【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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& b1 @& S* r0 g我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 d5 `6 X$ W: x2 d5 T/ ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 [. Y4 N$ ^7 U! k- f8 d9 g) QFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* b0 J+ W9 Q) B2 [, |4 VWe meet and talk everyday,
9 O7 V+ S2 H) U3 rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 s0 K3 Y, x& C$ x1 g8 P  V. VIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) ~; @; w% J9 Y) P* rLove… just the word love
: C% M6 o& g7 T; W  X4 y9 V# n0 _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, u) `: [) d" oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ {0 U' d4 S8 c7 w- HIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% R; F6 o, Y; q8 \  i% f3 x# @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, k8 N: ?1 |2 V/ M3 p3 s  {1 e" q3 ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 L+ R$ n5 T0 p) n. Q1 V/ rLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 P4 _' d4 M# i9 `3 x3 V- m6 d% YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 T3 u4 @# p0 M  fIf today isn’t too late,
# h9 W/ M+ s; V. Z- i* l" L, pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  j8 s9 Y3 P: U9 W, ~. zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* v- y5 i3 V* `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ P  [2 H9 x$ s; ^8 `Can I entrust it to you?
& N# a1 j$ w4 REntrust my love within your heart

" l; z; M& Y+ X' O[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 p2 I3 ?6 }( i  H& @4 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 v8 c2 q: L/ e# A2 @, R4 ~" P) ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 y) ?8 u! W6 y2 G( h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  g. B$ a9 U% k- b4 o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* B/ q7 y8 g( C. y+ b; M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ L' A/ @* [. W. H- b: o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 _! B! W6 @$ e) R, t9 i' k3 M: ~. M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: Y9 b! I, K/ t" g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 @. p1 q9 P5 q% b1 V, O  H/ z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ q5 D1 [- a3 _; S, o<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( i& V! h' m, z4 \# V0 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 S' s/ v0 V. x) x/ l' T$ x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 H* S0 v' b) _/ r; J0 p5 s0 S1 M<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& {4 _1 I& L- y% F( D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- v+ R8 X' }. Q5 z% p6 L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- R5 n% k$ ?& s3 ~9 }, `0 ~+ v! _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 i1 F; F4 \# ?' b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  t3 v: l6 t6 F1 k" S. [  q* E9 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" K" B8 B2 q3 W( [0 _( ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 m" B! [& G$ S: q. B* O9 }# |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' C2 K( S' Z9 p  a0 Y/ b<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' T: @& l+ O) h. p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ Z& W0 E% _9 b7 N<P>But I never did </P>
' @& K2 L+ L3 g" P<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ h/ L+ R& u3 b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% ?% K. {& I8 c* P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& J# M6 H" `3 r, A2 _: C. v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% W6 z$ k$ I, Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 K& x( p( X& e# {; _1 [' K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 a+ Q0 \% Y" d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* I# _. d9 h$ w/ P% e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# ^/ ^0 `3 j% R5 r  q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 C. w2 n! d, U; ]- T: y/ @3 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, C$ H+ [& K) Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 u: M6 B+ q1 ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>