【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 u1 J! l0 q$ s% I  RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ h# ]) n5 g; Z3 X/ L+ B. qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. T5 A1 p0 \- _0 HSeeing the sky content with its love
+ r0 d  Y, K. m8 s6 H, O* yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& Q* [  R5 U/ z4 v( V% c- PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ c$ T7 Y( A6 r1 CEvery other word you utter is love
" F/ e/ }8 \2 `% ?9 I9 pI really want to know just how much you love me
3 l! y) {! U# oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& C+ t" o2 i1 n* u* G* }" BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- k1 n( c1 f3 M  hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  m+ |% Z$ |8 B* ^# GI’m still filled with fear
- u$ R2 ~) o: r+ i5 r% wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% b# z* P" `4 d: R; {( ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 {* N1 f# F& q$ K8 U' S7 CWith such a tongue as yours,
9 `7 n# X( F+ \0 Z  Y% N% r: c6 _  YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! \- u1 i. g0 Y/ k6 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ J2 w- z: S( i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ b0 A, F. N* a. d/ w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ W  n. P' W& c* |# C. X, H3 R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 [7 C+ ?0 D8 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" p% O0 t% F) h  \- q7 ^' R$ \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: ~: J1 H8 K( w% @3 o3 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 {: r8 j! E, i  ]/ s$ p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: Q4 p5 k7 o% z/ I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ E+ X; _6 f0 e, B! s, O6 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; s; W5 O+ p% a3 m9 C2 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- F: M1 N" _& K4 B2 m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ^' T2 \1 h; ~4 c: m$ s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ }( C8 e4 K; E4 b5 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ w: o' ?* o$ a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! H9 f) v1 j; k- N2 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  x9 a* B3 g8 ~& q2 \7 ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  P5 C# k5 N3 s$ I0 g8 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 L# X# l. M4 [9 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  `0 I- Q" j3 R' L- c4 I. B) r* P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 q) |* r+ o4 d5 o/ Q* k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ y1 B  m/ r. T8 [2 E, ?) Y7 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 J7 j5 u. J# d" Q# ?6 Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! B0 f6 g3 z8 M! l2 Z$ Y1 z7 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 J% y7 v1 T' p* h; l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 H) t% Y6 w6 L. J2 d# S) y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ A: M6 n1 g: R: C1 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* P( B/ [5 w6 e' c1 D- m: y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, ]6 V' W/ Z: Q' f' Z3 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 A+ R  Z' ^5 ^: q; ]4 z我请你剖开它
7 ]2 u& z$ F# O6 {
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 p+ [. ]; l( t" b4 ~7 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>