【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% ^) B5 a: Q2 F) b. T) jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# }! t5 U; ?1 \# Q- {) R5 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 |  P, z5 Z; |( M+ tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, j# o# S5 t) a) {. `! \6 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 `/ N1 b( T* HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* b7 m1 o9 J3 D6 b0 W3 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ {9 s" F" f% y& {; t+ NI want so much to see inside your heart
1 g5 j+ Y1 G4 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# v0 H( M- B3 R  D+ @# G5 EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 ^3 f$ e( j4 a0 V9 _7 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; H5 M0 w) L. Z5 E$ q' W' o; b+ x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" w3 F5 O* p+ C, [( ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 O, ^: }' X' S: D! R7 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 C5 |5 [% u+ Q% c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 }1 D7 k* B: m9 U9 r9 [. L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 f$ E4 Y' k( ?- P- o. n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 r. }; b4 S' ^, M7 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( m/ T6 A" k& ~. I" B1 B' [7 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 Q5 K# i) ?. O" T7 R+ y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 A, j+ @. T2 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 f! K% a4 `- l1 F$ C( u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. l- E- w1 c9 f$ g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. [& w' M1 Y% T0 k% B! x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 e& K" [% ^  r! ]+ l! i4 ~2 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ O; ]* g" s; ^  W- q" L8 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, L% o  U. W1 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; S3 a4 c2 w, V- U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  o* S1 _; w; e- X. U2 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 Z% d+ Y8 m! S1 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! k; j+ [, a% S$ V: s3 f" S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 w4 J. p0 j5 L7 i1 q  S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, |5 n6 V4 O9 \  a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 E% h( V* k4 w- Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- l' F. N$ O: h" y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 ]2 M1 b, m% O* H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; |- f% z, }; Q& O* O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 D: l2 M: j6 m5 o. e( _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 B' ]+ o8 o# W) D% X2 b7 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; G/ i/ h% }9 Q; m, q1 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ T8 K9 l* n  p4 i, b7 {/ W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 _1 {- Y  r6 g6 F! a& x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

! v6 u$ Z' T5 q- j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>