【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; }& F& M8 c* Y! ^3 y! o歌词我附在后面。
$ N+ Y$ E8 p( k* QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) W/ P) |( S# ]+ C! K! F8 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% {! j0 R. _/ S7 X5 }! \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 j) B2 F* K, f* N& l% eWith the moon kissing it every night
" C$ s: I& J" U/ tSeeing the sky content with its love
4 M4 X% O% U5 q+ Q' ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 `$ l  E& _+ {4 `# }/ D  m6 r" nI love you I love you with all my heart
4 X* d( j4 @. h8 L  r: U1 m, Q' WNothing can compare to my love
. S% U4 d( B! \: E( G5 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 i3 l+ }+ H  E3 ?4 Q0 D( qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& t: g7 y0 V5 \; J. M; y* II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! \- ~1 M& y5 g8 R7 ~: A5 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 Q% F$ _2 n5 b( o0 E' u6 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 ?* W' d, E4 [+ W: zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  A$ l- r, z% T5 O, g: h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- T  B6 z( b' ]/ E* Y) s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ p  Z5 \& X7 t( @9 p* @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 B% S* Z# _, e4 x+ J6 h9 S  F8 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  N# l9 |; |4 p" e  i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" d4 B+ a; n2 f) a- W% C1 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 C2 Q' t! U1 e9 U! c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. `% }6 h' J$ V% P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: U1 z4 }" t' g8 Y. Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ P4 o) w9 Z/ e5 U; [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* E6 A% S5 [' s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 q- k$ b) p" \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 }. m, {5 e+ i& z% `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% G- r( W+ W% _0 d5 T/ v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 y+ G3 ^$ j! p4 j; k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( u! N  l9 I7 ~1 g( r0 m9 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( d% ^: K' d) A" V& ~) @7 D1 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* M2 U- i, [  ^+ i3 [" V! b) O- V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* y2 Q) {  M4 o5 `- ^6 ^$ z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- d3 C8 t% g, |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! R9 v* @/ k: v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' k- t7 B' y0 t  P" P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 j* F8 J( j& E- O% U: m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( M( C" c& u  C& [9 |5 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; `; j3 t4 h, L- l: E8 f! i* A<P>I regret not dying</P>
( y% w+ |% |% b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ n$ V/ l+ K$ r3 [" Z' Y0 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ v5 R& `1 m2 \3 t! V; K0 g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* p" n: |* F( N  F& v7 i0 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: ]! V7 j7 v$ `& o" D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) C! X  D" k8 G4 q2 ?: }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' H# [  S+ M1 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: b, u& t3 k" A' w: t+ P4 e* Z( Z% W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 g0 T- ?" z5 l- \/ Y/ Z; |) Y: W  P. W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 z( q& y2 O3 I* r* h. J: R+ U- G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>