【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 }) J) z" x1 P/ V! l& g/ g歌词我附在后面。
' _0 }2 ^6 A* ~/ yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, ]' R$ A" E9 E6 t% GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  ?9 X  {0 |" H; p$ @9 y2 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( U  E7 i# Y2 a# n  P" pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% j7 g6 @# ^2 }, ~1 [6 s1 l# f3 bI really want to know just how much you love me
" e, Y5 z! O+ Z$ kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# b, ^" ?' ^+ i" I  \0 g3 VI want so much to see inside your heart
6 F, [2 J" ?; z+ d) h# T' FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! J: T, a0 _0 h5 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. k$ `8 a2 V1 Q/ t! L( N1 {I regret not dying
$ k8 t/ k. H7 U3 h& V! ]/ RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  o" s2 U7 o1 d1 VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& A9 G: X. D( w4 U3 e: ~9 K6 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# M, i; _- s3 ]6 m8 H- p' x2 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" V7 B1 C7 j8 u5 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' K5 B, e6 b$ u5 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ g9 a  E3 a  Y# @, v# }3 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 @3 _% n& w* r- ^/ h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: x# t$ O* @2 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 i& t0 R1 ~8 l  C+ G# g& y$ T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 p+ h: d' L0 Q4 A" U+ q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% S. B" k& f' Y, ]8 X0 z/ g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) ^  e) a, o1 b6 T* V5 F, n0 A8 v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 t0 E0 r1 U' H( w3 M; a. i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 x  I. l% d( q) ^) i% {1 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 ~# u2 K1 b5 i9 A7 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# N' c: R1 I  `& J4 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' u4 t# F, i0 T$ }( V2 f% n" h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( y6 S' {# I) a2 X1 D/ [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 q" z5 ^* h! |( Z' d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) ~  o$ I# X- R% k9 g/ T! G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 T- @0 A: w9 y' j7 L( f; ^: m' a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( w9 n, ^0 J4 f; g2 G5 y5 z! K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' P8 A# f1 Z8 {4 N8 J# R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, T. U1 o8 U& H' |) _. }6 u' L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 z: `2 J, _. K/ g$ U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 ~* k( Y; M% L: f$ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 Y( n* J" R% O/ y- v1 ^. M6 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& O8 Z/ e# a' {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>