【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 |9 z$ s8 J4 L% j歌词我附在后面。
: j5 N, a0 p. S' rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 B; e0 p1 d; `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. t* r8 a! L7 \+ p$ p, VWith the moon kissing it every night
' O. G1 w7 t) z$ b5 U- F  y8 lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; m3 w6 O/ h; w9 h3 m2 dYou needn’t fear anything
* k0 @# d& P1 f8 j. x' p: vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  Y+ q- Y' x5 P8 ^" x1 r# h5 vEvery other word you utter is love
$ D2 v' T, W; YI really want to know just how much you love me
( g# ^; w$ r! d" }+ n+ p5 OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, x3 }6 w3 t4 m( ~# H) ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 p( c/ l7 i; m0 V) DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ]0 |, e! u/ UWith such a tongue as yours,
" c0 v7 l' }( [' L; s% A9 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# y  k7 x& e1 {% D! C8 cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% t+ j) q) x0 F5 z( M2 m8 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) F( T# c/ G9 @! S+ v! o: O% u+ s: l4 Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ ]+ b0 u: R) O- [4 y8 \$ J# Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. \/ J0 k* P8 B* f# V/ X# V/ O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- [& k8 x0 t6 @% X" J$ u3 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( K- S+ t9 I% N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* c6 s' ?5 {, X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  ]3 Y; v1 a/ Q2 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ c1 Y) J8 W" a& n* G  t! b2 U5 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. E+ {3 P' J0 j' s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ E3 Z, @% |# N0 U! t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 i, ]8 |$ N2 ^# R' T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! n- ]6 }! G9 {* y% Q( G# W* F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  e. M7 ?1 W3 f9 I0 V8 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 p2 T7 B1 ?( s1 r0 C# z% [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- Q+ ?  i' P6 o1 u) p# _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& T/ m( ]; w' i4 m7 ~' m  J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ E' n' v( p0 _/ {7 ?: M& ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& h* V5 P7 a5 k; F& z9 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: H# l8 u) d! y& B$ |4 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- z( K0 |9 |( |  f8 S" Z6 q- n% c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) R1 ^6 b" L8 Q$ ?) V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 O$ l3 ~2 i6 V* x8 B% A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. h" A& V& U' ]* S, Q) s! b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 G/ [0 o2 f+ ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. P# l* M% L4 x! A. T0 c* _& q& W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& S! R2 V+ A' X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) t) b* |# j1 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! f5 C/ A! Z1 t) w7 n* z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 f7 @4 b4 i( }  [% a# ~我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>