【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! Y1 a3 l# h! e7 _( n; \, j6 C: c歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- j, R8 J) u* p+ h) B  k* AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! S- I8 r5 [+ g! CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 B8 J7 A# m# `* ?; `The sky is happy down to its soul
  g1 O6 {, q2 H6 y% a' HWith the moon kissing it every night
. y, U/ d" _1 n) Q% |' WSeeing the sky content with its love
% a  I! `* J* |! P, D. hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# s4 |! d# R' i% c' B! pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 _  i+ \( N3 N$ D" p9 W1 s2 hEvery other word you utter is love
2 U  B' K0 x0 r1 s, Z$ _I really want to know just how much you love me
* q" l6 @* a8 F' p5 ^6 D/ qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 b2 @  a( n8 ]' h* O* eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, ?8 O6 S, b! N0 M3 R2 cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( O3 G8 a$ ]$ |! u  N. b0 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 Q; B: C9 c$ ]/ l- GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ w3 j7 v" L6 {7 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) S+ Y* U. E) j& w2 I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 u% k# [! c3 N  r' h  n* q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* [+ C9 P" U* ~" v  M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* m) C* d, v5 F3 B: w1 T5 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( u: C0 ^% b/ F/ v$ Y% k# p& D+ J3 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 c3 j. y2 H; l4 n+ Y5 J1 ~( f1 W. C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' x" t( X! `/ h& l5 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' G/ H3 J1 f6 l6 O) M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 C+ y/ \0 H+ W2 W" V- h<P>你无需担心</P>
+ N8 Z7 U5 c: y- v/ T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# f' o% R" R4 p2 Q3 r& h# e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ r3 z3 a8 `' C+ n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 g7 e/ j1 [+ @, }. K  G+ w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 a( l5 Z8 w; u. O! ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# c& W# i/ V2 W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 b2 e+ E7 f7 @  V' ~- z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 M8 \: l0 k8 C% m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, N. s! Q' r) y0 W3 P) x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ `* }! m  H& Z* d/ @' ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' n$ H* I5 Z, q5 w( D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 k5 j' m+ g3 k# `0 |) ?9 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! U6 Y- e, T: o/ O6 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 R) Y: S# q8 e9 ^( t( c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. y/ ?! x$ i& X# i" [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* @( {$ M9 O' A9 ?) [1 S  K* [' |: |$ H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# E+ b  ]' }) E0 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ p7 I3 }. F# I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 P0 o/ N5 @, C+ T  F- {. H2 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! o& K9 J  J9 G8 b4 y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>