【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 L3 q+ A8 [% z  Z! a  VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- Y3 f% u+ v/ DWith the moon kissing it every night
0 ~/ p1 Q6 ~% M! d* HSeeing the sky content with its love
8 S/ u7 h6 f# ?# c& l; Q5 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 q& i: ?$ d7 q& P  \  ~I really want to know just how much you love me
) U& Q+ a1 G5 T) G: i) bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& c. x  X! T$ z* H/ w' mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 ~+ k) C% G+ \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; l% \& T9 H' z2 JI want so much to see inside your heart
1 J! t& n! {+ d: C& \9 Y3 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ J% ?7 H  l( c: r6 k- y7 }7 {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 t- O( V" [) j- W. mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- w' Y. |6 D, l  _: l; e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# J; U4 G# r' h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 r( ]: ~- A" h# Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; q5 {1 v) \! ?& p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# b- a8 C+ O$ L( ?; f, Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: u* B: y  ?, |0 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, ^( ?' G7 Z6 M, I2 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 h3 I/ B/ P- e& j% H: X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 _  t0 S) s( z- e! n# j. U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ ?, s* E, J. T+ W# B2 O3 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! o$ y1 [0 Q( z% M# Y0 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ W3 {. R' k: X# P2 L, [+ x6 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) R2 q: Q' ]0 g2 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. j& H& k2 y( \8 O) X5 _, i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 P- r% m4 ]; o( }$ s3 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 w/ p/ M6 f8 X, N" V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) V% b9 [+ X$ C- n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- h" r; l5 T$ g+ e7 e. `; l0 e4 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 Z6 S+ i. n6 M6 [6 @  O0 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' G" C2 J2 H6 I, S5 Y) x# d( `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! D) g) ^3 A8 d, p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ _. @3 s7 t1 T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* n% J- n8 R1 C+ j! E4 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; Y, o2 c$ m& x2 u1 Y' g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# M" v% M3 }3 g* u. E. v# n* m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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; n4 y  l. ?& a1 Q) D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>