【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 o0 R7 `' Y: I3 |! r9 w# PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% ^5 V3 Y/ @  D5 f% [. e6 [- RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 r$ |  Z6 [* O" }: zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! M5 O( D1 e% ^+ L  e0 I) m: \- oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% A9 ?- n4 a5 x6 Z) l$ `Every other word you utter is love
. t8 W9 t7 R' eI really want to know just how much you love me
% Z- O  s5 W4 l; b. WI love you I love you with all my heart
  x: `- W" O2 L- [' X8 W! g) x" ]$ YNothing can compare to my love
; s5 ]6 y" A8 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 L7 {: ^9 ~: `6 a. Z0 }. ~7 wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ ?. q: T7 p  f  {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, g2 g# l! I: k* b: i$ \I regret not dying
8 N' g: `& ?2 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 M! V' L+ T, z, y9 e4 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. @* ~) e5 f7 q5 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 L9 _6 A1 J: ?1 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  Q" {4 d0 }3 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ c7 C& a: C. \* c1 G  |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 k0 w/ [3 p* g$ x  J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% p' f% _5 [& G. D$ Q$ y  \5 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ \& A  q) S* a- M$ z1 G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ f6 j# P; s# Y( W$ W! T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ d( E# R6 w; X+ P2 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  N( d( G* Z6 \) L; w  v9 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! e" z: g6 z+ d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 ^9 d1 I" M, a* N$ V9 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  l% L( f; w/ T  ~# N* P4 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& d6 ^! n# l, m/ d4 V: j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 A3 Q. P4 g9 H8 R- }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 [3 Q& _0 D& ?9 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, x4 J: Y( S' a" U) x8 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: R8 g: `2 K, }! D0 I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 r: Q# o1 ~  \% r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 X: N! c1 M2 M/ n2 q3 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 n5 Q4 W( @1 r0 J/ u$ d+ P$ c5 a0 c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  C! }, j1 Z* o+ L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. k% ]8 G2 a+ y' j# g! r) S! x( p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  L8 h0 n! z2 g' t* Q* ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 i$ }9 A- S  e# E9 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 Q# h4 g; f( G% q/ C* Q# k- r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 A/ d" U$ G! u6 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>