【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ U* K# b' Z* ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 E1 r; j  _8 {+ hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 c0 H+ o& c; Z. ^; E5 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 d5 W+ ^( P+ `# i% |& ]With the moon kissing it every night
4 n6 r0 c( d( t( l! A5 _& U0 [Seeing the sky content with its love
( A) h- `0 _/ Q% A# o( ?, |# ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 ?$ [. [6 p, b8 w- rEvery other word you utter is love
) R3 V  q0 r+ G- ?3 y  LI really want to know just how much you love me
' e* G& ?1 z, b7 cI love you I love you with all my heart
$ L: s) G  N. x6 l! s4 T5 ONothing can compare to my love
9 X4 s& {! c1 u: h! j4 U" fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! g5 O8 |1 r; h8 \$ Q8 z& f8 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. X6 @8 R7 s4 t6 ?% v9 D+ k( cI’m still filled with fear
3 T( i% X2 {0 I  e( `! i8 y/ kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 D0 N& s9 I1 m$ AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ ^0 Y7 a  m- f/ n/ C5 b1 KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 j* Y$ C0 ^9 E% l4 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( N( r) A* _! O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' j0 S: U3 S% m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 K# z0 R, Z$ [2 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, l7 f9 U. R% l1 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 T" R3 d/ t' }1 E1 f+ I6 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ C) h* C& [0 ^6 z' g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ L/ a+ n$ {7 t5 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 _6 J+ ~+ z! W9 z8 X2 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- `" T+ L+ R9 E4 t* P% Y5 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  H* S$ X, |( Z0 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 h4 \+ ~* B0 z. l- n5 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. L* {, A8 J0 a6 t7 J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 U, k% T' h: X$ o' A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# M2 Q5 N0 V. N+ W/ h' K# z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, d) C8 U1 _2 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 W8 I+ q) q# [$ T( i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& u5 i$ Y- u+ e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' c/ z8 F/ C$ z1 Z4 t" i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ u1 d/ x; k. J) c* W4 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. s5 Y  ^8 l( l' ]( M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ @& o" v% O" G3 I. h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; }$ M' C! H: w8 ]) o& }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 B; r8 t/ m( D$ T$ N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, }/ d- o( s' D6 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' C1 U/ v2 c. k. B2 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ S8 M- L+ V9 P) }: P  w8 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 x7 F; k" A' u- q9 ~; X! S# \  c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% q% b7 c) h' A: S' C% I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  D9 K6 W4 X- ^# M4 e$ c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; m0 V1 r/ P" z$ d  A7 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  S3 c. t# w3 f7 |, p9 R$ i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 x9 |# A1 y5 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ x! p8 }  b: s7 x4 ]6 U7 G( Y3 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 K, G  `/ ]5 A1 H) N8 B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! `7 P$ J& k  |) H5 |& u/ E我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 N1 e: a% F5 B0 Z1 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>