【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ x3 \: E2 H5 Q* z* X9 v歌词我附在后面。
2 L, Z  N" z; D2 S0 w5 ^- L2 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: n( K( v) D) U( {2 L/ ^% jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 x0 o. ]2 ]  n- Q+ WI really want to know just how much you love me
! |" Q2 B2 s6 h9 gI love you I love you with all my heart
4 X$ X0 P- f4 GNothing can compare to my love
- s$ i+ w/ t& k& R, D3 Q: g& e+ KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 x6 ^- h6 @: D9 q& q2 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, |; h  u! P& L. \I want so much to see inside your heart
5 X$ x4 r) r- y/ JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# j: }' d4 t9 F% |  x5 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- z% S7 B1 e2 Q1 Y/ m$ B0 x* \I regret not dying
# _! b+ D) X. M7 k7 I& o+ mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( g0 N9 ^0 p; J: ?: QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! i- N$ V2 X2 x& WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 z1 N  c+ o' `5 I- s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& @( f- K% B1 g: M& S4 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 g9 y9 {9 S6 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: c" Y; t8 G& D  @. g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ ?8 @) @, V+ h2 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% K$ u9 D8 u9 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ B) D( i! I9 c. Z' v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; o  J- o8 I% k! ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 k* ]( ]: {9 Z  V0 a/ d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 ?1 w$ P  X6 b- H1 K3 Q2 z7 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 c% N- I& r/ B. _4 s. c+ z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% z/ ]3 l0 |2 H6 ]% }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 L$ G9 Z: V8 V" ~7 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( W) J$ Z" d, O1 B. r4 {* R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 F# R1 d5 \# ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 z- o  p+ o/ e5 @! t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# J, [0 ^) q, H0 `& {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& u' I" i7 n0 q6 e# S( L0 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; k4 ?, Y- c9 D) W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, c# ]5 h6 V/ S: c8 t) ~7 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 |2 }; p5 c. D; M  l  n2 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  T# M- H. P% M<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 d, F1 r( @) p, B: ?! ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ P( ~  C) @+ l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. l' ~( Y& H1 c/ ^6 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 `: t/ @) \& a5 F( G4 }; s5 W  b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, w" l( r& h+ z" k1 g4 x' T8 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 u) E  F7 ~) M: v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 E- z# T* u7 [0 |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  }9 t+ O' u1 L; r$ Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ k* X/ ~) c0 r; |6 H- \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 T! Y: ^% ]" k' k: K6 n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 U3 H: E" i; a7 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, F8 r( t$ s' J9 O0 H, |5 k) X' R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>