【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) U2 e$ O7 r( I( e: rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 p1 U( o: ?$ G, qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 X0 T& p. O" M  V7 M, K! F2 L4 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 }& t% g' T' @6 @9 l' E3 Z; Z5 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; K, S4 h/ V; K. z# l" t' vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  w( b* o7 v9 w" c& a0 K- ]/ |$ hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) C9 \$ o0 \2 r# _Nothing can compare to my love
: R, K( a. Q/ N  Y% b4 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: O$ ^3 B2 M3 N% _; WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 Q+ `9 H0 O( O* gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 g( b) D( a) |! ~! V4 w2 hWith such a tongue as yours,
( ^6 T3 a: _% o/ N8 f5 L' Q+ D9 p) o: wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ t; n% G4 [9 N# l4 m: @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- i, e$ W4 A% B" H7 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, [" i/ j" v+ L3 r- T& C# l4 i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 z1 N; L( S# S5 E$ K2 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 b0 }: X9 l- g" j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" j) v* T4 M/ a. X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- d/ t/ h+ l8 H3 Y" U7 R  ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. _7 L  I$ ^  `6 F( Q6 c7 E: l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( e* y9 y& K; H+ i; v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# v, I+ C4 @- |% n' X' H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 `9 ]% _6 {& \2 o5 S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. d9 S7 k9 e' K+ a! M  s& c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* l( P) W) Y3 Z/ F: Z* s3 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% y' D- N7 I- ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 v: u8 M1 [- e& f$ a1 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 e7 }: [( w- C7 r1 l  o0 Y* P0 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- }6 ~: B( p5 b; f- s9 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* Q( ]; W' ^2 S& i$ X1 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 |) w- A5 s1 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 @/ W4 Y, e: U' |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, q9 ]' P( _, |& K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ i. D+ f! _" e* F6 Q0 E) |0 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& @9 r  r" a7 y3 t* h9 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; w$ M6 k' c* Y; x) u) r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 \: k9 p2 e$ x. `! r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! v7 O0 l( J+ R+ k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ N' b+ o7 j6 n2 _/ c; q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>