【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% s% j/ T* r9 X4 X. a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 e6 R% E7 ?7 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* s8 L3 w; U6 G: _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 b/ p* }  F$ m& KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ D1 v. O8 I1 aYou needn’t fear anything
% e$ X* K* h, K- A+ a5 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! C7 z" m) |5 Z* z2 RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( L6 l/ f: S# L4 a3 j* w- gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 p( o4 f4 |7 t% A3 XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 F$ s1 V  D& @/ B; e' L% JI’m still filled with fear
* F7 `2 l' Q8 \7 N9 S0 `$ z/ \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ H8 f/ Y) K! o$ k# U7 ~* {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ V! Z( Y" C9 K+ L  k6 U" _: PWith such a tongue as yours,
6 {. g( h, U7 y' ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 z" [: z7 \# Z4 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% b* D6 J' c0 M: D' K5 K, s7 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, v, j) ~0 B0 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 e  {* ^$ e9 d4 y, z7 m  e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  c  H; a- s5 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 J8 [% [6 |) D& Q5 ^8 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 B8 c1 \9 ?7 F6 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& q3 p* j/ {! d6 D: h% G: u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* p2 d, u, a1 M( m& b- c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ F8 x! |# P* T6 |<P>你无需担心</P>
) |' W" [* p) x7 _1 x' b8 A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( B& P0 C  R% W0 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! P: R; X; ~5 P" h; s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) P6 \( m0 z, a  d) H1 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ q- P0 d* a9 b& f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 H  E7 y6 R+ L( d- _/ o1 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 B9 k1 H3 v. s9 z/ ~/ @* ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; i9 k" C. n) l& T! s- R3 U% Q: Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. i& I+ _6 k4 T9 a( m' L* P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ b0 C  w$ E$ J+ d% P' c# O4 c( |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( K6 }  b" H% c3 u7 h% n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- g! B; F! M- ]8 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ e! J- ~6 ]- j: w( I% o6 j+ g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; n: y3 w  \! w) ^5 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  T& v6 E- S$ F  ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 V, i% Q$ y8 j" q# u. T/ f% {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' ~5 w" N9 ^, d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( M2 R7 B  y) |% H& D! V8 o7 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 n+ h1 ^8 H8 z+ k, {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& s. L% z1 Y& Y% i5 H8 K9 l, r/ w3 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" F: J2 W& s4 }1 R! Q5 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 x3 N! U8 X6 h/ X  |4 A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 ^3 X' c- S$ f0 p3 ?' f* b我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ }0 p8 ?, s6 \$ ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>