【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& y+ _- n+ I! O0 J" M! d) C歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! j) O- S9 w; Q1 I* MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 X3 H' f* k, ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( D6 p" E3 Y# Z/ K" D& VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* O+ d! t6 W2 |! J& O; HYou needn’t fear anything
8 f2 ]- x. L* j8 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# n4 `$ {( ]8 y  MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ \6 M- s" s9 @2 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 n2 M# I; Q" m  i/ FI want so much to see inside your heart
# B' H8 ]; ?, W: m# WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, @2 d: H& g: B3 v" D% {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; h; Q) j' X6 P+ E( r  H& T+ sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% b8 |# X/ Z1 E) i+ M  |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( C4 O( p" N+ R6 M; J- s/ H( xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: z# S; E1 l% a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. x8 N. @; i* C. i! a! P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ D, q0 i1 a' `$ {: {+ N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 Q" \) ~0 q& |! Z# {$ t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( S1 C6 R0 M$ G6 N. U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* {2 j' M" j3 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 K  l( y7 m- |; Z0 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 B% N. X- {! K" ^- Y+ p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ G+ D2 h. j, {0 z2 z$ c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  O2 w) s! Y5 K  f7 ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ E2 k8 z2 C7 B0 n, `% s5 M+ m2 ]# g$ }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! w2 \( \  e$ J" |$ l3 q9 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 o9 U1 C' F: j+ m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. S7 A0 S' m; N2 ], u) a. b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! K- `, P( U% O5 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" _2 G7 ^6 ^* T0 O9 p$ @2 Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ j1 C! o5 F4 f% o- S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ l" R/ a. a: W, I5 n3 T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( b$ v; O1 S  u, K+ C1 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 T/ M: f6 k* c" m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ I# v! {2 E( R! x+ b我请你剖开它
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! e+ \+ k' d4 k& B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>