【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 ^% M2 E) R, E$ u5 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 p7 Y( n* N# y$ lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* r* @' M5 G$ R: H2 qYou needn’t fear anything
6 r# R7 N; h# T8 c8 A  sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 p7 \2 q3 J, u% i/ x' uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 A1 {2 Q* }6 m* F5 eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: `" |9 z9 \) H5 R/ ~! KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' K0 _5 X1 I: l/ c3 J) T3 WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; H2 K0 p9 w; {4 A9 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' \- _8 d* J. ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' C" ~/ P) o7 n4 \3 Z9 e. j* ?6 |6 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 e" h5 m2 r7 }  S( x: I% w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 B6 ?! z& {6 k( L9 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; U; e- G) g3 X  S. F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 g7 C9 k4 X: S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# }# R6 {4 X9 A$ A; z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 ~7 E" F* Q' i! z% B4 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; |* s8 M- N. @$ \' [, X<P>你无需担心</P>
  c3 O! h4 J( E  S, w4 q9 {' h$ U% z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 z: n. k# u- }* |5 z/ k7 h& C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' Q6 g4 P( @  y/ @# Z- M! {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% G! Y" Z9 R2 N: C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- z/ ~3 d6 ^6 B( Y: P1 L: |. v! u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 w6 |2 K* r3 r$ T4 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. C4 M0 n. E. ~  m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- A( O+ |+ h6 G- Y  {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 S% B5 M3 M& r; C% F! z/ z0 H  F) h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  P/ J1 e+ B0 V8 Z# }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( {; r0 c+ \, w# Y+ s) U% M: h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ Z4 P9 e9 C& g2 I: i! w2 M" i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# L' M+ Q% {4 U. t* F/ t/ }( ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# |3 q% d- s4 S3 G. L8 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 q% ^6 Q5 B$ P0 N! z5 B4 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 n! ]' m" L3 Z  c; B: |* z0 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; p. ]1 L5 U; Q: X5 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 A! x/ d, j3 b, C, d2 o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ `9 Q1 N; g# ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
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<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- f1 c% O$ F* i7 V5 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) L7 Y& y1 Q& j3 L% [% p$ I: s  L% v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 G' M9 Z  _( Z, W& f) y9 K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 r, S9 Q) n& h5 E我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 l/ \# N% D' M, A1 q1 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>