【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 Q3 I& p' f3 B9 l/ u* i歌词我附在后面。
2 P. I( a# Y5 \/ `7 b5 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
% ~" \' n1 f; C  T/ Q- t5 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 F& T; D. o; ]6 y3 ?+ b! K0 r' UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ y, d& i% w* _2 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
; l; H+ V: ]* b2 z! [4 gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 M4 x+ n7 w; m: `6 K5 H* w0 ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) m) R- J/ p, R, U$ JEvery other word you utter is love
$ a% a# R% n) y2 c  vI really want to know just how much you love me
1 m1 |1 B: `% a9 \$ b: F" w4 SI love you I love you with all my heart
+ k0 Y  X/ A2 E' x9 S, q3 z& ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 k% f' c6 O; T6 p9 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 v1 M+ o3 Q8 X- y( A- KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ r. p, ]3 g9 D+ s: q3 a( c  Z+ s8 VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) V1 p. M0 V" PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" l& I0 B& H3 |4 g( O# ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- _; U' D7 Y+ T' t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ s1 S. d' G: r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 ]) [! Q0 T/ }$ f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; ^. ?( Y& p; g& J. ]9 c$ y. P4 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" _* d& B1 r. n+ Q$ n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; U/ W2 c$ r; V8 ^6 A7 _" ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 B/ `. t* y$ }. q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ T4 Z9 N7 t4 _7 R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 r5 |4 A1 ~  c+ n4 r* m8 ~1 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ }: d3 X' c& i: ~! K3 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! {. G2 x. Z' Y) N! A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' L4 M1 y" ]$ i5 l7 q0 y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* A( U! {1 y( G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 O- ^( v( h* z' ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* C3 b0 ^$ ]" a$ t& I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 K6 D9 V: k, N) w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 C" F) {& m, V6 K- t$ O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) l7 L( h( D  D# N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 ~6 N! }1 o* l8 g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) ]* M9 a3 x. ^" h" `2 W5 N  L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 E8 M4 g  c" t3 n8 ]7 w* ?: s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' l0 B9 t- `5 v" j" l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 L4 f/ X, z$ x3 ~* A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  m/ a6 u/ ~0 j2 g0 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 J- R- J" S3 O8 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# L" I, a: A1 [% b8 W" _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. N5 [7 X% t+ C, [% |' o& f$ E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 H7 @% P# v+ f2 ]0 D7 Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 \& i6 l% I3 W8 M; X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 C1 y( w, v: q  Z' Z8 v( g3 e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 z- p2 g% j+ S% F( k5 D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' U5 f  x7 _7 k) o/ b' w9 k) @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>