【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: a: Q* |  `) L6 e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, r' {+ ]/ [% f  nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, S8 ^9 ~# {- o7 d% q; _9 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ M' m8 k2 w' b" _, RThe sky is happy down to its soul
* `9 B' `. {- h5 Z$ v  KWith the moon kissing it every night
; |. m2 N' ^1 O, I9 h+ aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" ^  ?8 N1 K- Z' vYou needn’t fear anything
- U" W+ Z8 X: QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 p5 ?3 N4 g4 k  E3 }1 oI really want to know just how much you love me
+ y/ P1 o: J' aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& H  d0 h7 K- O) b% DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) x$ e. E) j5 g& pI want so much to see inside your heart
( i0 \4 J) C% a0 M9 Z8 D0 jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, X* g# A/ A5 l& |, v1 n, \5 \I regret not dying
6 w4 ~" p) R( o% L# u+ Y1 @% r8 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 \8 y/ A3 I' M& T' OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 V: x- x. h3 n- W1 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- ^! G; C% J8 S9 W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! P, X. E- k: J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 Q5 Q9 h4 \/ W* I6 @$ X3 D& g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; J8 ]! f; w$ _0 z7 M( h. M) b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 t/ x6 u; }/ n( p% ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& c7 ]2 }" B8 D$ G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 N9 h- H  }7 ]; [8 \+ e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( ^, E' d5 u' l$ c+ V) a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 M5 W, r1 N1 I8 ?1 I  v; q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 s+ m# d: V* ^4 H5 r. @3 Z& h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 [9 @% B5 J" l" x0 ?% G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  ]& _2 }  [* T& m7 U1 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" z- d( [5 B& p6 }9 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 p5 j, ~4 P" W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ v5 I8 o$ B, o& ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 J! h0 ?; m" s7 H6 L3 M; Z% O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. x: _9 \6 D3 o6 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" k+ `  e/ m. Q# F+ K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ B% d. E* M) N: R6 o+ K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 N* K5 |/ R; ~7 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ v$ g* {6 @% Q; x; M: A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 Y& {# N- {: s6 y2 S) X/ h3 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# |  }, k# j! W! Y4 z  m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 G# l  W) s6 ^) M4 U# K<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 v% _) }5 x2 L" g8 V7 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& g: p# `; \) V  `6 }/ X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: G3 h- n6 A; Z/ R- s, Y+ r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" l) C- ]/ \8 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, p4 V1 \) b0 {  W5 E# a& B" j6 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>