【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 D" a$ G4 n$ @  G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. l; d$ h, J* l6 d2 Y: BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# J  Q/ j7 r% H' Y3 G7 v; SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' @7 i6 A% G0 U5 bSeeing the sky content with its love
" G- Q- N/ R/ o  R  cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 x6 j/ ]2 w$ W/ b- ]9 e( V# uYou needn’t fear anything
2 B4 T7 L5 l# V9 D1 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 b6 W* P( Q+ ^4 tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 t; B- e+ T7 p2 T% \$ i! D1 \$ }Nothing can compare to my love
; S. A* `" u7 a# h+ \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& a$ t* K+ N' C3 E7 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' i( e2 x! u" n; M% RI regret not dying
7 G3 R2 d2 O& l5 |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( |# P( i: [% ^; z( S, p. ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 H' v! C/ z9 @" ?( t, `$ S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 v# a! V: j; [- Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 s: }+ M: _+ W' Y5 |: }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 W' W$ f4 S* I- }7 T9 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" }; V* T+ E" s" f# R9 u( b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# m- N/ G# V" n* E1 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 [. P! i8 Z) u1 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* r: b, @$ I/ y! O<P>你无需担心</P>
, ]/ C" m* u6 B0 g, F: b/ T. `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ @7 G5 w: Y( D7 R& j8 |2 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* _6 s; K* G5 w) N7 o5 w# a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ D1 x4 N+ a; X! h; v3 n7 X" ?1 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 A$ i: i0 c: f: w; R, m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 }& B9 X/ B5 _* D( \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 M0 _; M  u( G) m9 T! T) D. j# h5 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 h5 c/ Q: b: H1 W5 |) a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ ~1 U! R- {4 f& V4 Q& O# L* o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ F4 \& f4 l  U* }' n9 ~. Z# X6 h. m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 u# m/ z2 b* g$ I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. n; t( n& v6 i4 x3 g7 C- {% u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% J& Y# w% v$ D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 n3 o9 s& l$ \9 u8 g2 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" \* y' H: I* \7 u) x  ]+ A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 L5 s7 d0 `, v9 I. X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# ^) R& }0 ?6 I! u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 f% ?, t' K: u% q6 \4 C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 b! i9 d3 F3 M# {; d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 \% ]: S% p( P! z$ A0 ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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, Z: _# X. L; b+ m. W% u+ p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>