【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ y2 M) I8 t( z! N: H; m, s) W歌词我附在后面。
" D# {# P$ S7 v0 D. B6 F9 X% i% VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 }" e1 B/ G& p& W8 ]* \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 r# I# N5 s. X( [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% \5 S  j+ g% V- H* v$ o: L7 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. r! K. D) J% V; n/ C) s, k2 J' gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; Y8 l6 b( b6 |" q2 s- iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( \: _1 @& ?/ hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 H9 x8 y, n/ ]  q/ x$ b/ NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% J! g# v: i- V* cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 }2 ^: r7 Q, \4 L- GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 s7 S6 l3 b* o) E  V; r$ N0 j/ w8 kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ M$ x* e# z. q+ _4 [- ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! C  f3 t3 _2 X# {- F* x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. ]3 r. J5 }; L8 V" E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- C7 x  ]. q5 Y* B: }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 |) Q  j: K: Q; V8 M; B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 I5 q: j/ C1 z. z% j( B! Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 d7 ]( i- U" T/ z3 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 d$ H+ O* v! ], y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 K- \& l9 s5 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' V$ _$ C' j7 U' @' H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 P7 B7 B  M& t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# c8 H2 ^/ @# v0 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" _: I5 P: W4 X: n7 B& B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: {8 p& d2 R9 E/ Q2 h" E5 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 v' Q  F1 c; U# V1 G$ m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# w3 y/ ^& J- n5 R1 |& A+ F! b5 G* a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# C" J( U5 Z, J8 t% q( W2 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ b+ y, ^" }1 j/ l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 Q( ~  c9 V- J; k! T4 I- \$ ^8 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 m5 Z# |  A8 p7 S& k" _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' X6 P) z# U' V4 c4 I! c0 |/ W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 D( I; I" J! ~" j- q; _0 ~- @. T0 o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 u5 E" ^  ]' _+ x# d* ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 l/ z9 W4 w2 D) _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>