【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
: C, _. v$ L. {( }5 ~& b! _/ UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) C5 {* k( o2 ^From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" B0 H+ w% u  Q0 o" cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 C- D" z6 G* e4 j- B0 v0 |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 M/ O# U: m7 O) _7 i. {6 Z) ^I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% u+ e& F1 ?6 C  ?/ D/ s7 K" n& jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 n7 K! {2 |* r& v/ mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# C2 a& b' j# M/ O  b/ v; i1 P5 LEntrust my love within your heart
) t6 R. X& q; ?* p/ v, d# ZLove… just the word love
3 }7 h9 O: U$ P1 I, B1 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 o- n0 I' X( D4 A! G- UI want to confess that I love you,
# j+ `2 e& e5 D& @1 ~9 q+ aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; u5 U8 g7 r  E7 r6 S0 t. T4 jIf today isn’t too late,
- T, B& P4 _4 a" gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 ^) E8 q2 u* C5 CCan I entrust it to you?
# |5 x* T% J$ ]9 ~! U# d: KEntrust my love within your heart
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) Z: \/ O. C7 ^& N) |[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" j6 v/ N9 B' _8 `- ^6 y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 E% f4 f  K: O" v7 [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ L' q6 t+ ~% s+ o* K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 v( G: H0 d6 o2 a; X  u& O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ J; N0 t- K: H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 r0 u) K0 o9 l( r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& X5 Q3 U2 P8 Y2 f9 z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' b; ?) [5 r, \+ G' z! o/ C. z) g6 @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ a4 V( k$ Q& o/ E' w; V& ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- c8 ?! }6 S8 V( I: X! @<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 K% V' W" K  W' ~7 A<P>但我不会</P>
3 p7 B& o& g$ m: M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 }9 N7 h! f# v- T$ j( ?7 s* |+ ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- T( A- S7 P, f: T5 M- i5 \5 K  a<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 U5 x% |/ |4 b, ?- s' l9 z0 P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' z% i! g" S: V6 ~/ W$ I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% j) F- V- j6 w3 l' E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* U/ B2 }! }' m8 v% y7 C6 I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: ]0 \9 v5 ~# |; S9 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* M% r; c6 d% V2 }4 z1 U<P>But I never did </P>
/ `6 s  z1 G. M. K2 L<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! N( h4 @' I9 J6 f" k) h0 e' f: p" V: _% A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. g% b. b# D7 e4 T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ Q4 x1 {$ U9 w. C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 J* V6 \4 w3 a- e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 o  w! ?1 c7 t+ I- L, L  m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 i& |: a- p+ e3 m4 i9 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% ~( \" I) o* S2 t* L1 H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 {; K3 m- @4 u7 f+ B3 Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) {# x) g1 n" R<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ x  x( r+ S3 I7 M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>