【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 B5 v9 E9 z) \Making the sky glitter like gold,
& F% o) u. P6 f7 T+ B1 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" \& u; p4 A9 t% p1 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 C" I2 E( R- ^9 V! }The sky is happy down to its soul
+ ?0 G% Q2 c1 X/ {3 s: aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 P. ~& I+ m# _5 {7 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 c  ?2 f! i) l6 `& H0 {Every other word you utter is love
+ n& L' D0 w: i9 w6 kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ `* v  [) \1 bNothing can compare to my love
- |, ^$ ^# R0 u# oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: _0 Y/ ~: c% `/ O1 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 K0 \8 z* Y4 s0 m0 K: j  P+ hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 v: L( O- p& I; B0 m" \) PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ o- }; v( ?4 X/ W& a$ S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# x& o2 Y  x& d: g  I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 d  u" ^, |3 Z! R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; s. x6 D: E* y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# I. X: I/ a. ?. I. N8 p: Q5 Z$ q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: c; P2 w* |0 I9 l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 f1 |9 P) e" \0 Z5 h( |8 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 d/ m7 Q4 e6 `, c( K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  o/ {, A8 R5 {" a' ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* v9 \1 q: u: \. k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) x# u  n  ^( x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' p" T: {3 h  l& u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. o- Q! j; |, t7 }/ P# e/ ~7 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 k* J5 F! T- B( M* R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! l% ], q5 y) a1 \! }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, ]% e" I& u  W3 N5 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) O3 \9 ?- ^7 O5 Q, {9 c- l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. w5 G+ c3 G6 ?- r+ B; H/ {( ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ b* N; L$ K, Y! q1 H+ X9 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  m2 ^1 I$ _  U  K* H. u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* u2 _. ^: T' l5 `3 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
- f" r3 o1 M7 r& i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! a* X( E6 K( T6 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. C( D! `3 w3 _/ H" n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# [  R) a' i8 f2 ^3 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 a* u( a5 T: I: j& ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) q: D! W/ x3 ~- u$ y: n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! d: \& T1 e# m$ E, }$ ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ C- |( U5 R6 Y( s8 w% m/ @2 ]9 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' ^& \0 C& o- S. T9 R: A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
0 s1 }! v0 t9 V8 O. P- W
我请你剖开它
0 l) ?. {- o, ~& N; E, R; n( G
5 u' G9 _4 d! m' J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 i6 C/ \; Q: ^4 J# G) N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>