【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  m: u. y- [6 q" \: `7 d歌词我附在后面。
4 t! l5 ]: ]% A- ~+ r& z# q. [The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 s; ?# K4 ]! L: h/ m9 U( `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) g; j4 D: ~" D6 i. l9 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& M9 p8 T! {  g+ ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! \$ i6 C+ l0 R  m9 e6 y1 u" REvery other word you utter is love
2 ]; j! r8 ?2 }& d# D8 G/ A0 a& \I really want to know just how much you love me
6 P" I$ G- S% ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ w$ S6 e+ i. [& C6 z- c+ IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- f9 d3 ^* G$ G. A- `4 XI regret not dying
9 [5 c$ k* ~, A' H1 B( p3 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" o1 t5 A* S& I& H' _/ }% XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ t# P$ D0 u6 `. R! ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ x1 z3 F( q& Y  w4 M5 X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 i7 [6 n( E2 L: F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 ~9 F  g7 w1 B/ u  w+ Z$ T0 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 j8 t% O; J+ f* T; Z7 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 f; y  E2 ?# U8 l* n* }  e( `, y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' z: j/ t# M# ~6 ~6 B; N' i) {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 ^  U5 N! ^2 }/ h) g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- Y6 {5 [; C+ U3 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 Q: v8 W+ C/ Z; b( I0 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' F& l0 N" U  Q+ R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ^0 K$ N+ H; ~% P* v% m' \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 h( D+ [1 z7 b. h5 S+ r<P>你无需担心</P>
( R/ S  r$ q% Y7 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; i; T, X; V/ S' Y4 L; ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ e! g9 b1 E1 R- P6 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 _3 i+ U# i4 g% u& l. W+ k2 H) s, x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ]8 Z6 e: |+ l2 `2 d& T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 E5 l+ t- D! b0 m1 h% t# K- q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- {" r$ C6 j: [3 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 |$ |* z0 T4 y  {$ S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& j( u# c- H; I9 t) i; K4 n$ I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 T/ T2 U) O% [2 ]; W4 g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% O: e# U- J0 w8 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
% s: ^" [, A+ e7 @2 w! |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: |+ x( K9 x) n. j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& `3 w, ], O  l- N$ L/ ^& {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 I$ }+ Q- Y8 V. b8 y8 ]: b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- ^1 ~! L! G" o# g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

, w+ A% b. Q6 V/ c7 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>