【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 A; X+ H8 n6 x, o! x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' n+ _" T3 E' r' K2 \# vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: h, d4 O: s* qWith the moon kissing it every night
5 P+ G& o. A1 z/ USeeing the sky content with its love
1 o3 ~  c# @7 v& RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 ]% f7 i2 F" d9 e1 f) y6 |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' Z  V6 I0 H! XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 O3 B- S9 b0 r. \: S" BI love you I love you with all my heart
+ ~6 L, T) G. b7 H6 l0 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" Q3 I/ y0 W. W4 FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 v+ n' K" i! d* B* T2 z+ OI want so much to see inside your heart
& p5 z8 X( o6 `0 p) D, BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 s! h. G* J1 n- s' K( Q  MI’m still filled with fear
1 b6 X, z- M% {% f- C( s; wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 a6 r, W/ Z( h' p6 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 C( K/ F  p! w$ ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ E) R1 w4 w/ }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ G0 Z$ S) |, l& U' E. k2 [4 A+ nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, o/ v" D* k  J4 F/ r; ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 V0 o$ d6 o' @- _3 ~- H6 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; B. S, ]* R, }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ G; G# p( u( P9 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% A) ]* i% H. \8 m3 h  U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ ]4 d# _: X  E6 {* \* q9 q/ D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  E* ~. h. {9 Q& ^2 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 y  X! d- D0 i5 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% c2 Z) I( r; Z- [& j- H/ U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 N! ^$ z! ^! J8 R% \7 x2 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 i' S8 X7 W0 a2 K5 n% t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( Q! S% x0 |$ a) Q8 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* }2 }2 l/ x3 o0 g$ G5 i' c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, p6 Y0 Q+ g) Y9 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 j6 k/ z( V( _( L+ |9 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 h' K- U% D4 D8 F4 k$ B# O( j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  v3 ]0 D8 R( p$ ]0 p, x<P>I regret not dying</P>
) |/ E' z; u4 p( D1 v5 |2 f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' \, Q+ P: O# c2 u% \: C- F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) C2 [/ T* h' d/ s' J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 t* W- S3 @6 l5 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- U! O, i& ?3 B; \1 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 y6 t8 x* Y7 n) m! S' w& E9 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ W* S  }- z2 \1 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) A" C0 z/ f- o! |1 U+ T7 \8 `" V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, Z; g- N/ r' c! l) s: j0 w% G$ K6 x我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ~" d5 N$ w: E  Q) q$ W4 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>