【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& r1 R  _. M3 S: T7 F6 GI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
1 q$ O/ ^# d2 ^  P2 aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- p- W9 S/ U# Q1 WI would probably know how you feel
( c  I) B! Y$ D. p3 L7 pLove… just the word love
8 ?: R( ^. ^6 RWhy is it so difficult to express?
* T7 }; w2 [( a# BI want to confess that I love you,
( d: b: G- E% ^) V4 u# lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 H, m" V: i4 H$ n+ a5 ^* uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  q4 U1 j- j. l8 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 d8 g! n  Z( O' q1 O6 |3 q. ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( k6 u3 d* h/ e# K1 y$ hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: h1 P  X0 I7 c' j9 }+ `! N+ mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- I1 Z) k8 D, q* S1 R& l' tEntrust my love within your heart
) K$ r8 g+ k" u+ QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 L' q4 N- s  u  K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 C, o  L) Z0 d- S0 Z0 M& {# _  A" z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 ?2 K: y% C- }# \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 W) \; C& l/ ]$ }7 i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: x8 O/ i) l- C8 y8 Y" r( F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: s# v8 ^4 V) ]: E! V4 F- L5 v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ p1 P8 u" V& @0 t* {+ o6 X) q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" u, o# i) h/ _3 b; x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: z7 ?5 `4 F. F' y4 q7 E% Q: h<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% M/ f; w) E/ }5 \% c3 ]' W, o+ R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 M0 L, y5 f" K  M; o" K' _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: D; o% w! J" z, f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, H# w  W# m; z# g+ V! U) C4 b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) t- x3 a& g( w8 L! C( N<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 K6 f6 O/ \$ v/ k0 t/ ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ e3 n; [! m- N- N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' B( F4 D) g( Q! V+ G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ @8 ^( j4 B5 r6 O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- A, V- C4 h( Z: M; j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 w% d8 p3 w) d2 U0 T9 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 q) B- E& _; n+ e& q9 X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 [4 D$ u! R7 ~  T% k6 P8 [0 Y$ I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# r1 ^; H8 s; |: i1 X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ w- j$ m  V$ J( U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. |) I' u0 V: G9 M# R. n8 x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  n; |/ J/ S/ T2 f- H0 g! i<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 l! T5 g" |/ u" L6 P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& j" X1 q3 I' d; ~- c) G; z2 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  y5 f* n1 I1 s8 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: J  m) t2 I3 [( \& r7 @4 L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ T  f2 c: S! Y4 X$ W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! x3 _6 U+ q% B0 l: a9 i& a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! |5 g4 W" |) W. d! |. H: {. h) |& ^/ _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  Z3 p5 M* x0 C5 b. V! d6 S5 o9 S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 A1 Y6 c$ T7 O; p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! \6 R5 @+ D9 X1 Y: _4 l+ }" s+ k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 ^1 g: m1 q! @" x- w8 E# `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>