【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 Z$ w. x" ~6 L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- F& |1 |8 H( X  F+ p$ XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ y' |& J8 e5 @* kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 V& C7 ~, L# YSeeing the sky content with its love
. @+ p3 A9 \1 g7 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% P7 D# x% ?3 F5 ~You needn’t fear anything
  W5 C; s& A* u' O/ zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& v4 t! M6 x) {" S/ c9 GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 f8 u* `5 j; P1 L: xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 d8 t0 U* l2 B$ w( _0 M8 `# gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 x, N3 m9 g# w" a$ i, ?( |7 g# WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 \( \( Z( h  N. ]8 X4 V$ {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; M3 ^8 H  k. q" b: KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% Q6 g' ?5 l! V. R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 K- T4 [' r: X: c- S# B. a  H$ C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( M+ ?8 }& l9 ~' c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" p- U8 }, n0 m$ [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; {  E8 O" W9 X/ V& u) n7 X& C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 c/ D; A9 E; w6 m' x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* U; C( `0 ?3 m; I) ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 G& ^# D( l7 m9 |* l" O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. v+ B; M5 o; Y6 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 }  [) W) Z9 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  F" p5 W, J  M& P0 [$ k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ B9 {3 ^& @$ X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 x+ \% e) y( ]$ d# M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 }' r) E& C& y6 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 t8 N- g* M% J& h- N" |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, _: v. l. D6 x% K+ @; Y, L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ C" X: y* T. F: a/ u' h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! y8 U; U, ^! t" m' ^2 [4 V8 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# M* w3 `. H, N0 L) I- M' u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 b- l4 @- M# C/ J0 K% F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 T, V" ?. S$ e7 V# g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ]' o. H+ ?6 m% L<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 `$ _& j$ |. H3 v' S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: @2 z9 G- p  W/ W$ F6 R& R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ }) p% @- f. S; L. T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. d& Z* |6 H, P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 r$ p) N( m+ Q7 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ V: k) s$ k/ G9 X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 `; D1 `+ a6 p7 J- W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& w" X# C8 A3 K) Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>