【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- W  {+ v# O# X9 Z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) W& M9 G+ X- E  ^/ L4 @% HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 q' g3 S3 \- R# ^9 r+ `) p1 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
& c1 j/ M! T. tWith the moon kissing it every night
! Q+ i% c6 \3 w/ k; V; _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ \# F; O2 F  A  G9 G! I: @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 Q  A) k  H8 ^- p1 u; R. V5 O4 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 w8 Q) n- s0 y6 |I want so much to see inside your heart
' f+ K% j+ n0 j, NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 g3 m  P) w! P3 B1 ^0 jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ ^) c6 L. |% G1 U4 h. X) I- FWith such a tongue as yours,
( I2 r% q- H* WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, ?5 ?% m6 ?2 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- A, D  |2 T  Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: y4 }5 J/ a6 ]' r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 q: U  s& l! o! V# d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) O- Q7 H4 w0 F- k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 _6 Z* ^6 u) U3 {( ^0 i+ G/ ?. ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  q; f/ r( P9 q7 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, O! E- N: k$ h$ |" O' F+ y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  M4 C3 ]& ?9 Z" X+ J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! S( F8 {' X9 D: K4 N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, M" n+ _' D( p0 z, A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) L! j9 k$ s& K* z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 L! m. S" N  E/ C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 ~% D' _8 ^! z; ?2 `) b5 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 ]" _& p" J& Y& a, \. |( N$ k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ o7 p8 b1 T4 k8 d/ o* Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- ]5 w5 ~! ?0 n' z$ ]. T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- o% v" s: c( O+ V# U: W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& i2 ^3 R3 z2 f! p$ V% B+ N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( G9 A4 d( e. J3 c/ {$ z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& t, Y# H- x2 z3 ~" U9 ]- l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 _5 D, l! j, I( S5 @3 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 A$ |9 }$ [: O0 h; [; V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 T# u0 z$ Y( {! |) }+ S# p9 K我请你剖开它
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) C# w2 j1 }% S* ^) f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 B9 M8 P! [. ]2 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>