【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ I3 ~( ?* f; Q  QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ n5 f( R" X. |2 ~4 Y+ ~! ^# IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 i2 R# g- c, U4 j) Z" K1 z# rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* d) ^1 x& ]" GThe sky is happy down to its soul
. g2 X+ R$ b4 }" y$ v. AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ P  y) z1 T6 P5 o) M$ Y3 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" p9 [& D2 u. L; x. k9 J/ ~I really want to know just how much you love me
0 x! b- }! `, u9 F! c$ XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! Q) y0 h9 ?8 t0 @9 ]. g- o; W  L, pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ \% q0 B$ \" u8 ?# M% c) h, j; oI’m still filled with fear
) U/ [7 k2 O# |6 m8 F1 [# TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ D: ~0 V8 X7 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) A) \6 x$ P: Q( m: j3 X0 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  M. ~, e$ X+ j! R, X" C- CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ]4 d' Q; b# P! t- ?' B  F) u3 Q* G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- m7 ^! B6 _8 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# S4 F, ]' B2 e/ T' N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 p7 N  J2 B$ P2 ^0 X8 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& k+ n" O9 l& y2 M% b2 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 @$ a! [4 k( U/ D6 _" B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! T4 q+ v% J6 M8 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' V& I7 h+ p1 z/ f" I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ W( k& T% u( J8 Q( X+ w& }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; J9 ^5 n: s( C! |( K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) S- K/ Q7 j& G& Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 ^8 {' \  N( X. X. O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ @  p; c4 ]+ M$ l" s/ |! k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& p' l3 m. Y1 y" L7 Y3 m. l& o6 B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, D; L4 \* L: n. k8 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  K8 I9 L! Q5 a/ C$ ?+ E5 N& L9 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 R7 f( [2 U( d$ P% H: j& Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 g- y: X( \$ _+ c0 G: c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& g- i9 k; y( w1 m$ m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 Z2 E+ h% L* G! @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 \! A" v; A! F; E! p: j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 A( v: R" z  Y' M8 f- B. p3 T' m) H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# {/ Z: w5 j: B" M, d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" W4 S. y. C! n" r+ R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 ^. S4 j, {0 j3 [* B<P>I regret not dying</P>
) X. c' B  i8 R' w$ M: b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; q" r$ C5 |8 R) E; f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 R3 L& Z, r+ O! K2 j7 G; A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* m, a" \" V+ W! e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& i3 ?! _! s( \3 |" X8 E3 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 V/ a5 A: V3 Z% f) T  B9 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! [1 d# ^/ H/ y* d+ g/ }2 |& I; r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% ~/ ~8 {/ g5 o4 A! A8 H" f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>