【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, t6 [  p/ `3 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, c# [0 A5 a7 C* b# n: N( mThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ T8 o9 {8 ~; z$ S0 j0 t, G. ]+ ~8 wWith the moon kissing it every night
* v1 |" l; E) L  d8 ^: oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' ^: y2 [8 w4 N% \' L9 Q" hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* N2 f; C2 p, `( j. Q" bI love you I love you with all my heart
6 g0 F- _* s6 SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ s0 X! D' ^6 ~: T+ }; `. ^* jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# K7 C) d: o' x- a) [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 u7 N; U& S  lI’m still filled with fear
- D4 g+ H" R# H! Y+ T  I4 H9 RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ h* h, \. v' ~. `' I+ Q4 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% t% V( q! i, F/ V& D& I" @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ O9 R+ r& P/ S6 k% d$ J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* v% S9 S- ^8 {1 W" y$ O% H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ K2 d. m9 U) p! O) M7 Z* R+ n  G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ Q' o  \% O: f/ P) R& {2 y& M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: B8 V: j6 K5 B$ {4 w0 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 b$ \6 F0 U! O( j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ O; A2 w4 |2 j2 z% I) J/ z* N1 W' \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. w$ G4 ~4 ~$ `2 ^, d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 }) u6 F; d( ^! c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 k9 ]2 A7 ?* B; g& ~: Y/ X) c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( `* J7 O" b- u$ j) I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 `& r5 h& M, i' p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! c- g2 O# p' b) I$ S5 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 D, N$ P8 i# |+ o7 G0 x  A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' K1 b  _* a& m8 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 N% N3 y! J: [) C6 b/ G! \% q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( M. f5 _4 B7 y# l4 B4 V' E' a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, _$ P! \4 x# e; R0 d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 r: Y  j9 L4 u$ X) {% n8 l3 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; \9 C" F: U( G$ F# Y6 N: `4 B$ s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 s) M* ^4 w4 k6 M( j! d: A9 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 q. Y+ F& j7 x1 ~4 @( q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( j- ~9 \8 u# U3 s; _; A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& m! j4 O* {" p2 w! X3 ?3 l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ t2 Q4 b: d, Y& f$ p8 m我请你剖开它
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8 f1 [# ]( M! ]6 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>