【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 r+ C, U3 f% w8 M: A. m: k! uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- a/ g3 M6 ~/ h! x0 k8 w  ?+ HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 O- \5 [: `6 h! tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" v5 k0 b4 D! O2 s$ R, A! ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' O' |' b% w& qI really want to know just how much you love me
/ O8 z$ X2 F) b+ lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% y' p3 ?' U6 a: ?7 A2 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% t1 a* t5 K6 M! \4 Z/ y3 kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, w( L! c6 g& LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 ]  ]6 V# C# B5 FI regret not dying
+ `. n5 Q, F- \3 A2 ~% R0 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 r% m! l7 V! vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( E  [: W# x3 uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# t' u5 F5 U+ s# Y) U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# g" {) n. s* u: u3 ~9 x0 N3 U3 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 Q4 T  H- e$ U- C+ z3 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# a/ E, b9 x) H: w" R5 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" p% _* q6 s+ h$ s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ _0 v; c: B7 p' o, x& J  @) h9 _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- M4 F& Y" n7 f" l$ n9 B+ b: |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( m5 S, R0 N7 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ t7 L: `' j- |/ I9 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 O; o( B/ _  T+ @9 Z- V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# H2 ]* V4 z7 k9 ~: ^. k) p<P>你无需担心</P>
$ S+ w# N; v+ X. I. V$ T) b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& p* E- K: B( Y$ f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 J) B8 ^3 E! U5 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# m$ M8 S" q$ y% N+ D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 X0 q. t' O* M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 j/ Q/ E, s  M+ p. Y8 R0 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. u0 h1 W3 ~" j# M/ I9 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" W% }9 }. H+ b+ g9 p/ p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. d) U% y; ~/ G/ u: s% a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: N; p! _, K3 u: X0 ^; A/ A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) v: r2 q9 P- d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 G6 s/ v2 R7 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& T, ]9 C4 ]- Y9 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 W) Y3 `2 n8 [- j5 U! x! r+ w$ S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 L$ r8 P0 f( M$ m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% u; g) O( g3 }$ Y2 K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 F, ~: D& b' [+ U8 A我请你剖开它

+ H) ~# w5 I4 V( q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>