【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- A0 c- c7 _8 w) vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; x+ E8 ]2 M- i, B. b- u! vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 O( d+ c+ n7 O% C- O+ ?$ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* k8 [" i, _( c* e1 {3 S& i6 g* [The sky is happy down to its soul
* u$ k, E+ L) U1 I( G- KWith the moon kissing it every night
, S. H5 g% \  M4 Y/ l" x: \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 `  n4 q" `5 [- l% NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; w* d) t9 n' l+ }, PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 u& g5 q  w4 M; X1 f4 ]Nothing can compare to my love
0 H4 N! e6 D- P3 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 c+ U/ }& n$ C  n& {) ~" RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 F- L9 }4 [6 N' q6 `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. |6 [# x9 r0 UI’m still filled with fear
/ H* E/ b& N9 u2 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ U4 V; y( a; x5 _+ `: _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 m" T/ d8 v: o# gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* I6 p; ~/ Z# J) B+ ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& |4 E7 F2 h! u# N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 }2 K$ f% K$ n2 |3 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% Q0 o% Q2 v, R8 h- M1 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% a/ O1 C  J2 z7 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ \5 y( B0 ?2 P8 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ a" Y# C6 ^9 I* f% I/ G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  Y, X* `, w6 ~) e& F" U3 M+ [' m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ g8 ]4 e) G" S9 f% F9 O! n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# j( _" d. |6 v/ z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. U/ ~. P9 [" p$ _; {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 D1 a0 f5 f2 l4 ^8 x2 T) E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! ?. n- t+ t$ _' q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! l. ]% l  M& ?3 {/ t. C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- A& v% k2 R' D) H4 e+ @4 k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 {& ?9 F) t+ Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) u5 K8 k) u" S! G& t. k, e<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 W& @% t, Y* K/ H5 c. ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ _1 E8 X# L2 f2 Y8 M1 Y+ D7 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 d# h1 M2 l. M6 Z: e我请你剖开它

; U6 |  o6 ~; v1 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>