【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 {0 M; Y/ c% q/ R  B/ k
2 }7 U3 f7 l5 z: n/ C% d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& R; q' {/ O0 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 }( K; b' u4 g* u3 c6 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
. f" P% u# Y2 I- pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# ?" x1 F8 C. ]4 _$ q0 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, Q$ N' ^$ r% g# l) L( y( _8 m' \4 t  hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 V7 H& ^: s' v$ dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* q9 H& M+ \9 B4 P7 GI want so much to see inside your heart
$ r: ~8 D" J8 D. T9 a/ X" ^& }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* y5 x6 w2 C% fI’m still filled with fear
2 d+ V  G) U" \0 YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* J8 q6 Y4 j% k" j. \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 }% z- B1 c" ~* kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) ?" t( X* n4 ?- n2 O6 Y! T5 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 z& c2 P0 W/ B( U. S" X  u* |' w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" T0 V* v; w& j9 s( s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ A# P* p- a! P- S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' v, U3 |/ e: R- b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 L. ?! t. j" b, U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 a& X6 P" S. T* j. h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( N- W* R2 ~9 R' W, v* L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 @3 F% g9 _- M, m7 C! [) }9 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 ~" J$ n. n7 i' w7 M4 {* P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  {' r: K5 B6 o* j# E- h+ c; `- r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' O( p) o6 i1 ]: [  c- n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- g5 I/ {0 ?( E% X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* P  Q& l4 R8 t4 P. m1 P# z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  ^9 `2 T; v% x7 ]/ M1 j, `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% L# n, H  ^; _9 `9 f: P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 y" q: s: B4 J+ u- r# D4 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 z$ h; u6 D5 g, L+ f7 `( b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 C$ X0 Q+ l- x& N, I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; s& |7 m# z. H! p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 e$ `3 V6 [% ^0 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, }" E* y, M6 `$ V$ n' E% h' F. p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" |( u; P4 b6 x4 \# }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 ^  U2 j( D9 L6 i+ E0 f' O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 S% u  }5 [( s; o$ |' {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; q8 D% ?3 G+ t我请你剖开它
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) ^/ a6 V( l# e% O; E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 G! j7 e3 ?7 I5 P$ F3 _6 O5 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>