【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 k3 K/ w, L) B# i% ?) r4 Y. bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( e5 Y. `" P# E: l. D& G8 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' q" e8 L6 D9 N% |0 d0 @The sky is happy down to its soul
/ o! t& Z4 a% e, O1 F* [  H, JWith the moon kissing it every night
2 _8 ]& c+ e+ Y4 OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& \/ T' F  K1 K1 V! ]I love you I love you with all my heart
8 X# i* z; n; UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ]; @4 r7 I- tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 S; B! \' i: K) V8 Y' e# v) @  d" SI want so much to see inside your heart
  M4 i! `# ~* u( N3 a. N. |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) Y5 ]! g5 D2 ]3 I6 ~  gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& n* I7 ~- U) A2 n0 t+ O7 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( ]- p6 i+ L. V. hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ s0 H+ Y- Y/ ~7 O. `- }) q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 y5 N; z) F3 I- t- M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' j  v# |! ?; A( P0 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 U4 r; G  o3 }. h2 C6 |& r# d" U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 j: F1 T- P4 }4 [" P( C! {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ m) X- k* |5 m( n$ ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" K2 D4 r, M( h! T& Z9 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: p* t9 i. `: h; F/ I<P>你无需担心</P>
, S) ~6 M, k8 D- @7 _0 y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 T9 S' X1 X% r1 c8 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; s; Y* r7 T! j. }0 P/ J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- m5 M! e* q- Q; z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- V! O: E$ D! h; x5 }& D& p$ Y5 f, G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 D: y# y2 ^: J  p- p/ D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 T5 `! Q& j& Q) s. j5 G7 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 n4 T: g: a" g: `' [4 ^1 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! L* K2 c9 \/ ^/ T, ]4 y- P. L1 x( c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 w6 L  X# Z" N6 ]2 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 P6 O' p$ ]! t  z# N3 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 X# g6 E/ y- F/ f) m4 Y8 x2 @5 a) t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 q4 F" Q- m7 R/ C) M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! @7 C7 y2 u5 r5 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 g0 t  Y8 S+ Z; D% w! I  V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( d# D0 h$ _$ P6 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 z. `: K8 W- ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>