【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% V$ C# h* o# ]5 X3 s6 k' A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 a; G) s5 h# u0 `* FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 p% [! g$ T( e, V( r7 f& F! {The sky is happy down to its soul
+ C! e2 {: S, Q1 a" j7 f& g* J8 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( `4 P0 D8 T: ]$ S7 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ ~# `* |/ _3 a% Z0 XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, r- P7 T) m$ W  @4 O2 V3 \. ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* `- q9 Y7 b& [6 }I regret not dying
$ K" m. d: ]. X1 e& {) r- R* zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" [  ~' d% u8 n5 c9 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) J' M$ Z# c' h/ V5 k; F* GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 l& M" {! A. }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; t* Y# F/ t$ X2 k9 z# c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ G4 k- L: ?/ B' b3 \7 V/ t, H/ g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( x9 g+ i) e0 Q: E- Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# b: ~, T' A' m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 Y4 L+ I" m$ f0 f4 G5 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, S" X$ f3 a. P- [8 H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 d- j+ P% F( T( u. U. T# U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) ]. [4 h4 v) i. C1 i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* @: h3 B6 C+ M5 K, S/ P7 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ Q+ l! l$ [7 r4 b5 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  f$ r' d8 {8 r  ], L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. K! }0 _! X  B* k! E" x1 u) D- m3 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 T: ?  A2 s8 F! i; Y0 \! K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ {/ q9 s/ a4 j9 D! ]$ X) X0 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 h2 P; l) O. m4 z3 Z$ `/ c8 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  ~9 D6 U$ J! {4 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% C) V, ~8 m) S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 j# S6 }: \' ~4 t( e) r) h+ k0 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 w3 p7 G8 E. ^  [$ j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ h: e3 \& y& X6 y5 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 y' q7 D; I/ R* p% r  `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 d' r3 C" T2 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' F. F' A% v3 E; L7 C# f( w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ d& Z' Z+ G  y$ q2 ~4 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 B% q- y6 l0 U/ Q/ ?: k! \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& V; \7 V% }( j% P# T, r- L& k4 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 d; ?  f+ c% T2 U7 y) ], O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 r6 V, j7 C5 O+ ~7 Y/ E, o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 Q( G0 w+ [$ A- t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>