【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( Z2 h6 O) w# }! |" BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 D* ^/ ]4 r. k- N4 |+ Y* z4 t; {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  i$ J  N* K; V9 U4 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- L( l, X: q- G; i! c+ ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 G# q: r: H* C: D  a4 u! pNothing can compare to my love
5 S7 ?) Q1 y' J. }6 a  ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' o/ N8 ]7 B+ W6 t8 iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. f/ b5 _5 K: b; h/ t& J( @# m, UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) F! Q$ v* g7 @+ a" |+ gWith such a tongue as yours,
( t" S, h- x( E3 @; [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ ?  R+ m5 B2 K' I. p/ u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( ~: d$ s" S# L3 _* ?( l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# C4 i7 q; v6 U) a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 K# T0 X) \; v2 @1 V$ j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ Z; a/ `! G% O; `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 R1 a% _0 Y8 V# x% T* {# u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 Q# J0 N, i  f! p+ f& E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 W5 v2 c! T3 s  g( }( a) H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 }, j! r+ S* I( o$ k" Y; M! B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 N# D) g( h/ u. h, b3 y2 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 C5 X6 X+ ~4 Y" R0 T  \! a- }; n<P>你无需担心</P>
0 m1 ~0 |- L4 W) [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: W4 r- z' F; a) Q3 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 r/ i( M1 E9 u3 @1 h1 \8 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 V; Q: S. Q& Q9 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: i; }1 A$ K. ?8 E3 P* W& Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; F0 n* C# ^& w* ?- s$ b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 j* H2 r  @9 \2 m; r! k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 g' _8 t, V5 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 l1 }! P9 O# w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. G4 ?0 H6 f3 C! b& M2 e8 X# x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) }4 z8 I; @2 f9 X/ G# h! X7 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% r- |' O& v7 T* p( w  T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: S" x" ?* u' w( h% M2 v9 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 P* B8 Q; G' C0 H. T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* X- |  D$ A$ t& j' O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 G7 F5 d. {- q7 D4 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# l+ B2 P+ B' Q- |- |9 ]8 [. Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>