【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ R( d. x! z' @/ m歌词我附在后面。
/ W4 O8 e5 |! J; J! o5 u  I0 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 c* ]5 y4 _/ z) dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 x* d: z$ H" l+ aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 u) J, U0 S' I8 T; ~+ ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 ~! f+ {" P1 J" KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( d1 ?, f8 ?" ?4 @- q0 n% N- DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 w, F0 {8 p5 ^4 a# P- NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 ]  @- |+ R1 r4 l& \I want so much to see inside your heart
; h$ U  c# l6 y8 k$ Q9 Q3 J  Z8 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 p* j% {" {$ E2 o+ \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& o1 k# r* |  `% F. t3 h6 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& o. ]  _2 R, O! U0 v+ \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 ^) @) V0 v: k$ a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% L" W! p2 y( z, `, l; L( D$ J9 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 P4 \# o3 L/ p5 T( `! [# M2 ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 K  K) L' I+ r4 @0 w9 F5 @, ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% t/ x! }# L* U3 G) |. v; E, N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( u# k9 s, R" [( l  e" z" D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' J0 {6 K7 d: k* r& x! H/ g) ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 c6 D6 n4 o+ E3 }- p3 Z7 g" z( {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# Y% C- e3 u; i6 g3 ~" Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" e2 v' m* ^0 `, @) H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- K# c+ D* e% W* ?: c4 Q2 F! r8 W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- |4 W- n2 D% E8 I# O- R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* Z. Q3 a- U- X6 h$ h1 f9 X# e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! Z+ k8 ^7 l( \, x% q4 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 g; S3 }7 |' {: z3 _, F2 I1 Y6 r$ B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# K+ o8 v0 Z$ |5 U- L) ]% f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) L7 B+ C3 g# y- H5 Z- I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 A- @) z  x4 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- M5 Z  ?3 Z0 q/ f/ ~9 [1 q- O# Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% B4 [3 X2 }# y5 D+ z, ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 u4 c, t2 I2 c& \/ f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  B5 P9 M/ q7 d2 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 }1 N. @! ?& `& J& H' r: M5 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% f# ]/ v0 i) v1 K8 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 [0 S/ q: n6 f& U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ |' `% }: h5 r& F2 Y+ a( B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 e$ b4 K7 h! {; _8 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ p) O# E" {  ?6 x$ R( M% s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>