【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 Q' h& u% _, g* |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 F$ u7 R, V; e9 ~- wThe sky is happy down to its soul
) g9 l% y# i( a! E: nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, B) n$ L1 Q* c6 z+ oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, E0 ]5 R4 J1 E+ f3 y- XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, g# k: }& O" A8 tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 t2 k1 _/ L# Q" H7 ^* ~& RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' W* Y5 u3 o: g0 o) k1 [- r* tI’m still filled with fear
, ~" ?! v2 `9 h7 S: LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( |! D- o; D0 U  Q) rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; f8 L. s0 F2 w& F; c9 I0 B% qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, U8 Y& W/ v5 F' R0 H7 j) lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% |  I; u/ _7 u. @1 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, T) E- j3 K; a$ Q# W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( p% K8 Q) s/ f1 w1 l  l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% A5 i: L2 p  d3 j& e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- @9 p5 {$ z+ k% J! L; f& [$ }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 u& F" I2 B1 A  \2 [& j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ H7 f* X' K, V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# |$ F1 m) v. ?3 c% C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' f* S4 s4 ?- m# h( D4 L' K2 O% d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 v! a) L. O/ O* Y6 o<P>你无需担心</P>
" U  E( _: q( u7 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( u5 W. L; M( T7 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ [( n$ l2 f2 r/ L! l% m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 i6 l% b" K& K/ n% a0 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 G, G6 W$ o2 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; }) E+ x" i; u: }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* N7 H/ y  m# Z% C- l" w$ U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: P: z- @2 z. j. x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" J7 w* C- W- [2 z2 g% ]# _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( e3 i5 f0 ~5 m. o) c9 y8 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) I0 H7 s$ P5 _7 x. @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 @0 L4 A+ C$ k" L  s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 E; T6 p6 A; u3 m9 W  h/ c$ V! H7 L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ e$ D* {( ^2 s+ z6 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) ?4 {9 y9 m) E' c( s. X, s, S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- ~' @( w" |2 M( \! {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' Y, K) e- j2 K6 ~: \% \4 I( _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 c+ D; V0 @9 U3 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>