【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* N; F( x/ x9 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 x/ y1 \6 Q! N+ f( KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  L' {: r# F6 g7 T! O& XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 L4 h3 j1 H4 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 P, v+ T+ ?! G# s8 q. k# `( lThe sky is happy down to its soul
, j2 R/ C' ]( T/ K/ k, x$ ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% J1 n$ n8 d& y3 k) j3 r# GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' f5 i5 I! X# ?3 h' w5 D, N* TYou needn’t fear anything
8 }3 y8 M6 w0 U( [2 z: ~5 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: R, Z3 u! V+ O  Q2 ^- yI really want to know just how much you love me
1 I4 @! Y( z& O+ f4 X  r+ NI love you I love you with all my heart
! z) v5 O) P" K9 O- NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 R  ~! n8 U9 ]$ Z$ WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- X1 g) _- o4 r  Z6 dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" `; a5 o/ m3 u+ t9 MWith such a tongue as yours,
7 S# d* _3 h, GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 ~/ r% Q# J8 g9 f' o- M8 a8 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ a( p; z2 x; j* l5 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; G& @* S4 h9 Q# j8 V  O. E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. E3 R4 Y6 z* N' w" o3 s% {, r6 S2 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 V6 `7 H1 z9 J  [: M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 Q6 b9 Y' B5 L$ {8 _5 b/ Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 h1 i4 B1 u- A' ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 e" V! B, q; Q2 w  ~* g& J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ P1 N+ N1 M, ^$ z/ \/ Y% A) k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% {( ?1 d7 x' q$ H- ~3 d# t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 }2 ^8 U' J$ m5 @5 _7 a; o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 ~$ \) K$ ?+ A. M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ o, _( E5 K/ U7 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% X4 S$ V& v0 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ k$ @1 {6 @" Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ l7 n# g1 `; M% l2 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ q( V, i) n( i6 x+ b3 U* {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 v1 e/ v2 W" e) |  q9 p1 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) H) A+ p: ?1 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* B- q* U# U7 y+ z! q' S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( [2 x: z! t7 j, m- h+ q" V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ H# i1 K* U0 @8 P3 t& X$ Y3 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ ]" q% d5 W$ [0 H1 [/ V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 U( Z& h2 m, P% ?/ d* O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 @9 _, O& O8 c/ `4 }4 N, a* `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>