【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 o# V( Y* M4 u$ v0 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 R! h1 Q2 M, M0 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: I/ v9 ?  ]4 x4 L7 S! vSeeing the sky content with its love
  s3 A$ i4 U) Y! SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( O! I3 G& N# c( aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ S2 v! ~* ^: b  q( e1 J- [I love you I love you with all my heart
# l1 c" R* Z" Z3 d" E7 W* I1 C2 FNothing can compare to my love
& h* R2 q  ^# y! I3 G- i8 g( ]) vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" \$ I, H, `- b7 I# mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. L; ]- Y; U' @4 X' _I want so much to see inside your heart
7 W: B3 f' A6 L, P* kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 t0 d& l9 h7 \! X- X$ nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" L3 @1 e$ Z/ Q8 T3 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" ]- x( A7 ]5 g, z8 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 X6 s2 C5 c8 i& a, q1 j/ w1 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 c' {* P9 i6 v8 k! C% A9 \2 d3 P6 m* I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ I* m9 j+ O  d6 B' {* S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& ]* b  }9 A) }, v& s. a! p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; H/ O" d& g" i! q# m+ h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: p4 s- `7 U: m; T  _' M4 `- X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 S4 g% M  V4 J; f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 I" \% M  ^+ c9 a3 D2 v: }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* Z2 z  N! b) |) Y( d+ C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" ^5 l2 u* z2 q- C3 K1 q9 X: ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: ~( B3 Z; D9 A- }7 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: y( v, i( q$ Z0 _! |2 d+ d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, s# `2 v3 v; E) X4 h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 j% L- R0 G/ t' Z4 ^5 Y+ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' y9 o; e' s, K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; |& s/ O) r0 d; O# U1 T0 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% C' |! Y1 O8 I+ Q6 `' N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 V& s0 G( N) o( _- b( e- P! @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  e0 K7 d1 s8 n" Y) A- v4 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) Y, |4 \% T5 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 h! E- K5 O2 C) z5 r5 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& n* U6 H+ d: w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ Q  U$ [# j4 H2 V8 S' E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: `+ u: Q! P% y- q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 m" b$ a' y$ u我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; H4 @$ i9 K8 Y$ ?) d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>