【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- c0 R1 d/ u9 \. {2 T, e: f: R我另将歌词附在此。
3 }' j: Q2 |! R' gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. P  _6 z9 I3 r7 Y, xI already loved you with all my heart
' M+ w9 C( b: y, BWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* ^- R8 |! k9 VIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- x* Z8 N1 J0 G1 o' w& x6 I+ RI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 b' U) x- v$ \( o5 I5 ]/ o( hI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 o0 [$ u# D$ t7 p6 W2 \+ BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 g" H2 x! z; NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 }/ V+ n# L" R4 Z: ~Entrust my love within your heart
  j- z( c! L& v' BLove… just the word love
, Q, N5 {5 |1 C9 n# Q1 |3 w) _; FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' O' k6 B, G/ T8 M, P0 u$ k8 @0 JBut I never did
) F, a* V/ U, D3 U7 w1 g0 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ Z, Z* F8 \3 @4 g$ X" WEntrust my love within your heart
% M% m6 y9 L/ \4 ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

5 ^2 G; ^0 {, Q* V9 `6 H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 \7 }9 {8 T  D  I6 w. s$ M+ L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( |8 k9 h# R( C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ \+ h1 k6 g5 p  z* L% F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; o0 d! T. {6 V' n7 C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: u1 e5 U# G4 w; K* W. H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 r0 [8 u7 Y& @8 A3 ~: L( {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. F, a# r) F$ x8 Z  ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; M$ f% F' q- U9 d2 y; @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; u6 e/ g) I7 C) y8 T% j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) C" M( o9 s5 n3 }2 o, S: z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" R) a& o  |- |: f" }7 O+ y% I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. C% Q  ~* K- [4 P) r9 r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 f. j2 B9 |, y5 h7 b8 @  J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& m( U6 {$ X" L9 n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& u1 o* o4 Q: L* H/ k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ j! l7 P+ m/ w! U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ i  }) [2 r& h2 r; o, O7 N7 S0 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 L& R( }! I( R, J. D0 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 Q- w9 Z& ^& A7 Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 X$ e. z/ U7 j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, W1 X: ?5 d' k5 @2 N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' u& D& x& u4 U8 S/ Y! [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ f+ d7 N9 H8 y& D9 W0 T<P>But I never did </P>
" |% J4 d4 _- z0 H7 V0 J<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( g8 Q+ _! W. s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' }9 t2 J& \8 \<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, Y8 Q0 D8 f% ?: K. @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 Q) Z+ N& C( s: {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- y& j* j9 g* y3 U' ]+ ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# Q4 B: T* k# B1 I0 G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& B) q1 X" x0 E% x3 O  C3 i) b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: r7 {3 w* }9 ^+ Y! T) ~: e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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