【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 b% N# c% m' x0 ?6 F8 s/ WFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 O+ W  M6 K4 d. I& h3 SI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 {* G) D' x7 r% FBut I never did
9 x1 h. Y1 o. ^. h- e+ j2 x+ oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ I" N; P! }5 {. T" k4 dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" d7 d" ?7 s6 d4 g  l) ]Love… just the word love
0 J- F( @3 q0 \% O5 c% W* WWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 @9 y+ D1 h. d6 m3 B5 L+ tI want to confess that I love you,
& d( O2 K# q" ^3 ]; iBut I never did
4 ~7 I$ O* \3 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- u* D  ?) x* X. i; F0 e& sCan I entrust it to you?
+ r) l+ X* {1 Y$ m2 }Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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# C  k; o" R) k+ T0 Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* h( F1 P/ H3 l. L% v1 x$ m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* u5 F: x( V6 o6 @" e/ N' d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' P2 p& z; M" x% I/ S0 t: v4 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* I6 W3 Z! K0 U! ~$ k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! b# E( h3 q! ]2 F# G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 {8 b) h2 ?5 D1 o7 d+ w<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 q) @, X% w2 [2 s1 \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" z3 r# }6 X0 w& e. Z; s( N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( [5 V. W& x1 L2 F# x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% r' F4 a& L$ o# `0 j<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 C' f7 P/ h% R8 |7 R  V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- J0 @. q% a3 J7 O; x3 `2 G0 ?1 c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 p1 h' t' |% H) y# p. [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ D% ]$ X! K( |  s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, B  z" \% R9 H$ ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* J# ~# d0 E) Q& i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 D; m8 D8 k, t: v& z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# V  A9 d+ u' Q8 X9 c; o- J( G9 Z& g<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" r" H# d; a$ a0 g5 X- j<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 R2 x; Q! u0 `7 v+ s' p) s& a<P>But I never did </P>
% H0 b6 M; _8 ~% l5 E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) C6 K5 i2 F) i' {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" `7 }9 l6 {0 w+ B6 D9 n: ?& s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" I" B, N! t( v& T( U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) P7 j1 R0 f4 ^# C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' |- D2 h9 Z# ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  O* o+ {# E* K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 C# h0 t) S1 B' s$ Y6 W8 Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- c) j/ i8 f/ t5 r4 l9 H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# Z+ ^( ~, V( M% w$ [( k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>