【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 \6 B  ~  [6 |3 _" F歌词我附在后面。
' b$ I; H% _0 x0 F8 I  gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( M& g7 O3 m* N6 RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ f3 U  E: a1 d$ o. H8 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* r5 l  e9 r- W0 w! lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* l5 ^3 _# @% i4 d, C1 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ v' A& V! f8 ~4 J: f' VI really want to know just how much you love me
; [, c9 E( D6 d2 ^9 p8 H. TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 o" M) `! l9 n1 m* S7 D5 J) q1 c% hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! i5 |/ P: Z. `( F5 \& J6 ]- hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 {' b5 p" N5 e0 ?7 w' j& CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 w1 U7 W! Y4 I9 s; G+ r' CI’m still filled with fear
& k/ V8 o$ s1 R: v& ]0 u- n: mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; H% t' L" w& T: ^' [5 BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  i9 a- e% ]( a* ?6 A5 j5 ]- Y4 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# P1 I; }  n( v* L* c4 n- B. E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# L' Y5 \- X/ l% d8 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, }: F! C9 P1 M2 L& i* L$ J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, i. @8 A" E& v8 B, j* U4 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& b4 w" \# l5 N) A$ y, B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ k! n4 m2 U1 [7 |. X& `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) t5 I5 K5 p4 C! l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) t4 c, k  l4 f' m+ M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 ?+ \: S( `, d* W" Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 l7 u; b6 y+ t, {* j) D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" Y: k4 `' ^7 \0 A. ~+ C5 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 l8 O6 r2 `1 Q& ~& r2 l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 _4 u: w- ^9 U' @: c6 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 I7 ~9 s& |! Y" R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" ~# ~+ j7 U: I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, r* M$ W5 `0 A6 q4 }3 S, ]* F( _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ u. Q4 z- x* l4 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" I0 b6 l7 c( M0 k% R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 M5 {7 P, \* c- {& f) A, P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; ^2 N/ U- {! w' Y, \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 y# X# g' ]' O) U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! ?6 J! c7 X8 m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ C+ \, F! y6 [% m9 S. H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>