【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( h  q2 K: G# l$ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ b6 T% Y, @1 ~% W6 R% vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 `. w) u7 V; e0 e/ K) `4 R8 n# u! uWith the moon kissing it every night
5 [/ K0 N! ?) B7 o3 qSeeing the sky content with its love
% z) s! F2 O7 v# j5 s5 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. F$ H  I3 i, K/ M+ BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: I0 F; a9 l7 y3 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( h3 L/ h0 |  P/ B- JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( u; C3 h. w  k  W9 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& h* ?9 R) g* n1 Z0 U2 |2 ?! y: jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' X# q5 x) d. u% z( B  o$ U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 ~3 p% ?- P* r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% G4 j7 n, ]8 b, L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 n- w" V/ W9 D3 ^! Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; `; I& x' l: q  z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( Z' z8 _% b) z, c8 A0 ~( |<P>你无需担心</P>
2 e$ ~8 R3 Y8 g. L/ O+ |- I: h8 _8 t$ s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 p- m" V) g. Q. p6 c* I2 i/ ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' U/ g0 y! e9 F1 l& @# J4 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 ?; Z+ r% ?1 ]* S5 ]5 ?% Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! j# b1 U6 t- f0 M6 d) }3 m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, S; h. ?! i5 p' j: T& _2 l/ p& h$ b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" t* D9 ^" d# t" ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! J, l0 Y! S8 Y6 a* j* v5 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 H9 [4 ~% t" Z9 ?, ^* j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! l' D7 p' ?4 q/ C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 j  y. I" F& l; n! y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 F: R! z" y/ A* W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  H% b$ ?1 m7 P& I& m" K/ ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( a* b: x' H8 Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: B2 Y9 G# ^2 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' Z5 Y9 K4 g1 o+ P6 Q) o/ ]( z/ k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 s) ~9 I( E7 N1 |; d8 }" k3 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ o( b7 h, Z5 k. C4 H* }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ~2 s" k" `' `( {  o5 c+ r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 k) M1 t, ?2 @8 a0 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. Y* {0 \7 O/ I# x4 _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! u6 T, |. t% z3 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' A: X6 k& W* c7 F9 H/ S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& S0 w0 F  y  L; z* @  ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  J5 S! u) {# s) A7 r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 g0 R  b# n2 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>