【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* e6 a3 B4 }3 ]- \5 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. b/ w, [& T8 P$ C: ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" `2 v+ B- [7 g: T+ n9 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
9 i2 I& X3 W1 \! VWith the moon kissing it every night
( o- s! q6 I) E/ D6 v# n( JSeeing the sky content with its love
' |0 N  H! I) VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 Y0 J9 E- n- _2 G7 eYou needn’t fear anything
: q& ?6 |' i. T9 ^6 T: }6 S- iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, E6 F0 D& B) \0 o1 S1 hEvery other word you utter is love
& W- N1 G" N& ~7 |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% M6 b9 v# G( D7 p4 M. u( UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 L0 t" h% d' J5 c( o9 o( `* SI want so much to see inside your heart
" w+ y2 l. f- k' V3 _" N" |& ]  II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 D$ O" z" o+ {  }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 D; D1 r% G0 D+ N* \4 |: d- CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; Z" u6 {1 V+ @8 |) k' BWith such a tongue as yours,
3 D8 q% O: e& A5 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 g; S- y# D6 u7 `; v5 m7 U/ k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 k# K9 C  o+ y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 C# U# Z9 W8 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 {, D/ A  C$ |7 C" C& P# Y; V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# ?+ }6 q. T0 z& C, m8 b( Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 _$ V. j0 B9 X! y6 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 z5 ~. x. C% K9 @4 \; E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& o% b9 {/ S9 n( g0 d  ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 s9 |0 z6 c2 p; P& f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 ^  K( J  J, {) Z7 e/ @# g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( f2 Y1 F6 O: g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' d! M& K- H. x9 Z+ h- f0 [7 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 L5 B8 n/ H& p. }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% O" I0 P2 M& I( L* Z5 t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; i- Z/ R( T) T! t/ V" W& e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) b+ E6 ~, y% ~& q! g+ Q( t6 b$ P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! ^* r( T2 P6 z# M& y/ i$ |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ C' X8 w8 M9 K; N6 a( j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 O- L# T8 y" v2 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 n  ?( R! f7 p0 @3 E& [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! N3 R6 M: W4 N& m0 e9 \) _' y/ B5 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" N6 p' V2 g/ N) V" ^4 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ L5 U" s* N9 A- l8 I, T& E" I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ s) _* V: d% h: ?, B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; R$ j2 Z' r$ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 }0 i3 L( L& y5 k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& {# b( {) h! G8 L# r8 o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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4 H! Z) }* D1 E7 \8 ^) v: k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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