【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" E- K2 e1 K( |1 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. T. w! w" F# H* y+ qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 r6 i; E" [3 l" |. |8 p' EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; T2 F. C, n. P7 p: x0 nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ a' {& B! O. i. E) g, dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* v/ _7 v/ ]: H) D( \- C& |' iI really want to know just how much you love me
! ]* T; X. d" p. X8 |% bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 C" b" a/ s. |. I# e  g4 K. bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ y: D) q, a" D. X: k/ ~I want so much to see inside your heart
% f8 e) x' U9 q7 \/ b3 \; @$ nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  w- k, w9 ~* r$ j1 r# lI’m still filled with fear
; }/ E& S& l3 E4 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; n6 t/ V! g: w( KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! y9 O" `2 b  p  i+ qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- p, w$ `1 j$ q/ ~: D) _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! b" H" D. }- i5 o) dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  x( g, n+ q) S; j/ w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: Z* ^3 ^3 Z5 P' X* q' v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 U( Q& e8 @+ D, p2 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; h8 P' R4 m* V7 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; S6 i7 R3 I# \6 _  S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) S) m( B9 W% F/ w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& ]' E' w( ^2 q* g( k* T2 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% g0 @$ g3 O2 l# \  ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 U2 b1 J2 v" u. J: \. K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 ^: Y2 h0 B: B3 C5 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" `8 n, @! ]# F- _2 C# k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! `: L# w; A' V( J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* m; P  U( L  d2 w, P5 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ a8 Z( v2 y2 N+ @) R+ K4 c/ i. i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ T9 s* L+ W1 y7 G/ ~7 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# i$ D+ Y6 U! u( ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 c  U6 J3 e5 `4 W& Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 R7 M& M+ M) m  ]: N& L# S- v# r/ @! i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 u7 y9 s) \* ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- p1 O" ?; v. ]+ P# a, h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ z7 \: @% k$ O% q" c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ B& `" ]  G6 A! K& K" [! P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 i) }! y' S' m+ N( e6 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 l' m8 h8 @7 b; o/ u  C6 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. W' k: t' @% i, e9 p" Z, Z* o; w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* h7 @, y9 S4 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- I3 B# u, M3 q& Z/ g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( M" `: G+ p# O$ x. w0 Y: k% c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 T3 ?9 X5 r$ t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! D( U0 p$ O) m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  K2 |$ u" W, H1 P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 Y* W0 Q( t8 ?- Y1 D3 c我请你剖开它

: u6 |) d7 X7 L( x/ p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 |7 |* T. ]' a2 Q2 e. m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>