【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ R( q5 {9 n  \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; E) ^. B) e- _) RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% T! B2 j7 v( S9 G# r: }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: M, M; o7 W# E8 ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 P/ Z: g0 R5 A3 E+ eI love you I love you with all my heart
$ G' C5 U6 y3 m! n3 kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 S+ \3 E0 n7 r0 k2 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, a5 p1 r, B) g- EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. j- {$ E) I! y, U# JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" l5 y3 V  c3 _( f  S2 _2 I$ hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. ~' ~$ m# R; n* P4 c' c' }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ d* Z, F+ W  V1 X1 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 g7 Q; P5 C) I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) k  a$ e1 Q. [% Y4 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ `( Y1 x# N! ^1 a3 g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  n& I: q' e& }: K0 e, `* j, P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 d) H$ Q. [" Q& k4 [7 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 F0 [; V/ W$ ?) e5 g) j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) v3 R3 H& u) R& o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' m" ]7 N5 E: U. r& {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! p8 V( i: T" Z& _- t4 J/ \<P>你无需担心</P>
' h" F! i0 W, @6 u$ B4 ?$ J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! a$ X- C8 C% z8 _' p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; z. Q; [. G' d, w9 q" ?3 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 @. x+ x8 g9 V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  E$ F* L1 i+ {" j: g5 t" r6 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 W5 p9 h4 k; ~+ X& a8 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ Q0 z5 F* n& z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 E. N- U% J4 {6 V1 d) n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 j: {: {% v+ e5 @" G$ Q# {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- W* w1 @4 a5 }5 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& W: n, z3 u4 v/ b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 A$ \+ @7 M& U! n7 }4 e$ L8 X& o4 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& G, x$ n0 t# e6 S$ w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- r) p" m8 t9 R. q6 t5 v. [# l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ b  x5 l- A+ r; C8 J. u! `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% g3 ]) P# a0 J: ?: z8 v$ A/ w: b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 m4 M# t  s) ?; z0 y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 O% D9 K3 {, t( a& y' I% A8 J& m我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& g# z9 o6 S# b' D% l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>