【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# U1 H& Y% p: u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& l9 Q  U0 {/ B& l4 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 @" ^/ o. _3 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 ~1 U# }7 N1 ?3 n8 Z% AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' O9 t1 e' X6 A1 S- _The sky is happy down to its soul
. q! \/ }  Q8 X5 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. X  g% S0 G% O( xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 h3 u9 j3 i6 \- c9 N3 j2 N" z4 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 x, T0 S' E7 oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( q9 ]8 C) \/ ]I love you I love you with all my heart
  i* j- n. v4 |7 D% _3 {) Y# H( NNothing can compare to my love
; K+ s0 T! ?* L9 i$ l& k/ c# TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! q* s: u/ Y/ y' C/ `# WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ w2 k, S- K5 QI regret not dying
1 V3 J* D8 ?9 r/ DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 x3 Y& W* K4 I& |4 G" D* mWith such a tongue as yours,
3 K( h0 C" ]1 p. T- M9 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ e* E3 d8 ?+ ~; f2 a) ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ X! ^  Y# B1 a( I0 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 v! S. |. y' k  O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ s* K$ h" M+ h: @# B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- a+ h8 t- n* q# q' @0 H6 o% [- Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. E4 k) L) d8 Y& a( _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% @) T5 e6 F0 b3 g4 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 f0 M9 O% y6 [7 v" w6 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 o( a; u5 M8 p/ j* l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- n; z6 f( j/ @1 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, N- U1 V! @" P% _/ f: U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# P8 ?, w( r* U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# r; Q4 P( ]- y8 L$ @  B/ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ I6 @' W; g' u& Y/ D: T0 J( }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: @1 o# B  a4 }- B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ ~; h* b: f' m" E" r" r1 H: |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: ~: q( Q& O, q/ K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; c& e4 L! o" ?" y( j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; C" l" C' K. Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( K( P% j! V- j) P9 _7 r% E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 i+ k  _: D" J) i, Z" r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 c, z! u6 h  A% Q0 F" Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 x6 f+ r" x7 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ^$ p% R) _+ ]4 J: Q. U( M' j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ z! {% s1 `* ^$ ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ U& Y2 \! W% n1 S. v8 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  ^0 W, p& }" \( |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: F; v' k" H  r" b' K# a. O9 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' n# _) A9 U% m- h  b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 _2 H9 W- y* R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>