【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 Y- I% U& q' E' D6 R8 D歌词我附在后面。
% t2 K, t' u2 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, t! k( m& X5 X; l2 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 `) U. b* M0 y; {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ h/ x( B$ F' y5 {' oThe sky is happy down to its soul
( J& H# \) x0 {3 G; X9 \" {With the moon kissing it every night
# S* N; J! J# J" T/ _5 p0 G+ }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% U3 g7 l3 ~! XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' u  Y$ ?$ C) i) lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! J1 d4 I0 B6 eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# X0 p) z9 K, e; sI want so much to see inside your heart
* r9 G8 t( |4 v& j7 Q5 g9 v, {; UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  _& g: Q* f7 K: }8 H. U: NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 v1 H$ V2 V* c& t& G' A- C
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 x$ h1 Z* D9 [7 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( |) F9 d/ t) u: _) r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- F5 l" @; E8 H& D  b2 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 V0 v; n" t+ u4 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 O9 V' S6 S3 G# d! P+ B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 |  u8 i1 R  q' [$ w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* W+ {9 z( B9 R* T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! F- x! L/ ^+ r' P( A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; U# U" w6 e. N3 [# n" b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# @. Q2 A& U. y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( @1 B( m. e" h! D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 J* G. ~. e/ |, x" O3 f6 h* C2 t* k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" b  W2 c3 M- p4 T) Y1 P6 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# [: f7 g( Q9 E5 G7 P: i. Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ s; J) s4 w2 R- i" ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- _$ V% ^9 u8 d4 v) B- T7 g9 `- ~5 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, H: C0 ?/ n* F- ?# a% I1 [+ ~( x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 B) g0 b1 \# Y$ t8 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, T+ i4 M$ P6 f" c6 ^! k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 f1 {! i& F7 |$ p& {. T7 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 H% N: Y& V' `2 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( r8 U! J0 e8 J9 b% J7 v% q  F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 |( P; h: A% \" @& |0 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: U$ P) t& c2 m7 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, a& w; F+ p9 c# L% a5 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ W! T& s* S0 d# K8 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>