【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 J! m( W% m8 _( B8 O' [! {The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 m$ I0 C: P9 r3 V, B) u6 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* ?3 D! ]; b& gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ m* W. _. q" |5 z% m0 k% aThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 x! R5 b  ?9 i. h( }With the moon kissing it every night
7 D$ m% N0 L( s4 M0 ]7 w2 i9 k) fSeeing the sky content with its love
3 Q; y5 Q0 o$ H) A9 `" I& \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# `7 `; n, Q, k% j$ k. AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 p. X2 E; D# Y  J, M/ cEvery other word you utter is love
) j# f( U8 Q8 {9 j* r' \, }- ^I really want to know just how much you love me
$ M8 `3 i9 E/ ^/ S$ D8 xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 N" E6 a" }1 E( J- V+ \4 K( P5 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 H; Z6 Q) A) ]4 G9 P9 p* Q' bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ i* G( S3 t& O1 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" Y% w: }" l7 @# Z; b& A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' H; ~% Z9 r: R/ k, o; _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ ^" b' f/ U( d  J. l- u+ l- S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 a# X  u3 ^) P5 A% J8 x2 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 O3 R3 U0 |. A5 d6 u; O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; E, J) E9 D: p" ~, ^8 N3 G" C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, \* m3 h$ w& i% A1 f# ?0 N, V# T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- C& C- B- O1 m' Z; I7 B8 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ \$ r- U% X( `  B" i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 l3 G' F7 l: Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& ~$ M7 X: Q3 N; G6 t: p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 a, x4 E6 i/ A* `( i* Y( \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 o+ G  Z, o# J  q( O3 B  f+ G+ U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( Y9 @" D3 h  Q5 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" x1 S% j7 ?' h9 ]+ e& z2 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" D- `5 }# ~8 Z( r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# K% j6 `& x5 L. s' j2 p' H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 d. M; M5 T# e$ Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" ?( F0 I$ V# K, F& v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# H* Q; R5 p( I. k! u. S, I& F' B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; l7 _$ B9 t' r! }( k# ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  u6 f1 L; T2 A2 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 L% _/ ?1 l6 E8 `3 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: |; g4 {3 n( d) l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 {; f4 T, }" q. k' ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# z+ C* [+ O' ]% ]- w我请你剖开它

5 z5 Y8 E1 y8 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; H. m7 i; X* A- x5 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>