【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 l1 Q0 v5 y$ W/ [7 l* r* qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 d: t3 r4 V. \% j8 h3 Y2 e% W1 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ P1 I/ w$ y) j2 U( A& `- c9 r+ J* lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 t$ P- ~: ^  {  cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 O" f8 C/ M. h, M& d2 KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( ], Z  X1 n' w+ ]* w1 fI really want to know just how much you love me
  P  {. @2 F( Z, P& a5 _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ U( h! @" ?- q9 ]) @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  _# g, w4 u$ f5 ^" O$ t3 cI’m still filled with fear
- u8 Q8 l' j( s! ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 T% t' P8 q  I( ?. i6 Z; T% ]5 qI regret not dying
' H1 {+ R$ o0 E" l" q& GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) ]0 e5 w  T0 i$ m5 m( eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 n; s5 `; V5 @: e* S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" H; _% c( _& h) B% \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 s* m7 ^7 i7 Y& d- R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- P% \% _, [( e" u: Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  |* J; b, z3 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' p7 a) f( P' E# k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- N8 l$ @" f. L* A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" l% Z# S' a0 d1 q8 B& n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( O$ }4 Q6 C& g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ c1 e0 m$ m; K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  `' b4 \, A& L7 ?) L  S/ |4 p<P>你无需担心</P>
9 b, S- u: |& ]+ W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! q9 G5 F+ D  W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* O$ ?: Z- h6 F1 g. F* M. s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: i& E$ ~/ t; s4 V+ m% q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 z9 n+ y8 b0 [  \( F" ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; L4 n* [" `1 T6 Y- m; D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, v  A4 }' Z6 {3 ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! ^& w' @0 _  M& z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 q9 q; x5 I+ u0 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, V. r) X' C  k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) Y  o) r% y- I  T; Z$ N1 `; U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, o2 N2 U# i8 s! ~# c3 C  x  [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# X* ?7 t9 d+ L, d: }( S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# h$ H& X/ u1 Z6 x1 L6 H. G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ ^- I1 ?! ]% A: M; |* y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 b$ [! `4 f( o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 z( G- @: ~. q, Y2 M4 `( m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' X- ~* u" A) Y, x. o$ b0 V  M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 s+ h: h3 c( q0 |7 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; z7 y) A8 F7 G. Z4 o) a7 ~1 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
' {/ L5 R; }7 U8 E9 }+ ^
我请你剖开它

+ G/ c* A7 x1 U: T/ V0 ~$ k& W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; E9 B" k& e) ~3 k, l# R# J: P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>