【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 H. C/ K3 {4 g4 G6 DI already loved you with all my heart
+ N6 G% m/ b; `! \2 kWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ Q5 |2 d, e- H4 D* _Why is it so difficult to express?
; u* r! p+ z# n" t; c9 zI want to confess that I love you,
. @! U$ |# A; c4 a; _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  i. C( c+ q0 `2 l/ z8 N+ oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' `( t2 J, Y5 Q& H* K0 AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 @- z; q; L8 M5 Q# C* T: oLove… just the word love
  N% n% U  Q3 X: \$ N; ^Why is it so difficult to express?
0 l) ]0 @3 ^1 I' P6 ~I want to confess that I love you,
, m! P* `: A3 D/ b9 R: D/ tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 a- I2 o3 X. I5 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# Z$ p: q( a# t0 R1 h- DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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4 P$ o5 D8 ~2 g& E/ K+ ^! L% n  D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# j- F3 Q/ c, F9 B7 \* W. m. O<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( l3 L5 G2 |2 i& A% O5 M/ ^# P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 B" h' @/ Z; |# P" @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( g; l6 n- D% p0 ~; A. H/ i8 B- {9 z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 u. c5 `. |7 j5 n7 W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 H* r3 n- i6 B# o5 v! c: d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% d$ h* s" z0 h  ~+ M  {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( a% d1 F5 |; c* ?$ u$ ?( Z$ _, t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 i6 L2 ^# e* A  A) M, @2 a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 i3 ^8 ~- n, e: f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% y& }8 e; n2 Z; e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 [* O  X' F+ T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 g6 G, `  D7 C8 S  ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# v0 U% b# N! u' K. A  T5 R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& ]6 g: S; o( E; {) {7 E; j% J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) n) @6 [/ Z+ L# m! k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; z+ y; U0 }4 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' Q& W$ b& q: u& {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) h$ S* L. V9 d5 Q! d+ @& E9 |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! d0 H) R- V. |* h<P>But I never did </P>
! V. a1 K8 ?+ v2 Q1 a! l9 _* c<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, \0 e3 B6 K" M  h! ^+ _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! N& b2 K7 M$ M% I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 X3 q% a6 p7 F7 @: c9 w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 O' e3 K0 n8 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ v  |+ U. [7 L: ^, w0 D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  F( F, P: g  }/ }* Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 t+ Q7 v4 T$ d  Y' ^; o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>