【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  Y" z7 y# M; e2 {7 D4 D; `* u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: G  z4 x2 J3 O8 q5 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
# E' y9 \  u& e  [) h+ }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 h$ M; [& d8 Z$ R& YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) _. O4 p5 y: `0 Y. qWith the moon kissing it every night
, C9 [; Y6 e- T3 c9 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 V( w0 U$ B4 u- k. y7 m- qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# V) w- Z  v* C- YEvery other word you utter is love
5 M9 D) [+ Y" i1 \* H7 l! C" V  [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 y5 t/ v, r. K5 T: q( K& WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ T6 N7 v' D% q$ F  uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) y6 z/ L7 Q7 g. N- sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& T1 N" c  Z" _; iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- m* q; E' S9 [( C& ^2 IWith such a tongue as yours,
9 O9 M5 o  s5 d& G2 ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& Y! t+ V0 R+ P* [. \! FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; o8 A& A$ i+ ]% F9 i6 F* L! @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 A* [- v3 U, ]! F% _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! m; u' K7 N6 H! r; j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* u0 _' q! h: f. R  M5 M5 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 M+ V% [$ @. r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' x) g  |3 N4 }# e! u( v+ n" k: F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, _! l( O1 `# M, R3 k6 ]! o& R' W6 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 P+ H0 G6 m9 J% }, i, r* V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ l# {7 P7 ^' O# W1 e  W% y, h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, c7 c9 j5 [# K: I+ x! e: _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ |" V, \; |  x5 S5 I<P>你无需担心</P>
$ R4 ~) n7 c1 I4 J2 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" B5 K$ X5 e$ n2 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" }) }8 W7 s# y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, @8 b* D9 C/ Q0 e% j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- _) E! F8 |' M: A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' Y  \% x0 h% T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" Y8 V" }6 T2 _' \1 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% U; Q" J, d2 N6 O6 S. |) `/ B% V* [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 g4 z6 w& }0 `$ ^# P/ P5 J- I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* A0 Z9 F, D. L( X$ ?+ b& x5 E, f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; P/ |# D6 m/ ~( e, k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  U9 l, @" n1 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; K! \- h6 `$ c) ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ H7 }# L, d6 G# N3 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 X1 t# |- ?. {# T& `* J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- n% [6 k* s# x. n& w* M# E* R2 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& |- T7 y9 z1 f4 r2 |# l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 E* m$ n- t3 W4 [- d5 e) B8 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>