【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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5 n6 Y. Q1 l. N! H  K  |; ?$ @. I我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 S& ]6 J3 ^: F1 {, OI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ E' E6 f# X3 e6 V# rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, n; p$ Y& s* `0 @0 J8 wI want to confess that I love you,
" @% c( J# e3 w4 J" {. D2 z" iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 \% p' k# F+ ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ E. F1 V, [- W4 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' c5 E/ M2 D3 V+ K* OEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# W+ g! ~+ I  A9 f  |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! U: e8 v8 k3 ^; L, s, E- LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 W% d# G* p: k# ]If today isn’t too late,
! b  z$ U$ }# Y, DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: ]8 ?% O8 q5 {' o/ f' Y5 [; {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 V7 m/ Q6 M6 J9 M6 |4 w2 \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 G& q! F7 I9 v$ L( @' d) F1 FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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) G; V6 o7 w& y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) ?4 O' }9 j" l0 f  _  L& [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) _  p7 D( r1 l9 S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 f6 p' Q* o6 t; b4 a  i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 X2 {4 D' E7 L5 N<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* A, B: t3 K7 v7 O' \/ @- k1 j$ m<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 c, c: O+ X) O; e" r, v* S0 f+ V<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 B% b6 @4 k8 a4 q  A. J3 j<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 D* {% F2 a" M" Y! l1 e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 l$ i5 D- Y  E  y& e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& I3 [2 P4 Y9 c5 P0 w$ J<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ _3 b% n! ^1 G5 u, e$ y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 t+ i: }  d! U) n# l+ R8 m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 i+ x' v4 q5 p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  E: U( w# c& X( I4 M* E: V2 x* X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' [& ?/ V* X7 n7 \+ y! d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 r# L2 K0 P$ D7 U6 A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 C4 }0 c8 H% f5 x( O7 ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" f8 H9 T5 c4 B9 L& m% j; f) o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 \( V* ^- Z0 D1 S9 u' J! }<P>但我不会 </P>
2 ^/ @' J& T, R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" q# ^# j: r2 @5 d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! o4 Z4 k' [- w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ~. y) M+ r/ g7 J9 c' R4 B1 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% v* \) |( D+ L# g/ M% `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' _8 D8 a" m  f& F! G, s  i. _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; B8 C1 S4 J7 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- n& F' \0 {* ]8 y1 @$ p: R<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ I7 t5 z/ w: `7 [) x' h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 g* }$ ?( v( L9 G/ [4 q! G& f 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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; h: s3 d" V- M' q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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. Y% A) C' ^6 g* N2 c<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 n! D4 Y4 k  {9 s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>