【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 u7 j; y8 p' a9 G+ Y$ |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 Q4 f+ P, s$ N( @* M% |4 u! N4 R, TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 P$ }7 B+ H, J( @6 j/ yThe sky is happy down to its soul
; P1 V$ q" d% v" C6 i# i& Z8 X* `* T3 dWith the moon kissing it every night
5 ^# F2 z2 F* q/ L" D$ sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. P* J# {3 b/ [7 J4 ?+ ~8 mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# P) E3 C7 i1 I' ]I really want to know just how much you love me
! {/ f9 D5 K$ i* L+ y/ v+ gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 q& z2 U( |+ h( mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& L) i6 Z9 I1 G7 T9 pI’m still filled with fear
. h  w* p* |: _6 C# F% dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% m# Y0 T7 f+ o9 u* M. |3 OI regret not dying
9 Q3 ]8 {. U% t2 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% V8 B7 D% \2 l- ~# G+ W! gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 j, J2 z2 w& Z- L- L2 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 u/ D  v6 Y. r5 E7 T7 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" Z" F2 r9 T# F8 B% L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! i$ W4 a& D! A" z2 `0 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- A1 \- ]1 v7 y: j$ l: `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 u7 a2 t  R$ ]* ]1 ?- o/ ~" e5 U2 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 ^7 F* G2 `9 I: y2 |5 A* l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ f0 w. T( B& g  Z/ f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% {& _% H& T2 {9 v, }8 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( j- {; C7 r, X" v* s( v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& _& d0 v2 ]4 f$ ]; U+ P* a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 J  e( ^# H3 [$ x% l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ a; ^2 d' d2 X" O. b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 z2 M8 Z$ C; ^' B0 ~. q3 f$ C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. d# V/ g. {, }2 v6 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( W2 z8 d9 N: P5 ?9 g. n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# C) x( A& S& R) F0 B, x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ Q0 H+ T  C0 J) j0 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 j; b( @. s3 t; i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: N4 t1 o  f. K# q6 U  S& r/ H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 w* L: g* u, l1 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 D( q. A/ C: g9 Z) h9 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 v! W7 B4 @3 \; d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% i. I! D  @# `, c! ?% X6 q  M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# O9 T9 x- ]( T3 j: I3 g% g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' ?% o" M( n( d5 r! b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ J, L- \# ^, F2 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ z2 X6 _4 n2 V/ o/ I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ E" z) S3 T2 L9 x* U9 O/ ^$ Q/ X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 O2 s! E# |- i; S! Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& p2 \7 W# j8 q6 y! a( z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ J# O# M5 T' o9 a8 D- g+ j+ E( Y: {8 F我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 H/ n2 y8 Y  d9 L( T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>