【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 s- v- A& O: c/ C' J* {+ ]: d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  O+ s+ ?# g0 q- b! r' ~0 U# _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 F/ J4 C* c* W* ?1 m% N5 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ a) K% {) b1 cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 ^# R, K) ?# CYou needn’t fear anything
8 {- J  i" `3 I$ H" uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( J: E' G- }1 b. vEvery other word you utter is love
0 B( Q+ A5 W& R0 k+ E# sI really want to know just how much you love me
+ Q& l& n1 X3 ?2 _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( J9 H4 h* i) nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 k) t1 B7 u2 c8 \6 YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! @% h: I) K2 H, \I regret not dying
, k! x( t/ k, C6 @; ^$ h8 d' tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; M3 g( ~" `' H) ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- d6 t7 s" [' t! M* \$ _/ N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" B" O! D" `! y" a; _3 H. W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ e2 D4 t: E3 Y" I% J6 s1 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 P- c: k+ N2 c! z( R$ L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 E) ?. {# j3 J, f& G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- G$ S: w. T% B* ?( A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ a5 R0 F. d1 Z- S* x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% B, C) v+ T7 M+ Q" S* L* a+ y# h1 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; f! ?& ?7 x) C+ _7 _' K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" o$ j. T2 S& B1 C! l( n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 ?! z( D5 R0 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& B7 v# U5 T  k9 S; r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" P: k! G9 E6 ^& m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! o' {3 w4 M4 u" G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- u4 m: P- `( {, |) P2 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ L8 k' W8 }, G- J/ g& U% m1 f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 e/ R" ~; v0 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 W; X8 C7 [; \1 L8 F3 {6 F! g9 M; _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. |9 p8 v4 t+ C+ Q0 R$ Z0 u4 `- \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. @5 }3 q9 f- F5 m, t- _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. Z4 Z# ^8 b- ]8 Z' v( ^9 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 K( t5 b& V& Y; P5 o8 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- `; K, @/ i1 ~" z- S- h: ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; C# v+ W! E: X0 ?# @: ~* ?- @6 b; @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  `4 z! d+ f( \; @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) ?. g: E% \$ ]/ }" a8 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 X4 U3 R# l4 M* ]; K- W我请你剖开它

6 f, R. B; p+ p5 u, j0 h, n" ?: S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>