【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' W8 \% a- t! C- P- b% c! @* XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 }- z0 j/ R9 f' T; \( }& GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 q: e0 O# R6 N) i3 e( f+ G" ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 r! S3 S' v* v6 ~. VWith the moon kissing it every night
9 v) s2 K" N$ M- p+ i% ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& J4 |" h4 N' |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: o0 y' _; d- bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) |% _9 U& u/ B, T" i2 zI love you I love you with all my heart
# ]8 m6 C) _& F& ]( N) |$ gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( {# S/ |9 ^/ V, b# kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# n4 [. j5 ^' F) \! \I’m still filled with fear
6 T. {; Q7 I" d2 Y4 H0 HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" S" {. ]) d+ H' a' g- iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  n9 J; @2 K/ I! EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- ]1 j1 ?$ x7 x& ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ ^6 M; [' v' F4 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* N' D9 J! @* p% b, Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) @* T2 d4 c. K; ~% n3 H, n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" U; s3 K: y6 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! K5 b. B: o! q( g+ l' X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" I1 `" p& Y1 D+ Q8 k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 V: a% X- o% u: z1 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 a3 O0 f9 h8 J* G% i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* A# d( t3 \. j0 [* ]$ n& P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 m0 h0 _  i3 c1 B4 T7 h; U1 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 k6 X- X3 l3 C$ o& h6 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ u0 S6 j, @9 S: F# b) w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& R  l; m" r) w3 `6 j5 z* {<P>你无需担心</P>
0 K8 u) `8 u4 Y4 R) l1 W# F9 w6 ]6 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! j9 M; |/ H% B6 i) c: Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 z& Y  N& E% u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  v* Z! B- L8 ^: _/ X( `. \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# Y: i- W5 ^4 N; [* _2 O6 |7 g8 c! A+ w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" T0 w  H9 W2 i6 M+ P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; L5 ~) R9 h, @) ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; p; v- q+ [6 H4 |: m( A/ C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 ]. R: g' G5 ?. z; K! S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* f' ?3 s9 Z1 [# M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: Z+ w2 {, Z# V5 F  Z! W$ `. J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' w( z* I; t& f2 r9 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% t1 l$ ~5 F# ]3 {' |# @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 n: S, L7 [$ U8 r8 ~/ L' Z0 L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& K6 C% r, F; q! p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, X5 F2 K" h8 R/ l# H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! f+ }" @0 Z: w3 E/ P1 S$ F. B7 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) c! {. {6 j: w5 T- R+ k) e. u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! z7 R& r7 ?  u1 E& Y9 r5 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 r* F: @( M6 I4 [0 [4 M. I9 g我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" H' w# Y8 Y9 B1 C) a, }* a. q3 f9 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>