【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 A6 C# L7 t0 U) bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ n( z. ?4 D/ B) V5 |The sky is happy down to its soul
9 Q6 J% f/ D0 _7 [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ ]8 x3 o# X; rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ ^2 d+ a3 k% d& F" [6 {I love you I love you with all my heart
6 N: ^: U3 w6 C+ FNothing can compare to my love
: L+ \6 v: Q  C9 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ z& j$ j0 E% g% s7 Q# c  SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) @& D+ `1 C7 e6 ?5 QI want so much to see inside your heart
% A" E9 S/ N7 `; _6 g' VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 E3 y4 t$ l% e7 A6 l. TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ?, E+ X* s8 @) E7 M1 QI regret not dying
7 y- ?. K' H9 P/ W7 F; AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  C, p* L9 y& d$ M( |/ D% bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ L$ m% B; H2 P; ]7 N0 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% u: r( c1 b- }4 Y, [. H& Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( Y1 G7 P9 m8 ?: T" e% _3 D, ?( t8 A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ Z+ l+ O' V  V( O0 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 E9 H, |! ]3 G& `5 ^& f5 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, s0 U) e* k8 e- ]& q% c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ t! V, |* [& o1 g: h! m4 K) G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. T) t: k1 d6 c, r1 a7 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ U; ]9 B7 q  w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  x( _  J) g/ m, Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 l5 h$ `, u0 [. Y. g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! ^+ C# |* ^; I  r. c! O+ T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 y7 H. }4 }* `; v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* k3 f' v% e7 C4 X9 z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 C0 Q; D8 E7 Z( _; I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ A, @: S" }: L+ ]+ W; G2 b" \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% v: ]) ~& B9 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* j6 e5 }' `0 S. y$ x3 w& B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 G) S% V# a$ P1 C/ n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 i3 H& O! `% [8 q/ \4 V, A1 @) K+ G- k. N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 U8 X  C2 j3 j6 [$ V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, C. ]9 r! s1 T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* ^/ `; o% j1 H  c. z; K; u+ C) H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 N$ L3 z- Q: w/ }9 Y" F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  V, s+ v7 q$ G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) B8 m( j- F5 S6 Z6 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 J6 ~( v3 F7 K6 N, F) S<P>I regret not dying</P>
' D8 B8 |9 f* F( _) [; a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: `% v0 _* y, T! |/ c( R4 E$ @# A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 f5 u  z! E5 F- h! a* ~- M. i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' [$ D; k+ d. n( s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 @+ K. ]/ @9 E4 @3 b( c. x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& v( W  ?( k8 @; g) W8 N% @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, B* S2 q: x, t) l. l4 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  j: M* ~. a- D5 |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>