【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; M& F- X3 n# @/ R  s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 S7 U* {- T8 W. j. @7 R* j+ t" EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' q$ E: G/ ?4 w9 V) `2 w. qWith the moon kissing it every night
) O8 A  ~( X1 b0 lSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. |8 {# J; f1 [$ R9 k* yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" k  @8 A. J, Q# ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' x% C5 f3 Z  {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 N! V( k' D  W1 HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 ]. W0 ~5 }" d( s8 M; [I’m still filled with fear
$ s7 z0 U% K: m- |2 j% e' ?, M. xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" l' ]  K: h$ q  Q) bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: K! h6 A4 b, h% uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 l7 V  i8 \; l5 F' WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* a& u  F' j: p; W4 I! p* O8 K: T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 @& g4 Q* d( @7 J/ [/ h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 g! T' L3 g; Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) F6 _4 r6 y' P- ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% ^; l5 i4 ^, p( I, R- n0 N7 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# {: z3 D6 h4 @5 y% A& C" P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: v5 ]  H) g' B* ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& p, w" v! V( v; d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, R5 }3 g+ f+ U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 e3 w9 I4 p# l4 B# f0 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 }, Y0 ^0 P8 p6 M2 G, K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" U$ n0 ~7 e) m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" w& t( j4 N1 [7 r+ z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& ~. L# o6 P6 u, o* K3 c% T% R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 S9 z- a/ k. Y0 c# k. C1 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 N& ]. m, O: m# {4 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# A9 A3 s5 x: e/ @/ ^2 j! O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# a/ j3 P8 x+ _- D. s4 ~+ c4 X5 Y. o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, u# P2 C! K9 N+ E0 ^9 ?; f+ [5 l) P- t5 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 [0 [) N: b9 }3 t2 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. V0 f' Q6 B' W1 G) H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. L" Q6 S3 ]# A9 A  b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, P! v5 a7 W& c3 p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 u$ V$ n) n+ S1 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: i$ J! |1 i4 a6 }7 z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) V1 |7 g  J3 l2 c3 S* J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. _1 K" ?: m1 ~' ~2 W( w我请你剖开它

5 R' a0 D" m" R; p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>