【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ A6 T1 F: [, j( s. y5 D. h1 d' z, D( vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 v  {) y' X& O  i/ G/ N4 \! e3 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 V/ p+ g. K$ V; [- `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 Y; ^/ I9 i; W4 U9 I) h* ], kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% b+ s: p6 O- T! F4 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' L, b; l- _4 ~- _8 V& `I really want to know just how much you love me
6 }! `8 A$ `2 q& F7 Z! UI love you I love you with all my heart
3 a( C3 C5 A9 d# ]0 P) zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# ^) Q+ J, R& LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! [3 s+ p4 }  _; z4 P! QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: F- U2 }. E, {% V8 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* J+ L4 R7 q& ^! S( V+ }2 w6 BWith such a tongue as yours,
- r" p* w% I/ X  K. Q6 |' y* S0 {: Q0 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" t- H9 }, y; L' ~/ Z2 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" x% a, J2 ^: H8 L1 y) ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 ?3 n1 \0 ?. V7 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, }  \) T+ S, I' C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" d0 N7 @) y8 x' @2 q: K( z2 w, Z6 k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 A4 F5 R) K7 i& Y6 Q3 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: `0 Y3 T5 `7 _5 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ H" Q+ \2 U9 z6 i+ y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 P3 f' {$ e: |& l2 h; B, L! y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" D; q' z/ O/ k; ]  }9 w& [! `<P>你无需担心</P>
0 M* W1 }3 w( ^" Z! N" V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 D9 S0 h& q( S4 ~1 ?4 x$ e0 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* e/ v* u4 |4 ~( ]: r0 g+ R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* ^- o8 q8 q% M& Q3 i5 v4 O3 P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 G+ U. t- T" b% m. h2 r$ {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: d  C% h- k% {4 E; b; G. C6 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 g& L& `- s- b& q' L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* a$ r: Q" }) n1 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: n1 t  ^1 ^8 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ ?; ]9 G' O) c2 X( @" S& h& f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ h& g# y4 D2 [& i3 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 U8 P- ~/ `7 I( k. R9 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ e7 w2 R7 O: L" J0 t! A% T+ W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; U6 c) e+ o0 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 l8 e% s1 \, j. m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, ?( v# h9 e6 P! f  Q7 i9 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& O2 Z" r, S! u, O$ i我请你剖开它

5 M- U( I3 O8 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>