【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  q: ~4 r, x' t& U2 Y% bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" I' e' A7 y* [. s0 u3 b' VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 T) h, w9 i8 }& CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 U/ D$ A1 \$ i+ N; l( NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 e5 ]) i2 k* r$ v4 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 y  ]' E7 S8 J8 B7 V8 RNothing can compare to my love
# ]* G! ~1 J# aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ s9 m: [  n$ Q3 b# MI want so much to see inside your heart
" ?* g  C# C% m  F4 _  KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: A) X" W4 l' k, P/ H( k& uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; C, W; D  p. T4 O& [- FI regret not dying
: h1 V8 D0 U- cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ |/ @6 T9 Y) b$ t# ^, |& XWith such a tongue as yours,
) C: G% Q2 i/ t) }9 i6 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, B: X# E& {; C% l5 S4 l8 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( a: O  |5 D( i2 T. F. dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 H8 s/ @% R* [1 Q* }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! d* }3 d- m# s  A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: F$ V0 o; |5 `# Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: p" k8 E7 Q2 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& w1 D* G5 p$ T' X( R  _6 i( k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& i5 y5 K6 s9 _3 w/ u: I1 W4 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 k' ~0 U5 u/ Y$ x3 Z/ f: t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ W) o( S: F& ?& Y$ `+ Z  M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# [! i1 m+ L0 [; o6 P1 h# ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* i: R/ `* b0 l" F4 L1 r# r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# c, U% Y6 a! o# t# n% `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ M/ E! e9 A. `+ E6 n' g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# m! U8 B9 d$ M6 l% r: r$ _$ W3 c; H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! f" h5 s7 a7 ~: Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! D# G2 f9 B" B( G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' M; ]5 U9 O1 @6 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; Z! m9 u  l3 |. c7 e- X3 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! @: W' u0 _; w! Z  N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  _% Z" Q# m  J; S! d* [1 n6 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% I) D; G0 l) y0 K0 v0 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 @, F! _% v' N; I! h: T$ o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! v# O* f; W/ G1 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 Y6 E9 Z7 a1 f8 n) `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) d  h* C5 N; c" ]3 t" H5 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 k* W$ a. N# A9 ~! z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 X/ Q! Q. N0 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: h  R( e0 C0 Q4 A% n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: U! {5 f3 G! W% `# u5 \- S+ ?8 k/ }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! A# J6 t+ O& J' v/ u5 D" m* v' Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 p. u8 A& T3 k% Z3 H: k我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>