【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 H9 @$ X: H3 ?; i+ {The moonlight is shining brightly,
' p, o- P6 \* e" @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- x$ R. @) O8 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ S" ~  ?3 H+ }" sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 e" x+ G: F4 h: l5 q6 t0 M4 l% T1 F6 REvery other word you utter is love
4 Z( }6 R6 h: ?I really want to know just how much you love me
/ P3 |0 {7 u$ h. s9 FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 T8 U& S" K5 `" `7 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 S; J2 J3 e  E9 r& {I want so much to see inside your heart
0 ?" |" i1 c  ^& U) qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  {& N5 {# j) v3 \/ m7 tI’m still filled with fear
. O5 v9 `8 ^# PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 v, y1 S9 }' Z0 F* [& e: LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ r1 ?% Y( v7 J; n" Y) j8 nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" ~- J7 D/ v) i* s3 X& U$ e2 e* cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ U8 H# k; P$ tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: H7 }& l* J# a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ N4 G( i7 w3 S* Y5 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' `. S. O$ N7 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, z9 b( h& R9 p6 a3 ~) m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, K$ {' V1 T2 `8 N7 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! X! ]# `2 v5 {. ~$ s) `6 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, z  e: R' t; w. t3 n8 b& K% M+ Y/ \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 J6 L9 X6 p2 M9 n( d4 E0 L+ o. r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ W4 }0 [* f) l- k, r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- k. N& l8 a* q7 z& [& t& I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& {- a( s% T/ S" S6 X5 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( m" c3 U7 @3 I7 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# ]5 W5 c4 ~& G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ~& k4 j, M7 k1 r% ?- I' l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; f. ^# O: G# G: O1 a6 C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 u. X" e' t" K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 s: M6 V2 h/ k3 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ u" Y8 [3 e2 y  a! V5 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( h. _( X( E* c5 p8 t9 j6 [( F! k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 C1 `* o2 N2 h$ ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! l2 J, x6 y/ _' n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  h% Y: B+ n, l: [/ ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& I% Z: n* s6 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ R: C6 g0 }$ V7 w7 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 C" N. O; ^: c3 b7 T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- m4 @6 f( I% A$ [3 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 V2 M( M9 _! L. N8 s% n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) o: c/ Q% H, o" m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* u7 Q- n0 R5 x; y8 C+ G9 c: \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 H# m, i! D. V0 k, v# M! G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ @) y6 l7 Z4 X( x3 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- k/ C; \/ M4 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) L* U! E$ E0 a2 r5 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' m1 A+ e% f; ^) @& `' N1 S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>