【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 i$ }5 {! L# u4 k/ tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) E" K2 F4 O0 v$ J/ @: n! f4 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) ]9 {) s  q( S. W0 \; {# yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 {1 D9 u( Q% m7 b, m! gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* q% R0 U( |" h( W% uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: b) n. S# b; X7 [2 L* h. t% ^% kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ ^4 l9 d" q" ]" N4 [0 fI want so much to see inside your heart
/ y; Y) w' z) _; l4 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 h* Y/ ]& H; `( |I’m still filled with fear
5 G: {7 h1 }  n$ n( R0 o, J8 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& e- Z7 P) ^. d6 s5 U: o) mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( l& V- v. S' ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( j% [7 d4 @* c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 k/ h% U0 N9 j; H4 N4 p+ D( B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; A" A3 S  V/ n1 p5 F# b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& n1 n% b9 o  _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 d  |9 n) P5 [, L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) X" ?; }0 x# W, ]- H# y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  B, e, r9 ^3 D5 v6 B4 w9 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 K. a& I' d; d5 i4 m! O9 h( r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- H/ V/ u" t/ g7 f+ T" F- S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 [7 F2 h: j; L$ e7 c+ y  y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 W" c& N/ s* j7 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% f$ i, X; w, Z! L1 r6 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# T+ Z- r# f9 q/ o2 n) H# T" H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, Z, D" O$ @0 Y4 p' n* P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, s; m$ E8 J3 D3 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* Y$ \# l: ]7 X- G* |" M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. t. u! [8 i, d2 o# v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 m+ n3 P- E! ]/ y2 \9 |% _  d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, ]+ ~- w& v+ f. R0 o3 [" N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 O* x. K% L$ Q  h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* @# O8 m  I; r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; Y5 B7 R" g) F8 w6 w( x! t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% j# m, t- X" I; p" K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- h, L0 f! W2 x% l1 O! {  a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: s. V, z1 h+ ]% E  s! l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( v2 h" K& |4 ]$ k) ?+ z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ D* k* B) C: o( y9 v( a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" P( N& Q$ ^% l我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& E$ ~( y" j4 K7 e! I2 z* Z( V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>