【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. O; A5 r/ v) A( }$ q' L: B8 @From the first moment we met,
% a! a+ V5 h, {( U/ `# D7 T4 hI already loved you with all my heart
* m2 K. D2 @/ I: U& s# }) eWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" e- t0 J9 l8 d5 |* YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 z( [" u* H' Q+ G/ o) U" wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 ^; {# G7 \2 {3 eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ O" Z' x" _7 X3 F& t4 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 H) v# @! R7 _6 U! G" I5 l! L3 L9 ~Can I entrust it to you?
  k% T2 W7 S! S5 E- l$ OEntrust my love within your heart
/ F  I# s* j- u( ?8 p* X; pLove… just the word love
& _5 n( w7 ?3 N# Y: bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; q/ f5 t' W1 d+ x7 T4 W& \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! M0 G& m  R5 ~/ L5 e! {If today isn’t too late,
* n; R' B6 F1 z5 {) s' pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ T: q, z6 @+ `7 c2 L9 P  ]  v& nEntrust my love within your heart
. v# a# k: D! U: Y8 w( uCan I entrust it to you?
/ ]' J8 j* t4 l; p3 r& g# o2 UEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( g0 y; B8 n% M) y9 e% p/ I+ }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' M& f/ V( F3 X& w! M4 ^4 G, L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ |" ~0 e  Q: F" v1 i0 B5 h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 N- C' X5 G4 L6 X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' H. N1 j$ K7 x* C& x7 F9 T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% H) L/ b; @. W' u: Q$ }- V( a4 i; O<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- M) V( f3 m! R. ]: r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' A+ Q! h# b2 V+ Q# Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 e. C3 q5 W4 L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; \$ W1 s9 M4 M2 W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 B# w7 E. T0 `7 g* \+ h5 _  T/ n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! v8 q' R* d! Q: O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ K' M' M4 E9 |) _1 E$ l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 k8 L5 p. ^9 H! m9 t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! w; f/ |1 ~9 b* H$ e3 ?<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: j. T( @  i9 J! P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( O1 }- A0 n6 G; J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# H) {4 ^3 ^! o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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9 o6 E& Q/ w  |  v. U4 t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 n" f' W8 t+ u1 J8 L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 p6 K" Y6 Z: T* D, {6 c9 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, o$ E1 a/ v/ Z8 F# M& A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" m* B9 J, Y9 K7 a6 e: Q" }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% d/ ~' M$ r% g8 H1 ~% O9 E: I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 W3 u9 `" f' C+ j2 R% b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ [9 V5 R5 B7 b$ i% p; D9 [9 \* G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; J, K, ?, c; x& B6 Q) S, ^/ X$ v/ C$ C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 R6 ?' x( o2 v9 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 d9 w7 I) W% [$ _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>