【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 j; Y2 _. T6 j. QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 g- E/ _- z: w# ^The sky is happy down to its soul
1 c- L8 B2 S% m( EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: ^  j3 M! i# hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* S8 a) J: b$ B$ r% @! `: q2 t" mYou needn’t fear anything
+ s! q2 {  |$ V4 w8 Y! sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. b3 g. W7 f" B( {4 {  o4 vI really want to know just how much you love me
% E9 i/ j: F, |! h8 W0 dI love you I love you with all my heart
9 I0 v, J+ G, ?  r# j+ C$ X" W2 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 F& O+ ^4 t; b. l2 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& p( {% C+ e! |4 n  _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  }7 G$ g7 t, j" Y( s# uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# t# h- k/ K9 V% N8 A- ]8 w, uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 ?' O2 n, N7 ?: HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' h5 `+ L3 z( [2 \6 x- x0 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. H% S! _. A" O! T5 b  @1 y; S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 `8 v$ J0 J4 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 i  |2 l' y' T/ v: c% U9 _9 ?5 I% G: k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 G; ~! Q2 K5 R" E7 }4 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 k2 [1 F$ P8 f0 W4 J$ E7 _# x8 [* w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; |& Z: b: }5 f1 U8 z& X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 d+ t1 ~: _" Y' s2 y<P>你无需担心</P>
* d* D# b4 V# u- D. c/ e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. i7 Q$ F" G' p7 n1 u: K7 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 z0 r* _; o% |9 G/ ^, b( a9 ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# Q# P( O  ~) P8 B" _0 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 W& y$ e: p# x4 U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# @! C; S" Q- ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" Z3 s! t) I# W3 G% n6 a) s- m" |6 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 A5 q, A) A# a% ?  ?8 n  r, _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! `9 a" }7 G% P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 h5 ~$ h7 K) `, Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! e6 h1 x) ~  h- m% v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  t! ?7 \7 ~1 J9 F7 @6 A, g' p/ W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& B7 q& u4 Q2 Y& f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: R0 D( h# E; ]+ e. W; q# Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 W' `+ I! x9 m* R( P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ O! x. L0 z* P4 Y. L) F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( [, D( q! R; m! P2 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& J0 V6 v* V8 M2 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

" C+ i; ]/ Y4 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>