【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* Q2 d9 R' Y" d' u% ^8 i4 h+ E" ~歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 l9 x- P, v( ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
% {+ K6 n3 u7 u/ W: wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 U' i6 C* O0 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; F+ I9 Q8 E: y+ `% f* XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, X, Y( f+ k: z* D2 r5 b$ vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 w! y! A6 c% cEvery other word you utter is love
7 l) _: P/ z; a3 S8 T. A0 E- W3 gI really want to know just how much you love me
6 y: r! d' M8 O4 L* P2 mI love you I love you with all my heart
. l0 i( W+ i( ?( D/ DNothing can compare to my love
! o% O2 _6 b& ^, ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, k+ f# @& \4 I2 A  i* @1 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- n) p7 x6 \$ H; X3 E& PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 ]" u0 Q9 Q/ N3 q, X' q* E: ~" jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; }0 D; |# [, V9 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 _3 |8 X' O3 u+ v' `9 p, G: V7 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 o7 B- b* ]3 q. T4 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 t* m( z8 ]2 K4 V" ~. B) C& a+ j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ R0 ?: n1 A% w: I" E7 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; X! o( G, D$ r+ N" D4 b: I) d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ w+ }0 }; {* k! S  m9 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) X  N2 D2 [  }4 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" D- f7 H( V! p* q8 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 C, u$ v; D7 j  E$ T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( t9 J3 c4 y. D5 S4 c) s. c/ c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 ]' W1 z& T) c3 ]' v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% E' X, ^2 W2 a# u4 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; O4 }8 d0 X: d: s1 A: x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& i) _2 j% P6 m( m5 ^; \2 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& Z$ Z7 b7 `- k7 ~0 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* F: x8 Y9 H3 W, X& r3 Q  M$ q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ V; M2 m  s# U3 r9 H+ k% p% c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 Q; f* z% r0 z6 t2 l8 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ h; D' Z" [* s, ~% e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) v, B6 j, a$ F/ V6 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ f; q6 _; [: D5 I% a) c7 z/ G2 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. w& x" k8 G6 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" Z# C9 b) I; ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ G5 A/ H5 N, R4 Z- p, |8 n我请你剖开它

/ U5 A, ~/ A5 n: B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; J3 E3 Q6 T+ p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>