【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" H! j4 _; w& G, SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, K! W; g8 h3 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  ^2 s0 g) _8 i$ f7 K' wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; n% d: }: j4 |; F0 [' F: pThe sky is happy down to its soul
: d# k! v2 u; r. d) HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 w/ Y9 ]  d0 ?% G' `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 j. f; J) b& gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 R7 {! e8 x2 y& nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( `3 ~) T6 n" k* g6 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 s" |2 L) E/ J! Z5 M0 @, A. m0 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' @6 x4 f3 H4 }3 H" H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ F! Q3 k3 @2 D, o  U4 ]- J. G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, @) S, I8 _9 j4 J8 u& [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 A) f; i) }3 M+ c" {" {8 e9 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 j" }3 x2 c, F# p: J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' ]; e- Q& j' e7 h6 J: ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( J2 ~1 ~; {- o2 r3 }7 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) B' h. d* M2 \7 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 h5 p  ]8 C& B* S# I$ F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, W" v& c0 Y! L: V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 _' B+ h# e0 p* K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  V7 k. T: L" E1 `+ w2 _* S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. s/ M/ G* M) S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 I2 B+ f; K& Y/ O5 n* {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& B' a7 M* V4 h( N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: `; N! U5 j" r, c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 A$ B( C/ a) A8 ?. b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 }0 _7 O$ l' t6 b2 `9 d+ t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 Z: k: A6 P8 c7 D* ]# z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 Q* F- Z6 I# j; q# n* d# R我请你剖开它
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8 B9 g6 B/ o( }4 I- D5 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 V5 B5 W% s" w5 ^+ [$ K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>