【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# y$ c# c( c7 R8 L  AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( F( V# E, j$ }. [7 Q+ ?' q! u% H' O/ J! xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" n& M( d+ }& E" d: k" `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, k  N" [. D3 Z4 {$ }; H! v( BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 H: }  U$ h" T$ oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 ^% y8 i' P# F% I: EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ B& M6 N3 Y; j# L' b! fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% @' t- K( d, C- \- KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" P) [6 o7 H4 W6 Z( {6 e9 _# gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& S/ _( s' |- k+ I1 TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: f- o" P1 b- N+ ?9 M( c2 l5 EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* ~, Y4 C  T% yWith such a tongue as yours,
) O( \' s- {3 b& P; eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: {/ @, n2 E7 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 {/ O( l1 {% u6 ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 A: Y3 B7 r7 W- l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 V( u! p! u6 `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 N' ]$ B2 [# }; y' h( R5 _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! Y& \3 {, n" Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# V: h0 \- ~2 G( n) W; b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; J4 e8 G$ U% ]' d: ?+ u; X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( c4 N5 H' J; w1 w( h3 O* j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 e8 T7 _" [: V4 V+ Y" |3 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: \4 ^: }5 f3 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( F( D) Y# e* J$ _& M# L1 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& N$ R+ Q* ?( R* F% t  B8 b# \7 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ }' ]% U% J  Q0 Z4 h& D6 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) o2 R$ z  ]  x1 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- @  H  Z/ U. M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 S6 a% F( x0 Q2 d* ^% X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# v0 t+ [& m" G6 f+ P9 H1 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 B- }1 C8 _  G# U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( \: }4 U3 y/ ]0 h* M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ h" d. X& T2 r# ]2 N& o0 \8 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ C% K+ e, B: |# ~) g& E/ M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 Y8 B+ x6 Y6 N1 W- l3 u2 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; Q7 Y4 A" e+ {- h# N+ `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' L7 o$ [% Y* ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% A" b4 q+ e( p. r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' Z/ G8 V/ M+ e( H& O$ C! k2 w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>