【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& m  V; c, T! Q% ?5 d3 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" W6 K/ g9 o& c% h# FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: q: u8 C2 f' M& H& k& S" JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" D) X* t2 q7 w8 N; lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 \6 Q2 R$ k  R5 y/ {% u4 jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 G) ~: Y7 f' e; j: B# v+ f4 qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 O& G% c9 d' M7 V& r6 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, ?. E9 A: S: o9 T# G: {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 \- F: f( x( i" WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; H5 [" U$ |4 z4 x1 c% TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 n3 G- {, O/ Z7 ]; d8 J$ ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' p( k4 g4 C; E+ P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 b& z' J  Y& F3 G: G" Q6 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 J& q) M, U. `+ o& N+ w8 J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" c, X$ H* E7 S# ^; l) j$ a/ q; j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) ~$ j% z7 q% Z/ d# K  r6 {3 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( A, n/ ~  D+ K# ]7 `+ D. a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 z; C( Z  T, g$ R1 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# `) A, k; m. @0 ]3 K3 l8 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 g0 t: i2 r" t% l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- `" s0 _+ j8 [9 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 E1 W, l" h+ m& n4 z, w9 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 z. L; f. m5 M3 p; G' c4 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ b7 E4 l( H& f% Z2 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 p& @! O; i+ a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( v; t8 ~1 Y' \3 m6 S' Y$ o* P: N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 d/ c8 C+ W$ x+ `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ?! N; M; l8 e- B% L; c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; z5 N% k+ x2 T/ I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' |" u, J( o' R/ }$ C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 N' W  z2 X* T/ K, w1 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>