【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; D1 M5 g8 |+ N: D( E& e% w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! `1 t% X$ C1 C& NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 |  @( t0 B5 D* `2 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ K4 N$ N# m# Y$ ~; C0 a3 `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 Q- \5 g5 l* r/ J6 T6 V+ N7 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ G* y6 w9 y+ g5 ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. k4 Z: T! l( ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 w* N, I2 V- O$ q$ ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ V/ |% y( ^  N2 d3 ~# q* tI want so much to see inside your heart
/ K2 e. m2 |( T# m2 V' r8 {) {2 E9 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! X& f; @8 S) r+ HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( u# O8 ?! B5 l4 ?9 k& ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. A) K% A$ N, b/ }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% z$ A, Y& v  D# v* G" H( |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. e8 B6 q" Q# p; X) W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* S1 Y( z  u" }5 a" w& k/ g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, Z& }' ^) X/ i7 f1 K" C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; o. B: h5 j7 y1 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, T  N/ H" m4 L1 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# v& s! n- r0 n/ \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: i% @8 ~6 U1 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& `3 _5 M- b- L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 H, y9 a2 ]- m- U  D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# g4 q6 K* s  M. ~, y& m2 S4 C2 z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: m, j, ?, d$ @0 ]! x6 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ c, b. V0 ?7 f& \4 a" h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 L& T/ r, o0 {8 }  e8 n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( ~  f/ N+ @# V. Q. V* U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 j& {9 A+ r6 B; s( U% }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ J& X+ e! ]1 t0 D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% @5 q1 d4 R$ i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ B1 j3 b! ~, a! r& }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 P% z' ^" d& C, Y* O1 M& m0 }3 `4 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 [5 b2 b! H: Q1 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; t2 K/ s$ n2 i- y, o7 b& I, Q" Q0 A8 ]: E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 i# x* v6 J- X' s/ }8 r; U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. ~/ C) z0 z, M7 d5 ?2 K% Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  O/ J2 D9 O7 q: ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 L  R7 R# ]8 r5 n& v( c% T2 A8 m; C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% c3 E1 P) D! f# `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 v" Z$ S4 X% k6 Z' ]$ L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 n" W8 q5 \- F! t) Y; r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' c! i6 z6 k; W' K( L7 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ h( k7 J1 r; ]+ y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>