【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 I: r9 x5 w6 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% V! @5 h# C% t+ r; O9 d1 X( m6 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 ~) e$ z  a! X' V0 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 g! a8 R7 A4 P3 j3 I7 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) W) {" o4 F. x" D" k1 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: t, b/ J9 T. J' iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; T% X/ W' b2 w8 t% R7 UYou needn’t fear anything
5 J+ \0 r7 _: Y9 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 q' m- S/ u. E, T( `8 k  PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" {- }) j7 }3 q$ E& m. cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ N5 j8 Y/ W, _% K6 {! ^; rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 X( b4 e+ \. [4 VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) G3 N7 ]3 k6 v% L/ S# v2 j9 ?2 G5 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ K/ _0 {5 s) ?/ a; W  J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 G" l* d9 f/ j# _5 d9 h* C' \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! d- V/ ~% C% {: T+ N0 I0 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* _8 {, m! J& p" i( @* c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! S& X, C: V# q4 o7 g5 }+ P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 g3 D6 T+ }9 E+ i" V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) A0 c) i7 ^( r! A8 ?) Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! \/ t* F3 o6 }0 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- n! w: t$ g9 J5 f+ w( X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; m) Q, y. k# L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, F  K% V& X; m6 p' x: {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( X+ I& M  u- I; p, q; w; n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' p6 T% q) X6 T# \3 I7 n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. ^- k3 `* n2 R- v6 W  e<P>I regret not dying</P>
& Z- v- x5 K' d1 t" |  c% I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# q, V6 W3 ^, }9 J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 d$ ?0 b* ^1 v6 t7 g6 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ l% p7 \5 `2 T  A7 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 |" m8 W" l) S& Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ o9 N# S; V" |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 M( X* r4 m  Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 C* ~& Z8 E! w# [/ }# R. P4 t6 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>