【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 q# A( e3 z4 g6 g+ I& A/ X  c+ ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! G  u5 q8 X  z: [& k5 C& HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 b8 }0 I, N8 m5 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- w; u) q; K4 Q2 l' }6 a0 dWith the moon kissing it every night
8 x  m  O1 }2 \) JSeeing the sky content with its love
1 [) Q( `. P7 b' t2 }* fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ b- g3 \1 m4 ?6 hI really want to know just how much you love me
8 i5 T6 A; f4 d. k1 }9 {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 H+ ~, R0 o/ ]8 T" c$ e9 K9 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& |0 e2 |' I; v0 X2 AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 v) _4 U/ {3 `- HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- g9 }8 B9 S- `& n* x+ d3 G' E# `+ |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' @2 ?& W9 l+ N8 E% ]" f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 [9 W+ f" z/ B6 g1 C6 V' P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, U% w1 g2 V+ M# R# b* r/ b) T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) X! Y% {, W& Q1 E1 I" K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 H/ y' x; B5 A2 H5 r! f, g  r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 ?* Q: z- C: c. i( u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 C- N3 H( e& k* A1 d& ?1 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 d2 C1 ?+ s, O% y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* C/ `4 |( Y+ E1 S0 C, m( }! E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: P: h! w! U2 q7 o- h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, Q8 [3 ^5 K. H% g$ @0 u% H7 w+ [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% D( o+ c; e7 Y; T4 O4 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 d- s/ }% D1 C% N* D+ F" {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# Q* K4 @  f+ A' T" V. h& B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  A* `9 u. k# p' t# M0 G6 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( p1 {/ R+ u( u) z9 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) y& U% D3 C# g; h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 ^+ \/ C7 i% M) U6 \6 D* ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  Q+ f+ n  J7 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 Z. x7 c: z8 @: E, x; E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 J' N1 G% m4 Z% m8 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  v  T1 U& k5 _0 R( I; y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 P% c6 C+ v# K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" h8 [/ L4 |- V) t5 H% a8 w) j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 Y6 }! ~9 d% Q2 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' _2 P0 i; K$ a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: u" y% k! n- P+ S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ L$ x6 ^, L" p& U* n0 C2 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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