【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& p2 o+ G4 j7 T% Z  t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% P( u4 j, g- f! v, mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 U7 |- R* \9 o: c5 `$ nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ Q7 l9 ?  C# K& MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 ]) T9 q+ J+ v" zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) j; G5 S7 g* eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: B3 X; b- g& y# \# e! ?7 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 K% m7 s% I' {. M; UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 O: c) M, V9 I% Z1 T! m3 X/ ^I want so much to see inside your heart
' F5 O3 P' X1 ]3 G% r" Q1 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. `$ T! P9 H9 E$ N3 T+ y7 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 j% m2 C' j2 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" b) z: ]4 |% J- URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  z" t( T0 u$ {0 N7 _8 ~& f: ]& Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 J' u3 }2 Z# U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- W$ |, p. K9 s, d0 y  S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, T5 |8 M. l. @! w- w" w1 L$ S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% w8 }: ?3 |7 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 d6 m0 I! j: I0 ^3 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 S+ F+ Y1 r1 q2 m8 s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- `0 b5 ]# E2 c  M- n: ]- }2 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 q7 C: E1 x7 u6 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) J, G7 Q& w1 `! @. ~: V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* o% m$ q8 w$ J" q! X; ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ]1 t8 d: H2 b. y$ e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) d# [2 m) b. B0 L" W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) @' X5 J, b$ N1 u8 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 b; c# p5 n, Z8 p& H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- L8 w% L2 A. K5 E. K0 f' F0 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ |4 j  n2 S$ V$ O6 U' `5 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ P! k. v8 G3 S4 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 G. y9 Y% b5 F; c( `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  s2 o* u% s/ C/ y& Y8 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' j$ d; O1 N7 Z5 F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* h; s& I( i" P1 S2 T3 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  Z7 o: C( G$ q$ s2 T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, u: T- r  g0 D2 V/ c6 h/ v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 @$ _( l9 G8 H7 u- @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 f2 K: U  I2 P. F% J) F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 l) S5 |1 ?$ f5 `, T- o0 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, b( Y! `- _. c+ S4 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* b- Y- x9 z+ z  t. I; b3 R' y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>