【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 ^6 t/ {) t$ u/ @( I3 y歌词我附在后面。
, i6 o, S1 u- G& @( t, nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' {; _( J6 g/ ]! D0 D0 e% P" O3 e% AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) t' O2 t% T- Z1 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  l7 s( P  j- R, r- @: \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' {) r: `: E" iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# R+ p$ B- j. c" j/ `0 |/ X5 jYou needn’t fear anything
, j. \& S0 {: _! J$ BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' j$ L& u8 N3 j* n. p7 B6 sEvery other word you utter is love
( R; V3 K! T4 D9 g9 p1 K( pI really want to know just how much you love me
) D# W$ h7 C% f4 _" J+ xI love you I love you with all my heart
- y' j+ U3 g) S/ E+ m2 q) D: o! T' jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  l$ S; r3 f: [& q: i; sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ @4 ]4 F3 f9 ?, R. j4 QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; U7 `+ j. f' o$ DI regret not dying
! B  v8 S3 y0 T, H4 u8 y$ `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( w: B7 B8 H2 S5 o/ Q% KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 T; Y7 q! X/ `0 {2 M) Z' t9 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  v* S  F$ n  M  @( ?7 X, lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# Q/ ^3 N$ g  X* x9 m( o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 P, N' w* q7 o/ V! E! V* f0 `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 {6 B$ [- H! S8 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" D" W+ Q- j  s% v7 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 G/ i) v6 V9 ^' _( c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 y& b$ x/ m7 O7 ?# M9 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; J/ d+ {1 u; s6 A8 l  l4 N5 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; K2 p1 L$ i; L7 F6 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 c5 U; ?4 l* z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 |  u5 R! o+ }3 F; k2 d2 U8 C. |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& M5 G7 }% ?9 O1 Y0 T& W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: ?& u- i- e" G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! e- D* d, x3 o" M* {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ l3 l) o0 u( X8 y  J+ W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. F3 A5 {* R2 V3 R9 z: S' m+ m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ k7 j# h0 A9 B5 e9 n# M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ @* O  g7 l. v+ z: Q" ^& a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 g  y6 S6 F% @( B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 N3 {* D3 K' `$ G" \1 p% p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 s/ p( m% V% t- d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, ]& B) ]- k( ~1 {, u" u4 m- `1 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' l# a# h- b8 a% V! ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 ^/ O: Q7 E. i$ h5 {) T8 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; z: f' n3 N/ W$ I. R8 j. j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! p! h) F( u3 {; H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ ^( G/ W) N) u; M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: X7 ?5 t8 S: O- n) s* H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; I( C6 ?. C5 H! o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( u3 A  _; q9 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ v1 f' U1 b: F) g+ b3 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) b% G7 K7 t5 o( _; u* F5 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 Q/ e( u: l, E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: D& m/ v2 Z. X5 ?  U/ M9 Y- g3 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
) j' R3 ~6 T7 ^, ~  u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) X; Y; V- N; H7 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ E# p6 k  Q  s, |( Y7 D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 V" B* r7 F9 a; Z& S8 O; @) b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. _1 l7 z1 k/ v9 z( Z' d% Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% E6 L" H5 V$ d. ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 h) v! C6 e5 x5 R1 L9 I$ p' e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 c; `) ?4 o! j) H& e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>