【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( C$ N/ z! s) K) P) J2 N, O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ T: D0 {( v8 q" n5 B. C4 z  Y2 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 s$ g4 W! ?) P, @1 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 r1 p8 G' l; AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 k, @7 a% O' G! U9 m/ \  {The sky is happy down to its soul
/ y" N. Q6 \6 h0 YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, K6 ^: U- }! c8 O# CI love you I love you with all my heart
5 u8 u. _3 n* @: }& L, c/ A# ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* a' U, v0 |- b8 |+ y% tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ T7 k6 l# j: b& d* LI’m still filled with fear
/ S) w3 V3 d& aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" T, h' X0 h" `- OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ X7 K2 @% U2 I8 |# T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ _! ]8 b( b! Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 l3 t5 I8 ]" \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  s; C, s$ Y; Y7 c1 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ^2 x5 E) m* S: h0 L0 I5 z, F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ F3 z; j# ]" g7 t# k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* F8 p1 J& D( E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( G% z1 z. D  O* W* f% s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 }: ^# l7 ?8 \" c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) o8 E0 S9 S2 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% z; C0 ]5 b) S% ~' s3 P3 k# ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 m5 D5 G  T! x- \( Y: z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# |. F/ j5 E* N  B8 @" U) }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 v5 K8 B# P& v3 x5 \" I' ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. T2 G# j  M' ]/ N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ @' N# m! q1 M6 w* r$ S1 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- `& C- l; O# L2 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" M% T* _8 d" U+ p+ n9 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 C- z! X5 a! N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ A1 C3 X' f. M) h# a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  P/ }5 o, o3 U# a4 s. p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 Q: Z! W, _* h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& }6 q6 o. f8 w& I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 @5 Z# _' Y* L( ~  _) y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 d2 ]0 C3 ], @+ ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! Z6 X: P# o8 J8 @$ b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; j9 P: U( j) j2 \; s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. r! ^( S4 m4 O2 K1 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 ^/ R/ a$ s  E7 _  ?' j( ]9 P7 {我请你剖开它

# c/ E) K( \7 ]% d. Q* K$ ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 J0 k. S& W- C! U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>