【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  `, R& _; l) A2 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& u. K- y0 s! [, v8 o- ^! xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ q$ ]0 d) z7 X+ q8 p" L+ t# \! W6 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 ]6 r* \* g+ n- a$ ?) IWith the moon kissing it every night
  n8 h4 Z0 s# M/ c. B3 JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. ]; ^: Q. L( z2 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ x5 O1 C( l% D& hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ D5 V+ N' ?; ^+ ~4 T. E7 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, y4 K; T, d+ X9 M0 WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! e6 U/ X: {; \7 c& E/ }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 Q+ q" i8 n6 {& qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  S  E* z% {# [3 v+ eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 t' w; m: i6 L3 K$ R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 |. N; F) S; X; L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 A3 Z$ J, b' ]6 a# ?1 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, s. C3 n" t$ d3 r& R& A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 T% t: Y4 Y8 O# P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 r% ]0 X! L* _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# A5 S+ {; }1 z1 ]. T: F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( E3 y. w5 a5 V) j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 L9 T& o  H) o6 V+ S<P>你无需担心</P>
7 z+ M* |3 L- V5 F- d  g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% M5 O. A. U& z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- D9 x3 C. D* D  I) }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 v  i0 p% z! @0 g4 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 O5 U/ j5 ]! a  }) B  h  u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ h+ ?& i1 y+ t; p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) n* W- D! w, s% F* s" S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 f* z: M$ v0 A, {, D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ G5 i& I" Z& J: Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 f: t" r/ l7 O+ O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>