【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& E. D0 t2 t! i$ L5 t歌词我附在后面。
6 q  ]) b4 P& |, k  y2 W1 w" LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" t# Q! D4 B9 O- a2 [$ Y: G0 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" n2 s2 ]: P7 I9 m8 X  @& @/ o! ^2 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 k6 s# ]7 R7 n3 s7 L) x  UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 i; L/ e8 T  O/ b, _# r6 G& E! NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' e! N% j6 m: LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# I, O9 [, n5 e% j! \% n+ EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" H+ ^8 a+ G/ C% HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ l) ~8 U  f0 u5 r, ~$ f1 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 T. y$ a5 C, pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 M) j9 \! b6 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 J  H9 Y7 t2 [0 z5 y8 u/ D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( B/ a/ h1 ^* |: i' V" }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 [& B) g; x, U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% I8 f6 k8 {( }7 R! W4 Q5 Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ z  q$ S' g# b0 J# p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! A. P1 G% X$ C$ e2 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: N5 C6 v- D2 E# b' Q6 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 @1 p1 h" H' S$ b  \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. M, J- d) p# B0 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 q! Z( K* w9 m/ @0 B; w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* ]$ S+ ?. }# {9 |9 K) @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 q# U9 p9 e# W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" C& ~' r7 n% b7 c7 ]' n) L  w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 U+ i4 H# \; e+ O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 p9 A* Y7 s  D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 ~* u- `, i$ H& t2 |. c; a9 c3 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' y/ y! F+ G6 n1 W$ s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 ?- ^; n( g6 h7 D4 g) f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 b. d: k, N, U' D# ]' Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 Q* |, a% f! j5 }( D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. u! V4 \; F9 s7 D1 ~. A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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