【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 D. k" N5 D, ?8 `( h歌词我附在后面。
( Z1 c1 E7 L9 v3 ^$ lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) D! j$ R! B: q; xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  N+ t" n( ?$ x- c% x# f& zThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ {0 G% m* G$ d! CWith the moon kissing it every night
# P+ [) E1 o0 Z+ s5 J# I8 B8 gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" D% p7 o% x9 k+ oYou needn’t fear anything
. }  M. K( c3 n& R* y# {' BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: H8 S% a; d/ n! y5 V# B% _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; |6 Q% c( z- ]! t2 S( p' J8 aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; @2 \: e$ Q9 l, X; }* eI want so much to see inside your heart
% t7 e  [% a& r1 t  MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 k( _- V. t& f1 z& h. PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. d9 e3 v2 {! VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 D0 v& \* O5 l2 SWith such a tongue as yours,
( h5 v1 c) S5 p4 \+ T: [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% @  u1 V3 C" b# A# `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& v) I$ V) r; X3 R8 c0 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 i; V7 d0 r$ X6 a5 w7 l$ z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( W/ x! x7 o+ F* i# K* Z- k6 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! u- c! @" F/ R( u: y) p! S, C% p! j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! i; }" D" C+ I1 K* [( `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 q' G' I0 V4 F: u4 o0 H/ u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 Z- f! }* {+ ?" Q3 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 N5 z" `3 ^" T# r( L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" W) g/ n" [' n9 t7 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 Z2 k6 Y4 j; X5 m. Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ X/ I: \6 [: o8 g- b4 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 j/ K% ]1 |. @$ U- _% a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 F* q8 e% d5 d4 p! n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  w0 n7 ~! }& Y5 Z) R7 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 h6 T3 k+ E& P- ~1 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) }! q- G. d2 `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* C8 [1 d$ |9 L# j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& {6 K+ g# G- H7 v4 \$ ?# `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 P& i" G4 g' z- x6 p; u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 `% d3 D7 m+ h1 ?; c. h  [6 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* q2 `4 B9 P5 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* e! Y  y% ^; U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ F3 M5 O" B, J8 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' i9 ~' u$ e: |) l* I* y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& R8 e( \- r. Q! f8 d( `6 r7 ~; P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ [7 A$ i1 R. s5 ?* _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: M( I6 ]  ~" w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
3 g( F" d8 B) u5 }( T
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>