【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 Q9 V5 {5 G" \7 E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' P# W; W& A$ D" j: |3 a3 D4 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ |; {! k/ f" p3 U0 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! t) {; n5 ^5 H' \3 o  l8 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: A* o2 T7 E3 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 ?: p6 a# Z1 G3 J4 r8 ?! vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. `: a9 e* I( q! zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 W' |- [, p" n% Z6 |  ~- P/ u5 MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 t5 N7 G- H7 t( VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 Q# F! i# k& OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( k) Q% U* i& S* R% @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 a  D" t7 U9 c  ?- t+ TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: ^' e# M5 {1 p7 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, _: I! J& m* m1 h' V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 K- G0 w' X! q- N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* d! k+ q+ q1 a4 t3 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% |1 s) M8 T( [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' j8 F% J2 D; H9 |4 y/ s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' H8 w4 M' E8 W& s, F7 t( E$ c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 t5 g) d5 k( y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) A9 m# e9 Z5 z5 I0 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 C) u+ |$ Q( G, v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) Q! D5 H- U) \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 W, r% n5 @: g3 T- Q2 x0 h% ]<P>你无需担心</P>
9 s) }' v" g% I- Y; `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( K( _. q( h% ]+ ^' d! L" p- C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; u+ o7 p6 s0 T  n" c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ }! i: M1 D$ O( b) t0 R$ u2 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ a2 H: ?$ Z. c8 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ g0 A; N  l4 ^+ u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. z3 y  Z" H4 R  _5 Z5 t0 V( B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 |$ a  Q8 C% Q/ Y4 @4 |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% {% Y* u, t- e7 l- }; \8 z8 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  k* I% |5 P& W' d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 F+ w$ |' T$ R- ?: F/ k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% e8 \4 I. S  Y1 ~0 M4 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: m3 B( r9 s" h; H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 F$ S/ J& t, a( z4 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 o3 B2 ^/ f# j7 V$ ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 }# B: q" B4 c% k: X- p4 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 \' N2 P% C- k: ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 Y* S4 d* g3 t+ z, P- V7 O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. k. [/ x& D8 t  [2 N- x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 O+ J% j( ]+ ~: q. A3 x% o; J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ t5 @1 C8 H$ E8 E9 q1 v* v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% T% j5 _8 ]. N/ p' r/ x3 }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

& H  X4 c* O5 b5 q/ C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: d0 \9 F" a& [6 }. T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>