【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 t7 u8 ]  h9 D! z6 U0 Q. H  Q我另将歌词附在此。
: o0 u: d9 O0 D9 q9 k- aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& G* h# X  C0 n* B& O2 _, P7 K# @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" }! I( x5 u4 M, g, S# pFrom the first moment we met,
& M$ h9 x+ y; {0 B" V. }I already loved you with all my heart
; a/ Y% \& ~& b- a, u8 g4 Y4 _We meet and talk everyday,
3 t% i% @7 Q! ]! {* DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, W; i4 q- H) _! M( ^- }4 V' DI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
( f* b# Q" T  `, w3 f9 \Why is it so difficult to express?
6 V0 K/ D/ j/ u5 u; r3 H( c3 J( c0 ]I want to confess that I love you,
, L0 m4 o% [! S. `3 S: h; e8 n7 FBut I never did
4 I" b" |$ [: m4 v7 S5 ]0 b3 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* @$ q1 v) x! @. X8 B6 g5 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; Q$ [! q- u" Z  X: ~; j/ zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) L/ E8 J$ ]. a7 j7 \3 mLove… just the word love
7 l* [$ B5 E$ {8 p# cWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ f2 Q9 L& V% p  cI want to confess that I love you,
9 P3 T, b* {8 d5 bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( s  r, q+ P9 q/ M9 ^6 O( OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 x. U8 R) T; pCan I entrust it to you?
1 H8 Z  a# G0 cEntrust my love within your heart
* ?; k1 f5 _1 I5 L+ @: n7 ?! Q9 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 Q8 [) T8 M' Q& H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 ?7 ]' P! }# S: r) u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ E4 Y7 n# p0 f2 G& s1 l! E0 P( t9 ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( ~/ y4 u: h8 B8 E# p1 o<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ p- x' o- }$ C" i6 v0 Z4 z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 {" W$ H0 K' ^. {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. d9 T& l3 W; m2 A$ S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 ?& j# t% W' M- H* v) W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 v  P' y: @) x0 N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! P: N/ X- i$ e- U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! ~* m4 Z5 F  K9 C<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 |1 ?) f' z9 l1 ~# d# m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! T( ]$ s, o, D6 _( u, K% l2 P<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; N$ w/ y- S  s3 \+ h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; \0 \- [& E+ b( z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 ?( P# T( a7 w8 Q. q' Y0 T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ k" O" d/ X) f5 _9 V<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 A+ W- G, q/ [/ J<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 r: ?* _: v1 ?0 r" R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. \# c7 w; D% Q5 f) K4 |! @. z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, u, w5 u( c' n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. ?$ g. n+ F; T, x/ `  W& |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 e3 Y( m# i* ?+ `0 o3 @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 C$ ^4 g7 d2 p6 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: w1 v, |. I) ~) K1 E0 d0 w; u1 Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  D5 }; Z: v# t' F# G' c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# R0 K$ Z$ w. f4 I9 Q2 z; B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>