【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& _& `' H$ S" m! I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( S9 \6 r' h# mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ Y& m7 N; I& w9 x% m$ `  J' i. }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& l6 V& R7 w2 A- ~6 M7 p! PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" P' }* X! P# z0 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' y: h. X$ i/ Z" a8 UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; k; a  b. }/ W% y7 r* yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) h' W! e5 {5 LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 b3 U' @: o; R' x5 M2 @1 TI regret not dying
, z& B6 J' D* i% `  U9 V/ D7 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) D! i1 w1 q3 a* @5 V2 D" J1 m9 mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" K( W: B: m+ x4 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  T% h% Y( Z0 y# H% q( r0 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 K/ J* \6 X4 E* y% i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% F# _3 t- |, b% s2 M' \+ _, o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  V3 o6 _7 q: z# w. f- h8 k" c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% g% \$ m6 Y2 B" Y( ]  q/ E- t, l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& Y- }7 ?4 u( ~$ m1 G* a! Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" @4 [! J. a% _6 K9 ]6 S- ]8 m$ x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ \- H& u* {% S) R6 u8 u" \$ `" r2 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( H2 I6 \' x# l* X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 E3 T% Q* H* K& A. B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% i5 c  m) K% k& M# G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  o- d& @8 n: P# n- u4 S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. h' q7 y: A; P: i% x7 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: ]: O0 m3 D6 {/ d* r2 `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* P" B2 @' A5 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ c4 l, d, Y2 Q4 k/ K( A4 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- U; ?# a9 P$ }# s8 g) a( Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) Q  r7 J* ?) v" F5 H4 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& Q: Y7 F" N, b4 G3 b+ G+ P# H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 j  X, [- G2 R: r6 L& `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 f& ^, Q4 j% ?# i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( e7 z" Y6 P" Q7 t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 K. [' l) \5 u% e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- T! p5 U* T' B+ v2 M/ g' K6 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# `% Q; k$ H% \; S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, v4 v5 H; j+ E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ ~3 {1 ^: g! W) l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 E1 L0 D# B5 Y% W$ N1 f( c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ w# e: B6 {, D2 K3 |我请你剖开它

2 j# m# i" r) e6 Q" ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>