【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 ?9 S  k9 ^+ s# A- J5 a- Q3 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) C0 p& Q: P: e. s, kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 i* a( u( B+ g) tWith the moon kissing it every night
& B0 h8 `2 q. ^3 F4 y% a8 G, ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 @+ l- h2 z$ q; ?" O" L5 ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* [) V: T4 o$ ~3 X8 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
- C5 K/ |. ~" F" ~- h3 G( w- t2 oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. l0 X6 }- v$ M; L/ k  h( D) OI want so much to see inside your heart
4 M* K. [( y+ e$ f# r. ?. KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ |) ?+ Z; }! w% }0 TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) Q2 }) E' p, b  C% l4 RWith such a tongue as yours,
3 i1 `1 D% ]) q! V1 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, o( V& E5 D" e6 h$ _$ ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 j$ F7 e+ \# d) M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 {" |% u/ M5 T9 S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 ?% e" _5 u. l' X- ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! G. i9 M. H3 w( [, K3 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ y/ [1 Q5 R% w) U# r* A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. K, w! z( w, m6 d- P! q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- i( q) |& Y/ {3 V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  F/ |) [  f0 R: T' h* K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 ~& ]6 I2 V2 ]7 z. ~4 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' N8 ~3 D  d9 g! K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 Z4 T. x. n0 ^; f% X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 E8 k5 C0 Z  F& I8 U, C+ T; P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) _! w1 u! p5 c1 @, O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 v8 j: Z; M, f: z4 t3 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 l/ L4 u! R& N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 W- d$ C( J/ e3 n. j& b. c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ y0 \1 t4 }9 v" C# s+ J" k' p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ t; m' P& f" {4 o0 R# C- [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( X% F' T4 ]! [9 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' ^4 y: c) v# B' W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* f/ {3 T0 n, f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* U$ [" k% B' W9 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ |) t" @' X. Q( _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! I0 ^" E+ p3 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 L1 i0 a; W. X- a2 R, L我请你剖开它
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. @* E* h7 L( w% R$ L4 a" O7 u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. O0 t7 Y- v$ N2 ~9 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>