【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 M9 M: o# g* H, b" |3 D7 v5 x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ U- r* N( {/ @6 \  nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ F2 n( y  O; M. e6 q9 WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 ^8 `, N# ]# Q2 l, e9 U. AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 k% u- G8 s7 W! W% [I really want to know just how much you love me
& M5 `# E  V# D6 E" sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ P1 C5 h: @6 ]5 S1 m2 T& v) s6 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 C# \* Y1 C4 [- E' `0 a9 tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ j7 W4 S- m2 W) x  \' b4 q/ o7 {, zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% G' ~& {* Q2 v. W8 {, w7 z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- w- U$ `3 N5 `0 f0 f1 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 ^  K0 K& w- L0 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  G# ], x9 R4 e7 c6 C2 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 v% j0 q7 v7 l; V+ U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' r2 V0 e/ D. o' s5 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 x* c1 ^6 }. T& i% Q1 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( ]- w; t" N0 l- L0 O5 s( x7 b: v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* y! ^; U+ q3 X! u9 `% g9 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. ?6 c* N8 a& X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" ]1 G3 ?4 J3 H& h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 Q/ @0 i8 n! y# d- i<P>你无需担心</P>
" Q, y$ l% `3 m9 v  ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: j8 ^4 D+ z% x- C$ W* n5 l7 J' p* t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' a8 @" d) W( H# Z& _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. l- W3 Z: v& w( _- N0 d4 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 v( x( }; n6 e+ X3 ]  U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" |( w* |7 i4 G1 k% a! h! Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 E9 z+ n: O0 f' c9 v. A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, |5 A+ s  ^" b+ h: V8 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ q6 F0 O1 j" \$ N6 L9 q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( K$ S2 q, p) G0 h. l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 t" r( ?, Q* B+ d% B: `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 `% g- k/ g1 t( F) ^" z  C/ b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  a0 l" z' m; y9 `. _5 q0 T1 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ V+ M7 R: D, V1 k: ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! e9 i8 T6 Q( s7 }3 L* M4 \. y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. u) R6 R( L& m% R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 V) {+ M3 Y4 ]% O7 ^- W1 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 L% r* p/ b5 U& b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 o' x8 z8 q( E9 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" b4 n+ }8 I8 @/ A; L  f5 V. f我请你剖开它

7 E; R2 S9 e8 _7 T* Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* X! {  `0 E6 O7 c! b  f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>