【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; S" u" H9 V% r  w1 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 x+ F$ W8 }3 P( @# ~/ lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" S* A: j/ D* i, H( ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ E/ ?1 b1 K6 k  [Nothing can compare to my love
) g' w8 Q8 m4 m- fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ u) J- ?" |6 O# R4 T; YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) F1 U; g" {4 d  m: r$ J( lI’m still filled with fear
) D: u, F0 b) K' @0 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ B' ^" c" _( v7 b/ O" lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, O, J; ~+ |% _* C2 e  _' m# |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% L! Y( m/ k0 V6 L# s1 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, G7 [( Q( Q+ Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 v" T1 p* \  Z# k% R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) L/ Y# X) H/ d& k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  R8 m# l- |0 w: s+ A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) K5 b+ {( ?1 w1 S/ Y" ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 R% D( j% p8 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" Q( p7 V" |* a$ s* P$ b' c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, r6 T! |' O  R9 e8 O# C9 H: U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 l' ]0 i/ h$ L# m3 `6 H* k, S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& w! z& B$ ^* j' t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# \2 e# N- `4 I1 _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) [! e7 h% s6 r4 k3 F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 K9 `% n$ p- j- {+ ^7 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 s8 g) b5 E+ f) `) x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; r$ O; g1 @5 S+ x& Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- r/ u' H- |  J; A. j6 }7 e( C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# q2 o4 _/ |9 f7 h4 i2 D$ O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 D4 h  g  h) `3 R" {5 Z: i1 _. J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 y* v7 N% O" Q( P- P: T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ i' w1 {/ y) e; n/ @4 w. R! }+ j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# l) b$ S% @2 Z0 P: I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! _2 ]1 n. y" J; p, a. N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( g, h8 B$ |( J( b1 y: p/ @- w3 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- ^  i0 R: Z8 C" N1 j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 u! \  [, w- r! H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 S( e! f, y  M3 s3 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  i% ]  U3 ]; K  ]- E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 `. c4 L6 a% T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 g/ ?, z* M+ |$ T# c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 z+ S; B# {& V! d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" O9 g6 A& h, x6 O, R! [我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>