【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' a0 X" C7 `" M$ P8 {2 ]* }: XWith the moon kissing it every night
7 d8 |3 U+ M( lSeeing the sky content with its love
# L; {6 g& z/ J7 E6 P5 G4 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ Q5 N8 n. S2 N$ IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: v- I8 K; f& {: K5 r! ~) @6 IEvery other word you utter is love
2 }: y3 t4 ^4 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
4 g. U: O7 a8 J, JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( s: A2 q4 V4 b, \0 a/ OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 x/ A/ E) \2 {, OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* i* L7 u/ q1 }& W! L& p9 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: ~# z# J8 G9 }, B& S, s: o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- u# E  x- y. _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 a7 u/ a3 n+ z' j+ a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  O- S% W* q4 B7 H- b/ ]( s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 {1 j2 |& W( Y7 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: ^- |5 a, x/ @# G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. S# `9 v$ w5 M2 H4 y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 ]. c( {0 z- A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! i, b; |6 z: U  r  D7 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 j; H+ ^) q8 _- R4 z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 }8 q0 X; J) l9 l/ y  g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 `0 j5 a  y/ R- ~3 P, Z' f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 \9 Z8 S- ]: I# o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( Y  R& c) Q! E; F% A8 j$ V# A# C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& [+ T: b- z& j+ l3 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 i/ M& ~- s1 W; i8 _; j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ B7 K" o* z2 X3 c, a. K1 t2 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 p8 C' l3 _, ~# Q8 b% s  m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* K) Y) Z1 A8 Y( }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ p+ |# Q7 O( [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" p' |; o% T: j8 l" P. L% M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ x5 b' U+ j' `) R& Z" C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; i" G* e& G& m2 x7 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 ~9 a5 m. r  ?, |0 q- x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 H* q' o$ b& e/ @3 r: R$ \" o3 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 U; B& B3 a8 d9 ?3 L/ `: D1 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: c- s% @7 _; r7 ^6 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 t- z( v  S& U, N4 U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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, K2 Y6 O8 G7 R( ^  ]7 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>