【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# ?& z5 j, D6 _& \* }Making the sky glitter like gold,
, J9 H, n7 v5 g0 f) G- |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  Z2 z0 {+ ^! W) g9 o0 Z1 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 J0 r' b$ {* I2 _% s5 k9 D  ]With the moon kissing it every night
6 d% H$ }# S; K( @6 n& G# M, h9 v- y" B: dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ B. a, o: K/ I# tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) z+ T- n3 U0 h1 g4 LNothing can compare to my love
7 @, N5 p0 t: j9 j* \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" w8 y$ Y. i. A2 q' v$ a/ j4 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" ~, p' Q/ t0 ~" U0 Z# M4 O% yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ \  d" i, A: o+ t' N+ f  sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 y8 O7 I8 {) W4 C7 X! CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* c1 e6 O4 u* c5 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; Q# I* h5 D) }( U& M% _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' m* c- }( E; @% U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# k, R5 a5 }1 u( [0 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. i5 E6 X; p( X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 P7 \2 z* N  V# ~1 ?2 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 m' x. h: t' g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ j5 R' T8 }+ [( d" q$ ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ f9 v( w6 ?$ e2 A# C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ]8 e; D/ x8 ]( [" _! _0 w' f4 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" _* X8 r5 O. h) a" _4 T" W% H* t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" I4 j2 W9 r5 z% }- G& k8 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ F0 n% C: c3 e$ \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& M) i$ P9 @( z& @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  _- T, u  x6 ]4 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 S, l, E  a- y9 l; ^- l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ A, @0 E4 p, N; {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ e1 V: }9 Q( C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& H9 h  o! O5 p; _8 E( y% L1 j- u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 l3 E+ L! {7 M! E" K% Z0 U& L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 Z% O& P1 i3 R5 ?" s) S+ `. R; S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& b1 L# \9 @: [: c7 G) q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 Y% o* G6 w9 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ u% t: F. p% B- j; r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ y1 r! f0 k* I' j& M, P4 D7 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! w3 R- r' n! W, s2 h2 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- O5 k3 I( Z3 [. O2 N8 N  K<P>I regret not dying</P>
* r+ I+ R* o. B# Y, [# @7 P0 ]; U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 k( G5 d: z* ?5 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  T0 Z9 [8 T1 O: A. a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ ?8 Q3 c( A" D; y, y/ l! G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- }- ]1 A" A+ F: l; o7 n9 n6 \% U  H! J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 r  w/ W3 s, E! }- U7 i; C, w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 {# l& @) k! x9 y* n8 q4 |$ a2 p; n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) W: y. M4 n. ^; o% T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ E* d, ~7 o. \! e. m/ s( ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% n% _3 ~1 H+ u, ]) K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 z8 M" ]  P: x5 X' T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 W+ z, K+ x8 N, @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>