【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ l5 }+ k3 [+ y2 C- Z! U. Q2 f2 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! @0 x: E- ]' V+ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& [' n' u* H6 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 m! K: n# H! XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* p$ z1 W& h. @5 A/ |+ l' n: [3 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- R) p. x" q; c2 c! f* m( mYou needn’t fear anything
+ f9 z! ]* q. X; x, lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ ]0 B6 R$ r, w$ F$ v0 \+ kEvery other word you utter is love
: J. p, I2 {# R3 x& C% II really want to know just how much you love me
4 f9 D- T( `" w2 fI love you I love you with all my heart
* Z. b6 P- ?' S+ J- yNothing can compare to my love
& L1 V( M% F4 h- u* qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' t8 Y7 C. \$ dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  n! P8 K' M. pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- y) u7 \% ]  G7 }+ Y& K' c! ZI’m still filled with fear
( m- Y  ^  l: `6 ^6 h3 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. l: m% f# ]6 F; a# U9 ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ m+ t. F! z4 A6 R$ o6 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* a+ p7 b3 w$ PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ w# u2 M. I1 R$ b7 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ y# W- }2 A# O7 P/ A1 a. _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 Q3 }/ k5 p( a; J9 y+ w. n! y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) O  X% T1 `6 n3 K2 c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 _* @. V' b- g& k& r! @# \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, h4 j$ j  ?4 v  i9 b+ [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* d: s, c& y( ?0 W1 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ e3 |) Y* P9 N# b( o  [% I* x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% C4 V- c1 c# E& w+ ?<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Z! D" X( f" U. |9 T- P6 v( w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' M5 m9 [7 A$ \% f$ A. s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; |: ]! m& A2 C% q  @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 D8 {6 f/ n6 K. c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ]9 T; ^7 u3 G. V: j: j5 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: r4 _4 U  t  b" q0 ~. N6 {9 l! o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; k. r' t  Y/ E2 s; b1 x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 v) {) Q$ N9 W/ A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 b0 i" u4 R1 e" ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 [. a1 D8 q4 ]! Z" I" A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: ^+ O) q% l; b4 ]. w7 e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ Q& D# v( F2 j" f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ w4 _/ [( y7 U  {3 b$ j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 J, Z" g7 L, B4 U" y# T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 I7 u( p7 w+ M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ I9 j; S9 r" b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 P4 a% o8 S0 ?6 U' n* h' x7 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 f, t4 p$ C4 e" A0 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 X( |: }5 E9 |  C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 b9 n+ D/ }! F6 f2 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! K# i. O- d8 X我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" G/ A1 t8 w" \# o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>