【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% R. u( ~3 x7 c, K* [8 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# @, E% q5 I. q. I2 x& eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ I! ?0 A+ F6 B& O1 lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 D/ l7 |! D) c3 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# c- U0 y" T4 p. u2 FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 X  W5 i+ i" h6 [, q* HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 X$ |5 [" c3 v) O- }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 \- }- X) n# ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ Z" R! r% o9 wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" H# x; |! e- v; LWith such a tongue as yours,
2 O4 {4 M5 d7 ?$ _( t6 d4 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ x9 L% m1 B1 W8 R+ Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) b" k2 t  M7 M& }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) e4 n) F# Y- i; K) C- E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 J: Y" W! `% u/ x. U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( K8 g1 D, G  c$ l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& B7 t! l7 ^' ?5 T3 \! l0 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ b8 w( ^4 k; Y3 _2 k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# i8 K) W% _% Q- J. v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 J( a9 E; X* J0 S( F- b, V7 ]' X+ G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% R" e: o7 M- H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ }7 [5 q, @# k( e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 S' u+ o8 j, L. `" b# `" \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 A4 v2 {1 l! q, O- i$ X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 [1 i( `# @( ~" f) \; R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# r3 }2 d$ o, E! }' |5 L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 j. [6 \' m; m; i& x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 d. e% F& z4 A% ]( S9 ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% c2 E( Z- o! X$ s' z5 Y$ t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 e9 G$ }" w; U+ N! C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 ~5 m: L! t- x2 T% S: R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& o) j' x0 I3 k3 C% k7 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ R$ X& i( @* v' p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ h1 }% y1 X$ `' b+ w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 Z$ c3 n2 b1 {; Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ X+ m4 m: s9 w& v& @) Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ H* z/ o: C' u. H- j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: M( u4 K- n. p3 u! Z+ `8 m# k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. ^+ t' z; P* O7 ?* l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* v6 q, L! K" R5 e. j1 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* H5 r- l# g% a* X( y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 j. g3 n8 I3 I& b: r5 l# C* V: k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 x/ H  Z1 d: o, n% W: B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  w$ J. c0 A) _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ o1 K- Z( R" J. o' S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>