【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! a. m. x, I2 t6 w9 E' E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ C9 [2 H: X$ B( ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 K: h4 ]3 G3 HWith the moon kissing it every night
7 `# Z6 d/ \- j5 Y( L  VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, L$ m0 l- U, E' w% zYou needn’t fear anything
: v" l; q7 u+ m' k4 m7 zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 X: a9 _  h, N0 P( gI really want to know just how much you love me
6 U. Q  {+ V0 z: D' v/ M5 A+ gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* }+ s! H/ C& F+ R. y: [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& p( i1 E/ |. W+ @8 z: o3 PI want so much to see inside your heart
5 h$ d1 g$ f+ m# D6 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! K$ a8 _8 i: g7 e) nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 ^; L1 h5 _6 x% S# s, vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" B/ T; R/ s- B: }4 t' zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 Y+ s3 j8 H0 L# R% f5 @7 a' _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 C+ _  I) e: g7 y- C+ T: g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) G0 j8 O+ D# k0 V/ j7 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' F' T1 ?2 z' p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" F% c* H2 O0 c* f4 B8 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 E/ t* P  Y/ v+ B4 |+ w+ \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( D0 Z1 I! p0 c0 f/ H8 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 `" ~( O7 t& a8 H5 O3 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* d, z, G1 |$ `. V* Q8 L$ U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- D: s8 n% w& s3 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 V( w  T" `( j- n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' n# e* \7 F/ E# N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) F/ E# v! i" M1 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. o) T8 }! L0 x. J9 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 H6 H" @* L0 K2 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% E+ N5 j5 S% K5 M+ |) r0 t1 F6 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# Y% ]3 U0 ^/ O2 h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% \4 s$ |6 r+ V5 @8 B9 H+ U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& J% \- G% E+ ^8 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' g$ Q9 O* }# e1 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' Q7 Z* b. |3 m1 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 H3 A6 s! f& }1 o. B, D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! Q7 b, `' f, O( d# G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; j  k1 h9 {  J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 I, B7 u8 {( c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 p1 m" l; d8 J# |9 w% d! V8 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  i7 J0 \% `7 v8 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& O7 m$ O6 ]- m# y+ @3 D* _0 O1 B/ N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>