【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 U/ T9 S7 l! D+ v; A歌词我附在后面。
* F6 r5 Y' O! m/ X' n1 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# ^$ s- u/ m( c2 p8 V' E. U; v* e8 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 A% ^1 B2 n' z5 ?6 B; gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( w8 T: z# N0 C# K4 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
, Y; _  E3 \7 J" S7 oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" m! c/ Q' K6 S- w7 SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ ^) L3 v+ E& N6 _I really want to know just how much you love me
( B  Y0 N* }: kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 A- {' E, H3 Q+ OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 q' {% |4 I( N3 b( bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 J& j5 q: u: r' fI’m still filled with fear
3 o/ M" T3 M( K9 C6 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 y: M" b& @2 L2 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( D+ }4 s# g$ b! `7 y% Q/ OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 ~6 y) \& I1 V. j8 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: T3 ~, i8 n, u8 u3 H/ l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 C' C/ E) d* j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) M9 [8 j7 @  _* U: N. }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ h0 a& r$ I1 {: t/ t3 n* z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' Y( f$ S/ Z6 T8 w% u$ [+ V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ R2 g8 q) w7 s* F! D0 ?; d" K$ d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% s& l, w  R  f7 N5 @  `; M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 e, A# E8 e6 e5 [$ v: }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* G" W8 W$ Q4 u3 O. l, o# N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 x9 s8 L$ [' T4 E9 z/ C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- m: z1 f$ @* G" f3 S% a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 i& ^9 @9 F7 }! C8 ]3 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  Q& o% d* M' |7 P- ?/ d, O: k4 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 k! b: I* x# E/ g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# p, }$ Q1 E7 u5 W# }. D" ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 ~" X5 ?& A$ x# E0 J% f5 K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% n2 ~! h; n( o. M# @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" o1 l" j  N& x4 @- }$ }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( x6 }* r/ ~! V) d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 {4 n' f$ ~& v. t) M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( V8 F: |; \8 u2 N5 }* H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 N9 C, ~$ I' r4 w5 `7 Z/ v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 m# Z1 r6 Q  S: Y/ ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 C9 `; G& z% m! O3 x我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: e* Q/ x# ~, L4 _9 l) x- f+ N& O/ L; o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>