【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ e4 }. C# B* t2 H+ K5 aWith the moon kissing it every night
1 M6 b7 h% Z% D0 |2 H( kSeeing the sky content with its love
6 |& |" e" @' q# tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) V5 v( `, }8 L! y, D* ~You needn’t fear anything
" c4 w" @, l2 W" y1 l: KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 e3 h- q! `# B" F( ]5 {6 V8 l$ v- OEvery other word you utter is love
2 ^7 i3 M1 B- S3 \' yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 F1 o5 u1 Q* |( s& {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 E7 z) }2 H% T7 z6 T- NI want so much to see inside your heart
3 r$ u2 G3 F: p, y, `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. r$ E' M3 @9 q- yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ b0 k. e6 u  z$ A0 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; c. z' j. G9 D% o9 O% M/ @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 M" ?$ d3 ], y, g' W) VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 F% E5 [$ ^, {1 U0 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ g# L4 M/ A  }# a9 O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& y8 _9 z, W! P" f$ n0 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, A0 g7 t" v, K8 f4 N+ d4 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: \1 `+ r& g# h& i1 r" ]) u* H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 f) Y; p) h9 \7 [7 e* I' c  d3 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 O& C; I; `/ ?- B+ s; ~- a; g$ a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, a% Q- ]$ j; R4 z, R. Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ Q- x' K( j( p2 e3 B" f. Y' _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ q4 Q9 T" o$ i) B. q7 [% X$ N& Q* H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 A0 ]3 V4 ]! c  M0 C5 |$ w! {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* _8 ~/ B: R: v+ y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) Q1 T+ s% t; s/ o+ n2 n6 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 ?. U. p+ U) k3 |: H+ w  |" S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 [8 E7 Z4 k; f$ J  |; y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) c4 u8 M  o9 j) V5 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- `: [6 |# k4 `+ Z  P4 y+ X0 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. f( K/ J7 |) c+ V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% b/ R/ [# C: Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, ~+ C+ [( }& v% J! ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 K+ C* @5 N- O0 x- ?; W7 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- _. |( }- F# _9 t; X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: i5 x7 v1 d: h1 d2 J3 V) c  Q4 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& K+ N% s+ N8 \0 C! X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>