【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. B( x& N$ I# _) N3 n我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ I# W+ d/ |' DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ i" x4 j0 @& BFrom the first moment we met,
3 B4 i. D3 }: u; P0 W0 iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# e0 Z3 w3 H2 a1 tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& L9 `! x5 m9 ?2 i/ dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# c/ f! i. Y. MI would probably know how you feel
& u( K5 M) }* g# {3 r" h: e6 p9 D! ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; C, v5 R1 K& o; A! Z) [5 CI want to confess that I love you,
, h9 y2 d( @9 D' Z( ]; F5 m6 [0 pBut I never did
2 j! p7 D9 N$ K1 x2 K6 I' G  Q! zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: V1 w# D( A! `9 t) b* C: L* X6 yIf today isn’t too late,
! O# ]; j- H9 o2 l! ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. B6 K* v  ~1 E4 }' r. wBut I never did
" ^9 H1 m6 p# ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- d. r# {/ _/ |8 C" Y0 VIf today isn’t too late,
- S  O8 D' l; zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- L3 W2 T4 c. L1 vEntrust my love within your heart
' N( a, S: D5 _Can I entrust it to you?
( o; M+ v" B7 c$ u0 OEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ `1 |  F9 G+ H1 Q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' x, A: z# v  M0 \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 ?8 W. }) O7 V( u( i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 [) W# H4 F0 n7 U/ i" h& P<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 a: }, ^# \7 ?$ T- e% b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ Y' i+ ?; y! \$ n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ x9 x& u& y: f: C3 V- _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 u8 ^& x# ]% w* ?, j6 p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ A# N. \2 V  Z# a<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% ?5 s  I! V/ C; s# X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 U! L5 c, M$ K( T5 @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 U6 m  u* x+ F. q$ a6 |0 ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  X: q1 s. f  K+ X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! v, ~. k% r- N2 W" q8 S<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 L0 m7 O% ?' Z. i* {# H/ }: {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 Q% v- e2 a4 v* z2 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% A8 [7 H" x$ Z5 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& p1 h9 b7 Z7 }$ l& V# q& k) D' S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: F& ~! K* O1 Y# h8 X( K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: v; |) O  C2 E# Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ N! F# ?3 F" }% v' T4 ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# R$ Y: t& f" z- ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ X3 {/ r2 ~9 ]" o; w1 ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. G) f( Q! x, ]1 ~1 t! G/ d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 H0 e/ B& j8 L8 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 N) q( }. W8 G" c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' ?! O$ ?) H" ]1 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% u" Y8 ?% h( H0 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 I- e! E6 R. m/ o# Y7 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! t( |* B: `8 `' e2 _6 v9 B/ D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  j: O. V, b* B: Q& h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

" P# K# o) u# Y. ?& ^这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' a  N. S/ D* X1 Z5 A3 Z$ I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ f3 l6 M; y5 S9 z0 F* A- T( f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>