【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 g/ M& b& Z: u& v8 Y1 j# j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 }2 F4 r+ ]/ d9 {3 b% D9 _& |  tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 o, C* R9 x6 G( \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 |  h/ |1 ^# W* w! oWith the moon kissing it every night
& G+ L: m  M3 T7 F& uSeeing the sky content with its love
8 j% ^2 C$ b0 w: A; d9 {$ l) UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! ?+ j) D: j" L) }* eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ K0 O, v5 T! a- o# s) FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' P$ u! \+ L; p+ k3 K/ o* rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# j9 r: f2 x0 kI’m still filled with fear
  @5 G+ `9 b4 J9 J2 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% k9 M' ~. j& c7 k. R/ J$ P% }1 }7 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 I3 s2 A* F" B, v8 Q" eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' a2 u9 F& O9 b- y+ t3 ]8 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& F7 P+ ?/ j' P& ^0 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& E7 e; c4 `7 Z' c8 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& p1 S5 U! Q4 c8 P, E# d/ T& c0 }+ ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% I9 ~0 D' C5 `+ J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' }* }1 n+ B0 b$ L1 |8 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) M- |& [! L8 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 X# J. d: I5 j3 k! D5 \# B6 E4 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! ?* ]0 [  w1 {2 E2 c<P>你无需担心</P>
% c& h& k+ S. M/ ^7 W# D3 B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 g. U- U" `( V$ [. s2 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 y$ ]* O! @5 q0 u+ o6 n* Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- p! h" r, {% U7 G% C4 N- d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 b1 t( ^) Z  e3 r) a9 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: d$ d& d/ \$ E3 n; y3 o: b/ R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) J$ e/ c: `8 v+ s. ^' ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ |9 q0 V7 H5 k' m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, }# J. K& B* n4 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 B( p- Q7 I% M" }/ a3 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ M5 z' [, s, \7 ^3 G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 Q  m) p  c8 W/ |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. M. l8 A2 V& W; o' Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. \# p- b2 d8 s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 P% a9 x$ m" ]$ d) z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( j; _2 s: K& }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 m4 B- c, y$ O' M0 ]" G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) D( F; y4 U6 |5 B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ u3 w) ?4 M% d  O+ L1 s我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>