【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  x. L3 ~  }& x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ U8 a# e1 j- U7 N& qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% s. T6 J. ?6 j! n" {. hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ U+ G" I0 U$ V5 ?* R0 H7 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 M: o) F1 N: U1 S. |: T2 ]7 i* {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 m; g" ^1 y" wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 P( }8 p0 x; s) l8 nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( z, y3 @# G9 v. Q, ]) zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& A3 w! c! H4 ^4 `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) r% H* o9 s& w$ |5 W/ _' t; `* `1 s, bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 l3 R8 D6 F2 ]1 \  o+ K! w. gWith such a tongue as yours,
9 k- |  U. m8 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ f3 i, I, ~, `/ M0 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; a& ]0 y2 x' D' x1 s; [6 ~+ P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( A; ?2 O6 Q0 f# L" l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' F" F9 ?4 @+ B1 Q6 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ j4 J/ V/ E) Q" g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; U# f3 c/ x% d0 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 M$ _9 l! d2 q. q2 k8 n$ L- J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' ~5 X4 M0 C8 Z# r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& k! o+ J* `( T3 k# g* z. \% r. n  ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 J, I+ D3 E2 o+ a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  u3 Z% z8 B4 L+ ?<P>你无需担心</P>
- f6 G+ y% \# a3 e/ r* W6 _: Z: u9 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 v; O2 p$ {! }$ x& Q! R+ H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- B" n- ~! M8 l' j' g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- w3 l! ~2 J' Y( }" j4 B1 q: Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 `! g" _: B: L. T# Z# C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, C0 L6 U1 n6 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% _' t: P: C! l) G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* P. z3 C  W0 [  s; E2 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 P! H3 w4 O/ V" h  ~) w" K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; ~+ a5 W8 v9 _3 ^/ S1 a$ A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- w7 Z6 k; ?0 |1 @: F  F: s1 u# p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! `) |  K7 {; D) w. C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. t7 S: }% Q2 ]4 H2 w. T0 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ s2 h; _" _" M7 s3 @1 s* x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ ~. P9 U3 j3 f4 C! \* l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* \3 W7 o/ {# t9 R9 z, c: r3 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ w: I/ N' L' |: ^, w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. L3 I) Z. v8 L& n' C7 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" \  I4 }& b8 D  ~: @4 U+ m- t$ Y# z我请你剖开它

. n5 W/ Y( T5 s( s3 |& h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>