【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* O' c0 L7 b' n7 g( |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 V% {" S4 ?; [! T* ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 ~# t# e; F9 G2 F4 C+ JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ g7 @2 W$ L0 G  I& eI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- Q; @1 L& U7 T, _  g6 UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 p7 ]5 K9 U, W$ ]+ {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- ~! ?( P8 q) }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 H  O' H( O# @& C5 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! p/ G9 [: P; }' k+ A7 t) u+ R- iCan I entrust it to you?
& m/ @  x/ f% tEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' a. p' v$ C9 t5 h  DWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 j$ Z. C7 h- \9 y' U$ EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) h) a$ I4 i3 HIf today isn’t too late,
4 s5 }. M  M) T. ^9 [% ?5 X+ BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& I/ y4 Y" y1 i0 KCan I entrust it to you?
/ W, V3 ?% M/ R: c# dEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
2 g2 Z% c' [4 ?2 [Entrust my love within your heart
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( ]  O5 _5 |2 k. p[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# Q  C4 Y' x. [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; E+ _( p- Q& Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( c" C! ]8 f) F' n) {8 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ g9 e9 h% z( _! A: D. R+ d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 x( O. X& F' r0 I1 h$ |! j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# X" H, a5 y9 e& ]- ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 Q$ e  K, Y7 L# ?' D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 U" P: w0 M& q3 M& e1 A3 `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ A0 m6 f5 z% a" g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( O; w" m# V- v$ v9 F( F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 p0 v, _& V# f7 @$ \1 V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! |- x% C' W- S* L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 A6 U% ?+ u5 m$ H; r3 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ m7 i+ s2 A4 {& i2 @/ e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: E+ b3 M: S; Y8 ?+ ?$ h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( C, Y9 X( z# z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: z. g9 E4 t( D9 Y% f" Z* t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% V& t: M" c4 w3 F. \<P>But I never did </P>
, R8 j6 b$ P* o- b<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: X1 o9 Y' [# b$ f6 U/ Q+ D<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% {2 _; I0 E) e: l1 t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 R; V/ d1 e" R) c9 N' b9 U, D7 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( O4 f3 x! ~2 H+ k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 [" b( P: @& J: l( I6 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* U5 ]: {+ L" u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% q# }, H4 c: Y4 B  @8 }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' J: [; p# P* i) y5 N. R4 _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 p0 K7 o9 c% ]. Q2 l0 t. V/ L% Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>