【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 y% o  l) [, T; Q1 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ f5 {! T; Y5 b, D+ LWith the moon kissing it every night
3 a" H0 o6 y( _Seeing the sky content with its love
! }4 N+ Q, x- g! _$ LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ O% `  Z0 o- c3 x! m( d$ B+ dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 l4 [' V3 |" U5 {+ VI love you I love you with all my heart
8 m& q1 }8 U/ j9 g( m! v$ FNothing can compare to my love
% r7 T( d; ~, F! ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 }% S* p5 _3 r- cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" h  F! g! W0 j! A, h9 U! PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ O) [# ~$ |1 h* e' n; nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( a0 O  Y) z3 M# B; b! {( l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! W$ O2 f: i* f- h5 W& e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 n+ S5 Z5 f( V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) H4 o: D8 u( ?8 B* N- V5 I4 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' l4 n5 ~! W/ z" k( X6 E) X4 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 {! l" K& I  `. w; W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 g$ M4 `5 Z( U3 o& D5 c8 h- u) p& w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 G- ]  d: `6 J6 |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 H' E/ Y# @( r8 t9 r7 P9 V$ _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! F* Q1 h4 u3 j6 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 W; [; N3 g& p3 Q7 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 c9 m6 b* O, c4 _+ m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 W2 i) \1 j$ r7 x0 K* Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  x( K. [# A. q$ o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, r2 J1 u: c4 V( z- w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  O: _5 b- J( |8 x, @$ K* ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 O; O  @' C) g& v3 d5 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( y! x$ \7 H; }8 G3 m% Z  a0 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  \5 r5 Y, _9 @7 I/ @9 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: q* g! ^$ ]& @: t  n5 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 Z( s9 X- V- u: [! ^5 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 i/ d( u; h5 E+ J, I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- r' ^( s4 E8 N, Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 N0 b* g( }- I( ^! u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 ?4 {# ^5 m. I) T' r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 @+ B* N8 f# j/ h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* R0 ~1 ^0 G% }( f' z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ w' _. |" @/ P3 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  m7 A4 @# U4 x- v+ k7 `/ v$ N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' X' A) [% z) L- u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 _$ x  u7 ~/ J我请你剖开它
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0 [: t8 T+ h5 B1 ~# T7 S9 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 Y. b- V6 @" p( M9 m* ]& W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>