【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
' _1 w3 V0 u( a' `( s' lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 O4 f8 d& ]6 }0 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 c0 `) _+ I( W  nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 R* ^9 ^3 B$ A. y5 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( W' D/ C3 }* t4 W! G/ k# XEvery other word you utter is love
4 `5 ^* \3 V4 Q! X% F" WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* b9 k5 h' E) rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, e; ^& o0 Z  V- vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& j) l% u& y( [0 W" u: P1 r6 H- d  v4 DI’m still filled with fear
$ M( ~' N. S2 M; M) z* {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( }$ f2 J, W3 ?( [8 ~4 ?0 r9 u4 iI regret not dying
* \, |4 g0 z/ `+ B, bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 ]3 p6 L- d1 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: Y! h( X' o  x; n) J. [3 \: \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 u5 r2 C4 l! {0 w& p+ j% E. @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 r8 h: z/ b. E' K+ [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 R- O7 c$ G8 @* i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* a! n( X/ {: P4 \/ p7 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' j0 Z) |/ n- M8 b& t/ }' P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ I) b  _( e$ J$ y" r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* a# W' ]; V/ X, A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 ^! E) b3 U( J' H0 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ ~% x$ `! c. d* c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) p% i+ E+ f7 w9 K2 Y* q) K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( |! V- F, D4 A7 `* ~$ k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ B, D9 G8 Y7 B0 i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 Q$ t9 g( p; n* K% ?+ O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 d5 S' b( P0 h- d2 b! m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 Y$ D  A% f( L0 x9 P$ U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- @3 K9 D" h* x9 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 z% S  W1 N; F1 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 S! W3 f/ w0 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 ^- F: Z& z5 c. l, i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" `* p2 m' R( }& C3 L0 _: _* B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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