【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% ~) V# p: C9 j6 [( p2 C7 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" g. t3 a7 b* q6 w& l  BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' N$ Z7 ~- R. m" `2 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ [# z$ B- Q$ e" T2 B$ S: S0 q  yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 R2 H& J; x) f; e" V3 K$ UEvery other word you utter is love
+ B9 m% H9 e9 i% K- I3 hI really want to know just how much you love me
) s. k2 F4 m) C. o) HI love you I love you with all my heart
- V2 R( U2 l1 O" JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 {" U; {2 A7 \# oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ W" G2 O0 a, ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: N* |5 C2 R4 e: _% h0 E7 jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# r' S8 E0 f4 [* |3 O1 AI regret not dying
3 q* Z; V: i# v* T, D9 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. G; x. X1 A4 b2 g; W- ~2 ]With such a tongue as yours,
6 q. X/ w# k) mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* Z. R- Z3 H1 Z. j5 A. l/ HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! v! G' c0 N7 W6 D  K( i. w& p0 d5 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 L  ]% L/ h0 _' Q% X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* B* W2 F! J. t- @* c* P. p. s% o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 O+ C  {6 f- Y2 J1 w) R# Q  Q' Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& j: o/ ?, Q+ n2 }* T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& Y! D7 F, d) X7 P, m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  @$ {' ~+ ?) |: F3 h: r% c, {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 E7 I+ i& k$ C* S! x  i+ N2 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, q6 o: k1 i7 Y7 a% \% |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 G5 a* o) c/ e7 F/ N% K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% E7 `" _" F* l3 f, b3 O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& C6 j6 h8 B! Q+ B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; |2 }8 m$ |. Q. ?1 p0 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 f: V; B) N5 Q- J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. u- F, G1 [) _" G# m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) W6 `, }! _) n- O3 r$ b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, A0 @4 ]+ k9 K/ W% T) Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" T5 Z0 p* k5 C  B6 f% X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, L5 |0 h; c4 X5 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ ~0 l2 d4 ~! g$ l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 S; X8 Z4 z* Q# _8 o1 j6 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& H" B5 o* b! N2 V6 F+ A, h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ ]* R0 _  S) t+ Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# r+ w% r- s7 x# f; r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 H& @  x4 R/ F9 L0 q8 p5 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; Z' }1 E/ h! f; q% e- ^! ]2 }0 [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& H1 x8 O/ W/ B! C- k0 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 [$ g9 @5 j4 F1 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 h5 ~6 |( ~) B  P/ g6 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 ]) J9 D3 q& C1 a4 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- |& j, k2 A( [3 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% H* b# c1 n1 [- ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>