【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: H" Q( ]6 ^' k歌词我附在后面。
( m, `! K8 I% o) I% @The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! J: p5 o  u" u0 v, J3 j* ]& }7 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 ~: i# y+ J! J5 F8 i( f0 A$ ?" ?The sky is happy down to its soul
* i1 s( U! o8 U/ r$ J8 c& z4 a! Z3 \' IWith the moon kissing it every night
5 H% {& M: d' X1 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
! l6 Y- I( h! r' u/ WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! Q- @% S7 g) Y$ C  {# r6 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, q2 U3 _5 ~1 i6 K! |) p' `Every other word you utter is love
6 p7 a9 \  X  iI really want to know just how much you love me
$ s$ t+ {! e" CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 X. G, E" j# V5 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 A# D0 b6 W' A2 E6 i# C/ f5 ?I’m still filled with fear
' [( K, f7 L1 B! W+ I1 w. ~) C, aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 U9 ?# s* J0 c+ w- k6 [" LI regret not dying
/ O; i2 |3 g- A: \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: P( r- b% _4 U. |6 H% M9 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: y6 x4 f8 f6 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% r9 R! `* N; C, tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, b; L3 e. `; A3 i  W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% e6 C: O5 T  V; ~  D' l9 q6 D1 B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: H/ q1 X/ ?, k- [3 T* R2 @$ h6 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 z: a# l; h4 [% a5 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: h, Z( z5 L/ u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' {: f8 S/ q$ i2 o4 u" g" E% g% i5 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; f# I. W* E& D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# D4 A/ \9 u* n6 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 c) \- q, g" H1 k2 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  f5 \# N- {+ e& W5 y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) U1 Z  P$ q9 d9 S! Q3 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. {2 ^- u, Y( h* d/ X# H! i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 P( `  B5 ]% M" s0 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' Y, E  k" J" M1 a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ Y# n9 ]2 H: ^$ I: D) H" G# c; O- u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 a, U: D" |& `3 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: o4 N2 D# t5 l* P1 @" s/ K, x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ r- }0 F% M% ^& e1 L4 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 p: ~9 x/ F8 B( B; ]- f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 J( i7 K4 S* S5 j" _! n3 t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' p* C% C  ?: d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& E; K! q5 N/ A5 X; u; X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, ?! E( e: t0 N7 ]  e& X. d3 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- e1 n% Y0 J- u  j+ l7 U, k/ [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  P& z& Y* L5 P4 s: }/ E  T* }: c6 x! Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 ?+ [- v; s" Y: C3 ?1 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 J! C, ]+ ~6 n4 b我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! \3 k9 }: s0 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>