【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 G: u0 O$ N' i5 v4 J- ^1 K, p5 S4 e% SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: K. X- t& I# }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" i: m+ [* I0 X' N1 D3 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 b& m* `/ d) \: ?# t9 EWith the moon kissing it every night
' n/ j2 f/ e( Q- w  _& SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 N$ J0 T' W; X: ^% E7 k6 L+ zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  U' b  ~7 T0 v2 dEvery other word you utter is love
% t4 @% ~0 @5 A$ h0 T) r5 UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* a5 B; U, e2 R/ f) m1 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( W- V: b3 m1 m$ a  X" tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! t- f3 \5 N. E: X; @% nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ E8 D' }6 Z* A% h; e% yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 \. }9 U9 l8 Y& ?: i% URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) ^4 C$ w. [- k* P! ^1 x; e) w9 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% v3 A' [: N& _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 s3 ~! ]+ _) q  M0 V, M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ ^! h; V% P: S; u. ~) x5 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 Q* z0 k6 w9 C, X+ f/ T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 R; r4 ~' O" c: }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) b% K8 ~4 a; t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 r+ a; C8 i* J) s( A$ h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# q* h5 \" o( R( }4 ?; W& D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 s% O% g% `; O) k& Q: F9 y5 w<P>你无需担心</P>
0 w6 o9 I$ ^3 M7 P: H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. t, p& d, Y" E* V! V! t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 e1 `. t* a" L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 T* ^/ W7 I5 E5 w0 x- T. A6 j2 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; K2 u1 l: }7 ]  A# X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 p" s9 j1 [% C/ k4 p. I+ q& D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& L5 R1 I( d0 p: w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 v, p/ x6 x( ]# F+ `2 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: ]) ?- p) ~( o3 m! r4 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ P+ w5 M7 X5 g; J  f% q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 Z" _  A' z! d' \6 Z& B! O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 A& X# q: ]6 C2 ^. Y2 k9 W0 Z9 W7 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. R" T: n! U& G5 E+ z<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ Y& C$ ?$ W( [8 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ I# f4 V- K- \9 i- m! n7 h0 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ n1 e# C% ]5 l( p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 f9 C: J; @  V# I' i1 d/ Y! ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' [6 {! s4 q4 T: J# q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ h8 l6 x' J0 N6 n9 |" r; c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* E1 [4 c' S0 z  {, X0 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>