【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% ?8 x! `) z2 M6 V2 |4 {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 S5 z4 X6 O; b5 l. @I already loved you with all my heart
) m+ }! M5 o& T: R3 `6 L/ NWe meet and talk everyday,
: C' T. ]+ w# b+ s/ N: K5 i( ZBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) v( M& R4 P3 }1 vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ J! Z0 N  j+ @) j& _  M; n% J+ ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& a9 Y; R# W5 S1 v) rIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' D; V9 u& s: F7 c6 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, j& d( W' o' d, V, _' jLove… just the word love
6 Y/ g0 O& o+ g& hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 q& x3 l, U: D8 ~5 T0 z% vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 G: b1 l0 d& \If today isn’t too late,
0 Y, Y- h* p& U8 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, q% s  Y# U4 {: cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 k5 L) f) H3 I% }. I- w0 r( ?6 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: G$ W. x% A/ b' w6 dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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" U* m# e9 y2 r* o1 W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 O, L6 G; B9 ^$ q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 L! r# {9 V2 p! I- m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 @) t: p/ F! h. H1 J- }: L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 k0 B6 R# S0 i3 B* P7 `( d* A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) ~. `! S% ]; A0 e" a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% ~5 {+ o1 v/ q7 \: d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 o& H! K! D& f/ R0 q; F4 ^0 W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 Q9 W1 r6 X- B: `3 o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ k$ |+ D8 _, J3 s; I, E<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 z& c7 [: K& Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 t' A' a  X9 p. R6 U" I" Y0 M<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 g3 ~6 _* y3 j" ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 B5 O& {5 h; c# z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. u; l% d2 I* C3 L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: p4 s% O3 x; |. V: y9 a  i<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ E4 _- l2 E0 V6 u: v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; P" M8 a5 M) Q  Y2 v0 i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, W1 a: C$ U: n$ H<P>But I never did </P>
. x+ T. W; Q$ `5 Q<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) l( p& |5 H2 I1 T% ^, q, N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 t* B# i3 }5 M" ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) H$ F$ R% e# Q) U' ^7 j2 t/ W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 I3 q9 K6 N# R3 [0 V4 A1 L) i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 t+ `# c( v9 G: B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! O, K( t% v" g( s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>