【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 |/ O5 D* f2 _7 O歌词我附在后面。
/ F  y+ |0 R1 a7 h) vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 L, a+ b( i5 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% _' d" g0 |4 v7 k$ t/ p( Y! cWith the moon kissing it every night
5 Z" y# M: U2 p% R, v8 m* PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 I8 q7 ?% v# E1 C9 c' mEvery other word you utter is love
9 ^' s$ r( o) W! U4 GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 y, w$ F5 ], V. T8 PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 Y1 A0 h3 O, y" S# V$ SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ N0 ^* }1 M$ H: mI’m still filled with fear
8 ?% f! c2 ?4 \8 ?/ i, @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# g0 t1 n( G; f* b. VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 v! \* _- T# N+ C$ EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 {8 F6 c+ [9 i9 S. O5 f" aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ `) T$ ]( C. @3 j( rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& s9 v7 u" ^4 r- G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 ?+ e4 g( s& C3 x; c" z5 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 _- g/ V: b+ c  N" m% N1 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ m* ^5 H3 B& Y" @+ Y9 n: o8 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" M+ s6 [. k+ K) q' M8 Q2 F$ K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 C3 K# n5 W2 }. W0 l; y' r/ e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 O' |0 R' n+ r2 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* C* \& C+ m7 `9 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( y1 T" u9 _8 m! x- V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 V% k" D% J4 B# [+ H( z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' F7 b2 Y, h+ `9 \, d+ Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 @3 n: ~/ R) t# L8 d9 a, Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! N+ F! @. X  u" f1 S, @- v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% A8 R7 A5 j, r$ T; g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 T. n6 J: X: M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 P" L) V1 U* A( S& K% }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( O# P. r; K' \9 M& Z7 U2 u: q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, _. Z. y, `% s# _( s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! L" r. D( k+ E9 O, e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 U- J3 M) Y! ?$ m: U8 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 V9 X0 \# E: |. v' H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ @# o1 [- x) @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# r& n) `& P' u; o+ L2 ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. u& ^; I2 m' J7 ?& b1 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! ~& f' `1 B6 ?' D, V2 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* V3 h8 G9 K3 R- c  j. @1 q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) n. C" p) F* @7 o) J: k( P7 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. e+ I6 Z" S( p: a6 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>