【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 N$ R, {, u) N1 x4 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( F4 _6 F+ C8 b' R: c' nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 S0 Y6 ]2 l% s4 E. BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% y- x( `) m" K; |/ ?: C7 m: pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' m  i+ C( z) WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 O, o8 v; ]4 P! NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& o' [, O% Q3 k3 H5 e. O& bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 F0 a5 f- {+ Z; J: i. h2 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 f+ ?7 P" W# [( j( M1 j: rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 D, j' y5 X' ]. H# @6 [1 E8 E6 oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  I& @0 B1 w. D  {: _$ E2 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& A# |* }0 y8 u* TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" u: b( l/ B2 \; Y% F: G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ |0 R& ]& r/ ~# M9 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: {' h& R2 Q% v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  h  N, t$ g  B" u4 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- o/ X$ E" W8 r3 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 a" L$ W# |/ N! r* m: M& b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 u* b. l& a% X- H/ A. Q) {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% E- a' P. d% _5 i' y+ w' t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  p; Z3 T) p( J: ^4 t4 G: a9 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ N' V0 a$ X( \$ ]3 w+ S; Z+ o" K- g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 }+ I3 {5 b  K6 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 P, s) S# t' n- v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 J$ o, `9 j+ T" g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ M6 q2 J# p% L. {" v6 k3 _0 M3 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 u2 M5 a5 v' C5 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 j# d1 `) [6 e) C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' {- ]- O3 ^. C9 J3 l% B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; p1 M9 F: i7 r/ J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 F) @0 l) Y8 ~0 t0 N3 b( G- z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 m8 k6 L2 \7 v- A0 x1 ?: g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ |6 B2 @1 x; J% p  F<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 F, v# m' Z  b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; I5 U5 D+ r! X8 [" [6 _, T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( m5 H" }0 h- \3 A* n6 p" t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 J6 D2 |! I! D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: b- t6 C( x2 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 s4 W3 b- z' N% B$ H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 E' p, G/ ~( [! K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) Z) D1 r' q# z% g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ p: f8 f" F! i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>