【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: ]0 [5 J5 d8 o1 u( h7 Y' j5 KWith the moon kissing it every night
3 K2 _. e! S8 ^, K* b/ e- dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- j9 ?( g  R  C' nI love you I love you with all my heart
) m$ g- G4 r. i5 D; L6 LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 d3 W; S% v6 [& l1 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ @. g, j  t! |( f- n" uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 ~5 n/ C. e& Z$ {  a( z9 E6 j" b. SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ x3 z* l' W0 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. \6 J' A* [0 B# k! X: U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ {$ [, s' n9 V7 `; V! P, _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. X  G, a- ^. r* D# ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 N" x* H0 S9 u" W) D  m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; x' l) [3 C4 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ S/ y  l2 U$ N# v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  p: p" R9 V$ I8 ~3 s$ Y4 \. d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& k0 W( L+ i0 U% `9 j- {1 ?, ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 z, o/ H% |& R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 y8 K& M  p' g/ j" n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, _# F" @3 H- _9 W. W) {. t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  Y. g, z9 F, a" {- B* S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, I- A$ b# L) X- z: F3 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 L3 p% h4 p) K4 m' A: W# \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 m- c" P' R6 d5 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( R4 F- F; q  r  l/ N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* E$ ?1 {9 V3 _; N# e0 U" [# d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ F0 V: e) }3 O0 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  _7 C5 ]# G* M% P) X  h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ `6 O% ^& `- ]$ `3 I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) J5 m7 o& K$ }. L; R+ ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& H: c3 F" N; `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: e% {+ F3 [' D' }$ b% [; y4 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* ?# [2 J, z* C! J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 B( u2 {0 D' a5 I( i& H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, S& g2 @3 q, @% V7 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& Q# i4 b# }5 Q: G$ c& R) R2 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 W+ i  y" X8 T& s, h* b7 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& g$ X. a+ ?$ f0 C4 V1 ?: I, U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% u1 z+ ?. F& U/ L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 ^) i2 Y4 ]1 x. E我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>