【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, s6 ]0 @! y& Q" b% [7 @# W1 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& i* r) ?+ A+ g5 {$ o8 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' s" d5 M& f) W4 a" U* c! ^' Z% `0 ~. s7 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 m1 c* V" I" q; PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ p. m9 w; v7 G- wYou needn’t fear anything
/ n2 ]5 J+ c) c* I, cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! ~4 H' I5 h1 l9 dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: p9 ?! \) P4 Y- s& K+ k4 g7 l  LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% F( ^$ c. r! H4 n) _7 Y3 x( wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 I( [% h$ j  B' z2 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 `5 T4 F" c! SI want so much to see inside your heart
+ v, f6 a5 E  G' E( rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! k* a5 ]5 z# T. h! y3 x5 d; LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ^8 {: g8 p# C. B$ `( I, k; Z% |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 q% e+ v7 ~" p$ T: \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) v. r% M: c' G  }4 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ T4 S+ @; u5 i$ c" L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! B; Z9 o6 l4 G$ K1 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 x! o0 f" \7 {$ \4 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; S: I) t' c+ c; ~; o* s0 m$ U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 }" \( L, t  J) \% ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, ^% }- R( d4 v0 o; _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% F5 y  m& N( J+ F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- {1 u1 m! _8 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* V. l% P7 y) ^- g; I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, U. N; U2 S/ Z/ L; O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" x  h5 o8 ]% U* T# o1 e" v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 m( }: L- }% _' U) w8 A# k8 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) U; ]$ W7 }: Q8 v# C$ d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ x  E! ]$ v" x' d5 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 H. p# w& C, K# D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 H5 ~$ K; @  N0 \3 C0 ?6 M$ G+ G6 r/ P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" J9 C5 _; ?+ W& d. O! Q* S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- M& I6 g% ?& k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 ^. m; Y& n( T3 B8 ?+ x& X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" c4 T& P) w- |: l<P>I regret not dying</P>
) y" j, g0 W) R3 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 s$ [! l: J# l. A/ f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' s+ @0 a- k4 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 ]% F5 t; q% M. E; \: y# l$ ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' U$ x* l% x( \3 P; y* N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 D: e1 X, d' ~  B1 T+ v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>