【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. t5 v7 J" ~2 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ Q# j+ V6 a3 F0 B: Z& xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% `! N* v" s% f; ?. X0 q: D) b- MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" O, P- r( O! d; k6 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; a* T3 m& r8 U, K% x) `6 i7 n  GEvery other word you utter is love
" \; a' x" ?$ M/ Q# k3 SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 f$ d# L% s& A; q. t" s/ ^  w  {% tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& D6 D6 n) O2 P9 T' M$ G# FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) x# f1 h* ?) P8 J) h$ E# II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' {/ b) m( P4 }I regret not dying
9 d, H$ P$ T! i7 S( U1 q$ w! EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 B, \2 Z" v8 R4 T) W% F% Z& UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ `* D4 W, J$ Q" V5 e" CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" O  T+ v, V: d+ _5 B: d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, ]! P( P; t( F4 M# o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 |% _; n5 C6 @# d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* I7 p; N% S* X* ^& k4 O% v, P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 X3 {0 g+ y0 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 ^" d# O5 t( {4 o; @: q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* j  c0 k! `% J( i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 W3 z: Q- I, k: S5 o6 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) `  L% z" U+ \8 S7 ?* r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ x! o; @' Q; P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ m; q# m/ }1 z4 n% p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: l9 F0 q  {6 O3 N. x; F( H2 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 v- i) x& t  J( A/ F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 c- H% V( u8 l% o<P>你无需担心</P>
. r8 n0 N# w5 K+ L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 K. G( I0 L" g$ {$ A3 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! T  A8 X8 e# O) u# y; I0 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% c# K% s: q+ V) D' W, u/ V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 W/ P7 q( u3 }  K$ h8 f6 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ S$ ~5 z- ^* A. L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ J2 ?; Y% X+ _5 z& X; {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ P8 P, Q6 D* N6 \8 _2 J* Y( ^8 c5 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 t5 J5 B3 T! l& t, H* q- ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! @, I: j# c1 W* J" J" O0 B- t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ X! i: L. I$ k/ G! _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  z: m) Y0 u2 a2 {8 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 o. G/ p8 f: |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 C( l0 Z! |/ @: j- @; U& X' X/ }5 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 U& Y1 j- K$ l) a3 z! e- q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: m, u0 X# U" I1 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 ~6 z' j. ~8 Y  E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, ?* t6 m, A6 ^3 m; j8 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 S+ H/ k, y% D) k6 k% X: S- `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>