【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( q& d# x( Q1 B+ K; g& Q- B我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 F3 [) ?5 T" LI would probably know how you feel
( N$ O  v" C. vLove… just the word love
# M. w4 y7 g; y+ x! QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  [8 u" `5 H' `1 {: H. RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 F  s- s9 |2 @& p( u+ qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( K0 w, m0 t' ]' S) ^( V  vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' g5 s9 \$ f6 ^( tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 R  \2 a& R7 l" ABut I never did
* J3 E2 Z0 R. a) a" f  ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' k9 ?6 x# p: m* N: T* d1 ~: WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. ^5 t$ [* s: a, nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 i6 j. G  a; U3 ?& dEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' l* E, F6 d: t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 m. n6 ~8 M5 r; x/ p<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' O0 N  M* D, ~* {& U$ ~0 z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" }7 a9 U% k5 @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 Q  s& G- v& L: c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 H. y" f+ c  n, G4 f5 _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 x* Y; I  C% S8 Q5 s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, r0 a% r* d" O% |5 |3 x. W" _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 K# f( T" F4 T6 Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) b. l. N2 e* v/ L3 u. r) U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ Y8 H. Q. L2 w2 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ c5 _: {, g7 Q5 B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( y! Y4 I4 ?1 i4 u2 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ M* ?) a; r; _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' A* \& U$ P' @- }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ h, ]- Y# ?' ]! t- o5 V/ L; _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 ]& p+ r8 v9 ^4 v8 }, I7 V: |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) c+ K! b' W' u5 I8 G% V4 h; e<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* {7 b8 A2 b) Q3 z: ]3 H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: W% l5 t  {4 a# E$ c, V9 o+ p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% }: {5 \6 X  m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& t( @0 Y+ H0 r: p" M. N! C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. ?0 |  T) K# W! Z! I) s- \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 A, l; g- s6 ?, H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 ?# v$ |; {: y9 W# P  [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 u9 U, W/ b2 E5 g<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  }1 I; S0 H) D1 t0 B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# S: x( T7 J0 X% N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 Y# Q! ?* z4 T$ G0 o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>