【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 `- Z- q1 V% `5 K3 \2 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' }5 l$ r# C' }' C8 i# G. QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ C5 N! C! [* Z- k- q/ x7 ]1 y; lThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ z4 h9 R- o( B8 B: s* Z# ^$ I1 A& S5 {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: f  c) u+ t2 Q! l$ u3 mI really want to know just how much you love me
% J3 i6 S) h6 ?; h0 DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 E9 x; w( R* L) i; HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: j6 F; f, h, n5 f  ~! i& ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ L: V  O. f5 e& N4 ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ `9 [. }5 W4 c  r$ \6 pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  x/ x* K8 W& @  c: A  F9 j: }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 z9 S) h% F( E2 t* W- _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( C  N$ `+ m: W  u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ a0 W! D2 W. d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) q4 j0 z9 x& A* {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ {. @$ F& U9 k+ }- I7 Z& Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( w! T1 m  m6 |2 N" T4 T! S# N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 G2 X/ V6 z7 f. I3 [' M8 |9 a% I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- U; V& U5 T: \# K" q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' {! D; `3 X( C$ `- F! r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 Q/ W$ n6 J: ~+ }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: Y4 M1 f+ [% Y<P>你无需担心</P>
7 {1 ?7 s8 G( }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" C" n% _& @8 x( e8 c8 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% @  l& G  W1 G5 m/ p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: P4 N( V9 E% a( Z, c4 F0 f- y) `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: N$ p$ T5 N* c& G  T. \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 |: t' W- Y$ V8 d& l) r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 W' P  C) k& l4 t% `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- O* H. s0 V1 U% d$ u4 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# F, m, b; R8 i$ {9 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 D* q4 C8 |, S9 E. x( d6 y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 \, i8 y! e" C7 ^+ l( P7 q/ j) Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 T  N2 Y) a: z, F6 d! k2 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 B" w' @! _; \4 b; q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; ~. h1 x* _- c. z  {; |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" F# q( X: a2 G1 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& Y4 j3 T' _$ e& Q+ Y; U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! Q: Q+ Q( v1 `5 J# K6 O0 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- a# _. {1 J* p3 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

0 o1 V& }- r. X' j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>