【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 t8 ^! i) H- {: b/ w# DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, D4 t) h  [8 |+ A% l0 i0 Q" jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) V  @# v+ }2 {/ l$ b" U7 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" m7 M' Y4 P3 Q' s( J" ?  OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 z! T& h0 \; x: UEvery other word you utter is love
# t  Q' q9 u! w, p* d  u* HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 F- g! }9 N' G1 G6 L9 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. f3 e7 i7 o$ w+ v5 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 ?1 h: B9 d& r6 [# b/ T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 Y3 U+ V/ W& V6 ]9 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: U9 y+ r% l. i1 B; t! f8 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: |# _5 T6 M% n) Q4 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& O; V, f" O- M$ V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* n$ E7 i! ~* W7 y4 Q2 A4 `2 T9 b& n) p. z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 s" _. I7 I  i* {& c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 j1 Q2 W! H% t4 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& M3 _# g1 e& Z5 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 z! I( d5 X' `2 d0 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' a+ U' @0 b- x+ p9 k9 T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# ^4 A8 d- t! l2 ^$ Z( ]3 R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; f3 q# `) o+ ]" Z( Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 Y8 t; M8 g2 s% L& d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; G2 e- M6 Y( l4 ?# T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# W+ ~- u$ l7 l9 N0 c! i3 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" P! b# V# B) B. U1 y1 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, D* s5 y* K. z: p8 E5 H5 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( H6 w0 P" Q% O% @$ I$ e9 @$ [  k" r( V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 H9 D" l. D5 {/ ^7 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  b7 x7 ?# E3 P; s6 }; Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 @; H4 [% w  ]/ t+ x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; _% |8 L! N  u3 r# k8 g9 }# P0 p7 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. @& o  K0 f6 X, x' c- c' D( `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 e, C! t& N" H+ w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 r, A, ^# u6 ^  _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>