【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 @) h! e) {/ ?' H: x! O. H1 K歌词我附在后面。
. l, N" E+ d' I, o1 m) wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 R7 t, |8 k5 D0 e: ^  Z6 C3 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' E. _$ u" l6 D+ V+ R0 }) A2 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ Y/ R2 L, V( ?; n9 l+ WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ u7 q( L: ]+ P8 R$ T; c# cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- C: J1 E' @4 }, @9 IEvery other word you utter is love
% R! V3 H3 F/ {1 n- v/ wI really want to know just how much you love me
6 w" g( k9 Q9 e& Z1 H; c3 SI love you I love you with all my heart
! j5 ^; j4 j" c6 z8 `  B/ UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 v; s6 C/ k; z' M0 g, l& HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ [( g) x1 ?5 Z8 `' p6 YWith such a tongue as yours,
2 u7 n9 z/ M+ j. I1 V$ k4 U$ NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) X; h. D$ b9 L- r5 B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" }! M( V7 {7 Y: v- [3 |3 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 w. m* E% L7 L. @' a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( v  v/ ]- w; s& Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 s% G9 u( P5 ?- G6 D6 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; E& e& v6 n9 e) D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; v: R9 Y6 X7 c* V9 g. Q0 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* F% F! U, ~" s  s: ^" D0 c' E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 Q1 U* M2 ^; h/ }" E+ _. a8 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: Y% s6 D, k% S& z& R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 n8 u& u2 l6 _8 k5 a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 ?( V+ ?- E$ O7 _' f+ x3 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 d, \) c& K, |8 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ n, B7 a/ m- ?; z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ v- y& M# v* u" H5 n% c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 u0 _. K* Q6 y5 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; r0 ^# {( _# k& T$ A, l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 g! M/ N0 y9 p: g! z5 k$ q$ Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# q5 J. S# ?  X5 A" |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 \" \! P5 w) j; n8 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# B0 z4 ~! i; g5 |1 f: Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ }& f6 B$ S) g0 a! d1 O( r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! z# d7 H! _+ n/ A1 b5 d5 z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: T( `5 h5 u  |# N% j7 K1 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ E7 M' l) ^- _9 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- x! r& }+ A3 N" D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>