【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 v" I" U# o+ BWith the moon kissing it every night
8 Q; P. R! W; ^: q6 M6 {" YSeeing the sky content with its love
' V6 x: L2 j# W  WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 l/ a5 o" A- A8 Z6 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 m2 m9 e( i/ a! j- \7 k- C. dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 I! p( `2 U. MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) f. ^: v, n" F* ]' xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 W; l5 K' d+ ^9 [2 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 N. G  c! y# W* Q+ gI’m still filled with fear
) a) g7 r+ _. y1 F* E  mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 Q( U! c/ \) I' K  [! L8 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 T. O! V, }$ @3 E; U! C- ~, dWith such a tongue as yours,
# ~& S1 T; M) f# w; aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 t* W7 I- R& _8 x$ X* Y: GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# q' H5 m6 n; FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# d( _$ ?; J! v( n$ N5 o5 D7 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' a' n2 x2 Z% e& U* J3 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! Y+ ]% U) h4 J$ L4 ^& i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 z  _+ q9 V  L$ n  \% {8 s9 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 X, y4 p9 {& ^1 B4 w+ s: q( |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% L* j3 e1 h6 `4 f2 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 ]2 [, o9 b) r' c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 H: Z) z1 S# l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) z! `' t( o* L  c, \8 R/ w3 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- ^$ ^% P& G9 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  W8 m, Z6 G8 v9 t7 c% m; \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. v* F! N  n/ q7 ^) Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 K0 ]+ L4 C% y9 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 p7 w, h9 h- g5 x' H5 Z7 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 T( E/ S  h: y7 O  x5 L* }( Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% z6 L% `7 c' a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: P% z; M  w4 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 ]( K8 P/ v2 m: h- `/ j1 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 }7 \& I8 V0 {4 d% v- n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ Q" c5 f* y; g2 F9 g" U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 s2 e- g- D6 U7 `# f" t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 p* _% P0 @4 W( T  f0 ]2 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 }, g& E$ N! j  W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  _1 Z! W; Y& P5 Z1 |' T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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