【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: L% b$ v5 t( g# U0 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& q7 Q2 ]; e( H# M7 b% E) [( KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 O" [' X  h! w9 V" i3 G( DThe sky is happy down to its soul
# M9 Q$ X- x% T( N5 w' HWith the moon kissing it every night
0 `- `& F$ G! n( \, {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 ~$ ~4 H3 a+ r  RNothing can compare to my love
6 @# K$ W& ?' }! g1 E1 f( _. S3 R  E( SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: _5 N( K% ]8 bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 s$ Y* V9 L) c6 J6 d- `/ }9 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" z' A# x  B) \. K8 B( R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  ]& C3 ~" k! e9 D, A/ i, b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ l9 e+ A0 t  j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  ^/ j, n$ i! O+ c. F/ s, f, S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 P: D! [& `6 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& g8 n; V) \6 w6 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- r# g2 E  ]" c/ ?# P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ }0 V4 C8 o- L3 {; Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 @) Y2 q- u' k( U( T3 E; T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 e5 ]) ^5 Z0 q/ ]0 X# N. v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 k# z% i& G* n: O' T. n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& e3 y( [9 [! Q0 H9 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ |# c6 n2 i) n/ e0 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 ?7 t2 M% P- C. D/ J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; F+ c% i: \3 N1 `( j6 [4 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 i* k9 k9 c( k" C& Z- m5 ?2 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 d+ c: }2 O7 [8 O$ `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  b9 e1 Q6 p+ N$ e5 H# X" P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- \; V2 f- L4 K" e# M6 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 l' M( b! @: h/ D8 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. R7 I0 H+ S- `: [+ H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 t/ i/ d3 [+ r, g2 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, Y5 ]" D4 h2 W: ~4 u9 r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) L1 `; Z& B% a' \( [8 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 D4 _: e% R+ _$ M0 ^- Z' l( X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, y6 N$ N$ W- }/ z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% o3 _" O" S. E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 e0 e3 C5 U2 O# ^. ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 E4 n5 f3 e+ @2 G1 Q  `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" F' I# Z! |  r. J. Y, {7 D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ Z9 o& }; o4 g6 E% s6 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 Q% v6 p" f9 }  @" {6 B. O0 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; \0 L3 n. B2 d, \4 x+ M$ U: _我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ l8 p0 B& `' l5 W$ p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>