【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% ]7 V, I8 p/ F# P  I0 ~歌词我附在后面。
3 |2 V2 p1 W. v2 p  U& W9 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, V' r, [6 B) ?6 {5 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& T  }; b! g7 C& `/ l) KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' e! v8 ~: i* Z9 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ H* p: H; P" g$ W) }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% A- E: Y8 M  w. L8 ?9 z- @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- |) ?9 w$ s2 |* t% ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, _1 Z5 E  E- vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( ~+ O1 I6 ]" G2 j( E' pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 \5 ^$ s. k$ `9 M9 \I want so much to see inside your heart
& m5 z' W& l/ r( L" r0 u9 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, A' k9 V# E. X4 ?  ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" P  f5 x* E- K" i8 i$ aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: v" {; N8 n* }- B/ IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ `' g: C8 U' {  T8 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# e- c, ~, P$ |" Y9 [, fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' p6 L: g( T! k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) O+ d( }7 E( E. V, F  \( g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ G% o+ o) R& [0 ]) c) {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. W: B7 P3 [# J6 L1 k* b) O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; Z+ q' F' O' H% ?- C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: B+ q& j: ^5 l/ b& \6 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 p6 M+ y9 s* p$ U5 E5 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# q' @* D% G$ N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- e5 @: [: V9 _+ V3 _/ z* _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ O$ x$ Y) h- h4 u6 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# c1 x: g& a6 [1 T& a9 i0 |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, V7 M1 H* `/ q$ n3 g& k- j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 X6 [( r) S7 i1 m% [' U% u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 G2 N3 _2 h( Z' x& G5 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 Z7 _/ ^5 L  r( x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) p3 F2 b1 ^; i$ E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% I/ h+ ^" E5 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 ^- R; v1 L" r; @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 y! h2 Y( [; K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 M* A/ N* \8 ]( ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ p/ a! F) M% k" X. x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  o2 Z, l1 P. i8 y+ G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, g: i- z  J3 D- T' l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* X8 u; g8 L3 @* B1 `. ?0 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& T$ q  g; Z8 q  q; g2 |5 \$ O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# b2 p6 k9 |* N0 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. N! t% v, x4 E1 H+ A% Q! X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( T+ z0 }6 z( c" P/ c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 \* R* t3 ]  P6 l) H7 D. L9 f1 \9 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 X2 w* Q& T! b1 S9 z1 H& E9 u( w我请你剖开它

& y* f* i6 Z* N8 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 h+ V5 R1 N  G0 Q1 I: [, A+ k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>