【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 \! B8 o# E" E* j8 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 ^- s: ]; }" _$ bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( T: f8 i$ @' t2 K* |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; D( ]: g3 I& d7 B# Q/ ~* G$ x+ jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- \" ?. O+ A1 r; f# I( E; iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 C$ c' u0 m2 b3 y! U8 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# V. r: u' h( m' T5 ?; M, KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 g6 ~/ w! y4 ?* a, x" _6 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" Y0 j' l- y, I' ^* S6 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* ^; B4 Q( R# r  B1 W, x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ i4 t, W7 P1 Z. P  ?3 Q# z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 m# P( [' D" K# Z- W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! r, q7 O; k! [2 O1 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- j2 m/ r4 X3 F8 t2 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: N+ @/ M. J! _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 j2 E' n1 t0 P& [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  Q, g$ T6 p; s# k1 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- L! M+ A9 J' j! y8 b& P& A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 b- d1 r1 D4 l9 Z8 C! h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 m7 @, s7 M( A* V; u8 x  B8 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 G& p; ~' V0 V& T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) C4 T+ |: c1 z. f2 p2 T" ~; o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 q: v/ H6 k) k! S6 d3 j9 m+ G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 E  [. {1 j9 w2 H6 |: N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 ^9 a/ ]5 |6 L" U2 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ ~, q( I6 r% [5 W3 @  v4 l; j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 |8 _/ p& ^; j& x. F0 r& j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" f# L& ^% Y$ N+ R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; c" A* U) e, i- f4 K; V% B% o+ n$ z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 l9 }! @% t! T- n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 N7 t8 {8 z* s( ?8 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# b$ T0 @9 O! |" w& H( @2 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 v. [3 y4 T$ g3 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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, s7 r) J. ~0 B# C' a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 s: D' _1 O" f* d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>