【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# s; Y( M& f: C: o, ^/ ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! W7 I9 H" \% c1 C! bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 e$ a7 U: v" J( }4 X1 o  |; }The sky is happy down to its soul
0 d& ~9 F1 [% K2 _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ [' M; C* \; T! aYou needn’t fear anything
  Y/ z9 G9 b, y7 k4 ?" jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% J# T+ c( A9 N& Z) bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) F0 W2 c  K, M0 R9 HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( N) x) ~) Y& vI’m still filled with fear
, T% f# K+ a! I# Q8 D9 u- }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! P2 [" P, r5 q( U. x; @/ SI regret not dying
' T( G' C2 W- D9 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ~! Q- ~# W( x( n. ^( e  j* w) HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ Y7 z# C6 G- |8 ~2 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( h- E6 t# r) S/ \& TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# o. b" O6 G* b4 P: K- c, t+ p2 w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! f# V" i  a& Q' k8 N2 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 k2 u/ E/ j) ?/ i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 Q: J3 b) n' _+ ?4 o: T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 T! W) z3 w; Q' I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" ^) T, H( u; u$ b" r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 G3 m+ p. t: O8 _" ?5 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 Y9 u3 S- G/ z! ?$ `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% {$ y' X1 T0 o' B. Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 I/ i- f2 J1 v<P>你无需担心</P>
. V& Y! ]5 c' A& s- i; E+ a  ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 i4 o. T! B( }; S8 ?$ c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ G* R% f- M- R- p* _, S0 l: K# L/ T, p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 z3 h  W4 [2 L4 ?/ K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 N6 ~& @$ y4 l) `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ b- ~1 F: S, Z& v7 M4 |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 V5 ~, }0 l# G# H  ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* l1 _) L4 `' x" f/ \+ D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 _+ b- q1 A7 X( e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 C. w# l; y0 \. M/ }# C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; [$ x1 z9 Q- m: t" W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* Z3 H& \1 h% N; p4 O! |- ?5 N2 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' A( Y5 `" ]# k" {( @2 S9 s1 r' B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( [2 |* x8 K- z) @" E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 m4 I& V# O6 ?, j6 M* f1 }3 @# u4 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 Z" Y8 u; a! N/ C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 q5 B( f& i0 T' z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>