【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 M; J: Q( B3 M$ o; K$ x" [歌词我附在后面。
' F% I% q. Y. m" xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ ]9 y7 b( ?9 t% c) eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* N) ]1 s0 k: nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" s4 E" _* z: H+ t# }2 `! USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% F- F- z# }! y; AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 T, g( r( V6 G1 G' w! YI love you I love you with all my heart
2 |4 D. u$ p# i( t, z. WNothing can compare to my love
, H$ ?0 M, M" z" t$ eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 G. x$ |, z0 u# w8 _2 d1 B! l: l( I; pI want so much to see inside your heart
5 u5 A3 C0 z: hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ G0 @/ z: U# S1 U6 }: @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* p' i2 l8 c1 U  b4 ^. K( f- |5 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: \! r' o$ n8 t6 Y" k) q- q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# r; G4 t" k' @  J  O! y" }1 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: s0 A' [8 z: X" i1 v9 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 @# u) m8 a4 B5 L, H$ W! ~$ w# e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 j7 ^$ v" ]! v; D( l  O$ N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" u1 B8 m7 G0 R: J( A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" U2 a" z6 _  J/ V3 f3 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 X+ x& g+ l4 a& @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ r  X3 i8 q/ p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. ~( e) X. o/ a9 v: A/ M9 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: C  P6 [7 p5 M  x6 V! Z! g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ \3 x; L& z. t, \; i; H. M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' V$ D: G& [" t* r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! w$ Z9 X' V. s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ C+ n8 o, w9 h3 P" t8 ?4 m7 R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 \' T" e7 [) e1 u/ Q' N3 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 l9 P$ Q! ]+ ]# |+ ?: J/ I1 B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) b( x! r( m+ h, G8 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ ]. ~, r& \& g9 K( k5 g$ y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" s; T; C  h% J: K7 M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 r. t8 F6 h. i& V2 b, ~/ K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, q4 l, K' ?# O7 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 {1 c8 G0 }! d. E' j! y% O( x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* h- P( u2 L2 ]4 N# R9 f# K+ E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) @; q' T4 o6 `' r6 ^; U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>