【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* B7 \" Z. a/ M( PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! ]6 D" ^& H/ l) s$ L6 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. W5 X; Z5 C( ^, D" W1 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( U2 l% Q$ ^: V: q5 G* [; rThe sky is happy down to its soul
* Y6 k: N& i$ b# g) v8 G4 j- MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 ~* l7 |; D5 z: bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; U6 }: l0 \; A. P4 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 J9 t9 z8 U1 q6 uI love you I love you with all my heart
4 G/ g( z4 F: {, U; \! s% jNothing can compare to my love
8 X% l& w/ H. GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' L3 y% }7 `& J3 F; LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% s7 }* I8 }0 d* XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 w1 r5 S6 O9 L( q2 `5 H, Q0 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ |7 ^4 _$ V9 D8 D# C+ N. oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& W  W  O+ n& M; w+ L9 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! c2 p" {0 P0 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 w" {) b& Y! T5 B: [4 h6 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" w( j8 D% i$ T9 |1 Y% }/ }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 j: I" t& J2 m) ?# d# z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ `% }: x) ^8 v- W3 ^8 R" ~- f! |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, b* m( i( l* L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- v( n, c/ ^) @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 S9 z3 l: M4 F) w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& k) |* U% k3 V( ~! f4 T0 J! m: n# x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 }: r! l* X% s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ e: A) m9 c, O' v& W- K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 F- R7 s3 x& C) M2 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  A+ ]/ e, X- q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ \% W6 r- M) z' k0 z" h. _( }3 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# d- v# L: f1 ]3 h7 {; X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 r2 l: R5 n/ E/ Z) w  g# G, y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  T& H8 }$ h1 C! n+ c- I6 t* a# C. ?+ E/ |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: E) x1 ~! @# T/ O# x* ~1 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. A1 T9 Y+ [0 B0 L3 S& u. e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: Z/ H" m0 w6 p, p. k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- B5 j6 g2 w" Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- H- ?' j3 \3 ]% [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) O: X' H" u4 z* a1 l( R  ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 N; b! D9 [2 f. _  p$ x0 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" t5 O$ |6 a; q0 s- U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 H" f$ P+ x7 W1 s* D! f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 T, ^6 \& V, `1 k3 }3 c# C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ Y+ d4 w3 O0 q& p% H4 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) G# f# n+ a$ c0 r0 n2 r: E$ Q! P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; n9 s  r) Y6 x' _  W! G4 B+ o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 v/ w3 P, Z# {* {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ @3 e5 Y+ c7 Y- l* N1 Y- b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ e# a1 ]! S+ v, S9 a4 E! o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>