【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ \+ c! [0 q0 @7 h. l  P5 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 Q5 W0 ^& z, A" E& K+ MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, T! Y/ o& O7 |( ~5 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& i6 @; H" F2 z) H4 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 X( y4 L9 U& M. d5 l7 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 f6 ]$ _0 a9 J4 t  I' F# aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ Z$ H4 x/ z& Y- jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 m- o1 V7 x* z" yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  p; a& U) q: {& A2 X. k' f/ nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 e0 c5 }' d9 _* q: ]: `+ II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. _/ M; \' e2 [( I& d. k, }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 q2 L; T7 e. T( g9 O9 h! t5 H: CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; ^% Q) x. N) |1 @# R$ [$ O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 u- K& C0 ]  E1 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- v% C$ k* D; {( Y$ M" @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% e! b2 a3 }: k9 D. `; U! g7 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& \2 s6 d) O) r' o# d" p# T  I# y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 {" e8 S* v6 r+ i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( l+ i4 V  _/ g9 P" K( n: o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 }( w: f; r5 z; a3 b8 L& U$ O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* \* h. ^0 x7 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% I: c- P; S7 V/ B9 Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% h+ ]6 H" Y: r; x) r9 ]/ U+ Y  t3 n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% j9 `  B# z) m* j, z) m* u- S! S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ y& h* s. S0 o, g1 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& V/ \9 v' y8 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# p, h# E  C% x/ p2 ~# r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# k' V1 q" m& ?+ X! ~/ D" O* ^% H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! L% v, p7 Z" U* q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 E2 p! \" ]& T" R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ H7 ?8 [: i- q" ]! j  \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. e, Z1 V0 u  m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( L; l! Z, `0 ^0 H: W4 e5 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 L6 x6 F/ p5 d  s2 e我请你剖开它
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6 q& m+ v' t% r) ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>