【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! F( v, ^- X* U6 v2 s( w2 u! t* Q8 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) s5 A9 M* ?6 b, M, V2 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" Z( |& s+ N" \+ ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% A: P8 }- x! J# @- T) C5 U# _The sky is happy down to its soul
3 C+ P; d' V" @. j% x+ KWith the moon kissing it every night
4 U2 C4 @. Z0 c8 o- Q9 ^! WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- T$ V/ L& p; tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& o& K" Z! P" ^/ Y7 W9 hI really want to know just how much you love me
( v& ?' ~# V8 I9 Y1 QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: \. R( s+ Q, d! g# C8 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# B3 S: m3 U8 ^+ N8 f6 }) XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) ~2 X1 K& \' ?- m+ J6 HI regret not dying
9 v0 `  S2 K& }$ v& z9 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( n9 J! ]) l, [5 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' ]* R6 B/ v- E0 J: F5 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 k/ a8 t$ x: S. W; \& u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 y5 j( O+ y" n- x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 }+ G2 o* f3 O* C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. j6 l( }3 I' |/ W/ Y8 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 k4 @. t0 g, f) A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  O" }  r% D( {2 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% s/ R) p! ?+ A& h. d2 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' b7 g. `& r+ a) J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" Q! x! C' ?; B/ T! P, A) d, B3 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 h6 z, Z6 j) d' h* f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  W4 w% a9 z! E" @0 b" ]/ B2 p- q# i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ ?' q5 L( [: ]* ~, k  S; |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& ~& U, P' _' {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ x* E# }% a1 H/ x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" p- Y. x) O2 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ g( P3 H- l- D& J6 J# q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. _9 v0 T5 L* U' h9 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: z7 q" t7 I! ?& z# J2 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 T, c, _  ?; ^0 Q3 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 O; N" y1 K- ]$ _4 M9 @1 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: `; M. q7 z4 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ I% |: B- I& h( I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ @& y: h6 a$ w- |5 f  ^# L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* Z# @" D$ ^* I* K9 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% X2 a- s8 p: n1 M2 i; Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% o# B/ M- R; l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>