【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 p- N1 \1 M# h9 F8 L. H& Q歌词我附在后面。
5 j* K4 a, O, a6 N9 G8 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% t/ n8 C) y& j" h1 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 r- c; h" R  u1 _2 n* L+ \- zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ O% q& ~' z4 {1 d& ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 q# D( h8 L: T$ ]  N" t% rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& K  ~0 S) r' f" mEvery other word you utter is love
( P& c7 r# o2 W* X; a( J* mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( H2 o) E% G& SNothing can compare to my love
  w: J- f. t; e- T# Z% qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! m  v9 _+ }  M2 d0 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  J8 H; Q  ^6 I9 z7 tI want so much to see inside your heart
9 S* k, k9 w/ m" f8 H/ oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% D& H; J$ q/ J1 ]2 D0 y3 EI regret not dying
! `" F2 N0 ?. J/ S4 E; x# {1 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 d% Z+ b+ k% K; GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# [9 E: |7 Q2 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: z6 z9 r0 m$ ^9 N7 C  g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" X1 r, a5 z* Z+ [7 j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 i; K* j! M2 l2 W/ \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ _& W. p8 D& y/ P3 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, Q9 V; G  A  n& i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ a, k# z4 D8 ]1 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 U# l5 A# M/ Y1 N6 a/ @, l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" D* P& L- V5 K' ~" m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! F  c, i- z3 ^0 r) I8 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! e3 y) f# r- d3 r1 ^" S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 x6 }% k9 B, d9 A4 V8 {: U$ z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ D8 T* F- A3 P. N5 g" Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ X7 I6 M5 Q3 G1 ^0 c( o7 d; Z6 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 q9 {) r4 g4 M* C6 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ J" |5 K3 y; I2 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 c+ ~3 g2 t) A& l+ f- s8 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) O% F4 O$ `1 B) ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 [$ d4 \9 o+ x/ Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 x; m1 B1 z; Q1 X9 u" h' B# j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 N( V3 A+ }* F+ f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 |8 U- l/ u- I8 U, e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 i( i2 Z9 `$ J* q' S& |/ t" }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& O+ z: Y* k; O8 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; E8 k+ ~2 Z0 J7 y$ C7 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 E, @3 Q& |$ S6 o- v' t' T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. G1 Y/ u6 A4 E2 w3 ~& Y& F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# g; k7 a7 e0 v( R2 d4 p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 v; h7 \8 S- @* x9 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" q8 {$ k2 F/ ?3 k1 e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 K- j, @" ]) K  `* M我请你剖开它

1 p2 H5 U9 T$ d" D" K0 O6 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% i& W0 t0 l8 S5 Z/ n5 X- N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>