【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# R% s, A! k/ W+ VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 P8 m& i6 F& r% FI already loved you with all my heart
* h7 h* ~: S( q- K, s3 TWe meet and talk everyday,
2 x8 c1 q, w. K0 A* gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) L# Z, M1 j6 u7 G4 gWhy is it so difficult to express?
) a4 J; Q2 [, g- v; I7 ~+ E" ~I want to confess that I love you,
4 q, t( ?( C$ F+ s/ ?2 z* CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& ^8 c! P1 i1 E' T4 BCan I entrust it to you?
" p' w# K+ T6 z% HEntrust my love within your heart
0 O3 e! s. |# ^# H/ \Love… just the word love
! U% E1 }" M, a% a: p7 w/ h, d$ P  yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" D0 |! o5 a5 @If today isn’t too late,
4 @) M; L  b7 QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) I5 g3 T! X+ x: ?% Z+ |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ \" N6 D; A+ [2 e7 O2 A- P) aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  I7 ~" C6 h. e/ Z' LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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: A, D  G3 E! a  B% @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! d- f" ^7 F' e" T- \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, v9 v4 ^2 K) v3 t3 R2 T/ q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 R  T& `7 [( N8 C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% x  ?6 b- S- _: v! S  Q, a<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 Y$ }8 U9 m2 p7 l! `0 O9 q6 A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ i! s( n* i% X& G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, |( U: }7 U( n: ~9 s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 |* X% C$ ]5 V2 `; @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' Z# A2 b) E7 f" D<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ r, o- C/ J! x/ [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 {. k0 c" F" Q9 Q4 `) J- n/ ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 v1 R* v5 @7 n5 \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 L8 q$ a4 ^8 O  A( c* Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 L6 z( t/ ^4 W. a( x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 Y/ }) C0 l% D9 _- k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) _/ c% ~2 c) h: C! Y0 [: `$ {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; r4 K# S* p; m$ z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ t  l. [+ I4 d+ G$ R% N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( o" `( S5 t/ o% j' y' Q/ {5 A- M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% q8 o: v2 L5 \7 g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% L" E7 {! `% \, H. O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 U& m' I+ r2 I, A! b. C. Y<P>But I never did </P>
& K' C# i, b; X" m8 p<P>但我不会 </P>
, E# w4 k' j7 g. d* U! N6 J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 z5 ]8 N2 a" _5 w! d0 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( j; ^3 m8 R( R# n+ L( Y" T% |8 D2 @<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  B! a* d! r9 M" z" a* v3 C; K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, P& ?' E2 K; S: ?$ M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ P, Z& J0 N. d8 \, M5 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 Q  A" G# S+ s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, b/ A9 C. n( l  b: g/ W  }" F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 a( M0 H) l: n$ V9 I# j5 ]4 C0 m- v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# |# X( T7 v: h3 z$ L  B$ I( {. j+ D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 I2 ?9 u  x$ L9 j; F; e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' n3 \9 V- t0 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 a  g+ u/ w1 D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>