【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" v6 b$ {) H$ N3 f8 K- s' V4 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; ^) X* e1 t7 r5 ^$ R: L2 m2 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 `7 Y" V' C( W; v! t% fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% U2 i9 B" F/ c: T9 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ l& G4 V6 e2 M; VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 ]  x* w% |: ?% _  \8 l* oI love you I love you with all my heart
+ o" h  q; c+ V7 c( |; F, NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 o( X  p$ K! s) t! ~# @  JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# e6 v# F# e( p, V" n& C1 l6 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 }7 u. C3 Z: Z$ W; WI’m still filled with fear
/ {& f1 C" T! f) s% dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 K! m" y# U/ l& H: [  WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. y5 D* ^3 h& ^8 a; j' g  K8 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ h# y4 h' S+ j% t) n/ y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% N6 }+ j4 ?2 M! l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ B. u% t7 c  @5 \! ~& G) A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ C. l% [+ `2 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, x  N( Z) ?$ r  ?$ a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" u4 }2 |+ L" C! o' g* g( y" z+ d6 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- A* D' ~: _( c: I9 C$ o/ o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% ~+ _+ v$ Y0 \/ A+ g! A7 g8 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( A$ m6 Q% x; F8 `" m. z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- e5 h5 [% k+ i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 [  G# q$ q2 N8 p6 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 P8 Q- ?# P+ H: F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 m) l  C7 b/ H6 n! ], r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( A5 L6 T; _' T2 c) J: V! s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- F  D. Q, J2 [, R1 Q% U! ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: A. Y) `8 _# }, r+ p) ^- u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* i: ?# C9 e2 a2 _1 @, U  s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, d( R& R" d9 }2 d' Y" U( l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: p% s7 a$ D, b! h& M; n* g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- l$ y. V( e4 h/ O# I% T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) U" Q: H( y8 b- P2 H8 P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# k! R6 h( B2 e& a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 V6 N( V3 A# p* ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 y( z7 F3 Z/ O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 e9 @/ r# f7 z8 u7 H% n" \, r3 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% P2 v$ @4 r% z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, x) `' b4 j) S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>