【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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  V1 B9 U2 s% }; Z6 T我另将歌词附在此。
6 T9 K0 v( i7 P/ H) m& W! R( ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 D1 |7 U7 A1 b. j. M' c  CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) l: D) h5 }$ ]2 W- p, |I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* @- O5 S: H1 z  g6 T: _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 m+ K) h+ [9 h5 e8 ^" JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" B, r7 }0 {/ C7 o+ M2 FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 [$ [& Q' N6 W6 N8 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, n" i) M) F  gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( r& t6 J1 |6 ]5 R) |6 Y: BBut I never did
( a" B& f3 S1 eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 v# h* h4 \3 G0 {8 G$ c; `# x* |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& h" V+ h) i# l6 _* l) o* JCan I entrust it to you?
9 }+ U3 z8 u4 ~+ w; a( i: FEntrust my love within your heart
, e  D! T0 P5 KCan I entrust it to you?
+ K" U( y( j/ u: s- i% }Entrust my love within your heart

8 |! K) F$ g: X; B( d4 [+ i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- ]3 j3 _! E  @; j1 G6 f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ n/ y  j0 P1 a- q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 ^7 F; l" [. F+ G2 q( w3 s! y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! a) H; S/ q+ z. c* X6 m# o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, ]* d0 p- j% [6 ^# x1 \# Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( F4 u' m& g6 y5 L" ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, Y0 {! o/ z$ k  s( q( X# X5 K<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 b' X2 |* b: q1 o) e8 w3 t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# h/ v7 o7 P8 C<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, s7 ~0 N0 j* _2 s4 {! `- L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. l/ }. F' u0 O" {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 s6 F# Q, L. x  W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 e4 G' S0 c- M' d) D5 I# m# L<P>但我不会</P>
, _. Z& B% I1 X8 H6 G, b* a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; g8 M& n6 r4 T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% U  P" y0 J1 `: Z% o  w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 U/ T! S8 d8 t* D6 L% ]5 A  g# Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 l) R8 ]; P: A: _" R8 M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 [. y3 J" w  L$ V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 U1 s) K) }8 Q7 N' V# ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, m, M  y: K; U. O4 v8 j$ f; W7 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, E: o  t  M6 E- C5 ~" \$ M$ o5 E: J% r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ C* K! O% z7 [9 C  _) D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 C# @8 ^8 d" u- j- S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) e, V7 _( ^4 U9 y5 ^<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 h1 q8 n! T2 ~0 z# Z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: V; s9 i, m- c" ^) a7 c1 Y6 x% n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 C. c8 U' @# O$ ?. q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ I* \: f( @0 Z2 R( {<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) O. D- i' z. {2 X0 N. X+ K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  t+ M, v1 O2 W: ~, R- @" K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: B  R( O. f$ d! l# Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 c$ a+ v* a5 [1 C/ t; c$ Q4 L3 J6 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 Q! M4 F0 v- u+ c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* [5 ?1 ]6 b9 p/ f$ A6 V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 K8 j3 Z! C) R. B4 D4 O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>