【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 ~& f7 }1 i1 \* u6 S% P& J" t+ ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 N5 v: q+ p4 K! }2 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% z5 K- a0 Z1 V. HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ E, [: X, G! iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 J( I1 ^$ t; W4 K3 h' I, JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 Y2 X( H8 V2 Y( lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% W5 H2 z+ l3 c# j, ^, I; q. PNothing can compare to my love
# I6 ?# k2 u; \) H( \' VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 R# }" `& h# \5 v4 X' M) [* i' ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 k. }  f. D$ X# BI want so much to see inside your heart
- |2 U, w: t: b  i/ N5 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, N2 G6 B+ z0 S! TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 j/ _# `; d" W# w) cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 Y' `: ~: h: y( ~4 T1 G% m9 S4 zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) M3 ?( B2 K" y9 g' ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ {  M1 B2 M, k  H5 H; RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) M" |, F% o, r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 a* r3 m9 a+ ~/ g) i+ w% x+ L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- G! X. a: B, v/ f/ u0 q6 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# Y% P1 @- ?" R! G8 }* M  h' h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. P8 A9 [, K/ k- H; L8 F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ N8 I! a- o: k3 g2 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 r% Z* A  @2 y+ B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 ?2 X- z' C+ ^& I" h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( Q/ b& W2 a* K0 z% d. t, x1 |0 [<P>你无需担心</P>
( A9 b' S  [9 }/ Z4 s: J  S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% `! C) `6 U$ b/ z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- v. }9 m- p* h% X# R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 I! X* y. d6 S" Z3 y  T: e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 t: t6 p! @* f7 W' D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 R4 C4 b4 [1 k2 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 _" ^+ m. q; P3 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! ]8 Y+ P# h2 p( H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 T% V* Y& y$ b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' a8 o1 F: O' d+ K7 @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ M5 [& H" i* A4 {8 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* k* t% }8 c( p' Z0 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, w) G% B9 E5 H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  t" W: h0 L- S2 Z3 i* l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) j! [3 u3 w6 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! l, e% q& K2 R) W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, }8 G$ V2 m( e1 Y* {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' @* E4 Q& i3 ]* s' c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 @4 m0 j$ o! v2 S) V" b8 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* i% w. J* G6 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. z- O3 B; ?" }( k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 Z' q6 G% Y2 o. n# y, F0 F4 ]2 F# \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ b1 I: B2 W% h6 Q8 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>