【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 n, b1 G; d# a. c) }" [1 H) uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% K4 {6 |  L- c3 ~* C$ T0 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ x$ i6 ?% V& Q- `2 X2 [5 }, SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 d: A' N, _4 |4 N( A) M* e* c' JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, e9 w, X  u7 J( P3 G0 r/ p' p, rYou needn’t fear anything
, y7 [, Y' X; IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 _6 n6 ^4 w) V; H/ Z# l! \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 t. j2 U/ f. F8 zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 U" H5 A. `' YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" I+ {- ?5 V% t$ W7 R# eI regret not dying
1 x& U' t3 H* F( Q6 s% j. FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 L* }$ t5 g- M% Y, V: r. S2 jWith such a tongue as yours,
6 f0 t# M( w% X) W  ^: t* MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  E" U$ M/ B* v: N' @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% y# {. c$ B' V; y0 y. x& c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 M( W( q. {2 x  v* h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' w2 r" j4 H3 z2 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* W' R* K, {* l6 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 o6 \" Y, [5 x4 B+ G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* H( Z* u$ z) ^) m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% ^) B! |$ Y5 N) l; U6 X) i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ V1 ]" ^: X+ c6 v: h/ i' l. m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& O: ]. g6 Y/ l8 }! h8 w# v& S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 L3 N5 b7 S2 I1 w2 \  d- h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 Q' G0 P6 n: ~+ }6 H( N# D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: A$ ]9 ]1 ^( \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 k( A( X& t/ Y  e- P- X) d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. [% r% h9 @8 T5 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- m9 C4 p) I" }/ d2 q( ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: X3 H7 r- F, p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' [4 d5 x* z, J* q8 ]" i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; W# v; S4 i% b% @" l+ p+ }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ \. ~# ?3 S: S4 j+ y2 f5 T5 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 b/ M" C5 i: p' X1 s; N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: P# c% g% D8 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, u* w1 ?1 E! `. X8 O. @5 C. D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% I! d5 p0 r9 z# V$ ]7 ]( A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- l& \. q  D0 i/ F8 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. j  s' E) `# @1 g: b. `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 P) g- W: N8 H4 d% {) i6 ~" v) {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, P$ C) a6 B9 q& r& _9 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 t/ k: X$ n; n) P" \/ H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>