【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( w3 k$ t3 @. H  f& w0 G) ?1 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- _3 ^/ S3 t) e- UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 K3 G3 N, b5 ^8 {- v9 N: }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 h9 I2 A/ T$ B2 R. kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, b+ Y$ `6 T) S6 r: N1 @The sky is happy down to its soul
+ P# N- ?) N' C4 gWith the moon kissing it every night
* o8 f' B0 E' ZSeeing the sky content with its love
, |" W: M2 B- M; E$ g1 tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- A+ `) ]1 b( h& ?* D1 iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 G6 h2 S' \9 i  V4 wI really want to know just how much you love me
/ @8 ?8 y/ G: S, _5 @6 p4 Y0 u: CI love you I love you with all my heart
0 J" |( M) {* R2 o+ dNothing can compare to my love
7 x3 \6 [- c) B# q6 G- b% n; F1 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. G* l. w# P6 U$ `/ y) aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ^& x9 j5 A# D5 W" PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ i+ ~7 U) u7 Z5 _8 OI regret not dying
4 \% f+ T) g0 f# f1 U( `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ W# _- Z1 G6 A$ ^% dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 W! x& `6 f8 `/ l# PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, t- D% L0 n3 g) K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ i5 k1 g- u6 ]9 Z7 q, x* _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) M* m4 E& Z* A/ g( `2 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% C  s" d" w9 \, q/ v; j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. ?- {' {9 O" C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ A: o4 U9 ?* J$ c# L1 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 G" F1 g  y6 @+ n* s2 o& e1 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 \7 e5 n3 k: u. G+ t4 X* a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( l% T/ L( y9 W& o: m& C4 O; q: C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! m% F( Y* b7 l4 r6 _0 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: {* B  Q4 p( u- W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! O2 s: C. d& B" _/ Q/ e2 ?3 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. i( [0 i8 S! O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 w# Y" B0 e: n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 [. d/ q8 ~( V! y9 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% l2 v: ?& v8 S# K8 f3 y9 e" G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) D( [5 N- [1 Q9 p$ }5 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 N8 z0 |3 W5 f. D" J3 U2 b/ X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: i+ Y! {) U* K4 S: z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: i+ j+ B9 f# f0 L1 G$ l3 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" G5 L. |' G$ d& V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  Q+ U9 b% [$ Z( x( {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 i3 ^2 }$ M, Q% l$ b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 i" `( ^5 P% n/ n9 b- j4 h* }5 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, D7 q6 n, V) z+ L我请你剖开它
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: I& O8 K. b9 v( [, B+ v# p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* }4 o) t: n: A* E1 l0 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>