【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 p! i$ N$ M1 t. ~4 ]0 y. NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( u" y/ i1 J, X! d5 p* t* x( kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' ~, C# C- k3 Y; i. o. sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) x1 h2 N  [- G5 T. Y8 K3 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) a% T& u4 y8 Y" ?0 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
, }- S1 G; p7 QWith the moon kissing it every night
2 U, P  g  k+ y6 K; e( _Seeing the sky content with its love
8 w/ i( J" {! H( K& KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* _: g0 o) Y8 l+ n5 zYou needn’t fear anything
, l3 k! r0 q) V. VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' Y0 W' ?& x2 _) j+ \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ {2 M; c6 ?0 B2 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- O/ ~: ?  Z$ Z! b8 q  t4 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 d: \' _4 F( v8 s6 s3 y- f: P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" j, R3 R; K2 z; K; M5 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 s) M  p" z2 I  Q( {' b1 V. G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 b+ A0 T5 U6 {$ q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" Q5 @# x/ p) R: ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ {9 z" i* I5 q" e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 C1 r' e9 f" ]1 d  E0 t  e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- J  p) |2 K7 f* C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 a7 Q7 X9 \# d! J+ A8 M6 b3 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 X3 y$ A7 ^5 }9 a0 i/ J& a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ f4 `; Q5 F! \4 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 o0 [: C2 ~' u( N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! j6 H: b* Y! Z  i8 O8 d# ^! `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' X" @6 Z4 v: S! ]; }+ V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 I7 ~0 `! W3 X2 p7 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' [2 O$ r0 {; b# R$ z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# @* \. ?; X' g, m5 B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 l, M4 J% i7 F. ]2 A( _' N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& _7 M3 B0 y; w, y$ F% y7 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( H: Z% W! i5 W9 Y' ^$ t$ D: U/ [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( {* S$ H, }4 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# `3 U; Q3 N& S& s2 ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( Q$ [  u6 o9 [7 k1 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ b3 T* k1 P6 V' E7 a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ T4 ^9 v! v' x$ B5 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. A0 V& p* F1 T4 j0 \* r0 a& {! ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ S6 A& j8 H3 Z* T' v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 G. {* q" ~  n% `) V: x1 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. g5 m; Z4 [8 @8 C/ E1 R( J& u5 U8 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! q! P2 S3 ?* a6 S! S  F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( I5 H3 \7 M1 l* x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 _& f) z: L2 K( A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

' ?  R8 Q0 P+ k& b+ d- j1 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>