【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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# S4 ]* a& l. ^9 V8 P我另将歌词附在此。
) k+ V; F/ @+ O  V- n' H0 IThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ O# ?  J; s5 ?* h$ bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 K" c6 c  R& y8 I) M/ [8 rFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, m  |) B4 U8 H2 O) S) y, cWe meet and talk everyday,
( Y* P+ V, }' O7 Z$ p1 O# s' n9 B6 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# F+ Z( i6 m2 o& YLove… just the word love
( G. ~2 e/ \' N: oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 [- F/ h' k/ x2 ^9 u0 ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, i+ F6 ^4 y; k& K3 @) eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# n- z& \. {( @( K: V/ jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 J, p0 F4 o3 ^: P* Z; w  `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 \' U* v( M0 p! eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 O  E% r# C0 Y1 R' T) F" @+ pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  T. s7 @7 C2 W& R5 Q- ]If today isn’t too late,
8 Y; m, P* S4 i" q2 I% |1 B! q! SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 Q. W2 s2 P0 V7 v/ U4 `Entrust my love within your heart
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9 E6 ?6 B; H3 ^& E. O8 q3 r) K1 m* K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; a) P+ z) y9 `/ S3 A6 a<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 E7 Y; c: _/ Z9 u7 V9 r0 S7 J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 Q" i9 U, f8 V# M3 @  ]  X! c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 I) K* `( ?$ h- y+ C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, U- t) T! v, v+ C" n; B) l; n  D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 Y- w6 _$ _* g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ N' t+ U3 `$ Y$ V' h5 ?+ L3 r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, u8 z6 f, T9 I) J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 i6 Y$ ~5 [2 t+ c0 w2 b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 c& P+ Z1 y% g# f) c<P>但我不会</P>
! e! \7 Q' o: K2 p0 J$ ~# ^<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 ^" ]: k+ x$ O! s+ g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 X7 Z- z* e: B3 v4 |8 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 q* E2 h' h9 v1 C4 Q. b! m0 ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ E- K3 P! s% X9 L5 f/ k" X2 o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 u, R; o. h* Q# j5 j3 X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& f2 H# `7 P# o6 O, S; t( d9 U0 J<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% @1 |. k! W' C" ?; M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 b2 l" E' v/ \4 Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 d, `" ~8 D" p. l2 ]5 V) R2 S<P>但我不会 </P>
) t5 X7 e0 V& r, h; z. ~( u% F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, D( R2 {, }; C$ T) H$ ~3 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" [# t9 u$ e! l3 Q( O" }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; R2 }4 M) x" l# c6 H8 K2 q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! C* R/ b, _2 s- t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 i0 }5 W5 k" ^4 N0 U( j5 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" M) H2 K" H- _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# {- C, l; C% t) d( I9 ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 U: h8 G1 [+ M( C" U$ ?, x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>