【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
# I" f3 Z, r! H4 t3 f4 o7 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ z! |* H. v& o8 @' j' V/ {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 G2 \& Q8 [8 I) U! IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 F9 O' R+ W" xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. ^+ x; O  }) ?  \' yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 c" A4 ~+ W0 N% jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 \* H7 @4 w/ [% ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 ~5 P6 `& R6 b3 `7 I% cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 Z' c! N/ H& K& i, M; c( w) q  ?! TI regret not dying
# `; X& \) {% t2 e2 k& AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& P! N" J: ^4 n8 GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) k5 m) ~) T5 t4 }9 ]: }) q( g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 ~; e: v) w* p4 w3 g9 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 T/ w" {/ J$ P! b+ B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  I2 N8 m; f2 V% W! m  K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# B: z$ b2 k7 a: `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 `0 w' @6 G( l7 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 e% C/ c7 P7 V& o% J6 c. o* v8 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" }4 s* y2 ]1 f' T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. H) ~" F& u" u& c<P>你无需担心</P>
- ?; ]/ Z- h: t) C' p" t" u6 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) X4 A9 C4 Z1 z. v7 @; i4 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* v1 O1 ~6 X, X* P# L* l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# V2 H2 {7 l0 `" {9 U6 ^1 M/ Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 y& X. S# P; O1 O% s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! ?0 Q" t0 b( y# |' ~6 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: I& R1 v$ q' f! C% U6 f. L9 s+ G0 u8 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) y% l. u. x# D1 `2 {# j9 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. [$ d# a, w; D" r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 E$ m" Z8 d9 @7 l  O. O# J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' D/ b+ F6 X  I3 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) E4 G5 ~1 [9 J' }2 m' W" C; m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) `8 w) o  w0 D6 h" B- t: f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ j) P1 P$ ]. I5 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 `  O- l1 t  @, m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ b1 Q1 M. {6 U) _! ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! t2 n; u9 ~) D3 @  D8 T$ k  o6 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 m/ E+ Z$ |4 K7 ^% z7 O6 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 S/ u  t- o+ C4 y* }+ z$ K2 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; f% b+ a, {2 j* f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 v. n# L7 N; q" m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>