【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 R4 k" s7 c8 U. m( A7 N& `; {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 \: ~# S" [" F8 m. MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* d. Z% C- }' N; nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  @! h+ R9 Q& {Every other word you utter is love
3 P- m" N" \( X% R2 YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ Q+ [" ]: p, j; I4 x* @2 }# TNothing can compare to my love
4 h  f9 |" {" W6 d( lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, l* T3 h$ `4 q; g/ j$ qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  B# M& I4 K6 S; u: PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: a6 a0 l/ O9 {5 R. lI’m still filled with fear
+ E4 E. D* J3 o2 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: `2 u. D9 K* t* E7 A; D! EI regret not dying
% p: \3 Z0 A/ U; w9 K' v2 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% v  q* ?1 R8 p2 d+ QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 F; t' C2 M- x+ H, t3 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. p. B" A. x* N) F4 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 `2 }* ?& k0 h# z" f0 T- e6 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' o* X; X! }, R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 m; r# y$ p8 o3 v' h/ V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 c* `! Z; g/ X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 z- n3 x. S7 \2 n6 g2 B# ]1 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; X3 L; F- k; a  z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; k* ?% C0 U% B% {9 P* e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' h7 t8 Q1 a) G; A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 A+ k2 |* \. }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 Q" `1 i' U# N6 |8 _3 V! a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 Y4 z! Y  `' n9 Q6 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! `# E: R6 V0 J+ V% X2 B# o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 C" e8 E+ C6 D! P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 S% C8 ~/ F$ [- p4 q' [: P; A# D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* L0 {- R& F- u/ |0 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, u: |; [  V/ B# [5 P4 ^3 h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 p; l( R. o6 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 u5 h6 }& `" y$ t  G. C+ O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 H  B0 h) Q/ |" C- q# m* M# f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# d& w, x& P5 I+ s: o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 s! B( o4 Y2 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 h9 g" d- G; k- O2 N/ G* }6 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 e" v! H) N: E: Q& d4 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 R, C+ Y% ^0 }; s" J9 A3 S1 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( {( [) H3 G) B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* e0 V4 v7 Z# ]* d6 m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ f9 o8 b- c8 e) @7 M# I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* V  w0 E+ A( O; J- V9 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; r$ p7 \, n% ?  }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  M! y: I; A$ t2 ~& u0 \) M/ {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 m0 b4 _$ a( [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ C  K; Y, D# G7 q( _8 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>