【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  W$ J8 S$ _5 p& A! J: ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
' X5 N+ ?3 ], r  tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. C" [% r9 ]1 |! k3 j, z3 u; |3 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 |3 _# H; s3 [; RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# ]# M3 n& r0 ]' Z- IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# m6 k; [, x5 sEvery other word you utter is love
1 ^( N/ n3 Z6 a. b$ h$ L" _, }I really want to know just how much you love me
6 `# [% q) R. @9 S; vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% O/ P+ X" E+ q1 m- P5 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 k2 ?) `% R, V" \+ a) VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 J! ?+ z9 z) p, D( e" D+ _* q/ ^4 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( ~; R3 A3 d1 M; }; z  i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# l' `0 d' g2 ^' `7 r! `  ~# M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- C6 A* a# H5 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, D8 w( R& f: P+ _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: D3 ^- C0 I* |) I, a9 e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 y9 ]1 e9 b, d1 y0 g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 O  M- K2 S) X1 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  O% S. b$ e) M, V! U7 y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! |+ ?; b' c5 ]# K; v/ l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 K" C5 ^5 s; x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 z1 X) M$ j" ~  Y& |9 Q, r3 _* a9 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 z' ?, a2 D0 X. y, I; F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# C/ @$ r& z& G) \4 G" e% x) C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" b* B4 n3 A( x) M- |  L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# Z# }  X, s5 {9 q) S! ^, v5 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 v2 [! Q6 o; h1 C- `3 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& F0 `( j, T: E( C7 I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- J7 K( F" M: K0 z. ~2 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 z$ `: ?4 S" X/ D4 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( ^. x7 L" C8 z5 ?% ~; K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: H" `3 e/ G$ s) ?# i0 Y$ E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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0 t' r. W, t2 D* v: B5 R0 t; s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>