【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% Q+ i- r2 A1 d* `The moonlight is shining brightly,
! f+ P6 z; d" G2 ]% F6 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; w' ?! C9 g3 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
' L, Z+ |) H! Y3 g! s7 gWith the moon kissing it every night
2 F5 Q, A) m1 ?6 oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) O. O9 Z$ V) g0 MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ u/ d- U( Q4 V& W  B! ~5 QEvery other word you utter is love
8 B' q9 u7 R0 Q5 l1 @& r9 `0 MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, O, u" Z: l" O$ }" a  `- P5 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 ?$ m: A* x2 B8 d: o3 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 I1 W  j8 W: p3 U% |% u! iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) x7 j8 P8 L8 E" WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" x9 q* G7 x) R7 A7 B& O# g( XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 F* x  z) @8 A- d. h$ YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" Z9 o+ G# g$ k3 t0 g: [  p( [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ m; t  {! f/ M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 z( y- N) @; H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 i7 K- Q; Z. o6 e6 x  k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ @1 V+ |( n5 T, r. d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# j9 W, y! o/ y( A  t0 j) a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 C7 U  |, l  E  @8 n( ?$ Q) e. d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% F$ D) G4 e% U$ o" G0 F7 T! C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. a) z' w$ t# W1 G- [' N2 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* x7 N- N* f; E+ a. U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- Q, D" w  p" z6 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. z: }; v/ ]( w/ L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ s: m% }. A, p/ z. T0 h& B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! b, L! j3 `" m& a2 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# Q: m* F. A+ m& m2 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 b2 I8 x) Y$ s- c4 O6 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! _2 o! N/ ]) g1 j  }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ C8 _2 P( v7 o; I, ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, X( S* g7 Z5 ?6 `( [$ b" ?8 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ r' ]/ O2 y" P7 o+ ^/ ?; h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 r. e4 J9 O, |+ e+ u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( `  y7 k! t9 L! Z) T  _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) O" B' F: |; s, {+ I7 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 Q# x: J7 Q" e/ x% j8 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 Q1 v5 [8 ?+ P: ?& c4 n$ B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- E' _, K. m5 W& i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

) \4 x$ S/ F9 p3 G" ?9 a( ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>