【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 c) W" S! r4 A2 T3 a6 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 R1 S. y7 h3 c" j! JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; \2 X3 ]: }9 C/ r0 F( k/ J( MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ a. c7 h  h3 h; u6 l& ?4 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' j- @6 d' P% B" ^; Q! [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; e1 ^8 M+ h1 H) U- pI love you I love you with all my heart
, S3 D9 @; [) C! s8 d' l4 P6 DNothing can compare to my love
9 I5 l% o" [- {; U+ ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ w( A; |1 ?- e3 b0 _4 a) bI want so much to see inside your heart
9 B' g; T. {/ `; p$ }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 F8 p) [  q# }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ G! b+ x$ k5 g1 \: P* ~7 Q( iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 b  h' q2 q3 \, L7 N; G& Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, x% e* H4 L# x+ [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 j  s! I7 p. K; _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 ?" c( ^% s7 D2 q' ?: F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ a) ]' Q8 d. i* ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  F# f4 C2 U0 x  x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 ~8 `; |7 J4 S6 h& y( C! a. F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( {. M8 w7 a3 U& f. n( U( {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 w& c6 _/ K* [* t& ~<P>你无需担心</P>
( R1 X* J2 q; H( f6 n( J- s. {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) B! i! P7 r: K# M, `3 S% P8 u# |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 x3 e! k* c9 N" R+ `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 F5 w5 `$ S- Z7 g1 x* r6 O8 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 n) W. J' ]' @! Z6 g$ o$ v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 ^- N  j) p5 S0 b  z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ X0 g5 O/ [- T: |5 @) Y; ?8 I- Q6 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. |/ }( Z, X/ o4 ^- n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 U& s) r0 l8 ^2 N9 M1 J1 [- r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. l- q. R' w/ e0 {+ I6 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" {, B5 u; x5 z/ K; S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# x& |2 I' ~" {<P>I regret not dying</P>
, d$ N9 U( Z% D" o0 ^# v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' H& ]2 ^( r3 J  p0 k+ b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( M( W" J' e; [+ {/ ~* m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) @# n. L% ?9 k0 ?. I! k7 F" b  g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ I/ [/ _4 P, l3 `, e# |0 W. B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 g& L1 y% i- L$ z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. d9 p) \# L: U' t6 Z$ N8 _& f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& G# S- Q/ j( J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: a# C' _* b+ v: O: [% x( G$ G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* v7 F* c' f" ]5 p! o% I7 J4 R( A3 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 J2 ?! s8 B2 e$ Y3 |( X7 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 d/ p9 R1 X+ w我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ b% Z3 |2 G( A+ e7 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>