【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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4 q0 _! I/ l. [8 M我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- k, Y1 F, ^9 x7 ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: `/ p6 ]3 Z9 I, T% j) ?I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: Q$ V2 f1 l/ F- P* v7 ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 _& n; s% P  e  mI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  ]# w$ G; S' X1 G! z' c1 f+ V7 r8 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 d- \4 S' n0 k5 E/ o' _  j$ eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ v% k' D: b. A! `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 m4 M) A* B/ a7 [. h2 fEntrust my love within your heart
8 Z& v8 F# a' c& R. z1 s5 fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' c$ R) O3 L' h' ~7 f7 U! ?; A+ ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 L- O0 W; r# N" a4 Y: OCan I entrust it to you?
; ?1 n1 t/ _; E1 u# H( _3 x! hEntrust my love within your heart
! H' u$ m+ {! XCan I entrust it to you?
6 s& r; S0 d5 R; r5 ~$ p# Q1 S& E: OEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 H( l2 p- s: U, q  ?<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 O* H1 d; R5 p7 i1 [6 x! p5 B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  U$ H2 q# |: Q7 h; a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' X% U) Y2 X: A* ?: _<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 N, T+ e3 ^! E& k# ]8 M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  g$ E0 x$ E8 Q) X. A<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# d* Y- Z+ D2 Z/ _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. Q5 v/ u4 K0 d! z1 N. v2 y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* q# {* `+ X* w<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& z& ]+ P7 V3 j7 m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; w" U7 |0 `6 A2 j4 T( z& A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& v9 x0 s* B+ s7 m$ |; H0 @9 o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- K# x" f9 w6 Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- U5 r" H2 N9 e9 N* [  D- _3 |<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" c9 {( c: ^  j/ g1 r* V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 ^5 p% N" ?5 |3 |% f# b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' m& a- [+ e( ?% K7 t; ~9 y" q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ H- \( o* {" p) d! s8 ?( g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 x" E* h( F) {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- `4 Z1 _* ]- V  \, J) _( H9 a) f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 c1 A3 t1 ~' e; @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 A; Z  h) e. ^7 |' B' P6 @- ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ E, M  V  ^  l) X6 s4 z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, |5 n0 e+ o( L( U<P>But I never did </P>
: G; g' ?; V7 G<P>但我不会 </P>
4 o+ W0 `5 }; J4 `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 x$ X1 B; |) }2 J4 }$ ~- D" H* m0 i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) T- E: q; L% j: c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  c, Y) R+ q6 c- L& u# @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. G' `: j. D1 V: d& O+ ^, ~9 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! `0 b: U' ~4 a/ H8 l9 z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, e5 A1 n3 g3 l2 |9 P& l: b3 {3 P这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 b1 t( r* l6 K9 R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 ~* B* n( N1 Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" }) h) E; H# `" ^* D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>