【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' f/ z2 S+ }4 {& q' Z" \我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 V! a, a/ ?: U$ Y4 v: A% o% qFrom the first moment we met,
0 x) B# U, d8 }# @I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  G" \  q3 Y7 OI want to confess that I love you,
6 G7 P  p' W9 w# ?, i3 t- \7 c2 mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 j, O# u, I! Q: m& ]2 H4 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, M; z; x' U% O% {" x1 W  H' S8 _Can I entrust it to you?
9 ~. O, y8 G, e( ?1 H+ KEntrust my love within your heart
6 L! _; o* |4 u( C; }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  F+ Y. d" _# {0 }( U/ {But I never did
9 d( Y# K; j7 K  n$ R# S- POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* q# m; U/ ~5 v8 v: s: jCan I entrust it to you?
2 X6 ^& C1 ^7 `* }- |# ]3 AEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
( S9 o' o9 i- p2 r( sEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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, |$ D3 x3 o+ w9 U9 L2 B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ L! {6 K6 T! O, Z3 X<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, ?" j5 g5 c5 H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 D" D; W8 \8 |* ~$ V: Y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 _+ c# F  i  q* Y4 g( v<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 R: o  r' v. G4 v$ ~5 E6 w$ z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 d) W' @1 g2 T  X8 }0 M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 Y, V; B1 l/ r' G( T. [5 s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  y2 i- X- {; X( L$ x+ X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; Y7 A/ m3 e6 x3 U% _* a0 j/ z  l8 N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ u4 ^# s. B) Z$ s2 R8 x* }" W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- F2 ~. G& Y: w7 }. x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 q0 S, J' O# g* @2 W5 [5 W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% y. ]' T  L  C0 G7 e9 [9 T) a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 ]" @5 U+ Q/ [; h' p9 y4 H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, r# f9 a6 c0 k5 C; @2 h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, _) E3 D3 Z7 B1 K: k0 ~<P>But I never did </P>
# j6 t: z8 R. K4 W; j- e<P>但我不会 </P>
" Y( N/ h/ z  U$ Y7 Y! o7 K' N  H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 m! o0 Q. E5 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" H4 M* M/ ?/ O8 T3 \) `3 D3 B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 e0 b! \" W! @5 U0 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 Y% [3 p  j  M1 J0 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! V7 t( U( m3 T! e, `$ g- _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 ^" H9 M$ ?2 q1 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# R3 |% z' v* v+ `, C) S. x) }. g<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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  ~: Q& a3 ~+ J# x9 {这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>