【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% {+ G7 C/ o! T4 l1 j2 P$ G" oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. g3 u, {# y2 a- H) p6 B7 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" I' ]2 S9 {+ O4 P# ]& I2 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ W. R7 i' x3 x$ ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 P& ~* |, L7 D( F' t& ]Seeing the sky content with its love
4 m- L9 R- C- C# i$ v( cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( ?+ g1 o+ Q; v- B$ NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 Q# \  {2 P2 v. O4 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. @/ m6 w3 O) @  ?# ~, Y; V3 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" M. h: }, s8 a# H/ X- {I want so much to see inside your heart
1 g) b5 U0 c# m$ kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 s/ P! g6 i. M0 sI’m still filled with fear
, L( c! u6 M8 X- f& k* V  ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( ~4 }- g% |6 p+ t0 P) DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" c2 i' Z% n1 JWith such a tongue as yours,
( S! j, _, N& p' U0 KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: I9 c: ?) Q$ z0 D7 m6 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 X3 Y- P8 o. A) w  NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 d  n8 F1 F7 c( [( ?: @+ S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( n1 y9 u- r. o; \1 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# j2 K# u" b- l9 }/ L8 t9 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 u8 z0 j+ j* `$ j% D" k  }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& v+ v  |) A; z0 P+ [5 u- _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- V- w: h. x+ {6 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% ^/ ~2 D. U! g8 G! U1 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% A6 R7 W" [5 Z# q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 g- `2 W0 h& L+ {# N7 n: k- ]8 [9 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* Y5 ^# o8 {! _3 p, y: n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: s9 d" U. Y0 B5 J5 a" q1 Y( p" k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 \( V" E+ ~. |$ j5 t! ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% |  u4 r& q% t3 q" n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% J# Q% ?( W, Y1 L9 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, `5 [" ?/ d( l1 n( P: ~6 J; W9 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 q  `+ L# X5 W! c. ^% U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 ]" O; D0 k0 O) s! W/ V1 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 e& e5 n8 ~* F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" h7 x- T( D3 \3 m( \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: e% Y! [! E0 C" L0 \: J, i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! q5 P5 c/ w$ A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 N+ z  \) ~3 @% o" }9 p6 P0 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: P# ?; F; S9 F4 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ J- u( k5 j( k9 R: H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! b6 o& _# M4 k, ^. X. E5 e& C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ S* j; \$ `/ @: g5 \9 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% R. f, [: \& O' P! m' J5 R3 t+ d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>