【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ N" {' J! U; t# c( Z1 o" nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 F4 Q8 F' @+ KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; w1 r+ _' G# x2 h( I6 G$ kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  h# {. J# Z& g( aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- R5 ]' K% @5 h4 A9 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( N  o$ E+ P/ R1 m, i" CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ L2 C; T! l/ mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; f1 l$ u- [: y3 y* s* q, y  ~I regret not dying
% T$ u& s8 e& p7 V6 T! u; \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ Z4 e+ ?" m  rWith such a tongue as yours,
4 C! J, }: z+ `2 W  k4 |2 D4 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) P- ?! A+ R3 t/ C0 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 r  f8 N' ~# D# O* c- i! B  i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 @9 ?- A  b( ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 _  ^0 v5 Q* ]  O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ V' Q) h8 `  l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# [5 P' n- m5 Q0 H" Q6 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' G6 C1 e6 d* E* J+ }4 i+ z/ \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 X& y; x5 j/ `$ T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 d  h; n) t; f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 w( i. V  I! t4 R+ S6 ]2 ]- B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 E1 y0 t1 t! i1 @# k$ k' v8 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- q/ `% a. s, J2 C" ^+ `8 R; q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 X8 V; ?8 s: K# V, L1 n( d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 H% }2 |- }; ]- W. Z8 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 }# w) F. C# O% {0 w+ M& `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ f# t$ j  t9 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 g; r+ Y9 b& D) f" R8 ]$ d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 i3 z% e3 r- v/ p2 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 m  T2 H! s7 j5 u* v8 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ K) i! Q0 M9 f; L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 x; _5 T  Y! V9 M7 [. V9 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' O5 f' N% S" t. P$ M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ q. l1 X- C+ K- Q, @2 x+ \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ m* N1 u1 H  Q, m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ I) u6 ?$ I2 _" i: y4 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 m% h- h$ F- d, z  W* r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% Q* ~3 {7 H! r, C. _$ W' o/ a& q% r& M# L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( v: u+ D5 w8 g% e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& u/ N/ R% q) Q- N' L. y: b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' ^" o; o; x9 `- w2 u, d$ h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 r* w- S# s0 |9 r: @3 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: x3 F* k3 m# u# \$ y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  M* U, r/ _& O$ P) _! H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% [" v+ \2 p3 [# g4 l5 |% k1 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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