【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, r" P' f& \7 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* `  S% x( o, ?% |& G# oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 g1 j9 J$ P: C7 `7 c2 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 _) J. u' I2 s) U  }& Q2 F' @The sky is happy down to its soul
! r* {- Q' b: G  Z2 S* QWith the moon kissing it every night
2 C- |5 F9 T& `! \. WSeeing the sky content with its love
8 B% F" `* e! KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 \: S2 e, o: Q5 p5 y$ h! R7 v. J9 yYou needn’t fear anything
( G4 z$ b$ K8 i5 [5 o% ~; EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ ~" [; q, A/ R* c$ J" A. m; [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 C9 m% J( N: a8 x& \; d# |I love you I love you with all my heart
8 }, E" B1 n" v* M- A! z' C" ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" B3 ?+ I( x& A6 l+ |. z2 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ J/ C. T1 Q! i7 V+ r8 X4 J) ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 [8 X* s$ Q: f: ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* O  {5 d/ [$ G- L9 c2 `( oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 I# C& N- T* B# Q7 U8 YWith such a tongue as yours,
! v6 P0 B2 C5 V6 `0 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 N0 s4 }1 V: D7 }; \# F8 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& m8 r/ h7 J$ y6 v% s& d3 K& BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 B7 A0 Z2 b8 }5 S/ q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& w6 A; V( H4 f- c& v& V. _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 Y. a9 q- ?3 w: g9 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% v9 t) s& d7 n9 f1 W7 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  ?6 Q5 G; ]; ~2 w7 @! p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ S/ [- i1 k% z4 v, k3 _. ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; k7 e/ x8 n4 y' W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( H! _) n. q; P4 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 I0 ~/ i8 g2 \& D( b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  b& p% A( U3 @) Q. ~% \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& u& i/ @& z# N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! Q2 ]# r) f( B$ n3 m4 ^3 J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ r  y5 N; t) y0 ?2 P$ ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* q3 \7 \. P! H3 \6 h/ U, J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 f  N5 l/ ~7 W+ m7 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) h& T/ K. ]1 L7 g7 N( k! P$ w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& A/ Q2 B3 H) {* f2 h4 B( h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! Q: f; K; I' W' O  g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% w+ ~, \, ?2 S6 Q8 F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) I% d  K! U7 S! b: [/ R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ w1 N; }6 h1 \7 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) X9 \; J% |: t1 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; z+ y: P9 v: _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 s, U( ^. y2 q4 j( t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* V9 q+ L. X8 V( Z  z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# V# s/ p9 E4 k2 N9 y2 b: i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ Z, V0 ~" y, |2 _; X+ c" p. ~* y0 v; i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 |" z6 i& M. U0 V+ V0 B; J8 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! h; W/ I1 i- h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>