【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 y3 j8 \1 L4 O8 t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 z' H  u/ Z5 Z/ T% bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: @& e2 U' g" Z4 i; i8 x0 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% g  A+ N0 |* n+ @+ M3 r; UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 y  y3 T2 D3 |# X- K. dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ [2 q$ p/ R, u5 y9 S- iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& n3 A& m* ?' }3 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 s. z7 T5 o1 F* UEvery other word you utter is love
5 w( ?' `9 D$ [5 w4 |' ?: |I really want to know just how much you love me
9 X, P! L* L9 [% U7 O3 j  {2 dI love you I love you with all my heart
1 s+ ?3 I9 _6 J, b  M1 ^3 qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( V/ R+ c' T1 GI’m still filled with fear
8 y+ O1 D7 {6 Y+ q# V# j1 b% m$ hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 G( w" J0 r* J' z! U, O, nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; X5 b  z# F: P3 [/ DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" B4 S* a; l4 C* _7 s9 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 S8 e, @7 C. F; J9 V) T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ h- M2 @! u1 b7 y' _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% Z. G+ ^% l7 _0 p1 H$ s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 W3 R  z: a9 B2 O* ]* k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 N+ b, i6 C2 X: s, J# k( N* S<P>你无需担心</P>
- O6 k+ S; {/ a$ u- _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& U7 h* R' J( W3 R" Y( v. C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 P; R# M0 i# z( Z8 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  t% y  Q( K& G0 q/ j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: C: s$ }5 Z" j$ ~) p2 d0 N5 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 ^/ j. u2 e5 T& g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 y' V; l) d" l% y& H% a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& Y- u9 D8 f8 D- {& q1 k6 @/ Y. i! R: [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 p9 g2 w+ ]  k- ~) K$ m* ?1 Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ O2 z7 U6 B5 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ S; D1 d0 d8 Z4 R8 W( \4 G! B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' S5 _! @8 x. g8 ~; M3 s2 c4 Y" C+ g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. n: [" g! q! x2 n' O3 H$ k6 k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 }8 E2 `( z1 Y) d2 W! t& H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 l  r% j0 i5 t. }2 I) I) C) i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 n& o6 \# s2 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! r# Z% L$ o! V6 J% X0 y8 u$ B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* q' S- Y& n7 H# V, x1 U7 j* l9 A) p( j% K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" i* {, r" q3 ]; ]0 V; ^1 m) p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>