【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 k" |! r' p' N1 e; j$ }+ |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; c& d5 z, x1 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. Q/ I2 f8 G4 B9 M+ R) XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- D  y; Q7 c# y% ]7 U9 EWith the moon kissing it every night
8 h8 P# W( Y7 C3 }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& p  _6 M) n& G' E3 J* |You needn’t fear anything
0 g% m9 y5 S- M# n/ Q8 O* rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& W1 L3 }4 R1 h) MI really want to know just how much you love me
/ e2 e# f+ l# p& BI love you I love you with all my heart
. ^; {  C* @$ F, e9 g" S6 X; ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 I7 y8 S0 s6 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- f4 ~/ O( w# Z- VI regret not dying
' e3 E9 M2 w' v; y+ e8 P3 J+ B& E& ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- H! S" I$ e" F4 h2 ~4 V: n: gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* k4 R& L  k3 T. ?  B% x  d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- W9 E/ ]7 a# g' k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ u7 R1 G0 s: _; O9 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- s  p9 ]1 ?! a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 _$ h3 v( [' `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ I$ p5 A( N) Q5 z. _/ k1 T: q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- J* D9 {. z  X7 T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- n" F* {* @: ^" {& e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# E* k+ q& \3 [5 ?: T- `' G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* L/ U$ A* Q1 D5 `+ I0 W& h1 V<P>你无需担心</P>
4 `* A2 U) U  Z% |" ^. G- z7 Z4 l; u: c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" A) m: V$ \: b3 }2 U4 P/ `7 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% j2 A0 W0 l$ D3 ^  |: O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 o8 T& E$ d  I8 \1 I; o' j- r  z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ W+ w2 q! Q$ n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 I8 M; e! R* Y$ c# Z1 B$ |9 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ C/ U0 P8 i) x0 H4 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# T9 K! ~" d; e! M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) @/ F( f8 v* z3 {( X1 S$ v* G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 @; Q. }$ S5 b$ \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  V3 J/ p' k: Z0 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
) U1 p* h$ g2 V% S% l& n+ V! u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 b; R% N% ~( v1 C* V/ U' u4 _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 K1 c( V% q, p: x' _* E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# C# P, b5 m8 v$ }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 y6 A4 T5 l, r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* }! |8 \5 `- a5 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 R$ {* f/ t) {" [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 E1 |" F, X5 I+ M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; D, ~# {1 @8 d+ ~1 L我请你剖开它
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& l. d$ W+ G/ V6 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>