【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 U6 q2 u. A/ J, h. \9 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 ^7 ]5 p0 F7 A! U4 j; U. oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 X' e- C1 S% p6 w; y% i' KSeeing the sky content with its love
8 p; k2 m9 ^$ r2 U+ OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( h1 O7 J4 l* D. ~0 ]5 n% ~' oYou needn’t fear anything
9 t+ ?! y( ^. d  rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( [4 v& f6 N- [4 Z4 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( Y, N1 B3 R- g4 ?4 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: h2 f9 i( |6 i% V  M  j$ k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& J& _0 Z1 F0 F* x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 \. h  P2 {% @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" X' {, d" S3 Z7 ]9 M7 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( h0 B  s: ?% Y2 M/ q; Z) W4 r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 ]5 Q/ I8 r- U$ [8 a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, n7 a; L, ]* m) t3 K4 c1 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 t4 ]% Y) c( C  V: O. |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  ~% \, O3 d, m; `5 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; F- {5 h' T' y& B' |- Z<P>你无需担心</P>
6 d* r6 Y. g) ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, ^) o6 j0 O6 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 c4 G! n" S& C+ N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& n! _8 X0 B# g# W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ o2 D2 _! [9 h: c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 n, Q' d& z; a0 p) K! C( m/ S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" [/ c# r3 }& P  p6 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  C( i$ y% `  `. n; V# A/ l7 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! ~1 c/ }! y% N: b8 A2 ]* z0 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 ~3 w$ K1 K8 z  a. ~3 C9 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 b! J; f, F* B& p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 e% e: s( r* L! E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 v! }5 ^) @! h, L  e1 }5 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 d# \4 E4 e7 H; P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  o, |9 W" P5 y9 h! S* j5 N8 L) T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! j2 ?- ?2 J1 Z0 H. V; \5 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 ^/ J/ |3 V8 `  R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: C3 I. R# a1 `2 E' z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>