【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  c5 G8 b3 B2 Y  M& _+ Y- U9 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* x; s) G3 y4 ?; KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ o* ^$ K0 D# G, dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 Y1 ~( Y4 g$ @. e( C2 K# YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) ^% a, \9 j) @. D  @The sky is happy down to its soul
  z! E: ~$ f- QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& I) S( R: W. W/ SYou needn’t fear anything
+ I" M# w' E  e# W( {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 p9 S( U( j. t3 T; f, K& n9 ~! AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ Y% a4 i4 t3 b4 a; [* l4 s7 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ ~) K1 d* A9 }- O  I/ uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. V3 [) o, q' o. L# u! [; L* W" p0 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ Z4 s4 V3 r* Q+ GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 q$ _  n. M& W" G5 U! |' {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& p( d. K" [5 Q) E! @; |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( {, m0 ^7 M( |( j3 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. x9 W8 Q4 d- w: d8 ~9 _! g4 `0 [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ m% X1 p- ]3 a0 F$ u) B, K" j# ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 {0 k5 W+ u6 t1 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* [9 T% E- }, `! P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  T+ m3 M& y2 H: B" s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( ?# n) @  y* Q& t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; V- j6 Z4 I* z/ i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 I; F* @% p1 x. T# v4 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ W$ {) ^: B3 ^8 O5 P6 b. t) r<P>你无需担心</P>
/ h, c0 f4 h3 N. I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, ~1 {1 @' l+ h0 U; U3 x7 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 U/ G1 W# C. I. ^; e5 s6 Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- N" d( E& e1 R: ~# G9 l  x5 t  r& f, l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 y* l. X6 e$ A8 M, u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 p6 K9 q! k2 s4 x5 C1 ?5 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) V; r& D8 ^; G# |& g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- w, c& }9 ?0 A; s  M/ o( T% J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- A" b% n4 y& q4 e7 F% l6 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  L: Q$ T0 P: W+ J/ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ Z+ X9 [/ ^& y' ~; ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ S! p( ^% _3 i. _4 J" G) g% Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ f( U: N7 B" Q& r" n, \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 j; M/ ]2 e1 f, R# Q; k- A. C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; B4 b* X$ @( n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, Y1 ?' l  e! Z7 V1 e6 I. X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ E# v8 Q, N' d, L* B; A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* m* ?0 h. N1 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 W4 p, I1 g; O6 T; |% F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 S, E8 g% w  @/ S" o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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! T; C6 ]+ Q! M# j* g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>