【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 b5 U2 |- j7 O* P; B& Q+ V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 \/ ^- S9 o0 o6 m+ Y; A/ H  x! sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* b4 C- T* T  c$ }8 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( Y6 K& J, C+ H9 Y* V  tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" [( Y$ E3 n" b+ H) }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  e: o* L3 d& ^/ _+ OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ S9 G0 ~& @1 P* s( A: {  ]7 v+ Z  yEvery other word you utter is love
0 D2 t8 D: C% o/ d$ VI really want to know just how much you love me
# z' Y- Z: f' F/ O6 [8 gI love you I love you with all my heart
% @! @* R3 }( P$ K1 A: @7 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, C0 V. x: {6 L6 O' L, YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; m2 I+ j! ?' x! J( |7 k2 _/ V; OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% F+ B) p% R) D0 @* _I’m still filled with fear
, `0 w- ?- r$ R/ S% |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 ~, `1 b) R7 oI regret not dying
  h6 ]) W" G, ~8 H" _/ I( gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; @( t# r: }, ~; \% MWith such a tongue as yours,
5 F' {/ H+ \3 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ e8 Z/ o( G, E( S  u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& ]( M- {& i& z  j+ g7 f  ?7 n1 x6 Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; n. f( x2 I5 W8 h; [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 N& z$ Q! b4 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 N7 ~( @; w# w* ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% ?1 }( `8 T6 f$ j3 p5 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" [3 K5 m' h- Q) j" K8 G& e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 ?1 q, T/ i  P% Q# q% B4 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ C2 J( }% k! H0 E- @<P>你无需担心</P>
: S% M5 f4 u) U6 u5 R' c6 K5 R' F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 Q# v) q" N( p" O+ ^/ y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) j8 _7 b, l1 T( T, N$ q1 c7 ~! z2 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 w( J; Z, M1 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' r8 G! ^( e' x  k* T4 _; u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- J; _" [* B1 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) x' T; g0 W+ j* Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 d% J& K5 X! @" V" L5 H( F+ n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  n* u% ~, J8 L) C( M) J) c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 y" n+ C% }" o6 S0 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 t- \$ p2 t& r: z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  j. S0 j& z1 Y8 m- O. }( V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ U  {* v! _4 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ V  j, d1 N, N( k1 H+ a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ f9 @) S6 p6 V) Y  i- J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: I/ L1 G  }6 S% s, C( @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- v4 K2 k4 E# l/ ^! V: ^4 M, _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 y, p9 ~8 c1 @7 e3 p; c: ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 H! u7 I( d7 F6 H. |8 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ F, n$ B2 u$ \# |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>