【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 }$ G1 L5 ?1 a' k" T  G6 r: b+ R歌词我附在后面。
( n; Y6 i. Q" ]. XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: o# F- e+ R6 g0 O" T$ U! yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 v3 D0 q) }# D' S# S9 r  I8 ~8 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 ?& c* I( T7 R3 E0 N; y! kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 m6 w  O# k% V2 D4 |( w/ MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ s: g$ h: D; d  M! V& k; @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 F+ Y' c: y4 p/ fNothing can compare to my love
/ ?( @6 K  x/ {1 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 m% I: M" n  D) z, g+ n4 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 ~* o7 i* j) a0 M: K3 fI want so much to see inside your heart
# W6 a$ O0 {8 `0 j/ \4 h) f) h( GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) N& T5 x3 B  m( LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; T4 d: o; ?  q  Z% D% p0 P8 eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: p* p7 a7 m; `) VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ {  }6 W2 R  t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. A5 z# `- A1 S) I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. V) p' Z7 L- {# f+ Y3 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% e6 z, w/ W5 v, o  [% v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, ?4 h/ X+ e6 o  B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! \( a/ n* L4 A  O# P- h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; I- L0 l6 l1 S+ D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- c1 c4 q: q8 y& |9 J; l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" v; j& R# t6 y4 N; Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 l! C7 @9 v! S' K, E6 `/ Y+ z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 P/ g" R; C4 e* V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% }4 r! S7 D3 B( o! @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 k. I9 H3 A/ }4 i2 M5 a# f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 Q2 t  f0 ?6 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' A; K8 w/ S1 c7 i) b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* c5 {, Z" L* o- J  h7 T$ v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' M; e0 J# _. G4 B# D) L7 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ h1 Q- [7 Q5 G: B2 {  A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 V( n; t6 ]: N. g5 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, z) [; @6 `6 Y1 T: ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. ^) v/ _. B( x& x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 P$ Y5 Q) x" ?0 L" l) S3 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' p/ A+ }% x- F* ~7 S; y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: m, S  F) h" I2 Y3 R. j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  K- \+ [1 f! Z( S/ M9 R6 q, j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 t% Q4 ~! \; A$ a4 c" E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' I2 z( P, w1 K& k8 O5 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 K2 T; X& k' C9 J& n/ ~; M0 z* t我请你剖开它
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1 ~! r) Y& a2 {' z7 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>