【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 \0 L7 r5 ^" C7 {7 N( G歌词我附在后面。
5 b- E( Z6 y7 o* q- iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* ]8 |, s. v3 g  ^+ V# L" M% YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 a# X. f+ a/ m% u) I' m# YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 p. p' P9 Q( ^9 A9 x, jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; B$ z" }0 s4 Z8 G1 [8 Q; A+ d# nSeeing the sky content with its love
. R3 q. G2 l8 v4 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; ?* z! s# o9 k4 {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 l" C/ J8 K% \! `, ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' G6 n- B4 o' b" z! m) cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- A9 Z3 G, v! \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 T- L2 V( s( i% E- h9 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- O$ U6 @( D7 E9 x, o7 q( w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 [2 p' k1 _5 e# S+ p& |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! V8 u# B3 Y: |3 r7 ~' k3 J0 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ j9 t( m9 ?6 @' _: |) n: u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 ]$ m5 U. @3 s2 _, H" Q1 V  r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* \" R! K$ i: m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ D3 N7 ~" f; Q$ T2 ?  Z$ t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 w2 C" I) x: [7 u0 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 l$ K. u+ d" o- D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ b) e" Z( z4 f8 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) k9 x$ o% N4 C: u8 U* \- R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 J3 x; x) {4 k9 E) n) ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! n6 F# m+ w" d5 R" q7 U<P>你无需担心</P>
( }! ]" M3 ]/ J7 E7 v# ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 I. @4 C8 g5 W* K  y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ n! _9 u4 \6 E- h. Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  T( \! F, d9 J2 k; G. ~+ n; p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 u3 I4 F+ q- f. O& X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% T" V6 ^' A& f+ q- p0 N" i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# q5 G0 U" U" K2 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 I( _0 ^( Y2 l0 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% b  A  v0 l. x( f4 x  I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 Z+ G+ O5 e( D& \5 j6 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. j  G; c0 L, o2 l$ _% R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% w8 F) a# h2 b# n6 ]% G( P& e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, Y; q$ ~. X; E7 _, {# y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" v4 e+ c5 w% B, r+ G, u  b! c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; {+ R* y/ y* ?' X3 E1 E; v% c* P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 K$ S, d4 P& x  [4 y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! @0 G, @$ c  \6 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; d9 ]5 p' c& C" K. S( T% U$ h8 ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 T- ~5 \8 P# W* P- a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# g* ?. g3 m* V# T; e+ j) Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; y/ e" F% P7 U. P6 a. @# D# A0 U9 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# W3 l; G# E- {* [# H: I( A' \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- d) F! H9 Z) a/ t0 g9 C$ Q, K4 m我请你剖开它
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' E$ a  T, i# D7 Q* k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 z" p; f" O/ ?$ X3 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>