【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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  y* N: V* S& t4 R* X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ k* v7 L! G0 Q1 Y. J$ G0 J, q* o6 XI already loved you with all my heart
" a! R; u7 F- Y1 N0 jWe meet and talk everyday,
  S- \* f9 ?2 f' wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- o% _  W& P- B/ T& B; \( QI want to confess that I love you,
# k2 [* c/ ]) m/ v: ?: HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ I% ^- G$ h" x; W5 L5 M9 x+ TIf today isn’t too late,
1 A7 g. R7 N1 \/ |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 Z$ v2 ~( Z7 N$ P4 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) z9 T6 I% T) ~- b4 I2 dLove… just the word love
8 X, m% c5 \* l0 B! T& fWhy is it so difficult to express?
. \$ g, ?3 P, g  o8 ^+ ZI want to confess that I love you,
/ d9 ~- E: o9 f) P) D) @9 ~. o+ tBut I never did
3 h/ t, e; q4 p/ R! C3 ]; o. tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% }, K) P3 q' G3 X6 m# m- d1 N/ yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ a; s; Z; c' w4 @! QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ o6 U4 t& F* uEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

& M1 z% d# H# j- I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ \) X3 V8 O: k: Z# C, x. k& e! d) _<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 D3 S2 [& \' I, @1 S<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( b& U4 {; ^+ `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% F+ Z7 l) X' A8 |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" S' s6 h) V1 |<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# V: j1 D: A9 p6 q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  J% ?8 P( f$ ~2 ^. O<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" G5 r4 R5 _4 T+ _( l( h* y+ H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ _. U* E8 f# @. n+ J4 n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 R% ?6 i& n8 [, [" Y# {+ i  v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  M, L. J9 H) p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ Q% n% A/ r/ g* r. ]) f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ w' X0 p( B' |, g1 M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! s" g2 M: {1 k, f$ J. A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 M. n- C& l6 o/ L) H<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 s* R3 J$ [' k6 o( H7 P! c<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 p, {  k2 H3 j2 F. n/ L. I& F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 f! M/ f# k2 J/ X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: w: j* e' g1 K4 Y! k7 t# _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* _4 w/ l& o4 B) `+ W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# i3 Q/ w. n* |  n$ h: C, S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 z6 C! T# I' C4 j( t0 t/ D: M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 a+ R* a  T4 `* T& p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ U- s: r3 z2 @0 @( f6 _( r$ s6 |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ i, X% J$ X# i1 g) _# S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 H$ X  Z. b' r) w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( Z5 ^3 L% w) F% W: D% I6 r( D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 }/ l+ D" x! T) u( Y" W<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, J1 G2 M* B8 F" m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ K7 U; {6 k2 S1 k5 l. I/ _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 `% _1 w0 m8 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 v  ^3 Y' P( J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: o! v; E0 d4 C, Y( E. ^9 Y# h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 ?1 a5 f( F# a& @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 f0 q( w. Y5 g5 F8 u' `1 B1 m 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ ]' ^" m5 s& {这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ w, _9 }; \/ K1 D, J<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>