【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  K* ]4 v- S. Q- s, }2 t5 \歌词我附在后面。
* [' F/ E  F- `! VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 D$ z9 j5 I& h( ~% l' ?7 M* f: ]% }Making the sky glitter like gold,
. u9 t' K) i, J& ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- J$ k" D( F, E$ `" x( N4 D) e+ XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ H+ R+ U1 ~! \9 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 }8 t9 [% |& A! D2 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% X5 l- ~3 e! |+ n+ s9 x4 iEvery other word you utter is love
) P! c$ o5 `% E9 s4 W6 C6 G, xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ }" e6 ^5 f# h0 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* s2 ]8 {$ W" A% pI want so much to see inside your heart
% n3 b' I; z) n5 M+ l2 [" gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' @. s8 ]" P& G% b8 L! sI’m still filled with fear
0 n4 A/ R8 l4 `$ f1 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 G5 x# y. b  @; t& E# Y0 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 N3 X7 \: e/ l# ]4 g6 dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ D" X) R' K$ P" ]! A6 |6 YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" v. F8 @0 w: K3 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# `5 M0 ], p9 `" U5 ]5 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ D/ i5 w' l& U& v2 [9 a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 S' Y4 i! D0 z4 O0 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) M3 Y, E6 `1 K( }6 n- f5 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* @- L+ u- T" H8 w3 V! X! q! N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 M! V7 i* t/ ~2 i4 u/ ?<P>你无需担心</P>
) Z* |) t3 ^. B# i3 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 @" L) L) V$ Z% Q: s! v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 Z# J, _# Z% V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 j6 L0 k: w5 a) u2 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* h8 }8 R: ^/ u3 U' o1 Z; W$ A( u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! s# R# X: K5 x$ p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 [7 I/ G+ e0 m, r7 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 c& U0 h5 \, T6 ?! N4 w1 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ f2 x0 W3 b( [& `) d% P6 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  {7 C) |1 S4 ?' c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ x! b* h9 c7 \1 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" f3 Z8 F% k& g* t3 Z% V0 t  F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; J8 B) y' i  M0 x% D5 I0 L& d, G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 Y0 u$ Q& m$ g1 {/ d0 T6 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; Z( F+ h. f, E% q( R8 O! V6 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 F1 Y% S( t" j0 l, E* z' ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. q. F4 g# J5 ?3 |2 g( i<P>I regret not dying</P>
! J8 |8 l* C7 N/ h) m2 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: ~9 M- x. N3 Y% k& w! q" c3 G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* f3 @/ D' S0 ?  ~+ k$ Q' a* R! G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  h6 V% z- y' ]7 O: V2 ]' Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 Y( b. x6 F( W& Q" [' r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( V: ^; v4 V( ^& S8 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>