【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# D+ M0 M# [+ z$ M+ ~  }歌词我附在后面。
* H% G& E5 b2 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 G5 M* U$ a! P8 Z9 m1 d: W  ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 }# I3 \% p) @& U) D! mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. c  {$ m. `7 ^9 Z" R5 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- B8 ^% m$ S0 C, D0 gWith the moon kissing it every night
- |4 q0 d" v% M- ?Seeing the sky content with its love
+ ]8 ^/ Q& J. ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 Y% e9 d8 S6 C1 O, }9 hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, w( @* L$ m4 r' v5 x8 |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 S0 `0 L/ q6 JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, q" C5 n3 z* F* h% L4 |- hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 N) b# B8 b7 O# p% y* T4 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# j% \2 k. r0 B: MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 i- q9 _6 W/ {; f& `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& y6 F6 ]0 O& H) T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. O2 T: n9 D, e5 `* R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 \+ @- O5 w# ?. O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* J+ ^; m, E$ `+ G" K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 P& S7 E5 Z; v: O3 `( U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- B; z; _+ s1 b8 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# W/ _- z" u& b6 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  }: \1 Y+ J9 y7 }3 s3 I% q; [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 S$ H" `; k; k; y) {& E9 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ P; r3 X! ]$ k4 x, n0 y# c4 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 H4 r; v0 ^3 k2 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 O: w* j4 \7 d  M+ \- F2 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 \( I3 L) P* C! l9 p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: L* l% r- i) j/ f/ L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. E2 o. ?3 D* ~$ V$ R6 I  g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 |7 B! K: k/ D; f) \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ A+ G" _% v1 d/ R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* C0 A6 H3 _* m* W% \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' h. x1 p! ?& Q* P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 {: s% ]5 n$ E# |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 U& x: d0 D5 c+ A' u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( `/ z% J* e/ W' T0 K" J7 o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>