【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 }( z: d# Y9 h- d; V7 eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ D1 G' H6 q) L/ {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 I/ r+ n( i+ A$ ^* T, CWith the moon kissing it every night
. l1 y8 _6 F3 r2 e+ e1 `* J( U; kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 p$ L" r' Z7 M* x& a' \- UEvery other word you utter is love
' H2 M- z$ j0 O8 K1 V* x0 U( SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 Y+ D8 S' Q. j& U8 d8 A; ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: t+ Z7 H+ }0 |! ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 G- O, m* b$ H7 I8 ~. yI regret not dying
6 A- z& Y3 f/ X0 @) @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ c: ^; Q" Z# ?1 [( N: WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 R3 [1 v: M: \- n5 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% R5 e/ I' t4 v* L* O. BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: z7 `4 v, _4 w8 ]- G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 R! m! c. O$ R. ^9 @& f. Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. r9 e' a/ C: y$ s- k+ L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( D# Z) w, Y/ k, N4 o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, m2 b* ~# Z+ d' B* S% _8 H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 |9 `, f  b+ k/ ^7 C1 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 I, _  T. |- T7 M3 s& O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 B+ G; e( J% E0 J$ G* H$ O0 ~9 n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 t' l! N6 z4 w7 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 F8 m; z8 _6 e5 `8 @; V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" x: A( _: i+ {5 Z# a7 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 t- m" m+ X+ @; ~8 D% q5 j6 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 e$ |0 A$ K$ A* [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  N4 ]4 r% Q, |) Z4 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& ?( J& o7 {6 w' f7 F3 V/ G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' u( W/ U* x9 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ N, Q, Q  D3 c+ n2 ?8 E' {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) v  m7 g6 R9 X8 B4 C7 k- W% ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* o+ p2 @. X$ ^6 E9 \! A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ D+ l3 b5 H# ~* x+ h* p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% l0 i6 o( C5 B# D7 q) o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 z& [# D( q- G8 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% q4 x; x+ p0 {/ Q; c: U<P>I regret not dying</P>
! @4 S& D4 I/ x. e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 x9 i  O$ b7 g$ S8 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' Q/ }0 n3 t0 V) |* v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; t. a+ H( v5 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 q! H8 s. Y* \4 E: T4 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 R# h- g$ S9 ?6 g( J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( f: w' D/ z. s4 `* [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: |# i' s. T9 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ U1 Y& I7 A* z# \' [* o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>