【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ e6 ^) j- Y% h( P, |The moonlight is shining brightly,
% @2 Q* N) r4 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ q; N' G! x% lWith the moon kissing it every night
+ M) f$ v+ q/ Z/ l- y8 g# BSeeing the sky content with its love
0 [7 u% S; q' ^% J) ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 R6 u$ }: E& j) ?0 }You needn’t fear anything
9 m9 _- y8 I) l2 v4 q) X5 |" O9 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ Q5 B7 A  L! g* [/ U% _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ b/ E* g' f" ]4 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* @3 K( _$ @0 _1 |' L, v: sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 Q. {8 A# _. T8 f0 F7 B* g* F4 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. I. ?( |. D* |- \. M& LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 t! x1 d" L6 g: z) B- [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% k1 o( ^4 z3 P" ^' t3 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 y, u7 |. E- L2 ^" @  Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# r, `2 c) i( r2 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 |6 D+ k2 F) f$ H4 J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ t# S/ H/ ?$ |$ b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: W& f8 m* b, ^: i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 i& p* G% S# f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& y$ a0 T5 S: H5 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! r& ]5 E2 m1 \* w& {( C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 O. A0 ]/ u; f2 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 D; X( y# a# w  W<P>你无需担心</P>
+ e8 L4 p2 N/ H" w! E- @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% H/ w* A/ N, u/ Z7 y1 |) p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  p5 _, O9 q# F: s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 P0 Q3 z, g& T& _& o. |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 U6 M  L& e6 \$ V; L1 {3 |7 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ l9 ?' |8 P7 N) T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ j$ x/ `  a. \  t! P; }5 k4 D- k3 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" `7 q/ g0 {0 K$ C! B: ]% X6 e0 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: O7 d5 m, a! P# ^$ v" @# |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& ^$ C; [0 J& ?/ e5 v+ _<P>I regret not dying</P>
# N% I0 u* L7 C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ k) ?5 M! U9 m) }% M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, D. s. b8 e8 C* o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! ^8 }0 P6 {  g+ w8 b' ]( Z( @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 W0 s3 r% E2 ~$ k, g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>