【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 Z, d6 _. ?0 f6 X7 Q" q+ FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 i' ]) n) N9 I0 {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' D( E* `' }  A+ aI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. c5 X$ `( h; c9 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
& q- b5 y% {' r1 x. ]9 KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: }6 f3 z) }% uIf today isn’t too late,
- K/ g( j- d8 }" ]3 t' r' g2 kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' j4 ?1 z* T/ G- F5 V3 k1 }# BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 K0 c( C! R4 V! B% n: B0 KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: J" ~# W. b' q( ^3 \( MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  `3 L1 ?9 \) n4 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 b. r4 I+ G( O: \  FEntrust my love within your heart
: u" p  X2 C: V& y" F1 T* LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: Q+ n7 c. g; A. N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 p4 z8 e" [5 e2 G& R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, ?8 A6 D+ V; ?+ d3 ~* X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 G$ b! W* F4 y4 k# N3 E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 u' E% W; t8 }1 @, B" m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& p3 l# ^0 L+ H" O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. W8 e2 w' |9 {6 w( Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( W. P! C, d- B. J1 Z1 I* [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 l3 h: ~$ k, a3 r5 D8 O* n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) t0 v) ]& p3 p$ A  C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" p1 z: v3 v& N! x8 G& F( c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# H6 y9 p4 B- J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 H/ Y3 T% x; U! }<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 E3 p' ^: B7 x$ C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# Z7 n* T5 R% v2 \) {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 C6 o0 J' U5 v7 y7 [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 d2 w1 r, k+ t3 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: W4 p* M) ^- e, S7 Z9 l# e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, Z9 t+ Z. C3 C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, N! G3 g$ x6 W& i( i- D1 s- m) d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: N; b9 B( k. T) F% e4 [' I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: G# v( e0 i- L- |! t% F<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* p8 T  ^1 W  |* q; A: {! Y% W, j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: e, M& z9 ]4 k. r1 Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 F& O8 w' O7 g2 m3 ~9 ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ ~# C% W5 r  r9 A$ u( b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 _6 A: ^5 ?$ H( N3 V9 A$ `; f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 l' c! C. P% |. @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; c4 b& Z/ o! x4 T  P5 N4 I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 z+ ]/ F( d2 {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>