【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 r' h. q  s& P: @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 W6 |$ V: I% V# z6 @9 lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( u, @5 o9 L# |7 NYou needn’t fear anything
* |, g* D! t6 X8 O+ aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- w" A; i" \9 mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- o$ `  Y  v! _0 A5 A0 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 L: ^4 g3 r- V, |# dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* y$ j# f' I* S" J. y  pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  g8 _) j* L" W$ r9 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# B4 L' n9 j" Z' DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 U0 F' }$ a: G% u3 {2 x# r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: ~/ M; Y# j8 ?; g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 y4 G- }' R( w, P( c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! N. B4 S) p/ ?" g2 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' Y! u6 \, P/ }8 w" n+ l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% v5 Z5 b7 O; u1 @4 Y' |. P6 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ x1 z: q7 F. `5 |8 A7 l, ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* n( z2 T! t: i" |+ f7 n6 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- \2 q1 X) u& S# y0 A, ?7 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( u6 A# Q* C0 d. X. v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 [. y# m" h' A: z. s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' J( a6 T  r" W6 h' R1 X9 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, e$ T4 A5 V0 J  `: E. O9 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: C5 w1 a) D4 A( l* q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 |% E# z( ^' |) \0 U/ |! O0 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# J9 f3 F3 s7 X2 N# t# Y- U) ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 Q2 s2 E! x) h$ \- O- b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( K; }6 n' v( S6 |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! e' a0 e9 `) R, G+ T9 A6 b8 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 Q. U6 [6 V, O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 ^; W, a/ v  P; q, M( t. W6 b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- D" O/ E% ~9 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>