【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ L2 |! L! `, G+ @  i" {& n, R7 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 X& f2 O. K! cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 g3 Y* u( Z1 {$ N$ DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 F* F  y9 E: o( ]: d! GYou needn’t fear anything
& H- z8 d  a2 X$ g! \1 e7 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& F) M( r- r1 W! j' lNothing can compare to my love
) I0 L6 l) L4 h3 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ h9 F! K8 s& ]' ?; MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. f. Y) {+ `/ K" {' D5 K" k1 WI regret not dying
8 ~& a$ @2 n0 {* P6 ~2 [+ `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: v, i* J: x" u, r' F0 UWith such a tongue as yours,
2 K. L( j/ O: b. s" QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& J8 L" ]2 ]0 W/ r& C* MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% x" z6 z7 Z1 P7 z4 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" \; b+ d% O8 l+ Z" |5 X7 O. \( X3 U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 V% M9 e( l+ E4 e& M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 X3 B0 a/ G0 j( ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 A* i, R" o7 L: t, R5 E' r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ a% V# Y2 J) Y2 {0 P( ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 V! e; m/ L+ a0 F$ `# z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  q2 E4 K& V! ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' F6 o% y8 |' r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ C# r6 E5 d7 ~' E0 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) ^% @; E* o% k6 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; o- n0 v& L  d7 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 K0 {8 G- }. |2 G( {! J! M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ ?7 g4 K! C( V+ O: C0 w4 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 o0 k1 i; r( V9 Z. v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 [& i5 y# M/ T5 @8 j; ~9 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; b, u7 ]: {" }. P" m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 ^! Y( ^5 F+ f+ P1 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 I$ |: [  Q6 i0 B- g4 ~5 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ o, \1 b* m% B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! s( C/ R! _$ D$ F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* _7 W) a4 K5 E9 q- k; z! l9 P' \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 h/ f$ h* Y8 ]2 {# ~& E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! O( O, S9 b+ I0 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 s8 C6 t; [2 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 T+ m- @) E; k% G' f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 m& c5 ?7 A& _9 t- E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! R; n  E% k' Q/ w% @# q4 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& f7 _. d0 D8 ~1 R# Q! k2 K: M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 H+ F: g* k0 n- {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ y  ~4 T& D% w1 }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- W9 `' \, J+ q1 x: i我请你剖开它

+ [+ G* h3 D) o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>