【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" Y8 E( P0 H% w7 U# Z# \' T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* x2 q% k1 Q6 ^0 }7 d- T" {Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ v* v6 ?: D4 u4 j) E$ @" ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- x9 X8 m& {2 v* yThe sky is happy down to its soul
( |% w9 o( M' f8 o+ N* JWith the moon kissing it every night
/ W. V( w, q6 Z, ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 Y7 g: R- }3 DEvery other word you utter is love
3 ^9 b% \7 V+ z4 g& u! K2 t, gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! e3 k9 }2 B# v+ Q9 o- xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 }2 ]8 _7 M0 }& l  [' G' T0 m0 z0 o! z# _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 F9 k# {4 U) CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( {3 Q1 s6 b) fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 z/ Q: w) S" f' b+ T" k( MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ X$ s& h" N' [0 b& L3 m5 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: P) G0 n+ r8 r' d6 b  U0 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 {  k" c* h1 a7 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: V. `+ c2 o: P& O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( {2 i, V" y3 ]$ \5 Y+ g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- G1 Z# y  ?: y% V& f- o/ x& y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 ?, e, t8 R; D8 t+ p6 b! Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 y, t4 f6 J& h1 X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 ?; v$ A; i" {' w3 s& l0 s! O, T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( [5 F8 e' |9 D+ h' u  w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 X  _% L" v$ p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. I) S  O' v( \. i, y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. m4 Q8 M8 B5 a' u5 t% z* u0 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ ]  v+ {0 |" e* ^# F9 X1 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" G% f0 x% f+ ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 |% Q* Y; W( A" u5 x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& l! W5 w/ F6 f3 ~" E2 _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" |* s# P# X3 V  h% `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# M, o9 y/ k6 U6 K% C; P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 b+ w9 X0 L: }- w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, u. @# ^& q/ g% T( X) M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" t+ B' h9 j! c% T9 P9 u# F, }; f1 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 W/ a, C& Q8 f$ M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>