【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ ]7 P& I$ g. p2 ~. v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! L! e# W9 a/ e3 hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 u$ k; ~9 @  c% uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- R; U$ k3 X8 r0 u. E2 _7 U4 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 M& K7 O* A7 ]7 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( x- X2 Q1 Q7 I6 H$ Z" |% |You needn’t fear anything
0 ]8 k# G9 ~+ H( AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: r2 ^/ `8 T" I% lEvery other word you utter is love
" U6 s6 r# ?& o/ Y! O, f/ r/ [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" G6 m$ }& }3 o1 g! J0 F9 hNothing can compare to my love
  M. }3 Y8 w  N4 Z4 z  A7 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 G/ Z! Q+ V$ f6 K5 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! X- J1 T, l! X8 q3 i, B( P6 LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 \: H; q+ @- G& b. t9 o) [0 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) d2 w* n6 _. O& G  j5 }& u% ]! XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ R! h, u- C7 N. c& h5 @- l) fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 K) d- Y& a5 f3 M1 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 Q% h0 v0 c& n/ `3 n3 \' b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" d0 l& q: D. R' m. z  Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ R  I6 Z* D' V3 W' k  @" E7 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 I5 G$ g+ `" V9 i7 C+ Q/ |, n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' X, ~6 ^$ i4 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% M4 B3 q. p* o! O: `3 T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 n. p" O- M* h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; l( G) w2 U7 @5 X8 v; E* A8 Z7 ?  n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ z. ~* _% n: ~! I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 C/ \  D5 g- v! ~* n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 b7 h* I" N" h7 L" a* z! G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ {' I! f( |8 _4 s2 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 q0 S. L' j/ G" p2 D8 T1 D1 j9 R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. Q. Z" w+ V1 z" a8 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" Y, f, f+ a/ Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, i4 I  w6 J3 H$ F  ~" }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. s  Y3 e  O% `, p0 p5 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 v( g  a% Y& l, Z; M1 z$ [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ _' _( p# p& J, M  B# \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( j. s" {1 Z- I" @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; a! P  X; b; o/ X+ H- A3 u) k3 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) T$ D! A) p( y7 n, t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 T/ W! _# V, Z3 E# H7 n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& [; p& C: g! ]! l+ Q5 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- [) o+ `0 o$ D$ o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! {* D5 T7 W( f1 q6 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>