【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 q* D2 _  C: a9 r, ^: h  xThe sky is happy down to its soul
' `( Q1 F& h5 h$ k3 l) C9 `With the moon kissing it every night
- t9 W( o5 f: x& s0 U: O8 cSeeing the sky content with its love
. f, y6 P- M1 ~3 l) DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- _/ R; \- E* d( h2 s+ D) y$ LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  ]+ ^/ m: {" NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! M2 N0 j* j4 D7 F+ wNothing can compare to my love
% {' G- W0 e. q; p, FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. y4 i; n( a4 h( D8 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% ^0 ~# Z; m, bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' ^) C# D% D3 e+ o0 @- wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' Z# A* z! Y, L& e  |2 ^( bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- a, @% T4 W  z4 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 L  a1 B% e6 Q9 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 t, X! I3 S  [( O( eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) b$ g  g& H) C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 o1 @- |; R9 R9 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 s6 K& F+ J: C" W" ]8 I% }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" m/ ^  D2 Z. }! Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. F6 O. j$ a, [2 @5 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' ~% j  l, Q6 j/ q7 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m+ W, H$ g$ r4 ?) P! p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 _7 L3 n2 T* B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  n* m. |5 j1 `/ M2 P# G4 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 t9 [: L) A% v* Q+ }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! a- A6 s  L1 Y' n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ a! z5 s) `6 [; X  B. U/ ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, r" G) {: E- q) q! W* z. D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( F: O# j9 m- W: U; ?) y+ U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 ^* b  G2 l3 S2 h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. V& t- Q4 S3 [7 Y5 b6 a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" n0 t6 Y) {, x3 H  _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ M, s1 G! N( }8 q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 W) L" @8 v) h; ^& `3 z' V& g" I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 I9 R( C5 g5 o/ J  L7 t' m8 r5 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  \; \7 _5 s* ]+ I6 S. m4 d" I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- S, d; N" A: A- T9 ]6 W, j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! g6 [0 o0 E8 s! v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ d0 ^: l8 {! o1 q' j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, A' p: {' d' I! l2 h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ L9 ^2 `' z4 p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' f$ J& q8 |4 P( P/ B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( s' u& A- f6 [' Z+ n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ u- S4 C5 G6 y3 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# R* p! b; K# }3 R, E! }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 D& ~, b& }1 `3 A9 m' d& x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

" B6 _2 |& _6 @4 J9 W/ s2 u/ n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 P; [0 P8 f" t8 l' @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>