【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 h8 g4 u9 E! b$ U6 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- @0 m% @5 b  _, `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 k& V8 o& `6 A, f  I2 i* P% S6 @6 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; x0 y" O/ r* KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- H0 |* h! S3 \; W+ C. j! fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( u6 i# i% V/ l! Y) V4 sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 p  {% b, E' |# cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 k  @# X" c7 i: EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ e2 v" l! r5 gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# O- I  c7 v2 O  nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: V9 n) q! R- I$ o5 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ ]" u  t: k) Q# O7 ~' I8 \1 I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' M) P' B+ T' l4 w6 U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 j$ ~5 m  \5 W; E8 ~8 Y$ n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 L( ~0 W2 T$ }. e) g. f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: F' ]* t8 q' q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ \+ J: ^# u" L! N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ Q8 e% v. T* Q. H5 N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. A' D9 l  T3 g) k- M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& O- T. x( H& _' n# a* n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- f+ H0 S( T" p$ F& [" f' u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 m, e; V2 I/ C+ y6 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 c3 ]: }" ?% X: I; x9 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 C3 r  Z2 b% Q4 M" W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 J  X% H6 O9 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" h) T# x3 y# ~+ l0 h. N% R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 e$ U. ]. s( t% [# S# J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* H% }+ V* i: c' I& \% D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ Y8 d5 W2 i+ X4 B% s: a8 h; P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  F5 T" A; _2 R2 f5 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 {8 A- d" |4 p0 r5 J" E1 P" a- I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 e' d; ]0 e+ f3 s7 s  H; k! E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 G, y  Z. O4 S4 B7 \* Z( Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( ]! l( U( g+ O' @7 r1 q2 @3 i  W, U7 c7 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 A/ L) p" r5 x: F+ w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) m1 g( L  `/ P# I7 c, E- ~% W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: H( k" A  E* l/ Q1 e% z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 u, z( `. p3 y, C: d. I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ N8 {+ u7 J* h; i$ x% a$ B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! Q4 a  a0 d* f4 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( I; ?) }& E* n0 M* g/ a7 [: ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 f& }9 E; t1 n- P. F7 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>