【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* p& _" i* P& g6 S% k0 _: A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# T! p1 k" I, a" DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 g. S: ^# v! J/ j) EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: \; J& Q8 \, t8 J; Y. dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! H- I+ b6 }- `* e+ xSeeing the sky content with its love
, Z4 j* Z2 c* _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' V9 ~( z( A1 a/ W+ n  f) bYou needn’t fear anything
/ \# H, B# R# S5 _) c/ ?3 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 _' C! A* D: [/ z$ yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 p" Y& _) G9 E+ SI love you I love you with all my heart
4 z) n5 g7 G2 `+ y1 T( RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 ?/ y3 s. {  @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, T* m7 W- k- ^( {0 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ W! q3 a; r8 H; S" K' M1 YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! v* b2 m7 {; b3 H( HWith such a tongue as yours,
* L! T4 b# T8 A& x0 w& {  gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% X. o. [  \. H$ _, h  B0 J0 X  bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* L. B$ \3 P- Q" S/ F2 k$ U6 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ a! w9 ]9 j# R  a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ M" D/ k  m3 x! ~4 Z. X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. v* n+ u; w, g# v: U7 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! z% `! i! e* c0 g5 r2 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, k8 a6 K. J$ z: E  W, [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- \- q& N9 C$ V! z7 K! r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* r5 U9 M* t+ `  c4 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 t( g( s( _2 Q1 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 j. O/ t& q/ a* O8 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 f$ X$ n7 P( `5 b' ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. @3 k, g/ g( q; j1 h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ [) r; e% d8 ?7 @0 E; |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 F, H* c, q$ u# ]- C+ v3 n7 r; o: @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ h2 Y8 z5 t) A# P' k3 o1 D  B8 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: ^$ y8 e; O8 H  u# [. M0 _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* K1 r6 U& R+ {1 c8 G8 j; z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. |9 s- \& v8 s& Z7 }+ q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( ^3 W% P* ~9 i, {' C! g) I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* ]6 w7 h. i7 Y3 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- a& ]# @3 X* w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ c9 _- L% F1 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, D$ c( _& O  ~  j  ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; q" y, f1 D- w4 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 P: D8 r6 Y- g5 ^: K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: C3 D) H: q) X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* V" Y' H/ P7 q( |# I" @: O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' _- z( E: {6 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 W& E! d4 D% s$ J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 y" H1 z! I+ C4 F1 f8 A% `( P" S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 R7 D# s) L9 u' N5 T9 q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 _, Q5 Y6 E+ q* e8 j( X6 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 W; j9 y2 x/ I! K* z0 [) Q& [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ Y! h* F; I& p/ E" P* ~  _1 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* K0 }% r' k9 u  O2 f. m1 m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. a1 Y5 q5 R) ?8 ]- }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 p8 u# V/ x, l! F# T我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" [7 o6 \7 S+ ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>