【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  ]9 v0 ^6 u% W( z* _- M4 h! e歌词我附在后面。
5 l. N( O9 w1 l: _+ M; BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ \3 Y) y- N$ {# u( Y; k, o, HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 K4 g- G5 w/ J. ?5 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. y* R7 q" W' d8 P4 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 }2 E& @" u% u+ u  u2 ]9 Y8 yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: Q1 s4 o+ e2 C( uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! c5 ^( C7 X8 c# z: M% [, {; eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 Z( ~% |% ^% ]2 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 M, i8 [( e7 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: q' W- Q3 q4 ?( II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( Q: t: x) V" I& lWith such a tongue as yours,
) i/ d- H/ d$ b2 Y! U  {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# ?' r: R; `$ |! G) ~& KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& K" t! C4 M$ q* ?+ W2 {& g: c$ J# hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ a+ z  y$ y, i, J5 V2 c1 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 q& x4 @6 r: v0 G6 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ h' q) N! {# [' F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" V. B! Q+ n0 U9 E% n5 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, C! I6 q$ q& l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; ~* w( U$ v' _- M& M" Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  i6 u6 \/ Q- Q  N( ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. _1 u+ X! t9 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) J, n0 Q( l1 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" G" [1 U4 T- |4 Y: G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. f+ Q0 v0 r; ]" m( M$ g2 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* a2 X7 F4 a3 W- ?% L2 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 M/ ]% N- B$ i$ J# T% w5 W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& s: I6 F' ?' _. e  ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 m( l- ~2 X# h' C, U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  s9 h% [, I; S  e) K4 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ |  G9 a, J" b& }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: ^9 H+ W9 V9 V- [2 r0 P( F2 M; a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. W/ u$ L' T5 Y* m2 Y" y% X+ h4 A) i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% u. U/ f/ G2 g% o! Q0 A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" V+ ]; m6 i" y) N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) V/ r; V# G5 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 ~+ j4 v6 n! H6 P) }% K' n* u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) }, ~) ~$ v' ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; Y3 _; r2 a. @8 [/ q- l2 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% p8 e+ N- l) b! i/ Y/ _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 d$ b; h+ K$ D* o' K) v$ I0 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: n! G+ w1 k( \5 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% M8 p+ Y, Z4 `7 k- w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) ~! h. ?9 Z9 e4 C1 m; ^' f9 ]我请你剖开它
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, R# M+ ?0 G; t$ a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>