【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: }' }2 c- @; i6 i5 `  fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) U/ c9 g* ^$ o( u; j) @% zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( K# B* l: C% p: o9 o! w2 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 N. I) F) b4 J4 ~7 VSeeing the sky content with its love
+ r7 D& r8 v" c& {" P6 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 F/ G) A0 P$ ]( o' k9 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 F! G. ^- M2 @3 `' RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 S- y; H) u0 R" Y1 Y7 HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 P1 I4 A1 Y. z2 E  SI want so much to see inside your heart
4 B% p3 O* T) _/ h% lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 Q6 G& C# k5 v4 C) zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 M2 N. c4 m# p3 R: y* X; |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 Q8 H. v1 U8 ~: @" M, QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 Y6 v" \: j* w" k0 E# n4 D  u+ {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; `" h& X7 J" ~9 s' p5 y" Z, i9 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( ]$ ?, Z3 v% x7 t9 J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 j' r/ N& ~- u2 d4 ~& q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; c  T1 B7 S4 v4 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 ?. ], Z/ ]4 A( ~  p, R% B. M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" u- U* Y/ O; N8 L5 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 C0 k/ G$ ^+ V% p4 `  G7 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: ]1 A  r' p" X9 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* U( Z2 ]6 V9 y: e) S+ j) k& t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) E1 R2 T5 }" Y% Y- y# Z. c<P>你无需担心</P>
# D% G2 M5 O, n% z8 Y( ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; e" Z2 ^; y6 u/ D! S+ ^; x+ j) M3 m" E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. x; f4 h: V$ [1 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 Y6 y' p; ]4 Z6 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 [+ {# \. b0 k' f4 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  B8 L; Z( R& c0 s* n5 b; C$ [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 w8 t& e/ i* s* H- c0 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% w; T- l8 z  `! V0 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; x' F/ k1 w7 `% x& b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ D* k* y, q4 y3 W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& Z. H9 A. c& ]: z9 {/ q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ p  I' O! X$ R' J! U+ T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# a. D% t5 k5 V+ Z/ F" k9 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" I* `4 T* {' ^# e7 m4 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) z) Q: A0 _1 k  A# z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" F4 I, u3 U# |( S& n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# x* b% |. Y) _$ W: d( y9 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( ~* l3 i8 I( G; y: \2 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: [0 X3 \4 [- ]: v* B! V- \3 f, w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- I: e; w, H& J& H% u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 q+ m: {2 A; N. H5 |' D0 j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& k5 q3 I9 F) D& c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& Y% Q! C2 U7 z0 f! O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) E7 E8 G9 d' k/ z) j8 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 U3 }& B- B% u) s2 P# O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>