【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- ~$ I+ P& [, j8 \: Z% N歌词我附在后面。
7 \) J0 _& ?. n$ D' R1 `! S& q" ]7 }  aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( b) w" _1 H* N6 y8 z! {9 c- S: x& uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 ~( ^$ q/ _  wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& H, z3 v+ ^: q  D+ C  g& mThe sky is happy down to its soul
& m9 k* K- ?6 D+ R. \# _4 K1 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- J: X2 f8 b+ p- e' x* [4 Z2 z# TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* G. M/ x1 J0 O" v5 a# n' FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 O2 z2 i2 F% v; PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 k( d# w9 N& b( T( T, I  L% D$ B" CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) s6 Q* p0 }- F3 C! r  _2 P9 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, t8 V' V/ i6 n) X5 X' I! A) n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( V- W6 Q  K% t, N% q4 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 X+ e5 n# _% ^. |  O# P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ d) X, Z9 n# ]' P% W! F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 M; Y& C1 r" m$ {  U: }' F& g/ x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ F9 R: R( v9 x6 g7 J3 E<P>你无需担心</P>
$ j8 b- H' ?" ^% |/ Y1 \8 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 m6 b+ I8 P6 H; D9 }% r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 h/ [$ F+ v6 i% T: }5 Z2 S) j+ `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 g0 [* u2 ]# ~( C+ g: I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! k/ T+ {+ `# |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) \0 I8 X  {% E/ Q2 v* S3 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& ?- o4 a" I: g7 _: l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- @3 B+ @& @, p4 B  R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 Q+ G7 I8 _  V  B! G/ K" X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 F  w4 e3 T1 a4 G. i! t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 X9 B, w  g* k2 U% I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 _, R' r" f0 H5 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. V' @+ j( }* D' t( r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ Q" |& Q. S2 L" E; u: t* A( D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 x1 l0 m4 x0 g3 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- i- ]0 W$ @3 |# v3 F% S<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 ?6 i1 K" u) U# w" T4 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' O7 t1 Z+ u& w& H5 n! L/ ~+ I, y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; z5 a8 a+ S7 C4 m( v2 Q) P# v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 [. o# H2 d' p' C. }4 M: w% ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 a! n) H  I* U; |8 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. s0 p8 d# n! e3 v$ i( y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 L4 I9 m7 s8 ~) f9 D! A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 s) b, ^/ v) Z/ Z- I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>