【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* z- n: S; N1 J8 L# T* ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ n4 m$ c( h( f4 Z2 O3 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 m( @, I. M. f" D+ DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& ~7 g; N% ]" d' X. D9 `; KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. ^& S  T. p. K4 H7 CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 {" d( {9 u* t' x4 m+ J, YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ d7 k/ p* e& x7 N5 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 K6 z3 A) T' S- ?$ ^5 Y! tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 d6 s- o; d4 E- g  ~( r( u! f9 [I want so much to see inside your heart
! @' l* v9 e; Y. t1 G  FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% j8 R; G1 H; `' a$ M! tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 h& c' X6 ?2 y, \0 AI regret not dying
2 H* G: X% s; z, v0 b5 kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" N8 \7 ]+ O  R3 V# f% IWith such a tongue as yours,
* `0 z) ^2 k( |4 Y/ C! aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- O* D% k; U# x# G& S4 V/ ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  D0 v" `5 I7 V6 ]. m" K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& J% L" I# L' t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% J  g7 ~6 j. {8 _' d) f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; n1 L4 I3 m; l. d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  S4 `1 W/ [; x, W: l  e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 A: N! g, i: V& V+ V6 q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" U5 U  J! T# {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ r6 F2 N$ |  p, A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) ]; y% d3 X% L2 {) ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ [/ \. @# j* p: w: H  ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ M, C( {( t- ]6 \& |4 N1 b6 P% p) Q1 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 u" ], G3 X$ G3 b  o: w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; d$ a/ O  O; D) Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% O: B# S0 _9 X4 D  U' {/ j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! V  m% P) a* A1 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- I* }4 K% b: Q: Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 C- b2 Q. g1 x, l6 P- G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' G  f3 u+ |1 [, ?" x2 }0 t! L( @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ ]1 G* \4 J  u/ B+ f' H+ @7 M; S# X' k, A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 I# r7 w; J9 K$ W. t. |$ _, Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) K( m( h( z. l5 O& f0 i3 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 F2 z: M+ ~; B3 X, {* R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; a+ x% q) n. X/ ?6 F( J$ f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ n/ K: n7 G* R" V# U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 |* a6 |& |5 n1 w! _我请你剖开它
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, [9 r% i/ a" ^) ]) `/ \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>