【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ V0 I2 H" h* _$ ]9 B5 g. D) k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ X2 y2 r+ @$ V* C) jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" O$ ~4 _9 N6 p2 KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( w5 c' D  y5 m0 F, o' fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 c, o1 U8 V$ P, R* `; ]" a6 R3 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  ^4 W% |9 P" `$ Z" Z' h* [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% X; P+ ~5 X1 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. _3 F6 \5 T1 C2 ]$ L2 {% X8 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ [2 S' C+ v9 {0 g5 p/ s: HI want so much to see inside your heart
5 P8 w7 O( `% P5 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 B: X, e) r. y( O9 {& z5 ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 A2 i# p7 m; `7 X( n5 x% uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 {% ~' t* p4 J7 t! w4 w' xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( V1 b7 ~5 y# P9 a6 }9 P9 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ d' K8 l. P) q# |* w) H/ ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  C7 W' @: I# W4 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 ~7 J  ?+ k. j, _/ I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 m9 a1 B' f0 u- D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) u7 V, ^3 K# r! Z2 J: r. j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 G( s$ b( o" V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 B& ?( a3 I" l8 v. ]2 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 o9 U% H$ o9 X) l2 [/ _4 @' X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 m( v9 e/ N. e  h3 d8 D1 O0 g0 E& s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, B0 ~7 M8 }8 C, x. M! D$ u0 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 M. c# R$ F: q8 s; @! W( C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% j2 |% M9 D  M7 Q2 ?7 Z7 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 @2 U' u* ]. G! g" ], c9 R& Y+ f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 B( J2 E3 p' i/ a- n4 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( o! o$ D3 |% P0 R0 J/ h5 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. I, |5 y: p) ^: A0 N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 d+ A. n* G" [$ [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 J+ U# E9 D) c1 ~: P) B3 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 w$ h& _  Y* _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% H- t7 [$ b8 n; {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. f; k" w" @5 ~5 ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* @5 J4 ~9 J9 o) r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  ~* Z8 p9 K9 X8 H3 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. `6 v' C. s8 X) Q0 M! o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  u# Y, u7 D, ?$ D, ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ C" `) q7 A* D+ r0 ~" j. u! d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 X3 B( N+ l3 H4 z  o6 x2 f: f0 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>