【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 Q' I% X( J( x; E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( w4 `+ u7 I& e% e+ M: F8 ]9 |Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 O8 J! c5 A6 ~1 u2 E1 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 N6 }, ?# C) l; tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- @0 U9 C% M0 @1 R, `9 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ G) Y& X5 h3 X9 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  C. @$ {' q. J# e& u$ \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  [  d$ ^% p$ _0 f* @8 rI really want to know just how much you love me
9 G# G" ]% Z; M8 [' S9 y5 lI love you I love you with all my heart
. `9 a% ^! I& u9 X* s3 J, uNothing can compare to my love
" i' X  J6 }2 p+ OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- x4 ?+ T* l: S) `8 O" gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 R! L) X7 x2 X+ @& l/ cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) \1 }% j$ r2 E( X, m6 N1 h3 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" a/ a. z: W+ P. Z+ y0 \+ vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( R8 Z% [5 \0 U- V, J! uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( r2 q6 R, m) F7 X- D% d" z2 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 c0 `4 A! g$ d' T/ Z3 f! w: D1 _( L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 d: ]8 f0 o% F% a: N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 w! c4 e# T9 c( U- `/ q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 \, X9 t. }- O% P1 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# V/ D1 l3 ?5 ?( d. r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 q6 y# I* J, h+ T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 s. G2 J5 e- _! b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* P0 g- w3 q, e0 g4 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 V; a/ n! L, }) k. m& x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  |, p, Z! {, `8 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. t, k# E  ], r  `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# ^' K9 N3 F& m! Q, v0 l+ d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) Q! @. q. \( p7 X; ^4 i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 b+ b: ]: t2 ^- w9 z2 @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, }: J- h( y# c6 v$ o; {5 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% {1 `& x8 s  _) h4 \) N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( o$ S- `/ K& ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 \3 v+ a9 a) W  k( W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 V/ K" \1 Y5 B9 N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 ~7 F. z" `: V* l- ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# ^. H" f, Z% W" f. h0 o# L  h8 I. R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 u& a1 i# |: |( }* ~( M+ M& q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ y3 g! E2 ~  S% p6 f% x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 b; L9 g. W9 ^# b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! O( l3 z6 i' N' P3 S# B! K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ L9 E9 T+ Y0 g$ I# M+ `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ _. D0 _* H* @, y0 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  i0 d3 N3 |6 j5 n' w5 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 }/ D- ]# H  k! d0 q0 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- b% j, O0 ]- i  t# X, M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>