【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 U# k1 C6 }1 p5 r& E我另将歌词附在此。
8 q. c8 L0 b& S( C. t% Q0 _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( o# @  h  _/ }% T: F$ I( u, LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; C+ m; v, j4 K9 R  ~! D, E8 i6 s, mI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. K& u0 X: F0 _9 {. a" h' lWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ E- [$ T1 s" ]3 u8 E- FI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) {; ]1 L; O4 x4 S6 ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 r# ]# J( M5 j/ P! iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" ^) z& Z& |9 b0 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ V1 @& B  m0 eEntrust my love within your heart
( e. Q9 C( t/ s1 p" X! Z- y' gLove… just the word love
9 X) \' P/ d4 v% b* _0 {( DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ \$ e$ A. A- h4 P5 F" UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 ]3 g; N1 ~" }. z1 m+ x! {' @1 Y' Z* hEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 S7 P0 Q* R$ N/ T  Q0 R% y# g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* x8 n, @3 l: H: Z8 ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# R5 Z" V" }$ L# ?7 G, f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# h9 ?8 ~  J& W2 l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% w, b: f5 t& f) J; ^- m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 d1 B0 f$ Y3 y/ i4 h0 y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ X9 p- z1 A" d6 q" v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 r2 D; g) y! U% P. }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" M. S4 d! T+ P' A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! [0 u& F8 n& z! a6 j/ f/ C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, P* e" o! f: e2 ?( \" F7 K$ U<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, w8 B) r  Q0 U3 p<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 L+ b7 S; ]8 v  C/ |: N  R( ^5 u<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 ]8 w9 x3 Y9 T, g* ]2 {2 n5 b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) s+ |2 Z3 v& o6 }( R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 M5 P; R' ~# U% H( M<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% {: |2 I. y$ ?# A6 O& i( z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 v7 F; z6 O/ D7 a6 N" Y! [& s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 G) P- N$ V0 [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 T. B# y& g8 ]  n6 g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: Q" p* R. U# h# J. k$ ^3 R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& U  R% k" B+ ~: V2 k8 G4 d7 H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 F4 ]2 v. f2 C+ i( Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- x7 W1 d: n5 H2 \0 v  z/ E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ Q% S! W; s5 d# V" X: x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 }5 x& \. T  y5 j: ~  B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& S# m8 y: S2 s- t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 |3 N: h! `" Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! C7 c# T4 b$ }" n- ^1 l- O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: D+ V$ Z8 |% t7 ]3 j+ [  [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 F. ~: ^, X- Z" L7 w7 v9 U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- i' F2 u# P4 }' _& |8 Q, D( S这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' l8 ?2 _' ]* ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>