【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! S/ V9 b6 j+ t( H0 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ w/ W7 W1 s. p( {+ PWith the moon kissing it every night
% g0 j+ i; V& H* G8 USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 O& V( X" P5 f" k, c, nEvery other word you utter is love
. t! O0 O" B7 d7 u: \# {I really want to know just how much you love me
) ?! R7 O0 C+ UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- A7 O8 @5 P6 W3 C1 D' g* DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ t, C2 w1 h* y7 w* l$ i# jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' B+ B& R- V- @& AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* @1 I$ M7 k) c/ AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 a, w5 k; H) Y9 [0 Z" b0 ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 Y0 E( p! f# X& L( L* m  j$ vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, _$ L1 @# q9 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 }/ b: L, L. g& R1 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  t9 Y. ^: J+ ~% e( i6 u* g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 c: _# G1 a4 s2 E" Q3 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% ~" e! S( N4 |& n- Q$ \. b: F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% K. h7 j% `3 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 T2 ~# \  d# U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 n$ J+ d) I( Q/ c/ t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ B( ^7 B4 a" o. s$ y. [; F# u3 w* ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ X! s8 W# Y, h- u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" T/ T! I  g5 b6 Q( v0 s" d7 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 a  N/ h' d, }8 O% l1 v' m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ C% ?4 z) @2 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, z6 @/ n) v: x  d: @5 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% A2 g, Y4 w  e0 e$ _# Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 K$ `  P: P4 n+ F. A. _1 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ \  P: U3 T" v7 e+ l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 Q# o. O" R, h- }  e/ w3 O9 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* C$ p" O2 o- G) R0 a- t5 I2 k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 }/ v$ v/ G0 f. l7 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 ?' |" s9 M% E, q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! N& x1 A( H% t; |' I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; l5 o/ y- m" n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! F* x7 |1 y% R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ w; Y. s* k2 v* v, M$ L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>