【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( N5 {( Z% Q- x" \+ A0 L# x* iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' U5 r  ^: m: x# p+ M* A' W7 IBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 D1 v, @. ?; {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" P* n0 r- A, [1 ]7 TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 ?5 H. g5 z' B' ]/ yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% W0 v% e; ~+ D8 A7 r7 K9 ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# p$ G/ L3 g4 m' \/ M# [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) M- G3 U  [5 w/ Q3 `  Q6 ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ d* D3 ?9 p) SLove… just the word love
9 N0 s7 a  @" Z% o- E) G7 K/ }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: R8 h* I+ H4 aBut I never did
- m* `/ I9 ]" o8 A% ^( G- OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& _$ c; c0 F9 J3 w4 K' E! }3 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
( }9 V: h/ X, x. W2 e; {: mEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  m# P0 D" C  H' i7 y/ z1 f! }2 x: Y" m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; H( f* d2 p/ T7 s, ~* o( o5 e- d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; u7 t0 U% \2 w7 M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 F5 ]# x# V  l8 V4 m8 }/ F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 m. z/ m4 g; K; E  i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 E; c0 v6 k- }8 z; D<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ R9 P1 S5 p( U5 G: y2 ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 d8 W8 n8 D; q2 c3 C0 E! I3 P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 z  k2 ]4 @, a<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 Z6 x3 q- l- t& n+ Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% C7 p/ I) e2 W; I, Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) b9 r3 _5 G5 X3 J<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: n& }; X4 o+ z3 V3 i+ u* ]: s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! H3 j' [3 U5 W: ~+ M  c8 F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 u) Z7 O. l. _$ n<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" \  b, ?* k! M; [$ R! J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 B$ {5 s% Y& P7 q+ I: ?+ ~8 K+ F9 e<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 [: |, I/ B8 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, n  D) R3 X4 E% X, ^0 d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 @1 v% \: D, \. U5 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# X, G/ \/ q! O+ n7 ?& d1 f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 }# d, q7 G8 a7 N9 c<P>But I never did </P>
$ b9 t" b1 g7 E3 T+ J, p9 y4 ^<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 D' U: L8 G' q3 s8 I* y! o+ e" p<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, D# u! w. W0 \5 j0 R" h1 F4 U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" j: y7 Y5 L6 r3 _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 l5 G* a! ~# l$ X! m0 V( ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 h" O* ?& Q& x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 @; s( O5 M  Z7 ?2 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 C# S9 W& ]6 z, S3 V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>