【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% ?- G9 S8 A7 Q# H6 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ d$ z, j" R5 V6 y* gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# m* \6 p5 D1 C- ^% a( K: tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' \/ K5 U+ U% B& c9 w' l! YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 t* {0 A$ ~/ r6 xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% t5 I) j# Q, N# SI want so much to see inside your heart
4 U7 j2 I& h2 [5 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' n* w2 w: ~1 i' i  |I’m still filled with fear
+ k' _% N( {& J% Z) X- I$ G& NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 |0 V2 V9 |  H. OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ f: v4 U; y7 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ s! m0 ?( I2 G2 a/ H4 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 Q8 I3 Q* \$ M  f  R1 O) u% ]4 X  S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, a6 A. E, W. q' l( ]9 Z' i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 U; L; @7 r9 M1 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! j1 r0 R( G! h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( T. o; J( @- x. u+ U0 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 ~9 Q- c" r8 |+ H. {+ C% f6 R$ S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ n# g* p& \. u' E9 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ g; J1 |" O/ j( k- }, R- R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- j, h& F; D1 P4 x  O" j. M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ l+ t0 U) A' v; k/ G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) X0 Q* |" J1 l7 X/ u4 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' N; |) c1 K1 ?3 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 D' u' }  X% ?- R1 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. t: F$ _4 C; P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 @7 h4 h1 a. _, X% X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" |, }' F1 Y- _7 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 o0 \, h' {, `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& p3 W9 i9 ]/ k3 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 N% Y/ ^; P" D1 t4 N& L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  t2 Q2 D0 F4 D( A) [  p9 D; g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" T. }1 [, U. H" l" _- v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 t2 z( V, w/ j5 ]  k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  L3 k& `  N% ]- `" r8 X* k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 `+ o& Y& u7 i* K' |( L8 g" F" R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 y- ?  c" X) ~1 s# H# @( k5 u! L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ~% [( m6 z$ N1 l8 q1 S9 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  D" \+ t" t; n% d4 O2 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>