【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' r. H% C) u9 [( EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 N8 \* Z5 `$ J  y9 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ b- |5 K0 F3 N8 x$ XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) b8 R4 \3 @7 Q8 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 a, w9 {' Q5 Z% H' cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 t3 B" @1 X, ~6 ]) K# [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# [7 m+ z5 K; Y6 a! G, P1 d9 N- F9 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ U, {5 p7 f3 M9 N9 S0 gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# a+ k2 J- y: _3 k$ HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. D4 `; g5 N7 Q; k( {! J% LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, Y/ b4 K7 T+ u" \" }" FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. U: S, S/ t/ `8 S+ U' r: FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 `# ~/ t& Z' f) L3 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  h2 s0 h+ m( w7 |* Y0 p1 r/ o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# m+ h9 x& `( w; a8 t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ W2 j' E6 l1 E! Z2 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  s( n' q& a$ I' L% T6 Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 i% W7 ?6 W! p& E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. u, y( T6 C# l0 w4 q% m; K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 m4 {# H1 K6 V& G( |9 V' ?7 K! q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ j2 K1 b$ b+ y; Z+ v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 [" U' B0 ?5 U1 n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 Q7 r2 q1 h4 m6 M# M. ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, q* Q9 I" S3 Y8 w) q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 Z: `2 y. C0 ]$ x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ |0 K3 P; Z! Z8 q" t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 D1 k2 L3 e3 J0 H  e0 G' e* b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, q# {+ {4 H: \. P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' y. y7 Q* Y0 T: E4 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& @/ T" u: c5 ^  K: ^; V. [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 ~6 E0 z' }. L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 S" b+ a: X4 K) I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* ]5 N) Y; R" |, j/ B+ m* o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& |" R3 s0 C6 S. F) [: o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( \- _: Y- x5 {5 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 }$ I1 W0 B- |! F. `1 z8 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! I3 Y- J8 F8 _3 X0 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 d9 C7 ?, a. G4 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) d& K& ~9 e- w& H7 T& t: J, E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; v7 {. t6 b0 r' r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ t6 A2 i2 D# t- Q" Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# ~1 ^# G' u; }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 u. J* \& _; m/ X/ Q- D$ ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 C+ e% U8 k5 L" c: b8 ^2 D/ |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>