【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" ^  e" B& w+ j5 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 a# t/ N2 u% _' V. {' u: aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! t. v/ g; s4 c! lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ R  B! e0 S  n% G" `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" \% Q& X- j+ V( r2 N( kI really want to know just how much you love me
* u* v; w, n8 Q( [  n2 ]2 i) lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# w, ?+ ~8 V0 ^! i3 F$ J4 r4 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 A4 z# A/ o$ p/ MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' _  Y6 \+ l7 EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' @. n. K9 `- D( n% B0 N; lI’m still filled with fear
* x/ f9 O% q6 }7 I, zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ E" T. e% P! H4 R! V8 e" K* Y7 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- K' `7 J& `) K6 }With such a tongue as yours,
  F4 g) }# d% H8 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 g& u4 V" T( |9 W; d# ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. F% d& C$ h$ {7 Q% u6 w8 y8 H7 l# q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 J  U' a$ P7 w) \& @6 L/ d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. m( S. p" a+ r0 @* r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ q# o& g- o. g4 X5 o; X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* l2 z: M# M: c& C1 b+ u7 W# Q4 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ^5 S1 `1 C8 t$ `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- e1 w8 ~2 S6 U3 M- x& }7 g, w0 S, J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 ]; _: i5 x: L! i6 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& F0 U1 T3 H# W! M6 f, H# @% c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  i$ J# c3 V$ B  S6 ?2 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 G" W( D: C) L1 d1 D1 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) S5 H) T' H! J6 H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, G- b& O; ^% a0 m( }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% W3 v/ V, |1 O2 H7 `+ `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 C8 Y) p. b! B: e( y3 N3 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 z4 d" [3 i6 C) Y" e/ r* ]7 t4 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ V  F+ U, J' E5 X8 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 k/ [+ p) j0 k9 X  o2 z4 F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 v: `8 L4 @3 }) w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ S* h/ f( v' f/ \: u) y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% F$ q- L$ _  B- M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% i: M& S6 |$ |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ h$ y) `8 y: X, i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, X4 H5 F8 I3 C: @# e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ i* W! q  M* Y7 I2 F) Z  U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% ]. c7 R) f& T5 ]: C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>