【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 n1 S+ B7 r2 V& Y# dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 g. l9 v1 m0 @3 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 H# y, T8 V  a. Y+ W; ~% rThe sky is happy down to its soul
) @1 R* U4 d0 C* C4 e* GWith the moon kissing it every night
& H6 j: E+ \- TSeeing the sky content with its love
' t4 T! Y8 F8 s- \9 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 Q" x: t: v% k8 a, L% R. J0 gYou needn’t fear anything
. w3 d7 U" o8 H; wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 S$ L7 w' j3 P% e  t/ w& GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 M; @# o) t$ Q# v! |/ V3 _7 t. nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' [7 @( h: r9 a/ w; n; DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 b, R4 {& M9 @3 s+ }% j  SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ |  ^+ `7 Q3 C( o5 r% CI regret not dying
: t2 v* E9 y' j/ KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 z9 t* u: b, L. P6 [- VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 b0 [3 ]  k- w% J2 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" z+ K; i$ H, _6 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& n# i% H: J: q2 M* {. ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ n# t) Q, J; r; Z: P0 y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 P: P* F) M$ e  u6 E) j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. F+ Y# J  ^2 v7 |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  ~! k! u" _8 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 Z, ^$ h% b0 C! t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ F; G% \( l& Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 q8 H) i2 i; v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 B3 A- ^7 K3 [* x# ^8 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& |, }  x* {" @0 e; j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" k- M# Z9 T- p+ K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% C. A7 o$ w" i" Z- A" ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 H  g" [+ \; i6 J" [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 ?( `/ [0 b. S. ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% y. M# U. u0 I: f, V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 g8 m" y# U, n. J9 N3 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ t2 V- D3 ^* |8 K: F; H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' t& R( h  g5 [7 H6 o& h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 V- h( L, O& i: W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( h9 N/ P: P& _& X5 e- F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 \# B& @) z- e; g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
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+ b; ]9 D) e7 d" J9 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# N+ F2 I; ^6 O" s/ W4 h- ]' O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  [) a, S" U# O' Q8 z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) v- y8 Q3 d: x6 }. Z  ^# D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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