【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* M2 A6 [5 r& Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 A7 W4 T8 \/ j! ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 |1 ^* J, ~- D! n% x  ^3 A% cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 [. p- B& s9 `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& X  L# n) v  M9 K: jI really want to know just how much you love me
) Q2 D  c& @9 E5 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
* P9 X+ f. M& g5 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% b; h- u* o, c+ T& mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- ?5 R5 n; r& J3 Z5 @  mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& ?: F" A" P& J* A. X, S2 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 h: _- G7 j6 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 l7 `, Z/ U0 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ p& s8 d: h% N0 I1 l: C. C, V8 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. E/ A: _6 U$ y! W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 p6 S" R& F( b- ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 u6 N" k& {+ S0 O- S0 G# F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# C# U* X9 _+ i! w/ U5 {; z- B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: \6 ~% Q- I. y# A( l2 T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. a! i. g5 C1 v( e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( W' I$ O& `: c' q<P>你无需担心</P>
; O* z: c9 b. a# r" P$ Q! x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# H7 I9 T7 O. ~  l( D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 H. y5 C1 X- y- L/ k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 y2 B: W1 a; O( j- H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! @1 _: E# t3 t5 q2 q+ J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. r& w$ z7 w3 n) |# `6 Z4 U- v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: o2 H! D( N7 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 \$ z, o1 S4 q2 Y: M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# @+ [! i" |  q4 z4 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' x+ t7 D$ L+ S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% @* n2 g; b9 u! I) z( Y! x. o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 C5 v. {) J$ C$ I: O, A* f+ w# O' g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. v, V" |0 I9 n5 v- x4 a( ?. n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 z7 E/ Z2 T  y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 Q9 q3 G- V  ~% ?# O% i我请你剖开它
% [' @& Z$ V* B6 g' w+ Z
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>