【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 [, S2 C# y" \, w% N( _  Y$ OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, i1 d0 h/ P3 H" u! iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 s( o( {9 [; q  F4 X) ?3 iSeeing the sky content with its love
6 T' D. @' G& n3 X, d/ _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 F, [6 j: c$ gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, d: P7 w+ m# _8 O; AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* M. n7 f4 o+ \- e/ ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 w  t: }2 i2 w3 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& S$ X9 A2 j( P4 X7 V( V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 X8 y; m0 p; @: N( g, P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- E( z0 |$ {2 N  W7 C. f5 [8 b6 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ w2 Q7 l* n; d+ ~+ h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% ]' y( \- M1 ^: l$ s  C. C* B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; ]3 C  S" a- o& i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ F/ J- w  I$ o4 i/ `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 u6 F4 J5 `$ ]+ e. h+ ]: f( U; t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% F7 y+ o) h; z, h- F' p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 |/ Q4 o* b. c' z0 L5 \% X5 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! W. @0 x1 z8 c0 S% H* J7 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& R0 r( T5 Q2 P9 J  e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ @8 E0 c* C. E0 r4 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ c( J8 O  m. u$ p* A3 R! y4 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 M. p* {7 S4 @5 p( x: H8 h3 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ z. X7 [. F% t, i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ f9 p. r- S5 J2 O! [: |, R" b9 |# k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, p+ Q6 y  [* j. ]6 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 M, X; x/ s- A2 @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, j6 N& ^8 J* `% g4 z' j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# M9 I' \& y/ r5 L+ i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ U- {' d3 X+ L* P1 K2 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& ?; z! Z  `1 G& I7 h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' _* X  L) ?6 y' L' _* ]  \# B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ G$ R* I0 ^9 S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>