【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% ]; k! z4 n7 O! P8 h7 N- BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; O) q2 C) I; `8 j* j3 ^5 e" d9 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% S" U7 k- N! x# M; ?5 v: E* NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" V8 }/ S  X3 m  D0 b1 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 I4 G$ X* n6 U2 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 p8 U% Z6 y' H2 w+ l) W" BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# n7 s7 j2 z9 x) L2 [4 Y7 V/ gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' t6 q' R2 a. g. a+ p; ~$ WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 I. V% z; g4 r. lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 T4 D# x% M7 C7 E- q' H  BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" C6 y# H) O+ I7 c. {4 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# _  a, k+ u6 N/ G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 _8 X( S" p  Y* q( a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 ^2 v# R- h# W9 ~8 m4 I) J) O; l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 q# y. O/ y% p9 p# ?8 N' y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, q, M% c0 ~3 u; F9 H3 U' n; y2 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- }$ w6 H& J. x9 D/ \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ F$ g$ n4 A+ X, j  t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" T. ~2 U; M, ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 ^! f1 o1 b, r) R2 [, m  @3 e( j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ q! c& v( F% }$ F+ b2 v( [: L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 E6 C% b# ]' {8 ]) v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 Q6 X7 u/ p# x$ R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 v$ i, j% m$ F( M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  V1 D" y5 V, q7 k' P$ |2 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 C' K4 {7 [" m( n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ }) e2 ?& ^. h& l8 b' A! N/ Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  O5 K* B! m4 }; `: k% J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 V; }8 m8 Q4 F0 |6 O4 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; \$ `0 O/ v1 E# Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 F* P8 ^0 Q3 h  t4 x6 n' L6 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ N1 u* p6 d& C4 c3 C; F. X& X<P>I regret not dying</P>
) }4 y1 h# a3 G* Z9 k( r1 C+ p0 ^4 y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# V! i5 E; _1 c4 m4 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 z# F& C$ i# ~+ [0 a/ I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. o+ F+ r6 x. L. h' O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" k  G+ y* L. H5 `* |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 @7 D' Y9 c5 V$ P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ l. w/ E3 R/ A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 ?8 z, E0 D9 ~/ O! v" i我请你剖开它
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, ]. q5 I, f$ x: c1 R$ O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>