【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 a' c" D7 L; K" k' R歌词我附在后面。
; ^# J- V( l( i) v! U+ PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 V1 B% Q. b# @* b9 W' A- TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 N' m; l* {, ^2 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 C$ e+ _  k- P9 }; G/ @6 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 x5 o6 w3 \0 [3 \- vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 M0 \! t/ C$ T! ^! [1 TNothing can compare to my love
. {* v+ }2 [$ I& \: n: zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ B" A+ T3 q& t: z6 g! TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, k" C1 t. j$ z# X) d! @+ S0 OI want so much to see inside your heart
4 H# a% c% {7 C& c1 }5 rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 f8 ]4 V- U; o: N; |5 q- ~6 YI regret not dying
& l& ~& R0 s7 I/ J3 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ V1 _6 q& {( x' C! DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' B0 D8 S5 p1 Y4 p5 ]/ R: q) eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 x0 p6 D- S; g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 S) |/ B& N; E) O" y- G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 N- l) d+ U9 I6 l; P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! O/ ]' d+ t" M) ?% [; j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* W" l" s7 [9 j7 }8 R( T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" R$ X6 ]3 U0 `# |1 X" \$ e/ S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; l7 b+ I3 P6 b3 A$ {, O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 u* i: S" e) P0 w* H1 k9 z( J5 C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 b) e* o, n4 O5 i* Y  R' g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! D3 y: u! x2 ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- y  l; e2 ?6 V) w  {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& \  z, D$ T4 H2 Z  M/ T7 y" [$ g! U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 c, }3 Z, c6 V7 Y# T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% u# }  h* I; G$ M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" ~6 h% s$ ?+ G* p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 B$ d: H0 d- U, x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! n7 p! d4 L( \$ T3 U4 B3 z0 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  B, x/ `  F$ H$ c0 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( m  g5 R$ _% e) b, U$ E2 P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ u  Q; p; z+ ?& j- P& I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* V! E- V, d+ T) ~* y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ t& v: x6 x2 P. Y. c0 ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* |. v4 f, n; ~$ S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 T: D, T+ ^* ]7 k/ t0 \# C% n我请你剖开它

2 |, V: L. T# s2 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>