【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" `" R  E, Q2 l( N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 s! {, X4 E2 z" S5 D5 n8 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, N( E3 ?1 k. U  _0 M7 p2 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; c3 E' f* ^; ~0 X  z: L; L6 a9 \1 [With the moon kissing it every night
0 W! ]6 \4 t4 ^7 ESeeing the sky content with its love
% {" e6 h- l! B2 v, y: OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* H: Q' k- G4 V# X* z; ]5 X7 }I really want to know just how much you love me
4 ^- ~9 q: e  e2 |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 @: q. m: Y" cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) A  \# \; L( W- uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, \7 B% q/ X, @9 }' QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' s7 b( F4 k# Q, ^3 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' L$ z. f. k, D8 c0 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 j- i7 D0 w2 ~: F# @2 C6 k7 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: b/ e$ N4 \! Q; E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; i$ g+ `6 T7 R5 V! `+ D0 z) V$ ~! D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& k9 N  _% N: i% A! f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 s& D+ _4 Z- n. v. q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( E+ Z- u9 ~/ o; [1 D5 k* D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ ]8 @6 H& K0 r2 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 w# N6 u5 T8 ?* x7 {9 o0 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
. N0 @  `5 E# b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ h8 z) l7 u) G: _$ g  d& ]( F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* o6 I" k. Y& V+ \( K& l2 U. C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ X: J  V  z) G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) X$ D0 W. ?- c5 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 b. l9 d6 \) I0 w  k' e% R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 V( Q3 L' ?* Q8 \$ C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 L& B5 M5 X' N- B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- c. a( ~" ?% t; v' u( H" J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; y4 Q2 f& _4 Z) k% R$ T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, s1 p* |- j4 b4 b& {* G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( F; r* T2 o) `' h- T( u9 N2 l% F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; F0 w# L+ T' }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 H3 }0 x! \! _0 m0 B  Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; Q9 o* `/ x/ S! \! U% j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ }9 o! g5 p+ q) h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 J. h5 U+ ?, v) z+ V. }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 D/ `- g5 Y* c. N% Q  a5 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 v) P8 }2 i/ x9 z2 b7 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& A, ?6 g6 i( `, m, @* e0 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 _: m8 j& j& Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>