【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ U$ R! c; v' u+ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( r  H- P3 |1 d! i# {+ c9 N8 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
" B1 p. h0 ~0 tWith the moon kissing it every night
6 m5 p' Q3 m5 p5 k( b$ X7 b  J# CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: Q, {& H6 R0 DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  t: a. O  }/ {" b; d$ F' d1 k  hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! g% [+ R+ c4 P9 B- }0 ^. @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- l$ p  T% o0 KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 o, m9 C0 D" ]' \3 UI want so much to see inside your heart
# H9 t9 i$ ?9 u: F. f" ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( M4 l/ u$ \- _, [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; }& t6 n- M, T. g! y. EWith such a tongue as yours,
8 r4 i- ~3 t- a- ~8 ]+ v- Z1 uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# \5 W1 F1 H9 {3 V5 y5 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- ^; u: g/ B/ J* W  H8 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 d7 D# q' z2 H% W2 @3 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 s; f5 I; {( T9 D7 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 D& ?5 H0 D/ Y# y3 b' U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 D: K" m! T6 j: \' m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 P/ U7 J0 ]# `& R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! ^( Z8 O* N1 Z3 Y7 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% a4 `" W3 H+ n1 w, c2 E, j<P>你无需担心</P>
6 G5 H' i% n; J; a$ v$ {' j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# p4 S- W' }( H7 M0 N3 i. Z( a( w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 @/ E' P5 z- H  g2 g2 D1 h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! S: P' _0 X) {/ ]* V& @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 N9 X, R2 m, P! A9 N& x) n* [- Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, m, r3 j+ \3 d. ]0 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ O' h9 h; S% e& J0 H! j1 _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 }7 S5 _1 d" c% U: [0 w. E6 @/ X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 T2 b3 B. m& H* M0 Z! @4 [2 s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 _* m( A4 h% \) v$ j. {. t0 ?1 ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' x2 V/ a5 A! U  `* U, Y6 }5 [: q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, r( y+ \7 Q- m4 w/ ^0 F1 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) C& E9 C0 `# ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 G# Q# {+ y8 H0 d. ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 ^: ?5 F6 C3 o: |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
! j8 g$ z! \6 V7 |! F" f
7 ]6 `% m; [, {1 t) v我请你剖开它
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: I! q* B! g, s/ y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>