【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
9 {# p+ ^! S1 @The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
2 y6 @- r- K  r' K7 `) eWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  t: J. e, V# u  \, kBut I never did
4 W+ N' [) K4 n' d1 I4 v" @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 U$ M5 E) c3 e2 X$ }1 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 O- P$ f, v1 b  pCan I entrust it to you?
# }4 C" D8 y% g! d9 o4 O* ~7 `Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 L: @. x4 H2 f, Y1 \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# o! x" e0 u  l& I8 W9 `+ ]0 {5 c+ AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% I, y0 ^* {. x2 ~+ w6 q6 nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 n7 B/ [5 {2 {6 j0 t+ AEntrust my love within your heart
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7 \' T7 C# J. ]- ^+ i3 R, B7 j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  `# w. i( l$ G+ I+ }$ v& U5 [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; r. T- I* A2 Y# Z/ Q& |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 a; ]3 G9 k4 l! f  r" p" W; M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. H- Q! q2 Q% U7 ]5 z& G5 d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; G* k/ \9 [7 [6 X6 ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* }1 a2 N% T) F# R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 R9 u& C6 A4 j* Z& I, d1 O7 ]6 l$ `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! U8 e! D" h  G/ j7 L" c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 {# k" Z% r4 K7 G6 h, h% v$ \3 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* b! \6 U% C5 J) e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 l( F/ D" f& W8 @$ C+ B8 z. H5 ^% f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ L; C* w0 d0 Z) x6 t; S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& y! `8 j+ ~8 M# }+ V" n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 M4 X0 Z; v" F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 {+ ?, g: ]$ W) _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 L0 t" f  ~8 z5 z  [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 Z2 o; o. v& c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  B( B6 N, q5 b0 G& `) ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; }8 L1 H6 [! O' q% N* P1 o# [- m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 N) F* O) K* u! N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 {, w' v$ z, d5 L8 ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 \( A" N3 C% ^  ]<P>但我不会 </P>
. @. a( E$ @- o7 M& |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& N  \! `; F' g/ R* Q* Z' \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: z1 z* a/ O. E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* A! r/ o) c0 V! L$ }3 e: }) [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% N0 T" Q/ c* S8 X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- A0 n7 x5 H+ u  j7 Q# \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, ~& W& ^1 q1 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ D& K1 w7 q( j; l  C' D% |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. [  o6 i, k% c9 q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>