【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ d$ Q. o2 F0 X( L: eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& a/ v5 p- _8 S& U, u9 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& V: Q( J; Q8 N& e5 fSeeing the sky content with its love
  m* u5 Z$ y/ L* EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; c0 `  E) I; @2 x( tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: X7 X" W" H' n3 RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. s3 Q+ c0 Q: d7 RI regret not dying
$ b# m0 R0 c. |/ uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 ]- a( U8 k$ zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 o9 z# b$ p6 f8 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; y% {8 F8 `% h$ M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 g7 ?3 G& _. ?0 @. |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; p% F. C) Z0 Y! X/ f6 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! [/ o9 F* H# E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ _, G* O3 I7 E. x7 t" H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( C1 P, Q  |2 |4 \+ [8 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: c; s) k9 L5 z% Y4 b' K0 H0 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 |6 u7 j& ?( S# ?6 ~$ q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( a6 G: j/ T" a- t% N8 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 t- r3 t/ s% c/ F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! `9 Q+ J( d3 u4 \) s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ z1 r! ~6 f. }8 Y0 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ @9 _3 w6 ~+ k( _$ S* @6 K. ?/ Z6 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; Y! S3 b, ]& `* ?( @7 N3 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) a9 i' e5 H/ }9 c% Y$ W3 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; M7 _1 Z/ f$ K6 c- c3 u# Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! d  G5 K/ A* {* P- |; `' e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 t. z9 w1 ?& k8 [" q' h' p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 ~6 v, X# p# n# m. ~0 ~; v$ {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' Z0 z! w+ F: Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ h8 D3 z( s: a/ a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 ]0 U4 X& B' P! `1 R6 o- g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ c, M1 i! B( G$ m; a6 V( m: z/ n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>