【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
- Q% ^' y+ J5 g2 |6 nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 {4 D5 C, F: G* O, _4 {) v* E. ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* `! @3 n( E) l  Y4 U6 P# ^# S- bFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" s& O% F" k; }' eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 l" @5 M( b% a6 \( t& _1 X4 b! J8 pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. T; V) C! E9 U4 V% B1 ]- L  CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ [; I6 i# h7 z& w, E5 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 j, b0 `7 L8 y1 j4 B1 I- `1 ~Can I entrust it to you?
. l) V$ d+ e) n, R1 l( [5 s3 |: V# NEntrust my love within your heart
* @; N, P. Y; I. V( zLove… just the word love
, C' E1 q# u# s9 _Why is it so difficult to express?
% _" k, a% y& C/ l( OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) u0 o# `1 B2 {Can I entrust it to you?
/ A0 o" S7 B4 |. J1 g# K! IEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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/ X% H$ ~9 }1 y0 }" D; g( n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% m: E0 l0 p4 S7 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 K) T/ n5 M5 _, R4 r( }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- K/ ?9 p5 u2 I4 }8 h2 [! H/ J3 ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 t" }( p$ j7 k& X' l* K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# m: O, g" Y* C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, u' ]  [6 o) g$ D% }$ A<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) s7 e3 z( k6 Z$ X0 m9 q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. ?2 A$ K& m$ c* V& O4 o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" ]* T; U. K/ m) ]/ h6 }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 e5 ^7 b# X5 h9 `1 i; `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 t: P8 e. _; U! L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 @0 D: n5 w, W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 n' z( g) z3 |2 A) G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 ~/ x" `0 n. Z, C0 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( c' |5 o$ W$ Q/ U: d. G5 h2 K/ g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 g, {# ~% l! q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; _% s1 A+ y/ h4 T5 r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 t3 Y" W$ Q$ y. j* J3 B8 v. f<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 C3 u5 f# A; s2 }- c" n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 Y0 C) m0 [# O8 g7 C- J  y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 v2 k- j: w9 ~5 w<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! z. @* V7 q# p' }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ u5 g8 ]( n; w3 o/ n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 _7 C3 h1 Q6 h! s7 o2 |) g0 @+ O5 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  `. a3 n- e- Q" }, V2 j1 Q; D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" V+ Z. @, {( L0 h/ C. s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 Y' s+ B& ~0 @" Z4 D$ j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 ~  \7 V% `5 H* E: A% u2 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 ^! I/ m; a3 o1 }/ q( }: y) }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 E7 f# J( a6 N7 `. E1 C- j0 @7 y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 K3 h% Y1 O( N+ @' T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>