【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) x  P1 |* {+ i5 F7 g" g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, }' e3 s5 X9 Q+ s+ u! A5 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 n! C# S  g0 N2 ~$ }. f+ QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  [5 P. L( h5 g9 \& e$ iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' {4 A; p0 d' T" N# C$ x' PThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 R& D3 x# A# s. Z% Y: L) ]With the moon kissing it every night
* ^# m9 F7 x$ T  hSeeing the sky content with its love
; d6 Y6 y2 n) |2 B; SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! l3 _* v# z& T( H3 sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! Y' v4 \% w/ L  lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" Z2 w2 |) [) r! s: t* \I love you I love you with all my heart
* G+ {- U- O$ |; M8 UNothing can compare to my love
! D& V. r0 t( QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( C/ s+ P+ R: Z' \+ _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) @6 {& ~$ i: \4 XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( L3 o( w. O/ ~& N4 s7 \9 m0 ^- ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 e* @; S+ M+ j, \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; k5 p. j6 h2 R5 ]; Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 _1 h2 [3 e8 L( V+ m# L. {) [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, b4 p& ^* U3 {) H$ Q% M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ k; R( q* _0 z. Y) F4 R9 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& W3 q4 w5 N8 N7 B1 k0 A: i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ p, x8 Y) F, f3 O' C# L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" `, d: [8 a8 R9 a/ L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ I0 [  r8 ^+ i1 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 e9 g! P) M9 X4 m8 u  H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" o! l( f- B" ?. r9 h% o" r2 V! J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: u' m& o/ q4 _/ Y4 a7 k# A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 J$ z; ?4 l0 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- K5 K4 w2 T# @5 y  I, x6 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 O1 w, P" a' Y! k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# C" V( w$ ?, N  O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ D, t. A# f$ }" [. s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: T: r) \5 i$ q3 e% B! _0 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' g, M7 h9 O' n& J1 v3 R5 Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, x. [. ?3 a0 b" ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% ?4 x/ x6 p7 G. C8 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ [& p9 {( s7 y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# _4 T  a& r+ l9 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 O* Q: ?' n. e1 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 C& ]8 \! H* w" l' l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! b# }1 c1 p0 j4 Y% k8 u- H* H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ^$ |* M$ E. U  c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>