【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 b3 y* K5 n1 W$ c" Y/ i歌词我附在后面。
' f( r0 k/ [/ `0 d; b2 b6 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ z+ o' u. q! @4 H3 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. K% t3 q/ `; G6 J- D& ~With the moon kissing it every night
& }+ T9 P0 q7 X8 w% @' OSeeing the sky content with its love
6 a6 ^( G- E. Z3 `! A" RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 N$ b1 ^2 f( v3 P, Q$ BYou needn’t fear anything
& {3 d$ i' d; w! s+ B0 `" iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 b( G) t1 D8 S: vEvery other word you utter is love
3 c7 _9 t' ?$ P, d6 lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" H- S% S' p- o6 qNothing can compare to my love
" Z) N0 L( |+ u1 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* [6 G7 c  C! t' I: [+ v* P5 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 |1 q# H; H, E6 H6 VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 b0 A, x. d( {1 C  ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% b  K1 ^/ C5 W- B( ^* y. @1 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; ]5 S2 i1 o7 F2 \* R1 t7 Q" k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, N3 E/ l5 ]" ?# |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 Q/ I; U" w, `  x1 T# K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 P2 }) Z6 i% _7 N; z( g/ V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 t) q8 H/ }4 ?% L& ]: a, F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# v0 T! Q7 s$ L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  y4 Q9 b1 |2 S3 F4 v  ?  Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ X) ]2 `% k4 X& p/ p7 t9 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' r: d. f8 m. t9 |5 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 a) i, Q" O8 ~5 g! s4 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ q; O; r& C  K8 M# }# u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" \( ]& q, r, t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ p* v  L" b3 q9 P5 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 W; J& o4 K4 }1 G) P& o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* H8 c& G# d0 `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. i0 F0 D$ o; X: ]8 Q4 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 C% V9 N+ \* l4 H" r7 f. ?1 U% Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ Q/ R& p$ ?3 n# A, D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 X5 j3 {7 K. i# `/ b$ T$ x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' x' b, s, T. A! z- c/ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' E8 v/ a: {6 J' [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 N: S2 T! L0 ]/ l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 K1 Z6 t9 O% {$ I" n, R) b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ o7 d+ l$ D  F! t% x  j( V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 c$ r0 @- j! s2 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% S8 {6 {% Z! R1 p* J: K9 e' r4 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% `1 M7 `  ?) P5 T5 `( s" s7 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 S: i1 G, z: j. ^& ?. Z4 c8 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ ?# T/ X* u7 o& X& p# d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 \& Z' e4 Y7 ~; f4 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 M" Q" y+ T: @$ W2 E5 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 f8 _0 I. n: c, r" _* N, j" N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 l8 @8 X/ {( Y8 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>