【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 v+ G4 \: ?" Y- g  mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 r4 a8 E( M1 e8 T$ O6 F+ jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 k4 A6 n0 F. ~( bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  ]7 H$ s- Z( {: Q: v$ cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 t' b  ^* h1 G& R2 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ h; m6 m& o& i* F7 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 i4 e" w) _3 w4 P, j+ W  Y. ~Every other word you utter is love
4 h5 v& y- Y5 q5 \2 q2 AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, L1 l$ p- ~, RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. {  K, z' S- ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, \1 n3 }: t! ~I want so much to see inside your heart
' T& q3 s' ^: l8 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ J4 q, x& L9 l, @5 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. R+ Q5 ~8 n* D: T) y: _, E1 y1 vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 d- j5 ]6 M; [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& T" t$ |1 m: q" U# z  P* G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 ], S: Z4 C: y! B" B& v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 i- G6 c# @& f, h( W/ b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ K$ M$ S- {6 i, l! I: {) d( h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- i: s  [) l% K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! R6 _) A8 r/ j7 p" y  M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 A5 ?( `- a6 x9 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! c9 z4 k# y# A# q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- U# W6 t; p' a# N' `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; x+ n1 z& X8 H* L- A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 Y0 D; n$ @: U$ {# ~: c, A; B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ R- G( p& O# q4 E6 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 X$ K7 y3 q/ Q4 \+ L/ p: o9 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- E2 v, ^0 |. a& o8 X8 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: e9 A& J( Y" R3 E9 G" E2 x) R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* T4 f1 Q  B2 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ s- s  q. Y2 ?) v4 S$ ?5 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 D% H# X; z% J: ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- \/ l7 p6 U( B% h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 I/ Y0 Z2 {7 z! f5 M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& [! [$ H4 b6 q# s: n/ O1 P4 i4 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# F6 t+ |9 Y5 L! u7 o# M. W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' i5 D! v% ^9 E! K" E* b我请你剖开它
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4 }+ q* @  r7 D! l' f4 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>