【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# M, H1 d4 y3 S5 W我另将歌词附在此。
/ }9 m$ i! d4 W& JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 T* {* q# W/ m" lFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& C& Y+ \; V, p& |We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% ]; E6 Z% G: V; X7 H0 hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# [2 }+ b& N7 cI would probably know how you feel
/ ~' H- p: q  D+ a4 ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, O% G6 l0 h- Q1 v* i# l2 L! HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; i% e- V. }5 a: ULove… just the word love
; @9 j1 Q8 Z' C$ Z& }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 C0 U, ~5 c5 W+ Q( ?& v- uEntrust my love within your heart
6 w% Q, s4 b/ ?, \+ h, k; cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 k7 y( z0 e! |. i6 `7 R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# E  s8 ^5 |% }, V$ B' I; `<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" }5 M! @1 b& V4 C+ B6 y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 F5 d5 Y7 O5 \: j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ ], @( `% e% A. O<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' \& H. s9 |6 C: f% E* Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) U- z# g. g6 s2 W6 v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 \3 K# `! S; r1 L' O9 x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" ~# J& N$ i) @( k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: W2 H* q8 ?' X3 g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, h' Z$ e% x4 ~5 \5 r+ B; y  S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) t+ O" D( X$ n  X0 |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! i$ w- m+ n! e" q/ B& Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 A; j: i9 T1 z6 B<P>但我不会</P>
: u$ Y5 Q/ I& r- V! k$ H( t* M7 h+ k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( b9 d! c4 D& b! F2 \# x' t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 ]1 L+ F8 d" E4 j4 J* o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, }( R6 L4 m1 I: o9 E, K. r<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ V# `& X4 f% W+ M$ `- h: Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; j3 ~! T2 m# C# d, n0 r! W& t+ q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. h9 V2 W! F' ?+ q+ b: a- P: A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% S8 B4 d# P1 [, y0 S" O<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 F& \+ t9 T2 v' U2 `, {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" l; g' v/ K" }' F2 l$ c" V- u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: U' X% `+ C! N9 N2 q: D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 x& @4 R7 b, ]- \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 l& H  L5 R: j* r/ x  B* @<P>But I never did </P>
6 p* f0 K1 |& u: p# Y<P>但我不会 </P>
, O; p8 d, |* Q5 |) w0 `6 D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# C' t. S# y' w& ?  z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- t4 z* m4 r8 z$ N4 J! ~! |' l, w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 i& x; H7 Q4 h3 H/ ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! _, ?2 S5 S7 Z. @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 y) {# N* j7 t* M: b/ r* S- q  ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) {2 J- j6 q% x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 k9 t: t/ ~$ ]+ K) o" ^8 ]: `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 g7 _" U, h& V4 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 B" d9 i1 U$ R6 H- k+ V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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