【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" }8 m; N7 s, _. g& Z& T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# _1 q, E& ^* D; ^' Z8 f+ _( AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. h# l2 T2 v  ^: s7 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( O& t2 j$ B2 A" l; }' O/ KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& H" w  i, V. ^Seeing the sky content with its love
! l' S, S" T$ Y2 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! }9 W& K$ p1 V) r  F+ ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 }9 A) Z' K2 aEvery other word you utter is love
' e. A6 d9 L7 D3 L6 UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 ^- F& `% S% K2 M1 F; |0 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 t# O. T9 h1 q0 R# ?. hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% z- w) [9 h2 d$ b4 k! LI regret not dying
  Q5 `( U9 r4 \% q2 J5 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ J& m2 V7 [- V* [& IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* M0 h  c. S; J* W, \' X! C7 R7 [0 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 N6 Q7 p& s1 ]; U! }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 v) C# j+ X9 Q4 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 L; t' r" {* |% |0 f  C7 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  t, _5 W' X1 P# y, H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 D/ B/ U* m0 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% |% g& B6 _% G) @4 d0 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  e1 }7 E  u! y7 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 K, b! ?$ a# l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* ^' U  k% p! Q: D3 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! h- x0 U/ ]' H, s7 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( q/ V$ F0 V; V/ O# j0 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ _5 @0 j/ k/ P. J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 {& @. `9 U( B3 @. }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) e0 k1 M4 U7 Z! v! }" _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 y! Z2 B; q6 I& c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 @- N1 Q; l6 S3 \/ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. G, S' _5 G% i% _. @( Z8 A. k* C0 p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  ]2 t) Z8 N- R) e# E: S; w3 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 W5 k" R: X4 ^1 T- C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 R  F8 u' i/ _$ B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 ^' `5 E- P* k% u& B/ x8 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* O$ W* Q( K8 \$ b9 s' [9 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: a8 L, {: B9 y$ v6 w9 }. e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 W3 W; H7 x- W! R$ n4 r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% @) l0 R9 ?4 ~/ E5 L* l! o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 L' u8 k' B* e2 e( b4 [1 R  s+ N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 h( C) k* ?9 S1 ~7 H1 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' L) c( D: L  |& I* I- Q  \% b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% R5 q+ l, |9 M6 {+ A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 M  F4 T" x9 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! k; R8 F% K! I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, M& O( A- {7 ~7 [) o" d( Y- f4 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; U3 ?- M) W% v9 J( q. R6 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; [  ]2 H: h0 T1 |; M6 F我请你剖开它

/ i5 N, U9 ]2 m! i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' B+ S% p3 t& {0 }- {8 ~0 T; n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>