【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 G; f2 j  s( z歌词我附在后面。
  y/ X* M, c3 a; z' z" oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 _9 L* c# z" _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' n) Z- ]$ K6 T- ^0 W0 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; b/ O/ k  h3 q) }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 Q5 c, f0 |9 H! d+ \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' d+ x* k. _% x$ ?2 c* pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- C3 J, U7 o# [; ^. p$ tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 h: s+ }  X2 t  {$ ]7 bI love you I love you with all my heart
+ n# T( @/ x6 {" _4 b/ n$ bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ R- y: t( R( }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) |7 D8 [( r" TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ [% t5 C1 @9 Y3 F; z* PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 m/ [$ O2 |3 }) H* P% ^# E# B9 fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' t! l* ?0 I- FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- Y6 L# J' C: K+ L( i/ G7 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" z' M) f2 V9 m' z2 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 X) Y% A& Z% V* S# _& t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' z, U$ N$ ?2 e' T7 O0 I# ^2 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 N$ f$ W4 J$ y( Z0 S0 I; l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* }* U$ `# M& H6 t  x5 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 `, L! r; j% t! U8 T5 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 M" x6 s5 `2 R. a/ `1 ~, g" i3 c; x; y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; I) A& b  M; ^6 `- i+ J7 {' y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& _9 r. V# F$ }  {- H2 w# C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; y+ ~: O7 @) j# B' u! I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- O% f, R- u: S" o* `0 y4 v  ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ H+ Y; k( `' F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( d- A& W' G2 V" l7 R/ C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 g' j( `$ e5 B+ X9 D, M; b" A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 n/ d3 N! c; ?# I7 ?5 u; F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 ]. s' Z' p) G, g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 |" m$ B, v  j( m0 O" j! o" {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& L$ H* A( u* B2 P. ]: t. }* M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 K8 R; I  t  L$ R, n) l) Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) @+ D) G" }9 T2 s8 G9 U  o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 V* Q! Z7 M" A' x: }( o' F! t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. W; {6 f3 J' Q* ^; Y, u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; k; f$ B( r  t& i: g  D5 {5 _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" t4 Y' P7 g/ d; @4 N6 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 P/ {& s7 n9 l) x+ M/ B, O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 T7 [$ c: b# R9 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: s1 g6 q- k6 j1 @0 g$ Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% D: b" L% ]& j; d0 n7 D; w# g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>