【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* W4 o$ a  z/ pWith the moon kissing it every night
" M, K7 Z2 O# h5 A! sSeeing the sky content with its love
  s# P% X( X, Q" Y$ eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, s8 Q+ ?" V4 y1 ?/ RYou needn’t fear anything
: {+ z4 b( G# M! P% P9 }* }" HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 p2 n  n9 t4 m. L$ D$ z8 d0 @0 ?! tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 ^3 ~; `6 \% V  _; L; V2 I: BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( ^, R4 v. L7 v4 t6 |9 F  L0 ^8 G: DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. J" j* K5 h9 b) G7 ~" JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" a2 T" K5 \6 ?' Y5 y4 o. D3 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! E3 o" P; M( Z! V. XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 p) w) L! r; q: [, ~0 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# W, t9 h5 Y3 ^6 z+ W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' @& ~& ]) x8 c/ b! I/ p! Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( [9 Q- x3 I* m4 C  r6 H/ R* L' c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 E! z9 h6 g, i, P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( I1 W1 P* O, D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- x9 z) ?. H' k" G: G9 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 h* h6 X& H; H" }2 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" w! P3 t; C; \0 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& i# ~7 W) D4 q4 r. G. i$ `1 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 p, f8 G+ p. v7 R" r4 f7 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 X" d# [2 d$ I" P$ ?% d: {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ n2 Q$ E; @6 d8 ?! {+ R( t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ ]4 N( R0 L- N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 s$ U2 W& m2 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  H7 l  |7 P, P( d. {) E6 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: X- [; N% \' I# k7 `7 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ d) u" l1 i& p& j9 n  m# A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) k9 @7 T) ^7 I6 e6 d' I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* f: I5 _9 X/ g' _- t/ p( e& Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ I+ c0 G& @) o, Y6 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 U& j' M4 B2 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- u; P: x8 }! W: M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 p" }( O. w" M8 U9 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. _+ N, @; H1 O8 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 f+ n) m5 X( y6 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& D6 q3 J, Z: K$ G+ A- X( t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, _9 P5 g- s5 \9 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; @( |% ]' O: v4 a8 P2 \8 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 v3 t5 e4 f3 [/ s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>