【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: C* N$ b5 ~& \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: g7 V  E" A3 ]" {1 LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, C, H& X; z/ L% h; {0 YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' n' A7 i: h1 ]# eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- u/ q/ Q5 M( uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% ^" @: |! b& dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* n: ]" ]7 k3 D: k3 a3 w) a0 }I regret not dying
$ E8 _# r6 n1 R) i3 G, n5 H4 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  P. f$ `- `$ H6 b# ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( Q, G% f5 R& g8 I# L& `* c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ v$ d5 e$ e' T# S: H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ d4 o: G7 l" N8 G; E) p, p- W5 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ p  J/ L- Y, w7 R' I/ n: D; _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 `  M! m" \, S3 Q* D- a& B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ Y: W, W  `7 w1 y. s5 B+ w# s0 v4 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' I$ g1 L: G$ u- R- R0 ]; s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 ?! C3 o8 S: E3 ^# d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' i! Q! d6 U# f5 l& J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 V" S, o1 f  i4 D% h: J: R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 [5 x0 A* B- F8 N' n; Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 ?# x3 m* Q8 z  B; i& \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  M) t3 s  }; Z+ u4 j" d. i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! l/ l1 N3 A4 K( o) d% C. `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& M( L1 V+ U4 D* j. D0 q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 J$ k. \7 l) J$ W+ B* B; d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. `! P) c$ H: Y* W3 {8 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# F# w7 Z; i' }7 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 U. {. @; ~. e) D7 W9 c& ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 k4 ?( v' H. j* F3 }, k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 g! p: J& s/ g$ o& n+ T5 w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 t( s4 \  N4 Y* h9 \' b; W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ \% u2 C4 f0 o7 V1 [* I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& Q% ^* H5 u  E6 P! j, w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; ?9 v' k# r- j2 F  G* a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 ]$ C' |' Z! F% R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; j. q6 M! J  E7 R# [3 L1 r我请你剖开它
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7 [. E" A) E% w2 _3 A2 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ ^+ U7 a9 O; I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>