【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 N2 I+ S7 e- d0 X0 [/ e" {: NI already loved you with all my heart
' l4 x) |/ x! n& S5 b: N8 O+ k. YWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* f' I/ A' a/ G) a& x# V  I. S4 c4 vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 N( h+ Z4 f& _: h. g* g! ~, SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 U5 C3 i1 R# K1 ^, S  ?  _  W& `2 z! n* \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 `2 j! Q6 }- q6 a* e" x/ k7 {If today isn’t too late,
1 g! V7 T* z9 ]  a: u- E& bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% z( f2 A% n9 u1 ?9 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( j8 ~9 x5 j7 u2 k# [8 A8 R/ vBut I never did
- M/ {! u3 f: x! x) N! w& IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: w  _, G. K2 l# R( R2 mIf today isn’t too late,
! S/ c9 Z, x# Y- h- u/ h5 Q9 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. }4 D# y% q% s3 Z# v% @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 x* Z' ^5 N+ q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 D4 @9 o. J1 O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 i2 ]/ e- Z- E* W" h; f5 q/ M# B5 ]; H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' `  Q( a& g* H- g- Q' A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 y' Q1 j) y) Q, g. A2 ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 B  K; W. v8 w+ Z$ c: {1 R' {& M8 M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  b2 X% T8 l' p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& j* s2 d, q3 @% d* O2 ^<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! x/ n9 [/ `6 |, ^  [, h<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 ?+ e( n: O6 c3 F) \/ V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 ^5 H7 q- A' x1 K0 F* T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' z. r2 a" f' s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& x9 ~3 s( q+ S4 M( z6 N; d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 C& t% `, l( D: l/ G. X& R( a<P>但我不会</P>
3 o" l) b6 X5 p5 u) W% v2 P0 {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: w& Y/ {9 Z/ L3 k/ M- ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 h  a1 H+ A5 ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 R9 S& O4 j7 A  q! d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& U+ R% Z/ p/ I  M( W5 M- _/ L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# S8 o5 X$ S+ g/ v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% p) z( H" d" N* b5 M6 b8 X+ u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 j3 y* s8 n  G8 |$ Z$ g0 J( l- w+ ?5 l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 i7 \' v( S, Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 k' e$ Y% A6 i# l  ?- K5 R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 L5 {1 A( g4 W, h0 S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' Z2 \1 H0 V4 T# s! v) D' c( @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 ?  }0 W3 D" |$ E6 p) K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 u9 O. \+ Y1 x0 P+ k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 P% A; k# }( L7 c" s<P>But I never did </P>
0 x3 r+ Q8 d" ?: k<P>但我不会 </P>
5 o8 u- K8 |+ q  ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 _& l7 @+ W7 L6 t( V- R' ^, j1 W<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, U) s8 l" R* r! Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) E  f2 {0 D; y0 k. p% E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 V3 G4 i, L2 Y; N& `1 w, _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. D  a8 |/ Q; p+ G9 i5 Z% t1 e3 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& P1 d7 g5 V' R7 l2 ]+ i" s0 ]3 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 a6 I) |" L) F+ ^' u, j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( ?1 d' H& @4 r5 q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 W/ D0 D, O. C) j' Z+ P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>