【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. a% i- K, y: uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% W% _( \8 @; |- k" F! YI already loved you with all my heart
1 Q: _$ z2 U4 OWe meet and talk everyday,
* n+ B; r6 q( b8 XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) y' I4 N0 y; d) O8 ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* a$ [* p8 N4 W" V) y5 HI would probably know how you feel
6 p: `" k5 ~) \/ Y9 A  A2 X' [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; x* W/ [0 }$ R( {$ e! BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 z" \" V5 j5 N* {3 C% WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 l/ B3 H: U" c6 z: n4 K: iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 w: ^5 x8 X% ]1 @Why is it so difficult to express?
( Y1 k' r+ G% x. r3 UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ u8 X+ V" f* n2 TIf today isn’t too late,
- A$ o! O* l0 ^/ Z/ x# _4 |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& m, p% x! ?2 R+ @Can I entrust it to you?
& C) d2 b3 k! u( z5 P, |3 GEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. p8 F% r, q- k5 [- n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 q* N/ j% e3 y* F. i+ @9 @6 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. s  j) r% o# o& Y- p% e- \$ t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 y. M6 Q$ a# u. R% M  {( V$ V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. @- ]1 n+ M8 `- _0 I' w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* }# t$ e6 V' O6 Z, Q$ G' M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ U: ]: i; v! `9 M& [# l2 P% @, T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# i7 A' X- O8 L& Z( F+ V) U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 q3 @0 {1 O2 C. I% Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 n4 i% w5 a: z/ ?. ~. n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 ?1 [4 e5 G- R+ X1 M9 e<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! B( V  _! H7 ?% R/ Y. O* Z<P>但我不会</P>
+ M6 v4 E4 {" C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 Q$ Q% f9 V: P7 @7 o8 v& C1 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 y( U. a& E* H* J6 }' I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% I4 F5 W3 p2 t1 g: N5 R* B2 W& B0 d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; A3 p- l9 S. Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ D, |, h4 w; m2 c  E4 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" W) K% x) j- f) z7 ~7 d4 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 H( ?9 n$ @  O2 K" D, j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 j& f, i( ^% r3 C& M8 O) @3 F<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& E* Q0 }, [# J) [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; h% b; l; _# @  {* `1 d* b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* Z) G7 n+ Z; Y/ R( E6 ~<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( K; g) z0 L: K& Z0 \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% Y: W# y: M8 W% x5 a7 S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. M& I6 _3 B$ |; d6 b/ `  D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ l4 h0 r6 i. `3 H) i( w1 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 @) u& {0 h+ t. l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 s- o# k) c! X" `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 {4 e- m/ V- U4 `, k: L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 I$ B' K* v/ C1 Y( d8 r$ d5 V4 ^* Z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 R; G/ m  _8 J# \- s* _
% a$ H9 C! y0 M, |) J1 F 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
0 B5 r/ d& O$ @
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>