【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- i6 m! x/ ^9 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! t, s# L3 R( P: D$ S! C: L  M+ HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 {) H. C( K8 K; ^& A, G$ AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 ?' y! r- }, o6 q0 w( x' MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 V5 t$ `5 J* R, ?* xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: w4 Y1 G* K# Q; cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) ^9 h% x2 f6 @# kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 b: F4 d  y% fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 }9 r$ C6 w3 B$ H, K4 ]I want so much to see inside your heart
+ d3 ^& ]8 F- G, Y: bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! r7 e1 u+ i# `: o; t0 B) ^; C3 h" aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, q7 N- o6 V3 z8 I/ sI regret not dying
/ Z" d7 x. V' RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  s0 d/ W9 }+ _$ `$ k2 c( oWith such a tongue as yours,
5 {, @1 P9 l2 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) c! t; {  ?9 s+ {4 c4 b% t1 J, E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- D3 Z" z, W6 w1 A1 v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ H& r' e  R8 K) X& }0 D8 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; ^# b" l1 n7 j& J0 k+ z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* P7 i0 C2 P5 X- S* y3 A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ p6 ~# g% L4 b7 P/ F" T% [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# G. [) }9 o, J. U* |% S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* v) M8 V7 e/ K' v6 U2 T. W- W<P>你无需担心</P>
7 k: K. U  t$ C  \+ o( T) {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 R  m+ I9 |  O- X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 e+ \- P, N* a) T5 c$ H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ a" Y. Y+ P" L( V- L* H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 n/ b' F" T& X) b! q' T9 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 o) K) K2 U; R* d/ w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, m# m9 h$ c! U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- C; A7 Y) n, g3 h2 u6 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 k3 r8 [! A$ G9 R# i* R5 M% k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 ]" v' g6 H0 x0 M% o5 K& M9 ]( X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% _% l# e% j0 b) _5 R8 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: @! D8 n& u& s( c5 u* G; Z9 _1 ~4 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ q; i& }. R# u6 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 z' n; [# I3 L3 b- c- z# V+ K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! G+ W4 e" O6 l! r& d  p) T, p' n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" ?; F7 _; {; x1 N" Z6 x. v: n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- }7 }. d9 c, A! @8 |6 @% L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ S9 s& y& V- t2 u; u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, q1 v! ^8 v, `& x: M$ u0 ^3 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 M+ p6 k: M$ Q# a% ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) v- M$ k3 d; O9 ?; y0 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ w/ [& |8 ?0 j5 g: v9 w% A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" H: K* J" A* R& A5 ?+ U6 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 h' w* {: j( @4 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 V" A6 J1 z8 f4 H* _0 _7 h5 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 v% [# D" h: E5 E+ ?# {' `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>