【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% Y( p% R( t" `, H0 p6 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, {, R5 ?+ e" r( r. C0 r, _I love you I love you with all my heart
5 L. ~5 Q2 G3 Q$ K" S2 @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& l, U0 [+ B' U6 J6 m3 z+ \1 C) X. Q1 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; Y: g& z" O. Y, Y: gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 q' k1 c" a% y1 R7 \% QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 \' X" @) {7 \7 ?. X9 {% U  AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 G' B$ s; W& M& e) S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) e6 ~; N" k* ?1 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( a  u0 U. T( }+ J) ?6 @, Y- U, |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! P. [' W2 B& E1 V- d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# G/ r* i( z7 \( Y, T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 y2 t/ {/ M2 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  `! R% ~9 {& C# _2 p, j) `) p6 U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' m7 e  ^( q& U5 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! U2 [. M0 f- C) x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( B* R1 S+ J2 y3 J7 W$ ^4 F4 V+ I, V0 s<P>你无需担心</P>
$ B% x" B& F5 G# O, z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ O- e' s1 m$ O% Y( N3 `  }/ {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 ^& Y1 ^: r8 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- x, G, X) O/ Y. ~, n' z* R8 E: _) e8 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 A0 k3 z% q: k5 o' s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# R/ F+ i4 C' N  Z" ~. n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! n! y. |7 w" L. ~- S# |1 A* s3 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 {+ A" I4 k7 ]% w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* o$ V$ j- q4 S1 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 w! A) ^0 b% {5 ~# a8 e* C; u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 X4 u" ~3 M* F3 h( N! P$ n' {$ r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 e& F# t* o, k4 Z0 |# W/ T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 v* ]% {& N8 X5 i' c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 p; `( m! N8 X9 Z6 A$ ?8 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 p% P. P( T. c) W# z$ k. n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' I  D! a* g* J9 E- K& L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>