【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. o* d! B0 A5 X  R; H9 G6 T& Z4 p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* X) k8 n3 D6 W- x8 J! V; A' D. ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* V5 @7 ]8 e. O/ V- o% pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. j: E& {! ~/ Q  _: f# F% [With the moon kissing it every night
) X) x  U7 \) N6 ], |) H, ~) TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 l1 b4 v, w' N. \. \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) u8 k5 W3 p/ y8 h0 ?0 ?/ n7 bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# L6 U. ?9 V; Z# ^/ X5 k5 kI love you I love you with all my heart
; _2 G% p( U. ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% G/ b) C8 \* l) N: A4 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 ^+ H6 l& Q( b4 v/ _8 I2 rI want so much to see inside your heart
5 |, C8 B- ~1 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ L3 }; ]1 z( t- Z& n1 Y5 dWith such a tongue as yours,
* v9 Q5 d: N) K; d3 f& q3 z0 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ }& q( e" W/ [4 MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: c$ C7 X9 k+ r& Z4 ]. SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: A% f9 i* i; g  P4 w7 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ @: X8 D+ d5 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; V2 J1 ^9 f$ \' x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' N8 G( A5 B) L) e# E( p; ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( v% ?6 [( N' Q  A7 f  \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" F5 R) ]- {) |( y1 E/ ]% y9 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, R# @4 R$ |4 b$ q& l7 |' Z% Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" D: a* W7 I; V7 j" Q* r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. Q+ ?- Y, w1 t2 ]7 g8 I8 H( C8 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 Z/ T# U& i$ r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* @1 `9 o0 P; Z- g( I  l  g, l* b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 H4 n$ C6 Z3 r( B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 {. `2 w  Z" I8 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 c1 R8 U* ]/ _; x3 \+ q1 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: q! @9 L/ S% E5 a1 a: Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 c" a( R  w3 J5 Z9 a7 A9 I) Z# h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# H* R" n2 C' i4 }. J0 c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) B8 _9 U& @  J2 n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ a/ w4 x! w9 q  Y1 I- L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) W. @* {% J( s* D( B8 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- X4 w3 m( B" q; [3 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ y. G3 [+ ~# l9 T  c  ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ I3 L. _* R0 n. u/ `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 _6 m8 M) p5 f& Z! e& l6 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
& k& {* ^- M8 k; e$ b2 x) o) F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" }7 W; X) i5 m& y5 E% t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ `  X( [2 X" R0 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ T! b' S: x( X, {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' m  Q6 e. {1 g% J; {: d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 z/ B) f: i# s. @, z3 Q' @' w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, c! Z- h, s% P( l. o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) L. Z6 \2 W* e- U2 f6 ~7 c4 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" o2 W+ k4 |1 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" S0 \+ b& S6 y' K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 E4 q% [' [! a& K8 O我请你剖开它
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' W; |  ]+ ]/ A; T9 S8 C& ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>