【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 `! o: G! Y$ l7 \' f- G歌词我附在后面。
% e: x/ O! W4 U5 o8 f& eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- I  k1 N- T( T8 P' ]1 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* K/ T# j8 ~2 f1 q- u! u3 l/ X4 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; k, P) w0 @* aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 r" ^6 [+ Y; OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, K8 [0 s4 l, Y/ o! Q5 QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( D0 u4 U& K/ b: l8 f! @! N% S, [, oI love you I love you with all my heart
% a9 @) Y1 ], m# W2 zNothing can compare to my love
1 y+ K. S$ s) @7 j9 q6 ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 ^4 w7 @+ H1 u$ w. x: `I want so much to see inside your heart
, A1 @5 K: U7 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( ?" |0 M. Z3 w5 ?: {8 Q* v- HI’m still filled with fear
" z6 s: T# O. M/ OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 l2 V) e; W/ X3 oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  V. w) F3 ]* r( Z/ Y, e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ ?7 c8 Y, _2 T* U( s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 F% _5 B2 m- F* ^8 e, N5 d" x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 x4 B1 L" X3 s' r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 [6 F5 _4 H5 n: Q/ p( T6 F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 B- \5 s7 h$ ~: n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* q4 D7 d& c' l" d3 a( `3 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& J' r6 ^: i9 `$ w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 N. X: m, n4 @" f' I( a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. b8 s$ ~0 @- z: w; f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 C  }: V( j% p: ?1 {  [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 a0 r! z! ~* R' U; N6 V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) h4 }0 r% }% K/ J5 S<P>你无需担心</P>
% J$ G1 Q8 k, i9 t% T4 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ u+ A, H2 Z+ |% I" F6 y& Q! @4 l" P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. t- K& H  B, o/ l5 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! B  M9 s# w2 A) T3 Y1 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! k. ^8 G. S6 `& O- L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) W7 O7 x: |6 E7 a0 O  ^5 c# g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 X. F6 r& ]8 Q& r+ |! i& C+ }1 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ ]" e& [) L2 q! q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' e7 \$ T2 h2 Q9 R, p; a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( H! w) f3 K! g+ f2 F$ ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ u8 j2 @$ z* x& P/ K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" d* T+ M, X% l1 k0 U& y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  r3 X0 F) a' l5 q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 P* B* J; \4 N1 E. W* P! ^8 H5 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 |2 z& Y. [" ?' v# `/ r+ T4 B$ r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* b) x. z# P% L3 z* g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 F) B5 J# D/ G+ c( G9 B7 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- I9 C% ^0 B5 M3 Q3 t4 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; O! x# @; k& f' s我请你剖开它

4 E# n# C- j2 O6 K+ X% S7 M; D) U: b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ]5 Q! V/ |  W& j8 N$ y, ]" _3 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>