【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, E0 F; k5 A% I* c$ GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 f2 e, X( W- y/ d' `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' C. C9 H; F1 s* Q/ ~* z  lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- ^; t6 l9 z* ~* b1 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. B; Y- B- C" _Every other word you utter is love
4 s. p. P1 D% L* g6 R/ Q5 A6 C3 D/ j! `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' f) ^0 a: d3 S$ V; v8 J) Y" LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 @* {) z, X7 m: E: }3 B- ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 i+ \2 i4 n0 M' M! xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% W3 F( P+ I. ^9 u# i: IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ ?( w) @! V% N& E9 C8 A. `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 V. X! C, t) d- t+ ^- n5 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( i- }! p- b4 m/ x0 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. {7 R6 Z, N  G5 j" M/ q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' n' l. E& ^& w8 o! h; f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ d7 }" j1 m/ W: b0 a: [/ H2 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 L5 O/ P$ L) T! f5 J, b# O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  w3 v% p2 a% z; u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 [7 V) ]% w; O2 k# |" d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ ^2 a6 l! c& j1 u' {* A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- F% U/ `' b9 P* u' B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# A# x0 p) N- \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; y6 |( b3 Z" w5 n* B5 z8 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  \* y4 h, `6 W' W& g) x1 ?# I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ s, [! r" n2 V+ I( Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 |, a( Z) \" f! W6 L) Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ ]4 b7 }2 D! z& p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ T* B1 |  [+ T# O7 y6 p1 f1 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& f& r2 @0 V5 C9 V0 k% Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: _1 C/ }+ g$ A1 M, l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& K" E  E; U; l0 |5 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( N5 s& s5 q1 W0 D  ]  z* a5 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ o6 }1 b9 ?. h  Y0 b# b& m( N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 [. w2 h+ o- v" s# u( R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 \! G5 ]9 O! R4 l7 c4 w) Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' _% \3 k1 D( o7 z1 q) r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ U; K. b% ]$ F7 p$ k我请你剖开它

5 {3 `7 F6 L# t* W+ s7 [* \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 [* `1 }! I) |  i% I2 }& ~' m# F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>