【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ p) C! u. k: U) K. Z6 _+ E( \+ H歌词我附在后面。
0 h& N* u1 f( C7 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# L' ^- n2 m, d, @( n* V. rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& \4 M2 p5 v' h7 [, K, |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% t, I1 \# H0 G6 P3 @6 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% S/ ~8 l( f" B2 ]5 _1 P4 f+ }Seeing the sky content with its love
7 P% H4 M# n" Y; `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( z; k7 z( h6 l$ F5 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ p/ _& g: `. ?, S# X) t# m/ kEvery other word you utter is love
/ D+ Y8 d) g! D4 r9 VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 G# ^* @. X0 M& E. qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. q3 ?7 d  z# }( ?; I4 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 [  I# Z) a  A: F. y. VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 H+ L7 P( K" V3 V* VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 i7 P% g2 n" j9 D0 E( L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. U# n9 \* g8 u& v- z7 b( _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* p% n% Q+ F1 W, ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- P2 x8 Q1 D; G5 [) W8 {( ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 M9 X2 O* f) b8 c2 p' v. {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% H" j$ X1 h: r7 P& _: w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- X2 z: t8 a7 S3 Q( E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& y- s6 m/ z) X" x) M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 f1 b/ T, a% g- B& W' e% O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 `* Z4 \/ q' B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( N% ^6 s  ]' f3 U5 }: @1 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ w  m! @/ [% t" K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* s9 c- H" E. ^% |1 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 T. h* O0 Q# D& v- q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  v/ n* \9 `2 p4 @% u& R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 J6 o& g, l* \, ^' n9 N# B0 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 p, Q( \3 [; i6 d0 s" d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ X0 n" @; M. _) I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 Z( S, ?9 ~$ r, Z) v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% B' Z$ c6 t% g7 S0 }; P$ u* t( X0 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, X1 B* s2 m* `" U8 b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 f% N" ]. S, j5 p! z/ z/ T: [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 c7 f- g# r/ {2 y9 K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' z' d6 w1 q$ y1 r6 E: N' W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( K. i$ c$ u8 o: s) c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: w" L4 Z- {+ L4 ~% k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! F0 e$ V" C/ }( r  k2 q0 K* {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# @. Y8 P0 O! R( u3 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>