【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, [9 O  S3 h/ K% G歌词我附在后面。
# H4 B. U9 ?- t; KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: F- ?4 V7 F+ w+ u+ _, u7 V: NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  J3 m9 E* W' b: A+ R, @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ Y& ~  Z+ ^( n1 N# vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 g; C# a" F3 u: a4 s. }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" j! B1 X7 [9 s! ~; hNothing can compare to my love
% I- }7 J! A$ P8 Q1 ]4 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ \; r4 h& V) |3 f! A& N) p9 W# ^, nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) L" V  Z- `/ q* e! `: p) YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 M/ \" t; K$ _; t' u0 p/ wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 P+ I' G; n. t: A/ _& D$ t/ Z0 J$ SI regret not dying
0 J( }5 h8 c9 d0 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 ?8 H. H# ^4 j. U4 E. p% N! U% jWith such a tongue as yours,
2 d0 ]- X( U- e. \3 P' I5 }- b* a4 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  R7 i3 j$ |0 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) H1 A. w: Z* y2 m! H5 J* A) ?; G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 K7 E3 Y# \, m0 E2 q+ R- `5 o  _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! e9 g+ H5 S8 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: e# c' f# d6 w' V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 |) T- J' a/ h& n1 F! w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 d1 d* P: _7 q( w0 p( H( Z- L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 K. N$ @1 [- i: {2 P. A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) s( ~! M) @" q& _4 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ C' J$ Z9 C; ^* k( {8 s- q- G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* ^- J4 y* K1 {# c5 p" m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: v9 v" |! y- j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ F% H6 O2 F2 S( G1 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ ~& w0 s% o- ?# U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* m* C8 o6 D3 k+ J' L* P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ ?; d, U& C2 B* q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! |" J* ]% J, B& P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- g5 a3 b* ]4 M( _, `! U" r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 e7 w3 z/ c/ `% K  M) w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, w% W# ]: F2 p) T0 o' A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ V# Z, }3 e; C0 d) Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 W2 }4 c! ?% T, o" h/ K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 J; ~& D  W4 T7 `8 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) m: w% I! X7 D7 b% ?3 F. k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 [0 a9 n% f, |1 B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) M# ~7 |1 z9 Y% m/ A8 d* Q  ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
- ]* @, y4 U- k$ f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  u& l# ~4 d9 l  v7 b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 x- Z! S( P2 ?7 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>