【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  L" H, ~; w( UFrom the first moment we met,
- i. {9 x7 d# r4 ZI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 I: A  m. i$ v2 A: L' m0 HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 j5 b7 P6 w. l; p9 S$ ]  VI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 Y. m6 {6 `, j2 U! WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ S7 L7 Y  E* W( YBut I never did
* m4 I: I( m5 {( s$ M6 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 S" H# v+ h' D  PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& I( g8 `. A5 n: ]: M6 {. BLove… just the word love
6 E. w- B) Y( M4 y+ D: cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! P$ h: t% c0 Z' mBut I never did
( V& s: s5 D/ ^' G# F' [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ f) p" o2 ]4 C% @If today isn’t too late,
/ B) z8 Y: \, D# |, j" |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 j  _4 r) \# ~8 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 [: |+ L1 ]7 [. x1 h' D( mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! I7 \9 Q  Z5 [8 ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! J" \" o, B/ v6 R) B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  `8 b' {) h5 H0 _+ {7 b& q' y$ n2 Y2 T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# r& u9 e' ~6 |) F: X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: |6 M3 g2 r0 K" C9 |1 ^<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 E# \2 i: _7 u! A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 y' \0 |' M; d1 \! S<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) c& E6 G4 y/ C" F: |. Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 \! F; P* ^! d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% e  w& E. O. s9 M  F4 o- j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* s* f; W- p- R' j1 X4 o( l<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% T9 {, _# Q4 i$ |! L  W<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 G" w2 D$ b/ q. n5 y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) v5 t- s+ L# ~7 ?<P>但我不会</P>
: j) \1 `' v& R/ W8 f* X$ @7 M# N<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 [! ~1 }: G3 A4 h  W% J  `) ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, k9 |% _9 d/ j, i<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  ^5 V5 n* c. B# o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 |( O" N8 u9 i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, p" d" `# @" ~* j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 r; G: R2 t6 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 k( b' @' T7 Z0 H0 P: Y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% Z2 m$ O; F2 W6 |& t7 i$ a! \  I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! n8 U& z& x1 D8 K2 X! h% _6 t<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  h& [8 @- E! r' s. u" O) ~<P>But I never did </P>
/ {( v4 x0 x* g  M<P>但我不会 </P>
! y; l- i% s* R; g% b" I4 N$ W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* H  H4 Z0 B/ ~) W) ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 |9 y8 U7 C+ E- o/ [; z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! x- Q5 ], ?# E& ]' l1 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( J7 q3 U  V/ k, {9 n: I# A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. ?7 h& Z1 W  D% q* a' G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ z0 N. e1 e5 B, Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! _2 _6 ^% h2 Z" _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 C# S+ t+ l. L2 [1 Q( m3 Q  c' m! t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  B- d2 y+ Z5 m5 l4 B; d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>