【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 v- M7 H* g8 d. eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( q, A2 P  j# Y; [Making the sky glitter like gold,
, Q2 c7 S" _: Z9 d) T0 `3 l; @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! P! D  U0 U" F/ v2 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ m( T. J& ^- \0 q6 w3 ~With the moon kissing it every night
4 e& `5 P2 \2 V1 p8 R9 R7 i( SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. A' I4 v4 z9 t3 B9 @- gEvery other word you utter is love
% i, w: G& A3 E2 r7 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
5 g3 `1 L$ q- }" FI love you I love you with all my heart
: M) i1 {6 j. h, I/ ~% k$ yNothing can compare to my love
( q* h! x7 I: c( u# gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, T/ p# J8 G0 RI’m still filled with fear
# C! R& Z7 g3 r) A# `. I7 ]' zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 s: o* O3 }6 T, k$ b$ @9 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( H; v* ?: `+ Z! ~0 i9 L# l- KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- o. c8 m. a. K% Y6 Q9 Q' F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, O( d" V' I4 d. [$ X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- r' V4 c0 I" m: b4 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# L+ o) J; F7 a8 c  c5 H# X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% P4 X7 }+ n6 Q; Z* ]0 z" w) H& R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, |9 p6 V" {% o, Z) z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: d* v' b& W! s/ E8 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, g, ?( i' A) H8 d4 T, G/ y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. O& a* b! p/ h! O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 C" i% f/ E& H2 Y9 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& V7 z) U/ n/ S% n1 ?, c5 z3 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ P2 \; v+ @! e5 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' M9 K* g- F7 F0 c6 d7 P  Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* t. e4 E. s- w/ `3 A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: h+ Y, \5 c* {: f0 v" C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 T, E- ^" w5 D. t' _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: f/ ]9 ^, ]  k+ U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ f, V. |- q( c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  I. ~9 n& j. t8 s" Q2 k  z$ k: ^  w. @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# Y7 m2 s5 K, P! u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" D% g9 S4 f$ h& s: g$ x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# l/ v9 e: ], `' b4 _! L2 z3 d  j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  j) z: y3 ?( p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 p, M9 o* b: z0 @1 ?4 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. T/ Z' r5 q# q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  Z" ?5 f% L; g9 Y' _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ h- N7 q3 a% H4 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 F  P+ `# N6 c3 F# B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! d& G& r! @, ?/ Y1 I6 ~9 ^: `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 ^2 r9 |: S. i" ^8 I& {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: n  A( C2 O; N. v) Y# _6 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- z0 s# E' ]$ g5 X+ s' H我请你剖开它

; H! \) c" S; s6 U9 w3 t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# C6 P; [4 G$ W' I) ^% f+ c5 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>