【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' C+ w* e" u' `, c3 d5 e% ]我另将歌词附在此。
' N+ `' z; ^2 u, Z  j; A8 C0 t3 gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: H# ~+ c+ v; o/ @0 e4 p, eWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% j- O0 ~  g) k' L) X% IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 g! b3 z# D/ ^/ c  L. [, ~But I never did
: ~3 ^6 s& N0 m1 y1 ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 \, x1 `! J8 w8 v. T2 P# rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; h. g+ v2 K, J7 Y. X: a8 G3 a- S% o5 jEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' P% v! r0 M5 e! g1 r$ _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 u: A3 K  M3 p+ g# GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# c# I$ I: W$ `0 g. k6 s6 Q8 g5 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- A* D+ J, j, \/ l6 xEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  D6 [0 f% K7 i% i" M7 lEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. k% @' I0 y3 A9 S/ X<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  R: A- K$ p3 U( r( R, i8 v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 ~* t0 \+ R8 X. W- M/ U, `9 J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. m% r6 L5 R/ B! w0 c; L3 P- j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% l  a. \3 o6 Y- z, @& c" t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( U! {) [% g+ @/ m" C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! O& B$ x7 |$ w/ i5 Y" O# V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  }- G* o1 _  y4 @! t7 F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 f) q7 [; D/ h- v: \. f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, M1 ], Q9 M  L& [3 f4 i) j$ w<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 B! G% H% I. J& y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" ]/ G. t3 y  Y  Z  N: v3 N9 o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: R0 ~6 e4 H' a, `1 y! w+ J. Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 ^7 R- d% F1 m" ?: n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' N' r" Z) ]% p- Q# k, H<P>但我不会</P>
- g. J  W. J6 q7 l' J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 ?  |: p# N6 h. ]: _1 O( A) b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  G, d1 N. ?9 `, T& k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ h& ^. E7 Z3 M. @# U! ?8 E4 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 G# {9 w. q) m5 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. F" X5 t6 ~' {# z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; n6 H7 X/ K6 a% p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ i# a3 U. ], P# q  b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 V! l! z# [6 Y* P/ G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 b9 h: i2 \& K9 I7 W5 s1 |. r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ `3 w! q8 p, u9 s7 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' m8 c' }6 I8 X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* [7 J" y2 U, V4 U, D1 D: s/ }+ r. Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) b3 i  J! P! E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' p) R4 c  a+ [  @9 G+ h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& h( q9 W+ R- R; T% t; r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>