【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ t9 \1 S9 D/ I: S# V$ DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" l* ?5 \' x8 Z! G, }0 ~+ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 c) J/ t2 {( VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 B  o6 v# n; |- P$ ]5 A% K, \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, m* v5 u$ Y1 Q9 G+ {$ G8 xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) L: L* M% I0 A& s+ [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 P& O" T9 t1 S, I: XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ i* o% y: _1 h, s2 _( u) vI’m still filled with fear
, u) w/ N/ @% b% e2 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# p; l7 Q1 f" KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; h3 b; Z  C9 T. r9 O! [) N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% s: V. C- C% `' d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 [$ L/ K, z' U3 E: o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. D* X) g2 _5 V7 A+ t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' P+ \) L) j$ Z7 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 y$ N8 r" \) o, i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 @2 C4 @5 y# {! q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 H7 q: r- K# G, r; r$ i  I& L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 t7 D; ?, A; A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 O/ C& ~* ~( @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' U2 s1 R, c' q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: \! l' z7 L& U  }( a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 N2 L# w/ e) m8 O# T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: V6 _. x" D" ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 h. M; ~) O0 v, x& y5 L; v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( L2 W7 L% i: d- t7 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- a: @& v4 D4 K/ f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ V( H5 T% A: i, r2 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 b1 i7 e+ L0 D  O6 X: ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& K! I7 A, L( p2 ?" t( O0 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" k* d: e$ l; u/ X3 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% p" O$ ~: \% v+ `我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>