【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, ~4 p6 t+ I* u6 p8 ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" {; F  N) ^* R6 F- ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 t5 C# u- X  ~. }1 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* S/ S2 {/ P0 QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, `+ H  M+ m5 }4 tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  w- l9 u1 G2 j  C5 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
5 A7 j- e9 G( w6 YNothing can compare to my love
& k( l6 ?- o. i! `) ~/ n- N, R! l; ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( ^* q" p9 g+ {$ _0 X) m6 WI want so much to see inside your heart
. Z0 o; \, f; n& u4 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: u+ L5 h8 g! B2 c! nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( N3 G2 v( l1 t) V0 i0 V- MI regret not dying
* ]( h4 M; D$ @; VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, s# X5 R: U) w2 w/ X& [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: A& [/ v/ a# u+ f. }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" @7 W. O! s) a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) D2 P+ }' C+ R( U' G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 k4 k% j# a# s. D9 |2 n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  ?5 `9 V7 A5 d3 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 k; Y$ g4 D. t: d5 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 X) K( X, ]& V. Z3 B' r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, Y/ O1 S4 {1 n$ x4 {* `2 c0 X$ d0 a, G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; b7 k) x! M, A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* _% h# ?) o% k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" h2 v" b5 P! _: }. r# c/ O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 U8 u* V- H8 C' `" F0 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" l! h3 f5 N3 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 T) Q1 }# |; [7 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! c4 U4 A* [$ j  O0 r! i- q3 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: G+ S# {  p" S- O1 g$ w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 p; F" W. m% g+ N0 K" P4 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 C7 h4 v. n3 Z6 q! _- G% V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& }" B1 G2 z5 z9 ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 {  H( T1 C+ L7 t& N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! ?0 M1 J. w3 M! R! h& z" V" y* B& R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 j/ ^/ m5 n! G1 u+ R; B! @  K. {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>