【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 L% e& j5 T% zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 R" _' \5 o3 l$ F( c: M3 z4 PI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; }3 G8 {- B4 w, [5 iI would probably know how you feel
/ D7 ?/ A$ i- |9 R, gLove… just the word love
0 t8 w# ?. ~, p0 K1 w6 _$ }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 {( M3 }& e0 [4 b3 cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* w5 {4 H' W7 H6 S8 fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& E4 o. S0 _( Q6 ]- r" k4 NLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- b2 C6 U' I/ y1 d5 |$ M" F8 kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( o/ R: }) X. U- m" u* }, @+ P& ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. Q$ ^5 X( r5 k3 m5 O4 S% MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 W3 w0 `( T  L0 c; g8 H; r+ WCan I entrust it to you?
# \: b- M& `# T0 `; y; K0 J' U0 YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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& m/ t' U. Z* J/ K. g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. p3 m7 Q2 T+ J2 w0 U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% Q' Z% l0 t" }/ P5 }! \) N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ y+ D/ C8 V* V# A  C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" Y' n+ Y% j  F+ A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 c8 i  s$ |- V3 ^# F, l8 Z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 |( Y# W3 u# \0 T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( U+ S* m2 G" m/ d0 m& U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ R7 j" ]  z$ m! o2 `5 u<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 o" H3 j7 T8 s: Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 d  P5 b2 @; O$ x+ }" ]  `<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 a8 T/ J4 Y" y1 f8 t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 ?8 p8 x8 s# @1 X! \" A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 T; K9 X6 o& c2 U. F7 L0 H6 e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 A( L2 L: K) v! U* }. ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 B, w8 n; d/ J6 k5 P, r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 x6 T) {1 O4 z  e: N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ b, B6 [, q% S2 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 r0 \/ I: e5 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 a' b% d$ X" s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ g& t; c) g( ^/ l& q- m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( x4 _; @3 d. M+ m  l<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 o; |; M3 v! z6 c  N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( P% E! U. {; K  Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  P. |) i( s* n& m- Q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ \5 Z7 U2 J9 n0 L<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; H, A- x1 }0 C* s' ~" N<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% ]: d* l; C; z/ `& _6 }% C<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ g, {7 g9 y1 C0 N" ^& c- O8 ]8 U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ r: P7 y- r6 U' u& e- B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" h/ h7 s0 R' a0 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 M) M& H3 f5 A) f, B) x! B$ f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' X- a. H! F; m- `8 L! Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! a% `0 F/ A" u8 r% r3 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 ]( k+ q8 _8 F$ R& K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 \& [4 a& e7 T0 U1 d" r) t; Q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 n" _& F, J& K9 ^% K+ p8 J4 d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; W* O5 Z0 I2 _  M1 u7 n: q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) Z, @: a% X1 u$ ^0 x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: p" K/ z( t4 |/ A<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>