【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ B# z4 D+ s. @- v1 m' B" n: aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; x; j' S( ]( \. L  A0 \! `Seeing the sky content with its love
8 t) t2 ~# ?# WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 e$ |# F% K! a6 y8 K  Z6 t* p8 i) EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% Y4 D7 l6 ]2 }' t3 D$ oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: _# _0 l3 ^9 u% b5 eI want so much to see inside your heart
4 [: z+ e6 ^, \: Z$ [1 R$ CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 ~; N; |0 P0 B; U/ `5 O" [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# V6 q" `* e* y) L' _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 E/ C6 S4 _4 c# `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: S& F/ }5 ~2 P! p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  [) A2 j1 E& b8 |8 v/ M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, Z/ P5 _/ W; [# I8 N9 {' [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ i! M1 P' m* w% w+ D% ?9 I/ x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- ~" E8 ~1 {. \) @, [7 P, A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 c7 j  o! Y" E; a- c$ f5 i) @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) M: b3 p- R# X3 S! ]. L  z6 K( b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 x7 s  J1 d1 a" i6 V' f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 k3 A6 i6 V* P' k' j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 X$ h. U; ~0 U4 l0 C$ y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' s4 s) g2 [9 Q# Q+ m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; |3 F7 \9 k+ z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ N8 }5 z+ E- c! R) A( S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% `, P4 \& W% d, X  A; }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ]4 b% V% ~% m- p9 M: [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 m5 p* ~% G4 p% N0 U, q9 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 a) ^4 y6 ]" c  H1 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ U; q) o# n$ y# l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* O( r: a. h9 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# y. s' l% \0 Y: x+ P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 Z% j; W2 g1 N% K4 R/ T) a* x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 q( [6 u0 p  d: T我请你剖开它

* q- E, ^3 n" k$ f0 A8 d; Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ D& B' g0 e2 K6 c9 w9 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>