【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 [, V* L6 d% v5 z) F, kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  a  `/ N; u2 Q4 U4 l( G$ _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' O2 M7 c! X9 y  N% @; F% mYou needn’t fear anything
5 G1 I: z" I) Q+ y5 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ ^* P9 ~4 O8 t$ |I really want to know just how much you love me
  L& A$ _- V5 D% t9 `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 J+ J/ i; H. A9 ?3 w/ v0 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* D% j- n' C# }9 \I want so much to see inside your heart
2 g, m9 \$ c$ ]3 J5 @# v0 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. O3 g: z( s" [3 V- MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 {: g0 C3 ^  tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 v! d$ P. V: ]( Y  {- `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( k- Y  O- t9 p; RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  t# y8 J) ^; B) j, u# C9 X$ j# e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  j4 b+ e! ?2 h1 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% F( \& K2 N& [+ C1 Q) C% E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) G- M5 @) e4 Y( v4 i. \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 b5 F5 ]9 n& M8 z, y+ L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 e( g6 N8 a1 x. G  b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ W7 Y/ u* `+ d, [. ~2 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( H0 O  {# P, P* |3 D( Y$ F# n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 `) |& N, B; s; p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 d7 `% J- k( y' a5 N9 T. a) U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 q7 M! G. [" q5 @( }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& `, W! P* }0 x$ W  q6 J1 W' g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 `4 Z% ^. x5 y) l6 l; D5 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 F* _+ q5 H3 `! R# A$ F7 o# }, u- ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ O& |5 W6 A$ Q, ]) J+ _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 C2 B% c0 n( ?0 ?% i5 _% s! s, j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, M2 X3 z, M" a1 M8 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 @5 l" ~2 Z  p. G; u9 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 f/ s+ y( B  T4 F+ y) F$ @# B4 T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, N/ d4 f4 Q- O' m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ R9 u  V' x0 g0 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! w; e& G" c, [* x+ J6 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 U, H3 p. n9 g) I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 |  ~+ E! W; l- i4 q8 [4 W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! \+ Y: L$ ^9 y, U+ u) \( T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 E6 k; a) `! O1 t& X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. E- A( s! f' R) c1 v( r& y% d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 y/ c( U+ D$ o! a# q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 U2 f6 l, u2 p1 S# \% l' m3 [; m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; O3 P/ q! q1 C. j' k7 \4 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 f1 ]0 H% J( X" O我请你剖开它
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8 U# d7 H, ~! u( d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>