【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 S, ^" P# l4 L7 i: D) FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: U# {! L0 p, GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 q! b, Q* c& A8 W$ LYou needn’t fear anything
% h( U7 b6 H- vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 T' p6 u' Q' n3 z( R' ?! OEvery other word you utter is love
  b6 c, s2 b& p2 xI really want to know just how much you love me
; G0 f9 Z8 w  \7 z) @' e- S% d% \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ Y9 A6 I0 O6 m  B3 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! g9 l# f8 h+ lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. I$ K6 v3 G6 k: zI’m still filled with fear
$ N' i5 A* G" m- [0 ^# Q" PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ i( V6 {$ D* ?6 Z# k- Y* gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 E% c( X* r, t  k* ?$ XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 G, p! c0 U2 C! ?! Z' M  NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) {2 V1 n5 U: X0 `$ h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ a  V' y7 V1 U; w! w& a; |# H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  V+ U- \% `& v; s$ q9 O0 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  @0 Q) t: @1 f5 `! Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- Z, j0 j+ t% \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 [  `  l% F: G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; n6 i; |# O$ B0 ]9 s5 H2 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) T" }6 v& V" D) L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 @+ G+ ?7 I% I* A- E) ^2 n4 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" Y  O: }# W: A4 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" c* E0 R  M/ N  G* O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; [( C8 _' S" g- ~# C- w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 T6 X. o" R$ J, U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ k% c$ y4 U0 ]; G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  f6 k' @/ p+ p8 O% {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: n* O: M9 d3 W6 K: E4 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# I- \" V% w5 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 M. _/ e% B' l0 S8 e5 ?4 b9 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
- }  }  v0 z  O. a  S  a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ V. w( L3 a0 }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: z! m+ W! W; e# U( Y5 M2 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( E2 P; D( Q5 E4 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  r3 z8 y4 {; n; }; w0 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; [9 S! K' p1 y( Q0 }. u+ P$ W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, T" v% R* B, {, y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 c3 k8 p& G1 F+ i1 U7 ?6 u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>