【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- D" D$ k$ z' W; H; W( ^6 u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 E6 {& g1 c9 [! e6 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 v0 Q# k  e0 g& @, GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 H; V% d% C- s) H6 ]! pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! m+ f6 {( E0 t' N/ K; A$ V8 Y' P! TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' J% ^9 w' O5 r* n; X0 k. SNothing can compare to my love
# g3 p) r7 f0 K9 `- KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 T3 Z' c( y4 ~. |. m# \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 Q( n6 h) a# d/ K# D- A2 hI’m still filled with fear
) }& F* c  s9 B4 N5 y6 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 x: ?. e5 ~  N2 t! A7 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( R" ]) P4 @9 U5 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ g9 J; T# ^/ b9 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 i+ c3 {/ `* v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 f5 z9 F' f1 {5 X/ H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* K/ e0 T# Q" D7 P+ O: J! P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ }) x/ a, U+ _$ n3 r1 c* a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) m- _1 \$ v! h2 ^. y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ S) M# r' ^9 c. o) Z' |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 L8 P5 L, L/ F! E+ i" p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# E2 U6 C! h4 c# [* E8 z8 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 h9 E% K# w+ M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* P' z6 ]) O# _, Z0 H* I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) J5 f- E; o8 l- }8 B  m5 d; J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 [1 a  C% r3 x  t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, I& r5 i% Z3 }- V; i3 q; T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- S6 r  S$ W( a! k/ V: I4 F6 z  M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 h9 ?- `, w! j* x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" q  G; G2 Z& ?( m& K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! W5 K" G5 p9 E& V+ z9 {7 v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ q  y# _) G/ E; r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ O; y* }" v# t; q& Z' e) W$ A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ ~* @- x$ J: d) r( ]6 I2 F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) n; }' D# x! C  T- O- J  ^: r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ B) I* m5 V+ |/ ^; i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% S6 @: a( o+ C; P& H# {  R4 u1 }( ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* {* K5 z/ q/ k! |# l6 J! ^5 X& u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% n8 {- u5 b2 U0 g& D) V. m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' x) x# m4 g9 \7 O! g8 `1 {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* K5 d4 H& D, r1 A) E" x# U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! V- B, Z7 ?: j: |9 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- f2 x* J* |* V$ [+ a' @3 M% W, l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 ~  F" A6 a7 t. ^/ i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 ]" d8 m) e. N# w8 G* @# ~9 Q# u; q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 a# N: g- a3 I5 s  H! d2 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 t' U2 P, i( u0 P% D+ ]我请你剖开它

+ U$ @+ E- p5 P. j' E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* R$ R4 z5 T3 e/ c  u8 }  B: y4 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>