【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ D: o8 X: P3 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& r) _% J, C. f, p) W. EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ V* J  |7 }5 a% {9 [# ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, k# h2 A1 L0 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& D* f* \2 O6 m3 x3 vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% ~$ k+ {. F; H% s5 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* P! y' D; O  \2 D7 LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 n5 y8 m0 D) H3 Q+ Z( n" Y# ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 t5 p; I! D* ?* Y# U: QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( o' K/ @/ Y9 J& {" hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 S& W3 v; l+ y& zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% D# b  q! l1 T; {8 r: b, f' B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% i1 Z5 q1 i0 O% q% x0 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) ^2 K0 N. C( q7 q$ V0 ]4 c8 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: u# B; F; w" \; b% ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 ~/ K- I+ [0 y7 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& g( E: M7 n2 _0 N& H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 T. z( B1 U' A5 K$ \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 r5 f% O  u$ }. `& k/ I) c0 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 _5 o- k) K# \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, [8 P0 ~* I! w7 i  s# _9 L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- F5 v. S# l7 Z% \" i9 d* }, x, ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; @5 Z+ ]: _& S- `* @; M( y$ O: V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. _) [! @2 O& B* P# \- w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 P& m, V9 l3 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! d0 n4 n* _) j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 |* A( T/ d6 b, H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. b) S% @1 q) w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" V, c# Q5 Y, d% s; D; i+ V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; \: y+ O1 @0 A# F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  ^# m" \& B* F# O( s/ I/ d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 L5 t$ I+ m& n9 n% Q2 p  a+ I3 P6 k7 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: b$ u* m1 I# h( |$ y% w& h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ o; b1 @+ O9 w/ s; y0 j" O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 f: _0 Y1 }7 w, _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ R4 g! a+ B& c6 W8 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' _1 {! M% e: S9 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ U0 Q1 C" K5 S* M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& }7 u: d, F% ]) U$ n; c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 e5 G/ t) ]0 Z; R7 g$ r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 Y$ b- v2 z. S7 ]" H1 o6 z5 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' Y5 k& a) V1 Y+ W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 M% ]2 ?6 j, u- D# a% {7 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 J; C& Y; Q* f! \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>