【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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9 [! u2 |7 s# o* H9 s- s$ p! |; Z- V我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- p: C; J, j8 P) [0 uFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ e0 x. Z8 d# V* RWe meet and talk everyday,
! S& D& \  h& h7 h* c- r: ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, w" l0 ]8 x/ ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 Z9 s* |! `" S5 sI would probably know how you feel
  b$ [+ C, x, _; R; q, G( M6 fLove… just the word love
9 Z; Q/ Q3 `: d4 pWhy is it so difficult to express?
% s, J5 q% u1 d, ^% z4 ?' `I want to confess that I love you,
. @/ T8 t! K% v5 \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 }- Y3 s# K$ l  a- o. `3 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  I6 C1 o* U8 p- F* LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ |2 j& A2 H7 d* |- }& }. BBut I never did
9 a( W* K# Y( g3 R' K) X  T1 h2 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* ?7 F! t0 E& x5 x6 W0 dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 a2 T) V1 w4 \8 |! i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 s/ B  W* c% u/ \* d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* v3 @  I; @* w; `" x, n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( _/ B* u# {- ?0 _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& E3 w# T# Q  J4 P3 S# R# s% l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 U: ^. c- ?! E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- v# J2 L% o7 p! \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, m4 F$ y2 q+ y6 x' Q5 ]: S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& E3 x7 t2 C4 z7 ~* G* ?<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ N% P2 P. j$ L* Q) C* j<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 _; V# l5 X  W0 V* K7 ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* U# m! P# V" S- d9 K7 \3 B! K2 E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 e. O  ]' u- P' F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: L, h9 Z0 v3 {1 X* f" X<P>但我不会</P>
6 o' Q# E# X  F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& k  f* |7 V& u1 n. `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 \" W+ ~, F, ?( m; Y) p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: f$ k6 Q* J3 m$ v+ z+ Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: k9 X7 i8 k; C, V. P7 v# h4 ?  i/ A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( [* i2 ~$ p) U9 k; r* `9 ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. Y) S8 y, y% @( r$ [/ {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ I! f5 w3 ~& o' C<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 e* O2 L  x( N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& h5 d; ^# M6 T8 w/ L% E" d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 X" n) t/ Q4 ]3 W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* W9 D# j0 S, m. t6 o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 `+ ]$ W: h" U6 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 j6 D$ k! U1 L* d8 y; I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 W6 R8 N' R# v$ m$ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ K, O& ~: r0 n# @$ U& ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 c7 @5 B" L. t( n4 X: x! x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 G+ A) b/ v5 t( X) }& x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& I1 d" K7 L4 ]: T( T; Y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  E: C, b) K* v0 c, \- `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>