【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# b) l3 F, R4 `4 O$ G. O8 k  q  yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, n' V/ L! b4 O& K" U4 c; dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: C7 V' Z# M4 O# }With the moon kissing it every night
3 E# x% @( B2 ?Seeing the sky content with its love
/ r; K! J* P4 H' W  QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 [# I1 {) e. H6 y/ I+ FEvery other word you utter is love
3 l  n: E+ D. L1 AI really want to know just how much you love me
3 g# ~* Y: y# @$ i' QI love you I love you with all my heart
% r8 Z/ Z$ b' J: U0 m3 aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 {+ Q8 q8 V8 _3 ]1 w, dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 m; k$ L% I# {I’m still filled with fear
0 `9 T6 c+ m' DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  S' ^5 @# G6 A1 J$ W9 T2 UI regret not dying
9 S2 r4 x' ?) {: _# ?/ AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; U+ g4 f' @7 P% |4 ]5 R1 N6 {5 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& i7 s9 p. i# GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! [4 R& U( B9 I3 }) _" LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 _  h% a4 ^& B; T) k( @3 }' O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 {" L. G1 E$ P0 j) ~! l3 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# o, o: r  @; z+ l* y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, S: ~& X$ d3 q  ^' |1 a, H0 G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 t. W' L7 v  d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& a. ]) K3 e0 Z# F% c3 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# |) b! p% I( N/ e" d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  i: }) @! V( |+ \0 F- e' P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# k5 J1 d! B" @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' |, k0 V" \( N. }, x  Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( U. a: x- X5 _0 {; h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- K+ P. _/ o- ]1 \4 S4 Q* L: z& o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ t- m4 D1 F- q% u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) `! i6 y& c+ M  S% ]( \* G& O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 H8 j& g  }+ ^- z' b+ P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, |4 [1 L- F; R, m8 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 R$ [) m/ Y2 k2 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- H) l. q% n: d- L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 S0 N$ ~$ P3 ~/ D/ w( _$ a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% I/ h. w! p/ P2 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ n  i7 |( O' j. S0 s. H, l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 L, C# [  M) @  Q) ^7 Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* ?4 g4 W0 c* m" [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& v+ c% k0 o5 j' }* d8 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& `  {* r: k( O# O0 Z! |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 m( G% w6 c$ H8 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ X' i& P1 ^- }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 D; y1 P* w( x9 O5 }& F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 o- c6 u3 W. p  w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  K1 w" G0 Z) j. u) U# b2 j. ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. z: q# l  O& }4 P7 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 M% F$ Y4 U4 g1 t. \, a- y2 ]7 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 G, ~6 X6 B( K, a7 v. P. C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" H/ h/ N% E* L5 S" r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: c( {9 h) {9 ~  U/ @2 c2 p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: q% U# D, z1 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 W. Y8 j+ s2 B' g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& N5 k* I" v7 ^& G  X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# n2 ~1 H# w1 T* X% w  a! R' z0 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>