【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 N+ ]4 o8 Q3 B- s) M% d2 n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 m  [7 N0 ]7 R, ^& XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! j' f: {+ L0 Q+ E! aThe sky is happy down to its soul
" n' }" }' W1 I. j* ^- y, t  n+ G. rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 ~  Y. ?: k' LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, s4 \) }# H9 ?Every other word you utter is love
# g0 y5 Q, t, }+ `. H6 L' ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  j2 V3 N6 V1 v3 k8 Z4 m" vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" D4 ~) h, Z+ a  a5 X+ D* gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 s! {) X: A  q, J9 a5 d$ ^' mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ `: r8 C# O& sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" z6 N0 h. {% v5 y. C# l& R: MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  X7 R5 J  h7 n0 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 r8 J8 }8 u% MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# z% E6 y% [. L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 J5 [) j  z/ [% D; @1 n+ g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 A) Z: z$ l3 O/ z. I+ I) Q" k. s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 n6 l) V/ ?9 |7 F$ e0 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" D2 N. P6 A0 }+ E. ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# {& c4 C# j6 e" }3 ^$ ~$ I! O' i& m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ @7 C) r' |# x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 F1 S; M5 a* S: g0 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; x9 c9 v7 z4 K2 \$ g9 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) r! P( f/ q: m  U6 E& }, P1 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  o# N% i9 ^4 P  I5 D' i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* @- c( E. u5 E7 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 f' a7 x1 G1 h# W# }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 n1 i1 i, }& k- }4 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. E# f: k* h$ t( Z; a  I% {* K; F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 U. u: j3 o+ z7 l5 x- Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: P* q0 X0 H' Z% ~% Q0 ]0 o8 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 c( G3 l! P7 f" p! d' N0 R' l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 W' ^, ~6 b0 P- X5 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 @1 d! H# O2 y2 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& I1 N- l$ ~# q; U; j# m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 z# b1 c1 p) N  V- t7 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 L9 ^) Z( O/ w  x3 {' ?. H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% B' l, W8 |# u. k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>