【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. d% {& u* s8 Q  O$ R4 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 t8 [7 S% [+ B6 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 I$ e. q% ~0 k# M, ^8 r3 RYou needn’t fear anything
) j  s$ C% @9 ~: P* P1 X9 \7 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* R0 ^7 i$ }( vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. w7 \) q+ g. dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ u/ V- ]6 y- _( \  n3 x, u1 f3 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) y9 @" f1 |7 {4 _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- w6 `9 ?5 V4 e& y# J9 a% O, bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& r' _% G3 a- x( ?8 v; K! q5 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 J" [( t& t' a6 W. a' q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ i( J. x  M2 C, \4 P3 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  ]( Z) g; J% C2 T% O: _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% [5 X. Z! ~1 N' R+ t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 x- O' f5 f+ _$ Z; C/ u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( V4 A7 a  Q1 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 L( O, \( H2 s( v7 L6 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. W; e. L' H0 ~) B1 T2 F3 h- V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 Q% [6 `% ~& v. s' F0 {2 J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; a/ I2 z8 E) Z2 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ t- |. i+ h) I4 V7 @! u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* p- D9 @5 ^- f" h& g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ F: y0 T8 G) s9 s2 V5 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, a0 T2 U2 b: K7 S9 t) E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" N3 y- u* B  _' l, [5 _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 N( Y/ ]8 x- o: F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 x0 l! h3 I4 s4 i; o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 z' |+ W3 ?5 F4 L- @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) o" ~  v: l$ _  p* H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 S: W( J% y5 E% f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% Y4 g* S: V/ l0 q( j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& o( T3 [& `$ g' b. o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) z& C/ T' V" T$ a/ v. C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# I& Q: A+ D/ ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 G/ I/ U2 ]& w7 V: Q& W- ?( x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: W' d+ a" t0 P# W# |( Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! j0 p2 k. v/ O2 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  c- p3 Q1 f& A  J# Q% N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' @7 Q. T7 H5 s, y0 R' n/ u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, ]3 j2 w7 N; G( L: `" @- J. d: r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* f$ P6 P$ e" ]: w$ y2 h* N8 F! Z: O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* B6 G7 `7 t- W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>