【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  J. [0 w8 K7 w9 m0 j( V9 x$ DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 L) m$ @, s8 w: J3 sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: C1 _: \( @4 N& i& ^& U9 w' {  cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 Q2 s2 c5 o) _5 v. ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 i4 e9 X) i; Y# J/ bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; ^- ?. I4 I% v4 W; ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; \+ @7 E- u2 R. ^. n% jYou needn’t fear anything
/ v% p/ f: a* ?3 f& v9 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ k# G' U& X3 }: ?: e5 CEvery other word you utter is love
1 f) Q0 a3 {6 N, o# S5 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ X5 m. ~( s9 r3 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 P3 i( o4 J7 x3 E: LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" o& V, e) ^/ P! ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. m3 d, r0 e, [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) r* ]7 f5 S. t, DI regret not dying
. a2 H" Y! @/ x/ B' Y& J8 E/ BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% G# v; ?7 z. `$ ~  e# p, fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 Y4 r/ {4 @7 ]! V. LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 y) _" I  Q7 B/ n9 Y) X' U; o  j$ _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 B' z: d, }" M# k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ v5 E4 w- w/ ?  i' \5 P$ K( G  z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! |8 m' j% E, i7 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& l4 v% U0 L/ V% O2 ]9 _5 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ J1 g$ A8 r, ~2 f/ D/ @$ q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' F' |7 W* G3 D, |$ C/ d1 o* o! C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# n" w, d$ G  Z8 f- `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 C/ B8 i6 u- f' ~<P>你无需担心</P>
5 y7 V% @- \- z5 R/ }: W4 Q& W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" i9 Q8 S& r" z' j  j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 N) C# M5 i! [7 }& n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. d% a; Y- N! _! e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- h5 K$ y: U# o& |5 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' I6 x) _& F& J3 y3 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# J# b/ L1 H  g; V4 b' e# d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 q' z/ D; z5 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; Y$ J3 l0 Y% {! r1 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& J* g- X" r" q; r; C- A( S+ k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 b/ ]# h8 u9 B* m- b- F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 I% h5 i% n2 F* |( \6 J$ F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- K( i& f# ]  {1 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 D: O' V1 N, m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% V+ g$ N) b- i% G0 _' E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 @% [* |% Z( Y) a* q) U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) t3 b9 w5 V+ R# j  L8 e+ h( [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' t+ w1 O* ~1 _0 x) V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" x) \3 O: R5 S' N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>