【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- X9 |- D8 B+ s% N: {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- u7 S  t/ _; K9 b! ]# K( tSeeing the sky content with its love
9 {& W% d/ r" p7 ~& U& V* zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; l4 u* |6 M0 Y6 f$ K. aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. h+ [! M& Q2 z+ W9 n4 tI really want to know just how much you love me
& l: Y* J7 u7 E) {2 L. ?/ P9 W8 o. rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 ~8 ~2 D' Z, u5 y, u8 ?1 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 _9 X. a6 N0 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- v3 W6 E+ K( t! h% {5 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; I5 s$ R- {7 b- O3 F/ L* a; b# o+ hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, L! b( N: l' L, a5 f; j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) Z6 o. G; d/ H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 [: f: M+ m0 D* w7 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& S6 {: y: T4 {3 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; Z6 H2 U& i' T5 ~& T0 v% ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 ~4 Z) J5 F9 F) E; {- R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) t  x! G. r4 c" ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% y' O# A' ~& b$ X5 a% G6 j+ P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) ~; c7 m- S, E: g) f# q) V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( f6 y6 V* S* |4 U2 {/ U- P# b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; l' F0 M# t* I. s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 Q5 u1 H' H! L( a* O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. S5 d7 `2 t+ F  G  S5 U9 W8 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; C; _; x% k0 |$ p6 B+ e9 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 G) G6 K2 Q1 l7 t0 g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  B8 T6 O5 E- `5 \8 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 U% y, d+ o6 r  \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( ^4 u/ h8 _0 C4 t8 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ M% B+ C( ~: c; {  j, o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 j9 ~& }; R+ m6 n7 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 V: o) x  n4 w2 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 ^( W$ W1 f. t* x1 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  l8 ^$ S" X2 v- Z/ r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& b: S. N/ O! N; O5 `我请你剖开它

; W; X' T- ~" p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; Y+ e& ^/ r- T! \' e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>