【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 }9 M: D( `8 X" v我另将歌词附在此。
! M9 L3 _5 A9 F9 ]# O8 qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ l* x9 H9 h' j+ f* q$ p# O0 E# @2 i# tI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ ?: D. ?! `! D$ i- cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" e% r6 ~* Z8 y+ lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 _, F7 p6 y+ {+ q. WI would probably know how you feel
5 {* G' o4 Z' H. M: NLove… just the word love
' Q3 y6 i) S( nWhy is it so difficult to express?
, E7 \2 g0 D8 s6 N  b7 tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 q1 |  q' A) r3 G! T3 cIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: l8 @, K# ~4 ?! Y. BCan I entrust it to you?
( E$ r. F/ s5 Q3 L1 X$ CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 Q1 u5 ~4 B+ OWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: j7 p. @7 \8 u8 O: x' B+ H, CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* H* W1 p7 Z% e% w/ z" ZIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 z! C) X' a0 I& L; y5 f, R0 lEntrust my love within your heart
' j: W2 e9 u4 a; x- @! S: ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

% _; K5 M2 N1 W. F7 J1 e2 P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- c1 T' t# {4 X3 M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ {  w5 P+ ~2 Y  v/ V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 x& d6 m* ^. W4 Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* d$ C/ x3 g8 b: A% j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, e$ g( ~- p" q9 [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( A9 I; |' H' `- z6 B& _4 W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 \* ^! V/ w9 i7 ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! F* d* I1 e# H* \# D2 r. j1 T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' A) h, R( Y% J, ~3 o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  a; i  S) k* |1 m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: D0 ]) N- X" t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. k4 Z. q( i9 z, p7 {4 I: Y8 Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: W$ @' H" m: X& w# L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  q4 Y9 t0 ]$ Y, y2 u* ~$ R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" R+ d9 S; L) D/ S( C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. o& _, L9 q" E' ]* ]8 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( U$ M' x3 N: W0 `( h+ }- b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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: c7 \5 f4 V! k, m* V0 q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 U8 J. o* r: ^: J% x6 R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. b) f* V. a4 S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( Z2 }- x) ?) M. {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ p: k1 |! E: n/ h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ V# C. r2 Y9 Q# C% |: g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) y; f& C7 i# o2 k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' W/ |) m# h  U/ p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ V# T6 j/ p8 F. }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 t! `0 \2 Y9 Y+ s$ q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 C: o$ K# V% T: L0 A- u8 {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>