【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' S% J5 e% S0 R9 \* n" rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# J2 O; c6 F. ]8 s. @0 `With the moon kissing it every night
( ^2 c) l, p& e7 F9 p3 r: z2 e' z7 B5 xSeeing the sky content with its love
3 l! g  U7 k! z# e1 S' PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 @: q  x- m/ i- D, M+ K' J3 HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  A$ J# \* U: s  l+ Y; ^7 L7 M- tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 }! q. W; M/ L& w# o; w2 L3 V: WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 x% z& ^0 K& z/ `1 u' t; X) j. n( KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 p$ G, z6 v% ~( L  F8 K7 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ n$ T9 ?- J% _5 M" |! \: ?/ o4 aWith such a tongue as yours,
8 @& G- e6 r1 |  K! S: AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 K; N, n! Z9 P& D% k& k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; `# V4 u. H( q, q  t6 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ n% T0 L1 m- `" U& K0 O3 C2 o; N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ `: x. D+ v- S7 y; c7 f) t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 f' f3 [! Q! |6 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% H) J. E- A, n8 G1 ^6 O- C. b- Q9 J( `<P>你无需担心</P>
" V6 z3 j( {- ?+ h* m( G$ |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, u: s% [6 f3 x# I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% M; _* c% X! t; y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 N) b. o& Q9 C5 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& C: t' U( c( {- {3 Z5 g% Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% T, h: u* d. D0 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 B- a9 O" u$ Q) d* j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  v2 w+ u) E- ]$ Q+ W, T4 V6 |9 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 h; R2 S2 ?8 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 \: \5 X( Q- H' P; R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 [- M2 k! i; Z* ^' c<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 }9 Y4 p1 L3 v/ i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 D. o1 P8 ^# R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. S6 p3 h+ W1 T- P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. E% s& h" ~5 R1 s0 X/ Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# A% E  L, c9 i' G  w9 }. l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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, E) W" `6 s1 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ i/ f7 ]* |2 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>