【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, ]+ H# U: w: @5 x0 ]1 p$ p5 A: o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 u4 ~7 b3 H6 t$ L1 \7 t5 m+ {Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ ~) H& W# {, u0 Q+ q: o3 C' tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 {" @8 K* a& q$ x) }& }' hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% Z( a# l( o1 W; CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. v  c; j. Q$ S. m" wYou needn’t fear anything
4 ^8 H8 d  ~1 c7 r$ x  rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ f5 T5 ?, ~1 a+ ~8 U2 B, [I really want to know just how much you love me
3 M3 N) S  \' H8 G; Z: X/ iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. r$ q7 C  G4 }; EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! t: C/ @, y& I( P/ ^2 dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ p) G0 h: T$ |$ Y. j/ WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, k* Y9 ?; z" T' [: w( Y4 k9 [With such a tongue as yours,
7 Z3 S5 }: G; `$ k! rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 w: }: ]  }/ k6 z6 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 J# n& O# U! T' d5 `9 U4 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ [/ \9 v& @6 s+ V- u0 k/ T9 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' a) O" E: s4 D' ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; Z2 ~: _, [! _7 w9 t, R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) O6 e8 ^" e8 Z  j. `# W# l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ @1 O: m+ C' I3 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* i. k- u* B; x/ L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ @+ d* i3 K) C0 ?/ X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 k$ A7 S. J; h4 P$ s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: h, t9 x+ q' ~1 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" t; w' \  v' M/ m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ z+ ~8 ]6 Y6 d7 w, Z6 H) J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: S7 i# w4 p# n! e) ]4 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 `, S1 B$ W4 [" o( ]6 ]2 w; J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 r  @' Q5 S- G& r' r& s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 i, U$ r# R, ~/ z* b4 h+ n; `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! a5 ]% h. L) V8 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( R5 V: s  I( X; O( F; _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* v; Q1 K+ z8 |7 e, h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  f* g# o- R8 z3 }2 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) `7 ~9 G4 h2 {- B/ Q$ ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: d3 I+ e  X' F8 L1 p# P& p% F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( w  E" m. \! Y% Y* z5 F7 l0 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  L( j- j: j& j* w# n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 a5 t3 Q# J, Z6 Y9 E" t" C  h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' q) I9 s2 Q( O3 O: }& l& P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 S. y+ t: f' @. I) T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! I: H: y0 ^: B4 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 r% n# h3 ~: |( N: v5 t; M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! ^- I- X' j3 V  t4 p' Z1 F0 A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

, z& I" ]1 R* V' U1 |2 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 g* g" p7 |' x+ s4 k' J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>