【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' h' U! m$ T2 S* ^5 }- c& ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 l! ~. k$ R  j  ?& |; A7 p6 N/ \; i  N# A* lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 @, C) G7 Q" s+ t, N9 q( }3 QWith the moon kissing it every night
  {) f  w/ N! W: gSeeing the sky content with its love
2 j3 _8 i) J6 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ Q- _& ^5 {: H/ F* o7 i) k' dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! K% y, z. D) D! K2 q/ Q7 x0 l0 iEvery other word you utter is love
5 ~! f. }0 J  i' ~3 b8 D: P3 dI really want to know just how much you love me
# _5 l6 @' H, U/ LI love you I love you with all my heart
5 }3 [9 k- |" JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* z( H8 Q8 |: z1 F- H! o- ]I want so much to see inside your heart
( m3 q1 ^: S# x0 A- y" O- }. kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 C& V/ A, a* D6 ^/ nI’m still filled with fear
+ L9 s: W5 ^8 p5 K% A6 nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% m' R' j+ V& W1 m) L6 s/ ]; ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) o4 o  u$ B. Z5 [: V& e) O6 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ f! _; T" u- d/ v- s& I0 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# x. _& l* ]9 I0 m6 S4 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; t! x. P: b) k* Y( g( l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. J, u( m3 z& ?. v" C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% ~1 R2 Q+ B1 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& w3 J' W2 ?$ r: K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 X1 u# l! q% e; A& L% X4 I: g. E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 c! r8 C0 {) }/ w$ F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( {; Y3 w$ o  U! U; t  l<P>你无需担心</P>
: p6 t* k, C1 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( \2 _! c0 Q! E: I, V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 k2 \4 n- e1 H' ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 s5 X# N* u# F0 Y8 b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. S5 Z/ |& s1 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 V) m) W* T1 ~" H. o' S0 C' C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% t* o9 Z; ~' Y5 J- E; ^. l: B# j: `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- K4 J% m& a; i! Z. q. \2 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( ~3 b# P9 B6 E$ \8 |5 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ y8 t7 ~0 e( j5 X  K4 T# D# q" M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 o! `, H( O- p4 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& K! t' }& @" x) R8 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 _6 f1 L! d- r2 Q7 g' @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# j0 R, j0 o$ \. w/ M8 H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 C. g& R% c2 a* k9 \7 ^4 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 }8 ]' K0 |8 s) r! b$ }2 y! R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 \: n5 _! l1 X& q+ ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' y( [. C2 M% A/ B+ ~  m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ f5 c0 j' K* u$ C0 _9 R  A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 o6 u# c! T) Q  |3 f3 [+ }我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 t, ^, a7 m" g; s, p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>