【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ L+ ?4 H. B2 `* B7 P% x) d: D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; M0 k3 t9 b9 O; cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& ~# B! D) ~2 ^9 _/ X* C) _; i9 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& X6 |6 M3 g3 E4 M& Z& t! q, e# EThe sky is happy down to its soul
( i1 U- Y, v8 I* d6 e7 JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  ~; n/ y7 i4 A7 J$ M% E) iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# X9 {) U6 H, h  Q; ?/ o+ GEvery other word you utter is love
8 r$ S- e! {) i: vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ Z2 `* }: p8 X* ENothing can compare to my love
3 J( I# |, x# a7 }2 e+ R, WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) s5 |7 v6 C  s) t: {9 z2 v" VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" u% d: I+ B' m9 BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 _/ m# w, C$ B" L; ^. R4 s: |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 I: A0 l6 D! k, d8 @- wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 V% M3 c6 L: \9 d9 M: V  @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" i6 l  `3 P8 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- s% u0 t3 U$ L0 f! T' ?5 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, @; H7 \# s, f3 M1 d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 J, G, b; H7 G4 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 I% F5 {" Y. o3 t7 U7 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 N9 F2 U( ^- z8 @5 t' |% H. n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 |, u, A* y' a8 {+ i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 x" }1 ^1 z  ~4 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) o/ T/ }0 o/ O* K! C( e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 N4 x% a4 J" j1 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# C3 |. ]- U/ f* g$ v# }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. [2 f+ J+ o. s$ N* o0 C2 B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 h2 M! e+ K$ ?  L# P. d( }0 G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 r$ H  c* P7 D. S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 W5 j1 ^: I; W7 P+ \/ Z/ h7 Z& C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 Z6 b( X( b% B2 _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" k) Q7 p$ `0 O' F, X4 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 S( Q8 I' l- T. Y9 e) B% g9 H; l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 `& t# q2 a, }' U* N- }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) Z+ @9 ?' I! r6 g' Y) Z: ?* a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 N0 _+ }" I6 f0 ?" C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: Y4 a) j6 B9 m9 l8 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( W. ^! Q& @# d4 w) {4 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' b: p2 z4 U0 S* B2 a  F) {; n% W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& C% Z, i, }0 A/ _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 M0 y% H# d2 N+ o% x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: p0 n. V5 m* p; ?* B4 M) F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
- i- N4 g7 b" z' b
我请你剖开它
; c0 }9 E5 X8 {6 z$ P+ b6 M& J5 O" _
2 o( d' d3 d7 g& `6 d, r+ n6 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( J2 H& P: `1 X" z% o" `+ k. c3 I2 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>