【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& r% s- n# A7 _4 n# eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 Q+ u0 I4 `1 `, f+ ?3 F: K& eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 F* `$ |" g; l7 \4 {. C+ TYou needn’t fear anything
7 n8 A8 t5 n6 u% `5 r! HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 I3 H; }1 V0 n  K$ A. uI really want to know just how much you love me
1 _2 v9 R" I# G( @) c+ }: z7 cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. }" O/ Y+ V- |' L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 X2 r' H; Y. O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 B- |! U# n6 O( W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 h8 Z3 V+ |' K9 H. f: J- O% X: S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' |5 q1 y# u/ @' ~4 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: Y$ h5 s# {* w( H  l& _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 F- T8 X7 Y0 p3 E, F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 y& @+ m8 e) @8 u& q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( c6 C" Z4 k' B1 _# ^( p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# I$ i- _2 ~! ~0 Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  x' L3 l8 m. y5 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 v  Z/ U5 [! e* ~. B" V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' |, c: G( J" Q: e9 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, H7 R( K6 T) I( h5 w9 r5 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 u3 f' m) i7 R$ ?7 E5 k7 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 k) V& Y9 I! f/ k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ?$ b) F; k& j+ D/ [. g6 Y; `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 F# L4 x- }3 `0 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: r1 v! w% \. `! f) m# ~2 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; |5 f6 R. D9 X$ T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& I) G  X5 Z: F* Z# T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& {6 c( C' t( O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 X  p4 A! N4 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 O& U( k. V  R/ b; ^. u( s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 c! @- F' B7 H0 M- L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* B" P! B, l5 c+ K4 b* V0 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% |. ]! |! L& `/ w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* n* i0 r0 e( G/ K2 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! ^+ N" B0 K" w* Q/ U; L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 j1 k0 F: x. I  _: f7 S& v0 U我请你剖开它
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2 }9 V/ e1 k6 D1 J, ^  q; W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>