【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 {4 Q% R( S+ v' g: bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# G  [3 g' U0 I1 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 a2 g  q2 h: R7 b& a) jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  Q4 o- m: F. P' i1 s1 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  \; B( D0 C' I. Q- O. D( [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! |( b5 r. p- H4 C, h* H6 {1 ?# CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" Z( E# c2 n, L3 l! A& s' I" dI really want to know just how much you love me
# p4 r' ^( {3 R! n3 t' Q& ]) II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. X% [5 I& a+ J. d- nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, [& l, [: H$ m, P9 s8 FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 c6 V6 Z. B/ I8 r* M0 yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 T5 R  x9 g# |5 s! ]! dI regret not dying
; h0 N( z/ H1 \: Y& SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' i6 Q  J- J/ T2 `% uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 Q0 E/ x; [7 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 y6 w3 G) e0 t/ F5 A: h" w0 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% ?8 r9 `7 ?; {/ a7 }  m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  l: y! j/ g: s% a! Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 i0 x0 [& n7 e" c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, f; F- b5 W9 _: q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! z8 M1 A' {9 Y! L9 l' h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* L1 \, e/ l$ _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 L9 D4 e5 ~! x+ I8 [5 |0 L( n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" S7 C+ L& E0 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  {$ S" b! B9 Q( _# r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: u& C- m( d6 O# z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 Q# y. M% [$ m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% T3 v* U  i. O% p9 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( `' X! ?+ j8 c% y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 n! k8 t  v6 u/ b! v7 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" }3 T: Q" t( r+ i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% _( s7 Q7 w) ]$ `/ A1 g! V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ f7 P) j- L  @! T" i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 h2 ~$ q- J0 o  n" Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. b. i: X3 C* \( M3 E9 D' [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' t# q/ Q4 L! L$ B; a  v3 E, T( B; S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 D; b9 E3 Y% Y9 [' M4 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  L: l( {$ `1 \9 ~  S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 _  M8 |1 c5 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 k7 D- t( O& @8 g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 a* |# C" ^  y3 A: ^1 J" q8 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; \4 D$ ~; J# @  B8 ?: @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 h; ~2 O  G# \0 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; T  x* D8 R' Q$ Z# w5 Z- l9 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 v/ G% ^9 W8 v& d+ ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; }4 G% Q' u/ O  K* ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 [) R# r9 a  s/ o9 i- v4 t) [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ b+ A- S8 Y1 s- x$ K* v+ O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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/ b8 M' A- [! G+ K) | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>