【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 x  @" I; l- Y8 P' f2 l歌词我附在后面。
% I$ [: |1 Y1 U2 j4 w; q3 wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% W  i! J9 [  L6 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( M: j. q( E' W$ I4 a, Y7 }; VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: F' v, R, K/ j/ e) }. \- N8 [With the moon kissing it every night
9 ?( J1 N7 @& J( A' T2 l) zSeeing the sky content with its love
8 Y( t" h5 o' i; `8 s1 Q" @" o1 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 P9 J- D) n- [: pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 n* `8 M1 c+ s5 |Every other word you utter is love
2 b+ i# `; p+ k6 `& aI really want to know just how much you love me
- ], S! M, f5 I7 x" _$ e2 dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ E4 E2 j" m% X' q1 l- I2 ?/ ^- Z7 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( P4 u0 q" ^6 R1 @% }. vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) G& I; g0 q# |" J9 a; II’m still filled with fear
, s% D' W4 [4 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! ~, p5 Y$ u/ U$ E& }: h& [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 H) X8 J* d4 y! ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! u8 I( k( @* R' y' t/ B% j. R5 C, A+ dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, S% u. q. ~& k( h" V. h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 X/ p1 j  ~7 r& n8 Z$ J4 e9 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 B& o! _( f, S4 y4 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( Q0 B% p: ?7 q- I& o0 G& @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- E# [4 {3 O" m/ b. S# P% z* j& q1 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: K, h+ A* R& d+ S! C: x, y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ x7 _, H: q! {+ M6 E3 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 m$ Z3 Q8 n4 n; C8 Z0 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 @. L1 ^5 A# l. x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 x# `5 Y* s4 ^7 O2 J<P>你无需担心</P>
' p% U) ~) G; t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( V# W6 K: Z/ c4 R- v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. N; l) f) G' Q# J* {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 U7 |' ?- b6 o* h! R& \0 Z/ e3 K1 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. h1 \  _! i" K6 R( M0 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; i+ P+ |9 y2 Y% J' \3 e) Z& C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( p8 x" ]/ u: ?' o# C  ~6 P/ u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) I  S5 T- x0 q" p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 m; R: a, i8 |' |0 C  y( y/ ~; L# `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 `9 Q/ l6 Q4 K! v" y! |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; k1 Q" j7 Y4 i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 K9 o8 M  F$ a" N7 K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* ~( q* o1 F: ]' V5 n5 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: g' y5 z9 s" }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# {3 `5 P5 B- B$ O5 k7 m) r2 B8 @9 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& [/ b. `) o4 i$ U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- U+ I5 ?9 n) X0 l. f2 a* o) h! A! ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) I2 J, e) F" w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, P4 y1 k3 }4 |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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9 O2 K$ e4 w) f# z0 P7 P, u6 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ |4 D4 `% W/ }% D3 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>