【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( A* _# S' P+ C/ J歌词我附在后面。
9 R& \4 o+ A: R4 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ M) I# e  w6 @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; {- W4 t* K& |' }- pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% \8 V9 J3 c2 M7 I2 o4 xYou needn’t fear anything
) P- v& Y1 g' {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ w# O, F$ L+ t3 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 _5 t) l7 b, j! hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# _: v4 h- M# g! X* X& t6 cI want so much to see inside your heart
' P) Z/ c& _/ P" ^' i* g4 }0 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 Y" j8 G8 L  ^3 i7 ]+ ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  q4 K; {* c  `I regret not dying
( }; Q. x! _# s. ^; K- k3 M4 I: O( [; qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 O, m6 d5 i/ \: @9 B! |8 D9 S+ u# WWith such a tongue as yours,
# S5 @3 O7 X* ~" o. i4 i% L/ Q2 SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ i- v0 B+ u$ U2 S, AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ t& W* j" y7 ^2 z+ H1 dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( _5 S- }9 q5 X- ]3 T! e- r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 ]; o( H/ H2 G8 [6 w; }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. r! [! t/ U( N: G! a6 a% Z- _' w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" x* ~6 J9 ]4 F* E0 D3 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 f2 N+ C% {+ p0 |8 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ [$ N- J; G8 C( t. l: W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! Q( P$ L$ X. x8 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 W/ s, y  m$ `- I* Q! B# q8 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* i1 `' Z" U7 p. v9 y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ h. H% q7 l( l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 J, u. y* @) v+ d4 \1 t' D5 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  Y4 Y0 |; _& |* {/ W. H! E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 R% o$ i9 ~0 {5 o) E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! A3 F! C9 q: m- O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 j+ `2 }% |# j- I: H/ ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! c3 I6 ~: b1 G! E4 Z5 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 j: Q9 |: N% \4 `7 M' {* U) x% E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) E* p3 w; L5 c- B- g% N1 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: W, R4 \  i! R* G, z& C1 A0 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, l4 x% O  r, p- U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' D' n. g5 j/ e8 v5 x" _# A& Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! F  {6 n/ {8 Z4 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 v4 n" L3 N7 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" }- s% D: j+ u8 F6 d. y5 e' }  R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  j5 [3 |5 M* a$ Q. |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ U$ ~% t& c% ~  Z6 C, B5 `  Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 R9 S" y; q6 u) ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 X0 I1 @1 P. t( S$ u! y9 u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>