【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; [* ~1 @# z, z2 B5 W1 l+ a歌词我附在后面。
0 R( c; a/ H# d& _2 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 z; _6 P# {! |6 Q- RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 o7 r. R1 Q" g) b+ \5 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ E5 R3 N: J# F, v3 D; AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% Z2 @; ~" ~3 T' @% N4 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" T  U* s9 o# B4 L! UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& }  D+ D8 [/ h. o5 REvery other word you utter is love
0 _2 x6 d7 u  s7 k$ R/ a; WI really want to know just how much you love me
  h' }/ P( @6 p/ O$ II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 O$ ?% l" z7 z. n/ @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 |6 E! {$ Z3 e" b. Z* q) I! WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! Y% C. y1 ~, F7 \I regret not dying
- g6 D! ~, R# z9 `" nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 T7 m' C: l4 |1 h3 k2 y0 YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 y6 f7 \9 f  D9 Z$ w5 A7 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) n; S/ \8 w' e9 o! o6 E8 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( H( e" t+ R0 @( W2 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 |9 k+ B+ ~3 Z  H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  K9 o, y/ X; p$ H; R& R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 R; K$ q) s% ^. E% l4 q9 W  |6 c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 R0 v/ T8 P' T9 I4 u% y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ J  ?: A( J4 U, W) S6 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* q. O  t* |  x/ h1 G3 b  r! X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 B/ @/ @" Z" k" ^# S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 K' K) n8 q2 f: N( ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. R1 p, M* W' a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; g( e; j* c( V  a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( q  D* A3 e  a, x& D+ c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ b: |& z) N  c, S- c/ K; i; A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) u! E% h, r: ]; n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  j" l- Y6 {( o5 j( _$ W4 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: M+ a/ ~9 V. H* O. x2 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! W2 M. g3 k6 H- ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" m. L1 \: a3 C! R, Q" A- r: Q, j3 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" }: x/ _7 f& b5 I4 c* a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ m- b2 `8 F8 U' p; R$ z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& o# ~* Q/ i6 p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ t2 Z4 M, Y3 H7 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ ]6 B) N$ F2 W6 `8 x3 A2 T- I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' _8 F$ E% W$ i% j- o8 Q) s) [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, z/ j' j1 N4 r' c: G6 s- L0 Z# K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 J( H' G% J! @' m* E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

! Y& t9 P, m) {  L# i" ]. P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 i1 {3 \& X" X' ]% Q1 o) Q/ ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>