【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: @( Y4 s; k' _# `+ C歌词我附在后面。
3 |! ~! B) A5 U2 [" r9 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ ~6 q% ^7 x+ N3 ?5 I+ J* M6 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; R  R2 R9 X  lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 ^2 \% Q4 j, ?; [# x# }/ IThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 S# v; ~# h/ |) ^# `% w% v5 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ }+ n: Q9 M% `6 W0 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 V: A" @$ z. N* W1 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 \& I, q4 d/ KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; B. }0 B' t* J8 l+ C3 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
! o8 C: X" }" H% Y- u# SNothing can compare to my love
' M$ r0 f9 r  nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& _- L+ j+ e% I5 \2 N: K& I) [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 g/ |' c% Z. N1 T0 G% GI want so much to see inside your heart
; v  Q5 C7 v$ c1 t+ ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 d/ N* C) i: j- q0 A$ k' N6 |7 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% z: |, ]2 B1 i6 y9 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ }! S6 a+ h" ~# y2 JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 Y, O8 J9 I$ h4 F# O1 C. ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- a' f% d5 I- m3 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% |" K. s5 b/ S: Q$ F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 q/ @6 s5 h0 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 g& |0 H$ a3 Z5 v+ T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, _$ G' |9 W& m/ R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& ?! Y5 Q+ R- U7 b( o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& \. z( V( `# @6 a6 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) s, [4 a! k8 a# z: @: \( |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% [! Q0 @: t" ^6 R% C/ Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% Z) K. v5 A: ]. b. B) O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, T/ `( s$ }+ k6 e/ P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% U% q+ X( Q  W3 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 {( f& H% L  }3 p3 |" q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 Q$ v) z8 Q1 x: U4 j' u4 Y; _5 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ K% @+ l6 {1 y7 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# x: K2 j: m4 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; m* R- [9 f$ D1 Z6 O) H3 A( w+ a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& L, |* }* ~( b* H! j6 ?% m, m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' l- _! \: j+ |! F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& q1 \1 E. l' c- t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 P' s8 F1 E! D& ~4 J/ D<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 ~- x- X; |8 R! F# ^/ A. f  M& d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 T- Y# x  l8 u$ G) |' ~  T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; E" f% `* `% X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# |! I3 c, T0 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) z1 }, u% d( q0 B0 o3 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& E. y& Q3 [% N* Y- c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 V* S1 h) E1 F# q, r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>