【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. [0 l5 l; w" Q8 l( TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ b! p- p* L5 F2 l! ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ ]+ d- Q" |, |- R& dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' V( F" C3 `$ l3 ~0 R( a+ DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  q- K9 q  c3 a4 i& x  U# O& ~I’m still filled with fear
9 x* g$ Q0 _7 r8 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) }# E& F0 @  z  ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 a- q2 k+ f( B% k% IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 Q  T# v# q  A! y. h' x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 ]: J% w! B  f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 D7 ~9 i% H$ C: h2 ~  p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* u. ?4 O1 [& s3 @7 ]! ?+ Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) y/ c& H1 ?% J! l( R2 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ k! `$ \) I" F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 ?8 M1 f; }+ T' V( Z% G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% F: |' R# f5 B( c/ D9 `4 A! |7 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& k8 c4 U% b* S0 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ a: ~8 `- j& B+ s* ?/ Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& Q. _% b; X8 m/ T$ n  [' L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 P, O, |0 r$ |1 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 u/ g/ }( f2 K4 U+ z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: m5 }8 I: U' Z0 x+ B. {. L9 z7 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, C* t2 q8 B# L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 v" h; E: v+ l. u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ _6 y" g5 {2 q" k" a' I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- p# |( W6 y7 z7 r6 `6 ]' n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- e. C# b6 h. |! }" }8 _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, |% `1 R& a+ P1 t3 p8 X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& A# N" ~7 ~: k7 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ x6 g. }/ G, G' u9 X2 i. g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ ^9 a' x& j# P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* N/ o3 X2 o  \7 l- d9 W  `1 U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" n& Y" A0 \% u1 q/ V" j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 n2 V: I+ @" ]) o5 b% E% U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>