【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 v% i2 c9 g# B, K  w/ G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& |$ `: f" Q- u* cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' B, U' e9 z- K+ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# t! m) {0 r! Q3 S( {6 dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ d7 B" Y" [3 c0 l% k- EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 u( `, a. [; i9 s% PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) j2 o0 c) F& [# s1 n- M' XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) R+ X: T' @- {8 H, `* HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 I8 j2 y5 u5 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  @+ G$ L+ q9 U& T1 VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 O' I: F- j5 V! tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ Z' f, \* o; \, {: E  ?; zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- {. g# P7 b. k* K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 M: w7 P; d7 Z" s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. e* o/ C0 q2 \$ }! N# u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 e; c0 i, b) i2 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- L0 E2 a+ d, v) p. K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ K7 W/ r1 f6 }8 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! i0 z- u+ _8 x) z5 G) U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ g9 y( M  B9 g. C0 Z$ R6 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* s: y6 d- F  x2 E# @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! f9 w4 ^6 g- E6 O" n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 T8 h- O( X2 S1 J" x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; U4 g' U" s9 U  f. ^+ \% A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* y( _4 `0 m' P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 i+ D& v( |6 k% K" ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 C6 Y# L8 X4 Y& h5 K* \/ n1 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& H. Y3 |2 ?5 [: Y8 @# p* x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: v4 |' F  K4 f6 M4 F/ j6 z2 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ M9 ]: n$ O& Y$ K* P4 s2 J: Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. n) y) {$ |2 v  X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% [3 `: f* Z) j, a3 J; w<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 ?% D; m! Q! g2 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  l- J8 j) k6 l* l. n; a" c2 l( }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 s) h( |/ i/ ?8 Z) r7 D9 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 J0 k1 q6 Y% X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. O) [" K% g0 F, ]2 e9 Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ h1 [9 @0 z. k% r2 j0 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- a0 j6 x  ~/ _, W1 [3 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 Y' J1 D1 z7 R. e% Y: c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" k3 G/ Y; c  f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* _7 \4 R/ H9 N" I5 A) o: ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ]) i& D' h9 l% K$ l3 E* a: {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>