【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* X9 U+ d* ~$ I7 `$ v0 M+ N歌词我附在后面。
6 J1 p  W6 s) W" [% LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: D7 l5 ]$ v1 f) H4 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" K0 q. Y4 u, J) }' i8 ?$ tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; J; b- n' b9 M7 T7 R8 ?  A, ?6 S  _- |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 R# x* J5 y; g) y  r3 B  kWith the moon kissing it every night
: j, f% y$ k1 m3 S4 xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) {- X, i3 M& `; [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 }5 t6 ^8 z0 c! I, @4 G) VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ~1 h% e) z! ^. H& M& K# gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" D: y, Z# f! uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 [& I' ^$ i) ^7 q) n7 qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 ~: w% {; Q5 v/ l6 |7 E# uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' M, o% o  A! C* N: f, HWith such a tongue as yours,
8 Q# o' d+ q; Q8 F9 Q3 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, I+ i6 p! O, B0 o. }  H; |0 t' rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: \; x) w1 s8 m; S. N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 T& s; U, D$ D$ U, ]& s4 [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( W5 t0 G6 e8 ]# n. [* v% F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 ^7 ^  W- a$ h; S7 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ E7 U* D5 z- b% L6 G* C; K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 k: w) X; O0 g, {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) W# P; o! f  q' h+ X9 L% M1 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" P& p" [  f" }* O: \- }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! [) y. r' X! P9 ]/ c  b" P8 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" L9 V' C% J4 c! X3 S4 I: J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 S6 |2 r0 a3 t9 }+ }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# d$ `1 ~  \- ~2 j/ E. D1 E3 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; I6 l% P/ F# N) k3 }& r! Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ W' Y% k) B3 y+ ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 p8 [# `5 j, U7 C, C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ x! Y  Q7 l+ u2 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! W2 o7 U' e' I6 V1 e$ ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( g  W/ l% g4 {' e: r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 P# W  R. a0 t) w6 I2 W1 y7 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 M0 e! m3 v4 m" Z, J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ Q4 z& f* W2 S0 y$ [% Y8 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( l9 p) S' b/ l. b+ S5 `3 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' v2 _& d/ u6 M/ c% ]2 S, q! n4 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ J& c; H& l% j: _3 K4 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) d3 p$ t; h; c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 T" @; w6 C2 j1 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- D% i+ t( d0 Q8 u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, @: B# j5 e( o" l' ~4 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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