【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 }0 k6 w/ T+ w9 k. oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( `8 h. r, j. _; k; v8 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
* t$ S7 f! @" FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: K4 V: F4 }( e/ t( XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 ]4 Y( b. @* _$ s+ ~8 `; qEvery other word you utter is love
0 d; x$ D  F) H; HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! s) B4 @' M5 h+ t1 j% ?+ yNothing can compare to my love
/ C9 _7 J/ y% O- Q+ e2 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# e2 P& o6 Q2 V2 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; Q6 E3 K4 Z' F' wI want so much to see inside your heart
' }9 `7 \5 @5 U4 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! q+ v" G) r( b. z3 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 R- ?- C, {% S. tWith such a tongue as yours,
% }' n& z: ~2 s, PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 o' H) W$ m+ O3 z( p- G) `# S4 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ ?' s  ~" |. V/ Z+ a. q3 U4 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 O8 n0 g% i- u! a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  k8 ?/ |- ~% G' K# U" t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 F( v* F/ l: e( u0 U' `$ L% a: o2 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* K, M8 h0 L1 ?; u6 e) X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  o) n4 G5 T" Y1 j2 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 c3 }- L3 r7 B9 x4 ^3 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 m( O; v$ J" s* I. a<P>你无需担心</P>
8 K* `/ m* E( F9 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* G& U6 _& l8 U5 ]5 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& `- M+ P5 K" e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 V; Y0 d/ x& w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; d) n9 G% U0 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, d, z" _3 c& k0 q/ `4 I7 ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 R: k1 {# o$ U7 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" S3 W/ Y1 J) L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 V# ^1 q2 f# y+ [/ e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 s: `1 ?, X5 T; n4 ^- z, L0 {3 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: `- ^2 E9 \3 b9 \0 J<P>I regret not dying</P>
. N/ B' R; A/ ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 P/ q5 M5 h6 Z8 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; s5 a5 S9 A7 @% \& T0 \  G9 i! L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: M! p$ a4 w2 A% m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 C1 R' r+ k+ x: B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 i, ^# F( T* N& m4 m1 P% n* [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 A0 ]( L, U; f; f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% F" D! Y) K, O8 _+ k( q- H我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' D7 W) ~' M: Q- ^0 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>