【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 ]3 }  P3 F3 o; D$ j6 s3 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% G% d9 V9 i' Q) hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% y) [& g. W  b0 Z& e1 `+ ^. ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- G5 K/ g; J" K/ }3 K3 B/ yYou needn’t fear anything
# V( h5 q2 _. R5 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" F; A$ u3 [; k2 h% n* rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# F8 I4 u; `4 E9 X/ V3 }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 G# t; R& f1 c, ]; A: ~I want so much to see inside your heart
. S, A; I4 n4 d' ?  B# |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: e# j" s- l# _& A6 p& q% z5 [I’m still filled with fear
) u; `% o4 u1 ~. x+ N0 \2 x1 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 a6 e; o# S; p. \# ~  b+ n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ s$ S3 Z2 A7 z  y$ R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 n! T) {8 b2 L$ K) k6 u& g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% j6 w8 O! j5 L0 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ e: a  i5 w* X3 I- @9 D) I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 O& s" E, T. ?$ J! z' q( ~* r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 T6 L) U5 f7 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% z4 i  R2 G! T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 f0 n. i1 F. k& j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- E4 P4 N  e  Y9 A4 X- r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& D8 I# y- i- j( j. d1 h1 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. I9 _/ n8 x8 a. s+ b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' J! l9 C: K' N; k/ v7 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- ~* v! v! R& l* p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ O2 U7 l7 a& I' N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" s( ~  O+ l% R. C9 W/ r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) Q: ]& ~* s: R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! q" n/ a4 h$ a: K6 K8 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ ]$ Y8 O( _4 _- I+ f2 t* I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 X8 X; v/ M$ R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) |8 F" a8 N' ]) a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, p; p" a0 X3 S8 P+ F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. I' K. b7 g$ A3 o/ q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 B5 p; q% m5 x9 F0 ^7 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: v  D1 q) k7 D7 u0 R, ?% o# U0 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# Z7 q+ O9 z4 f1 Q" j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 j9 h$ w+ d- ~* F( G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* s& C, O3 }( P6 M8 N0 u. m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& r. u' x9 i! `/ ]1 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>