【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 a/ i7 K8 ]! R/ g, @歌词我附在后面。
4 I+ K+ e) e7 d$ HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. J4 O$ t$ Z  {% a6 @5 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 T7 W; L3 h2 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 ]6 `. K$ Z- D' ?* y! y! FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 \' q. u) @! ?' I1 zEvery other word you utter is love
5 w5 f, k* e  E/ GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* A9 t8 `, @5 b* ]/ I7 I& i& XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 `" p+ ^6 b3 Y! ]' @: C! AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ?0 M* m( g0 g, HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# V: u4 R( u- K; g0 \* MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ `# A9 C' u0 O5 E  WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 ~6 ~( v1 g$ V+ _) s( P  B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 C9 _* L; F- q/ _/ M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& |% o7 |& d) R" d/ h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 T. b* G8 u9 f6 ]% ?' f. N$ U$ \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 o$ B2 W. d& [( V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( A) ^+ g& m1 W; e" p0 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ s% `3 k: e3 X1 A! h  O: B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 i" \$ Y$ [; N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: o+ S- b, h: q& H: j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* \; X4 b9 e/ e4 ]- L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) i- ?8 z3 ^" Y* B3 t$ N$ _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 G( j% Z4 L# y+ j5 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, S- d3 U- j8 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: i0 e/ C; i4 w- r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ O9 X  j& |) B1 l; v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 w$ j- j# |+ O& Z- ]1 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ o" h/ }( L+ R9 z1 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ r$ L- N. I; f' g2 q3 L' ^* ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; U0 W  P, p$ d1 |  r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- v7 |; u: r# l' G1 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 `: d# e& r7 z: J5 U$ E+ ~; j, V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 j/ l1 q! k1 g; z+ c3 {<P>I regret not dying</P>
# U5 d5 w" ~' ]6 w8 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 y; K& D* c( A: i- |$ c  {$ N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 f. P7 ]; ]1 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! e4 g1 t  Q  C1 f$ K# ]" }. e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 t$ r" G3 U, Q' c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 Y( ^* a8 o' V0 i$ S7 @+ a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 }: @% k/ o7 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>