【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 t% F% G/ M1 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 r8 ?6 a; M2 L/ L1 j0 t! rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 I" M4 D5 e- a: L* W. [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 u0 J! B, S0 X; C. R3 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; N1 I2 W8 Q- ^2 O( aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# y9 e, ~$ K$ g6 J3 o! AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) Q$ G8 ]7 [( P/ p  gI really want to know just how much you love me
$ Q( c6 c0 L5 O( T( h# V6 R7 L- NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  T1 J9 d/ d& K* o. @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% j7 V: |, }/ ]$ H8 V- oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 I1 [# q$ b; {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# j. A# C6 Q' [/ c! Y8 q$ HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( O+ j, I* r  jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 i3 E* G7 V* C+ G6 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 h4 w, w4 w" C4 f) Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" q0 h1 B3 F+ g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 D' v* k3 t% ]3 X. F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- g: _. f% g, j% G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 E" [  H1 |& b8 {' C7 L, a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! C- k. q9 P7 U1 {/ W: I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 ?+ ]1 V  ?0 v( G( d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. z( V5 ]1 h1 l: Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; ]/ j- i  K3 m. y/ C% A$ W6 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, \0 t& N" f* U: f: p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 ]: h& n+ V; o* |0 s  A) W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; t9 d! X- w- A1 z5 `- x# n; B$ |) `  P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* G2 E; i2 @) E' s  O- U/ P3 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, F* S! o9 L0 w! M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ~5 Q! I* F. W1 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- T9 r+ g/ L9 }; ~0 D* L! ~& a- U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( U# u+ Q1 p8 o/ F4 u' S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! I6 a) A0 r1 t" j! L+ r* ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, `: {; }( s2 L$ t5 E% e% ~3 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! X& L. [3 p" v" E0 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 W. i( x! Z; t. M1 [5 W" w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 J! G7 ?: J# z, k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- W5 u) p2 D) p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- I3 n* G# I8 p$ w2 ]2 P& X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>