【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% U5 T1 x8 g$ _' N" r+ u$ V" ]歌词我附在后面。
! l9 y+ J) b/ MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 b% S5 L0 s9 @' I& T. sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 \. ?4 u/ V2 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 a& _9 V: x! L( `% D- aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 j5 K8 d/ R# L0 P  G/ p3 DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. S+ R, q3 D9 S* zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; l8 I, b9 y, @& {# C6 i% p+ OI love you I love you with all my heart
& d( X( R1 w2 Y4 j5 kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) R9 B, ^/ i8 C; m  X7 S& v7 O3 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' X# l, ]7 O- sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ N$ \6 I0 y( H- ]7 K) sI’m still filled with fear
% f  v! P* G6 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: @6 g* T, M! A; ]5 X+ gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* d+ v$ \/ s1 M2 P2 G. aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; [: y; S- A* D+ s# ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. `& i, S( j( R5 T; h; _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) n4 ~* G& T# M. Y* Y5 a3 C/ H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 S( w3 O  V0 r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 S+ q6 S9 d, U- q: e- ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ @( B+ i- k  |  D$ T. h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: z/ |8 L* L3 w  k2 _+ ?$ Q3 |8 P3 j7 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 L  g; w! q/ [' M' g# @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 v6 }2 t+ k3 l0 P" y9 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. F% R$ r+ \5 U  U2 Z- X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 \' Q" u2 G. _" E1 O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* L8 K# L; t( g* \) H- |+ Y4 Y$ _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 x, Y$ Z) m: m0 X. d5 C+ n* y7 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 j. B3 Z% v$ ?: X& f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 s0 j& Z# p2 G- K/ J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 @+ Z2 T; h, l/ T, b7 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 d' \: ?7 U. D1 j; C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 d* {& s# Z9 u% B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% G# `; w& D" F) M6 D. `, ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& `, \# j) Y( i$ t$ e0 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  S( [' p3 W3 n; j) ?! l  n. M; n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ I* X/ i+ \  b9 \& B4 t* z& G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 y; D2 E3 g" [4 ?, T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' H" u) t2 g' ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* h3 p7 e/ H! n( C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 S6 M4 C  A8 Z- s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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9 x, y& l! J' W; h1 ^; `# ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 Z- E- Q* f1 J. g9 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>