【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 P7 n  V  t2 }# C# ^( _) V& ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: ?8 T) J" N3 s* `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 a9 X! ^" O2 z/ Y( [) w+ tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" Z% F" I5 |- n& l# OWith the moon kissing it every night
! I& i9 I+ G- n5 D1 `' _& SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' c: q9 ~8 `  w) b  u8 fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: W2 J9 V3 }# TEvery other word you utter is love
& m: O; i4 G5 Q- U4 _( N; _& PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 z- H* Z& [1 x* `: _- H' m; B' `  hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ J; P! t4 ]% JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) j& d) d4 U! [& s, wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 }, N, m% T- i" {4 ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 A8 H% ?+ R. p) c+ b6 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ M: E! C) i) D+ u" G$ A+ P- \+ HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) h. S, d6 K* Z4 r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  Y$ t1 F9 @  N5 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) o3 f7 A4 U+ H8 F4 H7 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( k6 E, r# h8 Y5 ?9 s( J( ?) k6 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" R  p8 z2 Z6 J! s0 l3 }1 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& _0 x6 A* e2 n2 G" K' D( S! u# D; l! v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% D6 k6 @7 b6 @3 l: V6 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- S+ a5 {' R, ?+ y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 o- B, t9 v6 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. ]- {2 u2 P, T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) R, _' q. H% R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  I) P* k( a5 ], O) W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. f$ h9 c9 E) t6 I5 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ f* u5 l% [$ N+ u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" ^2 F8 a  [: {: M+ Z! g0 i2 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 }7 A  o+ o; T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ `! {$ C1 A3 `6 ~' e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 A& J* X0 M; \8 n# A9 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 a# }$ m; Q% S! d6 H  ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 h  |/ q2 K* t; f/ K6 _+ Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% b+ w/ I+ Y  K6 W& P* B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' O0 L  E1 `% J  S3 f7 k$ V# K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 O, ~5 k' ?; V, Z0 X' `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" z  ~' X- h( [% }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 m7 q4 Y0 e; S6 Y+ r5 I/ s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 T8 A% g! K$ r6 O) I0 k- h9 e# n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) J- r7 z! |2 y# H  l/ H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 s% v; i$ R  c9 `4 a' C我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>