【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 B: L5 E3 z* l5 N0 K* j% }The moonlight is shining brightly,
* ?/ m; Q8 A8 M1 \6 P3 XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% h7 k3 U6 f' F0 s: VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 x8 m- m0 I- [6 Z/ f4 h+ J. b* q" F  ]; DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 s$ |5 B! B& B" m7 PYou needn’t fear anything
$ F: U' {: J4 N  zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 `5 z: ?1 I% y) r, D5 hEvery other word you utter is love
$ y1 I6 \8 B# ~7 n3 a6 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
& f5 e. M  [9 J3 t. TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 Q, t$ X  D4 W8 V0 y! Q! jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ \- N) s, G* o* pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) G: p0 ^/ F6 U9 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. r8 q$ n8 t' r" mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. W2 {% X- u. m& y4 m$ I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* x6 g  R  t3 s0 F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ |! i' _  b0 R& ~+ {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 a6 M* w; I% F: s8 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, l4 l  z" p- z. g/ ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* E# P- u& P  N& t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% `) \4 D% s( e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" a; J: C3 f+ ^8 ^% z( E0 n' P  q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: q6 P; _8 q8 h/ Q& f' g  H; l& X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ h+ l6 E* [( f4 s/ M- r, f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 O5 Y" k% b" A- P) V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% _* A! N+ a! s1 @- |2 u/ n8 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; ?. T* r4 G, G- q  |  \5 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 r2 u+ a9 _4 v, s% m" S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( Y3 v, C+ s. e& E: C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  i3 ~9 a% d, z4 {" m' k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% z1 I9 u; N% M* d- x2 ]2 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 D9 w+ g' q3 F, t. y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 x. o2 D0 V5 }3 z( S) l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" h; U# }8 `$ d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 Z; p" ?. C7 _3 {- T$ Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ x# \& g- r! D7 @' Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
( Q/ L- d, h' _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! V, J8 I) V; L7 Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 ]9 M# Q5 {3 Y, K# V3 r' \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ S: X& l8 S' q2 p) a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 f2 b5 P1 W2 ^2 X5 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 H0 i* E7 L/ p5 X" y3 x) C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 M# D% a  g$ v8 s$ ~- W6 h, I, B9 }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# j$ R) N2 n: X" z6 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>