【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) e+ e0 h) Q; x! k* o. PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% O% l1 S% C2 a% [Making the sky glitter like gold,
, M1 Q) E) H0 [$ V2 j" `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& Q- |1 j% ?: WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) R8 I9 `5 Z2 u% ]) {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 ~2 n. O  }# }: [' LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; n5 d3 K4 B# d8 B5 V& Q) G) II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 E' `# I+ Q* U4 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) q  R) \- y1 }2 ?$ V2 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 S! ^2 x* {; ]0 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ f3 w/ J- x  }( L# I7 M$ l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* G4 o" u+ Y5 m4 ?: |+ _6 E- |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& b, c% W. ^$ f3 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: C7 J! [/ m/ O7 S+ u+ [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  d2 ^, I+ c" b& P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 G1 W6 G/ C: S: _! f) i2 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' ^0 W  f& R4 {/ D8 V/ g3 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# l1 r5 E) C& p# X4 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 S( @, U. f! u  ?5 M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- {3 S5 l% y- P" M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) Z/ r. w* ^5 s% B7 K4 j+ X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* N6 V5 [: H' R7 w7 A' ]3 T7 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( m! D2 T. v9 y8 i" s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* X% y" f1 q2 C" y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 N( H/ u4 F* E  B  E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( @; I1 O6 E9 }9 D& x- [6 c. R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 n: j8 |1 i) I( |$ ^- y1 ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# N! ^0 m2 q+ U0 z: W( Q9 g. a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 }* T# F  ~4 ^5 K4 a7 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 N: Y5 Y( W- o7 h9 j5 b! N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 ^! ]+ S6 \6 T. g) p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 V" G+ t2 y1 w$ L1 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: h9 W) u6 ?) k4 F$ j& u( K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# F" ]3 X! L& j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ W5 W( O/ V  V7 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 W, U$ H0 `  c  a% Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 K+ M" R4 ]) {! L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 J& k! W( q/ r5 Z) S; Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! G4 D2 X' j4 p2 _, n% y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 \+ O  z$ i( _! x8 b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>