【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 T' \- X# Z. O, G1 V: [" PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) r" X3 B' h8 G% e  kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, h' d  d4 I8 r! |$ l5 f, M  iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; ^! u/ o& X$ p/ k" ^' Z+ C" wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 ~6 s& w. l' {1 o1 r- a5 aWith the moon kissing it every night
8 {. R( M4 V1 F% w7 B, _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' A; |1 }" q( PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 u) N# K# R6 W* W9 q5 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& M% j1 }. }% t  S" sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' e: m8 Z1 Y( o/ lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 X  p7 X4 n. t$ L9 t' JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' V4 m: T- P1 X1 E% |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& f. [( }& W+ r" a8 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" w5 {0 T. e$ O9 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. \2 \! e8 e6 |, v2 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 g( g  H8 b& h2 }9 o+ }! Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. A0 B1 Z0 E5 C6 `5 f  Z- _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# [& q& t6 O# u5 F# Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% c. Z! k7 D  P% I( T- ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% ?! [2 k$ ?* s- N  `/ `- k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! ]9 b9 C; F( `3 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' n' f$ o1 A$ S" g: O4 C: `% [! \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) w5 q# r1 x$ i6 k3 I0 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" c% z4 A4 M! c; T1 T, [& n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 m$ |; j# Y, n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 W% U# L* V  |9 W; D5 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  t9 a, T. N+ f2 {  v9 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ N/ f7 P& M+ u9 U  ~6 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- Q& b! W& M  f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 Z3 I0 S) U0 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 ]5 L3 N2 ]$ I+ G  x! G<P>I regret not dying</P>
  Q' C( s2 n+ X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ x) K2 k& q- a8 A) J2 M; `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 Y9 \: t5 t6 @7 I/ n) f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; L8 t" Q$ _: n6 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) U7 d5 h6 ~- P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# t7 C" [) b7 u. e; Z+ K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 p7 q: F# ]7 e) V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>