【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 }; Y- x8 b+ M# g! u* p5 L  G7 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 U) Z0 Q0 [4 |0 a, c* Y6 V3 dWith the moon kissing it every night
$ g  C% P' j2 q7 _Seeing the sky content with its love
' _* U& b( T' x, O& R4 A* ]4 S* qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 N+ j. c1 e! A6 A$ j2 \  AEvery other word you utter is love
7 t. H& I. R, B0 WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* Z( \, G/ m+ I+ l4 [: NNothing can compare to my love
! [0 E5 R$ W+ i1 zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 E* P6 C$ Q' |: x. j1 cI’m still filled with fear
! H, O  i0 e( a& i2 c/ XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 y  l( D! {5 ?2 C1 T+ \4 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- Q. w2 R9 V8 T$ l, GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' i" E( E% b# ^& `; LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! p4 E$ @/ _" |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, M1 l- G0 n8 G( z" s) |: B% o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ Q, E1 R' ^8 n" {* U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# L; z8 X% R- b0 N+ P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& E% D: R7 m/ n- q. o" p/ @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 t+ g* S4 C3 @$ U4 Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 i+ j6 J) H2 i1 U8 R" U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 o% p; X! @- a2 z1 `, |6 ~- Y" }! D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, E" k- R/ k4 [& T: R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 _4 d- J$ I& k4 O3 Q/ c3 C& `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ S4 c+ a. ^0 ~  h6 S& l0 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; }# H$ F2 v" t/ x; i$ [0 J# `" ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ b# |6 O+ B, x, w' W  p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- L- |7 @. A) T4 M4 o: r4 z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, S5 X6 h# z9 x1 g7 t' C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: w; U1 o7 E$ R1 D! x5 l2 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 ?2 a) b* H1 M9 M! |8 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ h  N) _* q" c+ [+ }+ j7 }; ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 r) t6 ^% y, _0 F9 z; N2 Y; k+ c% y( y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ J8 E& y! Y' h' t+ p+ y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 U1 G& w$ T) f9 `; a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- n' E' c* Z5 J5 h- B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ X7 B, D9 q) U9 I+ W6 D: X# X4 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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7 l! P7 z( m4 F' ?8 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>