【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 _# }) m# n1 c$ {% [* f! KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 Z4 @: P  y( Y, `7 H9 c" sSeeing the sky content with its love
% x5 f) T4 ~) _% h$ t4 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 i$ N( [3 v) c, G! V* b2 eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 ~  x4 s, X4 S- y: M* uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. S/ L' M! S% A8 u5 L$ R( ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* S: u; c8 o9 a! l' II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 l, h' H+ A! M) q& zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  n3 ]! _9 K& s; ^  k0 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% L% @! P: g- {" ~; G/ e4 E1 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 z/ e2 N/ I4 o7 h7 x; F* e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 S+ B4 L5 {% l# I8 l, A5 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 u: [" V3 j* u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 ^% r- ]' p: |( c' m; s% f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 m7 f4 {' F* t4 ]/ s8 i- J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 ?  ^; W8 D9 R8 H- y, x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; }0 L. \8 J3 Y: p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' V  G, u; l# r6 o& U' S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ p6 }) K8 w6 v) ?3 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 G0 Y8 {" I7 s6 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ n( E# R' y% d9 d  t2 T( V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* y" A! g- _$ U1 f' m/ j# w  Y# O6 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# s  l( l  V) P% I6 N" M2 a* c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; M3 ?/ q9 r1 V; @" b  B# c& C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 g2 U) l( s, ]8 A! k& l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 l, P2 Q, u$ U( s0 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: t* r6 J4 e& z; a) T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( U( l7 z7 x0 W3 U* D6 K( H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 M5 m& l8 n) A* D+ i<P>I regret not dying</P>
- S! n/ E8 ?( S/ A# y* W0 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 \1 V9 c% |4 f9 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- n2 ?& R  {& |- o& C- C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* \6 k$ X" c1 w# j' ~9 {6 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. O# T9 i5 T* w& {* {2 f4 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& h+ ^4 d2 C3 R+ y/ i1 y8 ~8 h- a- `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! Q5 U5 Y8 y  f# L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ W  Z4 `1 e: ^7 f0 R- J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ E# t7 Z& ^: N" |" B) @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>