【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 x  g& B  i5 V: @7 n' q我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: _# h3 h- R  e( E: y* U% ]3 [That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, F0 Q" k! \( o3 dFrom the first moment we met,
# \# ]9 I' `+ k6 r9 F8 Z- l" P/ f1 C( ~I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# Z0 u7 z' X- M9 A6 X9 `: D- k1 lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 V% X$ K2 _5 `- ^I would probably know how you feel
5 g( ^8 w6 N; |! i: V  Q% e" `1 fLove… just the word love
1 y+ k, w% j- I+ f- WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 x8 A! c/ l' M  A1 A; JBut I never did
- i0 s7 X( R) Z7 SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* Y' ]* J* ^# q8 ]/ uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) s; ~: o" O+ U/ zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; L$ m9 ^* E/ P6 h" JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ f3 x( V& s$ d2 W% MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) t, A5 f9 \: p, v  f* L+ T' ACan I entrust it to you?
; r: ^0 n! H" }# e7 O4 g7 T: |( HEntrust my love within your heart
0 T8 T, w" l. H9 B4 _Can I entrust it to you?
& ~5 h9 `2 n3 \1 ], ~Entrust my love within your heart

8 L/ f/ ~( A. O  s/ l* l[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 b# H0 ~" A" O' z( H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 d8 {) L- e) `  X4 k6 g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. @4 S- C+ q# S' N  s- q5 R<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 U; A, O) `, c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* c9 n$ c- `% _& p5 p# x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. V$ t1 K! C2 U  A+ d8 f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* g; x! v  t$ A, v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% ]% M; O3 |! M, S+ N9 G" b1 p+ f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- x" e5 `( h5 V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ b* f5 `- H9 q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# Y0 h: T5 s; j5 Z; v- [8 q8 n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 @& u8 q, |% k6 N, f! K4 Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 z# Q/ W1 K! b/ W<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 n# N* e" g5 s- n2 S2 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ r3 a8 ?& Y; p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ p& t8 b* d2 U2 U( g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) ?' U0 A2 z; S: G) j7 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 I8 l( X0 X& l$ D% q- @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; L1 v- {# z# d$ l8 B6 v0 P* e$ s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 u* y" B" s' I7 F% P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ ]& _/ q0 W3 a) o! @/ H1 B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 ?0 g  a6 i* w8 `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* x4 _' N( m3 a) g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 d3 G0 J4 _+ a5 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 W, ~8 Y, W+ }) k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 Q) ^4 S; s. c! t6 ^0 S+ U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' ]2 K2 u! c8 P' G! E) M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. ?2 w6 G$ M/ m" @: o- A3 D2 o& A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ R& ^5 ?+ k( I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 J' Q6 Y( M  S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>