【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 l8 r# v9 J0 m/ RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! e3 h; p: f6 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ B4 C8 r# T) U& E9 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: B2 T& n8 P4 y5 i8 d  o7 CEvery other word you utter is love
+ r$ n8 w  f# K( B) [4 y" D4 WI really want to know just how much you love me
) O# R8 Q9 Y+ LI love you I love you with all my heart
% L: ?+ J) s& I8 qNothing can compare to my love
2 `. e+ q$ Y& o" y) E' B$ j/ GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 ]; T: J% F$ Q4 e5 L3 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" t. y8 I8 L/ q+ A+ G, i3 a) RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 }" {, n& t. {; m( v9 R$ j# IWith such a tongue as yours,
0 @2 E( _! l' v. c/ rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% {! U: H5 C. F8 I# V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: u1 Y7 }* H0 [+ A# @" F+ l) K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 w, H: ?( l0 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# \6 |+ G8 E7 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 P! m+ y7 D& l& e, }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ \3 e* W) E/ _8 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ~7 o3 T2 r  T' r% R7 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 U8 r* l4 a$ q& z- o& d4 P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" {8 x+ u2 [0 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# h) X6 I! H( Q$ ]<P>你无需担心</P>
+ k* S. E: n$ Z. Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# H) g# \: r4 q3 u6 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 Z$ O8 i' U+ e7 N/ e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 C: U, F. p0 d( A, c  ?$ P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: k( R; a$ v% S+ w+ o6 `4 o1 T* z9 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ s$ _/ u8 [( W( ^5 b- E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& a0 c/ L7 N8 {% Q9 ]8 E% r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. v- a- g7 T: r/ F3 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ U  [, P9 {2 u  c5 D$ H8 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ H$ }  y" A$ p& ^) y) \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 y8 ]8 ^% h0 ^7 |. X( n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ b% _  j2 H) D% q$ E3 J# o" f0 @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 t  k4 [7 M+ M" V( t6 \: w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. v! B. c$ H+ C! k& [9 w- K0 P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) [- O+ s, }) j2 t9 B+ K" ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. H/ F5 S9 i) e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 T; `! z# a# A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% m. E" }* K& U4 L0 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. u/ t+ X. b: a我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 F, O, ?) x9 Q7 T6 J: @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>