【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 [- a* k/ A1 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 d- N- n- A) F( W2 {* }3 V+ tThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 L6 U# X% r. A8 O4 I- NWith the moon kissing it every night
+ o  s! R4 ^) ^! z" `$ x" |Seeing the sky content with its love
: P" G8 T+ }0 u7 B. s6 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 G9 L' ~3 a0 |% p. U0 R# N0 o1 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ q" x8 n0 F% N7 d8 dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. P& t$ U( y/ l. U, [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 a4 o2 X$ U1 X- xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& v; O  q' v( a" y4 @- KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ i6 n+ m1 e% C8 w' `' @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  S7 d3 E& v2 A0 h6 g6 a0 cWith such a tongue as yours,
. H. i" o) @( U. P* `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! l/ I- {/ O2 ~- X) }9 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# R" U! x. e2 F' }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 h7 [! d9 a; y- o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% t2 J" N% c' y8 I4 f3 q9 ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# ]  I2 u  {: f. p3 }2 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; C: P8 i0 j; ?: ~. B! g/ |8 {5 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& k! Q  L8 M7 w# F! J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" Q$ m4 C- E( O5 k* ^2 x* A; h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' o( n" h; w$ c& @( \. q. Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) h  N& X' t* i7 l  y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 T7 D/ W9 j# ?<P>你无需担心</P>
3 j% p, @# S; s# h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: Y. S7 u; z; v6 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ }: @1 Q2 N9 |* {; H, Q3 d  v) O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* |! G& o0 T5 Q6 a3 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& V1 v7 W8 G. r7 D6 d/ i% r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 q8 {6 r7 `$ u! j7 b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# r- \1 L2 o$ ^4 H, P* L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ K9 `, ^& {) K  w' Z* G  J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 ~: N, l7 |! K% a: _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 N8 n5 i5 Q7 |# b8 Q  r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( g9 Z1 \; `/ \7 m' W7 V, n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' O8 |# }) l& V5 t2 S8 b( P1 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: X& W' ]& Y- V3 h7 e0 `$ ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 n$ S# a/ n$ n$ P9 M8 O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* l$ o) S& n1 X0 O  b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 z& C, _: ~, w5 v8 |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, J3 @$ q0 u/ y% v2 ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 Z7 ~/ p( D6 k  k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>