【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, R  N4 i( O( |/ ~0 l3 c5 [5 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 z$ F0 p) c' i1 U* K/ IThe sky is happy down to its soul
# z( k$ }( u; aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ d& O9 u8 v. u. K7 S+ T! e" nYou needn’t fear anything
9 K  q% f$ c* u4 l6 }( O7 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' F0 M% [0 I. d% Z7 |" ]6 ^2 g0 |5 ^Every other word you utter is love
0 p. P7 G) a: J4 i" t" g& k+ uI really want to know just how much you love me
' g3 K0 ], R8 V5 {2 g! o5 k( KI love you I love you with all my heart
9 N5 L" z7 f+ Z, q: s- R1 hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" M1 `. S7 k7 Z; B: K: nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; H6 M8 w+ k( o- ]" V5 L  A- v7 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 r# g) v  s+ h! LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, w7 o5 L' a2 D8 tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% U0 M3 a! ^4 K- z: {; `! X: I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 i' x% p& ~+ b7 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% F2 \  E; g5 |5 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- M; P) @3 O7 N& y& N! _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 V( l. }. [. @/ t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 c: V' Y! X* i/ u3 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ U9 k3 f! k# Z, D6 l) x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 L0 Y9 V5 e$ }! X$ z5 T; {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* i( ^5 U# q( Z* T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; N9 C/ y6 `" @; r9 V# H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: t+ u5 J' X5 e# Q5 J/ s) R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( N& q$ J# k8 e9 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& e' R4 R$ s) |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 K' m+ e2 i7 U' [3 D' h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ ?. M& c6 e: J% W+ ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 U2 U( T" q3 C4 \1 d7 z' S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) R! r4 P; O$ H! ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, G3 G* u% S. r* L6 j! i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 h  o4 Y( a) b9 s. r; R" I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 N. x9 w, m; {1 r/ ?$ o8 n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) @' I+ ^' f$ w0 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 Y1 t% m3 K$ N9 C( G2 t; _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# ~" i4 G5 c' `/ T3 w5 ~7 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! v) a! g8 I+ m. d3 k7 Z; K我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>