【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" f. f$ N. l- O: VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% ]7 c2 G& N' B5 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. X0 z$ Z' d1 v! h- m9 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) Q9 V6 ?: t6 W8 Q. F% OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ p' ?6 s2 j, q# a8 m) n  q1 nNothing can compare to my love
+ z5 n/ s% j7 E! B+ }& _, oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& H3 j* M9 \3 ]) ~( B' \9 NI want so much to see inside your heart
! ]3 \2 c' w# j0 N5 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# Q9 m& _- H3 H1 V$ {+ v0 fI regret not dying
1 e* W* K# O. T2 ~8 b% N% dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% j6 |, _& E. p" `; r0 `With such a tongue as yours,
3 _; z, q; ~  L  @2 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, @; t% x% m4 x1 N# u: ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( q+ A7 L2 q! s+ N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) Q4 Q+ a9 Z5 d$ Z4 W6 O% D5 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% [4 t2 M3 y& |: L( o, M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. z  i2 N8 w! K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' s; o+ ^0 f5 w2 f2 ^' z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% K# N7 `, U- e; E+ z, N. F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 w5 C2 j! b7 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ y$ Y9 D' A2 m6 F# |. k- c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 K5 ]+ x' J* `. `9 \0 ]0 k) |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ k' `) B, j0 k' G! ^5 x<P>你无需担心</P>
) w; g- u% n5 K& h" f7 B. z# @# P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, D; H- j: z( O6 Q3 D. h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; y7 h5 Z3 U1 I5 |$ j; g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% |! [. P3 [) D9 P, M, S( B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( Q# E6 {7 K! M: j' C2 i4 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 }2 v2 B$ D  f3 @% ^- |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: }1 _0 O/ a" B- ~3 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& a$ R7 K6 r+ Z1 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 i6 T1 t* J& [6 r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( [  Y( W1 K: W' ^  G" h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 H; k2 m# D6 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 F9 G2 z, L9 B- g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" O; Z, T+ N) f# v, p0 E7 P, y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( _1 ?" s$ d) s! S9 y/ m+ C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 v" J% u  Y3 b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 ]2 Y. p/ t% E4 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, q3 u: F# @2 x/ s: x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 p9 B$ G- s' j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>