【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, `9 U) T1 K! O7 @9 \7 V7 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ n7 d. a, y6 I  qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) w  T7 s0 q* `$ S- S0 V) _, NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! u( K) T6 X' WYou needn’t fear anything
2 \- P7 B" A: u2 a+ aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 r# y0 {4 @7 l, ]* Y6 x5 L$ m$ e$ [Every other word you utter is love
3 m7 Y' q  I: }I really want to know just how much you love me
% ~# ?3 S5 D; @' zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* @0 K$ R; s: B8 J# Q4 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) A) E5 \( v6 N  p# N0 u: e2 B; RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( ~) m9 `# t( E, MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 {+ B5 K1 u- D% z9 j8 t. yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 v( W' s7 N5 M; v" p$ ^1 i2 ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; h# U; n; }$ }! O; @2 }3 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: ]  X1 e1 F$ q" z. N- [% g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  y+ X4 k3 O' y  E0 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 N8 {: l$ X" P4 \* Y+ e4 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( _3 e# a% ?: f# ~( L- t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 ~7 d4 a9 D9 G: n3 U3 |3 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 z+ ]. u0 r) C$ m& S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 E& G+ Z' q: @7 O7 x& C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: _) S5 J. I% M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) X: ?& ]8 E" }7 Y( J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* M5 M5 p0 E8 h4 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ {( m7 m! K5 H! l7 e+ ^' X: h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; G8 s; y( f3 {( ~. V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ Q1 B5 i3 o, a1 s' t% W+ c* Z& u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# @' T* t" Q; M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 d" I+ c" u2 e* t0 D/ [) x. Y! n. e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* P4 |7 `1 j0 u$ w. h; s( y' Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 Z, f2 \* \1 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ^2 Z& J& L$ c) c6 ]1 B, i$ ?. u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 f8 L' H& F( S; o2 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 N7 C: i6 J5 T8 V4 g/ C& {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, C, R1 ~5 ^9 Z. R2 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>