【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ K- m, h6 z0 a$ V; IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 V; L5 D7 t, K8 O! A4 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ o4 o  S. g* ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& o5 n( k" h" OEvery other word you utter is love
2 C6 `: O' `/ F; f9 @' H5 TI really want to know just how much you love me
) Y' }9 Y- ]5 T' G' a; j( k% qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# x+ ~0 y; z, ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) R; k  z! f3 C, W# OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ q' j' q% `9 H; F- @- p3 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 \! n3 m& e& C. B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. ^! N1 G  H' s# Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ z- A& Q4 a6 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' i1 o8 t" p$ E( [7 }0 K3 Q! t7 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 E+ E9 R' l% u/ F6 \: z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 n- }. L6 x7 z6 \  Y6 r* d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ ^3 |8 \" I& O7 j' y6 _! D) z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; `. ]+ @' x9 E9 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: |3 t- H4 K/ J! H5 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 ]+ N5 ]) n* ^4 o) O& q# B6 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ [1 r9 s8 ?- G+ S, m) f) H- T/ f" a1 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; O! R# J# N& Q" T2 h2 h: Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 `# s# S# v. O+ y' O' V+ v<P>你无需担心</P>
9 o" _4 J6 D& g% O& e# y! F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% v' G. z9 w9 t; |; f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% k) H9 g; E- H  k6 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- G, W4 o2 M* B1 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) O, G% Q+ \2 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 R( ^+ w& T$ S1 r$ [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% P0 M+ U+ C. q* b$ V) j/ K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( e  f/ s/ u$ ?1 N( s/ k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 d0 o0 x4 U9 O- D, n) U+ p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: w* i2 ~" y  w, d: @5 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) l% m* A* K( G/ r! |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; u6 v6 e2 k( X3 P% E$ B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" V! d6 s5 z( l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& y; P# ]+ V8 o% [) k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% b: T/ [+ W3 g, s# y4 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 H; y) O0 |2 x- Z9 f  _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 ]# I6 u' v& B/ a# p( ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" L  C7 _0 D4 ^0 m4 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' d3 I* n) [, n! S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 G4 z) @1 N7 }- y/ l4 A+ r! ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: e! w2 i/ M% z6 q  T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 W; z3 q* Y# K我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ t3 f9 T6 Q* p9 |4 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>