【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# F( d+ [- g4 Q9 k; s  @* nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ I5 e+ l/ p& b$ I8 PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* j& n% J% T1 L) ^5 E( }" EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) z4 c7 k! Y; n7 X4 I! HI really want to know just how much you love me
! b6 s+ N1 `) j: g  oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- j7 N  X/ ]% y# I* \( s; O  xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* w3 w5 @' X* ?& X! `" pI want so much to see inside your heart
- {* q7 p! X1 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- S  y: s: o+ k  ~7 D3 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: l4 u7 B. O6 k' f& x4 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 J3 F5 f, ~3 [! \: BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 T, v+ K& z  J/ X& YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' ?' |6 Z: q% M+ H# s; z6 j6 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: A, T3 s7 K. T( }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  y, G3 r8 u/ Q7 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 [2 O% y3 o/ \( j0 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, q1 ^, [* v+ \. E" J! V" g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% N" h& W; D% h, Z1 M! l9 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 a3 b$ W/ n0 I+ |/ m( |! D# R+ H  O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. L/ C9 I" @: R2 p! Q& Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. }2 E0 ?  X+ u6 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* k: H5 \& z# }$ X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. P! Y8 Z" n9 Y: {% v6 K! B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 p, r" X* H3 ^/ `: f' j! e- V1 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 C- y5 |: j$ c5 ^: e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 e1 ^9 w$ W# H& k8 A; P, y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ W' I1 K9 h1 O( p! A$ u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 h7 E# V" [: }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 Z, N1 w$ i# T  n2 w( E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& ]  l! g/ o1 v6 \" f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' l- n% L0 x: [: m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. ?: a* G" @- z6 ~- C1 W8 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; O1 W( }! Y0 C+ _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. |! d) _* L1 u" z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; u3 Z7 p2 @$ @  y: w9 m8 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# e9 Q: E+ X- f# |3 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, ^' g- x; M% S9 Q! o$ ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 J' q6 Z9 ]; U) C9 A) ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ Q7 z& J! L. [% b! i- D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 @. c$ n2 H5 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& _: z3 @, z* u  z7 T# Y7 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# t! i: U# v4 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& e5 w8 t" @: m+ N7 v& H5 V, G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: w! T7 d) @6 ?" ~我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>