【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 a: E( c# X: Q# k( `Making the sky glitter like gold,
% Z2 t. _: C/ s. y8 |( ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) A5 V- R! `4 g( V6 _/ BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! g3 R, l2 _" q9 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( t; w: Y  H0 ?% g* d$ HNothing can compare to my love
/ Q! M- s' c, d  |7 ~3 a1 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& T; {( X- I5 p, V) T* C# X& p+ qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ O1 j  i6 v5 c# p' `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 S' Y9 X+ `7 u( XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! {$ I+ H* ], _. w9 JI regret not dying
0 u: n  S/ D, R0 r; ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 T+ E  n* z; I6 S, V! ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 E/ m0 B, P' XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; p4 m8 e* |. ?1 w/ `0 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( i- a* h- |% \+ v. R7 r+ w* |8 L; D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 t, i! \+ s0 |. V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 R8 _  G' ?0 p+ X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; T/ N/ m% O1 P  T- R3 e& m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 ]0 \  z. Q$ d; F! x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, i: m- z* K2 c, O' o' `/ l" }7 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; e4 B, T, T. i0 U  n# s  Y% k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! N% a4 B4 E, N- K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" Z6 {- X& y, I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) b2 h6 a0 I6 W3 M$ c& ~$ @& N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 {1 e$ z& l6 Z  @% N3 j: U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 o$ q5 _, ^3 j* Y; `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) F0 w) r$ ]! S0 W( o4 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 h+ ?, h# o! h/ e5 V' b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 P& m8 D6 W1 V* ]3 g2 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: F7 k$ ?6 @' v3 Z1 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& M+ K) V3 t; O3 B; V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% i; N" F5 H% y* t! n, o7 W9 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 H- O# p0 b* g2 B0 K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, k/ W( d% P" T4 N1 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 O+ ]/ U, x% K; z/ P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( q& o% _7 x; f! w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 K1 S  T. Y$ h# F6 {3 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; L' _, d- P" r1 y' l- j3 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" v+ F3 l/ R* J. m% E8 B5 x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& N' `/ J9 t1 ]7 {% e  n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 H/ F/ m) j' z! k. A: j# a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! z7 S# ]8 \8 ~  M, i/ z3 n; U7 O我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) Q& \1 `; ]& _, @/ _$ t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>