【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# W; O7 N$ u- n0 `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" p: [8 z( E6 l1 W3 K1 WFrom the first moment we met,
, H2 r! A' A! l2 v3 S1 nI already loved you with all my heart
6 \% _8 }: \1 ]' X# i2 }: SWe meet and talk everyday,
1 N# S' h* I0 u* e* aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 D  G1 M2 A) d# rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" e# z4 r9 R! L1 q! [4 II would probably know how you feel
) y+ X9 n  H2 F# J( _Love… just the word love
- N+ e: T" n3 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- u  ^3 G8 J8 m4 D( {7 EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- N' C# H: P# r; {2 iCan I entrust it to you?
2 O  Y* d' ~5 q$ KEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, T8 g- l( X+ C3 G0 H0 AWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 ?6 o+ l4 Q! }# G# ]8 U  h: |I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' ]. n8 r, I2 Y; ~' R) qIf today isn’t too late,
. s' R6 c/ q- `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) G9 m" \5 T0 A9 d! a: sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 O) S2 F" M$ O5 \1 n' I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: j  L! l! e2 b: p% g- I# z( Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. n; M3 h2 g8 L' D) `2 h5 B<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% v  _# y# N, u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% T/ W9 F- z% ?<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 W# |/ Q% g$ j$ Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  M/ g8 V* A# G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: h' {' v0 v. ?7 w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: ?$ X4 O! [+ ~1 m, u8 l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 X: T3 }  C( D, O: q- m<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# s$ x3 s$ l  w; g' m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& `) O4 r) W: o3 b2 A" P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  D7 m$ @! k2 N<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" @8 X; O$ e* j. [$ v<P>但我不会</P>
7 U; b3 }+ p6 [" \5 z' F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 z2 ]  \7 {' u0 w( Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& C5 z' C: B: D+ ^$ z* ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ C: V. Q0 L  O0 Y2 V# n& g+ k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 m: [+ o- E. T6 J: ]7 A. @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 n4 S/ M4 Q! ?+ p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  U0 ^6 b7 H2 S* s4 J6 Z! ~$ n# {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 r3 Z% y! Z  B2 M! S. D8 T  L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, E! I/ f3 K% q5 o* u( M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' @6 Q( g% V+ z- o5 Y- p8 Z' s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% w( F( ~  ?+ A. V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! P1 w! d( x( C- R( r7 [, D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 P* a! u* v# C& V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 W5 t0 |3 W' x  M" _5 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: E& x; P( U# W, e4 Z  c+ e6 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' t+ x! G  q, j) D, T: f) Q. Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( P2 z$ Z7 T) |. _$ D! V" F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% B/ t9 G: E3 \2 c0 k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 k9 `$ X* y+ C这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. B' w+ j6 E; Q8 ^; {4 l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>