【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; @% l; p( y( Q' v6 eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) j( ~4 [. ^5 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. M4 A  F. [& kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. s7 e7 N6 Z* x$ ]Every other word you utter is love
/ l% ~$ ]- V) V# R2 Z; [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ r: x! ?0 s4 K0 o  Q  N! lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 ^* ^6 ^3 z  K% c- S: [/ lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% ]2 C; ?4 g, k) ]5 fI want so much to see inside your heart
9 J8 T, B2 d5 }: T/ UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 ^, t  t% g' c6 o# E# s# m/ DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 K" W- k/ C  s  O5 eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! r) p( ^. \# o- j% g' ?. M6 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 \5 L# H- y( M1 C7 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ k& v* O4 M4 o/ h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 c5 ~+ y- A+ k6 Y1 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* B" j4 M, ?# [$ k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; m- D4 E; J/ H, A( [6 K6 s5 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 I7 y& B' r, ~9 Q6 h$ z. c4 `: B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 @8 i' B! M* o0 ]$ ~6 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: @2 W3 j0 a: U. t( Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 A; R$ |! {. ~# |5 Q% \- \5 N3 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* N0 L: h1 @& o: T2 Q, z6 @8 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( \5 J! s! K" n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- z4 {+ G- Y2 A, q9 ~+ G! i+ s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: w1 `% O  l& {  c- `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) g+ G; x3 r+ i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. O9 Q2 D1 @, R8 j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% V5 T2 ]$ r8 R5 I" P0 X2 D8 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 ^5 C$ \: p6 [- d. o1 h  o4 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 {; x9 [% K* a; }" E* {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ k9 t1 H# d9 R& W: b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 W! ^! J) R+ M+ h* Z; F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( f0 w- W( T/ J0 d! v/ `2 G1 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( [  M: ^; u- \- X; G- x$ N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; u9 I$ \; I. D" I0 \0 J6 G6 f" T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ Y) ^6 Q* T: y. }2 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 T  t4 b) P: j- ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# S$ v* p# b4 @' M8 h* Y  A9 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 c, ~% F& g, Y0 w% H1 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 I  R  J8 m# L; p9 a, ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>