【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" |3 k( d1 h6 U# F1 V歌词我附在后面。
+ y) T: i- z5 c$ X. {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ H! Q/ Q) y/ M( m# n  p* {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 d7 x* h' k. B0 r% X- s3 wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: l+ G/ F3 a, h4 ?& i' OThe sky is happy down to its soul
# }+ K6 H0 n+ ZWith the moon kissing it every night
8 j7 X- i6 M3 E5 P  Y- ^0 I. p, KSeeing the sky content with its love
# \  i9 {( |% }* E; XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' o! [, a0 `4 X% ^0 \4 |! X0 `+ ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# w3 {) ~1 w' rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, i& N8 Y" \% }9 j% |, K  uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 l* B2 e' p) w$ @- a  cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: B2 u  i# c& B7 V' S1 h/ _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" ^5 g$ c+ \5 x) y7 ?! QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( C" p/ Q# J2 G- E0 RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( g4 M* [$ L/ @/ zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# S2 l- L" I: [; DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 ?* x6 U) y% b% d' B: u4 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" m$ @0 r& j, ~! k: A* j/ ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ N9 L* S! Z* ^9 `! H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, y9 O4 F- j' Z4 L! M/ `9 {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 y8 t' X5 n; t" f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! O: t2 s2 D! m6 X1 a1 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' f# q; q4 D6 I. C4 M7 q8 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ T- T# {* O: W& `! u4 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ o! [1 E" z8 x2 S+ [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 T) [+ e5 Y5 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- b9 \% _( O$ Z  I; r( h- U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ C; x8 o9 A9 j8 |7 {% I: |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: O5 F: h" w1 u6 X" R2 j2 |7 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 n* P' a7 c: }, H- q1 T7 O5 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* B1 P. ~! ^0 \0 C* M4 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# g5 E. q& u3 _% ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- j8 E% Y) ?; V+ N: b) N/ x  P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" Z0 c! t5 k' R8 W. H# A<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 z# D# ~0 X1 v, |  U) _- S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ N, J$ \8 f0 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# b$ e. w  J3 X$ V7 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ P! P' J+ G& ?7 e8 l. @. @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 t( A0 }( c  N) I& r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ l, H& o/ W) s# j+ ^我请你剖开它

# j; q& N6 B1 Q4 f- E% c" ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>