【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ r- ^4 M, Z  @" }/ b+ N( Q- bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! o* P! [1 O( HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, s! C% f9 w/ g; c7 ?: a' R) aThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 W) L6 P2 @4 C2 k% UWith the moon kissing it every night
# _  Y2 Z) z& R) zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 z* z) h" D( W- }( t2 E) bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* i6 b$ i- {# ~2 [7 _% oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 v. b; k! `( `1 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 o, h4 C8 f8 j! J3 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. w! |) M6 w+ c% Y  h- {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  N, p+ e- X' W, _. z3 PI regret not dying
7 J) t1 Y; W4 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 J, W2 o3 \+ W: a4 y, O- i4 e2 k7 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* F% h3 G6 k4 J7 U( r0 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. R. N  e" w9 q% [$ V5 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% I1 e" {! e6 R& h: z4 D5 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, s) [8 u. H6 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% z' r# R: Y" M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  R8 j: K0 d. P# Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 C4 K! `: m$ s) C$ d1 D, }& C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& _% i; x2 N# ?# q) k3 \/ }$ y2 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 Q; H0 _! N! ]/ z' ]* Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ {" P4 W2 n$ j2 _5 }% _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, ]  E1 \* @- X) I8 e8 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ z! L- N3 J* f8 e8 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ `( Y6 U1 o3 R+ l! M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ P( E2 H4 L4 {/ b8 q; k; c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* L& u+ E  ?( Q: K1 S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% t3 V& R4 X) Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 R3 ]" P. E9 n. s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' P6 D0 ~. b7 e( {5 j$ a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! k! q8 d" U5 ~4 `$ |% l" h9 \3 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- f: i' g, N/ q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: v$ ]6 W" L' N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" ]8 r7 ~! D5 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" C. h3 f5 c1 w* E7 I. Y5 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
1 r  D5 m/ e  w# c3 c/ U* t; H
我请你剖开它
. n7 M* D8 p6 t. `
7 u* v& D% E! Z: s' o6 c7 }: [+ ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>