【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 d8 J* k1 l) B8 b+ i. C我另将歌词附在此。
) B2 z% g! D& z3 eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) _; G# e9 ^5 vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 D- O& [' W# D! H0 e- a6 o8 zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 _0 I. E0 [# @% u6 ?I would probably know how you feel
/ G# j3 X5 [% R/ ~Love… just the word love
$ |6 E, O9 M- C; M- bWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 ^8 @, R5 P6 ]; n6 wI want to confess that I love you,
" a9 V% [' a+ M% \) S; a6 h! b3 \7 M% RBut I never did
) y4 J) E: d# d* v% ~/ DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- `8 [! ?# V9 _! _! `6 sIf today isn’t too late,
; {3 R! [, \1 h4 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ v2 m1 s' \! R5 p, [4 q6 c2 wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 O# y1 z7 D& d2 X9 j; e" O) tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: L, |4 a4 }! r0 \9 w' OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* a/ {( G. X( L/ N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ S( h6 E& T9 j. L, F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' i( g0 ]! z: E% R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* S5 c5 L0 @0 w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ w  e/ c: A- ?; A6 E2 a4 s<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: a" o9 o4 x6 u/ L& G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 X7 g3 X$ c8 ]# y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. a5 @( R" o5 L* [+ U+ t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 n1 @. z3 o- c7 |: O7 p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; o: s* J3 F* X9 r' k6 A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, h6 x8 |# t7 Y* n! E$ q$ ~' D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 I# n" O2 `6 X, }% z; S9 y  P. b2 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ W0 p4 Z) o- s" L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 ?  C' T1 n% O" ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( D2 }$ h/ p3 @$ `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 V) J, M* Q6 R4 U/ i1 e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, u! s2 H1 W0 y* ]) t% `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 p1 S2 e2 I+ e- z- F2 s+ m# b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# v) P; Z( z; J1 C) k* y2 b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 t6 [# Z; ]: Z<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! Q* S( t! b2 i  z7 e! i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, T2 V1 o, G, ]% X! E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" \4 G6 E& b# F( m& Q3 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, @( Y; T; I0 Y1 S6 V" Z9 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! @$ k0 K$ D. z3 }) B1 ?: h8 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! w' ]  o/ t, P4 {* w: a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  }( A8 b' n* A4 |( S- O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 r/ I+ ^8 [! g  l  ^+ N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) \) K% x! Q/ o# Z# c" o这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' F0 O6 d6 B" q: ?7 a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' ]9 {1 U7 R2 l9 x3 R: `<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 U" J  f' i6 I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>