【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 m0 b1 x2 U8 r1 y5 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* U- r3 h9 V1 S7 G. M6 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* ^  Q  T6 H9 h+ jWith the moon kissing it every night
# X' P' w* c/ f5 s3 rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; Q4 z9 T3 c) ~* _' _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, D9 j1 i  `" z* k* nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  A$ d" T9 W& B/ M) _; h- @! HI’m still filled with fear
8 B* H# o# G  q7 ]0 ?6 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- {; }+ Y- i4 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) E# D+ I5 W2 Q5 Y  C9 [0 r$ ]With such a tongue as yours,
9 j( K1 H: _( O. o  j0 l9 {9 a0 g/ kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) A) Z+ U+ t. F1 t$ ^8 [# ^. ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( @: _: ~! _8 q% z# v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; }  u% p6 H# b; t- Z* @; z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ O1 [; L9 M" w5 M5 c4 D8 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 i% @& N4 p0 F- Q6 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 ^8 F6 y2 n, E! W. W) x; ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; x" N4 h" a2 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, S1 s- B+ y3 |, j* \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 _/ T0 z7 B( K6 x0 P9 d2 _: B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ F3 D2 V, H( ]0 t0 p2 n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ u1 Z  ?( ]# K. ~5 F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* E* m' ^2 E, O+ W/ q) d( d0 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  _6 \! r& s% n( T3 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 P' X: H6 V$ h" [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! C5 S$ R* l% r: n& ?  t# x7 @: ~! v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 ~. D& A" y: P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ?3 v$ o9 O# Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& `. p% O3 }  X: e7 I: {! f: M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 U0 m  a; A' P8 c6 y( C' f1 \& b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 l1 p6 n/ k% J# e# x) D, e1 E0 V" u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. o) M9 S0 W+ t3 X; |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 p+ v& X' B( X6 F  f# @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' c) {4 m8 \: W# ?* L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. O* \& V$ `) n  ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
# ^: a: w2 z$ f" Y* W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) T7 u4 F  Z% E- p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 T) u3 K( f) A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, r1 p9 k7 o' T6 s6 d; o4 |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 l+ h4 J& p; z  J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ l/ `5 w4 Q4 V3 N; Z& D- a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 B2 D& L, f  _& l7 `2 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 s7 W3 L- n5 S7 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! e* D6 z, r- z9 v. T# k" D/ ~我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 ^6 r/ z  n7 t  y# H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>