【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 n" k! x8 a! ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 S; D) [. y* k: H1 N- s+ lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 O1 ?3 o  V, Z6 \$ t- K$ nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 J2 M0 o5 F- e3 }2 G6 z9 tSeeing the sky content with its love
+ y( q9 V$ V0 o2 J1 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 H; I1 I/ p, N- X- l+ V$ a! r) FEvery other word you utter is love
. \) W1 J" X- a) u. `% ?6 l8 `I really want to know just how much you love me
9 z2 Z- E5 H9 n  D- u- lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 y$ I3 ]: U! d: R2 ^( M1 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 Q8 R. ^2 X* uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" `( ]7 ?# T- _. w+ pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" ~' t8 I, \  o1 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: ^  V4 V0 {# n; SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 a+ p3 }5 w# q/ w6 R  C: Y! kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) v8 \  Q3 [) M+ w$ X& _% u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 f6 A! Q' w1 {4 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; d" d) c' Z, _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! _( }, C7 J6 m3 V5 V$ B9 e6 b9 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 [; e+ M0 G" m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 y. M. H9 |/ Q+ }5 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; D* O! H$ d9 f! {4 z. u; r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! D# f) u/ Y" {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 ?( [- o+ L6 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& ?1 P( Q1 Y" L! a% Z5 u" R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( j6 Z/ l: r; M% |0 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 c) F$ G- K9 G; L% _$ [5 l0 l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 l' w  [) H/ v: i) @# r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- k$ C# z( S, |/ x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 _2 d' P) t" V  S. Z7 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 _; s% j8 V) N8 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. \' ?& T8 V: l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  p8 i. H! |" }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 n/ a3 B# s% N2 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( [5 H/ B3 `+ Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% m9 `4 |8 Q5 q  c* R% P  e& v# a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: M+ a9 h- j( j6 @4 b4 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) m" ]( k. A5 v& G3 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 A( f3 x% I) a+ Q& ]* M( t) ]# I: X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# @5 J; y) @  u4 q) N* M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* g( d+ C* I7 J1 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  M; `) W* y4 x9 }& V2 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 n+ Q1 h+ o, B1 T, D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" Q" T1 A" T- A8 l6 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% d9 q8 d. K  U/ @3 d- H; Z3 j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, X7 j! t- j: B, B% c! s我请你剖开它
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$ j  x6 f1 i5 t) I+ V/ T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>