【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
+ t$ k1 ^+ L+ P( nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' G8 ~! \, G; Q, a& \  R$ s; EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, U  r1 {7 u: ~( A- O% MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 K, a, ?" |# n0 V" G* e' u1 ZIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 z5 y, x4 \- \I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 p* O* e: \8 m- A0 P. D+ k9 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) {4 v, ~. g# V) y0 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 G6 d% I5 s3 {/ wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 x/ z) v2 I+ f7 x8 ~* U6 t7 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- ^% ]  p7 q6 b! S# F% [2 [$ YLove… just the word love
6 O# }5 ]- ]& B" HWhy is it so difficult to express?
* {# i% X- G- [# ?( N1 X) N. b0 }I want to confess that I love you,
8 c& t; g2 g! D+ D2 }' {& bBut I never did
( E6 o9 l- F( I3 h0 W. f1 c) bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 |8 m0 s0 u9 P+ hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 E5 Y0 o9 q* {2 ~8 H0 E+ iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

  ^! C5 T  Q( w; X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 `. Y5 o# b8 A9 W4 Y7 c6 `$ T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 V7 w7 k+ A! y4 P' D/ A" f# _# e<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 a! X! C* u: p8 C% V, `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% ^2 Q6 s% @6 {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' b" Z; o5 W: Y$ S; r% |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 B+ e1 z( o( {0 G7 l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* z6 e3 Z. y' c, W% u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) n- i4 y- H0 c3 G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 K' _: z* J# p, Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ X+ p6 _5 [/ F, V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ e* K. n* z+ z6 w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 j" O* g) S  f. s* B. f1 q$ [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 }+ z5 R8 v# B8 |* c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- M: [' m. {) F+ J, T/ {+ Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- \+ }) X$ `3 v& Y7 r. X$ G3 O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ Z  O; y8 v, c2 s7 C2 z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" s0 O. o+ r) d0 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# F1 t3 m& [) W$ k6 j0 S" P$ U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 a4 {/ y) S: q$ K& A, `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! F% w0 A9 W% I% x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ Z5 w' H0 j% o8 v  G' G/ i) i<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' T9 T/ w- }+ L* t* C" O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 ]( `+ s& N+ c/ @# O+ \# J% D3 k<P>But I never did </P>
6 v9 c0 G* ^) S/ ~<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 c& `+ N( X3 \# @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" b- f- Q0 c* Q  L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: J& s; {" l; h# X) |5 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) A+ O0 }. \7 _) [! t0 c% b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 q9 a. K8 `( O( B! w% ^- x" j2 U- G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ A5 P& V% D- Y/ T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. s! q& C& k' f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 v( p/ W1 P* p9 ?7 t6 K6 s3 a<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 E' m. `- ^$ x$ F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>