【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! t* {. w  o* Q+ H5 ~! nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; C! v: J( `* s$ oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ }! v7 `  t* W1 U; A7 s1 W: ]1 B& @$ WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 Q' @9 O' q' B3 ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& Q) `4 }9 [% i+ xI love you I love you with all my heart
  z3 C8 v5 n+ J3 Z+ Z) |, ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  S* I! S  z0 \, NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: F& _) ?0 S1 v0 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* {: j4 k5 ^( A, @I regret not dying
3 f4 e2 {. p) _& [& ~; ~& @- b7 ?$ BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: ?0 L6 G/ m! V/ h" iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 T& ^8 R4 {; g" H4 X( [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( \! r: Q1 q6 x( B' ^5 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% {% A9 k( {% M2 e0 j5 ?8 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" `! u$ f0 n2 N* j8 f# T9 z" H' s7 P# t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. n1 k" O) K( A; G7 @4 E8 B5 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 w  y- O: A. D+ s, J  D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ t3 z4 X" H, j4 k0 s3 d5 z5 J0 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! h/ @8 O: r1 v/ k: s& f4 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ u$ Y9 g8 ]' A& a/ v! Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% v7 \1 }; b( A" e  T8 g3 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; m: L2 J$ O5 d. M) r8 C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 d! G5 k  H4 e4 J. Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( P$ p+ x& ?' W4 O' ^% g" d, Q6 H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( ~  [/ F5 v1 A) [; [: Q7 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& G* Z, H% M$ g  s2 Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 W7 y4 _. ]/ y0 _; m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: I# U/ g6 e0 z& ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 k  \5 {) B3 k$ S1 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& t7 P+ G& }* B7 s+ O+ h& G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) ?" g- V: a# u( N7 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- H( h* v' o" X8 Y: [$ s4 `9 ]7 c3 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* ]6 N( p9 y8 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 J; b/ v/ b4 Q& g3 e3 r* b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 _2 a; ^' j0 X1 n' {/ k5 V& x1 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' H; M5 S9 ?3 S* I% V. [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>