【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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5 _3 |/ M, q: T. k. s9 K1 ?2 `我另将歌词附在此。
3 d* m+ `  n' o+ ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 [0 R8 S! ]( q# LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! y1 S* v; ]* JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" A1 f$ O: s9 N4 W8 Z' jI would probably know how you feel
$ _  N" _, u3 WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( I: I3 K2 |; O5 d' d! CI want to confess that I love you,
9 A" E5 E: r& H. e8 S! ^But I never did
& H- S% V; m, d" g$ ]2 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: m3 x" s" z1 g( |: y9 LIf today isn’t too late,
8 a' P! e/ ^8 P! AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  N* I0 V# Z* c' j0 H1 K$ l, hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 g) g6 M# D4 G% R( l1 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' l& }8 Y' m1 K- l6 u; LLove… just the word love
' g$ R, O, Q; |: P- AWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 T! C2 o. g0 [# ^% v: ?, C: sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ S1 ?( D; o5 I3 v" A( [, COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- u4 ]3 u, ~" b7 L" YIf today isn’t too late,
7 e# ~* {  {3 W6 _9 X* OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 K6 H+ k# U- w" xCan I entrust it to you?
6 l. j. \1 c+ ZEntrust my love within your heart
" `5 x) F2 t' A8 b& UCan I entrust it to you?
) M& V& L7 a& b" h. [, J5 L- qEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ ]7 m1 P) k5 D; ^- a7 \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% ]1 N7 s0 v9 `4 c) a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 E$ \% c3 b9 \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! _( k. Y' @+ w" G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 v% n5 ^9 I: W/ a/ i) \- p<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 s# w0 e3 Y; q# n: q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; @, \, _+ e8 P0 g3 J4 ?3 V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; t, e; w  L) t$ K: p<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ }$ p% U0 e/ Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 T6 _: x7 k* T! L) n3 o+ {5 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 m" D7 l4 z4 E, t' u% y: c; V* Z; f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 T! \6 G: M3 \' R; ^" X2 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  B2 }2 j% L4 ?' Y* y) @5 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% T$ ^+ ]* _+ _" F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 v& T: Z) i4 c' Y7 S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. _' c7 ?6 u% c# F<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, t# o6 D: G" a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: U' i8 I8 n7 W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 g" C8 s; O& l5 C" B9 x4 H8 P<P>But I never did </P>
  T4 Q4 K0 S/ {: F4 k<P>但我不会 </P>
; }9 @$ F. l+ m; N2 x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) \1 a# L2 D, m+ I; [1 ]& e4 ~' B9 I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 K( V# m% j3 r7 g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 v, k( R  f* O, O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( I, ?/ i4 S! r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) B( k# \6 {& {% p( J3 n, K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ `7 A+ Y9 y: o" G. E3 j; W5 T( {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! R6 i5 d" Y! }2 P1 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 T# k2 v- D  F9 q; E  a<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' @# ^/ D- U6 U, w* A. Q, j: E& A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( N1 g9 u4 ?! W7 z4 k% U/ O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 s, e' I7 w% F. k, H: |4 l这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ w4 ?! @6 t( C8 L, X) W$ F* F6 i7 T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ]9 l' R6 ]* }9 F* L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>