【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ X$ }0 p3 |* G, ]* g歌词我附在后面。
7 O0 ~: p' f! @" [( _: oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" Z) i  H, c  C3 e; v# b' M' w' I7 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 N% t, Q6 }5 K: XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* {/ `7 l6 n8 P7 u, LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 J6 L- U( I7 _: u; a# `- {  \* uI love you I love you with all my heart
# t7 x) g# J# W, ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& w# }% g# l' e* m' V$ kI want so much to see inside your heart
' Z  O- \. a1 ]: xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 |2 E$ j! {# P7 b6 M; Z1 [. bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; h  y5 E/ l! W/ g/ _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. s6 ~. W- L$ q' i9 j7 c* yWith such a tongue as yours,
- m* {# R5 @; h4 y7 F- @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# [- {/ K' ], Y0 o1 W* ^2 kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% z! f* V- Z" J9 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; T# F- Q! i% M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. P& h' L2 _2 r+ K5 s7 n3 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 Z& c' e+ R. M, t2 U9 x  }6 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# i+ b( f9 B$ A( W8 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% G8 c$ z! Z4 a& r7 i5 ^. U2 e6 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. j; E- |, ?* m$ U9 a$ |- m; W2 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ D! m+ B) b- \; ?/ S  b( d# \<P>你无需担心</P>
4 u& n  C4 a+ [/ O2 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% D0 ~9 }. x% A) O3 \* E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 W2 d$ B( X( ?( N' K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# I) N' n4 S" |, L9 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! m6 Z- f& R. ]& Z; X4 i$ I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" v+ \+ F9 M/ C; a& m' }1 ?4 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 F+ H! p. i; ?1 g1 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 {! ]7 \; _: |( l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( K$ M  |6 }+ t2 A. [+ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
# C. B$ |/ Y5 K9 V/ n/ [5 L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) i, e  V: S2 z2 t3 W6 D, d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ }% M: H, F2 z9 }% N  ?/ S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) x" G+ u  c3 j! Q& O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; j+ E/ m% _( A+ o$ t: t1 M  k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 t; U5 M( V* r% h3 R# [' X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 V9 r. u/ p, x' Q: O. ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 u5 a- V8 R: G) k# p8 s! M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ _  {1 q! i, L$ p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 C" L( M2 J  A; c! g. O) I. w" F我请你剖开它
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; h4 T- a7 `2 v7 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>