【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 m0 l* Z/ t5 M/ i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( E1 v) `7 E  k6 f( V5 J9 _! [Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 w+ u( |, ~  CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% J! a- l; {! Q1 v7 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* F% l0 R0 C, l" sSeeing the sky content with its love
4 z0 P' Z) H& [  Q6 L- mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ @3 U+ K  R. ]7 L, N' C: [Every other word you utter is love
  ~, F! V$ F% Z! @7 k" i( v6 c' uI really want to know just how much you love me
! T* H( K; U. c% B/ GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 E: i: [( R3 T( h2 ?& bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' _- v& i4 G& e7 r9 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: f# x) s) ?$ y9 C' a: e5 A" fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* P) I: Z- k& C& W! `I’m still filled with fear
! T- U+ u% n. P9 [$ _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* s7 @" B( o9 e2 H/ Z  M* LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 c8 Y: Y  F2 ]3 \3 b# o/ WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 S  @, h, g" h) v2 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# A, P0 B/ r) ~$ W# Z: p) Q' oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# A- C; E8 V5 J$ b! }7 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) _4 T5 f- [2 B% n. y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- ^2 O* w+ U3 W2 i2 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& j' N5 r( W; h1 t% [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( w* `! h' \7 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, Z2 H7 I& {4 Z3 `8 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& Z4 V5 ~+ F5 {) R  m0 B) O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, a& S0 S  U: u0 h  e  }: q* E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 Z* h( A5 {  d! Y7 u/ k& o# c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* W6 v( d- s+ S9 H- Y5 o* `9 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' g/ _, s5 U! H0 r* ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& X! S: N2 v* G4 [* f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, e7 |& K9 l9 p5 K( E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 B8 e9 s4 l8 ?7 j8 w% f+ [# P5 g3 t' }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 j2 A/ K% C# P. J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! k+ b# W  b/ A9 J  G' R& C' A<P>I regret not dying</P>
, g0 `9 N, A# W, a2 t2 t, o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 m  M7 O$ `9 A: K6 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. e4 K' g5 C$ v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 `- T3 \3 x' B* z+ H' {+ z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 [" z0 z' [3 p5 e, o我请你剖开它
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, v' X- p+ f3 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 f0 x+ p- ?8 W! _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>