【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 |, w% L$ z: e  Q# t# Q9 l我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 g4 b: |$ f4 P( a2 Z* eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 ]: y6 M( G; S8 F% c3 pFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 z" n( [5 ~8 b/ zWe meet and talk everyday,
* ~- Q8 u! h' L) [9 `& `* t' _' P. e  lBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! g0 \" R/ L# M+ {0 ZLove… just the word love
4 U! I) Y1 c( t5 e% KWhy is it so difficult to express?
. U( i# q, [: \* g( X! @$ u) ]! AI want to confess that I love you,
: c" |- A+ E5 S+ G, QBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) p0 i. e% e9 b9 Y7 G9 i4 A0 L3 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( {" E- f* s1 E3 I+ z  l! AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 ^1 j- g+ D" T' {- ]Love… just the word love
( z3 D2 j- \% |5 CWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; H5 O3 `5 I9 @) kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% R, z" ^+ K) \% k6 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* Z% [7 E- R8 U) c2 _" ?Can I entrust it to you?
( i6 C- U$ j1 OEntrust my love within your heart
1 L4 A  X1 Z9 S) LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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# ^5 ~+ W5 Y( c, u& I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ E1 T; y) h3 g( k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. E  {, A9 {- b1 N2 w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) P  y9 Y& q! q, Q+ p* O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 g8 e* |# f) C' H+ R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 q: w9 x. @$ M6 b0 f3 @- ~$ {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 `/ s* E( x7 t4 h: u/ @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 S( g- R, [; x6 H, g/ h6 @2 ^<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  C) c+ @; a6 P8 x& q7 a, {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, y* N7 |! b! H# b# ~+ ?- `# T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. |/ z5 q3 A; q4 ?( i: I5 d# i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 F6 i! ]- R6 Q4 X8 l. ?+ w9 ~<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ k1 ^% m" a7 ]/ w/ C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% W3 n- B4 Q/ p7 L( S6 s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 m* ~# ?- S* O6 Y. r8 D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) I9 ]) A' Z% x# G# C' _" |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) T- E* v& k/ d" Z* b<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 u* m, H1 Y0 }3 K' E<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) C$ T/ W+ W* C- f8 M<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! Z. V5 m% o6 M; u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 n, R( s9 ~$ k. e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ a  W: F  @1 }' {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# p8 e8 }. n1 U" _& v- e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( e* k9 E( W, A! _5 U+ x4 V3 N- i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 l, N. }+ U& ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 A# n/ p$ f0 J* q% G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ H5 }: g' e: \& d<P>但我不会 </P>
: @5 T3 [5 x$ `4 ^9 d" A<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 t, _* |+ x# I* `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* g' M, W7 J8 D; m  ~9 G% i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& {1 h2 [( v# o1 s8 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 ~/ `6 l/ @3 W! O. Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. v. f3 n1 _  T. s! X1 b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& u! A, }- \3 I  S% r# q' z$ p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>