【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) H' [- ]2 Y* `( w- t+ C+ \歌词我附在后面。
* J/ Q6 i) I6 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 t" c7 ]/ A0 c& T# LThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 q3 G  r# L  X) s# v' z7 z- O% ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ Y& Y0 Z8 [2 V% oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ t5 y% H$ E. M& Y" t: v5 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 Q4 i) s5 ^0 Z: y* @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# B# N  s2 {/ y6 E- d* U! U0 {I love you I love you with all my heart
# ^% E: j) w8 T/ [2 e, ^) ]* g3 k1 B1 ]Nothing can compare to my love
* v" A. v# p# B2 [1 y  cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# i: H3 k+ A" m5 R/ w3 p' hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 r: d# a% Q" @( w# gI’m still filled with fear
- l* H* ?; e& r* h% AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! G- H* p& z8 Q$ g, \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* m* w( t% {3 C7 J2 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 I( D7 V# Y( X" b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" H$ c3 o7 Z& c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 ^# M. H! \- C! `6 r* [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 f8 `8 P2 v$ x1 a" }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 d( E) W. M7 T6 y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 H) o# a- ~. _! R" L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 s% G1 u* |/ J6 N3 m, D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 `  r$ s# r, u, c0 }2 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: i; J% b! F  i( v* N+ n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 a& ~6 z7 O/ b* V) U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 t' t1 i! {1 s3 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% K( @3 m% J/ S4 W5 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) \: b2 {* h5 P% l+ ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- F& h7 d  g; M$ U# f% }& p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 u9 {4 M3 a, q" h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% \% J2 d( N0 I9 s, M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ J5 ~. ^. B9 r3 X6 V- i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% C3 \% ]! o/ |+ t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ l9 f. P8 S$ Q# x& C7 w- n5 C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  t, W" @) E. h! y! a, s+ R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, X% M* v2 E6 @8 z  c4 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& V( Z* g: q* o) D5 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) L! D0 y. P, i8 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: m, ]# G1 p% H+ c  I" d; i- g0 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- Z: L( ~4 g$ U$ V; t# U7 D# J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>