【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, e7 I: _0 U- QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. m, \9 ]: o3 i! A, x. QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' {  l7 l7 y+ D% yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ f+ L# Z4 E. }; P* GThe sky is happy down to its soul
. b" u! z2 [! AWith the moon kissing it every night
) d. Q/ d% T$ f# ^' C2 X; J) R$ qSeeing the sky content with its love
. }1 g% _8 U! wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( ?# V/ g. \  F0 X; \8 {Every other word you utter is love
( F) }7 J: E7 u% t- bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( n8 `+ u9 ?6 [# G, {) vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! A3 V' L9 P: B7 p0 b1 B# EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# r: l) _# U: ?5 G: s3 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# I4 n$ G* u" h+ e6 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 \& H, T3 i+ ~, G" j: T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: S; n$ Z. ?8 J' |+ J+ J/ T  I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. H8 d! ~; v/ k  ?% y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 B. t% O+ D( g# Z7 G6 \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( B0 e- n  }4 V/ C: |2 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, ~6 d6 r0 |1 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, A7 N* u' d- s  M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 o$ S. H) `& Y& M+ G7 d, X, ]  X<P>你无需担心</P>
; h2 V  J& M1 t" r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 |4 }8 y9 I* A/ M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# i9 m2 B8 c( E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- J! H! S: [1 s4 y$ f# ~! a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! j7 f5 ^8 r8 A6 L% r: x4 y7 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: E2 e0 V  T& V8 L* O% S  l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; l8 f4 d% h4 Q, Z0 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, Z# x9 G) J1 z! @. N! F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- J8 \" N) Q( o- X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ Q: ?5 K& [) ~9 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) Q1 {! J' Q$ M. q7 B: N( P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" i. U& r* M1 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- A* h# E, _" y, ^+ ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, P9 E% \3 ~. M8 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 S+ f* [6 Y7 F) N* F& S4 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 F- P% E# j) k6 _6 p# v  L+ y0 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) a8 u! |$ H* ?* Q8 d5 b3 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: d/ B! f# K" |1 F6 ~1 q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# d" p3 \/ ^0 H: C% V0 t: u我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) ^; U$ F: ], Q3 j7 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>