【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 P8 P+ O1 {( M我另将歌词附在此。
. ^0 |& {$ _: l: t# j- e( \  r( bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ [+ T: K! u( y7 rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ ]7 ~0 i% Y6 ^4 b& D4 p' hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ y% ], |! O$ X* hI would probably know how you feel
  x7 S" O5 q) k4 tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 p. P. q) z/ R( r; H4 UI want to confess that I love you,
5 r8 b4 h3 O8 O9 m# J/ MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, Q5 G$ p# \" M. O1 S& ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) R6 Z! V# d8 \, X9 R( ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- d8 X2 `  u; x1 [! ], Q3 n! P1 oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) @# b. `/ p) J. A- |Entrust my love within your heart
; G/ J& Q# D4 ]# m- ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 ~; x/ k* y, L0 u. j) n3 w/ i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 O3 y; z' _) {% ^8 [" u8 @<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 _, `4 {5 \" b9 u  `( v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 U3 l8 o& I1 I$ L) z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; H: h5 F  k4 ?& _2 d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: f0 K6 B5 _& w, j7 L  U2 [+ i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 ]& k$ u1 Z, w% v7 s: \. l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. J" M: {. r& \2 V/ B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. A; E9 E( j& H6 W, p! Z. g/ Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# Z7 x& G; G1 |: r. J: r2 I<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* G. b2 m3 J( `& t3 ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 o) X; A% D+ A9 s9 K<P>但我不会</P>
# ~6 z8 _: q4 C3 V6 ]1 r. V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' m& \0 t& V0 k4 M: R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& e. m+ f6 d. ^) G4 _" q. r7 o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 o" d) z. g8 {, v0 u( N' a5 v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' t* S: m4 k; X+ h5 k1 C+ l/ c+ ^<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 G( p+ K9 |) h3 h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: l* B2 V8 j5 U. w* F" A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ T, R! d7 \7 `* m) I- b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 J# A, j, O$ b2 @9 t; Q. Q<P>But I never did </P>
( v& L2 ^% h2 N! X4 X<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( N6 N+ N$ H) @# Z, F; V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  Q' |$ c+ k5 J  ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 L- z) f: j# f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( }5 W* z( H3 z* }* d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. ^; S+ B  \! c( q6 Y/ w- ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& ]* [% O& b9 s8 \1 M/ H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( G4 I$ e& E8 c1 a: {' Q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* H) q8 o9 q; r& }5 [) }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 |( I8 W$ H7 @( J1 S0 v6 u: l<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>