【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) q0 W( M4 D' q& N& D歌词我附在后面。
' u( s: U$ d' c( cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  @2 s2 l2 J& V5 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 k4 O9 u/ e1 L$ w5 p: hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ T2 S+ }- h7 }* VSeeing the sky content with its love
1 v+ O& z, g/ a5 Q0 `( T+ `- oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 h; i+ C/ Y/ Q* F  k0 IYou needn’t fear anything
- d$ U% z$ d) xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- R/ q( S8 n  C) O: a, x; bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  O& [0 e' b+ b5 v2 }) {6 V6 ]Nothing can compare to my love
; X( G; l; b6 Y  F" fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ H; @4 a! a/ s  m( \& o: w, ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; M0 p8 t" d7 E9 f! Z2 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* y+ I4 C. T& P. a- C/ BI regret not dying
* ]9 b9 Y: {+ qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" y/ t) J( l7 TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 }& t* x) [9 n+ a2 |! X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; L7 s  S3 T6 `  ^; `5 k9 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- v3 |. k' t+ ~2 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 S5 c2 [. w4 w6 c( W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: B3 D9 k8 U  J7 b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 H# l3 |1 O, p( k9 ~4 f. y6 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 l# X2 d+ V( p5 `% X  k  b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! K* u# A+ N+ S8 M! N  ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ n+ n! q$ r) W3 f( \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, [2 k# G0 G* M. t, z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; P, y9 Y; ~" E" ]$ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* [# G5 ]8 G- ]7 q0 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 G3 j! n  v0 F$ k' O2 w! M4 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) q! Q( ?% M+ ~& a/ I, \0 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 e4 f* |( p! h4 E% D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' s  r- g( P, r# C% Q! k2 |8 [# \) }8 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 ^3 m2 u& H* s- ~$ e& a/ P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 J8 j! _% @  X' g) O3 l8 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 X: F6 `2 x# J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ s% p4 G8 x$ U' p0 V4 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. S- O1 t( ?& n1 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: |# M! p1 R" x7 M0 k( L) U5 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 y: |  t/ ]% \1 V$ ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 M9 W0 X5 f/ G3 o6 s" z. ?- e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 Z" h/ ^+ I! M1 C* O- k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 z$ W: m* }+ v" N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! ?% {) ~- h# }5 b+ @! k. J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' ~, \- w7 f; n+ f6 ~, ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  q  l! {* e1 H$ o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>