【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  Y. R2 `" C! e1 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; }$ j$ U: ~- Y+ v# p% y: dWith the moon kissing it every night
) g8 K2 T% |3 q4 R  p9 f9 TSeeing the sky content with its love
; U# y6 h% W$ d2 w3 K7 A% _: hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& ~" H2 W- q9 Z6 Y  VYou needn’t fear anything
2 c/ H3 m7 A6 w) yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 }! o% R5 R8 T; @( fEvery other word you utter is love
# q: g, R/ n" S' jI really want to know just how much you love me
9 ~4 [) m' D7 f4 R: J; Z6 QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 I! a5 q; e4 c) v! ~" vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- Q$ b# R0 t4 c. L2 kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  N0 n: X$ B4 Y# RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# a; `: O2 f6 Y% H* m$ YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ }" V/ q( j2 q7 D* e" U/ DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* ]3 A% f  z. t# P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 u4 L2 N4 ?3 f7 D/ v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ u5 q' u. u; {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 q' d0 q! G4 w$ i; Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 a7 \' B. w: D$ j2 q* D$ x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& p0 n5 B% ]+ a- N" J+ S. E, t/ \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% L  A9 S' w' {- l! R8 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 c$ i/ l$ Q3 L/ q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 ~( |: A7 E$ d' w3 e# M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# L1 _, K: }/ t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 _. |- r5 z1 D) a9 ]0 U<P>你无需担心</P>
- X+ Z; D1 J/ N$ [, i. M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 R9 k3 j& m  F+ Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) G, u+ t$ W& f/ L0 J' {0 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ D* a1 K9 O& q1 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 K1 H; r8 l5 J) U" n! t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 u# T4 {5 R7 {( c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& H* D& Z. d% q  k8 o& r+ @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ C6 [- r/ {; D1 B1 w4 Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 k' p8 p7 ]2 X3 p- B0 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. i8 t3 G; J' a6 e4 X" U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' {4 E2 ~% A$ {3 v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 P" M; m/ ?7 M4 \7 l2 Y+ h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 b. b8 X/ c; g3 B1 A! B1 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 G7 e- W0 c2 L9 m! v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ L9 d* F1 v! S2 n6 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& a9 \% t3 R- g! b8 e' z& P; ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 a! _* p. e+ S# q% n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>