【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* N0 v- T8 y% W1 e9 h4 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 n7 k- C4 u' v, b" F: uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* A* e  ?8 x# M+ E( q* ~) a' WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- P) t0 C% `1 Z8 c' ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 ^$ x) u' s7 A/ S9 ~You needn’t fear anything
: E" j5 O- ?* M+ Z# aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ b- K& V9 z9 L  J- r5 rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ l( ^# w0 S( uNothing can compare to my love
  o# e. {8 G9 A0 {& o; DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! q; c# P1 |" ~5 `  J5 T8 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 J* F+ z1 [, EWith such a tongue as yours,
0 M1 e3 z$ i0 I' A' ^8 B; ?! F! X/ [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 x' K( y% l( K$ m4 ?. ]8 s: y: ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' v1 v/ O( J8 z- Y- o7 V* Y" S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: x- e8 S8 y# g* Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' x- M) A/ E; i. o0 @- `- f: |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 J8 S2 D8 f/ ]5 D- R4 U7 {" d/ k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ h( Z  o. Z. l  F- W& q( t4 d0 _<P>你无需担心</P>
) x0 G5 j4 A* Y$ H6 ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. w9 p: O) F1 z1 j" `) r$ `6 V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* {% R4 s8 ^6 O7 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ _' n- U3 t! r# o6 O# V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ [8 t- g: L) Z8 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 p0 ~4 O& u; H6 u/ B# w  V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, E" k9 ]; ^9 @0 R; e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" g% j9 b/ y1 W2 r4 t3 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& r3 Q( |! d! {8 E1 Q2 c, T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 z- a& p# p0 A+ h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( W1 F) Y7 W5 a/ ]4 e  n  \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; m% Y) w! U; t' z( ?  I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# t, L- l# k- x- \) E7 P1 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ n& b# L' u% W5 v& x, ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 U5 Y8 m1 f6 ~" }: K6 \& U, p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( A. V1 I+ G2 ?# Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 x4 b! F0 P# U6 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! c* q; ^0 ~1 T5 g7 d" E; e; t0 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 `$ e$ |; f8 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) G7 u1 `8 h. K我请你剖开它

7 Y, k3 f/ ~+ ]3 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>