【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& s( w  w+ N1 _$ i* p  C% UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# E  d/ K' ?& Z5 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: m  |7 i! d) Y4 f0 Y: x# HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 [6 E+ B6 g/ D* h2 cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 \3 y7 o) E3 w9 G  m# Z5 k: uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! Z; l2 P% m, C6 B, k7 W3 r4 ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% [6 J2 X7 L# l* B3 N0 n' i- s) MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: u. P/ x5 u3 A- ^I regret not dying
6 W  g/ T! b( _8 S' R! JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; D5 _" @3 R4 R; m7 E( z7 P# ^With such a tongue as yours,
: d8 S/ F' S1 i; L( w/ h7 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 V. ?- z+ ~4 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 i& U- C$ o5 N1 D% q1 i2 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 ~8 C, I, N1 C+ z- H0 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- P$ m& P6 s- {6 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 z7 h" I- }# Q* Y0 x, {0 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ t" ^) Y; J$ R5 [5 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 c; E( ^0 x& X5 J. c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: V$ n/ R8 F3 t3 R1 }+ H: |, Q) ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ v5 H! I+ Y: L8 c3 Q4 W' o3 K# g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: m! B. K9 D, Z- `, t- P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 c6 N- u$ R3 x; H# v# ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# y, T) \  e  O  q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 c7 z  M. N$ X; K# E2 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, G7 I/ y1 U4 X. x7 a) _& F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& `- _1 r% O# p" J) |% x. n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" P; ?! C+ _7 M2 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' I  C; g- u2 l3 A" p! S6 z+ v. U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 u' P5 f& G7 X# {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, s5 Y! k2 \: w) N) P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' ^5 Z. e4 F4 L2 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 ^! y8 I" o/ b: Y7 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) ^: U+ W8 K. k. D; Y$ K4 y& J# a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ r" v: C" u  U0 a2 w: `% Q+ Q) ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 `  _/ j& o1 U3 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ i7 i1 E( x! ?6 W0 c( i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' }( k' H- ^' F! ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 R/ ?2 _0 g/ _! o4 O& p6 q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" }* o1 [5 z, P" N+ N8 f% p2 X( z; K1 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ~6 [+ b- L+ S" ^5 K. }/ j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* c5 l# ?5 }6 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, B8 i6 i$ t+ p$ G! R我请你剖开它

! y5 I' R2 M# ?2 H2 u6 r1 u7 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 R8 l( u) j+ \: K/ r  D5 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>