【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 G- g6 t1 [  b* |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 ?' b" a) E& j2 R" W8 A& ]$ RWith the moon kissing it every night
8 l  C8 K& }0 v" s% lSeeing the sky content with its love
7 J4 ~2 f$ [6 V, r2 {+ yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& s! G6 W: ]6 \9 v0 w0 M6 zYou needn’t fear anything
5 r0 U' E+ V4 W' V2 K, y, f  lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% d, H: u& S8 W6 i8 OI love you I love you with all my heart
3 i6 h& y; T1 e! ~! q. jNothing can compare to my love
, ^# q8 t$ S* N7 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, p6 p) R$ d( O0 u# uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 H8 {& y8 A7 u% F" Q4 d- @4 z0 aWith such a tongue as yours,
# f: h% W9 {2 Y& o# J4 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 w6 I7 v9 {) f. nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) V' ~+ S5 X- |1 `" d1 Q; `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ o! O8 T. ~) i6 n& l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( s! M: ?; a$ F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% g+ x3 V# L0 j" y+ I' _+ n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. {1 _( [& F% I: U, k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! E7 ]8 P; B3 r8 t5 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& P6 y' K7 E4 W1 Y4 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 d. e& U! G( d+ g' n8 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% n  D# D: X0 o) n  r+ S1 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 ~" c/ L7 D# I, j- p' {' B- \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* t$ P# V/ M6 q$ n8 e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ I- J/ c. J; p' j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 }) P/ ^# {/ t- T& l$ P9 j( U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) y7 P$ f6 Y; a  ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) Y/ `) v' `0 ?$ x. K3 H# c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" q; [. A! V6 g& R6 D: I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# n8 A' n8 G* b. r. Y0 G# o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) |1 o: ]1 N2 q! q7 n  }# I. E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, e0 f! l9 |1 g, g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& g; b9 h0 z7 J7 ]  S0 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# m9 o' u. H" m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% L, x1 T0 ^. [, |/ `: D6 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: I1 S/ Z/ c: w7 \4 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 E; n% V( {) Q0 y! w$ P) a. }1 u1 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: g; F3 z5 A/ x. M' {8 V! Z6 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' k; k9 l# f4 ?$ o2 E; @: |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 v( m3 B1 ^1 t# J# I. a' w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 O- ~4 n3 u- }# }1 ~8 o: Q$ k我请你剖开它
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  B, ]$ k3 u# T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>