【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# B( L5 N9 o, ]: w4 Y" z$ ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! \9 b1 `- [! [. H3 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ o0 ^: s/ ?+ ?+ c) PWith the moon kissing it every night
# ?% A8 M+ o+ @. s. {Seeing the sky content with its love
/ L6 F& g" k+ q( h, k' KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, M5 X9 s! z6 X& UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ p2 D$ z- ?/ `" p8 [% B( yEvery other word you utter is love
$ \& w5 M( K5 d: ~8 r2 D8 N0 pI really want to know just how much you love me
4 w9 ]0 P/ x/ \7 V3 T* a. A' RI love you I love you with all my heart
9 V4 u0 G2 ?; C: eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& P# Z9 A4 u" v  w( h; s  k' lI want so much to see inside your heart
0 Y8 ~5 W" s1 s+ I  V7 e/ d; cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) P3 \0 |# H* L4 q  P$ f7 D/ @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 M+ G9 f$ j( v! t0 Y: X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ Y# L- X% x: }. c0 p/ J6 T8 o. m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 `! v. F" ~1 L( x4 k' \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) e/ a! z8 j" L( m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: q3 |" m6 A8 u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( ?5 U* v9 b' C% k2 G" R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 d2 c- R- _' V  q6 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) z; A1 _$ Z3 a+ `% W3 Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 ^1 f8 c6 O5 q5 o( J- S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! ]$ r8 o' `9 E. W. D" b" o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; s+ e' E% Y2 _' y) d" }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 n8 O0 L: b+ o$ ]/ |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) m4 p+ _0 f! i. ?& T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, Q# L( V+ \; ]$ M  e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ n) e1 u; Q' V( ~$ U7 |/ `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. f+ C4 r+ A7 w. {5 Y! N9 m# G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* Z6 m5 n3 v  b. N. G# R9 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 _, E- H; b3 G0 F9 q# [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  Y3 n9 S8 @& O9 [2 n3 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 [7 Y% `: o+ K, q5 I  F- q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 Z9 {. S4 B" o# j: N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 G1 z4 w; h: V$ @' h  M  J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, N3 e4 a; g! R, U( z7 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ j" ]) [  n. i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% G; _" \# A, b# |' d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 I3 Q# i6 A6 c; E& Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) \& g0 g. B3 g8 ~' b" r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 x9 F  a# P* M: h" M6 Q+ }- M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# ^% Q" M  v( ?! A3 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- _  L! F6 k4 V7 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; k; h! `" Y# g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' V8 s- p, R# Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! m3 V2 D' C" x7 l6 i7 _/ _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ J* u  n+ \2 B  s+ l: r# \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 U4 U( V, t  a' Z( |/ L1 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' X( a6 {* B  x/ P- h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" l- C5 K0 `, f& }. k2 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>