【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 Y3 I5 v5 u' w8 l: n. U歌词我附在后面。
, H4 w: I4 D/ P1 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! ?  C" i1 J. R" O) {8 N& JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 N6 ^/ s; ?$ w; b/ [2 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, `1 S8 `) c1 D$ U  @; q" H8 J' sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" j8 A8 z% T1 M# E/ f$ s% tThe sky is happy down to its soul
' _3 {  l0 y/ P2 p; Y& `. N2 C& V% \With the moon kissing it every night
& G5 p8 J+ d. z$ F) Q8 g8 ISeeing the sky content with its love
3 m6 g% l" u. f9 V8 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- Q7 t4 S# q* ]( h5 r% IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# S! R6 R) H4 A+ v( H9 g4 H" qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! Y/ s5 r' K6 z# R  xNothing can compare to my love
# S9 s0 L' Y7 j/ z9 n+ O. [& rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  X9 M, A; A% T1 r! {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. q5 [1 ~5 j2 l+ S/ QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  `/ [6 ^# {# N4 @" ^2 vI regret not dying
. x2 ~5 F( I" o9 ]6 w7 ~6 Y: @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( p! G  y7 ~: \5 _, J6 @: N! oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, n% `. ?9 x7 i! v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 A- U- U% Q4 C( E1 E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 I* T' [% w' f7 Q6 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 D5 P1 j$ C9 f! S+ ?- `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 N" X% T9 n1 e& ^8 ~0 b! `' S9 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 j& Y. B. g. J0 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 l; ^8 r( H. E9 v( D$ D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 x1 M. C1 ~, a; D% A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: \! G) k, \* u5 u3 N8 @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' p- F9 h/ a$ x* J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% q8 [( S. u' c9 V/ a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 [! D. U( f# ?! x0 V/ p2 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& ]: Z# d1 o1 @3 `4 _& ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 o2 t% e( D$ R  T2 Q" ^3 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' H: P2 s* d5 K8 T" M: Q' M" C7 v7 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, Y+ r% n  w$ P/ ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% V* ?* L: f5 I( F1 D+ F/ g0 y/ m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, B/ A. p1 J, m* a6 R; I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ {% {1 @0 s# ^" Y9 ]  E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  d8 x1 w/ Z! Z" v4 W, t! D" C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( R* |9 z2 M( p/ W1 v" Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 K- c' C1 _1 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( U) j: z9 O8 c) V7 Q  w我请你剖开它
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! {* z& i/ C! Z1 L6 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" W% a6 x& O2 y: F% z0 {3 q8 C2 C/ [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>