【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) `. a" F5 N- u5 q% S  B# [0 \8 M; a* hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 ~. q' c/ ?* O  A* iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 c$ a5 I6 p6 `& U" v. QSeeing the sky content with its love
* {+ A) @* U, D0 H. N: OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, C1 h0 k5 g  ?, T4 v5 i6 _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ U2 C( K5 r7 D9 V1 QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 e# l: \7 P7 L. ~% }Nothing can compare to my love
3 I# l9 q# g2 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% R4 B3 ^& G  ?6 Q( N' KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- [: |$ r% u* ZWith such a tongue as yours,
$ x' F$ s6 d2 n# a5 h3 a. ^8 B5 A$ wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: \& l( ?. s0 V0 K' gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* V9 P  m& ?1 [" W: ^9 [$ c: e* ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 m, k* \% w( N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 |- x7 j6 e4 v7 w! ?3 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* u& ~! s& g$ ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; }. G. [" B! q- _7 y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% G0 t5 Y$ T. C( {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  d: N) r; t, B9 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; F  e- a' H' P& [; j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 C& |' q; i* ~- T1 A2 E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; p0 O& k4 E/ Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 b$ K' q" C. H& L& V& x$ x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; A3 `( S& R! v5 ~- G7 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 ]; N0 E8 N  e" \& d: p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" b( a. H3 P0 f, n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 t+ b* @8 B+ x0 v/ S8 F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 O! }" G6 ^0 `) S# E6 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 s) l" [/ f% D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 {+ E& _7 ]8 w8 Y; F2 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  E2 {* B+ j. @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ i) q" Y& S8 C( R1 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 U% y% k' s6 t, k, H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* r( L- v$ m" I% I! |/ g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ i4 v  p! @9 O5 I# X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>