【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 ]3 I) M: t' [1 \' S4 d  vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% [. F! N% A  J6 G5 c" ]# K) b3 \3 N' lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 p; K) T( G$ a* W+ l! V' p, FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; z& H0 B+ L( s1 C1 I3 R7 T1 iSeeing the sky content with its love
: [; V4 }$ }# y' d0 o% u; mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( H3 L4 {8 s0 W/ sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 v& `$ o  D  L0 YI really want to know just how much you love me
, [, m4 y: r7 e% m# vI love you I love you with all my heart
/ K  s1 I* n) f3 G5 }Nothing can compare to my love
/ ^+ |: V) D, KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. X9 ^, b" e$ ~8 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 F! O( g. u! d* v4 II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" L- B) N- u$ P, x! |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 |: I: @9 x5 `+ DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" X) C. Y6 \( Q1 ]$ ?% @7 n+ e+ T$ U2 R: XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& I* p  t; E( P# `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" ]$ Q2 t% Y* |4 J+ z7 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 U, P) M) w) F5 |/ Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( N) Z% H) L0 L) z3 J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- c# u. t6 ?4 [8 m0 E, U4 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- C( P; G* }+ _8 z1 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( x$ a) @2 v+ l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: E; k: j2 a- w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" N. g. X; \8 J+ L+ M2 O( J$ C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 A# p( M9 g* E4 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) i  m+ s4 @$ F9 a& U; M# Z% R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( f1 R! E' l8 X" L  i5 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% C/ p6 k: m9 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. g# _1 s4 ~' p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) f) u3 l, x2 o5 T% j* Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ `' A7 ]: p! O4 r+ n$ i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  g2 a: O0 I2 ^: H( ~6 F+ Z; a$ }% Z" z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 ?- H- r- E; {0 Y7 n3 ]. E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- R7 g( b+ d9 @/ l4 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) A* @7 ?8 t$ d& {9 ~3 i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 A  E. Y! N3 L  F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 P$ s) o2 p/ a+ \9 s, U, i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- C. a; q1 G5 q8 O; M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 A1 }$ ]" P6 ^1 v& m我请你剖开它
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4 h7 E* V& P/ ]4 `$ a! c' r4 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" ?) _3 u$ d" L4 @" m! G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>