【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& U5 j3 V0 w, r' D9 CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 D. k; D' w( f6 h( r9 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 E1 ~' G! q( aWith the moon kissing it every night
- X# L8 v& ~0 S* Y& i# J9 N! }" rSeeing the sky content with its love
' P( _1 D2 K" M) W2 [- k6 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 m' ^1 V, a; BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 Y$ r3 e- A, j. _+ lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! b$ r' C/ V! ^, L9 K; D! lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 I  p6 U' Y2 ~$ xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' Q' n+ H! f. ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: j3 k" v& X3 C  O" I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( l9 @: ^5 B5 e" a% w+ W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% J0 O+ z  }% s* j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 L' P# u: A; j1 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 U( g& Q- ]! I* G3 G0 f. W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. j6 Q2 O3 d8 o2 S8 S: m$ E7 f# Q/ E" h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 F4 S  K) V3 b% q. X* f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 F( n' V. k8 Q% c$ _! @6 X( r# W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; V" O7 p1 w( A: z/ F. D$ C- \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 Y/ w( @; |, d0 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: X  \( F% G- L0 T8 p9 G* K: K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 b3 x9 k  \1 P7 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: |/ J0 ^1 u4 r0 U6 ?9 B% j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ I  v) ?/ V: M2 a1 t9 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) y/ r, k. d2 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; [4 M8 w$ V3 U+ \0 C: [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 n, S; I8 x1 ]4 `$ J0 j+ c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# E0 {8 q# z) K$ B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, K9 `- _4 [9 H5 Y& ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. P  D) f  G. s* @. X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 I' n5 @% H. Y! U) X" z+ e8 `+ E, q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 r: P, F% N9 y1 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! H4 I* b1 H& M2 _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* m' g* M% ?9 W  |2 H9 o; j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; m2 F& c  x0 n/ G, S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, Y  M& c% j6 q9 k* ~: w' x( W$ D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% @- j: u- u: Z  j6 S* g  B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: G8 T" T' |* P7 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" n0 d: \6 J% E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% \0 w9 O/ B2 O2 y. ~  I+ b# l  o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& X0 u" N5 j! V! }* b% K7 u" H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>