【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 v3 ]4 F0 E6 u6 v+ F8 F+ h# hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% i' v$ j& O: w2 f  H; w& Y, ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. W, O6 j% I- B) o, tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; V7 d! s4 D) |1 y6 B7 Q6 GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& y7 A4 V6 \: g5 i8 a* u9 x  YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ @6 L% ^1 x, U& d5 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ l2 A' v9 r8 ~3 i+ {+ N4 fI want so much to see inside your heart
% v- f7 o% J: W6 m5 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) S& a8 w+ h9 l! m6 AI’m still filled with fear
( y! A0 u6 a2 V. X& T1 [% m2 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 t$ O1 Q5 ]8 F+ z. JI regret not dying
  l# x* c) P% T2 B1 T( D3 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 Q* N, A$ h  Z' wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, {1 D- O( u; Y$ M9 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( v- L* J! N( b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# Y( @9 ?' z' H0 y; c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" C2 C$ t* `. b8 Y4 x3 |- z" p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ z* A/ |4 a  n8 u" \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ v- z) w1 D6 @3 R9 B% F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 \* r' _# k/ `! P6 c& T- ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 h- F: [4 X; `( X4 t( w( m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. x) l0 O6 K' F& d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ d  A: Z& p- g" c6 Q" y# U& {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 n" a5 k- f' L+ k; h; P% R  q. s' Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( H3 P' k$ e- X1 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  u6 ~3 n  q6 M8 T# J/ Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& i- s) i8 ^7 p/ L" f, ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; u" \! ^! H( N' Z' }; w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, j% w) I# n. f; Q& }! q$ P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 b6 g! X6 Q  r1 x5 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: `, V; a( {6 C' v; Q8 w# y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; p, ^, z' Y% r/ U, \, z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- e: u1 N' B& j/ g+ P- t& r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 U" d/ Y1 ?7 b  {7 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 c$ M) @* ?/ O" ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# j5 |8 F7 @+ ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
3 S! k: m5 R8 X7 S
8 z, p1 \! Q  J! H" D我请你剖开它

2 p& [! c" d3 d( S2 ]: d- n/ t  {9 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ B. R8 W2 y1 y8 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>