【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 e1 v7 F' V" s- u" v& `我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ x( U4 k$ m) N8 e% h) Q! lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 S4 l, W: s4 k9 `I already loved you with all my heart
0 A' m  d9 K# b: @1 V: DWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! o% t7 p: Y8 n( SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& v% X1 t8 p1 C6 w1 A% n& ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 r" K: t  C- OI want to confess that I love you,
# [! z" _! ~% Q0 i$ j7 }But I never did
1 c8 v2 }# m0 F+ d7 uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# }( h0 k% K2 R2 a6 XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- r' K# _  s" ^3 R7 m5 ]  k- NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' q3 X+ s" T1 K6 Z% `% UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  W- d+ M. v0 d% F7 OIf today isn’t too late,
" Y6 z. {2 D9 ^% }2 J" i+ _! ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( K: z* H" Q% {/ ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

+ E* `$ u, }2 V[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 I0 s, P; g! `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" p$ p  b7 }+ U8 @( ~+ Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! j9 |1 Z# }1 |. X% f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# Y7 ]0 r2 R1 D: n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; g, ?0 [. V5 ^8 d+ p. o<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 c$ P% [' [; {5 j" B' ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% m. R8 l  n& J2 u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" N* r3 p( u: R6 w% L& |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% @$ C. V( z  J( w! u' e9 }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ E* {5 x7 @9 x$ d7 a% z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 B4 r' n0 c. m- I. I( T4 H: B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 c8 \$ a0 G& J5 T+ T, f<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 X/ n0 i6 s3 f4 z! a6 u- b/ v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# _% b% r: o0 B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ {! w( f8 w6 y/ \5 q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& a. F5 |; |$ D# g; R; P' d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. f; h  E: S* i+ h% j' e+ u<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 Z+ @% C; W* h- O6 s% v<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- y( [5 T" H: c2 `2 V/ l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) O$ f) U+ k% [, W% @5 Z+ G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ f7 z: o+ G2 h0 A<P>But I never did </P>
5 z  X: T( v: @4 l9 m) M8 ]5 W<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& m1 b. W" |4 H$ o+ ]  n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& S! ]/ j* k! F/ a; l6 H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; D, {+ \- W- _7 j" c; P) _& E4 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( a8 w5 P3 J6 d# B* V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# ?$ Y% F  C& c6 M/ d3 f0 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ h) V2 h9 s0 S2 L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 e8 N& ^/ ]. a/ M) d# ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 [, M( [! _% @) O3 u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 r2 _  h" v: X7 ^; c9 }: y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>