【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 Z$ m( r  o9 bWe meet and talk everyday,
: v6 f( j7 ^8 ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( L: z$ r  L1 |3 O. h0 F2 v, ?I want to confess that I love you,
! ?1 t$ T. T. c6 A. A, j3 bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ x3 U+ N8 y6 R' h2 X9 YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ b1 o) ^7 m3 R& p5 O* n3 G. V  _( kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% _8 n' @9 K* q4 a; s/ ]: oEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  X' ?; f7 a# [5 k; xI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 M+ P; n" D' t( ~  z0 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 L9 T+ w4 \! \3 j  i( \If today isn’t too late,
3 U' ]( w& d( m$ |5 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" _' d' J) M; s& ]3 O" ?1 IEntrust my love within your heart
/ z( r/ \" M+ \) \4 F4 fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 W2 |# K: \# x2 ?5 a" \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! r5 W1 ~- ]5 L+ y  l% E+ z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 r4 s$ e0 h+ _% `$ q' \4 J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 X# D5 r/ r% ]$ t" Z8 r7 r' C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, ^) _1 L3 T- Y$ Z& T<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 |& X+ U! \) X; F7 ]; s8 d$ H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 J) Q6 [: z( I) Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% H# x" M" E( Y' a) X. o) T6 o<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- m: H$ Z/ P- ^  ~8 C; C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) k( Y5 n: Y$ ?. A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- i/ r% c5 \+ z% Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 j. M3 K9 d6 S& B9 ~7 O7 n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) T# q* y1 i8 g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! `) a: z& U* `9 j2 J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' ]0 Q' A2 W& G5 n- ^/ P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 B) A& P; ~6 ]( H7 p+ Y6 q/ F1 p& t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 \& N2 v% [) X" z3 U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ J( u9 [/ @. B: Y" g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! D8 a9 B( G7 `8 f( M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 N; j8 [$ L2 w. s- Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 {9 c9 O% j5 G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: K; E/ z9 H! G1 Q8 }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 s# ~( |  x4 m3 s2 a) b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 }% O$ h% [+ Y6 B<P>But I never did </P>
6 X2 J. k) _7 V( t<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# h! y: M- D% z) p) i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. n2 z4 }# [7 N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 R) R( g0 N* O" \; E4 ]9 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 B5 `9 _% r6 ^+ W& f4 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. E3 D7 W8 i0 z0 K5 i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 h' N9 {& c5 e6 x  N& k$ F8 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( N2 b  F0 l& |, G# F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 R3 g; l! `7 `' q! C- d& {+ X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 Y3 A4 B- D8 k9 q& ^0 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 R# T$ y$ e+ V. W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 s" p: _  u  [$ g# Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. c# T7 M0 H, T/ y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>