【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 u' J8 S: E$ i% j. \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! A, B" R! R, W' W- J& F) g; @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 c( r: x* H3 N. yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ i/ {8 q( b! R5 BYou needn’t fear anything
* [! N2 d2 o6 k0 L: ^) VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 w7 w. ^% ^. g) E; IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) i! g; U+ s' p. ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 V) Q% c3 C* Z: `: p! pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 w0 h8 [, S1 P& L2 e* [+ a" R0 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- ~+ @% n5 C& F# m8 E8 z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 _/ S- p5 J3 Y+ x9 J1 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" W9 ], g9 H( X( k. l( ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ p- F8 R) Q; t7 h* J; }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, i, A  K' e! c  V# t" @- p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: y1 j: j3 E7 B! M3 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 ]2 q6 j+ Z% |( g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& M- ~1 |1 q" |+ Y6 G/ ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 j; v" s) G& X3 L) r* M0 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# e* H% O; K# H: i; i8 {0 V$ W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; i. i7 z( e  J& j4 w( b4 v/ D, v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 V2 E. ^* `  r( C/ P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 n. A3 O6 U7 q% ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 V( J* U1 r/ G0 Y! |0 }9 H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 V) v3 I2 X' ]6 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 a8 m- ^& l# \) \' N; w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. ?- a8 Z( o- y4 O* l* u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ Z- X* c, d; Q2 @) b2 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 h+ j+ ]7 h  ?, g5 U! r8 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 n" a& \: R% R  N/ N: w5 S- W1 c2 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ w$ t. [% p$ k" ]  V* V, ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ O0 |( G# p& S3 T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* N! X& H/ N  K6 ]- I8 k2 q( l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 ~! y8 k6 X1 N* M. h. D0 j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ m- a/ ]2 [* n: E! L$ H. X我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& |* c- s3 a% E7 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>