【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  o: G3 E/ y  }5 Z( n' P$ aThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 A/ ]4 Q/ k0 r2 yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ H" D; K  M4 h- Q8 K3 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 G1 v2 `0 ]2 n! OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' p  [7 M! y' f, `0 d; ZNothing can compare to my love
7 F) ]3 r" D; d+ R0 L9 e: dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ G( T* i0 W- d4 l6 d% M2 I" lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 z$ R6 c# ^. L) _  q6 G% II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; R* n) S8 I/ i$ oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. z" K! X$ Y  F0 D  c' H* @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 ?1 n- s* @( d) R0 T3 AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ {4 y& _) f7 D. MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% |5 I4 _/ n+ ?( FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 ^/ D% B& E# V9 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 M; r4 C: a, t& Y) M# l$ Z) L; o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 K1 o8 }8 f! S5 h' R6 O3 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 I! s* t) ]5 g! n$ u0 t. D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 d) e; ^2 z5 a$ c. c0 V5 K/ {$ E/ g  C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 t( y( I  B4 V) M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" M6 D* c: S4 m" i5 Z: \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ {& u9 D* b1 X; i- ~/ n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 s3 l; ]+ M( b7 p# q9 Q1 l) Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" n% m, V- L# x6 e" g5 ~- S" |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% g0 I: m* w' w. k' l<P>你无需担心</P>
/ m) Z6 Z8 a# \# R/ s( @- |6 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  H7 a3 ?* c5 W7 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ j- @" r5 F1 C: R- R$ ~9 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 S! ~1 R$ t7 J) B* P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ o( J! u; u, ~5 Q6 Q/ ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* Z8 D! _# m% @( J& P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: f% S: q0 r- P- F9 s0 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 w/ ~  [: l/ }3 C8 e: V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  t" {/ T& C9 J- ]# f' w( t: g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, C& j: R0 H8 {6 t6 M# I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* X6 D6 O* }+ S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! z1 i- E! g( b/ m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- d* M( E- m( M: @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 I+ W* b  M$ R% T& V6 }0 {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ l- A5 K3 r2 n' b+ [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- _& i' k, n, R/ A4 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& t; C/ h8 S( F; p0 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 |/ R7 q/ c" l5 t, \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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" B( r" c6 t7 W  k5 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# F5 j% l8 z- M% ^1 i( t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>