【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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1 r, w: D7 i0 v! r! y% m& ^我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( j$ {$ a3 `( m! L; }: ~From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 G$ u! J* g8 Q9 P( q; t; _+ e; i! TWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& I' \/ H0 L" W6 f" Z  M$ ~7 `  RI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 p  I" R. `% d5 g( ~Why is it so difficult to express?
) x2 I7 T4 z! {! A1 e, N/ ZI want to confess that I love you,
. D: M4 t( W: D# `7 ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 Q9 c; T# g) A7 I, C1 x& IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 ]4 R+ [9 N7 N# S1 I* U7 J) wEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, i4 c3 C5 {. Y% s- JI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" J/ {0 L9 Q* \7 \  r' T; }" W2 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ e, K, l& \% e$ o! EEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' q# r# J* T8 O0 o<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ S# L3 V. V* g" [4 j- p/ Z9 P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 d" t9 O  e" t) a; P<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: G: M6 R0 k  q: f  g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* e4 e1 c5 C  X- }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ A. K- u' Q( R8 H8 L" Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& n1 s# ~, E0 E4 p5 B2 ~0 R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  v1 q4 v2 d0 z) J8 E# o<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" J( W$ x+ H/ D5 @1 @. P1 Q: r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* Q0 A. d/ B6 j  i2 z/ i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' D6 M, k# h) a2 C# E( N4 q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 \7 z1 f2 r1 C<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  p+ h, X0 q. j1 ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) E+ O, k7 c5 [: B4 e6 v<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 t( \# u1 R9 Z5 B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ K. l$ a1 h+ v4 h! |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 y' z0 J: k6 C4 V6 R; C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 G( `/ @0 F3 n, P& M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. t( h5 v% [: I# e" M& u$ c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 N( F( a% d6 D$ y$ T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ g. [1 X$ T# u+ d9 _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 L& \' N: V8 I4 W8 Q$ w/ g<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 X4 i( j8 ^2 j2 F/ ?( {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; i0 r0 V$ u- a/ T1 g* U( D, i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 e9 c  {( F3 W) O4 p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- C# {9 I" p( S+ D8 u2 h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 H2 O8 i9 `* c/ v  d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. k: G5 f: W# L; d. Z5 \<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ p# S4 @: W! ^7 L' @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 M: j8 c/ u* H2 I# b, F! _6 M% m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. U0 U. i8 P* f2 s. M1 ^* }7 K! j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; k% V5 V$ b- ]9 x7 b7 S9 Z" T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 E# m2 Q. ^+ K3 D这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>