【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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, @4 e- G. [1 \, N9 h我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, [" ^% h( ~4 D, x. N; hI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 M1 I, V6 S% D, S* b% SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ G4 ]8 n: G# j5 j* lI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 \* r3 t- T1 r- b/ UWhy is it so difficult to express?
. E' G+ j! t% D4 c9 }$ H- II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ e5 b1 a8 ?+ jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 X$ J' g( s  {2 UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  S( i2 M8 W: i; M! Y. EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! K; [) k+ m! w% P5 Z1 J/ _$ uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, g0 Q( |- n, ~: p0 V8 WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 G. H( I' O8 m: e7 VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ }$ x! f$ `0 w1 f% eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 p& P+ d: w9 x, @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& ]& a4 F3 l; P* l  F+ j. C# c, O6 ]% k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: J$ n9 A7 h6 R. G: X. X) l0 r- d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' M/ Z  B+ w8 G- j3 b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; \9 u, p2 k  I2 K9 q0 h, |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) R9 Y5 H, ^' Y3 W, Y. g; c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 l' Y8 D3 b) ^" |* c<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! l7 B$ R  W7 b. |8 w2 C( D<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# T# @6 P# H6 @% N6 u" H<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; D: C+ {" ], I; [  m, ~<P>但我不会</P>
& F! j% z0 o6 }: v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ T1 A) J1 O- [- e; z- |' v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* b$ x- S- m& g& U7 C  Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 X* h' W% x* S9 A4 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* O; V3 I5 Y! x" W$ N( D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 {) m" W& O+ s3 e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 f9 K6 o  _' l<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 l1 m3 F4 u% g8 B( W/ Q7 ~0 N# e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' E9 i9 g% r: F! c1 r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) L! r; c& g+ Q* H) W% x" R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& ?9 P( w) h4 f0 F: ?$ S5 U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, ?! W$ _) V6 |4 x& U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ u! J. E: x9 B) E( F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" l6 q! O' x1 d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( Z- c2 e; h. R7 S; L9 ^! A# _. I. W4 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 E# d! J  S/ l, _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 k- Q  I4 a/ M' R5 ^  j4 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 R0 d+ y/ W0 m8 b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  A5 ~6 b; y8 T0 J" W( R: x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 U5 \: y4 Z  |<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 l+ @) ~5 I( M6 `, j 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
) i" C7 r6 B. }& B% J
9 k4 t( R2 t) V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 d% W/ x0 f5 A* ]2 [3 V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 v/ q6 }  e' {, e2 y7 b8 |( M- G<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>