【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 i/ d4 o! _. S& T! G6 f- P- RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 F0 w. p: V5 i% V2 }# }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 k3 f' x, O5 R9 t' C& w* n1 fWith the moon kissing it every night
1 G' J% b" z( s: z! }6 ^6 x/ PSeeing the sky content with its love
. v  t1 \+ Q2 m; bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 h/ j* Y% U( [8 e! pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 d+ ^3 B" g- Y+ @+ T5 KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, u/ Y5 A2 J7 F' B( A4 ^; CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 l% c: H! f1 _6 ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# `3 e5 t& h1 Z$ nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  C% _# T7 e7 l' L$ K7 E: d. m5 |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ e7 R: r* p* v! C  T: l3 d( `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( p7 B1 E" F5 `; c( E4 x- uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  v) P# K3 q0 R$ @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' h, S0 u, g# W/ I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* h" k% d& ]# M' ]8 X4 s; b7 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# q. o# Q% @3 T0 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ K1 E( I) \3 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  O" ~; e8 R! z5 a+ O+ h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ c/ M( |4 n: E4 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 Q& b: {7 u5 h2 n# i6 q' t1 {. `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( u8 F. {" o( B! b" k# a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 M# t/ o1 h! {/ ~. B# g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ w' W, U. a" H/ ^7 K9 ^5 c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" I! M  _9 M# L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 z  i7 `" C  r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 I+ m0 s% X: L' I1 f<P>你无需担心</P>
  ]1 W2 @1 ^+ j* @6 ~0 I0 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 R6 G" F( Z! [) I2 ]6 ~; O+ T- f& V. M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, f1 S" f& ~) C; ?3 J. g; i- z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 |  U* O4 D  Q. r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 N, X" W0 g9 X) A0 X- Y. k3 {1 n3 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# f- G$ \6 f. S' B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 U. o. e) g, N8 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" V. R( o" q/ d2 }, D4 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" e  q- Y, z- s8 N1 s' C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 y, ?0 {7 j5 @: m; l+ _7 j' [7 d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% F7 m% A2 c+ M1 k; s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 d4 }* t" U& n* V  _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( ]9 L3 Y  L# h& n" P9 o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ m% Q* `8 f/ Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( V! D7 B% j7 T/ ?0 Q# m# q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" C. Y  ?7 a1 t$ s我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>