【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 `1 U; Q/ p1 Q+ S. Z* W$ ~; ^7 I4 J7 T3 zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* R2 a+ c: g$ s2 ]7 C5 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 N: j7 }# _% q; ^& g5 U: u2 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! d, e8 N6 I- yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 r, \9 c# b/ t! JThe sky is happy down to its soul
! c2 v6 T! K# P* uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  I# K/ p# D2 X7 P+ D& m" aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 ~: B0 N) f- l5 q# J4 B# YYou needn’t fear anything
( ?( m# \1 R7 a  {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ s  h: s! b8 \/ z: [+ ?2 B1 C: |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 p0 x. F$ o+ Z6 q9 z4 v3 G* dI love you I love you with all my heart
6 i" x. v+ ^! M9 T% g" i7 V$ INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* w3 W* b, o$ z" l# g: q8 |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* u- _5 T7 J. j& TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 V* o0 O% P+ Y3 K* t* n9 h9 MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# }7 r4 B& \9 D  k3 o- ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# ^. N) W! m, e7 V5 m5 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ X2 Y* Q! a% l! \9 A. V* Y( a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 R- q8 D( Y" Q5 v9 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! f* y4 C: A! y6 D6 ~# u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 }0 [0 [0 H* a) Y$ G$ m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  @4 k# W# C0 N, K* K! @; {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. l1 }5 Y7 _' H2 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 F$ ^3 u6 {+ [6 L; i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 B5 C8 |3 s5 J' }) |/ E% {# R1 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! p4 F' O: M6 y% {& {! t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ |( w- H3 F, ~" J1 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- {8 c- j/ Y% E& F/ I8 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 v, F; B, T3 B2 d. T  a& g' r! q0 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. G4 H# X2 G* B# t0 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 v2 A9 U" D6 ?; r1 {8 g3 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* s. O' G$ a" I3 V# a: L* b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: W0 X$ l3 r+ {4 t$ m  d* G3 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ b; i4 n, ^3 t! w, ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% \/ L' i& C; F1 z* ?7 l4 m. e: [1 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- r; Y1 t* _7 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ X" K9 p5 j* @( R2 e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: ]' [4 Z; M& J2 Z' b" q' ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! W, a+ ~! |+ ~9 i% \, G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- [8 o! p) [  v/ w4 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! o1 J! L* u  n. n1 M  k9 Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; t/ A8 D9 B1 q, y3 @4 u2 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 h1 m+ C0 P% }+ k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 {8 E9 K. K9 P5 j9 H. G/ T我请你剖开它
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0 M/ C% ?$ x6 w* ~2 Q$ z5 t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: p+ J' q3 W# Z' w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>