【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 A3 L4 a6 s! Q4 Y, y# s0 \0 [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 O5 o/ \% D) i1 b8 ~/ IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" P2 Q- D$ r% k- @+ C. GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* h6 C2 m3 t1 a$ o% ]! \4 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) {0 w: [! p1 s' n1 BYou needn’t fear anything
# S9 ]: l, c/ n& M+ RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 P1 Z8 @3 @  ]; b9 iNothing can compare to my love
/ B4 ^# u! K6 ^  J# j! ]6 {3 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, P+ n( m) P0 J( Y1 b: F5 P* r1 n' r* TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- ^3 B0 t, |: k& Y# d: D* jI’m still filled with fear
1 c5 Q! P: @# ]% b# I2 G& E8 K5 [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) Q& K" [1 w# V- ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 P( T" Y- }3 N$ OWith such a tongue as yours,
" T, |$ e8 `, u# r6 \3 P# F% BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 x% P' h" i* Q! C; A5 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ N7 s) k% i/ z; c+ @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 N% K4 U0 T; _4 g) f  q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% K4 a) C2 a" }$ S$ c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 i9 }" |& b- ]' W8 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: f" S9 w8 i7 }9 W$ T+ d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 T6 {1 A% S4 ^" \' R  q4 z: k6 t2 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, }3 r" Z& K3 g: v9 w/ d1 I$ `4 N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! ~& [* v0 e7 K; U7 [1 O8 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; @0 p/ v+ Y/ i9 o<P>你无需担心</P>
- t. p5 ~5 t' j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ |9 i/ v8 [, Q; E0 ?" g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  l4 v! e; l0 z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; g5 c0 w, i! ^! u4 ]* P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 S" \) T7 f$ q! K# x. ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 c3 s; W3 s* `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 G8 O/ U% s1 j" m( S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ P, F: \6 L& y( p/ {. r* l! J" w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, G  B2 h7 I& D: h5 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 P/ t, S6 Z) s3 y- G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ N* M( a2 j/ Z9 H* m  r% W( c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( ]( s" s4 R- t# s& L# X! a$ I) ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ p, ]. o) L$ e- o% M" b- p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 o; p) [3 r! d/ Z  C! k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 z7 Z; j8 W: L" ^, I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; y1 {9 h" m+ R2 E7 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& M9 k: ~/ ^; j  H% q: c$ n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( y! v" Y0 ]! a% i8 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ k) i) J; T; w. G3 i+ P+ J/ m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 w7 [% c, j; m1 `( T" ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>