【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 A5 o* s( ~9 N2 [& k% UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 I) f* t( D( x9 x+ a  yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, R! r! t4 `& W. O5 _The sky is happy down to its soul
. |" u2 H. d: m4 }2 i. z8 wWith the moon kissing it every night
# U; S; `1 E, a% E& JSeeing the sky content with its love
- ?# m! M9 o3 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! P, I) x7 m; F2 Q4 \% z! T/ G( \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 q# j9 r3 A1 F( |6 qI really want to know just how much you love me
1 Q( A# A5 X( kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: w7 w) h; J! j! c8 c/ o. }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" T' k9 L) p- G2 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; @1 ~, E, x1 L4 qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 I+ i2 Z, @& C4 X0 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 x. l( ^/ J: A6 z/ c/ rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ f! [' n7 X7 p1 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 f% w( `& Z" I1 H5 F* A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! e+ [; A1 E2 }/ P" ^4 Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. ?  W7 o% E/ f5 x- {* ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 e3 ~6 H  M# b' ?9 o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 S* m7 Q$ G; I1 R2 \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ {, H- N7 I4 t3 r& c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& `/ l" v/ _$ i- ~$ W% y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; {  Z. t' {4 ?5 z  a3 Y* w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 n' L" y# i3 p) c/ b" m7 ?3 O: E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- {4 d6 E" G( m2 R% W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 _- x, X+ r1 M& |" D* e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" s7 n; C# a  c" s# Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 ~6 [: k. n& Z% T8 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# A+ m! |1 }& y+ n$ G9 x5 M# |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% v2 C- I" A" a9 v& ~: s  j; s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 c2 I* z+ k5 H/ H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% U* S: {& J' g' N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. U, Y) A- ~, ]$ |- |" `8 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 T% `: W, e0 A# _( }3 q  z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( \, D9 @+ |0 Y. o% m0 H/ ^# w: |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! g4 j0 y. [2 ~, M( o' ^0 e/ a$ L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: W6 S  S" e( m, [2 w& _% q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" H5 c/ J, k! d+ h, F# K6 U- @0 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 H* }( t; R7 V我请你剖开它

% m- E( T0 O: B0 ~: C7 K1 A$ d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ ^- s4 c9 t1 b4 ]4 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>