【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" w! F6 ?. \2 vWe meet and talk everyday,
) x8 L7 P7 u! I: K+ c: TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 }0 i2 B) b( O6 J3 K, fLove… just the word love
$ V+ p4 d) w) |( M) }( b) SWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 u" e% W; s  i4 dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 }4 X/ ^0 `5 d# m2 V- Z! a: EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 i( q  y# D9 k1 ^* fCan I entrust it to you?
1 i* v# W, H2 ^) h3 i) w. WEntrust my love within your heart
; p- ]: _9 Z" t2 {+ O. }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 a4 o9 ?) H! C( sBut I never did
. c- W1 I! s6 t. i' h) _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 s, i  f8 D5 J) L) jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 N& O, l. \9 ^' X/ xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 y+ B9 |" g" y9 ~- \( qCan I entrust it to you?
* ?' g! s# ]' ?  S9 A9 w% GEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 V5 H8 M# p  O1 ?% c' QEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' O+ b3 g! T0 i3 x+ x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 v/ W0 l4 H; I( j1 _" w; D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, u4 B1 f4 d* x+ t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! S  e2 m1 I- c( `2 X<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: ]7 {" O/ `; j. F2 U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& C( O1 n! E8 W7 T3 l<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; ?8 V: @& e9 ?. h* a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" |$ {" E3 p+ v% x% U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ g# l: S+ D0 n' j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 z& r7 H5 b' K4 @5 H1 ^* l<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- a; p3 ]5 j6 x% i0 N5 o<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* [8 ~! y& H" `+ t0 P- x( _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 O; H: R0 V# e) E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 y: g, y8 \' w( n$ M' x0 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 T$ V: E& O9 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: l" [& V# m8 H. N% B1 X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 O- [2 f% I& S& r, U( `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# s  a1 G2 G. {6 i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' T; r# T; r* v* z: ^0 e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: T$ R$ I+ p5 W& _& r, d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 d* p! p* m+ i<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" x8 V; S7 R' @2 |, C5 G. n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# S8 w4 k0 E! [$ @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. k& I4 S4 H/ {) B9 X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  }4 w6 G8 R8 J! [8 \9 L  N: D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! O$ t- T9 e5 M2 Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ P+ G! O" \( T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>