【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 b9 Y  i! h4 a+ O5 r+ vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" K; V+ \# ^. ~6 Q4 A' sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  }5 r! s4 E: l3 T/ H/ QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& W; G3 `& q- o* sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 a8 e4 X) a% T; ~You needn’t fear anything
# b4 f7 }9 l: fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# Q% \& }- V7 ?3 Q2 tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 F0 t4 w  s/ w+ t2 |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( N2 p' @: J+ Z$ wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 d# K+ R3 y! rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# ?' ]- i& Y7 ?9 ^2 R3 ]With such a tongue as yours,
3 k# w/ G+ B; F; \+ X, iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  l# R6 V0 v  z/ E6 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 m& n' \1 m' C) o8 R$ s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* h/ a3 H( d! p# h; n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 l8 F7 P: s3 h  X9 a# p+ T+ n7 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) ?" D! V/ j9 M8 Q. f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- E; e$ T, w- H9 }9 g. l1 B- a3 L# V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 Z8 U1 n+ u5 v2 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ ?$ B3 G$ R* R& ^; q* G# B( T+ T+ i; g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
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<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 a0 L7 \0 {# t, T& j; O, \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- f) w8 z. W- b" q( O3 c2 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) {2 [# C8 u4 N, }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
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  i0 x$ e1 i- G- B. @0 {: Q% z8 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* j1 k, ^8 X% f( \- u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 P) m3 g5 t4 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, ?+ e: Y& Q# L+ s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& l5 G1 y% q! M+ e& ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 e, Z  o8 H7 C/ g$ c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 Q, Q) ?! W: B* V) {* }& m* m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 j1 Y; x1 ^4 ~! ~5 T; f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" |: V- w, r* b* W8 R7 z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  a* w- C: G) u) L' C" q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- P: N1 L# ]% }  O* L# m" a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 ?9 E: c3 ]6 ]2 Q' I) Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>