【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& p4 c' J- R3 U+ x2 Z7 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: j, U9 C* y2 O/ {/ {6 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 v% [0 v. m7 f& e# M. H, O0 Y8 U( ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 W$ h! {3 b2 ]$ \The sky is happy down to its soul
: t$ q) I1 t* J; zWith the moon kissing it every night
1 c& L2 c  u: N) y0 PSeeing the sky content with its love
! Y4 J& z* a3 M$ c2 w; f4 Z9 `* DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( g+ }$ e' G5 {8 ]4 h/ HYou needn’t fear anything
7 `3 O; d: ^' U4 c( `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ Y, |$ d" s$ w  NI really want to know just how much you love me
% B8 H% W& \/ U7 F; u/ T3 T' E; XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* r# d2 {% i0 A7 R( n9 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 B( X9 p7 J6 {8 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  f' F) B7 O$ z; u& h- M3 V* q  ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* A: D% _1 W, t+ t- QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; n$ c" Y" p8 ^0 V5 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" y# N: L6 i5 w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: M$ {+ B- y& y* w0 u$ {; F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# N  S4 Z1 S, C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' m$ m  {+ z$ X% R8 ^9 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& _& |. T) |7 v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 C' Y# L7 X& i( k9 Y. m! D  L! C% N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- i6 |+ z. h' B6 v2 q0 ~- ~7 D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( a3 R% N; V' J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 M" j6 l  t' r; D1 C+ Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 Z4 }  p; i$ H. C- q! y" D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! ~8 B: A0 g1 \, X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 ~2 T- h/ b9 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) \3 R% H  B1 O7 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& P' Q. b- _  B7 F1 T) K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 O. ~7 @- T9 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 a0 U3 H7 m; C  n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 S+ V6 V/ I, \; J, f7 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) F9 a5 ]/ o2 O, J! c  T' ]! o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- B$ D0 E5 [" m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* N. L& l9 ?+ g6 s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 F0 ^# i& i$ q2 X2 i# H1 V' n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, I# L: m$ `+ r+ y. V/ _& K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. t/ x* Q8 V/ ^/ d  u2 W: B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* A" e9 B4 R7 n& \7 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ H  L' |) u' S. Y: H! P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>