【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 N; `$ d* ]% H8 L# IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ l6 ?1 D" P1 L3 r. r0 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ T* p$ O; K5 d& }7 z) |1 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 F. m, y; ?8 _. v1 i; z) ?' H+ tWith the moon kissing it every night
: i! G! f! k  b. b  R- W5 H- YSeeing the sky content with its love
% f5 G- y' |5 \$ E% C9 X, R: xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) v$ H# ^" ^' Z8 _$ t. s+ z1 c( dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" m# E. i$ }9 }Every other word you utter is love
3 J: L/ `7 I; Q+ hI really want to know just how much you love me
3 B8 [, u5 G3 B% e: o- ^8 fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 m5 L: i  l: i- V1 W" m; T& @  eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: J) j/ J- Q! w7 }; y5 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% j, L" M" {+ QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- n' a0 {5 P: ~" m# dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, G: z3 Q/ K: z6 d8 T* [: ?3 gWith such a tongue as yours,
  t2 ^7 r5 `- d$ J- p( Y: s# |" `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 e3 u, ^3 C" e! k- L# j' T+ D9 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! [9 X9 k" R3 w3 K( _2 ^3 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" [. m& e% t" Z: u/ o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# M! j: S3 r" X0 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 T2 I4 f" g7 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 X8 S8 m" S/ m: i9 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 u2 }. B  j) w9 R* q, \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- {( v# m  d( _2 S  L" a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 h; x1 p. z+ E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# _. c8 M! ~: ?! b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 e% z6 ~$ r( L2 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 ^2 K- b0 z( W+ @! u: U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; E$ |* D1 c# Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- y) J, V8 C% d% p/ ^5 c0 M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( c+ b+ c. F- E1 v' N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; }9 J' T: n! @- Y. K2 L9 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: v, c% M' l6 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 Z" H9 X! a, |$ i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) d: W5 L) d$ H+ j' O: `5 p2 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ t# m& m7 }/ F2 k, B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 C1 a7 O6 g" J. j6 M% _' ]- }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 {8 L# Z7 x: Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ ^- j/ M4 x7 z5 T' r9 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! K7 Y( k4 I3 s, {! D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 Y( h: L. r/ I( q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 g# I. s: M& W$ N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 o" M# Z3 h+ I% H1 {8 F) X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>