【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  i8 s0 P* r+ H. X+ K# [7 S. ?* DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ W$ K% s! F4 A' t: r/ VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( _3 I! T1 M9 Q0 F1 o7 L# uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" X# }! U& J* v, `+ vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- w4 m+ s9 h+ k, B: }! H" rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" y+ \3 D( D+ Q# J* D# {/ bSeeing the sky content with its love
6 j$ y3 \) w/ j" _8 y+ [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 |5 D% b: s7 Z* m. ]3 N$ nYou needn’t fear anything
/ Z$ S) ]* _' mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' s6 v7 U/ t# s! B) R5 s3 C+ wEvery other word you utter is love
' R: n! q4 y: b" L  G* `2 f- KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( K; A& {/ P- Z3 y) p- zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 x5 W# [' {- C7 t$ _I’m still filled with fear
/ b" W! L$ v1 ?" y: y0 z' U6 YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" e; H/ y7 P) o& T: K" n4 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 E# `) D% q, N* f# UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- D7 z, O7 A( y7 q1 x+ wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 O% m8 D# N) b; \  yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. C! u- Y1 w! {/ j; F6 x- O+ n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 o, d+ h) J0 `7 @# r+ J4 F$ s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; Q& D+ L0 r- A& ^/ b# E* g+ F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( |1 t, p, t# ~! F' F. R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) @+ k2 `: w* X1 a; |9 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 ?6 K5 |, t+ E& S' J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 ~1 m1 z- r, [4 N0 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ o( [5 p; v7 X* J1 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ j" u( y- X8 Q$ j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# x6 v9 p$ x- k6 i( C6 J$ Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. c( t% k/ a  F) ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ e4 q9 z6 f7 I+ a' J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( C! \( T' p) B7 {: Z# x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' h  B* `4 e3 L% Y7 M$ x- `1 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 I8 h: ]  L" M/ ?5 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 o( G4 x: L) C/ I; t3 ~1 h, W7 l& L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& ^- t" }9 L9 E. C9 l( j/ b. t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 c- I- D: U$ t1 e" S) ]$ a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! U! m; J# t6 S, M: I/ L' o* i& }, E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& k- S+ @$ }6 _& [" \" S7 M. o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 |% z4 c" d9 I1 K' l' x5 @* R+ x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: R) P! |# c* k# s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, u8 K$ E& ~$ J* ^/ ^0 E4 Y3 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ L/ k4 a9 F# i9 r/ k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 ?3 @" a9 i2 b4 c. Q8 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 W5 T2 z# T/ |<P>I regret not dying</P>
- t: O$ I7 Y2 P+ s5 @8 J" y" d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 \: q8 |1 w) c1 x% F$ w+ ~! r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# X! _4 |& {- u9 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! n: D6 |- f* L9 ]' f7 ~% Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: V" v0 K. K7 R2 o( J2 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- \7 E9 q+ w/ u" [" N" D: k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 v" t/ Y( X7 |6 c' L5 x% Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 [* f. p. m( h% s( a2 Y. U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 U4 s* o. R  Q) I1 p  u' R' @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& x  `  y2 F! L$ N/ h7 V3 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 n: W3 V" [, P2 m: Y0 v4 S我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 H# y; x  `7 b" t% |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>