【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) r. Z3 T- k& b! k# H6 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 H5 k& T" {9 c" UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! y: F6 |/ J- K+ N# i' h( PThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 p8 y1 V* O$ }1 S/ H8 P8 cWith the moon kissing it every night
. \$ Q! v# h7 L; ~) ~, h" ^- BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) L$ _" v* t) |& T1 EEvery other word you utter is love
: i1 ~/ S* C- e1 n3 N6 kI really want to know just how much you love me
7 X9 k, @* t  o% F2 [- ~& rI love you I love you with all my heart
0 b% u+ o- E  T4 n0 H8 _$ DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! y$ G: Q- ^- ~. nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ Y. x% b0 g/ G" ?I’m still filled with fear
$ C$ k! }+ u- Y! |, cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# e0 O! o6 N/ E& {, ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ Y- h- c& y% V$ Z& @2 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 O: m: B+ C5 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 v3 U5 Q; Y" u( @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; H( X( v% h! O9 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% E3 j$ _* ^% g" ^8 H, _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; C1 O9 d2 z" [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& K3 }; a: [, V4 w, ?6 p( E! C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- a& B$ B+ I+ Z% E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* [/ `3 i* z* f" P- {  u. k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ B/ p9 L1 U6 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 y6 W9 Y% F. n  J" l/ Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ Z6 J' h4 Q/ @' C0 F4 X- H0 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 x7 `% X) S) j/ }) M( B/ U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 ]* P" S! J! C2 ^* C0 x1 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: w% C# e5 R4 C: _" b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" Q; N! U& @! h% k" k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! v  i- J* R) Y& F4 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% N* R7 k# b# ?; }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" E5 k+ `- x; ^* {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- S, A/ M6 ?* d) `8 d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 y8 [" W* ^, H8 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 _- s+ y# h( m+ I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' @) d' }0 q0 E, z3 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 `7 G3 Y! _9 g3 O+ T% l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>