【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% c. o( p2 p$ q2 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 P, @* e" J  x% G# c" N$ VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 g/ b0 a9 |. F6 }2 N/ IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 `' V& Y9 h& N2 s) b& F% P9 k3 T% FI really want to know just how much you love me
% q* \, E* M( L* O! T9 t: jI love you I love you with all my heart
! k5 `4 A8 u, F/ Y" O5 g0 s6 [Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- i# Q& [* |/ h, K$ \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ I& Z2 I6 s: lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' x  n" o2 X" s! M+ vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ J& v- i% T9 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 m- n' c' ]. @3 l6 K: eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 U2 @3 W2 P. k' ~& e/ S) I" i* {  n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) ?- s* E' K( h5 [% q7 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; R: J1 o7 p' m3 [3 L2 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" l% w% Z7 H* N* ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 ^, ^- |3 E3 c9 c* T/ |# w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 |0 a# K* y1 k8 }# f/ V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 _, X; D9 Q- q, R1 p: N7 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 @3 t/ X1 m, B2 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 Y7 a* D4 m5 u/ R* ?- q/ ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  |- k% M) ^7 P7 |  [9 A+ |7 B' i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# P( J7 O" B& `& h% ]; k% W2 O0 u, P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# |2 z7 m' d) E<P>你无需担心</P>
2 ~* W5 c8 i& E, H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( i, h& D, `# L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# T' G& t/ r; c" T& ^4 Y$ t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* t8 q) I( |" v1 v/ A. ~, ], b9 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; O# e% x+ H" b! N! L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 S% r/ a, b% `) Q; K% L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ G; T1 G. O/ O( q8 [$ R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* F( z4 q3 n; Y/ o4 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% Z# l2 G3 Y9 B' F7 {# A$ t6 _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 A6 A" N/ g# B: m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ {- O8 [1 T& w/ @( q6 t. `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' B3 L% x8 y; ^* ~! x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- p1 ~$ {5 A! \  f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' h, d% V0 S% b$ `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ v# }  E$ t' J& r. _: K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 k  u* O+ |. l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>