【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 U7 e$ o$ f, c: |/ Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( e; n% r0 {4 P9 f7 d1 i) EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 Q  g& N) I. }$ Z' O+ L7 Q3 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 R3 J) u5 N- D  R! iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& r9 N8 l* }9 k% A, e2 F5 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* k/ |9 Z# x& _. P4 YYou needn’t fear anything
. z8 t. b% Z# J3 q' _; cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: z" ?/ a; G8 }' p! E6 i9 tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" }  W* P) c6 |8 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
& j/ d0 ]* C" U% |7 i; Q& CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* a2 U! x1 P; H. {- E- r' e& v7 H8 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 a# I, Q* G" i. n3 D7 UI regret not dying
! g3 d) @3 o7 L6 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 u5 ~& j$ ~' \% _6 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# `* S3 J4 t; Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! C5 v" {* p1 w1 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 W: Q& ?( J/ @+ T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 U; J) S% c  U7 {9 g: K- ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ c% O6 L, K4 s. ^! L, F! {. x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) t$ \9 Z; h5 _# f" f0 @8 c<P>你无需担心</P>
5 }5 ?5 ?/ \, S' _) O) }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 Y% ^# m4 |( ?& j+ W0 P9 `. B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 Y1 s* M( w7 h5 J( K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; ?# ~# o% S$ u; _4 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. _3 F7 S) d' W' D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 t$ y" P" h+ Z- H6 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ P9 C! y6 k5 Y! e4 e/ H" v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* ~7 ^9 }* u7 O7 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" p' i- }! O6 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Y/ s: P4 p3 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% @+ ^, B0 j9 p3 ^5 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 @! e- K& C; ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) Q  e3 Z, C) ]" {" q8 W0 q  T# @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 A8 ^2 F) J/ D$ [* \' ^, \, I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# w8 n# \) c" Y7 G4 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 s$ _6 {0 f: M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, E" Q" c6 m5 S+ H. ~9 S% S# l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. {$ n- H4 v) n. R9 L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% t. n9 C2 A5 H. K5 i1 J# M我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>