【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ [' s8 N4 d  d/ G: z( z- HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* v0 D$ R  Z+ ?0 M  O4 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% B, W& {* ?0 ]1 }0 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ ]9 x) T7 `& A7 vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ ^; N1 _& X3 e, s" _3 KEvery other word you utter is love
7 l% @0 j8 m! t0 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
4 B4 ?0 ~2 ~1 l5 F5 _& ], gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 ]- [$ x+ r* @1 n$ h" nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% G0 m4 b; w1 Q0 y% NI regret not dying
6 a; D6 b$ J  iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  z8 ?: }  }1 }! S7 Q/ `1 QWith such a tongue as yours,
4 }7 \: G( M; P1 o) j/ ~" pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& q3 C2 x' }1 c# @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% J% Q! V/ ?9 }, k  h) |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ U* B$ @9 j% C( R' u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 |* ^+ l9 U5 R+ y" O, _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 M4 o9 j3 b5 q* [0 r+ U# k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 L( v! d# |, d% y: ~: K' [* c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 A, [4 B7 D: Q0 }" F! D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. O! ^, E& c& x2 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: V  Z0 x7 {* G3 x. |6 |" z* a- O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 ^" M- F) _# c1 I5 p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 F" U5 \  F( W) I" |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# Q2 |1 m# g6 v4 _% f2 K( o2 G2 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 j2 R+ n# ^$ L! y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ ~8 M3 q& @) }- i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 Z- n0 J6 ~* i4 k% o6 i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 c6 L; b' t% x% t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 ^/ S! Q4 b2 ^+ r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: ?5 M3 ~. X4 U3 D  B6 s* Y! v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% `- o7 A9 k% m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 a& {0 r, I3 J4 A+ Z! a) Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" X* J+ I0 L: _" e( k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ m9 Y2 k7 q0 D, a5 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 |. B. o% A+ m6 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ S- `* r0 f; u+ g, d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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+ B5 f& a" Z, a0 m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ q  ^. F" I2 S0 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>