【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' e7 E, F/ r! ~我另将歌词附在此。
% |* D0 ]: E! E! ~, L& I3 `. g% H6 VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: O. {) q* L8 h, N1 mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% J0 N$ m1 X8 y$ EI would probably know how you feel
: H' ?- W( d' S; x. _Love… just the word love
5 y' n& e' Z- k: s0 S! ]* ]Why is it so difficult to express?
* d- z+ M3 K' u" vI want to confess that I love you,
& X' F5 ]: u) o7 |! r) e- H. h+ Z1 ]- WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ k) o6 \- C- x- ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  [8 T0 L: ^; E3 w- ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 |7 O; i+ c$ p  k' |" c% _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 K: n/ p; B, }8 B, p- N8 {1 U2 o4 tCan I entrust it to you?
: m3 K* O# D" \9 ~9 bEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
; e5 e2 V3 p& t3 t1 Y) D) p# aEntrust my love within your heart

& |; f( B3 x1 g7 A+ Y7 B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, M/ F7 F% q6 d/ m<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  L5 ~3 u3 a4 x& e" H  F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, Z3 J% N( B% u7 c) O' P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 i& s. z8 R8 q5 l* z8 f$ }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 z! Y) ^$ i1 t9 v8 y& U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ |/ \5 }2 i& N5 O# b+ @& p" B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 N; i: p% Q" B" r) ]0 {. p# ~: e0 v0 ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 s* ?' g7 i, S0 G& _% ~# t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  C, _4 i  S  Q8 U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 z+ N0 L" u2 v& V6 H# q, n) q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- o% T9 o3 S, U8 B: c% R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' Y+ f6 i2 y9 F2 @& Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& A  n+ K# t+ G& x<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ H4 I# g3 h4 u. W& y5 @8 C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 D' O) m  i) `4 O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 |# x- g0 U& S! z8 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 j, w6 d) [2 ]. D% J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 H" g) ?; ?! T: F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* J4 ]1 A0 k$ W7 b( i/ A# v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 t8 V9 H. Q) P& O4 ]1 M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 q' f, e/ y( X7 ?! c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- J/ T6 |* r  X0 m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ j4 \+ G( `8 J$ w" c# h  X<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ u9 e! D1 x" A% `( S! s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( N8 t. P  _5 x- n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ p6 w& ]  h$ ^/ `% P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 f. F4 {% [( j% C) B. K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 s' ?, }9 O. }0 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. e* R$ e5 J/ w" g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) z  X, r$ _) f- D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- T4 G8 ]; Y2 E4 j- F: N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. b* I: \1 e1 L8 E: O! q0 c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ L; H% f0 X+ s6 P( p  z5 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 b8 V) _0 n6 N2 g/ d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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8 C4 b/ l* c+ q+ J/ i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 j: l! o9 l  Q9 a, D, O  I" ]3 f) V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>