【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# D! ~# F* ^4 f" X$ r( o1 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 Q; h  D  g( i9 ]$ A! t7 J8 S. IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 R/ a2 d2 s, @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 `, z3 {0 D8 j7 x6 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! b: m5 k4 }( U! f, hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 Y  D$ c8 ]7 D- D& I0 W) H" ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' g3 |8 \0 G& R  G+ c0 `& M; }I love you I love you with all my heart
% m! M( O$ }. x9 N% ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; }; Y7 L: P( S% O' [% D9 @+ o/ N+ dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 ?7 b* l4 c  k0 F2 jI’m still filled with fear
: h! ^# y  @6 E1 x* U) _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! [7 `6 Y3 J) tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 [0 b' r' |4 `: i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 i( U, B, e8 }; y* r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- `, `' M' q0 R: J  Y2 T& U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% f& l; H7 [  Q8 N8 Q( P% e5 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- d3 s' f3 S1 q8 s2 P9 M1 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ ]  j; f* ]( s, C' p8 {; O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ j: }" E0 N: b7 L3 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ V& p8 _+ g1 z* M6 Q8 E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 L( ~( ]1 m$ Z8 m3 F7 X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 S; ~) A. Y$ @9 r4 k3 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. h7 U' L" Q1 Q" t2 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 z$ x8 _  v( t$ R1 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; x0 o2 M% V. v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- a4 U4 q$ v  |* Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& _8 W  G( v# T7 [- f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# X6 D6 b- ^* {) R7 c- G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 {- N1 H8 F% @6 M& c, `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 r' y) e7 ?$ ^$ {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! o2 G  S6 X$ o. r9 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* @: t" ?+ w# Y" r6 x3 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 Z$ y& H0 }0 b9 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& W' s$ {( A1 A' M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) s3 v; B7 H6 y# B; Z4 u+ `( N) B) R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ }4 I9 @" Q% m$ i8 M# ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ S- I0 {( @% |6 z3 Y/ ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 z2 X( O( {& Z* G/ u6 @* [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; U1 f4 n1 o9 c4 g8 Q6 m% e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& U5 S( x+ S+ C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' f8 \; O# a  N3 U* L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, ], y! e2 Y7 E1 ~2 U9 Z4 P我请你剖开它
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0 [) `( ?' B  a$ t; z# e" a, o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 y  ^, ?) a* n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>