【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 z) Z* T% M6 v* o6 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
" q% o; B7 M6 _! O3 G# L* U; E& P. v# VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 C& j! X: h1 ^9 ?( lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 X  E; [* R  S& R: y! J$ E3 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 Q- B$ y+ z0 \! l: M% pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 O5 O3 N/ [; X: P* eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 x& u2 R: y+ q4 T  H) _0 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ a6 q6 H7 u+ JI want so much to see inside your heart
) R1 k& o: b* z' w$ B: ^; vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 J7 K0 e0 X" |) O+ o7 a1 dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 K$ ^& j) u1 EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 [7 l' t& w7 x, u8 u  cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 h7 }. f5 i( k" f  ]! `. ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! H3 m5 P' ^" A8 P& `8 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' e9 a- b& W4 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! s3 q0 T& o% y. C: e. \+ e4 J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 U' ~2 V' @  `/ N/ D: w9 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( C" f, ^4 Q  M  q* H) t) g2 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! |7 J' x. t2 p0 Y9 ^' N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 U% q7 B2 V' b6 X8 u% x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 W$ ~7 F# b7 n" n: F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ @4 p8 s$ ?  k* b9 ]1 R$ n2 g1 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) r; a, \' q+ z# ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: A# a& V" a1 ~% C: F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. d7 C4 M" @/ ~; N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ]. K$ r4 v) h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 Z' Y  k* D: o. W8 ^7 j5 ~# O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  l9 e! {% u. k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ t7 X7 [% `# z$ B4 {1 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& r8 L9 c' [0 ?! ?8 |& D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) o( A3 A! u- @# A2 Z) O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# @* x) b9 R! w5 h4 S6 S5 p& z" g( Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" w; w% o8 C! Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ p0 B) E, {7 ^7 _* Q. q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; H; n2 g) h0 o2 T3 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( v; c$ c( \/ l! X2 q0 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 P* L& S7 Q' @& q; J* y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) T0 G" V0 j% u  b6 _7 E/ f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 m. i& f; t! j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ U  M  }+ h5 u# p) B我请你剖开它
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6 F& [$ k( m' a& u! Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>