【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# ]2 N- H( b: N/ p" f6 H* VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ D& b. [- {4 Q) XThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 E" X  k! v! h. O) @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 M7 G, v3 G4 M; O: `' P! PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ F+ E& p% f: V9 z8 ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 X# e; j2 L) _I love you I love you with all my heart
& ?% r7 y6 E% a: y5 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 t: }& l$ C) C3 }; eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! B! X. O. ^7 E  ^  kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 z- s- w  N# r5 O( ^& D- ^& bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ B: a# u7 i- }6 r  sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' [/ l( M- ~8 X; O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 g0 \; M  ]- ~; \( h+ t9 t4 u1 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  U" }& d5 I# z( `/ m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; w# e9 B  T' {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 m: O+ D* K  Z" e9 ?' E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; i' o" \  m9 {: O* c% S5 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 |+ N4 L- d0 f, k. J# ?3 ^$ s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. i7 u; \& y7 L0 X+ O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 t, W. W. y% ]& i/ b# [% T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ u( E; h" `6 [8 _" I! w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ `8 g% e& ^$ o% i; o# T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& t4 w$ e7 |+ \3 Q1 O8 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  p" J" W3 e  \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' Z& I# I. B: q% q0 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 }. ^* V% s8 n! Y$ {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 O  r) K' r' u( J) y+ D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* e9 o" q' F2 y: g4 h9 M# O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ [" b  `" q, D2 ^8 v$ h3 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* I5 @2 q! n" S5 B  n7 K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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: t5 _6 `$ Q, ?3 o1 o7 A$ {/ I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; [: `* B/ r  |, b  p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>