【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. p. G" x- s$ a; C  @4 L" bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- H4 ?8 W& E, T  z; ]  RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! I2 u8 w3 E% E4 ]8 R4 E6 f& aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 P) l7 Q2 n" v) z2 r- a, mEvery other word you utter is love
; M# S& Q5 f0 n+ jI really want to know just how much you love me
7 n  a1 z/ X% g  T# z3 RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' B- h1 z  J5 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( U, l  Q& X. m( w" O% J: jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 B* M$ i( l  j& r% MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" I, v" r, P% d) v1 Y/ U5 tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' }% \" m1 b" J" m# w+ k8 HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ N6 G' X+ w( ~2 e. S2 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  `% C5 c$ Z3 l+ a* FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# T# e5 |7 a1 d' g2 G! G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, E; k0 r+ i" P4 b: U' [- e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 d# h& |" o  }9 m0 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ Q0 W( T9 O7 u4 b2 D( x& T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. {7 i$ r% R) W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ f6 t3 B9 y8 [# Z1 `6 S. ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. W# P& o) O+ z, g0 d4 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# y' m2 \, u& u0 [3 O" q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, R5 M  g2 M9 z8 Z- H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& ~2 @( H& M# ?( @; e) H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ z) h) P/ H. o1 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ R# [7 G3 }, H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( Y; ~' B- P) \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' [: Y: Y2 q4 n6 x. v. s: ^1 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 F1 N, Y: c4 {5 q- G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: |9 C; m+ }$ V% R& _8 v# L5 w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 k# E/ i# t" d* g+ H& B/ c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 G! ?/ a: g1 X  q, y' B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ A6 ?' t9 ]& S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) W0 }" ]3 c- c6 v$ s0 g& d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 B5 }5 ]3 F9 y- }6 O; t  @" I# M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& R& _  e1 K$ W' C1 _1 ~. b3 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ n+ E+ }- d+ M  N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ ^0 B" B$ H9 L2 n5 m4 M' k" M% T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' Z* Q- K1 F* u& O/ b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 ^- [0 g& K! s4 w5 Z1 g: e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 w/ D$ F. a2 q2 z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, n) W- ~8 u, q7 U9 ], Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' T  p! j7 O) ^" _- g$ f0 |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& Q+ T; Q7 s3 G  |3 @, Z8 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* U$ A: F  s; n8 z/ \; e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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- M/ p* L8 k! O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>