【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

+ z% a/ H2 x# Z4 i5 {; c# T<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

! F$ H. W! r* }: V2 G  K+ M1 o
歌词我附在后面。
: X- x9 K: `( T  l- wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# r! C8 c5 _$ b: q( i( U5 p; QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# C; f" ]  l( h( k( D- NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, X: ^6 w3 Z# [7 b1 s+ I1 S6 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, Q( g" [1 U, l: {% vThe sky is happy down to its soul
! y# u" M# j# i4 o* NWith the moon kissing it every night
! ~+ S- o# A- G& OSeeing the sky content with its love
( s" m% g; m6 t! b# K3 J1 tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' s$ s$ b7 ~1 e* j2 Z7 W  Y; M0 qYou needn’t fear anything
/ u' M" T* p3 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& {% Z1 i$ e8 |& W6 rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# X! T) V" }4 S$ k! P( C& @I love you I love you with all my heart
: x) ]$ ~  i0 H; F# J: wNothing can compare to my love
9 ~" P) Y0 E  M: VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ o9 x. P) X4 h3 SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ c" y/ Q) g5 _' G* Z; ^' Z/ ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 o  K: }& D1 j$ \3 Q, X, o& @* x) w2 j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! i  E, V2 J1 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 @. _. ^1 h+ P6 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# Q9 x9 R. P4 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 Z- P& Y2 i2 ]# w- O% r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) b& A2 i& R0 K5 ?9 o" a& ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 b0 M) p% k: B8 I- I* U1 g9 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( C3 r" c9 K: _  j' Q: O1 |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 e" L+ B4 X' e; }5 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* t3 S9 F5 r) ?3 }4 ^8 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- \3 B' l  o' h4 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 i+ d1 }& T4 P4 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ p' {+ g4 E% i' r* N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ t- Q* l! X0 o* L4 ~0 u8 p, C* D- Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  }( v) Z% h7 ~6 r' v- A+ U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ S2 q9 a# J& @! W  J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 L! t0 {' v$ K/ G. ?. `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 C  U5 g) j7 w% U& m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ `8 m2 s8 j2 B! P$ H# ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. K# q" o. |% |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
: F' v- o% P; j
9 d/ J5 @- v' o- e- [我请你剖开它

! G+ w0 H6 l' j) l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>