【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ t4 L( d3 W3 A: H- ?) K$ K歌词我附在后面。
( W& V' Q$ ]/ Z3 ?4 \8 I8 c) MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 m9 p' N6 s8 B% a; lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" j# B4 k( a( ?1 r# k! zWith the moon kissing it every night
) [0 l0 r3 |/ U& f# i* R; e7 vSeeing the sky content with its love
# G9 o( X% W. o& \1 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ v9 w3 P* }  T9 ]3 gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 [! ^! g' G4 }. k/ G, s: `0 Z0 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 ^0 W$ \2 s4 r1 ^' b3 Q/ {I love you I love you with all my heart
* u4 G4 @' o1 Z+ \- K) lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 L7 B' a, r2 _1 v1 p) oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" F0 {6 Z+ L2 P( AI want so much to see inside your heart
7 T/ E0 Z/ r% z4 B" q4 _  _% }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* P  v' r: `# P3 ~' TI’m still filled with fear
" }+ \3 h# {& n2 F, A9 P  HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, G  Q. D. J2 j% XWith such a tongue as yours,
$ M( g6 D, a" P" E' y, W2 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 D% l9 J3 [2 ?2 A, \8 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 e6 g; q; r$ y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! n: m2 r2 U* J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, z9 Z$ D& ?1 K. e; Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# k0 |6 f: h) ^! h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& W& v1 H( f' @* ]: C$ h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' }3 i/ ?& w8 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% W4 s+ r* |* V! e6 _- b" s4 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 @/ [. O# Y* K7 `) z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' t: G0 T9 h  m# |& r9 L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 [5 @% M1 @5 k8 j. F& L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 L4 Q3 Z/ t4 z9 T4 B6 U# [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' B2 b3 `/ Y0 Y5 k! W4 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 m- V; Y/ \( B# ]8 k! v6 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ d( o0 O. p9 T* F2 S: A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- L! e% t: P0 K  n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: M( C& R2 V/ r: |7 n% X3 r2 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" ]: W' N2 [+ N/ L& U' ?" q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( _4 q- Y$ P: a2 p6 k  H. h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& X. e/ t9 C1 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 @$ B0 {5 I$ A2 p% Q) L  j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ ]* j/ h# Y( s7 H0 C6 B6 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% J' o' l, ~$ K4 g6 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ Z* j0 }6 [, h( a4 Y+ }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 _# H# N" E6 O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 t& U# `$ x  q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# P/ y' y1 [" h/ c# q% s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. W0 I% z, h4 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
: }' ?8 y6 k# [) k+ d+ _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 |- c8 [! N1 H+ t- \+ X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 q% N/ `" _5 M* U" M' x5 v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& l/ t* p# k5 o3 y0 K# [7 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( d! r- H# z' l) N) J8 ~5 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ p6 K0 ]- G2 z! u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 W# r; c4 C( F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 E# Q. n% F& W, W& Q' E) {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

- s# C# r+ ^% X! H" v, M$ L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- a' K$ T! _* M: o' K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>