【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 x. y7 _6 z: M1 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
( R- X9 Z4 N' U1 L! C: k/ g& T& Q* LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, M5 m$ z! t( z7 cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" B- E) x5 v, I0 S+ ]- F* _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ g8 _% `! ?% @: L( s9 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* i! t5 M/ a9 L$ T! Y4 t: P+ nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- H+ A9 O1 d% W5 \With such a tongue as yours,
1 m+ U9 w+ M: T+ EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- L2 {2 ?/ v' n$ G/ ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* m3 q3 v9 f9 S; r0 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ S; {4 \0 S) ?% ~) e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ X! s  O2 d/ E* u1 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ y* p/ O: c& Q1 Z/ Z4 p5 e' Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, }' g. ?" F  k* P+ t' h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- `# n' x' ^% |1 {" i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( [# V. F' b7 g( V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& y" R, H+ o, Y# J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% o4 z2 ]3 t( P7 h4 ]9 f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 i4 m  a7 i# n4 S$ E% l- s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 G4 s  j! v/ `* \$ X* I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 |1 e2 r' K1 ^5 g3 z( i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% \  Z: v  ^" n* u$ A/ p# O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 {4 e0 c, l6 h$ E& C' Z& i/ ]( y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 A# y5 u2 @( e4 A& \! z$ i. L! f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ L- E0 B" A. c8 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 v- k" L2 x5 M  r; P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% q0 \, Z% a" m* Z' f$ q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; ]5 y4 r; \8 u( g# M& s8 B# {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ r# ^) Z! i+ V# o0 Z) \9 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! }+ |8 h) z/ k9 t( H# _! V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- X- \. ~1 v; O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 E# Z: f9 m* `* }) ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ \1 f* i: E' t! O+ ?# l" q, m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 y7 Q" S. w- K5 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 a5 _) ^& l1 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. v" R' i% J* ]: b: l& `! I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ z6 C% t: a5 f6 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% ^+ I8 L, _6 |* R# E3 K3 F我请你剖开它

. k' I/ ~! I: |& }( ^  {2 N4 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 j7 O* n: O. ~7 a$ X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>