【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 F8 K: N4 g; _: m. A3 w$ k! W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( d$ M3 U8 L  ]8 Y3 U2 q, {/ cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, X1 n& v% E7 s2 b- V' D; \$ JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# |/ ~. j0 J+ d4 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
! v& _( k$ k" xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ ~) M: a3 u  e; ^. V8 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  Z: G& Q' O& a' T5 S5 F* l9 |: kEvery other word you utter is love
4 Q0 q3 ~( L9 N' c& L+ \; j! g6 kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# \, J) V' N6 Z9 r: Q( o8 ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 G9 D" v$ {# E! A5 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 y5 V# j; T, ^+ r! Y0 [+ uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: M+ d! L0 [- q$ B4 PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ |9 c9 v# p8 G. U. P) TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ b) B! y; s/ l# R! S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 H' c( C, K" o. h0 T; c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 H6 Y( h" ]. T. L; M! T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( s; ]" W! E- Z7 j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 Y/ o& X' A1 `% L5 T; G; ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 J: ?6 m! I1 N8 G5 \' t3 @+ {% P0 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) U1 j) @6 y- ^- L: C( z/ l7 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# z- F/ |8 @0 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 N1 \. J7 A8 A, S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& y" k' T! X5 D' c8 l$ }+ K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 s( a+ T2 d5 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( F" l4 e) _% Z1 N( T# S9 F<P>你无需担心</P>
9 t0 m1 Z; ?8 w: C' a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 ]6 V1 |# E5 R# C* A! f! {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# X$ z/ r6 o4 O- i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; P9 Z+ p2 `* A9 x$ ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. w% n. \: B; [" x/ S/ V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 ?8 \0 a! G* a2 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 U4 o: {) H! P+ i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; Q* g7 e# Q( A3 p4 n/ F/ Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* E6 x& E2 T& W0 l; \; [' t" d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' J+ {  ~& I8 j! e, `7 u# z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 d, L( t3 x2 S  S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' [2 N' h1 k6 m, L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. \7 A9 s5 P4 j) k; |2 Q( T" W" x6 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. F: J; ?7 l+ l/ Y! F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* C2 V* [" h7 r0 i' l) C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 s; |7 E3 T8 {/ c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; i5 U. \; Q( X$ j' X7 m* ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ O/ w' K" X1 g4 }  G9 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' _4 ]% `& L$ U1 m$ l$ I+ Y+ z3 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 Q( \% U$ p) B. n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& B7 x  R( v7 A2 B6 G! f) V8 _- O8 v; g* M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 x' ]0 O6 }7 z+ w( r0 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, z/ X# }4 Z$ `9 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 }5 ^( l4 Z* Q' L4 P8 u/ t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 v2 k$ e) o3 U* R1 @* s2 D我请你剖开它
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4 o8 A' P9 h' y1 |( `% W) k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! H: l% L! Q5 P6 E. p* ]3 u, s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>