【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ H& K; ?5 c  f. ~我另将歌词附在此。
! `% S& F* W4 g3 S" j* j; v7 YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 Y7 I& N2 G; B7 rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- i7 E$ ^" \9 X% i9 S2 f* u1 O$ zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% R. I" l' W5 {We meet and talk everyday,
8 ^& H+ q) U' ^+ YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ ?8 A  ^- ]: f+ S& E3 J, ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 u3 [# |* T2 M! X9 k; A5 x' ]. e) QBut I never did
+ K' \/ @( b1 [8 \7 I7 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, s5 u& S" C( p, s/ mIf today isn’t too late,
' s! ]; `( N" {8 ?. ^! _) K7 YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* q1 l! G) d" ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# S# U% h2 t2 b4 eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ N2 X* _: R2 `' |' Q% OWhy is it so difficult to express?
; y5 @2 m/ H, c; _( P8 k1 {) rI want to confess that I love you,
9 j$ ?' l5 Y8 k+ U/ v  PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# s( X; \  }  [( n9 QIf today isn’t too late,
! t8 k7 a0 z6 N7 GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* v4 g0 o6 `1 h6 `# s5 f/ b8 A. qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. S5 k9 v3 S1 t1 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' N0 r* N0 D) ~2 V# wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

8 e$ e/ }& U9 O[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* k% p6 i& V- S- G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: ^7 E# u: b% h( p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ _; m/ l1 }* }: |- w3 L2 A5 ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 T* h* t. F) U! f' a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: B; L0 x/ x, y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; m7 l& B% E9 e+ w" |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# `7 }+ S) J" f; s( d6 H! M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 _9 c% @/ @+ k- U+ o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 h  z  n& ]$ M2 m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ @& Z8 F, X3 A* C" e3 U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" F& S, ?9 L( d1 a' Z/ y" b5 k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: A$ }; ]/ H8 e" O* b2 _9 _3 L$ W' v<P>但我不会</P>
/ l3 p8 |5 `; L- E; R1 f8 N, `<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 Y- r2 ^0 z. k, D" d% Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  t4 u) n, t! w. L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! ^9 G" C% W1 H" t3 E/ h7 h, }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% l$ \+ @: a+ F& m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* p: y- Q. _; K& A- y" \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# k: K. `' T% @7 M) W* g) D) |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 p, e" P8 {3 W7 t1 C6 r8 t( c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 O3 j0 _7 c4 E5 ^3 @<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 m8 s1 z2 u) W0 Y/ L% w1 F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( E, U6 \' Z6 M1 [: m) l2 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* d8 S- i0 y) M% b" m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ b3 k" J' F- D: u, H, |7 `5 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 f# i$ k2 n, ^6 c! |$ j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, k) b1 Y7 R( D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  H7 w! W2 B% r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, L: N# ]5 ^3 G9 J: m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 u5 b0 v+ ^0 G+ r& o% `# Z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. b, q% N- `% q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 ^. t3 U4 w5 c  a5 A1 a8 e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* a& W( A# @5 ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>