【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. v3 u5 Z- ^7 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 ]4 [) u4 D; p. Q# xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( [, b, b) |% S& |/ F' |' b+ T% yThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ w# c& c* h) M- `' TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 D+ ]4 _+ b7 Z8 I) w$ C4 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 Q. O4 x" y; ^, U% d$ BEvery other word you utter is love
$ z1 Z9 D; y/ q7 SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( m7 b1 t' r& }9 t6 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 H/ H$ W& E' F/ {  g" l2 E* w7 T) BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 r4 T3 n+ L7 Q! c2 I6 \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 h* f9 o) q1 h# [+ ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# f4 h6 E# Y5 I- {9 j7 q9 B2 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* u, O- Q, N* r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 p/ x) q% S. t" N- M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ i! X+ g5 z' }& p% z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( P$ V; ^! E' }: `" d) G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 w7 I, F! }7 p0 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; b1 o# S: w* o( V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; ^, D- ?; h8 W! X% q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ A5 [& w+ F2 a* V0 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 ]. ~1 V9 A7 p9 r8 F( J<P>你无需担心</P>
3 T) ~1 k. E: a3 Q7 x4 F8 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. ~; c  \# J8 x6 _7 w. X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, m8 }1 i/ ~6 x2 z) u1 _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 V5 Z8 A$ z- F( D* P) t$ ^* l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% _9 I5 f! X% U4 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! i6 y! N# a& C( r" p/ T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 P7 x3 ?6 N9 O( w6 @; p. g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" h1 E. \- ?4 f0 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 t# N7 K9 {5 l+ H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 b; t! ?4 i9 R* V& {3 }  \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 V3 a6 a! l( O: R: t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 c% b8 p. |* Z! f( }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* B+ w4 Y8 s& K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( a2 _% T# q( k. z- R* N<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 H0 x+ G/ _5 P$ w4 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. {; |: c2 x! W, Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. y% y6 _) l; O! B6 L- [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; y6 h! P- ?9 j# F; q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' f; p4 E3 o! ?, \% r% E1 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: r8 \3 c' Q! }& ]2 d5 ~) z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

. B; E6 K' _2 ^1 M! ]2 F& E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>