【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 |% E4 R1 s' c/ y2 C- c! b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 U. J, _% g. t- N( _+ }# mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# S0 Q# v  y4 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ A0 |1 T- [. ~% Q- B% K6 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 \- T4 H4 `' D6 s1 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 [7 ~: _# ?' L$ L8 G+ x5 DYou needn’t fear anything
) F6 c& O4 S0 q! U. q8 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. H6 X! C/ @* I. M% ?Every other word you utter is love
$ E! t9 C' N2 z, y( q+ ?2 _I really want to know just how much you love me
9 o6 \/ f( V, d* V7 h6 vI love you I love you with all my heart
, ~; v1 H* ]9 h& e8 Y3 h$ X( P  `( ONothing can compare to my love
9 J) A& g! ]4 E5 K# N1 m! iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; X' f6 K6 M' ~. _0 @! j* S3 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& e/ r0 K- }) h0 C# A5 Z' N4 Z. R; SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- L, t) h: o3 R5 G. e! MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. {5 j" X) T: `2 B! {' e: uWith such a tongue as yours,
) U, ?; u6 d1 T7 ^% oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# t5 P$ m) f6 X0 d! @# ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# E+ L; Q) H2 K: V' Y" TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- V9 c2 l0 ?, V; A7 B) ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ }( F9 M/ j3 ]8 X" k. l+ X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: f6 s' V# ?4 {/ h/ L, _' T& e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" [6 a; \* A$ F2 A. E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 [, j: T0 r/ g7 j) d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* {2 C2 x& O$ R9 X7 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& o" b/ h7 v' s7 {% o- y<P>你无需担心</P>
6 j# C. i- Q; O8 ]4 B( M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 {! L  f; o( _# M6 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* J, F! b! F  n' ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 H( n) Y; R3 t6 O: Z' G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, N, d; w% C6 H$ j4 g6 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* T- a2 X  I, o$ k; Q+ Z6 K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 q) |& ]$ P4 T) X( x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 @* T& l+ C1 m" F0 W$ K- a$ g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 {: L. r0 I* O$ S- @: M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( E2 _1 g) n& a: F* ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: p1 p3 W; l  _1 ]! g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 W( C1 v: @  [2 r: k" g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* j& M' i4 X( A* @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! W  c7 w0 D7 Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
* Y2 P+ V5 [; c: L$ p" M1 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 T" e) |; `- s1 f) Y7 n4 T) h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' K8 f" n0 N8 F& W! ?0 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' t2 A# _/ J1 l' u2 j; V. M$ G/ B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 A! m, j$ v1 _9 t( X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% [; }2 ?$ W/ y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 `) a6 t9 Z+ P6 t' h. [. n( V, c我请你剖开它
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) \! W$ B2 P$ G* o6 G6 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>