【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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9 C, Y" M9 G9 E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& Q9 l: s' b( j  w( w$ VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 ^3 n% g! g% S1 p* ?) a# k# qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 c- D. m( J( h: jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 n& w/ Q( q( m* _0 sLove… just the word love
! q( G  F8 \; s3 m& b) |  s8 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: \' }& ]& a5 z: i+ t6 [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" |' ?$ }6 o: M! ^. KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& J/ U' F0 C4 q' X& K8 ]" _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ U; f3 N( _5 F- |& G( h, qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) a( f8 T" c) n. y* xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 K7 L9 d3 V2 B' aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ t, j( U- Q2 ?9 @3 Q# w1 ~" }Can I entrust it to you?
/ c, ~* a9 ^0 w- f) u/ D# P" P& MEntrust my love within your heart
6 w; Y7 K$ b" S' N$ XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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4 ~4 Y4 T& I( Y9 W3 E; ][ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 w' G: ~" i3 |9 c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! Z! ~) q9 F, C4 o' X8 H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( r6 s) {9 X& @+ e# T<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 l/ @$ z  e/ ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ t" L8 m9 i1 J6 [3 s. l1 ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ \2 f: P% A1 C( e+ d( v<P>但我不会</P>
, Y2 G" x! e8 @7 u; A/ M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" @0 ]) ~% y$ q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) i  X4 [. }0 E7 j4 z& S$ D6 H* h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 t3 u9 Q1 L1 A" ?7 ?; [) v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& y" Q# \; c9 A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 G& S- h$ }$ w4 L5 Z) i) r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ ~+ V6 B) o- J) O2 i% v' z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 |9 S7 E3 K6 T) r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! B: E) w% ^: s" [- p. {, x$ ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ t9 ^* M3 Y' o+ ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ |) v  ?$ X) n8 [) }7 K# w<P>But I never did </P>
1 d' Z$ q' z5 S9 p( F<P>但我不会 </P>
( j( k0 j" _) C  k7 G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! {6 T3 A8 q* B2 l/ K8 g<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, T8 `# g* D/ o' h# a0 A& n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 B3 `" W& T" h2 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 e: F, A& ]; D9 u" m+ Y/ V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 J" R- r3 \& f. S3 n: x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ k6 O& h( I1 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ n" W% i/ A( r4 w* s; ^: \4 D* b0 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  K$ @% |4 o" T$ H1 _& p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% c' V  _6 E/ t. X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 n9 W# M4 L; I/ ~( X% m9 r. L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ }; v) s- a, S/ b0 w 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* I$ G. O! Y, Q- U/ h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ B( R# `2 ]: _* z  W' D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' }1 o4 O$ J7 @0 T6 p+ D8 d: s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>