【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
+ n1 C. E/ n+ y+ lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ m* S! v2 M, k9 t7 r) j2 m2 gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; A# A! Z  `; WWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: o: `  P3 y, S: ^  z9 cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; \0 e% o8 B- v2 C; nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 Y4 i3 V# G. f+ U# SBut I never did
6 q$ R( U, K$ V2 l6 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) Q0 V/ }( V/ J( ?1 T! `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ ?! A8 u( [- h& f! o" b: o$ OLove… just the word love
1 y0 r& `, k+ @2 _7 j' PWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ E$ x6 d) G7 i' y( ?I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! L, v# w: o7 f$ X( |- FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 {4 }1 e* p: oEntrust my love within your heart

) z, [* z6 Q$ m) @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 E# v% j9 e. e, w" {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 f8 Z+ A, H5 t6 ]<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- o' x3 }  j$ O. P9 ^. a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 Y/ Z' l8 {. y' ]<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. M" ^& B  j8 F/ g' I$ j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- j) N3 L$ h6 i. B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! h" O0 w3 N& u& J$ {! y) \* c: a6 L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 b# a* T' O" ^$ E& E4 P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: k2 h) u* _) {7 n7 `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 h) ]) l. U, l) r+ G, [<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 i' Y* S* z9 h! O. P<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 k2 v4 x  F  v! V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 p; P* t, L) h- B& z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 e* E& b  G8 k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* v" a$ N+ C; C& {1 D+ \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 e) v6 b6 p: {0 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. b" h/ b0 [4 g1 H" n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, V$ m1 Q$ T' O$ t0 I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 W& K# v; L& L& K: }8 l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 z6 x7 F( b& P9 t4 p" I& {' ^4 T<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ C7 u  o& W2 g- y4 f7 a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- p! O  V2 ~- p8 @% ]<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 |: X) U, V$ R2 B" ~) M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 R! Q) ?* }2 \) e0 ~$ G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# j) W1 [& q+ m- O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 G7 J& i( T# p1 B5 y8 R! I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 K* U4 o; D( j$ {: o  A/ c- k! ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 R4 U# C8 w+ l- N, ~9 `# @<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>