【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ k+ C& f, n; ?0 y歌词我附在后面。
( V8 B2 Y* I0 _3 U/ dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; c( x4 s) K: M% d; ~, NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 v# X' L+ ^* w$ J5 S: A& iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& |7 S1 ^" _7 C* \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; U; N9 z. L  i; a4 ~With the moon kissing it every night
$ i: ?1 g6 Z+ p. q' U( N2 t0 lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; ^9 y: A3 u( V& O) g& {  [6 uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 z/ t: [2 n  sI really want to know just how much you love me
# [$ q2 }% l6 p% h9 V$ qI love you I love you with all my heart
; n: @" r6 F# ~Nothing can compare to my love
1 y: U7 H7 D0 G  M, Z: fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  b( \% ?! ]' M& t% g1 L! _4 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. O  ^! H+ t8 m+ YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  d" J$ c5 w4 E: r8 |With such a tongue as yours,
  J9 d6 p5 n  u6 M# sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' h# c* {2 J+ h% p( D! qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 ^% @# V0 c7 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" e7 B' x4 l) j9 V0 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 @+ S* O. Z) C5 S% c& F; t, u9 j9 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ ^9 s  ]2 o  c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# Z' O$ \* \2 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& M+ s1 ~( ~- v! q, a$ ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 V7 o  s9 T& u* Z8 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% U) g2 p; I9 q# S4 u  i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  f& z, z0 Q5 Y* J' q1 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 d) ]0 r& o/ x1 k/ c* H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  {: E, g1 v4 H2 ?. w% J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ M. F% @& g; p, G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 _4 t& I: T. a8 i. `- F* \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ W6 p% s3 Y! j6 C, `$ ?8 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 Z! d. ^2 C9 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- ^8 I7 M4 k- \* w2 ?3 l: J- r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 ?; i1 Q5 c- ^8 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! f  ?( W  Y  M3 g5 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! h! F0 e# {% P7 T6 X6 v/ m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ _2 L3 n! Y: \5 t' N2 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 V4 K1 j; a8 j# l& Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 r' s" k1 z: |( {0 L5 i3 g8 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# f7 ^* L3 u6 P& z) ~3 G; f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 h, p+ Y. B  ]$ A7 m  ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 A" w! c  ]& Q/ h& r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: ~1 ^0 B* }" W8 c" P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  m6 J* R' {  k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; y/ h$ ^$ ?  F/ e+ B( w! J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- e+ M# j9 L& \3 i- ~9 \4 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

' C- l! U5 `- j& V' {$ O/ Y( ~! \/ o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>