【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 {) a2 i3 ]! [, YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# Z1 ^2 o, P1 _2 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ F# Z# e& L9 `' A) V* jWith the moon kissing it every night
. T0 \/ T( m* hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; t' D1 e- _0 ?( C# g1 D3 i. F  B0 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! a" ]! N- u5 \, t# W6 F7 ~6 N# qI love you I love you with all my heart
5 b9 V/ L& o4 u  w" ^: @% B) \Nothing can compare to my love
" s7 A" j' w2 g1 p$ x) SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ y; O) V' y8 K! {7 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 ]/ \5 A! U( l$ bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 |5 H- I) l3 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" a) S' Z3 ^5 f+ A% }3 KI regret not dying
& l: c. \' b0 ^1 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* h- t/ i8 N" u, ?3 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 X* j3 k. h- f$ C5 I" t& [3 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, B6 @( s4 G5 j1 L! l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 c+ t5 Y+ S1 V: c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ g, A* G6 j  j+ m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 E3 s& {1 F! P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: V; I! \* o: \9 P" }3 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 M2 B8 {+ H/ t$ J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 q+ a+ G$ o5 f4 ^' Q1 |3 s+ x2 I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 B- r6 y0 O+ C' a- _' Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& Q8 N# I; @1 k7 M4 R+ P2 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 n( N0 _  u0 u7 n2 n3 i' Y/ x! Y' T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& F5 J+ _! o! t) m8 S9 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ W; a" g% q( i5 l1 m2 d/ y3 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 o# X4 ^7 Z% v" f6 }, }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- U4 y2 U/ k+ s. ]. G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# e# }6 h/ k( P0 [. L' Z' `/ L* e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 X( L5 |9 g; p. K* g5 P( ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 B" o" g2 L* B8 W9 @  c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# H3 a  {) t- T% m! G8 U) I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 |2 W8 z; I/ [) E  _$ H" F( N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 ?& Q1 ]7 N6 K/ {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; ?: W6 u# W3 a- m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ O& Q" ^$ Q+ E6 }- e. P* v# Z6 \' a7 a; `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 _, T/ D1 Q9 j4 a5 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) Z7 y: u" t. F) u5 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>