【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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. T$ G2 o: E. W" x7 {我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 j2 d2 u9 U/ [. T" bFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
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0 \. A  i3 G& xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; O; w/ y% U# U- |# o( tWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 c( Q3 I! f: Z* L) VI want to confess that I love you,
5 l- {) L& j  t' e. \6 M4 I( _( nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& ^8 K" D& U  U- V2 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# b5 C; U6 O, d3 J( ~5 o) ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ x- K. }( }0 d8 _But I never did
* \' Z/ b+ y) I. g5 XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! M, n1 ]; K$ P3 q2 t) _) EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 M( p" d1 N: [7 |. S) Y5 }4 e) OEntrust my love within your heart
% B9 }! E+ o4 C$ j1 j8 CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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, F( ]: G: y6 v  i/ X! F. U  a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* |( [0 G8 {2 k# k6 ]; V  ]5 b* e" N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 ?; Q& G. k& H+ V& b0 m5 j6 V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& C  y% o9 N6 B( \' [  w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% j4 p, h" }3 m- l/ q+ s; P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) L3 a( {. Q! C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. p. Y( t3 |  [3 q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ U/ Q0 n. h; W- D  N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% Q/ P% D  }# @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 o4 _% o# U7 k" G3 M2 l<P>但我不会</P>
" {( R/ m* Q- j4 p& K+ [0 n4 S) }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  |8 R- z. s9 a  U4 ]+ n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 u' D; U1 Z) O1 ^3 l( Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) v0 J- t# y0 {/ @( r1 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! i$ }- z; _7 u, f1 Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ n3 X+ e3 p+ t* T: X3 c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 j0 \2 L" K* X1 ~6 X7 Z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
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- j. E0 s0 n) ?0 |- L<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& X+ c& S; F; u! T3 J; D& A<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, X& F. G5 q/ X1 K5 |8 V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 u0 \+ _" W) a) Q' I/ Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# B( @  [: [# k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 [" j7 Y( j; s+ G2 r  K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( C5 D9 ?% U2 z' |- |' D% Y( y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 d$ i1 h' \+ R. G# n, U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 g5 j: t, C. j  L2 L) w9 G, s2 o2 f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>