【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ M% q, T4 i2 Y, D, aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 K! R9 G3 T8 i5 ^5 k% R7 GSeeing the sky content with its love
/ N4 `/ ~: i. W+ V. f2 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, K0 b+ i% D$ W8 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 @! C+ |5 p: C! Q6 RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) i2 g4 Y: G4 P$ nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 M0 `" F! [$ G& [7 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
! t- B/ o) W* `% s' uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 f. N, s# \6 jI’m still filled with fear
- m; ~; l+ q% E" M4 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% N( n8 Z" s: h! eI regret not dying
! V+ ~, v! d, Q- V* [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- u+ w9 ^& D$ `- W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 I. t- X# h' z; d7 I2 u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# k5 S4 @6 \. K3 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* x) S8 [3 u2 D# U( U8 q" k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 h. b/ v: z5 d, H; i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 {+ U2 J0 k( j" h  v+ N0 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) f" f9 B6 c/ j. h0 _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# r; k0 b' S5 l9 ~1 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- h" A% ~- T9 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% D1 Q$ C" a5 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 _; u+ Q( w% E/ \: I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 P" I! Z3 U5 v% p/ z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 R0 o7 f% T) D/ q) e! s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ Q  z1 w" d+ P) m; r' i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 m9 i6 M; h; \4 q& _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 J  z, F7 Z1 P7 y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  K' O4 f3 m, d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 S( U) t& M0 i. j( Q( z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; k/ A; V. o$ G( G6 V9 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, c2 L3 N, j1 a3 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) Q+ h/ Y+ R/ Y4 e" n$ N# n% P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 q' @8 `9 B5 V! r! I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 v0 m" Q3 i5 i4 |5 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) T$ |1 u) C7 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* z7 j: o( M# h) d) p$ A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 M. A' u; n" p! Q* c$ N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: `+ k. r  m7 u8 f7 O5 F# c7 K1 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 |" F; C! t( z: f7 J& c1 W4 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' H  {- |+ \9 ?% Q4 r% _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 v# Z; h5 ]0 G# r3 B) E$ Z+ S我请你剖开它

( |8 j7 G# e! Y; B) z& a. Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>