【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
5 K+ D1 n/ u5 ]- xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ ^; h& W& X% V+ P# B0 R$ eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. _* k3 n* W+ ?+ Y0 z7 fFrom the first moment we met,
% n7 \- c: U* Z6 A1 aI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' @5 E3 c* w6 _7 ELove… just the word love
" ^7 v, B7 x/ @; ~7 {Why is it so difficult to express?
. w' m# r0 o/ f+ r! {; o( oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 x' A7 @' J7 qIf today isn’t too late,
" ^" |$ l8 {6 ^* ~3 }3 e- n) @3 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 m& c9 d* u' U5 Z1 Q' V& }& a7 RWhy is it so difficult to express?
* a+ U' p/ W6 w1 v: I; \: fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: s, N3 ]5 r! }0 @% c8 S; N% k; jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" h- A7 ?# z8 n' M  q( |Can I entrust it to you?
+ `0 ]3 }' t% F% H- M# ^Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- A- f9 G& O& s! Q( T7 NEntrust my love within your heart

- \! ^' w# x) z; j5 C. F) G4 F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; L- q: [/ V& Z. J& ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" }' c, a; X3 ~- Z6 u9 {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 m% b  |: ?6 h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 V( \2 I( O% c6 @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# F8 p9 t) v5 T<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, d1 n# V% T( T: w9 V9 [$ A<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 z& R6 O7 n7 ?, |5 W; e# g<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 G; ~' A$ T6 v& a" @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ {' D: V/ p) @* Y5 \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# J& p' K# i! M/ m, F4 I<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ M; s3 K$ n6 p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# e4 B% Q, ~. y# c, K# t5 C9 M  D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% A, ]4 y: R! X% `<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 d( O; K2 s2 }0 w1 |, `& ?( A) b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* z# Q* a# B# u7 e! s: o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 e! {! b+ s0 d1 J! ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 i' u, f9 \& C) B# D4 l# H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 Z3 L% H* Z- Q+ m; y  q: {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 N% v; d: h6 m<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% w5 L5 [- S2 ^6 O% ~. k% W0 i9 r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 X7 x- b5 v/ Q0 v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ M$ d4 R$ h% P" `5 f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ g- ]0 p5 {* ?6 S<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ k% |- z- K, i: Q' Z1 y3 x5 S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( ]- V+ \$ p" S! p" B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) h; j1 |) Q, m' q/ @! u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 A6 P' C/ a( f# O; J- w7 Z3 c2 V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 E1 C4 k1 z0 [9 M+ G# K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! Y1 r1 z7 @/ `7 U% j7 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ s3 O, ^: Y  P  W" [" e  A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 E. g  Y6 e. a2 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- }+ x8 r! z: v* G& {! E2 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) k% Q7 r8 K& W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 Q4 y; J" N: g$ }% }) }! Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ m5 w* b* h. n: h9 r* s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 l" u/ i$ `  f- f4 s8 d0 @$ x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>