【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 k4 O  p  v8 u$ w' u9 q$ U/ R; M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 ?, Q2 ]& }6 b) b( g4 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 u1 W: J7 c8 `# y& L) i; LWith the moon kissing it every night
) M& C- H: C/ ^- USeeing the sky content with its love
4 L- F% b+ H. i9 R1 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( N6 t2 R2 w' {  K/ C( c; YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& R4 c6 X3 v6 @% C* RI want so much to see inside your heart
; c0 I# H) O" \4 u) D. iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# _8 `; {( h+ D! kI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# o% q3 ~4 x: ?$ x: R! X% {With such a tongue as yours,
5 P& I, u+ D) E# T7 Q5 m7 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! p8 {/ X8 i9 h& x/ v1 |1 k. XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( v0 w5 d6 m3 U! T, g! |- P! x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! P: _/ C3 N/ f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) f/ y# Q' B  x! P- l5 w# y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' H3 K& `6 z/ Q# N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 o7 O8 U' @2 q3 m. K, F  i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% q% a! V$ L( ]/ j% E* |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 r" S1 E. U. J+ h2 S4 r) X  o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, V! |! V( V& C5 |  \2 M! a  }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: H- _' [* d- Y& K7 B) _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  D" [/ g1 \& T* k3 d. ^; j5 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' ^3 o: `) ^+ \% E- e2 j- c0 }<P>你无需担心</P>
) t. r# U4 r5 G  _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 {  n. S( h1 h5 a7 u7 C, N# ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. s- ]* [% e0 R5 \% S9 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; X9 ?  U' }, k+ J4 w/ u" Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! P9 w& ]! [4 u. G5 X$ b6 ]) T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 h; W/ ?1 ^% v& t6 K0 M0 P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% {3 |, q9 H% ~- Q5 h9 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ t: T0 P( V) Y. M3 r4 O9 }$ C/ B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 W* O3 W3 t* A5 z' C. g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ Y' N4 F: {2 m6 H+ l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% A$ d+ ?% z0 v, U1 V* {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 q, [0 b8 |' }0 X3 c* a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 f; ]" i9 X' C( T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 a2 e1 ~/ u& X) \) k. I; @3 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 ]3 \* u  [/ w3 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; f+ z" `: R" S: y2 J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( |+ Y3 X! H$ n: h9 d* L: U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, h9 a1 @# Z1 _+ _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& s7 I5 u+ G$ U: e我请你剖开它
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* r' r& T: r8 Q# o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>