【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( d6 x0 |, a# D( e7 ^$ i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# j5 [. N' G9 {; BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% {; B6 h2 G( ?$ X. b# o0 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
. X9 v" N! X% j' K" k: _9 k+ gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- @9 ~/ b% y" M( Y; Q# B& k0 QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* a6 T2 g+ s& \( A# @6 d2 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 t. Z1 Z& H  A+ d% y+ NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  g7 C2 z9 e+ O, J" ]/ s4 sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 L1 |* f3 ~: M* VI regret not dying
; e9 e% \9 z4 G- i- U" z6 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# O7 X* ?4 \) p% ^3 w1 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ n' J6 k" g1 o( r: R# X" A" H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" ?4 x7 [: g" K3 x  h3 \( ?0 r+ E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ `- l6 s3 T% P; J# j2 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: w' z9 T& `. q0 O+ c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 d" k: p3 Q6 B4 K& z2 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. e7 |' p7 p) B$ k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, T% c0 Y6 c9 f# p: @8 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 l2 z& l3 [. h; ~5 k$ L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. y" t8 e" l' k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! F" H+ Q) P2 K! p$ _8 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 @/ o, _" R5 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  j4 q- W! Q. `0 D" Z3 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( B" ?6 s, }+ E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" M$ Y' w+ |6 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 ^- w6 E1 T* C- r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, I; j5 |4 I5 I. G( t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, {4 _6 [4 i( _3 s  z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 f; V. @# J/ ~0 S, n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! m6 x/ E/ p  L* K& l9 i  r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 ~0 S6 H1 V6 K" I3 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; ^: ~9 O  s* m- L8 Z. p) C3 k3 s+ q2 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" Q( }2 |4 q$ F4 Q9 E  M5 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 y6 C6 B4 j6 t/ o% I* [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 Z* q, A% U; s; S3 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* Q- H4 ?: {# L( R* a( `3 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ X. Y* O* B* t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ }$ Q$ G; W  A# h* ]我请你剖开它
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; R( G: e$ p3 `6 b( F: [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 e& r! \! ^9 L( ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>