【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 M# N/ ]# w" m! K% N歌词我附在后面。
  w' Z: [* Q, ?  }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 L3 }- y# U# P/ Z$ e- XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ p" O- a& e4 ^8 e% \# O# \: EThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ A2 _/ g3 E4 |: N' VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 U5 r. H# }' Z0 T0 Q- }4 r7 aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 e. v, F9 S+ Z/ |6 p# T* y2 x# UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 H) F+ c* {5 v) z$ ]+ rNothing can compare to my love
: s2 f0 [6 K$ lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 }( I3 H9 y: m" G# I" g; s/ Y+ m& J  EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( G+ z5 t  @, H* S5 C  {& K) II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# h$ K' j2 x( |- u: ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. M* G/ S! Y* w8 ?  p( A2 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ `$ S& z  b+ s! K$ mWith such a tongue as yours,
/ ?( Q( D8 A$ V, @( L! q/ ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* b) S' g# i& V8 k0 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* \3 ]2 _, l% I7 H& j! A8 q3 }0 j3 ^! DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- U- ], l/ ~' p# C' r  b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. }8 C. P  s  L4 |% R7 \4 G/ o; v/ v# g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 t! X" l2 Q7 x% Q* |1 a/ S6 h+ `' A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 e9 G' f7 O8 ]) {4 {) I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" I- f8 \3 l) C1 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ V, r1 v  t. Y! e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 S1 J9 r$ r5 }# l; y% g& U# z) {# \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) I* g1 {9 g1 M5 J6 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 X; y& r9 I" f( T. R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 ?& p* c5 Z( k- Z  P6 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' K4 c5 o4 u! h# S/ _$ T7 b% I$ Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 P  \+ r- L/ ~' g  F3 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* A( d9 f" }/ ~' u5 [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 z( M8 S# w. D8 h$ y5 W0 h1 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- G, H$ z1 Z6 M6 s; t0 s' Y1 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, g% Y% K( p% w0 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 ]( C9 H; E: S0 M; W* O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# b; ?; [2 {& I; L. d! y# c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 M6 @3 X( V! M: Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 [' U( |+ w+ o8 f1 I1 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ C# Y8 U. B5 y/ }: S5 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ j# B5 n% h5 ?. A. [# e9 I$ w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 `( N9 l4 e" d8 I9 s* R4 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 a7 x, R! Y, Y4 s$ ]. j( I. M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* X4 C( H5 x6 a+ q, o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>