【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 E- E4 k. a2 V. L  S5 I, C6 \我另将歌词附在此。
+ p7 j+ J, X' d* c2 [5 F' l8 V: LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  F3 T4 `5 e4 B. x6 N$ d& Y0 DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ G' Y1 F3 S$ d; b; x+ }" \From the first moment we met,
3 p% D  G9 K  ]+ EI already loved you with all my heart
* d$ Z9 U; J+ d1 TWe meet and talk everyday,
' @% m+ w: V0 H6 X$ ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 Z- R% Q' W/ A! pI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# O* w7 p* C4 vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# X$ w2 h* S& oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 `; a' x* O  R! T8 J% Y, WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# x7 L! J5 u- g3 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ e+ w; M- w4 c: k! ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. n! `" c$ ~5 c& G& t9 OIf today isn’t too late,
' d7 @0 I8 r0 y1 r; gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 k  S- P# c( ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 V' m, O  d) d3 ^# xEntrust my love within your heart
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0 v! E# ^( p7 S+ c  B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ _- b' a/ t& N) d' {1 b9 k: n: C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 X# y: q3 s5 u* e  o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 \5 g: Q( V* s) A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* L4 K$ W8 Q- @4 c' J8 X$ u<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, W/ X: F  D6 C( v/ @$ i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, ~2 C! t7 D+ Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& |6 T' t* q4 m$ {3 D5 W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 e, r' @& }4 F$ A9 U4 B<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 _' x$ y( r7 v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( c! F/ W! X8 d) [0 M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* u+ ^# V* }/ w6 r* O  z5 `1 z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 g. b2 J+ Y; c7 P  M0 p: H# {5 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; K# m* `9 R* l$ H" h9 z2 [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" {" W8 Y+ s7 X, x<P>但我不会</P>
. r: F% L+ q) Q; A4 h; N4 S<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 I+ m- b/ h- h. N; p- J/ i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  n# ]% G7 ?! C3 n$ h  q8 J; P; ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% ~  C; e! d' k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- }* z$ L, L4 F& B2 \! ]4 G$ z8 v! }( k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& W. Y2 ]3 w. ?; i: y' \! F<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& p- Q. m% S9 g# A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 f4 z6 n  m. U8 |0 D<P>But I never did </P>
0 h! x' z0 X, {8 B<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& Y7 e9 K4 |- ^5 p4 S& M/ P7 ~7 \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 W7 k7 O+ A. D' l4 J& M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. M" W  ?! i( n; P& h/ k6 V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& A. O& c. C, }9 H! h7 J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) c0 i& h, ?4 O) ?1 t0 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# X2 \2 G! Y; [) Q3 J  y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; h9 k+ f. }) m9 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; H/ e5 a9 f2 K' Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ c; g9 s2 o3 F! q5 `7 |/ j9 B" v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 G. r6 J6 |6 u/ G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" k, m9 s4 s/ l+ U  x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( B# ]# O5 t6 k+ j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>