【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. t; m; y0 n! z1 O/ U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" p1 c5 t( l' [6 X! G1 M0 I/ j( D- fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 K, V8 ?- Z) H9 W6 x- f! i/ [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: @, G, g5 c7 \9 Q/ o8 i6 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 I; C9 d- j7 z3 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ [$ S8 D' P0 J; `* CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& ]0 {/ K' q- VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) K+ S. h) e6 h4 tYou needn’t fear anything
/ `7 s7 M8 r, n0 h$ \9 v$ iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ ^6 u- ?+ V/ x- J/ c4 P) AEvery other word you utter is love
6 A5 M$ a1 G! `4 ]. Q+ f. wI really want to know just how much you love me
* B. G; E, G0 p% n, Z; P, P$ kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, h9 h1 G0 n4 ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 a- A" T, G; p8 Q6 N8 h2 A% pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) U: _# ]# I+ P) l, jI’m still filled with fear
! y' p7 Z: a& g4 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ R# L/ i! i' u# ^9 z, K6 T4 s0 }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 P  u  j/ e' x6 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 }& ]" D0 M# X6 J" R3 q' M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  o/ N# ]  V4 {/ M. E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! `6 I' X+ _6 N, s8 z6 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; c, G( w- ~9 x( z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 J7 w$ ^7 X$ ~9 m7 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ k0 c3 k5 E# J- r& F2 U& p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 S* O1 _! r; _3 T, l' |5 {" i; e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 `: A0 L$ K0 S7 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" ~+ P# @  R/ f' U" ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: P7 j1 t5 Y# A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 S. R% a0 j1 A+ X5 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  D9 r9 ~6 w' n/ `$ e) U1 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; r5 W; ?  g2 o+ P% N& ]9 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: m) |, H0 }) r$ d& ?$ f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% J( e# E3 c; H& l4 ~" e& ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! G% q0 I5 s$ ]1 B4 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  ^9 f# @0 R# {) s9 b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 {7 k5 C" N! a2 j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ o* u& S$ n9 O) v) k: u# y+ E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) [3 f1 h5 d2 l% O7 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 r1 A# C/ S  m" w* D( Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 ?$ n0 s2 j# Q6 C3 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. x0 p; K3 [  t  l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* R& P: b6 Q! ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 _) d6 C0 {1 ?, T$ p, L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ g- j8 Z. [# a" \( w$ K+ o. H9 i( _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 u' g. t. l, K% `6 U7 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 S! ~7 ]# B# W7 i9 V2 j3 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 s6 c  O+ d- M4 L$ U1 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  }; w3 W8 y$ P, R3 V, l我请你剖开它
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1 R5 d" s% O" \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' g3 x2 v- ?! v4 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>