【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: Y! k+ w+ d; t! W% M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. T0 |; h# \" Q; W  JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 c# v' B+ H% W+ I" w* GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! U$ ^  E; K+ h. tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  ^) P. j  r; u3 u% }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- d0 E& n$ J/ F+ m" KI want so much to see inside your heart
& {! }' ], O' T7 W  @8 {" X3 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 {6 h$ z/ T1 oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' K; Q/ _! p  _( _( K$ jWith such a tongue as yours,
4 d& `2 V5 S* d+ N6 C" g9 v* pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 Y; z6 K& p: h5 D* fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 o* Z/ P" e0 N1 c' D% s# u1 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, i5 f: m3 h2 }) @9 t8 U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( H9 o7 C! m8 ?; Q! g9 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 ?- D* w( g$ c2 b$ n' Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- F/ y4 p' @+ L5 c! F4 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) h) `% [+ ?0 O9 b- W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 T. q8 r6 \7 }0 M  f! t! |  ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& t2 c( Y5 @% I  w: q) ]. v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 L- a; k( s9 W5 Y% Y! x% X$ Z5 ~# l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& S; R* C, m% w2 i0 f<P>你无需担心</P>
  f7 D" g% y5 x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# T' T0 p: \+ i! b5 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  I# m  a+ F- F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 h; s1 ~2 U' E3 q! ~. a+ _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. K# r2 \! G& u/ V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 [. D1 o% W8 s; z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 l3 P- ~7 Y- c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: N  _9 i9 K. f! ~. Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 p* A9 g! U! U& p/ m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# @! R. A; {+ M- D( ]6 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. U9 G; D3 n7 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 t  p. w# e  o( s# m  n  A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 `: j9 y1 e& q  [- k4 K/ s5 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, q0 i2 m0 g( z; \& M; e  r8 U+ ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 l% K, i& O' o# Q( n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ]; W2 Z  X4 K% h1 E" }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* l+ i3 I. b/ _4 ]' C) A. [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 Q0 @! t5 \! {8 |0 _2 ]1 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ B5 @0 n! [/ ]8 ^- ?# }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- U6 F& K6 ]8 M) w( x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) Y3 D- @+ n! I! G2 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 _7 h' Y* Y% x9 }% t- \" q我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>