【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ M/ x% U- V( S) _/ @, j( l- w: }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# ~+ d' k8 W; O' B% X8 j( g7 p2 t- QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, I" K, @6 Z3 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
. h( w+ @, B* O8 `, {+ p: a/ WWith the moon kissing it every night
# B8 l  F8 ^) V* Z* @# jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ \$ G! e, `& j% ~# [# lYou needn’t fear anything
) U9 z2 g% i+ X2 B, `7 MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ |4 L4 U- ^& H! [, F% E- mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' y+ l/ i7 O5 i" G7 z3 O5 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 D& o) _4 u: l4 O7 OI regret not dying
4 O! L8 N: i: I1 {! _. ]- Y$ sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 Z0 H6 `0 Y$ n7 D/ x5 j2 A0 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 `/ E* l2 U. _5 a( \; }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 P# h2 a0 `& w6 F3 C* X. W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* w9 J' H; n2 n- E) u& c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ a) q( G& C; Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 E7 m. |, O# o( l! m, S8 C# I/ l0 w% p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ }% P. ]' v; m9 k9 R9 w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 ^# f4 M! Y: N; C0 i' X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- d3 J& C# {0 ~- M$ {( u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 h7 @8 g( E3 p( u; W9 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' ~0 E" F6 ^7 w/ u1 b& J  G! V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 w4 _9 B1 a, u, n4 N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 A6 ^4 {) D: U* u) |$ |& C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& N4 k4 s1 H. e# \) m+ C7 t; \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ q7 E  V+ m; t7 ^6 J: e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 k/ p2 C- U6 u$ r) d4 L  Q7 X" v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 l& [$ q6 @4 a! c2 J0 O: H2 Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 N* U' h" ~1 R  `# [9 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 t# d' L' `. q; u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 \+ l+ T0 b# N8 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 v$ t" P2 ^4 k2 T6 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( z+ q1 Q  L; l/ B+ E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; j; G2 }( k7 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 d* Z, K8 {* A/ V+ R- G<P>I regret not dying</P>
* V, s) J& L( C. s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ l7 m; `9 b* f8 |0 L7 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Q. r: z2 j1 C) u0 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 j6 ~# V8 Y1 S2 b2 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* L; I  E, x( F% H- k0 J- E& u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" X6 L. A: m" b0 c, u! {+ u2 Z' |4 s1 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! b5 D# ^6 G( r. O6 B/ z$ B我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# s- v- ^0 {* A' ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>