【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- ?" R: X* r0 l+ T: n歌词我附在后面。
) f/ B* I/ M6 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 |& _9 y6 d& O0 x' i0 N% u3 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 l( @# k" {0 O8 N4 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 q! j8 h0 d/ W5 c3 }6 jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. ]: Q) @1 z& P# tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: z  b) t* ^9 }1 S2 MEvery other word you utter is love
7 R, R/ t& k! p* }I really want to know just how much you love me
; z; G6 G2 c9 O$ H- S) i6 MI love you I love you with all my heart
3 r, U4 N) J$ `0 U5 ^, dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 v& \. k' \2 ~/ h* H, TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- x: U$ E! N4 V+ z3 zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 z, |# y% B9 W' z9 W; ?: H' XI regret not dying
3 ?% X1 B. q- F6 s, g& J  M8 TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  \; S5 ?$ ^, r+ u2 ~$ dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. U- f; Q: y/ E3 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ P2 {5 c( M! Z) H! m2 {9 W7 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- y$ ?+ I; f8 Q8 U: ^7 q( v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! T7 b2 P9 K: Y" U; X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( a, W. q8 ~$ f+ e; d) S- \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- E% ?: s( d$ s6 G- S' K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* V3 h1 ~" H  _9 _+ |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ g2 A( i. H( A( N0 v. M" R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 m4 v% v$ x4 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 m$ R: S+ F. b+ h- ^3 \+ H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 i* {/ v  A7 m" {& [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; @$ l" Q( D/ t3 q; o: \2 f0 w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, U7 W) |& m4 O$ ]0 E6 `% B$ w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 O2 l$ X$ G0 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) v$ t. y( O& j$ O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* [4 q+ ?# p& Q- [  b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- |0 V9 K" [  u$ `# k6 X$ r; U- [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" J4 K7 ~* m: D$ o5 J6 i6 n/ S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, M) d0 A! ?' s' _, O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ r2 \0 v' b( W3 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" [( l8 ~% s( P( F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) Y  v% o1 T# U% b% X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 @5 O' V: T/ w& B0 z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' n% F, w$ W+ k0 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  a8 d  i" g, `! r( d$ ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ v9 t+ c" w* ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 _$ c( q/ d$ T: R) k$ J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- {# {" d$ o: q- F8 G: b9 ?( |( j, }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 E2 Q$ L% |/ k2 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 `( J! t' V5 U$ O) F! j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) u! p* W2 \# |' ^8 o1 A, p. `/ T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. m) d8 A+ D* Q( e; w# Q- d+ x0 Y0 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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, G5 B" y6 I% z* G/ K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ Y! @" w/ g# o4 u0 b+ @) W% a+ Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>