【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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5 s2 C3 D; k0 D& |( x& o我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 _4 f) l$ V' QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 I" p, X$ l$ \1 p. iFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
' A/ Y  O# K9 q! B1 oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- y+ I  c, x% n, k; \1 t1 tLove… just the word love
. X6 M3 B* n& q& a  RWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 p& D+ E1 b- A8 eI want to confess that I love you,
: w" C' Y4 f- S' x6 h3 p6 ?2 v1 T+ g# TBut I never did
5 W1 m* f; y6 Z8 Z, XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, v% F! g" ^3 [6 D8 u* cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- b& {( C; O& [6 h2 ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" |! r" s) w( g' b. z& qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% f, {4 y3 |$ G+ t; v- XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- \5 d1 D1 R9 m3 u1 dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) W+ s' o' e" ]. D' xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 Y  }1 }6 ^4 X" A3 }/ U3 T<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, g/ I" z& R1 i% i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! N7 N1 h/ X) }<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 e/ [3 I$ Y+ G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 m6 P$ J, |& \: F. |; T2 C/ c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 |: F4 x6 S/ O" h<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; Q1 z* ]  U" v. C0 y- D" }6 F& z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 [7 q& I% S, F! @/ C2 @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, D; I8 q8 Q( @4 S( l, `+ j& I<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ T5 x9 Q  w; ^/ v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 C/ W7 v! s8 J& r; l* _6 T, S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 M, l; @* g( S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 j; F2 s" P1 O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* l) k2 Z5 s: V9 w2 `3 D: H6 N9 E<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, q, N# B0 T. W$ }4 k% n+ d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ K, s8 M% O8 S1 j1 @4 i# U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' e8 t; B+ n2 U; r# p) [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  {3 \  a1 v( |  i" j. z! J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& m$ j2 e& d0 A) T4 d; {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ X, t& L5 b7 T, C, ?/ ]" u# ^<P>But I never did </P>
5 C! R+ `: R/ p0 q* Y<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* E& P' A0 k9 c* g( r7 [% l' Q6 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 z% b6 g* b1 H, h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! Q# h) y( e. ~0 b2 N! s! P0 H  m7 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ I/ K% r+ q) _$ c& @" x5 j- w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ q7 }  o6 O- G. J4 [( D( W7 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, b( A1 y( P, X: M1 D8 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ?; [6 B9 p* r$ Y0 {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>