【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' v" K! ?5 i4 ]" h1 F& ]5 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 n1 T8 `7 B, eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* @2 Q/ t$ w" Q- DThe sky is happy down to its soul
, }( R$ B% T2 h. UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 m% {3 e5 f2 f* U' R2 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 j) @+ d% g  J' y! Y4 u( zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* o. y! d3 A4 `% C2 F5 QI love you I love you with all my heart
0 B! W. G4 Z. v. {: q/ cNothing can compare to my love
9 [3 Z% q# G" u* |( Z; `5 e8 G, eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. `1 f  Q$ [: B) @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" s1 y* F* ]% [+ M5 _/ TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, \5 }  o* ~8 u* o2 oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' d7 o% _' H, w1 }% @" TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& _- `, `1 }" U9 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: n6 i* L3 z! d5 n8 w0 o! m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- l0 w* v8 L, q6 T9 M4 d% [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" M7 {" c* m: e% i- r) n. I& E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 L5 l3 A- j/ ]) x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( v5 r) k7 g& n6 N) n7 C2 e8 I/ e8 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ Y0 t7 h6 f! @  R; s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 n- P) w: D( c& N. H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" @" `5 c5 h8 n) B5 B$ J1 R0 M0 M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- v: C; {' o# A6 q9 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 O8 j" [1 I1 p3 N+ ~) s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 I9 l* L) Z0 R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 R, }* v* R  O- _# B/ C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; e+ T1 T; S6 A9 U/ H) p2 `+ w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  }& [0 {  C) r( {! f+ s3 k/ [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- A9 O8 Y# U4 L( g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& q* t* h% o2 D$ _0 U8 X5 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 P, ^5 K9 U2 |0 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& H1 r) g1 A/ t5 f& l$ P0 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: D5 J. W( X- ]9 O) }+ d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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, S3 U" |/ @: E/ ^% X* _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>