【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  l9 D  i. J; n" DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ A* x: L4 f& R4 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 `* X) v' P! B6 _+ k6 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 F6 b' R7 U" T, I4 y7 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 U+ I/ x  l% o: f' k  P2 _' _$ KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! Y/ N, M6 C- f3 A: E- aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ A) p0 H6 c* SI love you I love you with all my heart
8 _6 D: W; Q( X- k0 b' \1 ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ g# {2 B  u7 Q# z6 j1 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ r! ]# d. Q1 s" TI want so much to see inside your heart
- w: p/ u" w2 k; |$ R* W. UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" p5 U! Y2 i# z3 i6 h9 \& ?I’m still filled with fear
+ ?7 f* p5 K% C% ^; l; jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- c# g; h% t  vI regret not dying
( N5 [# N/ T. n8 o: Z2 U) h# GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 Y7 K4 a+ N; i, R* I* d. dWith such a tongue as yours,
* U9 {9 s; v, b7 C4 C  ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( x* o- y" g, c9 G" f5 @, p: xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, c! W3 Q9 h1 v) e/ F; T! {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: G. t: |! h* j  m7 L- Y+ u: H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! w. C) p! X% ?- T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( I! [9 B+ R. Y9 c; T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 W+ Q1 D* x" e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ q" C0 b" Z1 [! v7 G- \2 S0 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 z" w: E8 e4 H$ ^" Q! e- k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ n% n, S6 c( @0 s: _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, a$ G0 h! \; E/ C' D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ y) H, f0 d" d2 {. p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 n8 v2 r1 Y, y0 R0 d<P>你无需担心</P>
7 a) ]0 v/ Z% T! `& |; }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* B) J2 K, _9 D; D4 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 c; ?/ i2 l  j* }0 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, i9 L+ P) J* F, K4 u+ F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: C; h- O* t$ g5 x1 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 Y4 I& n! d" ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 L; Z; `0 v0 F$ {+ [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 `0 t8 h4 Y; l& d2 V6 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ C" [3 ]2 ~7 @& J" e3 D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ V- K& i# B  Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* |1 ~, `$ {' N3 R- q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: T% I0 v+ Q  y' F* Y/ Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( d* w; B8 p% X7 q4 c% U! }, Q' J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: s/ ]5 o% ?/ y# q7 E! w* l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 {9 }2 \/ G, _% X5 V5 o# ]+ T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' |6 j5 N  ~" h. E- k. X0 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 N/ e9 z3 b! Q我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 q( |% V4 n8 _5 o$ y* j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>