【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( ~) u- {1 N0 e. K7 ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! T6 q* w2 j; }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 k. v$ A8 E% g" d! z# X8 m* Y# ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, G9 Y( ~: N/ V: i, q5 ]8 d8 F& SI would probably know how you feel
  X4 z# j+ x1 {) \/ W3 WLove… just the word love
, a6 A8 ~& K* d, YWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 @2 u7 C0 l+ E! l( B' C* ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% Z6 n% }" W1 t* OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  \5 N( H4 b6 t& v$ E/ j1 yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ `, ~* C% N% UEntrust my love within your heart
$ b- U! P, V4 V* Y% wLove… just the word love
7 e& D; c7 ^" J- T9 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 @5 v; N6 s% M; y: hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# [( q, s- R: U8 K) @+ X0 T% w/ M8 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 \- L9 t1 W* X, y' }; `3 B* HEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( s7 d$ H+ D6 S# }  g2 k' i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 [' Y9 F" K/ _8 L1 p. D& C$ v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ D( f; ]. t8 h8 w+ D<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 U/ `! b3 ~! @* [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 F1 i" J1 W5 R0 N# {2 \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: ^( f2 L5 F* V" U4 A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; X* ^: c! }- ?$ i7 j* ^: `+ i% s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ _4 q8 P" H& y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 M) {4 g7 z% \% N% n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& X( W+ W$ {0 P3 I; e5 P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 b) y1 h$ g2 b) d$ _6 G: J; [) a9 P; `<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
: |2 Z) p5 a& o: S  j6 K9 Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 m( S' F1 E4 f2 X. e6 Q6 _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 Z9 {( Q3 W: u5 Q% m( `0 R) k$ y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- ]( y7 b) G' m* y+ r* Y9 }1 R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ z6 j1 P' U3 R& F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. G3 X2 J, ~, e9 |9 m9 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' c) ~8 j! q& r* r( t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 K1 h$ v5 Q7 S0 B* x  w8 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* A; c, H$ l1 E( l2 i1 s( Q' r8 t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, T  v8 u/ O* p. G7 m8 S2 o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* E* B- O$ W  s# _  I( i% w- }4 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& L5 g6 Y' A9 N1 g6 U2 j: J; z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ P5 U( K6 X# {6 u  o8 `: A3 q* j" l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 M1 _1 e& W8 q1 `/ }: n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" G! d; b/ Y% r8 J9 h) h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& D( w& }5 X0 P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; _9 |# p; z9 @5 f- Y9 J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, X; p2 U" K6 ^7 Q! X; x8 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( C  X2 \$ N% M8 a1 e4 k* i# J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 V6 r4 V/ W) v6 ~; I3 l+ d7 ?2 ~4 r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 y1 [( f* {5 h- ~/ h! g1 _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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9 N* `0 I! e6 A/ Q" u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. O6 B3 |; D. y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>