【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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& B7 M5 H6 i, ~; h1 O9 Z# S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 B9 m6 T; @+ K4 I4 KFrom the first moment we met,
3 e' O% y" e7 O  ?5 nI already loved you with all my heart
* r3 o: L7 D2 |3 T. xWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 W) c. K# B  T$ i2 `3 ]$ rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ i6 k' b2 _- A* l, {I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ p' y5 d+ D4 O+ i; R2 ~' @Why is it so difficult to express?
! _: d- a2 V( t+ [I want to confess that I love you,
, |1 v; H* k( @But I never did
6 a+ r+ d& ~( U+ |" X" gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) E  Y' v/ i) @% w7 B7 W7 S/ k6 hIf today isn’t too late,
3 _2 a; v/ K5 H. A8 eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, Z7 g2 E$ q2 t# q8 K, T  ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 C# X" {7 x7 j; q+ ~4 _8 PEntrust my love within your heart
+ n1 w, S- B. a/ ]& ?3 h6 |Love… just the word love
2 r( Y  v  e0 }+ A* b& RWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ l# T+ O; ]/ p; aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 ~4 M, j1 a* d# s5 q4 eIf today isn’t too late,
$ x9 q9 ?1 ~# mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 t- b% `( J/ l: j' aCan I entrust it to you?
' q7 o2 M5 w, R9 b' }  }: dEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! b" O# G4 c% v) Z" f( _8 CEntrust my love within your heart

7 v( H9 v( d- D9 ^- w7 y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* ^% f' p5 V7 R; U  e<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) ?9 c1 v/ a4 t) H2 v% l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% V5 e; t4 S( P% w, Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 U1 I/ Y4 Q) m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, r4 N5 M9 \  P/ v7 g1 l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' s  i8 n0 Q( M4 L, A0 H1 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ U' j6 {; n  a7 a3 ?. h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# H" \! O2 y8 m! X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ y. u* Q9 T- N<P>但我不会</P>
5 [  n, v( @/ C' w: N, k; p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# z$ }: d' n( @6 R& }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, D+ y" \$ ^( {' B, _+ y( E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" @8 P2 U- O! m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: H3 Y. K6 F8 C/ M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ q8 d/ h$ T8 B( h. X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" K+ h* |: u( Q7 b7 ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) L2 g$ d" f6 Q& |. P" j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) K; m* e2 W, V. K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 e  f! u* k& R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 \( C! m$ @+ e- g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 G: a5 j  G& _! W6 P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. \0 D( ^  H5 n: `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 ~- E8 q8 V; _! e$ |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 [1 X+ h3 i9 S8 m8 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
% R7 G6 a0 j* ^# w+ ?3 j
0 \" y3 p6 {6 k, \0 K4 |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! K5 J) X2 S7 s7 [7 t5 z. g- b
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# n7 J' X; v1 _$ l& P- r; I3 m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>