【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* J2 p, ^6 N- m% @& \1 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ a% N; [8 A5 lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) W/ g7 ^: \" @' u0 o9 `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 G  \- h5 [1 s1 r# w- CYou needn’t fear anything
  h' l4 `) K/ U0 P) L! \- g1 ^) ^. hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 l' x( B/ I. ^9 YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% y# X/ |5 d6 P* }Nothing can compare to my love
/ o  ?, i+ A8 ?! F) N, _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 Z/ j, W+ z1 F. f' H# sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 ~, z7 f( M! }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) d2 x) {; i1 v1 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" L# o4 d( c. v  C; U5 u) x* MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" S8 T+ w9 j: O3 U: t& t, u9 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 i+ |5 J6 c0 ^# R9 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 @1 ~2 J$ h9 i5 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" N* l0 @  L7 T7 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 r" E  u5 ]+ |" ]( O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ q; r$ X  N( e: u5 X( o2 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& |9 K, a/ c4 U/ K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 \) c$ Z8 h0 H& j* B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 S" r# L8 k, E5 U0 T- m. [, K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 q! ^* P" m+ W# F6 C% C9 z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* o" `+ c! V0 ]2 s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! ^# E% w9 Z. H' t7 b, X6 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  Y6 T, h7 H# v5 J3 w6 }<P>你无需担心</P>
, U! x6 q& c* ~9 X7 A7 b& U) \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 k' T( U8 W' e: q. S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 X  r5 ]4 ]/ L$ I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 ?6 Q+ {5 P  P0 E: t9 z+ @8 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 g& `# \2 y% o8 I3 N# o; s# m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ S7 K6 U" Q0 O6 i) t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 `* z, n' h* \, _4 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 C4 n8 R- @. e  ]3 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) K+ W) l2 x6 ?- _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 e0 X4 Z' h  L6 R3 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' G# A8 d( C* H8 Z" Z1 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 n; Q4 E! j8 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 ?; G$ X5 R& K, P3 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
& U0 s3 c# ?. N- W% h5 L' g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, x+ {& j& x. d6 ~+ b( s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 |$ G! {& K2 x# W, o) F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 ]" L% a# E  c0 g& Y3 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 ~$ W7 v( u0 ~3 p: v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>