【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 A  L4 f4 v  S# uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. V& o. E9 Y. \1 G1 s+ ?With the moon kissing it every night
7 n# ?" S- [3 S: b5 w" fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* ~3 G6 F2 u$ l, c( }9 cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 r) S+ q0 T9 K% w# m/ qEvery other word you utter is love
5 _6 m9 v) g* y: r3 E! ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 ?* v# B. t1 M$ D1 aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ r  \2 u1 }# t& W% F" J1 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ J9 k4 E% W; cI regret not dying
, t3 T: m* k+ s# wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 ~- Q  y1 z2 {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: ^# Q: Y6 k2 }$ o5 y6 r& Q# ~& CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 l# h' f9 G2 @$ h: Z( V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  Z6 w. r3 |9 Q% z; F8 \: X" \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ a1 G! R/ w5 h3 W' [7 M$ d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- V7 ^" N; l5 D  K9 `% z& q& W1 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( u! \/ F' y- B/ x2 u$ g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 F% C. A8 p; N, S4 s# n4 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ y  l3 n% o4 U3 E* T; d( U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 Y0 X+ b+ H& s1 T# k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 Y( n* G! K8 z  D2 l6 V& k! a$ m- M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; f$ \1 G/ Z- e% v8 |: w0 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 ~- J$ [, e1 y9 O- m" y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 B( X6 V( f9 u7 d0 N9 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: m" b0 V; f' v+ M) ~) [% o6 r( ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" z) \% _- z. l5 N) o+ R* t& r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- J: i, v' p: f8 t. @. n% I# P" j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: s% t8 w2 H7 i- M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: N0 O6 K* E5 `6 A- a# v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. m5 k9 l2 ]1 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, u9 e. g6 I) ~5 g+ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  L2 h; w$ d0 S) I. ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 o9 {; J1 F/ x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 I# O/ Z, m  ~, n7 B+ J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ ?& A& e7 n' `( I- e* I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 @( i( f; I% V5 A3 I( [/ g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; S0 C, q7 N7 K  t, G<P>I regret not dying</P>
: X8 f  m( a7 n2 _  x& z  F2 t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 G" P9 s) k4 O( t: z. M7 K+ a2 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 S+ T. [: L  C9 g0 M1 _3 E0 |0 z& j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! _3 f8 n6 u" Y. x2 E2 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 E$ n4 V, z) K: q) X  i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! S% g. K" o" {4 {  {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>