【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 A" V- v8 C1 C$ L1 L1 N- V' k" iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 \- _' J; b8 V: h6 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. \- S& C) x, ~* z" N: nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ z2 n0 g4 G$ P- f* p% c" yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 `1 m' e* T9 n( R% F4 C, ?. n* Z. ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. e( y5 v6 S, _/ D, lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ U! ]  J" a( ~# uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: n# Q: i4 Q& e$ p1 N- PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 G  U4 K0 S% |/ U" p6 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) |: @6 W  L6 h& k# Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ J& F, a! p7 d. w! H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 c% I; N& e3 f( r, ^7 L) U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 E" v' q5 i9 P: U% x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# L: x8 b) C6 y! T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ A+ k  ?1 o; {) P. E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ i' \' E1 U: c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 Y; `' K, ]* a8 o' f$ h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( c) R/ R/ Y0 p9 T# G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' ]2 m$ m- Q% ~: T- ^: Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 T- s5 M$ D" Y' M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ U; H" \% x( ~6 m  `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( M) d2 ]# e, |' J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& d& k" S% e# d& h4 k5 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( M3 O& g2 m( J2 D' q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  |: C- b: I. v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 g* E# ~% T! W! s; G4 B; R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ k5 h! L/ q/ f- H. j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 Q. z. N/ \  C3 B# |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- [" u" F& P3 P/ S. X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. u, c* p1 c, X7 y7 R8 I: N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ?: I5 a  x2 D" c, ]" E, C( q9 N$ O4 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. `; C! _  O, O8 B# r1 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" T7 V. R: C" |. D$ }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; y. r" |  t9 k/ Y. G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ a% b, a* U3 O0 V1 E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 G) f. B. {& G$ U5 F3 G5 k9 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ j$ Z: k' {" U7 x: Z* J+ c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 H% W# X$ j- ~# ?+ i0 ~, R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 O! h* S0 @2 n( m7 ~$ m3 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' w( s% V1 ?) l) {  [8 h' G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ V! R0 ]5 s+ e: Z/ A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>