【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
) `1 ~+ T3 F* Z- CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  N+ O5 ?; f. h/ k0 l. E4 {From the first moment we met,
; s& u) A; z( z6 WI already loved you with all my heart
: h; |9 E. I8 o! B8 HWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* f3 X0 m, r% |1 G7 TI would probably know how you feel
, f1 M5 w, K# M9 m. [* s5 `1 Q7 y# f  JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 {( P" }8 h3 X' M& D' ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ Y; L1 s  @5 j* m7 z5 z8 D" lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 w0 H& s1 X+ [7 V% jCan I entrust it to you?
! }+ q6 [6 S: |: a& MEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& Q, [* B5 M8 A* L9 k9 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 w6 _& h7 n8 T1 e6 d' kBut I never did
; y  U2 o  R9 ^, ~1 z' L( O4 c. ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! J- X; H  X% L  w  h2 zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 Q5 S% H- K/ }& A2 }; mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 n; W2 O2 t# x  m* _# aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, o5 E4 L  M- [! z% y) ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' D) Q% A' \& d: S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ i8 y" _' ^8 S# {# B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ q5 v8 W$ H' L1 W9 |% R+ Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. x0 q7 a1 J+ i4 ^) J7 i6 z: d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, O1 M5 U1 }" ]) W$ D; b3 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; T; r  \3 j8 |0 g- Y! \<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( j& ^: h. d; ?) O2 f9 R! Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 C+ e3 r% d: z+ k0 y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- j# j6 u3 W6 ^  }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 _! L; N( t6 T6 F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 f" }" Z+ J# G, u* D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 F3 ~' o3 Q- E! Z! v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& N( B# s+ N2 X0 d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! c7 ]) P6 u; z9 ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' D& g) B0 P" D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  U" R7 r' V+ W3 W8 g2 t" G6 ^4 P% C! V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( M7 J$ q- `2 X1 C$ @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 ?  ^/ j$ B( p  E; r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" H$ @7 Y5 A) t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ `* h5 ~2 R! ]" ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 ^2 v) O* i2 v0 o+ i; R& J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 L" L, L! ~% R2 r* a" T, E<P>但我不会 </P>
9 i( V) ?& h6 |! S/ b8 L<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' f" z5 v% V  u7 l6 l4 f: ^) O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 T/ k" b+ ^$ B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 i' }: m: f& M- f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 V  d5 C1 Z' i% D) a7 O# L" m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* X0 I; M6 `4 B2 t" C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. f1 q" V/ f5 |; x" I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ q* C6 s6 o: N* Q) L# m, F0 {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>