【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 p. I$ A) U% \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) C* a4 s1 a+ ]7 J! KSeeing the sky content with its love
5 K7 e# y) i  d9 K5 g. V" gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, \! F# b$ l! l7 ?You needn’t fear anything
, y6 I  ]; E) X- b5 t8 P% p8 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# k# s5 V9 N3 q1 b; i/ mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" _) z) P" ]1 c1 Y4 B# o' uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ i) ~0 n' n7 r) k+ vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 Q; K( |8 T- ]/ u" ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" g& a1 |3 Q* p/ t) |' W7 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 C9 C. g5 Z/ m; K3 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; m" C$ L2 Z) a) X7 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 I/ }/ X$ o8 Y( ~$ {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& l- T4 }/ I' [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 v+ D- T" l; Z$ I: T9 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; u" \5 Q' f5 t$ ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 M  p( F% T3 Z3 W# }( n0 r4 C( [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 Z; T; A/ Q+ c$ }- z0 c<P>你无需担心</P>
7 b+ ^2 w- K/ D1 C2 U, {8 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% B4 Z" I3 T( |8 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; q* F8 c$ n8 N; K' @, }' b6 v1 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  O1 Q/ b6 S& u' Z; X; g$ a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 i* ?: k, \. \/ R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" s4 l" k" x* Y" y9 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- W8 x$ @" ?8 E+ |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' f* _7 D3 n( ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 R* ?8 [% [( A4 y" J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- X1 f% y' Y' q+ _& e% v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 f4 P7 I- ^$ Q" B6 U% ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 L' d2 Y" Z5 @4 n' U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; W7 j, h  y1 o- Z9 V  a8 H* @5 q+ S' w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- p5 y$ ]  @# ~' m# I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" f* ]+ L1 ~: g8 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# Y% P+ J, Z; x' A% `1 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- g" m# O7 l% @5 H0 j" P& c  p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ?1 {* g  ~$ w3 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ E# w" o/ Y2 u( \9 q3 I- y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 w9 g/ O! a# R6 n8 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 F$ i4 _! c: n% m; v+ [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 l, h8 `& r% B3 f  {+ L. v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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4 d7 ^/ T; X' s1 n# Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>