【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: t% R( C6 s( K3 R% cFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
' u, r  X+ G! d# bWe meet and talk everyday,
( D/ p; ?: p3 s# M+ [% JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 c. ^1 Q' W6 H4 C1 ?I would probably know how you feel
8 B$ W( s4 |$ U' X+ o- E- dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ ~. v% ^! o, C; X% v! \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) S( a9 u/ a+ B* F- @  hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; l! Y. O' w+ M# a5 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, F% a" H% I1 w3 p2 A' j$ ZLove… just the word love
! z) ^2 ~3 L4 hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 E( X. \0 u8 wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 c. T( V- z* Q3 fIf today isn’t too late,
9 [& a& ]& |2 X. [. J9 |, Z& f5 L8 lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' @; C! b  L1 F, B7 |5 @" M+ p0 ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% L8 ~4 N0 O3 ?' e5 h& f5 W<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 r3 |1 V0 ^5 m1 w; A/ M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! }& w* E2 q8 _9 Y! _9 q7 p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. V& \% I) U" f  Z3 n+ k( c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 `/ U4 T) h2 Z- E( \0 q  t  Z; n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  H' @% V. J) t4 r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) e) n! Y4 d9 K<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& Y2 p, W/ q8 w3 _" N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ \8 y" N7 _5 b* B9 W  G# l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' P4 `: W2 [5 M: i5 {- k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* u8 U2 o3 y# {% _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- [* O& |% r5 G7 I& I' g/ \" R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. M! c4 ?4 V! Q$ E8 u0 b, A& i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( c) d1 E4 Z  \: p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 J( i0 w0 T& P/ e( c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& R9 T  D4 L+ o) `3 X% h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ C% m5 h' `9 D! I3 Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( ^2 h* x; L* f6 b1 @0 w. T" O+ H<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# I  [+ L/ F" w/ p4 |3 c* s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ L% C2 ~) T' D2 \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% E2 M! W: z+ S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; k, R! z1 k& |. H5 P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; \: B* I* @# l7 U6 Z4 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ q6 z8 X, h) ]1 v+ K5 u8 m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 R+ {3 d9 ^! _- E5 y$ }: `' R" s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" A9 K: O' j8 O7 [$ ~& Z1 z8 Q+ w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 J8 z9 i" E0 S. `- s" Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 U2 I+ [0 g) w5 o' B- {& |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>