【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* e+ g; ^: p- cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 E# ~! T0 Z" y$ U  u, pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" {; C% c( u, J; c' P7 ?' [4 eWith the moon kissing it every night
) n, I$ U- X" P$ h$ r0 G8 y: ISeeing the sky content with its love
+ E, c( K2 V8 s0 Q& d5 S8 |4 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; C3 P" L) f7 Q5 V6 T: \7 mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 G8 q- G& u0 n9 \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 w3 W5 P. V  _I want so much to see inside your heart
6 {" h7 ], D. }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" d* l/ c# i& b. E4 y) V5 k+ a) cI regret not dying
2 C  J6 O) w$ Y" a, DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 e& G- k4 t9 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. x( c' f% o8 C/ t# g( A& cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, [" z7 O* |% b- D8 F/ Y0 T5 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 X9 r$ x3 |# ]0 v' P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 y; k. i0 O! ~8 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( B" g& e+ }, ]$ M2 N- v0 c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# _' K% r. x/ V- J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) |. r6 e0 G9 F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 {+ I! w0 r; C  P5 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 B, P3 b; w: d; |* I$ J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' L9 Y6 F* ]  h, v9 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( e* Q" f1 s1 `! K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ B) V# P9 `/ |1 x- y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 p6 w9 {: v; e  ?% V( E" `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; N! n% n4 ?) z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) }2 k" ?$ ~+ ~3 f! d0 F; ^; T1 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 C' D# K/ Y1 J) ~) q3 X3 d3 `3 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 E/ @8 }/ w! t; C! U4 Q" M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* y" B+ B* D& i( O7 b9 k' ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; M4 P0 K3 D# \( E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% P  o0 W# v: H4 R$ Q& u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 a# B, c+ A( q' d/ ]" l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' M' v0 D7 G4 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 ]5 b8 z3 b( K7 {& D, M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& n& H8 |( G9 @7 |) v# W) K7 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# F/ `7 y4 [8 S# X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

- \8 B0 W' C; M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; ?8 E. C1 g1 O7 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>