【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* ], {  n$ k! s8 Y6 hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) F8 [1 S5 p; B. ?" @( ~; ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" D/ |- o0 b( i/ YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* \' D1 J( u2 ?/ qThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 }' @9 e1 S5 ~4 o0 ~+ ^) nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" B7 F/ F/ ~0 y. N, kEvery other word you utter is love
: m6 g' ~& O, u+ _1 AI really want to know just how much you love me
% b  @* h+ c6 q! a" d3 qI love you I love you with all my heart
2 G! @$ _1 P* M6 g  aNothing can compare to my love
7 ^. V) `# ]' BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 i/ n3 y, R! b6 R, W$ s( GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 i% `+ g% F( W- a3 WI want so much to see inside your heart
  D1 u: F" k+ }9 h% b" \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 h! X; T. x1 E9 {, OI’m still filled with fear
9 l9 h' v* d. |+ M$ ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 T4 m# B0 q0 v- DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* O6 S4 K4 x# R3 j) ~. f6 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, N4 k- t( d0 p9 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# I# b( E  ~. ^8 d, K  n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; q4 Q5 |+ b1 `2 e, S7 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* N; O4 @/ s  V; l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* l$ @; Y' \- Y- k8 P3 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' ~# Z2 s! {- f+ J1 s2 A( t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ I$ ]2 T( V: W: \/ p* [9 r4 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 J; s1 o/ G2 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) c' k; S- q8 q' x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ [% K+ u. v3 p) j- [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 T5 P( \4 y, Y- h% d4 i$ T4 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; L4 n1 B) z7 V1 O0 e5 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: I, |& a3 g0 i# Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" F4 r: U- |2 S1 I$ y4 K& ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ N. |# a, N9 w, T, B$ _" o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' A4 W: Q+ j& V8 r: P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 O% L0 F! z9 J0 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ Z* q' S% W! l9 A$ u7 z- l9 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! [; i5 z! c0 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ Z+ S: R. H. r9 D7 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* w3 x( ^/ ]7 K! P1 [# v( y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 S9 v) @1 H. z( W& j- Q/ r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 f1 X2 m' F- B! C, F7 }# j2 i, r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, N; q3 y: ~6 V; Q8 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ i; g$ X! T7 s! C  l0 U* m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  L: K6 B/ Z( l  _; |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' K, B8 u' |& R# [" |3 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. x1 F7 ^5 [, A$ b- J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 u5 i2 c1 k- Z7 [# C6 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. Q# G3 F! q/ p4 t" x3 [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' q8 O- L. M0 N# \) e# l& N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>