【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) {( Y% K  ~, I6 f# ]+ F. Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 l6 E; k( R- r) b3 L7 ]4 v* ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ Z( M: _- ~: [7 T6 R$ M- WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; w7 ]! Q+ ]( x6 E5 F- xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% E% l& ~' ^. K0 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; @' n$ ?* g: O4 X; XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 D- A5 x% |3 i: [2 X2 |I want so much to see inside your heart
+ n, I5 `! E7 [/ P  n# l1 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& s4 x0 C5 @1 y$ g& ^# }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 Y: H  m  R# c, R4 t) kI regret not dying
8 N0 Y7 G: a! g) D- h$ R4 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! q. t1 I. _- U9 s: z- _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ ~7 p3 `: B& B' i% ~. z( b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& D0 ^2 Q$ Q8 {8 x% Z. h! }! U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* T2 ^4 W( Y3 {) y  I0 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* C0 ~0 c9 F8 R% G/ x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% M% I. |8 {% c; ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 b4 f+ q2 r6 i! O- C* c( h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 Z7 z* b8 H) W2 X- k' L8 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 {* e: e$ D' S4 H+ Q* V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 g( Q' F- `( y* {  {2 w5 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' c  Z& L( U+ p) x* `7 u7 _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ F% V3 k' d& G9 H0 V. t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 T9 v6 @: }4 b9 [& f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' n& T$ o' u4 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 U1 Q5 ?. o' R6 Z$ R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' Y) W1 ?6 r# a+ M' f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. O0 v3 _: X4 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 x$ b! f9 f7 y# j( w9 e0 y# Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% L* z6 S8 W6 L* [# L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ]3 L2 p  a, X+ X& j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( g, w6 A) N2 @3 V  [, P" s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, ^5 _- \" u1 X7 T% m) d* q+ c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, H) [' b( E. _5 f. J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 W5 s" @& y# c; j. \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# h1 I& W5 c, F5 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" K/ c) e3 z$ @# c% c- P: s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- [! ^/ N, P. }+ J. K+ r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, h3 x) D5 a0 i1 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 h; D, ^( t3 M. ^* _* J6 @3 e, i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& i; _/ [. n/ m1 g+ D我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>