【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; a' q, a* \) S* \; iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 S/ P; N/ S- D' k$ D" ]( Q6 o& K" ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! d. |6 x$ c$ R$ s- t% aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- W* y# R8 r+ K6 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
/ d5 ?2 b. F, b9 i9 g4 C: ]7 mNothing can compare to my love
4 `$ h, w, }& W. Q# l+ y! e* a; ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  w/ h5 }$ a$ j: _6 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  p- S: ^5 b+ X% ~* z5 LI’m still filled with fear
1 {' R9 j2 \8 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ X! A" O$ U0 p2 x7 D- a4 q4 O% MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% E( m, |; y, F* ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ x( K( U$ f* r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% {. V. ~4 s0 d0 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% Z  b& U* D4 ^* q" k: ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. O+ V) A4 U& L0 _( j4 ^9 a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 F; n$ q# J, [- ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 N: O$ K/ i1 c" S$ S4 A: p. v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 ]9 [0 h* t) o; d  k; B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: M0 J2 ~* W" e* X$ n7 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 E# U( x: n& N& I' n3 e5 \% S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% ~( J( a7 ]" m; w' X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 f" o! j$ K, \2 s<P>你无需担心</P>
+ o" K, u  U+ A: P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* n0 n. P% x" }1 F* G* _$ w) ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! {' W. y5 a4 U' G( P) `& i- [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 n6 ~6 Z. R, y2 F1 Q& l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 j* x9 o0 L# s; y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ Q( `8 G: }2 |3 W, D# K& O! _5 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 F, B8 W) O0 k, K. p+ V- g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# I& P, P) H- M; f2 \# G, f9 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" d" t# L3 E  G, s: |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" I6 r% I! C; B( s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 E7 h* I' r1 m6 Q9 x6 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% D/ g  t, ~+ t; O5 K) Y# \, M; T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  S5 l5 b0 Z% [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ H7 L5 e2 c/ \& `6 p# [3 M- N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% A) }+ o, G+ N% d/ B$ l+ W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* c1 O' v. |8 C/ D5 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* ~) o# o, S- A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. o0 e2 G  Z, i, A. H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: W. Y4 y# M7 k4 A: r' f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ Z# v! v2 I" K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ n4 W+ @% T$ g* b) a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 c7 b* J4 Q+ E4 z. g. t0 F) b9 C/ {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ T4 X& ?+ W( t1 y' ^3 D9 m. p% E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) ?7 p" t4 o) Z; c0 S1 C0 \$ `9 t+ L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% S* m# y4 |7 J' m# D, C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  E7 Z4 w% L' C& B; C) V" I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" }4 u: L4 C, ?1 q- I6 M. f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>