【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 T+ s9 F- m- b( f歌词我附在后面。
% g8 \; l  \4 s9 w' yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' `/ d; U$ H) o5 [3 ^: [& nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  q7 I/ W/ I# m0 N# V5 \9 l* cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( K: D- V4 y6 T4 K$ @3 N% M  YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  g% ^/ n5 L; w; z- l3 VI really want to know just how much you love me
7 p) E/ ^* s" w  Q9 y9 P( w% X/ S1 rI love you I love you with all my heart
3 q+ h" _! E* GNothing can compare to my love
$ a& N9 }) \) [- d& F! X  HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  O" h% G  M& u5 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; e! c7 J8 ?, P( f" F1 r% E3 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, p3 x. o1 f# M4 i2 q, H) @) YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 x9 E0 P# n1 ]2 x" qI regret not dying
  v' G3 P! A- F9 b3 S& xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  m$ S  K5 m# A) v6 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 F7 o$ J: Q5 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& W5 Q( d4 V) N/ ?' X5 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) ]# g* Y2 t! @; b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; p% I* z3 b, s1 `8 j# o3 L3 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: O: J  B* Q0 k0 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, U/ |* X& Z! Y9 P+ u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 A, ]* n) h: T. F8 l. a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 {1 F) P$ g, z" ~8 l% e5 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 Y# f0 f" ?9 w+ P. T* O  Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  M$ `# y- W# _4 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 D2 g3 o" }. g: V' n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% j8 y  m1 q- h4 P, c, f# t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 x" e! q/ r1 v7 |. e' s- k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 P: Z' V2 K: e7 d/ ]4 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! h) m6 @+ `* V: z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! v5 r( a) {  c4 z- Q& T/ L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 r1 Q" N  W; L8 n) B) Y$ a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 v" [9 F" \. L3 M6 q! _/ H  g" B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 }$ U$ c2 r  M& x' ?' B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 ~! ^( c* ]2 c& d# g  g6 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. J2 V! _- t( J2 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" [& g! s3 ]6 n2 E; t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 {$ g2 V  [0 \' l% z, P- j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# m, o9 F8 L. o8 {" e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( ]$ y0 l9 `( l+ X( ~5 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 D* t$ V% M+ C: x% n% v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. j1 C; N( Y0 `2 S1 k我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  p% d' A/ U  u4 y- p7 ]6 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>