【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( N! \' u: n; s/ ?. K- J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 B9 I8 t  V+ O- K  r/ h6 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 w- P" N0 p0 ?! I$ F! pWith the moon kissing it every night
+ W/ B9 Y$ Z, x" J/ ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- \7 q: m2 j4 {6 U# T. T! _* o( \6 aNothing can compare to my love
7 R3 k) U7 H' D. V# ]1 F- {6 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- z' l  I8 }, M* h. OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 a5 J  c6 v2 F- t# w% f2 y" dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) g- G- [* y6 fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, |- I( d* B4 h: K" UWith such a tongue as yours,
4 Q1 h3 c! i% K9 f1 ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 ?; u# C& g( vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( `  R: R, n% F  ^4 P' M& F- CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( Q5 H) Q) S9 V7 k& x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ P, T) A$ P' v9 R: b& ?4 Y$ a# Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ {: e4 M* ~; E4 j0 _: w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( m. a5 ~- C+ l+ J$ G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( Q: M: M9 w# f, |9 a/ d4 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 M& s; |5 m  ~2 Y' ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 b2 k9 v. w0 V! \' h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, D, L) `4 y2 L4 a: ~" z2 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! B( ~: C4 Q6 a- i; {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 S/ B' C. ]. L# ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( X3 k( J# {( I7 [0 ?) D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ i; o/ {. f- g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! o4 k9 b- ?: D0 x+ u( b, P, R* [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 H( f% Q/ ?. w7 ]( l( ]! i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 K( l9 \+ |- `- h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 k! t; r  j' b4 Y) L& q3 ^8 s9 z5 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" p! i8 m3 V9 x  u/ ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& F. l4 [; U' Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 E2 o3 R/ z5 E- A, ?" E% f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, q; I1 H6 w3 [# D! _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" E7 ^( q& z  l" r3 m2 P& L' L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; |( F: w- |. x  h3 S; K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  N# r4 n4 {( B! i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 W( \  P) W( W! ^& U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, L& q: e6 q- E( l" g2 r" d" o0 @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 b% m9 p) E" m6 P1 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>