【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: I8 q' l' ^& {5 |5 h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 ^0 I, g5 o' a1 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# n$ j. y) O1 ]+ X7 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
  o& k, J; \+ c( s( uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' J5 k" W7 \- U4 P( e! {) p! [  IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& M% u. ]. f( C  u, wI really want to know just how much you love me
- K$ k$ |  w" N1 ~" wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 \; E* g# }: i% t3 s& T; Y3 ^2 s. _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 e; S9 r0 }4 D* W! G! LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ H- g# I; ~( F9 ?/ }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" p3 _' A/ x) RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; e% N/ s+ y; J) b0 R0 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( x% f; h, _6 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 S( o2 x' u: e+ J. }9 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) O" M  c, O' W/ Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; a, D- G( x9 E  T2 K4 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. N$ |. d) X: ~' E( p3 R0 n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 T. [2 f$ @6 F) f) W- n; G- D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ]8 g' O5 E& X2 z* L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: E) u- O+ h! ~) e! |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  q$ Z/ S; ^3 Q' ]- S: g2 I% Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, Z) ?6 r& m7 f3 V$ C  o7 k1 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 N' W* C( Z2 p2 U9 D* K8 t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# O# J1 f; d4 s$ u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* f/ M) ~2 n; B* P2 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) q6 v- m5 o( c: _8 L, d0 v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( m/ s$ e0 s( X2 W& E" I) G/ s1 N% r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) t4 r$ X, F8 ]: b- k: B1 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

4 X: U% ]% N. J5 [2 E. a8 u4 j9 k% d" F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ `- f, [8 i, u" m- K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>