【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' b5 H' L. j- ?0 H3 N9 ?  nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! L7 t, v/ h3 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 g! m/ \' g, q9 j6 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 Q6 `. y5 {, E$ K4 tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 R  ~( g: q! x' ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 T* b  ~( H$ [3 Y  `, V7 n' DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ f) j; c2 D3 T" V& M7 G% B/ l9 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 H8 a2 e+ Q; c% V+ m( GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. k+ D9 W- Z* D: F- [  s' \: dI regret not dying
0 B/ Z- c7 q# N8 ^8 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ i% S% I% }$ g0 l8 {9 g: H7 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 M* c7 O' [* K! R; E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; u  n5 _( r8 Z8 e. e. h: {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( j( f' [8 \6 q$ c' {6 x- t$ {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 k; A, j+ |7 d0 U4 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 O6 `/ T7 X0 a5 c. n; z8 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- ?3 [/ U; [% @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 ?0 `0 o7 b) f; Q1 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. I4 X# H% q+ z- C. e+ @9 `4 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 _5 q4 E3 Z( }4 j; `/ M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# w" F1 ^7 l/ l( I) d; @) @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 f* s2 E6 L' l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; J$ D8 W) i) S0 a) G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' N3 s' B- y8 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ V4 E# e, d% w+ E, S  f# _( m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ u! ^1 k) R. V! M5 }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 L# z) N, L8 Y* [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 r: o1 q2 L. o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) Z4 e  ~# l4 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 l' E5 P. `% k8 y% U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 ?) G, I- M, @7 t* L  Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( p  P9 ]$ L8 S) c* K1 |" i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) H; F9 Q+ x7 L0 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  l( G- V1 Z8 R: ^; L0 ?4 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 I. y; I/ J" }% S: v3 W4 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& m" ^; p3 p3 ]3 m; R5 b  Q- d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ x0 _  Z" H! Y' P: n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, H) j" O  B1 m. ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 M1 Z/ I* b7 {7 x/ c# d1 V5 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# c5 q- h, o" j5 c. s) t' B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 x4 t; A, H- @3 Z. U: |9 g我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" T# `6 u4 J. [2 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>