【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 F- B* U9 J' o1 ]我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ Z- Z; M8 g! x8 Q8 ~) W! |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 X  O/ w: M9 L1 P) EFrom the first moment we met,
; v9 s$ d' i3 n# y  mI already loved you with all my heart
! B5 @! N$ b5 H& {) A( LWe meet and talk everyday,
/ S2 b$ ^5 R5 }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, K$ R6 M4 h6 |* A7 J6 l( |7 yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' m& F# j# D6 l8 s6 cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# v, g5 s  E. y/ p4 d  [If today isn’t too late,
) W) \5 ^% W  W8 _8 aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 ?2 V# H( U) O* T6 n& zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; ^9 P' V1 v+ y4 iEntrust my love within your heart
" e$ v. Q  u+ r0 b$ x4 j4 z& v* JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' V! I7 i" u) I0 b  Q5 U) lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% A6 I' l* @- Y' ~# |. K' vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( @2 E7 e; q1 b1 d" q. LCan I entrust it to you?
' S5 G" ]( I! y4 r: c/ xEntrust my love within your heart
$ T+ D  I6 b" d$ E4 ^" \+ bCan I entrust it to you?
) L8 W8 D) H3 fEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' @* [9 J! }% _4 U: \7 Y0 q! I/ U- X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 m# j6 ^' K+ T5 D) U9 F. T0 I4 e) m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# o* B% F% Q0 ]- c2 r1 a2 O& F3 _) W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 m, E! _1 h- U" u0 F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ X) @. l8 e0 _, ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 S8 Z8 _) L/ M. e; P+ a7 I<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# h) h$ t; w# u% f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, U" @( |! b0 ~' F- r  D  W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 L7 r# {6 o( \! H<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% N7 O5 J' k# s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" P4 ]" }; _; s' J8 E* b8 g9 a" a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  X1 S6 R7 O; b$ z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 y7 r1 P& ?! X! l0 w8 L% @# u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 P# E* V6 r6 ]! C+ R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 d, _0 e3 _$ u# ~$ }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 h, w( W& ?. j3 Y% ]5 P7 b4 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 T  H5 k/ C9 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( x& k$ Q/ N7 H/ z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 w, R: l4 u6 M* r% w1 n" Y, M6 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 G- e& s0 W6 q  M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 x7 V, K8 U" [8 ~8 m5 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 z" Y. s& S( m- f" ?. E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" Y. S: k, r2 y. R' X8 }5 j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" E5 \+ M& g* X/ ~! o<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 m9 B- a5 J& O9 k; \* f6 o 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

% x/ u4 f) y5 l3 h2 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ e5 J3 p: N% j  p# L4 f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>