【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 _* e! b4 e% m, z/ h9 M8 M5 a: PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 M6 J! j4 _% g+ }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; T2 T6 l8 W% ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 D2 V& S, S9 @Every other word you utter is love
  i- o; A; K: P/ T- S0 CI really want to know just how much you love me
/ J. O, R6 \+ E; `$ }I love you I love you with all my heart
: ?4 d5 t- |4 ]. r+ g" c- RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ @3 {, h1 }) C/ @( R5 f8 L$ oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* [* ^* f+ W8 H9 S  lWith such a tongue as yours,
  v) p+ `# u; BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( U. u8 ~4 j) ~% k/ s+ ?8 V; VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 r: v5 N* t$ k) k3 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 c1 L- \0 K' [0 L+ a) q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; y1 s) P! @0 i- _6 L' Q/ G4 F% L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 j0 N$ Y0 \8 K" {+ U$ _  p- K8 W3 t3 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' ^* n% q4 b1 F  U8 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- P! k8 E8 }$ O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! j9 t+ o1 H+ `5 r: J2 b$ t: Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 J9 v8 w4 M0 b. q! R9 @4 l( T# [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" a7 _- T; X) ?. O; X5 t, b5 G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 |9 C" @/ D9 U- b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) d" U5 l6 e' J/ Q% c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. ^4 S9 `- `$ M# ]4 Y4 W7 h! U+ p<P>你无需担心</P>
4 R3 Z% ?" j4 \7 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 \' g/ y  P% \$ X  O; r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ p' d- s5 q: D+ ]9 N/ [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- ^* ?3 K; O3 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" m+ ~4 I' J/ m6 x7 w5 W; A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  z  w& Y7 D8 }. _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 c# q6 a9 d1 G( h: X0 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 e* @, ?3 f! y4 k) ^7 Z3 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, ?* N0 i8 r, F- u; j1 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 O: G, n0 W$ K% o; C# T7 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ u2 ]$ _! @# C( _3 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# ?0 e' i/ |" z" K" _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& O7 Q2 e  N$ M6 d1 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ w) J% U  w/ \* k8 l# X. i: g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: \  q/ f! N% j  F. R- n  N/ g2 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ O0 `1 i' W0 S: ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 ~# L  G! U0 u0 U: z3 V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- \$ U; r' M1 a( H  q# M% L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 ]. i$ N) Q9 v5 k8 Z1 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% ^( b* i3 D* w, P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" g" P2 ^/ ]* e3 X2 _6 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 R: ]+ `( ~6 Q$ X$ i1 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( E* B6 M2 {' V/ h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) j3 K$ _5 h; ~3 b" I# x& `( K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 T) H; F& t! j) B+ J$ |- D我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* `8 ?/ z) Y2 o$ d# D* m8 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>