【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ J6 A% j. C) n% N( d2 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 R+ T; x7 F; z+ XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ J. s( Y1 x$ F2 `8 X! DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; W. `& o( p2 @7 j* W5 wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  H) x, x* B& C$ d- N# g+ O8 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 x1 @" d3 |. S8 ~9 \5 B( LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 O% e, l9 y+ b; b1 r6 zEvery other word you utter is love
& K  |- E( T) e+ y  H/ V; s+ W, sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ q2 u9 D5 R2 `* X2 w; a1 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* k8 m& r' S( Q4 ^% P  X6 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ _/ R. b( t$ ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ J* |& ?5 P( L& b. r. ]0 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ ?- ~, K1 u. O3 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! H9 K" T1 Z$ |' n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 {! ~% w1 e( Z% F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" \# X7 G5 Q: c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! |1 K* Y4 \8 d1 X2 ~1 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! J! R! C9 T1 M# k, v2 B- K# j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* o; {1 ~' w0 d( h3 @2 u' @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 r5 L( |! G7 Z$ K" m6 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 i' \) M8 d* K- {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ Q. N; ?4 v$ a- y) m# Q, I, o' ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% [" `0 N- L, p5 P3 {) M0 C- P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" q" b+ _* s8 z, q9 f1 N8 F* i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* U$ \/ f% A. p3 O: W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' w! d6 C1 Z2 ^3 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 Z$ D: a: I, g* Z. X% L/ _. z. u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  ~0 C6 @% A* D: R5 Z8 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 W9 y$ g9 c1 V; H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 P; t) p+ u8 H& z% l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 p& V$ f: Z4 u, e, g# x. }0 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* k: J: W& ^) o) A" T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% p* K# O: w! i# q: ]! q' C# S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; a$ R; j( ~8 {- G2 K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 a7 x/ Y8 e. d1 S3 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' s; u% c4 w" V7 M/ R# b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ g9 f* s# r& P3 b9 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ H1 m( S( j/ B5 }4 c. F; [0 v6 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>