【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, j0 [$ o  b# @1 S& m9 Q0 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 b0 S: F1 L- `3 M& W9 CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( {; X- P  f. H/ W7 jWith the moon kissing it every night
2 @# M  u# C; D5 W4 t& dSeeing the sky content with its love
0 d$ C& ^! L" g1 l, ^1 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* [3 ?/ U  h0 s( W6 LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ i5 x' Q, N  N6 HI love you I love you with all my heart
1 t6 X. [6 |% ^: G- MNothing can compare to my love
- y; B1 c) C; t" x* x( ^( Y2 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" a3 l% M1 F( {0 [% LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" C  h2 D& o- y" l8 WI’m still filled with fear
1 [" d& K" A' h) iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 v" u0 r/ b) W% A2 @  FI regret not dying
  @+ l4 b8 d( ~* u4 f$ OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 K2 f/ r: ?  E( K# AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 ^8 c% {+ h+ G+ p) {& W# ^* q  MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) D" C6 M0 M  f1 D& ~. y% ?% b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- Y. x! p4 f1 \- M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ H8 ]' ?" A/ a9 {0 ?* g& p' _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, R$ ?' f' A0 v& F0 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% U4 M' [8 m' [; e* y6 Y8 s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; w! \4 a0 J9 K7 y- |5 D$ X5 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ W& [" s: d% g  ?) C- R% E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 i0 f& j, l& m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, F' v$ \* O8 A& f. N. l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 N4 _; {+ r' y3 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 v3 y3 r- `6 Y- ^- I5 {" ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 V3 s: Q) S  F' c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: x- a# t! q7 e! d1 g, H7 V- I7 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 ?7 m; f9 b9 Z0 m2 p- ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* e+ U8 J& g4 n' U7 E" u1 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 d( e6 Y; j' k5 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: R5 h6 t* B6 J1 W- Z; y; X! y4 ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 l! x; K" b0 R2 }# t' Q4 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 Q& B9 K3 z" C6 ^" N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- ~& @0 K8 T+ Y3 x3 b# G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 C( f/ G/ }6 M) U/ K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- T# [" Y$ r+ u: C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: D1 E5 `7 ^5 p- G# w# [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 [3 q4 c$ [( Q0 C/ g* v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* k5 R, g  |: D+ S: e: r( l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  c. L% r1 R( C2 r0 t+ g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! I1 l* `/ F* I/ k, G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  Y! w7 ~4 `7 I7 b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 |0 y# _! H' I' q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 P% R# Z" @- z" `' F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 O6 g* i; c) a1 ^; k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 l! [! M+ F$ T& L, b3 h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 G7 q# \& M+ _( N5 r0 {8 ^) ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>