【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: E) q8 X; ?  y! {, ^9 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, L( W  |; N) q. p; WThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 r. t9 O/ e. NWith the moon kissing it every night
' H/ D& V( u4 B( e5 s0 {Seeing the sky content with its love
' P: k/ M9 V: QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, e) o2 }" t* G: o; ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" s3 ]# }* f7 K% A! ]& g4 `  bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- ^0 u9 M% o8 s+ m4 l; a, vI love you I love you with all my heart
+ S* P* l/ X2 X* ]4 VNothing can compare to my love
* B) U& p  I3 K; QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( }9 Z  f4 l# X" a& gI want so much to see inside your heart
6 B/ R) K) F( r. A1 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 O% x' K' }% sI’m still filled with fear
, w% y3 u% n9 o. L, UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( j9 X( r1 K' pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' }4 V! D2 V: UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' R- H1 o, L. P; Y: h  \) RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- G  t: \# t9 D2 M" bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. c- a0 Y( b: X( K) ~  w5 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 Z% q. u/ l; I+ v) w4 G6 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 R" c6 f7 d$ H0 T7 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: G8 S! m5 k/ v7 ?, G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 I$ l0 F2 a6 \7 F5 e! w2 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& [$ p( \& O/ p+ u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 q1 q) f" m) L5 g1 Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- U8 g. S! J  ^3 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ B7 K2 F$ B, Q1 s% s<P>你无需担心</P>
1 I! h! h; x9 P- u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  u- D! ?% n4 z1 z' N- O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  `7 P  J; i! v1 K" ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) a2 B4 q' J2 B! `. `. z1 R7 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' p3 r8 N4 |8 O  k( R' o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! L0 t9 B8 Q/ H# a- R) U6 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 ~: |" O: \9 d# x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) S2 @4 e8 H7 U1 b* @! e! j# R5 C9 M5 l% l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ W' R" e6 g1 e( s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. d- r  g. z! e9 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 o9 R4 A3 v7 G- z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: \) }+ e0 C( @4 j+ S$ S5 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 @0 r$ Q; H$ A$ j! o5 w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ l/ M- P8 v. D4 ?0 w- {- [* k; ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# [3 W7 Y4 c: R4 b* P! m4 h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 Q5 I& ^! @6 T. f. ~5 ~/ [: t6 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 X9 J" `) x$ O8 M9 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 Z& Z1 b0 p# B$ T) [# V6 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& p# B  {0 K+ L# c% q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>