【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: Q8 |0 Z3 Q. ]* _  VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" r- X4 y2 }7 P" S* sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( U( |$ {: U% P1 K8 v  yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, r. [1 Y% B; p4 p, r& f$ p' CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. t9 ~- T6 |' D! {$ d" C/ ?4 L! h6 dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% l5 P1 s! V6 u. k' LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; a; [6 O" B' ]" j; n* s4 y, _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- W7 A( F( s+ I7 RI want so much to see inside your heart
  O9 U" P* O7 I4 K. g# e" R- g( ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 K- C. m& W0 L: N2 w( T  o' OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 V3 k% Q/ M7 v/ i7 K( r8 HI regret not dying
8 w) J9 L( w, Q* T/ ]- xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) D9 _' n4 D; ]: K- [With such a tongue as yours,
6 I' D  b  d* t2 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" ~' D( w( x  X' D5 G1 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 F9 A  J. |* t# o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 X/ {  L) O4 J4 J* L# ^" }$ y( |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ N5 [: C0 G. x, }, I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ }3 U. H, i1 y  ]) [$ k9 z. c6 _3 e3 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ f  u3 Z  n+ B( y! Y& {( o7 i1 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& R+ ~0 k  b+ u. o) y7 S1 {/ s/ `% E; H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 F0 {) f6 }3 E7 E4 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) E1 `( n: u2 ~8 F7 {2 B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 U- i) @) y' O1 R) E& _8 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- p  g6 A% b" X+ }5 g3 p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ y) P: H0 A! F- i; q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 m) L4 v* j! t2 ?: V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 M4 `/ r3 `, G+ M& @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, V( U6 C5 A( J+ m3 `+ a% Q# p4 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; e0 H. F& A, Z7 n: }6 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: C" A; `4 Y- l7 p; u$ P& y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ T# |' E! T" R' u, t! v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  [  H4 X( l" e8 ]9 U# R3 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 h* S6 A+ i  \+ I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. {3 a' X  O1 _- h6 i  H8 O; D6 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ j; h. x4 [# e6 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# C0 V, q9 K$ w3 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( k  y. X9 J* H# ~+ ^# q% [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( J+ n# J+ H1 r  g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; E& Q/ w6 c8 b; Z) l  a# R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ z) H3 N, j: v, y$ H* h% W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 ]7 X! q: J4 }! O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 U' |/ y: T. E( z5 k; c  l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- {4 y( Z; P3 e8 g2 l  r) y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 P2 @& ~. z4 l5 s- Y8 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& _, B8 {; C3 v! f1 f; O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ T$ q# ^$ F" G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ {+ n: t7 s4 _1 E) i4 S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% N& I8 c- h% |我请你剖开它

- t- Y$ g" \) I8 z- s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: u3 v) D* q1 p. v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>