【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ N! \- o& D  s- l  L. t; u, u0 _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# p+ k& B* e4 H( ~0 vSeeing the sky content with its love
, ~7 w# `( d! e9 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 A' A. R5 [1 I* {: X3 ^7 CNothing can compare to my love
9 Y% a9 c/ L7 j3 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# L* x* w9 q9 K3 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) e; F" i/ d4 r, V5 F" s7 BI’m still filled with fear
( M6 [! G2 E' lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# s& E5 L4 p4 ~- B  ]I regret not dying
+ N- W' D( M( f, t0 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 H; o) h# g& C* U% yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 `# a  ~$ m0 O8 m' `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 P. v$ @; J0 n% T# m/ R) l, |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, [. A( j# x7 v: x# {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& Y5 K" g0 {2 {, G  R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ B& h& [6 N( \0 X% y& Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 _/ ^' [. e- U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- V+ Z4 O7 O  S2 ~/ `1 z; a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% k7 x6 F. i9 c' \# K( ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* C& C1 j- h4 X9 y- L( |0 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' k6 ^2 ]4 o! L2 u" v9 F) u* j+ @0 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% D  E$ }/ }# L' o  S) u. p+ E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! @$ o% O9 z6 v5 F) P; Y1 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 Y* ~3 v# k( r7 h1 F! q' [. Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- a8 t6 r, R3 w( c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ Q, T2 {1 F1 |  v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  J! H" b7 h$ o3 {; `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  N, @5 x* U8 i: z2 N, m1 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* Y2 ]- j& \5 g6 K9 X/ L! k" Z/ p4 |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# g7 d. Q9 L1 T5 T4 Y  A. ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) V* u0 I" O1 d& O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- P- e% ]' j8 R/ C: e, M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 v1 _+ w/ {* H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 B% b9 V2 f# E# J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 R8 t4 q5 Z. @; n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. W* {$ O9 ]! j3 G/ E) m; i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 q- E' S- _  o8 C$ O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( m5 x* }6 t% Y/ L$ r% u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 w" g+ S/ k" ^+ w; {* @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( {5 _6 H) e" S5 C4 I4 h# n. I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>