【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 ]" O2 I- ]. b9 V' P( e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, N- L) B& }; O0 z1 x$ R$ Q" rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 m. I  w2 J+ }/ u. J! `! EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 ]6 B; c% ]! l( y* z- S5 D( ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 ?2 E, A( {/ ?, V4 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 p1 M* |4 W, G. j2 DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, M/ ]: B6 d9 ^: \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- E# T2 u5 y  ?" {) j6 `* j( YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 H9 Z1 `/ Z0 Y" R3 I( a  ?/ ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. T0 J3 T- h8 {+ `" sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% q8 @6 Q$ @- ]8 K2 `2 EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; q' |/ @% a0 r' S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) _' t0 h- g2 f* e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- w; Q; ?2 U- p, \# T- W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 C3 R5 q5 G: M6 x9 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 h4 B% x: B9 J0 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. a* ]9 j1 |- `1 J0 Q6 G2 R( t/ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 L! p) H) z+ Z1 x0 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 _4 c! V) N2 H! c. C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% S. [# @- u+ w- f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 b6 Q, f6 R( W* L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# q; c! L3 \$ G- Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 N3 A5 D6 p/ b9 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' u' s, b0 ~4 }. V' l: s7 `$ w2 \- E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& `  l2 B. e% g8 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 \) p; h# q' I5 v4 n& w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; z0 F" K0 U7 g+ W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ Z! i- d6 O+ F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ R# w5 ?2 o* q! g4 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 b7 U# a% [) b  U* b* E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ i! s, u) F/ O6 Z* S3 j/ f$ b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' O8 R7 d5 _+ ?+ q4 B8 C6 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: n7 Z5 z8 c2 r& i/ G2 l& h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" d0 H2 y& f( S  E7 @/ ]/ W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 O7 N. u; `6 f# _# P7 _, h$ K<P>I regret not dying</P>
- z: f; g1 U3 t/ Q8 D  K, t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! C" ?6 H1 ]& [/ z$ w# j( g7 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ h  u8 K6 ?' S, l- x4 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( w- H" A2 s2 w- k) M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, I+ K8 V3 @6 O! l& [$ F6 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' u, _. w6 w; x2 L3 n我请你剖开它
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8 @) I; A3 W  W( s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 ^  O5 D" ~9 c* ^2 t! y/ C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>