【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: k4 V! J+ g3 K( z' e$ F5 l6 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 S1 ?; j. J* c' o5 ~5 O0 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 a9 K" F# h4 xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ ~$ Y$ _$ \" }: b9 b' p0 lI really want to know just how much you love me
- N" m6 C  N6 N- p0 o6 u' `I love you I love you with all my heart
: {" R9 i& g' k6 k/ }5 a8 nNothing can compare to my love
8 w7 w5 ?1 h8 V9 L; @3 }! g6 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 s7 N4 L( k' i4 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; _" O. B9 R+ K3 L% j! K6 Q% DI’m still filled with fear
4 \. R( L- L; P1 v  RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( P; ]2 t& A1 v! z; k+ ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* H# I& p- @- o; r* B0 ]) uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' m- a5 X0 T: u! i2 ~! ?: V( ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  b2 g; ?- U/ [( R/ s' A3 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: a: p& b$ e$ e5 b! ]/ R' ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 L2 S* ]4 Q5 q+ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* X: u2 T5 v. K& X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: k5 n' L% W/ g% n# C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ H% E: X4 Q5 d8 C" N/ ~% b/ j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- `$ }. m- \& |6 d6 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 q% ^& R  v* x5 W; A& u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 z# D' R; A1 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* x: l' f2 o: C$ c: q( _; B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 G7 [5 ^) \/ \4 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( I- y+ H7 A9 X/ I, Z/ O( h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, J# V& ~6 N' K" N- G. n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ?2 A' D! S9 }# i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# c0 o# t6 t; n0 T$ l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 j' ?% }( E1 a; v! @" s) M" d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* i' H- Z' j" v- W7 z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 _, k' ^% [, s* g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  J, A' K( V1 z$ z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- l* p8 L, ^* `3 Q# c0 j( l+ T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ t. z& o: R0 z. o* L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 K# B1 ~0 Z' c5 X4 R7 e, `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) `5 W9 W. q; F+ `# O6 B: P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, k% c1 @  U& F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! R. w+ b1 w( l; e1 R5 m; U$ }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 I3 S7 ?7 @" C& |+ s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 ?9 t) f* D% X$ @  m& b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ a2 k! q+ e# S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  F2 R5 l- r" B$ e! H3 F$ y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>