【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
/ l- G+ H6 f- z% F
  f. J, m7 ~4 H<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


歌词我附在后面。
1 x$ X* J' O: Q  r1 S0 G6 Y# CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 {8 A" L9 j" uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: y! p! W* P$ {' a6 C7 d2 o) LSeeing the sky content with its love
; f0 A( @- W6 q; F; f2 x: @3 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ m) r3 F* J: K; U; LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& W4 t5 S; T0 @I really want to know just how much you love me
% L* J$ h& f2 P; KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 k* ?# A$ o  W& \% aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# `- f7 R  l$ qI want so much to see inside your heart
5 V+ n- M3 }9 ^* D# YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 Y3 P# U* M+ w: @6 B' f4 RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: G7 u! F3 D: D( e+ e8 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  K$ }6 L) E+ R& f$ [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 r2 y. r, A4 \9 Q0 q4 d4 A# C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 L: O& R, t7 |! z% D+ y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) A9 Y: a% k" I7 k8 x. h5 c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ e2 f3 @# Z) Z7 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 y. @! B) V+ r  n7 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) o$ B/ E' ^/ d; v4 Y7 O  F2 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 W" I6 W' E5 U/ `* ^+ v) Q<P>你无需担心</P>
  w9 }  Y0 L; u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ ~% [$ A/ Y7 u/ }8 `+ R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" v* g  E( ^2 m/ g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 _/ J6 P5 q; b; c  ?+ I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  s& u' @+ ^- ^. M5 H) x) Z( W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 j5 D2 R; }: w* A& F+ S5 r7 B0 u) n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 }: J9 d0 P' Z* d1 q# k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 ~$ z- d1 R5 a9 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 Y. v) j0 ~1 s) s. I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  z! |4 [  F, ^8 g5 E/ ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# z! `, y* z8 s/ ~* }- m* c- b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! p/ S+ H  f7 L, A" {% a1 R, U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 w& g9 b7 @. ^# h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: Q# g* G) V( @( i  f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 f% N2 a+ S$ r" y( a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% h2 j) C" d$ X( @# `8 v1 ~: ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ ^! e* j/ l1 j4 Z* O8 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% r9 F% {4 D, V/ o. k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" y4 f& t. I! L2 _. [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' Z' k- Y; S  |" d! \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& P% `* r7 A" y6 `+ h) F' r% x' l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: y; J" R& c, Q5 t8 e; Z. e  n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ b! y' j9 Z; @8 l) L: ~5 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 ^  `2 Z, N0 p" @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
, F; }3 e4 {  D* S
  c2 U3 j; c1 @- x我请你剖开它

9 {3 b2 {& w8 q- b3 z0 _# l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
( x5 Z. @8 v% ^- ]: _7 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>