【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& T. y" V0 B6 F8 f2 L6 J歌词我附在后面。
5 U  r' I, z. L6 s0 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ w3 L6 |- E/ l  J% s' f) WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" b; e3 T2 g  A, YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ w9 j9 r% \4 G6 A3 W' |The sky is happy down to its soul
4 \6 r+ _: |4 tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! V0 q1 G3 f4 ?0 Y6 S( C+ WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 g7 f9 f6 b$ k/ h7 f! h; E$ g1 X6 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; X7 D' |6 h8 @Every other word you utter is love
/ n* P; R8 x' X1 w" E- j; U% }2 DI really want to know just how much you love me
" Y/ C  J) q9 t" q0 k* R. f* x  }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 p- @$ w, _, N6 U7 O$ a, h- PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, q6 J% Z! X/ n0 s' H. [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- S  \( M, d- \4 J9 Z5 [  SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 p6 O, |+ o$ cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 B7 z; t5 O- l0 i5 a6 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ z7 |1 x* Y- v! S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 s& @7 F3 }  Q$ v" _) i' z& A- f1 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 T8 Y+ i" d8 z) S0 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 e2 r  {% J! X8 }) n2 C( L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& g$ I$ {0 E7 ~8 a& I2 g- t! ?" e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. O: g( A3 Y( r2 N6 t$ q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& d& H7 X" d8 v7 m7 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 u: n$ l/ ?6 k4 q& u/ s<P>你无需担心</P>
- I* _; R. b6 X7 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& a. ]6 @0 D  A$ O7 }( A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) ~2 X* P3 W7 }3 ~' g) j- h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* f0 g8 d; I( o8 f( }0 h5 c6 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 {" e1 C& S4 ?& \/ y; j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 r. H6 E6 _7 o8 m- g& K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! k; T% R0 b0 o( a: i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& b( c3 n; |) K7 s+ I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; s  S, X. k, c, B' {) p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" \. x8 J" T  |/ F9 N! X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) v: s2 o) F6 v/ K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) X2 n) H9 o8 U& d* R' ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 P( w6 @6 }' c  u* S; y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: o. X, L! b: g; N. d* g0 W# `<P>I regret not dying</P>
# b& V! A  F: H6 }7 L- }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% Z" f8 e4 g3 i' K( z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 H& Y5 K( U) G6 N8 m/ C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! n2 z. e! z( c- y3 B" C" y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 V" q4 H: V  J; l: ^1 B4 F* s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( g4 I0 J* K& ~8 }' T: N我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) h- R+ O2 p* h- p; h0 l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>