【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 P- D. B6 G; @* n6 m3 ?歌词我附在后面。
* ?! ]. u9 }% e/ E* l: x( J* gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 w" f2 i) `* A4 H+ S3 d7 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
" G" o  n9 X/ y% ]* qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ U4 M+ O  F$ i: }5 e+ v: QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 Y+ h9 c. `- b8 S5 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- D; Y: i1 ]4 x9 F) {' l; iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) A# M3 Z, W6 ^! UYou needn’t fear anything
$ Y# B* z0 o* p1 H4 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; R, p, B% P' QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  h- I6 ]0 J7 R) t7 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# ~  q. m& D3 c, {/ K% ]2 H2 m: eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& t$ x+ e! b1 `1 Q( ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 T- T: s3 }( G. P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( j# B' S* S7 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ W. T* K2 _/ H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ L0 W' R3 @0 B8 O" J! b  h# Z; J8 |! s1 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 m, P2 n1 c, @, S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: E6 i$ ]% Z4 E: V" q. w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# E  q" b% \3 f& D+ U+ ?6 r" `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 L# i  h8 j4 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( S9 _  C7 n; U2 X9 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 c' N3 g$ W8 U* B1 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: y" `* Y) F+ r8 Y) ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 o# A" Y7 b8 N7 w4 D1 X4 g& F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. Q1 A8 p% Z7 V: `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! Q* y( U7 L/ d. Y! i' Z0 J, x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 H+ d4 k3 d4 n  r5 G4 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ F. D8 @: e0 V! X, K- x- u/ v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ Z9 c! D3 B- k& w9 Q, C7 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ B; }8 u6 G3 Q2 k6 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ k6 h0 K' z) j7 @# Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* L( s9 a( i% q9 G; ?' o9 z! A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, H7 E- n* y4 _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 M) y' ?, `* Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! K' Z  T$ d8 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! o" \  ]4 [0 G& L7 i' H& t' q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 w/ c" Y8 v* d$ X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 i; b5 L" \' z8 V$ h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 G  A7 t' M- U3 W4 d1 f6 c- W- j! f我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ W$ H9 S# ?9 _; Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>