【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' @- C# X$ T- {/ o) D* vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* |: a+ L# f" {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 a& k2 W+ e, j; aWith the moon kissing it every night
# H( F0 P. U" J  x5 `Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 }% v$ O  s. P/ nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 }/ Z% W) \" c, `% U3 [( t& v, uI love you I love you with all my heart
) ^* B- T' ^- q7 nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; r/ p6 u7 Q0 i( Z, `  a0 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 \2 q% F: B4 r6 l& s( y8 }8 EI want so much to see inside your heart
" L4 O; `! h2 J' w! MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ T1 m3 l9 s8 T% x. e7 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! K! L$ z9 F8 T/ q2 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: W3 f. M! W" a; s' j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, h# U" q+ g6 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( P, ^: [# Q1 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 C" Z1 i2 }' F2 l, p& H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 N) u8 G. ]' E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 _  u' X! j$ Y% j9 O" o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 r1 T) F# a; T$ U6 ]4 @/ x! F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 V9 p' w! M+ O9 G$ }& |; F  ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; @2 {% {! R9 P; Y& Z2 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ o4 I+ n' Q2 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 G& G2 G* h8 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 ~- k6 n. v, p" o* b: `  o' B; w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" ?% F1 f3 [& ]: p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ X  J6 c! M$ K% i$ q, L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 ]; |4 v% K$ B8 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ S5 V7 K# S/ t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 i$ Y+ B: T8 ^- o+ `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! R, P$ j) o$ R<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 ?+ ?( U: F* y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 O, w5 ~1 F2 Z9 u- f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! C) p/ F; ^$ e3 s5 |) e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 A! F# |, V% c9 @+ Q% e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 n# w: v" T9 Z' r5 E. p$ u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>