【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  l1 z" T+ x( v3 }" _% WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( G& D/ S7 Q! fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, t) Z2 O" m: M. @' M7 ^% t: PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 ?2 N! D0 r- H$ k& f9 r/ KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' k1 o0 a  S) @" o# ZYou needn’t fear anything
$ x- Z4 o: [7 h0 U. LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' U% B6 o& a2 RI love you I love you with all my heart
$ f9 M8 ^/ K4 S* X7 cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* c: w% ]& O/ O3 v6 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ~9 L6 }% l; t) n1 x8 OI’m still filled with fear
6 o% B+ |3 M3 q; SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! R: y: {0 `, p+ ]' Y* vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 h6 Z4 Y5 n) q. F& P0 G0 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; l/ W. X0 i- ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 u$ |3 g$ [( e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 W( P# K4 d: ~: w  A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' A; F9 b. E* ]) o8 L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% v+ b0 ]1 c6 m% L, `+ y9 `- M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( b; |& P6 J5 z: z0 P/ X* W9 Z; R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% ]% c- Z: \+ E6 x" m<P>你无需担心</P>
! B  a- }' x0 [# D% `- V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 J, {- P7 l6 t! {0 E* X! ~6 W/ ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 o4 {- |. J' N- h9 P5 A  d! V' F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; b/ t/ f$ H8 @! F! J( g- g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 S% J% g3 ~; Q% m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( N2 Z% D* u4 ?4 X. I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 e* Z% f7 H/ z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: Z% c3 m( p4 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 H  W( K3 {+ |9 W+ B/ D# C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ w7 k, e  i( j) k/ X6 M4 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 j4 ^5 h/ \: A& Y0 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# K. s* p! ]7 q0 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ ~% `2 @* k3 O" V# ~5 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. F) j0 f" W2 I4 S- g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' ?/ t; j& o7 \9 A2 Z. R& n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- L- ^! n! O! F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; h# N& z) A4 P; [3 O我请你剖开它
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, I) _# u3 F& |. E" |. e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( K9 R0 o  C0 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>