【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
2 K" k9 G% f5 s7 w& X2 {: RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 t5 p! w5 W% o- q0 Y4 X8 dWe meet and talk everyday,
6 J1 J' F" h0 \, n! TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! A# _2 t4 q" C, {. E& ^- lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 _# l8 Y( h* ]3 ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 ^, S, s) t8 t+ nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) ~) x( F, P$ a, |' I4 nCan I entrust it to you?
$ K8 u. C2 l' e9 T# g  gEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" A! e5 ^9 T: j: q  y# [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, h- Z4 V# W7 E( ]3 _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) D+ R8 Q7 c$ Q  D9 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) w# n9 y2 p- \) MCan I entrust it to you?
# l' V# d) v  \# y) N% SEntrust my love within your heart
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. g0 u0 w4 a, M7 }1 d  J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 @& n' Y8 h8 y, F/ W" m# y+ [3 r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 r# ?9 m) J7 W0 c& k* U, O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! }3 |" @+ }6 j( J$ c<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% }8 }3 [  w3 E) A$ j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; Z% R! B6 `: x6 _4 @3 c1 ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ G7 S- i- D. F<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; T0 x- P' Z2 I+ m! r) h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- w7 |5 {2 Q  R* K" _' U# e' g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 l& X5 x# n% {- g( }<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. e1 z; |8 J6 o7 u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ C' c  ?9 z3 y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ {. [- W1 T9 X+ c/ D<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. ?  b8 {  z3 F# ]- i7 x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! }- \9 W8 b. O! U8 R6 _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 M8 ]8 d) g( R2 M: b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, M4 z8 l4 P1 f( K5 u7 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' Y& m6 U6 K* s0 B0 G  D* n! L; e) k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ x. Q( k3 l% r% @+ O4 M  x  ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# Q" t% r+ V5 T0 u+ E" v, p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ z% {8 u2 f% ^( S* P, C# G+ \7 G! J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' w" S  s0 A7 k0 J+ Q& ?- o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 M- X" L, X& ~4 h' h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% J4 P( l3 f$ z1 W6 t, K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 u. \9 k" m3 S  N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, W2 l! ]8 p# f( v0 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" d" u( i) Z. C' I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 D7 y3 X& d8 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ \( ^7 c; R$ w7 h0 b3 i  K1 E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) d+ r7 ]4 f- [' ~0 W2 d 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# W- `; x# i4 N) k0 \" g这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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5 R; X/ m, a9 u1 O$ ^  H% V2 e- @<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  K% i2 |0 H! s- ?. o+ I& ^/ _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>