【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& A$ V( N- E2 \# jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 F/ c+ |; C7 N; F; T, k6 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 ~8 [1 P# \) f! d' ~; K2 }. @2 dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# W& p' A0 O% Y7 A, f( h! hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- x5 E/ U% h% h3 ^+ O3 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 p( k' T6 M* m! {- M% l; _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, {2 _( m! `$ k6 T: Z" pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 t+ C4 i% P! O7 s% ~0 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ w9 p3 C# l/ ^& h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 ^  u4 k; I# c1 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: v1 Q9 J) y* p6 d" U* N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ o4 x2 Y) W" y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( h5 ^; J; q) Q& M; _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ r9 m- h+ {: F" _' J9 B! ^' x  _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* c, p4 `0 w: C8 S' k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" n! i  H0 p. U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 o; |' t' y2 W4 g+ G9 ?) F, a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! n4 R  _2 s3 r3 g$ a% A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ T" Z# V% M  j; N7 K3 g/ Y4 ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 R0 G1 o) r+ _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 L; a, }) t* X3 i5 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ p7 C6 V8 J2 F8 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ `! o2 U% c% G7 ]! ~$ q2 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 f" u/ i0 K0 l. l- _/ l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" k& x& n! F9 R- o# W. L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 y4 B1 q: C- B7 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; J0 @+ D) S7 r% O7 I0 _% [6 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# J9 Q& A5 r, A6 _3 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>