【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
) @0 N& Q5 }9 ]. w' N  x) H+ |8 aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: b# x( j6 T; J9 _( Z8 s! e) m- tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) T$ K( s6 I# h" U: i# |6 H$ AIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 v: G. M* T) r3 A! @) UI want to confess that I love you,
& z# x/ g) m' w/ ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: {9 [6 E& b- i. ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 n, `/ c8 ]* M4 N) I4 ]7 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 M% z3 @' B0 B  o% f! f# KWhy is it so difficult to express?
" `, a8 ]: Z2 R% ?* @I want to confess that I love you,
+ h# C" C( j* m) a- t% w1 o, XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  N: `0 B6 |7 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 e9 O5 H" H, j$ i7 J! Y# H6 oCan I entrust it to you?
# \% x6 {( w, C0 L5 T4 GEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
" E( _; a. K: ~0 uEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; M$ p/ {. M( f/ ~' G+ I( G6 z3 l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! n% }& Z$ \6 a8 C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, s- C/ C. F9 ^8 d2 |2 r; [+ ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) H% ?& m- C. N7 {: a8 }<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ J4 C4 c; C3 ]7 v) `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# J8 r" _) J& _  J9 ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 |3 y/ ]7 P: h! z7 ?* W2 R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# v1 k; l+ r9 h" g<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# h7 P5 ?" H: c: R" L, q6 u<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 V# m1 ~7 E' K, K<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. `# H* y/ E4 c7 \: H0 O) G) i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 m& W% Z& j0 v0 E; P* I- M  a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ g& \3 l: V  k. u9 \: `: ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  t8 j9 H* m  _, `/ b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 p5 k' H/ v% i. @* t+ }4 U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 b! G  E# o. Y1 S- d2 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* Z4 a  x; l+ ^0 q4 z& o1 s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; C9 p: _1 O7 R' }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) j/ A2 `' f) T% m" w/ @& X: D<P>但我不会 </P>
( c' G4 h! s4 r" E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 ]6 x4 H' ^5 \0 U/ V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) j1 v, \! Z' g1 B* V! m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 j$ e6 P9 ^/ E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: k2 O1 B) v4 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; d; x/ i' ]. c! _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 k# q2 L: K9 ~' R7 l% J: M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" r" g# j* F4 k$ J! |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: \" X( j" ?: N, I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! e" D3 i7 _5 \' z: s+ t<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( A& ^. g& N& R6 F# d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; Z+ p/ S1 K/ W: H, a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>