【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% P' q8 L* \8 F0 a. @. [! hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  l! R2 B9 ~0 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 U( a4 c6 i0 M  P$ KThe sky is happy down to its soul
' p$ _3 {4 @6 ~9 V7 l8 I% DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 ]  f; X- G  p- R% KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 u9 M- V1 k- B# ]: XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( E% ~9 m, E+ A, gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 e, E2 ^- f7 r" p' ]$ h: f9 v4 HI want so much to see inside your heart
! |5 I/ u6 H1 y6 v+ c- wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* L1 _1 J$ C5 m6 D7 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ~" `6 E# u2 h3 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: M1 V) f! o# O# U; JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. R  |, k9 w) ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: Q4 {" a8 q/ X+ r- j% K. }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  u* x" ?( o3 ], t1 T, E* y9 ]# s& }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 c; m. Q, ^4 \  h" i: @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* y8 \2 b$ @& y9 s- A  z8 \4 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) i+ s2 W0 S6 a, c) ]' R% F4 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% {, t& c- W# t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' F+ t/ S: [4 M+ p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' Z/ N& G3 l, ^6 c! n$ x! q3 b; J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# ~2 F* F: ?) y: @6 s0 [, ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 x, `9 t* y4 @: C, b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* R3 G  `: o0 r& G' a( O: B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 ~5 c+ e+ L& |6 x* J/ S) B' ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 y0 \7 q+ B# A9 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 w- z6 u3 f# b! ^6 G3 Q; V8 x) B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 w) W2 A  \- X# Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% F/ Y5 O% t% e- k7 }, S( E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 ?# K; ?) o) W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& S' n9 v5 v+ P& G+ o, J, y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ O: G0 N# H' D. b) D0 r% ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" r5 V2 a" `# Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ F. W4 ~. g4 y$ u: S3 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 h% d& \) Z6 _( l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  d" e4 D+ a  H% I0 H$ ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 u* d; f, @! G8 E5 X' @5 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ [9 Y- }  I7 C: a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 W0 F, R) F6 X" X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. Y+ I. F+ w7 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: d$ ~! H5 _9 y' f% p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  U( i0 p2 g/ V- Y, l5 e) T& s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 b  P0 q9 U' i2 m- {8 J# G( W& n' Y$ a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; m  o6 J0 j0 V8 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 b( b- _- O5 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 Y' n/ Z, u" N7 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" l. y$ w) I) h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) ]5 m' i) X# U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; ^6 I, X5 o8 k" w7 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>