【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% Q% Y  x1 ]' T/ _6 k) s6 i5 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 f7 }( r/ Z; d/ zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" w) v" E  A2 I7 q& Z, ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- f: M% ?' g  O3 W4 H" l) zThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 }7 z3 }" d% o. |; B. RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 J: T* [+ o: a& WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) u+ ^5 C# ?/ D9 eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" J0 E9 M4 @6 K! u& PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ W; f9 ]7 w' S2 |3 C  c* CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 o8 T: u: P  b% E4 S4 H1 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ n3 Z" E+ U; [; v3 g" \I want so much to see inside your heart
% n" s: z4 ?% K& ]1 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; K2 D& e- @% O+ c; KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 a- b0 e- S( f* b$ OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% |0 w6 R& A3 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) A0 F4 a9 {  d# a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  D! S% w* q8 t7 u4 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 h* X" X' {: e( b( [+ q  `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& m7 j; L8 j8 P4 f' S$ G: O% T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; Q1 N8 Q% ~$ p( R1 p# J- z* v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 E! u4 s8 r5 r9 \; h) Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. r% k& }; \% ]1 a: `$ T5 @/ a$ Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ t1 U. \! h* i# C' Z/ R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% ]1 I! Z! s; K5 M$ r5 M' h7 Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- ?: G$ O+ ], U/ G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# r4 s. B0 P/ t6 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. P5 _7 s$ H: _" s# q! F3 O8 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, B1 `3 C6 V7 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& H0 Q; c; D7 D0 `7 a! U) O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; z! z' `9 g" f4 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. y7 u3 q" P- @' ?0 {! p/ Y6 c. X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! {, S# {$ V# L' ~7 ]5 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 _" n, H, z$ z1 u: c, p! l0 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ ]0 u; Z* ]: k6 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ e) D4 L! T5 X2 x9 g; H/ e7 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ B6 v, x& L+ t/ [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& F8 D6 w6 k; X% D6 m/ d& |/ u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 c9 q1 A% k9 _. ^) R% _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. D( V; W2 _6 l3 |7 G" ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! K- {, P" `+ S, S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 q2 o8 T% c9 i: u( ?  f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, N; M* {( Q+ n( Y# n1 B& r; y, P7 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) u! R! E/ V8 g) {  q9 `6 U4 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>