【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
' h4 |) \6 a* p/ S, ^; @2 q* MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% O" |& S1 W3 G' E2 I; Y; H- {* `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 }- g. _) ~, W- _From the first moment we met,
; |3 P9 k: |  m6 _2 W/ D+ Z( R' p* tI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
( O4 P( J! U) Z$ t  VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: B. g! T1 z( M: `8 l7 S, F: kLove… just the word love
( h8 E# h8 g8 M: T0 rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 ?% W1 F' E+ t) k0 G6 E  Q3 W' {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 g; S" D5 y' ~$ z8 ?  ^2 E7 AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 C. _! m' l4 ?7 Y4 bIf today isn’t too late,
' y3 R) j6 A& d8 [9 c. }$ wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; J3 c6 H$ K; H/ Z# j& sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: i. u2 d& M/ P8 q& FEntrust my love within your heart
) U7 e0 v% J" \$ q) W8 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 Q7 s6 q2 R: A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; R5 I; y4 F8 S1 ?<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, v9 j( I; J. ^' a5 ?) ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 k; P: {. Y2 d4 _% e4 d  Q0 G<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 }0 {* g' n; J' u  d; g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 i! |$ W8 u# `: M* O; o1 q# v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 p- J3 p& u8 p( G# a# Q, C+ V9 W<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* D9 i2 ^$ c& f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: V+ o- c1 z( b5 \/ H, T$ ~  r<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ \& `/ J+ j3 w0 ?<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. {% q. S8 b; {( P' A% D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 ^# [% E9 E9 a' P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 z; w* f2 t3 Y2 M) t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- S# n+ D7 `. |$ P/ W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' Z/ C7 R0 z& O5 j4 v. s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- [2 d8 `; @4 _( K+ O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" D, H9 s8 S- a2 c6 z. V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 v6 G: A, C, B. A& S1 g+ ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 ~1 j0 C- S* T- s<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; o% ^7 L6 K: h7 [7 g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ J& \* e- I- J6 V( o4 Y: \, E1 @<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. Z1 ]; [5 z; X! E7 R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ q" k3 }7 w1 u<P>But I never did </P>
+ k0 y- W" \/ v* F* c) A: Y<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( n  \& ~; A% v/ J# s: h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 v9 i! Q! u0 }1 H# b2 G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: I! E+ f2 C- ~: q5 s& P4 J/ j7 D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. E3 j' N# J7 |' h4 {+ X+ C2 g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 ?( P$ ?& M) k  q' Q+ F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 d4 T# L/ n. t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! L9 p  n8 V# R4 g& s) }1 ]2 D3 F<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, o( F$ c" f+ @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>