【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 R  K/ }1 F+ ?- L! D- Z0 b% ]' _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* A- ~1 Z4 X6 L( ZWith the moon kissing it every night
& e7 ~' R+ J+ `, S* JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ ?) k' l* H( TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ d/ s2 Y  k" C; K  P! ^' N' MEvery other word you utter is love
; j5 r5 o0 g6 F" T- F/ II really want to know just how much you love me
% s3 I! n! n/ U/ tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) `2 M# u$ v6 e+ v) ^. sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& D% q; H$ `  h  y9 u' a" sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 k- a4 f& L) h6 h1 k3 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& b% N& R0 Z# g& ?* e5 }: vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: ^; y8 X9 F$ v/ z; Q3 F5 @0 a# Q, jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" F" d4 R) U9 \( v3 C) E$ w( K& kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! n/ \8 K1 i4 ]( ]3 @  I" a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 S9 z8 l( m9 O: \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& y0 P/ M# p* d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( n0 m( j1 ~' q' T4 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. K) s4 \) L' W( B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- o1 @% y. i3 x) G* Z9 f: ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 p" h2 N; q: A) I9 R4 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: s- K6 K- e+ s6 O2 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- ^2 {7 `8 E" t; p% D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) w0 }$ C+ ?7 ]5 Q9 v# c9 b+ Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 @: ]' |1 d% n$ H: F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* o8 \( z  l$ k" J: H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 R" x  ]& y1 P4 L$ T( L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! P8 N# u2 ]% V  S# x! ~. o6 s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; ?& Q2 y' \( O$ |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; M+ Z0 X# x# ], _<P>I regret not dying</P>
: x& m$ R2 C; H) @2 z* J+ ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  C+ l" u. d( V7 ^$ O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 K, [9 Y) t  l& Y. w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ H; p9 b1 F" z% S2 e1 F! T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 h2 q8 K" T6 n. D% l8 V7 l" `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- }- d; ^) f" z" r- \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# X/ `2 N' G  t6 n# I; l- Q+ x- L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) k5 D$ d/ ]- N  o8 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( [, w, L* W$ ^5 |. `! T) |我请你剖开它
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% Y, ^* v- `% W8 i. P7 Y6 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>