【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' T8 c6 d% }1 r, T3 N2 h6 M+ s歌词我附在后面。
. t/ @/ H2 X$ s2 e4 y3 P, a( ?2 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 h( A, W: e" X- E; [The sky is happy down to its soul
& Y) k4 O" C( f! aWith the moon kissing it every night
9 U0 Y% l2 t9 D6 ^  GSeeing the sky content with its love
1 T6 [4 n$ v  v+ [8 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 [! L! [# e5 W+ c- V$ J9 @+ u/ EYou needn’t fear anything
  {" R# G8 Y  z% |' m) X! A# QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( ~& [" k3 x: w& MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- Z& q) H2 r9 D( u* \/ c) @0 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
% |6 z0 a! N, r9 z& aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ v, {( F# R: ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" B4 V" u6 t% n. U; u+ XI’m still filled with fear
2 W6 g, I8 b0 F+ q$ wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' a* q# w6 b* K6 @) DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! r: K& s4 c9 @3 T2 D  C' l; ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  k' p2 U. a9 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' p, E% n. i% ]' m8 R0 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; ]# K% O+ n3 _0 q$ t# f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: Q/ `5 k/ v- Q% t( j7 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 W5 R2 C. c  R4 g" m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 _4 A2 D9 D) ~+ e$ D, {+ k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& L  M" g- E7 [& b) M% h4 V( b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# G3 O" _- V; W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ C6 w4 A1 A; J" J: i$ s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 N6 R1 l6 y' ]/ h1 N4 B/ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! }+ u6 |+ X/ ~0 Z/ s! r4 e9 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- m. |0 g+ F2 C9 t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ P4 W3 V+ i0 S! B) Y4 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* J, Y0 G& Z7 V% J) ]% l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, ~9 R9 c- U- F9 h& {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! {" y' H2 Y6 S1 `$ V1 d2 i" g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ L3 S2 z9 D# h. v: `- t: z7 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- s" s) w+ f2 @5 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 X( W1 I: b/ A0 Q" `$ Y  E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 a5 a! m) Y, ~+ X0 b4 ^! L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ]2 ?, P5 L: c& a# ?  t( o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ X- X, E" H  \6 ^8 i  B, o' a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 ], D4 e; |# R' }* c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; p. t4 Z$ K0 x: d, C# X6 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# s7 j2 g6 h9 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! V! ?' j+ f$ e  w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>