【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 v2 q# m- g; |- o5 |, i. \歌词我附在后面。
% m7 O; M* U% C2 I5 W( l: S! \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" \6 n' E/ i9 ?0 R3 OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 L/ J, H7 [; e( H: C1 K5 b5 |1 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! ~8 u- j- h1 mSeeing the sky content with its love
8 H4 f) J  _: BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 ]* k% p& Y9 Y8 {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  J0 H, f2 z6 I9 U- F  l! iEvery other word you utter is love
. H& v& e! ~; l- a6 d8 XI really want to know just how much you love me
/ L& X6 J3 ^% k' I* E$ s1 hI love you I love you with all my heart
4 M6 g1 P. A2 _9 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; [5 U  F' j6 J3 n) ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' F/ U$ x8 i" W$ r/ z) a; TI regret not dying
% R# v2 s2 M2 S4 n+ K0 _$ TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ Z) O$ i# A, F0 ~* V/ i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& P! y9 }' q- G; E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 \( x! y( U+ v: X6 a+ a5 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" D! o1 u- O$ U! r. K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 t* i3 P) G' Y9 j( I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: v0 G$ J; |2 ]* |. ~8 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  M0 N" S& J8 y" E. P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, [2 ~: m/ \9 ~2 f- p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 r5 @* Y3 l* e7 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% m0 \5 U% T& r7 c% B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, F# C. P0 Z' ?* ]1 X& v: h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  S3 J% T8 U. }( ~) O1 e9 s<P>你无需担心</P>
: V8 O6 s# m; U* l1 B, S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 A/ d9 Z2 H5 b6 g* U7 d4 F# }! k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! r$ M% M% K9 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% E$ b( \% Q) f- o; P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 {9 n% {$ L. D& y' _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- V( z3 P; L2 y, O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  p& P- O0 d: ^8 E9 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 I5 K  A3 d, f$ p6 F  A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. G& O- [- u' I" Q6 ?1 V- k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- K0 R: N3 O% L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 g( m! i4 e& X3 Q. c) {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 ~3 l0 \3 M" b* _, L& t! I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 b' i5 S4 w7 \; P2 W/ ]) }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! ]  P5 L4 K5 j+ ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 o7 P; z- \; W; r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) F9 Y2 ~" x! y! M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  ^; m: T5 r1 M0 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ C6 J3 D6 ^! W/ g: E1 k9 S; _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 l: [3 D9 l# b, V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 m& k4 `: ~  [/ \$ z9 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>