【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; O) i6 `( R9 q% `& o* BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 g1 C% I9 t9 [& e7 B" d' MWith the moon kissing it every night
2 g  D- T1 X9 F2 T" }% sSeeing the sky content with its love
1 V  Y$ P/ O  N4 M5 ~/ @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 M8 G; T) L) ]# O  {, QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 O7 K2 p; ?* g) `. MEvery other word you utter is love
; ~! ~/ r" @2 i* YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" g' L! J  Q1 f; NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' a$ ^. l4 H2 t9 n. P. }8 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 z, A3 y) [0 q0 r' w0 mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 A5 x3 U1 O" P! d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 m) W& d3 K9 g9 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- i& ]9 Y: g+ I. d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 d0 {, t1 K) N% e" W$ U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ w  u& b$ E8 b2 [: I: F+ ^0 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. [, f; A: ]2 V! [" O* P. q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# `% |' d) m9 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 H# ]1 i3 J. y7 R# f' O+ b1 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ }9 e4 J1 f. |% \$ K! n7 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 k( G( v! X" Q' _, P0 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: Z/ l8 D" K  [' x- V+ s# w8 n0 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 o- }5 i( u9 `4 j/ v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* M2 C, u% f  f+ ^6 y" Y! A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# j* O- w* ~# b% c/ h7 [5 K9 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: _  o4 v# j# l  A4 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 B3 A$ X0 u* C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 G1 ~& h" D. m0 X- U5 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' t/ A5 L4 {# W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 v" |8 z: }3 S1 m  f) k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ]( U* W. y8 j* u/ n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 f3 l- I+ H  b3 d  z3 A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ ^' c) [6 w" g5 A6 Z# U# R$ t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" n; y  h. [# b5 T, ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( w; n1 m3 h7 W& ]7 L5 \& ]  c: N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>