【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 z( Y7 z8 A3 d7 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* j4 M8 N( a' S+ }/ G6 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; |- C) l, X) AYou needn’t fear anything
' p( \3 |/ i" I5 ?, C! c# QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 i" P5 G. y' Q, l6 s5 iEvery other word you utter is love
' d" k( |' a  R. |2 K' r2 K2 o7 iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 B' ~1 E2 X' DI want so much to see inside your heart
  K& Z0 q, P  g# ^* wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 J5 {; N0 {3 t. @& Z0 AI’m still filled with fear
" [2 r" t0 ]! s# f! dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 @# c' d, i, u% f1 b9 M& NI regret not dying
* r7 L5 |. s+ a8 c8 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( w; l$ [6 T0 @( I  @8 o) GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 I. g- Y5 U: Y6 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 i8 d2 \- ?1 e: X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  ~/ |2 Z1 I- A+ R" f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 Y9 ]. e( M, J% K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 c& U* Z  H0 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ ~0 `4 |, e2 k1 L+ D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; p) G5 B) q( O# Y2 H2 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: S" a2 y# Q( ~7 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 _! E% S8 v6 u. q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ g7 u5 Y# a" }: @. q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- V) Y, ]2 \, u4 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 c+ W  s9 o( F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 K& C, C: K: Z/ N4 G2 D6 w6 F2 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! M% Q. `* G" r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 |6 ~; N5 |( p, h/ Y( R/ H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 R3 }9 |0 L8 O8 [# v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 L8 L) c) A( U  @' j# ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  W. N7 W0 a3 a6 C3 b2 v  w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 F/ Q$ W- y7 C( F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" E, y. B, O6 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 J* w  w' k( f0 C( {  C2 j! l1 n  m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 k& b6 n  L3 S2 C* Y7 e0 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 B0 v4 {  A' D% |+ `0 E; _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 n4 q0 ]+ w1 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- n7 \' H. Y0 e, @# f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: a# ]0 Q% o+ ]" b* ~4 U6 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  `/ P; }0 h0 R9 S1 z0 O& l我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: v  B+ u: W* U1 e) \9 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>