【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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6 J: j1 F4 s4 C7 J我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 j4 o( n+ V* W8 r2 kI already loved you with all my heart
# O9 a7 j% b% W" ]9 E* gWe meet and talk everyday,
; t, |/ V* `( ?0 p6 vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" z! \9 R- x( |# `0 c* V" RI would probably know how you feel
, g- e6 b- e/ n$ ?- |! ALove… just the word love
: b' z# d1 A* P/ Y( D! UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 L( c+ K3 L, ]; hBut I never did
& y$ \6 A2 R  F) FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  E+ C' W: C  nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 V9 e$ @* v" zEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( d4 F8 ~; Y% c4 e) h9 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 h0 L+ M9 U! ~( E* kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% H4 }9 V- G- q3 h5 Z1 Z: mCan I entrust it to you?
* ?3 a& Z& Y  \$ dEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ M9 H  ^8 @) n. e  I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  V/ r% ]2 b9 J% F0 p7 s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 f: k, Y0 y$ w) C2 d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) _- ^) ^1 x6 G4 h" h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" H! L' n) K5 e. C" E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. L/ ~( l" E) j! T, F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& F- B# o' e6 J$ Q! ^3 \* y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 j8 `, n4 c0 e6 _# l0 y+ b$ d* O% K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 m! F! D8 U6 \" X- p- m& s4 W) x6 L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 \  ^' r! E- g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' G/ c: c  a8 v9 N2 K4 E& Q/ J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 v: ?' L+ k1 z* P, ~<P>但我不会</P>
7 R* V4 y9 m( _# S7 Y! [# \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' Y! ?; h9 P, I  k; g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# V* i: q0 ~6 ^1 @( D) Z# {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. H' w& [& i6 Y2 a- i# e1 E1 E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 W4 H/ P% U1 f& X: B5 t" X# |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! n0 \6 a, k; f' C8 i% K: T* b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 o4 p6 Y( ?* X: L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 t  M2 {" i, E$ [3 Y5 O8 k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 |+ ^' n; L0 Z" m6 y% X/ r6 U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& W( e7 t- j* J6 F- M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 @6 b" A, w0 a+ V/ f; O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( ?; A& r; j) p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. C8 c! v# ~! O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& \4 d: W2 x+ r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ v: S+ K7 T: {0 @1 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* c' W; F! C, g7 o! x8 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 o8 a7 a$ R$ P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# I! f4 p3 @$ P- {1 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ f/ t8 D. e* t' [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' g2 q7 ?  E) X2 T( V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 B2 z! ~" z7 H3 z" k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' _2 F0 q7 Q9 a. @' Q  f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>