【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ W7 l" n9 P/ W; [8 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 r8 z$ T  D: g  W$ H) `. q  YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% Y( u; t! j8 b  k1 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& b# d6 H4 w' [Seeing the sky content with its love
0 i4 L/ v! `9 s  `* q6 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- r/ g8 g0 G5 `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& \- H6 \- a; N% i, Y$ B. z. sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ M  C! Y' A9 o. B" ]- JNothing can compare to my love
7 ~4 I  n+ O5 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 {' q, `" b2 x) J& \' |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. b; b8 l3 x! j5 Z" q5 _$ Q' n* p% XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 \3 t% Z: w3 hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 L' m# Q- s. r6 GWith such a tongue as yours,
0 v4 O3 `/ f* N# ]& }4 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 j: p( U% b1 D) ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 T. @0 P- f5 j5 v. g- N! r) k  pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 o! W) E& y" S5 z: \% }3 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  y8 d5 Q* j) K. ]6 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 S0 t' R  U, C9 J' }4 M4 `" V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; q& b9 n( k  u* g0 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 x9 g- r- v- [! P- U: r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 b% ?) Q- A9 H, j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: d1 N2 \2 q$ p6 `6 K8 W7 G9 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& X6 a0 x3 K7 k( o4 _6 }0 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- X. r7 G3 l9 P# x, T9 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 I2 L+ [* p1 l6 a( w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# `6 }: B; i1 p( v. @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. K% Z- p- w7 n5 P$ i" x2 S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% I0 m1 H# p3 \& s4 n# I/ T7 ?# C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  r$ {# r; V$ q  b3 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* t. [! G# C6 K( \% F) }3 p9 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# j( b8 M( b  p( W7 f8 Z- u5 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 U- l. P  K" b+ \' ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; |! z6 n& h4 z% {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 O2 f  ?* m' Q4 c( H9 G& z  G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 i+ I. c! F6 O% g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 H" U  m1 m6 I5 w# P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& h4 V( [# L7 W2 n' K2 W! v) }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. ?* E+ g# j! i; ^8 U6 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 o" x% q7 h# U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 p( p3 T& b- h+ \$ @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 G5 f5 n8 m8 F1 {' D; h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- N/ V) [( `# X  ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- G1 r' n! H3 m; A2 P* T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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* \) o8 B# e8 Y  D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 o' ~/ b- l! @4 S  c3 D& |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>