【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 q5 z1 g8 K% K3 o歌词我附在后面。
! y+ b) L. Q7 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ A6 a- G4 B  ~( O$ iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 z! G7 r( ^/ iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 o0 P% e6 g. F* dThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 z' o4 n; i5 S: T, c9 ]6 r/ |- }With the moon kissing it every night
0 M3 ~; t$ Q1 m! P9 g9 M/ U7 A8 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 ]4 q1 J6 u6 t' RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; M4 e8 b# L2 c" AI really want to know just how much you love me
) r+ S! K) y5 |- _, y. Y1 Y: x; mI love you I love you with all my heart
4 U4 J, B( K) A0 M6 |5 H+ @+ G. ENothing can compare to my love
" x, G; I4 ^4 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 i' C- H/ `9 ]0 i- lI want so much to see inside your heart
# ]/ j6 i% J% x) E1 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! |% X$ I& g% ]; A; QI’m still filled with fear
& o! e' K, `7 z. X1 G% iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# [7 }5 s* M6 W2 `8 `: ^- HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! k  Y8 K  E  KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ o( \9 j- i# N& n7 ^8 H' O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" T0 Z7 ^7 H# ]+ f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. N& m- `- `# L) u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- S- q2 m3 H# q6 R  `4 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 q" |5 c/ r2 f' y5 P* n7 W  b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" w0 H. \( ^1 B1 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& ^; i3 v% ?+ L8 l' z6 g; n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# o  j2 }. S5 N  W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 t- R4 y( Y- y% C$ {/ k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 n1 Y  Z( `$ m: F* L9 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 B; D% r0 W# I+ f. Y8 D- A) W- `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* O$ F! `- ~! O' H0 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& P) w3 R* a$ e! N5 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# F& S( t& a6 f5 ?) e4 @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ E4 a& J& q, h+ P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 W2 }& x& R0 ^3 u; g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. c& C5 Q" v1 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# I" X+ E8 c# g: X0 U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: B1 }( E4 |; |* F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 `* R3 f: Q' m2 z8 R; |* M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* e; P) Z+ Z& N! b0 |$ f. m$ D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ D$ [4 W# y0 [5 p$ m' o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 _; E5 I6 I& I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. w+ ^( g# H" p- d% i; F. @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ h; w: ~) B  Q% O( |7 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
% c* t0 A: m; t2 Y. S, x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 j3 p) p; G% n( l- {# M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. ]6 |! d% z, s, _1 a/ e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 w: O# P' R: }; S$ U/ M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 _9 p$ q, j9 Y$ }9 {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>