【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# ?# G! f' Q" k7 p. k, ^: h9 C8 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 W  \9 i: |3 R; ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: w, `6 f( L! L9 k& m2 H2 B; K+ i* F! T5 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 N+ m1 W. p1 z7 cWith the moon kissing it every night
' B, J# j8 I7 R* [$ i$ I2 d" ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# p) @% l4 v9 a- bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, u! @. o" H3 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 O0 s: _7 J2 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# [% F- v  k: q: L. u0 ]$ |I want so much to see inside your heart
9 n2 z( ]5 ]. ^! J" v, Z+ hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; ?. E: \* Z  H7 p& zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 N6 h6 r6 g, Z& E% eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# ], i! O: n5 W+ F- X" U- V& Y- D: F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# y& \) q9 c8 |; ?  N8 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 F  b; |: i6 I0 G& s$ ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: C% ~4 H7 p- @1 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  F# T2 A  D9 W$ J" r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, O& V# t" ^% D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ ?+ j) ?8 Z- D* n5 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) d5 M" ~. p* X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: J. X* ^4 n! |) z3 Q: I$ F6 ~) I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% l' |6 V& A; h# C5 b4 X+ [/ L2 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: `1 N& M- N, z8 k9 F2 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ Y' a* @# v; X4 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. b( z& l7 p* Q6 U9 S# v, M* v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 }# Z1 i) d' b( K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 `# f/ M& _0 A9 d. ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 N* `5 O2 u* p+ d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% e6 K% d9 E3 R5 @  p, E3 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 t' w, e: i3 @1 V" g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& {# `, r4 L$ v: o4 T& X, G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 f! T1 ?4 Y* J, y& a2 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 t1 k1 n# N9 v. X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 ~: x: I% u/ X  Q5 ]" _! T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 T# O3 j- {% j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: j4 Z, f. D% E4 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; s( S& V4 C% u1 B8 m( m0 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ _1 T$ D8 a1 y% I5 v# f, p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 _  \+ P* K; T# S5 A' T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 |* }, y) n4 v; s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>