【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 z6 t$ T5 q  ~) e歌词我附在后面。
9 D. J( Z) u' N4 S3 v7 d5 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  p" n4 x+ d; |* T& f% ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 {. N& H" T2 e+ xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: O2 W, D8 m  P6 O7 }4 i8 C4 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 v4 A  L. H( i( `/ J) |+ M6 @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 t7 i! c  k( s3 uNothing can compare to my love
: |# Y7 s7 [1 T) W" R! G& BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 |# z# n3 Z, z; O3 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 ^" S" ~# s4 H8 H1 K' W* xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% M( e' ^8 ^2 P+ fWith such a tongue as yours,
' N4 n; }# Z, H5 u9 Z$ CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 e2 |  P0 b' Z$ C( }) B1 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  \) g# P$ O' e7 ]: H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" X9 O9 _5 n" l. y/ |& q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- Q6 [* @* q4 b# d9 o, q1 ]) @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ w" L& L2 k. e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 Z8 K% ~7 Z' h$ g  m3 f2 P, o/ r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; x" s. p2 ~8 X  ?. o' K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 T- ]; T5 B& G0 ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 D) b6 _/ D3 b; f% j; y  x& \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; r' a" I' E( Y' u/ P6 v0 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& L* ?& F$ j- o' o$ y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; D- e1 e- |( y" d3 Q, I+ `' t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, Q* j! w/ ~$ f7 Y1 ^' d$ Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  f% J: N( S8 R) o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& r: n0 X# }  i# n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 x/ N5 |" e8 l/ S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 |: K6 h. m* ~% ^& S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 `/ n8 M- w3 G- F- C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 D! h5 W% Z+ z  T( ~4 j5 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: Z' Q& [' r/ }' {  m" a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- l# r1 g+ {+ l# z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 K  G& g& A8 ~, i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 S2 r* ^8 T3 o6 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>