【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 |/ i2 i1 X) }+ g$ m9 _9 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% t; C' }  S; k0 M, s2 @2 ]3 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 ~( g' v# i+ k. s; }" @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 f( ?7 [% ~; T( F- @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 p; _( y$ p& DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  p5 o$ V" P2 V# OI really want to know just how much you love me
. `& ^6 i, A  C% VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  ^  X7 q: Z( Q& w, a& V' s) ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, l7 r9 P/ o! ]" B! pI’m still filled with fear
8 C; P$ }  U3 Z, j4 LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ @; c' K) d8 y! b) CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 ^9 z# d* ^% ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 [% E, E) \) E( h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' u( O9 G) M9 G' @# o. `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 g1 d( e" ~" X' s1 H* B) k" k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ [0 G) m2 _& o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 t. [; ]* i6 C6 ~. Z& C! m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 Z. \$ k$ S1 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" O$ D' g* I6 `7 F3 ?/ p: z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. V# S7 G+ i8 Y9 o2 Z9 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" b! |$ A2 L5 R% h7 [) S" I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. @6 [4 `  S9 a9 L$ a0 B2 ]  u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" }' o! n' x+ i1 X3 j8 {7 _) W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" X& B% ]  a7 f6 ^1 r; G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 o# s- d  o  g6 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- l& h( U/ T3 {: _7 _  N) b0 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 |9 X+ P0 {) G  T' |% X$ @# s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- l# x  ]) U; Z" H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ \$ |8 V0 r4 t; c7 W6 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* G  l; P; A& l7 A" N; n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ f( O! @) ^, }3 y: E+ j* q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) H9 p- h3 R% d) d7 L1 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 \) u/ V1 W  \4 O7 a' H* ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ `8 u5 `" G5 ^' K% l! A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 q% I- P4 t5 d. H4 A# e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>