【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 `0 K. Q. m, iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) Q  d2 d+ n& d2 P3 l, b$ yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 i5 ~6 @& W! H# ^6 o: k. K! I6 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
- ?% U) Y2 r# E* U* oWith the moon kissing it every night
$ x& {' m0 m% Z- \) y2 Z' kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ O" a. y( r' k* @8 A! q  o, vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  ^1 b5 u3 h) pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% @/ ?3 a/ e( P; M& r9 ]* @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- B' g. r' s4 Z0 T/ {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; c% N7 ?) W/ ]8 i% o0 GI regret not dying
2 |: U3 e7 [) k. g" N! X4 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 f" @/ W; G4 K4 D; i  xWith such a tongue as yours,
% u8 w6 b: ]. _  RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& _9 L3 ^+ G" E5 r, R) RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ s0 q8 @7 s6 D/ Z, M9 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 x" M, K7 g3 c) w) R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ E0 l, P9 ^0 [2 [8 y$ I7 C# l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: G. J: ^% i- V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, D. b9 z$ q# B: h, Z# W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" m% e; n# ]+ y# a8 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" r8 x; H2 |0 G; c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 C9 @" ?: ~, R7 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* j/ _; l5 ~* R; o. r% M# H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; y* z: o% B% w- d/ }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ O% w  V1 s# x! ^% [& n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 ~! p% x' R; z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% q- x& e8 C6 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 K8 l9 @) A  b. J- t8 A3 N7 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' j* i' ?, R: Z2 F" x9 F0 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( j+ @# D! J. w5 G! s" V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: X2 g* h( K5 P3 Z1 f6 z) s  v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ u1 [( a" G: D6 h& m  Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( m# M* {) a. k  {: H: C) n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. N% y: l+ W1 r* A% I" Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* a5 l& ~6 J2 g: K3 _0 F% p$ ?% L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 A9 s  S+ {! N3 Q, c6 `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ a& F* c2 B: Y/ l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 a/ @; b& Y, L8 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# m) e/ s( S8 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  }& y7 @& z# E* }: d  z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- V, I* m8 v2 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ W' b8 H% e4 d% j1 w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! e4 K; ^& G( X, d$ [6 G! }& b" H& n8 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& |& A' k$ x* {3 J) ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' W  _1 x, C' O1 |* r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 n1 G2 [* F6 F0 |: R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: P4 [9 j" P! W, g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 h% |5 q8 u7 Y: w  S: X% p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! J. s: Y1 d/ S' O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 P9 o, U6 W9 _5 A/ d+ Z我请你剖开它

* B; y/ e0 z# k8 o+ N0 |& [% ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>