【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 b- S' L2 I/ m# {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% X# L8 u4 p4 C: e: s& O7 @  }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ x7 ]+ \) ^* j+ b6 P7 p: F. VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 @! S1 m' S; ASeeing the sky content with its love
; a$ W3 w1 k. A, _4 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' P/ J5 D) \, J: L3 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! a1 E1 v8 G+ d" R4 o, E+ C; @5 oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" ?( q3 w: `2 pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( I- y2 I: E+ v/ ^% eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 Q7 s) a' A9 m8 o/ Q3 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- K) i0 w: R* w0 p( |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% }6 a( G0 ^- j& j, w2 n& f* l9 y7 g/ M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ p# e1 k6 J( t: t; J- V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' D7 I/ T  X/ ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 r9 o0 {! U6 M( c* |: q( T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. h0 C8 Z0 e" q5 V) r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; i! |) @7 U' D6 l* e" U/ J0 Z6 O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# H$ Z3 z$ g; Y7 V, v! ^8 k+ T1 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 R& T3 I8 `& [* J6 e2 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 H" @' i1 F2 G3 m: S3 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, v7 X4 N4 {* r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 r; ~4 s* _. j' U# i2 k% p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ O! [1 N! @+ t. A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 h4 R) ?" c' @" |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 h5 u$ g, }% ?: K% w: _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 S2 p; j2 ?4 O2 E# b+ o, K& Z  i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! H3 w) ]/ J0 ^7 r' X: Q- g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# I: i- S4 i, v& J* g1 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 A3 K2 f' ~. @7 L* {( Z& l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. Z6 Q3 c. Z- f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& x0 h2 C- Z. w( Q- u1 U7 u- `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 ]  J6 M3 [1 W& N3 g. A; h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% ]# J5 ?7 H" k3 o9 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 a- ~- V& v; v! C4 v( S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; Q. x% h; l3 e% q& x- @. d' @7 Q5 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) D( C' j! u' a/ e2 @3 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- L$ C# R; l* N& y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( ~+ H1 C# l% _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 a+ Q! {( n  s" @2 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ l7 }) i. ?! i3 ?$ O0 G2 i" d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" X- s) l0 D9 b) U3 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 z& R" u& f( @7 S4 c- _. r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; i+ m* U" @& n: Q& S! e" P+ ?5 N3 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 L" c# \2 u* l! o2 J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! X3 Y* E: g6 _* d4 b" U; ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 A) X, t( _0 |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ `2 u2 Q/ Q# P+ D& L, ~我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>