【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: k  ?7 A+ J. i" @' ~& B3 z& lFrom the first moment we met,
& L! ?" O# U  l9 UI already loved you with all my heart
% d, S* N7 _" yWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 o) P8 E! L" O4 ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ m, d+ v& h* U) OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 V, D( o  `' o9 @& _0 HIf today isn’t too late,
! y5 P7 C4 X7 g  EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% }0 t' i# J2 ]) q3 o# RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% N, C& X9 _1 S6 E7 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 P7 z$ l( f9 o1 z; k1 M# \5 K! GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 e( U, r$ ?- b7 r& ]6 C3 K3 |; W/ XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 O& u; g( ~" M2 ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- }$ n  O) q" B! M2 J% rEntrust my love within your heart
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4 [( m6 Q, E) b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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, G, H/ @; @9 o3 J* \3 j8 U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 N: z+ e/ W8 X6 E7 p6 u0 c<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) C: p- B( k0 `9 W. _3 m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  L7 d$ M  R- O2 }# j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: w, M) S: B, t5 s3 B  s! t<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ D; h- R3 R& j- _7 ?<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, S4 r* K& k' L5 P! \- K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 e) }8 D  A7 B9 r6 y& ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; R7 i' |" A4 e# H5 ~1 y. R' Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 }" L% F* Z; @  ?9 u) I$ }; Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 T. C1 G' j7 U, y! D" G" S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 r# D: l; H( I. d2 p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! C9 r9 C; M$ x: f+ @* O<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 {4 J, ~2 i% i3 V& R8 t" U0 e5 I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, ?3 B5 @/ S7 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ i; B! G& m' K7 {2 i2 D) x<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; s2 E7 f( I5 w7 R- l5 S6 J1 @2 _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# q! A+ X( `" \" J) a$ ~; s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# L5 l# b  ~/ b  _9 k5 h1 m9 R! ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ ]1 F# J3 K# K4 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, {+ k# t* [: C3 \: [5 _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 C+ ^' [6 i& L; c- J# b1 p7 G  h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 R3 W$ u6 }, W/ i2 `+ p/ ~. A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. u5 n7 c1 O4 q+ P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- x/ S! P3 a7 O1 L<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 G* C8 j( O" g" C& U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! o# h( x! O4 x9 j+ g; w7 V% [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" n% p! J0 Q$ O3 t& C4 t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 t8 A1 l, [7 }/ ]5 T+ J" E8 {6 I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; k/ ?* i* c! t- q) D$ M, i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! W/ C$ x: v! O( {" b7 K8 R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; I# Y0 ~# b# B# g) a* o' ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: m8 A- s: V' [+ R: q/ `. [: T9 P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>