【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- K" T, X, q7 t! q  n' H) u3 h6 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 J, r9 R! l/ [+ \+ d3 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# E6 z9 {6 m& z. P; {( @  \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 ^0 U1 x7 G& ]* D; vSeeing the sky content with its love
! D6 t5 k) u2 [- ~+ aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 {- f8 \3 K0 @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) `8 B; B& T! k' aEvery other word you utter is love
4 \) q( x+ u  p, wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- p1 l/ U7 N8 {" U8 S( ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( o7 t* U% {7 |8 n+ qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ h1 m. x; R, s7 S2 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 P9 C2 Z( i& `0 o7 |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 l9 K2 N1 F$ a* iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- f9 h! V2 t% H3 l% B$ EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 W( g# Z7 a+ Z& k. {+ M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" A$ F5 [& ?9 ?. ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" W/ Q$ C0 E6 G6 d; a5 _8 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ M$ n- g6 M) J5 @0 |, N1 a) j. g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, i+ P" R$ e1 c; S# a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 w  v# S% C( H- I5 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 @' F6 S( {/ L( E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% g( N& ?# _. s" v+ ?7 @8 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 }- Z7 I) X/ H/ v' \5 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 P2 ~0 H- y% t4 N4 Z1 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ @/ F- h$ B% A$ G8 K* N0 T# V% H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, b  M8 f" c. d- I. G4 L& [: V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* Z7 v5 q, j  H' @1 {4 ]8 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! o. _( O2 C( i5 G. y) Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* b* `) ^; T  h0 Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* R) U) j* X- r/ Y8 f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  D4 a2 B- z; g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 w+ t" X" t8 z6 m8 Z' u. I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 B: u1 B' K: y- f* F7 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% H* a  }8 E; k; i" O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* R, l7 V0 w8 X/ \. T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ C1 M& w$ K, w7 r1 l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 a# {- ~% W1 R, e& M" g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>