【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ f' S( h! ]2 b' @The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  T2 A  A& @0 g3 e& n# dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; n* J3 I/ E9 H3 N& W  n; HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% z2 t# ]8 E$ y1 H* mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  C( e7 U: D5 `5 wI really want to know just how much you love me
( C" A2 p) u, |7 N, G7 {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: Y' R/ t: M8 aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 c9 ^3 V- s/ `6 ~* SI’m still filled with fear
: V  l, d: V  t: V! v! r4 y0 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ y- M& `' I( ]) z1 ~& _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( r/ S2 `2 u6 C9 ?5 p  @( ^8 |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 \2 _6 {. O& c9 D8 ^" |* VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 b( E; F. a- b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- e$ a. m- l6 j: w2 o/ U1 a3 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! ]$ ^- \5 C" M; L) |1 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 S2 a3 U* H' c9 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- _4 ]0 v7 K+ q9 m: k& s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# n- J, ^& b# p# N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; h' ~. y. j# U& u9 ?$ b2 p( k6 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 k, t1 S% e: Y+ D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 ^0 q, }( W. k) _2 k8 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- F0 T' e  h- }/ ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* B+ x* s- _2 U1 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 M/ h/ ?0 M9 T" D; `2 h7 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 m7 w2 D! X- H, I* G3 ?# z/ O- m6 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- K  S- b5 T" B8 R1 }2 p! ]2 ?) t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  u( u5 Q) c1 @, a# V  h; V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 [# u- ~+ v% d$ i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* \2 ~2 v+ p2 [+ ]0 i% m; `& A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ t8 D! x2 I. X% b# d- |" ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( }! ?: L( x" ]. j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ C3 |! b) }, f% T% z8 H: {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 o; z/ i1 Y; N6 f0 a7 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 @- e8 F/ L& E' B& e9 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- W& s* X+ @; G2 ?" q2 |! U9 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 _- R5 x0 C* n* Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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6 [1 O$ s1 P) ^, p3 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>