【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ c* G  x, ?6 G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. {, F9 A8 Y# q. E  U8 CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 r2 i1 j7 ^* E9 q3 ?- pWith the moon kissing it every night
+ _  k& g! k# k# Y- b, b& SSeeing the sky content with its love
  g7 A4 \/ w3 v* ?* m4 @  bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 ^8 X8 V, M. l( U( u' `2 xEvery other word you utter is love
- U& v- P" e$ h3 b: ?, XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ j7 }; W, D5 `( OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 S* |* [! A# E7 iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- S* o$ o4 ?6 |+ |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ K) b* N! E! U* K2 |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 q5 }' D1 q) e1 x, l9 l& y, J) u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* f) H" M4 W& y' A2 F- C4 m9 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ R0 p* ^/ T  H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( Z; T9 u- n) q5 T1 @3 d; e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( ~( q8 Q+ M4 h( u9 w3 d# c, v* T7 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! D& d2 g8 Q6 @$ z* ^: w2 M* s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# [6 Q. J8 u; O  G" j. w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ [8 n) Y; `" A( b9 h6 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 U# J: X8 y( Q$ G! Y8 P1 [/ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 |: q& V& x) c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 U7 \# z4 v' g% E8 c. e0 \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! e8 I- ?4 `) n1 x0 B, O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- w/ d$ _, \( d9 f: r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 k, t+ m5 a' v/ s; }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 L0 L8 C' T4 |' r! v0 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! Y$ S. I: X2 N4 {! |/ Z2 V: ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 g& ]+ @! P* S) _& ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 p( ^. _# o, G' a2 ~" A- y  y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 t! r1 ^" P) A8 j4 q, o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, P" P7 N+ i6 a. O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# f8 h# G' T9 \1 O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 F' h( b( M9 S( l; ^% \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" s/ a# x  K$ A" [; B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) q6 j0 @; e* e% t: x: a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ U" L; h7 l2 J( ~0 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 w. E# K* O7 B+ ~( I/ p# n+ e我请你剖开它
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" I& q$ B* n9 |8 U% b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>