【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  e1 i; ]. J$ D3 l! O9 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& p2 |; A, Y; M; A  Z& C% ~The sky is happy down to its soul
* p0 c  k8 \2 `# MWith the moon kissing it every night
  E& G) I; i1 a4 @" I7 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% c/ s% _% T% v4 G) g, ~; C. AYou needn’t fear anything
+ J; L( }4 H: V0 Q/ D& MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( v7 ^4 Q/ o( GI really want to know just how much you love me
: V$ l6 }" g2 z7 D) II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' E1 M' |: [8 e9 k8 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 Q7 L# g0 p9 g* Y1 v1 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ u: j% f5 g1 v7 _# iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 \& W- m" E  q/ }7 I8 \  x8 zWith such a tongue as yours,
* Y* m4 W- ~6 \  w) j! Q( C' x, SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 M& {) t' C: A/ E3 y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 I( R* b8 p+ B$ g# f0 e9 M  ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; z' o5 n! |1 C) S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( r" T. m/ {% a7 v5 [8 v+ e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- r7 w% @7 I9 W: \( Q! B$ ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, H2 H5 Z* b* s. b" G5 [4 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 e9 c8 |+ ~7 ~; R0 {* J  z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, i* |* A# u" @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! c0 h$ W, A% m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# s7 B& _7 J) w, }/ s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ s' F! Y4 _5 X* D( p2 f, Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- y& ^+ G8 P6 a1 f# P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ k- M" l' E- p2 o  Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ A6 G5 T& y/ c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 z. k  _3 {/ {, |! R- u0 C, x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' ~5 `- Z7 H: Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" R, H3 I9 |- Y4 r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 u0 f) X4 N* ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 h" u7 C3 N( H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" o& n8 ?  W/ R  l8 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 _6 a6 c5 v- p0 R! k& w8 Z" S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 W3 H2 G* L0 v1 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 V2 b+ V! V) h) N( @* z. D! H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ e1 p1 Y3 q3 F( E2 u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& {4 B9 j7 C9 g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ D) S5 i: u: K8 T% V" w8 T+ {我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( f6 _- ?+ W3 z0 z- L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>