【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! D: y, X) H( Y/ }歌词我附在后面。
# E- B* F6 @* xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 J) r4 n- h8 h/ `& A( r& |! y! ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
) Z+ N+ f0 Z9 p# xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 U% P9 f- N' X- m, [* fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. z& E  [) w/ }  ]# M: }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 q4 L0 `2 `( j' s  f; LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( G8 u3 z" O. g6 e9 {0 \' c# [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; [" Y0 [. R' c$ KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! E9 _/ T3 |. hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  t2 [4 V& \% J- P2 G+ b2 VI want so much to see inside your heart
) @6 H' j8 M) h1 F% ~$ G) z" zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- q( T  ]% c) Y& n" d: ?* b: @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# S2 o3 ~1 f' {/ I! S4 B4 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 n/ p2 l( `% f9 yWith such a tongue as yours,
1 o% S7 t5 e, `3 w5 j$ WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& w& q1 g, x/ U' T4 }% S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 Y% g! ?9 f7 Y' W; S% o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) c# w. l% Q! l+ B. a5 U. ^0 i& g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) k( c5 s' o6 d  n% j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 Y: g% f& o* T8 i8 t9 S" \7 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: R/ Z" W. O: j( v; ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- |1 M! n" \, I+ W' N. z0 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  u0 k- r" \8 u  Q+ A; M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! Z. f" f4 `8 G* Q; z# \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' j7 q4 J1 H/ l& Q6 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 ~/ a! F3 t! F+ R& Q9 {2 M( g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ {  ~; m9 q7 F. l& I8 Z8 a1 P4 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% p1 j5 b4 n& u3 A" u+ E+ j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! E2 H( z- d. [: a* }( l) e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ `2 {; h% V; J+ F0 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ y4 G3 s+ c; N2 ?$ O6 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 g7 m0 P6 W, v' H% Z# U- q+ Q. s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( @0 j) n( @5 O3 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' U3 h: P/ D0 o! `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* R0 O+ z* x6 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) k# u1 O& S( v& J  ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  P; G& ^( }0 {/ M, h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 [0 N* ^1 P  R! O, g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 R; ?3 _. E, y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 o2 ]  T: v( ]" m+ Q1 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& a, o2 V8 o2 Y, o, o! W. S5 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! }0 f, `$ j# D6 E) `2 r% m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
* @) J. `' W  E) d  p0 P2 s
我请你剖开它
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- P4 f6 |6 Z* t- B1 D( T. g- F2 o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, T, w5 b7 K) P; R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>