【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
' H5 c- c  V% m( g& M* A5 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) A! U1 `" l5 p. M4 ?4 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 b1 z0 R7 [7 M  @3 |' c. pThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 k. `) l* r- c1 L6 i) rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 Q5 [0 K/ }, |4 ~6 aI really want to know just how much you love me
+ z; W) a3 o9 Q: |2 P% gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) m2 K# z" y( p3 g2 e/ X3 p# XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; O0 @$ s: `1 }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: g8 s, m# i: M0 z6 p- @* PWith such a tongue as yours,
1 q' ?9 u* z+ s8 V: w+ M3 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ t2 a/ E+ h7 u: B& ~! N: bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  {& d6 z. [6 W" S1 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) Z; f! m5 W  J( F7 M- T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ Q) h, U9 o& n* a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) W, p! G+ Y( o% ]. c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& i$ E- p6 R: r" b# _8 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# i7 I5 B, g! z8 m' d3 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, z9 O1 n$ l. Q, R7 B. L7 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 @  Q$ G* n% x& h- f2 s8 U7 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 E; ~+ F1 C% Q6 f( \! m3 A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" Q5 k3 ^0 S2 T5 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 _7 Y& |/ b7 U9 ~  h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" w( V, J, ^1 S8 y0 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( x2 ^# F8 O& T! z4 e. w' I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: E; v/ f6 I1 H- B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 {- M1 j9 A" V; x8 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, a  R  f% t; X- R7 r+ Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ F8 J$ H+ e; h5 C, k- I; ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# B3 {& L4 `2 U4 g6 b& y! W% c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 U* j& f9 s5 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, W8 u2 V0 W7 Z+ S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 n( W# O' J9 M6 M5 Y, x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 K7 m1 q7 B( f& L- H3 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 |6 p- M  l' c3 q& s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 |% h$ F2 v5 a6 B. ?$ s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& J, h$ w- f; `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 y' t) }0 l3 g/ e4 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 g" _/ `. z  }6 \9 [3 M$ V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 V: `4 ^% \9 _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 w9 i% ~5 i( B, E- h% Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" e" T) Y1 W+ }) W( n$ t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) T* U3 _, C8 x. W  }我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. B: P1 r0 k: N6 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>