【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 C, F. D# p9 q0 x. J# a) o% J3 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ z3 U; C1 `6 f+ H, Z' }) iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' j7 ^* O" a, V) B7 f" KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 G) T* U) b% p" G4 T0 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 b6 L$ e6 z& \! NThe sky is happy down to its soul
, n# B. k/ s% i# A% w0 |: rWith the moon kissing it every night
7 |! e2 `% a9 W0 P" W5 E' eSeeing the sky content with its love
9 i# E: w8 C' D. }0 I  @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" T: v* ?8 V7 P6 @6 lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ [1 q% ^: u: i9 O$ R$ w# UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% n: J( k) `: t5 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
) ]4 N) h* }' z  j, m3 INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 a( D& ^/ {/ |) p+ I2 [, m2 dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( U3 \' C6 V. XI’m still filled with fear
! v' ]1 g8 [( N% k  MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: T. H9 f/ C# L8 ^I regret not dying
. Q; e0 ~" R8 [# rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- R0 \6 `% |+ [) M$ X5 r; b9 H% C' EWith such a tongue as yours,
" r& o! G" m7 P- E& ~- cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 v$ D& P) I( M2 z' y) v* X$ d4 ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 Q! |! }3 a7 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 ~$ Y+ K' I! ~& d% s* z  z5 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ X: g  H( O5 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* T; S, i2 }( B- u# M+ Y+ G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: H, m& j: ]' z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# `$ v5 [6 Q: p4 e6 u" A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 H: @7 e0 s0 U' r/ g! k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. i' {3 \# p( n( Y5 ?, _. D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  M- w1 K7 X6 F0 l+ m3 n+ G0 j, r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 b/ D  p" w. l9 w- N2 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. d: j! t. b2 }# w8 i* j' D2 p1 G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. }# e) y& O" X7 G; K' @, V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 J  k5 @( c8 }- @1 V, ~2 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' \( X; s1 H- \9 V: n2 U, M" ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! U# \5 b% i1 L! M% A- b, p8 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 Y5 f; v" a/ i% N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. H; ^' `4 |$ Y2 w1 U% [' j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 k1 \4 R& V8 b+ O  `2 l" l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 U! N! f, m! `5 `6 {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 I9 |9 U  ^' A6 J! ]6 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' y9 Y$ X; o6 O; y" d* N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- J  B6 x( D( I/ T我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>