【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# m9 }( s5 O2 B# KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( v" O% J& q& V: R( X1 l2 v9 y/ ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, w9 b- I- P5 c5 u0 O; p' \The sky is happy down to its soul
  O; y) _7 v1 {  U6 g/ p  CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 i! F& B; t/ dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' b; v' Y4 k/ s& k5 E5 ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ G  M+ q1 y7 h. L* v' YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! L, m: I7 X  w  SI want so much to see inside your heart
1 r0 c: X2 ~, R2 |6 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 c2 z0 q1 `/ C9 Y+ e, n7 dI regret not dying
/ V2 [& f# o: X# vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 }- W4 _; L, a  p/ VWith such a tongue as yours,
5 G7 M. f7 n% F7 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ ]4 G, W% J7 `. Q' b" tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, n4 b/ C3 f/ i/ }) F% h6 @! }" |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 E! h3 X: A6 |) b+ `9 ^6 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) o( R) h$ Q; h/ _: y. I7 `; p& K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) N  F: t# e8 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- }+ f! r0 P# O& B( [' ~5 i- E7 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 _- e0 y4 w$ D# ?' B$ x% [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 \1 T* V3 \2 P1 @/ l2 X* M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 B+ Z- r  K) |7 p- |8 f3 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 R/ a# I% `4 p% h9 h  u4 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 V* v+ O) M5 A$ o/ z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ {5 s+ B! f4 P3 m* i0 d" |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ o$ d8 }3 k" N! ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. X+ h/ b) r( w- a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 O& L4 R% @) D- \) O4 v6 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 X! U# Z$ p3 A& w, t0 K% H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 g+ W2 m* p7 @0 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! {. H' c4 Q6 l/ R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  q4 O8 j* f. z  {/ K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 F' P; m+ |7 S- \; ]+ i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* v' ^) S, E9 P$ E* ]% _<P>I regret not dying</P>
  Q, P0 H7 W5 g0 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 |/ u( V/ R6 Q' U9 Y0 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* [4 R6 H) c5 R  x' f- F- ~3 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 U( t9 ?. J! j3 Z& s/ ?0 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>