【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  F1 X# C+ k. t2 @! l! R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 L. r: C& s: r9 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ G2 J" r  p3 B; L' fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 b( T* y( l% j; R/ U7 B' FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 A1 S: S: h9 @* rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 x8 f: |! d+ _! v- ?' E' i6 DEvery other word you utter is love
. ^: |! Z3 A$ f. J* X7 I  q+ II really want to know just how much you love me
6 L3 t* S- @, g/ v6 p/ O: |% EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 d) e9 |7 K% \7 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' m: {; O% A: V: Q; Q! V# iI want so much to see inside your heart
2 e4 [1 u% M9 p. F0 q7 T6 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* j9 [7 r- r* c. HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 J' i& Y4 q* a5 A' YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 r/ }+ t9 v5 W8 I# g; _" x3 Z: wWith such a tongue as yours,
; Z# S; A1 {/ y1 \5 j' L- }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& D7 G- M. x6 [0 VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 X2 N1 ~2 A  I- n# n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* m6 f  C& z" R* L. V' d, t4 N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; X2 i# K& {6 `1 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  q: M3 V6 e& Q+ _5 y: J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 k) s; x) E' ?* _& E4 D2 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ W, m9 b0 k% _) [  w* h5 R" @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 }3 w: ~8 k, C2 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. U" @! y7 k! e' l$ k. g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. H% [  _/ h. G6 Q/ ?% `; H9 s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ j* S4 {; p% F$ ?. r. R6 D2 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) \4 @0 `& e( e/ n. b$ g- P* Q, h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. N* s7 y" p% K! u4 S/ u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 V0 o$ q. l' {5 W. U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; h* p6 I+ }" o; d1 Z6 H' h: T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 V6 m. l/ u2 H: S0 U. a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* w' G, W( I" m( c( Z# ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 D9 r% a! }) a: ^% G7 u! n; I0 f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  o2 g; q" J- i: p4 N5 g1 D, L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 \4 M9 G$ _; I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 R  w5 L0 @+ _/ [3 d* n; ?7 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 L& G/ k' i$ s1 \+ H" ~* E$ k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  Y8 f: W1 `, m3 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 N. l  k: A+ Z. ~: j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ Q1 i# W  p. _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  ^; j0 z! J9 e2 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" Q6 o+ d3 d  f+ ]: o0 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 K; B1 Q4 {8 N/ ^( S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* L# H5 X' P  ^8 z3 M" ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 T& S; g7 P& K7 e- [% d6 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 s5 d! @% q( f) W; X# d% N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 o2 g' v6 _. n$ Q% ~3 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>