【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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- K; r" I: s2 j( e) N- E+ x我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# [$ ]( t8 q: a1 h% F2 m9 {8 \8 O0 rFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 M% z5 f' J1 m/ r: k. J; ]/ }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* ?/ W7 N/ P) g3 }4 b+ t$ `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ M, ~7 X& e3 [I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& e9 ~1 J4 g; N/ l  b2 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
: H8 Q2 S) `2 O7 B+ q, B5 lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- O: T( x/ B  B+ ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 p. `0 s0 }7 f/ H% @. aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  s- Q  X) R4 c( oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  e+ u8 c1 M* {# XWhy is it so difficult to express?
. n- Y1 o8 d$ {+ K7 D- v' gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! ]% j$ |+ g" C3 R. GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- x: b) Z" @  J  B0 S) G: xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' {8 _; }! F1 L! z4 k  c1 [Entrust my love within your heart
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; b# c6 D8 P5 Y' J$ k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# G7 A& {. i5 g2 t8 I0 a2 V# p1 Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 V, C, y' t+ d/ p- t$ z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! P& [* h. F* y1 o1 o" q9 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! r$ |( F& p( O1 Q) X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 x, ]; `: g8 E5 q  \# [8 F( r' a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* q& c$ h/ P1 R5 V0 C0 r3 ~+ K: {0 |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 D9 S, Z# _4 U( W6 c9 i8 ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( i3 x1 b# r( k; x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* V8 W! p3 j! R0 L. E7 D( W% u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ M: z- t: l5 u! i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 k/ U0 j, h% N: R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 U8 ~% ?1 k. A: E8 P( m5 V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 U) \/ u( ?. @" o9 \/ [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 q1 B, m2 F) s- C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ S# J/ N' l2 r. v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& P0 Z$ x3 F( h' g. j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* Z. g% q7 V3 @2 B- D9 p2 H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# x  J- Q- Z, P5 l& ^" c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 E: s6 S' m# A5 M) I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ ?/ o8 F8 e& e* V2 H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) a# W! `/ D- a2 H$ n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 u+ {9 x- ?" ?9 g$ E( h* p<P>But I never did </P>
  @' `7 t* l5 {2 Z" D8 T$ I7 {( I. h<P>但我不会 </P>
5 A. ?5 k- }; I% O: V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ E9 l+ r% I; X, P/ @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 J9 {7 b( ~; c- ]) s8 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: X$ r5 [/ K4 B* X5 S) S6 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, V3 ]! G, C; |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 Y! j: r7 `8 \; P7 |1 l6 i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% k- c( z2 I2 C6 _8 Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
9 Y( F) ?& ^0 |: h# u4 \
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ V! J# v- @  m/ d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

' L& r% Q8 W3 v0 i8 ]<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* V/ m# @* ?7 T2 ]7 V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>