【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 ]( S0 }& }+ [: PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- ~  F. `" x( M- n% u* l/ zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 y: h9 a* p- D& v9 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 R( S: E8 X' [8 P& `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* K, J- T, y9 qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 H3 e) N7 z; @6 D2 C; `* p& V5 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ }% j+ a) U% c3 k/ w) xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ Z2 ]- \! K& Y* D/ w$ b5 rI’m still filled with fear
9 U, I, ?( W" M# n3 j+ [) i0 eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, C2 ], e3 V) j% ~4 W. wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 l1 y, {% F# D. bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 d& j  J$ N+ k& j' zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* }- }9 M; ]7 p: }! K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, u: s7 n4 N# S2 Z% A2 x* x; P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. b2 Z7 r. f% g: p  ~* U. P, k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' Q" a% E. a9 Q) \5 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 J0 ~6 a& m+ J3 C7 n* D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 D* Q/ S1 p2 p2 e$ o1 ~4 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 S0 ~" P) W% c7 ^7 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 K& L2 m5 x1 Q' P" t( K6 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 l! g& C7 N4 u; }+ j- @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 q) C, K( W# H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* A' j% l% h8 w8 D5 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 n" `7 G- ^- Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 }7 o: W* W* c. z7 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; r4 v2 ]- Q6 k. t5 ]& r: `7 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) E4 h, O* F$ {  e* f( P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- I) r7 }! m/ l' \: T# M6 i7 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ ]+ Q% L+ g$ V  L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) {2 r( n& a7 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# p  h' I. O' c7 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 o/ B! w- u$ P) W+ }# V' E6 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' U( w$ v7 k1 o+ X& X$ f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) j' z3 i/ u+ ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 c2 X% s! j! Z5 W1 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 l" J# g8 Q" w% p" r5 |$ W0 {, G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 g4 j1 d$ U$ n! H+ ^% v# N( y# d- @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. N. h4 ?+ T' Z" e6 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* L- v" ]3 _6 ?0 W3 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; P+ p3 U1 I6 B  o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 T! i8 L1 z) f8 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ S$ F- W2 L$ y8 x/ ~$ v7 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 l$ ]# [- b& Q我请你剖开它

$ C7 K- F8 V% t" a" S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>