【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* i5 k5 P5 O& h+ \% A/ @The moonlight is shining brightly,
% ^4 F, A$ E6 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
' q2 h1 i$ K$ Y; jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 }9 o0 Q  R9 ^+ G( M& ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 i3 p" t% C) v: I) w8 `The sky is happy down to its soul
, @- i, z# y( _  vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 @2 d# s- k9 p# n3 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& {+ D+ z6 S  a0 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. N, I3 X9 ^$ _5 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. Z5 X) o$ ?. Z9 q7 y0 }* EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. y# g6 V* o0 P$ v4 A9 AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  P. P# a0 v7 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 L9 `5 q9 [( a: SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ v. U& I$ `8 R7 \' I1 x% YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 P* u) B: ~7 I9 M3 f5 e" c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 |$ }( \; {8 P" G: n- v+ `( z2 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, K5 m( b. L3 |" G7 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ h8 |# w, y. P# h$ a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' n# z& O; {9 H$ r, `" X: V8 p6 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" K% A8 r& y- f. B# n9 }$ W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 V8 r9 d* {- D  N) k/ w, u) k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& h: ^1 U; J( W6 b( K  i; |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: {: V, Y9 n8 ]8 u4 A8 G; S+ L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 `/ U/ t. z; w; Y" x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* z  C. S* Q9 }( U9 a: e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) Z2 _7 h( b: S$ ?: a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 ^0 J7 w6 D$ S( g8 j" F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: M1 _% v6 l! r; _2 G' d% @: A' F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) C3 B, V6 `0 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ D7 s) p! I. T( r+ u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ C7 Y7 i% O, Q' I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- {( {4 u$ r2 P% I: l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% U1 n( I+ ?5 L2 W6 ~8 K! h  [7 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 t: l6 S: n5 {- I6 k, ~5 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 u) X; r5 H6 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& A' e8 S6 y! a5 w  W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ t: C: n: m, z6 v; q  B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ X  [; X3 W0 y+ [: V0 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 o( L( ~- ~9 i8 p: G7 {) P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; t. }3 q9 z, |" A" `2 K8 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& t8 R9 P% e  u$ f% p3 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 M5 @: V1 u2 o+ X# ]8 Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>