 D9 Z3 G8 u$ y+ m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; |* B: c8 E. ~6 E/ o0 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 G9 L& n8 E5 O# y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ h  l6 j1 N$ m+ v( g我请你剖开它
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% p0 P5 O. t$ C2 Z2 o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>