【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 r. L- _9 `* x- U歌词我附在后面。
- p8 j& v4 N( z: I# R0 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 u& c3 B  `* m& GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; H1 F: Z% w: C$ Y5 O0 @6 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 O4 N( w) n* K/ X* vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* `/ |( P* H, C! A2 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 F7 R. p! V5 _6 Q2 o; w$ mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ R$ Y2 \, f: \; aYou needn’t fear anything
0 Z, w% m3 F  W! u' bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 L* Z) E+ f( I! F/ E, aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" ~) q% @# C& SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 F- Y8 a$ f- U8 o7 E: WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, j5 d2 I- T4 f! B* PI want so much to see inside your heart
8 C. X4 f$ m* aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* _7 T* R) ^8 n* `  X5 `1 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: H' `; ?' w$ \0 A1 M9 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ [" }, m5 m, M$ T  C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 |9 H% P+ b9 T" A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 v6 `# t% w8 Q+ c# o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 _7 ?% ]% ]- P  w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 |4 ]1 D' M3 ~8 J9 E- ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) E) D/ F' f% b' j1 W8 u7 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 l' s+ R: }2 w# O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 \' {9 d( U8 n3 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 W, j3 V) U. e! [4 ~# Y* M" \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 B, u  G$ c+ b% B; ~7 S5 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  \0 o$ o  J/ c9 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) i# Y( W# W  O. d3 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 u9 n+ ^( _6 b9 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' w, w" c& l: \9 u3 F- K9 w0 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 r9 q' C# F7 p! \) ~1 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 m' u& K& F$ S9 m' {+ V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' {( ~! j- j; T! [( I5 e0 @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' Z8 q' ?% h' o3 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- x1 |* f' j# _' m" i4 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ @1 b3 Z- b" c9 w: u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 n( j- I0 C0 c1 @! ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  C' y3 p5 B% X, b# U  A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! W/ i8 @$ o/ M/ U9 m; A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 E8 B' v* H" H3 ^% e" N, A4 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! q; I5 i6 l; P4 t5 j( R- B0 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) M: _- J/ R4 @" u; M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; q$ g$ \  i7 Z( E+ \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% r/ I, X' e+ b! L1 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% \% `  C: k* f" X% M; K% T我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 D) |% X7 C+ _% \" `; a4 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>