【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, d$ @4 q) r2 H2 H' cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; t  b* i+ j" }) O1 N1 ]6 x) ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 `4 g. e" E$ N8 D% uThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 W4 H: |) {6 K% d! M) |. lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% w! {( q5 T- x' ^4 w2 z8 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 U$ N6 s6 L. YYou needn’t fear anything
8 U- E7 p' X  oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# D. i% M- ]! z6 e; A9 JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 J+ H! {; o; }9 i5 c7 bI want so much to see inside your heart
0 S. B) |* r4 d7 R. W/ uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! k5 }. ^& E! E. QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  x0 X6 K6 Z$ Y! FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ q" c$ I$ D/ b4 _) F. s1 J1 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# y6 y8 P% b" i/ i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ t/ z7 {* h4 Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% k; O) G5 B9 l- x5 h2 L8 i# ]8 s! n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! H/ ?/ l+ Q# P: P; Z+ h% z# X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& q1 X' y2 h- N: }6 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- n5 A( e; L$ _8 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& E( e7 c0 I$ R) f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ P! D, S7 _. g- w: ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 B6 Z- {2 B+ E0 K9 V  i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- I- W5 [, @4 A' z3 X+ ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% i: r! O# U" B! o* {1 e" S  e$ E) ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( A0 H/ M: ?0 \2 g% h$ C7 x" n" [& u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 T; M  o" d, Y* `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& g# O7 H( M3 |. i9 I1 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 W; y8 `" ^; C0 E; O7 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 X9 g* `& [' ?/ M7 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
( @" \) |9 Y5 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) Y/ H, C: N+ C3 G1 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 }, }- O- m& ?3 R. j# u4 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ T# a* F- ?6 F: K# D8 ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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3 B. w, Z7 u" {% R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>