【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; f7 M6 b% e6 B0 F; u9 s  M$ V; _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* V. j7 I& x. lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ H2 q, p" V! q  O) rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) a$ I% s- E- ]3 ?& _Why is it so difficult to express?
' i% s" V+ C; ^7 D% uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; X# m2 V- G' h+ J" n+ b2 V& uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& h% k9 q2 R2 _$ q2 F5 Q# CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ k' W/ d8 o4 t. ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 {- \# Q5 {/ N: |$ TLove… just the word love
3 P; ?, @& [% q' R# p* a5 gWhy is it so difficult to express?
& Y. r( ^" Y! W; o# ]I want to confess that I love you,
, ^4 ?" g1 h" g; T( A! M# @% TBut I never did
% g  p) _2 T) r' FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 p0 n# ^* S8 y6 F1 q! J) v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 D+ k. g: l% K: Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, ]- w4 \1 E5 v  F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 Q/ M; s, p0 c2 P# B" u6 r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 l) f+ [" a0 q# r. w1 H! w<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) B8 t. J3 {6 {8 w$ j9 Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 {# Y  ~5 D; t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 L; E) j0 _- c' C/ f% H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! I# D) ?) d* W6 \) ]# V3 X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ B" z7 y  ^2 P4 F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  \" F+ _- `7 ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 _# z7 s# j* n# _<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 x( m) i7 [9 D$ Q; L6 D/ x+ K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 |, \: F" x, e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ I3 t5 v# f# o. n+ I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 m2 o0 ~1 l1 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 i" v1 x# q$ T7 O- D3 J$ c' u7 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ t, t. g6 E$ {: _) _- V- r4 e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 X) @. q, ?* |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& P7 `. p" q: y6 ^' y, Z' S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 i2 C, V0 j! ^3 Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  U! S0 V+ [6 j. X<P>但我不会 </P>
# }$ I1 }& Z5 {+ u9 ]) }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  U' e+ E: @/ ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 }8 Z! k1 }; x! j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 q7 g& G/ n7 q1 r5 h8 l* d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ Y& m. l9 D. d9 x" O' u- H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 _1 A# c- R$ B" d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, J+ K. l5 F+ D& L4 j! L/ o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 v* e( t* X' f7 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 q0 g) X  }4 A- g6 k! }, O. w* X  O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 x/ g' y3 p( a8 t( e/ c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 z& c" y% N6 J# w5 S* s9 ~0 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) C2 k  b+ ~* l: l6 H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 S6 @0 e$ ?0 T) t) B$ `* ^ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>