【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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  H& g$ r) x( H我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 F$ q* t* w1 R0 Z$ _2 r+ r+ L, YFrom the first moment we met,
$ h& ?( ^7 O7 iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 U; F. j7 m: \2 o, |0 P, `" XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 N2 F0 E0 H1 b# cIf today isn’t too late,
; r: m! i  {8 h* N: R% lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# D; |4 b3 @/ o% [0 ?! uCan I entrust it to you?
1 C* e0 t9 r  ~7 d+ ZEntrust my love within your heart
( m( A: B2 K% M$ VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, k" z5 ~) I  \/ g2 M: BI want to confess that I love you,
" }  o) M3 Z# ]( \, jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 \" _: j" H2 @4 f$ r5 S, y' H& e( `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; v0 Z+ S- Z' V+ Z' ~  OEntrust my love within your heart
; j* C& Q: z2 s5 ~" E: L- JCan I entrust it to you?
5 I. `3 N, |4 Z' qEntrust my love within your heart
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1 t7 H' Q: R, Z) f5 X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# O3 J9 R  C8 N. [. M8 ]9 U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- w% w+ x% K% K+ o$ H; T* D: [0 F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 q# q5 i8 N" f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 F$ ^2 ?9 ?6 A! J# w) N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  @; U) G; P; \7 w$ O$ z% Z) Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" q2 |' \+ E* t& a; T" [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 t1 H. Q0 @( M% P: V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ F3 ]- S6 V' s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 f3 ?: |% c) i2 J0 g3 n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 X7 a7 ~8 x& y% o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 [4 J; F/ u( N+ H5 A/ g- {' _+ o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) |6 N3 K2 ^( |( B, W! C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 O4 X" [6 i* y) \5 f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* t* b0 L2 S5 C7 L, j) w5 ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 C9 w( c4 T2 h+ E! M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% K6 I& g. H4 k* m+ F$ ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. k1 ^& i, E% _+ L, ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% m+ D& Q! r4 M2 ^+ U! h/ X$ v+ q7 A<P>But I never did </P>
9 v$ f3 q4 @$ _6 g' d<P>但我不会 </P>
6 N) D2 b" k: f- |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& m  |4 E% o2 i+ A! e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 r, p- [) q9 b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% ~6 _: @/ S5 z: R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- i3 ^9 e) E6 w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 k/ q; M. g- ~0 M* ?. `$ s/ y, j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& |  t6 J. t4 ]" e7 P4 T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% b5 i2 H! r/ Q" u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 ^* M/ a3 Z& c0 C- y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 L6 Y3 m7 D; M% U7 Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" B. N: u, _: I  i+ e$ K, E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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  ?  d0 ~/ j) [+ F  z2 e9 k这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ w: I. z6 Q# b8 t* J2 Q2 ~" \$ E: D0 F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>