【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ W8 V) I& L. s) b6 Z! F歌词我附在后面。
( N& l/ r2 H) P( R# `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  h3 P+ l2 }! m) h  a' NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  _& ~6 R- C  ^& F/ FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 w1 _3 T1 i7 a0 ?- w# t! W! fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( [$ l% d' W. F+ CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 ]- N6 B6 L+ N3 P0 KNothing can compare to my love
( v, ]5 {& ]  `6 K: R" D0 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& K9 d9 @4 E: [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( P( N/ X, B0 V6 c. X% FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 g7 m' P% r4 ^/ F/ E  Q  o" SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ g8 Z0 j) ?# T4 Y# LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% e6 ~. e3 c' [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 M3 l0 \! {0 `& p7 t9 ^& G1 j8 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, F# K0 q& z6 W+ w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 G+ o' e8 C7 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 W2 {4 ]7 c0 I7 e% p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ b" w7 P/ I: A7 u1 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( L$ x5 v9 W! m' ^0 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 v5 B; Q' a) k: A  l& P% T- h0 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 o6 r5 ?4 H2 I( X" Z7 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# G$ F7 C2 g. X, {) |1 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 M7 F3 ~- R3 O! ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ z$ d  M, s1 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ t0 x. ^7 l  y8 H; [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 P9 y7 R2 I, o  W" W! ~- O+ q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& s0 x1 K% D% p' n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; U( M& ]  f" R" h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( f1 Q) Y, ^/ o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 h+ j1 a, }/ l: s* s( e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" L. o  [$ _& w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 k$ C, B$ X1 y  @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" O$ {& O" W3 @9 F' [% i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) K5 r3 ^- Z2 R/ x' r* B5 U8 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; G* J. A# A  s0 L; `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: Y0 _5 Y! r. R  z" L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  i' k! l7 j/ J* Y; W5 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- p2 ?" E6 O. |) T6 L3 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ m( p6 e* C# n. v# P8 d我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>