【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 A. h' M! f' W3 Z( S( BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) ]% ^; z" l' X6 J: f" x0 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, @- q  p$ A) G9 L0 R+ ~Nothing can compare to my love
$ w5 u& }* O) a  g* L: wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 E2 \$ R+ W+ P& H) p5 dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 W& a$ e* f* i9 l3 X6 @) lI regret not dying
: Q4 y% M/ C/ x( U3 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 L' M) y- [6 Q! ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; `& c/ ^5 R2 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* s8 t' ^. _% l( i: G3 h* H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) t5 _" R! B* b  q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 M7 x0 j5 |" T! p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, \$ f- `1 @$ h5 A+ j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 W+ u( c/ Y) I6 s- `; F" |6 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, S2 d3 u' a" F) d" @3 b* b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% T% w: V% J7 ^5 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 V9 |" m+ i* ~; F5 i7 o! f- `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- X3 b5 E8 q. [# m' e4 e. Z& e1 {0 m" l( W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& ]3 ?, U" ?& \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& M$ ^/ {; M+ n3 S5 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ c+ u" d! o# e3 d+ s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 M& `# ^3 f) C5 K" j4 r: I$ m5 o6 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) K" b+ @/ X4 N+ Y* ~! p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% j7 v' J1 E1 d) S3 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& c' Z- D4 \, u4 E3 v$ D5 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& E: d3 c: \: S# b2 }) E+ f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 G3 |6 t) F8 v1 j+ v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; G' B# X; b) P% h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' U. V5 `9 d3 C) K# D' o6 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, U0 I8 o' l' @9 L- ^/ G5 |% q<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 f5 `: E1 m4 r9 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ l6 ^+ i  x  O# J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' V: ?, o& k1 g! L1 O! U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 w' _4 `6 F! D7 K3 z0 w6 U. e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 P5 V/ U( K, w  |6 Z# Z& W* ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 o# ^3 B1 P. p" s" p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 N% E+ ~8 ~+ c! U9 V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, E$ L( G4 @7 w8 S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 X" I9 r4 ^+ D1 S我请你剖开它

1 O3 B9 C$ h) F" E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>