【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 N1 h3 _3 z8 \( F# h$ R3 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( s. A  C$ r( @% EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 V3 }7 y0 d$ L2 m7 B) M) SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 H& p! Q, K& L' [% ^  F2 J  XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; ^3 Y$ i: t/ m: ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& w7 x% H& h/ J" v$ d% T. B$ kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! Y1 @9 J. V6 R" ]0 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  S2 s) t% i  {$ N, e) kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ U3 o6 E/ Z( X6 y' J/ W- j4 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- T$ O/ `6 V" K! SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* B! `" u: v- Y/ m6 l7 A% y) F3 w+ CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( E) }! A3 o4 z$ n; E( f% m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# ^: v$ K+ i9 _, ?- ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) f+ q+ U7 {' n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 f  v! g4 v/ N' |7 \& I7 ~5 _$ ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) d; ^. `' g  U* F$ ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' p& ^. e  o, B" V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 S+ D/ n$ ^$ E" W5 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( [- @  K# [& q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; \+ U6 r% k; r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 G. O3 i" r0 G) B# _7 r4 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* S! i% @+ _- s, t+ ]; ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 ]: d# V- \6 b% f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! n4 t5 L" |# n- q7 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 Z. S  j$ k8 F6 I: E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. _; A# ]6 @- P4 Q) l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ [' H4 K! r& N* q! v$ `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( n, Q7 x$ O4 |. q  t0 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( o7 X- J9 x% t+ l  ~7 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ y! g. ]+ `8 I. V- x: q- K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ a3 n& b/ Q+ N# Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' \# J5 r; U3 Y; K0 R9 x: z5 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' n' ?  G% ?2 y& m  @% E2 \3 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 @, d8 C- N6 `! z4 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! N( f& X- o+ G4 X- G: O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; F# B9 |( g& F3 J0 b& I<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ m$ P- Q- z+ R' s% e" E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# q6 Z' @% w$ c9 u% f+ I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 ]( k8 ~% M' ^. x" L7 I' ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 `5 Q8 Y+ B: m2 g* z0 j2 p4 t, ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" \( c7 ~9 j6 v) I2 P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 L* d/ M  R! J2 Y( k& R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 e2 H' E1 g5 F! s, G% q; h( n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; _$ }5 p; R/ Z( D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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0 J( U/ H' c7 o+ T! K) J& \7 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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