【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
1 x+ E  {% j3 SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 t, n# g; c1 z% uFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; P5 P( |( h3 \3 d5 M1 W) q1 CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! p: ~. e; @) J3 K: zLove… just the word love
  c. r8 D% G9 d7 `1 w- x4 {Why is it so difficult to express?
' ^( a/ |$ @, iI want to confess that I love you,
+ U. v' `' k6 nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 w3 J6 Z# l3 u$ P2 uIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 O5 q' N3 L  w9 ~0 nLove… just the word love
% Q" x3 A/ }. |Why is it so difficult to express?
/ U* f" v+ o8 ^# Q( t6 p) Z! }I want to confess that I love you,
1 \$ W- K9 Q! r5 q6 b' M2 J( }+ CBut I never did
# t9 s, ^+ W4 {8 i7 A* F$ b8 rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ g: `& v6 j) [; tIf today isn’t too late,
( p* @. Z3 \& j8 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- u5 A! z! \& N# nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 u+ U( I) S0 X/ p$ ~Entrust my love within your heart
% H; I  }( c. w( M  e  {2 d! rCan I entrust it to you?
( k6 G* i  W6 V& \, o1 W9 r5 SEntrust my love within your heart
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' Z) x$ E( I) V[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 B- z3 ]) }2 q3 A) v9 s% M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) @' k: \/ M8 [; V# o<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  u4 |) q9 [9 J  k2 a5 B# o& s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 b9 k6 _0 _9 D  q' G<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, d0 G  G- E7 b& u; h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' y3 m6 |0 d/ I8 L6 h( p3 l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 i% q- {; n  |5 Q2 R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; L* L7 B* m  s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 e, I9 O1 Q) g/ h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; ^% L4 I  ]: x9 N: j, l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ h, e! K& g+ [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, Y. i8 u( ~, R3 T0 b+ G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 @% X- K; I& m# m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 l9 @  h! F0 l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: ], r  P$ J# M* P9 N$ X- m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) r  [6 M2 {* Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: a, Z* H% x  x) x( M: [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 [0 p0 H8 |6 e% |& n( T! [  @<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 w4 u6 [. P4 l- ^6 W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ M$ P  M1 a  |+ D7 o1 e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# I4 g6 Z& s! E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 ]2 \2 @* r  p5 s! x; w9 M4 d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! m3 r3 o$ U' J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 g" Y6 o) S, Y5 O9 J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  U6 a' x& {$ [: l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 d8 H0 P. I- ]" B3 s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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* L( V+ F+ D- p5 Y) m8 ^$ q  Y9 j2 K! S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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