【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ _4 i2 V8 z$ N8 R  r9 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 \3 U$ Q8 |5 s% _; AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 L3 z1 }7 z0 C1 Q* CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 N+ j, J2 U" y# t2 GSeeing the sky content with its love
# X2 X; F* p- D. S1 N. i: H( PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( o0 `" n: D; u5 Y6 o4 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  r7 q- x3 e( dI really want to know just how much you love me
* s9 K9 n( p9 Q  YI love you I love you with all my heart
* V9 J* q- `& i+ F; jNothing can compare to my love
7 g) n, o1 n* v& ?& r. A$ _3 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. ^: e7 R: T; g9 m) n3 \7 qI’m still filled with fear
/ K' o9 B, K) m! n) K' S7 X3 nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 t. D7 @# U7 t$ vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ |2 ?" o2 M4 I- m. wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 a) }# H$ |5 h+ L% d* W0 o% OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 @; }% ~, _( Y/ F7 v. mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; F0 O4 U  |1 I, u% b7 j' G) ?* |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ f# n/ L2 k8 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. q4 s7 R, l- |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* Z5 m+ e. \1 X; |' V$ {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# z  ^" }- O1 x( \! e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: O0 t: B2 H( c+ J3 p: b# U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 h2 k6 I; z- T* P" c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: F8 r, ]" L7 j$ F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 `0 f9 O% x' }- g1 g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 B/ I" O( q& n+ F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) D/ Y( P  r+ i, e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% m" r# w/ M! [' Q2 X/ j6 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ n9 r7 {$ {: r; o) Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& A/ I$ D2 A, l. C5 I7 N* \/ C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, C, o2 _- p" ^3 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ T0 e9 E; D& `: x0 r, `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' H" H* P6 O" g" s$ p# a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# `5 I1 w2 W1 t% r# m3 D( |7 y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. K* M. a5 r' [' R5 E# g( A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' H1 x# U6 S% [! W2 y9 a9 I% ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; W- k# \: e& T; t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 N5 w1 r+ X' \7 W4 W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: {0 M. |& u& i- a, P- g* T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 v* w" L" _1 [1 p; a# e1 @. a我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>