【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# g% s5 m- E- Q! u" VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! w! V5 d/ l/ `) K  P# F- SThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ F. A( M1 [. A8 `With the moon kissing it every night
: I$ |6 X3 |# A+ B) G7 F- n3 r) OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 g( i6 ~$ c/ l/ d9 d* wYou needn’t fear anything
# U/ L& R4 F& {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' V( h0 `. k: Z3 B" lEvery other word you utter is love
7 f0 L  r, V1 T* D0 C$ _; SI really want to know just how much you love me
! S" B) f5 _) w* Z& [, b0 B1 H5 j# @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ J# j7 j: d( VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, N) L+ i5 n( r3 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- n1 h# B4 _! c) @7 B+ B) X' h# \I’m still filled with fear
% l8 b: k" I" m( q& |( x' `* F! xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ |" v- O+ N5 u! X: s, \: RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# l2 h6 X& U) p' h& IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# B) p: @4 @  ?, Y4 ?' C( A& h. k4 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! B  v% W% L4 U0 {' B# y3 U4 Q) YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 X- n2 U4 |; T( [: E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' ]: {5 t( K5 ^$ t) d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  S- s- Q! f4 ]( |' U7 c% x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# V2 m& F3 ]/ n* S; \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 I1 d" }+ ^3 J& Z% M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 d" d9 l0 S: m$ \) u7 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% K4 r2 }5 J" w) n1 F- z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ i9 s0 a- T8 j! F3 n0 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! Z* P- s0 s" t0 B# d$ R+ T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 ?% t* [) P# r% N$ V1 T! y( i9 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) i1 e; r) }& Q3 a4 r# R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# N1 i' g! H! D2 G+ J  Q<P>你无需担心</P>
6 F7 m. s9 |% ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: P- X! V( p: y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& h2 t' P6 O" ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ s6 j! d# n9 Z$ T7 P$ U9 b2 Z2 D( d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 \# o5 r1 J4 E5 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 \# ?$ L! M& y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' Z4 `6 p  u  w9 B) W- b7 F6 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& e4 ?! W! r3 y% F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 r% b$ G: c  w! O4 l: D& L5 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; x0 o+ L% _' c% V9 `  s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 M6 R, C2 \1 o6 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' t. K1 Y  v8 f/ r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 i+ q* [$ `& \6 T" F$ N& @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  s8 w' J( Q. M2 `9 C; M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# L$ y1 @4 C5 b) }! O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; D( K+ i3 b% i4 c' I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; Y+ d  e. ?# B5 w' o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( g6 D( K: X! J0 y- G- a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, y$ g7 ?+ w% M! h. d6 L* v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% Q5 F* S1 R& f1 m" A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" _0 U$ `# H$ V' m# c3 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 K2 n: y7 A1 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) T* Z2 w; R& T$ P$ d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 h3 s# q( l2 g- K我请你剖开它
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( ?/ Y! Y! P5 h0 ~2 s5 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>