【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: a* }; B' O9 {, R& M: P% z1 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( c. B% z! G7 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 B( R5 r! A6 \5 ]4 z. u( {With the moon kissing it every night
2 Z* {' d9 h) y' \0 QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" f( H& |. q7 j' vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. X# C! o$ u- \0 d7 ^9 d; cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; M  e) x* @' JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' q- B  m! M+ II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 _0 i: y: g: Y! o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' k5 F. ]4 x+ M+ t+ B) @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! I  I! t2 F7 a% Q* g, j6 [# b& j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 X" u3 V* {- `- d4 q' f8 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 z; E# A5 F# W' S* @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" F9 S. @& Y( i- E$ d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 N" x( \8 {9 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 c+ B4 I: n9 j  v! r% |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 m" g& f6 ]' n4 t6 A0 h0 O1 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( g( E) h5 _3 P3 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( ~  u1 T' X2 ?4 W- w+ K2 n/ c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* ]8 M4 E9 R) j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, s$ a$ S0 A! a( r6 B" q4 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, R2 T: F1 w5 a4 U5 G1 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 B, w" m' S: ^4 J+ D4 F2 |9 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 n7 A7 p+ H4 d/ R4 L; U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) A- e# P) J& J9 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' r3 p# U. Y. {  b9 [6 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 H0 k9 e* v/ Q7 \: `) s) H; W7 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! m9 k1 C! q) u8 ^7 \4 L. {! y& g2 Y% l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! e2 P. S4 m9 X" k, [6 O6 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# J, P8 y& C4 O. w1 O* q7 M1 N" U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 }* g% `, X1 P2 d! s0 L' C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 ^; R' i' {# k/ r6 j( t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ t6 s2 ^( j8 I/ E. x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# o3 [) _3 r; o  C$ d( a: z% I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! i2 L7 h1 K3 P& ]1 |$ v2 w/ h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% A8 O1 {6 P9 b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; ~% C# g% d; G  X) i& u+ t我请你剖开它
. R( W. W; Q: V. D! D
+ B' A* O: {: l$ }# [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) Q4 c. Y4 L( \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>