【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
; }) k  w4 g0 d7 Q" `( IThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 u$ N8 ?/ A" T/ h. z) MWe meet and talk everyday,
/ Y* c( P7 }0 S3 L# \1 WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 t7 p# W6 W  mLove… just the word love
2 a7 t1 o- W4 L0 a, pWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- G6 O/ m9 g# T9 Z. ~" k8 }, C# o2 `But I never did
0 J% N1 ]! L4 o0 d" F- ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 ~2 Z8 s! d4 s1 ]$ d/ F- SIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) o& T3 V6 l+ D& {! d6 F7 v$ G4 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 j! u0 N( J% a) \0 ]  WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- R! i: L- @8 A: ^. C+ ^+ gLove… just the word love
5 |8 u4 K  ]( w# P' _+ Y4 A9 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# x) y& U5 o: D* jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 {5 {0 S- _5 z3 y  G7 Y+ Z! tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

  j" X6 e% u1 g, _* k8 H8 k. s[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 D. Z4 B7 z# y3 N' F+ c( T, q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 B  V" {+ K3 V, L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: e# q# v2 p: o1 g0 ?+ Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 [1 `  j) E4 r. N& x, u<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& ]; I& A! z8 A1 |6 s+ L" p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' Y* Y4 l2 {: |7 K/ a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 L  [; v8 l0 ], y9 l, b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  u2 D# B- l& Q1 R/ }6 l  J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' V2 e+ n8 u# b4 N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ p/ N& f, V0 m# U. i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 k& S7 t* y0 B: `& W+ ~( A/ Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) l0 n% R6 _; Y! |5 h  P+ T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# |9 @% c6 i* M& e! ^; g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 ~4 V( N; J) d8 a4 j% m1 r<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' H# O2 D! c% C' m3 Y* M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  k6 ?3 L9 b% \! {# l2 }& @# Q& D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ j' z6 S. y. s- m" d( ~, V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' i+ Z% y' z. m9 I5 _) G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 I6 f2 C! a2 a6 B  X+ {+ g9 S: d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" d; K4 M+ n5 e4 J& m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" c# i4 R+ ]% \6 t2 }5 z4 U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# l2 h% _2 C: N9 @+ d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ l1 A5 L0 b# c0 j( `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ W+ N9 t! ~  t) {0 [6 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 R9 o" W, v# c6 Z* K+ P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- x5 C0 p( P4 ]7 @, D9 w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 A' G0 @7 l9 E5 c" |3 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  U3 X: s. R# a4 u6 Z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ ^0 ^9 n# d# i( T3 ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( u6 a1 q8 ~# r9 i; d6 `7 I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 p/ K- g+ I. s3 s6 P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>