【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
) T1 @6 L" ^/ W2 p! LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% ~/ c3 ~" t4 J4 ]/ |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  o" [2 g) ?7 `# Y9 ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 j: j9 T1 d) c: i2 ?  k9 m, y, yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ o/ R/ v" U. _' I. L$ H5 |You needn’t fear anything
, O$ m# w% b  ?9 M$ [9 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( P. ~# r/ g/ j" i' KEvery other word you utter is love
" ?8 s7 `/ V, E+ U6 X1 D( k2 d* ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 Y7 f$ j9 k. _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- D0 e; }2 r2 A5 ^! j) [# ^& lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% m( l- t1 b6 p# RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 i5 o$ J3 A' ~' |: aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. ^( @1 p7 u" l" NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 y! y3 K; ^8 V! q+ \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" |' H% E* ~# f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ Z, t: R, I5 b( n& d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ t% p' X6 \* v/ F& b+ B* ?5 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# J2 `% w! u( R! q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* `4 W' f0 V- u; A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! e4 U4 d  c% Y; V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 F% u" r! L; @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" P) [# f( s9 t( V- L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# h3 v* d+ L7 M5 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 b' R/ s/ B! j6 r4 _; V+ w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 x$ x# A9 x  w1 ?3 m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% q8 P2 [# x2 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 c: n0 e7 |9 G( h. h% M& K- r; k5 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 A3 _, }* \1 G$ O% F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 R8 P/ s  R( T* F7 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ A1 a* y0 [5 V; P1 f3 a: O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% z/ }& V& S2 Y  v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, [) W; N' u; Q2 n  o/ c2 p% ~) J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ D' B* O. Y% E4 Y; S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 X' d# q7 m2 b, C$ g- z0 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, ~9 Q3 G. H4 e4 v! k4 b6 e2 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: h! l% Q( T7 V" X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 T* y) `8 K+ }: [$ }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ i7 y  C& {5 u/ ]0 a+ F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; u0 K4 W8 f5 Q' t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 }* M7 W- r, w  a4 z8 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ g& e: N( c' _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* a7 W6 a6 f- _1 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>