【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( l: U0 ]6 H4 N4 F5 W- \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! P+ t5 P; s. o8 ]. tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 w$ ^# U* C4 E; b2 k  g/ w3 A  GThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 c& V  e! u) I5 uWith the moon kissing it every night
; s- C. j1 ^6 o0 X- T6 l- SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& U6 t" k$ a: l1 zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- X2 y$ n# I" D# v2 F- \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" l- o2 Z2 k* F1 H8 YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) R  G5 e( u8 z5 A- t2 S4 TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! i1 ~/ ]$ t+ y/ c* E1 z% bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 y3 S) P- a' s: ^( a/ }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. l/ E5 h: j$ {/ j& K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; I7 w8 I3 E4 h( g" P5 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 V1 S" b2 ~% S+ v4 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 J  K$ o1 ], R$ Y( B" c0 C' [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 T" A4 x1 u1 i0 u2 G# ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 I  O# K3 ?& Q' t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  u4 \( _: ~7 F( J* |# q1 F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( l: q% l+ l- d2 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 U+ g4 I/ n* E( C+ E1 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 m( [7 @. C2 J$ t* Y0 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  [& K9 P' ?; l8 V5 V5 D* w$ `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. g6 ^% `% q3 X" J6 @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  m% n  M8 P! H2 x, x" ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ U  g7 S. _8 b+ Z3 b: X! C" I, U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% u2 S5 |  E5 _3 {5 f3 X4 w2 W+ V* J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 }- m* z( Q, u  D) O& A* v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# c, C' u& N" t# k" t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 \+ U6 @4 @/ B4 \/ J$ A$ o8 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ K- T3 K6 K4 F6 }4 X: h<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 r7 s% `2 r% k2 f1 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. ~6 f* C& i! _6 A+ ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* W) @/ Q. Z; G8 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ u2 G' N/ ^- p( u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; f* r+ K1 `. Q: c/ H/ @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ h* \( G, V. c/ Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# \. j* y5 v2 W1 f& I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 j$ D" E, l- ^' a( Z( t7 n2 c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

. q% w, U8 ^6 {0 X" p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>