【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* j  Y2 `3 j1 ?歌词我附在后面。
% y6 B. V( x/ R  V" W1 h& T, g2 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" V% f0 E% k  Y3 m6 e2 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 m6 G9 B/ K. ?5 _' ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 {3 L' [$ C: s+ ?: a. A/ FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% p7 j; v, ~+ UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 q+ `2 D4 s1 \( m( l3 f! jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 I* i/ B6 I9 s% x9 g6 wEvery other word you utter is love
: |( U3 U) K+ ~% ~3 u# QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 c) l. J# f/ z: I- p8 X6 z5 wNothing can compare to my love
+ h+ i7 a% A6 ^2 f5 zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, [: @8 {( p& B+ z5 F) l0 v+ q  rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 _; W1 r9 w3 I3 E& lWith such a tongue as yours,
- B: h# d; F6 S- nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% ]: @! e- p, PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! ?, F9 ^% V7 D6 r; M9 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ u3 N- k- u: n; G8 D! U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; Y; W9 I; J" ^! l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 W7 ]' T/ E" e/ a/ m/ P) Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 a7 i. R9 b1 ^% a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 l6 Q6 i6 f0 G* ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  ^8 \& e& D0 A! K+ w9 k; e) n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" O0 Z. S* o7 a* P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. i, _0 I  m. K  X; w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- y0 q& N3 N& A2 v- K; U% D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" X1 |6 a. W) K4 j  q2 R- Q& Z/ e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 h, i" W3 z% U1 ]- Z4 N: N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: e  t4 P- k. a: L/ H4 S. A4 d* V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% x! q- \) a6 W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: s2 K; R7 B9 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: k( q* g: Q; L: X9 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 E2 K6 n& _7 t* e- o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 o' J: ~& w0 }! U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. l- z4 f" H0 I1 q1 {/ E4 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  |4 M9 S; [( C7 {. h, o1 Q2 f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 |3 v; P4 J0 J3 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 T$ Q4 w; Q- k' M+ C9 ^4 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ s4 f/ j" z- C' F& Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) F/ O9 w, v. g8 b. r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" v6 F! u8 |6 A* c5 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ x3 A  M4 B2 y4 C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 h7 L; N  @1 P& @1 x. G1 ~4 I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" d$ L- G' |% v( ^" F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( k& m. [2 t1 Z3 P9 Y, _3 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 N+ n3 `1 }" {- C( S3 h% d: b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% U9 D4 z1 U* @! W5 S1 y2 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 o, e( O+ P' k我请你剖开它

: n" P  o5 }$ P( y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>