【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  D! Q* w$ ^. H5 B# K+ @The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 F7 F. A" f" \' qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 R' D7 M% h5 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% K5 v4 x) @5 w1 O+ _6 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ ^$ {* S  t9 ]1 Q7 P6 D# K4 M, XSeeing the sky content with its love
: j/ `# u( s% L4 H# g; PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 B; T6 f- ~2 @+ n/ LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* i  m8 b: a3 L/ lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* O$ I8 h& I- B' X* C" rNothing can compare to my love
4 A6 j/ P" Q' q% O, q7 U3 P# ]- CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 x, E8 N7 a/ L1 b6 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' J3 A  b8 m# ?! KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" s2 P9 W! I: g) i' CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* V" Q' V  ~; p( q/ W. D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, {, ?! j. T6 y# B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; B+ F: t! \. p- e3 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 w+ N! ]9 n! N+ @1 j0 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 Z6 V- h3 n, T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ {; x6 Y+ l" s7 F8 |+ G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# g, ^; J9 V0 U" E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 ^& J/ i8 Z; K! s9 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 U+ [- H: H+ a0 A# Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; `& ?# s, N) g/ c, h. {+ g+ G& u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 j: `* k; e, A8 [' e% K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* ^6 X' K  A- _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 [- x4 M. a" a1 N8 G6 r( \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" R* x! B( t1 L" P" g+ Y" Q" J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; R/ g7 F! l/ y) t8 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ J. J, A% ^8 d# M) N1 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, l9 X  v$ \  g. J' d/ I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) {: z( _) d/ O- {0 F7 c8 g' j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- O- H" F! r. d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* |6 w6 O7 v% Z: [0 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, d* [* H+ Q3 {6 l: B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" d  S6 ?; l3 I5 r- @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 _3 G$ w5 ]: L( ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. Y  R2 k: N/ z+ c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; K. |( c' h# N, j) U; ?# o+ k  s' e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ K- ~6 J1 x3 U# k3 O9 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( t- r' O; q1 y% @; _, q* t  t& u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 V. s4 z/ Y2 K# A2 h  E; ]" E5 t* h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, E# ?  h4 n. j. L9 t# V/ @9 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 N+ r# C% u+ ^# D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ [1 w4 D) P4 ^* A# S, F' J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; r' `3 ^# ?5 o  a0 F& M9 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 h" w" B: a% `+ H: f* g9 E0 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ {7 Z/ m% c# O# E' s. m; {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 \, D* h, d7 ]1 u8 b2 B2 r: f$ n! q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! H$ u1 Z4 l) m7 C: b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, t  \6 m, P% `  h, \& B4 P3 T6 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>