【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 ^' o. v4 m' T; Q0 A- c; OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# M, y$ `- E4 e4 y5 H$ z5 B+ o; `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, e* C! B) S# T+ d1 q/ y4 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ H& n) C7 s+ B$ ^/ G1 n) M. Q, P# ?- \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 ^! |4 ~$ \. ?/ pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 T: l  T9 M4 [# A* HYou needn’t fear anything
* R5 I1 E  q/ H/ H5 L% E4 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' n+ N7 e1 W3 @0 X  C5 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" N! P3 H& h- }  eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, C5 \& @4 f) G  ZWith such a tongue as yours,
! a4 J7 [# `: g6 U0 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, m2 x- D( z8 E/ EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& Z. _" y+ }+ t6 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 ?2 |* S! ^. \3 I4 Y/ T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" o3 _* k& g6 `& g9 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& |$ w' }; X0 i& `- U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 r4 b; k' d2 d) k% w# `9 I% @* k: F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% C% ~* n( L" G. F% t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% s4 u$ |1 O7 ]" s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  o2 C/ Y  R) C- s7 o  d3 d! i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ X$ o' v  \$ d0 g) k: H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" [1 ~) c, v4 C- q# `- m# f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# H) w9 u4 I' c, u1 g& _/ }<P>你无需担心</P>
- `. d# x- @9 i8 x7 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' d+ [4 G; w: e6 j& Y$ D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 _& P6 h6 V& E) @9 j; K9 Y) y+ C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% k5 o0 s! F3 A, x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' C* |4 V/ B, f; K, W. V7 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 ^  p8 _# D  S$ O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 R) z' O5 S2 q1 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 d! A; o0 A( D$ {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ w5 l7 L) R: b, g7 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- b2 _9 a& K) P) ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" r; t6 s9 F* s& u( N/ X# y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 U# v5 R) Q6 r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( N# S+ ^8 o) A: V+ R  r% N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, t8 e' b  U$ A+ c# }! I  l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( w5 r' p; e8 f4 o  T: Q# E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( J" M* \" X9 Q. \. y( y' ^7 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  K( G; o/ X8 Y' {6 V% Q2 j* P0 b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* |- m1 q" }7 g( O6 X: H9 O6 v, E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  v1 V6 s' `  ]6 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 Z) T; a1 Z! Y. s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 w8 I9 f1 _4 D6 Y2 H. H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>