【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, a4 t, Q4 `" t3 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; |; }" m$ w# m0 U" @3 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 N1 C" ]% h) I5 j" C. W7 m; {6 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 Z" Z: j# }7 q; K; K7 g4 b6 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; B8 X$ \# ~& p& I  U* n5 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 t9 ~3 H4 s! E8 K5 f* qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) T4 _  I" k+ g3 @  ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" z) F- {2 M: f9 ]% a- GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ T5 p* F" ^: O2 @: p7 L. aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 K0 o3 ^, `% |3 W% [% |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  o. ]. _, U, S# H0 R4 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* s- G3 G, @: H8 ^" \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# o6 }+ Q5 U  Y% ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 q, Z9 h* h2 K' F7 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" N( h0 o. H: E" L$ b5 }<P>你无需担心</P>
! @' o0 ^# b; }8 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 |2 z6 l& {- E' B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! H5 C: ^7 o; X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ S# v2 R+ Z& E0 q5 c% P$ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' k' `* q! s. r& C. \& C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, d  l0 {- r. p. N! b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* |! m8 g! s7 }3 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& Z# E8 b& J* v3 Q" V9 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, [4 C5 f, g% n# h* |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ R+ S# ]( U3 J& M: K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  r' g+ v$ g# \" i1 A0 i6 P' j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ~8 }" ^7 w) ^1 [! B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' R5 C6 h  I( j# U/ I  t: m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 w  d+ [$ j# A; l; e* O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* @0 c+ j) V2 M7 ]$ h, [0 X0 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' m; d: c/ u5 G% q- @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& F3 z5 [1 C" ^" @) i0 b! J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
4 [/ T( u8 p" z  ?
0 ^6 `9 k! N. V+ t( @. J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- K1 h1 o0 I  B6 y% g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>