【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, b# W% K: g6 M0 K& D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: V6 _& ?! b8 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; X( |: ^8 X$ zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, Y: v* P0 @, D2 f5 J& [The sky is happy down to its soul
6 c) h4 w* I3 y4 O3 X4 W& vWith the moon kissing it every night
+ M3 W' Z2 y. U: s4 A3 xSeeing the sky content with its love
3 V7 _8 P6 t$ m" I" e9 d" i; k0 yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( I3 R# o  K; Z9 ?* eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: M# k. C9 J8 i8 Z) s6 eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 W5 V- H+ }6 U7 Y2 p% ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) X) }( d, R; o! PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ ~- ^% K2 p7 m; E8 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 @8 _/ O, i6 }- |; S7 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, W! B2 @- S& Z; g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. [3 [( x- P9 H2 A3 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ ~9 f0 N8 [7 ^2 W# G" k% w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, |' X3 \; A; k5 t& i6 b+ i5 H* K1 {$ E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 W% |& N. `5 ]8 g) ^- s1 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ e2 w% \* w0 O8 w/ k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. h+ u1 E6 o3 @. x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: g; A0 n: L% i3 h+ y- u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 L9 a% Q* W0 Q7 N' S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. ]  j$ Q4 q( E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ a$ ~9 U+ R" ]0 V9 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 h. ^  \9 U( M- C+ Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: g" h3 j5 B0 P7 _  q$ g9 I' @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 {6 v" x# [2 o& _. D7 W/ g" G" }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: Z8 s5 X5 P) C5 K. l/ }7 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" P; k& e; M8 I" _7 [7 b" Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 z' \# e9 ^5 v* m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 y/ a- c/ ~7 `* K# f* f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 _2 A$ o: v- @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. o& t' F& R) s7 `' N' t+ t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 X) Y4 [' R9 B8 Q4 @* t* I! H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 N& k/ t4 ~2 W2 {) i( p<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 W+ Z2 |8 @- i9 L( G# J' Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 c) n8 `) I* _' f, }, i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. S9 y: s# Y' E8 d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 a" D8 W) u8 i' h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 v4 g9 G2 S9 Q! m+ S& `( j% ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ w! g. x8 R4 S/ K$ k/ s7 c3 `) d7 ?  f* q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( b& G. j* L8 Q, [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, q. B. z/ `+ @' C4 M( v9 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>