【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 o( Z2 w9 l! i8 m9 N1 d+ VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 _( z! Q* J5 v2 T5 F& EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: c8 c0 J! K5 a% P2 ~; r! F1 R8 zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  g* N6 x) V8 f& J8 a7 jWith the moon kissing it every night
, k: l# C6 a7 n% WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 X! I2 w+ o  V3 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 r# N% \' S+ mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' {5 y7 J5 y: f0 p. Y8 }0 SNothing can compare to my love
/ x4 _- `: o: x7 ]- K' G5 x3 {1 M6 zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ `2 u, k) ~1 [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  M0 L+ q6 F! wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% H9 b5 J( U/ g5 G' Y, kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ b" {4 B4 t( N0 _2 IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) I4 \5 @; B7 V% M3 _" b7 g+ e, D& uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 k  P: a$ y' Y$ g* h: M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 Y6 L  X( J0 v) ]  C& q; Y  r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. K" w0 i9 V: y: j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" J+ F% l8 E7 j7 ~( l" y1 d3 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" Z& {1 m* ^* ]/ j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 v  t$ i8 U; _/ m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 y1 F9 N. l0 j  i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; V/ a# K+ A( B! `; P. s- R$ }" |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 A1 q# L; l5 N* ~4 b: d. [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 F/ Z) X: L" M: }% U) m0 N3 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  ~3 r/ `) ^6 i( p# J2 d, E7 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 G" G, ?* H! R4 Q& g( D, _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 {; |. ^" r9 j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( d; y0 O! ?  M4 S9 Z; i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* r8 y! L9 k( ^" ]; P1 C' f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ [$ y9 w0 z! Q3 l0 M! C, X2 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% v( ~3 n. C& m$ s; m- L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) z, I4 [9 N4 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& {8 A3 I4 _2 p  y7 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& v7 S* t+ N( R1 g5 \: s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: |% H1 z) t" N) }/ [# ]$ m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  {5 `/ r+ @+ `0 U+ d. }/ z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ c$ ]; {% D1 u4 {5 e' N3 t7 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* x  e9 z+ j9 S2 `  {2 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! L- j3 O4 F5 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. k7 c5 g( R$ N7 G  `/ z- ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' Z4 ?- C) D5 w- A- C0 X; f; ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, Q# c; Z4 E9 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 K, k+ `1 x1 z( f7 u# T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: \$ a. p' @; R0 Q/ A6 h+ O' x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; _5 Y, d* h( H# ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 R, w8 P7 F# s) G; n8 K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 h$ O4 T5 L. p4 |1 `+ A! G  e0 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  a; h/ W; T# G4 ?& P# A; g# F6 H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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