【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' T$ V% a# J3 ]3 n+ V歌词我附在后面。
+ m" U9 V& n- {/ t+ PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 W! ?8 {7 S3 H1 ~7 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& J+ f8 }. y0 n; h7 Y0 R3 }' i% vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ _( w2 a7 z+ TWith the moon kissing it every night
( M+ e1 Z# X7 L" V  d; e7 iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: h8 F# B+ k: i# G$ m8 U3 y' gYou needn’t fear anything
7 j: i4 K4 n8 |& DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 r" J! r, g  x: c! ^4 \I really want to know just how much you love me
* e4 H5 R3 G9 U( J9 w0 gI love you I love you with all my heart
# v1 G8 j- r7 n1 \- Y& DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- f. M; R- G/ I( bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 N, n0 Z1 U. X4 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 ?' b, b5 p- {' M2 |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& [2 P* \$ i5 P2 s* WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* l9 _7 G; A$ J# B  \+ xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 N/ `; Y8 {$ F% G  FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 \& {, Y! V5 P: P: a; n* d8 R& ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 k7 W% W2 o0 v% Q2 a) N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ ~/ S9 j. K1 ^$ X) B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# H3 S4 O' b2 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, z) o( T1 U- b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 m& m/ Q8 c! V3 N( N3 Y( w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ @3 Q3 [8 l  z& ?" w) s8 o# y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 }4 R! K& U9 T# |& h. ~( U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  z& I! K! i2 n! p% Z8 s- @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 U7 ]% R. ^( O" a, L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 a% M) d- L% d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ o# |/ B3 P- V( b: O4 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" C8 [" Y! F6 D. C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ R) v9 i0 j: l* Y! Q9 l% X, u) f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: }0 }  `1 R' F% ~5 W9 z4 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 F  y- i! i$ b. G# h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ b' {! M6 Z+ a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 M$ |6 ~  H# U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 l1 O5 q& h. J6 n9 n$ H; r6 n* a( c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. S- X) H9 P% d7 ?: r$ ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 w* l" T% ]* ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% l. r1 B2 G( P2 D- {' v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( }! I. L! d- h6 K. l* I4 a! D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ i6 n$ w$ o2 Y4 d' a& I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 X4 I" z8 n+ r! }0 g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- Y; A" b( ^1 Y! n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ]) D8 ~" _  E$ `3 D) C7 x2 Q* ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  [# k; U; `# d) F我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>