【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ `3 W+ [7 ?& C( ^' B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  E6 r+ n) q: p( |# rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& g; B- r" s. K( R! U5 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; O! _1 {! u1 x  Z/ B8 t  A4 w3 ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 |- S- ~& @+ A! j! ^- e: SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* S" Y$ k5 x2 o- q* m( u9 G: ]I love you I love you with all my heart
5 Z' \" Q1 C. [5 ]8 HNothing can compare to my love
# h+ F' a" W6 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 b* x. `# ^# y5 y$ k% f: [2 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 o, ]( x) W5 z" x' v/ {' a, ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, d% _1 @, j: E/ w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# j8 f" z; G& h+ ?$ q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 |, p# _, b  c' a' X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 U% {. N/ Y( F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  j' W# i. |, n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 D3 V/ @  t8 E% m) ~<P>你无需担心</P>
' F4 W3 c1 t8 ?; E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; c6 H8 E' k9 x9 J! l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& D0 e- V+ u2 V9 S' A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' `. E5 @6 |& @$ Q) y8 f% v$ B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 [: E8 s( ~: \. X* p2 t7 T! J  G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& b+ K7 g' U2 T; t- Y  P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( ]9 S: w3 V& p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ x! A  p( u( P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 q: L5 J/ s8 m$ T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 A- v# M* b2 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! M9 T! S' R$ H0 @6 F) t8 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% O0 j6 ^4 s# l. o* @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ r% ]  u+ ^- I- |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ @: n# j% Q4 b' M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, C& Y* g7 G5 I) L& r8 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 v2 s5 e' Q! t4 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 o( Z. [  u2 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. u5 W4 n/ g0 i* e+ c' Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 O$ L: f. ~/ c3 j6 D( Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 k) F# ]6 R3 ^, |& F& m% v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! y  Q7 ^" W4 K+ d' e9 B0 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 g6 a: c4 p* A5 F0 u" o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>