【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' a3 r# O9 A7 ]4 F& w9 j! CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- P. l* t" R: Z3 x& A- l. k  tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( l0 K- g1 o9 K3 b1 bYou needn’t fear anything
' ^6 |' A; B1 b. W% o) CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ z! G; k1 T5 D* H, v0 e$ aEvery other word you utter is love
1 \; i- Z; Q+ d% L$ Q6 \I really want to know just how much you love me
# d; ?& O4 _! |( Q0 @I love you I love you with all my heart
: l% V" Q* k! Y7 r! ^! Y' R8 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 F0 ]5 I& ?" u' y8 ~. {( ~- t0 X: GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: p' b% c# M* }9 x5 KI want so much to see inside your heart
: V2 P( W! |( c$ J7 Y+ T% rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ N3 [4 k5 h$ PI regret not dying
1 B, ^. C9 e& E3 B1 D, NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" T6 o, ~' L' h$ l: b" ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* k; k  p+ S4 ]5 D0 Q4 c' jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 u" X; C' t- g  m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 F) k8 L8 @$ g2 t+ _" q4 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 Z, X" g7 t1 I- W9 k% P$ l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 C% F* ]4 u' R* s( Z& Z6 e7 U' R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" f) j# A- ^( o$ F# P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ j* E  [  x( u$ K" N  ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; \1 }0 _" B) S. C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 y$ C) I; a8 e  V) m<P>你无需担心</P>
! _- F  j, u8 J  m, g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 a5 r9 g( K& B; S! p0 E3 T- N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" b2 V- b; G/ e- v7 S; P- t. _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- }# J1 L$ G7 r# S- D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) ~6 S" x7 v- S, P# g( o  p( ^( P1 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, U2 E7 r9 P8 k3 c, A/ Z7 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 X" t) l3 j: y) @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 i* _6 _* F. U# ^/ A: [1 ^, ~' l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" |+ a7 z* _# E  o/ A* m. @$ _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- [0 n, b) L: q/ E0 R4 Q3 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) W. E- m! c$ V( ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 j0 X% z" Q9 g  E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ _9 M8 @7 m! [) D1 r$ `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ T. }* p- i0 z+ A! ~( m, [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% V& ~2 n: ~, k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 Y$ V% \5 \  A* }  E8 P  F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ P. z3 W" E. C. p% M1 [7 C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  g  q* j2 X+ }/ @+ N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 |7 E$ ~1 N& K' A( ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" G; Q3 s6 N" _/ U# [/ a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( H/ u9 }0 S  M1 @3 u2 y我请你剖开它

  l" k6 d' Q: q4 @8 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* j4 Z- X7 P7 Z  {; [  t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>