【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% W2 u) i. h' M3 v2 }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( y0 U: P% s0 c( }. j2 b& z9 i0 Y. b/ CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. ?! J* w+ F" n1 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, J% q0 D8 Q4 P4 W* ?3 M) s; BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 O0 U( y; [: s+ U' jEvery other word you utter is love
% T" B9 _; U  U7 Y4 ]# UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, ~! k1 g! x  t6 r7 N& d4 m/ A" `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 g& x8 O' y5 P. P$ r3 P/ cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- J& b; @7 I, F7 e0 o9 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ r: ?. L, R$ K. W; [) VI’m still filled with fear
- W& Q2 [6 ~0 v2 X1 G1 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: d" h9 l  ?7 E+ c: b; G  B. YI regret not dying
& Q8 _' r, @8 |8 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. X. n- W2 e7 k+ M+ z8 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% n' B1 b# g4 ]# v$ zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 E' m& F8 M3 u; L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: d) g; Q6 O9 a/ s2 n$ M" U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 C+ q* {% ~; H3 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& m( Y# `+ b3 ?" {' y: C2 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* m  o: M6 b7 _. S0 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 J3 u# i) O" F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) Q/ j2 ]4 C" |7 y5 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 {+ r! a. G4 n5 [/ |2 h+ L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, @8 m- y$ q. y6 f6 T/ F: E+ g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- L7 z& J" a8 k8 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ Y: z8 m+ ^4 m, A0 F3 M! P+ e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, B7 ^9 s9 {0 X  ^$ q. `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! @  [+ N, P/ L! `6 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! p1 ~. A  B+ X% M9 P# {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  `# a: N  R1 G" @8 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( r6 I; K- x' n+ p, C' r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( z: J3 u6 P5 P8 L) ^/ F4 e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- S) ]0 Q3 i* i4 k) O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 J1 u1 o+ g( _3 a8 x6 N5 t* n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 T: [8 J' g0 [' O; o! V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 ^  Q+ f" ~" Y/ \1 |+ }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 P: h) L2 ^* D  {/ J; o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 M: t7 O8 S4 O- p6 p$ \* R+ d3 N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% S5 ~  R1 A3 l0 |0 l# j. p+ D/ ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' ]0 F: b9 f# p<P>I regret not dying</P>
; T( L( y  x- Y! W$ ]- T# B$ f4 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 a6 a& z9 W( ~9 g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ l$ a) ]' N" f: `- |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 e3 m% z+ P3 E; ~  E  V7 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# [/ F0 i; Y, x9 Q, A7 x# e2 \* A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# L' }" p( k; m- ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' ?- a, L5 d0 `8 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! a8 c% \4 H: p/ ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>