【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( o9 F) h* v+ s8 I* k/ a0 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ F: ^* m8 h- l! Q9 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% h5 }9 e$ R& h: zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) i& [9 f5 j# H7 J/ _* zThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 J8 t: v5 D/ EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# ]) P. l5 V! f1 c* uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ h% ?% Q6 j" `0 q$ F- {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 ^; @: j. d3 NNothing can compare to my love
# Y: `) e, d1 w/ P3 W. c& KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- k9 {5 x9 _1 w4 b8 h( R: KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 d" F# h! R' S% uI regret not dying
( I8 B1 N* ~; ?( X9 S/ u5 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% s( t# g8 U$ E8 Y- [5 c6 ~5 yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 R. s* @1 Y" F/ p9 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# A$ w+ y+ Q6 b9 }) @' Z4 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, V/ U; D. E- \2 Y) V4 l, ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' R* \0 `- ~4 q" D/ a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ q. f3 m3 t/ x* R5 y9 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 o5 S* e  m* c, W/ B" o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* [; I, R, v; R  h  I; J8 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 x. U  a% W' @5 G4 H, M) \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 z# z4 [) }" N5 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 x5 q7 z- A5 e+ ?1 y, T+ U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* Y1 R: d$ \9 E( I( F" c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! t% e4 Y0 X) t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 m/ p6 a) N& V  `/ F( d4 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 [8 e6 d, B* u" K& ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  O, y& c/ l! \6 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# U7 r2 S- ]9 B$ Y$ K6 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* ?0 B( Z6 r2 n/ M9 b$ H8 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) B& a! U9 l  }8 k$ z. d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 n7 n1 Q0 h$ {+ _& w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) g0 f( a, V! ^% }. y( F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' T& f' ~! J, p& I2 v& R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ^9 F; i) Z3 u2 [* O5 }& F- z5 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>