【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 l/ J% B  o0 e9 V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 l8 b4 J  d8 `9 ^) JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- ?1 A3 y" R1 r# j6 e6 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
8 t) O. s. \. ~6 D3 K! WWith the moon kissing it every night
6 D/ o: b+ r4 {5 ?- P( fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ y. T6 q: d- a* n  IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 r4 G+ ?8 |7 x5 u# z( b5 Z. dEvery other word you utter is love
7 X3 a  S3 K  K1 w& QI really want to know just how much you love me
$ z  p: D8 s' Y# c1 bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( }' P% {6 H+ a$ j: ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: L5 u: R1 [# g" Y. ?I want so much to see inside your heart
* M" E3 w0 \5 g! wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! O) _- G  G& L: h  L' ~I regret not dying
' t# O4 I2 }) f$ A$ cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% u7 w6 u) B. Y  [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* y" i& D6 n8 P2 T$ s( h7 z$ u- T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% L( `- C- Y$ U) X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 c3 O8 L2 @5 g4 W0 [% S+ b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 W% F& I* [+ X( I7 r; g0 y; e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ T! v6 W  z* z- b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ @3 y, q8 q4 j) Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* T- e9 v. i( u& {/ T9 m: D% ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( a( ?6 y: b+ M2 {* ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 n& @+ G7 x5 K( N  b/ |4 R0 j- v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 D3 v4 u0 w1 L, d8 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; [( u$ s3 w; ?<P>你无需担心</P>
% o) B  Z- k( y4 F5 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 S' r& Z% h" l' y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  G6 f0 Y& d: {- o3 t8 T2 L1 P; {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ b; R1 t" T) f1 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( O6 t) g3 O+ j, q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: }" B& L7 b' f  r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! l' }) m9 \9 @- ]2 v1 I; O: M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# X$ j* \9 D$ w9 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) L7 Q7 l3 r; ^) |1 u9 [3 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; R8 t( j: P1 L6 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; e( ]$ \! I6 q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; _2 b! H- X: g" J/ D/ A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ p7 \* u1 ^$ ?! b! t; k5 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 C* O2 w" N) _3 F' t1 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 J+ J0 S4 {4 a6 [# Y+ ?: R9 M/ @<P>I regret not dying</P>
: G; f7 e0 F3 `, m6 [7 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, q: P( s1 ~6 a4 S% V# I& L3 {6 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) T* {- `# n, o+ v- [" c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 B! O- z8 E! C. M) _  U  L8 y0 o/ P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; X1 x- r7 \: ^8 F$ r; U% ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& L1 t1 P7 Z  S% X' f1 R" S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 W' j( S  W+ P% I9 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* K9 @# \2 I0 x  U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ d" V" D( M, ^8 D* E我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& w% U9 b4 L* a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>