【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) \- V& I  U( g$ ^. o# tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ b( I  ~* _5 C/ u6 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. u$ P* S. Z+ P0 I# X( OWith the moon kissing it every night
8 ^' @3 F0 ~' l7 r5 F5 kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* Z3 a. q" E$ ]0 Q+ x9 yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; u9 Z2 W, ^5 `% c, v% b0 iEvery other word you utter is love
2 C0 J* m9 o) oI really want to know just how much you love me
9 x3 k. S0 t# FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 l, o; `" z4 y/ w+ H! HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. m. `# ^5 c2 iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* H: R/ z7 ^* r1 q+ P/ Y, DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) ~3 Z6 Y5 e8 k$ n3 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, H' J9 P6 |; C5 c4 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ [- f+ c$ q/ G2 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, |5 c5 N" a0 U" k% `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 R, {) A/ r- P$ t$ W8 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 g$ s) t3 |4 I  P& d* Z- L6 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: M2 C% T; o: ?* o; X$ ^9 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 {( M& E" {/ s! S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 v0 w. P  u' g1 G$ Z& G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 ^" q) F$ h! N+ g5 G2 v% s( a# L0 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# Z# ~0 O2 T9 M. i3 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) j5 i( w( k- w% ?  G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  v$ N7 `# c% Q4 I/ N- M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 B6 Z0 L# O4 n8 H. c( ^( N9 n<P>你无需担心</P>
5 p* `7 V2 X9 f; T/ p& R' W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! t! l# g  H8 x9 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, p4 L2 |/ p& w4 o$ s% b1 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  ?1 a- L" J0 D. k7 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 Y( S9 a* r1 }! L" p+ Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, c+ G1 r# d- V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& W  N& V3 y" k3 q; d$ }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) G3 o! w( m6 o. d4 `$ U; u4 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: t  C) s; x% g/ D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- O' [4 Q1 ~7 B. \, Y" y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: ^  I2 j% O6 M, y$ N/ T8 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) U' t; @& [. S, l5 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 E* t8 y- R4 h( ?2 _- C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 ]1 P$ @& ]( K$ x7 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 x- H8 P- ]: b3 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ C. \& t7 I3 e, ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ k  i/ e% X/ V: g% B6 C' a8 \; \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' D( {) ]& N0 w1 Y6 i! O; g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) D3 g/ w; K: r9 k" z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 [+ r- \# Z9 ~- S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 t4 x  `* b7 }6 X6 k- K2 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>