【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% C( ]% a7 h- r- L) R5 O: ]) t2 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: h; _4 H9 t+ n: `  oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  [( _4 V( q) Q& `/ XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) N8 G/ L1 \& VThe sky is happy down to its soul
" z' V+ @* T& D: m, }3 V1 KWith the moon kissing it every night
8 O8 m- G9 n8 j' O4 |7 F( FSeeing the sky content with its love
: u- V5 K" v9 M" i3 j  z6 H% _" F2 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( T, O* |0 [9 h: C: {2 XYou needn’t fear anything
4 E4 z( i) v% j0 u& S  OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 b% |" H; \( N3 |$ i, ~Every other word you utter is love
6 G6 q: l: R9 e" @9 @* a2 l8 JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ S  L! z$ `7 {# T. fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# a) |0 B6 B# [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* q7 c! i9 v. B( iI want so much to see inside your heart
) z1 t1 j; ~  Z& h+ DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 K/ Q$ m& G3 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% L: {- z5 h0 A. u5 L# a$ UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, ?* n5 w4 M- YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ q% b) R, J0 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, h" V/ y0 d' }" i) |# Y+ G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! @) h* Q& F' x, P9 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" v: p# e) `* l) h1 C( C' _: p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 ]. A, g  R5 |  R5 u, c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' @. S, O  D/ R% a, c% V4 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! F. g$ `4 ?+ e$ ]3 N. q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, I2 a0 i2 ?, v; y. L8 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: R& u% Y# Z2 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 U0 C6 E5 f# ~  J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 G  K) o$ s" O' D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; n& H- V3 \1 b" d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 s5 p. T# j& ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; J" S4 |3 X+ K2 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# L% D6 N" g' M5 T7 w" X6 D2 h' T; D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 D- t: v8 b8 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( d: n/ J* A+ I7 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 p" _; q; `8 i  A3 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 w9 _6 i, @' T5 j3 G' G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 Y2 ]5 G+ c( r2 q( ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( e$ y5 L6 Z. W5 ]! j% x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 U9 U; P# Z0 f7 R1 M* f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 r& U, V, Y; k; J! v0 u& q# [( c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 |$ j2 O( g% F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
% y: z7 H( I9 b; i& e: c) J
我请你剖开它
  B5 h, ?* _+ M8 f! S# F
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>