【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% o  Z* G$ l' J" L0 p4 S歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# V. j: ^7 |+ p; b! {8 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 q" j# T3 ]2 t' d7 u( ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" }8 J7 U- |) t3 _5 ~- wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ f% v* H, Q5 oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 V- F, I$ R0 Q% U4 A% E) v' y( F" ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ _( ?: M% f: q' @! X1 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# O5 _) l1 Y/ s' m$ _3 x4 o# hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 V2 a! m6 m- II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& I! z. F2 a3 H" ^# SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 `+ [; N+ _* E- b& j* S" a6 TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 @& h2 [9 E" c/ CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  j' L# \- [6 J; D: ?5 W8 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 L5 I3 \! k# K, d7 X/ D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 |' K, B6 k, h2 z; U" s. k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. d2 v+ F3 K8 d4 u0 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% w6 }8 t* P" ^5 l' Y# V' @# P. w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& s4 ~8 e8 W% P8 s$ X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 ]: ]5 o! ~' Z7 Q; _; l4 Q, V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 N% L9 E' g2 Q; n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ k# g; w4 K! B& p8 V$ }4 F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: v  M/ X( n) B- g4 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* E3 c, K: x2 s+ M( ?9 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 B, v) g) w& z9 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" w1 @/ @" {( V. L; x# D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; D5 p6 Q0 d' i& e7 n# i5 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ j+ |- Z3 l0 [. H7 L5 i$ @8 Y; [, Q/ g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ b, T+ k+ `3 V* ?6 @: z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( ^, E5 L$ q1 Z7 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' s- x% m' j0 W0 [4 Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; \6 w% @6 I7 {  k- {% v2 I2 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) e" ^7 _7 |$ B( E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  j+ e$ E8 p9 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ H) c, Y( b& c7 ~% R6 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. {( G# Y' J  t3 Q6 q- T' ~) M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 b1 e+ x) @8 k4 x* i% S$ `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 Z7 h* a. e8 R1 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, H* `7 b! G% }/ t我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( V: i" @/ ?  E5 [: s) a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>