【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- r5 u, ?& j0 n" G- mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 t' d3 F/ z4 C8 B8 Z2 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: h  l% [. d' c' V- A! y' ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  Z4 z6 s& a5 Q' _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" f" Z/ y4 O' B, @9 ^/ ]) HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! ~% S7 C' T. HYou needn’t fear anything
0 m2 T  m; w5 i1 j$ H+ a4 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- C  g$ S8 Q+ f5 S# J$ PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. T8 z# ^; a- RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ A" v# F+ k2 r0 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 a7 p$ T) O1 ?8 ^8 _. y+ q/ M! XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 x' F- a: ^+ ^. X" \/ g: u) G, JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" A% e. n8 \9 |+ Y1 e. N" Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! Q8 T0 u5 F( l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  _/ t- [  \) J3 J% H  g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 H, r$ j2 G4 h; ?/ p" ?$ l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 p8 l5 v, T  S! A9 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 j  g7 Z9 }6 e" y, ?& V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# o; Z$ H7 }) g9 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 q0 {; o3 c6 N# {9 J- t: Y- D) W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( z- N& w* W7 ?+ i2 x+ B. g& U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; n2 h' T9 {- O  d9 ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% z# g) T- ]3 K" I% q6 u<P>你无需担心</P>
3 p; F, p" z7 t, M6 v0 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  ?; C1 ]6 K5 S5 u8 b( T3 g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" m4 ?, {6 R8 Q$ b+ c. T+ @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ F/ t0 e; o) {% z- N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# e& [  z. M6 H1 I  g, V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: c" P6 H7 ~' F# D3 s, `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ i* o1 J/ A) P1 L; H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' x0 b% U2 c( b9 z5 v( b; k& ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' v1 C" s1 p8 f6 m' J8 b) l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) F9 h5 e( Q" |' s+ S, S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& Z* f" ]- R( O2 d& x2 q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- L% k! S' i1 I, {% ~0 F4 k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  B/ q+ c. |9 [# v3 z4 ]/ s<P>I regret not dying</P>
% X/ e( a1 i0 L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) s1 t& x1 ?, b+ d8 P1 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, I3 D5 w1 o) q0 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& b5 E: F- ~4 d, A1 T8 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: b- p4 @% i* h% t" z8 B8 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: |, j  B5 m2 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>