【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. b+ o( `0 X. A% ^! q- z4 a5 eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; I# X+ Q  s6 q. f1 C2 z+ \: JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" n& B1 J- Z5 h' q1 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% ?- Y1 x3 `# R4 F! }With the moon kissing it every night
4 h' p2 |9 i* f' vSeeing the sky content with its love
& i% y$ |0 b/ d1 K# N+ l* T. s- UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 d/ M- C# ?) a. r& r5 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. m# ?# A5 l5 U' yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ _2 R" b8 c+ l0 BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: L% G  l2 H& o4 E9 ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  H; v2 v' O# Z% s) F# u1 UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. G2 J- t% d8 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* _" O' L/ [5 I2 M  v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; Z; E! r# x0 H5 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( K( F5 J5 ^( b4 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  ^3 P# [2 C4 ]9 y8 f3 b: L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 a% a2 g& ?5 X6 U; B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 Z! I0 x+ ]  U- C3 l. d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, \  J4 ]) p0 [1 v) b7 O. J3 y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- k0 m7 V4 q- d5 Z+ z& k  U$ A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 h2 C) A+ k) E, R. E/ ~% p0 N. j1 H1 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 C9 ]. Z. ?& n' E$ ?+ _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) M4 m+ ]8 O2 N! T) `) [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 |2 P- {6 t8 {! f8 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 e" a8 |' u9 M5 N7 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; |2 Z/ y# @" @, R( }0 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- q( h! V; v( W6 ^6 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) @7 y4 y$ z$ g- A) c, v% y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% Y% f4 Z! y( r5 [" r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. c5 y1 G9 Q2 `; \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% D! x& C: P) F1 E5 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! H: J6 z. l, ]" B5 V& `2 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ V6 ?# h  \: @+ t0 E" t! U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& m6 G2 h; V1 l1 u, W/ e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 d% C" a$ u$ ]5 Z1 ~+ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ A/ h/ B* r. M, @# D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 g0 U, v# N3 t1 S, r# q# U我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: G$ r5 Z2 d# z/ m/ Q4 _4 G) G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>