【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
# s/ L: F; ], o& S( L5 e9 QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- t8 U' o* p5 @From the first moment we met,
3 {4 @1 j: i: [, E8 J( E! T. FI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 ^3 v+ ?$ k2 w5 C, |+ y0 gI would probably know how you feel
: d- c! F/ |  jLove… just the word love
. `% ~: [1 G4 f2 G9 ~; wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% \$ t$ p: \* Z. {! \6 r: _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ G' r; o2 Z( J: Y9 y5 Q& ]5 kIf today isn’t too late,
- C% n, Q( d8 o1 X! _" iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: ~1 b* ~% }1 Y- gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 L6 n# N1 d" l$ u- @0 A8 d/ TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- H# l/ ^% @6 ?: i6 o* m. h0 }% vLove… just the word love
) S% F5 B" Z9 T0 {" p  `; FWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 J" k( Y$ C! H0 MI want to confess that I love you,
% ^, w/ _; @+ O/ f2 `1 OBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 N" t' u. O) nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 J) `- n0 w, n7 N$ G<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& Y+ T: N+ ^- B( h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, x' a. P" u* i+ F4 I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, b( f3 n# v/ Q5 t4 K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) j6 \( f4 H+ a' c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, N0 d9 L& Q" P/ [  H/ a& W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 G0 {8 H$ J1 [% o3 w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& W0 W" T+ k0 D! I) e8 C5 S- q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 Y* k1 F2 F/ P& C$ m. X" l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" z5 I8 ^8 y/ Y; [- I- G( j4 Y* Q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 \" J8 S4 M/ T0 g+ E" P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% p( d( p% `4 I% M4 w9 ]<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 D$ F: B4 I) B6 R<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 g- Y% _7 Y, D4 _) L8 X2 b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. g$ ]/ P6 X( b! V9 \- V<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; L8 `5 u$ Z! F, p" C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; x2 p" N4 f4 M+ Y+ ?9 f( c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# h* f+ x9 M+ S0 z( p/ _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# K# Y$ I6 x3 h8 n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ r1 Y$ i# _3 \7 f3 q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- ^: t  `  L+ X5 b- O8 Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ {/ ?' Q' j1 x2 M: H9 p5 s0 N7 q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# N" l* R  J$ T& c/ |/ o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, T+ B' S+ O/ o$ I* |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- }- E2 |  s8 [: J+ P1 M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 \6 m' i( Q! U/ n/ g2 T; ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ D. g3 u% L! F9 J3 \- A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% p2 k; `5 O7 ^# G) F9 C; |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- ]9 v1 d8 @% }& N" E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 B, }8 k. ^4 ~6 j8 ~3 v- m. |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 `& U: @6 K' X5 K5 U# k, ]0 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 C! N4 Z0 l. A<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* k# d1 F! U7 j4 C6 O& a$ H* ^$ [+ o  u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>