【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% W5 `3 ], l8 H2 M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# W# J/ t. w: v$ W* ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 N( d% `2 h3 Y) {2 f% w& F( vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: ]4 _9 t) ?. l1 e$ M" KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' P' `! a" X0 Y) ^* v5 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 T$ z3 Q# m& n/ T) JYou needn’t fear anything
$ Z; ^: l) u2 z4 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. w! ^" K$ x8 y; iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 v/ U3 B3 p2 E6 G/ c# @" bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( q, k& K% ^7 J4 b' u8 B5 LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" n1 f. Z3 S3 o1 t* [! P1 A6 @4 ^8 `! DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& t. R* h* V. |+ n8 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( t: S/ p" `1 u7 @; h  _1 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 Q5 d2 t! T+ [, }4 r& d* f; U6 J  L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; Y8 M9 d. y: a& _1 h# O8 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; {5 q+ V$ {* i3 b9 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: n$ }" h  T  s( g5 D8 @! P& W% T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- s: e6 m8 f4 C& g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! B6 G% H. b, u: _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* I( m" h9 Y4 e* w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ ]$ V" N7 |% \4 ?# ]* q0 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, ~  _, w3 D+ ?: S3 f7 W; E& ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) S+ e9 U" E, [( y, G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 ]) E) ]$ G6 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 X* \  o( d' X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ m& {( @- i, @6 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 C' N) A- v# A4 u; n6 [$ d. X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: X$ n- {& m1 T* N% x& n$ {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 @  U/ P3 g5 W" x' |; G- Q: W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( q0 w0 R2 j7 @, C+ U5 ]/ V* t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& \2 d& D* D6 a( R8 u3 y9 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! W" V9 ?  ~) Z! M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ U' @: u5 l7 f& y<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 S+ U4 Q# N% o* i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 D1 L8 m: d6 p; m6 v6 J9 L. k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  V, V+ S/ s2 k. K+ ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. {6 Q) k6 c' `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 H+ w, i$ f' {. q8 l1 `+ ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; V/ o3 }; h& H' G1 Y$ z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& j4 g' j9 V; V8 T! M, K. ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>