【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" Z  L" W) w( x7 C8 f+ P' q6 K% Z" I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. E, ^/ {! w2 `  _Making the sky glitter like gold,
# ^, E0 L6 x. r3 s6 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 I) Z" S- H3 F5 `( Y% WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 A4 V7 g: o% V% qThe sky is happy down to its soul
' C" y4 C( B- V. \- S8 t' b6 sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& F/ V; L0 n1 c# rYou needn’t fear anything
) J( j, o" F- e- ~* {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 O( x6 I- V: u$ O" Y1 ONothing can compare to my love
6 `5 _3 y: k7 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 i( [4 G0 W, WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ a/ S0 X1 d4 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 S5 u) d' `/ d2 w8 Z% i- H1 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 U) P& Z2 B. X4 z/ ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 D0 F+ ?$ \  y0 h( {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" [' y4 i" Y) h9 C& O8 a+ ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" Y7 X. Y+ f6 g4 y$ ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" o% N9 y! A. N% l4 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) p; O, \4 a2 N0 ?- v1 i# h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 R" K8 |- e# b5 V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 ]  i/ ]% G' I& L1 p8 C<P>你无需担心</P>
( g" i5 j) L/ p' t; U# s) ~9 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& j) b4 i6 q8 y* X* t' P. ~. T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# m; g" r" V' i$ Z. W: h) n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 \# e% z/ G+ p, R# Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* S5 S" A; o/ a" b& {  V  R. ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' l: b# y! q& e) H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 N2 a9 {3 m* d0 [% ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ x$ i0 m( o8 |& L: A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ B9 ?/ P- w. u7 X  j$ L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 n) X2 q9 P$ u$ h" M+ n3 P( F, T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- f: m5 ]2 f0 o) f; K  [4 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% v# z) R6 P! B8 {! l& I% B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 z3 m3 n/ y9 E/ ~* ?* D/ Q+ G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: l, f5 b" n6 R& W" R& V; B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' f% s. F* M$ D" i* d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ?1 s; W$ d( B! L; x% {" a4 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 K5 {" f% S* h1 h% z. J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

. p1 w1 k1 g+ ~6 N) q+ c/ u5 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>