【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ e* j& @( ~; Z; j' u1 R: H, Y5 r歌词我附在后面。
1 d1 ]# h1 T$ ~# cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' k& ?' {* S( D) }# EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! Z6 S* S' F  r1 b/ q0 M( W( UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 W2 D  D3 K7 c$ L: ]6 O; CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 C3 O: L& ?4 _) A- m# ]) D" \The sky is happy down to its soul
; R1 X. |3 ?) J8 Q) u2 Y, {) HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& C8 F, O5 S) a! ~- ~8 D& r0 dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! T6 a6 F& p0 Z& O- z/ ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 C+ D% s. f4 E8 n& n5 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" g; i7 S0 o3 {1 ]3 w! j$ \5 RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* L# X9 b' `' {% J! _: LI regret not dying
$ ^) |7 Z$ K, x. F, D& YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 ^' k9 o# S+ @, i& t# XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 S( @% m4 h9 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% V5 O( L* v6 g: D( Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( S6 _# B( b0 k/ g3 n4 m+ }5 S* P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& D/ ~) ^5 v2 q9 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: C% Q5 |% p$ m& t6 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. Q! X( e7 p2 E4 }5 N! k# r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 O$ G1 v/ u0 L/ f+ p7 \/ g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! [* Q: u9 a0 S. U9 O" B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! A5 u& P2 u  G) M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' ]5 }1 z) J) I8 b8 W% |3 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 E4 r" W: b/ _5 v* B7 U7 @- j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 N2 k; d. B. i  B! X5 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ L: n# v) e, l9 u6 T* S4 L/ B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, W0 Q$ v( N! m. B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 M2 h* _0 J. T8 e3 |$ y$ D' ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 H) E- {3 `: a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. w% U0 L& n! i1 @& A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" c' M/ m' ^' M" w, f/ |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 y9 s; i# I! [: t: ~# H- D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 E" j5 q5 u% J# q0 Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) M- n* q( R2 l& G( Y* C0 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& _5 a9 y/ J1 D% R* z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 b; ~/ Q6 y0 B' K& v0 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! l3 z( M% T. _  G( x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ E3 Q$ }" ]8 T6 F! q6 K2 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ t+ D9 C- N, a2 N* B/ K; y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 m3 p1 l- a# d% m! j3 Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- J6 k- f8 C$ ^) i+ @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! P8 w: k7 Y- |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# y$ o7 p/ Y2 h+ e3 G' \) m: T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>