【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
( L; W: I, K5 z% {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* u* d, [: M* y, F% SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) e6 I4 {2 g, S% J; A+ bFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ f* D& X& |* v' LBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 e  F/ D' [2 z2 ?, i  zLove… just the word love
& Q" V% j, h3 K9 pWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 R  \# c$ K" F2 p9 E4 M+ ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! `1 e- b0 Q# NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( H& P# z# i# P3 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ G$ `+ I  b6 S* b: [# C( f' rEntrust my love within your heart
3 f+ ^3 e6 ?' r- ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# y% ]* x/ G7 B# G$ H, sBut I never did
1 ^1 I- f! n8 Y$ }6 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 d1 ]% T5 x6 {9 N  B/ k5 jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% s, ^- }$ t3 o! W0 y6 C4 NCan I entrust it to you?
; s) Z; Y! U+ M0 L( l$ u! @7 \Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ ]( [2 A" a! O. U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. V9 b4 O( F* V8 W; t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; E- j: E- n6 y# A) J4 Z2 h: d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: w. G5 D3 K6 V6 y8 r# ^' d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; K6 O( o8 M- }' ?5 l  H  ]0 e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  C9 _: k* {( }: Q, e; U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. t8 \, m$ V3 a+ r<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 @& `5 f3 X- a% E0 x# ~, N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 g. j+ A* f7 t0 p& }( ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. @7 c" h; _  y& J6 U6 n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 ]9 k& T" }6 I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  i. S: D* F  T3 F0 }7 K0 i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 ]8 v+ {7 {; a6 \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% W0 R8 O& A3 j5 }0 Y6 d, Y2 X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  s3 {# U3 g! w( Q  _- T, y8 Q+ z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 c& D/ u" \2 d5 i: _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 M4 X4 e3 O0 b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 Y3 ^! P+ O( k8 b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% r) t8 F" Z6 ?, n: m3 p" z$ X& N: ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  k$ m6 N3 q/ L7 B6 W0 S<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ ~% y8 z9 A  ]- u8 z' h% ^<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 c! k9 a. X! ?7 U: O7 C) ?9 s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 h/ S# q- S! I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- k( n, l7 L: {4 H- @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! R; I! ~  |8 q: f/ J' e: X* j. N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: D+ ~2 _2 K4 x* @1 T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" H" z( @2 G+ u4 _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 ?9 V9 u  m4 r2 k& W0 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 _$ H/ [& \- G! \1 ]9 ]" H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 F0 w9 i. E( j, O3 Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ z; A+ \( W( P( L/ |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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! X- |& v8 F# k, Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>