【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 a8 N' y! P5 V) i& wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 s* L  K: j8 e9 `0 |7 E6 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( ^" u) [0 w! ~- U' ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  V) i5 x/ X( E: s( d9 M- O2 XWith the moon kissing it every night
& S& z$ G. e4 N8 y  k7 }9 Y0 KSeeing the sky content with its love
: ^: J+ ?9 X; i, AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 A5 t0 R0 D$ B; `+ V! i& J; P' vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ }: S" E  }" AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, W% M' z0 W- J/ z, A0 W6 V5 w7 u7 bI love you I love you with all my heart
" o4 w; I  C" N0 L/ @( P! CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* }6 Q3 ^& x! \( w* k/ d5 I" }, RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 ?4 A! c$ y9 }, J% vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ }. M% ]! v) U  ~( E8 j: ]! [I’m still filled with fear
5 c, M5 p7 \+ s" u. ~2 T; x4 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& S; t% f; I  H2 ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ k; b" I/ B6 q; R' AWith such a tongue as yours,
( ]* x* ^* X! o! ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 \8 Q/ @7 G7 T6 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! Y  _8 P; Y1 _1 J1 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& X: z6 M+ a: r4 ~) Y* \- s& L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, _3 t; d7 K8 O- X7 W0 Y9 t6 J# U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 k4 y: I. {  M$ C$ D1 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 s0 k) G* g& }1 J! m( Q5 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 G1 [, e: ^& b0 b" b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* ^; i6 A* h3 k. O* z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 G: _% M2 R8 ]+ q6 J) S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- F: E+ t- Z) a8 N2 ~) {- ~( b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; G) r" e* C+ I: Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, h5 \% Z3 H& }$ g8 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# H) y; E4 j5 m: R! A# a3 x4 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( D4 }6 H4 G. e+ t; u$ ]. m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ C( K# I" J# I: m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. {4 R; z. w5 k* U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, N4 I4 M# y- N. u) r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' o1 Z6 C; o8 f2 b9 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 v  w' Q5 E3 I4 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, [, H9 t+ ]4 g* p  k- {- x: `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" b$ ^% V$ ^4 F  \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 j9 [5 Z4 x& J, E4 p4 O- J0 C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  K7 X! j. s( R" i# E& X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 z. ~! A4 }( ]7 k' Z6 I; z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ P% r, ^7 Q+ G4 I6 x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 N& d! [  W1 {/ E. d( P2 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 q* x/ z# ~! m) {# P7 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: j3 W0 e+ c2 F6 w* w2 u0 L) u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: E& _8 c' N6 w+ j$ s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 A8 h) E% V. I( B; t( @$ p+ Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 w% f' J& B5 I1 {, G4 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 d3 a1 m: R, |/ p0 P3 U' O9 Q% a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: R( Q% G) K! A6 ^3 u2 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 O( e7 I+ N0 Q1 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>