【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 B; h- Z. Q% m8 u: D9 A# cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 k$ |) V- ]- o' dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 C7 d. _: p1 m3 Z6 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" O  I- d9 Q3 Q' iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" @2 P8 ~, M" S6 K3 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
! D3 C0 d- _9 y7 qWith the moon kissing it every night
# j9 a; }* ^. s# L/ F9 p$ ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 B3 @8 A- p" }6 t1 n% U/ KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# L# g; N" D# Q' MI love you I love you with all my heart
  i( a" [- Z& R/ F3 U: TNothing can compare to my love
# E6 ^1 m, H! mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  E7 y' O) v! sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) H2 b* Q  }* y6 K, `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. r/ T2 w9 B$ R2 ?2 R" `1 r+ Z( g2 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' z( [0 G; U' p. V6 U1 o" xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% q' [6 ^8 |3 p  N$ [+ E+ H+ R3 p* HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* ^/ X" Z# [; X4 C2 q$ `0 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  p: d! ]. U$ }7 P2 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( [+ W0 A5 V# E7 X' U8 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 U* w& B% F0 A& l$ s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 z* \; x/ a8 M1 I1 x: D: g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( U$ m8 q* q7 Z& W7 c- [& L' ^% @, P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  W- H* D( F3 z' L% a7 P2 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. ^9 A9 T  a6 T: @. ?% }( I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 C9 j9 f0 K8 e( l" u8 L" f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. g% |8 c0 ~8 f0 H( }/ a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ ~- D; w: u: ?! M( ?6 m<P>你无需担心</P>
9 H4 P- h# M* A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" Q' o& `( S, O* r0 O0 C# [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 t  z4 o6 @2 C3 |1 z) r) F" ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. c* f6 t+ H( x: z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ Q# Y( I0 w% ^; z/ X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 }5 V, i# F$ Q! [# Q& i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 r8 h( r( ?8 M& q; r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, P2 O. @. x9 O' I7 L" a2 }9 @* x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" P8 p+ P4 g+ W5 X5 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 n2 ]! I2 C2 I, q. \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( f# E; Z# K. D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. `4 z9 D" y; r' f6 Y9 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 @$ s/ j: p( t1 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! }% Z9 P5 @* `. W0 [3 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& E$ A& i" k# Q4 `; `. i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# D. |8 I  A; n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! I  I8 X: f$ o% K5 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>