【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; L0 h- w, s" Y3 OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 [: j$ G+ O( G5 @% e6 g% IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 R& a* D; y" nThe sky is happy down to its soul
- O; c8 n: C  NWith the moon kissing it every night
9 v8 u$ P$ D, Y9 \( ^  @# fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 f% ^7 }: C6 a4 Q2 ?8 xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; b5 L+ i! @& r6 c* REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' O  Z! V; s+ [* j  U/ RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" q8 y( w" c( oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: v. E$ @" {% _% UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 h+ Y$ R/ {( b$ S' [7 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) a% c# h( A. Y, b+ ZWith such a tongue as yours,
! R5 F6 X2 \/ u0 b. c/ U; `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 I: u' Q5 Q1 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" V! |% X' D# N4 z5 X/ P# X6 _$ R* E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 d6 r. p4 O, U0 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 N' V& l! }+ u1 o+ C( `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  |- ]9 K" r- B0 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* @8 l7 K% m5 e, W9 v7 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, D" k. {* D: Z) K% L! A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& ]- I6 H2 U& X& A+ F& D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 b% {! q9 ?4 B$ C& q+ B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 E6 X1 N8 c& J3 v9 O3 Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 M# S& L7 M9 l6 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 [; {$ S& K4 C5 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' `* ^/ Q8 m, n( ~- l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' t& A& \* ~# H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 a0 \7 K- S7 i' o& J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 d) z1 M8 @  ]8 h9 o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 l+ u- L& p0 D, @) B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 M6 O% Z- t5 U$ o) ^- C  X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 H$ y' L4 g+ ~- Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; h: r' @2 B# H- o: H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 a- M- y; P& o- v( U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: i- @% p3 y6 J4 M) _! g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& n+ x% q$ ?: {, ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! G5 @+ }  I$ E0 X$ `6 g! L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! W7 p2 V; {3 n' s. r6 d7 M4 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 h6 V9 {9 {, i2 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 K  b7 R: l( b) U' b5 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* ~/ \- r1 E& W( i  s  e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) T  K6 i( U' s- v# }; t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ Y% O3 B  r$ ~. [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 h: n* S$ y' C' J/ {% Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) C% m" t  R: A# L6 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ T1 k0 r' c8 e/ Z; a$ [2 v/ P  Q! f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 t8 W! v. s9 X2 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>