【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% O5 x3 r! w1 L2 O' UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% |& B: t) l5 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ ^  H- q2 |0 G5 I8 J; pWith the moon kissing it every night
6 F# n  c" d6 @5 j# n! M( T5 _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; k3 P6 R5 A& U8 d5 \You needn’t fear anything
4 J, V! R, P" B: w! y. _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 W. g/ V5 Z, h% u3 KI want so much to see inside your heart
! T/ B( a8 Y4 t. c- }3 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! S7 j% K2 L+ v$ oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ~2 c, H% [" @; @' BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- [+ I. [! k- D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. V$ l! ~& Q' y! s/ i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 k3 ]7 W- J& @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% C) F! \* x$ V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) l, F# O' f1 m) L) u- Q5 a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 y6 f  x5 |( x9 T7 K8 z" Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& B5 W3 X- i, j2 @$ c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: D& f6 n- J2 K5 l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, S; M5 L' w2 y+ Y" j& L, a) i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 N. `" r. Z4 x( b0 I% o; ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 e4 y& S- w) f4 M( y) ~, V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; S" w5 R2 b# n% _3 ]1 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& w9 u% ~) g  C3 e/ h. f  j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 [, M0 I* ~% F/ X8 r# T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# j( v$ s, S4 y+ F6 h, y+ {' B/ H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 Y; U7 k) h7 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* k' Q) D0 {+ g# f6 F6 N$ N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 z2 z- \& t" W3 c, B/ T' q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! a" Y7 T, ?3 d- A  b<P>I regret not dying</P>
% v* |' g: M  _: f( i: W- ~8 n& h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  m, q9 G5 a$ {1 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 b4 f& `- W6 h* X2 \3 v: ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 X& u  W/ ?  k8 Q9 f+ A& g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 w0 c" w0 p5 `6 Y- |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 `- _! ~" C! s5 F- u' B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. a3 g6 r! I5 D. w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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% B" _' f6 l  A' Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 H7 Q: b- x& z% ]! x. h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>