【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# Q4 O% E4 `1 C) qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* @! W; v7 z- Z. N# n3 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" X. F! T% v; @/ e  W2 Z+ ]8 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
# H. P' N( Q  Z0 NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 ^' j9 Q+ }- W1 K2 b: f9 j6 NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; ]$ \- m, f) ~1 @6 J6 n- tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 A" g! G4 B8 `  E2 V$ m; q( @I love you I love you with all my heart
7 c- ~- {2 M% a- m5 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 X, {- V5 O1 z/ p  y: N0 ~7 G8 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( g; [; ?' \2 A9 k" ^0 N; hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, r2 n2 v+ x4 ~  i: j) v3 h; ?, Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  ~# B; c* Q) S6 O/ y" S9 r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. ^6 q* _& p( _% l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. Z% Y) g, n- y- s- v" A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 l/ ?* {3 y9 v+ E- y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! u6 P4 ?: y! c3 P( w4 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 w5 _# M  C. x; k! H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% I6 x1 Z3 A. k0 P9 j' u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. d2 ^3 f/ N, S9 C4 H- o; N' m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: Z$ x' _1 T$ C# o& E. O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& `& g* l* n0 q6 w1 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% j* k1 o! l9 r; e, N# r  l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, m& T' c$ |1 I. W/ n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ T8 H/ {2 c, C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! L2 R5 c. P( X& k5 P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 E# Z/ K3 E2 t. Q: k( |% r! [. ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ z  }7 i! L- s9 r: j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ |5 \- @1 _$ i' o& A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! R& A3 A# W4 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 `, z, p  U7 Q* o! e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. S' g+ Z/ t- r& s' W: a/ E# L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* t5 |( L2 l. X$ }0 a( P5 }* s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 ]7 H) E# Z% h9 X$ B5 i6 [% `0 h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- [, d9 N7 @+ ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) r( {8 i& q' Q0 U" W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. ~0 F" |3 ^* N/ m- L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 o* |% v( _/ X* j2 T3 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>