【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 U, T3 h" @  ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ @  N$ o8 i/ r; ?4 U. D4 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% T, `( d: L# K) Y! C' g( V) cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ w! @+ v, r, k6 [8 k  ^% r6 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 \; _( x7 g. T/ w7 U* w+ mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- x7 ~4 M: W/ Q# F5 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ M( X- u3 D# v% {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- z" d  \; I1 kI really want to know just how much you love me
( \+ y! }9 @7 `' k' Y) k: HI love you I love you with all my heart
. B# {8 v( P6 ~( kNothing can compare to my love
. s, Z; Q' N8 ]- t7 ~$ S% o  fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: W4 z, u! _2 f! t1 qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! s* {0 d( c* J+ `" d- n# w5 DI’m still filled with fear
+ }" f' I/ k- S; U( bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; c! x2 m5 E3 d! V7 L) }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# x- |5 ~: N: S' y# R' bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( Z4 V4 V) T& ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 Y& U! P" F, t+ k- w3 O/ A0 T! r* a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 E% c' Z" W7 i9 K) \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) w) {# x5 i0 i. j9 j5 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ \5 ~0 |2 G# z! P! ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! `, v, c0 s) a7 Y: `% g9 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 @" {& S# x" f* Q2 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; y1 P' U8 _* q5 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. s* c8 P% T0 [+ h' J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# m/ A2 ?, b) ^6 C+ j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 m' m" F& Z  |3 D( [$ V* T" w; Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& d7 C' ?8 n( a. {4 E) ?; X. Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 M  o5 @3 s4 o4 ?9 E. b* Z. P9 a* y7 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; Z* U6 E* q5 i& H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ ^% {$ v5 u3 [: _6 a9 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: |1 @; G5 b; O1 Q* A. b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 T' s% q- X+ }4 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ I% z, D0 P$ ^0 k7 U* a- d% g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 ]  U2 C. G( q# i- z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" w5 e% D6 R# ?, ^7 w' B4 I; `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: L8 y& H  R+ X9 ?0 |) M4 _  q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' N" s6 A% X5 @4 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  v5 H; `$ x( W: I6 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: L/ x9 m0 n6 o% F, X4 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& L) _) b$ s! h- w6 y* |: [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 V4 T0 B( c+ ]* g, J4 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>