【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. Q+ Q( T2 d4 J" N7 _1 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' X% j7 B4 I7 Q/ ~" l- F9 ?8 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- _; y8 b! ]# @4 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 Z3 R0 w& N) WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- k* t/ o( u6 a4 W1 C" X2 NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& B) b# ^& L. }. zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% l" K) w# c) U. u4 I% KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 A& R# W5 r* t. E. p2 \I want so much to see inside your heart
) O% N0 f! ?) N, `9 q  MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, K4 \# t) x! N* K2 y; `I’m still filled with fear
0 x$ _# u, O1 x+ SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ o# B4 J5 F. ?I regret not dying
+ d: \4 o& k, r5 @: HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( E% x2 w6 Z* }* PWith such a tongue as yours,
: t! q3 d. F( Z  T. X; ?. p; YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 g4 m; V* c0 j. b7 V7 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* T- t0 I3 C9 {& K- ~+ h; S/ x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, E. L) u# ?  p' L; @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 `4 d. t( t1 j* r6 k: s2 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 Y+ x; v) ^7 P7 X: m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ M: V+ n, c: Z# n0 g! |2 e( C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. m, Z: w2 `' \- C4 `$ Q: f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  J. d, [# ~3 @: n/ D8 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 ^( n$ P. b: W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; n/ Y( F" X1 f7 `: t& G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' M' x5 c, e; Y* y/ Z* U2 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" P2 I! z! y+ D# u5 ]* a' ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* l; E  f3 i6 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ h. ^/ X+ z) V, A4 V7 t. `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) @. q9 M6 N8 g& W  ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: S5 Z  L6 Z- X  U: r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; D& I: D7 r0 I" n2 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( E6 A( @2 v" x4 N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. K3 Y) V5 v+ {2 Y& @$ J! I* k$ y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 h7 g) e$ e2 l& S3 l! i2 q7 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; c) w) n: y' D: P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 ~) f& Y3 b8 l* |1 O; l; m2 y/ {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: x# C1 i% q$ H, M7 r: a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ c4 I& t3 p- u2 [& `8 j! g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& T1 b' G5 s0 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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/ ^1 L+ v$ ?; O' ~3 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 d) k) |. U$ ?: {' S! X0 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>