【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% f6 i5 r6 m: q4 S, T$ A0 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" f6 q5 s6 ^" ~5 s" VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! U% A: p( A0 e4 R: J# OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) f* _4 ]+ A' `Seeing the sky content with its love
& U9 W9 s' @+ \- g' x4 ~! TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  z$ \+ e; l, i$ ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ y& ~. v! T, Y. jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 ?) X' j& I% {0 b4 T: I+ JNothing can compare to my love
/ K. E0 i1 l9 O1 V7 t6 a; xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) c( b& ~) i9 t# R7 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ h) b2 b) D& J: a: NI want so much to see inside your heart
3 y# b; O+ s8 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( @; P* |& k8 h  E+ VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 ?2 t# i# _/ Y+ eI regret not dying
8 s/ I* c  a$ z4 c/ f" ?7 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ a6 o8 _) v1 Z, _* J# q; ZWith such a tongue as yours,
' [7 O  }" w7 Q! K/ T: uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 X: s5 e" h1 Y1 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 G7 b5 V* g4 A$ x% b3 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 ]; S9 }. R% K. R1 z( H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" Q- [+ i( \! h5 o" ]6 X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- `+ g# \1 f: D7 N" H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, w; B; p0 _8 {; W4 T$ S& t+ g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. P$ a9 h# M1 O! }) ?$ Y5 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 G) w" M3 ^& v" k  {! W: P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# X( J% P8 E! d0 k& P8 M) |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* x, j3 r* R8 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 y2 m! F( s. k$ |9 v0 l! N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  ]6 Z+ y* [4 x$ P' r; a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' F' [: i7 X% e- P" R! L/ J4 k: p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 W  t, W1 @, d2 a5 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 P9 Q( N* e! H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) S4 E' J  S& e, C4 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  N. V" c$ B' ]; ^" ~2 t4 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 V7 n! h% T& D6 P8 S1 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 i* d8 C1 `/ j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  E( \4 I2 Z, m7 e, c0 R+ e<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 D, t; H7 E7 ?9 P5 i3 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 n% Y5 F5 q$ C, v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. s! |/ f2 o& S: b" q) N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 T6 R0 j0 f8 m! w2 X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* F8 f) f# E; J8 N# V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: L7 I6 n& C, P1 Q, [1 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>