【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 ^+ g! N) n8 J歌词我附在后面。
3 A$ @* Q- K* G. {- S/ V, VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! r- _5 _7 S1 _, o* B, pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 _8 ~+ Z1 T9 M% L. q, m3 OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& G9 `  [% [1 p) }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ T6 z' ], t3 F4 DWith the moon kissing it every night
+ S# j* }3 G+ n: t. fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: Q* n" K6 X4 O/ B5 ]+ cEvery other word you utter is love
' i$ b# ?- o- ~6 x4 WI really want to know just how much you love me
/ L: a7 w) B/ [, l4 |I love you I love you with all my heart
0 I2 K% a- L1 _3 X- jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% g- E/ `! z0 V! a- H: i- R- J$ }4 \I want so much to see inside your heart
! v; _3 z- p" e, H- r, BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& @( q, B9 t3 w7 J8 Y, SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- E8 s" n3 d: `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ U  x. ]9 x) }9 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 y+ K/ c' x6 n+ Z1 m$ W* NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ a: j+ ?& C, ~* [% z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 A6 s7 w& g' p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 V4 [* E6 ?0 V8 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, Z6 Z. V- J# U, T2 D/ c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 b- T- M1 ^& c& I& [, Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& r+ \7 t7 }+ [' \, d<P>你无需担心</P>
7 k8 k/ B4 K9 N4 m& Q5 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ U7 I) T+ \# o$ o+ y# ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: k1 m+ U) y# r* A" @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, J/ p& s& j( t2 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, c$ n" I" f% A& r0 K. K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ ^. S* ?0 d% V: q: P2 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  G+ ^% y6 z( y' g/ O4 J3 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ i- Y) l0 \7 z$ i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  S0 q  M/ {  w5 j# z  k# ~+ |' I, A" p0 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  J! \8 r0 b1 d# L4 V5 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 d) g# d0 m) S/ ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 s9 Q9 s8 t. v1 a/ s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 c. q8 V& P2 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; N6 O5 [, V4 b7 ^- L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 B( J* X+ m% A9 f9 t" \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ L6 T6 M" Z+ [. d1 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>