【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( `; l! p  L( A. H5 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' ?1 e* \: j3 ]! JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& W5 _- \+ w# s2 I# lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 y9 w) r/ O. nYou needn’t fear anything
/ i. w  U: q  z5 m* d6 m/ gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& ?! Q9 G2 }2 Z, {I really want to know just how much you love me
# @; R# a( E) f8 gI love you I love you with all my heart
, N: j7 ]* |1 g$ `* ?3 x- N: HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' \: J( l: X6 ?: H0 S% SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  }9 M3 [6 u9 C# d5 z* T: e" w# yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& j+ S% e2 ~/ [0 z$ @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  ?% O- q3 D! h9 }$ _. _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; l' c* L* f( X$ H& I4 |9 {# M: f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. c0 o3 _; B6 H0 p$ ]( j1 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ C- |( H& T$ J( r- Q" d3 _7 A% Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 x  c' f; S' m3 P; [6 M0 V, O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  M% |; e' T0 }0 m2 l! Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( v- L9 @0 [- ^& ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ M5 }8 p' r% z' C5 \  m! }) A# V/ X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. {% T+ \. ~& E  x# p$ L- [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 Q9 j2 o; L# O+ O9 z' Q6 y9 W4 V0 `, T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* }' c5 T- ~: a/ ^( q% H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 e6 ]2 t# n& A9 l* _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 F5 m9 s0 K, S( D4 L- C1 G% e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. n3 }2 \7 Q0 v1 G) z# E+ ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ l/ G4 Y$ b, D7 V5 V, Q! u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 M5 K2 `4 E0 {, J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 j. _& o' Y5 X8 G4 N4 }, a! R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ l; ]  T) C" S* c" |" _; D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 \# `; O8 ~/ P0 f/ n9 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- z0 G, a5 |0 E) r" d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 q. `) p- `3 y. ]. f0 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 X5 [/ A/ B: z9 b8 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% g" @" c2 e' j/ p, E. q% ?9 K6 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# y% e- i; P# X- Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: e# l; i# `% g/ |3 T3 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. j* z0 z8 d2 h( r0 Q. |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" [# v& U0 @- ~* r$ J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ G) ?" J* r* I+ B$ T* Z4 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ j0 k- s! h2 {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ U; d  E4 B, U& K1 Q' M) d. b0 S1 l我请你剖开它
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' U! w# L- v5 S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>