【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  i% x5 Z% b( E6 Y& h- S2 ^$ @% ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 G9 S7 R, k, r. H0 S& AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! k' H4 |' u2 p( h- M  k2 S( @. QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* L! u. F; r4 r! J8 Y$ nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 }/ a* G% R9 {* HWith the moon kissing it every night
+ J( i# p# d$ [, u2 A3 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. g1 [4 w' C1 y- \1 w. RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. `0 |8 U2 g$ m% MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 }  ^( k) f6 c! \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 R4 F3 T+ U  v( \% H8 N9 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! f% q& `4 v2 x, z: N* }0 nI want so much to see inside your heart
8 |+ _5 N9 L" k* ?; m/ b: eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 y8 G. x1 E. V% N* `% J  OI regret not dying
; F* o9 z8 ?( n% @# g9 P* KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; ?7 X0 x: f: k, w$ \With such a tongue as yours,
. x  N+ S8 I0 O  w5 B, M! X3 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 ?! t5 h8 Y# O% }: dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 o( k- r1 s  |6 B/ W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* s) F! M6 _- D* }% y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 H' X2 J3 z9 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! K' A0 S2 j* M; s' `: r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& J/ e5 D( Z, b; D) {! `( b2 S& Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- s0 t2 p# |8 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ w: R: R$ N; ~; r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( W3 D; ^  ^/ g+ Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ~$ ]6 c7 L+ o3 m5 r2 [! H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 t0 A" }8 i5 T9 j- K$ \; K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% V8 Y9 N0 k  K$ {6 A% r8 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 P3 ^* d; V  E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* O' b% S# x+ X$ Z( O9 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ `5 [% A) j7 ^3 q; _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& @8 a, ^+ k* M- p9 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; y  c) h$ v4 m' J' |7 r* i/ Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 `: P" y' @- [# j& i& K6 [# z" `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# f" X- x0 t5 T& ^: s& L5 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& W( a3 T+ m7 E( o% q* p1 @; d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 v' \- P9 @, Q; ~0 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 p2 _3 g6 d! }2 d) R+ _& u6 |" S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ |& V8 A, `$ t1 a2 R. |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ @& f3 B; [6 d7 F5 T. [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>