【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
! B3 u* s- ~( X9 b! n/ N. eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" Y/ q/ M+ ~5 d7 d( B! W: gFrom the first moment we met,
( V" Q6 c. ^- A9 x  Q+ xI already loved you with all my heart
6 D) Z3 X' [* G0 c) y% e# _We meet and talk everyday,
/ B- z8 V+ e( [. {- UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  i! c& m; B0 {6 dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' Z- K+ M# d: A, G5 \; p: ~" sIf today isn’t too late,
+ \. L9 f4 @9 f9 J- H% r2 k( zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 b) t! \7 v  @& EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# q  S2 S+ t- Q' H. ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; A# X3 i" D6 l% |7 [* aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" K2 H) z: u: E$ M- qCan I entrust it to you?
( |+ b0 N. V& w. R( NEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# h2 e5 Q1 \, E2 H1 f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' o' b' u3 y2 l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" n" U3 ]( i9 b' ^% K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: K2 |; y  d$ m$ q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* }3 ^0 Z& ?. S7 p: J& N% V* s1 W7 u/ j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% p& {4 k0 ?4 u' L; k. ~( l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 [- K; _6 i! V4 s1 ]' @. J" V6 \0 G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! j4 p) a4 @% b! M3 g( s& @3 E) O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: }$ b2 I. b; N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 t- G8 I$ T4 p. D+ P2 N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; S: u' a& w6 K  B5 i( O' `6 Z; ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; P: J2 @4 `1 n+ A" B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ b5 }8 v2 P+ s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& E& v' }0 X/ _( C& e: s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: w, f- P# o0 N" m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- Q1 h1 S4 S/ M: t' Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 t  }$ V! m5 ^: L$ {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  f0 {4 [+ p' o; L+ X, w  G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ Q, S9 Q* V1 Z  A- S1 N# ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 N6 d& g6 ^  L# `: Q5 c+ e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  o- j6 |. G; W' h4 @& m0 g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* h1 b: ^4 u* ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, k. @0 p& j: m9 v4 N2 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 f, ^2 h6 x# Y% K5 F) K0 h8 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' W6 i$ [7 ?" w* C- @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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5 g7 \( |5 H$ I- T$ R1 O0 _8 ?) S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& F( ]) t$ N) p, ~: _$ w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>