【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 e/ C5 k1 }! [9 C: |; O歌词我附在后面。
. A5 w+ |, ^- Z8 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 a9 {+ M, [; J9 ?7 J: H5 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) r" a9 O% X9 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& W, ]5 `: q& Q& {1 }  E  TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 R; G+ p9 U1 i$ }Every other word you utter is love
4 M- O! K* T; G% ]; e. MI really want to know just how much you love me
: [- h5 q- Z! @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( x# o. E( H4 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 u7 Z2 Z! u' d3 @  X" TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ I  M) l1 w* \) [7 lI want so much to see inside your heart
' w' [" S7 w& s+ D8 h) \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 N+ V: k% x* n1 hI’m still filled with fear
+ a, C4 Q1 V$ C" }  s( N+ s9 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ v7 E5 e+ Y, |6 D% p: [* @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# s( N% V# `% r) c& ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; H+ B: W9 J' V& X4 f( ~/ e+ C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, w) \5 M2 b( {' ~* @: k- L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! o. a. w/ R9 b% n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 o( J- N" \# C6 A$ a; _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  n3 c) `8 i) S% q( |7 x6 n3 {! [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( N3 C3 t( w+ ?! S, R: K4 z8 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 G) f( ~( x$ E$ c5 i: }5 B+ m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) J% ^0 e! U+ C: ?5 k) I, e; Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! f2 [1 |9 k( {/ w! w6 K/ ~4 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; [; a4 o2 ~' B& O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ E# X7 u# l, l& G- _  K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 W; @2 G8 @+ \! h+ f& q1 g% \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 V5 K; Z* H' Y$ V9 y6 q. ~$ [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 [3 [9 K% ^) G" L. v) a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 B& t% r* e3 V9 v* b7 [2 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 t4 ~7 ]) F# ^0 S" o- A8 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ @! R6 \, e' v) o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' {! v3 L. @7 u' ?& a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 _4 M4 _  M' B0 Y# x, D" R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 o) s$ u$ T& Q' D# [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- M1 _3 I% Z9 i# u: i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& t' p1 g& G' \) y3 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# V: A9 Y% N& o& |& }; z- B6 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 I$ ^4 e5 }, F, k8 k) M5 F2 R9 [) [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 I8 _' r0 t1 f) e$ `9 z+ r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 O' R" A4 {9 X2 q0 ~4 T' c% S3 G' f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. z+ @/ C( ?7 t* w) T* k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, e! T; g4 C( a3 D6 [  V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. _! }) o7 X; Z$ h) N7 b/ F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
# o% S9 ?  i+ x% B7 i, z6 ~
+ F" y' L' R' H" H1 {我请你剖开它
) i0 H* t! N4 S, ~
6 M' Z) U8 a: S) U( L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 U7 x0 H! d+ |# R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>