【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 D# t) Z# M8 _) Y, s歌词我附在后面。
# f# t  V$ J$ X8 U* EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) S# b7 U7 L" x& yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: m% C# I2 h% sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. ~* Y4 ]9 \" L7 wWith the moon kissing it every night
, Z4 u! M! B! j2 N6 d7 o- ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- \2 F, c( P" u# }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ H8 [6 ^. C) y/ IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 v6 w2 a2 y& K2 l/ N4 pI love you I love you with all my heart
2 C5 B0 C( G6 E) g$ a1 eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 \2 m* p5 ?# v! n) XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( c! k- ]0 v3 [  E$ T0 L- [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 t& S1 p1 Z5 M' ]With such a tongue as yours,
6 G( e" ~" r7 b: s4 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, r9 U  K) j3 @# V! J2 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# h5 |( ?4 D4 R( @( {; z3 ]4 v) WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' c& E+ O* g$ q$ r  N; h8 D2 t( ^' y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 ^- Z5 Z( i; e# Q+ W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 a8 E2 m+ y3 y$ g9 ]. X3 q0 M# s) [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" y- U* e  K" n  D7 ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: T( W# N2 o- Q; n) G9 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# a' Q, q7 H6 O6 W: [- Z1 s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% I2 Z6 y% z2 g: S# x: Y4 V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ h, @  U7 I( |+ F. c<P>你无需担心</P>
9 C7 X& @9 O! T( l  M" o+ m% G+ n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, C; _3 |; A  @8 Q& V* j7 f6 V7 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 E( u; ~, @5 T7 e9 f& Q' N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. r* w  o) v" E$ Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' Z6 O% \: L7 f1 f' v# G7 z1 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 L$ X: x1 C( |7 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ `! y- c# D3 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ ]3 M2 r4 Q! |! R1 q" z- m- v( v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- y6 G% ~9 W7 N' T4 A- q9 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: ]; g2 k$ ?0 A1 c% M3 I9 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 T/ R! X/ Q, V3 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 r- N9 ]: R/ h8 h( N  h) k* p. L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% @# A% _5 G7 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 {3 [- V* T  D; c' k" @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 u1 y4 {* {7 R  O8 C# H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! g$ j  L: t. b7 o2 g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 M3 \2 r1 f' o  P6 G0 G1 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ U: D* C! I( q1 X3 `# o5 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* v- u' ^& v/ y0 y5 \) X& ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

0 g: g% Y8 j$ F3 q: G; s% E6 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>