【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( \! f2 x& @" MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& m5 `9 u$ z+ [  kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ M5 r6 n* L7 d1 G7 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! A+ c/ O4 W3 v* M6 r* a& x3 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, l/ l" Q0 N# V( kI love you I love you with all my heart
/ C1 i4 B+ H5 o: o, xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 G+ T4 x4 q* [5 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# w) }8 q5 Z+ c. S0 h! R! \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ s7 ^) `0 E  L' v/ FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 s; `: a4 q$ W7 z. ~" H4 Z' {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 l! T+ f) E: \- ~1 C' d& D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, K  C5 P7 k" H& l8 C2 B7 ~, n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 S$ h( x3 L8 Q& _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; h6 n) X$ E. o4 O: Q9 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  \  ^9 P& z0 z+ S* V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 ~+ b% z% p! J2 K* W% H9 u: X+ v9 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 h3 _5 M; o, s6 V/ Q% j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 E& ?1 P! j/ d: R3 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* p9 Z' X5 f) Z2 K( V, j* Z& @. e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ N9 d/ D2 \6 }) N3 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% F- b/ B3 `! n  t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" V4 x  l3 r$ f! n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 }8 F+ @/ S/ n, k% J1 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- X6 A: {1 o/ i- V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" \2 J9 v0 z- S2 p" W0 Y. _, U: ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! v  P0 P7 I" d+ k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 A0 O0 c" c. \& ~0 G, {8 g6 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& o$ w1 R5 J: @5 ^  d. T) h1 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% F5 A1 r5 F9 m% Q3 m" ~$ B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# [5 O# S8 n0 o0 y7 O. V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 I6 S( J. ?5 m+ N, o) C5 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. q7 j/ j. p+ V; P* b0 K3 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* x9 W& s& n- ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) F4 G; L5 _: n; x" a4 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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( S; ^3 Z, K# Z) q) X' N* L/ Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; ^$ _' v( S4 X9 O; @$ h$ [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>