【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# F# G% |% n% E( K! p' W; FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% e  A" q/ Q0 {  f. L$ |5 |I would probably know how you feel
3 L7 G" _/ k5 \% W, e7 g# m7 d5 q% MLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ f& l3 p6 P* g) \( R2 c/ K% |I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, A1 F' ~8 W2 ?1 |7 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' L0 C5 Z* l3 X# I2 CCan I entrust it to you?
7 D3 X: T1 E- f/ @1 k! zEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 M! D+ l+ E( f! YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ N: K8 Q+ D8 S/ s( gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 P: R! |, B- ?, i. c- cIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; U# z7 m9 {: e3 NEntrust my love within your heart
) Q* d! G% D& s' I/ oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" L) A  [+ ?% J/ M% A2 {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! j) T& O4 ^! S4 ~/ B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& F0 P4 V; H) c# I  f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 k" N  v! _% k7 S- x1 t- r<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ l. F- l% \6 X% I5 F0 E  B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ x0 s/ O1 F8 e' @. h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 s$ @2 b2 |2 N+ u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 V3 E) i6 g+ K3 d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  x8 F; Z7 Q( ~$ `8 F0 `& r* ]6 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. n% G4 w6 l& j) F' r9 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 K2 Q; I/ s0 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 O  ~, q0 }$ s8 d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: s% S5 H! e. @  B  K  d+ C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( _9 u  y3 i0 Y) K& P) N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) B/ D: B/ h( f! w2 L<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* O0 x0 I2 V6 V<P>But I never did </P>
0 R; Q$ Q. b9 {' @. @' {<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 k4 l5 |  e' N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" k% v+ Z0 h5 V3 N- T+ _: |% `6 v- f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. |* K* o4 _+ g+ B8 R' u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& L2 l, r* a# b6 h8 P$ {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% w4 G* f5 j& O- {+ C3 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! C8 F% k: K1 j" J; u5 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" ^# _8 E7 U- ?6 Y5 a. e7 p1 f 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! o9 G9 T0 w* E+ w; O6 T这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! G) }% J) w* ~( \7 \6 M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' x9 e" h' i) f7 U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  ~$ o5 R! r+ K/ |: r9 V$ ]/ S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>