【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 \; r; E, W! R' Z# K% L歌词我附在后面。
. P+ j. E. b" u' k$ f2 U( N- aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- B- @! c7 P8 ?, V. r! ^" [# A8 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
# B0 d. h6 R7 Y' x( t5 n8 E6 q) cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( q5 \. J  D/ V, D5 q) m' kEvery other word you utter is love
1 |; v# U! q! W- ?2 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
% l# O. n2 d  _. `3 b  |) |8 |I love you I love you with all my heart
+ U) V) @; y, l* Z6 lNothing can compare to my love
7 u( E3 {9 B/ q0 ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ J  |9 R6 |! b& ]! `, t$ eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 B; G3 ]% ]8 B1 DI want so much to see inside your heart
; L6 o$ P8 n4 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) L# _' C9 c) hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* r6 m, f' p+ R6 \6 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 G$ k; C0 W  Z) ^/ @' zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 |  c! E) R3 F' v3 d/ qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, n( @7 k, j$ L; ^3 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( F# e9 I7 \& C, I- f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# t7 L: H: |2 v  B. V8 c" g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  ~0 H2 @. t/ w9 Z( I& U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, _4 k. G% U  Y6 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 ~+ y% l3 I6 e4 P$ O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; X. u: A; \$ f* E* f, }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  T3 P  ^9 f- B. e! k* b! Y. A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 q$ X" c& c, J9 a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  S* c3 }! m  G& R6 t! x+ f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 N2 p: P$ ]+ a6 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& ]/ l4 `* m( J9 @( v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ Q1 w5 P! X7 E! ~( }% B" n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) G/ z3 y1 e5 i1 E2 i* A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. ~* L+ K  N. A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; ~4 ^; M& L3 |8 Z8 o: @+ k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- u) S5 u1 E  y. _0 Z) `<P>I regret not dying</P>
; P! N; j2 u' s5 e2 T$ S. \, }+ d) T% {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 S5 r3 X6 F' i9 |+ v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  Z* z; M# m+ O8 \8 ~# e% Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% y# G' L$ v  W) {' T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

4 [  A3 W8 P- i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ Z5 ?$ v9 G) @, ?+ G' t! t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>