【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. Z/ r0 |: Z9 ?* {The moonlight is shining brightly,
& D: I$ ^6 _  d) Q, `$ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 X! Z$ z+ o+ x, J! tThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ F4 K/ n. q: W2 Y& tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 ]5 C2 T! F; e# D5 i& W$ L1 }You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 g# p7 ]# E! m# |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 N+ ?) m; n: ~" @: B" A$ OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ G) V' u. N! _' _' g2 |7 i; LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 ]6 h/ v& B0 f! z) U" D  R+ N& xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ ~. J( C; ?1 b3 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 o/ q- H  T# p9 v7 `( v, X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ }- q5 l; t6 q: I: m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* u6 u- m/ p7 V3 o/ V# \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! N% X4 d5 c3 X! g0 o5 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( I. q, e* @* L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; L8 O0 j. B0 k5 I9 ]- c: n  S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 i$ M" b6 U( m, H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' e9 J. W) v' j/ `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 r$ L3 M8 g2 f% A( m' Y9 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) h) z( ~4 f9 \9 A) l0 B4 z8 y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ v1 o4 C1 ]! i$ F  P# C0 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 |( i; E- Q' Y; J% R" |/ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" C6 D" t6 S9 B( `  u2 `* i5 u) y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( y+ K6 S. u; @& @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% {$ u4 K* {% B" b$ O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, W! I' E, X3 R5 F# [2 ~1 o; |# k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! c! [  Y7 M' q. H/ m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ j: H! y- b% O, V9 Y+ Z  R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 q% n$ g6 j' P" Q& U' E2 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" t- i3 q( }) m  N3 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 E/ X3 j% C$ d2 s/ ~3 ]* V& ]4 T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 Z. e! d9 x" u0 C7 {8 T( \2 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Q& m6 f6 B  P0 R- f/ C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 j- o% z% j! x; I+ u. q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 s4 l& c) ]4 w- D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 X! E* }- m) X' d! p' i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" B: v/ j1 T  o( J7 a! P- P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 W. q) F: q4 E( i5 c0 z: c: m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>