【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 ?9 E; L3 P2 H, v+ H6 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. K# @- d( C  G3 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 a5 Q9 G0 W! EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" v5 k$ P. m  r* {. S1 P) F  k4 KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* W( M' j! J8 Q+ z  zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) |& P+ ?$ [+ P( a" f+ gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 c9 m# I. R8 v+ O" E- q: V9 L# R7 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ N& W% I1 X" \Nothing can compare to my love
& u$ y8 ]/ R% J0 ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; Y3 q3 d  f: CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. }7 y2 ^" L) p* ^2 b) @2 B- f6 YI’m still filled with fear
: ~, H# W  d2 _$ H) UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, x1 C& L3 b* zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 W4 q+ y! ?$ v3 H9 C* t* vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( i5 I1 O. a9 {: _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; b$ d( \7 n+ r5 ^+ K6 F/ D" }) k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 m5 v% k+ b! r! S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 S4 s6 h6 V9 X) S& Y4 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, e" u7 J3 h5 r$ t* v" X6 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: P( B, p/ f9 Q6 {1 k: Y$ b* k0 n7 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& p: z0 j% ~, B$ Y0 t0 s: j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' t( L( q4 f- o1 u, N7 P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 Z# Y$ p2 d$ R( m2 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% S) E; g' c2 ^2 U: G3 T, p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 S1 q% |, k  X: f' N% h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 f. D, q# R7 x$ c9 O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 X: r0 u0 x1 r5 @2 A9 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) A" \- m) O1 T9 ?5 o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( e% \" C- @" c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. b0 G  O3 F0 ?) q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- l  J# y" M% E! n3 B) m, t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 P- e/ C( l3 e* c' \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- G  I  f. q6 k; g+ J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) q/ z- ?3 B" J, q- k, X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  w- r) a+ n5 c2 L* O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* w# L. u0 A, Q2 t; u6 w5 g. e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- h: n; Q4 F/ M- r" h- v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 x- u* [/ p( J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! D' w7 M8 }# _* h7 h8 O9 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* T% R. G2 o& x5 Q  G3 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ p4 k* ]; X8 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: J6 b" H; Z& s. M8 P; g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' @+ U6 g9 F7 u! w' o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>