【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 ]1 Q0 G4 T& CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* c. j5 X5 ^- B0 n& b2 H1 `* `2 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, j( a; G2 }/ @5 B& ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% g( n3 [* I5 Z/ {! k  T( w4 Y6 G" ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; g8 R; q5 u% g  ^2 t0 q$ oI love you I love you with all my heart
1 i4 J9 g- J4 G! X) Q; \. tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& [; W1 x1 S* w9 j: Y/ R$ R& \I want so much to see inside your heart
, g9 E5 f, ~: KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 S+ x) `7 O8 YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ n1 F; J8 V8 g4 ^9 QWith such a tongue as yours,
- T# l- Y/ x/ P1 \) x$ rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, D0 K4 X6 f5 _/ B' C2 j& t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* q3 [+ B6 U0 r$ b' t( ^  Z' D, s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 Y5 }3 w( x4 y  W; }# h6 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' a7 L. _# ?% b: k6 Z, m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' }7 Y7 O  i6 ^0 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& Z% }: ~4 o7 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( H1 J# ?8 O% U' H5 @8 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 o, F" S& Y( ^  ?8 l  _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& Y; X/ S# d/ h- C2 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 k# ]; ^2 W+ n- r% ]9 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ n& h4 K0 O# s/ A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, {1 d9 v, _9 H1 k. b0 O8 X4 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 X8 T3 M8 p$ {  T4 E: s0 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. K1 h! ^7 ^# I4 y0 w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; Y. x8 j$ ~) Q( K5 Q5 x% ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- i  w; W! q0 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* m3 e. n$ f$ B! T( b+ W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 H* ]+ p1 O- C- ^  U6 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" }3 Z  p2 P: I- `" @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( w" X; S/ I9 h0 M! @- [我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>