【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' j" o0 n" h6 w8 i* r  c$ I歌词我附在后面。
8 {# c- d. Z( g) n4 b# aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  x5 l% }" I, [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% m! j9 _2 j# X. e# }' Z: x3 v1 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: `& C8 Y  v% v7 T$ eWith the moon kissing it every night
+ @1 t# X9 t. G0 A- qSeeing the sky content with its love
" E7 a! d7 ~/ a, G, ?. ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  r( G6 `! Y& H# `I really want to know just how much you love me
4 N9 L# }/ S' X" [4 ?& lI love you I love you with all my heart
: v4 G, n! P) `4 g6 ANothing can compare to my love
' J( I  }5 E# T1 d- kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 ]0 F2 z: n/ |- t5 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- M( z$ H% Q" R+ V" LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' g7 ]3 e7 O/ ?# OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 {" t' \0 S, A; f- c) L7 VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ l, {7 O9 R5 z7 BWith such a tongue as yours,
* A- F+ R, V8 {0 E/ zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" U, H. \0 e8 K5 A" @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* G+ _8 P7 W( N% n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- U# ^( n: s: r- i& j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# ^& F6 t- ?; h+ m; I4 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, F& c, ]8 f* k  _* T$ b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) k$ G" \1 _% a+ l1 p5 Z. C% r- _6 \1 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( H0 L4 q$ m2 w+ L" K7 _6 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; q  Q3 [+ N3 I& ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) {4 e2 T" L4 n* @7 r% a- `+ l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 y4 d' H1 ~  ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 C, c4 ?: u4 S$ L/ Q; P6 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 y; x6 x6 D; f# Z2 K3 C& D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# T8 d% R5 m% z" M* D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 {( \3 l7 e8 D# a! f; X0 w4 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" u( [0 l" D' }' t% \  X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! T; L7 R, g' ?+ T& w/ n( s0 L3 n- e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( S9 r+ w/ j5 w: x+ C0 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ n- K0 e- M) R# Y; M  k" K2 P! C2 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: n% k6 J, K- P' C/ _4 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 ^$ D0 f& W& d! o8 ^7 F4 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 H) C* A+ {* s- _, i, M$ H& n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( {9 |/ `' C( A* _1 ?; {3 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 x5 f2 p$ S0 t, G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, L8 Y) v" F- y$ \# c5 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' \9 _4 @. Q  Z! `# S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 J6 r" k( f  b, _3 b8 f7 V2 J" q, r5 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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% ]% x( a" H/ |  t6 V3 ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 i7 R: [) L4 w. _2 E0 R5 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>