【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 q* Q* N& Y% G: k; KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ @8 z! ^( @6 q4 P# GThe sky is happy down to its soul
& H  F  f( q. [' hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 H3 t' g: c6 v; U# K7 w* N9 pYou needn’t fear anything
# T" P* F9 v) K  V  m& e! QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 C4 \0 Z' F/ n; Y" IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) V1 F# t: C2 H$ b2 nI love you I love you with all my heart
3 }' B$ U$ }# f: O, {3 i) cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! i) R* N0 P% z6 B& F0 x4 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 a6 ]/ a4 i% I) o0 {, fI want so much to see inside your heart
) ~7 z' \, {# ?0 v* x5 d# FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& y5 d. `# `4 O) ~- C& pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* J! K% m) O# C, P6 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& E, m9 A( U4 s8 q, g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ _6 ^- T( q; p3 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( e5 I+ }3 s/ |. X+ y' l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 }6 F" ?" \# Q& d0 f6 x% C, C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ D4 {& p; P% ?6 `6 t9 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' R: b; R( B; P# F& b! p* x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 u- v) t: \! u! g- u7 j9 s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ _1 M( G; K$ S* I: a* G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 c- Y# K. D. f0 Y" q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 Y' {4 e" R5 W" C4 F+ f. l- A3 V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' L. b, A/ Z6 G# K* p+ |: j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; d+ ^+ w+ q! |0 p9 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 e: f6 I# H9 P6 w$ {/ |2 g3 \# j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  [& y& }% u4 w: ?" P6 \) e, i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: z: X8 ^: r! h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 {5 y, c" W4 @  ^  x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ x% b1 @1 G: B  c" a$ x: P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. X5 |- w$ |9 w+ F' a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) G& Z$ Y3 `% `) I; g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ S& b' \. N" z% h& C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' K$ K& _8 Y, T' Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>