【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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# w% X! T& |! g" B3 t  k4 C) p我另将歌词附在此。
9 e0 _% _4 D& ~2 h% [& Q+ mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. {& `) ^9 e  p" m; I$ |$ K" @& NI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) n! m: W& f7 k  ?6 h1 NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! j8 [* Q$ H4 U4 O% U1 KBut I never did
2 D* @' X* r' q1 P9 x' QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. a* ]2 J  \6 M, i( u" lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( o+ {, A  I# g! iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! @, h# |. y! Q6 L. T) E8 aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; ~7 p5 M. z5 @. n$ FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* j. s& a0 I: c: A* f' H$ n" qIf today isn’t too late,
) g# r! v( q: I4 `" o4 a2 wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 T  e3 J: o7 `) h; K; AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* ]- s% y" t6 F  kCan I entrust it to you?
6 e4 h+ @$ o4 g0 XEntrust my love within your heart
: t! G5 N2 S6 Y: U) hCan I entrust it to you?
. z+ \1 Y- F2 ?3 \; ]/ r7 Q- nEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 e: U% ^4 r( b# M4 r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, R2 Z% D6 B+ D4 z- t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 C1 A3 D; d( v1 ~# C; ^<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ h) f: d' ?) l: p4 K<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& b$ U# [$ a8 y: A9 u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 p; d7 L. R# o+ d2 j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 I; L0 C% D9 B; \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) [' g% x# |5 k* I; V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 u( Z; s3 n9 t2 T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 P; q' |& ?. |9 I" X<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! a! n- r% O5 a1 f% P/ [$ h) C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 E' L; T, Z. X8 i% _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& P1 b* Q9 h  Q% D; L  O<P>但我不会</P>
: T; q* `5 |. I0 z! L8 _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 M' t8 g! X1 h' c6 P/ t7 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' h. i7 v! }9 I5 v2 Z: z" M$ }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* a/ Z" v7 d6 X" }; o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: ]9 W0 X( Q- a7 W1 Z$ ?. L/ I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  N0 l& T* u: L, V- o  |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' |! T9 k* Z: ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ ^$ c6 C+ R8 t7 n" F+ J* `: a6 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" Y) Y; t8 l9 A1 b- }$ d<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" F+ @0 r  z; v3 x2 ~" c( R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, A" Q9 E7 g! b# }5 V8 g( J* w<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 ]( s8 m" t0 X6 k" D<P>但我不会 </P>
& e7 G7 ~1 ~; `- s- e! [, q3 z, y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 ~5 B, r, c* y% s5 P, U) @. w) d<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; k" ~: A' ]* q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% S( h' k. w7 ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' j8 j. f: o- j, n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; z# V6 ?3 W6 n- ~. y0 Y3 s/ {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 ~  }, m$ f. H( m" \- l" q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. X) b5 R" [' x2 s9 e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" }. ~; x+ t# @9 l7 q/ I# `+ R' R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% J5 t7 f) [# A) m7 l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  D/ Y) e" @4 \, A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>