【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- V8 v  r: Y! ~8 S4 Q/ l* Q" PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) t- U+ o0 r3 b" N/ o  g5 q7 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  n& l% G, d& W4 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ t, l8 R9 c2 q- Y8 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- T' T/ @& D# u0 e' T" {With the moon kissing it every night
5 _+ {( L( ~" f  nSeeing the sky content with its love
) c, G. C  B! \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( U7 d6 R) B. ZEvery other word you utter is love
: u% c5 `- R2 vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 f2 `3 a1 @; m5 g7 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 @5 ?5 C1 k6 E) P4 SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 n# ^$ t  u& e9 |, ?6 e# GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 a! O8 O6 @7 ?# H9 EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 n! K& r6 K0 M# z8 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ E6 R' x0 v5 f! `- o1 y- {/ F7 Z- xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 w: F+ p8 v( {5 i5 \8 T2 m4 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ ^8 ]) F1 d1 o3 `4 k; D3 w" E- c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- W% W/ e& D; o8 A; T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 ?+ s# {2 y7 q& X0 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' {: ]+ N# |) I) M3 ~5 p6 k- j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: A9 J/ g( q" D* m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ b, u3 {2 M1 i) [# Q- q/ E3 w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) @2 ^0 F' q  m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ ~+ H. h- l' F: `3 _4 ]6 b( K: [4 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: _  T4 D: y# D% y9 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" o' Y! y( d, k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% t' f7 s$ t/ r3 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) Q/ {/ m* H9 }5 ?, T" ?% }5 S; i/ D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 f& l- e: D& z0 D/ m( ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! N( P0 x" i# S4 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% W+ _" w6 N( W$ [# o! l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 ^. q' ~1 ]4 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" i! p: k# F2 B+ D: F0 H7 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: D8 i5 w& i* A0 Q' @: k: B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- v* J+ v7 n: E4 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' q0 Z) `  n" V9 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: T1 x( k" U, e) T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 o5 d5 G7 w% K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 o* [  \9 ~) v7 u( g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( W- `  T0 M& l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ k1 i' A- b, T' [  p' ?  e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 }0 X8 G& o6 i8 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' @% E- Q1 Z2 _/ i% B* H我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: _3 y( A2 O* E. }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>