【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ ^" {( J7 b: x( Q7 n! f9 a$ JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& f& [2 R9 I  k3 a( {$ q! r+ TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 D, X) K8 t3 i3 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* d6 K6 Q/ K: |* v. N$ o' [) x$ {The sky is happy down to its soul
6 B3 ~  G- {; O# A6 yWith the moon kissing it every night
' U, ?7 w1 `) ^& r- d8 ?Seeing the sky content with its love
( x- p2 w  G& d% Q3 |4 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 d! y3 R; a! @/ NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ C$ u0 t& k. v0 cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 e) I3 Q; y+ i3 H# }7 q0 T5 SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' h/ b/ e$ w' R7 L9 dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ |0 {6 T- O! ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ e/ \, V. ^4 z6 Y1 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! o, u" \! o$ D  D+ ?8 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# v: j6 ~6 c7 D9 V8 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. {' `: E' B/ _5 A+ w" q7 A5 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 X' T0 f' E* I" ^- k& {+ d5 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* L* w3 c9 Q( m1 ^0 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! C1 M& M4 j9 N$ }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 p. \2 W& q8 Q: b2 g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 V1 T) O- p: Y! p$ l* C2 A1 `! N5 L6 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 _- _, |9 T' c( v% \$ b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) j2 T$ {. }0 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ l: G" J& {9 H: l! b) G" b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 ]9 w: o& s1 Q3 v8 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 b( x* s$ m8 E" G7 d! t$ j8 Y: C4 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; h! m0 Q/ U  n9 M0 i1 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ u" E: Y$ d9 C$ j1 l- ?1 Q; V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) u) N! n$ x  m& n! f0 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  D7 R' ?) {8 g6 \/ y  Y0 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ D5 I. Y4 u1 a4 n& K. ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  d4 u1 e' t% L( s' F; y' A# |7 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, W! H; v' M: a$ e4 _/ c/ c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 }/ }  @# s9 t) P3 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- R8 i; K  m$ n: @7 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  d5 `& W: r# I3 ?- B# E1 Z0 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 X  R( B' Q8 U; [5 @! U, A! l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- O: ~) t4 Y. S0 T3 }8 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 a" m. ?8 k) z9 s" A+ q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 H/ K, L* @# ?) B( L; u( d" n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 J. P) }. Z9 a  Z6 G: i3 e, q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 _9 T9 v& h' u: I/ S5 b, @1 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) V7 F; `: I2 v7 f8 B# a  b我请你剖开它

6 }. N+ P1 K) {) K/ e0 Z+ f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>