【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 x' ?& q& s3 a* R4 N8 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ q$ i. V$ L" e1 M, Q/ P; u3 KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ \+ V8 H- q+ U9 W! H+ _" R0 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. l$ q$ O& R4 v; qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 d8 o6 P, m  \8 R5 a5 s  P& UYou needn’t fear anything
, w5 T! N. ^) g2 A' k* D+ x* LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% O5 C4 f7 w9 U  z* }Every other word you utter is love
& |! e" E6 |/ i" AI really want to know just how much you love me
0 L* y6 @' p( w$ U3 XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# E. o9 p" D$ }" }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 T! B  W" g1 ]9 v: _% f3 k4 bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' g, i, v' f* W3 S/ n; b' Z3 BI regret not dying
1 G( ~& R/ P2 T( T2 J3 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  l( s7 H+ V, A1 iWith such a tongue as yours,
0 r$ ?% M6 Q& t2 C8 _& TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% f1 i! u# \8 z2 @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 r; c: w1 S% ^. I( j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- e) t0 w1 w0 a+ H0 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 ?% ?% F; Q( {$ k9 G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# Q! q; z3 p. o6 t1 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 F# l" s* X- Q* Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 d. M4 S. `& {( s" h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( R( c" s8 Y. K* r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ p' n2 e6 y. R+ A) @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. y9 w" @" k  u5 n% o* e+ b7 C% _1 k8 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 F* G( H3 @. y% M' A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" l7 b6 J* V3 p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, F+ k: M9 I( l) D, Z2 U/ U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ Q1 Z$ N* s& a, _6 x1 S3 C0 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( x( V) Z8 t, w$ I6 X0 R8 o0 F' O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* K$ c% n! _+ i% T: S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! H: [& y( K3 l) o! D8 l4 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 A5 r2 {: j3 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ n; G5 d) m" V; y6 x- a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( o  x8 P. `, D" S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* J, f/ ^# L# _. P; i/ Y  t: }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) g: ?8 s$ Y1 _) X* {7 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 t% ]0 n6 @( ?* _3 {  x3 h0 j& q6 h5 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! n+ S% z6 T9 q" I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 w* v/ h* {& i" b' L8 W- e) L5 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. z" k0 ~/ _# w) U' ]! L! `( I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& L0 |0 r1 I1 l, D5 z" R4 k& T) Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  I0 i: K: n" F# Q7 K1 c5 D' b: A# g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>