【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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* P: T: ^2 y/ y+ k1 d7 F' _我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 `' \* ]. H4 P6 t. r4 m- l9 }7 JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) H- z2 h1 N9 cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 ^+ _- ?0 }  @4 \- ZI would probably know how you feel
' ]/ G5 m3 Q" t. U9 b. FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% H" W( J/ W5 f7 ^But I never did
. ~; }$ Q/ N$ S7 ^$ xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! w5 i' j( L$ t3 x% g$ V* D" ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% m. `5 z: t' R) @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 m2 ^1 @$ g7 k# i9 ~2 _+ IWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 e' L8 \  ~0 N" e& Q( SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& u5 u: _9 t- ^/ w) G8 dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* [9 V# |% A; T2 ]& I9 B& zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 d6 z# T9 |4 s8 PEntrust my love within your heart
! w' M% Z2 b" }Can I entrust it to you?
$ Y$ S4 W- D; VEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: u, E8 _$ H. z9 L1 H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) i* _( ]8 f% i( _3 Y2 s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 e/ l* K% k1 E- e3 ~0 w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# G6 `' O+ S: x4 A* D6 b9 t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& J9 S9 f9 d, l2 s4 j* b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ z( ^: ~: j. n& x/ h! n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 d4 e- i4 w+ l& B# v1 G. K" }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ I8 @# K1 G: H& t" ]2 n' A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- I) r: x1 L3 o! W<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* q8 F3 k! q! O) D$ S+ r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! p; T' D/ j2 h4 ?& q. b: \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) `+ b$ }& Y' c2 U$ W" B7 X! n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 {% W5 ?6 t# N& h# x, ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  L9 X' n* `9 \% I( g/ N8 t) s+ r; w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 Y. V2 C. Q; E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 j6 J. ]& j5 p2 t- V3 K' i2 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" W2 v2 g* U2 n3 y, [5 I/ x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* |: J9 K! r  P* D. }$ _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% {& [! J- q! s# s$ v7 P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# ]) D4 j9 {) S) ~# ]5 H' y9 p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 t8 K' c, j" [) J1 L/ m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: R6 V7 ^! Z' `; `" z& ]( i- D<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 z: p8 c  n. R* m4 P! i) m; {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ \$ n% Q: Z/ t2 O$ R6 |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; ?6 [' `" T$ c: W4 ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, s# N. i& Y0 p0 i7 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 h$ ~8 {2 g/ ^. t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# N$ ]8 s( C; e9 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 u3 a5 ^3 ~5 X! [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# |' a$ R  }& u4 h- F" }这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 ^. T! r6 I. j. e  H* X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% L" |& H$ A+ ~) I& q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>