【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 G+ d# f/ O9 u) K+ uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 c3 C5 W5 I$ W* C( l  T, KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; W3 Y+ y7 G: _1 x, ^1 E3 P6 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ p8 j. R, y; fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% o- A& U0 H, u( ^The sky is happy down to its soul
+ V8 [8 g, h: x7 XWith the moon kissing it every night
5 {8 J# I% v& L6 cSeeing the sky content with its love
7 p; L7 s, w: k' F# O- }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! y# Y! h, N# X% z8 ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ~2 Z0 d( n  @  m$ `( NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ J, c0 k5 j3 o- x" c8 k, ?1 _8 Y5 tI love you I love you with all my heart
+ G) a) {2 b: J1 @: k; zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 s* d' @+ P. A4 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' }4 X+ I3 k8 B# G3 Y, S5 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- r/ O& T- v0 P: cWith such a tongue as yours,
6 {8 ]8 i% ?8 Q3 g& C/ JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! h# Y0 O8 N# T* G3 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' ]0 g  s) A" gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 E% ^  q6 d' M1 V+ M: K2 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 l$ @4 `9 o9 \- Z5 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 w2 |2 {8 e" T3 U; i7 x' E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. E( H$ N6 p) v+ n6 Y& P- {, @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, ]% ?- p. k' X3 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 ^2 S8 u0 u/ G- U" j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 L. }9 ^) s$ n1 H. ?9 O3 v7 j* h8 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 x* {: x6 ^. l6 l/ Q  d1 p5 d5 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ j' r! g9 W- q; Z' Q/ d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! U; D! H2 ?4 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& S8 J5 d5 P% A: b. E+ [( L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ g# {2 |/ A6 y' W' ~8 L, c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- U5 x6 t  A) B& r: F( T5 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- j6 a1 Y  j) E4 K: O" Q" p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 B" `1 r" H$ C. V) q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 m; s+ c. F& o& N, \- V1 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 t$ V6 o4 d2 G- L0 n5 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" C- A8 Q# R" ^7 D1 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 P- u% ^! c' j; R0 G+ e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ `3 b: X% ~. ]8 T$ C1 Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ O) I: k2 u* n6 t( \* |  P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- z( `8 A- L  I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 n6 J! D$ p" _& ]! C# F+ v  r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 C+ a' r  I" U+ N0 K5 o5 Y% Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) Y$ t1 f' L# B8 X" ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% A( W* E3 C2 O4 S3 x' c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 K9 B) n7 |* p$ x. k2 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 }9 r( ~9 f/ N- [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ~. N  p+ ~* u9 Z' Q5 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- Q: t9 y+ J" H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 |) t$ m. h% a+ ~9 P. O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; j3 ^; k0 U* X8 z. p3 Y4 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! a3 L: s; T( J8 v) O: q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 c5 S0 a# P) f5 R* r  b! `1 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: I4 n. Y3 f: h我请你剖开它
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% L, V6 {4 a$ d; h, H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; m6 W! c6 a. a! D' D$ U1 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>