【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 N& ^9 |. U# {8 y$ Q# e8 Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! Y" @3 P% r5 Z9 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 W; P; L) ~4 V( B# xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) n; L* s; t" M9 k6 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
# R2 M0 ?+ j* ^& F: OWith the moon kissing it every night
) {# K; P4 u& H/ I" bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 l8 A, Y  J: A  \0 }6 SYou needn’t fear anything
0 |( W6 F. `3 l% T) {; t8 H7 E. U7 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ q5 d" Y+ |+ f' K7 PEvery other word you utter is love
/ x% i3 c' I1 p6 w) @* O$ [$ v7 mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ t5 T4 z! ?# m2 ^. S0 D! A: ]  ANothing can compare to my love
# e9 U- R! x5 C" S$ C# |9 F) t, \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 o! ?0 l; K6 ]& D# a2 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. Z1 d* {. E/ Y5 X7 a% v1 hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& I. W9 p& T+ c5 iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, N5 H9 j9 Q. C5 u: n: S1 F# |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ @: K8 R* i. @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; w. B( b4 s! u, p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ N4 [; N3 Z) i. e! C9 s0 R. ]3 R% I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! K: ^: d& h( x, r! N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  Q( ?3 j( b: h: c/ M4 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 ?7 _, i  ^# X" f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! M5 s1 c  t  ~1 ?# W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" u2 C" e3 U5 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 B! `2 K& a9 c4 g" `4 \6 |4 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: X( }: x+ a: D5 ?- J( ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ ~5 s, q' o) i8 A' ]* S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 F6 a( q& m0 W8 z: Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- C: g8 b3 @& w7 y" V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- ~$ L7 z3 N3 @7 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  M# x7 d# W4 t% ?+ E8 O' C& Q$ v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* u  h5 y: N! P. o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 ~. X3 @, a! r0 C  F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ [2 x, {6 @+ O: i% N( v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' |' y& @; a5 m8 f1 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- G( q0 c: [. T2 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 B2 M  r+ H' F5 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: Z3 R: [, v0 _. K* r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% W* E. B! d: X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ U5 o3 X4 |' h6 n+ y( h$ ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. N1 X7 ]' y; v6 T7 F* y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 S; `/ j! d% G& ]6 j% C# _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* M% N7 R% Q& F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  I0 u7 W" `+ K' l0 a. j  e- _3 h# o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

7 S# a- v  C; x4 ^% T( I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! L* @/ m6 {7 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>