【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 g6 y9 l; W& Z- ?; z9 |% G3 I歌词我附在后面。
% d1 L' n* l! U' c) W2 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 {1 @. Y. Y, r7 L! s+ {! W0 i7 H, ?4 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' S3 F0 @, i1 p9 @  RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* j' t& N( O$ q" |' A8 N' hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ A0 e2 O" t7 ^; eI love you I love you with all my heart
2 _' D8 S4 ^! T/ j" XNothing can compare to my love
( B) L# S) S: q- s; FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ ]* c6 c" K3 R  P: w9 K0 Q. `" W0 S8 qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" N+ j/ i  ?) vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 u- s1 f0 s, U# m* V- HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ J' ]6 C# c4 o+ t( D: {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" N3 e& b8 \7 i. X0 I9 A8 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 b, F  U" ~8 ~  ~5 u0 `: m6 f8 j) M3 i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: n* G4 f7 T* B, d$ o, R4 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 P- h; _3 N- k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& ?# [8 O$ L$ L( T. y$ J1 w, I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- E  B) t" F& {; x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; K8 U( F+ W) Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) ]& `- ~* ~& x: o, Y1 a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 G, H5 `7 ]4 x5 M) U; J3 H8 ^( M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, w0 j' H: M/ t1 c$ G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# D, O( H/ N2 }9 [  E; G) M' a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 {+ ]5 a# w* q# {6 m9 V/ y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ e; ^6 U, h& L( [- f% n9 x) e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, Q% s  e) \6 C/ W- ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# k4 v( N% H8 [! J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ n9 N- ^: ~) b5 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 m! ^/ g4 U' B' T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) @& T- X) a+ M- x- z' e6 Q2 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- L# ]  ^1 J$ l7 [8 P. ?7 \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 p  i" _( r$ T/ o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 k( r+ r$ U2 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& Q$ s3 ]* e5 q7 t/ d9 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 e" c( D. s$ j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 r7 D# p' t$ I9 o( g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 f1 W$ N6 `, M2 @' D, n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, |+ g6 _. F' U: T+ O- @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& z7 p6 t; \7 M( v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( d3 q' \/ t6 h+ a7 U& `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* c$ [* ~( D! O6 i我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, m% N6 {0 _) B5 n% N6 a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>