【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ Q# C- o7 i% y8 y& XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 }. Z0 t, c$ lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" H$ u) G# s, d" z- P1 O0 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 n  `/ {+ r* b( pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 F3 V: `5 {  E' b' J$ c. K# JWith the moon kissing it every night
3 A5 R  Y- I. C0 ySeeing the sky content with its love
; U$ P7 b8 B$ tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 ]. k% z# E# i( z; JEvery other word you utter is love
" d3 q; F/ n5 A. T$ v% K& |" d  g* ZI really want to know just how much you love me
/ s1 t5 O2 P+ k3 J7 I' [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 `: ?, a2 q- d$ bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 Q% A3 L3 D- Y% \0 N8 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& t! z( ?1 K) K! s) |- V4 II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. r* k: _3 d! D: Q2 w  WI regret not dying
6 k% w. d0 d% u! Y7 u& u$ e/ c+ VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) J; R: Z$ ^; r, o8 B+ TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ L: a+ N- t" U- t( e- `' n$ _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 S% N0 R5 ~: Q& M& E$ v9 A+ H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  }2 {7 v7 o# w* a: ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 Q) k! ?( x* ]5 W6 B, L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 l" X! z( N7 t4 F) F" L; e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 U2 |7 p  f( j8 s$ j+ G5 G" E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 c" A6 ]% Q- S) S8 ~, P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 }5 L2 t7 @: B# G  u  B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ Q, i6 X  X: S+ }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 M* O5 t; l3 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) i0 Q6 F! b& g  D/ F+ J5 D0 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ [0 {+ G- _; p% E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 I, ?% j' Y0 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 F- n. d- S2 {2 Q: e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* X( q& \, E6 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 D5 i( Q+ K5 V+ N. B0 N1 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! }: ~6 l* D4 Y( i" S2 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 p2 J7 t+ q, n8 a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( z9 u1 l/ w' ?  E! C, z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 C& l- ^, [8 K3 ^5 d7 Q$ s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( _) [# |& A6 s# h4 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; X8 K9 t6 }; p; G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" {$ z: z8 g6 @+ c- S2 d+ U* H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: ~. z$ r8 Y. _3 w+ {: v7 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ ^  p, o! N( a- ^; \: y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 Z- Q0 G; n' b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" o# I* Q7 ]" Y) c2 G2 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ {$ y4 p5 M. ]7 T' D3 c- G4 r, o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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