【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 \8 j* i4 t5 S8 q歌词我附在后面。
) _9 J' f) F* W$ D# L1 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  @* D; i0 \* d2 ?! z: U, j3 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 m6 l+ E; R0 N* H" o, F7 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
" U% p1 A* Y2 s' f0 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- e- ^  X/ ]  P% kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 A7 r3 Y# D3 }& n! {  F( z1 U3 \8 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 W5 @9 D) P/ M9 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ K: o9 l. @0 d% S# I, \2 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 x3 x8 G3 _. {With such a tongue as yours,
) K) T8 A; A  z+ r# A3 @# Q6 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- d, s% ]  O  Y2 {0 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  ]/ W+ j$ M; CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: L3 v0 Z" I4 R3 s4 U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& V1 R( M5 U* D! P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  g8 N, e! y- L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 K# A% B/ B  l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 Q+ a+ b% `( G* V, C! O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) }  S) M2 y. |+ o4 {( Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" E: C. A4 k9 f4 j- E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 W* e/ `3 T+ g) q; U, I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; s* I( B2 G9 K( K' G- Q& @# O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" N2 X0 f: c9 J+ m6 e: H<P>你无需担心</P>
5 E1 n) w. N9 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. j5 G' @7 q$ ^5 ?* \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 s2 n- ^( R% Y9 N; B0 D& M6 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; v, ]- k( C' m9 O' w! Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 f- a1 C9 E; }! N( x) Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 r2 W' P8 `/ O! R, x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 ^3 s# l5 I" v# Q, z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 M! t2 ~* @* [; o0 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, ]+ A4 A. @- M" u/ L' _: @/ R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( j, [" k0 J; k5 i; s5 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 d4 \; S: A  k0 o7 d  U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 G  P1 C5 X0 I( |7 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) p% F8 V5 Q# c2 n( H( n) K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ }' r3 H/ e, {& ~# {( q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 J' S/ e. |# k6 D1 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( o+ y4 b$ H# L; m0 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; E. N3 ?- h9 I4 E" s( d我请你剖开它

- ^; i% G% j: R7 ^2 e; x: @4 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>