【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ X/ j& G& {3 r- @* M9 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 C1 u, F+ N) _; ?8 S0 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ g9 k: ^+ x) u7 vYou needn’t fear anything
3 t( `5 z/ ^3 {9 {/ K% RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% c  L; H; s. u' mEvery other word you utter is love
% D; i- O% l4 X! W: ]& \I really want to know just how much you love me
+ U1 k7 b" V, E- d& XI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' K; A( U" W& c7 x  s  k# X4 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; s" r8 n, r. _9 c. e' b- kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 j8 M7 _  D( V- i* ?; W9 w0 lWith such a tongue as yours,
. b  Z6 b+ a# CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' Q" ]0 }% V( ~) K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& l6 e9 L( Y5 X+ T1 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! E- y  t3 {) l( Z/ g$ O: I' X, G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 j& Z' g" N9 t$ g. _6 P" g: H* B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 O& h; B6 s4 W- u* p) n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 X  ~/ s+ K' ~: [1 @& l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 \, ~7 S7 l( C( n3 Y  K( z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% ^/ q9 S( z8 H. ^3 d0 j6 V# X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, A! V0 [8 M/ B) e$ r7 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- i1 |0 q( Z* l( x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; F( N& r/ q! J2 f" ^<P>你无需担心</P>
6 [' O9 f( T8 s. r; p5 J1 G% c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; G$ `) ~& I, g8 W  u1 A9 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 k- K+ I; w" E: [! r( s! G& u/ h3 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 U& \( P, n' t8 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  |: a% V3 J/ k0 l% u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* q3 w& |& E4 w- ?, }/ ^% `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ T) Y0 r" m3 i9 j4 w) e* _7 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% W0 C5 o% S0 L9 t  d/ f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, Z/ c# ^# m$ b; c' r  R: t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. M+ _5 O( a4 v! |# @4 ?1 s) Y5 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 w8 ?/ t, k1 J% R; k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% {' U4 w3 h2 {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 Q6 V, S+ M+ ^3 w  @5 a* Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: e! g' r/ C! i, ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; E: _4 p( I. j" y) y/ X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% \5 k- y  ~4 H" u3 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 u/ V- J2 a2 y2 P# c. T3 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 w2 }; E4 T, N5 ^& `, T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# K5 l% y; ^) N  o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>