【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: ^, {9 r2 D, l9 D1 T歌词我附在后面。
9 H$ H4 P9 T& i9 @The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 A+ }  {' j  O9 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ e8 I: H. Z9 L" H- i. eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 P! {3 `# w+ \1 F1 ~5 e* vSeeing the sky content with its love
$ ~: u; e& L3 u- a# \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" B# T) {5 t  U: K7 ]9 G! rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 @7 `) s  w$ A+ k" mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 s( W- c: x# x- q0 G7 `. ~, A) bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 _: |8 |' ?$ {* f4 j* tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 D1 L9 V% |5 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 D" L1 M+ _% w( @: hI regret not dying
. R0 z7 X9 |, [* LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  Q7 T( A- t, q! F0 sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 q7 M, ~& g) ^4 x. URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 h3 r, N4 _% a2 Q; V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; y- J: h) o: T; Q2 [0 t# u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 G) ~3 J# G0 k& v1 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ z+ H! G) L) e+ c- ^! I: r  h& i$ L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% \7 M# t9 V4 z$ D" U  F4 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 Z( k7 J7 F2 f& g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% I2 @. ^/ |7 x7 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ ^' V6 Y. X! I; H2 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 K7 e7 Q4 h( c* }) y2 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" a; ~4 n* A! J5 c- T" W6 b5 E8 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ d0 M$ R% R' N. ?1 M2 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ D$ f5 [8 e% k8 B3 y$ ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" K2 J$ Y. K; ?( F* ~& T8 D  S5 q, `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( j- A' J2 N8 w6 }* X1 B" B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 H% U7 d1 s! `/ d% a9 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; A' X4 c) x  Q$ B+ o* i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( Y3 _  W7 F* ?1 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 S- i# e; ?1 `4 |) {+ A5 d6 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# ^7 R- @* z+ E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 ]; ^2 `3 G. t- @: M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 P. F' G4 D) ?8 }, I; q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 C- R3 t0 x$ e7 a5 V8 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: d( q1 y' y6 w/ m$ f3 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 O: H7 n& Z9 f$ C, s: W1 w/ x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; M, q- @5 k! t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 F$ F' P' D2 }- ?  `8 g4 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, X; ?9 ^0 D, z4 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) z% A$ o6 S9 ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 b) J7 |6 p4 y. v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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