【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ A6 {* c+ e: I! K! I4 q4 D0 m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) V7 {# V) M$ g/ DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) m# J7 l; b' k# }5 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 F1 R4 @& o2 u! DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 a# E. N) v! d$ C7 ]! {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 e: ^) N5 ~/ L: v, A( w$ LYou needn’t fear anything
9 o3 C+ r# j$ ~7 z. P  x, {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- W; W5 G+ |' l0 x7 [: k6 ^4 DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 M. g3 D0 t: ^. _5 f; PI love you I love you with all my heart
1 `7 c" \4 b4 O' H- VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 \- R; h3 R/ ~/ A$ ?: t$ i' LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% ?. y8 ~) [; U3 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- G9 C. k, A7 q% XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ U9 {7 _  ?5 [6 g2 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* X. ~7 w0 m; S/ d) T" n- `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ I1 J9 ?# }9 `' ?; z5 u3 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. |0 N/ y# Z9 q% O0 d( y% H9 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 v6 f  C( j! \6 Y5 d) U( @) x5 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* s) z+ y* V% U: C0 z4 n6 y/ p0 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 ]  v( M0 L5 m; o& L; q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 K' J7 T' y$ d2 G6 P( A3 Z$ n* C3 }7 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& M+ _) L& y8 L' h* i& [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ T/ W% P- ^$ c5 b& }5 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# w5 |$ e+ ~4 F4 \! C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ D! b6 v4 f. {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- D/ o2 q9 J9 X5 K7 s2 F/ t4 @9 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# e/ E% d8 w7 c/ ^" N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 |2 b8 V" S8 b  |) d; C. z<P>I regret not dying</P>
, \. @+ O5 m0 H2 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 l8 }! }) M2 [) ~0 p! Z* k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# q  h7 B/ r4 E1 Q0 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ J& V& S  u* K( _7 ?6 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 R, p. |/ m0 Z9 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 g& Z' D/ x6 N2 ~$ G, D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- k) S2 g  S! v# ^5 \! G; u) Q1 I2 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) L: o" ~6 j8 @% t+ p: N8 B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 L/ r" v5 H6 v; H; j我请你剖开它
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6 L9 L- n/ L" t# O' a. A+ D) k9 t1 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ?- p9 `" |) b% `2 z% Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>