【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  f6 j/ W* l9 V- v+ T  yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ Y, S% N8 \% I. d% G" [- BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 M6 S0 A' ^- B. N* F6 K! xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. M% c! L' D2 R9 jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* n* v( L$ p  [, w* v, v, bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( c/ u$ U$ s4 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 B3 E7 E* S4 Z& V" [! lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, _3 M$ B5 b8 Y9 p$ s: u0 hI regret not dying
# D8 z: z/ t6 |' K# d; |! BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  N# }- k+ W. ?0 B3 m3 U) dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' K; e  {' ~3 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 o6 b) S" Q3 v$ l0 J  b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' n+ c- L  v' ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. c3 \1 q% ?: T; w# `/ @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, q4 W/ n* J$ Y3 F5 G) ]4 y9 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' t. v+ C1 I+ w) W1 ?! b. j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# n5 c) {3 }% @; }5 Y. Y" d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% v+ t- o2 V5 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 @) [; s" j+ S1 Z- F7 V0 \% w. z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! s: A  n# b; d, B% d% T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 G* P: ?# V# V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ d9 g/ _1 U) B: T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 g& i* K2 @2 k% z2 W  S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: M( {5 D! o+ K8 ]! \( A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; K6 F; G9 x& z/ S4 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 J# l% O- c' E8 y* i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: e, s4 Q4 c% a0 A/ J. N( T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  N, B* \4 @! e/ g" y' G+ p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 n' u! c, u4 A4 B( R/ s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 _) ^! ]/ Y4 u" L3 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 Z4 x" n0 l6 u% b4 R3 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# F9 D4 E; q; H0 K) E0 a: i) ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 o) Y' X6 E% r! t, K3 _% D3 z9 h: H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# q5 v  q# u( T2 f' m; ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# z" M: K3 Y' v我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>