【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" o. W- o! P* c% DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" a! k* k; W9 v, l, p) aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 }5 P4 Q' Z4 q. E3 {0 u& _  bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& u, a) d+ d$ ]" c2 `Seeing the sky content with its love
; p" A6 }% J1 x' N4 k% i2 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 q5 [% j7 I- D, W3 xI love you I love you with all my heart
/ k* k( N* E' l4 P% k7 s! \3 q4 b0 Q* c& tNothing can compare to my love
4 |, E0 p+ T7 l5 k0 c! M" _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 n, m; d/ n/ S( F1 g& H( EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; r2 Q  g) D+ lI’m still filled with fear
; {4 I0 o' a  {) d9 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: y2 i; c/ i! q3 ?9 E6 zI regret not dying
/ A' d# r5 H2 e* ^9 o+ g) @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, Y  a# F% [+ X0 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) T4 I) W3 A3 D2 T! @0 V5 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. h' W0 L! t/ b! G' |6 N1 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 v4 q9 k( b1 a! F( g. S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 c, e4 |% r, c6 E/ k) k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ }& _5 s+ I1 `0 t3 B" k! l* M7 j% `( _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! x& z  b/ u, w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 l' @" V$ T/ H& H5 z+ m( D! b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ Y7 [5 J7 s. I: d/ w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: X) b0 u0 R, C8 r9 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 f5 K  Z. u+ o) f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  t% o4 F6 b% I7 S& z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: N( G3 G# ?6 o3 |) X, Q2 ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 q( ]1 X4 k! C" H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: t4 {) Q2 h5 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- v: D& \  j: w( g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 B, ]8 r7 S9 w) M# e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. S! M$ y' }& y* R, y2 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: |" }: E7 e# Y" `5 Y+ I# K3 @0 `  K! J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) z& E& a3 X6 v( c/ \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 Z- v$ ^, D" T" B4 a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 i- m- {: n7 D3 w9 W4 U& \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; ^4 Z9 H" D+ W; S% P) @6 P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- {) b$ [- K# r& d' K& Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 s& Q& S$ U0 n! A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 g+ ?* G) b3 c* b0 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; k% J5 }# U0 @; l, z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) o. d" W- c9 A9 }+ D! j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% b0 i! d1 M3 \( z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  S) b8 ~/ o7 @' ^. C. ~9 _7 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ \7 x; L0 U+ X) h5 P. f5 R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: x$ B6 U) k! c/ i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 ]9 E% f7 l0 g/ J- Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' l4 q) M4 o, }* z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 h# w9 a0 f& C. S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) t3 }! M. r% G0 e" `& q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 r. C- c! J7 A; `7 }% a5 g) L, c- W+ T/ p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 G4 ?+ M4 x7 }6 X/ k/ u% ]$ P0 y- ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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' w5 N; @# ~9 j- w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 }6 g6 ~0 \9 n, G& F" M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>