【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; X6 e: K! `. eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 n& f4 a/ W+ H6 U3 p# W$ YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 @1 P- A# z. ^, qYou needn’t fear anything
% I: ^- V' H% A' F0 B! J4 d% PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) I+ @8 q' e8 A- f/ N; ~; r$ BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* z* I, m; U$ T9 V  |3 c8 Z' cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ S2 @6 [3 s8 r1 X; vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 d: n& o6 d/ MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ u% O+ \$ D( b& I  X! l' P" yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; ^: l* m+ V* N- tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' s' F% {# m$ IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ s: s, o) S; Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  _% a6 x4 h# S5 _& z7 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 b; g$ U; r1 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 E( ~8 j1 v- M5 Z( s5 O( w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! |" X0 B7 m$ }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 k+ a- P8 Z% y3 a0 _* c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 |3 c  ~" H" L2 ^0 B7 h! \. M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 n) b9 ?: S7 Q  x& M" U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ ~' T1 @3 o4 _  ]3 i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, c& A6 M6 \% t9 Z4 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: t9 L, \' {( T! I! T7 ]0 d) u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' F! z8 n* x3 N6 p2 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 Z$ t2 C- u% _; F- W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ w; k' @' f: H" j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 o: N& E$ t0 J& V, D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ S; H& ]% k5 w) }) K8 ^$ t3 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ e$ C$ z# S( a& o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 P" s" c2 v; d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* W. i9 R% L# b" ?, @: p8 B, }$ ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" e8 u' y7 x, _  x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 l3 E/ ?: ~2 K" P4 Q; t) Y3 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, o: N3 k3 u. U; U( _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ \9 ]8 ]& L# A+ t7 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 b* n4 A6 J: ~, `4 \9 U. b9 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ E" \5 v$ k" Z( g7 {2 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 S* @2 i$ b! p/ }1 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; L5 U8 p* Y0 v  j7 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. ~' ^9 F6 V: a' [2 l1 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) K; S8 y+ {# Q+ C$ d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% ^, ^2 s4 B/ K5 {9 f* v/ h# D2 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% E9 l0 H' {& e. T- X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 g& I- _9 S5 C. Y! S4 Q1 @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>