【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 c4 B" {* W0 E; F歌词我附在后面。
1 |9 V  U: E" I; R' G- XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ X1 i6 m9 h# o/ [. L! X9 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: Y; g! Z! v; m+ c5 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 q# W* \, D3 D. b% f* w/ L8 C$ mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, |, D9 c9 g( hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- I$ \# x2 a- E# AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- g6 c- i4 X7 ~# ]% P" |, DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# _$ n" K, H  p: L3 z; J1 I9 xNothing can compare to my love
4 s/ k4 f: I; j, CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ m$ F5 P7 b; L$ v8 p1 FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ G* Y' d* ?. U, AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ f6 c. d' K, [* V2 C; L+ v# XI regret not dying
& `4 ]0 a0 |, }# C$ S9 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& R' @( ?: f$ a( L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, |" p7 w. ?+ K( f, Z$ c8 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, Q1 y2 T% S7 }4 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 a8 t8 f- M+ Y% [4 B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, M1 \* g7 d" O7 B- ^" l% w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 f& q! c+ ]! C9 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 z  G* d7 F. j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- b( @/ K9 |6 m* P9 z. Y- W- k+ P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 ?! p' m. I! `9 g/ Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 N* `- y8 I8 b  h  |. j) \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 p/ w+ g2 V: h: ^0 ^9 f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' o) q( {) Y+ H* _$ V3 O; w; D! e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 n& w" D0 o! O7 E& k! K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 _: j$ p* f, X* ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 I( ]' }/ f, g3 Y  Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- W" p5 A: T+ ^) ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; M2 F% ^' K- |* D+ a9 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; p4 @2 h, C. N- u7 J/ T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 {, g" y/ j* {4 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>