【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 j; A3 k. L% R" N0 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; H- V2 r# `( l3 ^5 F6 M5 h6 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ M! b) n0 Q1 ]4 |2 }Seeing the sky content with its love
& j5 M) p' o7 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. a9 B( f4 z  C% n& HYou needn’t fear anything
; p# ]8 m- [" AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! a. S) [  {- ], R* XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 q7 w5 Z" g! \$ x) \I love you I love you with all my heart
% E" D3 C, I. x6 ~9 }* CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- Z: n$ {7 L' HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& q% p1 Y. K1 M$ AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 P4 O+ m  B' Y# v5 _( Z9 ]0 kI regret not dying
' s9 m( O4 x9 `% n- s! i8 H# qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ `3 u& f" Q* D% k4 s3 K! RWith such a tongue as yours,
* K! D" N2 {3 ^# b' c: t* CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 G4 t- w; W' F& J6 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& {$ F( T) b! [; l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 l+ c9 y9 n: W7 r) q$ L5 Y* n" \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# a# U6 d% N8 L2 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, T4 z% d( d  s3 |4 {. D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; N0 K( t$ x/ ^5 }, r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 }9 i3 }# V: a% Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* \7 o3 e7 ^- b8 o2 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% ?1 [; r  E9 I4 u( {. ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 h1 O; j% _/ D9 Z' l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ [" e3 f9 _& ?5 O& s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, I1 U4 Y2 S$ Z. O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 }( l% S: i( X* `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, ~2 q0 y$ H" j: v  a5 d# ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* d( \" \) p4 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" U$ g! q9 d7 u$ C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" U* [+ T" C$ ~( `2 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. l' g0 [  G! n9 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! _1 y" z6 `5 M' b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 G/ M0 Q& n, \( [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 H" Z" @4 |/ o% L/ i: `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- ?# I  S8 V; g$ t" R* a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  r) D' b7 f( h0 {( U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 `) ?2 _5 X5 i. D; c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>