【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: ~3 r$ m  b/ S/ O' g( S4 lFrom the first moment we met,
; z& k; E0 g/ ], A* e/ fI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% f) u7 K/ @; ~: ]. o0 D0 U4 xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. R3 H0 _, ]% D% T; F$ q6 SI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; z, l0 l; H8 S# P, B  TI want to confess that I love you,
( d3 v6 C; l8 }( r0 I( S% aBut I never did
% Y' y# d" _# h  K( cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# c6 m1 I: S# y) A* Z& H1 hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 @) X5 R2 T+ g: p! RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ [, [* t; E- v. {  [+ h' q4 QEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 z3 H& \, g2 zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, X$ V6 i. ^/ ~- C- H# X+ K, fIf today isn’t too late,
$ J% R( x0 i9 O& _: `& G, jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* K: X% ~( i- I2 q9 I# V* ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' M& o9 g+ k9 [+ \5 M' pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- [; x# ?' i; f; Q/ X
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) V) P1 F  ?7 M" u6 n0 s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; j$ m3 o! g5 B% _) r" b  K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) F/ T) l' f" C& Y. V# J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  y1 `+ E. i$ m8 n) A/ _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ C& e! c2 l$ P0 L+ d<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 Z0 ^" v. v) S8 {9 k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: i6 i6 U& f$ S) `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- q4 r9 c* I5 o1 ?# ^; |% Y; ]& v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( e9 A; |, Q+ P+ h5 `4 Z9 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& ~. P5 ^) T# r7 J7 ?6 [8 Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; @8 c5 ~# j6 X$ s6 k<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 Z+ i  J, w3 V3 e. G$ y) a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 }. H$ W. R! H4 D# T/ K) T* p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 }$ r  Z* K2 V) x6 c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; z, x% h* A* V# d% {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 X5 S# ?1 l9 M' I( P( m+ R2 Z9 y2 A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ ^2 l' O" |7 \  v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 v" S2 F+ X  |6 Q# C' t, {* h! j<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# M7 C% j3 M- s. g3 ~3 Z: o. i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( _2 D. d. c6 Y4 T) i<P>But I never did </P>
0 f7 j# F! _4 Z) M) N& {<P>但我不会 </P>
( w# S2 S4 M5 Z3 Q& ~; A* j+ b( [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* z2 \. h# `9 M% I9 X8 n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ @' p7 Z& R% k: y1 P2 [  `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 a( r: g/ O, H' Y' d# L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* C' O1 g# s! S9 `: k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ x' `7 v. o" I, S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' t) R. B: k3 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 C! h9 X  r& J3 R0 u1 p) {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ _% ]8 ^% I- o3 K. s% k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' {1 K) h3 e8 I: v+ c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 v! Y+ x4 J6 w4 h+ q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 K6 m. l+ c$ v$ R+ l3 N<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>