【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 O. }  A5 @5 b# V" K4 q# n$ _, Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- w6 p7 G" n4 ?: P! g# ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* k0 r) t8 K8 F! P0 I$ a5 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 F. ?% o% g+ ^+ Z4 T, X3 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. r' N4 v& M) lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& A: A1 a- t8 H5 p( A3 Q% \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 N' K& g' O: e7 P2 f" `* Q2 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 Y& _# K' M/ jI want so much to see inside your heart
: J2 Z/ g7 _1 r! q5 j. M7 l5 B7 gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: K, Q# `$ N% Z' D6 YI’m still filled with fear
* |  G/ `' Y- K  n  G4 J4 M* P& s# sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( b9 {7 s% s& {' ]: ?8 Y2 wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 h9 \! x6 Y0 Y. iWith such a tongue as yours,
4 ?4 F9 w7 U6 o1 u) y; [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( V: V2 W% k1 q) ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ p5 u' v$ ~2 o, FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 p5 _9 l% y3 f( N+ |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 s1 W2 G6 x9 r3 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- c! ~! h( Y4 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% E+ b3 m# x8 W- J: |0 w: R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, `: S8 d) [+ f  d: \" z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 I9 A: X4 M. C3 b  W, G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# M2 _  k! ]% D4 U# X, u* z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( x+ R0 j9 h/ T8 q8 l* X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 Q  E# Q) Q# [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" q1 O. ~, `  w, f5 e/ Q& X4 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ I% v" ^# P6 P0 O' P) C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 R5 P4 k4 v  A6 U( V* J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ l% e! z4 i- _' i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 m1 [0 g1 z( K$ Y# |9 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ E4 i' |9 \! v& c. L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 R9 x8 ]- K% M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 J  q( Q4 ~' Y3 [8 {: l0 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  @0 N9 G5 S  y9 q5 N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, h) U8 J: o3 b* b( a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 J- E$ D, g0 t8 g& w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( n" ?' y$ ]. t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ N" i: ^) q; e) M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) S1 I  u- X5 Q2 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ D( d# g: g  u5 @& ]7 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( Z- v! m, c/ P' c: q! j; M# P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, @9 Q& `! Q- ^/ |0 g  T) W& {/ _; E  U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 {4 G+ a; g* [. e% u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 v0 A6 H& g. Q8 r2 H. O' q( N& U我请你剖开它

0 _0 E  T; m9 s' w% Z' B" x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>