【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% W! ^+ t  o6 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
" A' b' _3 h% G/ wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 Z2 ]+ i) g/ n* T5 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 A( b5 C1 F1 D% \2 i) b- y( bThe sky is happy down to its soul
  m6 d" O& z( t# E" B- q/ t3 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 l2 x( T* W! I+ a' @: I+ @5 Y# PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: }: j6 U2 ^: Y2 S6 u" L* nYou needn’t fear anything
3 C# Q  `* V6 w  G1 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ d" `% L: J! E) h' qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 B" t4 w  A; X+ `  f. s( mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' y1 d* j+ F% c% Z: p6 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 N/ C) {% Z* Y1 r' `+ ^$ s8 W! }5 e5 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 u( M2 F0 u( h6 }2 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  ]0 x5 ?" r5 w+ _3 S# T8 s' _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ W& |# m; t8 m" ?+ e- O- X4 u* i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) h, g1 q4 D# P. g7 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* x3 T& g& X+ `) V4 K: c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% o1 |" K8 h7 P  @0 F. W) I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' v( \8 d' s) t$ R: b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; A- `1 s. {* z# r; \1 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! h$ C; H/ d+ S& H8 H* H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 U' N' U) o+ u, Q: ^$ ?$ \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) ~% O5 W9 R5 ?2 l' s& D8 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 Z3 F: W* i6 p8 a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 O. U1 ?- Y/ e5 G  X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ r9 F, s' Z3 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& K/ _* l) w" x  N7 V9 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 `* n! [. `* ~! ]' z5 H( V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- ^- y1 V7 g* d$ M8 j5 h8 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 _* t1 H/ y( F( b6 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. B+ |3 P5 @- H9 P2 U" T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 [+ h+ l' l% k9 U% b$ G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 j8 T- K2 |* |" V' B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ ^+ e9 K. V4 P+ }5 l9 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( q5 j' y1 x4 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% W7 @0 @) {" v/ f' Z: L9 J) n0 K% Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# b- b& @0 |0 u- C6 [* s3 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
' T9 w2 k1 Z# K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 `# o" w/ O1 n9 x* W' T- p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 C3 |8 P4 M' f0 v* W4 S4 ?7 A- [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' S7 Z! V0 f  T. w( X/ Z$ f" _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, Q! ~% ^$ l6 ^4 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' G" x7 X) C3 T8 P3 |9 l% h& ]- S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>