【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# `- B( l4 B2 L( h, }, ?2 w; [. \歌词我附在后面。
1 Z. Y& U2 K' H8 H9 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- i) }0 P" r. Q( nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ V( V2 A/ ^6 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 N* b, |5 _5 L  i- }0 p, kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' W( d7 }$ o. l! x0 Q# Q) JWith the moon kissing it every night
5 ]$ K; M: w3 C3 R* o3 VSeeing the sky content with its love
5 y+ w# U/ u) z) l! \. C! ]) kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: ~3 Z/ j- U2 X5 L1 W/ u6 mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 c% g6 N9 m  h$ p3 PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( C+ e/ x" `# m) m: gI love you I love you with all my heart
$ C% X# q( R$ E) oNothing can compare to my love
( W2 j$ d" m1 D4 f1 h2 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  }  U7 B% p3 w" A6 O5 U% HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, m- j! B! q+ wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) O8 Z$ y- I7 l, q* _3 E  _+ BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% P' e4 e  o: Z, |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 o1 b8 h" j- D& N, U9 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ h5 {4 G; o1 N# p6 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 Q% e2 a; O! u, W7 Z. ]8 l& K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# i( o: L* G* a: R% E& G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- n+ G. `2 R# }/ M, I) Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- \: R! C2 o: g7 ~& P, o, Y$ A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# a; o' r8 Y6 r7 h9 c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ R" ?4 S) |  W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ ^0 M3 c! i/ J$ M1 P& M& y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, I. O4 h) Q2 ]( Z1 N2 h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 c, @) a/ @8 e9 a4 O0 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 ^( \& m$ |2 I- C+ L6 `! U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" R& D0 f8 \; v+ ]" ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 O% s3 G: g8 y4 T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) q. O6 [' f, C# K: m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# }! y& s5 J5 C' ]  l) |( ~4 d2 L6 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% L$ a% Q/ z: L/ O$ l5 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 g9 c/ Z- N+ X& H* X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! v, s3 U! F3 u$ j0 K( l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! J9 z; d' k$ _9 H) r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* C" b  Q) |7 \! H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ n# g: t* w2 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( n: q! h4 c$ y9 }; A" j1 o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! ?+ O# v0 @' I3 _6 z7 H; F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>