【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ Y* R2 c7 ~8 Y$ c# v, U2 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 j8 V1 h% f5 j! LThe sky is happy down to its soul
: w) O# G+ P2 tWith the moon kissing it every night
, ~8 e; [% A3 }! s9 f8 X! E+ ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 L! v2 ]) g  N9 fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- `' B* Y' k# @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 Q- |; H& Y; f; a' k9 {/ C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) o& y9 }5 d% S" U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 L7 V6 p/ G" g9 i, m2 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; Q. q1 t- g( l1 l! C  \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 o# S4 i3 B) [; ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) D2 B# s, y! _3 Z) k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% J% u6 z: I( j/ D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! s# x0 w2 A3 a& O2 i1 y% z' A; P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( y, f( l2 f1 {' e! ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) S* m" t7 O/ F( N2 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ _$ ~+ ?7 {( i, ]  }. g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" k) f& Y0 W4 ?, h$ `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 f" C' B8 H5 `5 s" L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 M/ R; b( |8 d" e9 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 `% X  `6 U) Y5 A: |! N, N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 m, G3 e, j* h9 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 D% e/ s- Q( \, Z- j4 i* E- g1 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" s, U( T2 ?2 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& t9 z2 V# n1 U- y7 `; }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  D! @  [" h" l. A/ y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! \( K( X" ]8 [: q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ M  Y, F( V  ]7 K& _2 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. z3 o# P+ r6 z, R8 [0 A1 |' K8 Z5 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ S6 J0 A4 G2 q6 y' m! n5 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 N8 }! S: R) V. J# f4 R; L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 E  [- F) _* Y  E  f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  \1 r6 O* J/ Z- G3 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 {- F4 `0 _; x6 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 o' E! O/ w# R+ {! f  B9 M* [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ M/ Y4 p+ b: M3 f; R5 H& ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. U* n; ~. m' l& g7 I7 L" l- q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' U- j  y; |& W9 Z5 Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>