【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  G  U% W# v( {" \  }2 P- R- Z歌词我附在后面。
$ F5 g- m+ j' L) T/ cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ i9 T8 [2 W) `! j+ JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ }- }* G% y- A* S* BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. x  O+ n) T, t/ S3 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  I3 G! N  a& c. O9 K; iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 |% U+ R+ P" R1 sI really want to know just how much you love me
7 y8 A4 ?6 ~4 [( YI love you I love you with all my heart
# y8 }0 |; c) N( K, p# ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 u1 x8 ~! F& O) R" wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# J" Z7 j+ H7 a% ]: ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 ]3 U; Z7 s- m+ z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 ?% B9 [6 j2 f3 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: d/ x4 ~+ V" T& F, w/ Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ _$ J) A2 a: Y3 S; v' E( x& j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 I* c9 x  ~. l& A" I1 D( Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- H* ]( V; G+ v2 q4 D5 k7 o( W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 @% _/ b7 s' c$ x4 c6 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, U8 j' ]* v2 b$ x1 ?  {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 P2 P& [5 S& l$ {* d$ t# \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* u" f$ q6 O) ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 w# Y( i9 v# A0 [! ]1 e8 e. s% l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  q9 j0 S" Z6 }+ o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! m/ n1 x5 N0 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 n1 e3 L9 a/ M. K4 ~! P- {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, l/ @' W3 l4 O- R1 D" y$ G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% I5 g) N. A/ v9 g3 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 R& K! C5 z* K. x* v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ [& {% a( I% {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 i0 p8 {" x5 m  C3 m# J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 }" l! W' a# j. H; `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" ]3 e1 B" c/ h* j; N7 }: B2 k0 ~! q$ a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# X0 h% ]# o8 h4 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ o/ }: C* r* E9 e4 R# A. d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 i1 x, }5 |" e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

8 h" C$ D0 W9 w* w; R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, @/ Q8 w% d6 @) L1 I) N9 y2 D0 [. }3 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>