【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. G. a$ J4 r" c3 F# qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; n& I9 y/ n  r3 E' RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 F$ U( R' C9 }. e# _Seeing the sky content with its love
2 q+ i; m/ g: B. \9 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& R' `; ]0 x4 m: ]8 Y. PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; M2 n/ C2 g' CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- x2 g  C3 S0 x8 i  [/ ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ P) k, F6 V' ^- r8 g: b# K' W! s$ CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 m4 [: n3 P" TI want so much to see inside your heart
( l* v& i7 R9 M! O7 QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' ?8 m2 k9 j5 {# P4 J8 GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; F5 X1 f5 l- B. SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* ~2 O* C! j; W3 ~2 V2 o) H9 [8 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# V, J5 S8 L' X9 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" G; n5 |: ]- {: z5 C( M6 P1 R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# z5 a2 Y9 G4 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 K8 s7 X, g8 d# b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- v8 ~$ i* |3 s# z  s- W% V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. f3 N! K7 N1 C  d5 k0 c9 f8 Z/ {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' v/ B$ W  Y5 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! D8 x0 i' A1 H+ K0 v8 \, _- Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% `7 r' {: n9 c% G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 i9 E. ~% X% `  n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& O: @4 e$ }) x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ R; U. U3 r7 p, m& ?6 ~, r6 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" M& z8 O+ q; b4 x; g1 l8 [( h( F# a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, t4 f$ X# y# F5 j) w! k, P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& |* V) i; h' U: p1 X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: M$ w: s1 Q1 G% U% I* m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 N. k& |0 F( }4 D6 K  @% A, t* o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& a5 a# R8 j' N  ?6 h% r  F5 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# b) J8 F9 G. l! k7 B6 O% N/ O" z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 g) D4 y& [0 ?2 n2 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>