【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; R- Y6 A) S2 R6 QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) \) \/ O3 p$ Q, aFrom the first moment we met,
" _0 R5 |" p1 W9 j" vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 h+ F( e3 P4 u' E4 G5 {1 @7 {( tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 g. h  M% ?* \/ a. A; \9 o: cI would probably know how you feel
* G7 x' k$ P0 w* S  JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* }: h: f/ `% u/ z( B# \2 D7 I/ XI want to confess that I love you,
4 P+ M" U# g0 t# z$ oBut I never did
8 f" ~4 Y) ]4 H% [" HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( Q7 ^4 x) @, _8 YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! J! k' K3 X. D2 Y/ xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) d: i, a/ B" i6 L+ A0 ]Can I entrust it to you?
* G) I7 T, L% l1 |% sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 g/ [4 ]9 v) Z/ m+ z4 X8 o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ w1 h  J- t; W( _# K2 f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% O7 K+ K. v( k9 G" ^0 W6 d5 T+ @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. Z2 X+ c3 X3 r9 D% a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ u. g9 ~2 W* G6 {& O4 N4 r4 t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 m. K- ~; d# A( `& n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* I  I  B8 p0 u2 h9 M" \* H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 Q; B2 T5 N! f( Q( c9 M& M$ q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" O8 ^6 s1 R- M7 `. P& ?* q0 v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% M( U) e/ g7 C9 m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" G" ?7 S: G' m7 ]  z. N( Q" K<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 k& A- [$ x9 k5 x  `<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( f4 |) K, i( g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 t0 E9 F% X. S3 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  o7 y4 N/ z$ d4 D4 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( N4 R8 B: t9 s9 j2 Y" ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 {  w" L# M, w6 ~; D0 @/ Q8 D% T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- r: I& r4 O5 r0 z% r- l<P>But I never did </P>
0 b/ f2 x4 q2 x/ _. i<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% o; b+ w: I  a; ]9 `* a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 q+ R1 c. h6 C' e8 v, j$ P% J" p$ n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: `" ~* }# V0 S4 N* h+ e8 u$ Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 O/ M1 _, d( X1 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. A: {, T: y8 c2 P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 W  W$ M6 q1 W8 P2 e: o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 W# p: k& y, m. P  t7 e9 F<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, J9 ?- q& M" X3 r! q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  W! M1 A8 _( B- r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>