【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 y9 d6 @4 W/ X. \% L" |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 x- F* f$ K4 l& j' _3 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 q; n- B! I- q1 Q( ySeeing the sky content with its love
/ e8 U5 @( i3 j! |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& s1 \* e5 M, ?. eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" Y% P* D( h8 J, ~3 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 |/ n1 S9 D2 d% XI love you I love you with all my heart
% o& T  u3 j! ], CNothing can compare to my love
3 n5 ]3 Q+ a4 M( G- v' ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ L( Z4 v2 x& qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 y1 }: R7 k" h  iI regret not dying
; ]- y! D; F: P7 o3 I8 y! K- G% PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( I( S  c7 b" Y. ~. }+ {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. H$ ?  O' l  B: s' g8 r# aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( A# n* k+ N( P4 M6 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# d% j$ E. [6 @: b# @" i& m; e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) v, r5 D( c" s6 u: K: V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 S% \  g1 @9 V+ p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 D& J5 o2 N2 u7 _1 G& P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 @% z8 f% T8 j# S; b+ f' d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  }6 R& i* m0 s6 B1 O& v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* i7 T  t0 B' _+ X; P4 W1 M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 l6 m6 H( u# z7 o7 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 f( i0 t" q6 v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 [! p# {, l6 n! I, L3 i; W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# d$ }3 c; {; c' q; s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 I  Q, E' n& V/ F. Z: K. e. K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ Z2 ~2 p3 s* q1 ~7 H0 c: n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 ?( w* @. K/ e: t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. a. i" k8 \. k) T) ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) k$ O/ D. k! t9 Z2 k7 k. ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; [% U. N0 O/ R! R! U( I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% ^) B. `8 {! N* Q' Q4 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 Q; j6 }  e5 q5 Y3 H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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