【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' t! d) [* T9 M7 {/ q& d$ u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 O" Y8 c+ K3 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 P7 c& p% \2 e3 E- TWith the moon kissing it every night
+ E5 g+ ?* x: k! q" cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  q  I# z, y* n& O1 J  D, k' A: UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 _& K+ s9 {2 Z5 `  x8 ~Every other word you utter is love
; c3 }' X$ d0 K# e% iI really want to know just how much you love me
2 ~+ |! ~  L# r1 fI love you I love you with all my heart
$ K1 R! z: }' INothing can compare to my love
  s% {& p+ o4 F  N; ~7 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; k4 Q- q- @) S  K3 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  V5 m4 k  s2 n4 @6 j6 W0 N% SI want so much to see inside your heart
; S  ^8 a  u8 a& e5 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# A5 E- T- m3 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* w" }& S/ x' u1 F: n, lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ G. }$ _3 v, DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) o. \. m5 X% M& \8 k  a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) x1 f, e% x- M5 H4 T# C" Y( l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 I8 z' x" O+ L0 G' j  _# O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ X6 t8 U  R+ A, _7 o% x5 s. R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ F+ L$ l$ d0 U! I) ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% T- `. X" i% P$ N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# G" _: a4 r, \0 x) P% n: {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" v- y6 U% z" C+ ?, c% y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 H# K8 R# Q/ N% ]7 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) p1 k# l8 a. x( |: E2 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( u- M4 o/ P1 W! \$ e# i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* n! ~/ n" X& X) P5 u+ B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  Y7 L  f! s4 h/ v1 v3 z% g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) e4 _$ X/ Y* b7 {: D! ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 w2 i3 y& x( e8 j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! `$ o* A# t8 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, u' e5 N& F3 r$ Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% W" c% M5 ~9 i" C( }) U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" K3 y* K, h- l) E3 @) C+ s# l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 H/ e9 d# A: O0 M2 ?4 H  E/ F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& _$ ~) o! j- L6 R6 U5 s; r; T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& [4 M/ e1 P( \/ n; e. D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 L! X/ \/ t2 [5 }' b: b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; U, V2 X$ N' l- T- g, b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ W  Y+ s3 d8 P2 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# N& O- j. h9 p8 `" O0 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% S7 u8 y4 G0 ^: m我请你剖开它
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6 y+ q4 z: {( J) I$ r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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