【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, u0 v- W) {5 X7 N6 b/ o& X歌词我附在后面。
6 d$ i2 v3 H7 \7 g5 y8 F( k  gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" u+ O7 y7 H% d0 w$ |5 W  WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 c4 o  w! B8 a; f/ t9 R9 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; }7 v0 i$ Q$ l. JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ Y/ l- f6 c0 C9 M" TYou needn’t fear anything
+ ^# U) k  ~* Y) F/ [/ ]. Y- O5 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 n3 G: f  _7 l, f, {4 bI love you I love you with all my heart
# H) W, F1 G3 k4 i! }& `9 JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 o- i) z9 a  O/ @: }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' w1 S" S" c3 _- h8 i  a. BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 z( o+ R2 f4 n) T; dI regret not dying
- w  K2 d: X  u4 S$ O+ lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# A0 U6 g6 ~  i. t1 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' o2 h# \! Z2 N4 M! }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; s, m# R6 v8 Q/ X( C. S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ p! [' \) [( m, J, T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 N6 q; `) w& \5 i( t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 G) k6 x1 g% a  ?: r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. u. i/ A) P' l* z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 n% ~* g. L  K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 o, c1 s+ ^$ b/ `" Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ S9 B/ i% G: A- h) c, _! |% [3 J+ S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: w, N% C2 v# D1 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& B/ V. K* N+ E& z8 t" K% I# ^2 ?! N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# p. S8 G7 z: U5 A0 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- W& _3 b! ~. O; M( k: M- l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 ?4 z) i! D3 p: C. q/ K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( a0 E. O6 ^: n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 I) p6 G- d, p8 O1 S# p& f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ J& B0 T/ T  e8 ~; F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 M6 A4 Q9 f& J( f) `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ I1 \9 `( W4 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" s3 V) n, k& l( M  v4 \; E: k- G2 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 Q- T2 K/ J2 L( F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 E* P: G4 C( w( a* @. Z+ B" ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 t$ k3 Y( R' H2 W: n) D& J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( T2 b: w; X% ]$ \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 U- R; [3 q2 o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. P" ?& p9 l0 N0 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 c: J: G" ~5 g% X; h7 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( x4 n6 V, |9 P/ O% J5 B. `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! U* Y( c4 [& N- F9 E( n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 W0 y4 |1 Q) { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>