【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% M1 z& o& s0 W$ A! O/ s3 b9 r9 [歌词我附在后面。
6 Y5 l- y( n' v) [2 P# p! kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 W0 P" a3 P" s( vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ }- H% q" p" hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( p4 ^9 \5 M- A' Y5 L: a: PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) O+ a9 N2 l6 A& }' xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) q  C, {: c3 M3 m  BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. I( L) J) H% k+ _0 O  \I love you I love you with all my heart
% w  l0 U- c, @) ^Nothing can compare to my love
; o; q: }/ K8 m( I6 z/ t+ wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 G. y- A- f( SI want so much to see inside your heart
$ y8 _: ?, Y6 H% c, aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 m  i0 R0 B  F) ~$ |I’m still filled with fear
3 c* m) o' Q7 h5 b% pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 V7 B; X3 w5 J' lI regret not dying
! p( n; h' q. {) n& kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% M+ J# p/ h6 ~8 c. P- @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  S1 V; R! s: `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ m( X6 A7 C  n; E$ K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* V$ A6 J' K8 S6 z% `  d4 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& W# u0 m2 L0 o+ \" A9 ?* R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# V/ \" _- Q6 w, z) J# w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( D3 ^/ o7 F0 u  ^  v2 G: ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 ?3 ^6 E# k1 y2 o  X% n( O, B6 j* x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# }0 B' x- f) E" Z4 W1 X% E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) @! ?3 R1 ^' ]: Z* x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- u: |4 S& M+ B. R8 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) R% N; x/ h8 i$ S' o, l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 [9 n4 M4 C. U* M2 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 I2 Q$ n- H2 K5 y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 M3 ^( N# }: [3 U, s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; a5 }2 J/ f) n6 ]: l. R' k  l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 F; J: C" S9 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, Z4 Z0 V) O+ L' r2 r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ r3 w% j. u- F. r$ j4 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! F# y3 G: |) V( X" ^. c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ S' I& b# w$ L: J5 E9 U6 d4 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! y# L* H7 v" R- ]; ?. J$ Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 m+ R+ c' F! [1 ]0 R0 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ |$ c( e4 e  x; @0 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- y2 X5 t& x$ [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 C( L6 P7 u3 ]0 P' Z8 o+ \& T$ o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 p  R8 s7 Q0 ^( s# H; G0 v/ l& x( X/ `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 H# c  j3 }! |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* w. O% f/ D4 {0 o  Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 i) ?% `" t$ ]  s1 u9 C' Q" S: c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>