【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, ?! K$ @9 r4 L歌词我附在后面。
" S/ [$ E  m  ~3 w0 i+ a2 ]  E. AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, \. d* a5 F( p& r3 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! `8 G2 h/ h; D3 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* l. ^' l+ f# W9 q0 T8 X5 xWith the moon kissing it every night
1 D5 P' v+ [2 q; G5 _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ {6 j- `6 O* Y* zYou needn’t fear anything
; C5 m5 m$ O' ~4 H( N: F+ BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 h8 s: i5 \5 o# T/ ?& cEvery other word you utter is love
3 M2 C* e# P" Q7 `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# {2 ?" C+ m: W8 e6 cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( V. U( E( ^5 Y1 R) B$ SI want so much to see inside your heart
) B. e! k3 Y' ?  j+ z1 W. A6 Q# TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ z5 h* p4 U' [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: D! s5 z5 u' p2 {0 x: PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 ]7 N2 a+ a3 W$ V" eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 L2 _- X1 H. u5 D) W" d# M( J8 y3 z$ ~- i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ J1 @, e( A" _, J( A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 n6 P: w$ x/ M+ Z/ u3 g6 j9 T9 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 M* E4 g- B2 S: U  {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; }- B, k, [+ y0 d+ J0 y& X$ f& N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 L& t9 |2 j1 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ r; i) t% ~6 {  D" C5 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, z' F* [2 ?) V: y# U) ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 y5 e# {+ R  V2 l/ T9 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ R0 k( v/ A9 W' ~' {; |" J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. I1 x. i& T* Q7 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% z$ v* M. `8 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 s6 T4 Z. k0 O$ ~' f) w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 H2 C9 i( T# m. Q4 @# m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ r1 g+ V; Y% S2 P0 C: S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 w# R5 ^2 X* `' G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 M* x, T, }4 `0 ?6 z5 A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" C9 U, u- `' f7 h0 j" \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 t' j$ M; l( E9 g3 E! @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 Q$ |; C4 w& v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* w; J1 Z  J- N6 M" Y, y5 ]  C2 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 a% ~1 p5 ?/ o) g$ a  a: h* r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  r4 ^/ u" @. ^# _- u" p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 u( @3 O# O! |! t7 r" |$ e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* @: q/ t3 I3 O. n2 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>