【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 \: i# |9 S! I! o- I7 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) W% I3 G7 t5 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- ?2 L& l- V; N; `! Y& p7 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ P, W( f0 A- p' F0 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 v. ]+ c7 J$ Z; u: z. s6 DYou needn’t fear anything
2 |8 `# h7 \  a" Q) V4 z: VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ H) y7 V! H& v" b! @) uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, k" ^1 N) H5 j! V% l, G3 e8 [) ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 p$ ~' j( |0 B, ]; oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' {( |& D; [+ A( ^( jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) N% a5 W9 q$ D; G' L6 R/ T& L+ wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( u' z( |4 W, ^, ]7 ^1 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  e4 R% C% M( f3 K' k2 tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) j8 ^# W* V1 a; R' F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' ]( i9 |# I; R8 n" w. ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 g4 V4 j3 a; M& y9 N5 a8 [1 W9 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) g1 g& l! }# i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 f( P0 i7 d* I% K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ P! f: V7 T+ X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 X* ^& e9 X( [8 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 e2 ], O1 A( F0 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, n- j$ k. A  @* N$ L+ W5 E! L<P>你无需担心</P>
/ D, J7 W; P5 B( E; t8 f5 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& i2 q$ d: G, h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& f6 L$ l+ F. d  V" @* Q. I! U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# ~8 w* Q5 |. G& l8 q  A! w9 T% R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% g  f2 a2 U/ k. v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ }5 J* T4 ~; H- Z/ S% T2 d8 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ |: Q- q  `8 b  U/ b% w; T, f/ G& A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 Z3 s2 v0 e$ ]: N3 F# x; H5 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( n6 F' [9 N: a" ~; \0 m" m# b0 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, X7 [$ A; z; f& R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 ?5 k& _) d2 f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; w+ @) ]: s# Q/ K7 N1 |9 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. b  c* p1 j3 x3 L% h% L1 `4 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  u" z/ e2 D9 v4 H$ ?4 [. F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 a$ \, ^7 i( M5 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 [9 ]/ K. _+ U9 Q1 g% o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- H5 V/ [" K2 d: s+ t$ H7 G! ~& G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ z- C; t5 ]# b, j5 ~( {' u5 @2 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 {% W: Q( u, X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>