【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
/ L( k* w# t4 ~8 mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, u3 a2 X& B0 u% O$ C1 r% bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
' I+ ?6 H' p4 \; L5 k, KI already loved you with all my heart
6 h! _$ B- X, nWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ p1 ]* U- a/ I  y: y7 m" N7 K* qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% `5 z; m/ [# Q0 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 x( \4 d3 `+ I, bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& m6 U1 P6 c1 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. Y& H1 `. U6 C% ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ V7 t7 [! {% _* M; [$ R: x3 Q! R' cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ f; \5 x; O/ x/ C- z9 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. R/ V0 j; _0 `2 `Can I entrust it to you?
0 S; c5 E5 ]: k/ t% H$ w  jEntrust my love within your heart
# S$ O. i$ [. C  l* iCan I entrust it to you?
6 O0 o7 D) c$ Y1 k. ~7 XEntrust my love within your heart

! a/ c# o  f/ F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 w; S) G: ?. G5 w6 f2 \5 N5 T: ^% G
0 V2 s" h( @- H' ]* r" q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) `' T% P7 N2 R6 c<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( [, Z$ B/ E6 t8 S. {- }. [; G' ]4 {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' i5 x6 j7 ]  a" ?$ b, c7 F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, M5 K. o9 o% X9 Q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 U1 u4 t/ h' x- H# Q4 k" X<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 C0 x5 ], e9 t2 H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 A7 x3 D1 p0 g, G, E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ T& b  f; z( G8 J# i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( l7 [4 o/ x- V) f1 C  j! c* @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# s4 V2 }( j8 T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; t- i* Q- C2 {& q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& I' N) o4 i( B1 p$ ?( \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 P( G6 J. h% ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ H7 Y2 q# E; X/ R9 C" M8 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ _! T( I# B/ z* t& }; R- e9 n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% P7 l" c- p2 ^" O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 ?2 ]8 o7 O0 l6 O3 j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 C- ^/ ~- d1 N6 X9 v5 B, u<P>But I never did </P>
% o& T9 N( B3 A1 h<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" {) I8 R" R. C: s7 E9 u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 T& e5 k) D, I6 o6 p/ u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  r7 r' O! J( r" ?* e0 V3 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' ~5 [) ?0 [# P$ I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% H% q6 b* P1 c' c; J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% G" s+ i$ d9 K2 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' k; {- `! ^; n" S) K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* g6 Y2 t0 g/ ]/ V$ ]7 }( x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' H2 V! g* T& c- v7 p1 E  z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 V' p, c( _0 b, l' L; L! @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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" Z4 y6 R- ~2 B% n! Y<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>