【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; N# y7 f4 F0 X' x# r" M& m5 s/ ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
* s( [% n+ |) @8 i/ VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 K: f% r% E8 Z* {( _9 g1 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 D* e/ ~) P- @The sky is happy down to its soul
( b! n. ~5 W$ ~4 y: vWith the moon kissing it every night
- ]# y$ i  H7 Y) U& hSeeing the sky content with its love
) n( n3 A, b/ kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 Y" f" r; k% P. Q, n6 G- Q* xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# d' {# `+ A( d0 m4 a# EI love you I love you with all my heart
6 N: q6 I( k- p% J( L" VNothing can compare to my love
, {$ h, K- P' U- _* l  S# S$ rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ j0 h8 p; B) e7 F* H/ rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ U3 k' r, o: v/ @1 z- ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( s9 a* m8 p6 C1 u  CWith such a tongue as yours,
1 d  ]6 w: b' w: X, CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. b, f. ]! S+ T2 \+ b' Y: T8 cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ v0 o, E7 t: V+ i7 |2 c9 yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# M& V# I! G4 H. d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" w0 `: ?- v; }0 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 e9 W8 A. ]4 ?) i  _+ _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 x# U7 m3 C6 t" j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; g4 [; v$ R5 T7 `2 c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 [1 ^8 r6 O! Y8 Q2 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- h$ ~3 |4 @9 w8 c! Q+ I5 r8 Z) o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# D2 k; r, O6 j/ p- H! h0 Q; v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ _: s4 t( ]: U, @7 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ o. z2 ?9 }- w3 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- W' j( t3 t; p5 X0 }! ~0 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( _: U% i. u9 m) ~8 I% \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! S' B) o* P5 Z- H4 s9 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& R* w1 L. c( h! ^$ R5 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 K; R7 e) N/ [+ c0 l1 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 H2 _4 c, n( q9 s- X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( A" V2 x  x3 z) J9 Q2 b" t# [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 e% ?& ?5 b) t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 r, p, H2 M8 e8 _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" N: @  W) t6 c2 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" ]- l7 c& ]. V% A  b: Z4 `& r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ {, Q. ~4 k! ]) W/ W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% I- s" g) R. Q7 A1 V4 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' k3 Z4 h- m2 V; c/ D. }/ `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' R( `0 Q% K1 }' I" X! z# R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: u9 B' U9 k5 [0 o2 D- i8 P) {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, \' {% }! Z9 N" R' t5 z7 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, J+ f+ L3 ]1 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ i3 e* @, l; w- J) d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" i% Y% x2 m4 i3 t4 I+ m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" ^6 H5 s2 p' u, r5 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) m9 }# F" V3 f" g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 y' M- y; d3 J0 Z  [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" P5 N7 Z% K& Y" K4 \我请你剖开它
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- ~, ~5 S9 F6 C5 m& I& Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>