【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ ]2 ~6 I% j) D歌词我附在后面。
5 X" H0 q5 [* s& h8 C/ ]- E  p: T: c" AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. n4 y2 _  F4 t( p! \2 p9 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 b) b! }1 ]) u6 [% b) RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 h9 b# D2 P& X  @+ Q6 D. DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 S3 I( t* S" E2 z; C4 \; i  J4 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% j) z6 f/ i; p- Z/ x3 m+ p0 aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' Q0 L/ \6 d& SI really want to know just how much you love me
. V6 b1 J! e( w- lI love you I love you with all my heart
! i" s# q2 _5 ~/ W& D0 jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. u- @+ p" U$ a" @; ~! D+ S. }, t  oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# s3 h% @: G* XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( n' \& E$ ?/ [$ {I regret not dying
7 M. p+ }9 v/ zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ z; |' w0 L2 v5 H$ T- @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 p  Y! h8 }( gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- B" D) {6 x5 G9 Z* ]3 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& `$ e% g. B. }, @/ C; q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ Q# U' a' I4 w, A4 H# }- Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 @. O. H/ N) |( Y  A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 x# i, z# s/ z( ?! R  u& f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 X7 ?1 r* d6 `; j. n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 _4 b' Q+ n6 l5 |1 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 Y6 B# y; y& J; r2 [& I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" C" v. `1 U: H' j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( r  w8 F+ \5 M8 G$ W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; Y3 H5 y% Q# O$ W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. J; o8 h  _/ _# k8 Q+ r1 w7 K: E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 A" M! Y3 B$ K# \% b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 v- A3 C% C& V$ Z; g8 Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 J& d) ?9 a9 \0 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 q) W. u8 w' h! Z. a# k2 `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, m  N8 P2 N- r8 h4 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 s1 u. q! e0 ~8 X0 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: p0 ~7 _  z. a$ ~* T7 z6 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 g1 y$ Y$ v/ m& l( F- t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! C- d- y2 d. x. Q" X$ k( h; X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 v9 R6 i# j& p. v' ]+ k2 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, ]2 h1 g1 p! e! {, X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ \) V( u2 ~( s1 _# j! p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, S8 b/ [. l% i, s& b2 J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. ~) h& s  p& K: F+ C; P! T1 b; x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 T) Q& s9 _1 k( E7 S7 V: w  b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 T: Q0 F. W% e# m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 b9 S- |# F  y2 u- X# }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, Y) q; w/ _( L$ s) O0 r6 f) Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>