【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- f7 \9 e' y. z6 g" [; G8 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ F5 `! c  @! K* a$ r0 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( ]1 f" i5 i! o2 @The sky is happy down to its soul
; T* g% I/ W5 j& W! R: }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' ^) Y  `# _8 Y6 rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) H+ J$ f  s4 b/ l  L$ B- zI really want to know just how much you love me
: E" P) U& w# i- eI love you I love you with all my heart
) O, Z- M) E/ y. LNothing can compare to my love
% R4 y* X  q( J( _; `4 h+ e2 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ ]5 j. l3 O2 K% S9 w- @! eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& j# _. V) i( ~! _. a$ AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ Q- I$ U9 @* b8 t* `! F* ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. P  U/ N* N# t% WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 C* Y' L- U: j- E/ v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 A4 s( q, h; N* ?0 U  Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) ~3 n4 g. G& z9 X1 z3 D8 X7 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" u% H3 e4 l3 s# Y- P( _2 r& U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ k" G7 t0 A8 C# H: @. s5 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 X/ k/ z8 Z0 n, J5 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 c& I$ d  q) Q/ ]$ `' D% S2 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 T' M5 O$ Q- H  P8 h+ D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. w/ [' l0 `# `+ b5 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& O1 }, u! O* e( O' |# w: F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! k- x  L" Q  T" E. C# l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" i# ~; _, F; [  N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 @( D) ?5 V1 H/ Q# `, F2 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 g" w' y% c; ]3 f# h  }+ l5 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ y- V9 I; N  b" h4 |, r' `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" G+ ?( M0 e0 |3 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, c8 e- p# l' a! E/ c$ R; a$ J1 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" u/ V8 k1 N9 J& Q1 o3 U$ W! d% b: N* T9 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 t  p7 w. j1 i9 C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% {) h; q" J# |: R+ H3 y& r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ ~9 X3 H+ N, {; [2 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 L" d0 ?. ?; g3 L9 b6 _% ?& F  }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 U% r9 F: w# c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( d7 ?) Q# C0 k: v( e4 s( x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ q. J4 f2 ]# A& u! D! S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>