【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( ~1 ^) q( i: ~9 C4 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- [: n7 L) S/ x' WThe sky is happy down to its soul
* j8 F% P0 a# T9 X3 v- A$ r5 D& ^) e0 QWith the moon kissing it every night
+ R' R. |$ K# H( n" wSeeing the sky content with its love
  A& X  ]7 J1 X0 O, \# wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) U3 H. v; H$ x) E2 F& c( kI really want to know just how much you love me
1 \* K9 L: z: p3 l) G( C- LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. K% d# l# l' D- C9 s. ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* Q" ]2 c' U3 |3 v/ w! a5 c2 pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% T% R4 J% U% F2 a& aI’m still filled with fear
, G4 q; n- d& w8 d7 _/ qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ j: `# X- O4 A0 o# _With such a tongue as yours,
6 F/ D0 u% A: a& m# VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ v8 S! K+ t7 m3 I1 KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& L. e* e% a( K& |2 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 L. j/ b  @: B' J, Y( y$ U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' v" U$ ?, X, C* l8 j0 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 j$ q  s' o6 a7 d& m- P" b& G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 w% t4 Q* a* F2 {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- G/ {; ]2 Y1 i. \; B* d# C4 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 W) k. i4 j( k9 N, s$ R5 N% O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 U. ]+ O( S% o/ F4 M4 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 W  @  S7 G: M6 m! T! T3 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ y  _7 @' ~5 F, y% }! v' v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  m0 @9 M- b  `0 ^5 y5 U& B; |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 v. C1 K+ r% Q% z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 h1 n& I% d+ b; y! @2 W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 }2 n" n7 n+ x. P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 n0 C" R7 K# P- f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* m& s; W% i4 k- c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* R' w/ K. q- V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( V! r$ ~2 M9 D6 a' Q& s( T' y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 c( s( B; B+ l4 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ y% l/ n2 \+ {1 n  N: `+ ]3 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& S# Q! f$ y% Z7 O& L! Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 I) K5 ^& \: ?0 p3 f( J: |; y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, v' Y/ q" i3 D9 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' W5 x/ l# b1 h$ [- ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ S/ y" t! f6 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% W" _) l  T3 K8 V8 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 `' c, Y" [9 V# L& n9 u/ e- V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: C8 G6 @# y' t4 Y& L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) j0 `* @2 u6 o, f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& Q' v; n# t( u7 w* ^. u, M1 t$ Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
# K7 N. e' v  b: ^0 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" v9 Z1 |4 v& Q6 b# ]8 \( h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 X* F6 ]) B) z- q& @3 M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% c0 I2 j. a: F2 ~) _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 ~$ c' i5 j5 d  x* K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; ^/ ]& D6 {5 f7 \: O$ r% _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>