【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 b  `" Q9 B4 C) m* KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- f+ n6 S5 M9 O2 A/ n% rThe sky is happy down to its soul
% Q6 i1 k: y% V" uWith the moon kissing it every night
, M2 p. S% i& ~/ h/ Z- DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ n0 a) |7 {5 @/ L1 R/ ^: X0 F$ b' SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- m  w- X4 E) x) V* J. B, BI want so much to see inside your heart
, E" u  D' }) j0 X- wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 n( e" T/ n7 N9 z: DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 q% @( E. {' C& ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 |4 {  h8 @- ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ ]8 k$ U# e' m2 k7 F* i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: D# C2 }/ y3 V' z6 Z8 `) V! x) {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) T& }% @3 ^% `2 s6 @% J2 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: K! K2 l% j4 j4 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: n' Y: \2 v$ L# ?5 ~) Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 F/ e- `# r0 H. [$ Y) l- ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, z3 x9 D" K0 ~. p7 U+ J  J2 m9 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 ]0 {# b) v+ A+ Y. c( T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 X+ n8 R" I1 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 e! h6 b  X9 B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ t/ z- F  L8 W0 w; z. ]5 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; Z4 I* v: w- `: j. K3 m  _/ v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 [) n$ r9 t2 @. l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* l( x$ W1 ~( W% z  J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. D+ n: d- f) }4 a* D/ M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, |4 p! j# A9 l2 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; O* L5 f% T9 s, ~5 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 a% Q* {# M! [9 C# K; ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 u5 x- S5 B$ i3 m4 \( o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 H! D; b& Z; V4 {8 g* d, e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  L$ k7 G* p" u& D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( _/ d  P, Z6 W& e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 N% N8 y" G7 T5 l7 V  k7 @  I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% b: I! k4 |- J( c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- ~6 U; o5 f; b7 D  W7 D8 n- `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 @+ E4 j$ ^  }0 s$ {. d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) U% |" z2 z) i( N( T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! b% V, X  d1 E( M1 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; J/ [% f. K% |8 W0 K$ B& o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( _, n/ D+ R5 E' z0 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ r$ M. K' {5 Q0 B4 @5 H; y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. V. B' ~* H' l9 ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% r4 j  ~5 U0 f: p+ [( @3 b. {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* p% C0 B) c! E3 o: K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 _: A2 h7 P5 c1 H: g3 _+ G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>