【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, t4 q( g5 d1 Q$ c歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) ]) z8 ~: m, l( K# gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ y7 y1 M4 p4 U8 l; w+ FThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 T' u  ~% J* K3 X* S& c! ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% x/ ]* ?% G& w  nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- O3 w. K$ H) U2 Y, }/ AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) J+ [5 z5 \! o$ F! h# J  |. CI love you I love you with all my heart
. [" w9 p& c% }; \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( t6 e: y! Q& k9 e1 {) G. vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 B; S2 }5 p- l/ y" ~+ m9 CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ t5 J9 _# u& l. u3 jWith such a tongue as yours,
! V" X+ A/ e" p! tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 E! n6 X2 g( g' @3 ]4 C4 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 J- @9 p3 V% D, N, G3 V7 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 u6 o; H0 ~. A+ e# k0 B# i  ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, F! n, V5 K! ]; c3 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! O& Z7 h+ {* ^9 e: V; h5 Q8 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! ]! s9 h- E+ S. @& ^  j# r% u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 a' O2 D. a  D* T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. ^; b& Q0 F) H# A5 i8 e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' b$ a# w) {" T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' e$ c: v9 r: e6 }9 v6 @6 Y: P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 V* Y7 x+ n) c# A# m7 t1 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 u" Z( K$ B( F1 z' Z$ |  o# K  D4 ^3 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& ~$ R  ?& V$ n! m9 \' @! i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 i' v) ^0 V8 I, Y: e) b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 r9 c8 S+ D9 A4 p3 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! R, {5 C; G# r% b2 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 a; z5 G' y7 G2 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; f/ @4 d/ u5 e# s( t* }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 r! i% a/ B2 L7 |% y3 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# Y5 J# B1 y  f5 g9 A8 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ U6 |( Q- f9 u- d4 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) g* h& B0 S& C5 H+ C: P; R8 N1 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 |. l( n9 l. v9 s4 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 q) ~( ?% t+ y8 P" R5 }% [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# U4 @/ h3 p9 H+ l$ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 T$ s# l1 g: {, {, j( L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 v, d' A  a8 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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; M# a! M0 W: g% K; ~; s. O1 J) q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 O  C3 j- A5 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>