【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% z% s6 y3 G+ X! ]( m# w" ?* S1 u歌词我附在后面。
+ S3 b( ~- F! u2 Y* x, g! F6 }! cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- \0 w& q! y( L, U" H0 K; pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 W/ t0 ]# f9 A7 D& cThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 N6 h& {* o3 \( j( HWith the moon kissing it every night
# ?. k# ^) m$ j. n; cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ E" |+ v8 z/ |( _7 W9 |8 [Every other word you utter is love
% B! n1 Q  \9 i5 xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 @" r  H* [8 @0 E7 RNothing can compare to my love
, k& n6 k7 S7 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 H0 c( G5 G% pI want so much to see inside your heart
- H8 U. U+ Q& X% vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 H) x2 |+ [# Z: I& f) d5 y# GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% @; Z; |; X+ q) n& k7 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ E. P/ C, Y7 Z+ [( @+ ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& s3 p+ ]$ Y0 _# w9 |) g! l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% E! [" |, d9 }$ |+ ^% e9 f7 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 {. J1 g$ P) }3 c( k4 v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# h  d- N& N$ B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 P7 v* m1 G( |$ |3 J3 ^9 t: q' J* ^1 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( }! d; Y$ P/ \  m: ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 V2 e! u& F! F3 U5 x- R. I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& I0 I; J8 D/ ?5 Y- u& y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, U3 q- ^$ i! K3 u<P>你无需担心</P>
6 C) L, p8 {. b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. ~3 `* p3 L0 A. }* |7 K) x9 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% \8 P8 m( ^% J) U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% A, |+ m% E* {; c4 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 O) M) b! `* F7 B1 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  k2 t3 o& a- h: {0 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) e- A9 f9 y+ s2 r0 u; L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 r7 k3 G( s% m1 j  K" n$ `" `& |5 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* w  Y0 y) a4 n4 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 Y; ^* A; [5 E2 O- b& [1 Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; k- h9 g. L, ]. i7 Q# L4 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' K: \8 U* F( A" s; ]5 q$ T<P>I regret not dying</P>
) x/ k; _5 i" ]0 ~' D2 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! n# I6 ?7 p; j8 w; C. a' v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; J- E% v' S: E1 _. L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* n) |$ \4 Y) o' q: a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 \$ |" e, A% ~8 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: S+ L+ u* |5 T1 |& @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

; B2 R7 v; _/ v' D$ i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>