【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! ]0 `" Q2 S8 k6 F0 XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ u) q4 j& O3 }4 j8 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, E2 G% Z5 t; R6 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) r: @3 |3 a; S/ F5 bSeeing the sky content with its love
; a4 J5 ~$ o- b2 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) z- U  {; f3 |! F: o# ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% c/ e1 P3 z7 e# `+ P  ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" K' T- \: J2 H/ g/ GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 q- n& m! `2 P' lI want so much to see inside your heart
6 @+ ]; N: M  R1 W1 L3 j* J/ |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 G- D# _  X: C9 c  z+ aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, f* H# ^! _% L! a; K) o7 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# r$ t* h5 l* {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ G2 h1 W, l% t& c; I0 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 t! }) c4 n$ [9 o; q7 V( f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: S; \/ i1 k/ q  `9 v0 m' l6 I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) u- t; s% _$ F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; z6 Q/ h5 U- ?/ A$ {, o" B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 g: U/ [7 ]2 S6 M$ f  I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; C! B8 Z' y7 p6 s: V+ N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 x- J( I2 J% I5 B" g+ v( y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" S1 r, V9 @- M" b4 W, V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; j2 a& @( x( F' R" t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& I  T. v$ N7 Q6 e6 @3 u  o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) W. A  T# Y& ]  N, x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ S6 D/ [* I( k0 `0 h  U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 i+ u$ d0 M3 p( ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 `1 h: F! c  ^$ j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  L5 ?" N# }$ v$ [$ n" R, x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 O$ o! Y4 s0 C) {$ g2 Y$ o* B0 [( ?" W( u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 m/ w- V* k) J& y5 q5 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 Z6 T- }7 W; o) `4 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, e+ z, p8 z. V' ]# M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" l: V' m& a. S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% Y2 i8 |& u$ {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& [" D5 }8 j5 I( n9 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  C. B( T/ p, f; i& C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 `' D, L# s, v1 v/ X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 `- f/ v% J8 |  K* o7 _2 i- k8 R( J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) q0 G& S' c. V/ M; w$ w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% C, ?+ F7 ~4 B/ Q! _: O, P$ a我请你剖开它
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$ M) o. |, T; c3 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' L7 _+ F: Q* w# `- s" p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>