【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% t: I1 p& v+ d4 a0 S% @' VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" R, g, m/ S0 t6 y7 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 }, ]0 ?) C1 L+ w- V% AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! C8 C0 r& i% y* x, W/ Y$ l  {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 W- j& M, N; m, o5 E9 bSeeing the sky content with its love
$ ]: S: M. l) B& \* B- ~- aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' Q3 U2 f1 Z. x7 I# yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, d2 b3 P1 |, o5 c4 ^0 R1 T" lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! T0 D5 t7 S- V+ hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! L" K% ?+ w( _! T8 T% KI want so much to see inside your heart
- Y* Y) v( _, [! i+ PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 C: E( F& e1 C0 ^# tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. O1 O, {3 L: @* O( j" II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# Q, ?: s3 j- R$ P$ hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 U0 p8 n2 |* c7 O4 y3 N: Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% j( m" b4 [2 S" V) X( n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! E# q+ ^( X- G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, b& X( Y5 I$ G  j- p4 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% d) E( g  f, R2 G/ b# n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 W8 K# X: H1 p2 l/ K6 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# ~0 l( A5 y: e) R( k4 }7 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 R$ i( w+ M: \* F4 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 b. C& S1 t( b1 ~$ t; _1 P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ U3 G! s1 H, H6 E& K% l& C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 W/ J" f( l( @, s1 a( ~: \: X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 q9 k5 L! P) m; E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# j. @7 o( W: S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 D9 C) R  N, P$ n% f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. V4 I1 \3 Z& I6 ^$ w6 ~% Y5 U6 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 Y* x; N  F; G/ x0 o$ N. K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' l  S0 U! `- Z/ |. _, i/ V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" d  k* m; _" D6 T. A/ p* E<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 W$ T7 X3 V2 Z& p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ c1 i( k& V* ~, c7 k1 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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6 A) E- c( o6 z  U9 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! l1 p3 v1 Y/ \9 u, [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) Z! U; @/ C+ ^, @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 c5 N( n, m# }% z* i* l7 {+ A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>