【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; k% S# X; @" ?9 z( r% o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 h! ~, k2 d. g6 e0 Q0 R  XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ D9 k1 U1 q  |; r* M" Z- M$ _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" H% E6 `& W, |6 M( CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 p3 J2 N7 [9 }( ]2 TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- j2 ^5 p. `, FNothing can compare to my love
( V7 R+ h, [# ]5 R6 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ f  A1 A2 _, v+ f' qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 e% S# x+ k) }  X: \" R- Q" GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, B( \9 G- D5 z8 j9 F5 P, YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: Q: Q4 s3 T, s7 l/ c* dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 s( C$ E! Y# w* x9 x& z; F: S( E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ x2 Z6 n) w3 D$ U4 i* ?3 h* }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 Q& [& ]; E% `0 t$ X5 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; Z# }& d  s, c, h! {4 g/ ~; |6 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* V$ W* V" A- n" E( A7 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 ]8 q9 Y: P- n( U: l+ d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 T' t. b( p$ B5 g: p6 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 \3 ]/ Y- O! Y7 C; o; B5 D" j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 w$ ^' _* J7 E6 Z  I( Z+ ~<P>你无需担心</P>
% v7 t* S/ |) U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. f/ E. w. S( h' K- ?, O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' U% S' K1 q# _$ A& x1 Z0 b+ b" W3 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 Y; j9 m, f% m, {' Q2 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* ^4 v& Y5 m9 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! j0 w; ?' P, P6 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- w3 a/ `/ s: ~( Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ ^0 L; @& u# H5 L# I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. L0 T# N" g- V, `8 ~+ ~6 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ n$ q* F+ o( S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" ]( [" v8 Y+ d- H* T: w" @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' G7 U, B. e/ j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; W! b% E  |9 C8 L. x" g% O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) X/ ]2 ~5 M4 s. Y+ G& P' \8 b  a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! G& k; p: V# I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% @, C4 f% R+ _, f8 `! A3 C2 K1 H' s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ z5 ~: }! m+ J  J. `# F" t5 t; P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& `  M& W$ X1 X. a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 Q  T5 L, W; L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 ^0 H. M- X$ Y% [. v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 x- ?2 ?; V! E% |* u+ G; Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 G. B8 C) o. Y& I( n0 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ H9 s, Y9 M' Y' d+ Z$ J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# E7 q8 a& E9 W  g3 O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 c$ W4 V) v6 h  l6 |. M9 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>