【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: t0 |' X. ^; I. t' t/ w9 v我另将歌词附在此。
' d7 Q# n7 F3 D- n$ m* Q2 G; {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; a* E& S! s0 wFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" p& h, x' _$ p3 p) h; \We meet and talk everyday,
3 h9 m5 e4 S- f& u# qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' ]0 @( c* l2 m: }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( \2 r5 t4 U# b" c) h+ II would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* }# ^- D) v: B" S+ j3 x0 kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ T, x0 Y2 ?: z' D, x* }4 K# bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" V, t2 }+ D! N$ J3 ^. R1 W, CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 F* \. R% [) Q+ uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# b: b; D8 B4 N0 J9 e3 P: y" sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, d( S% t; A( ]8 G, YI want to confess that I love you,
8 z1 V3 M" ~$ V; A  j4 K& H& V; fBut I never did
5 j0 G2 H# s; ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 i+ R) C. ^5 A1 t7 zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! U2 I5 a" e1 I: p  t# z1 x2 wCan I entrust it to you?
2 T( Q) ]0 W9 G( ?! zEntrust my love within your heart

" y. w/ h& c9 ?( K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# H: L5 l2 ?& t, A+ l& V1 }. ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 t; u- J* a4 O% V" Q" P<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 \: a  w& `! v. U1 P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' x# Q- t5 |8 n& ~- V0 g1 U3 \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 i0 N" q( N* M& `7 T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  X5 A* d! c7 v: t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* d" h& o0 T2 w" q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# Z1 y2 I8 u5 v0 e  [: Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# n. c) G7 R# \# e* e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: R( ?4 D& o8 [  d7 g9 ^<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 s/ c& G. `) z: b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 @2 o9 N! p- G* u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 `; I4 ]  H- Q- h! ?7 J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# i' w- A" L5 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 U. `! y- `6 U* r5 A; I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ V! K# S2 v  y6 \6 l. Z% Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 y' }+ M" H/ ~6 D6 B8 w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 z- ]. q- r6 G. m+ k! C, B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 ?7 E- X2 o3 S. c. J8 h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; t6 V& l5 [) y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: x0 L# y8 S4 n3 A8 n: }8 l5 d+ G<P>But I never did </P>
, t) i( z' h# Y( T<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 E% Q8 q1 _9 K- _8 B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  j. b0 M( n, O: g% v% Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ S+ M1 R. a3 s( _8 U! B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" c6 x) M  K1 X' l: J/ F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 N1 z/ C) y$ r( `8 \! I7 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% r9 u/ o  w7 u$ `7 D+ y- c% G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 U5 o4 F6 ~6 O6 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" D6 x3 J1 m* U8 ?7 Y1 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ u1 H% H* t, c; y6 l! {# _1 o, w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  {+ i* d3 I2 M- N5 Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. }; u5 \, X. T* f, N$ a3 g! Z0 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 m# @! d1 Q+ j! y/ f+ U8 q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>