【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; U0 s4 O9 V5 ~& E0 L  U- F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- ]/ G! O: N1 o, J7 N( @2 HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 e  M0 E( D) D+ AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 Y1 B& p/ K% Z8 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, D' b" W/ O* L3 }) cThe sky is happy down to its soul
( }+ {' j: `* B' \% l! }8 c% rWith the moon kissing it every night
0 y* f' p" p$ I1 J% X5 u" C, ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- r! p0 J6 L0 h/ j: O: Z4 IYou needn’t fear anything
' T" Y( }# R7 u( [* g% g5 l8 Q# LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 {0 a" N/ A; u/ ~+ h, tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 d2 o0 @( E+ T+ |, A6 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 R/ h$ H6 S- [) C7 PI want so much to see inside your heart
- N8 |# h$ T" @9 k  Z2 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ a1 c' ?" F* z$ R7 T& V) lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) f- B" L+ q* T! v9 E8 WI regret not dying
$ Q$ P; B# s' y- t4 A4 ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( v/ D4 w; C( ]  h( f/ [7 V; {; GWith such a tongue as yours,
* F3 i" I& W0 s; J( B4 q1 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 H0 M( G$ G4 m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! @( W6 c, B/ [$ e+ z" z% M. s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- B0 I; x' E) G: `3 ?0 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 Q' x. m3 Q" d; b, h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 A( c, g. Q9 b5 @* p) G6 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& P+ l- k: z2 Q/ L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ _$ q0 K" p+ f5 r- @0 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& j2 I) t" n! R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% P) x" f  J# E! }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- o8 s' F# m) E% p7 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* z3 D9 ~: R& i. w7 X5 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) Y$ q9 a; X' s. T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) U( f2 X3 E- E1 g$ V2 z% M) K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# ^8 c( p$ K7 o) m, R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" E: b. E& z3 D9 {& S5 v) j6 o5 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# n: M; k7 ]; ?* ]. e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( x. \! o& J2 M# \5 c  o3 f# I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# E& e9 z* d+ Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 P5 i" u" B$ q% p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* D% ~+ O0 y4 C# _' Y1 z4 A5 ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# @, y: |" m- W; K/ m8 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: e, w4 j0 a6 \. V0 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 g# D* g# Z( z3 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 h. ~& {9 E8 Q' c& f+ |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' N3 M! T5 |9 U9 y& P* B8 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' D3 a# T: n5 C( h! H3 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>