【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 v0 n3 h/ I; R6 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( c2 W0 c6 f4 V1 E6 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 s0 U" m4 p/ z5 o" J# e7 wSeeing the sky content with its love
: ~$ t0 d: w9 [& d( sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 J4 W+ z5 w5 D5 mYou needn’t fear anything
8 f  b+ ]& u; ^. l/ EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* F* E$ g2 B* zEvery other word you utter is love
9 F" p" ]3 Q3 \8 `$ M- sI really want to know just how much you love me
( @6 R+ g8 w6 fI love you I love you with all my heart
5 t. h( ^# y& e* \8 ]9 H; hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* o* k4 k: k! x) p9 x3 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* T( }- l# s8 `( [4 A9 w/ lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 N, b# n! X9 @  g3 AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 W# R, h+ n# P& [* d9 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- Q9 x; L( C7 F% _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 ~$ E4 l; N4 g( _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ X9 D( P, j# K; A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ P6 V7 @: B$ v/ G4 C! q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' H" s7 O5 a+ j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& u! R0 ~' d& \1 p3 t! v' z( c7 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ k, J$ s4 e4 V. a/ p* x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& ^  `- o; }  m1 D6 {: {; a5 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 y0 ?3 W2 Q2 v; h9 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' V$ r8 f# C1 u" L1 _+ ?6 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 Q0 ?7 f9 j: j6 E2 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# a) z  B" J' V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' b/ Y/ U! s( X# z: t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ m  J" x) J* L2 z  F! C( |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 q# C& T: d8 o1 S$ V: J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* Q, J6 R! H# O* G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& N. r* J0 ^* o+ n# |. y" Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ J. K& L: v7 o& E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! U; e7 h: j' ?( T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) Y6 {  S2 @% A* [* t) f: G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- T+ `8 |$ _; l* P. x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( r7 l" w' ^9 N6 L8 y; I7 A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# _  E- H& n" P7 |; Y( R6 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! V+ B- @3 w% r9 Z" y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 d5 z. y/ V3 z" s& L! z- y& O3 o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* V7 ~8 L# Q) I% W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. o& {; O" b0 w: D! \# V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 I% i1 O9 N- R' b+ {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" |/ E  h4 o% U  M8 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; g0 }9 N0 j/ [% ~4 |. c. r5 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 X  i6 R6 ?8 Y1 z# `, M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  t# X' m$ G+ h: _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; d7 V; G; Q. \2 y% \% u4 X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 a' m, |! \2 b' Q! n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>