【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) E3 U  f* w# A+ l! U4 i( I* TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. C' Q& r% @( sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# c! M, V9 I2 A% h5 p/ CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" L# H# e, r1 TWith the moon kissing it every night
1 I  W1 I0 u. H3 j% M; tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: Y5 h) S( {6 j! V8 B3 ~& XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) x; K4 i( y# C0 F, [, R1 u, O4 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 V: w% [$ P7 E" x) \/ AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 ]2 W6 D/ Q( [" x$ QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& h2 x" F% e1 s7 lI regret not dying
3 U. Y& b$ C9 T( nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ t" v( p' M1 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- I, J. @8 G, Y" _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( J7 k0 w6 m/ k5 d6 |4 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 l4 p9 `; D/ U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( i. q' q# ~$ {  @9 N8 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 Z- L7 y& i4 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ D2 r# s; v( F3 N# x) f6 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ t0 a7 R  t( j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" B# n% l- W' W6 p) C! b7 z1 V  G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" A* n. _# Q3 S- @* ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: v# K+ l5 }) `! L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 R9 @  p- [& R5 U4 a' `( c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ A: F$ C; J# S; I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 G9 C* \) D3 d, m8 s  A# b2 m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' k% K: p1 W* w9 z9 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 Z9 }; U3 `: m2 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 d& @  s- |- P7 W# z# N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 `. d; y) n) }1 W0 z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& w2 z* ?9 n- K$ f4 A2 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 s- M) P) x$ M, U' Z: Z. E6 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 `& C( @2 O* B; v1 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& h1 ~  Y  N, G, Q) U" }/ ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 K% e1 F  u6 k1 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 R5 Z5 N, V. f' p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# Q: ~" d" R* f+ {3 n: |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 S& |; a. z/ L: v! l6 ?/ T( G7 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 B9 M! ?2 q( o, e& S9 V9 A% N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 F  g1 j- P7 n; J, G* k* z) y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% J; O; K, m& r) R3 B5 o" j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ j# {4 F* L  O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& u( n/ R; V9 d7 h: ^% Q2 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* ^- z* O) F  M, B; G0 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( j6 ~8 Y+ v4 v# Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* I3 Q2 ~  U+ L7 ]9 P. ]9 x# q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>