【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# P7 r" w% t# B( [" h5 g5 h我另将歌词附在此。
+ [+ Y$ Z" `- R" C4 X- \  g) @The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- v& f$ Q( ~0 c# qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 O( X2 |' m  S2 Q( xI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ [7 w* i3 x, G. G3 X8 oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: D% }- O' c* JWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 X" |: u* y- P0 g2 fI want to confess that I love you,
# d6 k) }4 a# b6 a) z1 `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 u! r; n0 l- g) Q& ~9 m3 Z* NIf today isn’t too late,
0 [; ~* t( |- B" [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* e, h4 Z* Z# Z* K, }8 ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, V% J2 W# M1 Z+ n& x2 w% HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" m5 `6 Q/ ?5 PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 N) e9 a. ^2 p7 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. ?& t/ @2 h2 V5 B) X4 E. nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: ]3 k9 u9 I( I- \- _" c; YEntrust my love within your heart
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! i8 X! _: M3 D- H- B# f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, c: ~& O) I9 ?) P5 F7 G( D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 S# l; F  R/ S. u* T# a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ ^- a4 Y* u" S7 y% M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; `8 h" J; ~. S7 U. j+ V# n3 v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; j: |( J9 o. @* P$ w1 X* R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 n/ r7 q. m6 ~: D# A9 M* }; ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 r" \; c$ D2 j+ M# \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ ?/ r# T% ]/ L( g, A0 ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, o4 k. k/ q8 h* Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 ?: V% d! [3 {! I  f<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 Z: Z- j' i5 J7 P& T' g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, t- p5 M1 p6 H# D+ n<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 s6 Y2 |; C& @; ]8 H<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& i" c% R3 R/ o0 R, i) l6 b  ^$ [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# E7 R; G+ H$ S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 M  t8 _6 v6 T, Q5 y- W! W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  z' S4 d; ^7 d6 V  y& F9 c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: L4 l7 X' M2 {7 D! S+ ?" J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 c" m9 f% [! Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 G8 W! D* Y* t# d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! t( X  g9 ^- b- B2 b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- i8 p  E- U4 i9 R, x0 {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: k' X( R) R3 v) l% I<P>但我不会 </P>
' X  w+ k) _  B3 B+ S0 s4 E* w8 ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 U; n/ Q. s7 S/ p<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 M. {4 d  F- A1 h) o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 [1 R& p' ]- v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% f' o+ c6 |& W4 R1 @3 x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ t4 a4 x9 n7 Q- l- C' w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! B: W$ d8 F- p4 x2 O5 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ V4 I0 E& n7 J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 D, I7 g" v5 Y. x5 I, u8 u9 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 J& `, }) C8 r0 |! N" g3 ^% a; t0 ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- }$ v" s  C3 `/ P) G( \这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% ?5 ^& d0 z; Q  s% H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: d- t: I2 P; Q5 `" Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>