【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% C. `: l5 @4 `, T( D/ ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 m5 a# K- O( q  e( hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: `* m; R+ ]2 F" ^0 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- X8 @8 {- T0 n! Z& H, Z& PThe sky is happy down to its soul
, E, o: ?' f' S7 p8 YWith the moon kissing it every night
8 G$ R' Q( _; y7 [0 |6 o( QSeeing the sky content with its love
3 Z% e8 }- \8 F* BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 E0 |( s& J* F" ^9 |$ bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; O9 M- Z# a! ~* T8 y% O$ FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 W& L0 p4 m2 }% x, e' @% [% W! ^I’m still filled with fear
, Z, Y+ V2 v0 L% R. RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" Y3 ?: B% t" \! ?3 `* F7 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) O5 V: o7 w( ^+ R* T% rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 r. S1 G- p- v  xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  q4 {: n* K1 Q+ v5 O3 m+ H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 W* b9 Z9 s- c) }" \2 d. V5 G1 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. b1 \% z% l6 m  J* R# y+ _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ A6 B: y7 i2 n8 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 p/ k- p: e0 [9 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 z/ I2 J$ o# U& I* {, @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 F( z% E. J0 Z: E# X# {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( A- f& s1 u; @0 [0 k* [) q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" ?! ~) H2 Z! ^" ?. d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, B) j  P. s" B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. M' n) \4 w; ?7 v2 l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; q# [: |* S' [, d/ \7 I3 H  m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; I& d; e8 l6 Q, }. D, r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, `) k5 a: c. U, L2 l# F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 Q2 H( v1 ]; \+ J1 U" @9 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 e( E) ?+ g6 q5 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ D$ F2 |& B" y5 i: l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 W2 U: b" Z/ A- o$ w5 l  t3 W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 L8 ?$ o9 f! J- b! Q4 o; N+ ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, x- X' Y$ t+ f& J8 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 y' U0 @$ @$ X' _  ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. M; d+ ]7 [. C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. K# A6 U5 N- q( P: S: a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& d) F- h4 h. a3 z. m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; y8 u6 }" O5 B9 j4 B& m. l% J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 ?  a! @, B! a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* Y) C! r+ G$ A. F5 N* f3 i$ k: R& w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 A& K! x7 I7 J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ @# m9 W0 K0 A7 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( C0 a7 G. q* A) ]5 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' E8 D! Y: @! I. F, c; J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 T- M% F- [7 N& b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ `( k: q% c/ p9 J) j! y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>