【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 I. {# K& K2 W8 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: N( u, Q) P' w; ~8 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ ^  i0 H3 S0 y" U& k+ RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" S0 H6 L- q! @) ]$ iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 r- r% j0 b  ?# V9 {9 A( y/ [; ]Nothing can compare to my love
8 x5 F0 b( w' R5 [. U- `- q1 V& q$ SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# m2 k; v4 f( H% w7 KI want so much to see inside your heart
' z9 `1 T2 @# }8 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 q$ G  [) l* V! y# X8 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% r# F& K3 U/ p! J% m8 BI regret not dying
6 o4 K# h9 A1 g: R) W2 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 L2 t/ z2 Q- ~* I7 z) PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' t8 G! n% r& q1 W5 d8 H' lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 m$ Y' f% m  _: K9 N4 g; CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 M1 u' }5 u' ^& D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 c9 f2 O+ C( e4 x' y1 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ N+ _8 F! h# {& @/ d' w& h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 V; i! n. M8 u( N7 z# W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: m2 I1 D- K( O- D  u9 r1 }* g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 C  m8 X! _# O/ J0 g6 {8 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 K( w1 ?, N* X- U2 P; o* ]6 s# H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' `8 `7 E1 I! [8 ]) G. h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 z' U, e$ E6 Q6 o0 b7 u& f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' _8 s# X% F/ N4 P* }$ |$ E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. r9 @1 m% _  n8 c6 T6 w2 C5 C- C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 l; [  f/ l$ x$ U0 K# x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% T, j, Z* q. D) ]  w. K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 o* r5 R1 M0 L7 f1 @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( @( Q1 n0 g& S* S; p5 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 r2 G1 J+ S2 W9 l% N/ X2 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; F- Q" o$ ~/ [- g! V! g5 y* Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& x+ p, {: \: d7 j8 J+ i  E! r, {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ B2 _& d# M# Q3 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 D" W# y7 I) j. ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) \+ ?! o6 A5 C$ u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) I( T' f2 T! \  b( z- Y8 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 |8 N) X! L, U3 Z3 |. g& n- g" J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ p6 Q7 Q) v1 y; K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% u3 q+ P  ^! I$ ^0 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ q% ]; k4 `3 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( r7 k8 s0 C8 k  C7 h. L5 l- t<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 l' s# u$ T5 Z+ P: P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 M0 K% q6 Q3 @/ O1 B: i( q% m# J% r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 @6 j) s- H# I9 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- B+ X6 C0 X8 o* ]) r" \( Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  K; r* ?  D! B% _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ x/ V- g" F% ~1 L) u* {: @4 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 q' f6 k+ o7 a. s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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# A" P% t& x/ k6 b9 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>