【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, p' h  U8 V6 O0 i% _$ \, s歌词我附在后面。
) V- Z8 Q+ ]! L+ HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: L# K# c& V1 S9 b, m0 Z$ W) I  qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( X9 i* i& I4 k1 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) H: |- @! i  x# c- @' s0 n& a- w, rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 H: t. e( O3 ?0 k' g: PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! @' A9 q9 C+ h4 D' Z+ m0 KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 S) m# x/ m! E9 [% x( O9 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, Z3 S: f( V& H9 ~; W& a7 b. ~; HI want so much to see inside your heart
/ c3 q9 E' n8 J0 y7 g  kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 [% m; ]) `# q2 PI’m still filled with fear
7 R: ^- H3 g6 wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; w) E1 \' [9 |5 g- [' xI regret not dying
3 i+ e/ X$ u1 m5 j: v! o* MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) g$ }8 c% B8 g. g7 v; @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- _+ _" e  {% Y3 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 l& L0 ?' j- F8 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* ~8 N& t: |, N6 n1 u5 K; {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# i/ q6 y' K5 C4 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: t3 t! F' s' c7 o: [% u, V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; d* d9 w' N9 e; O5 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- N1 x/ N+ d& Z/ r' X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! a- [1 ]3 q: P9 F0 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 w# m& G- v  m2 r* g4 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ a9 A; {& R7 Q6 S8 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ Z) M' t5 ?! X' M; C; D- M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& T0 ^0 x: K7 @8 f5 H# m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 e8 |, s! G+ v3 j/ j4 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ _/ h8 M/ n* Z/ F' J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) w4 _' h) \$ S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 M. f) n" h; }9 A- q* @4 g% P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% y0 [& {8 O5 U7 j. g. ]9 w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, ~5 p7 d/ R" \0 \4 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 o! {$ {6 l8 C% a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" I. `. F; d* F+ D8 M( J1 s  b3 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) k; Y# L, ]' m; f1 V# `* K$ y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  I9 @3 ^. N4 n1 N! E  ?! o3 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 U( T6 g+ q6 B9 R" p8 Y; J% w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: n. i, l/ ?4 C+ J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% n! w5 X6 ]$ }9 W: w1 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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$ ?9 Y+ [$ T( y" h6 j: x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>