【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 k$ i5 D) B% I( L+ oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, m! M6 E8 [4 }2 _0 m( C! K- }7 _5 K3 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* h5 W6 j9 w( U/ RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! Z* u9 e% M, p5 s; HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 ~6 q. N7 i; X) PYou needn’t fear anything
* v0 ~- d8 b) o2 d+ l' `% uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 N% M% V4 n2 l# P! I+ cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* v0 y6 a0 g8 {3 y+ K" y' \' gNothing can compare to my love
; S- T. l: T! l8 x$ @& Q) ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! h: ~% O" X" T' gI’m still filled with fear
" k" l6 B3 F( J$ O- A# U: o. SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 ?! c/ |8 L) R9 G, m- OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 p8 N! T, s3 I# I3 F! XWith such a tongue as yours,
4 }7 r$ ^1 C+ J3 B4 b  {8 L- o* F8 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% l% P5 M; a/ _$ K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 C! T3 w; y: [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* |. B2 [  g. t* o, Y: U1 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 U9 v! J2 {7 S8 G- R$ B9 Y. ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 I6 o; Q6 b$ n- q2 b3 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  X& F* H9 @9 {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ ?$ ?9 {& h& u( S4 h1 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! x6 Z. |+ z5 H# E% J3 ^5 O6 q7 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! m1 d4 M% g0 y. F4 C* e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ l" v9 h3 i8 L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ ~; w4 x( r. z" E& G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) Y& b8 y$ h. U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 j0 D5 R% h) b9 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- p  a# ~- y. Q$ B* l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  [% C: p3 ]2 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ E7 R6 z% Z1 q4 r: s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# {, i/ b* F1 g- b2 g" T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; U" ~. P" _. o/ n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- ]3 ]( k1 o' C$ P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( J0 R" n; o/ s" R4 \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 n6 m7 g4 _& S* _$ N8 J9 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* e3 D" J3 g. Q- l- [& e% b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: f% m) ~; M8 \& D: @$ ]5 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ }. Q4 U$ ~* {. P( g- Q2 @4 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; B% ~' m7 ]* _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, g/ i9 X+ E7 ~1 S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>