【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ N5 F4 B  o/ b# d4 N9 j+ NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 A0 f4 B! S( h3 z8 U# @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 t, V' B6 F0 ]! `6 _The sky is happy down to its soul
9 Q) }$ ^+ S! g' ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% F$ H4 Q, G1 C! P" [% A0 a: ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 X" {% u+ G  b6 V& g; @You needn’t fear anything
) D' V  ]5 p8 ]4 e" p* VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 w  ^% c/ T! H) ^/ C- d/ dI really want to know just how much you love me
- ~2 b; b$ a* r+ I9 |# c/ EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 ~4 w6 [! \- ?8 p& j4 Z# WI want so much to see inside your heart
$ j1 q" G0 J, E4 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- P. i% w& N8 H; G/ W9 O+ p3 E9 sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- Z8 n$ u- D/ M5 NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 J7 j" N- G% X" h" SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 l4 W6 h1 k6 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: y7 D6 g: @8 q  x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) S. _' y( E, q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. U0 g: u2 G6 y& A, I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. l' w, }. f5 u7 X8 E2 f% ?% X( g) q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  w: L2 v# q+ ?- A3 U; E  w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) o" q+ S/ i% a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 ]% v& M4 m* d. Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 @$ w. d1 u9 q% \$ h* M& W<P>你无需担心</P>
7 T5 B! h  N5 P: k7 F" M* [# s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 V) E3 a" m8 b/ K2 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ D- h6 e0 {! D3 k3 \# Q  {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& a9 Z1 Z8 g2 i( c5 k3 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' i* u9 E- M2 }' Z+ d4 Z+ h% D% X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  e- V8 ?9 P! s/ T9 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 v2 s& F& b1 _. ^; }( @/ V1 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 J2 V9 b% o6 w7 F" j6 g/ I, O8 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) x' @( r) ^5 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 `% F$ Q! Z2 e0 S" ~4 E' [. b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( R9 f+ x- K- j# R7 u6 {1 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 c* _$ i, l" S: {) V1 n  R. m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 f' L6 j7 j/ W, ?2 F) u( ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) d  e+ x& u# O4 B' `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 ?2 q- g3 P9 }' q7 W* x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 E1 O+ o! ^! Y5 P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" L9 ~" R- c4 P5 x  _6 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& L# b6 C6 M  Z8 a; v, ]3 ^! X- F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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) z* S% V8 ]' n% s3 L, i  q5 f" k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>