【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 V" Z. u6 Z* P+ GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 g) K0 P& D& B/ fThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 s3 N! L6 B& s  H0 y# \$ e& _With the moon kissing it every night
; c1 K' N. y( SSeeing the sky content with its love
# m; S+ B$ ?! O# xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ~. j- W0 @) w6 ^8 x: REvery other word you utter is love
1 N4 [. K( j, uI really want to know just how much you love me
3 Q$ [7 v0 s6 \( r5 e: i+ j+ P& cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, y# n; x; t, \5 i* KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ d$ D0 o$ z8 o5 ?5 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% L0 ?0 ^2 O4 H: d$ tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  L7 `5 U5 b$ B. lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 c4 X. Q! d/ i( k/ z6 qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ D. b6 \' W, E! D4 i/ a* ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* Z) J0 m+ m+ u  e& pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  I" T3 t: k9 w3 S( N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 t( e  H: m' ]; ?. X0 P( a0 s! X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* @; l" R; o+ i7 {  M) p4 u. @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' ~0 C) h) h& U/ F( F  P/ a- [8 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# t/ k: b% [$ Z" s  H& p# ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% ]5 ]: S$ k' J. c6 D. H/ v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 z& p; ^; E' ~% d; |' R- M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( M8 v& ?, B7 e: j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 z7 H+ W: f: J# u/ _- k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ I, s1 e8 B; \, o4 j3 U5 K' M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 t" h, I2 q8 R* B+ {& Y2 Q' [( b' C) [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 n& L0 F  A7 z3 B: ~, F+ @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* A' W9 W' z! }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ d% P) Z7 n; {! P4 o3 y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; ^7 f+ }5 \- s/ S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, G2 _9 x  [( ^6 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! {' [, x8 l: ?/ ]$ v8 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; [" k1 X0 K. \$ y: u( [8 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 u$ I1 ]' z7 e" ]# g( w$ f8 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 R3 K1 G5 w. f& O0 V. R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" y7 s7 G% Z+ r* r( U; P! f; o9 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 J; W1 D# Q0 e& g5 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: Z1 D* b  \! m& O* P" s* o/ _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ h' j4 o/ P! q  C* s' h; \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# g# K" Z, \6 G" q9 m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 A( O8 u( @8 j5 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>