【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. X/ G, B7 Q1 @0 D0 b* Y& R: zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ `; C, I3 g/ k& x4 m% k. PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 a# x. E: c5 U" cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ S  _" }4 {6 O  s, Z/ U9 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" e) a( ^3 M/ m) ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# B* Y' m, _( JI love you I love you with all my heart
5 w& b! T2 k8 E$ x" FNothing can compare to my love
. x0 c7 K9 B  y+ Q# R5 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 y0 I& ~* ^( Q+ |- f$ C2 \- N* [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ D% i/ N4 _# Q5 F; j( {# f5 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 _+ A0 w% f% |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 p' r9 }/ h9 X, j/ m- i9 ?9 Z* SI regret not dying
8 L7 C- D8 Q6 V" eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* Q0 P/ x& }6 {: y# ^7 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ l2 O  M1 ~5 n# d( XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- J* K) N+ u9 ~3 p# U3 SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& y2 D6 m  Q0 O6 N+ W& u2 ~. c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) T  L  {' E! V7 k; I- e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* q- D0 t3 W) G* b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 D2 c  |2 W, T( m$ i: ?; p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; J( Y: `  u# _! c. R3 A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 Q5 Q9 s  Z0 r' W" n* C2 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. l( R4 w! @1 L3 v# G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 K1 Q: y2 A5 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 Q* H4 _- m+ v# `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 ~, A* }% x6 f% W4 }1 {/ n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  J, a) q  D6 {7 v' s$ S) n8 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, V* `# b, Y' x: v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ x7 j; y- O8 u" q( F- @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! u/ H( }, v" o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' f: L! c) ^' n3 v! F- c; Y0 P3 x+ `  g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% v9 O' h. [8 ?/ H; i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ g5 @9 s- Q/ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 @1 x1 ?& F" E0 B5 r' `; e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 N) w* M2 \, U0 K3 m4 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- @; e" m+ ^' o/ t% @; V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ O, L! i8 P% p" O. L' V: q* u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. z. `! J0 |. K, @: E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! o! Y% X% D% ~  f( J/ P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 W. L0 M7 [, {+ b. L+ F3 t  y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; X1 P  `  M! N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 g" m) ?, n) S* {+ @7 ^& D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 P; @. @$ c8 s. w$ V% t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 x+ U, c. t  ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 \+ K# a% a1 O2 B1 G; t- X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, X5 F% E, e' j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ m+ r% d/ P0 `! C, t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>