【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. p% A0 h3 z8 c# ^8 J" X5 m* ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
  \; J' C0 n/ ~' ]7 D1 k# n3 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 z& Y" S) U7 W6 ~. D8 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% I( L% J2 x, ]( K3 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* u, t% @& o, ]: @6 K3 d. u$ E& iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; A4 C; c) Q) H! m) G0 V7 dEvery other word you utter is love
, A" z. W5 v" f2 K8 nI really want to know just how much you love me
/ H" Q: c  {4 R6 |9 V. i, @8 m" v; xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 j$ h3 s$ Z& J! YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 a* t- l* j0 ?3 A; RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; d; e, V" K4 w4 V- ~3 B5 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ I' s$ d% w! j9 b0 O9 s% YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 y. B; Z: p  _) }7 a$ hWith such a tongue as yours,
# A/ s& w5 G+ v3 {0 Q/ pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ A, v9 h7 B" s2 [' e% l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% w+ Y4 u6 g% `+ u2 W# K6 a; ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ d" B, `( d) g- r  z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ X  I$ g& c- T7 d; o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 d$ [0 V2 j" C4 E, u  U8 L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ T1 R- H% v2 m. e& m- b( p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ J1 l+ v- V+ A0 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 e  d, H, e5 p6 ?9 G! X* J/ L  K# n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ L; `( x7 M6 ^/ P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ I( f% g& P1 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 `) O: P: h5 U6 R<P>你无需担心</P>
# [  |" b' t7 y( j# _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 q4 p" o/ Q" |' u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' G. l- d/ b$ s7 D1 X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ \  W( x- k7 i& \% v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) R) P3 m5 r9 O9 i3 O6 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 J8 C; c6 G6 `" e, D( |2 V1 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 ?5 n' @0 }- p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 e/ }1 [8 E0 Q) L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& O% `6 P, T1 E# `; r# z3 u5 g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. K; N* j7 `, v% |: U# Z- a3 }* F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 K* M) h8 M& n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: b- |( F0 [+ P1 f# T. ]. f- G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 l$ k! q0 t$ I% H5 C9 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( a' H( ?- W  I, Q5 x4 H- s( b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) {% s: a9 `& P: F* W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ S. N1 \6 K2 ^. r6 h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 c6 K6 K; R: r. ]7 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 O. P5 p& Q% \, G3 d: Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 J( P4 D; ~/ a; Q% f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' K5 w- ~0 X2 x. a/ E$ J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 G: P# \% ]  p% L; D0 @# l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 d7 I) `) p" N! {2 ^- u8 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>