【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, X% n% i- f& b. W: h$ Y4 R7 CWith the moon kissing it every night
* c& C% g3 {6 f3 @' P& ~: W+ QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. V: A; k7 ~# }" j9 M: k4 uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) R6 n. f* |3 T4 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* |1 F* h. p( b8 ?# [: E, |! ~4 X! kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' ?9 j1 k) V7 g) J' B) C7 JI’m still filled with fear
* x3 m! O: a$ X% R& i/ l- |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 V6 d5 d+ z  A7 K& C+ GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 K' x& L/ E- `) R" iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  v0 V$ S- y  S) z& C: E7 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ R# s' g9 |  S* f& H! Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 F9 H7 O1 r! E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ l  i2 E) x! \" H! S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 J! g/ N' z9 k/ ?- z2 I6 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 k1 q8 L& {0 C5 l+ ]1 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: p5 c; f3 i. o% Z9 V8 Y  K; `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 }5 ^# ]4 w! `0 Y  t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ ]9 n) q% o- E- h( P$ J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. X" b+ [  ^  W- l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 _4 |) o* C6 }% n0 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 a$ Z5 z7 a0 {! Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 @6 T8 J$ M* Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 o& M( c- y5 q# S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, ^2 [; w* h4 `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 i0 L1 d/ p0 Y6 ]' G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& j( F+ \! D, z5 P# Q' M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  m; A. o' G' S6 i; \2 w; y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 H" {, m2 i! D9 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 ^( Z, C+ w6 O# w: h9 A/ N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 `  }( W# t$ T8 C1 ]1 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# ^0 p2 v3 m1 b2 ^# E  K1 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* A2 c' N, L! R) W5 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; E# ~8 a4 X: L& ]. v; A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) Z0 G5 K" C, Z# Y; S& Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>