【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 q" W7 [: @2 s8 Z6 S/ DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' \  W+ w& R' j6 \/ K$ d( PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# B7 g, [4 ?2 u/ p; x1 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" j8 F! ~9 H; l( S, p5 FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. g1 X/ [  U4 a9 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. d/ x# I* v* z2 B2 N- j0 FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 W3 g4 q% J$ dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, L' D2 j& T4 l* G2 M+ D6 d. QWith such a tongue as yours,
; i9 Y; o, u) g. TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  W9 T- t" e5 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  g- ?1 \1 ?% k9 t4 |6 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; @3 l  \8 }- Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 `" B+ r  u* }6 @) s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) v" f# [0 w  H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: B4 Z* S! U- ]; i7 z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. `3 @/ z7 {1 @1 E) p6 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# |! Z" ^: k* Y6 e$ ]/ r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% ]& z1 @0 ?- i. y8 e$ V  M  d9 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 m, Z; [7 f9 f' L7 |9 E6 z2 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 n* J( C; T% z. M+ d( Z8 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# W+ ~7 y" P  N  O* I4 M8 ]; o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* [) e. c' x- V1 B0 Q  i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 ^& p6 p& b& ~$ Q/ z. _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# {- Y9 t6 v( Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 {; Z5 a9 B, g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 I( k# U9 _+ c  ]3 j; N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 S) x$ T: Y( |7 {2 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 ~8 p4 Q5 H7 o& Q. \! W3 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% k1 |- P: O$ ~& m9 s* F  }  {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
! P' E( b) y( K& C5 f+ I/ e" a
" r+ K) _* G2 @! y5 w: D3 R我请你剖开它

* E8 w! ^0 @9 _) o& j8 p6 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>