【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) ]2 a, h/ \) V# W! g; KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( s* |1 \" h4 U# x1 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
) _+ E  o9 F4 w9 [* z9 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 p3 i# C" k& W: n$ k- a8 \% l+ lWith the moon kissing it every night
7 X" m7 X. G" G7 P! E; b2 @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; F  o# p1 j! B+ \' |I really want to know just how much you love me
5 d9 e( q9 F8 h, l6 r0 A7 c) rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ C2 `" ^1 ?0 @. LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* k2 c- Y- A: y8 w) v& {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 n3 u8 i# g, t- y8 DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 Y8 g. @1 t  j, UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ c1 |% {( @9 B; x" S; O3 c% u2 B3 HI regret not dying
( K$ f4 H" [' s, J3 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: P  T) Q2 J, c3 [  VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, ]) p! L. M& k* e& t# a& x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% {7 O& }+ d* E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! F2 M2 Q3 S3 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 W/ z2 F; x* R$ R0 l4 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 A/ e3 d4 X& Z. }, @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 e+ p) {/ S0 t" |0 a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! k0 z5 t$ |0 @: g5 T2 n8 J/ y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% x2 |# B1 O! X* l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ z0 j) C8 {8 i, X/ B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 x) t  [/ ^5 u2 X+ j. v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 u7 J. j9 G% Z& a7 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" ?, Y; \3 g8 c4 q+ ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 o7 U: C9 O3 K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* `! h$ S/ Q4 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& `+ I2 w* _$ u2 t/ f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 r3 y9 s; k! a: Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  `; L4 f4 U9 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  c, ~( \. \7 F* C; d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) L0 y1 F$ h$ l9 k4 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 f5 B  V8 [8 l& i3 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. g5 A5 D4 U# q0 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 K+ V/ W% W4 O# `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 T9 h; f9 w5 U" ?; o, {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" G$ W6 u5 X( e8 m- @/ H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( J# ?* |) y7 e# s6 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 f$ B6 A% z% \1 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: k5 \, r% l, @0 e4 a+ J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% L8 K' e4 L5 }; r* ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) f! b! |- a" [% ^' p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>