【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 D! ?- ^4 C6 {7 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 j" l* a" e+ q+ w+ fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- D# Y$ b; {, \; nSeeing the sky content with its love
9 \" S$ V2 K! [7 |' rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% K8 X# n" @' h" lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  Q9 }+ N( n3 G1 O2 Y+ pEvery other word you utter is love
2 d! B8 [0 k% b# l: v! ~0 EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# ?+ Z2 l! ~. BI want so much to see inside your heart
, B/ y  q8 R) SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* r- H0 i4 s, Q7 u: M1 `I regret not dying
+ h0 l: _9 x+ Z9 U2 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 k8 P. u7 N/ b2 NWith such a tongue as yours,
$ ]1 K9 l$ F7 i" ^$ [# H1 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# v% m# T$ C. H% S: U+ z" P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ a& d- R& C4 Y" z6 a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) S8 S1 j8 T0 Y+ Z- u/ i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# A0 D6 x$ |. m/ Z0 o2 l+ S3 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& T% r5 ?$ r+ l: Q2 q: t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 E% m. w  @1 p  o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ D7 w" n. }8 ~) E8 E& @) G. i: r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- h1 Y. p. A3 ?  G( i9 A$ p# |2 U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 P! h  D( l4 i' {6 V3 \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% L, V/ L, [3 }8 a, U9 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 g$ q( y3 o( ]' A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" d6 ?0 C/ Q- S- Q7 u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- m/ h6 y# p6 p2 M7 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 s* A# v1 |- w2 x/ C: y8 j+ o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ o# w: H& z+ O! ?8 ]3 i8 R6 F. F9 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, F( q& v- Y  x0 f. p: R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 M3 @7 I( |' c0 [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 G: T; q7 G8 X' t; ^6 d* P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 ]4 _* \( ~! }9 k" J7 `& x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, E: ~* d0 w: a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 ]6 N. ^: M( U% m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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