【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( u1 T# a7 ?/ A; HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ ^. B. A! u6 H  tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 C1 t6 _9 |' f* ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* {9 l( e7 H. Q' w! ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# t" |: w/ K( h% R2 }) oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 Q7 X) E" Z# rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 a; S/ ?$ y1 H- N- h0 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. i5 `  e* h" `6 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. \3 E. o- I/ z. G1 w$ ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, y6 e# w9 R* `( R9 S' TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- `, ^" p9 a0 B- tWith such a tongue as yours,
7 ~3 \' d* J# ~! j- sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 j0 C2 L: V  c* x( S6 U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 Q+ L7 h; w: y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: w5 f& R) Z5 `% D) C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 A* r: V' r7 ]  }# W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  E/ M6 h* e' R0 ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# D9 T) }0 J7 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( B0 K5 A; r' c( S/ ?. W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 ^4 o8 d3 p5 h7 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! H# E& k8 P3 y& [  I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, [5 ^, b* Z5 B2 p5 |! p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) d8 F$ f7 S/ q; n5 p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 U. A7 }# M' y9 n% v3 J: d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 A: S: a. P- h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 p" V; L  U9 S; o" x$ z- w/ Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) F) I: ~: y8 K: A0 }. M8 o! c% @* }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# X2 }! Q5 w  u, X: R5 X2 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- b8 n3 O& g* F3 r& v4 e- ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 Q' U9 k* C3 Y3 z) |$ [( g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 U/ ]5 {6 L2 `' o7 @5 u$ b5 `' b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! n7 v1 F& n6 e/ q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; C) ~8 I1 e% C$ r3 E' e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) c% p; D9 O8 o, P& [+ l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* ~7 j9 B7 {6 {2 E8 q. f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 o5 z, \( J: u# O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% t( P' D- {+ a) C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ k, V1 A! y) m* S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 ]) n, @; U; X: T2 A/ l" ~: p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  \4 A" \; {" [4 g0 O: z, V! }我请你剖开它

+ x% {, C' y; i/ I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>