【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 g$ A4 x3 Y) W& i0 ~# WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( H3 }& o! N* @$ p2 t1 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- H/ R) r+ J' R% X. t7 R% ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% v- g1 b, {, `! e: [0 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 N" O! k% {% C, I+ H4 m# K$ DEvery other word you utter is love
+ M$ j+ w# L0 uI really want to know just how much you love me
2 s- ~( B+ Y8 QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# D1 B% g8 w, Z* c$ f; W% UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' y3 N4 v; E) |" `3 D. zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# M4 Z5 I( D. w( A+ _I’m still filled with fear
2 _! X6 ?1 f6 i! Y0 Q/ ~* `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! K% n3 g% S( P' ~4 O3 C8 w* HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 J9 b3 \) f) Y$ pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ I% |4 u4 ^5 y5 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! V, Q/ n  Y& ?* r9 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' i; B1 d8 e  {' z! c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 k* k; Z$ c. S  Q# ?$ n0 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 @9 X( x$ [2 U. p" q: N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' h; B% X7 _4 I& c& _( ?! T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 }' F# o/ X  M  M( ]3 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 a/ W4 d: M; k$ L6 w/ q* i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" c+ G- x% y& ~0 _' a( l0 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 m0 a  B# Q2 T1 v, a2 C4 z7 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- u& T( K7 u- G8 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) y. r# z/ A6 I0 s; d  K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) ~* z' e& [" J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 U' D, A$ b# M8 h3 C6 i  h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) s* f% ]9 U$ W6 w7 P! ?; l# z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" ^* X" j* v$ @2 e( x7 e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; m/ z, F7 c* q" x+ _! M% u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 N: w0 F5 E- e  O7 C/ r# X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! e7 O( n4 ^6 ]; D) ]- l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 l! t- [) R0 [4 S* f' W2 C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ W+ [3 V# l4 `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: n' [0 l: F1 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) p7 k( y3 F; m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 x$ v- `7 E4 z" N/ `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* j  B# _) l2 V8 c/ Z# |# Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 A1 q; V% n) ], B0 B2 c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>