【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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5 d! G$ N; v: E, g; R. H# H我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. Y: k5 e# I' NFrom the first moment we met,
% d3 R  N4 L8 \I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  ^* Z4 B) E$ H2 x: |! dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, f! k' f# ]  q  K: L9 T$ qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 s7 p0 p* o0 I! \, C2 a' BBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: _6 p1 T6 b/ O4 B! IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: a" O1 H0 v( T% II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- m6 D5 S  E- Z( s* `' aEntrust my love within your heart
' H, g! u# E; Y& B5 [: VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. Y' w+ Q6 I; V% x/ [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 E/ {1 l5 W# Q' M2 n  Y( FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 j6 X( X% H# ?% O8 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  ^, A' Y4 j6 O2 u& H. ]  I- bEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 }+ a8 F( G- z  m, S/ C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& c) j) N3 Q% D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 e. I! G. X4 @! r9 ]% E5 R* G6 J; x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* {1 l: _# U. z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: c+ B8 D: x) V0 _1 M& y# d2 S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% E. T, s6 v8 ]' v/ u<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 u6 j1 Z3 y& R6 i8 R( F0 g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 E* B: V* |0 ^- P  {1 d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 \4 M% D- P  L9 |* B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& D# f# G, t: k5 d( f7 R  P, f! ?<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  z6 @( H# l+ L; K3 j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" g* P+ ]: R- Y5 R/ {- z: ?2 I<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 X. F# `7 Y# `* \, K2 u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) O1 `3 S) b9 p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  Q% X- Q0 Q; x/ Q" n2 D5 G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- u8 J7 z$ t+ I/ n: _0 |) c) M5 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 n) V, h& L, p+ p! q' ], ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( \8 d" g" s1 n) K! d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 S6 @) y" \  |0 L8 N<P>But I never did </P>
9 ^, g- z, w+ A8 l<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- F8 Q% _7 \% b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( }* [5 Q! r8 ^9 V- ]! r& G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' v$ L4 z, I, W8 S" a- i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ b: S' j. J2 X5 J! E1 v3 B3 _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 ?3 q: d. {+ C$ R<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 ~( O  t. X5 f% N$ X9 e# m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>