【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 h( ~7 I: r% r0 b) G我另将歌词附在此。
/ c, i+ `# U4 t, T0 w' f  \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: {4 Q2 z1 D& _6 ^4 R5 B- xThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  B6 T" B5 a6 o; gWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  ], x8 T+ l% V2 Y" k/ ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; m  l* O" ^! V0 p# }6 i3 g* zI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, m- f, X2 H& K! j) @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; h. a7 e: z) m) W, ?4 m) \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- {. d5 B/ P" pEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- Q, x2 _/ E! jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, C8 A6 T3 }/ N$ K# a8 A' V$ xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# R* v+ R# @. x, ~& j& I1 J# j' KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. q- Y$ f- y9 C6 D- {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% x4 t: R* _2 n8 o" \$ QCan I entrust it to you?
# g- i1 I( C5 b" |5 _- H" SEntrust my love within your heart
9 |' c1 a9 o) N6 }& y: m9 SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

+ s3 q( A; h3 z' ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 o0 y/ v- P0 o- c, I  w<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 B8 e( N( f( g# O  x7 M5 c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 Y/ |- P. U2 K9 ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 l. R$ `0 I+ A. _: p<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 R+ D* C' G! P. @# d7 Y& ]; ]4 \<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 q/ H7 G; e" o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. j0 W& o1 s. R4 J/ V5 d& I5 j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, p, ~# l7 K. ~9 J7 |/ s8 U8 m1 C$ _; |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 m, j* C) d" B- o5 L, S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% e7 @" w( S% _( a<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" E" x0 q/ L2 P/ C' H. b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( t. r/ l% `4 Q2 ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- w- U+ h& ?* O' I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% b* F: y3 q& ]% ^& C0 x# D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ O9 T1 K+ x3 r+ X8 t5 F& |& I<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: L6 C; n) P0 C" J9 M$ `! A! S: X; y2 f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* F4 c& W  j! O" F, o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 b0 s+ w% A* Y) P+ q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' W: f  F+ x6 [/ {0 e) S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 V! r7 Y/ ]( m5 l' J9 X, z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% n+ \% Z) h$ ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' e$ d* l5 V, L4 ]8 }# H" J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 w% b; v& m. E' g* }6 N3 e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 c6 Z. r2 Y2 t' ^0 r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 f% l' S* `& ?' G. x* O6 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* {$ e/ y/ I$ _& k# ^% P" O' o' v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; K# D+ O8 ]: O' T* a( P" r5 C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% g  D$ u. n% t$ r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 F. M9 P# `; ~) S/ y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>