【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ h! @: O: X) G3 _: K% c) w3 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 R$ }# m5 I$ C' iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 \7 b" l( o" a* f+ F9 H3 w3 Z- e4 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 z5 p. y5 Y( W( sWith the moon kissing it every night
- n% h% ?0 F( ]Seeing the sky content with its love
; O' B7 q6 z6 {8 H  l9 k% g' H- oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 q: l/ i" ]# Y8 X6 T9 ~  x/ JEvery other word you utter is love
2 [0 n) |! S$ u' g9 b" k& jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ c& y4 J8 U$ |- q9 @/ P$ g1 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 c0 |; A& E6 Y. t$ XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  u" @7 m  W0 I' l. f: uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 W5 n% s5 @0 s+ c. U, n% O9 `7 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  E2 O1 Z# n; K  K  R+ G0 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 ~- O% {) f' ]7 o: U& M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ o0 Q; p9 J$ l6 e. H6 z3 m% |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  D- D% r# y' Y- @  D! q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 {# b' v  v* K9 c, _: d% k3 N/ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 q3 Q) M$ _1 E, m/ ~$ w0 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- r8 M# K( N. F0 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- _! T# u- L  N. s" E$ x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 U- h' L; g/ e; t" R) g0 X2 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; t+ r! g  B( I: l( o3 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! w! a: r* P  _+ d+ v9 Q8 L6 E% C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% O+ {; F, k- W1 I2 s0 q1 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ~7 w% M; ?4 e, W; Q' e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% q, J5 T' u6 |) r5 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% k% Y, @8 v5 Y7 a0 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 Q/ f$ h2 b: F& G; X+ J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( u! g1 W, j/ y9 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ I; F' x! w4 r( Q$ A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" N1 k# i' |! T6 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 I3 k- e4 I3 }* K& n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 u$ y& A2 @$ j' h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 ~2 f' t+ f6 l. Y7 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% n7 q+ y8 s" @- M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- `7 H9 x: L( y" Y. ?7 Y) I8 n$ K+ ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 l& O  `* E$ X9 }6 r4 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* T: R7 t. e* y/ y, `& U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# F! h% S- P3 r* ]# U+ k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ u' ?) |6 s; R# X( u! N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ~8 K' `# R' U# M" e9 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ n8 n- |' B! m- D2 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' I5 U+ J5 @9 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 h$ B, N7 V) W$ U  R/ H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>