【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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9 i9 T$ `( |$ O! j# X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' \0 _' x9 G" }* x. ^$ `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 p, S/ o9 Y: hI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, L& ~( ]" u( _5 h! S4 m0 H- II would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' B: Y; K" S2 B7 F+ J# C9 d3 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. ^- M. U/ ^) c+ gBut I never did
* K3 Y6 w' R. X9 P' hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; `1 z" f/ X8 E5 p0 s: tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 H6 R  C* g' ~( s+ dLove… just the word love
# ~7 F$ E4 q2 I3 ~0 z, o$ J( TWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 H7 C' b% U, m. E+ }8 q" bI want to confess that I love you,
/ G+ ?* ^$ @7 k% p! XBut I never did
- _$ P/ n* g% w' d) y2 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* ^' n& T3 B. b& x' ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: c" ], t: [& @$ m5 @Can I entrust it to you?
0 ]& v, b; u. i  sEntrust my love within your heart
5 M8 a& z, C! w. r6 g' T5 nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; Z- \  k- H3 I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 ~8 A; X6 t+ g' D0 G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# c4 S7 w$ a; r/ D2 p- V/ y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  P. o& H( P$ R5 S( {3 S<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ ~- V( h5 h/ x% z0 y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  A& Q- c& m7 N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 _3 M! n4 }' O9 M2 S# O% K5 l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 C: Q' ~3 m3 F5 F3 B0 ]<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, M/ b2 H, R  z- P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. P2 [; E! N% c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. j1 D/ ~/ f, U) l$ c- r  H<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# O' ^+ }. S2 ?& F' i5 Q3 _/ k) l<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! T+ R$ d; Z; Q; a( L! \9 |. s) a# e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 v! z$ j) H, v' A! |( P% G& C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- D. {  S( a) d9 x% O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ F4 ~3 E) p( X, a9 m9 a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! B9 L8 V! U* N% r, d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 ]8 j+ n; j: I: r7 k# H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' ?4 {5 u9 Q+ \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* g* N6 ?: E6 @8 Q# p- t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 t' s' y4 n- H9 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% Z- Y1 i/ k1 ^2 d9 C, ^" x. {8 S3 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& X* v! r& K  Q* Q' I/ f" g6 Q3 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 R9 i$ d. b" M; P4 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( ?  U8 @/ @, ]' v1 z8 ^; I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 v& ?# M2 ?2 z1 W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 o# |* D) B3 t0 T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; p/ P6 q7 j; ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ s1 P. n: {( |+ P2 C) V<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! e8 y% g( b6 P2 P+ P8 p8 {6 W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: t- `' c3 l$ I& F5 l# t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 l' D' B* O. u/ Y/ E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 `( U$ I4 O7 g2 e0 K9 \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' O, E7 D, o4 n, `6 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 H% E1 N/ v! Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% Z5 p+ p$ B7 B5 ^  s- b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: F1 d( r( _" H- t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 L, F" t9 |& E, Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! U. v* z; i9 O! J% z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>