【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, ~6 ]1 m4 p& W歌词我附在后面。
, S) l  W3 t3 g  p7 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  v- x: f% g2 J9 ]6 M0 i! \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 }$ i6 `9 ?' Z8 N$ f/ GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) Q5 c. d; n% x: Q9 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ L# Q% k$ g( {( TEvery other word you utter is love
* \4 \! h: E& }2 DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 M5 |: e; f1 t4 kNothing can compare to my love
* d. b" O; I3 Y+ T( @% d" s- yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( g# q+ l: ]# KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# H7 f+ v6 u& s; O/ r: PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) @) I  I4 p, w4 IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 B: A) [2 b  d0 ?9 Q; yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, g  s; J0 U, ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. B2 l/ T5 c5 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) q3 V& J/ I, O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- K3 A  f8 `4 z. }6 H$ L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! Z( y( A- y( h/ X4 e+ j0 L4 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) x, D- d& X: o& l! z$ H" _! G6 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% a' o6 G* a2 `+ _& n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, ?3 I0 N+ |4 O; h, Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 U7 k; t- H9 D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. U0 I- k+ f/ @& |: P) f. Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 u; E) U/ h& T2 m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; B# V! n( m1 U) |1 K% D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# C3 H: \- f3 v" ?6 R+ i/ o) f. `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 l: u) W, f0 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 I: R5 @: H  c: g* `0 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  c4 ^% B0 A0 C8 r' x" R- l, _3 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- Y$ N* d" P  |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 U8 o5 [* K. v, k- n+ U4 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( N- M* w6 D- u# j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 \" b* K3 _( m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' z; v7 v& a, {( {/ a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 e; P% l8 o) W2 S+ k* D* i$ ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: h! x. v* v, s1 ]- U' v# X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ?7 Y' J) G4 G5 ^2 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 u; m6 @! i1 n* f1 d7 y% q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" n2 T8 [2 M5 ?% V4 A& [& ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* l. m6 D+ ~$ b' T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>