【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# Z4 m' h7 ~( ~6 o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 {: A5 j7 K" u3 c) G8 _$ Z/ H6 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- t6 s+ x; ?. ]( j7 t' _7 v  j9 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ C0 X# t+ I- h$ ?, q/ a# xSeeing the sky content with its love
" g# h% Q; p$ F5 {$ oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- e+ i! @$ r; xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 V# Z# H* ~0 Y5 s" S3 [, \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, f3 S; ^* ^, RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ S' e" Z/ w/ w6 k/ t0 g8 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' c, I& P4 x1 f+ h# g: T9 k4 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* n1 k( K9 i( b$ e6 o+ G2 o& V* vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. k/ n" \" F, J" h% `3 Z7 WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) p6 i% J0 [0 _0 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 L9 }/ ~: U9 [$ F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ t4 g+ I& z  @" A( G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 S  O3 {$ L- n# n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  e4 x" U$ W0 |0 o& ]; v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. E) C: S/ F+ N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ s' c# D% E+ [1 O' U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( c& K" h& ^5 I0 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ v3 E% J+ O! J( v" |* D  i/ Y" J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) d. x4 R% [5 M* v3 K% M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: ]/ g4 G/ [5 }# t3 O<P>你无需担心</P>
, G$ r6 D/ ]: x/ |/ P9 N' f. |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- f- Q" A" u7 ~2 I( b& I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 Z, Q2 e, M4 H- l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 C' Z' P0 K' z9 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ }% G! C% V1 Y" p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ J/ L- Q5 _( C$ C  f3 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* i/ O  \% ?- j8 G! x) R3 F' d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  x! D7 Q. ?! P# q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& P: a& q2 B6 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& ^( C6 Z6 X+ ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 [8 E0 M1 s- l% j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) C  H/ s7 M2 F. r1 l/ p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ x' x8 [. M7 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' [3 e, ]5 w/ I3 R9 F* g  k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 [) K4 x& a/ s' `  L; d( c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 @; ]8 E, ^, k% r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 }, u. Q$ q: d  z5 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>