【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% W1 J2 O% S+ ~2 {% v' l3 B歌词我附在后面。
7 @/ v% S) S) p2 U9 a5 H$ c2 eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 V6 ~1 e! V2 |. O2 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( @0 r& ]2 E/ ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 L7 R1 b3 d4 i$ V; o$ lWith the moon kissing it every night
8 |. S; q  n1 ?3 A* i2 X- G! TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" R+ T+ K0 [7 S6 xYou needn’t fear anything
: Z, V  ^) x* bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% D& L# s4 u3 g8 L/ K: i& fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. X  ^9 f( b5 q. qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 |$ n' C- S& R1 X* o9 N' ?) SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: q; O! J5 O6 F6 A3 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- U  Z! F/ u3 t! Q' b6 j7 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 l8 C; u; d  t0 J! z- \2 D! U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 `' ~9 k* q, g$ G# x7 P$ C2 Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% Z- \7 t7 y4 q) L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' Q; _; [8 k. `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 n0 f; F0 A1 V3 d9 A% j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" u7 U# v+ E' z1 S0 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' B) w. n: Q- ~9 J0 N( J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ]' s2 P! Z, A- o8 i8 X! Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. J& u: e. A5 I: Q& I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 [/ `! l+ o. U7 g" l% O/ [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! K) D) z' z& A! k+ h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! m- D: U1 p. p3 S" R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  X, G* `3 f9 g) ~. b<P>I regret not dying</P>
% ]2 q" i) l# t' I$ h: ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 t# h# Q9 N+ D( N& j- X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 P) X" j1 s: G5 e2 c( D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  ^# Q  n3 A* |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% _: F6 e7 j) h& N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 f* g5 k& B9 n* ?7 A+ o8 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>