【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 k$ _$ x6 m: \1 T歌词我附在后面。
4 `# X2 L3 ~) N3 @# AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  @" j. n0 f' W1 J* N  ]. Q; ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# G& G9 B7 m$ ?5 z8 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 i8 d  H9 n* z1 y9 ]5 n! SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ e' t3 g# r) |5 y* kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ }3 [) E# R# l' KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. J) [7 o; I" e4 e- `1 y+ @; J( KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 ~0 z" c2 O% q$ ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 k$ n: X4 r  M  ^0 s; l) O# MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! s& Y8 U2 x) C$ F" p( D# gI regret not dying
! C: e# U3 ~, }  O$ {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 V. C& X- y3 R6 C0 G+ C* x" S% G$ \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! J& s2 B1 i' W- l  yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& V- \. n$ e3 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; @! W7 R( ^8 @+ o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 f6 ^& H2 \% d3 I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% C6 p# }9 g! a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 }. i; W, ?0 t( y" b+ J# l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  Z. _, H3 W( r; N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( |) C6 E( J# H" G  l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 K4 `# P3 {3 A9 j# ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! _; j) A2 ?% h3 L* e8 H+ J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* ~5 \1 c  b' |% z' P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& j9 @+ s' t! J  w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 K$ P0 K' ]$ m1 j* a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 a: _) o3 L, T  S3 |( T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ d8 `/ o4 I( f$ H7 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' F8 ]6 ?' c- a( e% @( W) Y: H# t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: R! d+ W! I& z1 R& h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# o) K. q5 ~# s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; n, g9 v: f4 U; p! z, U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 ]  F; ~+ t' k! P) @( v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ P( u5 o+ v( d8 y0 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 B7 D# k; R4 K2 i, R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; y" Q5 E+ r+ x6 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 k0 X$ J) J" `1 e# }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" [0 X+ L. ], r' q. t0 Q9 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' Y) z8 m$ Y) z& }" `/ y, f0 p/ d. t( z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ]: Q" `2 |7 J2 _$ w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 O1 ?, G; q3 B  C6 b0 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: u  ^3 A/ e6 J( w6 h" }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. H; ?- X5 Y  u1 `8 j7 f0 N9 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ d3 b  M  _" }$ V2 z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 A; G. ~9 g+ d, F% c! k  ?) c. `! j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 ^  S( p: ]6 U' l5 J1 j$ n$ y& Z' Y+ b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>