【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* `1 P& M  c! V% i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ Y  s& V0 P1 I& h/ H; \7 CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! s# e# V( Y) UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" q: f" y& v1 U, XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, i, N& N: q& \/ ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 H# i3 U( K4 U7 m; _  l9 f! A7 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 O! v% q3 ]2 I3 \) aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 |3 _1 Y& ?5 D; d7 T5 g, QI’m still filled with fear
1 E6 r7 |3 \+ cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  Q' Q" I; x: |, fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& l$ O' F& Y8 L  z  GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 z1 O) @/ ]. m" `$ t; `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# d4 c. L. A2 n+ u& Z& M6 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 g! M( _$ M4 x. y9 k) N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 a6 s8 s( E$ X& J. t. S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. ?6 R/ ~% |3 E9 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 n! V0 z$ a" m$ c2 k5 _  Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" ~% ^  t. W$ X, @+ \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 X/ ]% N) c/ l( N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 D: Q0 [  m0 s( r# o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: _, b1 B, X( g3 h* b<P>你无需担心</P>
# p0 k" n/ X( N" D9 E! T  S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 p' d, p, |8 ~6 |& t% Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, r* q- j* w  A5 S, ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 \: }: H8 N& K( c# M, ~( R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! \% l$ L6 @- ~2 g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 {2 b  a5 J+ C1 c6 I4 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& j% ?, ^8 _  `$ h) B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% v. r$ W7 V0 [% l( y, j- V2 q' J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 _3 ?, |, T/ a  a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 K' O/ X. S; c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ M9 h0 l3 m) Z2 D# c* z  S& [  _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' j' q8 H6 s' H0 P; V1 d( n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# h8 D3 _& |% o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' v" l' F: A( V  m2 A5 c- T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ Q% ]1 O, m$ v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: Y; H3 Q" R/ m& A  B' p2 \: ?% ]3 e$ i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ a+ B9 K; o& ~3 q0 C# y" B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 q% y6 V, C" @9 o) ~& [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* ^: R$ U& z5 w) Q: C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; Y) F5 X4 Y% y& V6 ^' _( k& @' ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 n- c5 `8 W, b9 {8 X% z/ I* D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ [# i5 ]8 S5 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; O1 z8 n/ i/ b7 q6 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# G1 \! }* Z0 f' Y6 m  y: T我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>