【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# y( F1 u  ^9 \# M( e- i3 x( L" eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  E$ _0 F$ E' a% YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: f/ h, [. t' O- U* @' }9 s! WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) z) X# y! q  U0 B, d* n+ \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- e8 {% z; U: }: j( `Every other word you utter is love
. J) m2 T' Y- {8 E: T. }I really want to know just how much you love me
$ K. y, c8 j4 s) r7 y9 x! ?% }I love you I love you with all my heart
! @. p' }; U! Q+ N% rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) x; ^' M+ K/ V$ F2 x3 k! e& \I want so much to see inside your heart
& ?: J) k9 E, T: E8 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 A2 M+ h! d$ X3 r  t* J( lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 h# U- @% ^) c/ L. h4 |# x( DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- R" w& N$ Q4 u- j) h2 u6 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* I* Q8 m* j. O0 bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ j! [# `; s/ a- l% O9 W" O7 M, I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* F- _5 {( V* i. x7 z" N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  c( A& V& k8 a* m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# F8 g2 \; _3 [( a% ]# E5 Z8 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: C3 L. [5 B: i9 f) P6 ^. A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! Y2 s6 t' G: O) k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: {! M* s& z* I! B! S  I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" l+ z2 f3 H9 e( X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ a- R; X8 G$ R' `8 e+ h+ O! }6 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, R8 Z! O' t( I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" q. S9 O  w. _: {& B9 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: t' S' T: H; ~! S# }) u. j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 c2 Z* W) }3 Y, x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ K9 z# r1 F/ B' x9 L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# C" `  d% j, m; k* Q% ]$ {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 p* K3 D4 {1 f9 l( {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& H3 I& [& O. r. \  m  u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ S2 d% E3 j& @/ a" \  ^  x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! I- Z0 F: |6 _( B; s1 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, P0 ]) M$ f( z5 Y4 e: G: e2 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 l8 P6 D( \& Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 o% J5 H2 m" j/ D3 H. t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" a- u8 _) U; g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, j; S: U2 ~0 p5 o9 h1 u* {. N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. q- o. X* z% v% B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 n+ ], o* F5 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 O3 Z, |8 x# j: p) m6 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ \1 A" q7 H7 V/ w, A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. w# n8 ~% S' ^% O+ q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 N% C/ c4 B4 U& L% }$ v, x* D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 U8 ~& j/ F$ }  |  U' J% F' T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 ^0 m( g' ?; z; P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- o% M1 q. q) e  w/ @" ?1 L) A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 B2 R0 d9 f0 i! Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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