【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* v2 Y2 P. R( }( IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" y, n6 z! J5 o: |" e1 F1 z0 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* g- z- R, O, ]" C& u- a9 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ o9 z( i4 b+ M: i& ^+ WSeeing the sky content with its love
  n* V$ l! Y6 X" b  |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  l% A! f' ]4 D( M- c8 k7 J; jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 s+ t+ X) P+ s. O  Q$ Z( dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 z  ^) [+ S& z& rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 b$ L2 Q  Z: Z- h' _3 m3 R$ t6 H( OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! z) c6 v/ M, L' B6 |3 ^With such a tongue as yours,
4 e6 u2 _6 i) I9 M( iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 P) D/ o2 g$ o' j# {0 F# E: H2 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: z. S% e5 w3 k+ u# O5 f% [  u( K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! P: G/ Y9 E; p, p2 T" S9 @: Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% G$ V4 a7 U9 c4 S) _5 M9 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ D! R: e& p3 t) [5 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, [0 x! p' X5 K6 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 a% y7 d! L# C6 O/ P+ x  d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 F7 p" v+ G% B! ]* J. b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( M( ]2 t! M8 d; `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 J: v9 C8 {. G% U0 o% N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( i/ h- g- R! Q% P$ g+ ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. H; _) _6 t# G/ A* _& Q* n9 f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ j6 G  X! t) j4 E9 [2 \) u+ @  [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ x% B3 R5 K: V" ]7 l+ V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 ~( M; n( F8 n: d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- o9 c, @  h) ]) ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 W, g# _2 f$ ~6 w8 c( g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  y9 p+ V- W2 F2 p$ ?" W' E1 T4 s8 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" ]: ~; ~2 u4 E' b. l/ ^" E7 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 c% h5 G# Y2 t, @# d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' V9 k+ D5 i: ^3 _( x4 h, o  M8 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. {! L' S" s3 y5 k# v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ y; w7 [4 `& i, }8 E/ g1 f+ A, ~' v; l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( R, i3 p5 M, i9 K  y. U2 R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>