【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 u0 I2 ]1 s( W% Y9 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, G; r& m9 _* m/ V- S8 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ {3 ~4 j9 X2 f3 D3 KThe sky is happy down to its soul
# P, ?7 V/ b$ U. {5 r( t0 w" |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ F3 ^7 N5 Y1 q0 T6 l3 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% L! {* J& c6 o, p; D6 wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  n5 q5 e. z* F& fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: k. o5 Q/ |' u9 `7 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 M- C, V0 X1 Q/ p# K& qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% q. k* l8 t% n' `With such a tongue as yours,
  q* c0 A. o9 I0 r/ Q% h& MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ h, @* C+ m& @5 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% c& b, G) ~, T9 ^3 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 E: G; ?* a1 Y& Y; g8 v5 X3 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- \4 t3 {6 N  ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. ^1 J# J+ y* s# G7 O3 N' T" G7 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% u* z, w; E0 R) d2 X" y! T. @! K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" Q' H! m& U  |2 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% m! m! J2 O. K2 g  O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 r4 N3 Q8 P+ o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, j6 [; y5 d- ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. u+ G# c3 R" h  X- ^. K( e2 L( }/ u<P>你无需担心</P>
  F! ^* C" X3 @  j6 J) V. R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; |) i! \' j3 z3 T0 J/ z1 S/ C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: ], V6 B9 o" j) I; x$ i2 }; A& x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% \1 R, X% U' I& N- ^. E5 g8 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 I  }( `6 \/ F/ ?$ D( p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 @3 g; C( D% @# {. }( G. X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 m. O  Z2 b2 O, R! g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; q7 L* T$ I- T  L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 Z% N5 C/ b" H! x+ O1 F4 I& U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" e/ e) c$ Z/ e) \) S  a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' @+ b0 `4 Z, p# I9 Q4 b% i+ ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 Y& k; t) D: ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 ?% E( w4 }6 E" N! T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 z  t. Q  U( m% T3 g+ m. I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% V$ w) j( R( o( L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# W+ a" W4 }" ]9 W; \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% H' n+ R# z2 I' I. J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! s% I, x5 R0 E( N; G+ K! A$ ~5 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* R1 \& ^1 E3 M. G7 k8 z% s% S9 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* x, K6 U6 L) }8 Y: ^3 g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 c& }6 y; Q, {4 C9 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 T( s2 B# [4 H9 j# W- h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: q/ M2 X; a) M: _5 X& B我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 T* K2 W1 q3 }. y" G( i3 V/ d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>