【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% L1 Z4 G$ z0 a) nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 l( h/ B6 g+ y; b+ \/ h, FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' X( h/ X& [% r( E7 ]% LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; A8 C3 d8 N; {7 _) RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' d9 ~$ Q; W0 @' ]7 V2 q7 B, mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 @8 F0 {' W0 m# l* B! a/ I6 a/ xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 n/ {4 j# N& s2 E" M* W1 ZNothing can compare to my love
1 `: z. d5 |7 W3 M9 k% ~$ O& }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- b3 S3 s* a% g- j$ @1 d# YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  d7 r# @7 ~% p( I2 aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: o( A' u+ @% S" Z  ~I’m still filled with fear
5 D. a8 p( |2 H5 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) t6 o! i% O% n0 @# A9 Z7 B  @I regret not dying
9 T. G' b# B% OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* u  H* _' g, j3 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 K+ }8 v5 B8 xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 `" p4 m0 _; @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ u' B0 Y' \; I; d$ o6 n$ M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" p0 o3 y. \  `, G' e0 r$ Y$ E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; q5 y& V0 d% O6 q/ l9 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 X2 z  _+ a$ s& @/ A; w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 K3 Q' {- I7 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* m1 L* R4 z# _  [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 {. G0 t2 n  Y6 J  o7 c; V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 x+ l1 ^0 X+ O+ v  P( j& V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 o5 R4 w: ^* V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  C. ~3 `- b: v7 h& K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. j) y8 ^. @% J* G: Q* B" k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% C0 {# ^' ^6 z+ z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! b. V) D1 N' l' i- V8 W' U  K( Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 |( A! C/ Y- ~; T. x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 v3 Q% q, _: ]6 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; a8 _; X  g. r+ e8 d+ S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! M* ]& l! Q* K. C; V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, e3 e* G! W" i& Y7 w( X( x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ |+ H9 c6 K  }( P) q, ]; ^$ j/ c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% o: j! h9 w+ ~% L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 b2 d1 K  Q- ?  L$ c) Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- e0 T2 w3 u4 j+ Z9 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 t& e' O. }- e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 G3 C: M) [& K( `  o1 J) W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ L# J% u& r; G7 i. S: ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 R4 J6 v3 `1 @& q( T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' F; j3 g/ L, Z! ~" h  R. }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ E9 r. Z* U" v" }1 I+ P: q. k我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# d% \$ d5 U* o1 J0 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>