【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ R: E6 R0 S9 V4 i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" M  j1 v8 x2 ^) `& WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: ~6 b2 K2 W9 J4 G4 C5 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ l+ x2 r1 I- Q+ FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, I; }; Q7 {) v1 C8 j* C9 W3 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ ?6 j+ x) \9 l' w" _& {4 ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ C- @# m! T* e: wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- i0 N0 J) H* p' V5 y9 ?8 y4 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 T9 E$ O9 y4 t% Y3 p: F1 xI’m still filled with fear
" R3 l9 B$ D  U8 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; e' Y4 q% R3 p) b$ ?/ f" bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, E% x' y, P3 F7 GWith such a tongue as yours,
* [6 W: j, k3 G6 y) r3 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, K) U/ a$ p5 ^; I1 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" O. ?. k! k# n7 s% O; B3 m' H1 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; q! ?0 Z0 b, i: T8 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 y* L7 k. m; o( d! h( u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; Y  P% E: h8 w: q9 Q! }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( }# }' L/ G- [1 j3 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 m5 h, W) Q' O6 O1 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 e. h! t0 I6 S: G3 v' x# s$ z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 W9 b0 r+ s4 o/ N2 ?4 C1 {2 ]7 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ @% H0 o# D. _+ o9 F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 U0 J) S5 B9 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 c: P" a) P4 ]5 r" Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  k& Y# b+ {  V2 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ^% ^, a) A* f' `8 Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 ]8 q: n/ B" D9 M- {* r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 v* m0 L! ]3 n: ~4 k% F) G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* y6 s: Q/ [, G: w& U9 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 [+ |# Q. c- |  U6 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 _$ s$ K! o' a# r/ @5 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 m/ o- w% [4 \) [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 p4 d* C1 r9 S" ^/ }. `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' p$ f* C4 \' n, J! S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 L( E* H6 Z0 v8 _' a" H5 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- n% x8 E2 F1 Y' `: L% @# O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: Q3 m, h8 Y- g1 z- m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; {9 m) V8 v, t" T- T& M2 \4 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ b% A9 E1 Q5 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* i# n9 X& t2 f' @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% J) {! G2 W0 _, ]: C$ F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# Y6 Q4 ^+ J, e8 f+ v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, O# Y# m6 c' o+ N  ]. T: _1 \! p5 m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 w1 ^2 i. H2 s6 [( g我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>