【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* T8 A0 h% q, h2 o2 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 {5 Y6 A' r: i: FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 m5 X5 X/ S  rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 I0 }4 t, C( HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ b* V: N2 ]+ b. ]- A( YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, o) g! ^9 d' x5 s$ SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 c6 s, a( Y$ W; u0 q) kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 T# b# D4 w! L- I$ S% R) iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 \9 U+ C. p; e$ A- A" r0 P3 d, pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' y" y- J: l7 \" i# WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ j) H2 X) ]9 ^. ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) W( X8 E" [' V0 c0 a' N* a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( C0 @  M/ T) B, R1 m+ K# C5 y8 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' h3 e3 |/ G1 [; d3 i/ L' s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; B% D6 h& b- ?% D) a) D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! Y8 ?  X. N* N2 k0 u- X8 A# a9 e: L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 e1 p( V( f! Z: ?% x. J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* p2 s4 V" S' P. t. X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  Y2 `" Z/ d6 A6 |4 d+ P0 ?$ i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: E' s1 w5 ~+ d: b4 u' h  W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. |" p: \$ y# D, {7 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
+ E$ ]$ r) H8 L& B/ P, }4 K$ {5 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" j$ g0 `  Z& _: p0 @1 C/ w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* I8 V, L5 J5 S" C4 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( W3 r/ w5 }) k/ R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 D6 ]7 z. D& r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& ?& ?# |$ m4 r- f& D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# Z/ p0 K, m+ M5 n, [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% m* Q* a  y& Y) Y  z1 S% _& b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ }* e+ b, F3 W4 k5 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 F+ [( _, U1 j' H# B: O9 ^/ s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. T; ]' T: J  _2 a$ h4 t) _6 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 `4 l% D! ^% q& }+ A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) T8 z9 W. Z6 g) s% d* `4 ?4 \0 b8 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 D  ^+ X( C# P' J# n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ d9 Z, d7 [; i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  z* R% B( E  n& k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; p, v9 D9 V: ~" [& U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: I# Z$ t' h" g6 s" A% Y# l% K# ?& y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  x4 b5 ?- m, S0 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" W& W) z$ Q! N7 r, C9 M; `* D8 K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 @" Q9 q/ q$ F/ o6 n% ~8 i& M9 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" Q$ e2 h" q; F' F" k% Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 }  |8 |! d. ~/ B1 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>