【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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8 ?9 o6 p! H8 }. y/ ]我另将歌词附在此。
2 I" z- i$ p. d1 ^7 A& m: {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& Y! I# l* {5 n& A, ?. S( ]3 rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" H! m% w" a, ?# H( p  pI already loved you with all my heart
$ J5 l" a2 a  d3 k$ BWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 ~3 J- S2 v% g) JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ \" |- E. ~' H- `( D" B1 Q; B7 ?. WI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ z9 ?% s' }) E5 H3 _0 k2 t2 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
! Q1 K& d8 N# B( UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) l" m' Z/ U4 u! YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 G' T8 g. y% ^% |* f$ ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) b: V: j- _! F# ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 Q* ?+ _4 d8 P2 m1 g1 `Why is it so difficult to express?
/ F3 C5 r1 X& m2 s- g% s0 ~' `I want to confess that I love you,
2 E5 _' N8 R7 a5 D7 G8 M5 YBut I never did
0 p- }9 `  L& Z( X9 E# H; H& w# e! S1 A- w: IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 b0 G, {4 g" W4 q% q& I+ AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( g/ I- @% W, \  i- r0 }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" ^$ X- X2 E$ S! q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 b0 H  r, O2 D( I: w/ T<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, g# A  @$ I% g( H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 t! X/ H1 Y+ L' L5 t. U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 I+ n4 j4 b, }2 ]5 T6 J$ J4 D0 s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 b# {* \+ T; G+ a<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% V  `+ p! s% `, ~<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( a1 S- g3 y, n, Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; m* f" ?4 Z) d9 K6 ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* v6 m" O7 T! x4 W/ `* s& b: t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ x8 M4 g! u: F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ U0 N- f! v$ ?# o6 o: c; O( R<P>但我不会</P>
* f& ^0 H. |% ^( o  r/ q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 z' [; S( l/ G3 h. m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 U  y% g& a7 [) e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% F# K  g, O; M2 \8 p: a4 b+ u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 n% I# d' O5 X/ d3 T+ D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# X+ a! {% R  F4 K) `8 {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! n, X' ]' N, M5 I7 X8 f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ |2 |  ?2 A# H4 G8 S  h3 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: H1 \6 B: f1 K/ j  U$ [  q1 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ w2 z9 u# ~8 U. I  ]1 \, {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& G2 ?4 H6 }) i2 J' t* l3 X4 M2 H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& c4 g$ h& U) ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" B5 M. P. a* N  j9 V<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, U7 v9 P7 \, W1 K, ^<P>But I never did </P>
0 p  }3 b9 X. ^+ T: N<P>但我不会 </P>
* P) r$ i' W1 K4 C2 O  q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 w, ^9 y* J7 s/ b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 h; g. P  t0 [6 S3 _7 K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 }9 T- R$ K$ `! |. p: `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% q! F: W, L2 @' y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 S% ^1 s7 \+ ?. |. f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 ?2 U6 t0 q' I0 }$ X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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' x- \: f. a$ k! S( s: M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 J1 J8 r( x5 i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  x, T5 Z, S7 Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>