【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 w. T; ]5 m9 I( |0 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! B0 r: r1 p9 u; Z& m) V. LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; K% z" h: m# O1 Q& c0 B; Y- MNothing can compare to my love
# s7 W  t  A) ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, B4 }% J& e. _& T/ G0 @! P" ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. d5 W$ q! c3 @9 q; ^# I" q" TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! j* h7 u1 V  A0 t5 c& W! N) @I’m still filled with fear
2 [8 R# z3 v, o& W( CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 S# d7 x% `3 l* |2 H. W+ BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 s: O/ I- d, L. B6 A% N# vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ s4 D& |# k+ D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) G$ ^3 h' @' t* Y$ l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 X, l" a( K0 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; Z: Q( {  f$ W& ]( w" `$ E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( L/ z. v! [' L: X. R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  |! ?! C% h# H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 c; {9 Z& ?$ @9 D0 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" Z4 X' B3 H  g5 V! D9 `/ s<P>你无需担心</P>
2 d# z" `+ `4 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  q% [8 F8 T/ @2 I% ]. }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# g( w- F. L9 t& i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& Q: j, p, x+ ]# y6 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( W7 e# x9 D+ w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 T) g6 V( d$ V0 k! _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ i! U, N! Z, Z7 o: n4 n3 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 G6 `3 i2 A( R9 O' N* ?8 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ W4 |; n) z6 z% Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 ~; t# M  Q, a1 D5 \: o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  X7 [2 N1 M% h) w: w2 b* X! w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: P$ [& J+ w$ _) N. p( [7 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# {; T) n$ K+ D. g% T+ a& C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ l' E. g/ b" j. E% [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; M- `6 M3 r* L& z# Z- P$ H) h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& H1 U/ ~& k" I: F/ T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" P- L, @7 J1 Y8 D: |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 w  P4 Y% C6 b9 T. P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 X8 p. G* Z+ X. V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& {( ~5 i' y0 ~5 c6 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>