【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" P. N! C8 A' F; zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 \5 ]; v4 `7 x) \% Y* vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. A' m; H, i; Y/ q7 GSeeing the sky content with its love
5 p* T7 b' {8 a# Q- oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 ^* ~1 w) U; ~* aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 V" H% K2 \4 I- Y# {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  D3 z+ `5 I6 h8 f* ^* m' r8 SI love you I love you with all my heart
) h- |& h" b* T* H% g* T/ d8 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 h% I2 n5 E  x$ x- h" FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( b; ~! L. ?+ O* Z$ N2 oI want so much to see inside your heart
6 Y) {3 h/ q/ \4 h0 \. `0 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) @4 m5 a$ d# K4 {* Q4 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 V; v- h# P) ]0 \; f* B+ T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- Y  S- \7 Y' D2 H4 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% N% x- o8 g* ~$ p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- f& M+ ], S4 b) X. i2 @4 f1 Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' J: B+ u/ ~: T2 h$ r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, O: D; t7 a& H) U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 E& @, o5 m4 T2 E0 A% Z! u1 B. u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 E; b4 r. }/ q6 Q6 j) H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' J! @& v+ ?' U: P7 H- n/ w9 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ N) V' p- n4 k9 r9 D9 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 ]7 V1 F  s# [& F2 j8 R0 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ o2 \+ Y8 O( k8 J0 r! m' }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 k2 r* T$ v' g( B* I1 S( x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 i7 x4 ~; E' n4 P2 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 R4 k6 ~6 }5 Q- {3 b# c1 j/ c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# k7 X- y$ F1 Z' p% R) g6 F. D! O6 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- t& A- W* V3 Y4 ~* M) H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 v) K$ o5 T4 r* P  N' j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& P+ Z8 v" U$ |5 q% d7 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ ]# g" {3 [# U9 q( U: H; c<P>I regret not dying</P>
" l' b4 t7 V" J9 n5 W# C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! e, G1 @. |& d0 C8 `6 E! v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' g2 H/ a4 U- [( I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 W4 O2 [: C% a: @/ d2 h; G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ F% ^0 Z& Y: ]6 Y! g5 G$ v& k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; S6 o8 E* J7 g/ a& _; `) F; r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ c3 _& R# q" \" V我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. W5 d" ^" c# k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>