【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 w5 h& }- s: o% L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ _# b" Y, v+ H: bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. z  ?3 m! U! F5 O. o9 ^5 `The sky is happy down to its soul
) F0 U. ]5 L8 S3 g6 Q2 mWith the moon kissing it every night
- m$ L! _; D5 m$ j  ^6 e: [Seeing the sky content with its love
8 @& ~: _9 R: L3 ]! X) u1 B) uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 z4 d. I& G! c4 q; d7 K6 @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! d5 B* [( I+ F" I/ [& LEvery other word you utter is love
6 E" m9 K$ z! j& ~/ d5 ^1 J" NI really want to know just how much you love me
4 Q! b' |: Y& A  e; }& ]0 @I love you I love you with all my heart
4 Y! i. u- q- wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; [$ B6 S2 Y0 L) u- J7 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 k: }7 b: v( h) Z; PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* d3 R: B9 i0 w, s! l! y! T2 S; aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! Y- K* A: v2 e+ HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 H; _6 K  D  z- C  h) y  GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 I* T# C, J- H# N% c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- E) x$ F5 A0 E2 T4 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* M& }2 g( R0 \2 D" G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 p0 a0 }+ o# L; u3 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 m# m) k( o" A5 ]% Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ V# S/ O4 _) r' h% _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 f7 z/ p% E# _- U& x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; C9 N. U# p( O/ d5 L, @( r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 L6 f* K2 ?2 W; v5 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. v% S9 }1 h* T( A; r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% c$ H/ X7 d0 S* F8 F9 I1 D9 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 P/ F4 p' U9 l# D1 Z  V, ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! X* [) H9 P# @0 d5 M, ?# Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: [) X' o6 @/ t- j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' S( \4 R* b) Z7 G* _- [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( d+ E3 E# l8 D8 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( Y% |6 E! S- ]  \2 f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 d+ J8 `1 B( F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% L, o0 ?/ J. e- b, y% d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( B- p% j" a6 P: f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ E; y9 y+ s0 y- j2 F: }; p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 A  `5 n" g, J4 r' m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% z; T5 _$ ~5 @5 a4 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 a+ Z$ g+ S( ]4 X, P8 y7 X9 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# N1 t: ?  m( g  m+ A+ v; F% N9 Z  j/ J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ G4 {; B+ y" l  f7 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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$ Q+ G& U  w/ N5 Z* w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: s2 `$ t( L3 C; U. E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>