【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 {1 @0 y$ ?" C9 x$ B5 L0 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 r8 B, w  C% |, J* s9 F# |9 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 b  W9 X# t& ]The sky is happy down to its soul
" o  B& M, z* l8 O/ BWith the moon kissing it every night
1 M1 [" v/ u8 m" L1 `0 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 ~0 @+ c* \+ p7 D- R* l- _9 PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- b% o( ~) U3 Q$ v: vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) ~2 s% T$ j; ]9 ~7 ~9 e" h/ a" `! jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: |( _* v; a  z6 _% c: u2 ?3 o: fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 q& W# n) q# f1 g% ]- P+ ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* P$ g8 J7 {4 C6 KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, c1 d. X0 B; t/ P  YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* G$ {9 z$ |5 k- e5 pWith such a tongue as yours,
- S& G+ H5 R. k% n- Q4 ^" ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 O' j: d& B) E0 i2 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 x+ f( D! L9 s6 q. a- l" y7 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 \; ^+ A. n7 @. }  S( j3 O& G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# U/ ~* ]+ W( d5 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' N9 T: I& d. I& _; }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 w7 S% C& p' D+ V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; Z6 N, o8 a( N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 g) o& x3 Q+ C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 h7 ^" b. L8 G$ Z0 j' N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ _: k1 z; w# v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) `" Z% I. i. `' B3 h& ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" C# x' T$ o7 Q) t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! Q- Z8 l$ R& D! g; {+ N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# P& q6 N1 A% q4 |1 U6 M/ R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ Y! u- @! L4 P, J2 E! x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" a- i! T+ {$ h  M# O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  Z7 P- M8 G% M: s  M- e) Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( W/ o3 ]/ V, T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  A) l& m2 L1 {4 @5 |' I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 o8 N- I: I% y1 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 ]3 m# |' Y& c$ ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! y! _' Q. V% _6 p0 r! ]9 `- E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- S; D$ q& t' @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. X4 K: Y, l' {4 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ L: }8 B% p. f, N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& V9 `, q1 p2 P2 ~) _/ ^% S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( V$ U! P7 Q) U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 v9 n. F0 r- P% d$ j$ l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: ~+ D0 J# |7 u1 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% a# M' S* J! b# a# s: b( m1 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 K. @7 P& N) p8 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& _; N: l* o% X<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 a- {0 f1 n# g+ p1 m6 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" a# R) d0 s6 S" r+ f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, Y" y; B" H8 S  o3 S9 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; u' q# b. T' e" {9 u- V0 D* l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ a# N9 V) g  a+ B  L% a. j, X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* b* Q% J9 Z. ^/ D& f3 [8 H/ M6 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 F- P+ ?5 v$ a+ w, c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ y- _5 V9 H7 A, Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 e* @' H8 C2 H* J/ Y# J9 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 q; V9 S1 r4 f1 g  x) w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! i6 x( X2 B% ^; E我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>