【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
3 _9 [; p; ^! M

$ T7 [  v( V! Y+ C歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; \, C+ R5 ^+ v. {* aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- H6 L6 R' }8 A% C, Z- J9 q4 s  ?The sky is happy down to its soul
2 D. _- i- I+ Z; `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# X3 U: a: Y. q% Q8 y! oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 m- d. s7 J* q) r4 ?) H& v  `! @  AYou needn’t fear anything
  A& Z1 [( }  U' @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) J/ K) k$ _" @) @Every other word you utter is love
0 h! ~: z- V9 ?* X5 e6 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 \/ J6 A8 n) x' a5 LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 d3 }% Y- V  K+ z$ k4 JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, e! y7 c! H! {# i4 _, C$ NI regret not dying
9 b3 G8 }9 K6 j3 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 z: S0 l9 Q& nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# }) c3 g" k; w& l4 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- p; H+ |% I2 M/ J1 W' I
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  ^" p7 y! B  ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 B, D  j0 N2 L# E, G2 g5 p+ ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 t0 R2 ?2 n3 }6 h4 Z( |+ P9 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" G' i' f. m# \% T& F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 x9 y; r/ v, K4 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& z  e  a0 ?" A9 L3 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# }9 c( i( K* I. p( F* j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) ~2 {+ j4 g$ s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! z4 @& F- O: z* ~# i& Y; y: h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 F6 t- \2 j8 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( U5 j( l2 G1 L4 [' s& U; ]( m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- M4 }# e& F8 f) K, [0 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* [6 h; _3 i4 E; v* J3 k3 \- F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& `& l9 r# ?) X4 T2 c( g& w6 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 O, b, }- o5 a6 a+ @' }# n, r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 H) J6 ?- l# W+ ^8 h$ m, d0 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 U8 u* k( L- [8 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. c7 \  b; O4 }  d0 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 z* H! H0 N& P5 ~- @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" m, g& Z( |! {$ |- V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, R$ v! T( Y1 M% H  v4 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 S! I/ n. s" b- F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ }' M) j- t! k2 q; X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 b: h! J5 N0 Z9 H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& [- V! z8 `4 r: j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 |' _8 [0 r. n( k7 c9 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- }  L, S% P/ E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) E' A2 h# _" k. ]我请你剖开它
5 [( @4 ]+ s6 L* R
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>