【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  h2 M4 g% v3 K5 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) d6 V# q, Z  X& S1 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ O- a+ x3 G) q( c. DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* b7 `# e: }  Y- ]5 jSeeing the sky content with its love
- A% I+ A. S4 S9 n3 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- h! B8 B4 Z" x' {You needn’t fear anything
5 H/ O. A% M+ u. w: KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& m5 N2 B' N/ K9 F- UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 E2 o! D  ?5 s6 s, ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& I- h/ C1 |8 J; G3 UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: B$ K* V; ?6 a$ C) h6 DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) ~8 S$ o3 b4 \, K- k. B0 U5 KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* S) ?# Q& a, U' @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) P) L4 e6 ]4 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& s/ e7 u: f6 u" d, WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 T! u+ a5 V+ N! K" c# K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. u4 z% F5 D/ E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; a( d& T  t' @. i- f& [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. t9 o6 {* \% x. N. R% n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, S6 D* [5 x" n0 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 P9 ?  {* x7 D2 n! m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# E* i, f/ {9 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 V. y; }5 t8 R! ~) L8 G6 f# F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' a: g% h2 }# E) A6 u$ @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ p2 {9 Q2 F! ?6 I/ \4 c% b; T0 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& _4 J1 A7 Q" [- O% G<P>你无需担心</P>
$ t' A& [+ G; P: @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 c/ e9 `6 P  L, k6 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: K6 F4 h- U( |4 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 c* I, L3 F/ u/ i- d& z3 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: d0 Q( Z% V" N' Y" G' }3 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# E. L2 ^- Y7 n& S& P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ Z9 d/ C$ k1 H& O, D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; s; q9 A+ W+ G* A7 C5 l  r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' N, R% e, `" |% w/ }) a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& m) q6 v- z0 c6 W, \$ g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( S3 G& `; B! i4 z% o. M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 P$ k# b9 g/ o9 x1 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- |  Y0 x2 c" ~* P<P>I regret not dying</P>
- D0 ~# |% G- D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. c; w/ o. S. V$ K& B. S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* T$ N- q& F0 v- L3 W$ _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, L% ~) ^4 ~, @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 m; {& S# }0 _, j) c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) h+ A2 C- U8 O5 N" v5 u/ Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 H( _2 Q& Q& j) x' V' T! L  t$ ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ [. a% n, ~5 k$ S% i9 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& e8 o! h# R, U9 a9 K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% m& [: G8 j% B) I6 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>