【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 l; j# i: J0 m8 f6 ~7 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& n( Z& N! J  O% @" y2 u' J' a' G. v& |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- N& d2 k# t* z3 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
. {& D, i" A, mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 B4 T4 i+ o7 V1 J. @5 QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 }5 Q" v( c  d8 `  lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ [) S1 P  R- @( l" ]Every other word you utter is love
2 G; ]! G/ I% a6 V) l+ O5 FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ F3 ]' J7 R  A( s4 {2 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) Z; [8 U- H1 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 f% `- \( f, vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 g0 W$ |( n5 `# }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ `. u/ B" k& W& l. R3 Z" w* o0 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 D$ a1 D1 ?- Y8 e* GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: O8 n5 V; ?- d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; n  I, w9 M* S% P* n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 j& }0 F, c9 [- H0 `, M: \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, y2 G' y" i2 A5 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* W" z9 a9 ~( p# A) r$ \3 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" M  d' \, [" Y# r2 o0 w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 [' }. H1 {$ R: V1 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 t2 X- E: c5 a8 n( ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 U+ k- j/ W- c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( h# h2 z* ?' M0 h* g5 ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- y8 N3 `) z3 X1 E* x0 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' v9 L8 C0 j, {; n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ q  n( y) Y% n7 n% ^6 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 V* y, i  S9 H5 W/ c9 H& G. ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% {4 p$ V! W) r; U4 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 ?, i% n' o  r8 v6 H$ ?* z' I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: S7 S- r& o- U" e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* p/ v9 s" W0 _2 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 P4 P$ V( \$ B0 |* F* S, L3 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) J8 J0 n5 P% ]/ n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" _3 Y* X" M( @* h, e; f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  K8 T' y7 ~0 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 Y; H5 L! Q5 [6 {/ D7 Q0 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# B! B4 x# V+ z7 }. o/ W  ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( R  o3 @3 n2 ]% L: |% S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; y* h* }, q0 N& m- G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! a$ V. m% [: W7 j/ C1 Y0 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 ~0 ~3 g! W- t( s9 T' }, a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ K& J2 T/ v: |7 m5 z: y8 l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

4 r6 B) m" ?  ?  L+ F0 H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ R5 [; U; j% F) B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>