【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# r" h9 h3 s  i; |/ g歌词我附在后面。
% O& U$ H2 ]; u& a0 K, K$ T4 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  _5 P3 J1 {0 z/ I7 C+ L7 \& w* |Making the sky glitter like gold,
; c1 T$ d. p6 ?  ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& J/ U7 N0 K9 F8 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( F' U2 N) X* z& n- a% iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; M9 O: _$ F$ Q- \% gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& j; N! n4 w# `  x5 N! XEvery other word you utter is love
5 U" Q& j- L+ gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ b3 H2 B) M/ j2 R7 L8 y3 T+ P, \" BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ E4 q; m$ R, _1 m4 {1 R( ]I want so much to see inside your heart
9 h% R  L$ E' b; g" ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 G; S, q0 v* g" f8 }& C1 R7 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- ?! s" E& y- g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& Q& L2 [# ^, O# [+ N' Z8 p, N  s1 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! O3 `( s' o" K* ^! C0 q7 p, ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) y* e: X* R( R1 F9 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" W' Z& \" k% T3 v5 @. N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 x( r) d. w$ y/ p: j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% y  e% }  ?) O# M, v; \1 Z/ }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: A0 [' N. M/ m3 E$ H& x: V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( Q2 E2 X; B( j7 a7 X8 e7 L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 H7 Q9 f: c; x% a- j, c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 s+ p0 h+ M2 O) P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 D3 ]  V4 h( T! S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ {( I3 w" Z5 D; C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. n# N- N/ L6 ^$ x; p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! }; _* s) B% E) A% r# u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 i% q; u$ k3 Z# i$ j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* L# \/ h5 Q+ y6 q# d# n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 I6 ]+ _/ H4 m" [6 o' W% O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ i5 ~# ^7 O$ A8 X! |. A" [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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+ U8 f4 a: ]) f2 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- K: [) c1 d2 L' K- J1 b  M# f1 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% w! `2 b( K, {! M1 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 q: j( _- S! |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' g3 p. |6 Y0 q  u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>