【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 I9 O' _" d/ F% m3 R" zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, S, Q" j8 `8 H4 F' RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( o) q3 g" k/ u' KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 i( E8 V- J9 O5 t$ n6 `$ ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ P0 K3 ]# ]+ ^Nothing can compare to my love
- T# w+ y9 l+ U! g- |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) |* X! m% L' P+ m# b+ {' QI want so much to see inside your heart
! o- P1 f# D. F# I2 U5 J) |: t% xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' s/ @  W3 Q# j! w$ ~. {9 e+ J6 \I’m still filled with fear
$ S" c" H: Q8 D. J$ V" TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 r3 R  e: _4 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 [) t1 u# P6 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 a5 S7 n3 K3 ]4 k" \0 A- k1 o+ R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ R, V( k! O0 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 |1 @# c; \( t2 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; n/ c7 |# A& @( v1 w6 d% A+ Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ `) a( |0 S  U6 @3 h" j& e% x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% \: l6 u6 Z8 H1 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  T0 X5 p' U5 J( i0 Q1 P. K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 @- [5 Z/ |6 X. {1 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: i, f, u' \3 n4 I1 w" \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% w7 {- q) }  [! R0 t5 y2 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- v) l/ N$ l4 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 y" ~2 U; a* |6 ?1 _. t) y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  l$ p7 X+ {$ p' `2 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ m7 A$ u! R: A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ P1 G* \' _, ?9 o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 {/ O- a! n3 {; J2 m) u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ {2 g  e% z; _% t! f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 N. a. q; b7 x5 u8 [0 v8 i0 s4 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ `; P7 y; |2 f/ w1 T1 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# X7 p' }. U6 c" v; j5 _5 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 u6 _- R! b3 h9 j% d& q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  {9 f$ d' q0 i0 _. K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- }; H/ n: K6 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( T3 S8 l/ I: w) L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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8 `  N9 d6 \' U, Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>