【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ `, ~2 K: A  V! U/ a/ hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) E5 k# l: e# p4 y& `/ k9 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
) w4 \9 G  x3 E# }1 c8 B! {With the moon kissing it every night
6 _8 |- ]+ Y" Q+ J7 h1 e4 `Seeing the sky content with its love
( P' r7 z& S* f* ?5 {- F4 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! b( R! ?- t7 T  n& U% fYou needn’t fear anything
3 i2 A1 w6 E0 w+ N- `- x) G0 i" ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* ~+ L( M* c  L& F- m2 X8 @; y% LI really want to know just how much you love me
2 i" K  X1 D" {I love you I love you with all my heart
- O" }7 i6 p' t, O& y1 S9 W; PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- N& |8 n/ Z5 I! o' h. DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 b; U" E% o/ g: f: y* vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' N( w. I( q& F; S& K5 N1 S, m0 cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& \, O% v' M) F7 x- n* e2 ^. P( FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 L) G" I, l/ O4 _+ p% z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 I* H% q6 r0 l. {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. i" z. L9 X3 }, g+ q3 J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' f+ j3 d* Q- V6 g- D0 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 U: a- y6 N  v+ t% u* x<P>你无需担心</P>
' c! n: ]4 @$ b7 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( H/ M6 P0 {' D1 @' j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! Z1 F/ d4 w8 X5 l; b/ T3 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 B$ L5 e' }. P6 X) j7 X# y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& T* [' E: N/ P6 W- y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" S1 a- N8 ?0 j6 u  R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' [. @3 [- R% |6 {  y/ O# {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ Z$ Z* o; p3 j% X2 `' m' G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ ^' Q2 f; V5 x8 B, a( A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; d, v! V  @' k& s2 z* Z3 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- [* \0 e5 H0 t; ]: t  w+ @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ c6 F' d; L* R# J2 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- G  R3 k; b# u: z. I! o, N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: U* `7 s6 X0 \; m7 t3 K6 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, S/ [- H0 F9 w) c' q8 J8 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& C5 o! ]  B; {7 ^" O0 i' e; j; S我请你剖开它

( [& p7 r% o# E/ d! R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>