【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. t8 [. o) y4 @8 E. p0 m2 W* S# a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ {3 P7 ~* O- O3 F* b' [1 p0 }; uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( Y) T9 u7 E5 q! w; {0 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 g/ l) u0 s9 x! S, ]0 q  [With the moon kissing it every night
( W3 p' s8 N7 w1 j6 NSeeing the sky content with its love
' r# r; `/ {/ I$ C  IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  s5 f( K# {' O# J- yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 g  Q2 N  j: w- ~0 jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! X3 v7 N1 \( N% S. WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 _0 V' p$ H- m) E& K8 sI want so much to see inside your heart
! _, _( ]/ N* c1 p* mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' F* P* o# R3 P  l# L/ F* y8 MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% g/ g' M6 D6 d! D! sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ E& ~4 D9 b7 i+ o  u2 d2 LWith such a tongue as yours,
7 u5 ^1 M# S- v* o) q  e& b+ d3 \3 {! jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# \* |0 T; G3 v& Z, YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 k/ ~: f8 D; a3 ]3 H$ ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 ?+ Z0 t% n0 |" b$ K5 m8 S2 v7 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; v9 T0 v* l4 D* g5 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 B4 f" a0 Z2 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 Z; v2 I& g- k. p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! M( T. q6 R$ b$ s# C! \; f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( b- ]+ O9 d5 g6 x. @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! c6 c# _4 }( [) ~- t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ Q; O8 Q% }1 w2 e. M) G' W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 i: _' a! n5 j# T5 C0 H9 g% F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ \: e# [1 P# T$ ^; i, W; G* g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: V9 b% ?; d% A* x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ i& @. U- O# X- p3 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 N5 g" e  f5 g  K6 b" C6 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- ^* w- u) V  U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ e: m# {8 F2 g4 C" A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ ]8 K- M& \; ?7 r/ Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 [! T3 O; f) Y' n2 e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; x) O' P* X/ g! X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; V7 ]4 V& t# K, i$ s1 w* I: o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ C; Z. y' s" |4 Z3 |! A+ w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  q' \8 R( q" v1 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 ^' P2 U! R* N3 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( D; G( g. l5 Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% P, W4 ?. Y- V+ \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
  u4 z- u7 R) x( h$ b3 ^
! X2 c& T- K+ W7 W* ?6 @我请你剖开它
8 @# i+ A) T* n+ G5 [8 j5 }; I/ K
; V8 q8 _6 v, Q3 A1 P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. R9 F; [8 p8 k+ {0 j1 y1 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>