【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; a3 ^* H( R, Q% G( M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' ?. f  u9 C, X; GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 L1 @2 F: z8 f7 j8 R+ f& P5 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 K' m+ Y8 s; A3 ~3 b/ kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" L) R" A9 }+ n' y# E. jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; n$ t, g% x8 z3 Y" ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  o% Z2 N0 F+ b: x+ y3 dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% z1 u& p. A- G/ z9 l# hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 f/ Q( [9 c$ G' N! N9 E5 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( Q4 X, k+ S0 I  C8 d) QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 u5 O: u$ u4 o" Y% h# CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: ?% l& G( Q4 X3 b; S3 B3 w; JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ {0 ]) t  Q9 q$ R  GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  F. d5 C0 w" r, o: r+ hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( B# g6 r2 F  c7 ^  x  A2 b# |6 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 D0 `+ c, [, B3 {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" g/ X0 M, ^0 T5 J$ R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% _" u  d6 r7 C, B2 P3 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 y) q- Q* [* {; [6 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ K' n! P, E7 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# @$ S2 L0 e! t) A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# F3 M& U: m* [) W9 K+ r: V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 i, f: v0 G$ [! o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 c$ X& m( D$ m# t5 e: ]$ Z& L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 q# u( L" Y6 c1 W* z" {) r) b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% G* M1 C0 K% N& v6 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 S2 ^" |5 p6 t! V- ^& W6 y1 Z  J1 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, Y% c0 u" L! y. r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ r7 c/ x" A" f+ ~  A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! |- x) |" d7 G7 n4 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% w6 D/ l7 b8 q* q& S5 o9 y# R- L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 C8 L7 ]! G8 i# A! L" S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* c9 t3 m# r6 G) U4 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 b( R/ e& @! B8 V# w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 b: [7 M7 G% n! I8 ~! q& K3 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; ~5 ?9 k7 N( l8 s) A% z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 ^+ g% U) X6 [$ _5 o( @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ?" \% u. Y: b/ O+ a" q: I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) c" P0 h$ k/ F2 o7 p- [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" {. A4 p1 ?2 k8 z<P>I regret not dying</P>
& p: t( M- |0 Q; A9 k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. o6 m1 K1 l/ x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ W9 b6 j+ G8 `8 g  J: f+ y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, M2 A; I; v8 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 G' X' D' _- R, `) F( b& {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- r8 x4 ~4 _) f0 T- z! l. \; d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>