【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- _" e* I2 y$ h1 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% x* t2 r+ w( t# V/ {0 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 `8 ]( z; V& ~% o' JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- n* O1 L7 p! T: P/ L' F3 ZYou needn’t fear anything
' W7 g* O; d9 Q2 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: ~3 q& _  j9 ?+ E7 _/ r( K  ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! l- F- u% O9 t: L% cNothing can compare to my love
2 j% j+ d/ W0 J' FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& n2 J1 U( j+ D5 j1 YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, X' |1 X0 C5 [6 l' a* O7 W; [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: U) ]* f8 y1 B3 o4 H; MWith such a tongue as yours,
; M$ B; t9 i4 X$ I+ D2 i2 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 s" F5 P% V- K0 I0 [4 O2 |  GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; l/ O. F. T2 Q; y6 r9 P8 v; l3 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, p& n" C8 h0 o% ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 H0 {9 y- _4 i. q, m. S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# E( X+ _, @9 ?. R# V9 D# A! I0 B% ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! Z% o# Q& W# q7 `- l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. F) f/ |, Z* M/ W$ \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ u$ U; q8 p9 d; j: b$ `  g0 M1 c! F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 B( f6 L: L: c" G7 `0 a5 d8 O3 j( u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 U3 d4 }- _+ j/ g- u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 c# m8 v6 |: K0 x, B: D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% i% e1 B2 k# Q! Y; Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 d) ^, h7 k; b6 \  d: L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 n% p8 ~/ q2 `% ]1 M4 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; ~- a* H: ^- R4 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% K' E2 h* `1 J3 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) c/ q6 k: O/ P% ^2 f9 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 ?6 O* }7 N' o+ q; s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: ]. |3 d$ Q4 `) T0 d. ^) L! \1 T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) L( J$ @8 A4 o' ~$ H) f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" o  \$ n% h2 [: z* D. p* v) C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% A0 `3 \/ m, C8 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 N! h  t8 w7 G0 v: ?; ]& k7 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 K) h+ p: ~/ d- A+ A6 B2 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: [: \1 a8 \) k! y. Q. V) h4 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% h3 ~5 g/ |* S" t% u6 \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
, K% b' t6 B: u5 J
, u8 ]* h6 C* p! i. N我请你剖开它
3 f2 l7 s+ k/ J1 a& E
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>