【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 d" P7 \3 D6 h* o$ |( i$ h8 CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: F* u& U  F5 N  ?) Y& PWe meet and talk everyday,
4 ^' C" J0 V9 O. @& PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 I: t* o' {. x0 E+ yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 s6 Q% ^% O  e( c& r# sWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% m  |5 M1 I0 DBut I never did
; \6 M5 p8 ^. oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ K. E! m9 ^8 v$ J! i/ s3 K3 oIf today isn’t too late,
9 g9 u' J" j0 q. `9 P) t0 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 t6 ~: C4 W3 t$ g- zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: s; d; o) _* u( _" P" b6 S1 _3 ~6 gCan I entrust it to you?
5 N0 D0 V4 I, H7 K+ OEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* U. a7 }  H5 K% f" wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 l' l4 l- I& a& n0 d9 o- EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 v  H2 @5 G: [6 n6 X6 XCan I entrust it to you?
' P& L' p  N! R! {8 P: W1 OEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 {0 @1 w8 e6 Z  B! _* @4 W* }Entrust my love within your heart

) `4 t2 S0 b, V; S- ]# q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 V7 @& J( Q" {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* U1 J; B- l7 k: a! W4 Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 e4 q2 T2 t  L+ {) V* K: s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, z6 M2 S$ q  R1 ^$ f1 a# n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 R; D: ]* F) j, p<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  e2 \1 B- f$ E4 d) }% l: w5 O) v7 j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 R% W. [* t# F6 F# o/ Q! W( B; |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& N0 a+ ?8 T& a" _; `6 C: P1 {! D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  r; A: p# Y" t8 N" u: U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) d# Q- F+ |; A2 i. t/ m. i<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ~- \6 X1 @& f3 p2 n; @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" V- s% g% u  _8 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 W0 o7 C7 s' U* L" q+ n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 H7 e2 f# x7 h0 ~& X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( u0 N3 F) b( Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, x+ A6 M. h& P4 F3 |. h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; j- C* S" L6 S9 b8 e9 i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# ?; x) d6 O/ q- ?' c3 E<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# ]$ Q0 d% ]( d: L<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 l( d3 G( Y: c% ]<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# M; B8 w1 x& v! `( |! B- L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& K4 Q0 D8 r+ m; B5 }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ ]. o! z- v' a' {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, \* Z: R5 x7 z( o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 d# [- B: E+ z& D( f) D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 S2 Q5 X4 L+ @$ a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ l% H8 V8 H) K* v" r# v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 O: q( I, y  R; i<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 s( m2 x& V' l" V& L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 H9 p' C4 W3 ^( D% f2 s: n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 J4 K& n, n0 ^% m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>