【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 H3 A% v; Q8 i$ N; iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. a- q+ x( M/ _  w& T% zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- p, S2 ^- z& s) n% \! BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ M9 D! E4 F7 a! p$ UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! }5 I2 b$ j) a. nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 j7 \5 J) F1 V2 r( \& MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 U% Z+ M, L" @" b7 L; E; o* V) sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 |( [, u! `" v: c9 V) L  v- O0 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! v; L5 \! G' T& rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 L3 n8 W- K3 {' f" g! G, C2 A; kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 ~4 ?6 e+ A( D$ q/ `. G) e1 K1 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 I& v4 m6 J- N' m/ zWith such a tongue as yours,
  M7 c# a: i1 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" T1 Q3 b9 {, U9 P9 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' h: ^! `9 O5 g) b8 D: X! Q9 l1 Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 V" N' J; H0 H' V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% F, {6 {9 E9 r9 W6 D9 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 q0 a) r" F4 @2 C" |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ j% L# c- y9 H; F- x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" ^. y8 B+ f( Z  l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' Z& w. G) }! ?% g. L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 {! s* `! s9 z! T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 R/ A! x8 q3 q+ L! ?; l) c' v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( m/ ^7 S) R$ {4 U' n$ Q2 p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 @* S  T: l  w# Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 n' g% G, f$ L8 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: k$ ]/ v! [6 e( [, e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 _6 ]" O0 B, Y& {( \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, `1 d" i# Z7 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 ?! W" r; I+ \! c# v# \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, W  I0 [9 W6 w# Z0 a3 ?! D<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& }; k  A6 W; X$ `! z/ }  w( w7 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* z8 I2 f% w# D, v8 q2 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 r3 O8 n4 ^' Q3 L' ^+ I( x$ @9 b* X" D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  ~; B) {/ T7 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% d- g$ z5 S0 w* V5 s* q& A8 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 N9 X7 v, a  M' w: G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>