【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  k3 C6 u6 ^6 s, q. R9 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% V( d. t; L" h. o( OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 f. k, h& j: d' i' M! O7 q/ N# mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* s6 n/ \- {, W1 P0 k' E/ ^" JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ u/ v' b) J$ fYou needn’t fear anything
! @. ~9 l$ T& p+ X6 l, a5 T. `2 b$ I8 bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! l+ R) _2 Y( yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 Q! y9 [" `# }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: m' k5 |- D) a5 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 T; W" p6 p; M) ^( `" O9 ?2 D% SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 b! t; g: Q3 |1 q3 r/ m9 W0 L; bI’m still filled with fear
* i$ f* i( `3 i* P* c4 T7 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& T/ Z2 v+ g8 v2 Q% ?. s9 f: NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. G. }4 x0 n, J+ X# l% M6 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 v" c" U$ j! n; ~7 x7 M  K9 E, F" j: W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, j; C. M9 E2 F2 x% V& h3 Z% V0 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* A6 T7 v# G( x5 {0 B/ y$ M6 \1 j% `1 ~& _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' U: S# A) s! s: Z2 ~- q: m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 S( Z5 p! A7 S5 `, W+ A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- _- I' V) M" P! ~' S* C0 W( H7 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, |' R3 N/ F, P. _7 P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ {, d- Y9 w: M: b) n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 w7 u5 ~3 g6 j# W) k3 _7 r2 }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* ?' W# H) B/ ?/ B7 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( Y" ^2 U3 e; G2 `! n1 _& v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 u  R, T) R2 `' y  X: k; V& t6 C- _  V) U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* B  i; C6 W' s3 x' Y' l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( g* m6 H' V0 C1 g% X! D3 ?/ n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ j: s5 j! H4 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: M5 Q: a/ T0 J1 U/ l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 J7 O  l( F$ n' k- q9 j3 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ j- J+ b9 f8 u- Q8 Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 d" S! O  L" Y  O% ^2 W% V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- M8 Y; q7 L  E/ p; I' h, G% X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, M9 M: W3 _5 M$ A- I2 f4 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" Q0 J+ _- \+ `. y+ S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 d5 W" s" T: U& }4 }' l* e* f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# }6 W# ?; P2 j/ l6 T# c1 D8 `  M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 X6 W4 u6 a3 ^5 Q/ O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. N! G6 T9 j( |- p& b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& y$ [5 f$ L4 o- |1 [. Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 B8 j4 f& e: N7 K. M) F2 |& N8 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 t0 l0 O8 {  a- z& R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: y' s  w1 q$ {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 m7 Q, S* O, _( F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 j; J3 `- w( a; K# n0 Q4 v( f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ v$ S" g! Z5 W9 P8 s" h- l我请你剖开它
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* s# d0 u, N9 T% c0 f" x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' d4 _! j) @0 O. a& s, W8 y5 F( ?& z6 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>