【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! ?9 X! ?& i+ r" O8 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! m& u. J) C% r, j# ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 ]2 S" y6 H+ J( z3 p! ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# B- q+ _0 R; KThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 o; w9 ^5 r% ^$ M, sWith the moon kissing it every night
; L% b5 `2 H2 \: @. Q: ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% o2 D% t+ o  wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 ~6 Y- S6 m( O# B6 f+ pI really want to know just how much you love me
9 c3 U- p* S2 o0 s8 n: y0 iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ r. Z8 {( q$ DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# Z+ ?! V9 G& h3 ^  t6 O  ?5 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 y6 ?  R2 H/ }1 fI’m still filled with fear
% y8 i8 ~8 F# H9 ?5 G, UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 ^7 c1 U1 {0 [4 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ A: D, d& k9 j# DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; o0 `) \% R$ _# {( f( K9 L$ `5 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. L; ]4 t5 n$ L% {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, w# ?8 o) A) X& Q1 f! {' I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! M% f8 o7 w  K! d& }# ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. h/ ]& |; l3 o4 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# m1 ?* e) N; g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 `& o3 n4 K3 r/ c( L' b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 v  t8 S$ ^( Z1 K% b. L$ h0 P' X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( G3 _3 ~& o5 Y6 G$ R- b  U' B" l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. n* h! l9 c3 m% i( V) \- X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 r) H; b; i) n' M5 F& J* d( a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# \# J  r4 t; a! R6 R4 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: L* V; s, |: X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* u: u& \+ |: o* \/ C, r  q6 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, e/ r. ~; z6 j+ K0 h) {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- [; M( n4 E8 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: F4 b' U/ @4 Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- B% C! s$ W% e% ~  z: O1 o5 F: q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 f4 p  a/ ]7 m. O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& o- v; ~" k2 X( g2 b& ^0 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; U6 C% B" T; M$ m. T2 Q( \: u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 Z8 v, T( I+ P4 g; I, N. ?( h$ [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- p- L  \: m& J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 ?% B4 o, R2 T6 @+ H我请你剖开它

0 u# w( m2 W" z! u; _! K: Q( c0 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! @, o" I: O$ P9 D1 O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>