【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& c4 j: I! ^( ~& z0 ?! d- ?- nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) J* H  l! \- J- s9 f$ }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ w% M+ z2 c2 F6 p2 p4 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& \2 c7 q& C) }* Q% s# aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 p1 I, I0 D( v' @( A! o) tNothing can compare to my love
) [* n# W6 B7 d& R' vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! I. U7 i  I5 Z3 {8 I! MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, ^0 g( ]2 R8 F7 t' wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! G% E* p7 i  {/ ~/ l+ m: CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) A' [0 F. K" l; N5 c- U0 f! P$ Z" OWith such a tongue as yours,
: e$ C" j  Y: A$ _1 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' r7 H* u" L. `5 `! y; ~* \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. }7 Z! }6 a+ ^: ~3 U5 P" c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: r+ Y# c9 s, \: ]& }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 X* ~' ]9 _; P( A0 ]8 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 H3 Y! ]" O! ~  l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 ~" e5 D1 O+ l6 T! |) \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 A" l( H' j6 ~! H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 N  l" g: \8 j5 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ r9 S1 l9 c7 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: N0 b! V) L; x) X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 l) _) N7 I: y5 z$ X$ s, i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; A  u6 D1 @  k: [; V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. e( x8 Y- H8 y5 v8 X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; w: K8 q* d0 X/ {& ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% c0 v! \6 z( ^+ A0 F: S2 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 @, e) x2 X: D7 _  Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. ?- s2 ]! z: W7 i* W; I$ k& l' p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- `) ~, v" T' i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ U, @, R* }$ `) L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& I  ^' s# n" Y3 c) i( N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 {$ m% v4 y1 l$ O7 U/ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- L( z& s& y' R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 b! q# \, U" u; g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" T9 E; M. X( Y$ U# M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- S7 \6 W( C$ w1 j. S3 R+ E! x/ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 x4 k4 g: S# L0 Y! R3 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) N3 \9 {5 \- d- t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; I- W; G. H1 M7 N5 H1 p9 _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: g5 ^% H3 |! E0 T) |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 b1 W- o- z8 P6 ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' L) H6 m1 ~! i0 W5 f- J8 v4 h我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>