【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( s- Y5 {: e- P% U0 I) G- nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 {; }$ k" [( E, U, XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" n0 {* G7 c* k! xWith the moon kissing it every night
3 z, r- m9 i2 M8 s) m6 [+ B( PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! h2 A, E! j) X( }2 c" _4 rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 B, d& t+ ^' ]1 Z3 y& M% {I love you I love you with all my heart
) ~( i$ E. i& H; n' z; PNothing can compare to my love
' ^! R/ D$ S+ ~" f2 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: ]7 E' e4 @0 }# X9 B: M, ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 q! @  O8 K/ x. u& j" u" @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# b% f) |0 N; y) l2 N- V# tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 N* K6 S( E0 y" TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 T6 N8 r$ t( y5 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" _' }; q* V2 B" r5 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( b& C* H' F1 H2 ]3 u$ d1 S/ n5 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 B  X; T" @# k+ U- E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ }0 A& _2 A: g8 O) D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) M; W* j/ b- U' L) x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 h& y( a/ f# c/ F$ p! e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 N5 b- l! h" y7 s: {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ v6 c: Z$ C( H/ ]. Q/ ]; L: E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  r& I1 s8 J2 T8 C1 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, ~# u# z* p1 j2 c# C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) V' D. Z$ S+ o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( K; n4 M8 b4 S5 T' o+ p( ^/ Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. T9 Q+ D1 f! K. B7 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 U$ s' w( _  g0 i$ i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% ~! V' C+ e) h* k8 ?) l* Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 i2 Q6 J4 F+ a4 C& n! W. I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 e7 X/ i6 i! _* h! m: l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 p% S, {  D" X1 R" Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 c/ J% s0 |) W+ }5 J- Q, F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- d3 t! h# ~3 {: e( i7 ]9 n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; f* s2 L$ y# Y) S5 d<P>I regret not dying</P>
* @! C! @0 H# ]8 a8 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 @: e) ?+ B  E0 @- u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! H8 m9 C, o! L* Y& ~& v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' l' i/ t% m7 o% n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 A1 b! ^" @2 r3 M" X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) V- m# _' [. `7 h  @# m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; B0 k  A  d. z4 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 B! v1 O; t7 v: g* Y, a7 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 i$ B+ b9 j3 c. A  D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, L) V1 X/ D) T; ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>