【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 C) w# Y1 Y! Q' g3 h歌词我附在后面。
5 n; Q8 `% v* G; v/ eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 n$ B. a4 y# Z& ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! b2 g) \. M+ S) a: u' i: }$ dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 e1 V4 |4 x% K  PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ R7 v1 \0 r$ Q" g# pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! H' Q; S+ K3 ]  q, FYou needn’t fear anything
" k/ U* |9 s! Y1 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 B" q- |0 o# |$ d; h# ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  \* w4 |$ V% N- j& |& lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 E. ~0 |' D/ n0 I% i6 V) Y, _I want so much to see inside your heart
9 j$ A: q0 B/ L/ V) uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; R' a; l$ H$ D* dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* U) u- c- |" \+ L' o; [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% W: P8 J/ B$ _5 r/ X, s. AWith such a tongue as yours,
+ P; ^# I" g) ?' t9 g1 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ L% s6 I  b6 t9 A4 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 ], `- \1 d4 L  h1 t4 b3 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% Q: c% m5 q: c1 I' V& Q" J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# k4 J6 A4 B: o: D" h) I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% S% l% e8 n, c; ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 [' n) y3 h. a0 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) b; n% d% l. s4 Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 Y/ |1 [' m4 M! ]1 K% E+ A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 ]' k% o: V' Q, [9 Z, g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 i( T% U) K! t' I5 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* B' A# B# }8 G- F) h6 N# f2 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ U, R; K8 O& n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ t, i7 N& J: y$ g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' ^* |& E4 Y" V. ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! [' b; x& P$ J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; r  _5 p2 ~* k+ O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ N7 z! @& h) f5 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 V0 a7 P. m" i* X7 U. t; j5 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 J7 J  ^: p" c4 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 ~" x+ o1 ~7 O* S+ y* t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 d6 m: U8 ?1 w" X( C& b- S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* J# c4 G6 [) Z& j8 Z) A3 ]. T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 v& c9 X9 k( o* X  B: w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 c8 ]2 M+ t& f! }& J8 E( l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 b6 j, a: }6 p- l+ y" ~! X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  \/ i; f/ T2 F/ w; r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 i7 N9 y7 u$ ~- M( e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  c4 t* j" ?9 c& ^0 b  p4 t' r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 N$ r6 x& i: N, x( Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>