【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 i: x  ?: l! u% h2 m5 I9 o. HFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) I& i  D8 j, K: [9 QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# y4 O+ W* R% o3 k0 L( WI want to confess that I love you,
# O: x( K3 Y( PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! w* s2 g) a4 O7 _% }If today isn’t too late,
# G8 {( u: S# F( X$ EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; @6 f: V- O% l- J1 o4 @8 b: iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# M1 G. i  f: U/ yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- e& A! t0 L3 x5 [; G3 ?$ PEntrust my love within your heart
: y# C% h+ v3 ZCan I entrust it to you?
- Z% j7 u. I- f! R2 Y2 QEntrust my love within your heart

- Y# p+ Y+ k' j; k2 U# D5 G* N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, T2 A- Z8 Q  v0 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 H3 b" @5 C- X. S<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 L. U/ @# N# O5 Y& F, v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* R# C" @1 y0 }$ m" P8 J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. b  J9 d6 ?; I  _9 y. C8 B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 c1 U/ H; A! b8 W8 H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 i/ I1 n1 c; m9 [<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ O+ l6 L* S% Y4 z+ T  i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 o; l$ W# T3 d/ q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# J2 z! B* p( b6 A6 R+ \% p; X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 X- ]4 {  k/ u% @4 ~' {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( k9 s4 V8 |( f* m9 e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* c6 v; L* N; ]" F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' q$ B, h5 `; y/ ?$ s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; n; P8 r- Y( n6 k3 T2 f9 F' H8 g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: R$ K/ a7 W8 b3 R/ o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" y9 h: P% J' n% g4 v" \2 A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" c% f  u/ k+ K& ?  `( O" `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ q5 w# l( A, w! n( r$ X/ R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 `, p) m4 S2 U. X4 |! H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 s8 j  M! t3 o, S: \6 Z9 h4 o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 X( V+ B: b2 k$ _6 t) X6 t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* E( j- T7 b. m7 I$ q* v<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 m% s! [- U- b- \# N; V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  M5 I( }" X; l& U7 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 G1 a0 v; c7 U: I% R5 o' K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' `, C3 t* s6 @1 A' p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 p0 i1 R- Z- V( j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 A$ y0 B! }) W) k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 \- _! {6 q* V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% x+ G" o. `/ j7 B' q# S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>