【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 R0 o% f! P9 ^9 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 }+ L0 w. u$ ~* }With the moon kissing it every night
* `) g) N3 M- C- ]4 k5 ^- r# wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 R3 Z- `% a5 f9 `/ ]$ L. }I love you I love you with all my heart
/ X2 q0 F" v/ v; NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: ^) L: q% K4 Q# G: ]& SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 ]; Z3 R! ~3 ]- c+ WI regret not dying
" w. c- j7 A9 V6 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  W, D  r8 b% s) N/ D' s* Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' t' g6 f# J* ^( k+ `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 J7 |1 ^3 {* u; N( i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. E6 l% W6 X  Y7 o4 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ w8 {5 ~6 `9 \2 s: M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& X  E( \. F( ]6 p4 E2 `0 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 l# |# m, e5 L, o: z, B: I" j' ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 ]" f: z7 {% |/ n% _. `/ x' \# G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& t5 r/ g* v0 a8 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 `# R5 N/ P; |7 Y7 y0 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 ~# H$ ?. c+ S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- c# ]+ m/ W+ R5 p( ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 U5 \! C5 `0 V1 Y! e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' ~# P! @/ t5 `* W: r3 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 U& L' q+ Q6 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 c9 G3 N) f( u5 R; J- f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 d* V1 w% l4 ~! m. W1 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' c  C: ?' p/ }* O  b' j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  U' L  G/ j  X# ~, R) e4 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* E7 M! d- v- e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 B$ F7 e2 P8 I7 T/ I% s  ]8 p& A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" D3 u: Q8 _0 m  C. p& C" @1 W! Z+ ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 N7 W+ X7 n3 a0 K' @: U7 x2 `2 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& f8 j% r8 b* o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! M- P: O8 G. q. s: n/ c. @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& u- |2 j5 _) ^: E2 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ ^/ i; F. s7 K- W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>