【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
- ^1 `  T. n7 I: r" eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 p# L) L$ S$ |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 k# s$ c* E3 }0 ~% sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 l; b* l& `: X# q1 TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 W: E" G. j# {$ ^; |/ ^/ }I would probably know how you feel
9 N0 y) ]# \5 y/ [Love… just the word love
4 k  Z1 D# A$ I* s7 q2 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 Q: Z+ c0 g7 i$ K6 Q' nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; X$ z& f: m5 D! }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 D9 g; ~) K5 T7 j7 `6 NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  \5 x; Y7 N: Q+ wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" r) j1 n6 y4 L1 b: b' B, u  `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* Q/ L# a5 H5 [If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 ]2 S; o/ T4 t! S* N+ s& [Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 g) L' K/ s1 X% H( m2 o/ `Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( T2 R* y* X3 x6 N# G& Q& F8 v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; ^! b/ i, v1 v2 F: r  S2 s* Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 W$ C! e3 }4 `; S. _% L0 p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) r  p, s# ?# x: {% B3 A- d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  M0 b; t0 O% Y* G4 S; B$ C, j" I" k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 H- |" F- E3 Y7 C$ Y0 l, G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& X& d" r8 u# k0 S+ O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 R1 s/ |3 J! _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# P9 F$ c% q, ^$ p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) v: Y6 [$ G! e" v: `: A, ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; A. X' z% U5 z7 m& K# L- O% x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 L* v0 |7 ]! ?5 M3 {4 A/ e2 _<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- q; L+ B( r+ t4 V0 U! a4 U  c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* c6 X4 w. S: P8 _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) W: m1 @! U$ Q' ^, W. n4 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' d; q9 Y" W5 c# K$ w* {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* L, }. x; X& J' ~8 v2 E: g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 P8 K( B; c# q' ?( [2 Y! R1 f# h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: c" U" y8 @4 Z3 Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( N8 V9 ^* R# X! a; Q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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, ]: Q. d, q) |6 e; W- R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ B4 s8 v2 Z0 v' X8 E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 e1 D+ H$ {" Y+ f7 G8 f6 n3 [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 |4 w- r  V8 i; |7 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& v: Z: j6 @2 V2 q9 H) D9 [( w9 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  R5 X- |7 [0 X% ^1 H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 y: O' a. ~2 ^$ \, X; m9 m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 I# O5 a: k& L2 E+ h<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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