【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% u1 M8 h6 Z0 T7 u5 U# y4 F歌词我附在后面。
) ]) U, x+ o6 ^7 C% p% a3 x+ ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 R( _. A9 d& }8 n/ c, tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ q# J! c) b; q6 ^8 uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( }# }* J1 w' @% p1 O, @) yYou needn’t fear anything
- g6 \* d0 @9 S" f# UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 w) }' x! `0 I2 PEvery other word you utter is love
* O# T3 l  b) kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; L9 i$ l* j1 {" L8 E' lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! d( w* P$ L5 f& ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& [; ]( ?- C! l* \9 W# V8 GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ L4 [7 K: M; J1 Q. K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* F% r6 P3 L2 \0 ^2 {, N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 U) {( o+ z: l; C) Q; [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* s/ n3 e2 z* z  g! ?7 p4 s, I* C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 r# E( f- Q" F% C. V$ L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 h: s5 T. R, c( W5 {- c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* c" L3 ]/ L0 x% p" E4 L  c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! l- B6 V" a* z; n; Z5 |8 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 T  H1 _. y% \% n2 A! w: C; E6 G. s( i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. |0 ?  @: k1 v  F$ U3 w2 s* L- m. [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 y9 M3 h* C& m7 f/ n) _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ y+ ~) c% g# R7 T( p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 `  t5 u% q- H  _1 T. _/ K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) {+ Z5 L' t. r, T; \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% V! G, P8 x6 e( b8 G% r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- r) T' ~6 B9 @8 G" c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 d! K- f% z; u% ?; S% Q3 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' e5 ^) A6 T" z$ C3 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% z" H9 r3 ^. t+ G" `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ E; y# s' N) J2 c0 Y, c! W# B1 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ Z$ N! F4 p% a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* S- \% [! D2 W& @% I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ A1 R/ [# U$ i- C* d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 D5 P7 q  v" t% N; C; v# T& B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 y) N8 S$ a& h# M  j7 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, O, _2 h# e; R' O0 P- d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( Y5 g% P1 Y; v9 z  M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" A0 _4 ^- I9 X! H4 m  U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. Y6 C; w. v4 p" ?! s. b- {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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