【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ f/ S# ?2 X# iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* A( S+ \8 L/ ]! {) U' d. JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ G# l+ f: C: f# VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 M) `% {4 c  W/ r9 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! ]0 v8 z1 b' s, f) a7 s; H  ?/ D7 M( mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 `* i3 N8 C' }* N. ?Nothing can compare to my love
) z8 `: W# i" V6 z6 X; jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 {7 L; ?7 G/ dI’m still filled with fear
: G* ^' O. f1 a+ d6 t! \- v" BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 G3 w  C3 l3 W6 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# [, _; c1 b1 }9 o9 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ U( m5 J6 s" }) _3 F/ WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 v" {# u2 b: Y( x& c( V* p7 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ s- w/ S9 Z# Y" @/ |: x; ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( ?4 T! {: w) R# z5 p4 x' d, h) v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  {* L: ^  E# C" u- h3 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- t+ c' ?% d$ }+ H& O7 o/ Y( C$ O! e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# C! m' E: }* n* U. I, H! _* x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" W, o  q/ J+ q( \: U8 a2 U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* x! n+ z( z& y$ x9 G6 G- |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" s* r; X" }! \( ]8 W: t8 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ b. R5 M# g) \7 v! P" @8 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 E: i* S$ l  G) y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 }8 h8 L4 s) i9 Z5 B# X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% a; ^% Q( t+ j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 N: O, d& u8 y* V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; I! G7 J% G% Q! H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 v7 j) f6 _  d0 H2 T8 E/ j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 W! f) O: F; c# \. B# Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: q8 g! v3 N  g. T' v; n* ~. Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 R4 M6 e. H( j5 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ s! }2 {0 N. l5 q  l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  T+ m8 |* _& l7 n. ^) e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 B5 R- N, Z- S3 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' V& d) ^. K& w' Z7 L- E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, a7 i- p; X. r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 G; z. W' n2 I" ?+ n$ S- q! U. ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 Q: K! i7 v7 i5 l2 }; e9 o3 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! ~  [0 ~( b$ Z$ H, Z5 F: M$ ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 s" J3 U1 e/ P" ]. B- Y" A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 p% z* {) x( U* p6 J6 V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* N4 ^! B& B0 d5 p# C/ S, S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 l) @! t3 g) R( E. ?0 Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, p5 x" K$ m, I* r1 @5 b9 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>