【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 ~( m0 `3 Z4 L/ ~. j" N歌词我附在后面。
/ }* \" E" _2 Y# \6 c5 Z0 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" T; w& `7 c4 j) ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
. A. ~; Y" T, E1 u2 y9 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 k4 X/ ?0 u5 f( AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ ^" V; T. F2 [" S% p% E) ]The sky is happy down to its soul
6 z" G# A5 c' a. z; z5 j7 rWith the moon kissing it every night
5 F6 i  u8 z7 k! p: [# eSeeing the sky content with its love
8 |* ?+ Q$ @2 p4 K1 C6 C  `+ uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) [8 [5 p$ v0 C  cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  ^3 e+ c: A: ]# yEvery other word you utter is love
: v9 V% Y  K1 pI really want to know just how much you love me
8 K( J  r- ^* yI love you I love you with all my heart
4 A; J* E2 L. Y5 K8 T! iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' O7 w0 f* U5 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ Q8 g1 p0 a  L+ }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 O- L' t1 J6 \6 xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 A- w2 u* R5 @  _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; k4 r4 V* c# ~: g$ @With such a tongue as yours,
8 S- T- n( ]. N' D5 A9 o* TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. E5 z7 ~# a- p# c  ~! L( \2 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. W0 x9 M) G$ C, o" u* `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 e$ q2 r0 M% ]) Q% g7 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* N  Q4 U! X1 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 n7 o+ C  ?; x& Z( p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" m5 E8 J$ ^3 q8 |7 I( }, N# [) D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" Y" ]4 t0 j" k* I/ C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  i& B9 O# P* M3 v, c6 X. r, P! @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 m# b8 e3 }) v. K: M. p<P>你无需担心</P>
9 Z* _2 U& B* m& m$ G6 l4 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( B/ N) s1 E& ~3 I' \  v6 L; K- ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; B  Z% ?) w+ s+ K  T! J% R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 v6 V" U- r' N" U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 H5 Q# c$ I# A( j3 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 V% |/ C0 A7 p4 @6 C  j( E0 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* c1 o: f2 p6 g0 x, m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 }& S& R; U# X& k# C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# x7 Q, [3 O/ h: R. |: e; a5 z1 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" Z! Z8 v) V9 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 v( @  o+ ^% b% V; a; ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 F! r" K( o0 O3 W: U9 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 p" V% b9 S# g' i8 B) H( a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 C# v- g( x9 o/ @( h! B  G& Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( ~( }, T$ @# P/ R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' P6 B4 |0 S2 g" f+ R" {6 ~- t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: ~+ H3 K$ E0 }2 J9 G: T' P( b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* r- H- j( g' T+ ^8 ?1 i5 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 M. H& B5 A9 e% [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" o+ p) Y+ N" z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>