【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. n- v5 q) t0 o' M1 \8 W9 [歌词我附在后面。
+ v2 D0 Z6 Z, N. ]9 b! e+ t/ dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ t6 O' J2 [" @' ?( q, u6 E, GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: H* W5 Z* D$ ?2 _/ H, eThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 y( s; O3 j6 ~  BWith the moon kissing it every night
; |2 r: Y1 t  R# mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% z! j+ B, d+ mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 g6 g* z8 R$ G% n& O7 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; f: Y1 D- c' f9 t6 eI’m still filled with fear
$ `9 [7 R/ k' z' q9 b" {, tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ g) G. T, R' I# |I regret not dying
+ d# E# w( e; l- oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 g% ^+ I7 B" Q; `: \/ G: h6 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 @8 N3 u1 o5 F% V- `! B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 I/ v6 S! |& ]% H" _3 f8 _) l( w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ U! v2 [& l0 d# \5 S* s) n# ]: j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, B' G& h' B7 z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. j: n# Q) g+ ^( e$ [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& l! u, o. @) ~( m* |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: ]4 T( D1 h; o' z/ D4 G7 N<P>你无需担心</P>
. J1 l+ k4 M, B$ v" ^/ r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- p$ g- K! O6 x; @, X* o2 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! g$ ?- g1 J: J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  U& ]9 v- \# a) @3 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 K; w5 ]1 c; c( d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% t/ B/ I" q! F7 {4 S" P9 ?4 C: e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 u; M* u+ p' j- D! }  O- T! s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 h5 S6 f9 S" w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ Y5 e0 }. p6 w( M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% I/ B( m' J( y7 \  p7 r& _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 s7 H9 u& \. q) t: K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 I1 b, V8 s5 L. `8 v4 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# d, ^( k7 F5 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>