【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. Q- [( H; Q9 z: {$ ^( YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  S6 x7 v* X' T& A  U  {2 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 b) ?, [: W( n& Y' IWith the moon kissing it every night
1 j$ g' u9 _! ]) `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, i/ s, d  V! |; `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ A3 c2 i/ K7 O( U0 F& p0 lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' H0 ?  J  Z0 A6 X% K% V4 wNothing can compare to my love
7 _0 V/ h) h8 v( K9 V$ |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ U! [+ h- U8 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; F- I6 ^, f* H, b1 HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 e; G. @$ T: G1 Y0 `9 p( gI regret not dying
# ~) D% C7 [; F7 M/ O( i. \# K0 EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, T; \1 ^6 a) q( q3 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( z. `" b& P1 x2 T0 Q9 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 w0 I/ F. I! M) ?" v/ s* ?6 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! |" K+ l9 J& [0 l6 a  ~) h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 g- s- |  ~+ I5 h4 P4 e: y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# v6 j: U+ R8 ^' l7 U0 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, c( |4 ^" g# s& E, r( _) |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' l( }, N5 y3 {  |5 p4 t# E<P>你无需担心</P>
7 }. O) J+ N- m* C* W1 U9 x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* ~1 r' ^- ?( [% u$ W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: N. q  f2 Y( h6 S9 k1 v+ y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, W. |# R4 W. h0 W! J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: B. Q0 `& T# C( Q/ A7 H- L. k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- F( n3 D6 k" J. N6 |: T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ O) v! Q3 }- M- M$ C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 b5 u7 k- ~, K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 U& [; r5 ?4 ^' p" _* {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 k. }8 G" h4 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* ~- V8 t7 l8 `  b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" _8 C$ h8 \8 d2 i8 T  Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- q! v4 U/ x  ^6 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 Z( a# H3 f0 V4 ~) }! H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 f% v6 U# d2 N; w1 [3 D7 o% H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 q3 R" t; A6 N1 T! h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 g/ W! V- d: I( q& ]# s% k2 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% F/ ~: `* n$ s$ D2 p  J7 j/ F5 Z' l我请你剖开它
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9 y% d0 J& t8 ?9 B  f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>