【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- S; x: |# Y$ @" }0 K* D9 q/ E歌词我附在后面。
# b  X) j- o1 X/ w2 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& C+ p2 z( g. q  M7 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 w1 P6 e5 D2 w, LThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 j. ^  {* q4 b  L0 D& MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- \9 \5 D& n# F, PI really want to know just how much you love me
5 Z0 V5 o& J4 v! p7 O" y7 aI love you I love you with all my heart
. s& X  E# e1 m) X7 o; CNothing can compare to my love
* G( B; K; F9 x5 H$ ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% k$ f6 a+ O% l4 X+ K8 v& QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; F4 J% i& N" W, T& L: @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* L( y1 W( k* @8 o4 Z0 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ G2 F! C5 i2 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% Q0 x$ J* r6 R8 d/ `; u; mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 R) z8 A% y: Y8 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# d3 Q( ~9 A# v1 }9 S/ V* o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, \# M2 s$ w& g' K# ?5 j4 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ N# ?7 t6 D8 H0 A: W: m: w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 A" b/ Q4 n) b+ K: ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- C0 m" E. c- E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) C- Z6 s" j0 X8 S) W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( L  X0 Y5 `( Z. l2 v/ p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 I; E( l6 \/ H& f, i0 N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* s7 n. z* U; x# k<P>你无需担心</P>
% c9 S% v# y9 C2 h4 M6 D+ S4 K$ V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! f$ f+ Y; v6 l, f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- y; z" N4 C# E9 o# f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. j- D8 V; @) G0 h# e  H2 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. |9 B! P: x2 u) X( _" ^) \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 u4 F5 t0 k) X# k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# |% ]3 W, B( }3 w/ _. }, a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) @; \: M+ B  _% X1 O: z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; w0 |- N$ w$ h4 z. k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 \/ e4 j; A8 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- _% x6 N% I/ `# v7 u# Y$ d6 K. C: m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ t& ^# f: |3 k% U) F8 }: g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, _4 y- C; u3 Z5 j6 W2 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 o. i7 m' D) y! \0 o7 a5 |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 T' U  v8 P) H& k$ b) E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 [4 o. Z- I  Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" B7 z9 C% Q+ X  v1 Q# D7 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 b9 O) n+ A, n1 [5 g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; f: A4 v5 B* Q. ]6 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ V8 s0 X5 Z% H" z) h3 K2 J, R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) N, K$ s- X" W, p5 ?3 r% l+ C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 a# _* @0 N* a6 Q. q- ]. b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: x- ^( I  @. f: R- r4 \# q' H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 u& ~% ]% [6 ~. b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 q  G8 C. f/ c% H3 l5 i2 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 R5 g5 u% ~  e5 r1 J我请你剖开它
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  p% g' _7 W& {6 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 O; m$ |- U& n; o% ~0 V5 v' ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>