【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 T. Z- I6 w4 x( i# KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 |/ n' y% S! ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% E2 b" k! |6 e# V/ v/ C2 c' _( kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 N* i' @# N6 G& c; F3 vSeeing the sky content with its love
+ R  D4 d( P3 O9 h3 u3 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 o, f' \) p$ }- i$ mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: H# m# ^- e! f; r; t! D4 W; D( LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% L) b" w( D3 O2 ~$ o% WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- Y+ S) R+ Q. m! g" O) g: eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 v' ^( }. u) q6 s: ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 O! G5 V; ~  ~: l. Y7 q) i9 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 N* J5 }2 H' J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' Z7 I. h: r& t% M1 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 e3 a' h+ d% {, Q. c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# P1 Q' c/ ^: V# {% S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- l) X, R+ Y  F" q' q6 O1 L5 j3 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( |  t3 L8 \- Q1 Y. c. l6 L<P>你无需担心</P>
; a1 m1 V9 i' s2 d0 e+ ]4 o. d$ T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 l# O, f6 j' M$ p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( P& j$ |. i6 P, K) B% F. n- v" n3 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 Q4 W% J+ g; `0 {" W; q  d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ C0 X$ [  l7 J* h8 ~; f- L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* T% N/ v% c) p" I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 U" ]8 H5 @, a% S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# _" P) n: X- Q6 R- X- e6 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; I' w7 @  U3 l% Z: \: A$ v  J& x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 S# l9 v# V9 P) j" ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# k7 B7 [9 _; }  e" e' X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% h9 {9 r0 B! x4 g' n4 W- u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ u& f- c9 W/ U) U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! V+ m* V9 k8 t8 @, j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! t* m  V0 b1 T  c% L( @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>