【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 Z9 Z) D& l6 e; KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( v2 q$ e  e6 W1 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; X+ [. Q% p. x  jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) y  l* s5 s- D; P3 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 G0 S4 ~& i- h, K0 }With the moon kissing it every night
9 |. C2 \  j1 m) x' K7 j' g, ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 V3 [: _( E  n" O. G8 OYou needn’t fear anything
' Z9 I+ ?- j/ A2 T9 E0 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( p3 X+ L4 X$ [; ^, mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' r, D0 j, o6 h5 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& v# I* B& \7 A1 Y# |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  s6 l% x2 |  }3 n% `+ S; l$ jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 i: u" c/ F' A' [! d' `I’m still filled with fear
! J$ z/ M- E% O' K; ?2 e" R0 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& V" F1 c5 E) V" DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) e% L% S9 E$ i" V( e# ]# G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ V; s0 J" a) X9 ^1 ]! U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 q9 ?# a$ e# R* y) I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ v8 u6 t* y+ D& m& p7 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! o7 L' @, n0 O, p: c) C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  R/ d5 J0 J3 ?/ M: ^' V9 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" k+ o+ G: B& s$ k1 F0 X: S( }  h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( _5 x# F  a" ?: y' m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 K) v* x. @0 \, C* N, K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  R5 v8 o& f* _) U; h! @0 }# E, u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  V6 H0 ~8 C  ~& x+ z+ s1 H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' W" y0 r0 W' G# Q0 X$ F' y9 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. k0 h8 |. b  r; Z) _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) i$ f7 g- A3 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* S7 ], c$ `- }; e6 A+ P3 ]+ x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ z6 t4 C6 n  E  S4 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ S9 ~. a* z% N4 B1 z  C6 g% b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% \, r2 ]# ~' v$ P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 U! q2 {3 X* k# X$ ^! f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 e9 ]& f) }/ `0 p- Z: C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 n" Y1 c  i8 G; B8 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! h" g1 S$ ^7 V9 r! X5 H% u1 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* U5 }- a! R# V  i2 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- d# o, G) T9 R! K# k2 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! L+ X; A7 |8 T0 V/ W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" D: d5 i- s+ U9 l' f2 x) } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>