【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' L& W4 j$ |; f: vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; f- k) h1 H5 t" G3 {8 t  b7 s( uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 b$ ?% y3 I' Q' ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( Z) `* }& g& A. t) B& ]9 Y3 GYou needn’t fear anything
- y5 L# f0 O; L! @5 I" F* fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( t, F) ~3 g% m9 G5 dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 O, L  h7 w8 t& o) x" YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 F9 t7 L5 `! L. V" eI want so much to see inside your heart
  |2 y; B, z( ^2 A5 v9 c' b- _" c; @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 L) N! W3 b" GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 T5 N/ m& S& b1 n3 X& k2 jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: M9 l9 U" h$ v2 v: a" ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( W# v# }& `3 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 `9 N2 x9 X& U1 @5 K6 R% h) v( Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 O" j- K" H4 p) D* @& B$ b$ o% |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ C4 n- ?2 `/ _$ o( G( e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 C- ^; l  u) c4 {$ C5 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  z0 f2 e; l8 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, \9 f- i  G/ m8 m5 i1 M# y- L3 |<P>你无需担心</P>
5 d# C% N% \) g. _5 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 m/ ~) X. {8 A3 G, A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 x* M- D4 s- ]& S  \9 Y4 z; }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! ~4 F% o7 y1 e% u+ Q0 \0 A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" r, i4 W  t( E8 z# ^8 X6 t- E& q; @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 Z& Q& u- R4 ]7 K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 v% q9 K9 x/ {( L1 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: z/ J* r( {% R3 p' T, z+ h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# g* }, }3 @' t/ n, t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* Q1 M& ]9 s6 _  r: Y" B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ S9 G  O8 n3 @. \' O0 F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ Y+ Q; R( `; h6 E* c8 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& W$ R2 z: K( L3 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% Y; {$ m$ [  z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* W8 s) C. e" ]9 ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: D7 t$ L$ n2 s2 m+ T: P% Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 x1 ?3 |8 r0 a- t0 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
; y3 J- }8 z; P/ w6 h+ C* @2 h* H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, c0 x5 G- x" w* Z) g: O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, O- ?. t1 p( f) J' }& T+ }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 A7 b$ o# @5 P; E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" w  @7 X, V& T# J2 K  ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 @( O  I6 ^% B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. V% Z) ?8 n8 e2 [5 U8 r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- _" l9 I/ V5 v% K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 B5 D. u9 o4 r0 l我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 g/ j7 D- o2 g! e) t, K) y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>