【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% O- Y" d# j4 e9 cFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 r# L# }( ^# Y9 d7 ^( ]$ ZIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 }9 Q+ N- x5 kLove… just the word love
9 A: E, @( X' l- U1 V  G0 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
" [1 n) U! _( ?4 O) qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ t! z  v  j: R) \! O- b) {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ ?( m2 }4 Z0 cCan I entrust it to you?
6 R6 A" C+ W- @& w( o( }! P0 XEntrust my love within your heart
  _4 @# M- u$ G3 ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: y! K: r" L, ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 C, X  v- k6 h* a7 UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 J/ C1 Z$ X4 K' m# yEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& ]8 Z# Z, u& IEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 D2 h5 q' L1 J/ o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: K6 C- j1 z7 Q5 C4 b. [7 I* E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" \) w! _) h* b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ |+ n( B3 g; {4 ~4 ^5 O7 l7 H: U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 O' _' [8 ]# [<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 O  P1 h% \9 N+ ~* m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: P! i7 k. `, Z( E1 H0 J, P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) X% J. y2 d) r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 Z: y7 [/ H, F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- i9 M" p6 @, o7 R5 `<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- u/ c6 i& \. W% G% e; m. J<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: I4 u( T( s7 ]& v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ L* @' p4 j1 i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ z! S$ O8 d- E  d# O7 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 L  y! W1 H4 ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! |+ K( r% Q8 d# Z! Y+ A) D) Z8 K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ l! Z1 [8 y* n9 d9 z8 Q! K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( Q+ D9 ]' [! C0 f' k" R, L/ Q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* R; Q. W& \9 j9 x1 E9 S; V. [1 e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 A) Z0 ?6 Y7 q. }6 A  |+ N" F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 g4 Z: s( B0 y) }  k5 K$ x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ @9 H7 m% k3 f" T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 n: V& P& |. X$ ?" H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 u$ a' x. D0 C- Q. X7 P3 S" {* E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: D& I, t$ r. \6 i7 t& j<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" u# j/ d! U$ s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! h/ i. r- }- m4 h; u7 ^/ w4 \! E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- B- g/ K9 r. ^+ `( A  m: B9 H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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