【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 n' m/ ?/ ~$ L! Z7 jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) M% e6 I7 |; G* u' A3 z! sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  _0 I4 G% l3 l( |7 ~  ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 G9 r" p7 I' N* kThe sky is happy down to its soul
# @& a0 F& `7 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 F# q( j+ a; I7 d! n( t& {. U/ Z# rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 o- a) n/ V6 l4 o, TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 M2 x7 D3 f' i: \9 W- ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& U# [! ~3 l7 v7 r, Y! ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" z6 u6 ~1 g2 c) K' VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) O5 |% i- t% C% G  |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* Y- b- U6 [! [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; t* r& K- g* j) y* P  d; |1 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ [5 y$ e6 t# d% I# q8 n- f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ ^: m5 q; o1 Z! Y6 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. \9 h! E) B" F( F* H+ E# r* Q9 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ s2 P* C8 o9 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 R* W8 i/ x: @/ Q0 u. O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 f: t6 u) Q5 u; g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* o/ ?  l$ I+ ]2 n1 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 `1 d( I7 N! p# S' X6 M: l<P>你无需担心</P>
6 @/ n* f. ]6 y. k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 N& O( L9 j* `: a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; C/ @" v- k) i2 t% N4 j, R! ?5 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ q/ f5 S, _! @" u( S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. N# Q; E/ Q' a1 D3 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 v3 u7 a3 ?# k" ^4 k. x- ]1 t, C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, T" W* u5 E& ~& j0 q1 A$ p5 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( I$ w6 e) y. t' d1 ^$ p# b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 A1 y( }( L( v. O+ i4 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* Z' k2 u' h  {& d# x: T( ]0 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, ~4 u8 [( x5 x* |& @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 a, [, g3 f3 G2 v6 }: z5 G  \0 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, q1 X: b; K4 [3 X; |# M3 p# n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* k$ |9 P" I6 G3 c9 X9 |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, C+ v3 q* D/ e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, t# m4 P, m: U. g4 M5 y' M5 _" n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 ^5 t/ w# Q% p, y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ |+ ~4 K3 J" G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) e! _. L! P& i- g$ g% D+ j# h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# _" [9 O) U6 S, }/ a: B0 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( x! `2 L8 P) Y6 g4 Z8 y; w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>