【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
7 Q, G  H4 v: [% A( w$ [% rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  u: H, [+ \% r' B. ~: qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 r' d& i; U" D2 j: L3 |; ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! M7 ~% Y; b2 C8 ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 p  r# F- j" p' w. BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ {' ^# P  b. z' ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( ~8 |8 U9 w: j, B  X3 T9 k. BLove… just the word love
2 w5 q, K8 E( a3 z9 U3 c8 J3 SWhy is it so difficult to express?
- |2 q; D9 l( g) K* pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# D/ v& {& Z( f6 f3 T8 oIf today isn’t too late,
' g+ m, Z! D# vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 c0 }$ e' ]$ y: g4 k( dEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 q1 ^9 [# V5 f4 A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& V6 f: Z5 N: A3 W5 W6 G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* _/ c. P- L  n) v<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 Y; o5 V1 G% l- N* j+ Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 K/ g5 i: |: B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( w7 W' d2 `. c5 j. p! t8 x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 l' E8 _0 I2 v6 |+ Y4 W. u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 v8 e0 q1 T! `8 h: ?( I! B! S: J1 L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- P: q6 ~* S6 T- V( s4 h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  ^+ W) u8 @% P; m  ]) o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, [- |$ t$ \) D5 n% h" V. \. Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" H3 V) Q( e/ t1 W+ N$ E7 X+ c5 b<P>但我不会</P>
7 j* d. ?; I* R( C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 @( b6 a8 D3 K4 l7 }: n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ v& f$ j" o0 X+ m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" O0 h0 d/ k/ M8 i- P4 O' s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 t' _1 H2 y5 m. t6 ?* N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 [- M' H( F$ A( n2 @. _0 U; T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) s0 [( n, N# R9 T: H1 @; @<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# `0 i  R8 P. u0 j1 I2 M1 N+ b  N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 I* e1 N* L, t4 ?+ t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# i$ P" b7 e* s! g$ L( @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 S! e" @. ~+ e. R& G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; J+ D7 D: @9 x: U7 k3 d. O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% w- U9 c/ y4 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ _$ b, I, `6 O8 h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 B( C/ ]7 K& M5 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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7 W: C  |8 S  j; L0 B1 `5 g* f这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

7 _# a5 ~& v: B; I- B" y<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>