【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; B3 k* Z7 e! g& z" ~- wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 _/ B+ b  ^0 V0 n+ s' ~8 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! j5 K1 V! R% N; t/ AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" I& `6 f) u# W8 N& z4 V- M8 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. `$ Q0 ]" s5 R; S+ C7 eYou needn’t fear anything
  q: |# ^3 u3 i! z! z# l; fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 E- V! t& Q" uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 c) d  S. k- W' J' MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 h: i+ ~% _) gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ K6 \4 G$ H3 w6 M8 f/ v  GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  K' R: o" _. NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ ~! \# O% J: _; p9 n0 G' }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: w6 i/ N- G, M7 p% r: c* A% @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 ]& r7 V. _8 D/ F/ i9 ?4 `0 l% Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 j. t1 {5 K8 q+ c" w0 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 Z! s% p/ _; s% G6 }  w* N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) u: j1 M: @* C8 P# M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ O8 o% O, a$ c6 z. n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' E: c* n7 ]: F: [1 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- k$ t( X: H. v3 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  a: l$ |1 R5 J# ~, R$ A5 n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) v2 i1 J; ]1 ~& k( F6 s+ g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( ~. c! f( h' ]/ S. N. J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 b( m8 J/ }) K: f; N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: F; e4 ], E! h- H, X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ k" O- j7 Z4 P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. l9 u. h" L' J7 G2 I, }* |8 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' T$ P, e. G# m' t- y9 Q- j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ j- Z3 l  p- H: N4 f$ ?+ L1 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' ~' F. x! ?% Z# D1 g' O& k& }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 C/ Q1 P8 d( @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 z* _7 z6 `, c5 E; ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 h7 c1 W( B3 @/ o; ]  f$ [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ b: }" j  |- A- a. _2 ~9 s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ a, F8 j+ w( k5 H' e. J  n0 n1 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' D5 V. H. T/ M8 t- P" z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ c; I$ F  d4 |5 I$ |9 M7 x9 ~! T6 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" z- n- x3 {2 K8 f. L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 ^" L, [' b. z/ i, e9 s5 H$ T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 w! w2 L% [  D6 W( S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& l& U5 j; I% ~/ @6 I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; z% }. e& m) m4 i$ x- \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; W$ s9 ~3 `0 K9 L* c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! d: O4 s9 z$ l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>