【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 r  O% {2 W/ d# OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# }  J: e9 z7 \From the first moment we met,
; \2 g9 U6 v9 v% ZI already loved you with all my heart
; s' b) G. T4 jWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 U. N) {3 \& cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" P: D' u4 P# E' IWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ F6 W$ m7 X5 M$ l: ^I want to confess that I love you,
; L7 C6 p+ k# h9 S. k) }2 hBut I never did
$ E2 j' p/ A6 g- sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 t  a% `; K& mIf today isn’t too late,
2 [/ A  \) q) B3 v' E: h5 [2 wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  ?& @( r' W- c' H9 ^Love… just the word love
( g; O5 E# b3 C+ QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 Y2 V: V+ y- K! POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" @* t6 {5 U) G; t9 Q# \2 JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# Q! n1 f1 f2 q3 wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 i0 I9 \# j3 b5 i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' U' }! h5 |/ @8 ~& Y  z. ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# Y/ h- m/ T0 P; a" k. X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: T1 o; d, U$ E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 t$ z$ K, w7 {+ b: {# U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 Y1 A9 L) S- L/ v9 O0 N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% T8 D" X# W) k; C  b1 Z4 S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 a" u2 L' `9 N! W% l7 b  z5 X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! g6 ~) C+ z3 U' o9 s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" u$ {0 x6 y, n8 u4 Z+ X<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 u& N8 Y4 n1 O% H3 L0 x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ j0 g9 t( p! u) L+ w* X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) }9 r* u4 }4 W/ e; T: Z- }. \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& J- y4 n& T4 ?6 u  C' y9 P/ P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" ^- M) ~! I, Z* ?! s% D' _# S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! B- ]3 L) U: W% }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ O7 Y/ {- ^& h8 z$ K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 d1 B- J7 Y2 s( m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  i  D" y6 q& B0 k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 v1 O7 k( ^- d  |# J5 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# ~+ m! r7 I! b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( e1 b  O% a, X2 j' M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  l# h2 k4 i. v# S8 J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ `$ N! w1 V; F- R/ r* S  ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# Z5 u' T" q& d<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' B4 M; }+ B1 E  ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 K& g/ s# ^/ |! {, i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# g" x8 w' ]  H7 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 r) D! V( _* C* t+ h! r! C. @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* P  U- p  F+ X# p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  l& g% M/ r9 Y" h  L+ F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) N/ P- Z$ m$ f! D- s# k2 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% B7 F1 U7 ~, V, U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>