【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. M  ~" F: e$ \) H( D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 B- f! ]4 Q% q8 ~7 L  ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( v3 h0 {1 `$ GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# q1 E& \9 Y; J1 J9 S& r$ K( K7 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 V# m' h# w. _* B3 z: A( [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( f$ V5 D0 N4 |( Q  @With such a tongue as yours,
+ u; p) C6 f) d1 e1 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ `& A$ C4 O/ [0 K2 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. w* b0 m. _) w) jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' I( Z" g2 B' f  a: ^7 t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 B( }) L9 I- z9 o0 z) l, ~7 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' ?  X6 k  S5 c3 x& k6 j% y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 v! p, m) X7 A8 ]  W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 ]' G) _4 N0 g; Z7 l. X! a1 b  d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ C& I; ?5 F  d7 W  V) {6 v1 Q2 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# c4 S  [" w4 S+ |<P>你无需担心</P>
6 G: Q# l( f5 c/ k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 i- t+ o7 E1 N  S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" I5 N/ a7 ?9 H5 A. t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 o# A/ H( R, @8 s* M5 h& o/ i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& J4 @/ A- N4 P2 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 b' j" q3 \- i5 p, z- s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- k1 R' o. ?2 v# l- }# E" w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& d* D( u' x/ e3 W0 o, Z, m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* s8 A0 W+ ^5 d# Z1 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- M# _. ~! H! T" @: r/ N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ b3 r+ ~; J8 ]# F3 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, T- s5 m4 j  w7 g3 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! a% [8 e# b' V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  @8 r& f" l) v" e# m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  o9 R+ @8 ~% l: J! o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- o' ^, x- }$ F! s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* T: W7 V* ]/ u, N+ h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% E& t. g3 g$ D; p7 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 ]7 c# \1 j8 S) A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 e2 y7 N2 h9 _! S1 W2 g2 @1 u  q8 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 A) ?9 f, u7 i5 f" @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: @/ f' F6 ^% v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: ^, }1 L& B1 G  ?# J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>