【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) E% X6 r& @, }- s4 f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 r& U9 H& T# x6 d" }+ ^8 Q! KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: E, p0 Q- {5 C# X) S! C4 W+ z% NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# `9 C; p/ U! P# [" i9 a' @4 ?! oThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 k8 n9 c0 o7 f1 L, lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) r4 }6 G! S/ {; [" Y& r7 k! oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: b  K4 U! w- D! I- k  G0 M! Q5 lYou needn’t fear anything
2 m( q4 b# u" S/ `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 d: O' n6 c. o5 N3 xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! ~% t2 \! v0 n$ aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) {2 w/ @% ?3 WI’m still filled with fear
9 W1 H! r- N' hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' i5 z/ U, y) iI regret not dying
) f+ i( e: l6 ?( W2 g+ r: ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! B( ~. W3 O  B# X& H9 |With such a tongue as yours,
7 k9 E: D  [( _9 c' _/ Z5 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& u! Q9 Q9 V- y; g2 f* a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: z; m4 y+ G, r' O0 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 D/ P% J. S  N' B! h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ E9 e' v! Q' S: h" K7 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, h+ }) X4 W2 q" Y. ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& K; `2 h8 Y8 Y- _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! p$ K# [& W8 z0 t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# \3 r/ n9 q$ N! w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# }% g* m7 m) m% {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* B; |* l. b5 ~! p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 Q# X" Z# l. g) K" Y# i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ l+ M' K3 G8 a( }$ \2 _7 b<P>你无需担心</P>
" v9 U) D5 N) M0 Z* x2 _) s$ W+ j8 ^: w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) e! L) K1 i6 \9 e* L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) v1 ?/ }+ f% Q, h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" e* {, E5 k1 g! ~( q5 {) r/ l2 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 o. h" j0 L) d" K. p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 w7 l1 M' E( n2 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 j6 B& s4 D5 f, |' y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- }+ S( G( H  ]3 w- S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 C& r8 H7 N( F+ _8 D9 ?, @, F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 g7 u  [! @/ T# K# P) L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- ^/ W& o! r/ n0 Y6 W6 L4 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* b$ y2 `# h& i) R! R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% A$ n, p$ p8 o1 \2 b8 O9 T. l. u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# x0 ~; Z9 F8 n; N  L2 q1 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" T  R8 `5 j) p" S0 u* E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. ~6 `* U* K% ]( l' Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% k; q% @) o3 m) F$ s* ]+ A# D7 \3 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 {8 T8 q- d0 m! J; `: ^9 ?& j2 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ R3 V& V" G$ A  A7 I+ M- [- S# V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 j. ?# v/ ?. x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. L9 T: h5 v' ~& @: J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>