【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: j  {. Z# Z9 O4 L, I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: g" f& i& d. e6 R7 o6 H  L2 c* cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( T4 h4 p' l2 U: y1 d' UWith the moon kissing it every night
1 L. I* t8 |& W" _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* A8 t- G& ]! N6 K2 U. eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 E9 r) |4 b8 L9 R# m  KI really want to know just how much you love me
! t+ u( o2 |* aI love you I love you with all my heart
  a9 y( E0 {" P! {6 Q/ P: t5 H  ~* |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 k$ ]+ V2 I: r8 FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% u% ~0 G! |: S9 j/ `) A# VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* ^' b% m4 d: ~# W9 B  A! \6 T  FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 `3 J1 D" p3 z5 NWith such a tongue as yours,
$ A+ M; y6 A- I  H' P9 }+ N7 Q( dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- I# p* {, V" w+ x5 p; ^% w$ }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  o/ [  l4 z$ q7 w. c! Z( u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ t2 Y$ o7 b7 ^7 O! e/ k* _% ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  u. C& T( i; W) b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 e. v) C/ P  k& L# u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* {3 L" W. E6 K" s' h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( w* w# e7 m! T. x4 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% z& B0 |3 B( H# L1 z2 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 c7 c$ @8 b6 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' D! I- Z* |$ R- E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- G' V& m4 b+ |: b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% [" w0 P6 ~6 B' B; O" ^/ X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) G4 |( P9 g! n* o2 k  i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 C/ d8 w1 m2 T, N$ Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: `+ N! J  v$ a* v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& N3 D/ T% P, f4 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* |6 B& o7 n( j( P9 g$ e4 P/ D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 W6 v) r& W5 ^3 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 }* b  E9 H* W7 W  e3 m& S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 X( f5 W; s* l( `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ M. X1 ]0 S+ h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, Y+ r2 C3 G! i# A% b- \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 N# P, X) z0 H9 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; W% V9 `- O& h, ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* c3 H1 F+ P9 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
: ~1 {9 m/ l6 H8 C3 U, y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" B: N  w+ p0 B) T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) Z% N$ I6 D0 T' M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 e# T. r( [; L4 G8 y, c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>