【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 [/ S/ u. O6 r2 Y* g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 M% \/ e6 j# w3 I" H! v. D, aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 K9 O. m$ D: [1 v* J  mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 d0 j$ q+ `: W3 S9 a$ |! d7 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ H& s6 i: l3 r: L# z% C% mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- n: s) q3 C+ K3 y2 m, IEvery other word you utter is love
3 l# }4 I# R/ Q/ CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 s% D  i$ J) }) i) w+ MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- h# r! }1 @8 e5 s7 }6 ]: Q1 _% XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; i8 s8 m) v  r/ u, s7 m7 t! h0 y& WI want so much to see inside your heart
+ n% d' {9 q2 ~2 h' GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  p& X+ R% a% L# M9 ]+ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ y5 X2 i, W5 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( N0 o, D0 Q1 YWith such a tongue as yours,
2 `; Z6 p/ h" N3 \" m1 L, V+ EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" ]: w$ b: S3 A# JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, f: i9 N* ?7 A- F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) g/ V6 f( `/ \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 }2 u' `. X: }. h  c& y4 _$ s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ Q4 |* M, K& `) p# k! R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- P8 T, E# a' y( V2 L* s% o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 v! F4 ]- N1 G% ~+ K# L7 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: T' o, c2 c7 N3 C3 \9 ]5 I, g<P>你无需担心</P>
* y% S( E( Q3 H, Y% W1 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. t& m2 e: y8 C4 B0 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 G0 @- q/ y, L5 f, k8 H7 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- ?2 n- o: ?8 @( j/ R" x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 {, a! l9 x1 c( d0 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 W4 b9 B% W3 T- R9 L- J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# T6 H% G- {$ s' e4 a/ ?9 |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: N4 Z  ?! k! V6 q* m4 G0 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 x( x- W) y+ G3 z# {/ x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& r) ~* k6 o. |" Q  q5 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" i0 i" h$ |8 l# K1 x! a3 G2 T6 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" X5 K/ a; V% {3 E5 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  H9 y' |: }7 i8 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# P4 {8 o2 a, c& T* h) O) h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) s! V) \7 J! r/ g! G! ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, B( {: j! ?- E$ k" j5 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 V  `6 A, y+ x6 h( K( f<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 E$ m1 V) g) ^  Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- |& Z0 e* @+ j1 W9 Y2 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; h# r  B( ?' G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ ^) ~. R/ k. V# d3 q4 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 J9 m* l- }. ?9 O  z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 ?" x) Z; Q$ N0 D: H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, D+ F% Z/ {; V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ b4 P1 v3 Y; ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 C# B# ^" s$ @- A9 }: ?5 a9 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 G" p' D! O5 x; ]% P4 |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

, Z7 z0 A4 [8 S$ Q4 J4 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>