【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  I1 V  m- R* x  ~6 }& F歌词我附在后面。
3 x$ ^( u5 I# w/ n1 |# U6 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, _; c( i6 Z+ B/ n4 T$ NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 p( h0 ?$ P) |$ ^9 f7 p' ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  C% N; Z, A- v: u( P9 f" J3 F, D9 P# @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- N7 C, W: s1 [. L* p/ cThe sky is happy down to its soul
- N: t' c2 F; H8 W9 w, T7 FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& L; a* N* S" [' Y) B3 h/ Q: kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 l7 e. P5 k/ u3 w  WYou needn’t fear anything
1 o2 T, v# _1 u3 b- vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 J$ D/ `( o* K: c6 U$ LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% b) e" _3 o3 @/ e% Z2 k. `2 o3 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 W4 h2 _$ O0 n5 m* [( Q5 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 A# a* ^. H" c4 qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 q" d4 G) E: G/ a5 OI regret not dying
1 o5 e& t, T1 D2 x: `7 h3 Z! d2 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 _. I' n6 X% G* ]* IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: ]1 j5 Q" ]  A7 r. w: }6 [# m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 ?8 r6 P3 p9 Y( R0 e7 P0 ^3 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ W4 M$ {% D. `8 X$ l; j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& H2 d4 n; o/ v1 ]6 a9 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# x8 o: }1 G6 U5 i- j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 I2 U7 ]8 k2 p3 B3 g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- i: b/ M3 u: ]; [" C+ Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 V; M1 }3 ]5 f4 S* k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 b' r% r2 E0 ]* }+ q1 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 _& b5 T% l3 H5 a2 X3 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( X, ~) }) i8 d- z5 b/ C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 W; A& Y3 V5 d$ s) ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: k" ^: t9 \7 {0 d9 S9 _6 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 E* d* A8 X- @$ K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, e. |  j+ W+ F2 H# W% [5 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 X" H! o: X1 [, j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 P3 F3 w( M" A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ y: L6 M6 G1 k3 n" m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ a* H2 _2 h, j4 I& G8 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. b" f2 m- x) ^& B4 ]4 Z, U( d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  Y* [* {8 A# H7 A  X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ P" T/ @, n! t" c: ]3 i9 s3 g7 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) p  H( h! e2 [/ Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 s1 f2 h# \9 U& k我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% g" h9 m; E- o( r$ A5 @5 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>