【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ ]- A' |# ~% R" k5 B; g% W歌词我附在后面。
# v- _3 s/ u& L; X& R6 i. kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 V0 @5 A$ `3 c, Q, d3 N5 D+ GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! ^3 ]+ V( A! o# J( P$ aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( |9 {/ x( N; K: ]( ?: [" @/ m4 sSeeing the sky content with its love
6 Y7 U8 J+ \! u! k+ PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 V$ C+ m+ T2 g2 k2 l! rYou needn’t fear anything
1 u+ F) u! e4 H7 \: v2 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' S" W1 `6 p$ dI love you I love you with all my heart
9 j9 B! x3 k2 ~3 V# z! oNothing can compare to my love
: T" V  g- j* r4 I! F6 O: yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- _, C" q) z% fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ R( T: I, l$ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 R; m! @. L  S+ qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 E4 H7 I, C" a: a. wWith such a tongue as yours,
! `2 d% g+ {! H% v+ vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, I  z. |- I0 n" L! ^4 C: X% W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 ]+ w* q, G1 s5 B$ a% w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  F& U. a2 j0 g+ U6 X; X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" [2 n" u/ P2 _6 W' k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ p$ _5 |9 ?8 ?- o- ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 ^5 y5 S( `' M, s; h6 L/ f- Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 s& }) d/ t8 f7 B3 g. S" m5 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- H4 x2 E5 m) |1 A) d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 ]( c( I3 ~7 ^1 j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. S- W  A+ b' ]% L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ i! D2 f) M8 M0 r7 @# O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 i$ G9 R' I9 Q% b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. `, V$ j% G; c3 @* a  [& k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 F4 N0 \6 _6 X) n' g1 s1 |7 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 P  _1 z0 q( ]1 i6 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: o1 R! V/ V4 G7 B5 G! R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% C0 z3 @7 a0 G: H<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 m% y" p2 V6 g# I$ w0 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. V7 [* L! S8 b# F- A8 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 e; J5 k5 l( L6 Q3 S, A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- Q; ^8 v+ Z" ^# [6 U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* ?. C$ t/ T/ D  _0 s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 m% A' S$ K1 J/ f# a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 K: z# Q; j* [, M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' K0 k8 H! O4 q1 Z% ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>