【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" L/ z& V% H( R: @The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 g- I2 R- G0 G; q( D4 W0 n, hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: j, h9 W/ W  e$ H& i; K5 M7 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ z$ i4 M% x( c0 [6 [9 b4 t' q& iSeeing the sky content with its love
" a. j5 I* e( VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 k, z0 Q2 |5 l7 W/ xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: H8 V# E: n# @% [* X  z, \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 i4 C" {  A" D+ U5 EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" r/ R' b4 ]* z  X8 g8 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! |3 d. \) W. @( e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  E9 Y0 G% F! h1 V* b2 e& F( ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 t6 J( P& t0 y( N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 v' p$ h, h( {# D6 x: A6 ?. j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  O, U) l4 z' ^8 c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) ^; d/ B" {" u- |0 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; a3 Q; \. `3 H# w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ ]6 f7 D4 b' k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 G, B0 O/ G# N6 K<P>你无需担心</P>
  d1 }/ J# g% Z( o0 L1 p+ \! }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ i9 _# X2 o, v, c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ w5 y$ L% s1 u4 x2 v8 S! E, d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' d0 ^! I9 h# t7 V/ a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 `; D0 @3 o4 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, k: r6 s; p* x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 k8 g- h( x$ F. S% ?& R9 V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 z( C  O, B9 m* p; e3 D$ o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% G+ w( `  F1 ~- r. \" N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% v( R+ H+ |+ U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ K6 N7 n* g9 @, V2 g$ k. d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( x/ b& O. r/ c5 P* I' L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) B* c  c5 x% q( G2 ~( O' v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  R( p3 s$ |5 |# X2 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  p) A; r. p/ g% h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 u6 a" l1 Z: L6 T0 I' M4 c$ `, n2 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" A) ~) p/ o( c. g- Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 P, o9 ^7 E& L0 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, {# x9 g+ r8 u6 s: ~1 ^) @) M  k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>