【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% l/ y; E0 Q8 }" u# H/ C歌词我附在后面。
. T, R, n& W! Q' F+ ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& J9 I  r8 B& W5 M% O- F* FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ K  K. p# j/ P3 [9 x' ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- H6 Q6 T! M6 s+ p5 @! {9 SYou needn’t fear anything
, K; J. u( W$ b" P" o0 @1 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ W$ R8 O+ x; f  \3 r5 r$ k% WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: I: j4 S2 ]& ^- v7 z9 i; mNothing can compare to my love
( f6 z( \& E5 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) [) D) O, k2 |' g. E0 @4 O- MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 y! o' V0 |7 y7 o2 I. J- M: EI want so much to see inside your heart
9 A; d" `" R3 U. [& j7 V( Q' YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) m1 }8 D( V: S+ U; j7 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 o  u6 Y, m, L7 W# tWith such a tongue as yours,
# I% c, g$ D+ ?" EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" S) z1 e! e' R- eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ e. n# o9 ~- ]; A& h3 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 i2 V4 u& N( W2 S# N7 ^1 ]8 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* |& `8 Z4 A) W. }& c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ u  U2 f& p4 V. q, L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) V: `0 S0 \) c+ c: q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 M: O* ~/ W" a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 E1 b5 |# h5 h: J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 d7 p! n" M% ^' N8 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 ^, c6 J+ T; W3 I. h& c6 q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 D% J1 N0 `. Y+ |: l' L! l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% W2 c) k5 J+ o* l: J* P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 x" e! z9 z8 p  E( ~- ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" U: ?+ X* R8 g9 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) I4 ~) z9 m+ }6 k# T/ c$ A2 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 m2 _; W1 Z9 y' `9 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 v# s7 K+ c  e* R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* L3 F0 [4 {9 U9 d. m* Z% c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ ]/ u& ?) w% u( z( i2 S0 K, o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ X; [+ k+ x0 R% ?) o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* i4 j* q( x% D- T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 }& c9 a% A+ G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% j9 T. x% {" V" {; }9 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ `% a( J4 O; D4 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ f" R; q( g5 F- O$ D7 u: ^7 p5 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 K2 w7 J3 s* I  `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ a( R( w4 u' ^1 m9 _# T1 I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) b8 g  t& P7 j6 C3 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 ]' w; N0 d: p6 N$ y9 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 Q2 W( g$ G8 ?+ {- `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, \4 u# }/ A9 `2 B) q9 p9 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 o/ {/ a& W: X- Y7 U1 ^+ b4 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 F$ r% M/ }5 s7 P' c" C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) u1 w& Q! e" Y0 Y2 e+ o6 X) l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 p& n; l" |# W! |我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>