【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, Q( z5 L3 I2 h& B4 S1 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 v3 I7 S, C6 y0 n* ^- T3 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, b3 q' p$ k! V- S5 R% m! qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% y/ I9 a( _9 R6 Y* x) cThe sky is happy down to its soul
! o2 \: y) Z  l6 M( Q1 hWith the moon kissing it every night
. C: S) o0 o) q$ kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( |, |1 x8 ~" b* {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* d# a( f4 W) B& I7 u4 A- _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 E) W$ n2 Q/ g9 k6 D* UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 X( w! X# B) _) X5 y7 ?$ uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 f3 M; O! f' L* k; tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! B# _: O: r2 u" w/ \/ r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 y3 @! N' q* Q$ x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: T, h/ Y) t* j9 r9 U9 S/ q& t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 J) W' @: n/ W9 Q  n2 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 S  I5 K' M. x5 V! t6 h* S  `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; v( I! ~3 [. G( J. T/ `# c+ q6 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ e# I. _0 ]8 L3 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 W: P7 |5 \7 u7 T) V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 B& {7 p$ S9 U: j8 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  H4 \& ^# q: S* M* P7 ]! \2 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ v7 |( z5 T; W" [$ `* ~7 S- N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( X+ n8 _$ T0 p( C) n' a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" f8 E% p: y. M0 _% @# e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# d+ q% g& K% @2 _! }6 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ r: E8 X# i# r% y/ \* c" j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# J* ?% L+ B3 H5 L: S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( _/ o  ]9 I; b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. P9 y' _0 g0 {. B8 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 x( K6 P0 r5 m( N4 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- J# P. W0 e- b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- H, G1 W, l- v* [% L7 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; W% g% }7 h2 v/ P9 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 a. z$ y8 U( m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; s" \2 A9 H. ~6 D- `4 f" `" S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 N- j/ {, p. F# H6 e) ~. R- v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  v6 M2 S1 x- z. a6 s* k' V! L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  d9 Y9 X$ `3 f# L0 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
% C1 v$ \9 @  o7 L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 @. x( u6 y; @' i  D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' n  G2 b/ W" v- b$ P. @9 G6 W. F. g5 ]1 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) e- \. x# _0 l- |% j* ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# P3 Q2 g0 q6 x; Z+ b# W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: q8 Z( X( M0 R, l5 C# i$ M我请你剖开它
1 I# ^! X: B4 Q
2 v, O1 c, r/ i- w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>