【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 C1 N+ q) S" O& H1 m3 E( IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" L6 ]3 S' u: ~0 \0 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. s% p6 P7 s% i% x) NWith the moon kissing it every night
. V( E* v3 v/ q5 X1 B* USeeing the sky content with its love
2 u) `# P% b2 KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( P8 \& Y  c. y1 _! y: NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 u! I+ d) i, q  s: e) xEvery other word you utter is love
* x# K, ]( B8 C( J! B' uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 N' U5 z5 E* u% E4 ^Nothing can compare to my love
, \- o- J2 H1 r" Q- {- G+ WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ R7 z: B9 q2 I' {- AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 m' B( v' J8 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! I" U' [  C& k  u% TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 |" P" y1 G) n( sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 y3 N. Y% R. u/ bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 I4 Y8 w6 K# y1 u: O; s1 P. x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# S- R/ [+ ]: N% J8 n# v! A1 |) d) K7 c$ R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 K- f* K( r; F! Y6 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' Y! g7 j4 H, ~9 ?- ]8 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 |$ v4 K0 A1 I5 n2 ^6 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
7 c8 j0 F- U. Q. s$ S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ L" u6 O& ~) G9 N# o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ ]) |/ X# a) J- ?/ j* o" D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" b  E7 E& \+ N+ }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 [& r* S7 l9 D" d3 T! i6 H) P8 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 M% s6 S- G/ V, G$ U) p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 d6 r, h# R8 r0 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( p/ J8 a/ i; e3 ]% r; f/ B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ S- `# P3 n" E/ e- n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% Y7 t/ h! a  _4 |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 o5 F, @. b, |0 n$ R& p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 _! |0 v1 c. @( s! \. z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& i/ F& {3 U+ X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 t3 H9 f7 M$ W! U7 v( g6 c% I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, w# Z% k6 k! A# Q$ v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 A0 s2 [% N  g+ C) S/ G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 W  r* E7 M8 p* F8 J" _9 c' I( R! R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ G) I4 C" Y3 G8 `3 I$ m: v+ Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& T+ h1 _# i' `& ~9 [/ R$ Z2 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>