【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! M2 W% C" o* s/ B/ y# s$ [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ U" m& a2 B8 W' \3 @The sky is happy down to its soul
/ h; O0 F) y+ j2 l6 KWith the moon kissing it every night
  \6 R0 ~# p6 ~3 k9 H* iSeeing the sky content with its love
& |9 [" C- |! ^0 \4 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 ]! y" g* P1 C: l' IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 n: G! a. I8 i! e$ jEvery other word you utter is love
! g6 ?& R! ?5 m% W8 f5 ~1 C. hI really want to know just how much you love me
1 B: b0 a. n& II love you I love you with all my heart
' S3 K4 F8 W* ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 i! H; t# R' mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" G/ y* h* E; T6 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ h) |' {$ m( H( X7 f. tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 p3 G+ {# v5 g* K& D! TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ P; A( C2 S) W$ J: b5 e* z9 c0 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 b+ |3 j3 O' d4 [( [5 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; _) {  M# M$ z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 f3 Z- Y6 ~! o+ `) R6 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- I* J. C+ a/ o" M. u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- Y& `8 F! R* f3 C7 d7 B& P; V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# B9 E" ^. e+ e: }! K% s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 g; H( |8 u$ L) e! P+ h' ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% [& i0 r6 D6 a, Y1 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 b* |  |  f4 g, J, E  n+ a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) h  r) Q2 x. Q: h2 V( H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 V: O, H" l( J4 n5 z& B% {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; G. S0 i3 c0 ?2 {7 Z& P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% }/ o* X2 B+ |0 x" I& i9 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  ~$ X$ |+ c0 i/ ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ A$ W; {$ g# l; D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 W! O, [4 H" n- i: g: D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 X6 V% n2 D6 y  T' @2 n( o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! |- N0 d9 q2 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 |4 X$ M4 O$ ]: D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 F# e: c$ k' A, E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 T7 L; A0 A. X1 R% y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 J% I/ m8 p, m; `* C$ W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# h# O5 c5 T8 F6 ?0 D0 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 x. F; o. {8 {5 L, F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 {* c  ]1 x# H: e9 b! ?: H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  w. C4 A/ H% F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 f8 R+ X6 _3 O  P# }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) b! |- u% k; `1 c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& D9 ~; ?- p9 v4 T. L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ T2 k- @0 y/ n$ E( I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; J$ |! b9 a7 h" d: U  n, s  R* b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>