【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 |4 H) T  m; U' Q5 C7 ]4 L  HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" t) U2 w) ~' c, {$ q. ^5 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 g6 I' \9 T9 Q/ `9 C8 I$ GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 T+ D) W# P5 p; ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 s# k; b  v2 Q- w% @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 k3 Q( o6 i, E- KI really want to know just how much you love me
; k* b! F- S+ eI love you I love you with all my heart
: A5 t2 X6 A3 j6 A# XNothing can compare to my love
7 n' `+ I7 G* ?4 ?8 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* o, `9 b% {6 U, y% J+ aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 R* M- o% y. z" X8 vI regret not dying
) S6 Z) e3 h8 q- f/ @2 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  T; A$ {1 W# c- ]1 I  D$ C( G' CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 _8 S) t8 j) IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& S0 w. m- Y  l( H4 q. ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 V3 w! T5 d# k$ w8 M. T' I; ]+ ^( Y; x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 p$ O( c% D8 q1 J, A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& S4 n2 I6 ^% t) Y% _" i4 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- {  ~# d; D3 R" A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 l; k' }% Q* _8 g/ U5 T$ }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 ?/ c+ R' i7 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ P7 r8 ]' a& _& g) J7 m* T4 I  W: _- H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- v1 K" S9 a; U0 s- p( @, t) n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 [' p! x$ u" i( u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 m" ?" v  Z1 _) [& S- j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 N9 l! V& q6 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 b4 S7 B1 f1 H' Z' ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* m* k* T6 s& ~, C- u) p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 N/ E4 U" i  e+ Z$ c4 K% a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 {7 C# w* q8 j4 K' G; a7 Y3 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ c; u9 t. X3 m9 V/ _' ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 d; g6 u6 M. B5 o3 V0 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 W4 ~7 ^, X* z" U2 ?8 a% k/ K) o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ [+ j6 H% H  T" V- e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 ^. L  k4 Q0 [" g7 b$ m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 k' b9 X# `+ _. Y9 m+ ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 {/ A) w) ~0 c! f, x' x<P>I regret not dying</P>
# \" t0 o; _. ~  e% v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ j) n: b3 v/ A* U! q8 q" |8 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 g" x# H4 q- B8 G8 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# r6 @1 E8 x. o- c我请你剖开它
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) g* `6 S) L1 T9 v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>