【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 Y. d$ [( w, Q我另将歌词附在此。
1 `9 K6 w  V2 J! v9 qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ B8 U4 `7 y% j9 w* U# QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 t0 c  `) R, T$ nFrom the first moment we met,
3 }* |# B3 R2 b4 vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 Q3 h  D% Z! B2 CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ ~+ k, v, r- k0 |5 oI want to confess that I love you,
# a% |/ g0 x" @2 O, v1 B! CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, f# e' X5 K: H6 HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( {# }6 e" D, L/ s1 l0 L3 cCan I entrust it to you?
' N% X) i4 F/ s0 wEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  p; A4 ^& Y0 }1 m; {9 h0 wI want to confess that I love you,
6 Q: G/ k: ?* u( mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 k$ I" C; k% b7 G; ]If today isn’t too late,
9 }% r. D6 q' A1 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; \6 t2 z  B/ @" o; L$ TEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; }$ q$ M; V6 h& q3 k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( p& }, H& S1 x5 Z( B; F, N! \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! U, S, s- _. D3 ~( J7 C% G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* t# }" o9 z- B# B, O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- O5 q/ M. H* g( y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 ~; a/ I& V9 m" ~+ C  l4 H, w( s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( z2 R4 N/ y8 x. b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, h, @- \5 G$ t7 L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  f' d4 C$ H: Q, A/ q. C( \3 p, T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 C  I. l" J1 m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ @4 u- ^$ k& s2 t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% x  A, r% v1 j" U<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 n5 f6 g$ M) g" W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 c# n. E) I8 H( n/ y$ m& k: E4 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 u; V* e) B9 W. N6 \7 J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% ]4 r) p  Y; W' w( p0 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) t$ A; j4 g/ W, E5 R! }+ k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* G/ d4 d2 h! E2 S. C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' C8 O* N! |, z# Q# U) L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* R) S. K, h  \( k7 `9 h$ _1 E* g8 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, G+ h9 `6 e8 w7 z- m) H<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& W4 |0 S+ z( D( K1 X' s" i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" P, ?( a: U# O: E9 R9 e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# R" K3 _5 e+ O* e* a/ x; c1 a<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; D, j7 l/ }1 ~2 J$ F7 k: e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 n9 A! x8 M6 [' ~7 p; U/ [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ D' w* Q5 y) T! i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- `; B2 x/ }6 x: K# M: i* m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>