【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* \( M5 n0 r) p歌词我附在后面。
; V/ q* z% \0 G5 h8 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. d( t: Y( T, G; tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( y' Z9 X* M* ?) Y$ AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 b1 @5 i" F! i0 F) J: DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 k: o: y0 S+ k" _" `4 ~& f8 \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( O+ H; w3 Y' R; d0 L8 L8 f( sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  c, r, Z7 K. _  z( h5 ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 _- [5 p& i0 g/ I1 ]) gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 u6 B# u/ T# d* UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* `9 X, q: _& J' @9 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 T* T$ @3 Y2 j' u( U7 `. bWith such a tongue as yours,
$ a/ i1 y4 Z9 _! D. g  zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  u7 ?& k$ E5 S+ B5 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ Y( F3 u6 j5 J$ c- \% |2 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  N4 [  A/ ]2 }6 G) y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* o+ n: d3 |( ]3 t& \5 u6 {/ C* G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 R  e% ~9 m, }, I- Z2 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  s- t6 D% j' f4 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 s+ A9 c; f8 t* \6 t* `" _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 E& [/ H% K. n/ V( Z+ p. n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 p. m0 z+ f/ u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: X/ D! R4 O+ N5 w& F+ w4 g. o: F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' ?: x# P  \% E/ W2 ?- L7 }1 B$ S0 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  N0 p3 \5 R8 i8 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. @+ t- F- L$ U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) s& `/ _+ ^7 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% G: _3 x. X  ~# O0 {4 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 ^/ T  K. Q# e1 t9 {, T/ O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 l2 b% N9 U" d! |* C8 v2 u6 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 N3 t: q: J' p; O9 g: I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 l( ]7 _+ L7 h% z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ M* A6 Y  V$ l6 X8 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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7 m# e+ n- c& C5 y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 p& r0 z2 ^8 K" n( U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>