【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- S* |/ [" E6 z1 v: f' R( eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) k' H) ~! r! fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; M* g2 h3 r8 E$ iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ T9 m' F: h* U) [% A* GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- `; C8 C- m1 q7 Q& KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* z5 B7 ]# d7 y/ M# X" n8 A/ L1 [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" g' S6 o! ]& E. v( NI’m still filled with fear
. g- t7 }& [% K. ?% I$ gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' S. y* l# _7 v6 B$ GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 L4 s0 ], w/ |/ Q) h2 @) vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% ^, g7 \2 a2 C; o. U4 _5 t$ u2 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 s' e' u) M1 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. I& J3 N7 `& k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* G- {$ h, i! H" X: h$ W. r" P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ ~% G( P$ `  W5 y9 G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% s) H' ^7 r7 |, r# j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 z3 R& E7 `$ F" {: D' ]' ]' X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 J! _. u/ j- w* w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 t/ [' J* k9 `; e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: f5 h; F9 g+ V# L- O5 l0 j7 s( V& Z* k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. i; o! ~6 x6 R6 T1 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% P* I' b- ?! O# `. @<P>你无需担心</P>
. u" }# K* w! h( \# n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) l& Z3 N4 c3 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ t8 E! U9 q! L: t& `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. X! g7 }( F! }  z# W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 Q6 \2 y5 r8 @) K' H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! q9 Y. y' F8 ^/ K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% a3 h& @) T% u! H% H0 @( F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: C( V9 z: o. \7 i; G+ m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 ?  r2 M; u, V- q9 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# N8 d0 v: f# `9 P: K! _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  f3 P4 p8 \8 }( Q5 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 Q- M* b0 y% F1 b2 ~- |' j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- V4 M& z; @: Q0 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ V! p8 R: q$ n& n4 y/ S& ]$ O0 N% ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 b* k: j0 }$ J$ P6 t. c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# [: O0 c0 ~/ Z5 L+ ]1 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>