【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
, x' t2 ?. v. d9 J6 KThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, E- A4 K: T! h$ v8 T  K) MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  ~% h7 R+ S8 j. W) ~% AI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 k( a* x; n8 ^" b+ RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 H; l7 H" U* m6 LI would probably know how you feel
. x$ A  U% a% Z* FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ I2 C1 U: D) D# DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; I7 A" ~4 Q+ h$ Q% F. VEntrust my love within your heart
$ j) h* l/ F7 n& z5 |Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* Q8 k3 v( P  r6 s3 `, LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) k6 L, c% h1 XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 N. c6 k* v8 t$ Q9 D/ f8 LIf today isn’t too late,
; g6 w) G( H( v8 o! |4 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 O" o, s4 Q) t$ H7 ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  W) [7 Q: e& `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( M6 B  j0 j. f2 H, D, A& W5 Q7 L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, C; I( Y5 [- ?7 G/ _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) O; S" V5 y& u# B5 \' |* G! `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 a% v, \, }& K- H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, ?0 A! x% o0 ]0 e; j% Q/ F/ G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" p/ z. q3 M8 |+ ^: y' r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& h1 `" C! _. U$ V! R5 a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( B8 N* }& s9 \; }! V% q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& A5 x& i2 P9 `& Q- {<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! m" u3 x0 n/ ?0 u" \- ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* Q6 e" Y! y* |9 Q0 U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: A2 D3 c1 f6 I/ G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% G# Q2 w) g& `7 ?* }# K+ p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 S- R% q0 C( N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! q/ @& l8 j" U/ K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 Y: @* [8 @& {3 A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  S5 k$ d; P3 D) f' h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" X4 h0 V, @4 O, |, T/ g) Y; V<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ l  A# y/ ?) b: ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ V( d" x# M  Q1 n1 Y8 X/ c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& M9 H4 Z( C. D; ^8 \7 x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 r) e5 H8 ^9 d; ?+ s. t/ g/ u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  A# M+ o1 e; ]5 `6 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 G9 X: J, R) r' }7 W7 Q# Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  Q4 H- X( ?! [/ `: A- h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ t  u" ]' F0 i& l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! R( e1 w" R: _5 O3 {2 m! A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& i5 ^' V  U$ x. j6 J& U( e  s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>