【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ p- X: e/ M$ ^% F& U; V2 T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 e* }5 O( H8 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: y% V# V8 x: \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ u  R1 d* w1 QYou needn’t fear anything
# s+ [0 M- L2 `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 W. V" J1 Z8 m/ v7 K. qEvery other word you utter is love
4 P& N3 U% i- d0 }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- ], i6 b) m: H2 U, n/ z, Y* nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- k3 O$ g6 o0 n0 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 l1 R( F+ A2 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 T* q. L) X& ^) b: m- O; t8 ~' BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" M2 X- p0 M4 r& k" YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ V6 N2 f1 X$ rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 S& m' [8 b, x3 x  f4 B3 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: ]2 j$ b5 ?9 t6 \+ J( v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% ^& X- o  U- \/ o6 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 D& K) W9 m1 d" _% t* Q# Y9 G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 V$ q# Y1 M2 T! {, k' |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* H4 R' y3 t9 K8 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 Y; k6 q) \$ s, y( H' W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) E/ k/ U; D2 `4 A# i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 p; K- a- P2 a+ C5 J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 s6 H. H; n0 {3 g& \- u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ ~4 y/ s6 C) @; a' Y: @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 S$ s- J- J. v' ?5 K( O/ d/ [0 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ w, L5 _" t& {& I2 S  M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& W2 e5 H  r  O! a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* E: c4 x) R- T2 j# h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 m0 a' S: H: s; ]  }: j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' F' e4 L$ _9 l+ h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 g. i5 S; L* @& s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# I" {+ G! F3 _$ t9 I1 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 r; l& E4 v; C8 G; i. S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ S- |/ `; o0 k" B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 v1 ?5 l. e5 D0 f  q' K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# ?. A* c: @7 U+ }% ]2 I; z+ ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. ?/ `" m! z. G8 \4 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) Q+ h' r$ e3 d/ C  t" S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- M' c: Y. C; R2 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! v5 n* w; N- w! u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 F7 B* p! p$ t: M0 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* J/ p6 V, N) W0 b* h* U- U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' w( F/ Z" R# f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& p; I' {; D9 y" j! n; V7 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# V: w: J4 e1 H. G: G+ b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

4 B" V1 C! U1 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>