【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ Q- s; W- h- i9 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) }, u2 M5 `' f! s$ FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 z1 V6 s% H5 s$ n* t% \' }% ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: a5 R2 z/ a9 s6 A: J+ D. gEvery other word you utter is love
( \5 O4 Z4 |  xI really want to know just how much you love me
) O. u- E3 g3 Y) z& \# h0 h8 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
( P2 m- j7 K9 T  ?7 l4 d2 fNothing can compare to my love
6 ^: j7 F8 n0 M- T) `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: p# O8 F9 F7 n, d+ `4 Z( u! |3 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 N: P7 w8 V! \8 X  VI want so much to see inside your heart
8 N' P% C0 x/ {1 X# |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) U0 g  V, z( V+ T& ]4 |' p% |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 q1 X* V3 y- X4 v' v7 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 }2 U# q" s- W, a3 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 i, y3 d7 b0 s) w5 W5 F8 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- m% I8 }$ A) G) N3 A! k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, K' w$ K% L/ ~1 H6 f, p* C6 Z) v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 M7 x% u2 \+ {; g6 _3 y( }2 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, A9 q  _0 [# R& h- _( V. P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ x0 p" {. u8 ]( q+ h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  Z! w' j; D1 ^+ g+ M' `8 V( \( U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  {6 ]. K) Z) p3 O; m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 ~6 @" `5 w" \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  B" ?. _& P! i, q9 O9 ^/ O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 F0 o, u8 E7 M3 f! L4 `: t5 Z7 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* U6 |  J7 F' w+ S, ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 U5 u6 w6 f! A5 t! ?$ T+ y# Z4 u% C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, u0 @. x5 {  R% n* J0 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
% n# \( F" \* \+ d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  B9 B6 \! D7 y) [. H/ L. w, U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ d$ g% J4 d9 U7 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" P& ^# h$ P) u& i2 u1 n1 ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ T) v* h; b; y5 z) w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 b$ {* I3 z6 w& R9 Y/ N) x: C; a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ @+ q. K1 e0 p+ C/ R2 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ v3 X7 l& y( N2 b4 b  B# g1 f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( J& ^0 s, B8 _  ?; W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>