【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( i0 N& i$ v/ Q2 u* l: ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 l8 g4 c3 E* H/ |& OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) X3 b4 H4 p' o. IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" \! q8 L1 |5 YYou needn’t fear anything
$ y2 e3 Z, K( U& O! S% N  Q8 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! x/ b) v8 D7 W+ WNothing can compare to my love
: t+ {% @, m1 w2 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: Q5 K& F# s5 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 W& A3 W) o$ g# x5 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 H6 a( g2 t$ ?# E, T/ `$ cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) M  o/ }1 l# G" r/ \, hI regret not dying
' m% R, [& D* fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 Q3 L. R8 ]0 x5 g1 F, M  fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 D; L) S+ j" a5 \+ K- ~4 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; a% P3 v/ f6 _- \1 C% Q& W; f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 {# {8 j) j2 T$ r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& S3 t# T2 L$ K# |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* f  @, h4 }4 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 e2 p; ]* }% ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, x8 P  \9 c& ^0 E. d5 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* t/ M4 [( U' S/ N' U" C* l6 t  h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 ]9 M' X- }* m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. z% w7 G) T  k- v  u$ w3 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 h7 m' X) g+ O0 Q& I: _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 G5 }0 ]7 w) W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. C* q6 ^( A  A0 C# F' y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' L" T0 R5 K8 K, G% R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; `  G* S: h& {: @1 b8 R: Z  o$ A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# a5 @, G5 F; X5 |; c- c% Z5 j8 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 M6 m, Q" {: l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 k1 L1 C5 T- K6 _9 ?$ H) k1 w) o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( U4 a; J1 M7 ]% N4 d" [, G" y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; \+ _* e' N( m3 g  `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 a0 C  x. i, J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* G8 {9 R" c/ i+ ^4 R7 k/ C$ Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. ]: A: E' g8 z9 ]7 K8 r6 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! F( n7 ^  z* {' Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) u( O( w* Z  c" O! t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% M; F3 }# ~  q* l( H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ z5 i- ~/ w7 U4 G  f/ x$ c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- j" v/ F. T6 s' V! X7 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* v& D8 x& b; X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# H. y1 G- c9 ]6 j! a% C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' D  e, H2 z& j! `/ q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( `1 ^2 z$ L3 Z$ E% F# B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>