【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 b- c& r4 m" Q5 I歌词我附在后面。
- f) j4 A. R" L" a+ ]; H6 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 b. K) a7 Z" m7 D, ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
. r" G4 h$ H$ aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 {% n+ }" p2 b( m2 K- m& gThe sky is happy down to its soul
# l  S4 E( I% N1 r( ~! s, sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" S  |! Z% I4 B) _6 A2 e) pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! Z& T1 H0 |9 }7 U+ v. C, ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. O2 s1 x- P0 t0 I8 [4 o3 MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% c. ~1 b; g9 j  ~3 v/ kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 o$ u& X6 \- J% f# ?  v: h8 p5 S# LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, \: ^+ b; F; ^: l2 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 B4 O) ^1 z4 w* L& K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& p5 t3 o8 Y% B% b( S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: x& ?. W3 y$ J' Q' m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! L) e4 P" n2 t- w$ j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& K1 w- o; Z! C/ O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# W# a6 U& q. h, Y7 K; l7 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; D* k$ F9 j/ P% }$ X3 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) X7 V" D% w) K6 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 H  j4 ?, p, l$ S3 c- l) B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. D" s" H1 t7 a" C, d! N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! [4 b& _3 _; x/ j& X- N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, B8 e0 J1 S, D$ p1 z, u$ U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; a1 J- {% P& B* x# i0 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# j. ~4 d/ z! r. N) x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 q8 N. V: V0 n' N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 R$ m6 d+ o  ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# Z" r5 e- `7 w* Z+ @1 m( U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 Z8 _7 I. O4 C! N% c' e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, [; m; F* b, K+ q' p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& C- j# |: I. t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" Z/ e+ [/ ]( V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 D( E# [# N0 I0 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- |% Q8 u' K% A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 R: q$ d0 P1 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  K) J2 d, e6 P9 G, K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( q2 [7 ~3 m$ x4 F4 B0 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ F2 n" k* V$ b  @7 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) J" Z. k9 o7 v) O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 T( n- N4 |' A' z4 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# x: |4 p7 u& P$ _& c4 |+ T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 e1 f. c% `/ X% P' W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( B4 L( t! g, W+ n8 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) Q0 U, H0 y/ x( e1 I  O- z0 r! v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ K6 {: o/ w/ Y( P我请你剖开它
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' q; l6 E9 B: y: p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 g, [  y/ W" B5 x  g' S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>