【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' T$ R) |+ E8 H  c! D! \* j" b  s3 ?歌词我附在后面。
4 }' U: e( @- d& |* @  g/ V+ z; V4 EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( P0 V. u  G1 a3 r0 J1 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' {% V4 p* X! FSeeing the sky content with its love
" e9 D( z6 T2 N; C2 M: S9 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# E; }4 R( U' I2 qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  N4 Y9 s. A2 t: ^2 p% W5 q' UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 P) {: S* r6 o  Z( y" T2 l5 ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  P. d6 f' L: G0 ^$ sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ R* _* U  U/ N8 z/ g# a& ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& j7 Q% K( V0 d+ l1 TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" K. ^; o3 `% j7 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& E5 g9 \( f# s& mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, |  k" z$ X' f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% }3 `: a1 d" d" I7 d2 B3 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* Z# n7 y$ U* a3 t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! d$ Y* D3 R1 @; S5 M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; A+ Z7 Y# v2 b+ ]9 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& x# z+ p+ l- l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 h4 T3 R% M0 b6 L4 M: i6 g9 p; [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 w( Y$ `# E. T7 n0 Y3 i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ a* u$ `  j- Y, s0 P8 S$ g9 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 `  J- ~* \: \; S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. {5 r4 y' B3 _5 `$ W9 k2 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 W1 k. `7 O- C* ?3 W0 a/ l+ v<P>你无需担心</P>
3 n, _% I9 H+ W6 s7 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; J9 S- R* F+ S; _/ U; `5 I! `8 e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' t+ N  j& t3 C; {# C3 O, u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; Z8 J3 h% g5 \" |+ q; ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* M1 i4 d+ V7 I* C8 U* J+ J8 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 L1 |1 U  c9 }) X7 V: V/ y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' i* v% Q( b- s+ _; k! o; }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  H+ f$ P7 s- V( H  n+ f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 X) Y" K  J  L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ A# Y+ m' S  d# o* d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! X5 a. |- C! x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 `8 S: m4 T; G8 f/ @* n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. r! a$ f3 V* m3 |: i0 ]3 @1 d9 l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" B/ W: m( F" u1 Z5 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 r. |7 J0 W0 p$ {9 Q* x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 J  u8 B& F* {7 ^* m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' w2 v; V2 p6 y. v& {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>