【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" s+ n+ v5 ~* T- X# o. F: x0 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' _" e$ {$ V5 E) t- L2 a7 _2 @% sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' f4 o  g3 Q2 j$ MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ k6 E/ Z, l) L! Q* V; l, ^+ z6 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; u% l) x' `1 M. A; [With the moon kissing it every night
6 S3 z1 z, Y9 M, L- e' hSeeing the sky content with its love
1 P) Y+ V4 H. ?" TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 E, J& ~' E3 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 a( O  E# u: [+ k3 G* T$ o: C+ ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ m9 ^- O. ?) l. Z  BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 Z2 {, U! Z3 B# II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 m& g" q' l0 U2 s& }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* }& N' Y8 w( k' R3 D4 F$ iWith such a tongue as yours,
2 q6 L* t: P7 h- ?( wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! n9 j# G) t8 T% h0 W6 `4 \* @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, n: Z' [+ v8 R* T, A- ^5 sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- Z- ^7 }( ?6 L. M4 C: y5 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' l/ J* A. m. m9 s/ k6 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 [1 y1 P" W$ q$ I& ]5 c% @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ g; C2 z4 j+ F! z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& G9 B/ z- M$ m) E7 w' g$ ~/ F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) ?$ ?' R: ]9 ^' L1 S4 a+ G& K/ m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 L  C( C' `/ `& e$ d3 [$ _1 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- W1 a1 Y6 h' k6 p) B: g% `* J1 G2 u<P>你无需担心</P>
* g9 w: Z7 Q: l8 d7 e3 Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% M! y; o0 d# v* o1 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ c3 x: v4 k" ^  e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 J5 n$ a1 Q/ t* ?. R; a7 ~$ C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" A0 N( m9 J+ @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 o4 F8 Z9 j" b% G( o2 Z) B1 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ _, z# \6 P! D- E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; o8 m5 k1 [( F" L! r8 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 ], m. _# B" G% K  k8 [5 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: q( P# z3 s! E4 G+ z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 E9 f9 P" k* n1 e: I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 I' X- Z9 O& C# v# T0 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
; l# {2 D) {3 }, w( A- x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 a- ^2 k* \! ~! U, C9 G2 W: a" u& W+ S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 r3 y& V2 j  p) [7 M) |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, s( M8 _1 Y' |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; p4 U" g9 g1 `! K- V4 p8 e0 |2 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) d" ]4 H2 B6 ?7 O; H+ {% w( A( M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 w6 `" a5 u0 t; _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! {8 Q" D2 D2 Y9 [3 h- M+ h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 {/ G5 c7 i. W9 l我请你剖开它
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- r- X- F4 O( J( d1 [7 j. c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ ^7 X" s, F5 r, R- u+ L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>