【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 L* @7 K' Q' M8 Q1 Q4 d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 y( E" _2 L& p' t6 `/ r+ b. SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 I4 z/ Q1 c4 a) f1 c0 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 O1 U9 r. _  n& ?Seeing the sky content with its love
; n4 n, \; c' wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 R% [, ]% f1 g  h' BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; e$ W: m6 O$ ^( y' f- SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* B/ l$ E+ K2 W) k5 ~+ I) q9 UNothing can compare to my love
$ o0 ]- A# Y  U  F8 N% y& LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) S9 T9 [) N5 \7 g! a6 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ Y$ q8 T; x  q  P( e* B# `; r2 S% BI want so much to see inside your heart
% J7 ?. Y% l% `: Y) H6 s2 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' w1 I  C9 N8 z; n7 g8 l) }+ [& N7 |I’m still filled with fear
: H$ i) K9 W6 N/ DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, U) k  K* w/ N  |I regret not dying
! y7 U; k* G7 W) l; g) \& L9 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 ^, d, U! }+ {( vWith such a tongue as yours,
* @; T$ o! J, A) R, L+ R* j6 {- bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( S2 I9 h! H, c9 Q; u6 T/ dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 A; ?. e( F! j% W) e, U! J; `9 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; f+ L5 W* j1 w: ^& d! _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: m' ~* i' h& l5 a1 A4 b5 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 j9 e5 @, B2 \4 b7 G) O5 ~- M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 V/ a5 E9 t1 R" j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( ^, ]6 V4 \5 B! ^3 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ u) q) d! {" r4 T8 C6 n* {" v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 g# s: C0 d1 t3 n; ^2 t& P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& O. O+ {, Z, G4 |) d4 z7 [. J. C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ p$ v" K" M  |4 B3 g- g7 D4 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 V' H0 q9 o" g  U0 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: E9 M  }, C" ^( N& R) U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 _" x/ d2 n- R" j* T# n- n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. `6 |( A& u& p! y  c' D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. _0 F' s# T, i6 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' A7 d' _& {" f" R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 [% P5 c. A! o# R* q2 Y  }; b4 _5 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 y# u: W  o$ G/ B+ b3 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 E( O6 g+ R: D% G% Y3 t; U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. x- z6 r  S; W2 M# ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! a9 K% R& R" {9 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 ^- ]' z/ e+ Y& u2 }" i0 w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 s- @4 Q7 R0 u9 }5 Y; M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: R* U8 n$ B( b+ x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% M+ y/ y5 O' H( N' @) u# H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; ~- y2 B1 _( \: B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; |4 t' n7 [4 Y  J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ]- F5 U0 r; f( u# L1 Q- F# e; l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>