【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' \4 B) q  j, d8 m/ g: h歌词我附在后面。
  V* u2 a0 q7 _# `! Q  {9 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% S' b5 T. j4 b6 v+ {, M1 ]$ J. QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 s0 r8 T5 W& k, m5 W9 N6 NWith the moon kissing it every night
; w3 M- Z7 \, p2 ?; i: USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, A( ~5 k2 [$ k+ W) L( ~6 v4 ^! \# K* K8 QYou needn’t fear anything
6 f: E+ e- ]2 {$ N$ U& H7 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 r- D4 @0 A1 f6 c" P8 Y3 [I really want to know just how much you love me
% Q6 P+ ]# g! w5 b8 L' P8 l2 d8 yI love you I love you with all my heart
$ J. D: M, @$ }; QNothing can compare to my love
$ J" m! [' Z! e7 s& E& m' lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  }. T6 ^" J0 I) ?I want so much to see inside your heart
; `: d! u* g+ V; z, `9 }) K+ EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 [7 V& F! `. `  E. V7 k# KI’m still filled with fear
# n5 }0 N; x9 W# h2 ~8 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- q+ u1 M9 r( i) [, O) lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& n3 i- ?+ ~$ [% s/ XWith such a tongue as yours,
/ F' n1 s  L6 b1 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 C8 L) o: W( i4 [0 R2 H. n+ WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ r- ^: M$ {( w3 r. `$ g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# F* o& S5 d! n* e. g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% |5 r7 ~8 P4 M' v0 \' k/ ?2 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 U  O, y1 [) D/ D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 }( Y) @3 ]. f6 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! W/ W6 h! o% u9 i- R4 g! k7 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 P- R0 I3 Z* x; g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 e8 l# r. I2 {0 m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 p4 U( L) j" y8 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ N& ]' }4 D% V/ F5 j# D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 r3 W0 i7 W4 R  v. ^9 ^! ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 Y# x- M( O3 `& Q* f  e$ C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ O) _" @! |* K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- r% G0 ^4 `$ n+ {9 l" p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( s9 J" W3 x2 ?0 Y# F. o; t: @! w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) V7 M2 q$ p& I. o+ T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' V+ J! ]4 u  }* e' _- V8 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* ]4 ?2 R( ]2 D7 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! D+ m3 F3 ?) D5 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 _' I+ D2 m( K7 u9 v. r. R4 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 Y* m$ C/ ]2 c$ f& f% U6 R1 ^  m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% d1 Q9 D& C9 D& r. }5 m$ }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 V3 c6 \8 D- z' S& r1 T( M( _/ I, n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 [9 w! c- J. R4 i9 o+ ~$ o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 o/ ~. a; t! [  n- @$ X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>