【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ Z5 R/ o8 U* z" a) OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 L& Y7 k( k7 A( t! G9 a  VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 g& r/ Z3 k. X# \! d9 w; {1 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 z* p, U( C  w& @7 eSeeing the sky content with its love
& O' G9 f, o6 X0 n8 h# l" }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 l2 |5 k# T; bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( ?# ]7 G8 T$ A4 j9 Z2 b3 oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 w0 t' [" ?' w8 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  b3 c3 \8 p8 \/ N8 s+ O% E1 u- g" pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 e+ t( T' P8 ?* e/ iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- E2 U- _6 E0 D& RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 R" K3 R8 N1 }# u* }0 BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. n8 E$ S6 ]! F9 x0 F# TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& L3 v) M) k: n. e1 u* U! _. v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ O4 T6 m) ^$ {5 ?) [; Q. m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! U" [: |, ]1 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) m( U  u' B( K+ o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 Z1 w/ v7 l) F" W% \. A8 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 p$ [& ?  n' @, q+ R$ `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ A8 R: Y1 |( p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! }* ]. s  _- t" W. i5 `<P>你无需担心</P>
3 D) F! s7 x; q4 @/ ]1 M0 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) f8 N& W6 u' L1 |% O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ O" Z  Q; ]2 ^  E" w2 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 w: e& K, y8 e; ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( _7 A) C2 f% V& \" N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 C4 P) R7 G4 z% C; x0 |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! E% T  m& v# p5 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, U- n* u/ M) l0 m3 C2 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ g& z) p) ~) {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 }0 {/ R. [& W% m" H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 ?0 t/ L/ O& x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, x* h- G7 d& h. J8 Q& F: t+ ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 \/ Y6 X+ x( I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- c* q; @9 S. `0 A% S$ d5 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" a- P" s3 l8 a. ^6 b- C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 o- H, H) `" d! E' g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 L& Q7 D* ]1 f0 N/ t% S! j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 {* W* ?% N  v9 `4 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ N2 ~# \( D1 R! o1 l0 w, l9 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ m6 l! G2 U4 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 B9 b5 I! Z# @  D, ^& Y6 G* N- h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>