【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" E- d: R7 S' W  BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 h/ C7 G5 M+ z2 T. T- g1 D4 u+ U& ?The sky is happy down to its soul
# H$ X* u0 E8 I( C( E3 HWith the moon kissing it every night
* R/ c6 s* P/ K$ h! R+ zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' E' D3 M' ^$ b8 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 `6 `5 C# h' M0 b# y6 O2 cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ x: S! _) g/ N2 }. yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ d$ k1 J. D, d, F3 n( z5 U, ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  r+ B6 X5 q, TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ p5 Q8 A; [& fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* L$ H* E0 A! J* r- s+ t: w5 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' d7 U/ s1 v/ @# p/ h3 Q; ]" r# ?I regret not dying
8 L" f! A9 z, m. \9 _# V! {* Y' X2 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 s% g: j! d; H( m: \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 q- s# @& t- P5 I$ ^% SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 ?8 m+ d( o; H& z/ L  q# sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( @! L& Y: ^# A* Z' R" L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 E1 n% Q8 V& g0 T$ Q0 h0 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ d! d. r  M! V% ^# p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# `6 Y* R9 _: W0 U( ]  H" j9 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; ^7 |. s7 `  e* R' Z. s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ z# m$ f: V1 b- M& a3 p) r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 _+ o0 o& |. _4 n, F- A( ]# ^; Z$ {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 Y3 c+ ^( t) }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& G" q9 v: B1 q; B! ]' i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 X* F$ W7 u' n! {; _6 S) |$ d; h! f; N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 ]. ?6 i$ C2 C+ p- {, |4 V3 `' c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 `  x4 C: ^3 }3 e  p! z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 I* h) W) a5 P% u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: W# S% z2 D( _1 L" _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: \: m: B1 q0 g$ h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. d: p  X$ ]0 A0 a  B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 W- ]* h/ w3 t6 x' c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  g6 c) N! L; x* }: Z6 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 F$ N2 Q& f/ W# ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 n0 Q6 l. @4 b) |0 R* R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  m) m  d; ]' G3 G1 }8 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* N4 S; l% h# P1 l+ @( I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- n; H4 k  a, u3 o7 p& f, V0 J% y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' n' w, @. X' u# {' H. }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& y& K! ]$ e2 \, n5 K  J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: B0 q1 K/ e0 {6 k! T7 H/ J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 c7 S3 x  ?" u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" g1 M8 q$ e- z# |# }1 Q' @9 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& w$ h7 s: F# X& g, X) T0 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, W) K. Z; W* L; `6 x# u5 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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