【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 K# Y4 k6 u8 I8 a6 a3 H我另将歌词附在此。
$ N) p# E2 D& L8 C3 ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 m  l' ]8 o) GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, k: i- `' Y+ QI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ C/ G! t4 J) {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( \0 f' u/ _5 G' Y! \Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& m9 b) b; Y7 RI want to confess that I love you,
+ P% u5 v. b% o0 X% x: `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 n5 Q8 s& j8 l4 B7 l5 {7 X( TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 [& P. |$ W0 X  ZCan I entrust it to you?
. Z+ \  U( ~7 |2 X: cEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 ~! {" q! r0 d% r$ X; |Why is it so difficult to express?
7 }4 Q- H, f" S* k+ d) cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# ^$ K4 V+ ]; ^, ?9 r9 L: _& OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  m+ G7 ?7 r4 o" s& `: U5 fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% [8 h0 [( K0 ]& _7 x3 lEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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, i) p/ @5 ~/ o( p6 U# l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: Z0 N( K# H" C" n8 R4 Z: r$ z, `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# S4 L+ w5 k4 _# k; {( E4 \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, c4 Z( V7 d% }- J4 B) v+ s# c) ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 z# D2 Y. w- o$ Y: Y  g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 o$ x4 O' N* L9 j2 ^0 i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 J0 Q7 Z9 |; M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 T  X8 O6 T4 S$ L0 e) |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  c. E9 o% D6 m5 @% K! {2 `" _' ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' {* r4 F$ b. Y+ q. A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ R7 a- w! x3 Z1 x4 B<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 S% j* X) b6 R, o5 G) }7 U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ a4 z# m1 l6 y9 e( Q& {' b. R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 ?' O" m* N5 w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ w! A/ I! g8 h' p, u1 o3 m/ `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# g9 W% G5 s6 f9 @5 }, x) E) v, G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& r% t' u+ c! {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( X# K& N# z/ L. r1 G) r& e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 `9 W4 V2 E/ O6 d8 P# o# \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! A9 v& x! M& S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ Z; Y  h7 p; Q( q4 z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ w9 Q# p4 W, l! m- ^; Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& ]5 O, D8 K. _$ Y) ^0 x, ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! L+ B. D+ u' t  Y& D' P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 _' \2 T) M( a6 Q) F% z9 ^  ~" L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( x, v: r% n" w" F& \# M( D$ I/ \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; X# a) y; S6 d2 V/ _% N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( ~% i1 I& o: j! A% R0 o! m5 f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; V- D7 i0 y7 n; z' ^- B  f# M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 Y) [2 ^; ^$ n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ b# s0 M& r5 g& L5 o<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, s+ {# W$ T, f9 p* i: V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  y8 u8 F: ^4 q) y1 G- }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>