【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 c4 j, K! n- C+ f  c; PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ n: S" u: A. r2 @' O) E' MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 f% u, t6 J- `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* W' k& ?& w, E4 l, o. P# I- EThe sky is happy down to its soul
  h) I$ o' L1 b1 aWith the moon kissing it every night
) y. N- c# ^, cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 h/ L2 k( j" f, s! c# H4 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" N& ]! M- K/ Z1 y& zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ W0 v# a$ w1 o- R) v0 S; v( j- g% `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; ]$ \1 |$ S3 H! h8 o, JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) g" u4 R: X* L# H0 V3 r; zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# V$ o+ b7 W' O$ g3 E+ |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 h# K/ q! |5 @  o  CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 o! p4 W% i+ E7 \# `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ ?$ I, Y/ i: y! N: n" ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; D3 S( S  {$ m+ G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, R; t2 p  G" K9 i. f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ p0 q/ Y6 q. [- I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 e9 v# M+ F- G4 S9 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 |' Z% j: d1 N7 U% l6 p9 F7 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 x% b" C. ^- v* Y# k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ {# j; Q6 ]* K5 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ^# j1 e) [& E1 ^7 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ v, k% {) B' l0 [, s) n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 s. K- K$ i( |* j( b2 ?4 y# O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( N* j# |7 r& z8 {+ J" P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: x! |: l7 r! P6 A3 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! ?: L( h$ a" U, j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( B6 v& s* A9 [, }& M4 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 n3 F* q# E% B" O! O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- |; E9 ]0 `" [5 D, [; f$ E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 E% v$ n0 j/ F. x, _- j4 e/ z9 P! {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* S8 O5 d8 a1 E  j) X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 e) |, A) s- f! P) u3 K2 o" A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' {$ M* S* T; V! |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  t. I/ s* y& V+ [# y5 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, g5 W( ]% h& P; u; R5 E7 D/ b0 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) ^# P# A# Q* f8 M0 v. Q4 |4 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, f: w5 o$ y& K7 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# Z" e, m. m, P0 Q4 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; ^  K2 b/ S* G我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* Q8 ~% R4 M2 O6 x( y; C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>