【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& J, }4 y( G5 V5 Z- J2 N; oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' P9 c. i1 p3 P3 ^( p9 n/ rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. e9 Z, I7 s/ E4 z9 x  LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 Q3 F$ m% q2 U+ \1 {  DEvery other word you utter is love
, C9 U( g5 x& t4 s" lI really want to know just how much you love me
. r. S# [8 Q# [9 G& C7 w! bI love you I love you with all my heart
" l9 r% c, w4 I# NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; U0 y( _# x- bWith such a tongue as yours,
6 C8 P, ?: C3 M# o! JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ `" d( q" h+ L- L; `9 m, u0 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 p, E& X8 F: ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ H* i# A* `6 j, b4 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% w3 ~1 t8 H9 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 m4 _; m1 Q! \6 w( y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 P) _. b: R7 `" p8 M2 E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 b' B3 M. |/ a' H9 I( u5 l, F0 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) P  x# @4 u+ Y5 G" ~6 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( r# j6 J9 ]+ P7 a: d7 J8 J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' o/ L$ W( T/ Q) K2 h: p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' R! k. s* V8 w0 q4 J% |; h) n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) D, u& t& d, e0 F+ V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 Z( `, J. }( P5 {! G# s* E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: I" ^, Q9 B8 |: @- f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" ^5 j0 J# G- E, f( i5 v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' y5 u3 r! \# V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% C: ^! g2 Y# O- _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 a2 O1 ?1 n& @6 D( E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) D( v7 F. c' `! T0 I( G7 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ z' n! O/ \1 U3 I7 _* o( r  L<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 ^" z- h' ~5 `1 |$ O$ a$ Q/ m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ h% ]' l' C" x9 z; q! e2 R6 E' m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' {% K# H, d, v* {* |8 [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- [% n. t% `9 J6 g: s% H) c" ?# V! Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* e7 G; P& D! |9 B$ [/ Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, c1 l0 X/ n0 F4 K/ l4 P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% y7 c% U* y# D+ I% Z9 `5 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 s, G1 c1 `. {" T8 E# }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 \) V+ ?9 O7 G) E" o( b$ X5 @4 }% F  I我请你剖开它
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# L8 O5 r5 i6 R: e  C, a8 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 g- c8 _5 {$ B6 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>