【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
/ \4 O7 M3 w5 C8 i5 Q) b
<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

% l1 Z2 j/ ?6 @( H
歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 D, l0 D  [. jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, P: x! s$ G9 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 f1 x% m, ]2 B- g0 T+ ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# K+ Z$ R* ^5 D, |; w, l& g$ x% sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& M6 e( w- _: ]. IYou needn’t fear anything
7 H0 K- R/ G3 B% c1 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- ]  I3 V6 ]. l8 N1 ?5 C. z5 gEvery other word you utter is love
3 |" _: g- ?$ iI really want to know just how much you love me
- c1 O% K9 t. Q0 O2 r. XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 i% h8 C+ H8 Q. ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 L9 w2 Y1 ]3 X' r6 T* `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 t! q3 l& q( r! c4 k4 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ t3 f9 y: H, k7 w- j+ E& j7 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 g' n5 q2 {: e' m0 R! r- E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 H5 w4 I% x: N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% n1 e' [. j, {- S( w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; H6 |* U$ K/ ~, w* a5 _0 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ U$ a0 ]' b$ ?5 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 f2 j& Z! _" I  y7 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- _+ [* h, f; c5 q. E  D1 z. N: l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 Y0 e# X% s% [6 w+ I4 B3 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ I* N+ D% P" x6 F5 U. r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ s& s2 s  [( m8 P& q  ]; I9 v) i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) G/ q9 x' |! O! U) t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 |! I# v& g, d3 y2 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) V5 n5 N9 q( V# r+ s+ ~: C3 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* Y/ c. M/ |( w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% c# c+ W4 i# U* g  t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ @( h" m, b2 B5 W( L% P: v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 u( i( @3 V6 Q* @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: i! \# R6 [. l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' T9 U% G; I0 F7 y& U; }8 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 q( K; `9 i- \( P; B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 w) ]9 l, }. O1 C0 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) {2 |+ Y; u+ ?7 k' K5 y8 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 y7 `' v8 R: }5 _$ Q2 @$ S7 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 E# Q9 ]- O( n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 `$ x/ @7 l& s8 X& Q( U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 L0 \+ f; r8 @# p9 J1 S( r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 c. ^! ], k) ^. C# ~4 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ d2 \$ P  L9 E  `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 f/ O1 y( a% D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 X( R# i0 p$ ~: \7 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 W, W! Q; f# v! Q/ F9 c- Z3 Z% P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* D0 G6 R2 ?3 Q% d我请你剖开它
( `; `# y1 l0 n) ]: k( P* I  n
& G7 L8 |' G5 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
) t6 L' V; _  Y; `" c+ z* P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>