【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* N3 I5 Q7 z/ F# L/ AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 `4 e6 M* \5 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 q( S0 H1 f. `* j: {% g. A5 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 N6 |: A; O, ?  A% `9 b. uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& r" V0 `- O  U. k* R0 I7 l5 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: [0 f3 ?4 d- i0 M: ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. G1 h" [+ e' l& |9 D0 XNothing can compare to my love
. b, W+ P/ g* L3 G" {) KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 O; m. L- z1 g& {" \4 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" X6 {+ k: {6 e$ _" @I’m still filled with fear
" }( O. a# Z& U4 n) M% gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* v0 y; k% Y: K5 z+ X" Z" {% O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# N1 y* R2 L: Y# v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 ]( |; n0 S/ ~/ }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 {- j% S. c& i: m  n6 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% d: x9 w% y! ?5 G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 r- R% C7 \/ }) f; n2 p& `. C; T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" ]# K* D& f9 Q; o0 \9 @' R) c5 q3 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 `9 y1 b% f6 i+ g( g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( _7 \' M) F* R, k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: }3 g- y: `' x) \# I. ^) m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! w2 z9 ]% ~, {# }5 t* `3 t1 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 j' w  N. ~8 _0 O2 R+ Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 A! M3 z+ h4 l' `. l/ E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ \7 d5 z$ ?( B) A$ Z; f$ ~1 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- ]/ ?) r$ c9 E4 t2 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! I' o+ S( }, Q$ [  m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; _4 |6 h# I) E, k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% d/ w! H1 ^+ C+ w4 \8 |; c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 ]/ J* X0 w" A( R: E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ A2 g. B) c4 y# A# z5 T3 w" a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 K. v: `3 L3 K9 w6 Z, _8 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ o; y, n6 }  l$ T5 z% ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. o4 q' y' q) A( D2 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 D8 s2 q1 D0 U: Z( k. L) }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% P5 |7 n% B6 ^& d5 W1 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% h- W1 a# Y3 \! L2 F6 O4 k$ v5 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" L" R2 A+ @# {, H& v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 V# f. p$ v3 S" d) V9 x8 R0 d& l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>