【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( w6 e- l4 I6 Z8 z' ~歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' ]7 {- b9 q8 B; X& LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 j$ \) U6 l, a, d% [, LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; V; h- ?* o, @7 L" EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, M* M, s6 o; V$ iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ H3 F  U. {( p  E& K! DI really want to know just how much you love me
$ T0 t0 `0 R3 a+ S* PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 y8 o- K" Z$ y% iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ s+ c# U  z9 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! K  m# ?9 k, _. zI regret not dying
' I5 u( S  ?: z3 M( u1 z+ FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! k: M9 _: i7 \. c8 B; _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& j# s$ N9 B4 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& d( v9 Z, w3 Z8 o- j3 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: t0 J, {9 S" ?& u  f6 c% V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 e+ W1 T6 I0 S6 s! G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 V2 `* S( T2 `- h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' b! V* |# V* K  D1 U+ `, `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% }: q3 @9 k7 U7 R, s! g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- C% P7 C# o" }! j6 E- J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 q/ M- W1 p7 o) j, K0 E" {0 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 d" ~- ]2 }: P) W4 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 [$ }7 M" o; k" D6 h* M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& i% _4 V  e6 d  b4 G6 n- u% E<P>你无需担心</P>
% k9 V' d4 ]7 G6 u5 v" l" Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 c! d% f3 [& \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# i9 e- R3 r  J; T# E  O7 o1 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 T3 ?# N: q' D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: o4 m' f0 _) U: k9 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* z) ^2 g: b2 Z2 D5 ?( M# o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 Z7 i8 Q3 a6 _* b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 Z9 n) e+ {) C0 k9 k0 y5 y+ Q4 \6 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 W# G& l  N) L8 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; W/ Z1 m  B5 D" o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# ~" e. B1 G1 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 V6 }2 k* _) o$ ]+ }+ _. r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& i0 u, w8 I  J  m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- F8 m8 H$ O' U, n) o: G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 B& j* _" Z$ J; ~6 E. v& C  r/ A: X" b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 ]! W* D, W5 k+ t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 G) ?/ ?6 P+ E" V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( p( k' |8 X, B2 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

2 a0 ?7 f2 C# U* G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# M: F7 c, Y" f/ ]  J: S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>