【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 h# p  F" \2 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 r/ Y" J, |4 b6 m: q: vWith the moon kissing it every night
2 C* O! Q4 I% N, X( \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ }1 @+ h9 |  x( f4 h; yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 N( L; B4 Y+ U. C* c4 q5 V4 CEvery other word you utter is love
. l' Z6 z$ G0 u, iI really want to know just how much you love me
% P* J) E5 X5 L( M3 tI love you I love you with all my heart
, o3 M% C4 W3 vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; L) S. @& F% H2 _8 B9 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( l; P2 @; {& \) q3 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 A$ W9 u7 v: T1 b" FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 I+ x1 U6 k4 I. J. G3 `. m! aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* V9 P1 u3 y1 ~2 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& d9 b0 e3 ^5 r) U/ @- S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; {4 b$ J$ j/ r( ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& L& K: i8 k% s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( `7 {  s4 a) k" k0 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% J6 c2 w2 _& G! f$ X; V; j! t! Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 G$ f# d$ W$ ~4 G3 [  p+ W  O# z' a% M<P>你无需担心</P>
' d$ I$ A$ G; X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ j" O! _% l3 B- \: m& q. u3 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. Y8 O) G+ ^& u) p1 `- O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 @, ]2 ^. b+ B* I: F5 _. v/ W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 t: |* g1 O8 h+ N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' o6 E, K, ~4 t  e, h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' Q( h' Y6 r# T" p  ?5 k+ N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  U; Q" a, |2 s1 U! J8 P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 e# d# |* v& v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% h# W8 B6 d7 g% k. P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: \. J- ~: Z& v# y( A5 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 f9 ~* ]6 I  f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- x" {; I6 j" Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; j% _) V, Z  Q' _/ Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ U+ ?! L" v: n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- K5 o3 u9 p2 D8 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: q2 B2 A2 Z" C" U, y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% N( A3 l5 Q% D: W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>