【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 b% m( Y  D# `; S) V6 o6 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 S8 r$ V" S; j/ A  u+ ^# Y+ EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) |7 i& u' r5 S- L8 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% `+ d1 |4 w3 C% v# ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 C5 p, a0 W6 {& O  CEvery other word you utter is love
1 n+ ^- j* m: {& ^% c. II really want to know just how much you love me
, N1 v, w8 a1 |- z, D# LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 g( {3 r1 N$ GI want so much to see inside your heart
* f7 y3 X" O* j, g( l$ i9 b0 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. u' k# K' ^, L' E+ i' ~6 O) |6 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% M0 K( X0 h) w# c6 Z% b, yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- w/ r" f2 M% v* }, r( JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 J- c+ C5 p5 s8 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ ]: C  i* Z  _3 o( u9 l7 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, _1 A( G3 w/ O+ y3 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# E: ?& Q4 ^6 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, ]" J1 S# y4 X' S: a; z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; r  x3 K! `) `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* f4 L9 X- B9 c7 P/ ?( o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ l4 r5 ]: A: }0 c/ p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. G6 N" r- X8 u1 F, z' {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 T! c7 H8 Y9 X' N& E& \6 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 s# \( P- m% E. i. o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 e! h1 h. f; c: @7 a5 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 ^  o3 |" A6 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. V2 \  o. S. C7 {: p% z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 v9 @; f! o! [$ w* l! @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" w; N. x4 u0 g) V  G3 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 M- X. L  {' Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ t" ^$ T' V% q4 A2 H1 d/ J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 {4 `) D6 B" _- g9 B* p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 |+ Y) J3 X+ g5 T$ H7 C3 y& C( Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% \/ a1 L: Z& s0 [, M1 G. `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& O% m( J% k- A3 k" C9 a( [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 t/ @  l1 k0 B9 g0 ~. b% s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 O# H% r% v/ L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' b3 F+ e4 D$ }: f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 L- @4 s0 t1 H* z& ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 R$ |# b  v* V1 o我请你剖开它
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2 r6 w, w6 r' l8 L5 \+ i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 e: ^5 Y. b7 o+ y( H" t2 t9 g$ p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>