【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- A6 w/ E! [0 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 @+ d" p0 T1 Y* t) |, i' kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  r8 `% H1 F2 Q& P0 i# Z$ QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 P, e+ \6 l/ H  D3 cI really want to know just how much you love me
& b: S  z6 k* Q# G0 e; d9 b$ {8 mI love you I love you with all my heart
# l) L+ p. E# @3 T0 ~& N3 TNothing can compare to my love
; [- c: `4 p. |8 c" f# O" ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ B$ d8 ]  E' g2 B: R# \2 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 t2 I: {# F0 FI want so much to see inside your heart
* E& }- W& ]8 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# [) n) E# ~6 j$ [I’m still filled with fear
" q0 Z) D% ~$ `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 o: J* j* e" W, _' |. M/ B2 NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ c  t# _1 o7 N% X2 [7 n+ WWith such a tongue as yours,
5 V8 o$ Y- b8 j6 T* A; ^1 j; CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 I3 Z5 I( C  h, P+ V, |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 @0 M5 l8 K" `2 u7 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 k: |* L  z4 o: c( e* i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- o5 P: \$ _7 z/ Z% D/ f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& {3 s- R: Z) s: c# M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ d- P% z* M' y0 n1 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% y8 X+ h9 C" ]8 h/ `/ X! n" X9 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  y2 l6 `; v2 l( W) S: Q# a  O+ f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 C: D7 ^6 Q1 _  i; |) F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" l3 z. h* h0 Y5 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 S3 q1 w0 d# J- e2 H% l. i7 A<P>你无需担心</P>
9 ~( r; u( b7 `$ {, e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- @2 Q' Y# @: U. t8 _+ F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- n6 G# W5 L; a( y( k; d- J$ O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  H* ]; v$ |, x( g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! t) e4 T% Z8 D6 [: z2 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% n2 O* Z$ I- \. t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 ^9 m% P# a# `# E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" P: i$ N, ~) Z7 m6 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  C7 a/ U, g" x; _; z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% B- ]" P1 i% A+ e3 e, D0 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! `8 V/ I" I& R. i; q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% {+ S$ F2 X' Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* ?7 A; C  L1 L# J  b! G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ `1 U- k8 s) M9 ^7 q0 ]  N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: e" O7 e+ E% x4 X% a  |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 U* ~$ y' X6 e( E8 |, J+ _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ ?' z# ~0 j+ ]. _( @+ z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  \- c1 |8 s8 u" K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* X" S" C& Z- R  V9 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 |: |/ y1 e4 l# G/ P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 E* W; T- d. `0 n2 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. l9 S6 H  x& U4 V+ ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; T5 G" A! D5 [3 g: M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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