【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, h0 H5 @. E: m3 K/ v& t: y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 ^) g) e, r4 u- @* p/ J. R& \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. N& n9 v' r* Q! y$ B! [Seeing the sky content with its love
7 x/ `3 S3 D$ YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 e& p& [/ v& i+ H1 UI really want to know just how much you love me
+ v) @! ^; n' H/ I: h) A4 eI love you I love you with all my heart
' M, h' U: X+ u% z% D( KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# [3 D& p; r, E6 p. k: I- }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% P: y. q) K$ u$ `% y; OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 x) u" Z. S+ H8 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 U5 F6 T- Z5 l: c/ Q4 H8 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. q' P* q* ~7 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, k, R% [( `% L+ e6 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( d7 U5 ?$ Y3 N6 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! k6 r! _( S. o2 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* u4 @0 `0 S. r1 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 G" D* f# b  p; g. D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ {7 [( s; t5 ]6 F- s: |( Y' v" Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 s( i$ y6 A* `1 c1 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ [( w' |$ _# W) s1 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 n6 W& ^! p6 Q/ M, L% ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. l: r! p3 c- q1 D0 B$ V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& G8 r' W- G6 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( p7 b0 w. F3 R7 P% M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ |8 z5 s7 \) V, R8 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- L3 c) e, W4 T# F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 O! A3 \& G! {* @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 |! N$ B8 g* e/ J# D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# Y! q+ B/ |2 Q; r/ O& K- M5 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! z5 K! L" i- A3 C2 H9 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  \0 U! m# x. u7 K4 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 E, X- \' ], w/ s' t4 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 {  C# G& O$ A2 P2 t+ T8 t. @% o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* d* y3 d) g% H) ]. r+ F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. Z' p) Q% C* Q8 ?0 d4 c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ o% f2 K( J9 U9 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ]# y6 r) g4 }4 ]5 b3 W! Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  }9 U7 f7 M9 h; A+ i$ i4 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 f5 Y  Z4 l. v" a" y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" g$ w9 x' S# k/ Y* _9 r' a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% I" a1 @5 f0 v4 z6 @我请你剖开它
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. o( w+ h& ?2 X5 {; F* X/ _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>