【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: k$ Q5 D) p' @! p- KThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 ]4 d+ W& ^9 G/ h$ S. cWith the moon kissing it every night
* ]' K+ A2 P! G* t5 }5 `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% r1 I- M) ]$ o' r' w) bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. w, U5 M7 i9 X( \% ?' |% }9 zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ o9 |. F; s2 p/ h6 g, lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 u& v+ y: W/ c  p9 x4 lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, h1 G4 {/ a3 S" KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% r9 I7 H9 y& m9 n/ [% H: XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# I' \0 X0 Q# ]0 ?% s, ~With such a tongue as yours,
# N: [5 `8 z- rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 A3 U  {; y, {, C7 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 P- `( J! [. V5 v0 x4 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 \3 C8 l0 y, X6 b/ X  Z& u; J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' ~1 q; {  \4 q$ T" E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  u; ?6 b  j3 K" k- V) L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, s5 e% Y2 G, K+ k, f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 H* D6 H/ |9 ~3 K7 a# T; p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 m) X$ H* j; Q! i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 \0 s9 j$ i- Z- R5 Q2 U; ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" m+ E+ ~( b( ~3 C& i- F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% J- a, Q) X7 B& {" F. W; j7 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: w% P+ ~3 O' B" S% @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& S( Y4 B# f3 Q- Y& p  E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ e' n$ F  @1 A- q5 |  ~  |8 W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% |4 U; Z$ q8 ~8 s2 o8 s& V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 V7 ], r( O0 N: d3 O8 Y) Z  G! }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 _* k$ Z9 \8 a0 {- s. u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 {1 r; W1 ~1 c6 p* @! x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  p0 K% o- o$ r" r. O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: g4 v1 ?# X( P4 w: @2 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# F: b( K0 G7 z% n$ j7 L, q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ }' o' F& o2 c& |$ k  [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; C2 ~& l+ Q* ?; o5 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ U4 k2 T7 o: v: e/ T+ |+ ]8 S$ V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' G! I0 Y7 Q7 U, \! l1 w7 J; m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 n( U9 ^9 Y( ^% a$ _9 G2 p<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 }! u# w! f( ~1 M- L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 ?- U. L9 n5 T3 b1 H# N, [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 n' P7 c+ J1 ~2 S- m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& c) h8 L4 \, w3 y8 A; }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 O; Z5 @+ a- S! R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% E6 n9 J! C3 }8 \& h9 b! V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( v/ R: m6 n4 i% v- ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ E3 H& |& r& \& m+ h* k6 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! v  B+ X2 C! j" y  e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>