【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 H% M. W* r4 r6 O- y. \' D" gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  g  Q7 m8 H$ v/ ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 V' T6 t) W0 YYou needn’t fear anything
  N3 B  F; f, U$ FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 X% H3 d4 d: A- [" c7 s7 DI really want to know just how much you love me
( t! w  @5 ]% D1 k' LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 g) X5 w+ V3 Z5 n: d( Q1 c6 J) mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( \5 \" w' S0 X' ^; v3 N! tI want so much to see inside your heart
' [$ _! t# w  c  PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% ]7 k/ m' m5 Y9 q1 n3 _9 Z5 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" e- I5 I" T/ U4 U: y8 R  X/ g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 X* n  Q% W, U/ f9 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 Y! t# U5 K- h" p: E* T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* J$ G; y0 V( k5 k! K" A+ E& \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* j  T( O2 ~3 b1 J, G! g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 M% h4 X1 g+ j; D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% Z6 k3 u" p, e( A4 m# s- E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- D# X( z+ @) g: v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 v1 f9 [3 c' `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( E# }; R/ L7 e( v8 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; O! C' o6 ^9 S* ?3 x5 {' d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 j8 ^; q& T  p! d: H* r$ _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 g8 R+ G$ s8 \4 x. p- h/ z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! P: m5 J) z  d4 z, n  f3 ?: p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 E# [. p1 M- E  `2 E2 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ s' ^- f; E) X  @  x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 i5 B% w2 H/ h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" N, W" e' X5 n; l, O- @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 i4 q" u' C: @+ O6 L' e! L, g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! k2 C5 k' _( m, G7 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
% t) A0 x3 U9 ~  A2 o. _; `" D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: F3 K. j# v5 V; y( @# g9 h! @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 N2 W# t  {+ [% f% k1 R( G1 |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) v9 x) q% w- G9 v8 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& P: P- {4 h; I2 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: V& _3 {2 {0 K1 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 M+ A" O4 _7 i- n1 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

4 y! S3 j" H2 b5 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 i9 V" i" p  P% F, B8 {9 O4 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>