【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  F4 Y" h/ i/ e; N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# z( V/ w! J( s( u' P! wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 c- R2 ]% }" BThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ H! Q8 a9 K! ~- n% zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 {2 \8 [  W. n, n- U7 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 d' s5 H* p8 p. J# T' ~You needn’t fear anything
; l6 q  }' d  `5 Z2 t6 V$ wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( F5 r% `7 _5 b7 U% GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ O$ i9 v- Z) P8 U% w9 QNothing can compare to my love
9 O+ K$ x$ B2 n6 V) G/ ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( Y' @" w0 \2 k# z% x% B' cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- I' X8 d9 B( n+ }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" k% ]' ?) |4 L( c9 ?I regret not dying
! p' f1 @% \0 P1 F! n* m! \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 C2 J0 ^* K3 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 K' n- r3 s' e/ c" N/ J. J+ u! rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( P0 N8 D- X8 K/ IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 A. N* C6 w2 V. B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 o5 I! M: y" P6 i  f' e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* B: ^2 U: K7 a8 I0 ]6 C5 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 [: O8 K) @8 g& v+ m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" A( n4 t. L! T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 m, [, h) `; A5 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; j0 o1 [8 d) a, Q0 L: ?7 R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 e& C) I6 N, Y$ J- }0 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% K5 O" d, K% Y* B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. y; V1 F7 a" U% A2 b( N6 c" Y: A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" {! x0 `8 i- w: E6 K/ Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. f  t) F! c) z5 ]! ^  R+ ]+ B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  G- R- `9 s- R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 L& W4 x% W! v; Q% {& b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* T  T) P6 |5 m' w& U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 L$ t* s. t2 I6 }1 w. l1 v# c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 `+ C4 h  J) ^& R* Z: Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% o4 }2 a3 ^, G! D3 V( P. B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- E, v  M; [) x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( V2 b. I: O# m7 x1 j8 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. t5 r' b/ M8 ~# V+ V6 d2 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' R( n7 s0 J) v3 R, q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

' [  T8 O5 y: l- C4 J/ m% G. a$ w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>