【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* k& y. L+ |! \* P( w! A) GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 ]/ Q3 D- {! T+ S4 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ c* _: {6 Y; i" V& S( ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' L2 q5 R5 C. |. RWith the moon kissing it every night
* s& u1 L4 e6 W+ WSeeing the sky content with its love
8 E+ y' ^' a8 V( U  C0 a; r/ I+ ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: ~, j, F. ?! f, ?You needn’t fear anything
/ ~# I( [0 y+ x- C8 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' m5 c/ |9 W- f* z0 ^! SEvery other word you utter is love
1 o7 m! m% |  l1 R  ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ m! L! v& l' [+ \% fNothing can compare to my love
: T4 }) M, W: s/ s2 m, Z2 N. @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  L: }& F( O& Z- xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: v" y  A  j9 W. a0 C7 X5 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) s! g, {/ X4 [1 Y6 J2 `9 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ W. W$ u. B" P* x7 f- fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 x2 ~: o+ `# t5 D3 L7 l* O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* x3 W- L% w7 f" {' W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) Q8 g8 t1 o- |' Y  H1 k  h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 n6 E  X! _& y0 ]; a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% s, H" Y, A: G8 Q1 N5 ~) K: ?$ r4 U4 O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 u2 |$ l( q3 k8 e8 |1 u; v2 o5 S" ]: \8 ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! j( S8 h: t' N! [& A  p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  Z' }6 u5 l' a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 s" e" C0 ~9 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% o- b+ D( v. ]# e1 t  D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ @8 u" H; {3 \* A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 |. m. a0 o9 z: K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" I. w0 O( i" N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 i( Y. o( H& [: H# ^& z: c! D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ ^! Q6 Q# C4 F3 h1 l# H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( c* B9 m+ @5 r+ j9 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& b4 ?' f/ v# `. d; T' M* [$ F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& R- _% ?/ A( |$ x- i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% z# o$ @! u! j$ b$ O2 z' N/ S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( ^- Y0 x& w* f% {+ r* w- |2 f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# [4 }5 f" c1 K/ ~4 U) q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' |( N7 ]: y  Q' Z# Y. u5 r* Z, I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 E+ e9 r0 S( [* h% l& h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 p) |0 w7 R* l7 O; o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) ]$ Q+ H8 ^8 E4 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' m# h/ g  B2 g4 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. P+ l. b; M) p4 B& v) k4 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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& c* P+ j& i: X! p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>