【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ E' [9 g: |" rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 Q& V: H# ?% F3 _& L3 P- g* C6 p6 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" g6 H* G4 R, n& h9 I4 V5 T6 a  yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 k0 P. e/ Z9 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# K: u8 @8 J8 i! w& ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: b4 q4 S" Z. ]& [& MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 B2 b+ `# T& ^# o( x9 A3 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 z4 @8 s! d3 ]- L7 q! ?8 H4 O( MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 f* x+ M5 q# A. _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" T( _8 d' P- H8 Y0 ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" _+ i: T& G2 w  C/ a1 J0 G, Q5 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) o3 f- w% g- o- s  F1 A% s: B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) J+ D9 v. q& N# G* d- V3 |- R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! O& ^0 q7 N, v- K, r& @, X0 A, r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 E2 Z0 U9 d$ [3 J! y* ?$ o& `( x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 K+ s6 ^8 ?$ R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: H" G' `: |# r2 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; @6 n# v7 Y3 y2 ?% N% U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 k6 S; B6 t# J9 l. D$ ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% R) [3 Q7 `0 y6 V: I" D' y3 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! w9 i7 W. c2 w8 D7 \3 [3 g+ D( e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 V0 ^: Z; d: B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" U) \  l" ^/ n3 }  M3 W# V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! b& m4 K2 N* q, L9 Z2 W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 D2 \, v. _& k0 K4 g) C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ L( o  f# t5 C* v( }9 ~/ `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( E. u3 o) l1 J* N0 r/ J& \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) q6 G8 `  a- V% o* m% q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 ?; V# F1 `, b: ^( T9 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( z1 b& x# h# W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 J$ E$ ]% B/ }- n8 l. x7 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& t+ }6 m, d- @/ u5 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" w" ^" O" t/ Y7 x2 C; x7 Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. S! n. o3 q; U4 o; `) }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- _( f( Z6 G$ l4 T; A7 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ T: v( ?, w: d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! B; b* c, h/ A; ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 m- `8 k9 a3 e, T2 Z  K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 }/ Q8 }# B2 r) n: B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* O- A1 d; Y' t1 z$ ]/ W3 ]9 d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 {% Q0 H' j" z- c, T( ]* ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* K1 X! V! `+ E/ j: G  _8 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% r/ g! b/ s  ]( k9 y- d8 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  g/ W# [* C- U我请你剖开它
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2 o1 Q# P- O2 R- V% Z/ h5 M, @$ [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* D7 B' U' o) K3 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>