【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' y& K* T+ f1 G8 B6 ?! B' }歌词我附在后面。
( r; X3 d: J4 M: ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
  v9 ^, }) `7 e. ~  BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' @3 v( p5 O1 }) i! d2 c* c& |1 j6 d+ kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 {  i2 s$ X" H! r! t3 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. P) W/ \9 u' Z  X# e6 H0 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: Q% e  P& I9 L- ^You needn’t fear anything
& a4 I/ ?. c, L7 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 q* J* W+ z1 s3 b6 e7 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  n* A: V6 \; L8 }/ tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* ~4 I7 |3 y# w# o9 c5 X: B% ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ j' I- q' X( P% L3 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, a' p3 y- i0 z) W: C3 m. T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ v  o7 _# R; C+ G- ^6 b6 c8 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" I4 j  O& X0 \$ \: j4 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  ?) U! T0 ?* E! h7 O  u$ n* m" g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- o5 Z- O# X0 K: V+ B' f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. h9 S9 Q3 p' F3 q- B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, q' B9 {! b' F. S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% V* v0 m9 d# S# D% {3 ?$ p" j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* ?4 ]; g. P: h# h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: B  x& b6 A2 B, i& @. d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* r; E6 }! |/ e4 O% F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ z' l0 s* w  Q2 h& t  I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% \, n4 q! ?% u1 S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ f# Y. }- q) ]9 w( j3 Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* Y5 L6 U$ m# u* r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 [; T) N1 X- ?% W/ j' m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 d6 [1 N4 A/ ~& n: t9 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 J  `% y$ s8 n4 d& _' a0 D3 F1 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: ^: I" [8 {5 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ |8 d9 W, z" H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; }3 V. r& q( R" _: r% A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% Q' @: U6 s4 Y9 C/ A" N0 G( r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! b# {) @5 _1 b" G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ ?. j' s- p- C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ Q8 f* D( D* m& X# B6 d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, c( X2 O; _/ {  o. i9 [9 ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) s  r' s) ~) T) q) o1 ?) i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# c+ e% r- c4 U2 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ r$ i' N, F( \+ N/ B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>