【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  t2 I$ z+ Z6 E$ ?$ W9 c: D歌词我附在后面。
8 G& I# p) ~: R6 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 Q# Q* J" ~: S. E: ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 u# ?* g! b( g* w3 L* yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 m, v. F1 w& o( PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 b) E' W5 h2 FI love you I love you with all my heart
8 x4 {2 _5 t) V5 L9 CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 `  i/ u6 I! ]3 ], ~I want so much to see inside your heart
- m+ [" J2 G5 I1 Q: ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ v8 U& X6 S9 j! L8 HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 t; e2 L! y  W/ M% {- ~# t3 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ O# z' X9 v2 t: }7 S, }# ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" x, E$ s# _6 F. q7 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& p* M8 q) q# k: g: k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 ]. Y. f* T! c) L* `9 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- Q6 r! x) E5 s; y0 t; l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' L) I' f, t* x8 _* M  s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 G1 p! {/ N8 u3 }: h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. u0 c3 o9 j/ O9 ^& J4 M" j" k- y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# N* T, v( y9 t# x2 q, F/ S2 H% b8 u* |<P>你无需担心</P>
$ t3 C4 I8 `, O3 Z5 \5 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& Y# K" C. [- `: p7 S* G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 P- Q6 ]) z, {( P% b0 h9 l  u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 o+ S1 t$ @8 U, F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) ]. t2 E8 |! c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 u' m+ u1 _! Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ O* K  _( T% x5 j! R( j: |3 E& [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 }- D1 I0 y" |: A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) Q5 g) O  g& s3 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% X5 H4 V' K; M% d  ~/ {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 V6 y3 a) e: R( q; f, q9 `% r$ P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ G9 |+ H+ a: f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ q2 O7 G3 \1 X  B1 K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ v" ^9 _/ r/ e: v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& t3 n" t8 h; x+ \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 }% Z* T0 ~8 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& {- Y' O. k3 K+ Y5 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 \# f5 H" v4 i% o( y5 z1 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, O) _& l- Y$ \7 g) o' `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 t2 H# p/ d' t8 i我请你剖开它

  i2 Y: x  A' h0 X! @' }( J* v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) t& o0 v1 ~, H9 n) @& U- d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>