【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 B2 t) d& E$ H0 g8 ?' R+ EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. k! \/ L- i# W1 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ J" l; `3 z7 L. g" ?- N) _The sky is happy down to its soul
9 W$ S3 m2 p' `$ q: b( DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( e: x2 D9 r# W8 X; B0 KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, `) |5 [6 [  V( o; q: fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  v9 G+ r- a# U1 f1 u4 WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; K4 k# l  ~" g5 c: V: V8 bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! ^1 O: ~/ Q+ J  W" x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ I7 I7 a, {, C8 v1 a& D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, m. \7 A) x- {/ M: k0 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 \* F% q- }8 @- h# h, W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( B* {' N% M: u, \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 B" d, l" c4 G! R8 W0 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: S  L. b9 L( L- W. @7 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ j6 U6 _/ T. q4 |( B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. D2 i1 p( x- @) K7 `  P0 i  c9 [9 c) k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ m; l- [$ p" z" c# l! |: l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' L% r2 V( E; X' ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 G9 f+ L( D" k; \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 T: W. @/ V0 b9 p) g: [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 _* p9 b8 ^6 Y1 w( ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' ^' k" h& n" K) O, A' V- l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ [% M: b! m8 W- G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) L& J  j8 E$ F- W; f( m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; D6 M& s) ]% V* a2 H, M$ O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 I) u: {6 U" q0 W9 _7 o7 ]3 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, j  A. n# A& H3 l( Y8 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 B; @  L3 P" B- ^0 z# f+ e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 d4 r* i/ b+ i4 F# q7 [3 e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 j. Q8 R2 C' u8 c$ h, H, D4 X1 S+ q; |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: w6 R* F! f& X& I" C1 @' p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 k  n3 m  o: n  ^" b3 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' Q' Y7 o% E( d& S9 W2 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 L2 a% ~) i0 n7 E/ d/ L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  z$ {! B( u$ ^6 A2 h0 L5 p) ^7 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>