【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

; I0 J4 i, \$ t0 o<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
: l0 K3 d% G: M
# \8 a: J0 h% m$ |" B" T3 }% ]
歌词我附在后面。
; ?' W2 j9 y" V7 o/ }( OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" U; x2 h0 t/ p0 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ~: Q7 q! ^) h( O" r0 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ P: i' T/ b3 m+ X  }Seeing the sky content with its love
/ ^, g; x1 A3 e: C2 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ `7 C; i+ u0 q: H: Q! X" iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! e' F7 \4 Z) N5 h" y3 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 W% M  l; M) c: x) E/ S: o7 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  K% G+ C2 k3 u8 f# N3 y4 y7 _4 U  dI’m still filled with fear
0 T& J! S8 ?6 `, j& kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 Q" H; T  a2 U4 B  iI regret not dying
) k0 m+ ~4 C1 r3 T9 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ b( C4 f& s0 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! L- _4 l2 Q) {& `0 v1 Z% [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! o2 ]8 ?5 D" _% i6 R# l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 `$ g5 h3 |, Y: ?6 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 {( Y- G# Q  d1 w2 {# A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 Y( C& h! e$ _. \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* X, H+ _2 H- O4 h1 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; F7 W/ c1 {* H# l$ |5 U9 a: T5 P* g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- b. t6 L2 I3 n! ]$ s! B7 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" L6 V0 r5 p$ M' Z. m( U8 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 z6 {/ @2 K* l/ M8 V7 ]  k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 d+ |9 m2 _; E" S$ g3 T+ ?% P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 G* t+ B% f' p, Q! Z<P>你无需担心</P>
- L) v: W4 N# D5 R/ q  h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ k6 N1 r+ u- r% f* w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  G$ n, Y% I0 W6 S: d* o/ Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& p) Z1 \+ ^3 A7 M- _9 K' a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) R$ @8 m8 E7 s8 X& J+ j9 Q9 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 D5 H: r( S# H( _# {' ]) [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) x5 |1 P# z/ p$ j" x  E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' p. h6 Q. i. s  j( W) @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- b2 T* S& S& Y" M7 t( i5 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# E$ `8 Q- p+ Z4 t3 D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. t% A. |: B. p2 ]5 c5 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 }7 U1 {, i; W8 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! R% d; H% @; K) O$ b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 T+ h; r& C- l- V& m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& ^( ]0 K* J0 _0 g2 p) z' o5 F8 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 K& O: }! N  a- ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# {$ h( \: T5 X+ A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# V" O2 _! h* l) @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 ~7 A. u5 h& w  L# y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) Z% r/ {1 l1 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* o1 d1 Y- L' V' [1 b( S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  M) q  I1 z- k2 f' Z, x7 L3 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 x% ?& @' q, S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
, b' B% q" q# g5 C6 c8 o! t$ o
我请你剖开它

9 m! b) }1 A8 c9 }! \( x8 Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>