【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 D+ \- o! |6 d: f6 [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 G$ f3 w9 X! p. uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& s3 P; D' U0 k, mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 e: e  o$ v. _7 ~, o) E% wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# p3 }5 ^3 R& u2 OWith the moon kissing it every night
, O4 G$ L2 \- r! g; J; JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 Q2 j1 S( B* {1 a+ [You needn’t fear anything
7 i6 D/ w9 z& G  p9 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 I: A0 Z8 o' Y8 ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 Z9 b: V4 @, j: rI want so much to see inside your heart
9 {5 F" C+ [! R1 U1 Q7 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" T" N4 _, L7 K; t; ], ~I’m still filled with fear
. X$ d" C. W$ IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. _# r/ \. }- R6 H8 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( B* E2 J8 I+ r( D5 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& y1 C4 s  J6 N" Q7 B  o  I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ B" {9 r+ b9 q8 C- E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 z3 d& T) O" }9 B4 `, @; C8 Z" x' i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, y! G8 A$ h# v8 G  D$ I' t! L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( k% j& [2 p. ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 W  K! \4 U4 c- `0 n; @& m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; |1 a5 P2 S$ A" ?: E7 m; W- o+ l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( V: ?' e! Q  M5 |& P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ ]" m  E$ G% t<P>你无需担心</P>
1 F) J" X& f: D  ~4 i9 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 L$ V3 Y% {4 }& Z, w3 Y8 j3 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( ]: _& R( l' s+ Y5 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& U5 b5 S' M& E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 _" x/ c$ X# n8 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( v" p3 e$ E; S1 f$ a& k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( |- E" r7 W6 m# B7 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* W; n5 W, q# ]  N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 z+ `. A( t& ?2 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; `2 g, U& i  k" X# n, ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  r2 x" d6 Y" r) |- f$ b4 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& ~+ C0 m5 Z  A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 n0 V9 D( v" u* n* J" ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; L5 Z' ]5 f; C- ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 Y7 I" V, T& \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 r. J; k! N% f. i3 O6 c& U$ D/ }0 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ t( g' t! Q) M, B7 t0 o7 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 b9 t! L) u% N! f3 B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ K9 Y) F5 q8 j5 R6 T. M2 @) ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
& A0 U! ^  P& |7 y  A) B, ^$ M/ X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( F! h7 n. g6 v4 z: Y8 a. ^7 F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 g9 q1 b# C, Z  j) ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 u3 v6 e5 t5 `3 \( q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, H& t+ K2 N% T4 @3 ^% K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 ^* q+ w3 r; K) K7 `( P0 K# J! V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" y  r8 t; F6 m; D; i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 b# ~; s/ y5 X' y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>