【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 Z' G" A0 e0 W5 k' d2 n9 J我另将歌词附在此。
+ Z- f3 S' j" ?1 Q( {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ b6 m0 G/ b) j# |1 s& pThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( I5 w" i% ~- Y! MWe meet and talk everyday,
. |* i# ^0 `- [  _. cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' E, i. v4 j2 ]' V  l$ vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) d6 \# {8 ?7 |* ?6 a" j6 Q- lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- A6 _/ }: r& N' Z- `! fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 o5 A) s9 B7 S' M8 [. ^% \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ s* g8 n$ V! @Can I entrust it to you?
5 L7 @8 i, O+ G0 \Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ ?% i% ~" y0 X% K! n( C. yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 k/ W/ ^1 S5 ~4 h! M" t$ O# CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- M/ x- `* M& Y( f- GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# ?- x; ^7 j6 x- l% qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

) i! ]9 {; a. `6 `* f; v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ G% d  u% n, }& J3 ^4 ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" r# _% W+ l6 I3 c! V2 T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; X0 `4 U- f3 I- v- p& u( J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" w7 v+ D" D9 }2 X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; @% @4 q6 e2 r- s0 K<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# i! A" j3 X9 ]6 X) p. {( Y. G" R0 a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; s8 b- t$ a$ E- l5 K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: W! M7 N& F6 r/ C) x7 }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 n( y3 ?. k8 @9 Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 c+ o5 }/ B7 b1 f& J9 K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 B9 l, M3 p* O/ {1 a1 D- `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ Y* ~# Y& y5 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( W/ N6 z5 @, ^; v5 o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 U/ j/ ?6 _' o, {& C/ [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 b) @* d* [* D2 c1 F; S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! w3 P! ~3 P, p, B* ?5 q# T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& O& z) V7 @4 T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 M! T- }, \6 ^+ h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% ^9 B; E. r0 t7 P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) Y! i, ?5 R% l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 V8 O4 t- e7 w4 g; ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 f3 h4 p; i, P/ y' E. d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 \  j) x  M- m& W* a( c% l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( O0 ^, Q$ d$ X; O, N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% i& X: @7 Z, d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 `4 c4 [+ X+ Z$ M; N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ _8 N  N3 b0 b! H- k; N! v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 t& n5 b! a0 A: D% j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ M- H( E+ Z1 @+ l<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 E& v' Y8 T5 v' a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>