【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 S3 Z% G- F( I  K# C8 zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 E9 e+ M, m$ o; UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 K6 Q5 e$ m$ Q; o( L" EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 t: F7 m* j4 w' O6 k- `) W: O0 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 D7 Q, g1 M. U7 J' TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 @+ K+ @5 f5 {. c; VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( \+ F. m4 I% v+ ~- u6 _2 g4 }+ L4 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  x- h# w- y5 x( [+ G5 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 }0 o+ N/ h" }& \2 }# n7 [4 ~With such a tongue as yours,
& g, y! |7 C. u0 J* X  C6 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 U1 }2 ^1 f: T4 `" [" kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. T4 p5 R+ P0 I2 N+ N: g" |' b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ x5 a' M. C# ?' {! s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 t2 w! V. ^+ I& N4 D) x8 ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 b$ d0 j3 ]' t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 y8 [4 y3 k& y2 p' s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 ^+ U6 d8 v# T+ l9 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 j! }/ s" k+ D& T/ C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( X, Z8 e0 c- }3 ~( [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- \9 h2 V2 b, ^: |+ ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 z9 h0 J* H0 o- v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& k5 {" R0 W- }2 y1 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 A4 t9 s8 b% H& T1 W) G8 ~) }- w& q. R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# d5 F0 ~4 s; L3 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. b9 v2 y% E5 u5 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 q2 Y: l7 `( q/ ?. ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! {5 W0 e4 |" j$ O! z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% r2 w" C1 b. @: O( f8 p5 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ~- E9 h: P* `' z2 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( J# j" {, V) a! G3 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% o( ]" D) g/ e9 \( }; m$ Y& X% K: \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% j$ S( i# Y+ M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; V) y, d# B; ?1 e' |& _! h$ |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. ~* z. s0 i6 C1 Y+ E$ C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 ]& I- p8 L1 E) Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 b$ D: b9 j3 R# z8 D: W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# T8 i7 `+ g  ~4 U; _2 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 X1 @) j6 ]+ R; u6 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- E! |1 w, ?/ q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 M4 E) U+ \; c- i; f4 b" p我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>