【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 w3 j. a3 N; Q8 uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
- v! X3 |5 w# F: k+ i2 ~, aWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ o, K, ~' y; fLove… just the word love
5 t" V5 ~& }# K& I7 ?( dWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ g% R+ g- V/ G& ]- wI want to confess that I love you,
. f8 ]) X; |5 \9 j8 p' gBut I never did
# P! [% Y  d6 A1 g3 @3 A! HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) i9 y- P; t- t2 ILove… just the word love
' @9 q/ _* C" c4 F8 ~! A5 cWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 k$ I5 J6 c9 T; }2 TI want to confess that I love you,
7 J4 }/ U" u- Q+ S0 F& `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# ?% D2 f6 n* v/ }1 C: @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 w) H0 Z; ?/ PCan I entrust it to you?
' D! r. i; X2 P+ T3 N; Q& x8 yEntrust my love within your heart
$ l1 a/ U, B- o% H! b: G2 ZCan I entrust it to you?
" W6 Q% r9 b6 @! ^- _Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 ~+ e& ?! m/ i- o; I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 g. ?/ b5 h. U9 W; Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ o1 q1 R* j; A1 b: s% N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( B% m' N9 \% a; b/ Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 |; j; p% Q1 l+ }/ n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, J& O; C( n" o) j' |$ f% l- v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( R! M' K; |$ t5 F. T6 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( A5 J8 w3 _- p- {/ j/ O% ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& M8 }/ U: C; S8 P+ `# X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# s  D2 i) r7 K& w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# j1 K) }: f7 u4 w2 ^1 |" U( B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; j0 h3 j: M/ a2 Z% m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 D0 Y: B3 M, B, K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 W( I3 O- ~0 C1 B2 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 v" c( u& a* V4 h0 P9 D3 m+ G<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) ?, P& t! z# ^# }* w2 f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" Y  w4 s- h9 p& _/ R# @<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ v( g6 n* z& S$ e' V<P>But I never did </P>
3 m7 A! j' V4 d  h. o/ J1 c<P>但我不会 </P>
1 T% e7 I3 |3 G; G* C<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 d+ q1 P9 H$ d  F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 j  Y  X3 ^) s! e+ a" B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: m, _* P* O/ x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( P7 ^5 C7 z* }# k& s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( }. a: x' x0 I2 V, L; c4 d  c- |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' x  O' f7 i' |1 [6 n<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! D. Y7 r( R7 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>