【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% @' C" }/ _% A9 O$ v3 M# OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; r8 S# W4 F9 H" V' xThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 p' T- _9 O2 o8 Y3 l+ P% i% E; XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% I9 R+ o5 b" N7 Z  B$ eI really want to know just how much you love me
9 X* P7 o5 X- i4 j" z, ^8 HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: [6 D& a0 g2 b: Q8 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ p1 G- Q; P! ~/ vI want so much to see inside your heart
$ ?* w# I) H' hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  s% z3 t6 q$ Y2 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! {/ ]1 a" D  J% @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: \$ D, }2 Y+ G/ XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; j0 ~% }! |  c, e; {" N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 A8 \$ i0 L5 T3 c1 w, k' D* }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% X6 h( x, Q" N% A3 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& k7 Z5 Y1 D; ^; h  N- H# x1 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  k. V7 L# {' }- d$ @1 |6 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 T6 l$ H  i+ D* h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* B: o, f" S; m* t& L: S  y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 M* ?8 m. E7 R4 s* {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& z$ C& ], `; k0 p* ^$ Y+ H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 F8 `: Z) G, j7 ]# Z  [8 T& N6 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ M9 a+ `8 P( J; l1 n  K* K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! V. ]' i% c8 |2 ]0 `* E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- J) }+ G! [0 g4 J9 E  r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, b$ Z; }8 ~+ i& B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 R2 ]6 Q! p, a7 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ f% P+ v  `+ c0 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 n8 f6 e0 x8 D! H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! c0 V. N5 d0 _9 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ ?1 ~6 y4 S6 \7 m9 p. }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 D* P) L' f3 ~) f0 y: g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 j( S" E3 d9 B3 K7 ^; T; @% q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# l+ K/ L' P" [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ ?6 w0 t  j0 k7 ^  h. z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# z! _) j# N2 @; j; G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ i+ m$ z0 Z$ M) C6 \8 Z) a# b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 F* Z$ P( G+ X# g$ u8 {1 u2 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 N  P# E- C% Z; C# E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 h7 b3 J! J$ l+ l" R, g) `* r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ H, ^( k5 @8 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 Z& ]7 s0 Z& D7 t! v" L+ R我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% k2 D- \; O# m9 N2 b$ [$ v( [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>