【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' G' d2 b0 E, |+ ]  K) HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( L) C, ^: N; K# G* QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 ?$ w0 }% b( ?- @7 Z% I: KThe sky is happy down to its soul
) W  O/ {( o( _- P% j) E" m% M* ?With the moon kissing it every night
& ?! l; V3 P. A/ wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 [4 ?  C5 b( ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: R% {) s5 j8 G( b$ tEvery other word you utter is love
4 R' @( {( y4 ]) R" Z" N6 L, YI really want to know just how much you love me
* r  T$ _. N( bI love you I love you with all my heart
; `2 T0 L% Y, ]; Z3 Y8 s; aNothing can compare to my love
  _7 p) N' e* A9 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 H' J' c, F" c1 M# gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& t/ @! @& H5 y: n' `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 Z/ @! l' ]* |8 l: WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- j0 D9 a5 D, i: I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& |7 i7 g# \% C& j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ I4 k9 s# M, {( A) d7 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- Q2 n# C1 n+ z( G& c8 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& I7 c- i4 f- i5 T( M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) A. X) q+ H& q& d/ x& x' X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 T; `! t6 e6 r/ q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 e$ t! Z3 }9 U. y1 H# D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 b9 c. T; d  Z8 V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ B2 U+ O& i' r8 p8 _( R! O- ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) J* R5 ]0 B' _" a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: C; j& e& G( A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- Y  g2 ?  e3 J+ R) G" b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: T+ I3 D# s8 o6 S' q' t<P>你无需担心</P>
* @. R! S" _3 n$ i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, I2 ^# A. i5 H+ K. `; A& r& Y  p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 D; z1 X( m5 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 J$ R  p! V! n9 U4 E$ h" f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 V/ P4 Q7 C2 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! T7 e8 Q2 Y: o0 D9 K. M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 F' d$ y) i' y. A/ \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( L7 K5 g. [# \3 P3 m2 e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" t6 p1 M7 Q( E. i; j$ E# w8 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 y) W. R9 j, `; @3 P$ a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# E. C1 Q8 u' E( G  s2 L5 i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! o- S  C; ~! {; g2 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' B/ [9 l% @* r, a4 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" I( W4 U6 A+ x( a) m  p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( \- J# X' Q0 M' x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ E4 |5 j- b: A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! Z0 p/ c+ `0 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 L' S7 }$ _. M$ s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>