【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  ]7 N) Z8 k! N' R4 l4 I歌词我附在后面。
) G: x/ o7 s+ W1 y3 y+ q% oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) s) W' \2 e9 }" c& t' G0 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 j. G  e/ X+ ~: I% v, uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  p2 `/ w1 y7 H2 [+ J, s' eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, X* S; a6 g1 |1 g0 i2 s! i; Z* s9 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! R6 U* l9 z+ n( `$ x# n- G7 k5 AYou needn’t fear anything
9 w1 O6 a7 B/ c, V  ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- r& Z- a; U; m2 lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& o; u: a: L% S) h1 bI want so much to see inside your heart
4 z+ T' [/ p$ V5 i, B3 j- @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 g4 j/ v4 N/ P: {) P* `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) o% [6 z' ~6 ~* Y5 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" |! g5 ~. {% mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( E/ B% d5 v. x% F3 q3 b# w1 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 g; m1 ?! x" S6 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* J3 N$ b0 h$ X) y( I7 t( j/ O6 O+ K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 }' `6 f# s( F! }0 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% ]  Z; ?' f% K+ H1 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 Q! a! {/ y" p1 z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ R5 j9 ^" O0 d6 s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 c+ x! ~( ?+ M& H( B0 _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) X$ d. R- \  ~6 }2 ~2 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) E* ^% n- Q8 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! {# w1 P( Q# n& B# x7 T* B, n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# ~) q; f( f! Y, W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 O4 c$ P/ \1 x0 o. x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, k* @2 e0 u) `% ~4 i) V: e  }$ t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 z" t7 X& C* f; h/ g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; x+ {7 I; i0 r6 K* V* V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. {# ^) Z. d- b8 y: S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! _0 q, R2 U( |; E, J2 w% V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( q  B! c6 @, n8 _- L# }0 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ T8 V9 ^% z/ {- s3 ]9 X" x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 ^0 `+ A! u% H+ [4 r7 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% D, K& t  g( j; B" P. B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ x- }# K3 q: |7 x+ Y- K" m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 D/ g' _6 U6 O- f3 C" X: d- ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ x( [- N. X# D) |$ ^! [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 P0 P. `( t5 }7 `  }$ P5 u我请你剖开它

* H- `/ ?, m2 a9 l) J$ \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 T* s9 E& ?' Z% t+ T# M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>