【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 r4 X7 @+ x" H% ~歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 k2 y& z) g9 X0 ]$ B6 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  W! w' c. N& _" ]. I; r) qThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 T4 q% J0 k# Q# C5 lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ ?* p" g7 ^& Q+ yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. ]$ V: l+ v; R) N% P: c0 yI really want to know just how much you love me
  W8 E$ A) ?( N: ?9 z- z* jI love you I love you with all my heart
& @: U; [1 e( G; YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 [( m* w) I1 \) wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# @# C% D0 ^; A) zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* ^% [' k" O0 o8 H; X/ p; M6 O+ WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  _! w1 C: M5 w8 f7 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* C% n9 |$ n6 {/ _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 c) b1 h& ]( d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( H5 O# j4 G. c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 r5 \/ @/ L- l: o9 m( x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. ^0 b' l; J9 `: O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 L+ K9 y- y; L! |, z7 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' ?* m5 x$ Q" s1 R8 C' W# v; b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* C4 Q, X7 T6 d- Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ l; v+ t6 `3 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 u. b: ~7 z1 f  y' r# U" ]! n) c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) y% S' s, U$ `! f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! o5 G3 _  h3 S4 _8 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: n; g5 R" h6 M* J* A3 `0 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- y9 V& R* q( \$ k  S: z4 H3 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 s# s# H! H" f* @5 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- e$ L& N1 I0 K% @4 f; |8 G1 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 R  U5 Q8 q& l3 D4 {7 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% g! @, L3 c0 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, u* ]# N( N3 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" }* y  E4 b( s! p6 V: o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 Y* E* s, d, a+ D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* N' l' E# u2 Q2 [) B2 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 G! P3 p$ e$ T% m9 d  K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 `1 T& d7 }- w1 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 K' R9 K# f$ O1 H7 E3 @6 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 W: F/ O/ l" {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 R$ M$ f) }- Y! R- \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# A% Y1 L! z1 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ s  D# A+ g1 I, g" e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% l+ Q+ M1 Y% J7 S4 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 J; P7 {( _- n) _0 g0 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>