【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 B$ E+ K. A5 M3 a+ D) y我另将歌词附在此。
( U# z" i/ ^# A5 VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ n! c8 v$ P1 ^! y% tFrom the first moment we met,
- h, V0 g9 {! O. uI already loved you with all my heart
& D+ U# O1 \$ ], y& dWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  k7 I8 {' Z9 C& UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 r$ [! f/ E% [/ B  JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 U8 p' S: y7 e. y  JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" U0 k" w) W5 Y7 R6 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ ~& x: y' a6 s; C& j) nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' w! j+ X$ w* c- aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: C) Z- T% W: nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 c5 w( s" D0 F; t& Z# IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 W* j0 Y& [0 F. X- N6 bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" H) }2 e" t) zEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 ^( Z( ^& m  g0 ~Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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! o9 n+ g2 q; ]! i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 C; h9 x  r$ x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 A* K4 A: H: r- z& ~7 ~: t+ m4 B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. U! ~) V: V; D: j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% c4 [$ P; ~# s6 z0 k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 @+ }7 @2 H) R+ T( B6 A% v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( A! p* [8 Y; w6 f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( B; t- ^2 G8 L5 L<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 y( I3 ^! B/ ]6 V! c; M  P<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ z. j$ K$ N9 N. e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! z2 ^8 W1 |' ^& h& h, U- w. h( D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 F( t6 W/ I% `7 ], q. W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ m" W5 q' H! h+ n1 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 Q! e' A9 ?' F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% O% ~7 S9 E. M# T. m3 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  J9 ^2 |8 R) n4 d/ E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* Z" D/ m  |# U, @7 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ i- m" d. s" ~2 H  j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! {1 @0 J; [. F9 f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 `' ]  ~* I  E8 e; K7 f! E6 ~2 Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 p' e& k) O- U* s2 T<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! z# z6 A1 D8 R7 b3 G; z2 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# s- K3 F& O3 Y) R+ T<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* N. m( N0 a5 M$ o4 q! J  @& F* m' z- h, K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: I* W9 W. ]+ D: |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ s. l% W& ^8 S* T, ^. J) U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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9 C! C) e. r/ r. M/ m<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 Z  G% F" O' [6 J; s! B) m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>