【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 }, W, g4 _: \2 K9 B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 s6 |- `: c: u+ SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 U' X3 w5 O* ^3 E( |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( ~3 t1 ?! u8 i/ G/ ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
! ?& W' Y+ t  BWith the moon kissing it every night
8 _  k0 u3 r6 \8 n: c0 a% M- W$ d0 aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 V! k$ e8 T& iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- |2 C+ |4 D9 I" N: {. V: eEvery other word you utter is love
% L+ R1 Q3 z" U8 H7 G4 |I really want to know just how much you love me
% O% Y  i6 @, ]5 y( }* A4 j# _3 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. O' \" p% J9 m6 E6 O1 O% XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% Z) K% d8 I6 \  l6 hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 W1 O' P2 E! E" \. G# ~8 XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 C+ _! j1 `6 M$ Q. J3 YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 @) S9 ^1 W7 |' S& ^. E1 J7 cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. q0 ^) k# X& T6 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, D8 `3 W  F: q; N4 k& g3 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 Q+ g3 D& x- K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, F. ]7 m* Z: x# j. \: O- k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 N8 _- M2 ?# p- A  L  s$ S3 o2 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' l7 d& X, n: X' F1 D! c" f" t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. U1 M  w9 L+ f7 `8 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( e/ e6 a( _) }5 r+ x5 w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" W% @1 l+ q" `" o2 H- Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' z1 y! a# L/ H! }* ]4 ~2 ]& R: J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- b8 `* P% _/ m0 s. Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 m( q6 Q% {1 D$ K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 h" w+ o2 M6 z1 B- o+ R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. s9 @' w/ a+ A* M) m, w( C. M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& h' o( J) c# @. _5 j- c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; k7 P5 N. h7 m# S  ?3 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, v) I/ p$ A  d% N1 |3 P" c0 u1 d! g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# E4 f  s+ ]+ @# {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 ?( e! r# v$ u0 ?* V3 Y- A, z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 G6 N+ n9 p" [( ~: z$ v8 Q9 W/ D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! s1 [' V! w' z1 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- ~+ p, l) k- @! T2 a( {9 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" k, u/ \) X) D  F2 Q% C) U! v我请你剖开它
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6 D: t0 \# D  W  p/ W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 d; B: t4 A% O0 z9 X6 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>