【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* X' w  ~: J- U6 q" p1 g; c* }歌词我附在后面。
, ?' P9 b4 A: r( h' HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 b) _5 ^0 E% U0 L( W2 f7 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 M; b& F9 S/ ]1 Y9 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' [7 T# ^- d+ |% b. M7 n8 P! wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, K$ g1 ^; Q8 P2 p0 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ a, Y2 e0 `' g! n$ ~; aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) s# R0 K" R# D1 o' jI want so much to see inside your heart
" Y- K) x8 {, M4 aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 _4 u, W2 m# ]9 ^2 t1 b+ M/ h6 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 I9 B2 ^, \( j1 JI regret not dying
1 Q' \) Y2 N4 w; k9 @  `+ ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( s' X7 _; Z6 w5 |# v, j- g$ q! J4 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 y% u3 q3 [$ x& f5 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! [  G8 |  }( a( T* @$ F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- }3 ~# M5 b- ~4 L& |( z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: V+ ]( o) D3 B3 S2 `. p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 ]4 ?# \( Y  Y, b8 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' C1 _/ K& o) E. U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: e8 a! ?" O5 b8 Z! W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 U. A1 u, C8 p5 u! k% x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  V& s0 O  J4 ]0 Q# V0 d+ K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! {/ A% Z2 C! y0 O* q6 a) t( I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" ]$ i1 ~$ L5 I' Q1 V6 a; F  @# F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 w9 S: {) t! M' l7 B4 w9 P' i* `5 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* m: w6 q0 U: v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 o& x& e8 ~$ R( V1 n# J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 L8 c' t' A: K) r; U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  u; V+ k) X0 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 H' [7 P8 X+ L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% K" d1 ~: V* i6 `; \3 Z+ }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. _8 e: A. r: y6 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; Z- Q( U+ b- h% w- J7 U" \) ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 j2 N# [9 u0 ~5 p% O8 h4 D1 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" L0 o( i; L9 I# m! e7 J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 d" n# Y$ E' Y9 X6 ^  C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" h* _/ O( r8 @+ w$ U' F! R+ E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, B8 w9 D1 H9 {4 n+ |, q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ w$ I3 w6 O/ ?0 b7 n0 ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# s* ^: n- {- H1 H- Y, e我请你剖开它
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: x; y5 r3 P4 Q) {/ R/ p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>