【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 |3 b7 C4 [7 J( t" J9 AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% l# {- {2 L7 x: H- g  }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" C+ L' G; c$ P9 Q( ]% uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& b" {7 z6 {0 SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# O7 A# H" [: [9 D( xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, z+ B0 s0 x: S3 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. |3 ~0 K( v" a6 f, CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 P* Y( C4 H/ ^% }+ f( ]I’m still filled with fear
4 U5 R  i% ~& ^0 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 D" g, x/ l9 a$ v* o  C4 VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 U0 n. Y9 m( ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 z0 Y+ t/ r( Z' ^6 i- ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 E" O4 e6 j$ U, J5 j* V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 C8 i0 f0 E2 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, P5 m% e" e# r1 W4 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' k( }; s: z1 N! P6 m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% W7 ?/ T9 j+ v( y& y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& \7 n3 D0 O# L- D$ \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ c* a% Q. Q4 u2 H# Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" W8 H5 Z# k& w1 B( q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- m& v% B, B/ @7 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# ^! z0 g- h0 e0 C6 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 Z* E  {4 D6 c! O% _1 C" f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! [" `0 b( c1 S% u/ _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: N" H$ J0 ?& O6 u: H+ `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 _( G/ R8 s# a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 _7 u4 ]! @: f: Y1 L7 P6 d( S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* p& z7 h5 k' c. g+ A7 Z9 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 X6 g" s% x% n: q' Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 m/ @# R9 k6 }3 \2 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 s- D% F. L9 g' F+ s  x" y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 V. N- e/ O% Y$ \5 t; s! }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' r8 m$ D) B. J7 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 O. u3 p  r0 V" ]. G) E8 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 A: e* s! J8 N# m3 h' M& ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ e' _* |$ N) F+ g3 R( b* a8 n: P9 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' N  M+ v* x, }0 b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" i9 q7 L1 O; j9 y4 u+ q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" O* B+ F, a3 u5 h- C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# Z1 r" w! L+ _3 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 }2 S* C' {+ q# N! |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" `+ m% A, n- Y$ [, R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 [7 X) f) b5 E, S' x5 W; t- J) V我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>