【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( Z6 Y2 K; u2 _% XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 {, F! M' H& x* ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ x6 L! b" C3 E1 n# XSeeing the sky content with its love
5 r3 F7 t. k: s- N  bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: j1 s7 o  K7 |0 y/ pYou needn’t fear anything
7 K" i2 V  w0 n8 Y; \8 \. AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 \4 }8 H. W) |; h( {5 I' MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* o! k# E; W  f; TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! F8 D7 F+ n6 C( g$ c4 o7 J# ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: N4 G! Q, J) k$ R6 R0 r+ s% k" xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 K& W7 ]' C# ^6 i/ s" W( ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! j, e% K4 }8 |: |" Z" K1 u/ v' {7 _* Y0 ~I regret not dying
" U# M- T- j! Q( w. II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 ^# c' A/ k2 y* R, ^" ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; U0 ?' O7 N: ], k$ LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- ^* Y: H7 t2 \. Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% I% @6 T2 c4 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  C2 X( ~8 U" ?) o. ?; r! \+ q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 P4 J% A9 ]8 e! Y; |* P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  [! ]& c, _* P3 u. m/ N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. a0 y& z" }* l6 q7 K% a0 Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 z4 Q5 b; w; q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: r- J4 V& E1 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' T0 d3 ]+ j. C! Y( ?$ R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 }1 u& y/ N" O/ Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- h7 U/ S4 f8 g/ Y# K$ O( v2 g6 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! L+ G9 V" A* j: H" Q. k) J/ h/ @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! k0 x8 l# V, h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 Y: Y- N5 a+ w- Q- ^8 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; c' H1 o+ Q6 ]" r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 J- e9 [+ V5 @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: f6 a( I5 O& k( W3 M  d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- h. y  L+ V8 {" E, L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 o. X) A' }: R, W/ z<P>I regret not dying</P>
. u& ^) t) Z9 N1 w4 }. x" t1 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 ~+ g# n8 }, N9 ?2 \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 {* ?  Z2 {1 z% x" Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( S& p# x0 p5 u) F% [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" x5 B" g. e0 U; w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. [, Z8 A# o( ~$ {( R我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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