【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! ?9 H" S4 k/ d- L. _; ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- g; w  H) I& n+ H4 m0 a: l/ v6 m- wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 l/ D- {1 l2 U! K6 A4 d- R& @1 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( q+ {$ n' M! u8 CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 S4 p& e' J' K# f, W+ s# V: n. s* hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# m8 k" s5 @2 D( II love you I love you with all my heart
% _2 ~4 n! J1 Q/ Z: nNothing can compare to my love
, `3 B7 o# A1 s3 [# O% KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; ^+ Q6 g5 I8 Z* F2 eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 b4 ?, b0 x+ T7 B* BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% O3 `( b$ H9 a* P1 lI’m still filled with fear
: G( o& ^, C' S. hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  x0 q9 ^3 t0 k! Z4 {$ {I regret not dying
2 @3 p1 |0 c  L8 e8 `' wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! R1 ]" B  N% G& rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" r. q6 H, p# }/ @& TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 Z. ]# C3 A: I+ A- `1 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 m; r% w0 F8 R0 j) f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 Q" T% l( A0 B  D  K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 Y! q# u) U* H( x3 r) j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! k; M% N7 x5 p7 `6 |. X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  \) m7 s4 `! D, T. m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 H9 Q3 }9 R9 ]1 b6 F4 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, b: _/ r- P' z8 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- u& S1 H/ o! H/ u  b' W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 k5 K  g0 E' _1 E, ]8 z% v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& G7 _4 P/ Y9 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 N- X' o( M- O( ~4 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 F' S. u; w7 l3 s4 s( X( V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ Z5 Q( ^: P  o' p) @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 f) S4 t: k0 _. H5 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 E  U0 F8 k" ^! W8 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% y$ ^& l% G) h. R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, i( A5 s' t4 P2 C* P3 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 [- r( {" p1 j& F7 Y  J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! [1 q+ e# F, S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 o& C" Q3 F2 m9 E4 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 s# w" f4 `: x' ?5 z6 l& E  N4 v/ X6 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! ?0 n7 F( x2 k4 ]+ ]! w# U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! W1 O9 E% p5 z# B9 a7 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. R7 a) b' H& }% ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 N. w  b' g& x  c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 m& R7 _* P1 H* {5 h3 Y# n4 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% S- j+ t, n9 k- N/ A+ [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* c) r+ Y- \* t/ \2 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; b+ e) `% E( I* T& A5 g) j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 n: t6 ^) h0 G. s$ j& k# w1 y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>