【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; l; X% `7 U* x- DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. y# A' v- s: f2 g5 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& y8 U$ H7 A0 G5 v( N7 k5 {/ rThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 P' \. ]( X( w( t$ Z  ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 W. u9 L: l) e. E4 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 N6 X* e# Q: [- P$ d. G( ]/ q& }Every other word you utter is love
, k3 C3 E( S& `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 L% b% a+ [/ N  @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: c/ S2 y4 e7 ?5 H- e+ @/ ^) ?5 `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 |& O7 i* k+ T0 u6 _  oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 S  q4 Q. Q2 s& y0 ^+ ?& fI regret not dying
1 I+ q9 o) n- T+ C+ t' CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 n, ~1 ~2 j3 u! z' p4 p+ w- q6 QWith such a tongue as yours,
8 i4 M0 A' T: ~2 @) hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  J2 S' s" I6 L9 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ @# X: C- L- z& q9 `3 Y- m2 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 p0 A/ h- E) V1 H5 A* @4 u( l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 F0 ?1 F, N0 X% N2 I  y  Z% S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 S; g- h, r( j( R" y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) @( h1 Q) @1 R  J  w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 u, Y/ X% v3 a+ K- |- c<P>你无需担心</P>
8 B8 z. a. H$ f' W( B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 b$ r9 Z( }9 t' ]8 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 t' Z* n) B0 G! u& y& ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% x( _' A+ b& U% J# q( K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 b( f8 X6 y  P% K. A  v; h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* j7 T. c2 Q7 e) Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 l1 \( O$ c0 u' v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- J$ \- H1 Y# q: Q$ ?8 r* k' ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 P* a1 d9 P" D4 ?9 ^& I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; ~# u& n& O  q) p0 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* U$ J8 O" ~( ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 [# q8 ]8 X) M8 i+ b' z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 q8 ^1 {+ I3 m$ p3 t1 S3 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 l6 x) ~7 Q9 d5 U0 G) c6 {1 K; X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 u* U: J2 o, M$ g3 {% \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* f- q. L0 g: `5 i! k4 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' D% [6 g" O2 t2 p0 t0 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 F# o: Q- {& k6 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# h" o7 C: \6 v2 q+ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 p( ^' T0 ^8 P2 x, n* j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! G! \' g" e, m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! k; v+ L" L& N& {! {我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; {( j7 A( K  [7 Q: j; M2 }( Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>