【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; c& N; J3 C4 {- d9 p, `9 DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 k9 v0 b  W; G2 C1 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 ~' u/ M: I2 x! t& `2 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ n- v$ p* k! Q& T1 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( Y$ U% ]& R" BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 b0 p) V7 R3 c+ DYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ z4 y! N2 U- L4 Q5 `7 UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! L& A7 X- I, cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; d3 b+ [+ T: a" bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! @" n% U7 y# a/ q: \1 C) e5 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 }: {$ i! c( o$ o# \I’m still filled with fear
" y7 n1 C: i( V; }2 \% uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* |( j6 A- z9 H) nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ [/ D3 G: H; V# e& P( {1 Z5 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ y; z% D* _$ e6 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: l* `: }+ B) P1 L; \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 y2 P! {' e/ }: W! ]3 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 W4 Z, I. A6 m2 |9 h/ p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) U% J6 T/ ~. {# C' Z- N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" g# H+ B/ X6 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 T' g3 [  P0 L3 |7 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, X& j) S( a  C/ X9 [( j" k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 v3 d* g, W" t+ P$ o, v4 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, n  }! h( v5 u. U% M" v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* p1 w$ o- \  n% Y) r. G$ W* G$ ]<P>你无需担心</P>
7 Q" @( Z: @* \& ^; b3 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' l7 |; Q2 e7 i4 j9 G1 Y& n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 k1 M, p. V8 i& ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  c9 Z" I: b6 C$ S  Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 e0 w' l7 `6 E! y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ C8 [1 F8 h& J9 ?' r/ x+ j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# @/ _- b5 y- I, z; F7 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" {( I1 _- K6 U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# P+ F6 [  ^  @" Z, K" V( Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: h/ l' Q# x1 S+ l+ j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' O& Z( h: g) m, T: K+ Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 O2 ?" O8 J6 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" H: E- J  V. ^, w% Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 S  {( |7 a" w* Y' D1 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) S# Q  U5 B; s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 b6 M* {5 A' Z/ o& V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* U1 O$ _# \3 i7 r; x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ M7 `" d! H. h) n6 J! l. j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% O* W0 v" V2 J& u: ]1 c! h3 Q, Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  Z# Z3 O" H8 ?4 ?: _5 Q* c5 H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>