【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! k  v) d  Q! xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 O8 R; O" J5 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ x, O6 ]( d6 c: r, hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' J+ d  z% V! m5 t* y: {7 [' y3 `$ \You needn’t fear anything
  |8 g2 a, E6 }- f' HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 G# }" E; a$ @( A0 kEvery other word you utter is love
% H9 b! c9 K8 [; E7 k  kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* e$ V3 P+ U6 H% `2 q/ hWith such a tongue as yours,
) \, O% |4 V& P# `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( O7 _2 z6 a! iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- r0 I9 s# _0 d# \: n$ R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' |2 I; u% v" z& I  c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 Z5 t- k( D% F$ ~+ j, `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- v9 v" T9 T& c# X2 G9 k2 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 @5 t* @* P, N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- B. I1 o- d; U* ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# p8 Y, S( h& ^6 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 _0 N0 @) u; Y% H5 I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% k8 Q" K$ S. ^' d- d) n% \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' C1 I! r7 l3 L. R: S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  I. o8 m! _9 Y7 c7 z& c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 e, W+ d2 ?" T( @0 v6 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ e! @5 c3 F5 W1 E: R& E) Z6 d3 r9 ]# N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 E7 Y6 V1 Q9 D5 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; c! i. ~& Q0 j: m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" m" z, }$ Q& `$ t8 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) c, z+ j% |" ^; I2 V1 ^: |; }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% z$ ?' ~8 [8 `4 e- C- ^8 }/ T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 X! x3 G- q" k0 S2 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ W6 s" T0 p1 }' |6 f- a1 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 c6 S3 M: ?2 ?1 B& N1 p) ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
( z; s1 q% i3 d$ N. l4 P$ i3 X2 x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' w& ]* ?1 A7 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! a' w' L7 h" m8 N4 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' {  }  R0 S6 [* a1 o+ R) c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ r" Q% D* o& `! N* u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# M0 I: J% ^! y  o$ o( B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. D4 ?' ~" |* E6 D6 f8 r: k) S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* A1 p% [5 a- I: z7 K$ c/ H* @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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' I' ~3 A9 f5 L  {$ N0 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>