【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& _2 ]6 u! R% G6 p7 a7 Y- vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, j, O4 P! d0 d) OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" L3 J+ E% n/ _, N5 @I want to confess that I love you,
$ M8 H5 o, M1 ?* k) MBut I never did
# f% ]4 E* G4 O0 Q- mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 l' U; k" U* Y; \! [. g% G* T" jIf today isn’t too late,
0 V% U" f  [* FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! _1 `3 L+ k: ]% {2 ]+ D+ Y; uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ f7 i3 e1 V# c1 @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 p$ E  ]# H- @2 S0 d8 MIf today isn’t too late,
' C2 {5 L/ Z8 k1 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 [1 P$ n8 A/ k! ?9 G- _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ b$ q$ Q/ a( |8 _Entrust my love within your heart
9 n5 C( I' v1 w% KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 X# c. ]4 c  C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' ~: \- _  M4 N# Q) Q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% ]/ H3 @) J  q/ D0 v2 R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# w/ G7 l4 Q/ ?# o6 y4 g+ r9 M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, i9 w8 X7 C2 J% Y- V9 h$ k<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" Z6 {; E: k# z# ?6 ?6 U# o( Q$ _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, y) @8 s; t2 y+ i9 H3 i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  e7 {# i. c/ @9 K$ }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 I% w* n! x% c9 T0 E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: e# i; D! h* a4 t4 o# L+ y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 ~& k* c4 ~% l1 M- W" x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) F( s. g4 J3 c$ S, E# F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" V# C. i. S. r; Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* Q8 o4 h4 C3 }8 S/ q" v" ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 s- m' D$ k  N& [1 m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! w( A; |$ |% V3 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* o$ C$ P: E5 O2 u0 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 g" l% ]: }& L: r0 t, j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 }. G- h8 ?$ ]6 N7 [1 I1 t3 ]' j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 E% E% y/ M/ E! A2 _4 T8 }<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% \$ i# g" z. w# k; E6 }  `<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
( i3 L4 v2 q3 B0 v8 t' N8 M, t<P>但我不会 </P>
& q2 _0 l5 R+ U$ t7 F2 l+ R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ f2 e/ R. f% z, A  [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- d  ?4 H, U8 g- d# @( `  A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! M1 y& W6 w! p. X& J+ w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( c6 W6 R; e  T; Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; s( U2 A4 \, v$ v  p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% _* R, Y" d2 Z! a  B' v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; I$ k! b+ Y1 Q% L# m  ~/ Z- V( e; G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 S) k6 m. q4 F0 a* g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. s+ V, X: [" b7 n6 A- U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 d# P3 F+ E: f5 L0 p5 p! s5 z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 Z# z( `4 h( {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& J7 c- a4 q7 w; U9 |' i9 b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>