【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 K. I$ e2 r7 N! z" ^, W我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# m. M% e* J. F: CI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ H  q$ h$ e6 P; hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: _+ n3 {, \! q" u1 `4 gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! b! ]0 w2 f' m' W. j; ^I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 a3 f4 M) W- x& T" GI want to confess that I love you,
3 `$ A6 J# @& TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 b/ k/ P1 x$ |" n, y7 K+ V  CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 J/ q2 k# q% J8 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 x( j' C5 Y* r. `  E6 g8 C1 RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 o& M2 d, n7 z* u1 E7 NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 f, M* {$ i, l0 g8 @0 h3 _4 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& u  d0 m' S% t( OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

& n3 B+ E1 U0 g1 u7 b" d, e  N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 I8 I. u6 ]: y3 A0 `7 h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% s5 Q  ^. A6 }# f" \# ^, x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 @/ F' g( L2 t0 k+ Q9 U1 E! i<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; h$ d; u! P- N. ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 u- n$ X- f7 I5 ]/ v1 C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' A% G( _9 |0 P& Q, w  u# i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 j3 n1 Z# w! Z* o0 a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. A& ^7 v- ]& F. A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 U# V3 V9 f" a9 [' e7 o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' A7 W) s: o5 E8 [( \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 q5 I# k; I( [% V1 B1 P$ F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. J% u5 T2 d- ~: v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ Y# {* P5 k0 H( |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ O0 g; G% n. |" E' e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 z- P+ y+ I8 Q8 t! t; e. o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% @6 {2 g8 Q+ G* G" a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 @( O* {* y4 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* x4 c/ }% r) o6 h) M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 z3 D  T& V6 d' J<P>But I never did </P>
) |/ O( b3 m" h! o  }<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) H0 X( {2 e5 E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  m# L/ ~  F0 `<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' a) p% T0 R$ Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 R! [5 L( {3 Y, C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& ~# c& x9 M  h1 i$ F% o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% q1 {- G6 {0 V2 Z; H2 L7 |& c1 N0 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 I  ?( k2 L' @  S* x8 ?5 z* x, O) b! _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, b) @' P- v+ n8 x; `/ n8 e/ `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: G3 Q% _& V3 x% T这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# f7 a' P) b$ \: y# f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& u5 _+ U& Z5 p9 t1 h% W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>