【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( ~" X  }. m* \. s1 X: ]我另将歌词附在此。
. v* w* g# z) ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( E  j1 J% J# KFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. s. ]$ _1 T3 U( S5 H1 b; u9 mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 U: z1 i3 m& U, M. nI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ P& v% u. a* @+ \8 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 x+ E5 X: K* |5 c* zI want to confess that I love you,
* U+ ^  Y2 f4 i% aBut I never did
4 E) H# Q$ ?, J, H8 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 T$ S* j% N! Q5 e' W: lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ r6 `/ R8 h. G2 N- v$ mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 V4 J& W& Z1 e! n2 b: V9 aIf today isn’t too late,
0 d3 G( o, w6 X& H+ l  U/ KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, r! E) ~0 p2 ^5 g, u+ C" R( |% ~Can I entrust it to you?
, |# q- o5 m8 p% TEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* e! j8 D# P2 J& l8 {. [! e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) [0 Q& k3 C/ `# M& q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 A4 {0 S" G: K7 `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 j: y4 u3 E( x3 b2 Z0 e- }<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 a, G( W& \  p<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: J6 Q$ \- A: L( {# v/ h) ]<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 Y) ]; j, t' h# a! ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) n% h2 b) g8 h/ }' y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  a0 z- b( `# J+ d+ b# N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% W8 M' `0 @2 Y& D- Y" M( U1 |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 u4 y# v* S# N3 z1 k( T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 v& |4 U& ^" Z6 b9 @) V7 a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 T. ^/ |* `9 c" p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# ~, i4 k) T2 [! C6 E0 a<P>但我不会</P>
. Y2 J" w4 y7 k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( g& A3 L: @, W+ j<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' H" D" V, F. r* k% n% e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ n. {0 g% E. _$ s* `2 l6 n/ f5 D# f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  R8 q9 q0 k3 ?8 z/ \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; f" A( A/ a: L1 F3 h1 C4 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- O5 V4 J- e9 C0 P( W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; w& R/ C- H( b: n$ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# Z9 \9 A9 H: q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( s! g- w: M7 ]+ C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% g" U8 m7 U+ t3 Q  U2 R# D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. t- h5 `3 W# l+ T4 v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% w/ A/ s' u; f  t6 |. o& }- ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 G( ?; d1 X( c' o<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: w: F/ U5 d" z5 w3 X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. s9 F3 W; G" i- s) `7 P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; S% ~6 Z1 H+ z3 f2 Q& ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" r) k* m+ o- e: v% y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 v$ b2 m1 ^0 e: w2 p5 a. P& ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) Y* t  U: E  f5 m/ G' d' Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' Y) I% [7 [5 h+ N( Q+ v; C1 u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>