【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 ~( g: }! K( g7 ?2 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* r$ N' D2 m$ T! u0 O! KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( J$ d* X5 t- B! @0 k# T" uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! J- o/ v/ C4 b- p, @7 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  e6 ]2 V5 f/ F7 _+ pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ x4 n- I* D; y* I3 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! G- P1 @- z( E- m1 T4 y5 oEvery other word you utter is love
) b7 V3 l/ s; w6 II really want to know just how much you love me
4 d1 ~* b4 {3 p4 R4 PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; i% M# u3 z- dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! K4 b2 \6 F8 e- u2 x- i( hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. h  ^: F& w8 `' M6 m0 P2 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* k. Q/ o' r) M( R- A3 g7 Z: KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ U* I/ p  ]4 V/ KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ y+ K. A" g1 A0 _4 v2 e5 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ a2 s+ J) X' X7 v+ ]6 x; E# G+ v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# p6 ~% H1 U1 u' s2 T& o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 r" n) i$ v& p8 l% y6 W! R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 M# R8 G/ N" `4 L) O, v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ n( m( x4 _2 `; }  w8 `+ Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 N3 Q3 J9 K* Y( E% C+ B$ b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 B9 p: z6 m& Z( {( L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% a* G- O# V3 L. o8 Y3 i* v' J9 U" A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 q$ \7 T0 k3 s. Q8 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 q# ^( r+ I( _3 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 \7 O7 L1 b$ p3 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ^' r& v7 c# S$ B, T+ S; u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  \7 d/ ]1 X" z% d- Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% N+ K. F3 h  K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 J$ \% J5 B. P  j% T- z$ _/ x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) u) ^5 q; k- d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 w0 w% J! l4 ]& A3 S$ @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* ?; L8 N% _* t+ p! u3 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
) y* K! k3 l8 T9 V. v) A6 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 t0 Y4 ?% Z3 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 @! Z. \$ p% T& P$ u' l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ M' d( Z1 `1 f" E& o5 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) f0 k% V7 G: z3 a; X2 A7 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: E# S0 B6 l- a6 ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 Z9 ?# W( }, S- A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>