【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# ~  t0 z2 h, F  \4 h& n) AFrom the first moment we met,
6 C  Q% o5 V% m7 R; N2 h9 b$ a- J) uI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  F" B; Z# Q; Q: G3 v9 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 ^" z' s/ p3 c: Q% m. ?* I5 rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 [) k1 ?+ [4 H( oI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- F! @. x; O1 W2 }& k4 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
( @7 g6 B3 P- q( ~! ^9 LI want to confess that I love you,
* n' z% J  O. R/ C. o/ h# d+ ]But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" }0 J% c: J0 Z5 l* a; OCan I entrust it to you?
4 `- [- _! \* `/ q0 e% G5 d  uEntrust my love within your heart
! C& X% N, n4 A; p% ^. ILove… just the word love
1 }. b( B1 x1 W: u6 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 S7 K: }3 D" O( u4 sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: ]9 a. b/ O7 K* v" e9 L3 f' sIf today isn’t too late,
" T. ]' T: ^& _/ D# y( r/ P0 B2 Y" X( QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" T7 E. l: n* }8 \3 U5 u+ @<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 [- t) n0 ?3 b# N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& K$ k! t" B" ^, r4 \, z  y) }<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ a7 y$ l, j1 u% [) d" w" }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- }1 `- f* f4 v& E4 v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; c9 G# z3 H: g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% K* e4 N' V) F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 ]' M' C4 A4 W. G2 j* c. J. k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 P* @8 k1 B" D* f# ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& [$ w, O( v# U2 h# z: E. y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 V, \  G# U+ B/ c( j/ m% M& f, X& g: c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: ?; m2 J! [. K9 l7 V0 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  E( e. A8 i- ^, A8 z5 u9 W6 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 R6 S2 ~( e8 j% o0 n5 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% S2 `8 {: Z! {3 x. Z) F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' Y! p0 G. G3 v! A' [0 Z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! n) b* k& y: K' }# e' s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 ^4 N& a3 o* i2 r2 _( h6 ]6 ^" o5 {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ p, m( j1 B5 r! D, H: m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ T. E  i0 z, _8 I( {6 M6 G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 K: p+ G6 ]/ Q1 G5 Z) N9 F& _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; ^6 ]. v9 k/ |5 p& U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 C: Y$ O  b) i# J" I% |: Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- S0 ]4 v5 \6 w+ W' ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# e/ P. D" C0 E, I. g7 p7 L: g' W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, @' `. z: x! L& H4 K. l4 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ O7 s: ~- J7 g9 d7 c$ n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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6 v. V; A& l$ C& L5 {$ Y6 t  n这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 I+ i. P; S9 z7 o  y8 p' F; U1 ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 H& u4 H; Q9 d3 v+ R<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>