【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ K6 U" W' L: d+ ~1 R) \  YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 v1 \8 X# q* Q' b8 [0 ]9 X- Q/ _3 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 i$ N, f; l0 |, E2 s% l! i* P6 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& `2 u2 R3 D3 z7 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. O1 s. p& m4 Y$ |With the moon kissing it every night
  u8 ~. q% |5 c" b% d# f9 ~0 x* `: oSeeing the sky content with its love
( _+ c+ z) l1 g) y( LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 J, v: B3 c% X1 c  ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, c3 @3 Q( i9 _* `/ pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. [5 x, S4 x+ B4 g8 j. V' PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 ^- P5 ^1 B+ o- }I want so much to see inside your heart
4 b9 c/ k4 ?; YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 J6 _/ s; q7 Z' o: fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ W5 G( r, `4 S4 u! rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* W4 a; r+ D9 Z6 @. |% e& c' g# iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: e( {0 D9 t8 Y- n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ M3 Z& g/ I6 F' y% e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 ^4 @5 J2 b3 m* V5 o- H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 I5 n& J3 y% F4 ?4 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 N" C5 D# i4 r8 D. c3 D% F# l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- N9 r* w$ n1 t* Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" l) ?7 v0 I: B# K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! K, ?3 X: |8 S( b! s6 Q6 q( Z<P>你无需担心</P>
; v8 p. {* l, p) f+ s: I- r, G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ w1 Q9 f, I9 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ u: v4 d7 a+ O( \8 ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. X- I. T) B9 W  t- N) x7 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 j9 f: t7 ~& _* E9 c  d' Q* f+ R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 j9 R& O; Z7 j. x8 R  m" z6 K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 _/ D- T. m' N3 y8 v% }, n# {& `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ K+ n/ D9 M, Q0 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 p1 U5 Y: x( ^) M; D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# c* m  ^# Y6 W3 y* N% V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 k9 y& ]# @- x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 y1 t/ D# O# f* X, M& K! v<P>I regret not dying</P>
( [& Z1 N  s+ T8 H+ l1 M, z% S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; ?) ?; ]: N4 T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 V1 T: z' j$ D4 Q7 i0 Z8 ^* y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, H8 O; a) U+ V0 {- B- ?+ X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. I$ @4 n8 w' t* z8 v' Z6 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ N* g* t$ T9 i! z4 h7 o6 H8 ?# g! y# g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 _2 G1 ~+ t+ B) X, ?我请你剖开它

! b& _1 o1 k  {. @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 D5 y2 D1 G6 Y  ^% y; e$ I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>