【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; p, q$ t% j5 Z2 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: P. D9 Q% |! x3 q# e% EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 G" w! i  N5 ~4 w/ ~4 s, w/ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 d. Z8 v3 D  Z5 e7 z( nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, x; i/ m% {0 M6 Q) X6 tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 t1 R) x  V& a& j# G% KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- f9 |* Z3 t5 f3 Y) q; p( ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 w) E# W( A. ~! }, _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ }9 E* U+ O; F# Q. M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' D! Y8 V0 o, T, G/ k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# g* G0 B& J) d; e* j# a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; Q/ z( a8 P, m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 T: _; e: M6 i! I) }/ R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ i& s0 G+ V, R: k* d, c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 U/ G* L7 V$ f1 M  J, R3 y' ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 K, @: S- L2 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ~* c4 C9 d8 R+ p) f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  \+ x  |; M  h/ [" @: i3 d: E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 h2 _. K) b4 N5 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! U  ]* |' m5 f, E5 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ S% Q9 n! A* z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 ^6 k) l/ Y% t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 {4 N& U3 T# L- ^9 C7 w5 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, n6 |; O: A3 P, P/ ]" v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' S$ o8 y! ]$ O8 O3 x, [/ Z4 ]; J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* f! v; b- T, S- G& r- z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" j: }- M0 r8 |  Z$ \/ u, ?3 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( v: e4 P  l. H% K# }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ B9 B$ b0 ]' v+ N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 Y. w& e* L; a2 A# }0 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) m4 {9 z0 \9 ]1 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- V( z' d& f# K# X& \& }7 U3 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# I8 _6 |5 Q! g- F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 J5 A% ?7 \4 B# t, F* F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! F6 J. S& V: s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 t& L1 |' I4 P8 C  Q" t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; U7 |" H  `1 }9 i2 M" l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 w; M2 V2 _6 ?( I$ F! P9 x我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>