【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. W5 ]3 k( w# S' O; |& c& F歌词我附在后面。
  K+ L$ f, Z% N( [# V5 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 k% C( _) ^" s6 |) sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 q; e( n& w  {' L, MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; [, v% S4 L' C6 \4 k5 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& {: s2 s6 i5 h/ GSeeing the sky content with its love
# V# }% p4 S7 k3 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 `* A! F  s2 y7 _& uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) T9 f3 W. h1 r$ B; yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' O6 c7 t+ |9 H/ j! k  R* L! R5 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* [$ b/ a4 S+ t9 y9 F5 OI’m still filled with fear
& W% V: H( k# O4 Q( mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 j( z& B+ s/ b, F' y9 q. {& l: g7 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; T8 R8 Q: J1 E6 W9 S. H# g1 j, XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 X1 r$ `. e6 J/ VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 K( \* {/ \% j& i, c9 e# h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 H2 p9 J1 X+ c- ]) ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* c7 Z( h  E) _* W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( N1 B/ x, }+ I( d, O! J& R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, T2 y/ v) O: O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" z( B2 m4 Q: O! a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 g* K/ D4 q8 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 c$ a- Z/ Y- Q' N) ], N$ e  N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 _9 W% ^: e3 l; o/ _) o% i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 Z, s$ z" g# a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* ?4 o* q# e1 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 R1 D7 ^' v9 B0 D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" ^; m2 [5 {  ^% W  g8 L6 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 \; v+ ?* m5 `/ g! w: S8 ^' h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' |0 h- u# x8 m* w; |7 }' |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* w. A% {2 ?% ?8 s1 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 i0 e* c3 z( d+ `9 R7 U5 B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 P; j/ U6 V8 w) u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 @" r- r# x6 l8 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: D  a6 Q5 }2 K; e  P% j7 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' J( y  o6 Z* @- ~' @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& C7 B" p1 u/ D8 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% _) \" o, |2 t( H2 X& J; E: h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ Y- J% [  A: I! K( C0 f1 S1 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& M' M" C  d4 c; U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 V& B' E+ W$ \+ h/ D. _$ z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ d3 f; `7 B8 _8 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, ?8 V- x; r3 i/ P6 _" {6 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" u' g5 L8 N. G9 F/ U  I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 o7 K8 W) q$ `1 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) R' I9 }9 [2 [# `) i2 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 W) F2 r8 _1 }" ~6 z3 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- @. P2 O1 C3 @2 a' P3 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! {4 @5 x& t, V4 u* e; n% b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>