【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 W0 w( o! G. IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 H. V- U7 u$ u: R6 R7 CWith the moon kissing it every night
  e" y6 ^0 F5 U* VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ p' W6 f+ Z- ]9 j' nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 |- @7 m3 S. ]  ]1 x4 @5 a0 z0 CI love you I love you with all my heart
$ t7 j: S4 z2 m$ ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% ]  T7 m" c& }& r' E' M7 X4 NI want so much to see inside your heart
9 N$ W' y' a8 `0 `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 }! ^: F! ?# k1 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! g7 Y2 q! ~" H: w6 H2 aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% I+ O3 p4 y  [, T* v" _With such a tongue as yours,
- q2 V( V8 ]1 @& o/ v! h+ eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. }% V$ ]. n4 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: S) F0 w+ T+ ?& s+ a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 D6 i$ j6 B% k' m, n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 D/ v; M/ l& D, k9 n. J5 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 x+ g" L. ^7 W5 F8 i- c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( u. ?" V6 c* s. o5 f4 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! ]) W' F+ x2 |& @! v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 _5 P" m8 L$ [  G# s: A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- C! R$ g/ I( l  X7 I& C5 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; g% [6 M" o; U9 M/ }) s) J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 {) X* n# E3 ^  [; l0 R) H# N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, O3 X0 B0 B" r9 Q4 @4 @; a! Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 a2 P. Z2 E2 N. l" a$ z8 z$ u) F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, u9 r' @* V1 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; l5 \- L9 W3 A* R4 B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ V8 s, j; {' S% Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# Q; Q' l' V. w, [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! V  T" ?, X/ x5 c, g; \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) J6 D0 |5 j5 D7 x/ C8 e/ c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& x+ ?4 E; _! y! b# Z( w3 w3 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  s, w- I5 e% e  M- {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 G9 Z7 n; r# C/ Q' I. M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. A0 a( z- f, h) k3 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 Y/ q  t. D$ h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) ]) G7 U5 j$ H, U; |6 y! i; T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* s6 |4 o+ J8 {" J3 B$ y1 |) j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: W9 X7 t5 q. x  s7 X2 r9 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: @1 @4 `) s) d  l  D; E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; w% U7 s' |8 `& L$ x! s2 `& w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* {5 {9 ^: r" [# X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>