【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- K! g0 |) n' i6 Q! H6 B# _3 U) dFrom the first moment we met,
- g/ w- ?2 E( E4 e" VI already loved you with all my heart
: R) ^. y. J" S7 H  @We meet and talk everyday,
. v% _; F( Q# x/ Z$ {. X3 f7 f3 _2 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 [$ H! Z  ~% J2 [! Z  @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 ]% c; g' U) A$ s+ N0 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# A; D; |4 w) X+ r$ [6 r3 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
' }" N+ a* u$ E( g6 p: v6 U9 nI want to confess that I love you,
+ c/ Z8 s6 I/ V+ q+ |; o* |But I never did
: o7 M* Y0 e. T; ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! c- S. _; @- U+ X& i$ ]; X  b9 x& ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, ~( L0 Z5 B6 J5 t9 ~5 XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% k7 |: f0 f+ S' \. I& M. y5 H) D6 sEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 P% x4 [+ A) K- t8 |' x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% x6 I* F) `  N* g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 J+ {0 B: ~7 F) T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: O+ H+ u% Y# x8 v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 h+ w' l) d4 ^- J. m; u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, Z% F4 f3 [0 `4 {& P$ A. ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 C# M, d% q# S! {0 j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: D* X1 J6 `- i" v! y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 P+ N; X2 Q1 P8 S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" D7 d$ k, b: F0 a2 a4 |, @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! B& y# f* J3 r, F0 L<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 O5 Y4 G# V8 b- o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- u9 O( H& B5 C  V& J) n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 a# `' F5 _% K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. `4 c) d- |4 q* s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( I* |1 W) ?9 d, Z3 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" Y* r3 F  ]* \. _% q, y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 T2 T' i6 I9 a0 H# ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 L3 U% ]% E  V2 }9 O2 F<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! W" T! b6 y- E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 S; ?* p( k: U4 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 a# Q, H' z: n4 K- b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 t' o8 H+ j/ Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: w1 u0 A% {+ H* O3 R9 O这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 f0 W- j' g& E& I8 h. r% ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>