【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# `& E8 h7 w& s  O+ _$ |2 |) J7 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ Z$ @0 c, }) `5 T5 ~' QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. z7 {9 u0 q( Q# [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! V! f! C$ B& K+ {; lWith the moon kissing it every night
/ Z# m& D( `5 }  G3 P9 m+ vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% H4 b9 B; _0 E  m/ C& `. QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 x6 Q# V( u$ dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 P0 t  ?: }/ x5 w2 p$ U( GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ d1 D- ?! Y2 x/ S2 V$ Y' ^I’m still filled with fear
; w' V6 \* j1 Y/ g( \9 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ @7 {- Y& Z# w9 ]1 U0 F- kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 Q& q# p+ \. h& B  Q& ?4 s7 t7 A' vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; t, e3 W; r2 @$ OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- {5 }: b% f/ lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 B% P& T  }! P$ p/ z# r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! p% ]+ l: B1 ^) ?5 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 o, L2 N: W% |6 q. C2 G0 f) G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 W* v7 z/ F( j, W6 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ L% m0 G+ c7 b! I! T7 t8 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ E; M, o: X0 B' S9 s2 J( V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ X/ N% p- X* J+ k0 m. F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: x, Z2 ]5 F* E6 k/ W/ a7 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. f' q; K0 I. q' m  T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, T3 R- K# h  H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 V- s: m# l, n. _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' W3 e! ^8 y; N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 n% D1 I. ]: ]! B  Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 d) w; B, p& X  M$ _( Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; V2 l; V# U; z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; q# F! }* v/ y( u' t# r9 m  }& D: U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 e/ j; @; ]" e, w% x7 i7 Z5 M! E4 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' c9 Q$ W/ }3 f4 X. C8 H' M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 G" s* J5 |% O2 B  }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 B+ `! \: `1 t( i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& N, _# i7 b4 ?2 a7 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# n  y. B1 C4 ]& F& e2 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' B' w* B- ^6 I5 ~& ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* S/ d8 {  `& z6 q2 i$ Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: w# c5 v" u( B* Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" E- R: x9 q, ~/ l- D# k5 `  K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 @" d2 [5 ^! b  Z' c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# ~' d0 ]/ P, [! B" Y. m2 f, |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 a8 G2 y5 ~/ g. k+ [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 Z$ |: x1 I) Q6 r+ m. l+ z/ [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ G$ X6 o2 Q/ D( b: ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! X6 X5 \: H. T; ]; I( q# I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 u. o1 e9 Q7 f+ Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 C  |0 f9 x- X+ |我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 M0 O! f* C5 }: l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>