【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 Q0 W5 |, B% v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ g) p: k& V7 ^0 S: @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, j; X: `( o4 H+ dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' D" m  [3 Q4 P5 m! V! MSeeing the sky content with its love
- l: [. l, x$ _) PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* \7 l* _& Y+ ~$ k9 s- r: mYou needn’t fear anything
. u; y; f- e3 G; Z: cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. B5 h3 ^& R9 U1 BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' |2 e8 w$ b4 E( R( {7 k! m1 L7 k( eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  |8 v7 Z* E- N% C- E4 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 c, Y- U% z5 J+ I! SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) {: i) Q) D, V% yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ o9 b9 S; M1 Y% GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 G- e- l6 a, YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) `, {7 m  ~0 V9 c. BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! S) i4 f, d+ l4 j& x) m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% U  o% f; T4 Y# o( `% n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! k& j  ^  o+ K, k% n6 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 d, v1 y8 {! n: w; L# a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ P4 k$ @! W! C& c2 t" O5 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 |/ i) b8 N1 f' I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 }1 e% c) z5 J# U2 c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* q1 H% a; b" I& `+ _9 n8 \; |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 {# `* r9 X& S! h+ t& U1 _" O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 p  f) k+ A/ d+ g' `7 B! Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( s5 b: |" y5 \% i$ ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( a, z0 p2 u# Q& D* k& D7 j) v% t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 c' k: G" J+ i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) [/ B4 {( W( G! i<P>你无需担心</P>
) h/ U4 s1 ~/ V( A# I' d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ E# @2 ]+ \) i# u7 ?, D8 z- M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ f# S, T% y2 ^6 B. h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 l4 |8 F% k0 c& ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- s* |' p1 g* a2 N5 |" E) M" l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& f: N/ ?3 I9 }3 {, f  {7 b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ e4 L, P+ b  c/ y6 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 {0 s% \  G2 g3 Z. X4 u, D3 g% c& o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  F; N4 M" V' Q9 M( M, L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& ~0 S  n( q: E, Q6 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 U$ e$ b1 Q' s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 V, j" Y" N0 |6 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# V4 F% L6 V3 B% z1 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 d3 u! W6 A4 j4 i8 E$ P  n3 C; `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 u/ b3 U/ d3 T' q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' f2 f; e2 ~7 u* w, Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" P9 u% [' c) q' K5 Y( _* w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 T7 \3 d7 }2 y! M( _5 c9 ]0 a我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 Q+ D' ?! Y! ^, q1 q$ G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>