【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  \, o4 V. T( A$ ~" l- J# uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  f1 x  r+ x; yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 W( M' s3 `% J: f# bYou needn’t fear anything
% b/ S; U; d' T) u: n0 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ N( [+ x: U1 z" E( ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 R4 D# X8 l) o. l* lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* R- L3 x* L* V9 h. T( A- M  y9 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, l7 {- r7 F$ MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 n' ]7 j* p; {& R! jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( Z2 P$ }' W2 E7 J8 f1 m9 o1 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" ]" Z2 `- A* ]+ B% P' H3 |9 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  s, U# H! @8 H. d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 L! A# \" h; z/ k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 G( o) p  Q* T! e8 e7 X2 Z! ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 W. @7 _% i: }; \) |4 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 p9 ~6 B( x  Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- s) i) n) s1 M1 H4 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ D5 n9 s$ r0 P6 _6 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ j# z) h- Q! M- b0 `$ N8 _, T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 _& k) L, j6 @8 e2 E0 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- X6 J# m  k8 f( \; g& M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 T, m/ {2 I: ~3 a! |# j0 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  a8 U$ {2 k2 ~, Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 b7 O! V$ q% Q) E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ x5 ~, ^' g+ N6 k1 {9 |# x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 B0 o! f! G/ s- H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 a; I4 N% q$ ~- w0 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 R: u( [7 ?# A" E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- U/ l6 c( G" Q  `% i6 ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 g$ w, u+ m& a( T& i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: P: H# b. `( t; z: Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 F: t' @8 s& X  M+ v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! R2 r2 O3 V3 `( X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 b6 t' ~! I+ g0 k+ t0 G8 U! C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. D; e+ V9 I2 m+ h- J7 U2 V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. U- v$ Q' R7 Q& g; p" x3 c; C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: ^+ ^- m" H# U7 u$ t( j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* G8 W, O, r' m6 S$ T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ f; v/ ~( U+ T6 X+ \  o8 K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 r6 a' ]( a( U2 \2 b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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: _' A' e4 E6 O  F: w5 \! S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>