【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- T; v" V, f3 h0 r1 b& z0 I1 b3 x7 y) B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 a1 h3 Q/ i' M* B7 ?6 b$ a  XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; Y8 U* q+ H# I, i9 m1 X. u0 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& {  k& ]; Q3 ?+ |0 XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 t$ R; @. C8 Z/ wI love you I love you with all my heart
1 x4 P* N- |. QNothing can compare to my love
  K( X, |' y# n3 y6 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, K% w, u8 H. Z, II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" m; H, E  E; `$ W' `' fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* C" s1 H2 m2 i4 U, u) DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! b" f% K3 o* ^9 Z) U* |3 YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 G3 }8 E6 D. j9 D+ k3 l/ ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  s! z7 G* k' ~& f3 C- A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; J! M/ u6 ?, P( W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% W) Q7 D" _. Y1 ?+ s1 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" a. N& p' s% c7 D1 _( S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# V  @# }5 T, R6 z- n9 m, n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( P6 O) h: a- I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 K$ L! b6 u$ f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 u% |4 {. [# W+ l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 G8 H$ B2 u. n' \) T/ I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. ?1 Z  _- M, E! @: U4 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ]# M% x+ a6 Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* B3 T, v. T3 g' ^  x/ L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 r; e5 \' A( {2 F0 ?9 I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, y+ k% z" N! @9 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% w4 G8 s! H/ w' G3 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 [4 P1 f: L) `/ Q* U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( Y7 }- b/ m6 j9 D, L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 l2 A' N* W5 {% T+ f  P6 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 f% s; `/ q- B+ l# o+ t7 y& `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 v6 b) R+ x9 j5 E' {+ w9 c" u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 \+ j( O" F# i5 P1 [6 P) `7 W$ S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  s2 N: Z  `* \; d/ Q0 {6 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: |: R/ L. }/ a0 O+ p1 ~6 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>