【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 u( f2 C' b0 M9 E1 ~0 P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" o* ^& \. ~# E1 y0 t+ \Making the sky glitter like gold,
: A8 F+ Q  _# z4 S1 u0 [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( [, {! D- ^9 y% c3 \9 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ D) x7 q7 ]+ ]0 T, _+ AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, U8 f- j& L; t8 |, y& d. MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 {" {6 \$ v) B- m4 G3 k9 }" YI love you I love you with all my heart
) f: ?! d. [( [5 p. P, I1 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* C( D- \- S2 \6 q+ pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% k2 K9 p, m  `+ w7 |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 v: H# m% A* d: NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! Q+ ^+ I& Y; ~3 H7 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. ~* C3 d$ w- ]: `1 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" S; H2 c/ P' R3 V% i( m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  P) n# ~) |$ `/ A% Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: k9 i8 {" f1 D  H/ Q$ M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 V" u. z) w2 W9 s- N* U& x5 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, E( s; j* b+ ~' J5 \9 D  Q/ \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; Q/ b; ?  I7 U& }% ^) d9 d2 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 v4 B; g. @7 J" N8 s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  a/ u9 }3 P" z0 d( [3 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( k: N0 C, r* g8 |# s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% n' Y2 \) A1 c  m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 ~! @9 B# C0 t' T% _# z& w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 q, G5 N  I5 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( ]  u2 G& F: ~* y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 K( R8 `: \( a; [- Y3 [3 }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# \$ {8 f# C8 d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% O, u- L2 r/ n+ a8 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ a, P: s# U6 X* v, y8 R: S3 a8 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; r  S2 F) T% N% t3 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; c; b$ n$ n3 V/ W$ o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) I' N9 F& y5 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) `0 M6 Y' t6 L! K/ W" u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; `' |# X: N& D$ z0 E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) s1 o, l' O3 I; @) W* m. [/ A2 [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 D. y- W! c5 M% j3 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 N1 e. w) Y% N  c+ r& Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 e6 l4 q8 y8 k( M  y我请你剖开它
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( ?6 T1 ?+ C1 ^) m  p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>