【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; r- l' Q' W+ s% T" `, |9 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ W* ~* F6 w' X  H- XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 c. s% M, H, v6 B$ h' z  jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 ?  i& }* t" |& |* ]% [3 m) }You needn’t fear anything
" O/ D: O: z( g2 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 t. q9 i3 `* L$ OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* `* F" ^* K4 j; K) e/ ^1 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 S! Z! S' @" @. O3 z: }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% U  F* _. j3 K4 Q% S/ HI’m still filled with fear
; U  ^9 k5 r# M2 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" t" e* U0 h# |# R7 _& N6 II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  F& H) u9 z, z6 T/ |+ m" g6 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! ?, ~( \$ g. H9 n" V# uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# O2 d- m9 n$ l. n" E/ J' ]4 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 s9 D( X0 w2 x4 E. [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& T$ V+ z: p* L+ j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# r3 t6 o  W' v% r2 E9 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" C: V1 F# Q6 i% h; n* h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- H5 _7 R/ p, g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) a$ C( h/ \: B3 |8 T1 M7 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 \& }% ^, S/ s5 Q) n$ r: o- W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, W& c5 E  E" `  {7 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) y1 O4 M3 Z& }6 q% Q+ Z* N0 @4 d& G6 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& U# U* }# a3 n' W( w# Q2 o) H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 ]2 j' A; K6 D+ _* h! l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 h2 y$ a  i# ?# H) M5 Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) |/ S4 n% f+ x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 D; ~2 W  }9 L+ x& ]! u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) F' G6 P. Y$ \. E% g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 d+ O6 V4 |3 ?6 a7 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! r: y3 n0 Z: e( a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ t* r% L- H+ L9 ^! M8 Z# y5 s- G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  p0 o. i  g' T" C2 a; ~+ Y3 X4 ?2 Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 o" O) T- @3 T. O) r( f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ U2 N* B7 L6 E+ |  O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  F, ~6 T$ ^1 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* B2 T: C7 ?' O6 M6 z- s( ^5 J$ x0 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 {; Z& L/ I) H% y  {* E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, x5 N8 U5 I9 p% c1 p% \  c4 n+ i. T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 Q$ n) v# c5 ~1 k# [/ H3 K3 p' C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: S: e% k, o" M7 R; l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 W5 `5 j3 ^' ^3 v% F5 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; C6 L8 V1 F/ I, W/ M/ o7 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 B5 H" f# ]5 U& Q$ \" T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ ~9 J7 G* ?9 v! H# Y/ o) D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>