【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ e- Q$ j) Q. S+ x$ ?3 y2 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 H2 m* F0 L4 e: A% z3 L1 S4 C, ?1 F2 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: N$ y$ \1 K( f. u* g. MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 g; H4 U5 t! g; I0 P. Y4 VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 \. w) v% t1 x6 I: z8 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 M% J+ G2 @& ?9 B$ HEvery other word you utter is love
9 F6 Q: X# p) B* U6 UI really want to know just how much you love me
2 g# f* y& H3 q  S9 hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, D4 T2 p4 s/ v6 T/ ~& CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 ~1 h" \: d, ^0 P0 s& f! J2 M5 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& Y% C0 ]( E6 ?' R# b9 k' {5 X0 gI’m still filled with fear
4 Z- z3 Z% R% Z7 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. w- B* ]" i: g2 z) N4 C  I; sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ \; L' S; g7 x: u! i+ x  u+ b5 J( @* zWith such a tongue as yours,
: E$ {1 h7 t& `0 z6 O# `2 k1 D* QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 ^4 N, `& q0 k5 {2 I2 m, f; _# ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& |8 `& d6 t- l% F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# }$ m, B2 c3 r( n9 @& Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ x; D; Q8 j/ b, e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# g  u: w+ R! b# y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 N: S7 L$ P+ c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 P! v) r. {, n2 T  {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# H/ E- A1 v2 M6 p$ F# A% ?8 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, E0 {) I, T/ _% L9 V) T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 }$ f; A( y; E: U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 e0 o- m6 `9 x  d" P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 [# C# {' n9 I7 l) y" w! e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* D8 u2 H! U( U4 W  \6 V0 {( n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, h" g' b* t- m4 P8 E8 S<P>你无需担心</P>
  }/ }& |" R3 h( V' _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- c# D# g% Q1 t5 i4 c- u2 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' ]4 T, B0 ^% P! p. R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  }- X$ C& m0 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& N; _8 _) E/ p0 O$ z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 d4 X0 H2 s. v9 w4 v  O5 s) D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 u% a3 \5 z) e2 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! y8 ~% ~0 A6 y7 n! [' \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# X; S0 ~' K4 ]2 |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* @- z* j+ y) ?( w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, M0 x: x: U6 p5 p8 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 T0 r8 c3 o; Y# p1 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 S) {$ r! B, s5 T$ t' }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 b6 C  h+ v# ^" w5 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
, f- J0 ~9 K8 a+ e+ V- M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% q2 j  t; I, M, z8 E* `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 }) q% h% v) U! \3 q3 K" f5 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 H9 S" p8 f8 n% Q7 H! ^5 _+ p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* ~  _" O# Y$ b0 t5 o* S) H  _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: c! z  d8 v) p/ T4 p/ @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! h* _# E& C; v' Y4 N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>