【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# G( r" e9 l8 B& Y. W# T6 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* d6 q0 U$ v0 D0 C* C) o/ U/ JThe sky is happy down to its soul
! |8 q0 I" ^$ U4 M5 ^. q; nWith the moon kissing it every night
/ q  }# x! H% NSeeing the sky content with its love
0 \2 f9 G. G+ @, ^9 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ ^8 S: ?. ?6 h4 I* ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; J; r# ^2 p# R% y% t& u4 e: E2 A$ R, aNothing can compare to my love
0 w& m3 L2 `3 y5 K8 S, f) U$ Y( \$ HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; u# b% \' F: ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% t! b4 O2 i( w) l" EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 Y' ^4 L( L1 M. X9 S$ G3 NWith such a tongue as yours,
. c4 F% K# V# x& w  PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. E& [" k+ s3 S! PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. `) Z* b) r: E/ x! t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- `  D( Y1 U% S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 m5 x$ e+ Z! f- @$ v; o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 p: P* `5 F- }1 o% g! a0 R9 j) a- V0 h% |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" W: _( M; L: L  O& @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 X; u1 `  G- ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) B/ \$ g5 z, K) X& ^7 B3 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* T: t" f  _- D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) X& q& i6 N- A6 t7 W  [7 I" P8 i" k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 }, i2 {- ~. T4 Z5 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  ~5 K$ H. Y0 w' v4 {6 @. v2 ~# B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 S/ r) q; Y' D1 H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. e5 [1 p# Z: E9 W6 P; F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 C; J5 o+ L- t4 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- w' v+ j4 B7 L& W3 V! a) R& d! h8 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; r+ h* e1 r. z/ s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- ~+ p( i, X, Q5 H2 J, |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( S7 A% b9 k) S* e. Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* {& U; L4 N! |$ c1 i1 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 ?& c4 U# k5 X7 h/ c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: J, S" h8 X( X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& q2 k% r; o+ N3 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( i* t; f! n  d% D2 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  f% y2 R3 g4 ~5 ~+ m, _5 ~6 \2 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 s5 K/ {2 o0 p1 Q' i6 l: T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; z# `5 ?7 j2 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 g/ ~' b8 s( v# l' J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ |4 r4 D$ w4 z% M9 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 x# w* N+ u3 u1 m7 x" T: u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* A& d6 l+ d; `* n4 a我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>