【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% H3 s/ B- c4 x$ Y3 |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) p  f; M" X- o. p% pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 T8 Y: Y: L  s- g8 r  k. _( fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 `4 x0 s  o3 C* o$ f* I! zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ ?" }. A& ~( j5 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 m6 t! P/ X" g/ s. g/ K* M' mI love you I love you with all my heart
% f( W1 J  _( u# WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ u1 b/ R% ^, t# F3 @  }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 U& K$ o6 U# tI’m still filled with fear
& v+ V! l9 X, o8 f) ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 X5 |6 M! u! U% P+ k+ MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% N9 q# I4 O& i( R/ a" q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* {# p3 j. F6 O$ Y5 s0 K7 }& g/ j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 k% M: x5 a, c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; g) ~* c; z" `) \7 d" {5 a4 Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& F+ m; h, N# I+ @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 ?% _. G1 c+ X1 D, {& c5 W& e2 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- R$ c* V4 T; f* E$ E% V* G- f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( E. |0 {5 E* `+ U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! [! c) d% z" u8 l; y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! d! ?" A: j$ i* ^# D9 j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 A9 \/ C* y6 }8 w! K- P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 m7 `0 i. W/ w8 w  `/ k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 A# K3 [% N, b! e, ]: T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 B2 x3 s' }! ~3 G2 Z$ K! U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; ~  w6 S( I% K7 t: @7 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 u9 Z! [: M, _+ X6 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 K+ a+ o2 X+ Y% d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 m% M  X% s! d1 u2 |8 m& ^9 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( y* U) H* m* p5 ?* O: P" k. I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' y  V& a1 Q+ w0 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" y  @1 R  x1 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  u' h; S( G( f4 P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! a0 Z  h8 t3 @3 E' g3 e) I$ S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! x' N7 P! u, D+ q$ e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) N1 X% b) S. P3 R2 J4 j# W1 G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ v% P# n' \3 u' K! T! D) ]- d8 j- F' ~$ p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" w4 S- s0 R$ p7 n1 D  r" u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 A+ X2 X$ K1 V6 m* }6 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# u4 t# U4 c. W4 |5 R$ S$ p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: l/ o/ q5 U" j+ B, X: k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" O% l3 a# e- ?/ A* Z我请你剖开它

  C3 o! c# M* G4 ^9 N/ i, u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>