【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; |9 i% O, ]# G; r. {5 q3 s$ F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, P( ]  B: T; u% S/ g" k+ QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 g) u, I& U& YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  D) B" O: P& P, _8 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ L. u2 [; I) L* g. d3 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" U$ J" g# ]' r" D0 JYou needn’t fear anything
6 R1 k9 p( r  ]% [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' N& Y: C, r+ z7 d1 BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ ^6 ^4 L8 X. L+ DNothing can compare to my love
  [6 j6 f+ @/ K% b! BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 }% w' F! ?3 z: l" |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: R* p6 y! p1 C$ {; J% i9 |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 C) Y/ c6 A7 \& U3 J) iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; Y9 }8 G4 A: N& T5 @- lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ @- p2 i6 S. m* s$ o9 aWith such a tongue as yours,
0 j1 r. A! {0 K. `' [, @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  i% _( j/ e4 ~  I7 k. p0 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# O$ h" k& z9 d! W) T0 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 Y' D4 ~) Z$ }, w& Y0 `" s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# ?# O; c- r% }, Z0 W0 K$ y4 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 I% W4 @2 F/ n; A& a9 e/ t* K8 o* y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ D) ]' h! f* o! ]( b0 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& z0 [: L2 U+ z4 R! n" ]& a) H& }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; m, A( {# l* ]4 a* s5 a6 k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! U3 w0 n1 E( U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' e7 ~2 j# a  \8 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. P- c8 s8 {0 c# Y4 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 }3 e/ {9 ~1 X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: @9 T7 k; w5 y2 |0 m  s6 w" c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# m* F8 }3 p/ M9 n; P1 r. u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. l+ |# g) k2 |8 S( E7 P) c1 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ R% y- c' f0 w$ {& ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: O! Q2 E+ ?" A- V8 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ \% F0 A4 v1 Q# a. M# I. D& J2 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 j  \) Q# b! S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% O+ ?9 t: k* A4 A6 L  a. \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 }: g* a1 e. f+ O0 [5 {/ G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ p5 y0 Q: ]8 @2 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* l" s8 w, [4 v6 |( D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% m, v+ ]* o* F. u: s0 d+ }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 Y) k' ~, q5 P' F/ j8 Z8 P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! \: s, d( i! f4 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 p: o3 X7 x0 ?/ @; u% ]+ U. Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 [/ f. T3 f! d  j2 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  W3 P4 ]. ]2 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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/ O) V2 i) q$ S, {, u! S2 J% t! e4 ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>