【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 X" U% g6 X; q, \! lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% |( `1 r! N6 _4 x$ Y3 d/ AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 i- @: v! [; L. _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* [6 ?5 o' _1 E) OSeeing the sky content with its love
6 M# ^4 W! t% e2 L9 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( j+ C' d9 \% O. q5 o' iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: Z% F' Z; Q. L9 w2 SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 N5 h3 J+ N7 T) tNothing can compare to my love
1 Y% W- K0 `3 s' p7 b( ~, [0 m1 w( v7 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ v; m# B' n+ |! [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 }: |7 }# ~+ Q8 i- v' T8 r2 sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! o/ @& M( q# jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# h. q7 z& f2 yI regret not dying
0 S% B/ n9 w, C6 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ U! X1 D* q( g7 h$ _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, g) R- y3 f, J/ }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 u: y, x- f0 I9 Z& \$ |6 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( a, P4 s- T0 v1 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. n: H# `9 i6 D9 H& ]: v9 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  k+ [; q4 _0 ^: Q( O* ^, B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 [8 W! ]8 x( q+ Z1 x/ ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 c1 o1 l0 ~, u. z& y/ Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ?2 ?( N/ u) `' B" e$ ^2 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; g% j9 m. e# @3 y! S8 u+ F; i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 H% Q2 h' \$ w+ t) R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& E# J' R( F6 w) ~5 b$ c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 q/ F/ ?8 R6 P! I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; v, r& i# y% w& E6 X0 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) q. K' I$ |. |& y" _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) W1 ~% Y3 |; x; m+ c1 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 a# }8 b4 X  P! e6 L1 O6 h  B7 I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- U6 t2 U1 _  H# y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 o4 `- X8 ~$ e% N  p9 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 S( V% O' g8 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 R( D! I  ?% x, E! C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; q! o  r1 _: L0 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. h( e* k; o2 ]+ r5 n, W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  X3 [; n+ L! x2 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& ~; t9 ~" V4 x3 Y  i1 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
# W6 g' Q7 w8 t3 M  C# x
/ w- _9 g9 f1 l- O4 }1 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ p5 e: V+ b" ]: L4 x3 Y% y6 l8 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>