【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 b4 S+ x6 C. n7 }0 {% O8 e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 Q, w* |* E9 b' x, lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 S4 j- k# h# d, V) H+ T% tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 u% F' F/ `5 K! _6 K( h( yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 t, X4 f, b! _3 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ I  I, M3 ~, @; `7 yYou needn’t fear anything
8 o# D* y1 u" HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  _, s2 k0 n) N) G$ @, n9 EEvery other word you utter is love
9 B  H% @& l, W) T: F" w1 w! XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" }$ X' O5 G7 q2 E2 W" k: x; oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, z1 J3 r; w2 y  i. NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 N9 W& _7 A/ g, h' iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 H" B  K4 ~) I# ]" M# B8 F. i0 CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 {0 k0 W; h- sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 i  T) G3 t- W' E( }, i- q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ a/ v" i1 B: Q4 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 h/ _4 e: ^2 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) ]. {. z  X( Z( B. {* r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 r+ G1 h' @( x( [! A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* N) E+ H" k! b+ e" E- O" G  o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( |$ m6 C# a% J, U, u% v; k, P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  v& y$ g) T5 n7 M2 F" g7 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
1 l) p* \& \, i8 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 k* X2 j' H/ G, O# L6 m- X" b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 ~2 g  T; E# J: M+ A) L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, k( g. m& r& c7 D: T3 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ a7 l+ V/ v% B! X7 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 x) P  x4 B6 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. A* I* H" x: [8 m7 p( a. Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- X8 F  M9 p; S) n% e( L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, @. `6 T7 a1 }) g4 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 W/ t0 q2 M7 {/ T: Y$ N' G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ U3 ]* G* o9 A: P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" n8 v! l4 N9 v1 s* @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 b; T+ P0 `5 d* {- B1 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ q% X( z4 i6 H: T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! {6 m" @% v; o* U+ ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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