【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) B6 a* X7 }) z( Z  L) Z歌词我附在后面。
0 J% ^: F3 z# Z1 J+ C% xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, E4 Z# n  Q1 y/ d- s( B5 @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ s- X. Y7 n' y: C9 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 J! d9 q. s: F' xSeeing the sky content with its love
7 _4 O) L; |5 z; gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- J, D  a* c, h3 }8 @8 zYou needn’t fear anything
: j2 j' C& Q' R) H* ~, XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 [! L& Q! Y! ~2 S( N: YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 T3 [6 c3 c' HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( o! c1 g( Q4 ?6 W: [  d' g* YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( y# t# p! F- R1 s2 o; u3 RI’m still filled with fear
" ~* o: f0 E. hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! e/ Z7 b$ S/ m2 Z/ t& ~I regret not dying
  y8 w' L" @! X7 G' kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  O! _9 ]4 c0 a, m+ \" I# f' L/ ]1 ~3 H1 IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& e! t0 B5 x+ wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  p' D7 Q: k( R1 m1 {) ~2 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( D9 n, P* p/ j- x$ c: a# `; ]+ n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 Y3 J% e2 H, P/ u3 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 d) E+ U/ m2 I6 W4 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 r( z, J! }% z, |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ |3 |0 T" \* E0 ^! Y3 ]+ P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 W& V; i9 m# }, q/ P1 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. Z2 f. [) B& T) O0 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ]0 S4 y3 k; g+ `- S+ X4 e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 B# A5 [3 z& t# H; P- S" [) ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# a) A& `4 X- a- s5 o% Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  [- ^- {% \8 U+ Y. t7 Y8 g2 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 Z! M' H, G0 L) F9 H- ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( F$ [0 ^# ~8 o1 s5 S8 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- A2 d& Q& x7 ^4 l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  a4 q7 d% q: E9 r3 w8 D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 o/ @6 h7 ~, |+ d2 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ V% S" N# A; o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ f2 n$ C6 }9 Z3 |  y<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 X$ E- Z3 z' R' e8 K8 K8 b0 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 _! g# s4 o! l6 O5 A; D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' q# M" U2 A4 g. ~& T, c6 m' F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) l2 l" H8 `4 T/ o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 r9 ^( W8 k+ i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" j/ O6 \) h( {! d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ y. H! Z& O/ a9 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 `+ M+ g! l3 t3 m+ Z6 N4 c3 K' f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 l. ~& S; w5 q% I, v0 b) v我请你剖开它
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$ t* p0 v2 R' N8 J! I6 k3 J5 H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>