【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( G  Z* g( h: S: c$ v8 @. |The moonlight is shining brightly,
# `9 H; V8 J- w- x4 F  ]. B  c: |( n5 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ]" S( ?6 ~) BThe sky is happy down to its soul
( A/ W4 Y3 @* G  {With the moon kissing it every night
( Z) B" Z2 g4 U: ?1 U  l$ \9 }7 S8 uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 g  n0 C2 r% c4 r6 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 M4 e  x3 q9 `Nothing can compare to my love
  j+ A+ P- z" [" _3 }# X6 B# {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* P; d8 j# g7 @+ ^# c7 F0 \" tI want so much to see inside your heart
! a& {2 k/ [5 M! ?2 |" gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" U0 Q. H$ r! q; }I’m still filled with fear
% K* a" T1 i, P+ X4 |6 nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  g( c# ?: i) S5 L5 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 y( ~2 ~; x. Q/ y* BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* i0 R3 \$ w; ], X2 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ |. `3 h9 E) Q% O2 o7 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 e6 l* v9 Z/ J- j3 B1 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 g+ \, Q" g2 D% v3 I  a6 u8 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 w8 J1 m$ v* d% M) q( B+ F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! I' B- }8 w# I$ H# \: u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- o6 M7 l9 C7 l2 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- }; ^7 m& P0 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" {7 s3 H& h) h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 |+ I# t8 A9 ]$ y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 T+ g' ~. B, U: C. n% I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( X5 ~. H* {) T- \' C, h7 P! K' c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" q0 m) S( n0 u, C$ Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. V# E% G, Y: x2 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& |: |2 t% W# h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 h% [: o  I; ~1 h( ?+ E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  m  c  h) c5 }" j: \" j; Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 H  [, m: K0 Y$ V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ P) X1 r: w/ ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- a  g; ~, }5 N! M) f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; z; r1 t2 |9 @7 z4 H# R* ?3 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 c9 }* q. x1 a! I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, a8 K* G0 j  ]; \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, m. {# ~0 p+ j. a" u+ k2 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  I. e8 u) ^( {& N1 X( N, u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; k* I$ V$ S4 M. o8 I5 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>