【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: u) `4 O' V( B& U- r歌词我附在后面。
$ w* `" W. O. d( nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% Z: c* ?: d3 e. `6 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ Y9 m/ c- l& @- G; s: i( c7 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 n6 T1 ^) e8 R" r% VWith the moon kissing it every night
! T1 S, L! [$ \1 wSeeing the sky content with its love
8 S# t3 q8 B$ R! T9 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* D5 S0 f1 G+ C4 e! yYou needn’t fear anything
4 U( u& C+ F; Y0 |5 X% E0 I3 bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 n* K' X3 o3 C8 i8 j4 x9 WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- P7 l, t( J. E( i& @# j! wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  u# X9 C( j7 d2 t% sI’m still filled with fear
7 V9 }/ r; N8 B  S1 A9 |1 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 O+ J' J9 {9 V9 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 k3 v& O0 H! i1 i8 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ v" l8 ]" Z- f. D- C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 x! O+ H) e3 v4 I. m0 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 l3 ^7 l% b1 D, B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, N" h- t$ Q( _; F4 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. ~4 T* H+ M9 x' l" G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 K# p- `7 E; R3 _3 |/ F2 }0 r* P0 \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 j) o' ?* b# T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& D' b# q) Q& O& p- l# ]3 o4 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ M1 R' t; F% X; t+ p$ F' T& k! F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  d* Q0 `% @. T$ m( x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& n" B2 [% O' k; o' {! u! Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% I( X, @' S; E' ~4 L4 k* n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  s; B: a( I- ^& }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' \' B% z% p8 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 k) j4 X2 V. x+ ]: R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! ^* C9 A. q, G2 Z( n, m% y9 R2 D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- ]: Q1 N: b. n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 h' g. Q. T0 r& x! ]0 h4 y- W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 n* N5 v* z$ \: h  u/ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" w; M7 V0 E6 |; N9 U) T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 G5 e* T  C; g' S% Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  \( F5 }( o- x9 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. w9 A$ G& _$ F" y0 V* b- n0 D. c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* i8 u" v' z1 ~- O3 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) ^1 _% P+ M1 \% V; @6 {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; W  Y/ O- w3 O; ~; R0 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, T) }" H7 N9 o5 Y1 g! F8 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! t- k4 @( Y9 Q; I( X# `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 o6 {$ w% d- q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' L7 [2 G# S' |$ J- M' |: |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 N* ?2 q; i0 B5 d' H, ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; L5 a: C- _( l7 P; m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>