【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 z/ s" q* D" l歌词我附在后面。
! t/ I' L& \; s6 @5 m9 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! m1 g9 k- y9 H$ aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. L, ~9 F6 W4 S6 Q# p) s) |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, @/ f" s: W, F( P# X. SThe sky is happy down to its soul
; L5 _, @# ?$ Y- MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" v' r7 W* P' ?1 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# L0 |# \- M; A- y9 w7 qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' ^* X2 f4 k7 ]$ I6 Y' MNothing can compare to my love
" x& |5 l) x- ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 C4 r" C+ ~8 M# U0 y6 i. Q1 b2 aI’m still filled with fear
. Q/ z& p$ Z4 l9 z- UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% r; q+ J* T% H/ O% c' z: E6 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, s  P. y# p. O! [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 P- O4 w3 H' E2 b& w! V3 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ F8 l0 M/ K% V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 l5 r  y2 K! f) [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 V. v& _+ H9 X- k" w9 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ {6 [- U# z/ W. U( y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# k, {; v+ X; x! E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 i3 {; ~1 ?8 i) ?4 q8 R$ Y/ Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! u" E. r) Y. C8 ?5 {) B: H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 W- _# R0 `6 J$ F! v* M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 z4 M4 q: \1 Y$ e! h2 C, y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) V4 f2 b1 P8 G+ E6 Q' }4 k! W3 Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- b8 H2 Z8 h( B3 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, `1 m) u4 l2 u* {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' S3 J$ f# ]  s* h" p6 F+ ], \* Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' M) r7 P. j2 K7 ^/ B5 L4 l  @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- e1 [) m( Y. A# R7 a7 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 Y1 g0 ?$ V4 e: U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 e$ }- K! y  e) E0 B/ N8 C$ ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: ~8 ?; z+ B) A- E3 @# O  z) ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# m6 I2 e# q2 w; r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 |. h/ Q; l  S* j5 i3 `5 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 ?+ p6 }  j5 m, m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* @( C8 w% C- r0 T; y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% J  }9 ]& O% v0 z" T4 ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* f: \; |) o8 q/ o( a& p( ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. J; r( w+ N/ J7 U; T+ u% G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ r+ x2 @5 c% z% P2 i8 g* z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* A, V% ]: t+ \* i' A& ~/ M2 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 L8 e7 L& R/ C. ^5 z$ o, y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ x( E) F' Q' x& Y1 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 {# {& D+ U0 C( L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ S# L9 S' s# L: z" I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ B7 c: Z3 }* l( x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>