【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: z7 }3 R- r0 W5 q) u! t' }( j歌词我附在后面。
9 ?2 m+ U7 `0 M3 V1 j* ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# Q- c- R% B' B& E  KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ P" o4 k1 S- wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; A) r1 p  M* ?) {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 [9 N3 \3 v. \: K& K: G5 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
% E' C* l) P2 y/ v+ U# y# vWith the moon kissing it every night
9 m+ G8 k7 F5 V- e1 ]6 x  USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ a1 H  l; K5 F; F3 t4 g7 c/ O6 dYou needn’t fear anything
6 H) L2 |( W( g( o, l" xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 f" a& N8 u. D' L7 g, B3 Z5 ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 V/ N) g9 L9 F/ _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 _& n$ g- T; u. a) xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- r! R3 W, [0 w$ ^9 L) ?I want so much to see inside your heart
# L) m4 W) g1 Q4 l' \' f' G5 a! mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# q5 \. k* J3 E# @$ x/ A8 fI’m still filled with fear
0 W( l$ ~% U) P9 N9 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 t" O& `& z; Y: ]+ DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ Q8 l" q9 M# v" FWith such a tongue as yours,
) E' p& j+ j4 WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# ~5 n3 `) U- d: I% P) Y7 e! fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# l$ s! _1 g3 o+ K7 N1 g4 |7 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; t- X) f$ A: Z4 B. Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& c) y1 G% u, q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 n4 \' ]( D! i; v; }- O" O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 |( |0 T% \. G; q% n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 Q9 @! Z$ h/ P& h. f0 Z3 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' t6 }, Y& |) B1 l1 [2 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  Q( X( o6 L' ~' F( y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  C/ V+ t8 v! d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' _- c" g/ `; o+ N7 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 F7 U$ y; H- o9 H, Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 w* x0 v; ]& F. a% u! i) I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& O5 D/ P$ Q1 w$ V# ~  c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ P$ G) T+ [# a2 g  J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' _+ H4 P5 W5 Q# u4 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' |; p6 E* |* H  n9 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! W+ p1 O4 B* U- j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 |* _, s) q0 _, i: P2 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 p5 l9 ]  b* O8 w& J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  r; ]( o( ?, A. `8 x8 M9 o我请你剖开它

" M; ~2 n6 ^$ H6 f2 `! S2 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>