【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 i# i# `0 O2 Z% O. g* P6 S! aFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 i+ W6 T$ a+ g0 E) CWe meet and talk everyday,
  \. ?5 }- Z  T- v0 n: E! S& tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  h, z; c$ F. i7 z: M3 {% }' v% jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. @4 k4 d6 d( ?. Y( y( k- XI would probably know how you feel
0 R- U6 B' z1 V1 JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 f0 J( l" X' D( Z. `! PIf today isn’t too late,
+ ~  n4 c2 M' K1 z' W* ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ T" w9 U3 N# v& cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, c: d1 ^5 ?: h+ U8 F& a8 JEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  q: o$ i6 H7 a; J; LWhy is it so difficult to express?
; O+ ?1 t. l: Q; v$ S" [, J3 h' A% @I want to confess that I love you,
' l. c; I3 ?6 y( ^7 A9 O7 V% V7 wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% W% J1 r) O: ~8 J6 s) i% AIf today isn’t too late,
+ ?) k& Z" C: [! @) FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 F( j1 S! X' {9 y+ ~; r2 BCan I entrust it to you?
/ y1 T" h- c0 k6 q, V& IEntrust my love within your heart
: C7 I* m& A' e) X4 J3 `Can I entrust it to you?
  H1 k$ U; `  M+ i+ B- WEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' i8 q1 x3 T0 L/ _5 w8 ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 f1 T, G0 x# n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 q. ?% t( R, L  M9 I* A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& w- p/ [6 C+ {$ e: Q4 k! x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ [) h4 q0 b2 _' c  N0 m9 F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 p2 g4 ^& [0 r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 X( O5 K4 ~0 f; ]2 y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 p# a* I! F! H. W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" a" {" Z  t( p: \) u) }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ ]6 y2 N* q+ w* ]- I' i2 {<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 S- x' v% x# ^) G6 W2 I<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& ?8 n4 m8 G. l; l<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# Q% d* K: @8 Z9 w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. M- |# Q1 t/ L! L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 Y. Z8 z0 C! S8 e5 Z1 h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 E! n: d6 l( H0 K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 u0 [3 m' J8 q" K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* m, g, p  i% N) K: C: ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 n* A. F3 i/ e  i% `8 q<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 }. d; q' h  T# q6 S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 S: d; L* U2 u3 m& [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 ?" W5 n! K- w% {/ a8 W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 m% a5 ]; s" c) Z  V6 f- b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# c0 [0 O% C) P4 ~8 V) F) H" D* Z. S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' o7 S" [. f+ Q$ L! w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ }- h, }) ]3 o# t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- z+ [2 W6 m+ ^9 q* @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! @7 o& _+ a: Z8 n3 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ t. T- W: E1 [! b$ W3 _$ \, ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 U7 C% n4 z; [9 N  ~3 ?) F3 H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" r- r1 m, t1 q0 t( i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>