【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: Y  j0 x8 R4 b6 {% x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 W/ S; V# E5 d$ zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ y8 C0 m* j" v% n% t% ?! dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- W6 n, X  b1 eI really want to know just how much you love me
+ U( g8 U6 ]) f* `: Z7 ~; o8 K! [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 u2 U' |  @. Y& l# q5 ]. KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  U+ T0 O% S! Y- C) Y2 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 H9 H" w  `' h* r  p' i- S2 b+ i6 M+ dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ W6 a1 V2 ^3 W3 T* v* H3 {$ o( }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" |2 K7 H5 m1 F. H; z! URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 H1 u6 f3 D) ]- O& z( ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# h: b0 v/ @- ^7 a$ l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' ?& r% B+ T2 ^7 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# x7 K  S2 o9 m: k: b6 P. C0 T) E! d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  B. D7 }, `; @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ X) E6 _( K& M7 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( Q. L& c" A5 Z8 L/ O  {) q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* F$ k' o1 A4 D6 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 f: Q& v( T5 |1 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 T9 Z" i1 z% ~4 [* @( k8 q  K+ {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( m/ n2 c* O6 t* x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) Z# d1 G) {+ g& A9 U# o$ s& r7 a+ J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; G3 g% h8 g! ^0 U) s/ `+ p- R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 ?1 f/ x' ]$ r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 @. U" D, N9 E. ]  t9 L- k" q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 d' c: N' K6 m1 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 Y2 D; j+ D# ~9 N9 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 d" |/ C' v$ B& K5 }8 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 R9 q1 I4 U! v) J3 I. }' g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) V) G( q9 U' L7 {: b8 ~! w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 M8 c" e7 x( c% W- `$ W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) V' V0 S# y3 ], Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; y- W" ?) O# X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! {% q, r. V: u, R! Q9 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>