【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- f& A2 b& a7 [6 x6 JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% j( l! h- i4 D$ v9 Z4 r4 MFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 V: V% `+ a' e' wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- [2 g4 I: D8 f6 n) l9 x( ^8 wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- s! b- |- w) k. a) B" f' LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# e3 c( e. G2 Y# M  UCan I entrust it to you?
! J8 ~: |: E! @* E$ O, Y- D6 MEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 u. s1 u/ U* v* J, yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, G+ ]4 x6 l) U# H" n4 u+ QBut I never did
5 V: |2 |  F+ z7 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; {# y$ H+ V8 O) Z* [- JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 Q+ a0 \9 E% b) sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ u) y1 K& N$ d# F4 r0 d( sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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" h7 q% B) S7 V" U0 }' T0 B, _/ `; \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  D5 r" H& ^: R+ [3 P& z% E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 Y$ q8 z( l1 O- U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 q' x$ `- u+ }8 T; s2 ^1 e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 M! k- v3 s9 F# E/ z* O3 R; c: C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ L5 r' A: ?9 y! D( z; b5 B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ k9 o! t, m/ ]- K0 B& W! d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; G! H+ N1 ?9 C$ s9 t/ F! J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! o5 @0 _. e5 Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% |; d, e+ n$ i, e8 z2 K" C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, w, d: q8 r4 h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! l' Z$ |' Q2 v* P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! j, R+ Q( B* ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. T* P+ [) t. O3 D- Q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: v7 ]4 X9 e9 T<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  W7 [$ G4 {2 `' K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# t% i6 e  R' I+ v" [: n1 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 }; g6 b+ m. ^6 ^& ^, a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' E  [" l- G! k9 A. D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 K  l+ D% h$ u9 J- h. D. T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) ]9 U6 {- v$ O% p% @0 k* q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 C0 p% i" L- [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ [$ r2 o" f5 _( J6 z0 w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: h/ N- o6 M' z3 u  @5 H0 j, B8 l! D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; [3 l+ q( g- V/ u' m3 f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 d# H# a# U" V5 G9 W# |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! j6 |% @* E5 y5 p" u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 Y/ z* k0 M0 u! d: j" @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  g! e1 ^4 D) `3 y0 r/ T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 n4 K# v7 p9 B# v% i9 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  t' o& F, }# h1 f! K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 t: `. C$ k5 }# Q- P: i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 N- X9 e& v# c- j1 T* f$ n$ b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& ]% }- B* E9 _! Z' _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 |- U: F8 Q# C; _! o- f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>