【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 o+ L, m& N1 e2 N3 H! b; aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 [6 l6 |* X3 N$ h- @7 JWith the moon kissing it every night
/ W) k( i+ X. f' h5 B: _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* q5 I5 k0 |+ E8 W: X3 `) jYou needn’t fear anything
$ k9 ^3 G4 O0 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 j4 |1 D8 Z! z7 mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" u' C( F3 N9 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* i$ S4 {2 g* A  S( v/ Y0 RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 i* Z% ~( T1 K- F6 J- JI’m still filled with fear
3 n) V6 K4 ?3 Y& j) ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. [7 f! E& [4 k$ |% II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! z& P  ~# w% TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  g' K& d8 {- J  wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" w% V1 v2 E3 g9 D+ P9 P/ t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 L! d, Z2 ?% d# n% L, E" k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 ~* c( r- A- k: M9 D0 V; E! k5 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 `3 v- H$ d3 n3 G5 p( ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. |% d9 ?' B# ?5 e9 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ ?- h( f+ Y6 ^. W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  G6 E* Q3 O4 R8 l6 \6 U9 l( k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, b" n' y+ H$ q9 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. k  x* `9 y* x2 o& p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 a  w* a- h& Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- a( E+ \6 `$ W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( ~6 B/ h8 x4 z! [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; Y# M/ v! L7 w# k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ S1 q- [, D3 |; I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 {& w; N$ F7 {7 x, I1 }7 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" i# m, S! d5 \9 c5 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 o0 N3 `, n) K5 {& N% @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% S% ^" n. |  }2 B! t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 C  h1 h; j/ @6 q- x7 k+ V! O9 {! `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. F4 d% v, v8 r- V- V: v# U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ g; r# ]0 u" Z, _% h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 V* ~3 `/ c; A& `! k7 [; b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, {2 b9 V' G  Z7 I3 ^; l- F: s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ A: ~: b% Q4 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
- F1 z4 d* Z; c( k1 l6 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- h" y/ \( e1 e9 h& D, E9 g. B" P- U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 C: d( ~9 |0 p- O( p4 f! O2 T我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>