【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 T% h4 C' A: E! P" e/ u, r5 e! A5 b+ wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% Z8 ~( _' U7 z* G- w  jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; l- b8 m, s' s7 n9 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ h- {: l7 {9 W* pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; g+ u( }( G; B! B2 `9 W$ L" j6 oYou needn’t fear anything
7 y+ [5 g7 x4 H% W' ]8 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 [* O) j' T2 I* |; r' M# gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, H2 @( W* {. V0 ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) w6 r! T3 z( P, z+ w1 I* D9 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
0 ^- q8 G2 z- a# X) ], UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 G) }# g- b! `6 h* II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; i5 N  l. |" I3 I% cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- b' a+ X' s* A' DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- H* U: q& V; uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ o: C' z0 I( {' \% Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% q/ N# [' A- z$ [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 k: s- h3 {' {$ V* h+ \7 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. N2 Y. ]3 I7 \& s6 [1 t/ T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ F( G5 I7 _' h$ ~5 D* |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 S5 U1 i. A8 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# _7 A: C0 O6 s: R: g4 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 x( @1 ]8 G7 @7 {! u' I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 C9 D0 U2 k- e, N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# q5 z- b3 {$ ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 Y7 o: Q/ W2 f  ^2 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 q. C- I4 Y- G6 K: S/ ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 ?% L: ^9 y$ F  |7 A" k7 a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% |/ B% h0 ]# e3 Q  V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 l) d8 l% l4 y4 B0 X/ m; B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  y1 ]% \- K) W: U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# H- v9 E: t- S1 s+ N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 N2 z9 ?3 u7 f/ t4 ?( l1 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# ]: h& L  ?6 z. N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! }9 C2 i+ m0 y( p. ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 R0 l: T: k# e  N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 H$ \$ K! M; S) D6 o4 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>