【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' K; k, V8 ^! n9 Y# z, ~9 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 l- X" H- q+ p- y" s0 t5 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ v. o/ E8 K( M& W! FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; y! Q( ^3 Q/ `5 b, l: m7 N. SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' [" B2 p0 P1 O. ?" l. VSeeing the sky content with its love
: s$ H$ V, v( g2 v7 w3 Y2 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 J8 ~  M7 J: W0 w2 x% SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ u4 w# \- W0 `; c: K  pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- [6 l! d  Y, o4 s1 X- hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 ?; q" ]9 d  C* u3 H& OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 v; J: r5 Z9 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ [; i- b: `, b. a4 y  SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# e7 Z2 r5 K" C8 R3 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" \+ ^8 A+ o3 h* MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! [* u3 G& L( T3 y0 n; D5 |$ V5 z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 R1 N( O0 X% i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ b; I/ u) A( t$ o8 ]5 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ C) D; P  S. F7 w8 b8 r; F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ @4 B+ V# S0 N  a+ S4 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. D( S, X4 t! s; r  b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* a6 E# J3 f* d8 S' `, T. G4 [3 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 T1 U8 N+ w- e+ Z+ b0 O& B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ ~. G! h# u# k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 R) m4 Q- ^6 J& O$ b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ f9 v: D) P. W8 c' ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( a! Q" s, `1 `: ]( j2 B0 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 m, J) Q8 [" v$ B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& W; l+ b, p1 w$ D6 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# i+ m5 `  b+ M& B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! [' S5 I5 K( \( Q3 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; ~* I3 i# t! r9 m" n# ~3 ?6 U# q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 V+ f* P4 @1 W* t# s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 o6 H6 E6 @7 H  u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ m2 Q8 j- v: j2 }  k# Z: C# g. [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& A/ n0 T) Y& X. Y  @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! t) ]# b- i- p0 x4 E' {: g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ T  F# q* I: }( @! D" M4 @, }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  T" z( |0 `1 H3 \8 t# v$ R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 ]- v* {$ a9 @- C8 G  K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! a, Q: l; a0 C; r1 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>