【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ M  O# ^) d  b0 p% f" `8 N1 k歌词我附在后面。
3 x) O2 v" }* h  s& @; q# v+ EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 o8 |+ d+ e: l: i  H* W8 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ t: A8 A! e8 }+ L! w, JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& _5 B3 ^4 a2 _8 Z# _2 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 Y+ W2 i0 {, A+ R% _" eYou needn’t fear anything
3 c( M# d  a6 f+ z/ ?/ |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ i; b. @0 O' J! t" BNothing can compare to my love
. R* G7 U4 b& @- Q, CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 @7 Z/ ~+ ?: F/ T* ~, ^3 vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, P0 f) R8 J' ~' z" dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 u. F# f; K" \0 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, p" i, L+ t9 L: G, }' S: JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 S" S1 p: ^8 _4 J8 Z; C( CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 G5 k. d) j" S2 D# t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; P0 y) S. N# H# S/ g3 M5 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 }) N3 \- q! w% V0 A0 b7 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 d* F, S9 K, j+ w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ G. K: B, f/ R# `4 t7 g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 K6 T" z2 C: k- z  L4 \7 R2 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 t$ j3 J6 r% R5 K* T: P8 [( j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" Z, l4 ]; V. G5 K% m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ b( p" \6 h% _  E3 t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! v% c0 w  |, Q9 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' f" p! }  _- P0 s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' C( H! k2 F7 Y- F4 M4 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# h; ]8 e  S. _9 s& O0 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& ]4 t- t  H8 C* I5 |% _4 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 B( a8 `+ K& z% K8 Y( ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. x$ _5 C: A3 k; ?/ b) t# |6 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 K0 m9 B% t; h  G% J5 k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 X+ X2 F2 @9 m( r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* l* T7 n3 Y3 D. `& q) x# V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; f: q0 k8 t) \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! j$ w" W% e! i$ u: a* _1 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' W; V2 k6 ?, f" N, y: x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: L  e- C- A/ C: w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 Z; v% A' J: [. D& f% s<P>I regret not dying</P>
( ^* d( a# E, @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 ^- p4 H* a' L; u1 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. n/ \1 L$ u0 ~6 n8 R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* A* I( l: C2 {1 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" V" ?8 e$ J8 c) h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, ~+ G0 C9 Q& e& o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  C' M* i( I- {1 P+ @5 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 V0 S! T& t3 \1 O# u! K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 ]+ k0 Y& D" Y0 D$ C我请你剖开它

2 o0 b, X. I2 t6 a% u5 \0 @  r4 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. V, p2 U* R/ l; Y2 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>