【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ w6 v0 Z0 }4 X/ d4 c/ H/ n歌词我附在后面。
' [, r- @% b# t9 g0 z' yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- y2 |. a# [) g+ |, V( TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 N1 V# {1 {& ^6 z% J( G2 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 R9 G) K; g3 p9 g. ~5 v! DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 m0 x, l( Y" f5 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
8 m3 Q* a+ p' p# zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 Z: e* X$ L/ v" \1 u9 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 q3 L( O4 d: B0 D. Q+ x# nYou needn’t fear anything
/ Z! i, a5 r+ T) T; E( A; t, oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 U: ~3 Y- z& _3 M5 R0 b6 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 a1 m5 _/ m3 n# M  x9 B6 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 h$ r) v2 H" fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# S( u7 L9 `. y, cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& e# A' j; E1 ?, H8 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; Y0 }! Q- R! zI regret not dying
8 ?$ p7 \% [$ `' RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 G' O8 @0 I6 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% q3 I1 ^* F/ JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 u' A( J* _4 _. p0 E* u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" R5 {' E3 w6 R3 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& ]9 D. Z4 |/ q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" i. D6 v7 ~# w+ M0 o1 a0 G# s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 Z9 r6 Z: G- l7 E$ X3 j( h0 t<P>你无需担心</P>
' S$ t: |/ r  }' w# V/ R) b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) p0 p- @4 a% {) ^1 E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# _8 r! i/ u$ I% v, y% r. R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- z( m9 u; w. |" `. T: ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* G, E8 J0 v. o# l& f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 ^( I, D7 ~2 K, m- Y6 b' P) j/ U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ i$ Y  L# N( c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ b4 H+ j  c% m- |) i- L4 N. l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 E% L1 c3 o" H! D& y/ p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# p3 ~9 C1 B3 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 x* h4 b/ v" t7 R; b+ F* n$ `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 r! ?8 r( m% X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 ?0 M5 f+ ^2 X' R4 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; p& w2 i! Z- V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& q2 m- V6 p# W. L) X6 |; g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 e1 k5 a' P+ R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% p+ I8 y. v' q' e0 J! L8 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- b$ _/ I$ ^# ^  Q: Q: |: f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 h9 D0 u& V  w6 s0 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, p, g9 k+ E. i/ x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' g% s2 z9 v; h6 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- E. T. G0 I& T" A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( \" R+ {6 |! J7 d, ~: o! A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>