【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- w3 V& O! c  u; w1 HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 V3 p0 v+ I+ S5 b% o$ ]$ hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# D9 Q5 P: k* F& v; D$ Q* G7 C4 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 x) m- X' {: k2 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 L3 H! s( `/ _# _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 [( H3 o6 R/ m1 y$ Q9 R8 @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ _2 [$ U  b$ d( z2 O$ t  i$ A" q* ~I want so much to see inside your heart
# a6 k$ c& p  J, AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 a; B+ D6 a! W* y+ K4 T. \I regret not dying
, l3 B5 |' z  dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 T, g* ~) R  \8 O* zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 M( L+ T" L9 \7 W* n' u% EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ R, ?# M- }# x, _% ^# Z0 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( [- L. h% \( Q$ G. [: {2 ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 Y4 l& B) \6 N' O  [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 X$ ?! n9 g: n+ ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 i, p8 q5 i( p3 `& F0 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 S- ?5 M" \8 b- a1 n* w+ S4 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 p/ t% v- i: ~) K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 r5 M( D3 F; ~* z. ^7 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 R" c4 ]3 C% p/ `0 c: r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 i# F, M: X( C* ^4 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) P& V5 w% ?- G4 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ y' ~/ J. P6 v2 T+ p7 h9 F. W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 B% M' c8 B; d" q+ l5 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; w0 q8 y1 t5 j1 j/ r. G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 y% Z/ O* Q& _* w  n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) t  g3 b7 M4 X; Z4 S% K0 [0 u% s# F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 a* A, r( `2 u4 {8 M; G$ W+ B( Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& D7 ?( F$ P- H% z* i( \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" ]6 X* H" Q4 }" A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 ?$ J' M" U% _8 W( h+ T1 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 x5 `& \6 D' r4 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 o( ]0 l6 `- s- f% l) {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 _# j. u9 e/ t4 O8 G7 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 D9 W/ s# M  g7 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) K3 N, i3 n4 \7 v1 ?; x6 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: T2 H2 y- F3 z% _8 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( _. _) G1 f" K; x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& ^1 G9 m& c) D' {% O9 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ A, L% s9 Y$ J: z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# L/ @( h; k" B3 x& o$ e0 Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" [5 R% v- e) [: o2 C0 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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; d' m% S8 R0 T! s8 a9 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>