【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! m' I' a, _+ L8 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 G; E3 N% D1 n; j  N" e% XThe sky is happy down to its soul
! T- n/ i* F- ~$ wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 t0 C# K5 n7 P- ^Nothing can compare to my love
7 I/ `. [3 j# V" r: cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- v5 C* t( e& g& E% \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 Y/ w8 \! U( kI regret not dying
4 ?( d3 a0 }, i; h2 s) G7 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- q- ^  c$ q& t# s3 @8 `/ jWith such a tongue as yours,
5 N* v: i" j4 Y7 B) H- g7 j# CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: I0 L$ D7 @( n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" T( a+ P  e$ l" @1 @' A* z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- @- y' w2 g6 U4 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, N  P8 X5 _; a8 ^/ A1 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- @6 z  w. w2 a; j6 r- O( P* n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ C( p; ^5 u* v9 r+ p! N/ z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; }1 c3 U: p; r8 E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 {$ K/ _6 C0 ]* Y5 W# ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  J2 a3 [% Z: U8 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ Q3 I1 W) g6 S& L8 E3 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; ~6 u% l8 T( J8 f; J% g% \: q4 O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" }4 b. {; X) }) ]# y, J* m( T2 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 U6 B2 R! u1 y. M0 |+ ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 a- [) P& k; I+ G& x( T+ c- j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  e' Z" _: q1 q% K+ Y! ~9 @0 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- a4 O6 a* S4 J6 d: J: ~' m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 e9 N4 B% x6 z' Y: W, u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% C! t8 o* I. g: O( p3 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  ]8 J0 F* d  n0 w: W4 ?, c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 `, h( S9 ]1 Y3 u- n" |2 v6 G7 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 e9 v+ D7 o; j. Y$ |( W4 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ c3 g& q$ e* S1 v" u<P>I regret not dying</P>
& w( w7 X1 Z& e) y6 Z1 t1 n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# x& S- ]  R: d) Z, f8 W5 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. v" t! [+ i) U0 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( B) t/ f1 U+ {& ?. a% d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  j% E0 ?$ b; y) s- ?3 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 n& K+ M0 b/ H& d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! x  d1 A2 i3 c, |; G" ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 A( t, J# g$ D4 v6 @0 ^我请你剖开它
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: O7 X" Y2 ?* ^3 e/ @! g6 ]6 A0 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& A( P. F) ^! q, {# q& ~) u) w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>