【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ `1 ?# B  w; y6 Z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  y* b  O1 j$ ~0 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  [9 A" k: p2 \8 R1 s4 x+ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. U, l8 P6 W  |$ z  l( nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 k0 F: I5 o9 _* G! `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* i& `" Q) [" D! y6 U6 z$ Y' IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ \# K- G1 E9 {5 w3 W0 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  B# _1 n8 e. g7 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 T% L, [6 x/ U& q- r* YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. ?) m- n- Y7 }4 w( b9 w& Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ L4 Y* n% l* I/ Q0 Z" r. Z( b: l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 c' H' S0 N, D! w8 \) U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 }/ b. V/ X) I3 {% v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% a" J9 W/ a3 h4 J( U" _5 S7 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 m6 u8 n. H" L8 r( ^! z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 s$ l4 U8 K- g* X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- h) R$ b( F6 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( H9 s/ C0 A5 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* l3 x1 ]( l/ g3 W- i% \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! {6 W1 H7 l0 p" m# T' w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( \& Z. f# b3 m4 P1 B; D; x7 r  M' N! \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! C# _1 r' L, ?; S0 S2 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 S9 i7 j1 T" @: |4 o) t, C7 H) y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 u/ E+ G* h, E. g' n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% @" V5 A* J  E- X2 e" x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ t! t% }! _! G; q& g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ q' s8 {6 h. S$ S/ r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 ?1 A& M; k7 V& J: G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 A5 w0 u% d7 x5 l  l/ Q, t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ i. Y- l2 p8 j& ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>