【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* A+ `  S& W! G6 w8 G  S( o0 k歌词我附在后面。
$ ?$ }0 a. \& f7 i9 [3 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: g+ j5 H2 m. M1 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. f- U- H6 V! I/ n5 f( t3 f2 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 x, v  @& ~1 EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% T9 u  p6 a$ C+ }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 z% E0 ~8 Q5 w6 X; W, z* P% ?# QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 Q) g8 r# s$ ~$ @! ?, g0 u( XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' i0 d3 c! W" J& h  J" HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& @2 U! J4 H, P# I# u! ZI want so much to see inside your heart
' L% F, h; p# u6 {( j: a& Y0 M2 |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! m6 W3 ?' c, ]% cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 u: }6 A$ B& A' PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! T4 K; p; [  M7 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 Y# u% K* t) K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 S% M1 b, ]& _" x: u5 O! j2 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; q# h3 ]+ k6 u9 Q' G) S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 t4 Y) ~* g3 p3 a; Z% ]& H! n9 [4 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, V! h# l6 }2 d; f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; o( Q5 ]/ I! Q) ^, w* ]0 s. A  O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! A9 S: O0 t/ m2 E: Z7 v4 \) ]% }6 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' P! P" Q( z. O/ h  W  {4 |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" u( S- J' O, o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 b$ U, d, o- u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 e/ ?8 E* v( A" J  [0 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- {* d6 I4 I( `( N# \# H& f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 b9 ~$ e% L# P6 V- @7 a; K: e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 F) }. Q# `- e9 `2 Z% C$ X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: }7 X( m1 E# [5 M( m* v( v% a5 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: ~! D1 f' Y( z0 f% ?2 ^+ e* F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# s. n' R/ J/ P- ?% g3 y9 s/ S8 I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' l+ ^' n' s' p9 x$ S! q1 d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! W7 R2 n8 S! L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, L7 U  Z. e6 T6 A: ?! i& ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 b) [0 E$ G/ K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 s. c& i6 b% \) ], c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( b* X' Q8 r# l! E6 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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