【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ q+ H0 A7 i! H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" z6 z( ^4 d/ R& s/ c6 S9 D7 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: y- K2 Z6 X8 h" u% fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 z) s4 m+ @5 Z/ n& P) a! j9 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! _- A% @# O$ i/ d5 O  E1 TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- V6 T* }; L0 X0 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, G# U7 `( F% _! R6 G5 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 b& ]* l0 {1 h% x8 {+ `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; }& K0 ?2 v6 B" q1 ]I’m still filled with fear
6 m% Z5 A; O0 b7 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; H& U+ U/ j! NWith such a tongue as yours,
5 Q( F1 I* t- ~  _% M# AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 U9 r+ O# R0 e; d  ^$ f* s$ Z5 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; f, ^+ F1 [! ?' B8 f) V0 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% t2 G' P/ `& r: M$ o0 {' T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: P: e" K6 s  _8 ^6 Q, G- F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ V0 A0 A5 ^# Z$ }( h9 N- {* ^+ g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, ^6 g5 |8 H" p( [1 |8 t! g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" G9 ]8 l) S  t0 P: c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 {" t6 Y) w! l# q3 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, P, o! j+ J+ l! e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 S4 N7 @- i) n+ m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ T$ V3 X) B; F, x: m# A' T$ X9 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 A8 ^4 C; P" h) V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" c" j( k6 h+ c3 j2 J, Y. \1 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 Z+ @" M7 k7 N1 I<P>你无需担心</P>
; t5 x8 F' D2 T6 P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% P7 ]4 Q- R) B2 D7 y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# ^  W) N. U. Z) i3 f* Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 Y3 J1 Q% f3 X& z# u: O% M" |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 ~9 o& q9 i1 ], d+ c" k  p  {: P' v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! \0 H+ ?2 l! T# O1 y9 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. v* ^0 G# |' _( t8 l, x8 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; S# D, D. b. @* k; u1 e" B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, d6 O5 r+ I9 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- U% G9 r7 P9 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( C1 R( J; D8 ~& y" |" J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 K( B9 z- q: F/ E6 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! P9 `5 ?$ H6 D. V! E7 b1 C+ F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) A# g& D* y9 C+ g$ f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 v0 }: B) U6 [& z1 N" R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 i, O  e$ z: y" S3 y& H<P>I regret not dying</P>
( Y1 }5 n$ w6 D* M. J7 R; V" t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- l' l3 ^  X7 T( m5 {6 _7 W! u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 ]' b. V, y( H1 U* j# c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 A& j% c' Y0 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 j9 h- C( U5 M) _我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. H$ x, f2 U9 H( `. [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>