【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, U1 C& _( p, ]. ]0 a歌词我附在后面。
/ p# G7 ]* t( }: ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
, L) E  d# H5 e( i$ t5 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! ~- n; O4 x2 ^0 P; F) F0 M4 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 f6 i: N" I' h' d& a( AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ K9 p7 N& H5 ~! XWith the moon kissing it every night
* B% X( I* o8 V! H/ H, u" GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* h/ T/ M+ ^# M* L5 C- S# |I really want to know just how much you love me
4 u% G- J- b3 W- O& W7 gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' o: t4 K: C- p6 i5 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( r1 V8 z0 E; D% C; aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; y8 r' n0 k9 Z2 c* v: CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- g# J; I8 Y) A" bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 ~3 ~; V1 @6 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& [3 h/ @. f( O# X* l, B- Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 |% d3 X5 \$ O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' u  `" w9 N( W' N2 I( x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 _: p( L2 {4 U) N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# M, u4 f/ V5 R* q2 k' k; p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* A7 ?0 T0 S; v: q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 R$ @( D* F& Q: e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" r3 Q: A9 l6 B5 z, f) x: ]$ U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 J9 q  U; q7 r+ M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: y% p0 X; t5 v# z) Q! N: j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# Y& X# Q1 _6 p1 d  p6 A. \" I; H6 g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# T4 ?4 I4 l% g5 C1 H& V/ h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ c; l  w' U$ M) P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: O9 ]6 a8 s# u/ U  x2 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 H2 r6 t3 \- j, l5 ?" U* [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 i% H" L' o, u0 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# t* \: Y9 }- }& M! _+ x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( G& |2 }+ P. n5 E  a" s: t7 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 h5 V; {" k* C4 Y% @: [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 [6 x  ?; r% h% {- y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 F& k! H  h5 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 B- y3 f4 s# u' L: c, H2 i6 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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9 w7 O+ X" v1 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% K! E- a* n; V! Q% ~# b  u  c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- y& o3 A+ ]7 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- j. Y( u9 a4 w  Z- y3 j8 p) s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 ?7 R  M5 @7 ]# a5 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  \; u! X6 c, { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# ^8 N6 q) B5 l5 Q- `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>