【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 t" R$ p# s& g; Q) U. c9 V3 s歌词我附在后面。
- f1 L8 L* k6 l% H1 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ y) w2 V6 L" ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 t5 T; a& ?% g: [& o. ?" \  jThe sky is happy down to its soul
( [0 w. _( }& {2 @" tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* c0 F) `( \7 u: {' cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: t$ o9 s/ j# ]I want so much to see inside your heart
8 F  x9 C9 _2 E0 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 z2 O2 Z7 M* C# F$ AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, C% q' K3 Y) `I regret not dying
& \! \! l: Q: kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 m$ f& ~- k: a7 n% w5 ^, Q2 h3 ~: ^
7 H3 K; e' a# `0 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 L7 _/ D3 A6 h8 D. [! p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: a/ @% M' ?$ j! q0 B# n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; [3 L( w1 o. Y0 y7 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 i" ~( `4 U8 y9 y5 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- e- F: `$ r1 e: U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" v5 i+ W8 U7 s9 j1 t% |+ R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 B1 M4 o" Y% h4 \& D- E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 j9 W2 h: ]& ~# M- h! Q0 @9 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 `( k. n, u" a1 u# K" d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ t$ E4 S, x% N<P>你无需担心</P>
2 c; Y3 Z, {: G3 ]! Y' Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: l8 }7 G+ ]/ |8 U' F" S, `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 [7 P& L0 N* q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ a) N- D: h4 [  O5 T4 Q5 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; w+ p) ^+ h1 j4 I! X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 x( M8 [0 A0 Y: M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ \2 ]; U3 W$ L+ Z" l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* {/ R% e3 r0 p5 A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 W0 D5 z: p- y" |. s, J4 I) t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" ^3 q4 Z5 `1 R  v# [; \1 d9 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, S" S( _3 j! d# a) F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! o; C- l4 e6 |, ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 O( J( m$ p. f" a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; k0 E. m( A9 `; L6 a# Q1 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ Q9 ]1 y/ j0 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 A3 m, ?7 G. D  b& ?5 z6 M/ e! Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) }6 P& J4 r' Y: Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ p7 y& I# a; ?9 o$ V* L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' M( o5 A: J0 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& k0 |, g4 k( n" `  G- b/ }4 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: o7 x4 a7 x4 T9 w" V9 J' w我请你剖开它
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, k+ w! c& |$ b# g, C7 D5 u3 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 z- U8 N3 V$ B. c2 E7 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>