【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; q9 c5 e  r6 _4 O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- y/ L$ k3 q! s% U/ HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 F; B# \" Y0 b/ B4 b. tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% n1 _7 _/ h: m  C* iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. U% Q5 |9 p# |- l3 _You needn’t fear anything
. ^, y3 Z: w& ]. sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" X2 X4 j, d6 U: sI really want to know just how much you love me
( d$ J& B9 g3 H; n7 WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 N! ?8 x. ?; V7 ?$ |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 s/ b6 w# g; {$ H. T) ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 Z3 T* X% k( tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 X& O7 `8 c- f& I* oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 L! V& ]4 g$ V' ]( [( oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ f# D( @2 R; k; z: q+ W9 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 P3 Z5 X8 j+ ^0 S3 y9 `: @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ \/ k/ F9 W9 l8 ]$ |5 y  H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, M1 V5 W- r6 c/ X0 }+ [& l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: N, R. K! S: d  q. C! j; x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 O: ~" T! H$ k& v3 q/ q3 J3 O+ M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 Y: l( a# z$ n5 u7 w1 ~& i* s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) H/ ~9 G2 W) p( f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( |$ y' \6 U; w% v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 A1 n7 C" k8 m! @& w<P>你无需担心</P>
% Y3 U/ e' `0 P7 A- V- T  e. C4 M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, z2 }0 N' Q. r5 R% d' q. ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- ]+ f! O8 z8 y. P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 l2 A) {$ R1 S$ S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: N# i9 R# r7 i! c' ]! N$ D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  m9 I) `7 g7 V6 s: W2 d4 R. R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' a7 B5 [5 U3 `  N; N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 t! {6 }% ?5 ]% e8 F* M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: z, j7 A, H! B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, s; r) C) H' _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, b( J, o' P+ `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 J* E. X: Z4 i' w. y2 P. N# q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& u; L. H& X% Z" k8 `) O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# P1 _  v) g4 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 @, I# J" f) ?/ O<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 P8 u1 s) y# J. m0 A) s3 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! r! _$ B; c2 \# r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; I1 K- @6 ?/ `# Z# m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 p! D* v7 }) R1 e; P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 M) b+ h8 L* I8 O& q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 z4 A1 O" g7 \! ^我请你剖开它

( z. ~2 J" T  |' S' { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 i! B4 W4 i3 ^; A# L* Y2 b( u2 w# s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>