【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- v8 F9 d. _8 s% Y- U. [6 \歌词我附在后面。
/ u% @' c3 N8 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& ]: e, A6 A! `5 N% _& a6 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' x" F! w1 G4 j8 O8 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
% o1 [  k+ v! k/ P1 J' j  C( uWith the moon kissing it every night
( ?9 T4 c+ d- s) b" P9 J" ~Seeing the sky content with its love
+ l1 B5 R; h. z- n5 w4 {4 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 b+ @7 {; b/ E& e7 `I love you I love you with all my heart
% {$ U) U6 [, \6 c9 ~5 FNothing can compare to my love
  m0 |% w4 D4 z- [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ T; Z$ r3 g( w# N0 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 `& \' g  N% ?" b& s9 `& hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 {6 N6 ?8 k+ B' g/ P; M& WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 r( B; w5 G6 o0 `" iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) B5 P+ ?* |0 V3 ?) Y' o9 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. D; S7 n( _/ c' @( A1 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ r5 ]0 k. G1 ^9 k4 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( e* o, N/ a" V" T. D6 u0 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 h( ?# o" q- X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 Z% n7 l- p0 f) [: t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ @' S, u8 h# @6 X3 L  n1 F/ v3 I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 n6 @) I! @3 S; a$ t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 w9 i' ]* Z6 `+ ?" _' Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 w# [+ c3 L1 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 p% j3 q9 P( s( T+ o. N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& d& V3 M2 o. Z/ O( B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 t1 L% o! W% n4 A0 B5 a4 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 B7 H* S3 c" n4 p$ _) \$ F( q9 @* b4 f3 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; q) D0 ?# v! P3 A% C; Y) Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 J8 H$ e9 ]4 S8 s! w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, |3 j' H( `; W8 @) y$ Z7 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ?* l! L0 _# H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 Z8 \/ T1 U5 \& v0 `/ Z/ H# }; L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 p  F9 N+ j3 y0 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ T+ _: U, ^, i( J. m" F+ @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( N/ N. D& w" `4 H4 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 e" h% ?  [+ ~1 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( |, e. D# u% R  L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" y2 {, B& l. W/ A: I+ i# S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
$ p$ b% p7 M, }# e: S/ i
9 {3 ?. ~8 ?  w. H6 z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 D$ n0 C4 w$ }) B0 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>