【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 J( G4 r8 I; @2 N5 h/ y) iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ E% l: o, a7 ~2 ?' i1 h% j8 v+ G2 HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 l8 ^4 Y! ?+ K0 JWith the moon kissing it every night
; ~+ _2 V* O5 M6 w, i& uSeeing the sky content with its love
) e2 T1 Y. C. Z2 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- @' X9 i7 k; u! J$ f$ ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. D  R: k  K4 @/ NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& ^( [7 Y3 V5 Z& @8 JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. e% p" ~; C* d6 n. X" xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 \: R; k! \0 k3 ^8 y* XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. `8 J  ?. G% D0 c; ~' |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 s" w2 J; ~4 f  @' |6 YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% w9 Y# K- Q9 J2 w3 F  d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- z' o: I$ t/ J) m& w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 Z: Z2 h6 j, u9 X9 w' s  x0 i" y0 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( R- @( Z( }, ]# |1 Y/ L6 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* Q) x( g1 \0 l1 m8 |  f6 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: {; Q  M# N# v8 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ ?. n- _" q2 ^3 U4 k. \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! c+ g% }$ ~$ M3 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 l5 P4 g. K& S- Q! u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ r; M) x" l% r# Y. W3 I% w, U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ J* t9 S' }" L# W. Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 P% [/ t. {$ Z! x- L0 q6 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 K8 g: x" @( J4 W' O/ ~7 ]4 w/ l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 V, w9 Z7 U$ d) C2 D: c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: y/ Y* O/ S- e+ M/ T) W2 g9 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 H- m& a8 L0 l: G& f9 ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( D1 w+ l; N  p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 G+ J4 a4 T2 I2 j0 m1 F' ?! M# Q+ A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 B, L4 T: o: h7 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ V. I# H  f) ]' |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ U+ c6 n! |4 S! z& @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 o% J; z! |9 Z% }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! h, T  }& t" C8 u2 ^: h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- E8 v1 P" c9 e6 B- e2 R- T: R# F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ L! z4 I9 H: @& x3 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) Q% J  O+ M( L) A. s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ f/ N: X+ g$ O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ V  u# ^: u  B. \# Q; e' R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 I, K3 k1 \% n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' t  T# u: I) i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, \8 r0 X+ D' F! W1 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ P- M. t2 S, B" P( O- n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 g* a; R8 g( N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' a! R! v( m+ N( C4 o7 K2 H1 V3 P我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>