【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 n* o' {, S& M, P( g* l- kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- W9 r1 U3 \; [2 }( F: j5 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 b% _- Q3 _9 Y, CThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 a& _1 K  k* a( T: s; ]5 h, WWith the moon kissing it every night
. i1 Y4 `/ f- F0 eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 v! z; O8 S1 z1 p" ]1 I! lYou needn’t fear anything
/ ~$ E) z9 C  A) |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- f% {$ }. ^3 ~% h& L5 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 c% s' P" n" ?8 }6 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 ~  q9 m+ j8 v4 g$ EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 _( j9 o9 Q0 a# x6 C. M$ d, E% N+ wI regret not dying
+ ]  l" L/ [$ GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. y4 N/ H9 F" \) p! @  w% TWith such a tongue as yours,
$ ?) ]- P( R. e2 @+ }! sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" P+ T' |) O5 w; M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) K0 d- e& b' j0 ~1 |7 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! U! g2 f. x$ _: }3 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ `' R- q! t; |  u5 R: W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! t0 m" i- u/ a8 _$ {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 \+ X6 A" D; }8 w" r( p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ g  I0 g+ X" m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 n) [2 k0 C$ v8 k! Z# H& I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" p9 r& h8 O" |+ }. g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 Z: o8 l6 F5 T0 K8 P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  q' [" }3 s3 G1 j, ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 Q- U8 f% d, e3 n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 w* I' S9 m: Z, l) I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ c4 [4 G" T- R; H) |; T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 j3 y/ Q0 c5 t: H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  z$ B4 L& L3 h' j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ A; m$ W. |3 f# e1 Y6 \7 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- c' q0 r: N( g8 B! G3 H, \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 \; `6 H+ t2 G8 E1 O% K9 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 J' c3 M6 J4 D, Z. ?9 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 M; c! F4 \1 N( _2 O% f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) C, w& H, O+ Q3 {+ S! f0 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 x8 Q( L3 z, n4 a3 s: r/ ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* |9 p$ I  P% k/ z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, R2 `; N, T  ]: C+ r& E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 G6 [0 Z: I0 `; }* }& \我请你剖开它
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8 d4 s5 T+ @% ?/ n- j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>