【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 j1 w: I7 M0 `6 o; u- P# J# g+ I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; o8 r) G6 l$ ]# aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 Q$ C# ^- \5 I  \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# ?  H( m; u1 g: \, n" L2 o# o* N& rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 `! V. T3 W- x- t' l! L# GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. r1 u5 C( D6 z) H0 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& `$ v: T; r. @5 K' V  B. n" Q2 iNothing can compare to my love
% d; l- p& H+ @$ ~3 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( O7 d- {; o1 J8 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
( w0 D  P) i% w/ q# wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 |) ]3 h  N4 _- k% K+ _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ T* D( F& i/ ]# D( w/ D, zWith such a tongue as yours,
7 h$ u% e4 l8 i6 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 b; E! f) h; R1 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 n# ^( t' D8 q7 m3 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 l& a8 b+ R9 U4 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& F5 U# \; U0 C( k9 }1 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% q* D2 l' o( x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( M1 Y+ f1 R% P4 _4 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 i6 M- R4 {/ V0 w6 Y& `( g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& s! M. L  b6 v+ C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 s1 @% |; [, u8 ~% t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* \+ |+ ]0 M! Y! s! i" h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' w6 L* T7 O& V6 \4 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* G+ _1 R) p! }' w( A( V<P>你无需担心</P>
) r$ O0 e6 I# T& N9 ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 q+ t% j4 A% K$ Q; }8 }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 ^, T, W: v. D) w# f4 Z+ t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 l* Y0 c5 j  W5 I2 {+ r3 r5 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ J+ I0 W& H& e. W% x1 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 x2 @: f5 ~. t5 l! M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 X  o, k/ x3 r" E4 S- C5 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* h0 ~& v+ ~# a: u0 ]( T8 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ I, p. y- u* z2 r0 L8 K' y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 P) X& |% o3 R: z9 h( \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! [% ~% V% k2 _% ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 }3 H2 I& H3 v+ J7 C5 r# I8 B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 C, W! k9 J/ z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" b& ]+ i' ^: v+ h4 A4 S* L# E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 n! z: N' I2 \8 q, Q1 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 `* F. N& a5 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' h7 }. J; b  s- v- T# C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ s" i! x7 h, F1 j( s5 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ N- r! X* }/ p# E) G$ f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>