【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
# Y, m0 V/ @" m+ h4 q. j+ WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' A2 N) o4 l6 W& L0 q3 eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: |; N% |2 ^; T) y7 wFrom the first moment we met,
6 V. t0 |9 k4 a  e$ R; r. EI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ e. s7 n! a7 Q2 SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( R9 u+ A2 Y' V$ C7 k1 lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; p: y. _% l9 m3 A# I' T( E, O6 h6 h& ]If today isn’t too late,
$ D5 R! `5 {# AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* L9 z6 o5 b- z, W9 zWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 O) W+ @0 {2 |& ZI want to confess that I love you,
3 R' A8 [( k: L  N- X# JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 |* Q( S: J: ~7 ^$ J) `If today isn’t too late,
" V, K. v- e+ k; HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' k/ H9 L* u& j' [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ Z' h* r& ?$ }4 ^; o# T- MCan I entrust it to you?
% B5 P) \& u/ G( Q+ JEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 Y9 i( O0 n! |* [! e! e/ x! t7 F- K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& \: p: E, \# _8 ^" H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( R7 ~; Z' w3 [* s7 {" H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# Z% {# q. G/ G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ b" [8 x. q+ [<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% n, @+ B- ^: [7 T# b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 ?% {4 R) M2 ~! Q" F7 }& u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; n& P. O9 T, w. z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' Q; h& H4 Q/ b% L  M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ X0 s* B+ N& B. G* K2 s: c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! e5 ~8 t. M5 G. M/ ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 F: C6 o9 m$ A* P2 W) I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) Y4 {. B7 U2 t* c# i, M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 O% m: p" w- G9 Y7 l1 H$ q% s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 w- O& o( z$ [+ e4 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: L; n! f7 p0 C6 ^9 `) ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 @- f" i1 a# V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# L% m  d# v& L% j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! F0 {% Q: N3 e* ?# }& `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 b7 R+ @: S% p0 T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 Y; y! p+ I: L( H# ^, n0 _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 r4 S. f5 J+ M2 j% A0 d" q<P>但我不会 </P>
5 T) j6 G5 m+ `0 q& d+ t0 j% j3 l0 K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: w5 d' Y0 n: H7 Q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 J( Z* s. z4 U$ Q: k2 W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; q( U$ A7 l% P) j" h2 E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; J. w+ l0 P! s3 B, s) [, N* Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 W. v/ g# r6 W1 G+ c$ Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ v& V- G/ V0 j2 w+ B& r& o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 F- R8 f6 F  k" R5 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 y  Q; @& B; d4 R! K& @<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>