【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 S; c1 z" e0 b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 k- H( y7 M/ B- i7 g% xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  L' y8 K; x  t+ n' n7 H$ k- M: G" d7 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 m( ?) G' J2 I- h) [: U- L# iThe sky is happy down to its soul
  D9 C  o! p/ r% lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 |6 t- O/ A- a/ {' E2 ZYou needn’t fear anything
' T& l" F7 \: m6 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- R* T3 A! G9 m2 ^* R3 ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& X( }( J0 H$ ?- p) ONothing can compare to my love
) Q8 _- [/ Z3 q& o0 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. }4 B- J( W8 n) x& zI want so much to see inside your heart
9 E+ a) f2 n1 D3 g* JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, V% R! }6 R: M' C; h: t, u* Y: W1 @9 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 [' D5 R& I- P9 l! H) ]: ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 O  C% r, i: ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* H( w+ g7 b) [$ fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 p$ r* I+ r2 ~6 U* NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 `* c6 t$ Y5 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 f+ ]7 F/ B1 V( H) H7 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: {7 `5 s% E! Q3 r5 @/ _* ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ I' K5 ^/ w" S0 [0 z7 ~" C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# Q; i2 a; h, O; `8 A& z/ Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! C8 A' N/ p7 v( [4 s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; ?1 N. F4 b- x" V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' P: @9 ?  _  T9 @1 [/ ]4 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( {: F( Q) V( b+ B' K  A2 U1 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  _" V/ t7 c4 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 e2 ^! B0 L7 Y5 K5 e' q/ x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' d; A: C2 u1 b' T% t8 i$ j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' k7 e6 w1 @. ?, o* r! R/ I4 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% I- d3 W6 B! j! i3 I+ V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  @3 {3 b8 g& B/ Q1 ^2 g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  e( G0 T! V3 o& |7 N' e$ {9 m6 f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ s0 h: a, Z2 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( V- w: |& x9 V# d$ \8 ~8 A( c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, D$ X' R8 K0 r0 A4 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& j( i8 ?, D* M; i2 \( c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ C& y! y8 G, u: y6 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  C. M9 Z$ i  s# C* W: }% l1 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 L4 R) i; ~8 ^% A) j7 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& p) m+ v0 W/ t  m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ t8 f" B9 a  Y" d  V" d( O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 c! M2 e+ I/ z- z% j3 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>