【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. i+ n: {: e: |; e1 \- }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ f/ Z6 j" S+ s' eSeeing the sky content with its love
9 H& k1 E& F6 S7 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" q( V2 ?; I5 U5 |/ l4 l# dEvery other word you utter is love
! I7 w# `, {- tI really want to know just how much you love me
1 p8 N+ f5 d% w: TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 u0 j9 j8 q6 n  wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 R: @2 \+ f5 J9 U# UI’m still filled with fear
/ m9 s: ]; c2 G6 [3 x; F$ yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( _* v" t5 v/ S/ fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 D, I. x  u6 x/ ^/ o: QWith such a tongue as yours,
6 W0 f) c" M# F9 B) VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ?/ R* E8 V  G. pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 k$ n% p; J" N9 J; a# |3 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( _4 n% ]( q, V. j2 R, z. B4 D& [, H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 I8 v, O' h" e5 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. T% ^3 g( f7 x; {0 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# g5 f. `: v$ ]  \! z: |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 U  Z: H- j7 l% [9 }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 h3 z" X0 r6 p- M4 \: }; |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# g! R) u$ ]$ e8 L# l+ j1 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& P" a) u4 S0 a0 ~! ~- j: j- G" q( s" C0 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# |- u! f/ ~7 ^, E4 J- B% Z: K# Z% C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 _4 {! \: ]! n: s* r<P>你无需担心</P>
% c' g; s/ T0 {/ F# W" {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& k2 I! s( Z% L, v/ i7 x6 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, j+ _  c, T5 M4 q6 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 z! O( b9 I! H+ V" r; `/ O- e) P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  O+ i- `6 A7 z+ M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 T5 w5 q$ Q; A) q8 A' _1 @& H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) d7 k. u- t9 r3 J7 O, h: N1 R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 H* T7 T0 z4 c3 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: ~) ^% X, L1 o5 d$ v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 l. n  }" Z, H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) U. H' }* m0 o/ P+ p6 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ i. ?1 w6 F) B7 m: V- `* ~" N# T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, Q" }$ T% P2 H; C! P: v. v1 L<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 q# F2 e( r" Z$ H) }3 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% J! t0 X+ W2 ?/ a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) Z1 A& C2 z- J: Z% a9 `) g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% f/ V) J$ d5 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 I/ [. B, E+ J# b( e2 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( h) I. ~8 I5 V& c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# n' q3 v5 F8 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ ~, R0 n1 X  j+ h  d我请你剖开它
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+ C& F* g2 q$ z- y1 C1 V( C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  B9 Y# K0 T1 G4 |" o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>