【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, X. W# [4 ^  l4 ?- zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% c0 ]  U1 A6 Q0 H; D6 b! eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" T  X& M# _8 K/ l: O- g+ nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  w" N! Z. L4 F0 T& K6 O( P2 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# |4 R/ R+ k8 u6 I% v& O& \Seeing the sky content with its love
7 u) j: r) \' U5 k) {9 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; M8 E$ D$ y  X: wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# ?$ j  p( ^" \9 z% ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ }# V' I+ }( u+ m: V/ NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ \. I) t; w" R, yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. W% H5 z- d+ W; R: W) N# t  O! J/ _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 c( W" w; {# |# I& cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ q: h$ |) G9 o4 k3 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
% u" S3 [$ V* \0 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: U: r$ u; d, k8 r# z3 S3 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 I3 P* K1 }7 Q0 `. ?. R: q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  l& F% m9 Q! y% l% W* N4 j$ I! F9 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ x# e, i, E- I  q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ @5 X, o$ d& q; W- i* I/ b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" U! o6 l$ }# R+ h7 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ @4 p  }, R5 T/ o& S6 l' A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 i$ K4 g( ]$ J, [8 i. X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 L3 k- \/ A2 v. R* n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% A& x. ^2 s* j; U0 F1 l; J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: a) U: |& {0 }4 X; I) X- s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ d+ a5 ]; r. {) E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% S$ |, V- D* [1 M  t8 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 H; [0 P, }- ^& d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( B) p4 ?3 B6 I  K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 ?- }/ r& u1 P6 g! ~8 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' I! Q7 w. W3 g; S5 W4 `  E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 q, G; R) c7 f' \& G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 A- q6 i6 D* S  w) ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. ~& Q% n2 N# g/ m% _, ^/ s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- O, s( A2 R" [. x5 N  W, D8 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) G2 N5 H& Z3 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: N* v/ ?1 Q  O7 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) p! R0 V1 R* v# j, k( F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ `7 d! T& m8 d, C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( W) h3 X/ z: @7 c  e/ Z8 \. H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ e; X0 ?9 Q) {" F* Y6 k8 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; E+ i5 g  H& a6 S4 I* z1 |8 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" l) W- L1 C3 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 q& ~4 F7 k, M& I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% d% g6 ]$ ~* K: `3 b/ @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 W6 G6 N/ ~; U. b& U; s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 h) j) J8 N; Q2 U( Y0 J6 B8 M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>