【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; d1 q0 K3 C3 U6 ~2 K8 p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: {  K& G' T9 Y* ~3 {! sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ a$ p! L9 s9 @1 g2 _0 W; iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; E- o. f7 l$ l/ @$ ^( L9 l/ w! AYou needn’t fear anything
3 Z& p' K! w. h& n' D& _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 L9 o  ?3 O* t% g0 Z7 ]7 o8 EI really want to know just how much you love me
$ e8 I  V6 ?: c4 V5 I% QI love you I love you with all my heart
& Q" q, f5 V) \: t- V" wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# m, ~8 K6 E. \6 V. T8 F* o4 T7 DI want so much to see inside your heart
- R3 `) y' d5 d) z1 o7 ^* K5 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- |4 D0 R# X! R* |; e3 \* oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 e1 c8 }! P1 F* x$ C& v, GI regret not dying
( m& Y. C6 H# ?- |7 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" V  p$ \9 d! g3 K! s" MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 O- P( Y1 T0 S- d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* r; D: I, P% S# \! F' k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 M% }, `# M5 n, ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 ]& D1 b# U* a. U) Z) V, b8 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% C; y* s0 r6 N: q8 l" {" D8 q% b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. k8 K4 @) u# m4 c; s; F: r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* g0 F7 Z% a5 [) R2 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# n1 L8 W- t8 S: o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# o' O# l% l. }- q8 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 N6 u* E) S2 o$ {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 g4 C3 x9 [! u, D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 J7 I4 F8 @5 u/ b6 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 F6 r; I; C. {6 S9 ^4 X0 ~/ a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  Z) w3 S& x( E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 N' v. }# y: a, B' S. G% {9 M  a3 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 ^, x! r) B* \4 S$ K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  H) _: w2 {& h3 d1 d. k' l0 W0 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ ^( E2 W+ f+ y1 G: s$ c' b" @; F  k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 M; y! j$ V! x+ L: l  B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) _; ^! _0 K; m2 a, z6 j* Z% K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 l/ Z( h& O( f* x1 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 _0 U* }  D# {% [/ }3 J+ b" t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# w" T0 h2 X" a+ n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 ~* i0 N9 _8 o) {. J我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>