【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. V8 _/ ?5 ^' I/ L3 n2 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( B* ^3 _# @: k/ }; |4 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 k" {2 I& h1 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* {8 k, g5 c% N0 X/ T9 ?9 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ M! l3 _  N- fWith the moon kissing it every night
5 {' ~$ W& x% Z  }# {; p" G# o4 GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 X; D6 A8 G& _6 l' X3 sYou needn’t fear anything
, j( u- v! S2 F4 A0 c+ AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  B; f& Y. }7 h4 g6 a; O+ C/ @4 W/ [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 u2 ^( y8 b9 U& e4 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 a; e+ e( O0 ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& t) j, v, Q7 t( gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 R) d5 T: m* |( e2 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: E4 _3 v/ }) c; w, l4 g5 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ _, B) S9 A+ M0 f/ A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ M: u+ l. Y) p4 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) n' o, x  d2 X0 p& {/ {: @# \6 ^" K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& a9 u! ^( O0 |* D# O' G2 z1 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 X# \# C! y4 W) Y8 `+ W4 g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 p' v- U9 a- N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! A) Q" q' f5 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# u; c0 q: S9 |9 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 u5 r; f/ T  F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& i) K1 b& \8 n$ G$ h5 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ c6 ]; |4 _: N+ [$ V+ Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ _$ k9 g9 @1 g. P& ?+ g8 r( K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- @$ `+ g3 m2 O. T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ B  d* t7 \) m9 Q  l$ W; P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* @8 H5 V  `8 ~: B8 a* z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 B+ x8 l4 p. z1 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 h0 ^" H# H: H- S" |8 z0 V2 Q6 b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ e: w8 R  G' B6 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 Z+ s; `5 d+ Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) m( G9 |6 r0 d1 f$ \( ^% F* P<P>I regret not dying</P>
. ~" r: \1 D; K* q( ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ h, k8 P, E$ [5 O3 _; e4 v+ T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 h: `( Z3 ]' [9 F' Z6 q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 u4 C9 N8 x# ]# {; p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! w8 a) Y0 P2 d4 Y# z* i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* K) @/ v/ ~. Y4 O" P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>