【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 K  t4 n+ c. Q( PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& ^5 ~7 \* g: bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ u3 ~) b9 q8 s* R% U. o# m& V, I; }The sky is happy down to its soul
; x) J+ E  }  e2 C' W9 ^) g* C# p& aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% n" G% O" N  U8 N4 V1 I: HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ A$ f; ~/ G  g0 e. b+ _+ ^4 e+ I- fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 @' m# o. \, sI regret not dying
: Q/ m4 K) X$ t4 C) T% f2 eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 \1 `) z, ^+ p# r3 x0 d, fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ x- x* x5 M3 xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 f5 x; {6 M) |( x4 ]2 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% `" F' e( G1 f" W% w! q6 ?0 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 O8 ^. c; }. t2 M, k3 {7 d) Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 r8 I! I5 k: _& {/ h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 v  q+ q" [, o1 K5 @$ G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: o% K: n* F# q: Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 z2 h5 D8 Q7 q. v: R" s& ~' @; z% T2 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( i4 C( u+ x3 ~4 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 j; \. a+ H8 {6 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* `6 ^9 |. u+ ]; ?  O<P>你无需担心</P>
/ t2 |+ b. q0 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# B# G0 F) K: \/ R* d+ o8 ]" e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 @6 `9 Z, s" C) R1 a  o4 W; l$ }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 c* m6 W; m  k5 g, L- b, g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  r+ m  M6 B: k) y+ g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; E) k) u: k9 x- |0 G. T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* {4 P- c7 R/ i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: n8 n6 C: w8 r2 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ s! m! U- `- u4 Q7 ]  t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( d. r7 g+ P1 `- ~! ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 g9 f, d) O6 A. F# g; h5 F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: M  `6 M! f0 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' F2 ?4 w; r: l/ m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' z. h$ D- d; Q# e  A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 T  Y5 n. [0 |, _- |# R<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 g! p7 F5 h- M* [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 {3 [# d, A) p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 s% Q, ^2 g) R8 S, L& z  T( L. b% _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& G. g- Y3 _. m( w) k  c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# L; w) n( n) }/ S+ s/ N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. I6 Y: {* J' o) Q4 h0 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 L+ ~/ l8 p( ^' |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ r8 Y+ ?. O5 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>