【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, b: X- |% _" {2 S2 s5 U$ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( ~0 s  ?( H* r, m! uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 T1 Q7 p+ ~) r) AThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 b, o# e" A/ m) D/ i3 W3 XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 T3 `. ?$ p2 l) yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 p$ S" L1 [4 l) c8 c" Y) CEvery other word you utter is love
5 q" Z# O' b" K( p) W4 xI really want to know just how much you love me
. e% [( a( O  \% \6 }$ v/ Z& XI love you I love you with all my heart
7 V8 B* Q: y9 N; _9 x- }( J* ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 F, Z/ W7 o6 f0 K" rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# g5 |* H4 ?) h# [I want so much to see inside your heart
7 C* U' E1 q, H/ `9 W4 i5 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 q4 h1 l; P- {  |8 M$ I1 v" {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ C& I6 A+ c: Q- X/ jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* ?, Y4 X! N& y* }+ V+ U1 l; QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 J/ S+ E# S( ^4 d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 ]: j& ^6 s, \* n" k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 z, y+ Z9 |% V1 U- j* d8 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) J; u2 d* i0 I& U! q. r6 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ^" X7 D3 u* [2 H: @  |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 `# J( D% q( `7 E8 ^8 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% F3 `2 p; D/ S* G2 }3 d; P0 E0 @% i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  }) `6 \8 ?  z& m( U: N3 i. P; m) m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& A$ G$ `$ {1 _" b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 F7 W* i6 B% ?6 @, I1 g/ j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 p9 u. r/ q9 Y( ^* `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 x9 M# @0 F( g, ^" f. z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" Y7 }; E8 [+ p: G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# w* [+ d- S; q! ?4 F7 Z: p4 j9 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. z% J. r+ u) t) H1 G' e8 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 e! s5 B' U: g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! K  M! x% ^  b& a2 G( b. T: s/ u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 u( f& B+ l2 l9 x- n  s* V5 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 E3 k0 T$ I7 y$ R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 L3 t/ D, f! \0 o2 W5 B, }+ p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% \1 H. l' N- H) ^& K. j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' `7 V( ~" A/ w  g, e) O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 R+ i4 t( o! m& o9 h5 x3 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* t0 P( K: P8 B1 f& ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 J- h0 ~- h  K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" p3 O# b1 n1 T7 o0 T# q" Q: p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! V! h7 q- F5 k& M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ n# F3 ^/ b& C1 p; N; m, w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! o2 o5 I4 t% e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' c2 c9 R/ @$ u' g* \, T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>