【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 d0 I+ }& M+ L( ~/ m9 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' w' m! d0 p/ G' g, pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) T8 y# ?( g  i% I( A2 H& p% N+ lThe sky is happy down to its soul
- }: ^# Z; n+ pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 ^& G5 \% |" c9 _* _( K7 vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( S+ c, n4 n4 C( B8 v* ~5 fNothing can compare to my love
/ C8 z- B  g* fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- T! e- ~' S2 e  E' D8 ]& m: nI want so much to see inside your heart
1 n* d/ Z( }, n5 M, e6 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 p" _5 {: u/ fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  O$ n2 k9 K5 c! x$ mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% s# T9 e* X- w" {6 c; T( gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( W. x" x) Y  D( L" Y+ [, q2 W: }- O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' W% D. ?, S) {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. z: G4 d% p9 u9 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) o$ g; e6 i2 F1 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( D6 e- ~, j* K2 J% n9 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 z0 p" O2 R- I, w  Q/ \: N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% @& h; H1 h& {" C- ^; j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& ?- Q& y& t2 s# p! D$ i# k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 S% V) z- ^9 X/ s/ l8 Z: _1 h, d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* k; J% T3 Q2 k$ S+ r3 j' P<P>你无需担心</P>
; [2 K* h# A* F2 U; p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" e! g# K; ^& B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- I3 l2 b* d, f) A/ d0 A9 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 l) v& A" b, b0 s! m/ [1 G0 F9 U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ u5 E8 U. G' y+ e4 P* o( H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ E- {& u0 H0 l3 O6 ~0 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ h/ ^) b( J4 e2 n/ v$ p& r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% R+ s" N& U" j! K# G3 i. v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 n- [2 W: ?9 M4 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 W0 D3 c, b2 m. }# p3 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 v( v" H1 _+ U& J* ^# f! n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% M2 K0 ?# E% L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* J( Z& q; z  R4 j7 e* }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 |6 [/ B5 a7 \8 D8 R1 E0 W7 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. E$ R4 T; o+ J' l1 a7 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" a; F4 g% @) l3 u" f! Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* w$ ]6 y1 u1 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 ]7 {2 r, `$ G( R5 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>