【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 t" x2 h2 Y4 B" ~2 J4 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 S) u8 d* D8 X8 c) m; `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 M) }8 N- N' M# W8 t2 x/ X8 F* H9 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, P* c" Z; f$ c+ a7 W+ m% \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! x6 n  u9 D: `3 B2 LYou needn’t fear anything
9 n/ ?8 k" g! M" |$ LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' u; H: }2 `8 d" I8 ?: Y& {% [' A2 F& dEvery other word you utter is love
+ ]* y& c- H# |  L: gI really want to know just how much you love me
$ `* p& @/ G1 U. iI love you I love you with all my heart
5 \- z) z1 |$ d" j5 G( C' yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 n' j1 h0 g* a5 g. J  eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ E( G2 _& f" r& X$ c/ `+ BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* i. T3 T3 u/ gI’m still filled with fear
% Z. ?2 r1 C; e, QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ e3 G$ _. I3 w& m1 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 p! E- k1 \8 p1 t; P+ t; c- _2 s- f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ _% Y* H  n) a$ F( m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 K/ G3 E. ^- J; v) K2 o" O4 Y5 j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ m# R0 m) }, X* N7 O- `& Q! W! Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* }; m# ~6 V, g3 U: N+ C& j5 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 L. t  q) X; n# ?- l& [/ V  M* G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" K, s8 J& H( r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 o9 ?' N! D2 c, N# A2 {( w0 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; n5 I8 ?( U! w: `3 i& i+ T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) X- P# b1 y( e$ g" T- ^- k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; z$ H# H% j$ t; _2 N# N& {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& L5 C; n2 U6 p5 G1 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 U/ R/ ~$ J2 T' X3 p/ p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ k0 B! ?0 ^6 @, I* F$ p$ J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* a: P1 W) v4 x# l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 N) f. N- ?3 m( _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ j# e! [/ j0 S1 J) ^1 I) w( d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 z7 x! ~& l. y0 h& ]2 D7 a# r$ m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  }* Q. k4 i* C' f5 j9 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
: V) a6 b% x4 R! J/ O9 {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* V2 u5 a) S& @% o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" S( N3 r3 R" D5 }  S( }9 J9 T9 ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# s4 ^4 A; A- j9 X$ q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* y/ H1 w9 b1 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; J# H3 g' i  N; s, u) @: I. h1 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ u0 v9 L! Z$ s0 m4 a$ M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ v8 I& O  ^3 y  y: _& a1 \. V1 E: `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 ]" I$ m! l$ y6 d' Y: t' o2 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>