【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 k8 ~+ W* J, a" x  Y$ T1 h4 \$ tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ V7 c: I; o, m* CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% c& ~# l8 z1 ^8 l. V* L8 [With the moon kissing it every night
( ~; B5 Z- }9 b. W7 D# p; JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; A4 V& G. ~* W% y. OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 ]" _4 V- X% A+ E! [, \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- J5 _5 ~, y# R3 vNothing can compare to my love
9 `% c, X8 e+ g0 Y) t$ @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 J0 H6 V) ~5 y: p1 `2 tI’m still filled with fear
4 U- H$ r, V) ~- sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& ]$ |2 {/ \0 @. {' P2 {I regret not dying
; U  S! L* Y& }/ f  F: L1 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 S" Y  u0 k+ d, k: _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ m% X9 m2 }: Z( @$ ^, @& O: t3 w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" o1 |. d5 v+ k8 S/ F, R& ]" k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* c2 @' M/ U2 Q$ w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: G$ K" k7 y3 q7 ]# i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) \0 W; i8 P4 \/ E" A. p& G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* s  v7 H7 L5 y9 S7 p2 ^1 Q- _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- s$ Y6 ~! H$ R- D! I  q6 b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% V# P+ |/ p0 ]0 n) {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 s5 {% [" j/ U# j' C+ X7 ]7 a  s; ?1 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 i' i4 W" [4 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 c6 l' _  z' L: b/ ]% g- v4 x8 r# N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! Y& u$ N1 _2 C1 K$ z) {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 d9 {+ v2 u  c; s1 |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! l! D  \% x0 G! U# h$ V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. h! U) T# X3 H% U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ \  \  g3 }8 d1 j& q7 q- N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 `0 E! v3 O- q, Q( y0 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ d# ~# }7 \; K1 y+ J3 `$ C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 H- h5 }0 B. L6 c$ ~4 J1 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 X, k( [* Y5 r: s7 x; G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( l9 \$ q2 C+ O5 T6 m, G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" m1 e( g* P# G1 f, R) ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 f9 A- u: Q/ Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ ?1 N3 W) }2 ?: K( j% F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- }4 X4 f6 m3 Y2 K1 l( E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 m; W) f1 A/ g% v我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 j1 d  E- X' h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>