【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& p* B8 ~. S0 g5 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: h" V: ~7 Z1 I. p, g/ H* {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' o% k" @+ [* X0 d2 ~8 O1 @2 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
# F1 S! x0 B- Q% H! lWith the moon kissing it every night
1 c0 W/ @8 y; H" c8 ?0 {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, }7 s1 [- ^" eI really want to know just how much you love me
% [9 {' ]: [$ L$ k' w" o5 pI love you I love you with all my heart
; f9 H" K% v3 q# D8 A" VNothing can compare to my love
3 ]. V2 ?% j, I4 ^+ h  O$ @$ XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' R9 \. e) ~8 `0 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ T# I( I( v# _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( A) K  i: V" A4 g* fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, A4 {# D$ L, i( b1 GI regret not dying
; }+ |* {8 }% i: W0 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; ^1 u- c9 [- ]' @- P4 j) ^With such a tongue as yours,
# Q1 C8 O3 z) }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 _7 i5 w7 Z! F! a% ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ ]9 l9 d8 S+ O9 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' z( S# r6 ~+ |- M; ~. [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; z! z4 N; B5 H. ~; d' `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 f! K* y2 ~2 r, G) ^1 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# m9 W0 \2 M7 x7 i- ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- S# m: s9 ^! i. U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 J+ y- r6 p0 t# |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* l/ `3 {9 G1 O8 K9 e' b. s1 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% }: P, y( T) V0 P9 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) d: @5 v/ V# P2 I) U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, L$ I: F; a* L( v9 q, g% t. M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" T$ {. A$ p& I; B  @" S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' C0 P8 t- h* ]9 G$ ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: j* Y$ i- b8 c$ M% F: G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 _1 c$ M* `9 t6 k! D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ c# G5 G8 a. h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 y$ v& x  s& ~' i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 z" ~& I( d% ~/ k" W: Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( B' n/ X% m$ y1 Q% B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% \2 W4 K" A: A* C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 `% l- c) z% y* M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( N# u% @5 q" S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 [8 G: ?3 U  \- z0 p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- }0 R2 `. ~$ f& `% Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& {; U0 d2 T  f1 y7 z+ k  H4 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 R: W  S2 K9 Z0 _2 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% u3 ]0 \. X9 Y, Z0 j1 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 }+ h& r: |) ^1 v& e  E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

4 w" a0 y4 y/ y" g, d. X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 ?+ W! \) r5 h. J" Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>