【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
3 S- [& Q3 s' W* L: ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% K1 h: o0 |% d2 o; @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 E  r; A- B0 A5 G7 p( [I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  e- i3 S3 a# m5 G. aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 P' ]. z& Q" ?2 R* `5 j: |* c0 g4 kI would probably know how you feel
3 Z8 @- M1 B: l9 h" y* ]: ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, Z7 a  o& c( Z8 m* p& j1 eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 ?2 Z: i, E0 o- xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 f9 U# c+ C. `7 H' uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. G- Z1 l+ Q, ^, j/ k) z! a3 NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 N! Y2 q' `$ ]8 B5 uEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; b7 Z4 B9 |" }( [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" j9 B% @. G' a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 W! e! ?+ m1 w* e+ e" t3 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 |; h, g* b5 t/ q; N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 L( z0 Q, b) J<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 }9 v& \  |: ~, q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  o# X6 d6 x! o. T+ e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 f4 J7 J7 ~- Z9 a! [! O2 J, P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# x6 o) H" M+ t+ `<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( g) c# W  L% J. v1 \' k0 o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' p+ z! h; h' g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 Q* L( O4 {8 m5 y0 e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ a/ l/ G5 H2 K2 a8 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% W  c  Q3 W( K0 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, G- q% j6 y8 J3 k' \3 B: A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 v8 L% k5 m7 y8 c$ |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. {) a* w" V: L7 _# D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& _2 O4 Z* u- ^) R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; {" }* I$ g( F" Z. h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 f* b* _/ n: |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  b' M* Z5 w! y& M<P>But I never did </P>
' o0 W9 }3 H5 M2 m( O+ c1 i<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 S- p6 V/ c% P2 i& }+ U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* F0 p/ o2 D# E8 O" }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 y0 [9 i9 {8 Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* b( h4 B! [9 c8 q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% r/ T, A5 x7 }" s( A! q9 D$ i8 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" t2 ]1 A% x# X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( ^! U8 ?# E% p* }" ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- l2 A9 y/ |: \. J9 f4 B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ U0 N# ^" Z' J2 z3 m8 V7 o: v2 {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  C, X9 \/ n- e" o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>