【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ B- a; ^( _4 ^# pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 k( a# `4 n) w2 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 Q4 J% W' k9 iWith the moon kissing it every night
/ P! [# V" S- L- D* B5 \Seeing the sky content with its love
3 x6 W: A3 [/ U) B" O. {9 D6 T* VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- n! L4 p. T% ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 F' U5 X; u! u: I6 ^4 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: s. [0 |. o% M( S% Y& J0 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 C2 n3 {8 l4 R. }( h1 B* mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 _; t/ l1 i6 q" U  }( YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 S1 Q8 @; |; ~: _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# J; A3 a0 S6 u) bI regret not dying
6 C7 q0 x) J; e( J5 B: ~. Z; y7 eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ?6 s. J; T3 o& z3 k* z( Z3 UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 D- Z5 J4 ~1 V  |/ a  D' _- H3 A2 ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( X8 o. y4 l- X8 |0 n1 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# `/ ?( e: `+ O  t6 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" r- p/ ~' z- p  M" ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 e# ~& p  o# ^. U2 b+ t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. E) n' {  |) b* y1 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; u" o! r6 [3 o, r( v# L7 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  O6 O+ g" j# d6 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% X  l0 K+ h- @8 y& g: _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 l7 t* @4 a# z) G9 {' n1 E" J4 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 N) K3 f" r: H0 d" j1 G' Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; Q, U; r& j# _, `5 v7 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" a% d) R- R8 P' R9 B" k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 S; p- s( u* t0 v( E1 V' z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( u6 R2 i1 O; \4 }" l7 e/ w) ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" R7 s' ^% _$ P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. V3 x4 R/ U+ b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  D1 z6 X5 s, P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  _+ X. y" U: [  }0 c0 J/ V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" C) w. u& u; {$ X" U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 k+ ?4 j% H4 F2 C9 S  D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 Q* S2 V! K9 Q$ U/ G3 Y& w* c我请你剖开它
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5 V6 q# L& G2 n* }( D- B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>