【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* _5 X: Y; Y% `6 L* m: x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* e& M9 P* ]' [8 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: L2 |: o; Y+ ?% \4 E5 K/ r5 a0 i  IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  s- W: z* y! n& o. q$ l' ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 u7 M+ P0 ?; lThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ d9 F3 \( }6 _; Z5 SWith the moon kissing it every night
8 M1 O. e! T3 y6 _. k/ |Seeing the sky content with its love
  Y0 n7 u, f1 Z) M' g4 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 t: F; T' N' pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 d8 i" u" R( }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ Q/ E, E+ J; ]/ [6 |I’m still filled with fear
4 x; H; _4 d3 Z0 S6 C9 R; \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 P+ |, F" ~6 R* y: s9 Z/ ^- EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ e1 H; y3 k8 ~% A" LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 `; U" W1 C' M+ W9 ?6 [/ c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. V) \+ U( A% b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 u8 f0 o& r% _! n8 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- n0 f% ^: g# _3 C' V0 i! l+ |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- ?3 J& |9 h' c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 U& V, h4 i. q, i3 k0 Q0 J. F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' ?# z* t/ T5 P. I8 I* J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 \6 `+ O/ m7 v& K, E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 P3 [5 O" ^. M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; H% H- K% y) x% a<P>你无需担心</P>
1 P) F2 t7 n# v3 P9 Z/ b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. Z8 B. a+ h! V! x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 L6 Q' v" p$ Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% _0 B9 B% P1 S. g6 k7 V, b9 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" d2 q9 F* N1 w4 P  N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# }& Q% X0 x% j* I1 H- K, V: k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% K) h5 f' W! Y, `4 ^7 b9 r" ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ O* l# P/ [' V% \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ G, P$ u9 g2 z) ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" w6 U9 r- K1 Z3 ~7 P; I: m6 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. ^: n0 K, m# t* U- b! F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# y% |( |) ^, S3 \3 `; M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 a" \5 r% r! h/ r. `. k, b/ l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 X/ v2 V  k8 G1 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& h; a) G' j4 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 F) P* z+ ^, c4 j0 H% J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& |' f* F0 S9 q+ ^! s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- \2 s/ Q' \5 [0 |/ j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* U1 l) x4 H% F& p6 f8 Q4 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ T& \& {$ M: o# x0 Q6 a& l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ c0 N7 r! r& j5 v. N+ I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 o1 b+ C% S( C: S1 B& j" n3 S" d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( E! v# B. M. g, U) z& f# s; U我请你剖开它

0 h! n/ @+ W( j4 s: U% @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>