【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) [! c2 {& T) N* r$ ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( K  f; f" {8 Z9 @- EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; A" g7 U, E" fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! K, b/ v* }  {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ O0 Q& i5 C* S9 s  _4 M$ uI love you I love you with all my heart
! S/ x/ s* }' p7 Z) YNothing can compare to my love
& i! W$ x$ U2 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 u$ {: w+ ~3 O5 c! x3 }I want so much to see inside your heart
8 r. {1 L( [! DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, R4 u7 U) _5 u; X2 DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) U0 T; ~" ]- ~4 d" g3 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 z( e' f0 _) A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 y" C& M+ p, k8 e% I) x, g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 N3 P6 L$ h* ^0 S) a; K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 |" N, U* h. k3 ^/ l' H& \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: X* F1 S! a( j. V" o8 t; K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 o/ t/ ]  R6 o5 m% ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, _1 a3 P9 [8 _1 `" t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) N; I1 N. q' Y4 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 `( Q8 U+ I6 ?* v9 F0 G5 Q0 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 [+ h5 Y! u0 ]+ G* D5 }  Z<P>你无需担心</P>
+ G8 y* ]6 G, o1 m9 b! U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! z0 N' F  N( p, h. e! c) R1 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  t" R! b2 o, e: G9 n% X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  s9 T, X, y$ F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  ~% ]9 {2 _3 O& Z+ W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 }& F* ]# V" V8 f5 j- O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% b( u1 h8 U  `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  x% x: O  G0 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 C( Q( t8 \4 c% x" w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 ~" j# o5 x4 R* r) x+ ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! D+ O. ]$ m7 I2 x0 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& o% u  c' p$ [* y9 W' e; l<P>I regret not dying</P>
& M1 r' u! W" u3 E, I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, j. G" \! j. H8 K4 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: ]1 M; D/ X5 }# Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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' X6 L* e5 b2 q' I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 M% y! Y( C3 A* ?. V0 D7 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>