【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: S- P$ d( B8 @' a% n$ OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- v" \7 p) ]$ W* P+ P5 o2 N' GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* w0 z, ]6 y5 l5 E) e( {! OSeeing the sky content with its love
. f& |9 _4 ]6 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% o9 p* M! q/ ~* dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 @0 j" n1 m, kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; A" F% @0 e; ^8 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" S. _4 J2 }0 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 g5 I* |- X4 c& |7 P8 ?7 o# y/ QI’m still filled with fear
. k/ ]1 n; a( Q6 f! b; y4 R6 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& m: [/ a  \8 T, N) J( q1 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 @9 m& y* [* t& }3 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ Y6 b/ j9 V& P! \; m4 U7 ?2 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ U3 f% W& }% U: [) Y" h1 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 o1 }" v/ q6 ~0 y4 O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 Y9 y* q) |& t! V1 J* H5 Q/ `6 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 {5 D/ \& B9 v% P  v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( c0 u; r% ~5 L1 y9 S# n: e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 i- Z6 R2 d; Y& T, y. P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 L+ ~2 G8 E9 F0 M" \<P>你无需担心</P>
8 [- O' Y. y7 U" Y+ j7 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: f( U0 Q& i) T6 d& F2 Y+ D7 v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" v. S) `- m" C( c4 g4 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: V# {; J* s" D1 s  `$ ?7 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' w  Z# X2 @6 ?( ~2 X: L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 Q+ v- \/ v5 q, @& N( x" f: ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: i: l( p) D1 B' O" Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' f6 c5 l  }4 S7 x; Q. C5 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. P8 p. f( P: W5 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( ~/ q8 v( z0 Y. ^/ h& F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) v  k9 ?: Y3 W5 h( c  N! Z8 ^* \<P>I regret not dying</P>
& s& V( s8 S: g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 _. ~6 c9 \0 n  s% `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 n: a3 `1 s; p( }* {' ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ B/ i9 r! D( {: }( ]# v7 K6 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- ]$ x! @+ t* ~我请你剖开它

) D* v" I0 [% Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- K2 H. p0 Y3 c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>