【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& Y8 h, F1 I3 ]2 K9 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 T* Q* B: f4 h  aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) S9 v- U+ i& I8 R3 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 @9 T. P4 x5 a( a: ~0 J% pThe sky is happy down to its soul
) P( u( v6 K1 F8 N$ V/ `1 TWith the moon kissing it every night
. H& ^8 v: `# h9 v0 w$ e+ l* g% wSeeing the sky content with its love
9 l1 l$ z! M2 [" O0 C" wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ r0 n9 \/ e% x7 NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- ~+ d9 g! F% l: ?* fEvery other word you utter is love
% U: p/ h! {7 T7 cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 w! K! \+ ~/ t! @! R0 P' @- n$ LNothing can compare to my love
4 s/ y' m# T7 Q1 e) A: OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 [% O+ D. E) NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& W6 g9 F. B, l. `2 m3 u# J' t' z6 wI want so much to see inside your heart
! M: @' ^- E/ s' j! @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. A/ K1 l9 L; J6 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) P: m2 W9 o2 p% dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, b3 w, X- D& u  ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ T  u1 B* q- ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 s+ I7 a* |% H- J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ h# G7 \4 [+ v) O. @( G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 a6 m) N2 H2 }, a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 ^# o& W* S  B. [9 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; N/ Q3 }* o$ Y" b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ d6 Y" \3 O% ?) p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 m. N) J2 n5 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) g% j' w4 `/ U/ o" x  }4 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( @' x& [+ ^1 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ Y2 |9 P! q, j8 Y* x. f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 ~  T" u- k8 B) K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 X3 F6 k  G. r8 E1 X) w, {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; p" W, L# M2 x, h% U: L/ o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& K$ N% ^5 [- z5 A# }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: c+ p; K. @" h" b4 u; P/ ?* \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. B1 _/ x1 o1 v0 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; \' ^) n0 |# b, z$ Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. O; o. G- I1 a9 ^; U% g8 H% N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: d3 {! W' m# B0 u6 S" ]: E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 D) `! R) O; v8 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. P2 B' d0 X( D" L4 {/ D8 ~3 N$ W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 Y' |. w& {2 ]: j  o1 M6 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ K9 N- ?2 L7 t8 z4 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. F% c4 V" U9 U" h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 r' O$ P( a. ^& j0 y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) p5 r: n+ p# ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ w7 O. a+ K/ y/ D  ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* A" l4 \) g) _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 A1 ]0 i* a4 t7 j, Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>