【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 T' c" |* b8 Z+ R- Y+ D' J歌词我附在后面。
% K- ]+ E* J4 \0 I0 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, [" ?9 l: {2 j$ X6 ^9 G9 N; MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 d3 D9 v+ ~6 h+ q$ |" E( `: j' U5 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 y& R$ c+ x2 U* gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% Q* `3 D  t, r. MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- S# B$ y4 r( M0 ]! x+ L4 I( Z8 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( G# m1 i$ [' b5 \/ D4 [Every other word you utter is love
0 r5 i$ f% F" R% n+ q) a# S+ a/ uI really want to know just how much you love me
$ n9 {) v" T, M1 g3 m8 `) J! F% LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 R- m% S1 K7 f" R) {# oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) T/ D$ B0 T, j* @; YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, @3 _' s! n9 f+ T" OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- Y; u% }( M/ {* T/ c3 h. II’m still filled with fear
% G% m4 _% a& o& ]& \$ qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 C# s& z9 J/ v- J: X. zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; Z% `- j- M, _8 r6 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, j& G3 c* M: w9 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ @$ F5 }7 J% Y1 U8 j4 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 j7 k" u$ ?4 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 }  Z' s0 W5 q1 D: [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 L0 T) C+ |6 q" _+ q, m# M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) r) E  U  n7 Z" b( h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 z6 I' H, t$ x3 v+ H) }  Q, V  g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  P- n: ?7 m4 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" ?, x0 k7 f! v" Q. Y8 Z( R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 W/ a! R; b0 u0 t. O0 d+ E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 E$ K- b( }; N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( d$ B$ Y& T! |% ?. U  X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% w4 |" j' t& b2 ~8 n' p( ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# `8 z* I* f" L1 w0 P+ s5 i3 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# \0 M: t  X8 h5 X3 c% `8 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% k: q, @, [' H; N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. g; m$ Q% F3 s$ ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 ?  g0 W- i$ {0 L: A8 P& l0 f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( Z0 O( H4 M' {3 m" B  e( [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 {/ w3 k0 t9 U) F4 L* I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 x+ c4 }9 q! h4 v* `) t* @& k* e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  w" n/ J, r( @3 P/ C' e0 F3 A  H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& Q5 `8 Z1 b5 Y9 k& Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: _. @& ~# |% u- L9 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& a- R- Y% _, |4 q3 X. Z3 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 Q+ q' s' X2 H, @& D+ q& M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* ]: Q9 w5 P$ \, T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* b  S6 o8 E7 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ q* [/ w# o* w2 F9 M; l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: U+ J, O2 _8 r$ ~# U# O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 Y9 ?# D7 V) J5 ?2 D6 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 j- Y# `6 i% C' U* @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 l" i$ y7 B+ [我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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