【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" B6 c& [$ {" i6 x1 j; W7 Z$ j0 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- o" g; `6 Y1 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 b( o8 S) n  D3 w" i2 l/ T7 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 Y& c! ?" z/ E: y9 U+ OThe sky is happy down to its soul
* |5 R! h2 f% l' Z" mWith the moon kissing it every night
0 A) |* `3 }, [/ \8 _Seeing the sky content with its love
- p! x& k3 t# Q6 B6 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& T2 {' H* D# REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ I+ r1 p! l9 v4 bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 g, {) f9 h1 p. Z4 I) \9 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( \$ }/ k$ i' |6 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' N% f3 L6 F9 C3 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! F9 ^+ v% ^" j/ L9 T8 {I regret not dying
! [3 [% R/ I6 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. `& J" w8 @3 N1 B2 eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ W. q' Z1 D6 J8 ^1 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. [- b+ t$ t3 Y' x  B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; C. p5 h2 m0 |( z+ q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( Q  s) ?! [* p+ g- V. J. j5 Q1 [# H3 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ l+ A5 g! Q! @( a! q) Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# R2 C# F) z, C3 t! m+ M& }& S: W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 g8 R5 n3 A" r) P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 E% ?4 k3 ~1 N( X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 v& j$ D+ u% }% X  L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( G' {: D) O' D6 I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# f! B7 n* d& y% Y5 Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% B% Q: n" @8 ~5 V0 q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 h% d9 ~6 l9 U, @4 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& F5 L8 H# A6 {! n7 ]& ~3 i+ `: s5 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 p5 Y. g. [  R& I2 M" V0 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ v4 H9 X- F, D# k$ Q/ o" j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 P8 Y9 B% ]. D& Z8 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' d6 j9 H3 g: }; l% C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 p& W" x4 `/ b. a  I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' W, K, s3 _2 t9 ]- Y; g/ n' C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 O, J, r- Q$ A. E  I$ I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. ^2 u7 ?0 P; X* a# K: V$ d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 G$ S3 e, z& o4 M0 A8 r3 L: M7 O" o- _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ e/ u; e. J$ g) a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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. m6 ?" n' r5 D9 e6 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>