【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# h3 o) l( v8 E" z# p8 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ X7 v2 \2 D1 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 G2 f/ q$ E) S7 |4 S6 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& t& l, t2 \8 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 C' k! v4 s, R' Y) lWith the moon kissing it every night
$ S# n2 g- Z9 ]9 WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 w% N! ?! i0 ]2 J4 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
3 C: P' S; _& ^. D( r0 f. tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* w8 _" k- n, w0 B( W4 n" yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ S! x# t/ C$ u8 W! BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( W( l, t4 a: ^- ~9 U. dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 T0 x: r9 F/ g) y& J0 e" i) HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- ~8 C. Q8 v" R- l* f, k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* y. S5 O/ y( v$ m( T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ y5 }( B* x+ u. I& N/ Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 z% {4 v5 v. |3 t8 T( I2 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 y- @) P: I7 j6 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ N& ^1 G% k1 I6 y+ H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 W* e" X  ~: U/ M4 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) j  {! G2 s. b2 @2 ]' b5 d8 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' b* Y: ~7 O* X' a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, D. ]% t5 E6 X2 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 L1 M, ]1 m' i' H. ]) C4 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* f! u9 r: s  J4 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 X3 O6 x. v4 a/ S* Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* \0 ]) T! z& u- y2 k" ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& x5 I% ^  K. l5 \; _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# R6 R" d: [+ d# q1 p! d4 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; o0 x& r" v1 _1 x- f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 ^) i( D9 C  F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 P9 j* i; N# r  d5 d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% ^: F: I9 R' d% }- u7 m) b! s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% z, u! S/ j+ N& _, S6 Z" E<P>I regret not dying</P>
; s# _6 k$ C6 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* Q  @. h1 P8 t8 H' r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% i" A2 N5 D4 t) N6 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 N$ \, Q6 N; b+ u# Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- o# D! p2 i& H) w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 S/ d- c7 S6 C) K- @) g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 y: L% q5 l0 W( ]3 F% x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. L8 A7 X* R: V7 l' h7 l. Z1 U5 s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>