【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ z9 X4 J! I5 [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! f2 d7 }2 H' X% B* o6 Y3 J8 k+ T7 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 a% Q) t' q/ r/ T8 [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 i' X4 s: J+ F" s4 C  MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 i( p5 C) Q7 K- iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' g$ `" z5 ?2 x2 B- ]8 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! x" Q% C, s; hEvery other word you utter is love
2 D" O: G+ k6 b3 UI really want to know just how much you love me
7 Q1 Q* S* S# `; Z# }5 gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 R# ?9 u: R& N$ R3 U/ G/ TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 g% K% @$ D: w( J' H9 P4 {# VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ A% O. ]9 ]( N6 K7 p! @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# t* U5 N( T( y4 P$ n# VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ U4 M: @$ F/ A7 |" i7 `I regret not dying
, a% v4 U  H9 V3 y8 x8 k- X; rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( N% o( x8 m$ L! {7 `9 }With such a tongue as yours,
1 {# n! K' e- vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; T" g, U2 C8 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 M( z- ~) I" t  pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% S$ s( F1 u" C3 g5 h1 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* n- A% D  x4 a% Z6 n. [8 D5 E, B5 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) S! F; k* V0 W( s# R2 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; [' m1 z  o$ w$ L+ r: E4 h% @1 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 |' V3 |) O; @1 a5 z9 L3 s# \( O# j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 v: i* _  d0 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" D1 \  L$ ]" ?3 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' c4 d+ m& M( h4 r6 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: S  S- @& t6 \# M# ?) R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 F+ t  Q1 e( X) k/ {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! p- T9 @0 O9 z6 n( J! @4 {- z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 u$ g. F' u! l$ l8 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. Y% x- G; O% Z6 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 @2 Q+ }4 C% A) F5 |, a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# r9 L# ]+ q- c7 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- q; z' _( j$ F% _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 t/ d5 n% W+ }* M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 f5 O+ P- D* k* Y0 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 T, _  v5 x  n. K* E# I0 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 x( \2 d% Q% \1 H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- i; G5 A$ T8 ^& {+ v, O; t/ A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) M. Z0 b) b9 i/ F1 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 o+ n4 _$ I8 r" i; Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 x" d' r9 W- E7 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% _. h% u) M8 Z9 m) a2 J) I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# ?1 L8 I1 T+ p' o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- s/ x! A/ E6 ]* k2 p2 V8 t8 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* {; K/ ]1 G( X" K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. g+ M; l# n5 i' T, S我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: j; H% `) U) N/ O; S5 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>