【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' W* n3 ^+ C7 N9 C. J, O/ ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' k  w' q! }* L4 q2 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* }1 T0 p2 ^- K- ^. F' }With the moon kissing it every night
  v& E. L" @7 gSeeing the sky content with its love
4 @, H* E; K: \8 ~  o) nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 K5 ~  ?3 u, D  o% e: z- a3 [& _: t) VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. G& C5 r) p$ v4 M8 tI love you I love you with all my heart
! `* [  L' w3 m6 z" i& DNothing can compare to my love
' [; }6 o( x& h4 \, o" WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, W( R5 r7 ?8 k7 e3 d, _4 o/ dI want so much to see inside your heart
' `* U" B  U3 R2 F1 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' i- d: |' w$ y. YI’m still filled with fear
! @( z: J. A+ t% ]0 K- FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 k; A, W. b' e5 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ `; w8 ?( R' ]- I" r4 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 ?$ E- ^3 e+ z5 t+ M/ [- |5 m2 M7 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! \* o- L' W2 L% g2 X2 ?/ q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 R7 Y% a9 [) U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: N/ E! A4 `8 N# ^! S) t. l9 `& i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ J' V  _, F- V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! S8 @  d" k/ v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ _+ {& r* U* M: o+ x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* K% C: e5 U% U& P+ U) H4 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 R/ ^+ l& D& ^- Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 X9 \) E& o0 @* {3 }! B0 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" M$ G6 P2 ^- y$ F! ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& I! K  e% q* W% o) d; ~" B. U9 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 Z' W1 |( Z. Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ w( x: k/ p2 J7 y  m% y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! X1 L1 R. j) g/ O. Y" S8 }  i* y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 x# s& o6 z4 `  I) {3 T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 C9 `8 N( G7 [' u5 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; L0 M! L' W( _0 ]/ }. A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  O, ?( d+ b+ r' a9 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 I- \; a/ T% P- z& h6 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) n* X3 r0 [+ T' e5 B1 D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ X3 n: A2 p; s8 z4 Y3 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% D) u" C  M" T2 I9 r' R2 O" ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ f- Z2 e, g. B1 k  y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( A: D: @- X9 {% R8 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 C- J+ p' Q" f" k2 A; t8 B: C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) n; y3 H0 E2 p5 \; O/ J" F, g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  [" U( {1 I/ F7 e' w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) q' N9 ]. K5 D2 M9 m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 A9 Y5 F  p+ n9 `6 }( u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( R& f# l, X% R% D' Z% a$ H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 @) x, r& h( Y( w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>