【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 R/ G( v, X2 }歌词我附在后面。
4 r: k2 b& K, i6 N( F: Y  v2 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, @1 J+ q: k% K8 D: A3 \( @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) p5 R' \, [2 d! J3 ^% H: Z1 O  y# aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- \4 y3 b# I. J/ \; H8 Z* t8 n  C: KThe sky is happy down to its soul
. u  g( P# V* P/ N1 f9 L' SWith the moon kissing it every night
4 u. R1 o5 D2 u% D( z) bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ c0 g: P# s+ ~) y( ^- YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# y% F: x& e5 V7 C) wI really want to know just how much you love me
5 m9 i9 F; @, E) S; l2 i9 E' K8 X$ DI love you I love you with all my heart
5 X2 x) Q+ u1 D9 M; K! ^% YNothing can compare to my love
2 ~3 @# h* ]& J3 w9 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 A' S5 }8 F1 a: P; VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 @. J4 i, h4 |+ n* N% L* g1 {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ V9 B. a3 q1 R5 e. j/ nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' M$ N9 C1 }; c8 E0 e7 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 p; ?  Y; Q$ W9 p+ |/ M6 U; c, {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 ~$ m, Q5 z% L: ^: A1 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 a7 q1 {* h1 D* J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) d4 _2 D* A  ]' k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# F0 y% Z) N1 m5 f4 |& D8 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ^7 u* j" ?* U, g7 v! S# H6 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 L9 p7 S8 |# Y* ]9 P/ ?3 f) s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! G( y' @/ a, E1 ?4 k& d. [<P>你无需担心</P>
* \, K- I& n% n8 T% o2 `% L4 X) Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# o4 E5 B3 M- C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ G/ ^" f% j" v' H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 [0 P: N8 j3 J# {0 F! C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 D; z( I8 n+ B' [5 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 K2 q) `! f4 j; Q7 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% ]) l, Q+ O0 A7 [: ^/ B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ }, m. p1 h2 k/ {" N, ~4 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 g1 E7 N$ ^+ d- ~% Y4 c  a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 i( d/ I3 }3 ]4 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( B% X% ~9 |3 `- Q; x& a2 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( u7 \9 j0 t% S& j<P>I regret not dying</P>
. H8 p  A1 z: u% s+ _4 X. ~5 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 j8 a9 b7 g) ?: d; _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 M" |2 l9 P! h' q1 z, _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: _  b+ o4 D, e$ G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  d' B- V! W8 V0 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 m2 ^4 r9 M! H2 J) R  Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% R4 a  a, e% e' a% b3 M1 v8 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 N1 ]2 p' b, @( l" L* x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>