【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# }% ~& d  U) H% vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ M' O& R* q( |9 c, @: KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 O' b; {$ x# [$ QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. t# }; t: @5 b2 jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* w2 j  S4 B! c( M  FYou needn’t fear anything
) M+ `2 n5 i6 V( O* ~6 x. iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 L: y" Q! \! Z: p9 W$ tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, c5 o0 i4 `+ M5 L# k+ I( HNothing can compare to my love
' w0 R  M( h2 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 l' H+ e  ]) x0 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 }# a, q; u* B2 B: @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# x# ^6 s" \% ^1 v. k" x: M' w4 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: z! r3 J/ l$ Y5 S# DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; `  B  |$ T- g/ S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% P" ~2 J# \- q7 k# \" M( g5 D( |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 _: ]7 o3 b, ?/ j1 ?2 d/ d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 x# m( X9 ?. q6 a7 s/ T9 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' P" r; z7 l$ k  B/ Z" w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 A# T+ p+ x# s  Q( j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* S; c" [& w4 l4 y4 |; P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, k6 f/ p2 e& g/ c6 b+ U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 \" N3 C6 R) ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" m  M  k" f' ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 l1 g' I' y; Y7 a+ s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( D3 y+ _' G) j" z' H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 J: m3 @% c) d" C. O7 T5 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( s* R# a8 S  N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" I3 ?0 T, {+ _8 D4 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# F2 @5 R  S, a, n, j! `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ X& b* P& p2 |( \- I+ s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ H" P/ @$ M+ S5 ^. x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) g5 U' F( s9 i# Q: x) \- x3 a! H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; E) M8 i# v/ z5 L2 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. F+ x: T7 a" I5 S/ \6 @0 h  t. v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' i& C8 d2 j, m0 F9 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ S4 h" a& ?3 F( O' D! m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; p: u( r) o, N# J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ^9 M0 _* t. ?* f  h  [. r5 d/ y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>