【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
, Y  k2 n$ ^9 B1 BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! a- O' U2 ]" P9 ]  FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 L, P# U" m7 kFrom the first moment we met,
* A' _3 m$ `8 Q5 ?2 y) \- `, {' rI already loved you with all my heart
2 h4 @9 c7 J8 m2 j+ D# j# nWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 I- {6 L' y# q  F$ u) [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" }8 L, a- u& C% {: qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: Q! }' a" l0 N. h3 }* w* EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, q+ d& J9 M: _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( @- z1 U/ m5 j% x! @' _Love… just the word love
. \/ l- }7 ^6 F& u! t( b4 L# dWhy is it so difficult to express?
; _8 M# S) ^( t0 s. II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, \+ j, L% u8 I# {1 U" \3 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 d' _0 m  ]5 n' r. NCan I entrust it to you?
7 A6 [% o: n5 S7 X/ I5 e  v' FEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# ^( Y; f  m. ^- J& T6 O# ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 ~2 E& l" y8 Z7 }  Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 p. W5 A& Q& A2 @% |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 D0 g2 B2 Y( H; W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; _' w3 a" ~7 e; K# P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- r5 V# U* S- `3 }# p# i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 t# D" d4 R" j( t& }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  \3 M/ M* O" K' r+ z; I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 T1 F  x7 b' a5 ^5 V9 s: C<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 Q7 m, c6 b0 y+ `! ]+ F<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) v( ^+ J' o+ K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 [+ ^6 Z, U3 S<P>但我不会</P>
' v" A5 T" J3 D- l0 H- r: m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) v; Q( M% M. @: F( P* Z$ o  P# u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# q- l" E: v! L8 X( r* O4 H5 j  g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. M" a4 [6 ^$ u" B- C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ O, g8 Z" O7 [! j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 }% o( i: p0 o% i' j( u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' V% g: B) c  |" F6 y3 O' b' k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( l; F4 [. V. ]# _# C<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: P' G  }5 c8 M3 \/ ]<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 D8 d3 ]: R1 H& |# s' R$ T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ X2 C" v" Z6 Z$ x( D, b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' V" _8 Y; a# [7 I9 u  G6 M; A! R' b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# u0 v7 }  ^$ x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ ?6 s0 H! `# i9 t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- [  o) D  \* c9 ]* m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. E1 f+ M3 J" }; ~" N- d: Z7 B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 t; J7 K! E2 s( E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! u9 J  k1 v8 b( g" d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>