【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, c. n! D& d$ t( S/ u! B3 @+ KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  Z5 R. Y! i4 X" D3 x- gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 o3 j  S" z1 p( s5 ^. rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ S/ j1 J; n1 `: ^/ u: x( ]Every other word you utter is love
( @* y% E+ n+ _I really want to know just how much you love me
( L1 a# ?8 U3 Q( FI love you I love you with all my heart
, O  E5 b6 w: h. n4 S  J, ^Nothing can compare to my love
5 b. S6 `5 G' ~, w3 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! e/ _/ M: H# e8 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, E0 r: x  I+ u! `$ m  F% A4 fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 m0 p; r2 m7 Q1 k7 d9 X$ F# H8 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 _& @1 k; `$ A+ U9 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: `' a3 v: H8 b% H$ y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 ^. G3 y# Q, l: ~5 r* [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 p8 t' n  k1 V& i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& S) X' w7 Q. }4 n/ X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' U2 u8 z0 S: l5 G3 o4 d2 g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; h3 {. l& {4 k9 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 q) J1 [3 K' a2 Y( }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 P" h# q$ Y8 s, `+ A+ X# x  V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; O% N8 a9 m: }( }1 i) w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# z$ j7 K8 f, _; H4 V5 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* m/ E6 v) L5 ]7 V" U5 i4 S<P>你无需担心</P>
5 K+ S. C# k5 V# d8 g6 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' \& j3 T. o1 }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" C* i5 Z, N# }. q8 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 u% |+ v! \* G$ r3 A  @- y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ L7 @7 B6 j1 c- B5 ]+ @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; B8 m& n, ]/ |4 R% G( O/ C! ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! ~1 [8 V4 T2 N/ Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- o) \0 z; w- @% R3 I  J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 T' u1 f) ?3 [  J7 D1 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 \+ E5 l% o0 _+ ^7 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# }; h  R5 b6 i7 G4 d  P  d& V0 s" a<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 |5 ^/ b9 }) h  l7 e0 d4 L0 c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% c2 S! |7 k+ z: J  r( h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 u4 I7 K+ B& {+ U. |8 Z8 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 q; k; E& h4 H! z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ T8 p( V- \6 [* @9 t6 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 O5 d! \$ R# ]2 p* Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  q( w6 [7 n  h6 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

- a: p& r' N% m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>