【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" ^6 }: {! ?( c3 \3 R% G. W! o我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  Z* Q. X# e# k! T% b( `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' N  L; y; q9 EFrom the first moment we met,
! r) L  I; F9 L: D2 g, c5 \5 DI already loved you with all my heart
8 j( f; O4 }  ZWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 V  S- r# {9 M- p5 i" SI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  F$ X3 j) a- X( u& [/ SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& h1 q/ B  Z4 Q4 M3 uIf today isn’t too late,
7 ?3 O2 J0 R' m% {" ]2 S8 BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  W) F+ b7 `) N' {% ]! {. ^! S; oWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ X2 I* F! C5 o; ~/ oI want to confess that I love you,
( ^/ ?( d- s5 ]! {6 sBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 Q# k& c* e" k* _- n; IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 t. `6 u4 j5 A, [# h2 i9 AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; y  r) z/ o& G5 o: kEntrust my love within your heart
: K0 v5 T1 S2 j7 TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 {* G+ I6 k* G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ k  Z$ F" n% ]<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! r6 v; b" s  a: `) o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, C# g8 X& q; J# C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 Y+ ?4 n( U  g( a/ X/ ]( b9 ?5 V* L( F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 j; t. \4 l/ P+ j' a/ _% b3 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# R* \: B' f+ N<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% A: H9 n! H# U, l% L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% |' r$ Y0 p! g7 R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; @) N! b/ n; C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: {) t' v) y! d" F; J6 W$ T- N0 V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 K3 b! ?/ R9 T0 ^: E- v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 @- C3 O# k; W" `6 r* R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) _0 f! c: A9 ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 Q; S# M! G2 U* ]7 u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 _; z5 I, }; w<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 H/ Q- F( c* w7 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, P" I* G" ^1 w0 M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) @4 |- s, d3 |: C- n/ r9 C1 V5 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 u6 ^, V! S$ ^7 `$ m7 x  Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! Z: i2 J' M' e) T, [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) w7 b9 }5 ?# A3 c+ u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 \+ j1 j! m, o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 n$ Y" R' n  m* y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 p3 O2 [7 R4 z" W+ s9 w" Z9 O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. E8 l8 _+ b3 B+ |4 H+ ~& K2 _<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 g2 q6 t' u$ r" k8 j) G& B6 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- a9 F5 B! _) L" L8 ~+ T. w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 ~" p& B. x* w8 X3 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- g3 w( E( j6 U6 ?; O3 Y/ p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 u: Y& d) O& y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- L6 ~8 x( ^7 C* }6 N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) q3 l/ S/ q+ z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; ^5 B. A3 ^  _( A6 D% ~" z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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% B3 A4 T; k( A1 U) ?0 E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 |0 Y& Q, k% `8 U+ Q1 v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>