【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 k7 h5 c( F$ CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 H2 ?, o4 h+ E; n: e- }* jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 Q, b- U. a5 S3 U7 |* ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 X, R$ e+ i- h; e/ uThe sky is happy down to its soul
) b8 G, Y9 g# T  {% }7 X7 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 O( m; h5 w& X6 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 s7 ?% X4 `$ _/ XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* C' ?  I" ~8 C5 z6 x7 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ |4 E0 O1 f; o2 cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% Z" B* Y4 p+ L2 W/ _, }. hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& K  T% d, f3 j4 c6 VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 [, ~4 x9 ~& M( r7 eWith such a tongue as yours,
) \6 `9 q# i$ y3 ]7 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& e# K# K, M' S* e7 E! p( KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 E& ^% v5 M$ P0 U$ l* P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 f8 t. h. g  L! C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 x! i: Z8 @$ c6 I' u# \3 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  W# J! H" [$ _3 D" v) l: \) M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  I; D7 X. h$ k9 n2 l' t0 D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 V- c* Z) m& n2 `# {% K& x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ W- }1 ^) j7 N3 ^, P; y" a: G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# x1 v' A+ [4 E0 a" z2 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 d1 t5 r. I  r' j8 v; h6 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 `$ \1 f# ]1 f6 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 J0 D) \. `$ [/ u/ o! i' ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 L- h3 ]+ M2 X0 G/ C# i0 p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 |  s: f% j6 {* N3 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 {/ Q+ t. r, o/ H9 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; @) a" u! W3 H; f& P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. D6 M: a+ a, Q+ L4 U( G3 i- _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 {/ a2 q8 f6 N) r4 @5 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; j# Q" u5 J3 H0 \& j0 j3 J# ~" @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! S# m- T# b$ V. g' {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' l1 I1 X# \) _) C- s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ G4 F2 j7 q/ K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& R' Z: [1 _7 J8 m& L1 D+ W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% ?1 g. Q( Z. {8 N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ B0 B' N) s7 K7 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) }, g( e4 _6 l: W& o, j3 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" x4 n2 e# T3 z1 W% y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! U  c% k3 K: ^; v. X1 S" d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& b" d& k  Z2 Q* E5 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 R4 ~6 I; y% v% W' q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 b) ]" M, D) {. a- i+ ]$ [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ g6 P6 g0 K" j7 p7 l5 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>