【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ ?/ s, `  `6 y4 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 W# B5 i4 [" ^, y+ AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# S& i7 V3 z/ G- q$ EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! }4 t$ p: W( D+ w6 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 M9 y2 E- |+ |; h5 P! b! H& s0 {# FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: N& s+ ~( [2 p1 A- @) I& M# \& p+ xI’m still filled with fear
$ E' e  \4 x+ p" PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, u# ^7 A$ I; H- X& V- |# KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ R5 n) M& ?" c, e5 g3 tWith such a tongue as yours,
% V. v: i. n, ]3 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* [' l- S+ Q, G# R  a* J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* n2 J" m! B# o5 A1 _3 B+ x8 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 f! V* H' _' t- S, }; w  s9 _3 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 @" B: {! x% w' f9 L4 Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; a; J* b  e' a/ ~+ k- \5 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 o; \- {7 {8 W4 z8 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 l3 u" j* ^4 `6 a2 |( q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" f. y% Y7 {6 ?+ S4 H4 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. k3 G8 A9 C' G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 N2 p6 f  ]# V$ s, Q3 x* Q5 U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 L- r' n' p$ Q<P>你无需担心</P>
! V! R- y( F& X; q9 O+ V& c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  J5 r5 Q6 Q0 ~: o4 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 h7 D$ Z( W, Y1 `6 r7 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 a! q6 [" \5 R3 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 M# W; {8 I9 {5 x, F# P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 q1 L' l: q( y( L. d' P9 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ t  p' D* Z4 ]: m; M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: d2 K' I. p7 u0 N4 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, g. o" S" {$ k+ Y4 F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 v" |8 o* J% |/ W9 U6 i4 g* Q& ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 o/ F4 b$ b. p( ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ b7 N2 y3 ^' t# V' T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ B& `, x, a4 t" Y1 E' Y* M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; A1 h; v: O* s6 E: v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* }6 K& p7 g( B" S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 k2 j6 s9 V2 b% E/ q$ L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 n- k) \+ M: }0 g9 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# ?) w4 |6 _  n# i7 Y. W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ @6 _6 d+ E3 i! k! u# h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>