【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& V" G" i: Q! r, X; R% Z+ x; K0 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: x6 m5 Q, {* Y4 m6 n0 P) YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& ?0 `7 g9 A2 V) MThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 z$ ~1 D# E% B' B, P" {1 QWith the moon kissing it every night
9 ]; M4 a" Z9 k# ^' y' JSeeing the sky content with its love
- O+ ]# u  J) t1 T) N+ q) p* z0 a: y  JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! T' T4 C  U; p8 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) \0 D/ Y8 K- ?  B" z) TNothing can compare to my love
( W0 n  P3 i) `5 A7 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% m" ^- P6 f2 z" R7 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. X1 H- Y& i! @6 P% GI want so much to see inside your heart
2 p& b$ C  W8 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  G! ^4 b% X  ]- UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" K+ W5 y  A  p3 g/ l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ m' X' o! d) b: }& k: r! H% W+ ]1 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 a* _* X+ h& ^: q  P: G+ v# |) o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! o' ]$ ?$ r! I& q* I* G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 E0 G- k  C2 d' W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) [) h% N; f! C0 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ e( x( r: o: l4 c& S5 M$ I! L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ M% ~* u0 F, G' o0 n& G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 g/ K+ j* Q5 ~, u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 o' U! ^& x* A: z9 Q$ [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" D1 D* ^9 r& {2 r& {6 M2 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( k! P6 g$ ?5 B0 \, A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- `6 a' _) k% G5 X8 Q% W" N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 D) S7 `0 M6 m: Q3 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( @  Y1 i( G3 ]. k! C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 G; v  R$ W) g2 {5 [* u3 @3 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 U6 N1 z6 {: {$ d" o* h# j, d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' l" L8 z+ L' G  K5 K% e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! c  A  u$ v$ `6 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* t9 c; N1 p' e1 d, m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 d2 |1 s/ q  n. j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ b; k6 L' ~/ E; `7 e! F& E4 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  s+ ?% J# J. z# i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 A7 A  _. N% g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, J' ^5 k8 `6 u# b/ E1 S3 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( }" F. i+ o( o4 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# A/ Q& Z! X& q& V, s# i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  N& A1 ^8 S2 V6 l; J  p( k$ n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, X6 I) A: T5 J3 O. Q$ q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: R8 G' w; ~* I) M我请你剖开它

% k0 D3 N% e3 ?) ^+ S+ A4 S$ m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>