【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! _5 `- d8 Z2 W4 ]4 W( W! j6 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( @7 n% |1 j6 g4 k. XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 x* \+ j+ t; F6 `( ^4 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
. l9 R  ~$ `. J8 U. C2 [1 vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! m) G: e% E- _3 o! z' O. dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* b) o$ M/ g" M7 T& CEvery other word you utter is love
* A* {$ ]; Z* t/ z; }I really want to know just how much you love me
6 {5 C$ i: q& f4 E0 R2 r8 F# OI love you I love you with all my heart
6 Z# b% I. j. I9 hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 U! `3 P. _: _I want so much to see inside your heart
! F0 v# v9 g, X- x' A1 l# U6 x1 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ q# v5 p4 Z( \& E/ z+ m" [- f9 CI regret not dying
2 {" U7 r% E& q% S# q+ V9 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- F1 `# u7 Q. v5 N( m6 n  l  F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- z/ _2 N  U0 W6 ?+ U, O% v; Z% {  N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ ]+ R' L6 g, W" Z7 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 O1 y+ K' S5 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 U$ |6 ~, E. u' J  }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. F% `% v4 K0 d; H# n# \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& E- m* d' P# m5 q5 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! Q6 y" @8 b; c6 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) N$ ]) k+ r$ z+ ~2 }! E$ C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, A$ O! y2 n  g5 U% n6 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  Z5 s6 H, {; q* y1 M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, {) ]6 F. ^& R4 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) y9 S8 N5 e& `' `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ~. R4 S; k8 v$ F  G. \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' `2 P9 L8 k/ [- m. G* k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& z( I# O7 c  B3 n; ?5 k2 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. f* |# q* A8 J) L1 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% T9 T. Z% C  E  R; Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 z$ }% }) h  J# p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* ~/ S$ G* c' [. p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" F" n# `. x# f2 Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 N6 g5 _5 p( u! {5 @1 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- l1 J9 p0 C0 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) k/ g& X* e; C. w! W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& V( k) g& [+ N1 K/ [1 S5 a* m8 ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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# e) i. t0 i+ Y  b' Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>