【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 l# ?9 t0 M4 p; z6 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ u4 l" K8 _# ]3 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& V' n6 {9 U) ?' {The sky is happy down to its soul
  U! r5 l  b: Q" v5 fWith the moon kissing it every night
" n$ `) D& t4 M5 q( [Seeing the sky content with its love
; S7 }4 y3 }. [) L- t* f3 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 g3 K! R( X: k' a( B& Y7 ?- GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! q$ }! K( v8 t; T3 [, x" r. fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 ]1 O: K0 J" i4 J) o- D9 QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ Q$ U# r, s$ L( I; a% Y/ ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 I) G" O8 |( }: iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ g. @: Z/ g6 [0 k1 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ N. ~2 N) c1 {/ R. I' p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, @/ v7 _# H0 d& \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& q  G3 b0 z3 N& j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 l9 y/ x- @% K9 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& _3 F- I; T2 F- p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% I0 s1 [1 F, i2 k5 j5 y' K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: z/ I  b" f! X8 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ @, Q! b8 W0 e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# }% R5 V/ {) ~3 g5 n* F! i! W, j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% r3 T5 R2 X3 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 v6 o  M# s. y+ F9 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: s# J) N( s$ }2 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- V8 d$ n# D. ]7 e$ S! `5 `2 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 L2 h& d: F9 Z  z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 T, N  W  P2 e/ ]5 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 o# @0 [; n: j  u- ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 @  w" H+ C7 z) [, C9 G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! ?( P3 F. \  B" K: D* @* ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 R2 i3 A$ M3 w, D6 N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. N" H' T$ h1 n# n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ ~3 E# ~! S: i) R6 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 z$ c( S2 m: Y) t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 ~6 Y- e& x2 `: l+ b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 M# y) s( ?& |+ f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 ]. b3 |" E5 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 e9 n# g. f5 {7 J. c, |$ X; C6 g, \我请你剖开它
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) y1 t4 _6 O5 q' p) b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 b& Q& g8 F9 }  g. S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>