【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" b. R/ p) v/ ^+ l4 J4 EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! P) K! }( r" p: WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 f2 C' l4 Q9 R$ j3 n- LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 f+ K1 X# M4 R; b# lWith the moon kissing it every night
/ b& z, C$ J  V; f2 TSeeing the sky content with its love
" w' h. D$ o. m9 T$ z/ iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" @# g3 J: V; s! d0 V* {' OYou needn’t fear anything
  w+ A# b6 c+ A! QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, s( Z$ O) s& o1 fEvery other word you utter is love
/ y1 ^7 j4 [% `; J- L2 F. d5 QI really want to know just how much you love me
/ \# j/ f5 \  D( R: \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, ]- U# x& f" w9 d# kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 s  T* E" G$ ]% GI want so much to see inside your heart
6 G; G: k. v: d1 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ [/ a% W1 r- v5 h7 N( N2 p- OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 u: p. |) r4 F; g! M* v3 M/ DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: z, G7 ^: F) ]% ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; z( U; W! f. L4 x: T: |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 Z) X+ H* I" x; A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, f2 j. {. y+ Z8 }3 ~2 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 V. w; F: F9 h  _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: v) S4 Q+ ~1 u5 R2 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  O2 B8 D" ?4 ]; o: M  _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 Z. l5 b0 i* p3 Y6 v5 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* f6 O5 i& C# N1 Q/ p  h( O, y<P>你无需担心</P>
8 n4 O1 i. p, U& Q# b2 Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 A% ~( D0 \( p% s* o! p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ `& p  |% z9 k( d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; a& @, L4 f8 [3 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 S( R7 [' h; S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ `) \: \0 f; [# q2 L2 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 u$ f& x5 d; ^$ d, ^, r- r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ v- S5 L* j3 w" a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% L% X7 e3 E% H0 ?+ ]& f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* B2 o7 C7 ?$ x. V) S  b" |5 m0 D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# O+ g! r3 L* }$ n( ~9 Z, h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 H/ _5 n/ N5 m" T1 ?5 H+ ^  }3 x: I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" n0 K: @3 L$ f5 t$ K' y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ C! t" e3 D! L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" w0 {" L0 ?8 H; g5 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>