【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 k4 ?: Y* M) O! yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  E! m. l9 T# c2 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) p+ e1 y0 N7 w7 Q2 d$ DWith the moon kissing it every night
5 f. I: r" b. V5 ~* \Seeing the sky content with its love
6 G3 J, S! M, ^" A3 c  `, ^: pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* r, v# {/ Q0 G' X. e$ _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% T+ X( |7 z3 I! r, `, ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( c5 {1 }" D8 `1 `6 t) w- \. _5 p8 vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ Z+ f, d, ?; W0 Y0 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 U" {! k& L( `  D: ^0 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 X9 z2 ?& o9 ~# i/ AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 t" |2 d5 K: J* K9 SWith such a tongue as yours,
& Z  C; b6 ?1 l1 k- S% f0 W1 J4 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 x' T& k: M2 e+ f! }% L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 Z" [9 a* q* Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 E1 G  ^& ], u6 v- D" I: ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- C; W4 I/ \8 Y8 ?3 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 A0 J. F8 U# Q0 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( A. G! [& |% ]" k' |* E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 Q1 s3 M) X$ z. v' J& O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- [9 B) z% N# ?% ]8 u2 u, T2 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. ^" `, b& @8 p3 s! _/ K+ J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 X* ~2 }+ A: e" j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 M# q4 l5 G" \- |6 c7 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: Y2 |. k* T: X0 L2 L4 a, h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( Z1 y9 d; R  Y" {" A* _6 e& K: c3 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 g/ x' A1 Y" Y$ W# H! h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 Y8 O/ }, h5 O/ C* f2 @& ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 z& P$ e1 E- h; F- `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% ]: O' D% x; K  j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  X  @: ~/ P0 _: @$ f6 }( X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& E% {; Z4 `7 m  i" Y4 G/ O( @7 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( i8 e1 v3 R  C; n- E* P$ W& w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 f8 R! ?' O2 U0 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& N* {  Q5 W& k7 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 g% N' y, S7 @0 t/ x' y3 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, w& O6 v; c$ M<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 K; W" J  I4 T5 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* L% y7 w; C7 u+ l$ o% s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  b' m9 [4 h2 L3 u6 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ |" ?8 u7 _  h6 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& X% a0 X# E* s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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5 ]. R+ u1 D4 B' x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>