【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 T4 D- l" P! _5 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 e; G6 m7 m& n5 F& ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: y! h/ k# I) U# x: bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" d, j) U. t5 M9 Y8 M8 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 _, o& c# `% o4 SYou needn’t fear anything
5 v: R# [. v0 n/ g1 E3 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# m/ U4 j9 E+ V) v8 QI really want to know just how much you love me
0 l0 V6 v& `* d6 z1 [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; ~" K2 |1 [% X2 T% T2 ?9 f1 v: dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 S7 T0 g! i& l5 x! ^2 t8 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( U  ~% y4 `5 K8 r8 e- wI regret not dying
7 ]) t  G9 U5 C3 h, eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 }2 C% ?4 n5 ]$ t* ]$ q3 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 k! |) M7 D: C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- d, j  L/ m, [; e6 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& Y1 l4 {' `1 f3 v; T  `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 o& e- f$ N+ l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ v' F: W6 m+ R% f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- I( D/ ^2 |+ S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 y  f5 B) A2 E( Z6 G) a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ S- _& W' D8 [- R5 b% j) k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ |+ D. Q3 A7 g3 ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  ^5 \  R% ]" {- i- c, w9 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 \8 \) u- S6 @( O) Q5 e+ }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 e) R; Z, V8 s/ P% P: L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 Z! Z2 c* p* a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ X" N7 O: _1 f" X/ o, ?5 K& s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, R" [7 t0 t) J6 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ w% z& y: a/ @' G0 O1 R' j; T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" `- q6 _3 i+ C" m4 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 Z9 ?2 G  b3 Y5 \/ A8 g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 }# J  b; ^4 ~# Y- y0 o4 G2 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# A- Q( R+ B" p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) m/ i3 D2 `" F# }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 z) y  ~0 E# F& t& U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; n, w; h$ P- J$ |- y6 E. {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% _1 d# ~% O7 L0 N2 d- s7 D' c" p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 Z" j- D. \( @" p3 G2 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 \/ r0 Z4 f2 q! D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' h9 z& `  Y9 a+ x$ ]' k! I2 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>