【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ [( o- h- `. D3 w- GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( Q* R/ o7 N! pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" g2 o& n- X; ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. e% w% n1 \  G3 X6 `% p, z/ wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 _7 S1 s  {8 l3 S0 cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& M$ h- f9 x; NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 A  v' Q% h( TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 F% {% R3 i  m+ b+ r+ s" eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# e; i. D& ^, v2 p3 v) _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ D# {. V9 q' S: {With such a tongue as yours,
% K! r: t8 ^/ Z- f! F" dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: m$ b8 A  d( d: }3 x3 G, G6 v; L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 f  N1 C8 d0 D' Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 h) b& O$ j5 h* M8 I. K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 w8 I  l5 F, H7 P1 ~5 }5 r4 O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, M" [8 r0 {& F* h" ]; g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" E5 ], O( ?* Z# C& x/ U0 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 V3 z/ \. J6 }: ~2 P) i6 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 r3 B( K  s+ b1 z. ^6 f) v% `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& P' f3 O' _% H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# B) R  ?: \- x% {/ u, D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ m( \% A% g# F' F+ I+ h: |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' e. ?$ S' B" f% G  T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 p% d) ^+ v: P8 A6 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 P, [1 X9 t- m9 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; i- d6 _; D: l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ m( J$ Z) i3 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! d8 C. Y) U& y9 f  M  q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  y2 r; S, B" n, w5 E2 M4 h: M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 o. K* W3 z& u7 w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 f& f* F# B4 X8 N0 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% F  J# }4 z( ~- d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 [, s! }, p' G$ e, e* I( u* G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, t' f* i& K7 ?9 T' k* T) b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! C0 X0 s' D. j. G- d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 {# E' l, W  ^9 W' }$ ?我请你剖开它
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$ J$ o, L2 p- s- x0 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& \  P: Q; \- b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>