【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 p( {5 M# e' y2 J* a5 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, P& @: m( z9 c6 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! u" i: z2 j! |# A: N/ h# K8 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& Z% k% J) G, C( j/ uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 D( g& `$ D3 \+ O0 W! DEvery other word you utter is love
, b' a# j/ T& |) |- OI really want to know just how much you love me
' L8 D; v4 w% J/ m5 N+ gI love you I love you with all my heart
* H  @4 }! [+ x6 T- Q/ tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 r( Y1 t+ _  s' R( T" wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) d, U4 U1 n; {I want so much to see inside your heart
) H. E2 S/ K0 k: {. VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% M# d" C+ M2 P+ i1 p1 v5 dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 Q& e4 `. j) N6 c, S/ v8 ^' {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ t/ b$ S  Q- v9 h( sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 z, ^  B- v: z' T% OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% C) l' U/ G  f0 G* U& v3 w5 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ t& i4 [5 U8 O9 Y5 d) p* O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 p  t6 m% R: [0 \2 S; d. _5 p- ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ F3 K$ D8 |* U9 S5 E% W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' E. p4 Q) f/ z) T8 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! n( Q) c/ b# L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ L8 P% p( S9 S0 U+ F+ `. R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 y& M! O& Y8 D& c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# F. G$ Z$ l, w  i9 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 b$ m+ Z$ Y- `$ T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" b& y# [4 X  I% ?# ^" |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) h- o& h9 ~8 C, Q2 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
) U+ a) L  \  p7 I# z7 g8 y1 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  ]7 H* o6 d2 a, `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- J0 V  M1 p" B7 I% r% }( }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# Z% q. a- \1 Y- e* W+ u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ r% m+ B7 ^9 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% }7 s; @1 D3 E$ A6 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  [; D/ u8 r- C9 e3 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, n: L9 }: ~0 ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 E/ m/ j! |& t# d) z$ a* `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 F4 b7 t3 i9 d0 Z& i2 ~3 `( s+ z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 p8 g8 Q4 b8 o9 z. @' \* Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 p$ F8 i& a% Y) Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ K# B4 F7 {" G3 i" E( L8 @, {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ n6 p. V  H! F% V& n* h' o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 S- `4 r4 h: U5 [7 V  n; T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% {! @0 L7 h& o: s1 x& R8 L* k2 g, D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ?) ~2 X1 S6 X& W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 Y5 ?: @+ I8 o* E& T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 l0 K8 V7 [' D% Z! p+ |" ?我请你剖开它
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# |, Y+ G& b2 g/ N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>