【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- _! O0 F9 q* E0 Z$ I( i9 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& w1 z2 c5 j  k4 ^$ t1 J$ k# BWith the moon kissing it every night
0 \% H+ w) O+ {& y9 n) l" z/ GSeeing the sky content with its love
+ Q" c, `5 ?, f7 ^( M& P. K, C5 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! O8 L  O9 \6 |/ BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ ?4 Z3 i2 U6 P: zI really want to know just how much you love me
6 \) R  a/ z  Y- }# E0 XI love you I love you with all my heart
: V- s0 |% E2 [. mNothing can compare to my love
/ r( N6 b. W* w) oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 \7 j' j( U9 H) Y7 T9 j/ i: NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  v" m; M: E, T( q& D1 `* ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& V% O( P+ Z) V. ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( T& g4 m' ?6 G0 ^* k% C1 Y* w8 a2 gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 I, ?; U, a* L9 \& q7 ]4 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 R/ N: ^+ o: b; a5 k9 o4 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; k; l/ G1 ]3 c. W& z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 {# ~: {* U: j* ~2 j, {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 _$ n$ M4 d0 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 Y$ b: _  T2 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* O& R4 x# F4 j  q2 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# f. L. `$ J7 `2 Z# \<P>你无需担心</P>
2 M& `8 D8 G1 ?/ H0 x7 A/ g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ J3 s' u0 X6 a2 ~1 c; r4 E3 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: r% {2 g9 w% ], J" X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 w! M; `9 _7 Z) t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% n9 G+ X- s& L5 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" Y$ b' r  O& @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ M5 {' [; c$ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* H* X, h# R, H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 N' u+ E  L1 B) _4 Z5 P  j' y4 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 h; \. [& Q) I% k8 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  Q3 y) p. }+ t$ L. Q4 `, U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 X: c/ Y* w4 B- ]7 O8 J3 u3 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- M$ n0 J$ _+ p6 c2 O4 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 Y4 ~! r! v- ^& [& c2 D9 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 o) |7 T; N: k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 Z' v$ k5 R6 w: Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. ~. q& Q; x2 P/ n3 c  n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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) w3 K% w9 l! b6 p2 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>