【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, v5 b! [' O( l6 e# \歌词我附在后面。
; j: g# y. U3 E/ RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* q6 w3 n! M6 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 D0 ^8 R7 I* {5 N, ^0 j6 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. A0 K' ^  l& ~3 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 B. W. K4 U2 s, L' _" v. G# xYou needn’t fear anything
  E% C8 w% q0 ]) o4 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% _3 m" F- T! A8 ENothing can compare to my love
  q2 R' k. d6 q$ @. W+ MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 F* W5 Y$ O( ?; b; o5 P) o2 {* ~' wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, G# P2 {6 C+ {8 m8 }/ F; b0 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! W0 i8 a- M* wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 r; t+ d* I0 ?: H3 [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  t. z& K  y* y9 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# k5 e% J8 i; Q$ z; g! w* S3 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, H" \! S1 p8 o0 e6 a8 j2 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. ^: ?2 V. {' c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( I' D) A. U) [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 g* {6 r# I7 L* G+ `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% ~% |, e7 b% X. ?. Q. q  @4 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" x& M4 N, }& P  _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- f% e3 d1 J4 L1 f# [3 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( _# D0 ?9 m; `: Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% C! d7 O. Z6 k. x/ s. O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% J3 z. _/ I' @% b  Y/ _" [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& Q: N! P4 [' \: H* h( T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ ]) ]7 w5 b: D0 D( u/ n0 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 q2 B0 p. X9 i2 o. z. D; h3 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- E+ r( y" m0 X; Z, E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: d3 j7 w  G  N) |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) Y/ \- x; {/ n  y* ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* |9 p4 c/ @% r. M# Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 \9 K/ r3 j" q2 g& |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: T' n( N5 a  `6 \0 v! D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 e, Z7 R6 d) s) e1 P( N) b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 M1 k8 u1 L, ~+ ?2 h8 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; C% w! P/ p+ [4 [/ Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' ^9 Q5 b1 M/ d" G! i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>