【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, t7 d8 f3 K2 }' z# m. Q) ~% s6 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ q: D$ f! M$ P4 [" o! e8 K  W( g- mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# ]* e6 ]" W3 H3 R+ ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* m$ k  d4 ?  _With the moon kissing it every night
" I( c6 W$ f* K2 |Seeing the sky content with its love
9 Q8 F9 B( a, DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 J9 V% Z+ G' f2 q! T+ B- M8 uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( s# W9 D2 }4 Q1 P" ~2 A, F* E" d; rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: e0 r2 D7 F& y- e! D5 PI want so much to see inside your heart
, b8 E9 o, C4 p4 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 ^( s! ~: b( W& n/ @/ T: ?+ m7 o& j& }I’m still filled with fear
* _! q1 v$ Y, L% @( L* d2 vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' |, L1 J# b1 \& M% d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- Q' N, K  S+ t8 G" W- `# m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- s- Y& F  P1 ?3 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  M$ }5 i, U/ ~3 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 P% H5 U$ s' g4 o2 U! N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  ?  S9 r, B6 z) j! H" H" |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: [4 w5 I9 u5 I8 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( g: B8 i" }8 j7 h/ w7 V5 f" J. D1 X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 W7 K* n+ ]/ |# ?/ ~: C9 {) l  ]/ }$ A<P>你无需担心</P>
7 }/ |0 b% s- r8 ?! a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 Q% R6 s- F; ?8 {- O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ ], U- _, l  q% e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& Q# \3 G' b4 A+ ]! O& P; [/ X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; @: D' E- e1 b. I) O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ t; R, x5 B' e" v4 H1 F, C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* E5 [' {7 s$ N: h# X4 Y( P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 J1 P1 ?% O' ?6 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( K0 c  Q' u" [& b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. \( f# ]6 V1 l' m% I, o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' u' \$ U9 B8 {7 h6 a' a. }2 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 x" Q' S% q  [' \# I7 n3 P& D+ r) \) Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 K0 g1 R4 n: z6 K% V; i1 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ w) n3 U, `' D9 N5 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& i) g0 ^% S" n, B. j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 g. c: Z0 N4 i. b. p- g% `" F4 }" \5 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 q- F1 n: ]9 r9 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& G0 j# Z6 P) I2 Q0 W% {  e! S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 b- H7 {' x1 a/ K1 }/ K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>