【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 w( X' k" h, @9 e/ B9 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 V* V4 U3 q( e) ?  U9 rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* R( \7 I" D6 f1 x  V8 O: MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  P* P( T" J( M. c+ MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. Q! C& T8 G/ R( w6 CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, B- b) X# _* [" PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ j6 W$ u6 }* }' _- r3 B7 TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 d  ^0 b! w, _1 O2 A' b7 O6 X9 MI want so much to see inside your heart
9 |3 \& ]& r2 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 ]( |2 Q/ ^+ @I’m still filled with fear
0 O) J. ^" f1 e  \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 B( d1 T1 a5 b( RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  `$ L" N" C1 IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# d/ \, z( I" O4 X( FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. R  Q- R# A( L! B* p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% e% c$ V+ K6 S$ `" \& f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 U; v7 F' ]# s5 Z1 M  D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* I4 `' }# C  u; @& B* B: V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 Y  h$ m2 q0 t5 h/ b% w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ g, Y/ P$ f+ j; e, y( E& ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 n: A- q; r  T  i% A" J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 L0 e" e* N. N4 Q" K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% ~# A) \* H' ?) K: G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 L6 F3 r  }7 `9 ^* J% W) E; B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 b8 f1 X8 Q. f  @9 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- \8 T6 |% H% w" H; _3 E- ^& c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 j0 o  v+ k/ x* N1 A  i* ?1 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! z* v+ y1 a+ j3 i1 e, z" c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 x1 J7 r$ o. a& P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  R* b9 W4 ~0 p# t3 K. M. W* R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" x. w0 ]5 X% o7 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' z$ j/ X+ u: x; e  p7 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- k" ]& R* B4 b7 ]' Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, g6 ~$ C# I+ w3 s+ p% U" O2 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>