【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; O4 J  h, c) V" W8 H0 S$ IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
! S0 O+ ~+ m2 ^+ }9 }I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 }) N$ q$ J  `5 lBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( i' l, U" a2 w  V' CI would probably know how you feel
" n3 @. ~; t' |' u% M0 ]( E$ sLove… just the word love
! o5 x6 t1 m. O: g/ _" F/ JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 C1 l. z+ x4 A: Z  PBut I never did
/ K+ w; E  M. q, UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& [0 J+ Q$ ^8 l5 }6 _0 vIf today isn’t too late,
+ u- o0 z# {: W; tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% |6 p+ i# C! o- r6 L2 s. KIf today isn’t too late,
7 T- m) R+ m% |+ mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* f# V( Z! T! T- N- J; PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 A. L7 \. T6 G  L( f% iCan I entrust it to you?
  _2 {% D1 [" G- t% `" p9 YEntrust my love within your heart
% M4 p, r3 }: uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, T" X& `% s0 d7 p. y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( q6 P. Y1 W0 p3 G( E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 W! h' U1 p9 u( l# v4 N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! ^7 B7 I- C2 B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) Z8 {3 B# ~  o: V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* w/ O/ C7 w, t: p. l% F0 Z% }" J* r<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  ~( E; ~3 S/ C' j7 }* }( T$ Z7 D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( V, ~/ m: ^4 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; O+ u4 O: }; I! o6 l# r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; G+ m" _! q) Y, m- u. T) X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* U# k9 C% Q3 x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* N& p! J0 A3 j5 P; x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( o% h9 F1 R% r! V$ `: E. G<P>但我不会</P>
$ s' I0 I* D& Q! n* M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( a" |2 Y$ W8 E7 {6 x  J: U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 X; ^  j, G/ L9 _& h5 l& V0 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# p' z1 i8 a  P<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- F+ {* z5 R; K6 Y% r) A8 i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ n* r6 i, t- }0 c" @2 M5 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 E5 Y$ d4 Y, y% \( K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! h, s8 G  P* V5 F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* z& Z6 B0 ?7 F6 @: M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" A4 @2 ^) U, z6 j) a' Z8 j) C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ y" V# {' }9 c+ L6 A! L9 g3 K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 z  R% {- h# n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 k9 ~% _$ u# b; d) m2 R) L<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! a  {; q7 r$ b9 _9 P* v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! `$ b+ T4 M1 Y# Q% Z! B; b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 P# _* e6 Q" Y$ |  M3 J, m( V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& B+ x7 ~/ U3 {9 Z( {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: m/ e4 E5 J2 R2 t! y2 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 I1 z& R5 r' T9 L. _" W  }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% q$ n! C, G% O7 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ z( e. {+ |" U, v3 S9 h9 V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 P9 n6 t& ?2 _9 Z% f7 R<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 d1 K' t* b3 S* ?/ `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>