【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 C7 [" v+ R% g4 V" {( P  YThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 M0 G! I: K9 l7 \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" k( B3 x1 L+ |) z9 |0 n$ }  tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ [, X1 v- A' U- _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! @6 I2 m% o) hNothing can compare to my love
1 N9 ]9 X& N+ B' Y- C% f& `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: x1 q5 W' `, VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 h6 P8 ~: z- y  R3 P6 V$ n& C  II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 r! o0 }7 p/ _) V0 O: mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. Z5 [. G% k& g" _! e- KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. W  V: Y) u1 R8 [5 M( n- x; A5 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% Z) k5 F4 Y! P6 L! n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( C4 r8 E2 e8 J% B2 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* U) C$ `, k, X/ N& O9 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- }2 ~8 h, h' }5 v" p$ S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& `) g9 }" _5 ^: s; D/ e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* a( @7 N( y7 G( j8 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 F: S; _" U/ M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, {. ]  E. K; F- P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% a0 }0 l/ e4 ^3 F+ Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ a0 R5 S* ]' U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 s! z; p! y, p) B: g& a4 p) ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 n5 C. h- F  c" _, M/ j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 B+ Z* n( b/ s9 L3 K: b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 J) Z$ [8 P8 t3 R0 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 v5 q; l0 G/ l$ d4 P+ v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% P+ b; }# g. {% Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( }6 Q! I" e/ T! [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 N2 L0 F$ [" L- @; e- B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: m- i/ S: A, ]! p+ X( I" M5 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 `& P  u0 ?% I6 @2 s- ^  \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ v! h$ N; w) C' u/ S8 Z: E5 c  i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# K  F  S1 I* y- z0 ?9 Q4 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>