【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ x2 i7 _* S4 D/ W1 {5 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; Z( \8 q8 l3 R' QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( `- T+ _  Y2 T" O, y: pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 h% }. o9 m/ W0 n' W* l0 cSeeing the sky content with its love
6 j+ N" n; g0 K& ~7 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' b% }+ p7 |$ z7 h3 nYou needn’t fear anything
( ^# c+ o5 m- R& ^9 o1 F4 a4 Y, yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 Q# |7 _1 C; L, c" ^8 n+ T8 r  KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( W3 T: I# R2 E6 p8 ]4 M6 cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. N% A- c* B$ L* g4 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) z% N0 L5 P0 s5 z' MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 C# }9 P' t% G& \2 a3 e! }" ^! i" qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 |7 r( }7 \! F0 d2 @. Y- uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 t- F  b/ R; h; ^% M3 v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: f8 y2 F' f1 r$ n; n. ], }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& [) M' Y& u# ?( n% P  b8 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 |6 Y( q1 k; w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, Z7 ^/ |# I4 z; l3 i( E" h8 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ o7 @% o( R! w$ T9 K3 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; Z9 z! E. ~' \8 ?# D' ], i/ \" {* D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& P  f% v3 H) X- J' L# y1 i8 I3 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 M& d3 M" [* G  [- ?( [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 m: Q9 g% z9 `7 [$ a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' T; F+ l; g7 k2 C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 y, v6 D9 T2 d7 ~1 o8 a. c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ G+ v5 V/ o; U  ~% B3 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# ?# r1 D* h( [1 _- Q  ?% h, z( ?" O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 q# D' _5 y0 y" U4 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, h8 V( k3 B7 B$ c% e6 _& Z' k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ [; {; C6 D& V+ G$ j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 y9 R. t0 E6 m- m) Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 ^% n0 c/ d+ D, z# W9 J  M' R. K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 {5 J) F6 P6 G$ |! Q. `* E$ ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 D9 P7 I/ P& ?7 N, s: s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* u1 t% G2 Y, R; A3 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ E, O2 K/ J  d' D0 G  V1 a" l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. E$ |  S8 R/ V; M: c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 U; _5 I! e) s" H$ H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' b% J4 A) v/ \# D" b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, N+ k" U# ?( j3 w3 ~  _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

- e  y4 h. S6 O* c% Q2 c3 D4 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>