【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 l( b; L$ @" v% w: K7 P歌词我附在后面。
% p* x. X; d/ r! NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& g; G. ~( u; R% Z8 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' c+ B7 i' \+ o) ~  Y7 j) i2 _. X: EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 Y- \  N4 S2 R- x! eWith the moon kissing it every night
4 G5 L0 }+ Y1 t# tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 Q$ E8 T; R/ |; sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. O/ ~, `6 E# D! r3 r! aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- F- [: E2 p  b$ l8 `1 v2 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# ~) S' K5 _* A3 `4 V/ aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 w2 Q$ Y/ L' I. L1 p; LI’m still filled with fear
( v/ g; O/ `4 fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! |2 h0 A0 n4 g3 C! R5 [- [( jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) x9 }2 I+ l, q) Q5 tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 ^4 m( ^( E! E3 H1 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 j. [0 n: K( T5 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* t  A7 ~  g+ c- j% s$ @2 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' Y+ A, j4 ]  M9 k4 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" h, K+ }; P" L( b! w% s- h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 t3 K! P$ g: _$ T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 Z( k8 U1 Y$ P! P% l5 L( H% G* B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 d+ @" D2 r' m6 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ K" l7 S; [& n( ]; ~6 @- ^4 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 |" M( h3 E: F. ]/ g<P>你无需担心</P>
; a( x# i9 l! ^! ?- h+ h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' a, t; O) C& P8 J+ \9 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ t; A  L; ~/ ]) c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. i: p7 U1 r" u! P' p( D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. Z& l9 {! j8 T5 r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: h# \2 h# @; i* S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ S4 R! m3 D* a4 l: s" P* X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 ^! y" v; _$ h6 C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ D1 M+ Y! \! v9 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 [9 p6 m8 V$ V) q# ]- y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, ^9 x  V, h3 _$ l9 v2 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ n9 ~- V7 l, C/ O) P4 F7 K  G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 ^8 g1 h' n6 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 @0 J7 A$ E% v' k0 s) h* @, |2 ?/ i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 Q# K( p: m: B% y' j/ D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' ^# v% w5 v% m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: @/ q: v, W( A6 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 G/ R! _' ~5 f4 e4 V, L4 `6 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ k; t0 S- u$ x0 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: ]8 a% \( l6 N6 B- S: r* ?9 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% H, P: {8 U! q$ H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>