【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# F/ F( |: U, n/ C. k- H, ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ {! |1 e; T+ t6 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" F6 O9 m+ |8 x; }6 g# n) j. xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ s7 j2 z3 g" ~- gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; W7 [0 e% M5 C: l* {0 }( IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. o( e. _5 N8 |Seeing the sky content with its love
! H$ Q3 w: c) ?5 X4 a" WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 h1 W* ?7 I' W) N3 \4 Y3 h( MYou needn’t fear anything
0 n" @7 D8 E% k& B  ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' C: Y6 I7 O5 ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 e- Y$ L$ T  l  q8 [I love you I love you with all my heart
! ?1 L1 O) D( S7 h3 t" j* JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 N& G5 d) W* n* @, G: l2 pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 l' O4 n9 Y4 a+ DI’m still filled with fear
9 h8 `% u7 b  d7 r6 f9 U) ^: V1 H" oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# C8 t) Q; R' M9 VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ w6 Q" H) q6 G5 P% Z  qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. Y0 h2 }' Z, x9 n2 T! MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! Q( X8 _) g! uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) {; d# O" e2 P% ]$ R& V6 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# m! ~) @1 C/ r8 k) s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' g% z& l' z) u% L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- Y) Q* w3 M( Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! k7 u. y# a5 [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( Y# Y. \% V! b6 t$ o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 O- L  o9 g( V' H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 J/ W  L! D2 ~% K+ p7 m1 F; O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; H2 N3 Z) E) Z# g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 w" H% D# q5 E" N$ p4 p: V1 |# a- ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! i- ]7 [( j6 ~! H# S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ |5 p* q  T) I( O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 d, K2 x, k. U  m+ i7 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 @$ P. p* C5 s! i5 N/ [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 ?4 G/ z1 O( `: `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 D3 n$ r- l* d  f: C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& t% N6 ?& {9 ^1 Q  s<P>I regret not dying</P>
# k$ a; H- C7 L/ f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" _/ _' L. x( ^; _( N: U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ U; G1 K" s' z4 z$ i2 h& v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' b! Z; U* z6 H% p8 E) H. U* a6 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 Q/ r: y' O% r. V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' R, R7 |. U% T1 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ P7 E# E& b0 O1 W3 u# d/ C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 i: W  E4 B) E8 t; H, q; @1 X我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>