【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  g( a- w" _! R! Q( @The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 y/ n: V/ n9 ]# O: BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ k: @& F2 B1 g( g" `- _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) J; y5 ]% Q& v2 Z0 z0 _Seeing the sky content with its love
: d& K) x3 S3 h, |  fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# d/ `! H7 [8 k; SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ s! u; M% ?! F8 p' pEvery other word you utter is love
4 w( W* U* T4 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# Z! _" [7 \; `4 x/ K) e( [Nothing can compare to my love
! ^! U$ v' J. @, t- }: gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ B; h* x9 R( S( SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 E4 P. I3 b+ ?8 E" a2 H( aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 O8 A8 W7 Y$ W: U. dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 A, F- a# V! z3 m) @/ DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  ~1 G* t; e- c' W% a/ JWith such a tongue as yours,
/ q  y, ?! g1 \& Y2 w& jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 M4 U" p3 i6 O9 }  w5 }6 f+ G" @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 K* r; a! F4 C& r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 W/ q& t1 s, K, I1 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% \/ J4 x* h& k3 t/ `  ~2 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 P& T& b5 ]7 r2 Z, Z9 J+ d" a7 D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; a$ q8 m. }; n' O) c6 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& _7 E7 ^1 Y2 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- S( V* c. a9 E8 z9 X3 d- O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# l4 T  ^/ q' ~# c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ o7 a+ V3 Q/ [/ E( d; b3 R* r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ i, I1 t/ D4 }3 c. W! \/ G7 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% p8 V  }, S( d. W<P>你无需担心</P>
8 T# E7 m8 H5 b( M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 j$ {* r# D7 X: [7 P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 L9 H$ q4 n. M* v: ?( Q9 e; I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) v% B5 V8 ^- E% G& S4 t) k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 L6 `( Q3 b9 |0 [# C' H6 t+ s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ |7 V. W' Y. v' h2 Y& T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 g' O& e1 N& x7 H* n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% o1 n8 X; [  z" d( y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: t& e+ M% f0 q7 _9 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ M; r, P. s, |3 P: n. z2 n! G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! U6 Y! P, W) S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! y3 |3 S: |! O1 e8 ^( A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: A& M7 t# `/ M% A1 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' G$ Y  K; H( U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% |& b/ ?7 [, s5 s. O" q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. |) ~' J6 y4 O) ^9 c. X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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