【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 _( W' v+ f1 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 ]) u! D% V" ^With the moon kissing it every night
3 `- }& Y6 S, s- D/ lSeeing the sky content with its love
$ G' \/ I7 O. U# |& @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 O2 z0 q0 u4 vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# a4 A% V- B- p9 C* B# f1 ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ [  K* Q: U8 `/ G  l1 z8 gNothing can compare to my love
* s9 N1 w2 A) C9 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: J1 f7 }. y! v( {9 I0 [  tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 q* y* m& m2 E% k1 I9 u. j: ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 Z) k7 C6 V, ~. b0 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  N+ R, A% d- ?4 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 d' b' g8 D0 h( v* p- [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# F" S$ X5 k- l2 e1 e0 R, a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 b) j$ @. L. _, D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 W9 m4 |2 u) @6 L8 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ {! s/ z6 H6 e% c! {. x- l- o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' i1 f7 p1 e' o1 S/ M" i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 [! m9 W8 u/ }2 p: [: F8 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ q6 B  i, C1 L( D& T8 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. ~3 c, y3 l. h% k6 Q8 x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) E, ~1 q$ k% m7 w8 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; F7 c5 E6 V" E% G% r# r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( s+ @: t/ j5 J% a$ I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 P. Z# F& _- e5 k- b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 O( \1 K7 t- ]1 k' g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% c" `0 R$ K) T) T0 Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( \" e& Y$ m/ @/ T) S! z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ w# b& U; ?/ {  r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 l$ v+ r8 U7 m2 C* y- P4 H+ T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* B1 {8 C, H- C# b3 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" {+ P& l1 a/ x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  B" e( j7 |; E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 g7 s( m) h4 i7 [% _1 @8 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, m# e/ ?" Y6 _  [2 o5 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 r8 E" U$ T! D5 [8 h& x7 d& O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 g8 x* Z1 E3 C" [$ ~- W5 _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 j4 L' }6 \! J% r  C  @+ d& p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- l) h  y/ `% h' j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- |  y( K& ]. ]- E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 l! b/ d8 f1 @: ?) R$ t0 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. o1 y' T  \. c+ |& z7 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 G! s. D& P; r8 F" m我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 S; ]1 q5 |6 v  d# O7 V2 L6 L/ E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>