【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 Z1 g. l4 F7 M2 Q  K  Y! |; fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# x* Y: s8 Y& ^9 x$ B! wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; ]+ @0 I. W' a2 CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 d" M' u2 m9 ?5 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 T+ d$ y3 K/ R8 vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 ~5 L" L6 n9 c4 H" A! J# m' D- zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 _' r0 q8 g9 ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ g+ H2 [1 t* VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 v9 I+ D+ f" _, J( D& W: @  hI regret not dying
+ |: h0 M" J" N+ l6 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' }8 B! s+ b1 G/ l+ E  z4 nWith such a tongue as yours,
8 z& {6 l+ w) J* |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: G1 S4 o5 `, p4 u' _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 F  c6 _1 S1 |+ e9 g4 D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ p0 P) c0 Z0 l- g# ^. o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ R# T1 ^$ {2 ]5 e, H2 x0 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  C/ k9 O8 {; V0 ^& b4 f1 l/ F0 o5 G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( q% C: |& C7 S9 W' b2 g  [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: [6 ?% X0 K# H2 [7 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 H+ U$ Y5 i& L) i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; J6 A" @' f: }, L# {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# {% G" X6 p( I: S  _. X) W  b# n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& [( w" N, T7 z; i- C: R) g2 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 t$ E1 u0 q* j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ Z7 @$ b8 y, h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 q3 @) |5 k9 h& s! C. H$ Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ q( X* P$ o- A5 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 a  u- f) M1 b9 G0 ~: e& b6 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) O" `" V- M/ N$ i# \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; w& T- z8 u$ v3 v, @& S% q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 T* g7 t  W' Q! m9 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, }% w" u: S0 g" x' ]$ P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* l$ l0 ?3 M! V, P5 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 F* p% k7 O8 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 W. [- y! |! v; j% k! Z% e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 }7 [- l1 A8 I2 T  j8 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ E6 Z: W+ i* M6 M: s2 D4 G, ], V$ D$ {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ e( w6 Z1 j5 j: e3 {4 t4 W" c4 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 e: p: _' n  a& N" q  i; s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% A8 `9 Q6 ]" f7 _% l" G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 [% X: x- H0 g5 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- Z  T" C1 a1 J* o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* s( O+ G$ @: N, N5 x/ D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- o7 R( y2 u# w1 p, K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" Q% @  F- H1 ~# ~" T; @: X% j: M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 h- A( s4 K) m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ ~* I  [! U4 B) ~+ K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>