【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 v2 B% f" V5 Z6 }I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ R, t7 X8 O# x' cI would probably know how you feel
4 v+ Z: H3 b! \& Y8 A& `: C( o# L' }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- ?0 I% u" F% I4 T( f2 Y0 t- H+ O8 H' FIf today isn’t too late,
  O8 I2 w' R8 o/ E" |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  ?* {5 s/ p; wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' H# ^! j/ L6 LEntrust my love within your heart
4 M1 h+ G' z! K5 ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" ?2 @( P3 a! {7 A8 I7 t3 pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ \, z8 R% B/ m0 v' I& l$ j& bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# _. J$ p. t; sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 d' }/ Q0 \# h) e" G0 x0 ^Can I entrust it to you?
" F* W: u- c8 A* m% N0 oEntrust my love within your heart
6 U: W/ _# C8 E8 o1 L: [' d# _, [) CCan I entrust it to you?
3 }) v) ^& S9 t0 V' v' }1 E, pEntrust my love within your heart

9 l4 |! W: t, R4 ]- v, I4 {& J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 ?* @  u  ~+ i6 u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ I  H( n* K1 i8 k: s" i) S1 R8 M0 A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 _, n# _# v3 Z2 Q: \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ q- _/ [1 ]& |, \. E9 t* ^; h2 G" J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" q  X' \. y0 n, j; U) W. t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, h) d2 X' ]: X5 a5 T; T* V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* s# V8 v( w' |/ w5 v! l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% j& R( o! c( \. t5 m/ u5 C( E& s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. ]& W) t& `) ^  n% p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' }+ l8 r( Y7 l- R$ R, b7 z<P>但我不会</P>
3 M' N7 Q& ?' B" r! d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 z/ O2 A- M* E, N9 K7 Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. p/ w7 S( e' {  N; J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# M5 x* U5 o/ j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 U; K- `: z' D1 n5 l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ L+ \7 k" b3 N- e' ^5 ^$ h# \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# H5 K3 u* A2 r1 M8 R0 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! `( w5 D8 a$ a6 J/ g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 i4 R3 F: i4 ^# g: ^% l$ _<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 U2 X# S( @8 _; u) F. o; ^9 V. ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 U; @, @, ~" \  `8 D; L<P>But I never did </P>
5 y" U* ]; W' i8 B( y<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& h% n: @. p/ B9 U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 x1 N0 \; B% q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 Q2 _0 |/ z. B8 `2 @( a( C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- @1 o& @' {* ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 U6 K4 Q9 v( M$ ^, t; b$ V4 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 K. I" R! I1 m" ^4 F8 t4 k. B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 q4 h* u0 y" {5 z% N( p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( B/ c7 ]8 X1 U) v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% L! U* i/ t5 i( q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; _* i: N! D6 B) ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 T, M) s: |# l4 f# S; z' i 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# d$ D1 Y# Y4 u5 T4 g4 P  c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>