【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  P+ G, J3 u8 N4 j: ?: w: u& dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 n6 j7 w; c9 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: }! L7 O! n7 q6 L/ }& [" DWith the moon kissing it every night
* Z$ z3 K* f2 [+ G- h6 XSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# x. ?! l/ i6 f( sI love you I love you with all my heart
- p6 g( a. A# n3 S$ V; Q& ^Nothing can compare to my love
" n3 G' |+ y4 w! z0 T( f$ d9 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# g* k1 M9 U1 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' I$ N% E& ~5 @4 Z9 }6 Z, ]I want so much to see inside your heart
2 M0 ~5 o- u) w( jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, X' Z$ Z! p6 N* t( KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 W* I3 h. @6 u9 j* K! t/ C: ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" j9 K1 ~4 N  L# a$ i: X" IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 K1 E. M. E4 g& p, j$ h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# a# r& T7 F# |. `* G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, z) \+ M2 h" `, I6 y& i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' E5 Z& A* T# j8 Q) a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 j6 ]. m. N+ v% [* G9 v8 T- N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  [, p! A/ m$ o4 P3 Q, W! L9 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 \) `7 X7 [$ A. p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 }; Q2 r% K- B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 h& f( A7 T7 O1 [5 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ^" D& P# w$ ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 e  h# P1 `' w; x" J2 b8 y  z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* J" f2 U8 H9 Y" |4 @( g- s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" p! f$ k$ ~8 W8 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 B7 F' c$ s# W8 D( J, ~& k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( O1 E9 l! X( C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 E' i" t4 |" D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" U" g$ S' V  `5 |6 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; H! b1 [, M7 K5 t# ~- w; j0 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( Z1 W6 V7 e8 |, s4 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 O) r! w8 M7 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) ]) r8 ?6 }- i& |" L& K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- e0 D5 w; B" h0 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. Y" d% c6 I# G+ T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ h0 G7 z1 T7 ?) k: `% {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" P5 d% Q* u% @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ ?4 k1 H4 A/ C' M( j$ ~- W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# o. N& D+ r# W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>