【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: D3 k% g% ~" ^* W( OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ w' ]+ U* Y/ ?: C1 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 @; b) H* u: y" OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) z3 ^; @5 \* e# |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. d; }/ v6 C! J" n; FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: P0 u6 ~& o3 HEvery other word you utter is love
3 l- X( @0 Y$ w# GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ Q( D* H2 v( {7 ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) E! d4 h1 M/ a! S! }. C* TI want so much to see inside your heart
2 |  ^+ o) Y, h6 W& {, T6 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% M1 L7 [/ ^: q5 d0 x& n1 B) BI’m still filled with fear
2 W$ ]# N$ ^! b2 p8 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 j: Z; ], B& AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  n/ C7 Y/ F) k! i8 x: p9 ^  lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" |& T4 O7 B& T" L  tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 N2 y8 q) n6 u% y; f8 N* b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! \) s: _( q1 B' g- d. }- i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 E+ z/ _8 R! M- t& h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ v0 g* k5 S  T( L! k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 {# x) N) O& e# P! C4 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" f. o: g7 k- j, O% g3 J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% M7 u1 o! M  x, U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 F* X4 C& {+ j7 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, }& M, I' y0 F( x" v0 k5 e- ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, }7 W) R$ Y0 _/ `; l+ r+ P4 f! h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; a. B7 {  Y( \" m  V& c: ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) X7 V" c) Q9 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 c4 L5 i# S0 p* \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 C- [- ^6 r, H6 E1 J! R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) u+ H; {. q* \6 G1 ~& u5 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ A, [6 o! V, f( S" B7 s3 _9 N" P0 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ v! o' d3 r2 s) j1 s% v5 {5 F+ X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- `5 |$ l) I' D2 m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>