【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 b" o' a' W$ DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ E  e1 e( h4 c* n  zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# u3 \4 Q7 @+ }* x2 \  }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( h' R9 E1 s1 }& l1 J% j" e, f5 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ m( |  C& b" b0 j! YI’m still filled with fear
9 D! b7 a9 Q5 D8 T2 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 P- ^& I  p$ j! u/ UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 w) T- Q8 Q! [. Z4 n, `! TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) F7 V' N- _2 m/ y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) j- o7 b% [; K9 e/ @& ?5 q$ b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 R9 }0 a/ _  g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ s0 i/ j+ I" `/ z4 v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( |8 Y3 a3 ~; J; [<P>你无需担心</P>
! a6 d0 t5 m8 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) I; H, h5 K! l3 X" C0 H# a7 v$ W8 l# x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 t% s9 G# w; z7 X: x8 u  U0 C/ A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. x% A( M. Q7 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, Y& h- |: W1 K# C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% Z% I: I/ a8 T$ W" G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# @) v( P& A# Q% P. O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! J/ f* q. K) E2 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 k7 _. M! |/ e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 R! q6 E3 p5 K7 e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( l2 G. L; B6 h8 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 y. `) n# ~. a  [! K; k: R2 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) W% s0 m8 x, R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 o: A( i$ ?* h( L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; r$ |. T+ c" T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; Y; t) A' `' S- ]3 j2 q3 A2 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' x8 X6 o/ O9 s" E: o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ W- [; ~4 s/ y2 w+ ?0 R: k/ D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" d1 z5 V  G# |2 H4 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% B6 N+ N. N' p" B! J! p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, X3 U; w3 T/ |. A- s9 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! N; Y: T2 R% Z5 J% b5 ]: R& R我请你剖开它
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& M$ d$ M. H/ w1 c0 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>