【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' h- B$ Q, g) r, E( c; q" dWith the moon kissing it every night
! q9 T; r' Y' ]$ P5 S7 i( MSeeing the sky content with its love
9 V, s) a- K1 o+ ^: ^( q+ L7 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 }+ [. l8 G1 c+ H' cYou needn’t fear anything
/ V+ S. Q& l0 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ ^3 Z7 B/ ?. ?4 L0 |" M& hEvery other word you utter is love
2 I2 T5 r  X2 b4 m- G( K8 fI really want to know just how much you love me
! e: z" w- S- `' Q2 u. ]  U- d( @( YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 P  c' d' M0 v/ f" t+ DI want so much to see inside your heart
# D% y, V; h! G9 j/ C" @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 Q1 k/ X* y* g0 _! {' YI’m still filled with fear
) U' H+ S( y& v; ~2 L  K  UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 p. _) Z5 c# j+ e1 G& ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- Q, ^( e& i& @. t" \With such a tongue as yours,
- j$ R# f# T% Y( {' c" BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 J0 Y5 P  A# _$ B0 g9 R, \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- U! D6 H; E9 A4 \2 `0 k% n3 m% w# o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' A' U! E: M5 }" ~' W1 B% D; J' P* x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ m0 s; M( o% `: S6 ^' ?; {& [, N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 k9 n% L$ @8 x1 Q9 V7 Q9 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 a4 `1 d' J3 h3 A; t  }$ |# w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 R1 c. e' y. z4 B: M5 s, }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. K3 Z0 t2 @+ ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' [% [- }+ H* _3 l& @; B1 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ q" X7 z( X4 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 p% C) r* Q: g: Y9 h7 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: h8 Y  G8 w5 M7 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 X4 z  I$ ~+ d3 [. R# b' h: K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ I$ k1 T8 T& t0 C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% G3 {- x- P/ l" X1 H2 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ r6 Q/ f4 ]/ N! {4 g9 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( g' T+ Y% j% C, S/ u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: f! C/ a* h1 e4 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  j0 a9 p- H6 h$ W# z0 t& p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: ^4 i# {  C( ^$ ^6 J0 M8 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. Y* u, b: A& h0 ]! Y; S! |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- @) V+ `+ y! O3 l1 U* \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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