【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. b! i1 F. U2 f7 X: n- ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; @* O/ H! K! W* j4 D$ tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, t* j7 e: V" D1 X* N& b1 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 f* k0 a& @/ J  Z( IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 m* i& e: F/ t5 r. }' H* v+ K! U8 gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 ]! ?! E  o9 G. ?: T/ N$ k' ^1 FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  x4 J% u3 g$ b+ W7 V6 P# `6 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( e' H. T, s' O  R' J$ _/ g8 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" n) _" b7 S3 F4 u& |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* Y" x1 W+ N. y% N% m& C0 U* ]% yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( d$ b# J7 r+ P. Q* \! BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- F8 Y/ m+ y4 m' ~9 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 ^' s0 j( n* F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 i: P  i' h5 j- Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) U) V! N- v1 C, R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 z$ v) k1 o2 P" F! A1 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 K! A% P1 O8 I" i: C: D! @0 ]/ {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 D  D0 q; `2 M& E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, B) z& x7 {( `9 v+ ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' ]* z' P3 j% f6 G) x# p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 p4 I7 k  v! ]2 ?1 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; z$ ~' @" {2 g3 K) [4 K9 L" e3 y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 Z/ e8 Q4 O5 |! E* [, }! _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 r! g- _; [; R0 }5 M; T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 v8 U$ e8 r$ M6 E6 E( ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- \" k# @" v, o+ W9 H, g; o9 k* J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: T. U+ A3 _* K2 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 k1 _$ D6 |2 p: {" k( {0 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 Y; r  a# ]8 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# J5 N$ Z  k" K2 u2 P. l3 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 N1 W; r1 H. t! a2 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& Q% x8 k+ s8 `4 `+ _' T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; }) R' R8 i6 B5 J! D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 b+ k3 D! N' A  E' [3 ^5 Z4 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! f- N  `0 P+ r( K3 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: j+ }9 l7 W* h* p' T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! Q8 i' ]4 K$ t# j& N1 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 }8 e. {: P/ E0 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 [1 b) ~4 p, {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% h7 q" {8 X6 e$ j1 }: p; l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) x8 D, i, a! `8 J- u3 V. O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; K1 X3 ~$ j! o  @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 D' i1 d5 ]5 B, K7 A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ N* g4 M$ R6 s3 X6 d我请你剖开它

; m2 V$ j" f- G# D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>