【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* T: c& y7 P, _( G: O" QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 J5 w  O% L: k9 \  }$ a$ N! oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( R0 ]  Y1 `! n- |( lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! ?0 q  V8 z* ?' U. HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" Z8 ^& j; ^, b, L4 SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, h: b8 d' |3 {1 K/ O. pEvery other word you utter is love
) M  ?; X# E" R# G6 s  bI really want to know just how much you love me
5 t8 C9 z6 k% K5 Q2 [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! g- t# Q7 y4 F- PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, Z" h5 ?8 S' H' y, s) kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: b4 t# l) z4 {7 g) f/ kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 Q" |. ]# E9 {2 G( Y2 v* ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 ?0 x7 M/ n3 y& C# c( R- q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* a0 v6 A& L" b& Z( @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, [' X% I: ]+ S# m1 y' r: A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 t, m; A8 q  m+ C+ l4 u& t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: t/ s# _9 h) D) A! m9 W8 C# r/ ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 ?+ e/ r  _) B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ \% x8 _$ W, l1 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 P& N% R" G8 m# E+ K) ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: W1 ?2 g* D& T, L/ H6 y- J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! i* T; W; a/ C' E* h# G$ P9 Z( p. J<P>你无需担心</P>
+ S1 x: l6 A1 Z9 a* r$ X3 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 |  ^$ e' ~+ N  d: _2 `' D9 l9 k  j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 H2 h9 l* a$ y: l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 g1 ]/ ]) a: {1 o. f" R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 u' Q9 H( X# ]8 ~# {1 F2 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) W0 f" E/ X$ Z" r* \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ?8 r3 P  m7 e& h) M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( i/ }+ b' s# Y9 x2 l+ {; h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( i% O! }) u# M( }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ B! `8 Z7 u  l( c3 [& l% `0 Z8 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% h( @$ _# w4 R+ \6 s" |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& {; g7 f9 [" P0 y6 s6 d9 J, m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 }* g* V' @! S; U* L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 @* |" |. A8 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
# W; v8 _/ C/ e9 x% O1 Q; w3 u$ R5 A" M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- r# U# Z8 c. }  t8 P7 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ R% }& y6 s! k) y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 [8 t1 y' P9 @% |2 J2 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ l& P7 _$ k; D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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( X. [$ A+ X' @% C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>