【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ G; {2 g$ c7 J2 U: w3 j歌词我附在后面。
, m1 B9 F  k7 d1 X6 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ Q1 A1 ?& q( i3 v: r* I5 y5 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  v3 a! v) H' u6 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 E! i- v: ]$ z! C* xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ Y/ E2 }  h  h/ N# kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 I0 a' ]( z6 G2 c+ lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: J& z7 }2 u) {* [8 S" M1 `. v% ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 I5 e! o( c/ e1 {8 y2 s  mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  ]1 b9 y  b* {( Y- w) K/ {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 D4 Z* ?; V) AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' f8 ?7 _4 l+ i+ {% K% TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ g8 o+ E) T& c8 Y( ]- J, u& K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! I8 J5 m1 n' e* {- v6 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ E: d) D' F; v" m$ [" @, J% D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 \  O$ w  r% U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 I. d! b7 t# ]6 J) b0 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 R& v6 W/ c: j, u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) |. y; }. C7 C0 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: c$ u9 V' |" f* H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ A; w0 f; T1 H1 N) w  m( z9 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 B6 T* Z3 C7 p8 t) ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- f1 z1 v8 F  p" B* p) I" v9 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 r0 a; @, z/ M% Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" z* L3 e+ M6 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 x% J! k2 i: s1 U/ ~; ^! l* X$ q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# I0 e. e2 h1 _, A$ ?4 W- W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 a8 J9 J' {# r4 u& q9 b. x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 m; x4 ~* X9 n* \# }8 x' e4 j7 n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 M$ }( F( H# [. k* [- C7 J2 Z7 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 d& y8 v% c: K5 D' K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 a5 A8 s4 |/ y6 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; M' {6 Y# J+ H* G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% s- `6 f2 I  ~0 {7 K% `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. p- J9 U0 P0 h# |$ h+ R2 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" T6 x8 p; }+ t' f3 o1 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, ~9 H8 x( w& C/ s; Y4 `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 n# K) }5 U% W/ \& _& R2 U2 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 i' d- U0 Y. e7 X; [: I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. s1 c- X$ _8 J* ]! o! `' I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- ?+ x: g! O8 X8 i6 o) G+ \5 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 ~8 q, r" S  \( C$ G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 S( Y% D. @% b6 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 ~% I' l1 x  E1 e9 i9 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( m7 Z: R1 m: n1 M* O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>