【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; s0 ^6 K: r+ L8 f4 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; F8 C  N. |; YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. \, K9 J! ~  `+ C6 `The sky is happy down to its soul
# ?9 V; |0 W- H5 n5 P+ ^With the moon kissing it every night
& p. A9 Y+ h- U; q, T3 t+ JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& L' A9 B( x. x# t. ^; PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 ?" ]6 T- s% ?+ CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ {+ k7 q2 h! V6 p! }I want so much to see inside your heart
- ?/ d8 R1 b+ d' q. j! n- \8 o- e& dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# U, b9 P( C8 z. fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 M; J; W# O* h& h/ {/ [+ DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 M; ^8 ~0 [" ]$ p* }1 @  ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 @1 d0 s4 w% T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- y" d0 J+ Z9 c! e6 _9 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: G, h6 H$ y0 [9 W$ V1 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  F8 E! z  ?- p. w- ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' R- I& h1 p1 y$ w" F/ m, r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 }7 c1 l+ U% t$ Y; F% x7 `8 \5 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 |% k' M* J# s3 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 x0 z! U. v% J8 q5 X  G8 x3 {( b: K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ |- S1 Q% `. _$ r: I* v) P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& R5 Q' Z" m% V- @/ _) |: A1 K/ |: k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  `( P2 q, C9 t! R0 U* c8 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 g" [0 U% e3 d: r4 R  M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! Y6 |% D1 D" o; U, S  i3 c3 G- o  |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: a: L  M- L" i1 X6 D; b5 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# M% M6 b* H1 W' {) X4 i/ k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) Q2 H! A! I! f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ @3 G9 x  Z# f7 I- i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' R& M8 Q. `9 t4 Q. i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, T, D/ ]# \9 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* t% A; g6 ^+ |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* h/ n$ [" {, \" k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 y" W9 |. K6 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% j/ ]" q4 p6 W+ S$ u2 }% C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% o" U$ U4 t% U3 l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# r- t+ G( e) V: |3 w0 R# p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. \  f; y: [  ^1 A1 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  \0 a8 ~. d9 w3 @" H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>