【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- v! r4 m/ s1 _/ uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 u, f- h; l( \+ i. Q% QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( Z2 x0 X) O- O6 {& `1 W1 {; F# k3 {* ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 c+ x/ x% K! k+ [/ F* l: bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  c: r  K- i3 E5 Y1 p5 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 F! F6 G+ L" c$ m8 v6 ]: IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 ^% v- g* M' d: @+ g, ?Every other word you utter is love
1 O9 M, s' o! M$ u3 p! }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 @& x7 z2 y8 ]: tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 s( I2 ?1 R9 Q4 jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' U7 Y. O3 M3 U* q4 `2 fI regret not dying
6 |$ W( H; k# c) AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* t) d; u; h$ ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; k& a# X2 @7 e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 U, m, ~, S$ x; E& M! C) x5 J& M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. i8 Q+ ~3 \3 b6 G* z% t6 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" a0 @2 I+ ?% M% W- n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 D0 R  ]2 }" w! B' }1 r  _+ _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 P  P: m+ n, h8 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 ]0 o- z- }( i* V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% ~, Q8 r9 J) ?/ E1 N$ C7 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 ?- \! r$ j+ h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) }  I% u/ s2 t, }; t% o6 C& n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 W; f2 y& M; T' K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 s7 j% \% \0 A. ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 X: H+ C. v% y8 j7 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 |0 v, a) t$ J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 @" T' f3 [$ y8 z1 Y+ Z# F! r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 D5 n% m% l" l: P4 J0 W& K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; l$ s2 l2 P. N% C; Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 [9 c) B1 _7 @" u7 x- Q' F$ t/ t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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8 ^! x# y! W3 l8 r4 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% a4 y- n9 f4 Y6 k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 ~6 J/ s& k1 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 h* ?# s% v5 X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 ?% l1 r4 Z$ W* G- T1 ?" K, W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 E. W; F! E  X4 ^" N" R1 h! m* T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! B/ L& J% t4 ]/ y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 I& B* |1 C  L9 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, _0 q" ?: P# a, v# T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>