【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* F% u% X" G8 b. O( v; v2 a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* [  C, d! }' E5 T7 w: nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' L) b7 ]- A0 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 L/ w$ c' E% o) m8 ~5 E3 a* ]& SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 n' r  Q! B8 S$ Y4 i) P; n, FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& W- s9 x; ]% |. ^You needn’t fear anything
2 I6 t3 k! t6 O& I. tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, e/ h/ V% G" zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ B4 s& l" b% t0 t, o$ KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# G/ k! C. j( jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! [! s, O% A) Y2 C9 `, Q9 kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 o5 P! U, j/ r, H- p/ CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) m3 z5 S7 B, h2 \With such a tongue as yours,
1 c& i& Y& P! y' Q6 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 x" _: V( n3 X2 [5 S: i! `$ e; Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* X1 ^; T* }% `) z; o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 N1 F4 |' d5 N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" F! z6 Z7 F3 d( K% P, Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& G% T; T# n' f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 w1 d- A7 C5 b8 ?% n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 [- }+ \2 t' ~, B6 U# M* j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ G0 j! i/ O& S7 e$ e; Z& d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 M1 X& \* c# c+ y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ {8 o; ?/ c  `+ r  L' x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; q' i# C# h8 W! o; x/ j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! N7 p: U1 y& G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. i8 g4 ^  K+ {: D1 L+ [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" {! {6 F' w( O" G% O& y! h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 a. i7 N' E' h7 ]* I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 ?" p3 v7 s. i$ J9 g  a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  g# I% F* g- o1 F+ l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; t$ B2 t5 r& w6 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! p6 b6 b& L! D* k$ S* \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! q/ r1 D" ?% G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" m$ R% C4 [* j" J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& }: A' C) P! X$ P. q' N# B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 X4 b" p# \) C9 J. x$ I3 C; A- T8 |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 N' j2 |1 s9 z( }3 \我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& T1 S( d  n: Q3 b+ C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>