【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 D/ Z" `2 G) _  n6 c5 ~/ P& S歌词我附在后面。
+ ^& z# s* e1 a2 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( x, j9 w$ J+ \. O" f( ^- O5 Q4 h- y+ MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! f# a- C; t+ H0 lWith the moon kissing it every night
, n7 y0 E& w, v& ?9 k+ XSeeing the sky content with its love
0 }7 `6 ^+ H; s/ W, y/ P4 i7 vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 J% p+ P' r, @7 ?$ f, `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ Q; H8 ^: K( k5 k4 {1 U# oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( Y5 s9 _- U: X3 v$ n9 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: J4 k; T" @4 f# u9 f1 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 s$ j3 ~/ H! F0 m5 dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. Y' I' m5 u+ {2 Y5 O  Q6 r* [1 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! d, _) A) p, i4 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: S+ x) d. [& P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- F( ^: A  L! c+ i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& j! Z* L7 x, X$ T. J5 W% S- `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! @/ o0 \. ^- e8 ^0 q; N& E2 q+ [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, J1 a/ \* o% N# A% X7 f1 m0 l8 S1 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- d3 Z/ u( g0 I# e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 o' t4 J0 q# m: M& j0 t: i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* w( }, O: y, _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# o+ D! ^# `% s, h) A1 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- k: M3 a, V5 _, M<P>你无需担心</P>
7 Q' w6 B1 z' h+ E8 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( @$ S, T( y1 l/ K9 Z! ?/ v* t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 M: i, X  E0 U. I2 H' x. ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 H1 @  H" c+ }/ p" r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' v3 U. |% s, e- u2 j) t0 Y3 i$ u# z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; K# l; v  A$ |8 i( ~, o: k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 b# l2 e- O) V( c. [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; b- V# O: T0 {6 }0 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. M1 T$ x" z0 l& b8 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  u) x" H- T7 x& n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 M: a* K1 o$ \3 R, M6 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# D* \/ d) P4 S5 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. x. {+ o% q7 O6 r" w% p% U( E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. j& B2 Y& c8 ^- E2 ^* }3 X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" A. v# y" o! ]% I* J  m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 B5 L. ^; U4 k4 t% i: B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  L, E2 `6 L6 ?3 T6 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& r. R( b. v, q9 j0 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ W, `% r# U9 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 r+ R% l( D0 ]* i! T我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; w, O' z9 M6 u7 I* g" j. v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>