【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* Q" V" V; ^4 s- d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ n4 E7 ^. ]- W8 w8 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, P# z- g" l1 M" b$ V$ HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! O. `. I$ G' y) W- j1 }The sky is happy down to its soul
) c. [# ~8 ~: B2 M0 [- x0 WWith the moon kissing it every night
/ x  d( F  w7 m8 `2 f! M" jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. H" P0 r0 |# \8 @9 b: a% KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 m3 c# a# m' O  {1 F2 AI love you I love you with all my heart
/ T( @6 l' y0 E. W0 JNothing can compare to my love
% R" }/ c/ |. D$ Y* nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 K: |# Z+ _* d1 A5 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# R. [8 w% M) k# D6 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ c: M+ X  @1 s/ x8 W9 O1 _% @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. G8 U& }% d( u8 D. z8 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; p0 m8 d6 g3 X7 `3 A8 N$ VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; `7 n% }! E# c) X9 d/ bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" H! X+ k' `3 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" g+ e4 D1 A% o. k/ B0 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: Q. L# g/ w- M) V7 u8 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 n" R5 n& T+ }; C  ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" u0 a  J: y1 T, r) U+ o* ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% k, j" X9 ~& G2 O: }* }) \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: I- {0 a) |6 f2 E! J$ h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. V* o+ V* V& {( @4 |/ z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ x5 P$ U  E/ T# y' K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 E6 C: Y* o$ e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ m  I+ v+ `$ p5 y: O9 W; W! N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) ?3 m  s: A3 W6 h% R' J' y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 _5 n: q! g" A8 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 H5 ]6 M! g. {/ @; P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 {( Q( U7 A0 W# z: k6 e+ t0 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ w# d1 [. q, R1 }: C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ C  {* |# @. e2 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  r7 Z, `1 M) g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 E. N, @' Z7 G; o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 d, o  ~' `  B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; `5 {# R3 D, Q1 N  K" }. Q" p, ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! u+ O" c2 ^2 d2 y; s' a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 }- S% T5 b' d# u, W' Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* g5 T1 \6 H* d5 t' H2 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 Z, w& [9 Q+ g( i4 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ e- X  W) R, h* I! v  f7 X0 p1 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

& G4 ^/ m; `* d% k$ t% T' N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>