【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; B" _* V% `7 d; x  e3 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 o7 d& L+ V) K% j, ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 l: p/ k+ w4 W' `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 U! u( f; x, ?* ~/ W4 R4 @  cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' k( T9 n/ R. d, ]) `( TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, e# E: C/ U& R6 C$ z6 f( JEvery other word you utter is love
$ X- u+ m7 d4 ]- Y: \I really want to know just how much you love me
" {7 N, |; n  A3 hI love you I love you with all my heart
7 `& X: b/ G, l7 _Nothing can compare to my love
. O% i2 m' s, w; m+ SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 h! g& v. ^' N1 a. Q1 x( _1 BI regret not dying
5 u' |+ a, f8 w9 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% G; d( q4 H5 p* b1 n: a" SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 ^0 a- P7 q# j) E1 v  sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# y, \" Z9 C7 G  D: f0 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 q4 g& x+ T, ~2 Z" G  Q/ y7 G- S: K( ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 j; c4 }: c7 V0 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! j# w) b" o- m& u. _& e4 ~, p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' m1 g+ T, c  \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 l5 s) y3 `0 f- p# I, Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 B$ w: x  J' g8 U$ D& P: s& Q9 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! U* ^9 _2 \5 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- l6 M. M; ?! Y4 V0 K3 s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' v- \- }# Y" E. J5 U- ~% e) E5 h4 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ f8 H% _: A9 n& W8 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 _6 h& ^3 B3 Z8 K7 i( }+ Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 B" \# K- h2 I! I& K% {. a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 L, T8 I* n) J2 Z) G) L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, C% r: B* R: C  J) z3 x+ ?! S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! ?3 b( y0 {/ ?2 ^/ _: E" M. @- L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- q( B# E: b  Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 m5 Q: o' Y7 |. A) V* t8 O6 G8 o8 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# b8 w% i- T1 d6 r- b8 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 d# k. g! P: b+ J/ e8 N0 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" b8 p4 y: J- f. C& H! J% G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) M" R  N1 I5 L* D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) W, @' Q4 B; @' W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' }5 A6 k2 B# f5 s4 B" k  }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) O. v! @% B$ z0 u5 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. p! C2 Q: v9 j% V( h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% X" O/ r. {) k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- K% `' \3 `: E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 v$ C1 o7 x  n0 l! P6 R6 S& p: u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  P& U$ M& `* g; }5 X; P1 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! g7 k- r3 I5 t2 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; W# }+ h! T- u' t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 O1 G1 L/ j9 y: K2 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: C8 e, Y; n: F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 E. {1 v. M' V. s+ L6 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ A) B! q4 ~5 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 E+ h: n& Y" Z& C2 k' |3 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 P% f* ~8 r6 E% b2 r0 i. u7 Q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>