【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, m* J4 Z$ s2 X; m) d! TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. m/ A' C# p1 `% z  i; rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 V, [# @. z3 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
, j$ i' t# `+ @  K. X6 kWith the moon kissing it every night
6 x0 e: G2 u* \Seeing the sky content with its love
5 m9 I& o4 c' A! `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' y, \4 b3 \; xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 P! M9 P. a9 j5 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; O: i  A* M: O  h* i+ z  uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( W1 C# L6 ~! ^) C: j/ p8 a* s4 U$ ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% G/ n  o, P& Q' o6 \. N: u$ Q# vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. F+ O) e( Q% [0 W9 ~/ zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 o: \/ V* x+ F8 b) t" E# jI regret not dying
0 K2 D  U2 `4 F; F8 C" SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- x+ O9 m6 g0 {" vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 W  X- {& j! R; J+ g+ e' X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ E& z/ ?  U9 J. o" }. |# Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( D. e- p4 x  M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- i5 N) q0 ^# u8 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" X/ M8 z$ \9 {$ i3 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& m  H: l5 Z" u% I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# _! L* d* L3 c9 R7 m: h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% c, U4 Z; {/ L6 Z+ s; ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  R4 @% p. _, T' \" U3 O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* ]$ t0 u8 ^% H- F8 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) Z, Q8 i  I) _: O' G6 i$ n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  T4 g, L) I% b( Y/ `8 O+ W6 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; `! ]: E( i( i4 p( P* o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- I5 Q* Y0 Q+ `. b& o7 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 U2 `: ]: |0 \& u6 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; C) `0 v3 {- m( x6 ^% p# z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' X, ~' |/ M+ |9 j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: x0 T; U( o# f* q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" [/ g! I8 w' e+ O3 R0 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- z8 Q4 E* z! o5 k( {& ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 z2 c) ?' z& K6 @& D/ o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  R3 H# q9 S3 t2 {, L# w5 N" v* u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 y. o- {2 Y$ u9 @& v) h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: ]# q/ G8 Q& V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 Y$ f  E; [$ i: p+ \" u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ a. b0 J, B2 \" o6 `$ m$ R2 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ m+ ^7 n4 H( F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>