【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, H2 z; X, b$ T, b2 a, s; wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ D( ^8 Y" a' D2 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ x# R, @) `2 l% N. sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 T8 I% Z, A' e: t! NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 N4 J  c- f  e/ v! i1 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 E9 b# n) S2 ?' d/ D, n, lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% r- n' M, z1 O/ E! @% VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& t; J; o7 I0 n/ H# A3 r! SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ [' `$ \9 D- r( `. h; A* M% S: p1 EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ _& B, G+ a" S" D; b8 Z9 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( W9 r+ o. M: B/ i/ o7 n7 i. M) Y0 [& bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 s/ {2 w4 x- A5 wWith such a tongue as yours,
" i7 y3 d& U+ q8 X+ d9 x) }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 q; G0 W& R& \* O' e4 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% C6 h- ]( Q$ O: i) ]0 l; u# ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 u0 |1 }5 X- G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 ?6 Z" K' ]7 G: G. l6 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 ?* l$ T- ^1 ?6 y" z0 j( x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 w( N3 g3 Q' X3 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- `* m0 u2 M& f2 \6 ^3 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 W) l2 Z4 R1 S! v3 C6 m$ |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 s- x' N4 x  K7 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* w/ Y" P" j  e1 R" Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' ]6 l) F4 Z3 t1 @& t/ L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% u" \. G8 M: i" z/ a3 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ d/ T, q' G% R4 U6 T+ D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: @, f1 ?$ b1 z4 u- `; k9 g% I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* n7 t" T; X/ [2 S( k6 [5 x3 \+ P4 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' d. ~4 g+ M& E8 D; R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, d( i  C  f& x8 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) a& d' y) E8 z- Y6 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; L. @2 q) E/ [/ A. k$ m3 b! y  M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 a4 ~! X1 U6 G! f% O9 A2 Y+ a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; C0 ]$ ?* K% r! S; t) B% i" z; t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ I0 n/ J! p- x2 Z: L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 V1 c' @. Z/ c% J. M, s9 g+ d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 I7 ^5 D; _2 K  v0 {: ?* _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 m5 F. X' G- b0 k$ l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( B$ [3 j$ T' Q/ q$ C0 O! [* R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ Q3 v8 [- f$ l6 y; t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. k9 a5 x, h+ ?, n" M<P>I regret not dying</P>
" ?' D( f1 h- W! a9 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 q& ]* k( Z* _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 t6 y6 \& S4 H3 \6 E4 e2 s/ v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 q# m9 d9 h/ l$ Q7 r" U0 Q& E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 Q/ I2 R7 G& o& W2 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 M: @, O+ J% I" I) l. o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) a/ j: r# k4 E, @6 [; Y9 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  r+ ?. V/ e$ g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! q- n8 J' C9 N6 W) k9 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ A6 K7 a4 D9 t) y# g9 p' m1 a/ {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>