【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& J. _) G) I2 V8 ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& C& ]4 @% z2 x+ K4 D3 Q# e4 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 ?+ Z, ^! ]5 n  d6 G2 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ a( }/ h, Q' \0 l( f. J, C; @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; }  m. v( r7 X8 b! ]! q; ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& z' f' u1 K3 |" r) M" L, N, U0 k* cI really want to know just how much you love me
: a" y8 F& O! b. R5 v- H7 H3 bI love you I love you with all my heart
3 B9 i: X; c1 p2 z( JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 Q/ K9 K/ Y1 c: ?1 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ W! c# D' j; T' f- k$ oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ W8 P) W( Q: q9 h  f5 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, f' N/ p) D+ u" H+ v5 r% M4 C$ i5 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ V& F) q1 U- S2 e# vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' Z; U+ G( b+ H& @: l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 U+ M6 B# D3 K$ N0 f& ?/ r% {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! y. b6 X! u, j: [! }  R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  J! G( M0 x. \* o- _$ ]3 l* k: t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% r* l2 T5 `. \  _) E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 |9 p6 S' K. u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' t3 I0 ]3 \, v* e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 c$ }% G0 y; ^( x# x; i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' {- ^6 }5 ^! G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 _) ?. y; @; \, C' v! d, W- y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 k3 N0 Y& A) U4 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 g6 C; D0 O  ^( H) p( H4 S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: ^. w* a2 @  N% A4 {  f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: {- C8 v+ l, N2 n$ P$ J- e- F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! g. w% h$ o. D$ E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) g# W( W" z" M0 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 A3 _3 s& r% ?8 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- V! \. _, W( L6 u, x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% b6 [0 r% w; H; Y  [/ t- l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% z8 d! U3 C: `. T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, }# w+ O, V* E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! I! w  H( l" w6 j4 A$ R5 l/ d& X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& U- E/ r: z0 V7 ^  O! W9 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! q& V/ L( X5 d, U- Y8 n我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>