【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- [1 m; L9 ^8 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 {% r0 Z; S' F* H: a; B2 G5 R7 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& x, R/ x7 t! c+ g" nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" T7 O( z& l$ M6 H. _* hSeeing the sky content with its love
4 N( T5 d8 }( h- oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 S9 F, M* z1 A2 h! G, \0 R) ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 [4 h: K* E' v# V1 r( L. GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. s* i" X" Y! D  Q, r  f6 F! FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 ]7 W3 n: f, Y) U* q# u- JI regret not dying
) A* M7 S* {; v+ L# j- A6 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- x) R& n, f7 X0 r9 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& n' J! e- T- j/ J7 `# ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 N" O9 n* v" L0 r: j  Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: j- R  |7 y. X' W$ b2 D+ y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 L, ^4 L: T1 N- v( \9 o6 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( m" P, ?) m  K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ u& Q/ x% I8 R* q7 @: P4 r+ A& F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! R( u8 t! R- s! l& D5 J  A5 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. N+ |" K) y( T. `3 m7 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& J. g, u5 u: L: C/ O/ B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' t- m. e% T% \) G8 V3 @8 ~2 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% s; {2 L/ F4 m6 Q- N& K0 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. i5 q- Y1 j3 [' P) @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 P0 F( L2 x3 Q/ ^! i% w' r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* `9 C, }( \) A: R# {: |  ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) w+ J; S0 x& s& p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# b/ C+ |/ j% e6 ^" Z) E4 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- ?' j2 k' s) Z2 }3 d# d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% W* u" m" g+ `' M2 e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" T: a7 X0 F! K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. J0 ]: \) |; J( h7 d+ J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, u# z- G1 g  U  y8 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" x3 P2 \4 f7 M1 p. R# |: }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) [7 K4 ~; ?2 X1 C' j' k' r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  x: h8 \( T* q3 }; [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* ]* g2 o$ S5 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>