【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 S* C) _) C+ A& w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ q/ s3 _6 F- YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' _/ c- p2 h( rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ {- J) ~" Q' o. r; m2 F8 e  NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: |* N* `( x: F% q9 ^2 k. Y& L8 `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 E' L2 w; D/ M1 \Nothing can compare to my love
; v* ^' j2 A9 |+ A$ P. [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# S8 B3 r6 Q( bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 f* b8 ]5 }  a% }/ II want so much to see inside your heart
, b/ }/ ^: f$ _) i- l- V5 C5 P' }0 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 h% }7 q/ g9 t# G( s! PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 E* I9 @6 w, T+ D7 u, RWith such a tongue as yours,
# W. F. \0 Q6 \5 I; IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) @: T! y: X1 \* k/ n2 C8 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! X8 @& `* d: p* Z& lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 n: }8 q4 ?' p- F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' j. w, n2 T9 {& ~* m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. T' @7 b) v/ J1 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 a& D$ U0 v1 C! Y/ o* ~& F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; H+ p- o& Z4 Q! o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: [" g! v6 O7 O$ k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: v; I; S! W) S! |0 m; N, \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ O- Y8 m' l+ Y! I3 l1 x. f- \. ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. ~6 c# h! q+ M; E' `/ q<P>你无需担心</P>
& z# v2 r1 ~5 X3 y) z: Y8 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- }  H# O+ b% }2 }$ a( r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, Y$ x3 p, G( X+ P. w1 d+ J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: ^) j! s3 p- P% p7 A6 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 A9 P( e' a% ~9 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" l' L: o+ O7 h" ]8 P! i4 p/ ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* Q# L& t  d+ S0 J. x( v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. U: v+ f0 |8 I$ @9 y/ U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- R. B3 \' U$ Q+ r, C7 D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 B- U# w1 f( [- A& Y* g- B$ c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% `! n) H2 |8 H2 ~9 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 t9 @5 [2 g1 B3 h7 W% v5 o+ ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 ^: d& G' q6 x: J8 N/ N" j" u; N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ ], p* s" H' D( p6 _0 Z1 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# S: [6 j7 P0 M% c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' W5 N" A6 r3 @; X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 ]5 d) j: T' D  x( |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' Q# W; J2 M% [" D" e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 @3 e. ]9 @, d% @& A, U$ y) O( N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ T& w) `8 o% J; e# O# {) }; @+ y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, N! \$ h/ |  N1 `7 z+ v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( @) E! R5 V7 d% [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 q- S3 ?+ o. [6 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ I+ f  u3 G+ X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 t( H4 O1 N9 `5 k5 ?& G: u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ b! _6 ]8 R' \. w' ?2 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>