【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 h; w7 V3 n) J6 M- x" Y% [歌词我附在后面。
  \! x4 C0 M0 E7 J; _5 W6 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. m* g4 y" N; Q$ M/ e5 Z( q3 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; D" P8 J5 }9 _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 o0 N4 S* }( u- ^: V/ uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' y7 A. M" c& m: L  @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" ?8 y% F& T$ s) ~! vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 ]3 R; O: m- [; PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& B: P) O) H: i. p5 ~+ Z1 @0 VI want so much to see inside your heart
: V5 D7 R) }1 B2 e$ b1 gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) k3 V+ X$ q6 qI’m still filled with fear
2 t( X& P" E4 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) D8 u4 y6 _; f0 V7 R: }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. \5 b# Y  W3 z$ ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* k: G- n8 O1 j7 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) W0 I0 z+ E& E; n% G- ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  f) n, @% ~! I" E/ {+ P8 Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% \% P+ q- q  G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! w. q1 W' E2 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* K6 M* O$ \9 F7 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# a5 J  z0 E1 Q+ J<P>你无需担心</P>
4 A) c# H4 v. H% |4 ?$ S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% _/ g& x. n$ ]% p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 q! [% C; X5 A! P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 a% N2 A& r, y- w& s# a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& `4 b+ q; x  m! O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# z  M  A% O4 S! ?: w! @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 T# U0 c8 t6 x$ H3 I0 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ W2 w! u3 X5 R- Q. E5 s0 v# [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 o+ h1 J; z- |# b) u5 x7 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' r. t+ P3 v* @' c* H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  r& t1 c$ `0 d3 I: Q* i& d3 O* K5 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) X" F) U3 z* r8 O6 h2 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( x6 g& y4 R' ~0 I* c+ y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. X. E  R2 g& y  m8 y; Y# u% u0 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: H1 V% ^. K& T1 p0 u/ q; p4 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! E$ v: u( q2 W- i5 o( }, h3 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, B( }9 q; b. u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# j, c: ]3 L' T9 `8 W  W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 z1 H  T1 J9 L$ c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( U& o$ b* z5 F% S) W" x& ^+ n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  p( S1 T" p  _/ q. y6 o  S# `& e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>