【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, g% M( g8 A" F: s# Q: r& Z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( n) s$ b, z! v7 D$ RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" ^- t* f, i# T" l- i# NThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 x" w* _. S: n1 a$ pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 R! j/ S  e  mYou needn’t fear anything
/ t+ v6 Z+ s: H9 n: f; [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; }; d" a* c/ iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 A3 I- A* O6 z5 H# D6 |* e  qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 B6 y, B# _) c4 \5 C9 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ L# r, i+ W9 o" G0 n" ^1 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
9 Z/ g  t. ?9 q. k% k+ \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 {3 d  U2 f& ?1 ?( B4 _6 eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. v  G$ W3 M+ [: f: {/ A0 f- DWith such a tongue as yours,
4 M- l1 Y1 F% m' T' `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 J$ C0 F# n) a- j; y0 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 m; M; T1 Q) O5 _, T  r) N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ B" S7 g1 h3 v' ?. X, I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 a. D* {+ |9 G0 |7 Q/ z1 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: x9 K& i9 h  @% |  |- `4 \1 U3 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 T# p3 I6 o# ?* g. [( e  P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 t/ V6 A8 d  _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& |0 i- a" R; n3 x. P- n' t<P>你无需担心</P>
2 M! m  D3 @$ c' I5 [- K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 {2 @' ?" G- o* e3 P& ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 s* \6 O6 O, Z- s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" r4 z& W( R  r! d/ j' H6 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 ~# x/ J$ E4 _8 c, L1 {" R) w% _$ b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& |( O6 e$ @7 L. S0 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 G  _) o* W' n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 X% w" C- E' s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" e  ^% a+ S0 h; E  _+ G6 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 C# X$ O5 D# k/ ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. l& |4 }6 Y1 [( z4 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& y* x; o! a1 n  H5 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 @5 t$ i. N; v5 T/ c- Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 l& c: e4 a& }* O1 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* N0 w+ {; L% G& Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>