【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 K' j% V6 ^. N1 x: ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
* C* m9 h) k1 \: [% q+ \6 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 P, p/ L% P/ ~; h6 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ Y( k' s$ ?5 [: e- o  oThe sky is happy down to its soul
% Q: ~. Z  T% C3 x/ L% h% z" [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' s/ u, ^3 b6 b# r3 \. gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( }4 K- @- F# BYou needn’t fear anything
% F9 n" S( C3 L4 U5 b1 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ y5 r1 H5 d4 j' I8 E/ k' fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 `2 y4 @( l1 RNothing can compare to my love
' B' B/ A# N. e5 R& A' jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  r4 s: t2 n/ r, \; x! F/ S, o% ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 M- @5 u7 m! T8 YI regret not dying
! W4 @7 w# G" jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ R) ]0 p0 k$ x) c" EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* t* U) P# m% I! l& \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ z0 F. [/ t/ b" E* K" T: [7 i1 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 l) o" I6 J5 ]" i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: S/ u! l8 U2 z* _0 E0 b3 W" b3 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' P% ^4 v% V9 W$ u# W) }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 u8 e7 k5 p: c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 X6 L7 G. Z% t2 W7 X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 i5 r$ Y( [! l  G) U( K8 @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 ]! g7 E8 z: c+ c( b0 A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 I# q1 _# o' j$ K& _* C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 J; X  H1 }1 b  L7 p% Y# P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, L8 |- W: Y' D% y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' z# x0 m$ Z: d: q- S; I( `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 {7 ?* B, q4 K' I% p; K8 C7 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 }% w% [% m7 C. W- R% ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 v$ T3 T3 T. O9 o0 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: O% U4 h+ X7 T+ Z2 D1 f5 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& D4 t: g$ x$ |- J- k( {0 W& R, a& y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 \1 i6 S; `& g- T  i% U5 Y- y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# \3 [) @3 X/ v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  M* ~& t. Q' ]: W: |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; H9 u& _' Y+ y3 Y9 _( Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) _& D, Q8 t1 }* K6 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
" ~6 o9 r; g* `$ X* a! u9 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 |/ H" |* g' X$ c: H* b1 M( A# A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ Y' N6 d4 N* E& t: w0 J' B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 W% b7 v2 j' R7 a3 U4 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) C# _9 a/ J; Q7 w1 ?; R9 `$ P# Y) s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 _9 M- t; {+ g# H  ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. f# ^. a. \: [+ ]" |我请你剖开它
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" K+ p7 H& X7 v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>