【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 ~  B( b5 D! Y/ |6 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 G- B) r' D, N! ]" V, T5 \2 R6 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. ?; ?7 R" B  u# t/ l' r! ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ h' h1 y4 j- F- W* aThe sky is happy down to its soul
: F( q! \; D; \9 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 _# \% R9 ^# u# ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 d6 ~3 r& i# Z! U1 {Every other word you utter is love
' R$ n5 O) M* N* J  ~* g( o& eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( u* `& x/ Q0 u6 R( qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% Y! _5 I/ }/ T' t# o& AI want so much to see inside your heart
4 u/ M, b- {5 q! S+ GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 O1 Z5 M1 F$ K: E3 E$ \6 rI regret not dying
" y& W3 V9 U3 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 t3 I, S8 [) d! \& a- G* x7 MWith such a tongue as yours,
1 F! {- r. Y! m+ TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: k& z# l8 O3 H6 ?0 }0 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( x: V+ {  H7 Y6 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) a0 t% d/ K& Y- ~* L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& b' v' g" ]- {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& B2 f# A' _8 `2 R6 I  U0 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 E& `6 [1 D/ K$ t; a7 P  ~: Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! e  @& y* A8 V5 P4 ?3 f, R+ u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% I6 t3 Z0 _9 u8 r  r- \$ O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 _) }" @2 T7 B5 c" T: v& y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 `& c& J/ I- K" a9 C9 A2 t! E% j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 W6 m: v. \8 n/ h5 e5 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 R+ r0 q. u/ D$ |0 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 ~' }7 A$ s4 n* a7 T! y/ w$ C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% U8 P$ k. Y$ J' S" c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 B& @% U$ d  \2 X) v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" c" O1 f$ |5 T# G: v2 v0 e9 J; b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% `4 N3 M3 Z$ Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# R' n, ^3 H* ~" O# e( K9 g" K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ O" Q$ z5 A, `9 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  f* R* e2 a8 L0 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& V4 A' h0 G* E8 h# E% b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 ?$ s  X% f# R  K+ F9 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. X8 S: ?& X0 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 d& W% X. N. ~5 B) e$ u" u% J5 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: `. f: R# i/ s/ q# _' \2 E7 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ^+ c) r. s5 D: }/ Q- [0 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ v3 c% v2 u7 t( N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# W* B  L" ^1 L1 Z0 {9 E. s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 L! d3 k$ I" |2 w5 `# m$ f2 v0 c: u' [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( Q; s2 S# u% u# B; [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; P3 q' R. I6 B8 S7 u* \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>