【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# P0 W) _. ~) M% w3 B" n( {, P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, f' V1 `9 x+ P9 Z# _: M3 p: n$ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. x! d5 V! p: i& R: J; `, FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% W9 G: e* m9 e; y7 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! [. K: \; n% H5 pSeeing the sky content with its love
- l+ c3 H6 t- p2 ?& rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. l; [1 h# ?( E: e* NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 H3 o( z4 b9 U& ]Every other word you utter is love
) Y6 f4 `! @- A6 TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 t3 ]4 F9 k* MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: [& k& ^: k9 K# b' WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 W. v3 s" |- E& _7 BI’m still filled with fear
% {1 m8 V$ z6 u- Y! ~. uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% I. W8 p! k; \( mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 l* c6 k6 l. l) kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 t& h- t8 R7 l. q$ O9 }4 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! _4 U- s3 h8 L) L  F$ lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% @, b+ R8 O6 s0 F- }5 r) L! j/ B9 m2 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 x3 {+ o, S7 \5 n$ `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  Y0 D# J3 X0 V: w* T* d5 N6 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 N2 G" G( q, R% `+ Z) e* B6 W9 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Z- u2 o2 g1 f# n$ L# K7 _6 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! x9 X) Y7 Y+ K' N/ l! f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ K1 Y2 B' l& {7 {, N! P' X& D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: D  K$ ?6 F& F1 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 p! E2 t7 ^7 \! _" q; q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ E) J8 ?! {# i: V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 k4 G9 d' Z* t: b/ g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' C; z+ R% X8 |. Z4 V5 o: a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 F0 {4 l" n7 b8 t: C4 b6 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 q. z  l& O1 G- G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ a" y  m8 T# X$ y6 o- Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% m! a; l9 J! Q0 ]; B6 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( y0 @7 c. ?; L' ^$ ]) h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 i& J  d2 S( O' {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* a6 g; U/ f9 G3 o: [$ \0 q% I+ P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 h  v% m  c: N; W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& x% ~5 M6 w% z# X. C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 v! K0 `- v& K5 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 M! M) [( X2 {8 D4 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& v3 h  J( _7 ~7 ?7 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 U4 }4 @, O( u5 b( N9 r4 Q* c& b: C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, b4 J; j9 f& m! i1 s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ {: o0 s) L! j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! A4 k- p! g5 ]/ k9 ^5 m# O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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  P& ]* i0 f; Z0 {; T' j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 L$ P+ t* U) ^& Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>