【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) b3 m6 q! x0 T. b- E歌词我附在后面。
. U9 h( F0 I! _" DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' k! v5 \2 z3 _9 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 f% [* O* `  S: \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; _! f  C9 A. G" f/ z. ?, }) oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! R" Y# a; ~! _  F5 vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 R( B% \% E3 }) _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ i# g1 h- a0 L- a; TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ L; U! g7 @+ {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 m0 h2 }) O6 _& {7 A% R) T5 x% [; K* ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 e0 _. a9 j/ R; m( i4 d6 }% oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, t! b+ x' C; a; k; F# Z; `, B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 K, L( B( M6 ]( J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, A6 P( _6 }! K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 V" w  ~1 a4 O' M# c2 ?( q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 T! Q* S0 o5 p: X" K  {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ n1 Y5 I9 s' [% i. W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, ~. r& c/ V4 I# q( g, S4 }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 }' Y: U/ T8 l6 @+ u) _& p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( s/ l7 b' z' K' [7 R+ ]6 x0 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 _  a$ x! v) S- S% n3 T<P>你无需担心</P>
( S; P1 ]# h: B: m) R) q& O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% m& g' i. \6 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% F" E7 J% |7 S6 ~0 A; ]0 e8 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: E& |  h' F& j3 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 O6 _5 C: F4 F5 \& Z! T4 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% c7 V8 Q5 E! C- m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" K; ~3 C) X5 ^2 c; U1 Z% }3 t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 f0 q4 R: x& m2 a0 _% H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, i5 l7 [0 x- G# U  u: [# ~/ D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 z4 a; W+ E! G) C& h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 M/ i# D/ ]0 t4 i. ~# o+ q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, x% w( K2 e6 R, A! B5 `- N1 L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 j4 v2 y. z2 G) k! T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 ^! L/ ?7 I/ o9 ^% e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ W' M, I7 U( E- F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( I0 d# W/ \* r% z. A7 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% O  _  p9 b/ h) e2 Z- k4 A+ X: M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; w; O* \% p7 H9 T$ a) S8 n8 d( [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. }/ k0 t9 k! N: x- A" U我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>