【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 k6 q2 I  q- `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% L0 R3 N& i4 p# @1 r/ fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 k0 l1 R5 P3 n' r7 \0 P& @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  s' Z' W1 n5 c  MThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 h. ^5 b, A; p; v( PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: d0 L2 a' ~" g2 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. h% s% \4 Y- N# A! w! e1 rYou needn’t fear anything
; s/ H, j9 W! F4 ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! v+ j) J" t" T; ]' m* I% G+ @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 _: D9 d/ Q3 s0 a7 i% o: H+ ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. \) z6 T% L1 G# J0 u: Q2 _- \I regret not dying
: B8 f7 f: M6 z" A# M" @( TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, V( d4 Q' H7 c/ A6 WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ h! @* ~& m: P, I' E' A  D( KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 [8 G/ J# _4 }  ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 Z6 I& U/ q0 P  p; c* G
- y: U  R- }0 q( g" @% e. m$ b# O. p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 b3 e0 u* j' ]5 U) X! J% O3 @0 O/ g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 c' z, `. y! d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 E) Z# j# I/ Y( H9 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! R; b* e2 M2 p) [1 p4 L3 b. p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 b- ]) E3 N8 b( j) S" D" E( A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 e: U& O$ W1 L8 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; k) H& s! q5 N0 ^4 {8 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 E( B) {6 W  U; |% E$ k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' w' F* o1 F& V! Q* r" r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% f; T/ g; I6 Q. C5 m7 r4 F<P>你无需担心</P>
$ o1 F* P2 _) v2 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- L) p* z+ y: R; \( c$ Z* K+ z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 @0 ]2 `5 I5 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: Y2 k/ E" P! O" W+ a& ^- w" p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ P  C  o: p% R. Y9 h! V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 Q: R0 m5 T; }6 A2 B/ F) _( p: y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" c( |$ @9 \3 w, S# `% H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* k  e. v3 H: @4 e( X4 d; d& x2 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ }1 \# n! \3 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  x9 ?( H& @) z+ R7 ?5 C# Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# L0 s2 g2 n' L- {" J/ x* k" @2 Z# }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ `9 Y5 r9 O; W  V; V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 ]$ k6 B  _; \7 E8 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 X1 w" S- Q# l" G# Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  i5 @- j" u4 `( m# w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 w( W% P7 ?7 s7 [* Y4 P; h3 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* M0 _* h0 \8 b  _8 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! e! q/ b$ q1 o8 _+ j; ?% v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 c) |* I7 e( Q$ n. ]1 g( H我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>