【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 U! g  z) k. Q6 R( oThe sky is happy down to its soul
% d* v- L  v. I7 @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 L) q( W9 q4 G0 S, i3 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 \5 B' s1 _: n) A9 T' T- o, ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" j, q6 `4 w$ b% e5 H( s' |6 xEvery other word you utter is love
. V6 w1 |1 e, R1 S: {- j5 GI really want to know just how much you love me
" ^2 t$ m3 K: b0 N8 ], G3 NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! D: R4 d, J" o3 ^) iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ J1 \$ n' e2 I4 {- T% MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' A) u8 R2 y0 |" g& P2 [4 f$ uI’m still filled with fear
1 u6 m# d: ~+ v2 Z2 n+ JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& T+ |2 j2 N+ Z, W, bI regret not dying
. q: g1 C" B* fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) y7 E3 Y. i5 F. p  P7 b& O* _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 o5 q* V- w1 I4 Q  J4 p' _0 B2 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& w. k' l8 a. _/ ]' O* |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& G# z: \: ~" v2 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" Y% W0 O! w: @5 ?6 u2 m5 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ [& P2 H- M& n! i+ J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" p) L* b* J4 Z& q9 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) o( |* s+ N! f+ ~4 M+ l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 e) d# y1 i; _; L( z8 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ u7 l4 L7 Q  n) M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: P6 k) F- s0 U' `( j4 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 d5 I- z/ O: I& q! k' m( q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. |8 Q- p0 W) a, U1 n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. p+ e. L/ Y/ O" a5 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& t' B9 O7 V7 \4 _  M( N4 K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: K% e/ H4 y/ l  p) A  R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. y5 |5 y; B6 Y7 Q7 Q5 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ ~+ x; V5 z, m- t( K' d$ |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; z: q; S. q) w+ ^5 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# `8 F5 ]7 n; f  L: s4 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
) u: d- [' U5 A  a# g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* _% ^" {3 K/ r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ }5 Q) N' M1 Q* j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ i+ q) s+ I+ ?/ |& ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' B3 R- ^$ g/ ?4 w' V我请你剖开它
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) V% u0 L( K0 ^- M4 H: h# }$ | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 r' j% N& y  T1 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>