【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 N# s$ k4 x5 P" [+ ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" S$ q. o* ?7 K8 y; bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  h0 v  O; @% A; MThe sky is happy down to its soul
' n' s) T" e6 y! dWith the moon kissing it every night
+ u/ L7 A; o- A0 D4 I$ }" m& M) M, jSeeing the sky content with its love
4 d% ?# S" A0 f, B- O0 S0 NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. H0 Z( l+ H7 qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: p6 c4 e/ E) I8 d  y+ m9 nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 f% U) r4 a: m2 D7 M4 N- z0 q0 hI love you I love you with all my heart
1 g& C+ Z2 ]7 g, JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 L4 K( t" U+ c% }! H5 ~* U4 o6 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 ^5 @8 K' \- h: z2 A; N9 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ R3 K$ I0 o# EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% R' d- L  S6 D3 j: P% m/ YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  i  C. F$ q7 M0 R' xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- M6 B/ w+ ?, x% ?3 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" g& z  N  p7 _+ T  s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 U( I# s4 ?: }9 Q; e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 h& O2 m' f5 P" j7 H0 k, |  t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 [. ?3 \- A: m0 P# |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# r! |! p% f7 [. {2 I  w8 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ @" D1 E$ X5 d7 p' T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" J1 ]1 N# a6 X. b+ [/ q3 p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 ~) A! Z+ j: Z( C2 ?/ k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 D( T: ]5 {# d! t- D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; v: H$ n9 Z: j0 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( B( D) E. {% y- [9 S" r" X5 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ K' E: {0 [5 S  R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ F2 K8 M6 Q3 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 \2 R! `. D  I& l1 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) H8 q  a* H4 I) @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) K/ f+ y6 p% g0 P& A; K" h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! R+ `- L0 u9 `0 k2 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" Q/ z0 g$ p  a( f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( o) g- h1 u* P* ^7 x+ q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( E" p) r2 r2 c" B' W9 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- g  b' X9 l/ S  \: P7 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 [% V% V; u8 }0 m8 \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 }4 ~/ I( r+ v5 Z' [% v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% K, `( ~: D: u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& B3 w8 n0 t; C& t2 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* a+ r7 v$ p7 v6 D. O( D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 `2 W  X. K; H+ E# u8 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% i( a" _3 d5 ]7 h& }2 z! v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>