【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: V& V( b1 J" Z( W+ M/ Y4 b! O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* w, h7 g& c. a- K6 W3 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 D& z/ {4 V3 S( B5 r) OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# A4 e1 i+ G  I' m  J% t1 f, sWith the moon kissing it every night
3 H- y1 p* d# \7 x; n+ V0 \# W: \Seeing the sky content with its love
+ e7 g4 Z( w! |2 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 ~0 _& W9 X7 D4 C4 E) sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# w) R  }, p% @, }# D) i, d4 |# TI love you I love you with all my heart
1 x% a& A0 N6 ]" m) D1 C9 `1 xNothing can compare to my love
) c: l( J% s- X% v, ?+ T% j2 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, G0 ?/ `% t5 W: m! |I want so much to see inside your heart
, t5 c9 |/ ^& h) Q+ X2 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 E% F& @1 b5 z0 {I’m still filled with fear
; ~/ [" u/ |  z  v1 o8 F5 v# `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% }; F( @3 \3 a! ~With such a tongue as yours,
) e  ]- Z6 ~8 {+ [) s! s2 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ K* {+ Z# Q; E) L: h" kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 A  Y9 [' e3 D( F+ T" L3 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. i  X0 K8 ]2 r$ u; d, S6 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# [  N/ \; `: j* v' Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 i7 {( h" h; N7 o4 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  g8 I4 X* i3 Y6 r% ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ n6 I0 Y, @& q: U1 q0 Y8 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 J) L% j: S6 ^6 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 f* l; Q: l1 E; _) h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  @3 F2 G9 Z+ i- F# k9 x7 }4 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 L- f9 G: B6 O5 K6 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, j2 X: B' G, }; r9 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  H" p* [" N2 S0 D. p" p+ T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( K! b& Y$ {- C  n% }3 Y/ g8 Y& w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 m( \; L, [$ v" }* u7 u! ^! }, B/ n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" ^% X4 J' s: ^- [! H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" a  _8 h* a  t9 ^+ A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# S3 B* w3 O; k% v! f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 ~9 A5 E; ]! ~( U+ M1 R" I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- Q' Q" E/ W; q) l: P% E  c; A4 ]) ]/ u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& A2 t; r8 G, d. ^  `/ C( Z8 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& d6 w& [, x1 F( {! W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ I2 Y# E$ ~- F% c. d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 y$ J  c' y0 C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, p8 I# Q* `7 T! J. _6 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 M& T; n5 S1 I( w* g! Y6 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; ]& |. [% E0 ^; B2 |* \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 J  g/ [( l2 V6 y; b% ~$ L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 j5 x# n! I5 o' @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>