【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 i4 D" j& R' \4 @  }8 w9 s3 i歌词我附在后面。
. g) n6 X9 H+ V0 o( ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
! f( [6 n+ e1 o: ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" H& [# f1 ?6 l2 Q4 Z! w) e+ aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 L3 s" M* g, c  W% aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' M& e+ x$ _. R0 y) bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ }0 M& Z" h2 Q) A$ k3 S3 mEvery other word you utter is love
( k5 c% A, s1 N, w& C. z5 K' oI really want to know just how much you love me
5 r1 x/ D6 F8 D- S8 i6 F, T. GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ t2 Q0 A( a# F5 q: tI’m still filled with fear
' q4 r- Q4 f# `+ ^2 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 g; r  P& _) r; }- c3 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" J% d4 Z) h7 |' NWith such a tongue as yours,
  j4 G) f. f1 o3 E  K9 N. cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: m9 o0 P6 u& rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  [& b1 c9 H1 C# ?+ _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 Y4 n7 Y8 K( M% u5 Q$ a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) u8 P" v9 y, U) ~" x$ h! H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# v  R% ?+ I: E$ `$ {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! H& L' M, w% i" K/ B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' a" d/ d& r9 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 h  o. \& @: c( H! {! Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; r( d7 k% r; `9 g, N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: b7 b# V0 w0 k; {- x, }8 z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 |0 F# v4 _5 D: a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; t) g! N8 V! W* F: G6 C' M4 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- z# }7 M; m6 q+ W( W3 R7 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  m& n3 j1 u1 L/ S7 u0 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 P; Q9 I+ g2 \" q& K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! {1 R) Q; P: A" d) r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' a+ c# k! Z/ i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# p0 q4 d' _$ ~& B; p2 v8 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) L( X5 F# G+ |+ Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ Z! m# j+ c$ q& Q2 u+ k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. W  J4 R2 a, s0 x: }9 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 K8 w  J' e$ h5 B& x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' n% m7 h, K& f% g/ k9 b# ]) P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, j; i; Z5 a) w$ t4 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ U9 q1 _' U$ x/ x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>