【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  y+ Q+ E; A/ v8 z8 P# j歌词我附在后面。
, z- d1 Y, d5 N+ x$ y" H. J: S0 [" Z7 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# i$ R) K: x$ M0 _- e2 x+ qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% H6 I: H6 r( C. q# v/ ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 s& q  S4 P* l7 {7 I; e# H, X/ TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 a7 H* |' b7 v2 n4 R2 AI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- T" V! w3 T  x- VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  N, g& |4 z+ N- M$ c( Z. CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 q" L' V- B  d! q- _6 \% M' l& LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 c4 w8 k9 h. _- e' X& f: [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 @# b& u/ Z6 I' L. FWith such a tongue as yours,
4 T% ]( P6 l& P) N* QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 c- `  ~8 `* R$ U# S- S0 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ T$ n; v7 n" c0 d* n' Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& x3 D* N- j; [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 w, [. V4 d$ h* ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ j* B' `" k  T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% U: T6 f3 s5 C. A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- N6 h, }$ o& \6 [% t& c* Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% ~5 |7 e1 q4 f  G* Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& R. \6 z. d. i% J& o% ^6 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! @( x+ {/ _4 W8 U( V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& Z/ C. s8 n! ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 J+ r' h) T. s2 _1 `$ |" a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) z7 l9 g5 C/ `6 S& O1 d& ?" j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 Y5 u, t# }+ ~3 S- @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' p8 Z! X7 M& {1 f2 }/ B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% W: U8 P) q1 z  x4 t& D4 ^8 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& s0 W2 ]1 `& g/ g( t& |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 J( i6 k  E. `. u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! T$ H4 g, x$ T4 M0 X& d3 _( Q* V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- z) M: K" o) y* U* ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* _% D  U$ f" l6 s7 B  ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 p) ]# |- Q0 F' \" o, l8 [, j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% V% M  y# ?/ c$ G3 c" L% r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  J) O" q' z) V  W我请你剖开它

4 `  c0 y, @/ A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>