【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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" |, P3 p, R4 m. D; \我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 z' ~& z5 t& ~5 rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ I+ e  t/ {" ^: gFrom the first moment we met,
8 I) u' Z- f  H5 V3 }. U. XI already loved you with all my heart
0 M' P% ~+ X* W( ~- `* vWe meet and talk everyday,
" _0 X9 h1 q( t$ U7 V6 K( fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ S% Z0 Y1 ?; b: S0 M# gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: H5 [5 Z3 l& XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 l  o: x: _. a1 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' n) B" ^8 h4 D( Z# ^5 Q$ s3 Y7 UIf today isn’t too late,
9 Y+ i# u% X( |6 |9 r5 Y+ {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  V% w2 N1 w, h, }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% |, F4 H5 B) B5 g1 \( JCan I entrust it to you?
! Y- {3 Q! \/ A% ~Entrust my love within your heart
) v0 F; @. @5 i8 B: xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! K5 T4 m7 x, gBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# w. a2 o* n0 e0 ?( g0 p: yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' I* {! g2 {2 B. J/ g; uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 H: e; o7 I; P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; ]1 U# j7 e4 I7 L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! l* }/ [4 q5 x  Y3 ?/ q9 U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 W8 n( P0 K4 s4 ]4 i" {+ W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 Z  v+ N- E) N# j9 ~) P6 _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: P: \! z! A, A: r' D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 A" s9 c, X6 P9 G1 Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 _0 x4 z1 i  L# n$ `/ y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& w, ?0 f4 O# _8 U6 q! B<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! k7 Q5 E2 Q$ v/ N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) B0 Q& ~$ V7 b: c$ I<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: i& X' a) k( ], w' _* i$ `- g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 e; C9 ^! l2 T8 [& Z5 h1 _8 y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 `  N5 y  ~8 I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; U' U1 X% E, Z9 `& J5 _9 W% S4 R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 I- h# b  P0 T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& B8 c, h9 t& T, I) Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ r  t: @' f) U$ d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 l! g3 x" S; l& U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* Q9 E* g! ^% L1 I7 {' `; E+ C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 S# Y, U6 l9 b' `" e) q# t# b<P>But I never did </P>
, _% T7 S6 N. X' B/ u' l) F<P>但我不会 </P>
$ Y* c% e8 E# p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 m$ R1 h" @5 Y/ e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& T  }5 g) H0 f4 k9 e2 ~7 O* ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 {3 s, h/ V6 h* O4 s+ ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) X6 ?, l8 _( c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% h8 `7 ?$ \" \* Q4 v% E9 L0 }- Q0 S. m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* b5 f6 t0 K. \7 t- L1 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. ~4 ]. e% Z' k) M3 t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 k: I. D4 V: [  P; Y% J  ^! M& k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 d. E/ M. Q$ {; C7 A0 |6 ]3 z- b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ p# S" X+ f+ Y3 l3 V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' w; G) C, Y7 \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>