【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 l" m2 v0 q6 S/ `; Q: \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 ?- z! C. v" ]* Z% VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- h- _( d& G4 R! b' r1 W9 C$ T5 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ _: F5 ~8 a0 ^+ g: }6 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# I) X0 {+ W$ B% J5 D3 j% N5 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; m( V  ]1 J4 D9 T; w; W% fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( C! Z: i- ^2 bI regret not dying
& N! w' |* r" `6 X- c3 t! O0 m9 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- s) Z& ?+ G6 F2 O1 f# x, ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 {2 D, W1 t$ e0 S# c: cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ Y  ]0 h. p. ?) n1 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 Q1 a: e( B, ]+ a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 G2 w5 z  \. F( t6 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: @: P4 p/ L. T* `# J( a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, r3 x$ e+ Z! @" w: d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 ?% S* T+ y1 W; J2 t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' |) p" {2 {# M+ M# y" ]9 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 C; R& P4 j' Q4 o' L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 [5 u( e" z: D: u7 z& j9 C<P>你无需担心</P>
( v' y' f, W9 x8 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 V7 I, Q& X5 a1 g* @, s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 n" Y7 ?% n2 J" T/ u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: H$ _) n6 S# c! S& K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# ^" w8 |4 F: N2 L; j7 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 P. c- z" v- n# O$ v# E; \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; s, V% Y% d8 b; L3 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( P3 m2 j. A' Y& X- ]+ L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. g; N- q( m( G7 [) Q% m2 w1 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 z% O, e2 k0 W/ J' {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' Q' |5 [' e3 D" P' r# O$ `+ i+ x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% H! M  T4 B3 [% K' h2 l5 f/ z5 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; j. q8 {7 M3 K# `5 W0 l/ `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ G3 u4 N( _2 }2 V9 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' t7 \$ S" G+ {. G  K- v, t* l: I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& P2 X5 e, m  @: p. S2 n1 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# @) U2 i) w: B! L9 i  j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, F; Z# n: J4 L2 j/ }8 s1 H# O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 I1 d8 H; c% F2 i+ N0 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) P! F+ T$ k) Z- T6 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  V' x& K3 z( e3 t+ S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& G# a4 T( `7 h我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" s* C% v# L% v  u4 E1 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>