【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; M' M# v, P1 x, jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 K, E" j& L* \4 k0 V" F- j$ JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ r) N* i) e! {! `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, Q9 e% k' O$ zNothing can compare to my love
$ F. }- o  K& i% K0 KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: ~, C0 t" E" q# A" m% g- cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  G1 y+ _+ ~+ uI want so much to see inside your heart
0 f+ c3 ], X" P1 s2 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ X* y  e1 g! D. TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 P" |+ x0 h. n9 Z: F1 k0 a( ?! \I regret not dying
3 Q1 n# z+ T; M! |  W8 w6 BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% D& u. p4 N. ^3 Z& Y& @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 g8 u% @9 z- a0 n, T: zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) U4 L- T" m2 [; b2 ?0 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 G  I5 ]# M: c: D" \9 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 W! V% N& U) m& }/ M0 |- F, u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& p6 J; }1 z3 t' V7 h, h+ b8 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 e  @4 u. t5 j1 c+ m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& t& H2 _  B& N" r# D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ M& e/ o% H, v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) B2 p! H5 v4 [- a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ y6 c( Z4 M, J  |; m" }: ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 s/ X" h$ W3 |9 U* L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* q$ n# }. h7 E1 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 @+ Z  E  O' s; I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  k- i" X2 j" D4 L' q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 i2 h4 y1 C  P6 S0 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# s9 I" ]2 _/ |* N6 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! `: R0 \( h, `7 F1 k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 h9 N3 l' M# n8 ?/ c) Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- J1 A; L' n& a& j4 s5 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* t) g3 F/ d7 I5 l  E! o& t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ?2 C! J! u9 K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 R+ ?" C4 m- H: @! _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 L; _& ]) |7 P7 S$ H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 D+ i1 A2 s5 q9 v3 T- [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ M7 h4 U( Z% g0 j9 V  x6 N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# K2 g5 m# ], W1 D  Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ S' X# X' i3 y5 I3 }& |  N我请你剖开它

: I# m, i7 |8 v: d" V4 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>