【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; d/ x4 U6 k& |% U/ BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 J9 ^& a" o/ \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; Z8 x+ U$ u% S6 M2 w" ^( b# M, F" u. ^7 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' K3 w1 ]. l7 |: WWith the moon kissing it every night
$ {, ]6 b& b# f, E: o, E2 I; CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 y; u0 S% q! {" W: [8 \4 yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 ~$ W+ N# n+ ]$ C. aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: W6 P. ?6 v% U% SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: t  `0 J) w4 d0 aI’m still filled with fear
7 m" i  U" B. LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! M% s  N3 n2 y! @2 p/ b: x! pWith such a tongue as yours,
% I/ h( w1 t! o# c. ]3 r1 R/ fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  l8 N9 Y7 ~) o" y8 Z# eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) c% H) H- \4 e, m; zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 j- B% q7 y$ y# F, c/ [' a+ }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 W; _& U- p4 q0 T7 D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, s0 ~* m! d3 c8 |: s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 g: J% i1 X5 L" A* t7 J' Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 F5 P! }, |0 y+ `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' R& J7 h. j+ s+ C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 m& L. T1 n7 D- K) v. Y& j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ~/ j1 @& g8 O8 m( a7 h  i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 ]9 P2 k% V5 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 E. u, _7 ?: f4 P7 q+ L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 ]1 {# E) P8 A6 g8 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 n# R1 X( M: a$ E: l5 \$ X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- c  \) i0 d( V4 ]/ @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% m' [. [  j/ ?7 Y% l) q4 o/ J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 E0 n& |% ^! N& _3 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, M4 A( V4 I7 |: V: i3 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# I1 U" t4 k/ K" A" s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 e* f; M7 s: e# p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 P9 z5 D: G) k2 f0 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- A9 l6 S7 x* f2 x$ F5 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 f- [% H6 L+ B) p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) p0 L0 ?1 E$ s/ p5 g4 S, b: M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ @( O' @, n% x$ _: c+ t* g2 A0 z+ p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* L9 o5 Z" }$ w, Y/ D9 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 ]3 c" K/ e/ j2 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 x* J! z( E. q8 m, z  F2 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  o0 ~/ ]8 [8 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 _! F; ^- U; ^3 m' _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' E: p0 v8 f! h1 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( f8 \8 s& R3 R: b8 Y5 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: E4 |# d8 x7 a  z6 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 u  r& O: G3 K) y% I' ?  r6 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>