【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" [% f/ M4 q9 @9 G- y9 @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 W- W1 Q& f- V- T' F9 ^0 N) eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% t! c4 u' j8 C8 Q( t4 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 H9 q7 s& d# \4 YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- H- `  n5 ~  x- _) L6 IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  w4 f) q6 u- L  P( A/ M. }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( [+ w8 |5 g& C. L2 z0 _) Q  f: E6 `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- C3 F* v/ @3 S+ xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% Y/ r! V( r+ `- X! a, R1 i2 p, ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 u0 n" a. K, F7 zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ V# V1 p+ o3 L- LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; O5 S4 a% i5 p- r+ {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' o5 s0 S9 @+ a7 d; E3 b5 h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 X4 r2 e. _% ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: d$ v) ], [$ C3 e8 h0 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- z* }( ?( N/ U7 F% Z( `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; V+ c8 H! Y1 b, K9 q5 d/ S3 ]- D. P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" K, ?( F% U3 i- [9 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* F, h* j( p% [$ y9 J. ~; ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. G5 B+ d; w' G1 Z( {# G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 y' X/ Q2 {. G  D: x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 v, B/ u1 b9 T" i! U1 O9 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: b8 Q3 u! _7 `% |7 Q( K, B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  h3 R" V+ D" A3 n: g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& B3 i; x) @3 x4 u4 S% Z6 Q# o0 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: X2 N6 I' a4 G! N& n8 v, i3 Z" v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; G- r* V0 m% j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 `0 V9 ?8 N% [# i3 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 `$ ?; h) c, G, `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 A3 w- I9 d5 s; w( z6 I; R: v% L$ t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 Y' s, e1 [2 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& g# M1 q; m- i2 q: ]. w+ u' z5 a8 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 u0 c2 O) y6 D0 ~0 s, x# z7 A# R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ w4 X& h& U2 R1 c( t+ T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 L- D* H* W/ M8 Y+ c+ Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
( O. {" s) k8 O4 l0 p, S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; w" `+ D( d0 ?$ E/ {3 F) z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 y' V. F, G) z1 y- H$ y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: g  @' K3 [/ t% k( R. w, a/ C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 ]9 X8 O! Y( b/ E6 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. S4 _9 k! a  ]( Z* y; M6 S6 V0 s# p) v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 }+ R9 G7 c- g* ~! `# k' ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- R3 M) a$ \' z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! c- }5 u$ C  E  i" G7 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 @+ z) F6 B! i" M! M/ Q我请你剖开它

- N- a. o9 J# b, i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& B+ t$ `0 _7 i7 ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>