【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" d9 g" s& }3 F$ HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 ~# Q* u+ l! B% KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! N# ~. u6 B5 ^. W4 D3 HWith the moon kissing it every night
' m  X$ z( ]2 q$ d  I! mSeeing the sky content with its love
& V; d; K3 v/ x7 C& q. T# dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ f1 U# N4 z4 T$ p: {3 s" xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& }% z2 V- u$ Z% r  CI really want to know just how much you love me
  Q& v* S6 X9 t$ u, {) |6 TI love you I love you with all my heart
% b1 p. j3 A! gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" ~; K2 S& M# j$ `0 `3 H0 Y/ wI regret not dying
! b( q3 p7 z: g3 u" j, i0 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  ]# J3 p! [7 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 h2 Q" N9 ?4 a+ S* w& ^) C% bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ X/ P) ~$ U- b* y; U! M5 W  l) P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 S0 h0 H8 r" v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 v$ k7 v1 b1 g* n$ N" `. r+ q; r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 @1 V; e2 d- y$ @5 i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( ~6 N* _1 g3 W; ^4 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( g2 P( R5 o& [, U/ y$ _3 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  X3 X+ d; v- Y9 p" {# A) Y: R: a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 M% |# J7 h5 D1 q, i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ _+ c* ^( @+ y, R3 u  I5 x( [9 R9 g% H<P>你无需担心</P>
& b4 U+ x: i% r. p4 H3 T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* l9 o8 ]4 h2 N2 v& l: A) p7 G" k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ v# N9 X  \; K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' O% _/ y3 Q( L+ t3 `- @/ {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  w" K+ ^3 E7 y& c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ u0 @, f3 B- w! n) c' u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% G) a7 a5 _2 n7 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 H+ d$ K1 x" J( J7 v( l) v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  L  [) i' g' ?0 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 A5 H; V9 P, b6 w1 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  t, r' A; |1 H* N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, c) \4 ^; x$ H: w, E5 i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# g; x- L8 X' A) ^; ~0 l; t+ V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# C. ^/ f. Q' l# r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 I4 D7 }3 N; E- w: N! F, R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 K2 i. F, N2 {3 P# A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ I" {' G! T9 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ `% Y9 P4 d- h7 f  z) k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>