【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* R; f2 W) \; l- E  h9 H- `歌词我附在后面。
$ ^8 S0 ~( o5 i. E$ _% N/ [The moonlight is shining brightly,
! s( i  X' X: o: T. Z/ `% b: B4 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; W6 q: o$ }& U7 T- X' m, W. ]/ bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# y6 U' a- s& @+ d! YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* T$ R, r; K1 O- F' b; G2 a; e/ f9 m) PSeeing the sky content with its love
9 U* {" R: d5 v1 _2 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 ?: V1 Y# ~, ^9 J' i7 ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! f2 s( j5 |+ ?; P5 pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 {$ [5 \! l. c( n8 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) D# M# G7 G& {$ p- P$ }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! |6 }. M1 }- M2 ~9 O! f2 \3 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ k: h8 b8 H5 b; cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- M8 f- l$ B2 b" @- D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, _7 v( _, b* ]' B" N/ ?4 J- \8 v4 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* P: I) l$ R5 i) b( p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( a# {+ s. d! M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, m8 C( s& i  v! z5 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 N2 K+ u5 u' ^, v* Q. |# U: q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, T( g4 p3 }' M) e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( i8 }; _" q7 e# N4 H) a1 j<P>你无需担心</P>
% M/ e5 M, D  m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& z, \" a2 D( i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  V3 |3 e, F2 T% E. o  x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 m4 ~4 O4 }: u) F1 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& q: H4 j$ s: [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& k: q$ f( B. Q0 k9 Y9 ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; G" i) M/ P: f0 s! \0 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: X5 g# p! H  D. q" K; ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: I( l1 f  w, d- H# R+ J0 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 B0 n+ |0 B2 ~, M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" {* p: [% X/ f4 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 ~" d; w8 j* s- p  t: A5 `1 a7 p& {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  s. g6 \0 C7 r9 ]. w* \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 v- A% p: P7 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ V# {# S9 \/ f! v* z4 g( P<P>I regret not dying</P>
, I, W0 r: H  ?$ U% U) V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  j) P# F0 Y, h# ]9 O' w. b( _; Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" b' T$ L5 h3 R! M, y( X9 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; z' q9 \6 V( }. `. z% M- r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. L1 ?5 M1 Z2 I, I1 w* p1 H- i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>