【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- i. H. h/ U- Q3 l; J; _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, S) B" a5 s; c4 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& A9 X. k  W$ G5 ~, WThe sky is happy down to its soul
; j1 ~* Q" w, {1 a, YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, v2 p0 g  T# ~! s# [: DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ }+ D- l9 ~, T6 S9 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) q- Z7 ?, p& ]$ oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ I2 ]; y- |9 W0 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! ^# ?4 T5 q6 yWith such a tongue as yours,
" }. L7 e( z7 C, b1 @6 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) h4 f3 f2 V- w9 v/ T: MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, N' f  m+ r. k0 C' g9 c% E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 d+ L  U7 M, `5 |1 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& `  T6 T4 {% L7 f( Y* o( w6 c/ E) f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 R/ A" D! N( P- m6 j' U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 Q6 c+ Z. a2 T* P7 w6 V, y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" m) a. ^$ O, v; b$ o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 K+ D. x# k4 l# T' l! S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 I+ J. C8 @+ V5 `/ ], w$ J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ w1 t8 L/ [; ?; [  e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ k/ r8 F  d1 R) ~5 f$ u* c( B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 g! Z' c8 c# ?# M# Y6 s; ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, n# R9 G+ n( ^. t6 R. i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  M. u- r( b( v3 J8 k' q$ Z0 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# r$ ~0 D  t/ k8 Y! X# A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 m3 M; y$ M- i6 h, K- m% m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  _" m* U3 c4 H6 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 k" H/ ]1 O0 w2 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% {( r% K  e9 }9 {: ?" ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 v% `4 h2 I3 s$ |3 C" H% C9 n: S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. [, L) k7 j  e8 |/ {2 f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ^1 {8 w  d# [. r, u  u6 C9 S3 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& e7 E. e3 ]* P3 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  q3 [0 |% `' y; U, U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" ~: o4 N6 b* v6 a1 ~3 {4 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# e$ e& j. h' e7 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ s- w  g! v; t5 }' M+ `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, z9 c/ Z0 s) x8 |$ o2 g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 h3 {9 w9 e: M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, N! h0 S" I' r6 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( _# ~8 A2 ?4 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) N5 L. h9 b" x; z5 \6 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& t( O; q( T8 g7 n: U3 v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# N/ U0 }- _. D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ _  f$ p5 e6 S1 c$ N* g. N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>