【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# K4 U; E; i+ @3 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& l( |- l3 m( G6 t+ l8 X- w. I; d0 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# ]  |; D3 @* }9 c, p4 G: ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 N4 k: p6 J4 f% WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 f- d2 i# P& I9 x0 |; JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 _" j" l1 p! K+ f. mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" E4 W* R, ~) z  dI really want to know just how much you love me
% M- c+ Q& @, d: m! Q$ O/ ]I love you I love you with all my heart
& x8 Q; ^1 ^/ K) E9 A+ O2 DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 h/ A7 h. ]: a% NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ S2 q, a: k1 S. J% P2 E: v) RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 ^6 I" p- o& T2 E4 g) |5 WI’m still filled with fear
- j: O5 N* w# T6 E; G6 B. J. p7 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 B+ x/ q  Y$ K1 _% I, NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( ^4 L/ v' V6 H/ F0 l, t5 p; f2 ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" m- `1 J+ U" q% w" fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 d4 \  ^7 U+ D1 ^2 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ W; V; y. k1 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) ]4 \/ _& {' Z7 A: ]5 Q! `/ B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 N! |- M; z6 P/ w& e# y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 n4 x9 W# [7 `1 n8 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  X4 O& J* S5 p  c; `& h0 L  B0 H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 v* m' T  q+ k5 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) h9 F- `0 @( I. r& a/ Y+ c% ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: b& h( h) ?" Q( [7 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ H, N, C: M0 l3 T9 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 [& \/ @+ w4 o/ G/ t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 O& A3 G1 f& T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 ]. Z; @6 |" ^0 P( l% ]; O( n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ L9 G, i" F! I0 Z( X) h8 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ A, e0 K6 q% k7 `, I& s% P3 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! V! e$ }% N5 P: a6 y  Y! X6 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 N; U' Q, g% A' n+ s" |+ b, b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 n4 X2 R. \, X* t8 Z8 j% U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ t/ d0 h1 k( z$ i. \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 K3 P; f* G2 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 k0 w9 }! e2 A- x; `5 C* T0 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 v9 v1 r; t0 v& A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ Z- v$ X1 L1 m8 L# d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& Q/ N6 K; b7 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) |' _# c; R7 m3 a* X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! F+ y* \4 Q8 R; ]6 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' z3 N3 K2 u# f9 O+ B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 X1 f; ?& q5 a; @: z$ G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ t* u* d* X& w# G, D/ A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>