【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# D2 p1 Z. V* [5 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, g% x/ t6 H# Q- _4 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; o; K( n% g% x: w% w% vThe sky is happy down to its soul
( }, ]+ U' T4 o9 i! j* J# NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 y3 V; U; q" `/ MEvery other word you utter is love
) Q- W  \" u! }& N% I  g$ M- R2 RI really want to know just how much you love me
( p7 U- {7 O* p. ~, _" tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% K; }2 J2 `: k$ o2 S! @4 cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- h- ]9 s3 A1 R' Z' R/ b4 LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 z, r( l, ~: F7 HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: d, [  G8 S4 g$ pI regret not dying
# c5 ~1 g0 ?" g* s9 ?$ Y) E* TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 ~5 y* k4 a) J7 ?. d# m- `With such a tongue as yours,
9 R8 D* |  ^2 I5 J4 Y# T( RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 }3 Q* m' y# l9 G2 R5 a0 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& K7 D0 h$ V% V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( ^5 Z4 h+ m+ |4 A8 O  U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% x6 ~0 b: U+ ?5 p# l/ b7 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 Y+ M; \- Z6 x& _) @* J# H  ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, Q/ S2 S; W5 c, Y; j0 U8 x( o' [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 o2 V4 d) N* z9 I. P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' J: F: @) I0 Q) {$ p. B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 [+ q* G3 h, `/ U) F+ l1 L7 G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% x7 N& `, T/ g, R( D0 a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, k; b% y( B1 I5 _1 U; @2 K( ~/ }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" D" k) U4 V6 S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 e) B$ w( m7 {) o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) G0 r  W' M5 ~4 U5 Z/ D6 M- {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" ?/ h  H2 Y  U# R( V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 {5 r" ?" F/ Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 O0 Z1 m1 \9 a- v8 ^; b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# T! J; h% e- N& o% E) }3 H$ Q; ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ S' j& g/ ]$ L$ l* ^' Y, `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. X, [9 m& j9 I. S" _4 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 o6 n9 X' l" c8 }* L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" f. ^. d4 w: I6 m5 O* A8 X. d7 E$ l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ H% ]2 ]+ }) m* a! M5 A* a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>