【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' H$ i/ k0 M6 ^5 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 n  j8 [; U) d- zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ?4 c2 G1 _1 M4 ]( NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 G5 s1 F/ ~6 g" d& B  @5 U5 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* `1 F$ V$ ?! R0 ]7 w- H& DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 r) P$ m. Z0 |" ZI really want to know just how much you love me
/ X7 F( z+ U! y+ Q3 y2 dI love you I love you with all my heart
/ l  o7 Q. n# l$ `; l' y5 m  e% UNothing can compare to my love
; V9 t' M! y, H) S# PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* D3 x  C$ M, _0 `/ c; {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 C0 }! a9 @6 e9 W5 P1 L+ mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 C. R2 J! b. w: b' j' ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 y) t: Z. o% ~I regret not dying
; \$ Z8 l! ]/ n" O( ~& X% m% kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. z# n* j" `( }" d* y/ U1 }5 \With such a tongue as yours,
7 O/ c) J! x! o6 i1 k. oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 ?7 H8 h* @7 A! y: Y% G( {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! N: i' B& e6 Q% w: f! R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* X2 X( h5 W) |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# |/ z/ K( f6 b; j+ |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 w( H) s$ c4 s+ b) E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ f& D. N4 f9 Z  a# P# z- b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: y$ ^; a8 Z0 t" V  l1 q: E8 J8 K# q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 w0 \& p9 Z. K4 P8 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, y: F- z1 r* X1 n, I1 F0 P) \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ O! B' E3 W! c; g" C. }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. _& E; t% a' M& U, w; L2 v2 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! x7 [; f5 I2 B* ^& ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 n/ |2 Y# b# {8 `$ c' P1 j( k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* o7 z8 I3 @+ s- O  }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& U3 q' T) M3 C- p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  d9 i' B9 N) J% w- h" Q0 C( r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' I4 Y! t; c& C3 B, L; Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ O; O8 G# M/ l. ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* B6 B: ]9 y7 v' e, g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" i3 D4 X2 q5 O, Q% b, T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' e4 h/ B5 m4 ~4 P( k/ i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ A" Q- r9 c+ Z$ _: R8 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% A- l8 C6 ]# f- N' x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>