【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; c' m3 @! J  Z# H# y1 p* }* n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' c+ d" o: Q9 B- hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' |  i  K) |% d! H- pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' E" Z8 s' v- D/ @/ g3 B( zThe sky is happy down to its soul
) f+ b+ n8 L' [* [% T/ yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 ~, X+ ?- W6 @7 E; }3 T" cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 k  o( n8 \$ i; n! g" ]You needn’t fear anything
) \  `6 V5 z& V5 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 g# ]  Z/ e* R% B3 q( a3 VI’m still filled with fear
, w! ?4 c4 g6 i8 x0 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  h* t# w2 \6 @I regret not dying
( w  s) a! {+ L) {2 z8 D' Y/ OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ t( D8 x7 N4 X, O) f1 jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 t$ D/ |! ?1 F# b5 [) DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# R  i6 `4 n3 l, R; J9 N5 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 m8 ^- U9 o$ p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 ~" A- E/ I& V+ J0 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 L0 R: O) D: K3 ?! m' t# |7 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& y$ b( _: Y! K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, W  B) m  S; A1 D1 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 @" s1 Y/ {$ j' o: b: r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* ~9 D6 m2 s' }$ l9 ]+ a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ Z2 [; _: a& a+ \* k! u7 g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 d3 g" r; {2 M. O+ ~! [; v' T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, H, B" t$ P( Q7 P" H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 |/ {/ g# o8 U1 K' G& E! Y+ P6 A( H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 B; E4 z/ ?0 j5 L2 I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ k; `8 W8 f- D% _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 {2 o7 J) J9 ]; J" C$ O; Y% i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 [% I. }  D; I5 m& D0 w; _* y; P4 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; X  M2 h( p3 R% d' P5 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 e3 h4 r/ d; v  j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 E3 w. p( q/ \) Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- h( Y* d9 v& X( D  O% R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 A2 Q8 p( n' t( s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 a- W6 a9 {) b& A3 p6 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& {4 S7 {' O8 l7 z" w" B% _" b: N' _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 f& `- w+ m, T, ?, G) ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; X% K) y6 r/ e0 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 Y+ R6 ]" W3 {5 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, ]1 ?9 T3 y$ _1 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>