【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 s- {7 D4 q0 v/ Q. g$ e歌词我附在后面。
! D3 t( h( v$ S" R5 k/ b8 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) @6 V/ |3 L, F' NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- v/ u; E: g" e, c" W" M0 O) A7 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% g6 k; U6 F; S( Z7 V4 N; q& kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 ^$ ]( R! O8 w) |' ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- ]- ~( U5 ?. B1 o* Z; ]! X3 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 h7 y) h2 v" z1 c/ U5 B+ UI love you I love you with all my heart
+ q6 [: R# o; ANothing can compare to my love
* ~/ ^5 P; l% u+ z2 I0 L0 c3 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) \- y. q+ M1 {' b) @4 K1 S5 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ ~* [6 Z9 c2 |6 Q1 @) l0 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 m8 L5 ]* ]7 _! i8 l: NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% J" Y; O' G/ `7 _+ h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 _/ x6 I: x$ e/ d" V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 g0 `2 m' z* P: R1 d: t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: S. |3 R+ D, @& s8 Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% m5 g( O$ Z* E1 R' d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 p/ a7 s' [2 T* Q8 v5 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 O9 p. p  _$ X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 w5 U& g5 i; x/ p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- Y4 o$ E( Q- h/ Q7 a6 Q$ m9 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ v. C0 h1 t# u: i4 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 t" n0 x) O4 q! f. r4 Z9 |& m: z0 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  B$ K  x1 p+ _; d+ ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' U; P3 ]7 J9 y5 U2 ]% s: K0 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- [3 \/ R+ F: D# C! r8 C<P>你无需担心</P>
- f; q' d6 d% y2 b8 B* T0 `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' S, K$ ~9 i) E$ g+ P3 Z: p; c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 i8 z$ q7 D  t% `. S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# S4 R' V" [: C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ {! T+ P7 G7 Z" @8 \7 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# y; e8 h' A/ g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! E; x) U% B5 R* @6 F9 w* o. w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 n& M! q3 Z- Z$ f+ m& [7 f5 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ^# J- T  |6 w4 u1 P( r( d9 r0 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) H; d% ^4 o9 A, W4 s( X4 v) H- n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! l9 G3 I7 o3 t0 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' {' k3 I0 F5 Q0 [. {+ X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& X0 l  U/ l6 H7 G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ @! V% |6 g! V7 w/ L; t, `) I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, j# \. L* [7 B+ i0 g6 b$ F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" S6 x0 T6 Z# |+ O' f1 ]% E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 n2 M+ W& |. s; E5 j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>